Write faggotry thread #24 Previous thread: http://desuarchi

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Anchor posting for Bunny Mint story

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Been wanting this for a while now but...

http://landonbay.deviantart.com/art/Autzen-s-story-ch-4-page-39-414290765
http://landonbay.deviantart.com/art/Autzen-s-story-ch4-page-40-414856423

In these chapters Autzen, an autistic buizel, needs to use the bathroom, but is too scared to use the airplane toilet's loud noise. Despite wearing a diaper he doesn't want to use it, instead holds it throughout the entire plane ride, all six hours of it, even when he's sleeping during most of it, and makes it to the bathroom.
Can someone rewrite this page(s) so that Autzen ends up having an accident in his diaper, perhaps it happening during or shortly after his nap? Read the previous chapters to understand how he'd probably react to it.

Help a fellow autist out please.

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Holding onto lillithmon story

Outline: https://pastebin.com/nHUr959h

Suggested extra kinks: lactation from pent up sexual frustration, drinking milk from source, her receiving her first spanking as 'proof' of her desperation/frustration

I would like to request a sem-sweet, vaguely romantic story set in a fantasy world.
Main characters would be a young (mid-twenties) male officer or politician (or both, depending on how you do the culture) and a maid/serving girl type character.
The scenario should be something like a military campaign in a border region. The officer is staying at a small hotel that is his headquarters and the maid worked there before he even arrived.

The maid/serving girl is from a much lower caste than the officer/politician, something along the lines of being a foreigner or maybe a different species (halfling?). The officer guy is human and very "knightly." He's handsome, courteous, and dedicated. However, he is severely overworked and is starting to get stressed and angry.
The maid character has been crushing on him for a long time and hates seeing him like this. She tried to do everything she can to comfort the guy, but do to their social positions it would be unseemly for them to bang.

They end up doing so regardless, though they have to keep it a secret.

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Still not giving up on Florges toots

To keep autism contained. The idea/suggestions are linked here: http://pastebin.com/Zx3Uj2QY

tl;dr Main character dominates Florges by making her embarrass herself via teasing/lewding her to fart. Stuff in pastebin are suggestions

Here's all the links for the /d/ exiles out there:

https://fourleaffics.miraheze.org/wiki/Main_Page

https://docs.google.com/document/d/1ccAAmGecQiEE5ywZc4S4d1347WuMPEsF3DbSNAS4LRo/edit#

https://discord.gg/vYwdHes

>>10238440
Why a secret? Is it one of those stories where those relationships are taboo, or would rivals abuse that relationship?

Reposting here as the previous thread expired.

I am looking for a writefag who is familiar with the Warhammer setting or the Vermintide video game. I have a few weird Skaven-themed ideas that I would love to see put in writing.

>A Stormvermin fleeing the battlefield after his squad got wiped out is cornered, stripped and gang-raped by a pack of lowly clanrats he once dominated and bullied. He then has to crawl back naked to his burrow and beg his superior for mercy.

>A young clanrat from a defeated clan is taken prisoner and given away or sold as a personal slave to a Skaven chieftain.

>A Grey Seer gives a huge dose of warpstone dust to his apprentice and proceeds to fuck him.

>A Skaven cut off from his clan is captured by a human who spares him out of pity. The Skaven starts following him as a companion and the two end up romancing each other.

Would anyone be interested in the above or know a writefag who might be? Happy to pay for a commission.

>>10240810
>>A Grey Seer gives a huge dose of warpstone dust to his apprentice and proceeds to fuck him.

What exactly happens when a Skaven gets off their face of warpstone?

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>>10240918
Pic related, usually. Find yourself hosing brains off the ceiling.

>>10238440
Wanted to put a marker down that I'm working on this. Not to dissuade others from writing, mind you. The more the merrier and all that, or at least there will be a higher chance one of us actually turns something out. Will admit I'm not familiar with common protocol here, and it seems everything is in flux since this thread is a concentration camp for writers and requesters from all boards. My status is as follows:

Am doing basic worldbuilding to establish a fantasy universe set in tech level 2 through 4, GURPS 4th edition standard rating, with functional magic as a background element. I hope it provides a believable standalone environment for both the conflict and characters. As proof-of-work, here's a snippet that discusses the female character. Feedback is appreciated, and this is of course not a complete physical description of either character.

(1/3)

>>10241030
>A slim hand closed around his torn sleeve.

>"Captain! Captain!" The sound was almost indistinguishable, a meek, feminine voice trying to cut through the chaos of the room. He turned to look at the woman who had poured him an ale. Of course he recognized her, in fact he was fairly certain that she had been there the day he had first been carried into the inn on a stretcher during the liberation assault, but after a day like today all the beauty he needed was at the bottom of a mug. Now that he thought about it, he hadn't asked for an ale, she had poured it for him as soon as he sat down. She also hadn't touched the coins he put on the counter. Thinking he had underpaid, and slightly annoyed by the noise of the room, he reached for his coinpurse again. Blushing, she shook her head and gestured for him to lean toward her. "There's a message for you, Captain."

(2/3)

>>10241059
>"So I've been told," he replied dryly. "Where is the commander? I have to make my report." She smiled at him, her large brown eyes making it difficult for him to grow angry with her for the delay. There seemed to be a hint of fey blood in her veins, as the upper part of each ear came to a narrow point, but aside from that she looked entirely human. The elven trend toward thin limbs and androgynous features was certainly absent, she was unmistakably a young maiden. A light dusting of freckles covered her cheeks, which he noticed only because of her blush. Her mouth formed words which he failed to hear over the din. "Say again?" He hunched over the counter, putting his head close to her mouth. To him it was a perfectly normal action, just as he might shove his face next to a comrade's to hear during an onslaught of glimmering mana-infused artillery shells, but it put his mouth kissing-close to her full lips.

>The serving girl stared at him with what he thought to be an expression of fright on her face for just an instant, then leaned forward as well. Her cheek pressed against his, lips brushing against his earlobe as she said, "you're the general now, Captain."

(3/3)

>>10240918

Strictly speaking they can literally explode from ingesting too much warpstone at once. I prefer to think that it makes them unbearably horny and promiscuous.

>>10241059
>>10241067
Looking good so far, my friend. I do have to point out that he asked "Where is the commander" and she replies "You're the general now," however.

I'm not sure what the GURPS stuff means, but it's nice to know you're putting so much thought into it.

>Will admit I'm not familiar with common protocol here
Ditto. Back on /tg/ and /d/ the stories themselves were usually posted elsewhere with links provided in the thread, but I don't know how that sort of thing goes around here.

Thank you, by the way, for picking the idea up! I'll be looking forward to it.

>>10241030
The traditional method is to place all the writing in a pastebin and put the link in your post

>>10241510
the threads here were slow enough that greentext stories could be posted here without too much hassle/trouble, and then the pastebin for said stories be posted after it was finished. With there now being more people, >>10241592 seems like a good option

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Bump

And also a question for those who have been on /trash/ for awhile. When a thread falls off the board does it not get archived?
This seemed to have happened last thread, which caused a few of the regulars from other boards, myself included, a bit of a scare.

Just tryin' to figure out the dynamic of this new board.

>>10242275
there's no archive system in /trash/, so any thread that goes beyond the 11th page will 404. Your best best is to use desuarchive to find dead threads (be warned, it does contain annoying popups that might be bad for your computer)

>>10242293
Thank you very much for the info.

>>10243054
And I thought I've seen everything by now.

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>>10243091
You'll never have seen everything.

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Who wants to try a miniature collaborative writing thing? I think some of the problem we've had in the past is the lack of immediacy to the thread, so instead, how about we do it within the thread?
If anyone's up for it, I was thinking someone would suggest a character or setting prompt, then one person would write a set-up in 1-2 posts, then the next person would write 1-2 posts continuing on from there, so on and so forth, with contributions open to anyone willing to give it a fair go. You'd keep the ending of your contribution relatively open to free expansion, but try to continually build towards a conclusion.
What say ye?

>>10243387
Could be worth a try, I guess. The hard part would be getting people to contribute, and keep anything resembling a coherent narrative.

>>10243387
while it does sound like a good idea, that idea might be better off on its own thread, the likes a CYOA (choose your own adventure) or a WWYR (write what you roll) thread.

Parallax here,

Finally getting back to writing, and making some progress on a few different fronts. First of all 2000 words added to my Repairman story. Since I've never posted in /trash/ before I'll just share it as if it's 100% new.

The Repairman (Working title)
Tags: Monstergirl, cyborg, M/F, fellatio, 69
8400 words

https://pastebin.com/tfMEDPVb

For those who have read it before, new stuff starts with: They stepped beneath the gate

>>10244211
Glad you made it here m8

Anybody got a good Princess Peach request they would like to see?

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>Long ago, a warrior of immense skill and fortitude forced himself upon the world, fighting in wars and great battles across the land in search of his equal.
>Many challenged his might, and some wet their blades with his blood.
>None ever bested him, however, and in the end, their legacies died out as his grew.
>Fearing that he might die a cowards death, weak and frail, shivering in his bed, he prepared a great sacrifice to summon a demon to him.
>He bargained with it, trading his soul for everlasting youth, with the promise that he would die truly on the day that another's blade pierced his heart.
>A warlord's life did he lead from there, gathering men and women to fight alongside him as he waged wars anew on the land, seeking his doom.
>Through the years he spilt blood in his quest, leaving a wake of death as he searched for his own.
>But death never found him.
>His companions died off one by one, withered by time and war, but never him.
>An age passed, but still he lived, always accompanied by his demon jailer.
>Swords gave way to guns, horses gave way to locomotives, towns and villages gave way to great metal cities.
>The warrior gave up his quest of an honourable death, falling into despair, goaded by the demon at his side, though even her voice soon fell quiet.
>Now, they both live in the cramped urban cities, whiling away their time and searching for distractions from their fate.

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>>10244723
Hoo boy, haven't thought of princess peach lewds in a long time.
How about this then:
Anon gets an opportunity to have a sleepover with the princess. On said night for fun she'd be wearing something like pic related for the occasion: tight pajamas that show off her big peach bomber booty.
While joshing around and playing some vidya games, anon gets the idea to use her ass as a cushion to lay his head on, surprising her. Amused, he plays with her ass while she tries to keep her eye on the vidya, groping, slapping, and burying face in her butt to make silly noises out of her throughout. When she finally finishes the level or dies, she shoves the controller (his turn) and sits on his lap, using her ass to make him hot and bothered as he plays the level too. When he bumps into a loading screen he takes the opportunity to push a few fingers into her ass crack to stimulate her, and things go on and get lewd from there.

Pretty tame, but it was something I came up with on the spot.

if I wanted to commission someone to write scenes for a game, how much would I be looking at paying per scene?

>>10245967
Off the top of my head, I'd wager their usual going rate, which on average, from what I've seen, is $1 per 100 words. If it's a continuous job, though, that might change the price, like 90 cents per 100 words. A discount due to consistent funds, that sort of thing.

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>>10242275
>When a thread falls off the board does it not get archived?

We use desuarchive.

>>10244772
That sounds like an interesting story concept, but I don't really see the pornographic angle to it

>>10246870
Not him, but people often get surprised when a thread goes straight to 404ville these days. On other boards (discount /b/), dead threads are locked in an 'archive' state for a few days on 4chan before they get 404'd for real, hence then the use for stuff like desuarchive.

>>10247718
Remember, /trash/ wasn't supposed to be a real board and just a dumping ground for "off-topic" threads of other boards. Granted, no mod aside from the /v/ ones actually seem to do that and others just delete those threads like normal.

Could any writefriends tell me about their experiences taking commissions for erotic fur lit? I'm thinking of getting into that sector.

>>10244772
>>10246884


Here's how I would tweak it.

That hot goat demon looking lady in the pic is the Demon of Hubris that guarantees the man will never die on one condition:

>"Never admit surrender in your heart."

Should the man break this condition, the demon will take his soul to her mysterious domain.But as time goes on, and things don't change much or get better for the man, he starts to question himself.

>"What the hell do I do with myself in such a peaceful era?"

Eventually, the goat demon lady convinces him to just give up over a few days. When the dude finally admits defeat one rainy day, the demon admits she is enamored by the man, a thing she never imagined. Before the demon lady takes the dude's soul, she "plays" with the man in a rather rough yet romantic fashion.

>"I'm so glad you saw things my way."

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>>10241592
Appreciated. Registered for an AO3 account based on advice from previous thread, will likely post full story there unless sound objection is raised. Account activation expected on 7-04.

>>10241510
Standard GURPS 4th-edition tech level chart, my use of which is a holdover from my /tg/ roots: http://gurps.wikia.com/wiki/Tech_Level
Chart provides a concrete definition list for communication of intent and expectation management. Appreciate feedback.

>>10240455
>Digits checked.
Was thinking along similar lines. Decided to mix social factors (social status, marriage as a strategic union, questionable loyalties, toxic heritage) to produce a volatile situation. Due to fantasy background, decided on unique citizenship assignment system based on military service that would add reluctance to his side. The default balance of power holds that the female has more to lose in this situation from sex than the male (loss of status and perceived value, implied treason against own people, danger of pregnancy, childbirth, difficulty of raising child on her own if man abandons responsibility). Reason needed for her to desire him and for him to initially deny her. Otherwise, he would have nothing to lose and everything to gain (immediate pleasure, implied conquest and subjugation, potential continuation of genetic legacy), while she has little to gain and much to lose.

Since the request was for consensual/romantic, there needs to be a perceived exchange that is of equal value. A secret relationship complicates the exchange and places a heightened emphasis on trust since neither will be able to appeal to a third party if one side violates the bargain. Integrity must be built and demonstrated to the reader, justifying the characters' trust in each other, otherwise the story fails to uphold its premise. This is of course my analysis, which may be flawed or non-applicable to a separate set of premises used for an alternate take on the story.

(1/2)

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>>10238440
>>10241510
>>10248627
Compacted summary of what I've been working on so far:

>Men kill in war. Hunger, cold, and disease kill more during the chaos. In a conquered settlement far to the north, a freshly brevetted captain-now-general struggles to hold together the garrison legion despite constant attacks from indigenous resistance groups who somehow are able to bring high-yield explosives and powerful spellcraft to bear. After a day of blood and pain, he retires to his quarters. A familiar servant girl, always in the corner of his eye but never underfoot, shyly brings him his meal and a washing up basin. He's not taken great note of her before for obvious reasons, and she's not directly engaged him because of a natural shyness. She helps him by scrubbing his weary body down with the warm water and rag, telling him how much she appreciates all he does to protect the settlement during these troubled times. It's what he needs to hear. Still, he shouldn't trust her, anyone could be an insurgent, even though she's been working in the inn turned command post since before occupation began and is about as trustworthy as can be. The innkeeper took her in after her parents died due to food shortages caused by the war. She's another victim in his eyes, and he doesn't want to take advantage of her.

(2/4) (Overage)

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>>10248888
>Due to the way his empire's citizenship works, any children he has with her would be citizens, but descendants beyond the second generation would not be citizens of his empire unless they or their fathers earned it through military service. Citizenship passes from the earner, to child, to grandchildren, expiring if no further military service is undertaken. Furthermore, nothing compels him to recognize any children from her as heirs. Technically, as someone living in an occupied settlement, she is an unperson. While martial law protects the populace from violent crimes, and a uniform code of justice holds the soldiers back from savagery, she has no rights within the greater empire. Everyone in the village is ranked lower than slaves on the pecking order.

>And there's the rub. While it's almost expected that the lower ranks will merrily ravish any woman who winks at them, though violent rape is still severely punished, officers are held to a higher standard. Officers are citizens, enlisted are earning their citizenship. Any children from the enlisted are more meat for the grinder... that is to say, more young civilians who will grow into the next generation of citizenship-seekers and fill the legions' ranks!

>He also can't claim her as a slave, which would add legitimacy to their relationship and protect her against him easily disowning her, since they have enough trouble with the settlement's populace without the new general snapping up a poor orphan girl as a sex-toy, no matter how willing she might be to wear his collar and serve him faithfully while enjoying the protection of his authority. He doesn't want to see this land razed, mana-scorched, and resettled in two generations. Before this pointless war, which was sparked by unwise alliances with smaller factions and ballooned too quickly for cooler heads to prevail, these people were valued trading partners.

(3/4)

>Also, how rare are /trash/ quads? Seems like a slow board.

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>>10249312
>Worse, she has a touch of the deepwoods in her blood. Though quite human, her pointed ears mark her in the eyes of the northern folk as a magnet for ill omens, an illegitimate daughter of the ancient gods, an eternal reminder of their hunger for man-flesh. The young officer is skeptical of such superstitions, a staunch believer in the One True Goddess and the Horned Flame of enlightenment, but he cannot deny that there are things wandering the frozen woodlands that should not be. Few men of the north dare to approach the servant girl, none dare to bed her, and only a fool who wished to die in unspeakable pain would try and take her by force. Such a dangerous heritage belies her meek nature and eager work ethic, but it cannot be denied. Even so, she shyly offers her lips after confessing why she's always looked after his needs since he was first carried in wounded on a stretcher, he ends up kissing her, and it all goes downhill from there. She hides in the closet when someone arrives with a stack of reports for him to read, and looks a bit guilty afterward, worried about ruining his career. He sits her down on the bed, hugs her, and tells her she's the first good thing he's had in a long time.

I hope this is satisfactory to the requester. Will post more when I have a draft chapter written, hopefully within a few days from time of this posting.

(4/4)

>>10249312
>Also, how rare are /trash/ quads? Seems like a slow board.

About 1 in 1,000

Oh wow the last thread went fast with the new population

>>10245455
just thought of something to add after ass crack stimulation, assuming this anon is still here:

If you need specifics for beyond there, he could give her a hybrid buttjob, one on her tight pajama pants and one that takes advantage of her ass crack, shoving his dick in the crack while she lies down, thus covering her pants with cum inside and out. After which, a lust-driven peach glomps the anon and they promptly fuck like newweds tryharding to get pregnant

Does anyone else collect story ideas that they never really get around to using?

>>10252718
Hotdogging is something we can all appreciate.

>>10254724
There is an unfilled request sheet. Even better, I'm in good contact with the guy who runs the thing, so I can edit it with the story seeds.

>>10254724
My list of ideas and prompts is bighuge.

Requesting lewd red riding hood story.

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>>10254724
I have a Notepad++ file dedicated solely to story ideas. If I manage to type enough of a certain idea then I transfer whatever I've typed for it into a proper document to see if I can finish it. At the moment that file is 1200+ lines long.

>>10254724
At first I used my email as drafts to potentially email them to authors about commission ideas, but now I write down all my story ideas/request/commissions in a word doc for future use

>>10255263
>>10254885
>>10254743
Ah, neat. We should share.

Admittedly most of my newer ones are /ss/-based that I grabbed off of /co/ recently, so chances are most of you won't go for them.

>>10255014
>Requesting lewd red riding hood story.

D here.

Any specific fetishes?

>>10255614

Just tag em up correctly and I'm certain somebody will like them.

>>10258081
She must overpower the wolf and break him to her own will, then force him to impregnate her and look after her whilst she carries their halfbreed offspring to term.

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>>10255014
Like pic related kinda lewd?

>>10260884
>break

D here.

Ehh... that's not really my speed.

>>10255614
And anyone who wants to take a request from it can have one, they've been sitting on that sheet for years in some cases.

Alright, I really need to get to work on writing today, I'm super behind.

>>10261305
Very well, she merely dominates him, so that he cannot imagine a course of action that does not serve her, whether through protection or otherwise.

Also I'd like to see some claw-scratching/small bites, please and thank you.

>>10260884
>>10261305
>>10261778

Heehee and this where I break into the scene. That's exactly my speed, anon.

>>10238389
Sorry I'm taking so long with this. Finding it hard to motivate myself to write, lately. Honestly if you want to give the outline to someone else, I wouldn't be offended, because right now I'm getting no more than a paragraph done before wanting to quit writing forever. It's not the subject matter, either. Haughty, gothic, succubi and demon girls? I'm all about that.

Right now I'm trying to go straight to a full text, which is slowing me down. If you want, I can just do a greentext, at least to tide you over.

>>10263683
Perhaps you're suffering from burnout? A weekly schedule usually does that over time. Well I don't mind playing the waiting game for this fic since your stuff always comes out pretty good in the end. Plus good digimon smut is hard to come by. Not sure what I can suggest, but I'll be sure to keep an eye out for it.

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5000 word update, finished the hetero version, Ebooks coming soon.

Outpost 2: Snowed In - Hetero Edition:
https://pastebin.com/3m4XKHD5
30,041 words.
final tags (boy i really need to start keeping track of these now that the threads go down fast):
threesome, FFM, assisted blowjob, deepthroat, kissing, snowballing, face sitting, creampie, femdom, messy, long tongue, biting, scratching, maledom, size difference, large insertion, dark skinned female, excessive cum, size queen

>>10264763
that's the funny thing, /trash/ is a more populated and faster board then both /aco/ and /d/ and has been for several months now

>>10264088
I'm going to play some Cyber Sleuth later. Maybe that'll add some motivation for Digimon smut. Thanks for being understanding!

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I've got another short romp finished today. Unfortunately I think I've ended up writing the most difficult to explain story possible. This is a mean-spirited little KanColle fanfiction taking the interpretation that the girls are proportional in size to their real-life warship counterparts. So of course, I paired up the smallest and the largest and made the smaller girl a dom without considering whether I should.

SubSlave
(A Kantai Collection Fanfiction)
By Parallax
3995 words
Tags: F/F, Giantess, Lezdom, noncon, giant clit
https://pastebin.com/aakh58jw

I'm not exactly in love with how this one turned out, I felt like I was really struggling with the girl-on-girl sex scenes. Maybe I need to read some more stories as inspiration. Still, I feel like I've accomplished my goal of trying something new and actually finishing it. I would appreciate C&C so I can do better next time.

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Happy 4th of July folks! In honor of America's birthday, requesting for lovey dovey Statue of Liberty on Lady Justice lesbian smut

>>10264784
>/trash/ is a more populated and faster board then both /aco/ and /d/ and has been for several months now

Which would explain why the board has gotten worse lately, baka

>>10264763
Grave Goods has been said to be planned to bloody long in the past, any idea as to an estimated timeframe for that?

Sharing an old smut/romance fic I loved to read back in highschool, involving a human pairing up with a harpy in the World of Warcraft universe.
https://www.fanfiction.net/s/7952682/1/Rennah

>>10264088
And thanks for the faith and patience. Means a lot.

>>10265784
Which board are you talking about, /trash/ or /d/?

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>>10266215
It's up next, I got around 20k words of it done already, so it should take me another month maybe.
Sorry it's been languishing on the bench for so long, it's been an absolute quagmire, I won't go into the gory details but it was a joint project between me and my (now) ex and it's been wrapped up in more relationship issues than Tiger Woods.
At this point I just want it done and out of the way.
Not much of an excuse, but I'll bang it out soon, gotta work on the ebooks for Outpost 2 tomorrow and then I can get to work the day after.

>>10254724
I have at least 4 dozen. I keep telling myself that someday I'll stop being a lazy piece of shit.

>>10264763
Snek, have you ever written anything about Boraelian fertility rates anywhere?
I'm just curious how often the casual romps end with someone swelling up with kittens, for either subspecies.

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>>10271027
That's a good point, I've not really reconciled their behavior with their biology on that front yet.
I've said that Equatorials have a historically high mortality rate and that they birth litters of kittens, while the Polars give birth to one child like humans do and expend a lot of resources raising it.
I toyed with the idea of giving them heat cycles, but decided it was too trite in the end. Also, any kind of fertility cycle would interfere with the Equatorial's reproductive method, whereby only the strongest and most dominant genes are passed on through some light-hearted raping.
Maybe some kind of cycle would work for the Polars, it's minor compared to some of their larger differences, and they can be a lot more selective of their mates.
I'll have to have a think about the Equatorials though, especially in the modern era overpopulation would be an issue if they're able to get pregnant from every minor dispute.

>>10271738
Just thought of a Worlds Apart sequel, where Liz realizes that Jamie is planning to propose to her, due to her knowledge of Earth courting rituals.

Or reversed, with Jamie realizing Liz is looking to court him. Or double, with each looking to propose to each other/gain their in-laws approval without knowing about the others intentions.

>>10265219

Man, that giant clit-fucking scene is something else in a good way.

>>10269844
Shiny was your ex? Man, that explains a LOT.

>>10238143
Oh god ts so hard to find you people. I don't think I'll ever be able to grasp the mental gymnastics the mods used to move this.

>>10274403
The closest any of us has gotten to that is "because go fuck yourself, I'm the one with the banhammer here".

How do you people go about outlining stories? I like to write the plot out like greentext then write the rough draft.

>>10269844
>I won't go into the gory details but it was a joint project between me and my (now) ex and it's been wrapped up in more relationship issues than Tiger Woods.
Shit, that's a rough one bud, good luck

>>10271738
>I'll have to have a think about the Equatorials though, especially in the modern era overpopulation would be an issue if they're able to get pregnant from every minor dispute.
I mean given that your equatorials are essentially sexy but exponentially more retarded krogan to begin with, it fits

>>10274423
>How do you people go about outlining stories? I like to write the plot out like greentext then write the rough draft.

D here.

I tend not to outline, but I know the beginning and usually the end, and let it sort of wiggle around from there.

>>10274423
I'll usually list out major plot points or scenes I don't want to forget. Then I'll work through from the beginning, though if I feel particularly inspired to write a certain scene, I'll skip ahead and find a way to slot it in later.

>>10255614
https://pastebin.com/YuPDrWEY

>>10275376
>Mercenary is asked to deflower the new (brown) girl at his favorite brothel, since the madame knows he is gentle in bed. He falls in love with her, buys her contract, and takes her as his reverse-trap "squire."

For the love of all that is holy, someone do that.

>>10274423
AA here, I tend to painstakingly plan out every scene in great detail so I know exactly what I want to write. Unfortunately for me, this also means making the outline can be as time-consuming as writing the story itself, and my own perfectionist tendencies don't help at all.

anyone taking commissions?

>>10276597
It depends on what you have in mind.

>>10275534
I remember someone here mentioning that we need more stuff with sacred prostitution and all, and this prompt looks like it'd be really good for it; say the girl is an aspiring initiate to the cult of the goddess of liquor and whores instead of being sold into prostitution

>>10276651
Eh that feels more like an attempt to cram two ideas into one instead of letting each develop on their own.
Plus part of the first prompt feels like it's meant to be the knight "rescuing" the girl, which doesn't work otherwise and tonaly clashes.

>>10276651
>>10276908
It would maybe work if the girl signed up for reasons other than whoring and wanted out for that reason
Say the god in question has the domains of travel and promiscuity, and the girl signed up for the idea of travel and sex with cute exotic boys in faraway places, only to be dumped in a cheap brothel two miles up the road from her hometown for a her time as an "acolyte"
So then the knight guy is asking her about her story, before or after sex, and ends up throwing many dollars at the priestess running the place to let her break her commitment to the order and come with him
Would that work with both of your ideas, you think?

>>10275534
That one in particular has been on my back burner for a looong time. It's easily my favorite idea I've ever had, but that's the problem. I never feel like I do it justice, so it never gets finished and I end up starting over.

Good news for that Little Red Riding Hood requester: I finished the outline for the first half of two stories.

Bad news for that Little Red Riding Hood requester: The first part is actually futa and the one doing the domming and wolf-child making will be the Lumberjill.

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>>10273727
No, lol.
Speaking of Shiny I've not seen him for a while, I should really email him and make sure he knows where we've gone.

>>10274462
<3

>>10274423
I don't outline ever, I have a vague idea for a plot in my head and then I just start writing and let it develop organically. In my experience a lot of people tend to get very bogged down in the planning stage and often it's just a better idea to get the ball rolling and worry about the finer details later. You can always go back and make edits, but that first push is the hard one.

Also for those that asked why I go to such lengths to produce hetero edits for primarily bisexual stories, or writers who might be interested in some demographics data, pic related is why.
You can reliably triple your views on a lot of sites with what are usually minor edits and genderbends. I confine the sex scenes to their own chapters, which both makes them easier to find on repeat viewings, and makes them modular so that they can be removed and switched around in editing.
Change some pronouns here, cut some scenes there, and voila you now have two stories that appeal to different groups.

>>10278956
D here.

I can't imagine what a genderbent version of any of my stuff would even look like? Take all the futa out of The Long Haul and make it that the cocks are ejaculating prosthetic cocks?

>>10244723
is this anon still here?

>>10279030
...Men?

>>10279031
I am still here and will probably write the outline for it tomorrow. I'm a bit burned out from today. Any questions or???

>>10279586
ah, just wanted to ask if there are any kinks you aren't interested in before I throw out another idea of things to add.

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Nice butt bump.

>>10279586
I have very few hard passes, so just fire away.

>>10245455
>>10252718

Another drawfag here. I really like your Peach ideas, do you have any more? I can draw but I lack the inspiration and anon + Peach fantasy is exactly what I'd like to draw.

>>10279099
D here.

But... guys jizzing into coffee... that would be gross.

>>10274423
>I like to write the plot out like greentext then write the rough draft.

Basically this. I used to not do an outline at all, but I found just going straight to the rough draft wasn't working for me anymore; it was exhausting. Having an outline at least gives me benchmarks and allows me to keep certain events in mind so I can foreshadow and/or set them up better.

>>10279099
Not quite. Even cuntboys really doesn't work as genderbent futa. For most interpretations, futa have everything. So, to genderbend it they'd have to have what? nothing?

I'd argue the opposite of futa would be some kind of strange asexual eunuch with no genitals or breasts.

>>10282549
I could see cute traps maybe working.

>>10281887
Well, in that case.
While I am not into farts, I am into smelling butts and assholes. If you do write in a scene where he buries his face into peach's ass (during her turn gaming), would it be possible for him to take a deep sniff with and without her pants in the way and compare scents?
When they both get lewd, he can also give her a sloppy rimjob as proof that he isn't bothered at all.
Finally while a bit obvious, I think he should fuck and come in all of her holes, maybe even receive a jiggling anal spanking sex in their session.
>>10282090
Oh really? Well, you're free to draw any of the lewd peach ideas above. In particular I like the pic and her tight pajama pants, so any ass gropes/slaps should have her wear them. If you want a particular idea, maybe she could have those pants pulled down halfway across her booty and an anon shoving his hand inside the large ass crack, her moaning or gasping in surprise.

Thanks for the consideration

>>10283631
>If you want a particular idea, maybe she could have those pants pulled down halfway across her booty and an anon shoving his hand inside the large ass crack, her moaning or gasping in surprise.

Yes, I like ideas like these, The more details, the better.

Would anyone be interested in writing a story about a reverse trap seducing her gay friend into some heterocurious experimentation?

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Snek here, here's the first 2500 words of the Borealan pirate story. I'm supposed to be resuming work on Grave Goods tomorrow but I want to work on this too when I have time (and only after I've reached my daily quota), just because it's been scratching at the inside of my skull for weeks.

Rig Runner:
https://pastebin.com/xmLQAjyG
>no tags yet
(may be poorly edited because I'm tired as fuck)

Here's the Ebooks for Outpost 2:
Hetero: https://www.patreon.com/file?h=12527918&i=1183996
Bisexual: https://www.patreon.com/file?h=12527918&i=1183998

For those that aren't familiar with me, they're free, Patreon is just super convenient for hosting direct download links.

>>10279030
Probably not the best idea for your brand of smut, lol. Take anything to do with futa and make it about regular dudes, and it's just gross. But maybe some people are into that, who knows!

Well I guess Snek is my ex now. Now sure how to handle this.

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Requesting for a fapfic based on this image with a reluctant Mandy. Would like a nice intro/build-up showing how anon managed to convince such an unfriendly girl to get frisky with him, complete with Mandy reluctantly allowing him to ejaculate inside her.

The guy should have lots of stamina and capable of cumming several times in a row

>>10288373
>Well I guess Snek is my ex now. Now sure how to handle this.

D here.

Snek ex.

Snex.

...

K'NEX.

>>10274418
It feels like the mods have gotten it into their heads that *chans are meant to be more purely image driven than discussion driven, when I'd argue that's exactly what the booru imageboard format is for. *chans are an evolution of a pure text format that had images added in to them.

Christ, in the original forms only the OP could have an image that was used either as a prompt or an illustration for discussion. Years ago in what is often regarded (fairly or unfairly) as being a better time, deliberately constructed PIC UNRELATED and WON'T LET ME POST WITHOUT A PICTURE images were a sizeable minority of OPs depending on the board, and the concept of reaction images practically exists because most image replies once they existed were an accessory to the conversation.

Are we back?

>>10290555
We are.

I thought this was the end for a while there

>>10291636
Most of the website was out of whack, not just us.

>>10291902

It didn't affect the board of peace. RMYT

Is the anon writing the Peach story still here?

>>10293730
OR of that story, yeah I believe so. If you scroll up he chatted with me a bit. Supposedly he'll be working on an outline today.

>>10293771

Are you this anon? >>10245455
If so, can you come up with more anon having fun with Peach story ideas? It's refreshing in a sea of Bowser raping Peach fanfics.

>>10293968
>sea of Bowser raping Peach fanfics
What about Peach raping Bowser?

>>10294069

Surprisingly overused too, tons of futa fanfics out there.

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>>10293968
yeah that's me. I'm surprised you're interested in more peach ideas. My priority is the sleepover one, but I guess I can make up a few more if you like.

Let's see...Peach's dress is pretty poofy, so I could imagine her trying to keep a relationship with (different) anon a secret, but a turn of events has him hiding underneath her dress all day while she does business (chatting with folks/mario, greeting the populace, getting kidnapped, etc). Of course it doesn't take a genius for him to start taking advantage of the case, and messing with her legs, ass and pussy throughout the day while she tries hiding the pleasure. Antics such as tickling, fingering, wedgies, slaps, taking her panties, that kind of stuff. Despite her embarrassment from anon, she doesn't seem to stop him. Not even Bowser's antics will stop him as anon decides to eat her out on his ship. A thoroughly day-time teased and sexually frustrated Peach then has rough sex with that anon. So when Mario comes to save her, anon goes hiding again, letting the fun start once more.

Whether anon is younger or just shorter than Peach would be up to author's discretion.
>>10293968
>Bowser raping peach
Huh, those are still being made?

>>10294203

I'm interested on your ideas because they are fun, lewd and creative, keep them coming!

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>>10294230
Well I do have one more idea, but it's more rough/straightforward. Still more fond of the sleepover idea.

Anon is out enjoying the beach with Peach, enjoying seeing her pink bikini outfit. As he closes his eyes and soak in the sun on the towel, Daisy decides to sit upon his face in her swimsuit outfit to greet the couple, to Peach's dismay. From there, sexual jealousy hijinks occur, such as both of them wanting Anon's attention when trying to teach him how to swim (emphasis on close body quarters, boobs pushing onto his chest), comparing swimsuits and letting him grope them both to determine which has the better swimsuit (groping areas are boobs, belly, thighs, and ass). Peach wins the panties, but Daisy wins the chest. Finally they play a beach game or something that makes them hot and sweaty. When anon decides to hit the showers, both of them join to determine the final competition: sex. Threesome intensifies, just like out of one of those harem anime beach episodes.

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The somewhat faltering thread on /d/ and all these gifs (pic related) I keep finding make me want to write ficlets about mass effect characters being used as xenomorph breeding fodder.

But first I need ideas, people. Basic "how did we get here/what happens" will do.

>>10295569

Nice, you are pretty good at coming up with good setups, very tempted to make a comic with these.

>>10295584
Reapers use the bodies of overpowered civilisations to create new reaper hulls. I'm not sure if you can actually go inside a reaper, but you could easily fudge it that Xenomorphs existed in a past cycle and were assimilated, and somehow hibernated or reformed inside the reaper. Maybe the reaper is dead on some planet after the ME3 ending, and after going to investigate, the characters get locked inside the reaper while the Xenomorphs begin to awaken.

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>>10295774
Huh, hadn't thought of anything so clever. All I'd come with was "crash-landing on alien world/exploration mission gone wrong".

That's a good idea, actually. I'll consider it.

What would you have happen?

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https://www.sofurry.com/view/1206922

First person gay boy sex with a Blaziken
enjoy

>>10295833
Small science team goes in to the reaper to take samples, mysteriously find themselves locked inside. I think it might be established that you can't get a signal out, so the rest of the crew doesn't suspect anything for quite some time, while the xenomorphs start to hunt the science team down and drag them away to be impregnated. Cue whatever combination of alien biomechanics and insatiable lust you happen to enjoy. By the time one of the science team is able to escape and get an SOS out a week or two later, pretty much everyone is already completely gravid, the next batch of 'morphs just about ready to go to town on the incoming rescue teams.
You've also got the indoctrination angle to layer on top of that if you're into it, instead of 'I must destroy the universe' brainwashing, it's 'I must guzzle more alien seed', which could be fun.

>>10296013
Hrm, could definitely work. And it's so open-ended you could fit any number of characters into it. Well done, anon.

What would the xenomorphs that come from different species be like, though? For instance, how would ones from Miranda and Liara be different?

>>10296074
I honestly have no idea how xenomorphs 'work', so I'm not much help there. I assume they take on some of the host species' major traits like general body form, maybe some form of psychic ability in the case of Asari?

>>10295913
>https://www.sofurry.com/view/1206922

You need to registered to see the story, friend.

>>10278956
What site is that? I'm not familiar with the UI.

>>10296708
oh shit
gay
https://pastebin.com/9erjBhyj

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Resuming work on Grave Goods as promised, 2000 word update, new content at "So you travel West, across the sea and into the land of the Song?"

Grave Goods:
https://pastebin.com/PvhfYmN4
tags so far:
>oh god I don't even fucking remember, traps, gynoids, honey used for sexual purposes, blowjob, handjob, kissing, petting, prostitution, elves

>>10296973
StoriesOnline.net, I recommend it.

>>10296160
Official media varies in how heavily they borrow from their host, but they usually share some defining physical traits like the Predaliens having their "dreadlocks" and pincer mouths.

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Taking up requests. If you're curious to see what kind of stories I write, take a look at this short story I wrote. https://pastebin.com/dndx5hSq If you don't want to bother to read it, it's a story that involves Filia from Skullgirls, weight gain and belly stuffing.

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>>10300271
do you do any request?
Requesting a story of Tethu (right) spending the day with Esna (left) in the spring of their Oasis, swimming around and having fun for a nice bonding, touching experience.
Lewd optional, if he decides to try and touch Esna elsewhere that isn't her hands, such as her head, or breast, or that big mermaid butt.
I wonder what fucking a water spirit feels like..

The series is Ever Oasis.

>>10300742
Ooh. This could be an interesting one. Do you have any more information on the characters or should I just get to writing shortly?

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>>10300783
Hmm...well, the duo pretty much host their oasis, with Tethu being the chief and Esna being the source of the water.
He's the last 'child' of the great tree while she is the last water spirit.

Esna is somewhat larger than Tethu.

I think that's all the info you need without me going into spoilers about the game, but if you have any questions feel free to ask

>>10301172
That's all I need to know for know. They look like they would make a good couple. I've never written a story like this so I'll have to explore some things.

>>10300271

You write belly stuff and weight gain? Fuck requests, do you take commissions?

>>10302344
Nah, only requests. I don't want to make a living out of stories involving women getting fat.

>>10302452

God dammit, just like 99% of people who can write said material. I must be cursed

>>10302490
I wouldn't consider myself that good of an writer to earn money from it anyway. I'm pretty sure there are other people out there who have written better weight gain stories than me.

>>10302514

There are, but they also do the same "eh i hate getting money for doing things I enjoy" shtick as you

>>10302541
And what about the ones who do take commissions? Are they good, too?

>>10302832

Yes, but they have lines/queues to the high heavens and good luck ever commissioning them

>>10301172
Alright, another question. What's the relationship between them like? What are their personalities?

>>10302945
This is true, I could probably make a lot of money on commissions but then I'd never be able to write any of the things I want to write.
It takes a long time to produce a story, and you really have to moderate your time properly to avoid taking on more work than you can handle.

>>10303423


What if I were to only commission things you like and give you full freedom to dictate how the story goes?

As for the time, I'm patient, and I do know that (good) writing takes a long time.

>>10303708
Those are pretty much the only commissions I take, yeah, (I'm Snekguy by the way not the guy you were talking to, still adjusting to not having a name field).

>>10303744

We need to find someplace other than trash, this shit blows.

>>10303377
Esna (water spirit) is somewhat naive, but passionate when talking about her goals and is often optimism. Tethu (seedling) doesn't have direct dialog (though he does talk), but looks up to his brother who taught him the ideals of being a leader. Ultimately his personality may be up to some freedom of the player to decide, but he is determined.

If you need specifics, then see a portion of this video as a sample of their personalities at work:
https://youtu.be/1nbssHdFTus?t=5m25s (5:25-23:33, with 16:22 introducing Esna)

They have a pretty close relationship over time as the game goes on.

>>10303863
Now I feel confident enough to write this. Here's hoping I do a good job at it and not stray too far from the canon.

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Snekguy here, 2000 word update to Rig Runner, no tags yet, new content at " No, he couldn't just hand his livelihood over to them"

https://pastebin.com/xmLQAjyG

>>10302945
D here. I'd be willing to give it a shot for a commission, depending on the subject matter.

Why don't you email me at dtales AT protonmail DOT com and we can work out something?

>>10306191

While I've seen your work and know you have talent D, my policy is to only commission stuff from artists/writers that I know they like too. There's a massive different in quality when an artist/writer is into the subject they're writing about, regardless of skill level.

Unless of course, you're telling me you're into belly stuffing and/or weight gain.

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>>10303773
We love you too.

>>10303773
Too bad nobody can agree where that might be.

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>>10306270
>Unless of course, you're telling me you're into belly stuffing and/or weight gain.

D here.

...Well, to say the least, I'm not as 'into' weight gain as futa, lesbians, public nudity, humiliation etc, but... I do like food. And I SORT of toyed with 'belly expansion' in Slime of Your Life, where a slim human woman inexplicably wants a round tummy.

It would also depend on the specifics of the story and how long you wanted it. Nevertheless, that policy is sensible, anon. I tried writing a 'weight gain' muscle fic for an anon ages ago, but I never finished that. (This was a request, not a commission.) Maybe I should get back to that.

For your approval, the closest I've so far come to writing a belly-expansion fic.

Slime of Your Life
http://pastebin.com/utmXWknh
https://www.literotica.com/s/slime-of-your-life
>tags: slimegirl, slime tentacles, fantasy, fantasy races, interracial, condoms, elf, centaur, futa-on-female, multiple penises, slime vore, same-size vore?, lots of semen, anal, oral, stomach bulging, public, engulfment, doctor

alright, but consider: gokkun based weight gain

>>10307395


Slime of your life is exactly why I know you have talent, but also know you're not into the subjects I'm looking for. It's still an awesome story either way.

>>10308534
Not a bad idea. But you would either need:
>A fucking TON of men and/or semen
>Or one/a few men with inhumanly high semen production

>>10308818
D here.

Well, thank you very much. I hope you find a bellywriter to fill your request.

>>10295718
Out of curiosity, what does your art look like?

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Snek here, signed a contract with my artist to produce book covers that I can actually sell, so eventually I should have one for all of the major novels and I'll go back and do another editing pass to bring the older stories up to standard.
Here's the draft of one for Fineprint, with Cola, Ursi and Xhe.
Next I'll probably get one done for Purple Heart, then maybe Or Die Alone.
I figure descending order of popularity is a safe bet.

>>10311326
Good luck, my dear Snek.

>>10311326
Xhe's silhouette might warrant a little touching up around her left thigh and hip area, at the moment it kind of looks like she has a giant cock.

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>The Villk are a race of docile humanoids who wander densely forested mountains, commonly known among the humans who live near them as "mountain demons". The stark white face against their black fur appears like a mask, but is in fact the Villk's actual face, almost always wearing a blank expression.
>Though their contact with humans is rare, there was a period proceeding the passing of a strict prostitution ban that forced brothels in a small mountain town to use a desperate loophole by seeking out non-human females to use. A few Villk were captured from the nearby mountains and brought back to see how they fared as prostitutes.
>The Villk were highly curious and cooperative learners despite the language barrier, but they proved rather unpopular with most clients, who were turned-off or downright frightened by the Villk's ghostly stares. The captured Villk were soon left to wander back into the mountains, seeming unperturbed by their brief alien experience among humans.

Does this creature sound interesting for a story? Like a story involving a man buying a servant and getting one of these silent forest demons for a maid

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>>10314169
I guess? I'm too terrified of the face to even get a semi.


Those eyes...

>>10314169
I like the idea. Depends on the execution, but I always do like exotic/alien interactions, seeing the clash of cultures and how they work around it.

>>10314169

I could see something interesting. Like an extremely lonely rich dude getting past how unsettling the eyes are until he makes a move. I'm guessing a more weird fantasy slant to the potential piece.

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>>10312220

D here.

Someone said "she has a giant cock" and I appeared in the room like someone said Beetlejuice three times.

I keep thinking about writing either a sequel or a short expansion story for The Long Pull. Anyone in this thread interested in that?

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2000 word update, new content at "He set off down the squalid street"

Grave Goods:
https://pastebin.com/PvhfYmN4
>no new tags

>>10314169
It's not the eyes that unsettle me, it's that it looks like it has the head of a deer and I'm not interested in furries.

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>>10315332
It's really just a weird humanoid, closer to a strange mountain spirit than a shitty lolfurry

>>10316014
How much do these creatures vary? This one's head features are quite different in comparison to the other picture.

>>10316014
That's real hard to believe since I can clearly see the fur and animal ears on them.

>>10316127
They can have different masks and different animal parts like antlers or large ears.

Like said, mountain demons that can take some animistic features.

>>10316144

Look, nobody can force you to like them, but I personally think these are low on the furry scale. They just have animal features, but it doesn't look like it's their focal point like it is with furries.

>>10316263
Are there any more defining behavioral traits for them? Or are they purposefully left mysterious since they have little contact with humans?

>>10316595
They're purposely left mysterious because of that, as well as their masks don't betray any emotion, ie perfect eerie poker faces.

But you can still tell with their body movements, they are curious and docile, to the point you could capture one, put her in a maid outfit and tell her to act like one. Somewhat submissive as you can see, but definitely the type to look over you as you sleep.

>>10316666
Meh, doesn't really sound interesting to me. Apart from the blank stare, they have no defining features either physically or in regard to their character. At best, acceptable greentext fodder but an actual story with one would work poorly because "mysterious" and "submissive" without anything else at all makes for a dull personality.

Also, body movements don't show up in pictures so you just sound ridiculous trying to explain it.

>>10317276
Well hell man, I'm just trying to work off two images one artist made and a vague description

Hard to do it justice

>>10317351
That's a sign it's not worth doing justice to. If the artist can't give a proper description, he doesn't get any writefaggotry of his work. Simple as that.

This shit lives and dies off of details. No detail, no work.

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>>10315332
>going to /trash/ and not liking furries

Where do you think you are?

Any writefags working on any of the requests ITT?

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Weird request but does anyone have depressing sex or masturbation stories? Pic unrelated.

>>10319903
I think now's the time to work on the story No.10300742 requested.

>>10307036
Requesting dragon maid sex lewds, the kind where she has the receiving end of the bdsm fetish

>>10317502
Need we remind you that some of us were forced here against our will?

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>>10326670
>>10317502
Settle, both of yous. We're stuck here now, arguing with eachother isn't going to help anything.

We had people who liked different stuff on /d/ and /aco/, no different from here.

Write what you want, let others write what they want, simple as.

It's not worth fighting over.

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>>10317502
At least I can post art of my Equatorials that I specifically designed to comply with global rule 3 now, the /d/ mods are such fags. .

>>10328432
Smol liz best liz

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Has anyone ever written anything for Towergirls?

>>10329206
I think we have tower girls threads here on /trash/, so probably.

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Best trash princess

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https://www.patreon.com/posts/11774816

writeup from a previous thread about a boy being stalked, threatened, and then fucked by assorted killer Japanese spirits

>>10333669
Speaking of this...
>>10328432
Snek: Have you checked out "Hachishaku Hachiwa Keraku Meguri"? The doujin seems right up your alley and it got an OVA as well, at least of the first chapter. Size diff, gentle femdom, a chapter with a giant snekgirl, nightmare waifu etc. The later chapters get progressively more /d/ and outside the norm, though I dunno what your limits are.

>>10334300

gonna need a link

beep

>>10335318
https://exhentai.org/g/1051020/25f6a1305f/

http://hentaihaven.org/hachishaku-hachiwa-keraku-meguri-igyou-kaikitan-episode-1/

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Somebody tell me if writing something based on this image is a terrible. heretical idea.

>>10338395
If you really need to ask, you already know the answer.

>>10241030 reporting.
Update on progress. Have 20,000 words for maid and officer story. Requires edits (spelling, consistency, clarity) and completion of outlined ending. Spent longer writing rising action to explain officer's elevated rank and building relationship between officer and maid through conversation and physical contact than expected. Intend to edit, break into chapters, and upload to AO3 for ease of reading. If other upload option is preferred, am open to advice.

Unexpected external complications (power outages, data loss) have impeded my writing time, otherwise I would have the requested story finished. Embarrassing to have this long of a turnaround on first request I've written. Apologies.

To relieve mental stress between edits, and due to sudden inspiration while browsing thread, cranked out short Xenomorph/Mass Effect crossover story in response to thread prompt provided by >>10295584. Creation of short story also provided reassurance due to unexpected scope creep on maid and general request. Will post tags, summary, and pastebin link separately from this, due to character count limit.

>>10326230
Breeding/milking in a sterile lab environment instead of an organic hive, but still same fetish as what I chose for the Xenomorph story. Good stuff.

>>10319903
Affirmative. I am working on requests detailed above. Is it proper thread-specific etiquette to post working drafts, or is it preferred that only candidate drafts are posted to avoid toxic self-promotion?

>>10340183
you're in /trash/. From my time being in the thread (the beginning), anything goes. If your story is frequently updated, one updatable pastebin link should be enough to keep track.

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>>10340183
>>10295584
>Milk, Eggs, and Facehuggers: A Mass Effect Alternate Ending

>Character Tags, Alien: Xenomorph (Facehugger)

>Character Tags, Mass Effect: Commander Shepard (female), Garrus Vakarian, Tali'Zorah, Liara T'Soni, Clone Shepard (female) (bit part), Dr. Karin Chakwas (bit part), Samara and daughters (bit part), Miranda Lawson (mention), EDI (mention)

>Content Tags: Oral, vaginal, anal, milking, egging (insertion, incubation, birthing), male prostate stimulation, MF, FF, MFF, MFFF, bondage, corruption, mindbreak (moral restructuring), sex toys (double-ended dildo)

>Note: No gore, blood, or the like is detailed.

>Summary: Captured by Xenomorphs, Commander Shepard reflects on how much she has accomplished and wonders if it was all for naught. Forced to incubate and birth alien eggs, she thinks back to her loves and heroic achievements, then gradually comes to an unsettling conclusion about the galaxy's future.

>Link: https://pastebin.com/i8nWSpYR

Requesting comment and critique, in particular uncertain if I have applied all the correct tags to this story. Am using pastebin due to its smaller size, may consider moving story to AO3 after feedback. Hope story and plot device within provides value to the anon who posted inspiration.

>>10281887
So, does the kink interest you enough to add it in?
(bump)

Is BaselineAnon still around? His pastebin hasn't updated since May.

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2000 word update, new content at "This place was a maze of massive electrical cables"

Rig Runner:
https://pastebin.com/xmLQAjyG
>no tags yet

>>10334300
I'll check it out!

Bump from page 9

>>10340747
Azzie, your kindness at picking up the xenomorph prompt (which I myself had already forgotten about) has touched my flinty heart.

That being said, I have a few questions and other such issues I think we should try and sort out.

First of all, in the first paragraph, you say that "Once already [Shepard] had tasted death, and been drug back from it."

I'm not really sure if "drug" is the right verb you're after here, "dragged" sounds much better.

Next, I'm a little unsure as to what Shepard's position here is. The narration describes her as having her arms and legs "clamped fast to the organic ooze at her back by more of the eight-legged freaks," which leaves me undecided if you're trying to say she's been cocooned into the hive wall, as hosts usually are, or if she's being held in place by the facehuggers, or both. Perhaps try and add a little more detail to clarify that?

Reading on, I'll tell you one thing for nothing, I very much enjoy the effort you've put into the mindbreak part of the story, it feels a great deal more organic than you usually see with this trope.

Line twenty-eight, you've got "wile" instead of "while".

On a matter of personal opinion, all these lines you keep slipping into the narration from other works. I'm not sure if I like them or not. It's clever, I guess, but it's also kinda distracting. Fair enough with her thinking of the xenomorphs as the perfect organism yadda yadda, but her thinking of the geth dreadnought as "the fully-armed and operational battle station that, once completed, would bring a new hope to the diverse races struggling to restore freedom to the galaxy"? Come on!

With regards to what's actually going on in the story, what's the deal with this "incubation sack" that Shepard seems to be wedged up against? Is she connected to it, have the xenos made her into a surrogate queen, or is she just producing the eggs which are then incubated elsewhere? I'm confused.

Cont-

>>10346077
>>10340747
Another personal thought; you have Shepard wonder about what might happen if some of the other characters such as Miranda and Samara fall afoul of the xenomorphs, why not just pull them into it straight away? Unless you're planning on doing that later, which I'd totally be onboard with.

Aside from that, I like it. I enjoy your choice manipulations of the canon, they all make sense, and I like how it all ties into what actually happens in the end.

At first I was hesitant about your moving Shepard's narration back to her own encounters with her party, but after a while I felt like it actually worked. Didn't make the story feel as schizophrenic as I had feared, but the niggling feeling remains that this is taking away some of the detail about what being stuck in the hive actually feels like. Again, personal opinion.

Though, one question remains unanswered, perhaps I just missed it. How *did* Shepard and the crew end up being captures by the xenos in the first place?

>>10340183
>Embarrassing to have this long of a turnaround on first request I've written.
I've scene it take two or three weeks to so much as hear back from a writer. Writing is a creative process unique to each writer, it takes as long as it takes. Take your time, I'm in no hurry.
The detailed updates are very appreciated, my friend. Thank you again for picking up the request!

>>10322837
Bumping for stories or general advice.

>>10351714
As a rule, most people that I know of avoid "depressing" like the plague, so I can't be of much help.

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Who wants to write a story based on this?

>>10336982
I've never had a doujin make me aroused, horrified, sick, aroused, and then horrified and aroused again in quick succession. Jesus fucking christ.

>>10353632
It's great, isn't it?

>>10353632
What even happens?

>>10353771
I'm on the bit with the tentacle monster and so far only the /ss/ stories have been decent enough to fap to. Everything else is rape, monster men, and terrifying implications.

>>10353811
A guy gets in a car with a taxi driver and the two trade horror stories. They range in subject but most of them either end in a series of girls getting raped until mindbroken or a teenage kid getting his rocks off in a monster girl.

>>10353835
Like a solid 75% of this is noncon.

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2000 word update, new content at "He sent a servant to fetch her"

Grave Goods:
https://pastebin.com/PvhfYmN4
>no new tags

>>10353835
Oh yeah I read the snake lady manga of that, didn't know there was an animated version, that's cool.

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>>10354439
There are some panels that skipped the lewd and went straight to triggering a "fight or flight" response. I had the same feels i got when I read some of Junji Ito's shit.

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I need something nice and sweet. Might have nightmares about the demons i read.

>>10354697
Here, take this wholesome palette cleanser
https://nhentai.net/g/63767/

>>10354673
I had a dream with a face like that in once. Wasn't as bad as the one with the teddy bears.

>>10354697
And also this https://nhentai.net/g/52358/

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>>10340183
>>10241030
The way you talk is kind of moe somehow.

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Starting up a new series called Night Empress. It's going to have lots of rad stuff like madness, terror, obession, and superpowered dickings. Basically the ingredients for any good party.

https://pastebin.com/TBC2Vp06

https://www.hentai-foundry.com/stories/user/Vluirty/25112/Night-Empress/65661/Chapter-1/The-Newest-Night

>(Tags/CW: Femdom, Bloodplay, Rape, Female/Male, Knifeplay, Choking)

PrayingMantra here!
Been finding something to work for my ADHD so I'm hopefully finally going to be writing regularly.

>Property of Prasmille
>futa on male, anal, lotta cum, orc, sex cult
https://pastebin.com/FwtTeEZY

I'm proooobably going to draw this out into a multi-parter exploring initiation into the sex cult in question.

>>10346077
Correct on first paragraph wording (drug vs. dragged), confirmation: http://www.quickanddirtytips.com/education/grammar/dragged-versus-drug . Correction made. Line 28 error ("wile" instead of "while") corrected. Thank you, double-sevens anon.

Regarding Shepard's position, intent was to describe imperfect bonding at start of story so that motion to see others and touch clone's hand would be possible. Focused less on static bonds and more on struggle against them and gradual acceptance of them. Detailed constant movement of Facehuggers to build image in reader's mind of a living hive. Like ants in a mound, the constant exchange of Facehuggers emphasizes organic efficiency rather than static mechanical perfection. Reapers represent cold death, Xenomorphs represent breathing life. Mental conversion of Shepard possible due to presentation of alternate path to victory, an unthinkable solution to an unthinkable problem, as used by great cosmic horror stories in the past. Slack in bonds at end of story signifies completion of conversion, not possible with static cocoon. Feedback appreciated. Added additional clarification of bonds to opening paragraph.

References to other works (Heinlein, Firefly, Star Wars, other great sci-fi and space opera) are a result of writing during stress relief. Seemed like a good idea at time of writing. Feel it adds to the homage of older sci-fi dramatic heroes that the work is intended to be. Appreciate feedback. Minor edits possible, but feel the story has fulfilled its purposes (quick challenge, stress relief, quality product meeting specifications), and nothing is overly obtrusive. Example: a Skyrim reference involving arrows and knees would be significantly out of place due to space opera backdrop, and would likely warrant removal. To memory, no such reference is present.

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>>10346077
>>10360891
Incubation sack idea, and entire hive design, inspired by AvP: Extinction RTS with a bit of modification. Purebreed Xenomorphs develop into praetorians regardless of incubator. In-game, praetorian Facehuggers can be used on animals to breed a praetorian instead of "wasting" the animal by creating an unneeded drone. Expanding that logic, only nutrition and a protective shell are needed to grow a praetorian, therefore the process can be externalized into a sack. Likewise, Chestbursters would need to mature in a manner that did not result in host-death if mass-scale breeding is possible. Presumably, once the egg has gathered enough genetic material and is birthed, it can hatch in a safe environment into a warrior transbreed. Did not want to detail this too much, since Shepard would not have absolute knowledge of the hive, only flashes of insight. May consider additional detail if further work is conducted. Priority was on erotic elements.

>>10347491
Affirmative. Based on ease of conversion to chapters, and confidence with chapter content, I may upload one chapter at a time instead of all at once. Uncertain which method will be easiest to proof while maintaining consistency. Primary determining factor is effect on story cohesion and quality.

>>10359442
Focus while writing is crucial. I struggle with it as well. Happy to read that you are implementing potential solutions. Content is vital, especially during this time.

>>10356990
Thank you. I enjoyed the Medabots anime, though the opportunity to play one of the games it was based on has never presented itself. My communications are often compact because I wish to use as few posts as possible and need to respect the character limit. Usually I pre-type my posts in an external editor, check the character count, then optimize them as best as I can. No insult is intended; I do worry that my posts read as too brusque.

(2/4)

>>10346077
>>10346203
>>10361013
Seem to feel the message between the lines is "more". Desire for more explanation about how Shepard and team were captured, more detail of specific characters being taken and bred, more description of incubation procedures and logistics, more content in general. If analysis is correct, this is a positive reaction. Especially appreciate your notice of effort put into mind-break elements, felt it would be unbecoming to depict Shepard accepting anything less than a persuasive argument that involved completion of her overarching objective. "Just tell me one thing, Burke. You're going out there to destroy them, right? Not to study. Not to bring back. But to wipe them out." Ripley signed on after receiving an acknowledgment to that, and so it seemed fitting that Shepard sign on after realizing that the Xenomorphs would be very difficult for the Reapers to destroy according to their usual methods, especially after all the damage she had already done. Also nice to see that my modifications to canon were acceptable. Felt the scenes aboard the dreadnought provide a contrast to the hive without violating willing suspension of disbelief, and the clone's presence adds symmetry.

Uncertain if further work will be done on this story, will definitely not be until after completion of maid and officer request. If sufficient interest exists, may well expand story with eye toward further development of erotic aspects and Xenomorph logistics. Will reevaluate at later date.

(3/4)

>>10351714
>>10361156
>depressing sex or masturbation stories
Extremely broad subject, difficult to provide specific response. Who is the target of depression? The reader, who experiences a depressed emotional state during or after reading the story, or a character inside the story who undergoes depression as part of the plot? Assuming that the request is for the reader to experience depression as a result of the story, what form is desired? Depression based on implied inferiority (racial-based breeding, cheating, non-con), depression based on existential fears (loss of ideal relationship to uncontrollable factors, destruction of innocence, age resulting in inability to perform sexual acts while urge remains), or depression based on the commonplace (characters presented with simple problem but unable to solve it due to poor writing, lack of rational thought and prior planning resulting in tragedy, failure to seize opportunity due to lack of skill or social error resulting in downward spiral)? Many more forms of depression exist. Concrete examples would be helpful in narrowing such a broad category. Also, if the intent is for stories to alleviate depression in the reader instead of causing it, that should be clarified. The desire for relief was my first impression upon reading the post, which changed after re-reading, though that initial reaction may be due to my own mental state.

(4/4)

>>10361208
I meant more along the lines of a character or characters being depressed and trying to use sex and or masturbation as a coping mechanism. If there was any goal it was to make the reader depressed by the characters not being able to go through with sex because they have guilt and history weighing them down. For another story I plan on having a character with self esteem issues masturbating fantasizing about a lover.
I plan using robots so I know I can use the lack of genitalia to my advantage by him/her lamenting not having that aspect of humanity.

>>10361156
>Uncertain if further work will be done on this story, will definitely not be until after completion of maid and officer request. If sufficient interest exists, may well expand story with eye toward further development of erotic aspects and Xenomorph logistics. Will reevaluate at later date.
Very well, I understand. What you've already done is great, I'm sure of that. I just feel as though it could be a little *more* great, if you know what I mean.

How long did this take you to do? Makes me feel very ashamed of my own efforts in the past.

boop

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https://pastebin.com/3sBXuw07

Updated, not done yet, but the good part's starting.

>>10364676
Tags please, anon.

>>10303423
>and you really have to moderate your time properly to avoid taking on more work than you can handle.
PREACH IT, BROTHER

All I wanted was a little spending money and some money to buy groceries. Nothing special.

I still have 11 fucking stories to do. I want to put a fucking bullet in my brain. I bit off more than I could chew because my inner jew came out at the idea of being offered money.

>>10364704
You do know not everyone is from /d/, right?

>>10364704
>Tags
When did that become a thing? Anywho

>>10364676
Blowjob, supernatural, voyeurism, maybe loli?

I don't list her age but the picture would make one assume regardless.

>>10364729
>When did that become a thing?
/d/ is now refugee'd here, so I guess they want to impose their own rules for their old thread

>>10364745
>so I guess they want to impose their own rules for their old thread
But isn't not having tags kind of fun?

You like a random story so far, think it's hot, you decide to fap ... BAM! Inflation/watersports/vore OUT OF NOWHERE!

You didn't expect it, you don't like it, BUT THE BONER IS STILL THERE! YOU HAVE A NEW FETISH!

>>10364745
>>10364729
>>10364721
I'd hardly say it was a rule, more of a guideline. It's just polite, really, and it saves anons from going in blind. Whilst also directing the people who might be more appreciative of your fetishes to your fic, so they can give better feedback.

>>10364765
Were it so easy, anon. More often than not you get your boner killed by something you don't like suddenly coming up.

>>10364778
>I'd hardly say it was a rule
Considering anyone who didn't tag was immediately screamed at, calling it a guideline is a bit silly.

>>10364778
>It's just polite, really, and it saves anons from going in blind.
While I can agree with this, don't expect things to change just because it's "polite." These threads have been going on for a long time and they're not going to change just because someone didn't like seeing a certain thing in a story.

You're pretty much being "triggered" by fetishes you don't like if you don't watch how you word that request.

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>>10364704
I gave the tags, in case the discussion you got involved in pushed it away.

>>10364814
I never said anything about *that*. It's a given that some people will have fetishes in their works that I don't go for myself, I'm used to that. Goodness knows I've got some that freak people out.

Aside from anything else, it makes tagging it easier for the hapless drones who have to incorporate this stuff into our archives.
>>10364925
I saw, anon, thank you.

>>10364765
No, in practice it's a boner-killer more likely to end with someone yelling at you for adding something that they didn't expect or want to see. For example,

>>10364814
In that case, don't expect many people to read that untagged work, let alone give any kind of substantial critique for it.

>>10364968
For future reference, you should put the tags in the post itself as well as at the top of the fic.

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https://pastebin.com/MgNR2HTa

Did someone ask for a shitty nerd-to-gnoll tf fiction?

No?
Well fuck it I'm posting it anyways.

>>10364814
>a long time
Jesus it just occurred to me that /wst/ started four years ago

Then there's however much time racks up for the /aco/ and /trash/ threads

That is a whole lot of time writing smut

Truly this is what humanity created the internet for

>>10364716
>I still have 11 fucking stories
I'm going to assume this pun is intentional

>>10364716
how much do you charge? i typically do something like 12$ per 1k words
at that rate you get a fairly decent amount per story and you're not cheap enough that you get a hundred stories at once

>>10364814
Tags are 100% necessary.
I don't know what you like, you don't know what I like, because we're anonymous users on an imageboard.
You don't want to read a story I write and find out half way in that it's NTR, and I don't want to read a story you write and find out half way in that it's watersports.
Everyone has different tastes, not only that but many people have tastes that are considered downright repulsive or disgusting by the mainstream.
You're free to write about and enjoy whatever you like of course, if you like messed diapers power to you, but it's a courtesy to inform other people if that's what your story contains.

>>10367354
I charge about the same on the off chance I have time for a commission, $10 for 1000 words.

boop

Is the anon that was going to write the Peach fapfic still here?

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2000 word update, new content at "It didn't take long for the compartment to vent its atmosphere into space"

Rig Runner:
https://pastebin.com/xmLQAjyG
>no tags yet

>>10367450
$10 for 1000 needs to stop being the norm. I'm pretty good, and I'd do commissions if people didn't expect me to work for beans like that. I can write 6000 words a day before quality really dives. $60 a day is hardly anything to me for that amount of work, especially compared to my office job. Y'all need to unionize or some shit to bump it up to $15-20.

>>10367354
Guy you were replying to here.

I charge what I feel is worth my time. If people want a ridiculous amount of characters/fetishes/scenes in just a one-shot, it's $25.

You can call that too much, but when some furry artists get fucking $600 per picture because they're popular, I'm not asking for a lot.

>>10367450
>>Tags are 100% necessary.
>I don't know what you like, you don't know what I like, because we're anonymous users on an imageboard.

You're really going to keep pushing this, huh?

Don't be disappointed when it doesn't start happening next thread.

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This is DLFG here. I used to contribute stuff pretty regularly to the smut threads on /tg/, then occasionally when they moved to /d/. Before we got booted here, I mentioned I was working on an extended fic about a female drow hooking up with a werewolf.

Well, if anyone remembers and is still interested, it's finished. It also ran a little out of control and ended up over 46,000 words long, with three sex scenes spread throughout. I wrote the whole thing with very little planning, so there might be some inconsistances here and there, but I think it works reasonably well as a short story. That said, given the length of the thing, some spelling/grammar errors likely slipped past. If you give it a read and spot anything, please, let me know.

Tags:
F-Drow/M-Human, erotic dancing, vaginal, cowgirl, vanilla.
F-Drow/M-Werewolf, blowjob, vaginal, large penetration, knotting, teratophilia, excessive come
FF-Drow/MMMM-Humans, blowjob, vaginal, orgy, dubcon, humiliation, role reversal, spitroast, bukkake

Incidentally I also have a tumblr now. I'll be linking this (once I've given it another proofread for luck), and everything else I write, over there as well from now on. https://exoticerotica.tumblr.com/

>>10371791
You're free to do that, but then nobody will want to read your story because they won't know if you introduce coprophilia half way through.
Why on Earth would you be resisting the idea of simply providing information about the content of your story when you post it?

>>10371843
And I forgot to post the link, because I am an absolute moron.

https://pastebin.com/kicRtkD6

>>10371885
Don't worry, we've all done it at least once.

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>>10371843
>46171 words

I feel so much better about working on something extended now. I'll make sure to give this a read at some point.

>>10371864
Laziness and a desire to farm views, of course. Not like a meaningless number that can be inflated by bots should matter, anyway.

I don't think either side is *wrong* here
You may not want to tag every single thing that happens in your story
Maybe the part where Rainbow Dash cucks Twilight Sparkle by DPing her wife is meant to be a surprise
But you're going to want to warn people if the story involves the Mane Six going to Africa to bathe in black man shit

>>10372835
The real problem is that it's been considered standard on the /d/ thread for what feels like ages now, and now that the /d/ thread is suddenly refugees in here, those that have been here for lord knows how long feel like they shouldn't change their ways. The arguments that you're seeing used are the same exact reasons you would see in /efg/, but people would actually comply because literally every single writefag and every single story in their archive had tags. This thread is not the same because it's fucking /trash/.

>>10372904
>This thread is not the same because it's fucking /trash/.
Oooh, harsh

>>10372927
I'm not saying it as an insult. I'm literally just pointing out that the standards from board to board are completely different and the people from /efg/ should not expect those who have been frequenting this thread for ages to suddenly comply to their standards, because /d/ and /trash/ are two completely different environments.

>>10371843
I've been looking forward to this, actually. Thank you for posting!
>46,000 + words
Uh, might take awhile before I can get you any feedback.

>>10372964
Not anymore with the mixing. Things are going to change with the fact two groups are now the same group. Not sure why those few people are throwing such a hissy fit over something so minor and with more people here now it'd mean more people to read/critique their stories. Doesn't matter since most are just going to skip over any untagged stories to avoid any shit they don't like or might have in them.

>>10373014
I dunno, apparently it's been working fine for these guys? I'm not denying that tagging is an inherently better system, my man, I'm just saying that it's a little rude to suddenly drop in on a friend of a friend's house and start shitting all over their fucking living room because you're used to a bidet instead of using toilet paper.

>>10373077
The thing is it's not going to stop or go away since this is now where most people from /efg/ are going to stay for most likely ever. Every time an untagged story is going to posted I guarantee there will be at least on post asking for tags and getting all pissy when it happens will just drive people away from reading the story then.
In short, get used to it and ignore it or start adapting.

I always tag my stories because I want them to be found by those who would appreciate them the most, and avoided by people who would complain about the content. The only time I've ever been annoyed by a story being tagged, is when the author goes overboard tagging irrelevant stuff, and I show up expecting some high-quality hyper futa and there's only a passing mention.

>>10373133
Alternatively, you will get pissy when there are no tags as what frequently happened on /efg/.
Your own "adapt to it" can easily be applied to you considering your new presence here and not the other way around.

It's logical, yes, but when everyone else has been functioning just fine without it and one person starts requesting it, it's very out of place.

>>10373311
thing is it's not a single person, multiple people asking for a very simple thing to see if a story is worth reading or to be avoided due to fetishes involved

>>10373377
There has been one request so far for tags, everything else has been /efg/ operating as it always has.

>>10371186


Say that all you want, but unless your writing is godlike, watch your customer base evaporate at the speed of light

>>10373311


That's fine, I and many others refuse to read anything that isnt tagged. If you want more readers who are actually into what's in your story. If you want less readers, don't tag it.

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>>10373833
OK, instead of gradually introducing it to the norm you could just be fussy like that.
Whatever.

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>>10371138
Not much in the way of typos, there's "space save" on line 12 but I didn't notice anything else.

The initial exposition feels unpleasant to read, what with long paragraphs detailing tangential aspects of the story without providing much in the way of character. I assume you'll do a sort of backfill in a later update, but it just seems weird as is.

More character nitpicks: repeated traits of intermittently sardonic and faux-suave aren't good when there's no establishment of character, and with no reason for them to realistically act that way. It came off annoying and out of place in your ice moon story, and if it's going to be the same thing here, I will be disappointed.
The Borealan also seems too long winded and just... obvious in one or two places. Not much story yet, but still, might need some solidification of her character.
>"You spaced my entire pack, would have gotten me too if it wasn't for the mask I had in my pocket, and if I had been one of you fleshy little humans that pea shooter would have finished the job."

Also, space nitpicks: space isn't cold. Having a single crewmember on an interstellar spaceship is literally the stuff of nightmares. Sliding doors are poor choices for holding atmosphere. Unless this is their first day, these pirates have very little clue how to actually be piratical. Without a hardsuit or lengthy prebreathing, rapidly moving into a no-atmosphere environment will cause the Bends. It's a pulpy setting, so these things don't really bother me as much, but they're there.

There's also the continuing issue in repeating sentence structure - specifically repetitive passive voice - and flow in general. I've raised pretty much this exact point a couple times before, but I do understand how difficult it can be to really change a fundamental part of your writing. I do think it is an important thing to keep watch for though.

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>>10374049
>>10371138
>Continued

As a shoddy example this:

>The dress sense of these pirates might have been funny under circumstances where his life wasn't in immediate danger, it was all leather, they looked like a damned biker gang. Upon closer inspection it was actually quite elaborate, it didn't look like any clothing he had ever seen before, it almost looked as if they had tanned the hide and tailored the clothing themselves. By that he meant that it looked hand crafted, it wasn't a complaint about the quality by any means, everything had little personal touches and quirks that one just didn't see in mass produced clothing.

Maybe more like this:

>The dress sense of these pirates might have been funny were his life not in immediate danger, all leather, like some damned biker gang. Upon closer inspection it was actually quite elaborate, unlike any clothing he had ever seen before, almost as if they had tanned the hide and tailored the clothing themselves. It wasn't a complaint about the quality by any means, everything had little personal touches and quirks that one just didn't see in mass produced clothing, he just meant that everything looked hand crafted.

Obviously not a fantastic transformation, but it cuts out some of the passivity. Anyway, you're definitely getting better at it, especially in the later half of what's written, but I'd still recommend actively going back over your work every now and then. Just pick a couple random sentences and rearrange them so there aren't many repeated 'it was', 'they were', 'it looked like', 'they did X' etc.

Bumping with a wiki update. Added 30+ fics of this (relatively) old-school writer dude called Franciso De Stiges. I personally have not read much of their stuff, but they seem to have a huge boner for Shadowrun and dubcon.

https://fourleaffics.miraheze.org/wiki/Category:Franciso_De_Stiges

>>10374077
Yeah, he was one of our better guys. Always did like his stuff, though the absorption thing was a little weird.

>>10374544
New thread. Usually I wait for the thread to 404 or be at page 10, but made it early so that you guys can back your stuff up before taking a chance with desuarchive

>>10366781
Hey, this was mad decent. Judging by the end, do you plan to continue it? If so, please make it hard gay.

>>10374420

Get absorbed into the fic nyuck nyuck nyuck.

>>10355468
>>10355160
Thank both of you. I was pretty bummed all of last night and some happy porn might help fix that.