Belly Thread #63
Cuban Edition
Previous thread: http://desuarchive.org/trash/thread/10020273/
Insert your own "stuffed turkey" joke here.
Growling bellies = best bellies
here ya go anon
https://pastebin.com/bFspf8av
>>10050858
>>10050858
I was totally unexpecting something like this but holy shit that was excellent
>>10050858
That's pretty good, anon. If I may, I'd like to recommend taking a closer look at the following components of your writing:
-fundamentals in grammar:
-e.g., you generally shouldn't need a hyphen between an adverb and adjective, such as "massively-bloated"
-the punctuation and capitalization need to be adjusted when dialogue terminates, like so:
>...that does feel pretty nice.” The
>...that does feel pretty nice," the
-misuse of semicolons (look at the second sentence and see if the semicolon is separating two independent clauses, which is the most general use case)
-stylistic elements:
-clarity in language (e.g., what does it mean to "cutely gasp" or "cutely groan"?)
-repetition in language (Ctrl + F for your use of "cute" or "churn", for instance; there are other ways to phrase your ideas without overusing the same word, and it tends to be distracting to the reader to see repetition without intention)
-dialogue selection (this is more subjective, but most of Greninja's dialogue feels played out for the theme of interest; it may be beneficial to think about different approaches to speech that help to characterize her [or other eventual individuals] further than just being a subject for expansion)
Hopefully this can be of help to you for future writing.
>>10051928
what is this, a blob for ants?
>>10050983
>>10051197
glad to be of service to your penises
all the homo
>>10051824
oh hey there college english professor
>the punctuation and capitalization need to be adjusted when dialogue terminates
I never really understood why. Putting a period and then capitalizing the start of the next sentence looks perfectly normal; why put a comma if the sentence is ending?
>misuse of semicolons
That's like, the one thing I actually learned in college-level English courses, is how to use a semicolon. Prof told me that it's basically used to separate two things that are related, but could also work as independent sentences.
Looking at a few of them, yeah, it's not the most absolute proper use, but using comma after comma after comma makes it feel like a run-on sentence.
>what does it mean to "cutely gasp" or "cutely groan"?
Kinda hard to describe. But try to think of the difference between a "gasp" and a "cute gasp".
>there are other ways to phrase your ideas without overusing the same word
And there are only so many words I can use, without being overly verbose, or going far out of my way to find synonyms that aren't commonly used, which would be even more distracting.
I do CTRL+F for words that I notice I'm using often, though. There are only six instances of "cute" in the entire thing.
>it may be beneficial to think about different approaches to speech that help to characterize her
m8, this is a 1.5-page fetish scribble, not a novel. There's really not much room, or need, for "characterization".
>10051928 (You)
this is the belly thread, not the "unrecognizable blob of cellulite" thread
>ywn snuggle the bunbelly
why even live
>>10052063
>Putting a period and then capitalizing the start of the next sentence looks perfectly normal; why put a comma if the sentence is ending?
It's normal if there is an independent sentence following the quote ("Blah blah blah." X took a deep breath.) , but when you immediately follow the dialogue with how it is being spoken ("Blah blah blah," X cooed...) then you use a comma. The sentence hasn't ended, so to speak, at that point in the latter situation.
>Prof told me that it's basically used to separate two things that are related, but could also work as independent sentences.
You are right.
>using comma after comma after comma makes it feel like a run-on sentence
That's also right. I'm not trying to be nitpicky here, but instead, I just wanted to highlight where the usage of a semicolon may not be appropriate since it's a small but beneficial thing to tweak overall.
>there are only so many words I can use
I too am aware of this, but you generally only want to strive for repetition when it adds purpose to the ongoing development of the writing, even if it's a quick and dirty setup.
Again, I don't intend to be an authoritative figure (or perceived to be acting as a "college professor") for fetish-based writing. These are merely suggestions that you can use as you see fit, nothing more. I'm sorry if you took that the wrong way.
>>10052621
>Again, I don't intend to be an authoritative figure
that's just me being a shithead
I actually love when people give me real criticism; it seems to be extremely rare when writing furry fetish faggotry.
>>10053462
>>10053471
>>10053526
hue
Friendly reminders:
When saving pictures from twitter, be sure to right click > view image, then at the end of the URL add ":orig" to ensure you are not getting a resized image
Similarly, when saving images from tumblr, replace the last 3-4 numbers with "raw"
Because nobody wants shrunk bellies
>>10050586
Thread question since OP decided to forego it: what's /belly/'s favorite way to help a belly grow? Most definitely a fan of the puff kiss myself, though pumping someone up through their navel is a close second.
>>10050858
magnifiqué
>>10056072
I think you mean
>
Deer?
Deer.
>>10059325
>>10059334
DEER
>>10051757
>hiro
>>10059325
>>10059334
>>10059638
Deer!
>>10055276
im gonna be boring and say hose-fed liquids for maximum sloshiness.
>>10050858
Hmmm...I don't know how to word it but I feel like it it could be better. Needs to cover the belly stuff in more depth, IMO. Also not really a fan of the trainer thing; I find it weird when the Pokemon are anthros but still have trainers.
[spoiler]sequel where she poops out the massive doughball when?[/spoiler]
>>10060979
I wanna see that
That or a hyper pregnancy fic
>>10061205
>I wanna see that
Oh, really? Nice!
>>10061454
Scat sequel or hyperpreg fic?
>>10061603
Scat sequel. Although it's technically not scat since I meant she'd literally poop it out still as a giant doughball (or though I wouldn't be opposed to actual scat either).
>>10061637
I'd prefer if there was actual scat, but I guess I'd be fine with the dough poop too (is the local writefag seeing this?)
>>10061741
I'd be fine as long as it come out in incredibly thick proportions (since the original story was already hyper), but I don't think the writefag would be interested in that.
>literal shitposting
>>10062495
>scatfags
>>10062495
>>10062526
>being bullyfags in a comfy thread
You can both go to the other fat threads if you want to cause drama.
>>10062600
>we're bullies for telling you to fuck off to a thread specifically for your literal shit fetish
this is 4chan, go to fucking plebbit if you don't want to be "bullied"
>>10062600
i don't think it's too much to ask to not have to deal with actual shit
you can go to a scat thread if you want to post about that shit
>>10062635
If you're triggered you can always fuck off back to /aco/, normalfag.
>>10062641
>i don't think it's too much to ask to not have to deal with actual shit
Right, gotta maintain that safespace after all.
>>10062651
>I'm not a scatfag therefore I'm a normalfag
sure showed me kiddo
>>10062651
>triggered
>not liking shit makes you a normalfag
>>10062662
you... you literally said you didn't want to be bullied
you're asking for a safe space about your shit fetish
make up your mind
I'm only here for female bellies but I won't begrudge male ones. Vore isn't particularly my thing but as long as it's not explicitly fatal, whatever.
I think most people justifiably feel like scat crosses a line, though.
>>10062600
>>10062651
>scatfags being this triggered that no one wants their (literal) shit
>>10062678
>you... you literally said you didn't want to be bullied
I said dramastirrers need to fuck off if they want to turn this thread into a mess like the other fat threads are. They posted literally nothing of value but telling each other how great they are for being scared of the same thing.
>>10062700
Lk where's that Mozu?
>>10062702
we're not "scared"
if we wanted scat, we'd be posting in the scat thread
but we want bellies and no scat, so we're posting here
now cut out the retarded mental gymnastics you dumb shit eater
>>10062702
my man
i've been posting bellies alongside calling you out for your shit fetish
you've just been complaining
and if we want to talk about wasted posts and nothing of value, you talking about scat with that other anon was a waste of space
>>10062729
>now cut out the retarded mental gymnastics
>gets triggered because people wanted a follow up to the story that had scary fetishes he doesn't like
>>10062732
>and if we want to talk about wasted posts and nothing of value
Right here, circlejerker:
>>10062495
>>10062526
Of course you think your trigger posts aren't a waste of space though.
>>10062741
>"Oh boy, I sure did love this thing about X, maybe a sequel where Y happens?"
>"Well this thread isn't for Y, maybe go ask in the thread for Y?"
>"HOW DARE YOU"
>>10062756
again, we're not triggered you mongoloid
if we were triggered, we'd be whining in the scat thread
now for the last time, go back to your respective thread and stop being such a cancerous fuck
>>10062741
>>10062756
>triggered
you keep using that word like it's helping you out
but you're still complaining without posting any pics
>>10062777
I like how disingenuous you are being, acting like the second scenario has no ties to the first. Not to mention she'd still have a bloated belly at the start of it so in actually it would be XY and not just Y.
Bellies big enough to grind on: y/n?
>>10062882
If you just mean post more really big bellies then yes.
>>10062904
>>10062904
Sort of. If that's what comes of it then that's cool, any belly bigger than a specific ratio would work for that
I just think that grinding on your own stuffed gut is so disappointingly underused in art
>>10062946
>>10063025
I know this a belly thread, but damn that butt is great.
>>10063141
Well considering that she's pregnant, of course she'll have a wide ass and thick hips
>>10060266
That's just a regular deer
Just a just a normal ass deer, with deer proportions. That's a feral deer.
No no no Plasma Snake don't fucking do this to me this is a line I don't want to cross fuck me
post scat
or else
>>10063496
Why do you think anyone will fall for your obvious falseflagging?
>>10063496
>>10063520
samefag
>>10063594
>>10063824
So I commissioned that guy who does those really nice animations that are sometimes posted here, like >>10062795
They don't normally draw non-humans, but I think this came out really well!
>>10065334
You the kobold guy from a thread or two ago? Looks great
https://www.dropbox.com/s/7xy5fst2mnrnd8q/Like%20Rabbits.rar?dl=0
>>10065400
Yep, and thanks, I'm glad it came out good!
>>10063373
It's just Patience being Patience. Don't know what you're freaking out about.
Look at her go!
>>10050586
>It's just Patience being Patience.
>her primary goal in any form that she takes is to get fucking huge
I love this
>>10066743
>>10065589
Whoops
>>10055276
definitely hoses up the butt. mouth just isn't as good and navel... I just don't get navel inflation. It makes no sense.
>>10055276
Either hose up the ass or by their own gas
>>10068813
Yeah, navel inflation looks weird to me, even weirder if it inflates only the navel
>>10055276
Magic food that instantly causes weight gain
>>10062716
Sidetracked by several things, but still on the way.
>>10068813
>>10068909
What's not to get? If there's a hole, it's a weirdo's desire to thrust something into it.
>>10068940
If it ended at this part it would be best Isabelly sequence.
>>10068943
Love that belly.
have some safe popping
and some jojo memes
>>10072364
He did another animation like that
>>10072298
>>10072306
Same character twenty years later....that first stuffing up above created a monster!
>>10072364
>>10072407
>really want to commission this dude because I love his artstyle
>at the same time I don't want to because then it'd be obvious that I was following a fart artist
>One of your favorite artists draws a character made by another one of your favorite artists
Feels great
>>10074173
YES
>>10072407
>farting
reeeee
have a non-disgusting edit
>>10074173
>HUGE Cinnamon
>teasing
>groping
>workout wear barely visible in the sea of flab
>>10075722
>Robotnik exercises his pingas.gif
>>10072298
Source? Google and FA searching the filename is giving me absolutely nothing.
>>10076331
From the art style, it looks like AmericanAnomaly
This thread needs more comfort slug
>>10077384
I concur
>"(fug) my belly for good luck" shirt
>Patience will never give you finger guns while you give her a hard belly fucking
Why live
Pampered tummies are best tummies
This belly is a work in progress
>>10080673
That belly looks like it needs a good shaking.
>>10076331
Here's all the pics of her that guy has done for me. https://aa-artstuff.tumblr.com/search/riley
>>10076331
He's Americananomaly on FA but he's not posted it there yet; Crazygameguy on FA may end up uploading it to FA instead, since he created the character
Post bellies you'd hug.
>>10083756
>>10084277
>almost flat belly
>>10062689
Anybody got more pics of folks outgrowing running shorts?
>>10084772
>>10084789
anon this is the belly thread, not the blob of cellulite thread
>>10084997
Well, this isn't the inflation thread either, yet shit like >>10070345 & >>10076331 were posted anyways.
>>10084997
Derp. My bad.
>>10084997
>>10085031
there is hardly any difference between this and the fat thread anyway
>>10085031
inflation is still mostly belly-focused
blob is not
>>10085303
don't apologise, the only one complaining is him
>>10080673
And now in color
>>10088603
>beat me to it
Hoodah pls.
Excellent work regardless, though!
>>10088603
Damn that's nice.
>>10088603
Does fatbold give bellyjobs?
>>10091527
Only if you ask nicely, and she accepts payment in sweetbread.
>inflate someone
>climb into them
>tickle them from the inside
how would it feel like?
>>10091656
Would be great to see.
>>10082835
Still would like to see his OC give a bellyjob too.
>>10092124
>completely blue raccoon
>normal brown human hair
>red striped tail
just needs red eyes, angel wings and a scar over one eye and it'll be a complete sparkledog
>>10060979
Go away scatfag
>>10062600
>>10062526
>>10062495
>Scatfags trying to ruin one of the best threads on /trash/
Fucking horrible. The fact that they're whining about people not wanting their LITERAL SHIT fetish here is hilarious and reeks of Tumblr/Reddit.
>>10092804
stop posting in both threads, you're throwing me off when check each one.
>>10092090
Maybe at some point, but I've got some ideas already lined up for future pieces.
>>10093556
>Maybe
Sorry, I meant probably, and by probably, I mean "almost certainly"
>>10092124
>On one hand, tummy growls, a cute pudgy belly, and an overall sexy figure. Not to mention that raccoon bois/girls are underused in furry art
>But on the other hand, that godawful color scheme
Definitely one of the more conflicting boners I've had in a while.
>>10093569
My question is, growl or no growl?
>>10095104
Depends on if she's angry/happy enough!
>>10094160
It's a shame he's rarely that thing into the simple chub. That's how I like them.
>>10093569
>kobold belly jobs
Oh fuck get LK to do it
>>10095334
I damn well would if he was taking commissions, but I don't think he is right now.
>>10095334
>>10046585
>tfw DP2 guy never had his dream realized
>>10095368
>>tfw DP2 guy never had his dream realized
F
>>10062959
Who's the artist?
>>10095910
boot
it's a FA filename, the artist is just after the string of numbers and "."
>>10092842
>tumblrfag gets triggered this board isn't his safespace and tries to deflect about how his buttbuddies got triggered
Absolutely pathetic
>>10095363
Depending on how complex, I'm a maybe. I just don't want to take on something super complicated and have stuff pop up that keeps me away from it, you know?
>>10096351
Fair enough! I've got some expenses lined up for the next month or so anyways, but I'll poke you when my art funds fill back up.
I also have to ask, what do you think of her design? Kitprin was a huge inspiration to actually getting Sienna drawn.
>>10096416
I really like it quite a bit, I've been a few of the people commenting on her design before. Excellent color choices.
And that's super flattering! I'm glad I can tangentially assist in more tubby kobolds.
>>10096351
So what happened to the DP2 commission?
>>10096554
That's pretty awesome of you to say that, thanks man!
And of course, the world can always use more tubby kobolds.
>>10096245
>>10092842
you're both shitstains, now do you need to be put in the timeout porner or can the thread get back on tract
>>10096839
When can I marry Sienna?
-t. not Fiametz
>>10097042
>>10097071
Never, Sienna is a strong shebold who don't need no one (except for her grocer).
>>10097042
>>10096245
>>10092842
>calls people shitstains
>has a shit fetish
I'd take it as a compliment anons
>>10075335
you're a good man
I wish the asshole was less donut though
>>10096839
Heck yeah, tubby kobolds.
>>10096768
Some emergency expenses came up for them and they had to back out. Haven't heard from them since, hoping it all worked out okay.
>>10097371
>Heck yeah, tubby kobolds.
But what if; tubby kobolds face sitting on other, not-so-tubby kobolds.
>>10097520
Or vice versa, not-so-tubby kobolds using tubby kobolds as beds!
>>10091836
>inflate someone
>climb into them
>continue to inflate them even more from the inside
i need more of this in my life
>>10091836
like you're fucking dying
>>10052063
>Kinda hard to describe. But try to think of the difference between a "gasp" and a "cute gasp".
Jumping in with my own suggestion: the problem presented by using words like "cute" is that they imply judgments that are ultimately subjective; that is, what I find cute might not be cute to you. It can seem vague for an impersonal narrator to use subjective judgments in that way, so I think you might be better off ascribing the judgment to a character, e.g. "her cute gasps made her trainer's dick even harder". In that case it becomes clear that another character finds it cute, which ends up being less awkward.
Another option would be to describe the gasping in terms of what makes it cute: "she gasped with surprise", etc.
Any other artists who do semi-large belly arts of this type?
>>10106253
Artist?
>>10106504
Not the anon who posted, but it's Garuda.
>>10106611
Is that one actually Garuda?
I know it's Stella, but it looks a bit different from his style.
>>10106611
Nah, that's his donut steel, but it's not his art.
>>10106647
>>10106658
My bad. It does replicate his style pretty nicely though.
holy shit wbb fanart I can actually get by and with good bellies too
>>10110029
2015 pic of top character, but there's no other pics of the other two
>>10110271
>but there's no other pics of the other two
That's a shame, though they must've been created to replicate the show's dynamic if that's the case.
>>10112552
good mouth nipples
>>10113333
good quad
(agreed tho, those nipples are hideous)
>>10113433
I'm kinda tempted to try making an edit
>>10113433
>>10113678
I too would prefer big fat nipples instead of mouths.
>>10112552
>>10113678
>>10113725
okay, edit done, it's not perfect but it's decent enough I suppose
>>10114918
That's pretty fuckin' good man.
Many kudos!
>>10114979
thanks man, enjoy
>>10114918
>edit
what is this sorcery, it looks nothing like an edit, it looks legit
>>10115026
it is indeed an edit
also oops I didn't even realize I accidentally drew some big mark on the right there, here's a fixed version
>>10115111
Very nice. Looks much better
>>10115111
That's fantastic.
>>10051928
>>10051942