/cyoag/ - CYOA General

go sog wild, guys

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mystery boxes provided as needed

>>54569048
I meant to ask, do you have multiple mystery boxes for each answer?

>>54569069
only for the robot maid (it varies for different orders you give her)

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>>54568868
I want the fire emblem cyoa.

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>>54569229
Immortality
>Tfw you will never have enough time to do what you want, explore the world, learn every skill, read every book.
Planewalking
>Tfw you will never live in an amazingly different world, worlds of superheroes, altered universal laws, magic, the worlds of your waifus.
Superintelligence
>Tfw you will never be smart enough to comprehend the universe in it's truest sense

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>>54569279
Anon deleted their post before I realised it. ;'(

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>>54569287
It had spelling mistakes. I disagree with your list though.

Longevity > immortality
Humble localized settings > planeswalking
Ignorant fun > superintelligence

>>54569048
>Multipurpose Laser Tool
>Robot Maid
>AI Companion

Get the AI to file patents on the technology, then start looking for investors to fund me starting mass-produce this shit.

I mean, look at this:
>Man-portable fusion power
>Some sort of highly efficient cooling mechanism to stop a megawatt laser from burning your hands from the waste heat
>Humanoid robots with humanlike physical capabilities
>General artificial intelligence(!)

>>54569048
A surprise, to be sure, but a welcome one.
Laser tool
Robot Maid
Shock Suit
Nanobots

A shame I can't take fictional universe with it... instruct the maid to execute order 66.

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>>54569336

>>54569048
>Robot meido
>Nanobots
>Hypernet
>Laser tool

I am surprised that no one has tried this before ''Execute order 69''

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>>54569447

>>54569350
>>54569365
>>54569503
And if you get the AI to print out all of the different orders after you get her to connect to android maid's brain to download her programming so that you can make the big dollars selling the revolutionary software?

>>54569048
Fictional Universe
Nanobots
Gold
Laser "tool"

Filming everything forever sounds extreme, but obviously you are just going to kill me anyway. I can't think of a universe off the top of my head, but unless I can get immortality (and nanobots don't provide it), I really just want something comfy and maybe sexy.

>>54568868
Is the Egypt-posting anon from before still here, and could you post an Imgur gallery of the red-board ones?

>>54569048
Basic Comms
Hypernet
Nanobots

I guess I'll slowly get cuter as my body repairs the damage I put it through.
Meanwhile, I'll use the future internet to do what I do with the regular internet.
Time to watch engineering and chemistry lectures on youtube while eating spaghetti.
Who knows? I might learn something.

>>54569603
Actually, skip the gold and I guess I'll go to something futuristic instead of fantasy. I think I'm only supposed to have 3 choices.

>>54569604
they are clearly pink

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>>54569603
>>54569655
picking a red option allows you to pick 4

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>>54569048
robo maid, no oders. I'll try to watch movies with her and we'll have a tea party. Maybe she likes videogames or tabletop games!

laser

>>54569664
>Literally the opposite of what I asked for

>>54569662
I'm colorblind, okay?

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>>54569681
you did read the option that said you *had* to film the order, right?

>>54569710
what an edgelord

>>54569710
We'll just film our lives together and make a tv show out of that!

It will get great ratings because people will enjoy the cuteness

>>54569727
Must be all that glorious nippon steel.

>>54569664
>>54569682
So no response for how "something comfy and/or sexy" ended up as "I wanna be a hero"? The least you could do is drop me off in some porno.

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>>54568868
Post cyoas.

>>54569811
you first

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>>54569811

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>>54569811
Wouldn't you rather have a waifu (cyoa)?

Is there a certain specific way to make cyoas? Some sort of plan I could go off?
X choices of one type
X choices of another type
X disadvantage choices to give more points

I'm not very good at thinking of choices and I feel cyoas I make are lackluster, with uninteresting or just plain basic choices.

>>54569857
Give an example of a cyoa you made.

>>54569857
you're doing it exactly backwards

imagine something interesting first, then build the mechanics around that

>>54569710
what a faggot.

>>54569883
>>54569901
I kinda want to do a lewd or /d/ themed cyoa which I don't have any examples of I've made, alot is just WIPs I don't like the idea of posting.
But, ah never mind, I think the problem is more with my own creativity than some cyoa plan I could follow.

>>54569048
> Laser tool
> Robot maid
> Nanobots
> AI

I'll have a number nine, a number nine large, a number six with extra sauce, a number seven, two number forty-fives, one wit' cheese, and a large soda

>>54569979
Posting WIPs is fine as long as you're clear about your intention. Go ahead.

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>>54570009
Ugu nevermind, I don't even know If i'll be able to follow through with it pls no bully I just need to spend more time thinking. I don't wanna raise expectations posting a wip

Anyone got that short cyoa where you choose super powers and there's just the one that says you get all the powers but you have to be a turtle?

>>54569048
Multipurpose laser tool
Robot maid
Hypernet
Gold

I'd try my best to research the maid orders over the hypernet before issuing any. Failing to find something, I'd probably try a command like "orders list" or "orders help." Some commands to try would be order 42, order 48, and order 98. Maybe the orders don't even need to be numeric and I could just say "order intercourse."

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>>54569826
>Nostalgia
>Endure

>>54569852
Is that even a female?

>>54570372

It's a 100% female (male), anon.

>>54570407
Female (males) cannot be waifus.

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>>54569811

>>54570415

What are you, a faggot? I bet you don't even enjoy their feminine penises.

>>54570438
Male vaginas are far superior.

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Speaking of cyoas, SDA VN when??

>>54569981
>>54569350

>>54570520
>sakura beach
get some taste, pleb

>>54570520
Never you idiot

>>54569826

>Born Late
>Sleep/Videogames

>>54569826
>Nostalgia
When I first came to /cyoag/ there were soo many cyoas to play and make builds of, and I did that alot, I couldn't get enough of them, there were soo many interesting themes and well made cyoas taking up my time.
Only a few months after my first introduction now, I have yet to make a build for any new cyoa which has came out, they all seem boring and visually poorly designed. I skip over anything which doesn't look nice and have yet to find a cyoa I've played more than once.
>Endure
>Art
All I can do is wait for that one cyoa to rekindle my interest, In the mean time I made and tried to make a few cyoas which suited my tastes, some success and failures in that.

>>54570520
When I find an artist who's literally willing to die for me, sure.

>>54569664
>Never trust a mystery box
I'm so glad I didn't go for that.

>>54569826
>No GF
They say it is better to have loved and lost than to have never loved at all. They are wrong.

>Lift
Because I'm trying to get in shape so I can try again.

>>54570771
>The lifting meme
Does this even work?

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>>54570573
So you recognize where this is from, hmm?
>>54570587
That was uncalled for!
>>54570701
Do a kickstarter.

I always felt those "Comfy pocket dimensions" were lacking, so I'm working on my own cyoa. Lay out is horrid, but its what I got.

I've got 1 out 4 pages done. Should I post it even though I can't do anything about the looks of it?

>>54570815
Yes.

>>54570810
>Do a kickstarter.
That doesn't really find me an artist, though.

Also, money isn't the issue, it's time.

>>54570815
Try your best to make it look nice, take some inspiration from other cyoas. There's nothing to lose from delaying posting for a day or two to make sure you get the best work possible out.

>>54570796
It gives you a brief shot of endorphins but if you're suffering from something like unmedicated depression it's really not going to help.

>>54570828
Become an artist and then use artist welfare aka patreon then you can quit your real life and have all the time you need

>>54570819
>>54570831
Well shoot, it's 13 MB and the maximum file size allowed is 8 MB.
It's 1703 x 5762
Any idea on how to make it smaller?

>>54570858
Jpg it?

>>54570796
I'm just tired of being skinny fat and sitting on my ass all day. I can at the very least look like I have my shit together even if my life is still kind of a dump.

>>54570828
Honestly if you said "hey I'm the guy who made Stardust and Battlemage, give me an artist" you'd have a few dozen redditors jumping at the chance to draw for you.

>>54570856
I don't think that's as easy to break into as it seems.

>>54570858
Save it as a JPEG instead of a PNG.

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>>54570881
>>54570872
That did the trick! 7.9 MB now.
Here's the completed 1st page

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>>54570856
>Become an artist
This is probably the only plausible action for me, to be honest.

>patreon
I have standards, you know.

>>54570700
>I skip over anything which doesn't look nice
I will never understand this.

Then again, I skip over anything which doesn't have waifus, even if I return to it if it turns out to be popular.

>>54570889
Can we get dryads?

>>54570858
Export it in a lossless format like PNG. Download IrfanView, open the OMG, then save as JPG. Start at 100% quality and gradually move down percent by percent until it is about 7 MB or just under (for some reason 4chan inflates filesizes so you need breathing room if you want anyone to be able to repost it.)

>>54570900
That'd be covered in "Mythical Animals"

>>54570889
>Forest cyoa
What are you a fucking elf?

>>54570890
No, I don't know. Please, elaborate on this revelation.

>>54570910
I wouldn't call sapient humanoids 'wild animals' desu

>>54570911
What are you if you're not fucking an elf

54570890
>I have standards, you know.
lol

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>>54570899

>>54570889
>All homes are the same size on the inside

Thank you. I like having the small home nestled in the trees, but I also like having all the interior space I need.

>>54570889
>One day, while walking home after a long, stressful day, you become lost in your thoughts.
Genius.

>>54570895
As a graphic designer it's just painful on a personal level, and I just can't get immersed in something poorly laid out and difficult to read.

>>54570889
looks neat!

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>>54570920
I would rather have a real job than be caught using Patreon.

>>54570428
>Midnight
>Snow
>Victorian
>Fireplace, Couch, Bookshelf
>N/A, I want to be alone
>Hot Drinks, Candles, Alcohol, Plants

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>>54570931

>>54570942
Nigga I'm something of a patrician when it comes to reading good writing but I still trudge through this shit.
>>54570948
What a strange thing to think.

>>54570889
Ah shoot, I forgot!
There's a couple of grammar errors and wordplay that doesn't make much sense, I thought it saved to the .mdp when I updated it but it instead saved to the .png

When it's all said and done, the correct version will be jpg'd instead.

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>>54570890
>patreon
But seriously, wouldn't that be a good place to find artists? There are decent people there too.

>>54570942
What would be some tips for making a good layout?

>>54570889
I like it.

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=huN376F3QTg

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>>54570948
>I would rather have a real job than be caught using Patreon.
Do you hate money or something?

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>>54570815
You don't have to make it fancy to make it look good, keep it neat, organized and simple.

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>>54570422
Sagi
Cuddling with a ghost sounds like it might have some physical limitations, but we'll give it a shot anyway.
Playing hide and go seek with her would probably be fun, she'd probably be really good.
I don't want her to do all those things for me though, we'll split it fair. You should always be on the lookout for things to do for your waifu!

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>>54570922
A good point. I'll have it so a dryad could be a possible companion.
Compainions are determined by how many guest rooms you make in the house. There's 30 different rooms total, each with 5 upgrades. You get to pick 15 rooms and 45 upgrades. Some companions are fine living outdoors, but you'd have to know where they live and find them to be able to talk to them and hang out.

Thank you for the idea!

>>54570961
>>54570958
Do you mean me using Patreon as a source of income to excuse my time problems or using it to find artists?

>>54570983
The hell am I gonna use Patreon for?

If I'm going into hobbyist VN/art creation, I don't need a Patreon provided I have a normal job. Money's not an issue. I would rather not quit my job and rely on Patreon for a source of income.

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>>54570983
that porn game is shit
>>54571025
I mean thinking Patreon is some bad way of earning money.

>>54570970
Best advice I can give is just look at how some of the more graphical cyoas, notice the similarities and emulate them, how the text is placed, the spacing, textboxes, colours. That's how I started off, copying the design of the Gentlefemdom layout then playing around with my own style based off what I saw in other cyoas.

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>>54571047
I always saw involving money into a hobby as a bad thing because then it fills you with obligations.

If I were to be running off of Patreon by doing CYOAs, do you think releasing something every half a year would be acceptable? Even so, I'd have to promise to meet deadlines I didn't want. I'd rather have my own jurisdiction over my own time; I always treated this hobby as a means of creative freedom rather than to create things to please a certain crowd. It's why I declined opening a donation box when people pitched it to me here a long time ago.

>>54571108
That's understandable but also different from saying "Patreon? No, I have standards".

>>54571055
Ah, okay. I was trying that, but apparently it didn't turn out well enough for you. Motivation to work harder next time, though. Is there some accepted standard for stuff like spacing between text and boxes, like a percentage, or is it just by eye? I know that in particular is a huge weakness of mine since I'm too damn wordy.

>>54570889
Liking the cozy vibe going on but could there be more options for Homes. I wouldn't mind a hobbit home, witch hut, or some sort of dwarven tunnel.

But with that said:
Day and Night
-real changes

rivers & streams
-fresh water
-Pristine
-perfect temps

Scattered ruins
-puzzles
-regenerate puzzles

animals
-mythical +fictonial
-friendly

Holy tree
-fuit

lonesome cabin

>>54571118
>different from saying "Patreon? No, I have standards"
Those are my standards.

I'd rather make money from my job.

>>54571131
>witch hut
Yes, it needs a witch hut

>>54571108
>I always saw involving money into a hobby as a bad thing because then it fills you with obligations.
Just look at Tok, brought to his knees over a contest for $25 Steambux (How's that lewd cyoa coming on anyway SDA?)

But yeah, that's the right thing to do. Keep at your hobby for pleasures sake not money.

>>54571135
That's not what standard means.

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>>54571025
>>54571025
>Do you mean me using Patreon as a source of income to excuse my time problems or using it to find artists?
Artists.
>>54571047
>that porn game is shit
I played it for the plot.

>>54571149
>playing for the plot
Pleb confirmed.

>>54571143
>How's that lewd cyoa coming on anyway SDA?
Still planning, haven't put anything to PS yet. Gonna be a challenge to do in two weeks; I might have to cut content.

>>54571145
As someone who worked in audit and studied standards as a part of infosec, yes it does. I don't want to reduce myself to being an >>54571149 artist for a living.

>>54571177
Then that's not what you said! This is what I mean: there's nothing wrong with using Patreon to get money. You just don't want to do it for other reasons, namely you don't want to get money at all.

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>>54571108
>I always saw involving money into a hobby as a bad thing because then it fills you with obligations.
It's good from our point of view though since it gives the maker motivation to actually finish a project instead of getting bored and dropping it after two months.

>>54571149
I don't know why I linked that here >>54571177

But yeah, I could see it as a place to find artists. The problem is convincing one to sweat and bleed for me, cause that's pretty much what I'd be asking.

I think the best course of action would be to do something small to have a "portfolio" to showcase before trying to get a better artist to work for you.

>>54571193
>there's nothing wrong with using Patreon to get money
Except for the reasons I highlighted in my post.

>>54571205
>instead of getting bored and dropping it after two months
I would rather not feel the urge to force myself to complete a project for the sake of pleasing people or making money, is my point.

>>54571212
None of which had anything to do with Patreon, and all of which had to do with your own reticence to get money for content.
>>54571205
It doesn't.

>>54571126
While a good layout is wonderful, don't overthink it too much on the behalf of one anon who probably won't read it anyway.

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>>54571229
Making money from hobbies is my argument. Patreon is about making money from hobbies.

>>54571205
Or just incentive to jew people out of money for as long as possible and never deliver;
see >>>/aco/weg

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>>54571126
Honestly I don't expect anyone who isn't a dedicated graphic designer or artist to make any masterpieces and that's okay the people who are obsessed with that are in the minority.

Spacing I always do by eye, nothing too close to any boxes or borders, and inline with the image it's referring to, not spilling out the sides. Textboxes are good to separate text. Alot of cyoas have images with rounded edges, that's an easy way to make it look nice.

>>54571248
Patreon's about making money from free shit or shit that's otherwise hard to monetise. Regardless, these are all your preferences, not standards. It's not like there's some moral failing in using Patreon.

>play morrowind again
>decide to go along Hla Oad first this time
>all those camonna tong references
>remember that you cannot join the camonna tong
>exit morrowind and visit cyoag
>realise there's no crime syndicate cyoa either

AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAH AM I THE ONLY PERSON IN THE WORLD WHO HAS A THING FOR CRIME SYNDICATES?!

>>54571272
>moral
Ethical.

And to me, yes it is. It is an ethical failing to use Patreon to make money from hobbies for the reasons I highlighted in my post. I don't look at the artists on Patreon in a generally good light.

>>54571300
well if you make a cyoa about it you might not be

>>54571315
>moral
>Ethical
Zero difference in normal conversation and near zero difference in technical conversation.

>for the reasons I highlighted in my post
You didn't highlight anything, unless your deal is "getting paid to produce not much", in which case the failing is on you for not producing much.

>>54571239
Sure, but I still want to improve. I managed to get textures working, which is nice, but now to progress I think I need to move onto stuff like bevels, drop shadow stuff, varying text sizes. Or maybe that will just look super cluttered and gross. I don't know, I'm not a designer.

>>54571259
Alright, I'll try to keep stuff in mind. Thank you for your advice.

>>54571315
>>54571330
this exactly the kind of pointless arguing over two or three words and their context that the fatposter would use to "improve" one of these threads.

>>54571349
Make a CYOA faggot.

>>54571330
>Zero difference in normal conversation and near zero difference in technical conversation.

Morals = what you believe about right and wrong
Ethics = what society believes about right and wrong

>>54571369
That's not even remotely true.

>>54571369
>>54571375
That's also not how SDA was using it...

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>>54571330
>Zero difference in normal conversation and near zero difference in technical conversation.
>He doesn't know his ethics

>in which case the failing is on you for not producing much
Which is the flaw in the concept of getting paid for hobbies. It is a concept I don't subscribe to, it is outside of my standards. A hobby should purely be about doing it because you love it.

Even if I win this stupid Reddit contest, I'm giving the stupid $25 to someone else.

>>54571369
>>54571375
>>54571382
It's the other way around.

>>54571357
I've made 8, and 2 DLC for one.

I think I'm about done though.

>>54571386
Give it to me.

>>54571386
Yeah and now imagine somebody used Patreon and does make content, like, I dunno, Toady One.
>>54571395
Still wrong nigga. Feel free to find literally any evidence to the contrary.

>>54571315

Hobbies are a luxury, you must be seriously deluded if you think it's more ethical for someone to try and work a couple McJob's than it is for them to devote their time to creative pursuits that other's are willing to pay them money for.

Maybe it won't be fun for them any more, but it's definitely not less fun than trying to hold down multiple jobs with irregular hours.

>>54571397
Then post CYOAs.

>>54571386
Take a screenshot, and link the screenshot in the Pastebin, but with the code blanked out so nobody can cash it.

>>54571416
>>54571419
You guys are failed artists, I can tell. Only someone like that is so rabidly defensive over his money scamming service.

>>54571430
>anyone in these threads
>even capable of reaching the status of "failed artist"
try again

>>54571416
Toady spends more time attending family events and hipster indie game dev conferences than working on his game ever since the patreon.

>>54571439
lol

>>54570889
STreams
Tree
Day and night
Animals
Wise one

Cabin


MOAR

I need more comfiness. More places for my mind to wander.

>>54570889
>Holy Tree 1
>Ruins
>Animals 3
>Day and Night 2
>The Wise One 3

>Manor
Really would like a Witch Hut with witchy waifu

>>54571430

I have no talent for that sort of thing, and I've never personally used patreon or any other website to donate or receive money.

I have, however, worked shit jobs and know for a fact that treating hobbies as sacred is some kind of rich person nonsense.

>>54571395
>It's the other way around.
Bro, I literally had a university lecture on professional ethics yesterday. I'm just telling you what the lecturer told the class.

Morals = what you believe is right and wrong
Ethics = what society believes is right and wrong

>>54571466
It's not nonsense if you're rich.

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>>54571421
I'll post one of my early ones; my more recent ones have been posted anons in recent threads, so I won't post them again so soon.

>>54571468
Your lecturer was a retard. Is that hard to understand?
>>54571481
Noooooo you were good don't stop

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>>54571416
>Yeah and now imagine somebody used Patreon and does make content, like, I dunno, Toady One.
Now imagine someone who doesn't use Patreon and has a normal job.

>Feel free to find literally any evidence to the contrary.
It's more that ethics is something that applies to a society and morals is something that applies to humanity. You learn this if you take an ethics course.

>>54571419
>>54571466
>McJobs
That's 100% your failure.

>>54571468
See above. I learned it slightly differently.

>>54571466
I'm poor and treat my hobbies as sacred.

>>54570889
>Forest CYOA
I didn't know that i wanted this so much. But can you choose to let time pass? If i want to fuck off to my mystical forest to never return i would like to not worry about everyone stopped in time. I would also know if will there be a way to get something like shapeshifting so i can get to Be the little girl not something that is needed but it would be nice

>>54571499
Suck my ass

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>>54570889
>>54570889
Which of these options adds elves?

>>54571441
He just took a whole week off for a wedding and this year he's been in and out of conventions. His work ethic is dead.

>>54571475

I highly doubt most patreon artists are rich, so it's nonsense to them too.

>>54570889
I want comfy snow and cold in my forest.

>>54571511
Gladly.

>>54571499
>Now imagine someone who doesn't use Patreon and has a normal job.
Sounds like someone who makes less (or worse) content to me.

Ethics is a branch of philosophy, or alternatively "the moral principles that govern a person's behaviour or the conducting of an activity".
>>54571514
Yeah and this is wholly new, seeing as this business model is very strange to him. Also he's clearly working on the game a lot.

>>54571533
>He's clearly working on the game a lot
I can tell you're new to the game and haven't been involved since .23/2D version like I have. His pace is abysmally glacial compared to what it used to be.

>>54571559
More that he's working on shit no one most people cares about. I care about it

>>54571567
Yeah, like his brother's wedding.

>>54571488
>Noooooo you were good don't stop

We'll see anon. I wanted to see if I could get to 12 weeks with the streak before an honorable retirement, so maybe I'll try power through just a little longer.

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>>54571533
>Sounds like someone who makes less (or worse) content to me.
I knew you were one of these "artists". This is usually what comes up when cornered.

>Ethics is a branch of philosophy
Yes. While ethics is something like subscribing to utilitarianism or kantianism, morals is "killing is bad."

>>54571575
No, I don't care about that.

>>54571499

It's my failure that I had to work full time to pay for college? I guess I should have known not to be born poor to garbage people. Chance and circumstance have no effect on reality, apparently.

>>54571581
It's the only thing he worked on recently.

>>54571579
>I knew you were one of these "artists". This is usually what comes up when cornered.
What, that if you get paid to do something full time, you can do it full time?
You read that I said "to me", not "than me", right?
>ethics is something like subscribing to utilitarianism or kantianism, morals is "killing is bad."
Yes, that's about it. So it's as I said and I was right at the beginning anyway.
>>54571585
You have nobody else to blame for your own bad luck.

>>54571585
Welcome to the US, where there is a chance for everyone, and thousands more if you are loaded...

>>54571530
What's your shortest CYOA you've made? I want to attempt something.

>>54571609
I think the US has the lowest social mobility of the entire western world save Great Britain. It's really funny.

>>54571636
shhhh ! The NSA is watching you ! You'll be branded a commie traitor !

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>>54571585
>It's my failure that I had to work full time to pay for college?
Not really what I said, anon. But if you think going Patreon is an acceptable justification for your "bad luck" then by all means, go ahead and become one of them.

>>54571605
>What, that if you get paid to do something full time, you can do it full time?
Are you upset that someone with a normal job can do just as good of a job as you can, merely by doing something because they like to do it rather than needing money to justify it?

Please, provide to me your superior content, although I'm pretty sure I know who you are already and I'm gonna tell you now that I'm not impressed.

>Yes, that's about it.
As I said, ethics applies to society and morals is humanity. It evolved alongside with us, it is bigger than what you decide for yourself.

>>54571621
Not counting Depression CYOA, I made pic related in a day.

>>54571683
>Are you upset that someone with a normal job can do just as good of a job as you can, merely by doing something because they like to do it rather than needing money to justify it?
If you are producing content in less time than you could do, you either work slower, or worse. That's a basic law of reality.
>Please, provide to me your superior content, although I'm pretty sure I know who you are already and I'm gonna tell you now that I'm not impressed.
I think you have been confused.
>As I said, ethics applies to society and morals is humanity
No that's completely different from
>ethics is something like subscribing to utilitarianism or kantianism, morals is "killing is bad."

not even bumplimit

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>>54571131
>>54571447
>>54571506
>>54571513
>>54571523
Thanks for the suggestions!
You've given me an idea for a page and some extra options for this CYOA. I'll try to see to everything that I can make fit!

I think I'll add an "Encounters" page. The Forest points are mainly for the BIG shaping features. The encounters will be minor things that add life to a now populated forest. Things like minor weather control, night sky star canvases, intelligent life and residents, hidden artifacts from previous forest owners to discover that do certain things, and more landscape features/secret areas to discover.

It's gonna add a ton of time to the making of this, but It'll be for the better! Time to get working!

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>>54570422
>Italics could've been finished PPP+
>Drags their ass on purpose
Can't wake up.

>>54571621
Oh yeah, if you're thinking about doing something with it, the source files are in my Mega drive.

>>54571743
>If you are producing content in less time than you could do, you either work slower, or worse.
Yeah, I'm sure if I quit my job and become a Patreon Jew, I'd be better off as a person.

>I think you have been confused.
Fine, back down, then.

>No that's completely different
No, it isn't. "Killing is bad" is a universal moral adopted by humanity through our evolution. It's something we agreed as a species to be a morally bad decision to make under most circumstances.

>>54571757
Yeah, this is a big part of my disillusionment with these threads.

>>54571825
>Yeah, I'm sure if I quit my job and become a Patreon Jew, I'd be better off as a person.
Nigger this ain't about you as a person, I'm talking about as an artist.
>Fine, back down, then.
This is what I mean. Back down from what?
>"Killing is bad" is a universal moral adopted by humanity through our evolution
Tell that to Stirner. Objectivist philosophers make me sick.

Can someone post a CYOA for me, it has to do with superpowers with minor to major abilities but all the majoy abilities have you dealing with the fact that you're almost like a small god. I remember that one of the majors was Mind Control but it warned you to be careful so that you wouldn't go around changing close friends personalities when you were angry at them. Thanks in advance!

>>54571849
It just happens every once in a while. I don't even think it's the namefags, because you see this happen in the worldbuilding general too.

>>54571853
>as an artist
The point is that someone with a normal job can still be an artist if they treat it as a hobby. This is your fault for thinking it's feasible to treat a hobby as your income.

>Back down from what?
Parading about your superiority as an artist/creator.

>>54571853
>Objectivism is a meme
No one in a field that matters cares about your bitching.

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>>54568868
What would happen if you combined cyoas and gachas?

>>54571853
Nobody takes subjectivism seriously, you hipster scum.

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>Mfw watching people futilely argue philosophy and opinion over the internet.

>>54571886
>can still be an artist
Yeah, sure. A worse one, barring personal quirks (ex. "oh no! All this money has only increased the pressure I feel as a creator, and now I will procrastinate even more").
>it's feasible to treat a hobby as your income
It clearly is, or we wouldn't have workaholics.
>Parading about your superiority as an artist/creator.
Fucking exactly what I thought you thought. I never said that. What a cock-goblin.
>No one in a field that matters cares about your bitching.
>>54571912
>Nobody takes subjectivism seriously, you hipster scum.
Then I will make them care. I, unlike them, do not obey the herd morality...

>>54571874
It happens a bit more than that, its just earlier and even less relevant to the general than usual.

The fact that threads where you don't have to sift through about half the posts being bickering about pointless stuff (quite often off topic pointless stuff) are now less common then not is not good at all.

Especially when they're all like this one; its not a discussion, you can tell neither side is actually listening to the other, just waiting for them to post so they can try to pick apart their words and tell them they're wrong. When its over no one will have changed their mind about anything.

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>>54571920
>mfw I can't even understand what they're talking about

What is a visual or writing element you wish you could see more of in CYOAs?

>>54571948
I ignore them and only reply to CYOAs.

>>54571899
I would get poor trying to buy the 5* little girl inmortality

>>54571965
Animation

>>54571825
Thanks, appreciate it

>>54571965
Writing which is good.

>>54571965
>>54572014
Webm cyoas, although I don't know how it would work or what you'd put in them. Music would be a nice touch for immersion in lore.

>>54572037
Wait, no, that implies we've been getting at least some good writing.

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>>54571899
You get interesting concepts that die.

>>54571938
>Yeah, sure. A worse one
And you're a shining example of this?

I'm asking you to show me.

>It clearly is, or we wouldn't have workaholics.
Are you saying that working as an artist is the same as working in something that matters?

I think you underestimate how low we look at people like you.

>I, unlike them, do not obey the herd morality...
Hahaha

>>54572033
If you're doing what I think you're doing, I encourage it.

>>54571964
To be honest, you'll find that they normally can't either, they're just regurgitating words. But never let that stop you having pointless arguments on the internet.

>>54571965
I'm not sure what a writing element is but I always found it interesting how individualistic cyoas are: personal powers, personal comfort, complete abandonment of society, etc. are popular themes.

Personally I'd enjoy seeing more cyoas where friends and family matter. Either by including them in whatever the topic of the cyoa might be, or by letting you design/pick a family for your new life.

Then again, one of my personal pet interests have always been powerful families. I find being the heir to a trade empire, more interesting than being the founder and de facto ruler.

>>54572050
>And you're a shining example of this?
No you faggot
>Are you saying that working as an artist is the same as working in something that matters?
No you faggot artists can be workaholics
>hahaha
This is your final warning.

>>54571773
>It's gonna add a ton of time to the making of this, but It'll be for the better! Time to get working!
Godspeed. i will look foward to the comfy forest CYOA, considering how it is starting to look like chances are it becomes one of my favourite comfy.

>>54571397
What 8? Blackrock, Beastmaster, Skyrider and? Liked your stuff.

>>54572050
W-what do you think I'll be doing?

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>>54572072
Didn't you say you look down on people who don't get paid to make art because they're worse than you at it?

Sounds like you're jist afraid of being outed for the hack you are.

>>54572182
>Didn't you say you look down on people who don't get paid to make art because they're worse than you at it?
No you faggot

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>>54572180
Just do it.

>>54569826
>Nostalgia,Born Early,Born Late, Existential

>Transcended all of them

There is hope, brothers.

>>54572050
>SDA CYOAs based card game
>If it really existed i would never get the cards to make an Archangel/Archdemon based deck
Never lucky.

fuck it I'm gonna finish my CYOA just for you retards

>>54570878
>tfw you'll never make such a good CYOA's people will want to make free art for you

>>54571965
>writing element
Not sure if this counts, but CYOAs where the results are initially hidden from you and determined by your build and choices. Theres a lot of ways to do it, like the one early on in this thread with the robot maid and stuff, or how Eternals Rising has your companions grow and change in different ways depending on your choices. That really draws me in.

>>54572136
Skyrider
Blackrock
Beastmaster
Beastmaster DLC 1
Beastmaster DLC 2
Well of Dragons
Delinquent Quest
Hidden World Tournament
Last Human
Space Marine

>>54571757
I blame Shit Dick Anon.

>>54569043
Rebel
Scythe
Shark

>>54571481
Executioner
Barrier
Silver tongue
Enchanting
Burning Deep

>>54572244
you what

>>54572243
>Well of Dragons
Please post this one.

>>54570902
You can literally do that exact thing in photoshop without having to download this gay program you keep pushing

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>>54572310
Here you go. 1/2.

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>>54572347
2/2.

>>54570899
>Battlemage
What are the best powers combos?

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>>54572228
I'll give a Special Edition Swimsuit Archangel(tm) card to everyone who browses these threads.

Except Imaginos.

>>54570878
>>54572234
I need good artists, anon. But that's now an avenue of possibility.

>>54572325
Ah, I see. I don't use photoshop and am unfamiliar with it. The program I use doesn't have great options for controlling your export, and the program was recommended to me when I myself was having issues getting the file size down. I should have realized the functionality came integrated into the more popular programs, I guess.

>>54572243
>Delinquent Quest
Wait you did that? Damn.
>Last Human
Which one's that?

>>54572347
What a shitty cyoa. The writing is terrible.

>>54572437
Good thing bad writing never stopped a CYOA.

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>>54572408
>Which one's that?

>>54572437
Shame you didn't enjoy it anon, I enjoyed writing it.

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What would be the best way to go about making a Transformers CYOA?

I'm considering making one where the reader balances Energon, which governs their abilities, and Allies, which is obvious but is limited by their starting Faction (Autobot/Decepticon/NAIL/Unicron) and the Age (Pre-War/Generation 1/Post-War).

How could I work in the various size classes? I was thinking of making them Scout (let's say Arcee from Prime as an example), Voyager (the standard, think Starscream in relation to Megatron), and Leader (Your Primes, Megs, and various bigguns), but I'm not sure if that should simply be cosmetic or have mechanical effect, like, say, the larger the size, the less Energon you have access to.

Thoughts? What CYOA's would be good influences too look at for inspiration?

>>54572515
I just want Beast Wars desu

>>54572505
Wow, your CYOAs really don't have any connecting themes or anything. You go from beastmaster to martial arts to post-apoc lonely simulator. The only way to identify them is through the slightly impressive disregard towards aesthetics.

>>54572528
Now how did I know that the first comment would be "But what about Beast Wars?"

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I honestly don't want anything from any of these guys, he picked a really bad set of boons honestly.

>>54572515
No Metroplex?

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>>54572437
Thinking about Transformers Armada for PS2 hurts my heart. I want Tidal Wave sized transformers too.
I want to go back.

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You out there anon? Have you worked on it at all?

Just checking in, hope to see something cool from you soon.

>>54572515
Making a good Transformers CYOA grail remains my holy grail, that I'll never achieve I suspect.

My outline had the player choose:
Alt-mode: Land Vehicle, Air Vehicle, Beast, Other

and then classification, which would have been the meat of the work:
Triple Changer
Combiner Member
Pretender
Headmaster
Targetmaster
Powermaster
Titan
Monoformer

Then a series of perks like Point One Percenter, Spark Twin, stuff like that.


>>54572536
I think about stuff like that a lot anyway, I'm the day dreamer type. I've got another half a dozen or so in various stages of early drafting, but I don't think much will come of them.

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>>54572574
>>54572515
And minicons that give special abilities.

>>54572563
Pardon the pun, but I'm starting off small. This is my first attempt at a CYOA and I don't want to make it too complex. If I even make it at all, I'll probably add onto it.

>>54572605
Minicons/Headmasters would absolutely go under Allies.

>>54572554
>Hamlet
>Bridal
>School
>Sentry
>Orphan
C O M F Y

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>>54572515
All I care about is Beast wars

>>54570858
Chop the pages in half?

>>54572243
Thanks. Didn't know you made those other ones.

>>54573002
Well, I hope you enjoyed some of them anon.

Good night /cyoag/

I hope one day one of the CYOAS will come true for you guys (and me too)

>>54573247
>a cyoa comes true
>it's this one
>>54569826

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>>54568868
Changling bloodline,
Physical ++
Mental ++
Social +
Translocation Sorcerer

I love translocation in this. Teleporting is already great, but "rips in the fabric of space as a weapon" is basically Black Blade of Disaster, which is awesome.

>>54572374
Umbra+Nocturne. Unmatched power in total darkness + the ability to create total darkness at will.

>>54569826
>no feel of general personal worthlessness

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>>54572591
Age of the Empire.

Human

Wanderer

Traits (11):
Intelligence 4
Charisma 2
Beauty 2
Empath
Proper
Adventurous
Light Side Affinity

Skills (3):
Historian
Scholarly
Astrogation

Flaw:
Weak

Equipment (1000):
Pistol (950)
Nice Clothes (900)
Medic, tools, camping kits (825)
Fancy binoculars (750)
Strange Crystal (450)
Guess I'll have some spending money

Companions (4):
Childhood friendo. What is life and adventure without people to share it with? We'll take on the galaxy together.
The grey Jedi. Jolee Bindo type. the wise mentor of the party.
The royal. Probably has some important business to attend to, something for the party to do. Came to us for help perhaps.
The astromech droid. Everyone needs an R2 in their life.

Ship (3):
Reliable
Cloak
Kessel Runner

>>54569857
There isn't. But if you want one, take a CYOA you like and copy its format.

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I added some more home exteriors, using some
of your suggestions and some of my creativity. I also got page 3 done! Page 2 is still a WIP

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EMPIRE REVIVAL CHAN


WHERE HAVE YOU GONE

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>>54573592

>>54573592
Is this CYOA going to give you any emperor skills to go with this? If not I don't see it going well.

>>54569857
>>54573507
You should also look up web design. Current trends of mobile-first design care a lot about the format most people use for their CYOAs.
And umltimately 90% work of either goes into making lists of boxes look pretty.

>>54573592
doesn't chan mean a girl in chinese

>>54573650
It's a Japanese suffix usually used for young girls.

>>54573624

Yeah, the guys not finished, he was asking for more resources in the previous thread.

>>54570889
Oh, I like forests! This one is especially nice due to the built in comfy power.

I'll take fully upgraded rivers and streams. A source of water, and a place to bathe and swim. Building a swimming hole by moving around the river rocks is a great way to spend an afternoon.

Holy trees with fruit, because something holy is good, and having fruit to eat means I can stay a while longer.

Day and night seem like something I wouldn't want to miss. Real changes should be involved too. Since I have more upgrades than I really need, I'll take the ones to let me control this false time too.

A forest without animals would be a bit boring. Real life animals can be fairly friendly already, but I have the upgrade points so I'll take that option.

I suppose a calming shrine is a nice thing, especially with the comfy amenities.

I don't want any of those homes, they're surrounded by death. I'd rather build my own that's more harmonious with the forest. It is mine, after all.

>>54573522
thank you

but i am sorry, I already have a waifu

>>54573650
that would be nu hai

>>54571506
>want to be the little girl
>in an asocial setting
>also want to advance time
So you basically want less muscle, periods, and having to squat to pee?

>>54570889
Balance concern: Everything under Rivers and Streams feels mandatory, like it should be part of the base package.

Also, I realize this isn't done, but I'd like a bit to detail what kind of forest this is. Is it deciduous or coniferous, for example. Is there underbrush, and what's it like? Are the trees tall and straight or complicated and heavily branching? Is the ground flat,hilly, or mountainous? That kind of thing.

>>54571416
Toady made content for years and only added patreon because his donors asked for it. Not really the same situation.

>>54573899
Huh? That sounds like exactly the same situation, which is strange, because usually it wouldn't be.

>>54573805
>Implying i want to be the little girl for social advantage
Anyways what is wrong with wanting to advance time?

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>>54573868
First off, a lot of the shit like food, water, bathing, swimming, ect is covered in the house options, so no worry there. There will also be set locations to choose from like other settlements that will have their own lakes, ponds, and rivers. The rivers described are just ones that form naturally and independent of you, in the wilds.


2nd off, I'm going a mix of all types really. Deep jungle, hills, caves, mountains, no underbrush, some underbrush, thick to thin. Certain things such as the home exteriors and the pre-planned set locations to pick will have their own sort of terrain described to surround it.

I'll make more of an effort to answer those questions, its just at 1 page, a lot is left unexplained by the forest's guardian.

Thanks for the suggestions! Here's the non-final homes room page that might clear some things up for people. It's planned to be page 3.

>>54573754
>>54573522
Oh, I didn't see this. These are much nicer homes!

I don't like that none have a porch, but I can build one myself.

The roots of the tree are nice but the sound would make it harder for me to sleep. I think I'll take the Witch's cabin, although I'm going to do away with the scarecrows and jack o' lanterns personally. That's just too much.

Looking forward to page two.

>>54573627
Web design is barely related at all, it's just aesthetic stuff and that's the least important part of the CYOA.

>>54570889
Rivers & Streams +1
Holy Tree +1
Scattered Ruins +3
Day and Night +3
Astral Spirits +1

Mighty Manor

Looking forward to continuation!

>>54571465
>Really would like a Witch Hut
Oooooh, yeah a Baba Yaga style walking hut would be great. May not have been what you meant, but it's what I thought of.

>>54574042
That would also be great. Chicken legs are disgusting though, I want dragon legs or something.

>>54573957
I didn't say advantage, necessarily. But for purely physical things, men are better.
>advance time
You'll stop being little and start bleeding once a month.

>>54573993
I like swimming in natural rivers anyway. What's the point of a forest CYOA if you get everything in your house anyway?

>>54574036
My bad for only skimming the original post, thought visual design was also of concern.

>>54574067
And i just noticed the glaring flaw in letting time advance. Fucking hell i am an idiot.

>>54574097
I guess its less a "forest" and more a "forest world". Ruins, settlements, natural treasure troves. It's a CYOA that I'm trying to invoke 3 things with: Comfy, Adventure, and Social.

>>54573993
This high tech stuff feels a bit... out of place?

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>>54574067
>Purely physical things
Even without the social aspect, there's always masturbation.

>>54574018
Continuing:
>>54573993

There's really a lot of home stuff isn't there?

I'll take a bathroom so that the shit doesn't pile up around my home.

Bedroom is sort of the point of a house in the first place. Can't imagine who would want the bed to be the earth's softest, it would feel like it's swallowing you up.

Library seems nice.

Kitchen and dining room are also kind of necessary, and the grocery food supply is nice, although it makes me wonder what ingredients it would have otherwise.

If I'm the owner of the forest and stop time to come here, who is the teleporter supposed to invite? I don't like the implications for the setting.

Weight room is handy so I'll take that.

Treasure rooms are nice if there's to be storage or I need a big room for some reason, but mostly I just want the tools.

That's all I really want, but I have a ton of extra points, so I'll just take the CYOA portal I guess. This page kind of undermined the first one, it got less comfy.

>>54573993
>>54574042
Bathroom +1
Bedroom +1
Library +5
Living Room +0
Kitchen & Dining Room +5
Tabletop Room +2
Gaming Room +5
Treasure Rooms +0
Guest Room (Free)
Guest Room (+3)
Guest Room (+3)

>>54573993
>the pool can give you water breathing
>the streams upgrades just make them how you'd think they would be in the first place
Eh

>>54573993

I think the "CYOA Portal" is a mistake, it will just make people treat your cyoa as a meta cyoa, trying to synergize with other cyoa rather than playing it as-is.

That said, I liked the first page a lot. As much as I like pocket dimension cyoa's, they tend to place emphasis on the magical perks for rooms rather than the outdoor space.

>>54573993
"Duel" is when two people fight each other (e.g. "duel to the death"). "Dual" is when you have/use two of something at once (e.g. "dual wield").

>>54574382
>>54574384
>>54574289
Thank you for the feedback!
Make no mistake, the home is the most "stand alone" part of all of this. I'm placing a lot more pressure on developing the outside world. If all goes as planned, the home will be a place where you won't spend most of your time.
>>54574432
Thanks for point it out, I'll get it fixed right away.

>>54573993
>A self-maintaining fireplace provides a cozy fug and sounds of gentle fire crickiling
>a cozy fug
Spurdo spärde?

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>>54574295
this doujin was unironically hilarious and a fun little read even aside from the sexiness of the situation.

>>54574507
Maybe fug was a bad choice of words due to board culture.

Fug is a noun which means: "a warm, stuffy, or smoky atmosphere in a room."
I'll replace that.

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>>54572554
Oh dear, I love this one.

I have pretty vivid dreams and so I'm sure Ms. Doll would enjoy them. I would try to have an interesting dream every night, and I would really enjoy sitting and listening to her tell me about them, since I can't remember them. I can look into ways to dream about certain things and tailor them to her likes. I would very much enjoy spending time with her.

Hopefully she isn't put off if I accidentally have a dream about her, where we hold hands.

The grassland spirit would be nice too. I would tend a garden with my Doll friendo, and we can go around planting trees with one of those nonprofit organizations. I'm sure the grassland spirit would be pleased if we become professional tree planters, and it's even for a good cause. And I wouldn't be too demanding about the weather, just sunny and cool most days, nothing too difficult for him.

The Orphan can come along, and learn about the importance of nature and the environment and what we can do to help from the grassland spirit and me. I like to think those are good things to teach. I would raise her with kindness and affection and encouragement.

>>54574509
wait, so to fully upgrade a normal skill costs 3 points but for regen costs five?

>>54574609
Each school has one skill that costs 5 to fully upgrade, yes.

>>54571773
Gotta say, reading over this it looks really well done, so keep up the good work!

>>54574509
Not bad

The only major complaint is that Flash is the picture of speed and not Quicksilver (Since Flash is DC)

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>>54569268
One I made a year ago.
Or do you just want waifu stuff?
Because I could do that too.

>>54573805
Peeing as a girl is fun.

>>54574668
Damn, I totally spaced on that. I'll fix it when I update this.

>>54574668
Isn't Genius Brainiac?

>>54574633
Thanks! I shaped it after the little desire I had every time I took a stroll in a forest. That longing to just explore, unearth, relax, and discover. Then I thought, why not add an adventure twist to it?

>>54574509
the general purpose points are really stupid seeing as most powers are on the list. it would be better if they were cross-class points.

>>54574743
I'm not the creator but yeah you are right. Didn't catch that.

>>54574788
There are a LOT of powers not on the list. If you can't think of any, feel free to use them for any class powers.

>>54574384
Oh, an idea! I think I'll make it so items can't be
taken outside the home. The idea of the portal is to go on other adventures and bring back treasure to fill up the treasure rooms. There's no real minmaxing if there's no threat, and the home is always safe.

>>54574509
Outside of Flash (DC) you also mentioned flight and reference Superman...also DC. You should have mentioned a marvel flyer.