/cyoag/ - CYOA General [Here You Go, Anon Edition]

>>54430990
gay

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>>54430990

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>>54431020

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>>54431071

>>54421601
Speaking of that thread, what is the actual result of attempting to fuse all 6 right then and now?
I still don't trust this 'hero' one bit.

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>>54431101

>>54431109
I wish he'd come back so I could start improving all of his CYOAs before his eyes

This thread is trash.

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>>54431144

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>>54431178

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>>54430990
I like cyoas about running your own corporation and making lots of money. It's always been my dream to be the patrician of one of the major houses in a trade empire that lies at the center of the world. Do cyoas like that exist?

>>54431216
Make one you lazy ass.

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>>54431204
Fucked up and posted the second mystery box unspoiled, so here it has again.

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>>54431272

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>>54431329

>>54431304
My people have made plenty of sacrifices and done enough free labour already, don't you think?

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>>54431390

>>54431421
The fuck are you talking about?

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>>54431438

>>54431449
Your posts are beyond offensive. Never talk to me again unless you're prepared to pay for the psychiatric treatment I'll need as a result of your posts.

>>54431421
Back in the CYOA mines slave.

>>54431421
Half rations for two weeks. Now get back to work.

>>54431492
I have no idea what the fuck is going on but you deserve a slow painful death.

>>54430836
Probably requesting this in a new fresh thread is not a good idea but i can't fucking find the images i need help

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Guess I'll start dumping Celt's stuff as a segway from our collab.

>>54431544
It's most likely jonh shitposting about being black.

>>54431588
Milk is racist. Please don't make this CYOA.

>>54431614
I thought he was a dirty mulatto that was born into old European money.

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>>54431109
>check TokHaar's Google Drive after work
>maybe an update to Eronomicon?
>The End
>What the fuck
>discover drama

It's like people don't want CYOA creators anywhere. I followed his stuff on /d/, until they waved their magic wand and said CYOAs were not /d/ enough.

Great. Gotta save all the CYOAs in his drive before he makes them private.

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>>54431635

>>54431620
I am sorry Anon but my choice has been made and i can not do it

>>54431649
I have feeling that Tok is too much of a shameless attentionwhore to quit making cyoas for good.

He's going to come back to us sooner or later.

>>54431620
What about chocolate milk while race mixing?

As a first time attempted creator... god damn these things are hard. I knew it was going to be a lot of text going in, but the images and formatting are proving to be a right bitch.

I could try making a smaller option first but I'm more inclined to suffer for a while than compromise.

>>54431848
>god damn these things are hard.
That's what Highlander said.

>>54431692
Eh, he's not quitting CYOAs, he's leaving us for plebbit, where they're more willing to crouch up his ass.

>>54431848
You can venture to the hidden realm of Makai Discord for answers if you so desire.

>>54431863
> Hey guys the 2.0 is gonna have every companion have half a page of exposition.
This isn't a human anymore.

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Here's the full release of the 2nd edition, png form. If anyone wants the pdf, say so. I may change it further with feedback, but I have no more changes planned.

Only changes since last time are some clarifications as to how the Figure of Legend rebirth works, and I actually added descriptions for the three magic schools.

Anyway, this feels like homework now, and I want to work on other CYOAs for a while. Enjoy.

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>>54431952

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>>54431966
Added descriptions to the three *new* magic schools, I mean. Abjuration, Disjunction and Compulsion.

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>>54431979

>>54431614
>>54431633
He's pretending to be jewish you daft fuckers...

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>>54431995
(5/5)

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>>54431990

>>54432002
Oy vey

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>>54431869
I thought as much.

Daily remainder, discussing cyoas on reddit is a punishable offense, if the OP/original author did not request for feedback (which is never because most cyoas they have there is ripped from us)

>>54431952
I'd prefer the pdf, myself.

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>>54431869
>>54431692
I guess everyone on 4chan hates content creators now. I guess just repost CYOAs over and over again.

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>>54432018

>>54431795
Sorry, just saw this. I *do* take requests, and I'll add this on the list of future things to consider. At a glance, though, I'm leery of changing that. Part of the drawback of Unpleasant Visage is being unable to escape your ugly mug.

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>>54432060

>>54432032
Fucking hugboxes.

>>54432047
They lost their value once cyoas started being produced a dime a dozen.

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>>54432039

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>>54432084

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>>54432129

>>54432047
>being blunt and pointing the obvious flaws of an content creator's work is equivalent to hating that content creator

The general consensus seems to be that Tok threw a hissy fit, because he rushed out a poorly balanced product and when people pointed out the flaws and even give a detailed suggestions on how to improve said product, he saw that as a blatant attempt to defile his work despite repeatedly telling everyone that he will not be doing anymore updates and fixes to said product.

>there will never be an inverse waifu hatred
>one where a bunch of crazy assassins/serial killers are trying to kill you
>but you are convinced they want to be in a relationship with you
>one girl is a legitimate serial killer who does extensive research on her targets, you think she is just yandere
>one is collecting body parts, you just think she is really into Frankenstein cosplay

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>>54431952

Thank you Acheld!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

>>54431869
I guess you didn't read The End. Going to redit was never an option, quit making CYOAs was.

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>>54432168

>>54432047
>criticizing or otherwise pointing out the flaws is hating content creators

wew lad

It's been at least two months since I last saw a new Waifu CYOA, have I just somehow missed all of them?

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>>54432191

>>54432098
What exactly is a bait about that?

If supply increases and demand doesn't, then the value lowers.

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>>54431952
>>54432088

Madira-Hamsi

>Time and Place to be Determined by RP World
>Figure of Legend
120
>Wizard
85
>Memory of the Ages Level 0
85
>Gift of Gab
80
>Polyglot
75
>Commander
70
>Map Maker
65
>Mage Eye (Wizard)
65
>Strength & Speed Level 2
57
>Reflexes & Reaction Level 2
49
>Impervious Level 3
31
>Regeneration Level 3
22
>Non-Reactor
20
>Endurance Level 2
12
>Super Senses Level 2
8
>Diet Level 2
3
>Sanitary Convenience Level 1
1
>Iron Gut
0
>Beauty
-2
>Divination, Telepathy, Stormsage, Defiling, Compulsion, Master of Motion, Disjunction Major
-37
>Teach Defiling Minor
-39
>Godslayer (Upgraded)
-42
>Personal Omni-Wear
-43
>Rage
-38
>Cursed by the Spirits
-18
>Nemesis
-10
>The Myth Maker
>A Dark God
>Sorcerer Supreme
>An Empire Eternal
>Multiplayer Build
0

A walking plague! A scourge upon the world! Even the spirits of the Earth strive against her! But she can be placated! Mortals' time in this world is short and their brief lives all that they have that's truly valuable. Sacrifice them to Madira-Hamsi! Join her armies! Build her pyramids of skulls and spread her legend far and wide! When the world has embraced the savage beauty of destruction and the blood flows like rivers in celebration her eternal rule, then she will take her place as the one true Goddess and elevate the world with her as she begins true ascension to unknown heights!

I could write up a Nemesis myself. But if a shared world gets started with the final version, then maybe someone will want to be my Nemesis instead.

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>>54432227

>>54432188
I guess I don't care about his infantile rant.

>>54432233
Applying economy to CYOA creation

>>54432268
I'll be your enemy, just a sec

>>54432268

What kind of sick mind comes up with stuff like this?

>>54432193
>CYOA Authors make content for my enjoyment for free
>Being an ass to content creators is muh free speech!
>I expect to be able to be an asshole here to whoever I want, without any kind of consequences.
>CYOA Author quits
>REEEEEEEE!!!!

>>54432459
Ah, I see. I didn't realize I was trying to argue with a mentally retarded person. Good luck with your day, hope your handler is nice.

>>54432459
>CYOA Author quits
>Brief applause and the sounds of champagne being popped.

>>54432459
>CYOA Author quits

Good. That deviant did nothing but shit up the thread with his drama and fetishes.

>>54432489
desu anyone who argues about anything here has to be at least a little bit retarded

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>>54431649
I kind of always disliked Tok.

I didn't think his cyoas were anything worth raving about, they seemed pretty mediocre, and he just came across as an attention whore who thought he was better than other people.

His latest CYOA seemed fine, but then he just freaked out when people criticized him, I knew there was no hope when he used the excuse of "but reddit liked it!"

Like, I have no issue with reddit honestly, and I've posted some of my cyoas there before, but I always post them here first. Reddit's a hugbox hivemind and always will be.

Also I decided to go look up Tok's reddit account, and he's just as much of an attention whore there.
>didn't respond to me within a day
>Better start insulting them.

>>54432074
What I mean is that you DO keep an ugly mug, but you get to change it from Ugly Black Dude to Ugly Chinese Dude or even Ugly Ogre Thing. Unless you mean you want stasis to be part of the drawback.

>>54432612
I never liked him either. Unpleasant personality.

It also irked me that he was making CYOAs which basically followed fantasies that I'd been having for more than a decade by now, but he always managed to make them sort of inferior.

>>54432612
Response to criticism is arguably one of the strongest skills an author should have, consider someone like Highlander who even used the core of autistic complaints in the long run. Because Kit got drunk and said he hated her CYOA we now get an eldritch abomination of a CYOA.

>>54432459
Except no one was asshole to him, no one beside the usual shitposters spoke about him at all, all criticism was agains this CYOa and most of it wasn't "it's all shit" but "this and this doesn't work, can you correct it?". It's onyl after he started blaming anons for shit work and confessed he had to release for reddit competition that people got annoyed by him.

Also, it was all described in the last thread or two. Why are we ressurecting the fucking drama? If you're interested in the whole mess, go to previous threads.

>>54432612
Nah, some of his CYOAs were pretty good. I agree HE was always a steaming pile of salt, but whatever.
>Reddit's a hugbox
FUCK NO. Reddit turns on people real fucking quick. Way quicker than even here. You know ZBG? There's no way he'd be able to turn around what he did on Reddit.

Where is our god Thoth?
I DEMAND AN AUDIENCE

>>54432636
I understand what you mean, yes. I may want stasis to be part of it. I'm not saying no, just not saying yes right now. I'm too tired of that too consider it in detail at the moment.

>>54432691
hopefully killed himself like tok

>>54432691
HEADPATS

>>54432690
What did ZBG do?

>>54432684
>Because Kit got drunk and said he hated her CYOA we now get an eldritch abomination of a CYOA.
Maybe i should start drinking

>>54432684
> Kit's drunkeness is the reason we're getting a 300 page Traveller now.

Gad dammit Kit I wanted this thing out before the summer ended.

>>54432713
He was just a bit of a retard. Then he took a break and apologised and got back to making OC.
Reddit would just let the salt linger around him.

>>54432691
My attention is yours, child

>>54432104
>>54432129
>>54432168
>>54432191
>>54432227
>>54432269
Card: Famine
Royal Cities: Oasis
Lands: Gaia Pillars/Lava Lands/Stormy Lakes/Mountain Ranges/The World Tree/Great Deserts
Citizen Life: Hard Working [III]/Happiness [I]/Community [I]/Dutiful [I]/Craftsmanship [I/II/III]/Mercantile [II/III]/Engineering [II/III]/Farming/[I/II/III]/Metalworking [I/II]/Education [I/II]

Garrisons: Grand Dragon (Earth)/Imperial Magusx4

Seal: Stalker's Sidearm

Minor Powers: Cat's Stride/Land Sense/Quick Reaction/Watchful Eye
Major Powers: Magus Training (Fire/Earth)/Weapon Affinity (Marksmanship)

Royal Diplomat:Damien
Royal Bodyguard:Gracelyn Morandi
Royal Spymaster:Owl Girl
Royal War-Master:Zanzabar, Bound Scourge
Rotal Specialist:Christoph III

Waifu:
Nali and Fiyu Tilsane

The majority of my kingdom is covered in a vast mountain range of dormant and active volcanoes cradling enormous tarns on the highest stormy peaks, feeding into countless rivers that crisscross the landscape. All the major river systems flow into a massive valleyed basin at the heart of my kingdom where the World Tree resides, with own royal city bored deep within the tallest mountain that lie just north of the World Tree.

A seemingly endless desert encircles my mountainous kingdom, occasionally broken by skyscraping earthen pillars dotting the outline of the few outlier river veins that sustains life in this harsh environment.

The game plan is to exploit Famine's effortless agriculture trait in order to quickly grow my kingdom's population to enormous proportions. The idea is to use my fire and earth elemental mastery, my 400 imperial magi who all possess some level of earth elemental magic, my earth dragon and members of my population that excel at engineering and crafting to quickly terraform the mountainsides into extremely productive terrace farms exploiting the fertile and rich volcanic soil of the land. I'll then erect water channels and aqueducts to feed these terrace farms.

>>54432747
Once food is not a problem, I'll use land sense, earth elemental magic and Stalker's Sidearm's ludicrous sight range to find and excavate ruins with the desert, acquiring all the rumoured buried treasure if there is any and let my bankers manage my finances. If there is no treasure than set up mining operations on the mountains that are rich with ore and precious minerals and metals.

When food and money isn't problem the next step is to develop an awesome education system, so the select few citizens that possess exceptional knowledge and expertise in farming, industry, metalworking, engineering and commerce can effectively teach those valuable skills and techniques to the rest of the population.

My kingdom may have shitty regional cuisine and entertainment, and my people may not even be the happiest, the most caring and charitable or the most dutiful. I'll mitigate this problem by adopting the delicious cuisine, culture and entertainment of the other kingdoms through trade to keep my citizenry happy and productive.

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>>54432762
Once everything is setup, my kingdom is well fed, well educated and my coffers are overflowing with revenue, the next objective is to develop my kingdom's infrastructure, science, industry and magic. Obviously my people are all going to live in massive earthen mega-structures carved into the mountainside, so in the civic engineering field I want to encourage the R&D of roman style concrete, deep earth mining techniques, basic hydrology, metallurgy, as well as set up magical institutions to teach the populace basic earth and fire elemental magic competency in the immediate and intermediate future.

And much later on when electricity is discovered and refined for commercial applications, I want to focus my efforts on geothermal energy to exploit the abundant lava flow and volcanic activity in my kingdom in generating clean energy, as well as developing a flexible and robust electric grid that uses pumped hydro reservoirs to cheaply store vast quantities of energy in order to meet peak demand.

But in the meantime, with Nali and Fiyu Tilsane taking care most of the busy work that comes with lordship and my grand dragon patrolling the land keeping the peace. I can focus the majority of my efforts and time with a small retinue of the best and brightest imperial magi, and with assistance from Gracelyn Morandi and Christoph the third, to weaponize volcanoes into gigantic magma cannons in order to deter invasions and hostilities from the other Horseman and major kingdoms.

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>>54432268
Sturm Anrufer

Immortal Wanderer (90)

Wizard (60)

Genius Level 3 (50)

Flight level 2 (45)

Mage Eye (wizard) (45)

Strength and speed level 2 (37)

Impervious Level 3 (19)

Regeneration Level 3 (10)

Non-reactor (8)

Endurance level 2 (0)

Super senses Level 2 (-4)

Diet level 2 (-9)

Sanitary Convenience level 1 (-11)

Iron Gut (-13)

Telepathy Major, Stormsage Major, Firedancer Major, Binding Major, Abjuration Major, Disjunction Major (-48)

Stormbringer (-33)
Skin of the outsider (-18)
Beastfoe (-3)
Unpleasant visage (2)

The walking cataclysm, god of storms, breaker of kingdoms. He knows that in order to defeat a figure of legend, their basis must be shattered. Their constructions shall lie in ruins, no empire shall last against the grindstone of Sturm Anrufer. All who see him feel fear and disgust, even animals. But that is the sacrifice he must make to destroy Madira once and for all.

>>54431869
don't be silly, makeyourchoice is probably like 80% /cyoag/ posters, not sure about the nsfw subreddit but its probably similar

>>54432032
that place is weird as fuck, they dont allow discussion and tag waifu cyoas as nsfw even if there is no nudity

>>54432324

!!!!!!!!!!!

>>54432329

It's an evil Goddess build. What's wrong with it?

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>>54432690
>>54432732
>There's no way he'd be able to turn around what he did on Reddit.
I have honestly never been to reddit except to try to find CYOAs I couldn't find in the archive...
Where are you getting this information?

>>54432104
The worst thing about having to pick a waifu in a cyoa even when you don't want to is that you'll be effectively cheating on a girl who was "designed" for you. It's not her fault you're already in love or want to look love elsewhere yet she suffers for it. Sad reeee.

>>54432775
The idea is, if you fill the gaping maw of a volcano with water, plug it up with a gigantic rock and then using fire and earth elemental magic to rapidly open up magma vents and channels to super heat the water into a vapor instantaneously, you can shoot gigantic rocks the size of fortresses so far away the planet's curvature needs to be considered when planning the trajectory, or simply to spew lava like a enormous flamethrower as great short range deterrent.

My character is specifically set up to take advantage of this WMD weapon system, with stalker's sidearm and weapon affinity in ranged weapons that require marksmanship, I should be able to shoot this volcanoe cannon with pinpoint accuracy, allowing me to Pompeii any city or smaller kingdoms that becomes a dire threat to the safety and prosperity of my kingdom even if they are a continent away.

Eventually I want to develop portable cannons and rifles, steam and internal combustion engines by harnessing and enslaving fire elementals. Master earth and fire magic to the point where I can simply spout volcanoes on top of my enemies on command or tiny volcanoes that act as field artillery pieces. Inevitably leading to jet and rocket propulsion with the long term goal of turning the entire planet into a spaceship powered by its molten core, stroked by the elemental plane of fire itself.

>>54432806
Nigger I meant that if you had done that on Reddit, Reddit would not have forgiven you, because they are very self-righteous.

>>54432222
ye there were at least two big ones (alchemist and that futuristic zodiac brides copy) and probably a bunch of smaller ones I can't recall atm

>>54432815
Welp that's it. I hope I didn't bother this thread too much with my autism.

>>54432784
Sorry to be a pest, but you made the same error angel-anon did. If you read the drawback section's description, you will note that you can only use 30 points of drawback points toward personal powers. Any beyond that have to be used on items, pocket dimension and companions.

I will also note that you only listed six schools of magic but paid for seven.

>>54432822
Don't forget reddit is controlled opposition
>we are actually reddit

>>54432845
How does this Multiplayer mode work acheld?

>>54432845
on the first part it is ok because I neglected to include the 10 points I get for multiplayer because durrr. On the second I guess I'll also take compulsion major

Saber CYOA when?

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>>54432822
Oh, my bad I misunderstood what you were talking about.

>>54432881
there already is one its literally nothing but endless saber.

>>54432840
I see the Alchemist one in the archive, do you have the futuristic zodiac brides one saved?

>>54432691
>Anon summons cancer
>Sucess!

>>54432879
Last summer when version one came out, people enjoyed doing interactive RP based on their builds. That's all that I mean by multiplayer. There are no official "rules". Just have fun with it, if you want to.

>>54432880
Also Stormbringer can't be taken with Stormsage (under the Stormbringer drawback it says so). It's contradictory. I'm not going to hound you about it, but it's not technically allowed.

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>>54432784

That power! That love of destruction! That will to embrace it! Why not join me? Together we shall crush the ephemeral empires of these mortals who fancy themselves as great as us!

>>54432920
it's gratifying to know that there are things we can succeed at no matter what

>>54432909
I don't. It had 'damsel' in the title. The guy kept updating it with small things so I thought I'll wait with saving

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VILLAGE OVER

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>tfw Beri won't respond to your email that you sent to him

Feels bad, man.

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>>54432958
I was brought into being to annihilate you and all you hold dear. Annihilation is what I live and breathe for, but only to a goal. What use is assaulting the mortals? They have nothing to offer as opponents. I shall build them to be worthy opponents, but you, the dust and relic of ages that will be forgotten, you will be left far behind.

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>>54432909
This one?

>>54433000
>>54433182
Seens to be it, thanks anon.

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>>54433182

>>54433197
No problem.

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>>54433221

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>>54433264

>>54432784
>Stormsage
>Stormbringer

Hmmm...

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Who hurt Tok's feelings?

>>54433340
Tok.

>>54433303
I like to think of it as having the power but its usually completely out of control, but can be called down at specific times, but never dispelled.

>>54433340
>Tok theme song
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=y983TDjoglQ

>>54433340
>Tick Tok on the clock
>hes about to get rolled
>OC is too shitty
>Tok denied his parole

>>54430990
Zodiac is interesting in that the girls aren't all completely awful but none of them are really interesting enough to select as far as fighting an entire war with

>>54433177

You are right that mortals are no opponents for us. They are slaves! Such puny things have only one purpose. To serve their betters! But nothing they make lasts. The only thing of true value to such creatures are their lives themselves, which are so brief. By giving that one thing which they hold so dear to us, they can now be part of something that is eternal. And their lives can now have meaning!

>>54433340
literally everyone with good taste. He made a shit CYOA that he overhyped and threw a bitchfit when some people tried to fix it when he refused to.

>>54433386
Maybe its a Macross thing where your waifu wins the war through the power of J-pop and love?

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>>54433386
That's what this is for.

>>54433357
>Stormbringer (+15 points; cannot be taken with Stormsage)

I mean, I'm not going to tell you that you can't play your way, but I'm not psychic and I don't know if you noticed.

>>54430990
would knowledge and skill give you a leg up in magic?

>>54433505
Knowledge no, skill yes, if I recall correctly.

>>54433431
wtf Hu was and is best girl. It never said anything about virginity so I really don't know why people would get mad.

>>54433489
not gonna lie, I didn't notice at first but the two could coexist if you took the calming power out of stormsage

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>>54414805

Nobody ever chooses Melanie when she is objectively the most interesting and least crippled either emotionally or physically.

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Why doesn't anybody ever post the fantastic Knight Bros cyoas?

>>54433606

I like the drug wizard. Cool concept.

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>>54433606

>>54433533
I'd be fine with it if you removed the ability of Stormsage to direct the effects of Stormbringer in *any* way. But, if that's the case, Stormsage is a waste of points.

Could someone post some good yandere cyoas?

>>54433640
not necessarily, you can still use stormsage to call down hurricanes and lightning etc with more direction

>>54433721

We don't need any waifu CYOAs, fuck off.

>>54433606
That one is awesome, but feels incomplete. I think it could do with a character creation section where you can have some skills or talents of your own, otherwise I don't see what these people are getting out of allying with me.

>>54433640
>Stormsage is a waste of points.

Not him, but you lose your drawbacks after completing a quest, right?

It could be fluffed quite nicely that he (or others) had a bit of an apotheosis, and concurred the storm. (Or bargained with it, or befriended it, or whatever fits for whoever we're talking about.)

>>54433721
there's just the one and it's already prettymuch perfect?

>>54433721
no such thing, might as well try on >>>/x/

>>54432784
Here. Fixed that for you.
Immortal Wanderer (90)
Metahuman (70) - It may not "sound" right but with the number of physical upgrades you're buying, this is a better deal than wizard.
Genius 3 (60)
Flight 2 (57.5)
Mage Eye (55.5) (and you can drop this if you want)
Strength and speed 2 (51.5)
Impervious 3 (42.5)
Regeneration 3 (38)
Non-reactor (37)
Endurance 2 (33)
Super Senses 2 (31)
Diet 2 (28.5)
Sanitary Convenience 1 (26.5)
Iron Gut (25.5 > 25) - round down here because no more discounts)
Telepathy, Lightningdancer, Binding, Abjuration, Disjunction Major (-25)
Stormbringer (-10)
Skin of the Outsider (5)
Multiplayer (15)

Lightning dancer will let you control the lightning of the storms you bring. And you've got 15 points to spare. Drop skin of the outsider, or do something fun with it.

>>54433766
That's true. Better use of points to do something like Supreme Sorcerer quest and use the bonus points from that to buy Stormsage when you finish.

>>54432800
>What's wrong with it?

Literally everything. Get yourself sorted out, anon.

>>54433805
Thanks senpai. does lightningdancer do anything else? Because I'm thinking of taking on 'the myth maker' quest

>>54433889

She's supposed to be an evil Goddess, so I made her evil. That's all.

>>54433900
"Lightningdancer" is not a fully defined school of magic. I note in the CYOA, by "Firedancer", that if you want to define a school of the same relative power level for another element (Water, Earth, etc) then that's fine.

So, look at Firedancer, and see what it does. What Lightningdancer can do should be about the same power level. Firedancer can eventually shoot blasts of fire from their hands, so lightning dancer would do the same with electrical blasts. Things like that.

>>54433947
pretty cool stuff, hmm. Would it be fine if I took stormsage but it didn't activate until after my nemesis is dead?

>>54433986
Well, after you finished a quest. Neither you nor your Nemesis is dying anytime soon. At least permanently. Though you may be better off getting it with the points received from one of the quests.

Also, I noticed you didn't buy Reflexes and Reactions. Since you have points to spare, I recommend you do so. Your Nemesis has a Godslayer, after all.

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>>54433138
Speaking of waking up inside, the lead singer of Linkin Park fucking necked himself. Get rekt'd, fag.

>>54434080
Yeah, I saw that at the Daily Stormer.

>>54434037
>https://strawpoll.com/4568k533
Hmmm...
Figure of Legend benefits from later time periods leaving them less room to die before present day. They have more power in a short sprint.

The other two benefit from earlier starting points letting them take advantage of trial and error with relatively little consequence over vast periods of time.

I'll vote for Pre-Agriculture, as it both benefits and interests me.

>>54431449
>>54431544
>>54431614
How can you be this fucking dumb?

>>54433505
Yup.
It'll accelerate your learning and you'll be able to understand much more advanced and complex spells.
>>54433533
Nice dubs.
Like I said, she is a virgin, she had a long, unrequited love, but he basically NTRed her.

>>54433291
>>54433264
>>54433241
>>54433221
>>54433182
So we are the Roman Emperor here? How far in the future are we exactly? And when will the space huns show up?

>>54434037
It should be fucking kill yourself because you and that shit both are cancer.

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>>54431952
hold my beer

Blanc
Arrival: Where I'm Needed

Fate: Immortal Wanderer = 90 FP
Fate Modifiers: None
Mental Upgrades:
Genius Lvl 2: -6 FP (84 FP)
Memory of the Ages Lvl 2 -5 FP (79 FP)
Wellspring of Harmony -5 FP (74 FP)
Gift of Gab -5 FP (69 FP)
Polyglot -5 FP (64 FP)
Economist -5 FP (59 FP)

Supernatural Gifts:
SEP Field -5FP (54 FP)
Mage Eye -2FP (52 FP)

Physical Upgrades:
Strength & Speed Lvl 1 -4 FP (48 FP)
Reflexes & Reaction Lvl 2 -8 FP (40 FP)
Impervious Lvl 0
Regeneration Lvl 3 -9 FP (31 FP)
Non-Reactor -2 FP (29 FP)
Pain Control -2 FP (27 FP)
Endurance Lvl 1 -4 FP (23 FP)
Super Senses Lvl 1 -2 FP (21 FP)
Diet Lvl 1 -3 FP (18 FP)
Sanitary Convenience Lvl 1 -2 FP (16 FP)
Iron Gut -2 FP (14 FP)

Drawbacks:
The Dustbin of History +10 FP (24 FP)
Stormbringer +15 FP (39 FP)

Magical Schools:
Telepathy, Major -10 FP (29 FP)
Divination, Major -10 FP (19 FP)
Spirit Singer, Major -10 FP (09 FP)
Shapeshifting, Minor -5 FP (04 FP)

Items:
Wanderer's Journal -3FP (01 FP)
Personal Omni-Weapon -1 FP (00 FP)

A simple wanderer. A shadowy observer. He goes wherever he needs to be, helping those that need his assistance. He might have helped save a king once, though history will forget. He doesn't mind. This world is always changing, always evolving, always moving, with so many things to see and do he'll simply adventure until the end. Legends will speak of a white haired hermit moving place to place, with storms nipping at his heels. Even that will be forgotten one day.

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>>54432088
>>54432268
>RP world
Shit, count me in

Alternate History

>Fate
Immortal Wanderer, Meta-Human
(70)

>Genius
Lvl 0

>Memory of Ages
Lvl 1
(68)

>Commander
(63)

>Homeland
(58)

>Born in the Water
(57)

>Flight
Lvl 2
(52)

>Strength & Speed
Lvl 2
(48)

>Reflexes & Reaction
Lvl 2
(44)

>Impervious
Lvl 3
(35)

>Regeneration
Lvl 3
(30)

>Endurance
Lvl 2
(26)

>Super Senses
Lvl 2
(24)

>Firedancer, Major
(14)

>Wanderer’s Journal
(11)

>Fabulous Furnishings
(9)

>Cooking Suite
(6)

>Running Water
(5)

>Chrono-Computer
Luxury Package
Restricted Info
(-5)


>Rage
(0)

>The Historian
(Artistic Prodigy, Polyglot)

>Multiplayer bonus buy
Disjunction, Major

Damien “Raging Flame” Shaw is back from Traveller and better than ever. A master of physical power and the art of pyromancy, now with the power to dispel other magics!
All I am, is but a simple wanderer, watching the world grow and being an unseen factor in it's progress.

Lets have some fun.

>>54434274
>So we are the Roman Emperor here?

Basically.

>How far in the future are we exactly?

More than 10k years.

>And when will the space huns show up?

This is based off the fall of the Roman Empire, so they're already here, along with the goths and picts.

If you're asking when I'll add them in, As soon as I can find a way to add in meaningful interactions with them.

>>54434291
Awesome. I award you a free Omni-Wear (1 FP) for doing Mushi-Shi, one of my favorites.

>>54430990

B-04 (Beauty)
M-05 (Knowledge)
S-09 (Magic)

Lizette

>>54434318
Cool so what we need to do is reform the legions subdue the nobles, unite with Orion, and then march and conquer the galaxy for humanity. It's a lot and won't be easy.

>>54434313
I'm not familiar with the Raging Flame. Sadly it does not seem you paid the 10 point base cost for a pocket dimension, but otherwise seems like a cosy time.

>>54434339
>award you
You are such a faggot.

>>54434414
If it offends people never mind; it's not like I'm talking about something significant here. I just wanted to express my appreciation.

>>54434411
>base cost
Motherfucker, I didn't see that part.
My bad m8.
Guess I don't get Disjunction Magic.

>>54434414
That's not very nice, anon.

Say you're sorry.

>>54434339
Thanks, mate. Mushi-Shi is one of my favorites.

>>54434411
Hey ach, how does Pocket Dimension interact with multiplayer, if at all? Or is that up for the players to decide?

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>>54434411
>>54434313
Re-did my build without a pocket dimension.
Now with guns.
Hope my math was right

>Immortal Wanderer, Meta-Human
>Genius
Lvl 0
>Memory of Ages
Lvl 1
>Commander
>Homeland
>Born in the Water
>Flight
Lvl 2
>Strength & Speed
Lvl 2
>Reflexes & Reaction
Lvl 2
>Impervious
Lvl 3
>Regeneration
Lvl 3
>Non-Redactor
>Endurance
Lvl 2
>Super Senses
Lvl 2
>Diet
Lvl 2
>Sanitary Convenience
Lvl 2
>Iron Gut
>Firedancer, Major
>Wanderer’s Journal
>Personal Omni-Weapon x2
Goes from brass knuckles to guns
>The Historian
(Artistic Prodigy, Polyglot)
>Multiplayer bonus buy
Disjunction, Major

>>54434550
I'd assume it can't be used in MP since it kinda breaks it with the time option.

>>54434550
Hmm.. my intent is that it is an impregnable fortress. If a player wants to hide non-stop in their pocket dimension, nothing prevents them from doing so. It's just that they won't be able to do much.

I seriously considered removing the pocket dimension altogether for the second edition if I'm honest, but I thought that might cause too much upset. I'd somewhat recommend *not* using it for multiplayer at all, but I'm not going to make that a hard rule. I'll probably make a note to that effect at some point, though.

>>54432088
So, weapons you make yourself are eligible for Omni-Weapon usage, right?

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>>54434590
Okay, that's about what I thought. Thank you for the answer. I'll opt not to use it for a multiplayer build, even if it would be a convenient excuse for me being absent for w/e reason

I also thought Pocket Dimension sort of clashes, but ever since Time Stop Chill Zone I'm fucking obsessed with the damn things.

>>54433627
1994
>middle eastern chicks dad was killed by isil

>>54434500
yup, it's the best

>>54434589
Very quick math in my head shows you have 4 points left over, but I could be wrong.

>>54434621
Correct.

>>54434629
Yeah, they're really cozy. I'll admit to my shame the only reason that I put them in to the original thing was to attract more people, but it doesn't fit into the overall theme very well. I'll definitely add something about that under the multiplayer section next time around.

>>54434677
>4 points left over
Well, fuck 'em.
Only other thing I would want is GodSlayer.

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>>54431144
Catherine objectively best girl

>>54433049
> Hellenic Seaside
Love this shit.
> Mediterranean
The perfect climate
> Woodlands, Rivers, Lakes, Plains and Volcano
The last cause you need some excitement
> Cozy Cabin
It's got "cozy" in the name, goddamnit.
> Far Outskirts
Healthy balance
> Glass marble, fur mantle, pale ring
I'm going to be a ranger. Animal friendship abounds, and I roam the woods.
> Endless Expanse
> Hunter
My items will make this a breeze.
> Fairy Grove, Healing Spring, Primeval Forest, Crystal Cavern
Again, ranging about.
> Christmas Cake
Waifu, sure. Younger than me, but not so much so that it's ridiculous.
> Uneasy Peculiarities: NONE
May revisit this later.

>>54434694
So, get one. Might as well get omni-wear while you're at it, since you have the points.

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>>54432881
Rapier CYOA when?

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>>54431952
>Time Period
RP World

>Fate
Immortal Wanderer (90)

>Fate Modifier
Metahuman (70)

>Mental Upgrades
Genius I (68)
Memory of the Ages I (66)
Gift of Gab (61)
Polyglot (56)

>Supernatural Gifts
Born in the Water (55)
Mage Eye (53)

>Physical Upgrades
Strength and Speed II (49)
Reflexes and Reaction II (45)
Impervious II (39)
Regeneration III (34.5)
Non-Reactor (33.5)
Endurance II (29.5)
Super Senses I (28.5)
Diet II (26)
Sanitary Convenience (22)
Iron Gut (21)
Beauty (19)

>Magic
Beastmaster Minor (14)
Telepathy Minor (9)
Stormsage Minor (4)
Blessed One Minor (-1)
Master of Motion Minor (-6)
Shapeshifting Minor (-11)
Illusion Minor (-16)
Defiling Minor (-21)
Compulsion Minor (-26)
Disjunction Minor (-31)

>Items
Wanderer's Journal (-34)
Personal Omni-Wear (-35)

>Drawbacks
The Slow Pace of History (-20)
The Course of Human Events (-10)

Multiplayer Build (0)

No longer a pirate shackled by his aspirations of comfiness, I have gained a great breadth of magical ability, removed my ability to be impactful on history in any way, and now I'm going to play well with others.

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>>54431952
Cthon, The Ashen One
Time Period: [Pending]
Fate: Immortal Wanderer
[110]Metahuman

General:
[100]Genius Level 3
[095]Memory of the Ages level 2
[090]Wellspring of Harmony

Physical:
[086]Reflexes and Reaction level 2
[077]Impervious Level 3
[074]Regeneration Level 2
[073]Non-Reactor
[069]Endurance level 2
[066]Diet Level 2
[065]Sanitary Convenience Level 1

Magic:
[055]Divination Major
[045]Telepathy Major
[040]Master of Motion Minor
[030]Spirit Singer Major
[020]Binding Major
[010]Enchanting Major
[000]Disjunction Major

Drawbacks:
[+30]Dust in My Mouth/Unpleasant Visage/Weak/Beastfoe
[+10]Multiplayer: Join Established World
Quest:The Historian/The Myth Maker

I know not what I am and I know not my origins. The only certainty is that I exist, I endure, I am being and being is enough.
I was here when the earth was but a molten rock was it my womb? I cannot say. I have laid witnessed to the smoldering Earth cool, I have seen water materialize from celestial rocks that fell from the stars, life flower in full blossom and wither away a thousand fold upon a thousand fold. How many countless eons have passed in my mindless stupor I wonder? And now mind touches something unique, something new; sapient life.
They live, they love, they feel and they reason. What peculiar man things they are, perhaps the earth have answered my silent cries for distraction in my eternal vigil?

So I fashion my body from the ashen clay and obsidian earth in their image to walk upon the land on biped feet, to learn from Man, listen from Man, observe Man, feel and reason with Man. And finally to regale their stories to the lonely sky and the dark earth, their hubris and their achievements once they wither away to nothing like all things.

And so I watch and I listen and learn.

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>>54433752

It could, and the dude would probably be good at it too, to to me the reason why Knight Bros is the best CYOA you can get is due to the lack of rules, lack of points. Shitty skill trees as lazy writing.

If you want all that stuff, just write up the nitty gritty four your character — Knight Bros is just straight up companion picking with good world building and unique people.

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>>54431952
>Time and Place to be Determined by RP World
>Master of the cycle 90 Fate points
>Wizard -30
>Mental upgrades
Wellspring of harmony-5
Gift of Gab-5

>Supernatural gifts
Mage Eye (Free)
Flight Level 1 -2

>Physical Upgrades
Nothing

>Magical Schools
Imbue Beastmaster major -10
Imbue Stormsage major -10
Imbue Blessed one major -10
Imbue Spirit Singer Major -10
Imbue Shapeshifting Major- 10
Imbue Abjuration Major-10
Imbue Waterdancer Major-10

>Companions and Items
6 companion slots-8
Wanderer's Journal-3
Shared Omni-wear -2
Shared Godslayer-4
Bag of Holding-5
Book of Culture-5

>Drawbacks
Betrayal+15
Weak+5
Sleepy +5
The slow pace of history +15

>Quests
Technophobe
Sorcerer Supreme
Multiplayer+10

A frail child born with the power to grant humanity the gift of magic. It seeks people worthy of this gift to share it, and strives to prevent human innovation to keep the world pure as it should be.

>>54434892
Doesn't it cost 20 for imbue major magic?

>>54434950
Wizard halves costs

>>54434960
Ah, that's smart.

>>54434869
Good, well thought out build. Interesting to see that you've gone with breadth over depth for your magic choices. Very jack of all trades magician.

>>54434875
Something is off with your math here, I think. You start with 90 points. I think you may have added 20 points to your score instead of subtracting 20 for metahuman. It costs 20 points, it doesn't add 20. So I'm afraid you're well over the purchase limit, by 40 points.

>>54434892
Very nice job making the absolute most of the wizard discounts. That's when it's actually valuable to go "Wizard": when you're imbuing a bunch of magic.

I'll probably add some rough guidelines of advice in the future to help anons determine what the best modifier is for their build.

>>54435109
Check his drawbacks and multiplayer bonus.

>>54435109
He added his drawbacks first, he just didn't say that.

Also, yeah, I'm more of a Jack of All sort of guy. I'm no god, just a wanderer with some tricks up his sleeves.

>>54434875
>>54435146
>>54435156
Ah, my mistake! All is well.

>>54435109
Thanks, i always thought that if you can get magic it would not be fair to not share it. After all would you not be jealous?

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>>54431952
Hey it's me, the thorn in your side!
>Figure of Legend
120
>Wizard
90
>Genius Level 3
80
>Memory of Ages Level 2
75
>Gift of Gab
70
>Polyglot
65
>Mage Eye
FREE
>Strength & Speed Level 1
61
>Reflexes & Reaction Level 2
53
>Impervious Level 3
35
>Regeneration Level 2
27
>Non-Reactor
25
>Endurance Level 2
19
>Super Senses Level 2
15
>Diet Level 2
10
>Iron Gut
9
>Shapeshifting Major, Blessed One Major, Telepathy, Divination, Master of Motion Major, Enchantment, Disjunction
-16
>Imbue Shapeshifting, Blessed One, Telepathy, Master of Motion, Disjunction
-28
>Personal Omni-Weapon w/ Godslayer and the Switch upgrade
-32
>Personal Omni-Wear
-33
>Beastfoe
-18
>Cursed by the Spirits
2
>The Myth Maker
>Sorcerer Supreme
>Free & Sustainable
And if I'm reading this right, I get 10 extra points for multiplayer, so I'll go ahead and:
>Imbue Blessed One Major, Imbue Master of Motion Major

Just a friendly guy with a tendency to let people know that, hey, they've got options here. In a world of skull pyramids and living storms, it'll be good to give the right man in the right place the power and knowledge to make a difference. To be the bird chirping in the ear of a fearful noble, the vanished martyr who kicks off a rebellion, a helping hand to those facing the unholy, a wise sage spouting portents at a concerned king, those sort of things. There's a thousand ways to make a difference around here, and a thousand faces will step up to hand out goodies to those who need it.

And, eh, who knows, maybe the world'll turn out better for it.

>>54435305
Are you going to wear the hat and the shirt the whole time?

>>54434892
Apparently i have one point left so i will make my Shared Godslayers Shared Switching Godslayers

>>54435305
>inb4 this dude becomes the filthy frank of the RP

>>54435456
Often enough that at some point in the future some crackpot theorist (also probably me) will speculate that there was some common factor in many ancient cultures.

>>54435482
I would fucking love that.

SOMEONE MAKE CHIN-CHIN

>>54435305
Wait, why are you the thorn in my side?

>>54431952
I know it's lame to make builds for your own CYOAs, but I can't help myself...
> Starting Location: Sri Lanka
> Starting Time: Whenevs
> Bonus Points +70
Region Locked (+10), Betrayal (+15), Tower of Babel (+15), Nearly Mortal (+20), Multiplayer (+10). 30 points must be used for items/companions.

Immortal Wanderer, 190 Points
Wizard, 155 Points
Memory of the Ages 1, Wellspring of Hamony, Economist, Homeland, Mage Eye, 138
Strength & Speed 0, Reflexes & Reaction 2 [effective 1], Impervious 0, Regeneration 0, Pain Control, Endurance 2, Super Senses 0, Diet 0, 120
Major magics, including imbuing major (discounted): Divination, Blessed One, Spirit Singer, Enchanting, Binding, Abjuration, Disjunction, 50
Compulsion Major, Master of Motion Major 30
Companions (5), 24
A Shared Gift (all five companions): Pain Control, Endurance 2, Reflexes and Reaction 2, Mage Eye, Wellspring of Harmony, Memory of the Ages 1, 10
Book of Knowledge, 5
Godslayer, all companions, 0

Basically I'm going to make Sri Lanka (always one of my favorite starting countries in Europa Universalis) into a goddamn paradise. I have the means and the methods to uplift the entire society, and create a magic utopia. Homeland will make me very secure there, but I'm way too vulnerable to ever leave.
(con't)

>>54435963

In time, I can create a magical assembly line society, producing enchanted items at rapid pace, possibly to serve as a magic arms dealer to the outside world. My five companions will be just as powerful as I am, and I will imbue magic to many more besides them.

This is the power of magic industrialization. Binding gives me golems for the manual labor, and I'm going to have just goddamn enchanted everything.

Compulsion is for rooting out challenges to my absolute (and benevolent, of course!) rule over the island.

Biggest threat is the Betrayal, and if it goes badly I may end up dying at least once and losing 10 points from that. Probably Shapeshifting, if I have to give up something.

Only quest I'm in a position to do is Sorcerer Supreme, at least until my drawbacks are gone. With the rewards from that I would buy imbuing of Master of Motion.

As a "player" in the multiplayer I'm really just watching and waiting in my island paradise. Willing to provide magical items of great import to those who advance my interests.

>>54435963
Er, that should be "Figure of Legend", not "Immortal Wanderer".

Quick, reply to this comment with CYOA themes/settings/ideas that you want but will never make yourself.

Has there ever been a decent authorfag?

>>54436036
Chuck Norris: Destroy All Humans Melee

>>54436036
Human Workshop, for altruistic or selfish reasons, you have the power to mentally and physically shape people. Be a traveling healer, helping people unlock their ideal self or be a human trafficker, creating sex dolls for the rich and famous

>>54436036
You are an otherworldly elder god that has been accidentally unleashed in a sci-fi setting. Bend the unsuspecting mortals to your will.

>>54434892
Can I have some magics, oh magic fairy?

>>54436036
hmm... I adore Feathersnake's stuff, I'd love to see one in the vein of RangerCYOA or VikingCYOA and AztecCYOA for Wuxia/far east theme, or Greek Hero themed.

Basically I just want more feathersnake CYOAs.

>>54432088
This is awesome should we be expecting a World of Myth and Wonder update or is that a bit further off/no longer being updated. Just curious

>>54436138
Yes, you should. Probably not until next week. I need a break from the detail involved. Going to finish Mentor, Lover, Friend in between.

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>>54436058
I like to think I'm pretty cool...

>>54433606
>>54433627
Aren't there two more of these?

>>54432612
>Like, I have no issue with reddit honestly
>I knew there was no hope when he used the excuse of "but reddit liked it!"
>Reddit's a hugbox hivemind and always will be.

>>54434869
Hey. You have ten more points, I think.

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>>54431952
>>54432088
Build for the RP world.

>G-Man
>Immortal Wanderer (90)
>Tourist (70)
>Genius Level 3 (60)
>Memory of Ages (55)
>Polyglot (55)
>Economist (50)
>Mage Eye (48)
>All Physical Stats Level 0 (48)
>Master of Motion Major (38)
>Compulsion Minor (33)
>Disjunction Major (23)
>Pocket Dimension (18)
>Running Water and Toiletries (17)
>Chrono Computer with games and Book of Knowledge(11)
>Unpleasant Visage (16)
>Weak (21)
>RP World (31)
>Quests: Historian, Singularity, Free & Sustainable

"Rise and shine, Mister Freeman. Rise and... shine. Not that I... wish to imply you have been sleeping on the job. No one is more deserving of a rest, and all the effort in the world would have gone to waste until... well, let's just say your hour has... come again. The right man in the wrong place can make all the difference in the world. So, wake up, Mister Freeman. Wake up and... smell the ashes."

>Companion: Gordon Freeman (29)
>Metahuman (19)
>Genius Level 2 (17.5)
>Memory of Ages Level 2 (16.25)
>Born in Water (15.75)
>Strength & Speed Level 3 (13.75)
>Impervious Level 3 (9.25)
>Regeneration Level Level 2 (7.75)
>Endurance Level 1 (6.75)
>Personal Omni-Wear for both (5.75)
> Omni-Godslayer for both (2.25)
>Iron Gut (1.75)
>Non Reactor (1.25)
>Super Senses Level 2 (.25)

"You've been playing too much Half Life Anon."

>>54436082
>>54436100
>>54436112
Nice, three back-to-back actually good ideas. Arigato.

>>54436137
I don't know if I can reliably try to emulate someone else's style. I do like those CYOAs, though.

>>54436283
>I don't know if I can reliably try to emulate someone else's style. I do like those CYOAs, though.
Feathersnake is who I want to be when I grow up.

I may later expand the Mentor, Lover, Friend CYOA to be more in that style. We'll see.

>>54436233
N-nani?

Can you point out where, by any chance? I've been re-reading my build because I had the nagging feeling I fucked something up, but I can't figure out exactly where. I always need a day downtime before reviewing my shit.

>>54436305
Ah. You get ten points for being in a multiplayer game.

>>54436036
The same thing I always want, a knightly order CYOA

>>54436341
Do you want to elaborate, or do you want to be surprised?

>>54436058
Most of the anonymous ones are fine.

>>54436120
I don't know why but i love how that sounds.

>>54436355
Surprise me anon, brighten up my day sometime

Where the lewds at

>>54436253
The plan is to use my intelligence, teleportation, and compulsion to steer society in the direction that I want, while quickly making tech advances in my pocket dimension.

When subtlety fails, my companion steps in. Due to the way the omni weapon works, once I build a sufficiently powerful rocket launcher, Freeman can start insta-gibbing whatever he comes across, including other players (god slayer + no need for ammo + sheer destructive force of the explosion).

Have more than 2 pages of Sonder ever been made?

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>>54436492
Vaginal discharge.

>>54436036
A sort of Ben 10-like CYOA, where you can choose an X amount of alien forms to change into. You can even throw in some plot in there, give factions to join or objectives to achieve.
I've always liked boarding schools, so a boarding school (maybe a magical one?) CYOA where you choose cliques, subjects, events, friends and Houses sounds fun.

>>54431952

This cyoa is making me rethink my life because my first instinct upon noticing "Compulsion, Major" was to create a slave empire that put ancient greece to shame.

>>54436498
>The plan is to use my intelligence, teleportation, and compulsion to steer society in the direction that I want, while quickly making tech advances in my pocket dimension.
>Quest: Singularity
You got yourself a nemesis

>>54431952
What about the companion to this?

>>54436568
>Body
Male
Muscular (85)
Disease Immunity (80)
Beauty (70)

>Everything Else
A Perfect Fit (65)
Pheromones (55)
Naughty Dreams (45)
Induce Arousal (35)
Innuendo (25)
Skilled (15)
Domination (5)
Aphrodisiac (0)

>>54432459
I agree behead those who insult namefags!

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>>54436790

>>54436790
>behead those who insult
I started saying this as a joke some time ago in relation to one particular subject here. Now I'm seeing it more frequently. Is this my fault or did I unintentionally tap into a meme that existed

>>54436058
Italics is pretty good if you minus the cuck shitposters they attract.

>>54436253
>>54436498
Primary... enemies:

>>54434892
"She is... quite troublesome. Her goals... are counter to... that of my... employers. Luddite. Magic user. Best dealt... with long range weaponry."

"Killing kids? Seriously Anon?"

"She is another... well I am not at liberty to say. She'll be reborn in... ten years, according to my estimates. Much like we do."

"Like that edgy skull lady?"

"...Yes."

>>54432268
"An enemy to all life. Use... concentrated fire. I will attempt... to block her teleportation."

"She killed us the last time we tried that."

"Our deaths... transient... unimportant. Hers... saps her strength."

"You'd think that a 'supergenius' would have a better strategy than ripping off Dark Souls."

>>54432784
"A disruptive influence... but a... useful tool for the time being."

"Anything that goes against the skull bitch is good in my book."

Persons of Interest:

>>54434291
"Undisruptive... observer. Monitor but... do not engage."

>>54434313
>>54434589
"Thrillseeker. Possible contact for... recruitment."

>>54434869
"Monitor to establish... behavior patterns. Possible recruit in fight... against enemies."

>>54434875
"Passive observer. Possible collaborator... in historical chronicling."

>>54435305
"Fellow... utopia seeker. Contact for... collaboration in economic project."

>>54435963
"Fisher King. Minimal importance."

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>>54433606
>including that indisive whore Miyuki and not the JUSTICE that is Strikeman
-5/10 i feel sick

>>54436874
You channeled the memeforce bro, that shits old

>>54436903
Overuse of...ellipses

>>54436950
Yeah, I probably overdid it. Looking back at the subtitles, the G Man only used them once every few sentences. My bad.

>>54437014
Don't be sad, anon. I'm just giving you a hard time. I appreciate your commitment to the grave of a dead franchise, now an empire of hats

>>54436903
KYS.

>>54437081
Be nice anon, he isn't hurting anyone

>>54433049
Industrial Decay
Subarctic

Mountains
Lakes
Islands
Woodlands
Rock Formations

Tower Lodge

Village Border

Inviting Pendant

Endless Expanse

Baker

Healing Spring
Fairy Grove
Old Castle
Galaxy Lake

Lonely Monster

Otherworldly Mist
+Floating Islands
Wandering God
+Dapper Gentleman

>>54436838
>sample
Although, the full sized image is too large to post.

>>54437301
Christ, as many times as I've played the Village, I have NEVER noticed Industrial Decay. All of the options are so good I don't believe I ever made it to the end of the row without going "fuck yeah, that one"

>>54437223
He's hurting himself and that's a sin

>>54437357
Seems comfy. The other ones feel too generic.

Post waifu cyoas.

I'm lonely.

>>54437361
Suicide is also a sin.

>>54437382
>Industrial decay
>Comfy
Choose one and only one

>>54437361
Just let him have imaginary pretend fun time, that's why we're here isn't it?

>>54434629
This CYOA is the best fantasy ever
Fucking heaven

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>>54437418
No.

>>54437382
I'm a sucker for seasides and gothic architecture. I also love Industrial Decay, but it does put The Village from "maybe creepy" to "holy shit creepy" as the description indicates.

Damn, DSA makes some good stuff

>>54437457
It really is. It's the one I always go back to if I'm not in an "adventuring" mood. I even started looking at cool home designs just because of it.

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>>54436197
I have three:
Miami
Peace
Space

It does feel like there should be at least one more though

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>>54437081
>>54437382
>>54437463
Here are your (You)s.

>>54437223
>>54437405
>>54437418
It's a troll. Don't feed it.

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>>54437395

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>>54437395
>>54437711

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>>54437559
And your a bunch of brain-dead faggots. This shit was gay autistic cancer the first time around and it won't be any less now. The CYOA itself is extremely well-done but these dumbasses are some of the worst. People already don't like this general because they think we do that stupid shit. You will not do it in this general. If you don't like it go get a fucking thread for it and bring even more ire to us all. Kill yourselves.

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>>54437805
Everyone hide, the cyoa police are here!

>>54436663
The Luddite Angel, in the flesh. I took the liberty of dispelling your Abjuration Wards. Please, don't think that I've been avoiding you, a great many matters require my attention in these troubled times. I *do* hope you understand. Now, I require a further indulgence on your part. I cannot close my report until every loose end has been tied up. That's why I'm here, Angel. My... employers are rather peeved by your technophobia and they have authorized me to neutralize it. They agree with me that a peaceful solution would be preferable. You've proved yourself a decisive thing so I don't expect you'll have any trouble deciding what to do. If you're interested, cease holding back progress and focus on teaching magic. Otherwise, well, I can offer you a battle you have no chance of winning... rather an anticlimax, and more work for me. Time to choose...

>>54437805
I think you take these threads too seriously anon.

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>>54437711
>Shaylee
>Tongues, Horns, Antlers, Large, Luminous

Long live the Horned King! And his Onahole Queen...

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>>54433049
I've seen this many times before, but I don't think I've ever actually done this. I'm gonna see about making Industrial Decay comfy
>Industrial decay
The base of the challenge

>Subarctic
Since everything is metal, things get hot easily, so it's nice to have everything be a bit on the colder side. Think Russia, with their long winters and cute fuzzy hats

>Mountains
The entire place is characterized by peaks and valleys, only some of which are the result of clusters of buildings
>Beachfront
Not much of a beach, but the harbor is pretty big and still good for sunbathing in the warmer months
>Cave Systems
Things go as far down as they do up; there's always something more to explore
>Volcano
It's said to have been a huge power source, back when this place actually functioned
>Islands
May or may not actually be large oil rigs

>Tower Lodge
Near the top of one of the many spires; alternately accessible via a pulley system

>Town Center
A couple things here actually work due to regular maintenance, it's quite the sight

>Inviting Pendant
In spite of the relatively harsh appearance of the village, the locals are friendly and always willing to share a pint
>Soft Blanket
I am in one of the tallest towers, it would make sense if a guardian once lived there
>Fur Mantle
Always nice to have in the cold climate, plus most deliveries are done via pidgeon, so it makes things a bit easier

>Endless Expanse
I'll be honest with you, it's not a very happy thing. The people of this world sucked it dry ages ago, and the land outside the village has been robbed of everything of value, including life... but hey, at least things aren't too bad here, right?

>Blacksmith
Everything in the village is an endless cycle of scrap-iron. If something collapses, it's taken apart and smelted into supports to keep other things from collapsing

((Need to do this in two posts. So far it's reminding me of Gargantia on the Verderous Planet))

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