/cyoag/ - CYOA General

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>>54202560
How would a Vampy cyoa work? I can't think of any interesting choices. Deciding between whether she'll suck blood from your neck or from your dick?

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It's complete.

Not happy with this one bit. Actively furious at it actually. Could've been much better, but being so old, I just wanted to get it out of the way, and done.

Chances are I won't do many more straight up just powers CYOAs. People seem to prefer ones with a more worldbuilding, and I prefer writing them.

Mystery Box coming Soon^TM

>>54203869
We prefer waifus. Do not disappoint us again.

>>54203842
You are a vampire's butler
>Choose the tasks she has you perform
- Licking Feet
- Running baths
- Cooking & Cleaning
- Kidnapping Virgins

I don't know something like that?

>>54203891
This. You're on notice faggot. Gib waifus or face the wrath of /cyoag/.

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>>54203907
>butler
>wanting to be lower than someone else
Plebeian.

>>54203757
Enter, the Pestians! Vaguely brown people of delicious and healthy cooking, wholesome communities, and busty women!

>Card
Pestilence

>Royal City
Overgrown Fortess

>Lands
Thick Fogs, Dense Forest, Stormy Lakes, Gaia Pillars

>Citizen Life (14 +4)
Tier I- Entertainment, Cooking, Education, Mercantile, Farming, Community, Happiness, Craftsmanship, Engineering, Hard Working, Dutiful
Tier II- Craftsmanship, Engineering, Metalwork, Farming, Mercantile, Education
Tier III- Engineering

>Garrisons
Those Cast Out
Thorns of Triforge
Wild Beast Masters
Imperial Magus
Black Band Merc Company

>Seal
Fleshweaver's Kit

>Lordship Powers
Minor- Scultped Body, Silver Tongue, Rabbit's Foot, Watchful Eye
Major- Mending Flesh, Dragon's Wings, Ironhide

>Companions
Bodyguard- Gracelyn Morandi
Diplomats (+1)- Damien and Bartholomew Esq
Spymaster- Owl Girl
War Master- The Legend, of course
Specialist- Christoph III

>Spouse
Nali and Fiyu, The Twins

Indulge yourselves in our annual Pestivale!

>>54203891
I haven't done the mystery box yet, so there's still hope, anon.

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>>54203977

>>54203942
Yeah? Well you're a skeleton, people walk all over you every day!

>>54203942
>Not wanting to serve vampy
Are you a faggot or something?

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>>54204005
Say that again faggots, I dare you.

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>>54204011

>>54204018
Shut up boner

>>54203757
Reposting because last time I was praised and it made me happy.
Kingdom:
Famine
Necessity is the mother of invention. My people understand this very well.

Royal city:
The clockwork city
Which is why we live in a giant clock.

Land:
Gaia pillars
"Alain!"
"Yes?"
"Get this girl some clockwork sword, or something dumb like that. I want those painted pillars."
After one of them is painted, we turn it to a city. When they're all painted, I'll give the girl some kind of a gift. I don't know what yet.

Border walls
We're keeping the damn Pestians out!
>>54203946
That means you.

Stormy lakes
For tourism and fun purposes.

Spectral lands
Because a steampunk land under eternal night with bizarre events is basically par for the course.

Mountain ranges
Because who doesn't love a few nice mountains?

Lava lands
Don't invade. Please.


Citizen life:
Education tier 1 and 2 (16)
Because we're a smart people! We know that we have to learn in times of plenty, or we will learn in times of famine.

Engineering tier 1 and 3 (14)
How could someone not learn how this works when they're constantly staring at the inner mechanisms?

Craftsmanship tier 1 2 and 3 (11)
People become experts because they have to.

Hardworking tier 1 2 and 3 (8)
Work hard, play hard, that's our motto. Minus the playing bit. It's mostly working.

Happiness tier 1 2 and 3 (5)
But even so, they're still happy. If not, most towns have someone that can make them happy.

Community tier 1 2 and 3 (2)
We are one country. We must help each other, because we are the only ones who will.

Dutiful tier 3 (1)
More like Sherlock Holmes than Spider-Man, but I bet it'd be entertaining.

Metalwork tier 2 (0)
In a world made of metal, better metal is better.

>>54204018
sauce?

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>>54204048
Garrisons:
Grand dragon
A fire dragon may be cliche, but after a few years in the forge, it'll thank me.

Empire's hands
Shh. I'm keeping these secret so no one knows i have them, you dig?

Royal guard
Royal guard
Royal guard
300 royal guards to fight in my name, for my glory. Against 3000 enemies, they only need to kill 10 each. Easy Peasy!


Seal:
Baby eldritch horror
Who's a cute widdle abomination? If I live long enough, the return on my investments will be great.

Powers:
Land sense
Who knows a clock better than its maker? This land isn't a clock, and I didn't make it, but still.

Royal presence
I am the king. I am the one that rules. Of course I have a kingly presence.

Sculpted body
It fits for the king to have a kingly body.

Silver tongue
And a kingly tongue.

Magus training (tentacles)
And kingly tentacles. What? Occult feels better than elemental stuff.

Mending flesh
Because I don't want to lose my arm to never get it back.

Iron hide
Because I don't want to lose my arm in the first place.


Diplomat:
Zanzabar, bound scourge
Okay. Stick with me here. Zanzabar knows a lot, right? So, I bet, because of his indepth knowledge of the nations, he'd be the best diplomat.

Bodyguard:
Alain and Marie
Alain, more like. I'm not having Marie fight for me! What do you take me for?

Spymaster:
Christoph III
Intelligent but insane makes for the best spymaster. It's not like he personally is going to spy on anyone. Just direct my hands, and they'll do the rest.

War-master:
Damien
Aside from Zanzabar, no one seems like a good fit. That said, Damien seems like he knows a lot about tactics.

Specialist:
Ophelia
Because what kind of a heartless monster would I be if I didn't take Ophelia?

Waifu:
Nali & Fiyu Tilsane
Two for the price of one is a done deal. I like each one a lot, they're useful, and they're fox girls. What more could I ask for?

No goals. No plans. Just being a monarch.

>>54204018
We need more fantasy/modern combinations. Not in the gay "we must uphold the masquerade" urban fantasy sense, though.

>>54204018
Are you a faggot or something?

>>54204048
I don't want to come into your city anyway. People come to US.

Besides, why would I ever leave a kingdom of beings physically enhanced to the ideal in favor of some sickly technophiles?

>>54203869
Oh, I recall this one from yesterday, when we exchanged walls of text about how it could develop. Well, it's not much different from WIP you provided at that time but it doesn't mean it's bad. Who knows, maybe one day you'll redo it, too. Still a decent thing (for a waifu- and lewdless thing, of course) so thanks, anon.

>>54204109
I can taste the disappointment in this post.

>>54203946
>>54204048
Lords Famine and Pestilance, keep this meeting civil. Lets wait patiently until Lords War and Conquest arrive.
Also, go fish.

>Forth Lord; Death

>Braug Kr'tah
The design of this place will match well with my land choices I think. Plus I would love to have spirit people mingle with my people. Reminds me of Spirited Away.

>Gaia Pillars, Lava Lands, Spectral Lands, Snow Lands
Mine is a land of mystical hotsprings and waterfalls that flow even through the snow. The spiders would also be paid to connect all pillars with web bridges and elevator contraptions to make expansions much easier.
Come to the North Kingdom of Death. We have many attractions meant to relax and rejuvenate.

>Tier 1; Craftsmanship, Mercantile, Farming, Cooking, Entertainment
>Tier 2; Hard Working, Community, Mercantile, Farming, Cooking, Metalwork
>Tier 3; Craftsmanship, Engineering, Farming
I have plenty of supplies and raw materials for my people to work with. Combine that with their ingenuity, bazaars, and even the festivals to make Death's Kingdom one of peace, prosperity, and partying.

>The Raiding Legion
>Imperial Magus
>Royal Guard
>Empire's Hands
>Grand Dragon; Angelic
My Royal Guard will whip the other garrisons into top-quality shape, making them all versatile and even more fearsome. A small army, but they are both fast and hard hitters, decimating hordes of enemies with barely any casualties. The spies would also be incredibly useful in keeping my eyes and ears open to threats. My dragon is also a majestic beacon of hope for all in the empire.

>Reaper's Blade
>Oni's Armor
>Stalker's Sidearm

>Cat's Stride, Sculpted Body, Land Sense, Quick Reaction
Most of these are to aid me in combat, but Land Sense would be fun to explore the many lost tunnels of my city.

>Dragon's Wings, Titan's Blessing, Weapon Affinity; Sword
I am nigh unbeatable in combat. Fast in both action and reaction, as well as the strength to lift mountains.

>>54204114
No-one's more disappointed with this than me. I just don't have the will to make this any better.

I got about half way though, I was sleep deprived and bored of the whole thing.

>>54204137
>Royal Diplomat; Ophelia
Very knowledgeable and used to the Kingdom of Death. I'm sure she would be a good diplomat, as long as she has a "translator" for when she's quiet.
>Royal Bodyguards; The Legend, Solstice, Alain and Marie
The Legend is the wall between me and any other that would harm me. Solstice, Alain, and Marie are all just to have fun. Alain could also aid Damien in his duties as Warmaster.
>Royal Spymaster; Owl Girl
She's just perfect for my intentions for my spies. She'll do nicely as their head.
>Royal War-master; Damien
Strong, disciplined, and able to do what must be done. All these traits point to Damien making me an army of warrior monks that will protect the Kingdom.
>Royal Specialist; Bartholomew Esq.
The head butler, as well as Ophelia's personal escort/translator for when she must attend to her duties. Should work very well given his mannerisms and strength.

>Cethra Lilith Drove
I'm taking the fucking loli and you can't stop me.

>>54203757
Is this new? I'm away from these threads for a week and I'm already missing stuff

>>54203869
Don't let them talk ya down, Hendy boy. I like it!

Regeneration (10%)
Pheromones (20%)
Fragmented (10%)
Eye of the Beholder (15%)

Not going too ham here. I remember what I learned with Fleshweaver's
Clinic

>>54204198
Still slightly warm OC.
From 3 threads ago.

What are some cyoas with powerlevels?

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>>54203858
dlc

>>54203757
>Death
Having immortal citizens seems to be a pretty good plus, and the extra seals and friends will be useful if any of the other horseman get replaced by someone who's... not so friendly.

>Braug Kr'tah
I'm going for a kingdom focused on being the cultural center of the world, and having magic and natural tourism will really help with that.

>The World Tree
>Gaia Pillars
>Spectral Lands
>Lava Lands
In stead of at the bottoms of mountains, Braug Kr'tah is stationed at the base of The World Tree. The Gaia Pillars that are spread throughout the land are are connected by rivers of lava (due to the whole Lava Lands thing). Floating rocks surround The World Tree due to the spectral lands. The rest of the surrounding Kingdom is mostly Spectral Lands with occasional magma fields and lava rivers.

>Hard Working 2
>Happiness 1, 2
>Craftsmanship 1, 3
>Mercantile 1, 2
>Farming 1, 2, 3
>Cooking 1, 2
>Entertainment 1, 2
Everything is to make this country one of rich culture, art, and amazing works. People come for our great and unique food, trade and specialty crafts are bountiful throughout the land, and our entertainment is known throughout the land. Be it for our natural wonders or our man-made ones, everyone will admire my kingdom.

>Skeleton Horde 1000
>Imperial Magus 200
>Empire's Hands 50
>Grand Dragon 1
The skeleton horde makes great "meat" shields and can be "re-assembled" is needed. Probably the best unit for simple front line defensive work. Offenses will be taken care of by the Magus', be it raining fire on the enemies or some other form of fire power, for raw strength in combat, magic is always a pretty good choice. Having what is essentially a black-ops corps is also useful for more clandestine operations. And last but not least.... why the hell would you NOT take the dragon?

>>54204258
>Baby Eldritch Horror
>Reaper's Blade
>Stalker's Sidearm
Eldritch Horror helps with kingdom defense/security. No one's going to cause trouble when unspeakable monstrosities are on guard. The Reaper's Blade and Stalker's Sidearm are both really good for combat, but the utility provided by SS is also pretty useful.

>Cat's Stride
>Silver Tongue
>Watchful Eye
>Quick Reaction
Agility and precision for in combat and quick talking for out. Not much to say about this.

>Dragon's Wings
>Magus Training: Illusion
>Weapon Affinity: Sword
Being able to fly? Is there anything more awesome than that? I think not. Also I'd think it'd be pretty useful. Want to be able to use my Reaper's Blade as best as I can, and Illusion magic has so many uses in tricking your enemies in and out of combat. Also, don't want people tricking me with magic (it says absolute control over so I think that'd help defensively against them also.

>Diplomat: Damien
>Spymaster: Owl Girl
>War-Master: Zanzabar, Bound Scourge
>Specialist: Ophelia
>Bodyguard(s): The Legend, Gracelyn Morandi, Solstice
Damien's calm and honest nature seems to be best suited to politics and keeping things peaceful between countries. The spymaster and war-master spots seem to be pretty obvious. Ophelia seems like she could be useful and could possibly learn and grow to be an even better necromancer or even general mage. Also, the specialist really seems like a "Royal Friend" option, and she seems like a nice friend. The Legend just seems like a powerful bodyguard to have around and Gracelyn seems good for solving any magical problems or threats. Solstice because I want to have someone around that can keep the mood light and she seems like she would be up to that task.

I don't really care about any of the Waifu options given. Lilith seems the best to me but the picture makes her look like a 5 year old and I'm not into that.

>>54204252
Hey! Someone saved it!
Love ya anon.

>>54203869
It is kinda ok i guesd
>Shapeshift -5%
>Liquid flesh -10%
>Regeneration -10%
>Pheromones -10%
>Time-Space anomaly -20%
>Tulpa -10%
>Blood prize N/A
>Fragmented +10
>Empathy +20
>Final sanity 65%
I want the box by the way

>>54203869
unsettling, fragmented, blood prize, mystery box.

125% sanity in prep for the mystery box. Betting it all on black.

>>54204146
>I got about half way though, I was sleep deprived and bored of the whole thing.
Sounds like getting burned out. When that happens, it's best to drop the work, get a day or two of a break and then return - much better overall results and effect on the psyche.

>>54204114
It's not that bad, anon. It's just hopes were high after said talk with Henderson yesterday when brainstorming was in effect and CYOA has potential to be something Stardust/Magical Domain/Conduit-class. Now it's just okay, I've still had some fun with it.

>>54204080
like alternate universes or "the gods have come back!" kind of urban fanstasy?

>>54204369
Alternate universe. Like you know the Greek myths? How they'd just accept that cyclopedes existed, and gods too? Like that, only nowadays, and with modern myths too.

>>54204392
modern myths are memes and corporate news. Someone invented copyright, which implicitly created canon, which was the end of traditional myths.

Now community-created and shared myths can only exist if they're based on real life like the news (you can't copyright reality), or if there's no owner who can DMCA you (memes have basically had their copyright extinguished to the public).

>>54204080
>Youtube "prank" channels run by fairies
>Demons owning banks
>Angels in the legal system
>Centaur races
>Magic as part of the STEM field
I agree

>>54204438
>modern myths are memes and corporate news
"no"
In Liberia, soldiers believed you will be killed by a bullet with your name on it. Some soldiers wore wedding dresses in an attempt to confuse the bullets into thinking they were someone else.

And, anon, copyright is oooold.
>>54204460
All of these except for STEM. Magic would obviously be part of the humanities, and would be the principle source of rivalry between the two.

>>54204460
>Women's Rights movements protesting succubi and slutty elves

>>54204080
I like the masquarade bit just not stated outright. I was toying with idea since some time of making CYOA where modern occult groups and orders would be doing their stuff, have their conflicts etc - having some fronts operating in broad daylight, just being disregarded by public the way IRL occult organizations are.

>>54204491
Yeah but that's gay.

>>54204505
Then I guess I won't make that CYOA then. Whew, one less thing to worry about.

>>54204521
Thanks.

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>>54194452
A forest sounds like a good place for a troll market.

>>54204487
>succubi and slutty elves
Human women are now obsolete

>>54204584
Succubi would be held by the government, used as diplomats and spies. You think common folk like you would ever see them? Maybe on TV.

Assuming succubi act as they do in non-Animu land.

>>54204584
There was entire series of erotic stories written around that premise called Faephobia. Some of the stories involved women trying to "catch up" via magic and it going sexually awry. I also recall one where a dude turned himself into a sexy elf.

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>>54203757

>Death

>The Looking-Glass Kingdom

>Thick Fogs
>Spectral Lands
>Thick Forests
>Snow Lands

>Craftsmanship 3
3
>Cooking 2
5
>Hard Working 1
6
>Mercantile 1
7
>Metalwork 2
9
>Happiness
10
>Community 1
11
>Dutiful 1
12
>Farming 1
13
>Entertainment 1
14

>Skeleton Horde x2
>Thorns of Triforge
>Wilds' Beast Masters
>Those Cast Out

>Oni's Armor
>Reaper's Blade
>Baby Eldritch Horror

>Watchful Eye
>Sculpted Body
>Royal Presence
>Land Sense

>Magus Training (Illusion)
>Mending Flesh
>Dragon's Wings

>Gracelyn Morandi
Specialist
>Zanazabar, Bound Scourge
Lord of War
>Owl Girl
Spymaster
>Ophelia
>T'lak
>The Legend
Bodyguards
>Damien
Diplomat

>Verea Amenta

My land is an endless dreamscape of everchanging icy forests. Just the sort of place to get lost in, forget from whence you came, and realize that you don't care. My citizens are simple folk, living the simple life in small, widely scattered villages. My Queen Verea is in charge of managing things and I'll assign all my companions to assisting her. Unfortunately, managing the ever shifting realm of frozen, deathly fae forests efficiently is near impossible, and I spend my time using my magic to tease, trick, and lead astray visitors. All while tormenting Verea with my love of the chaos of the natural and magical world.

>>54204425
this is pretty nice, is there a image file version?

>>54204632
>I also recall one where a dude turned himself into a sexy elf
Humanity is now obsolete

>>54204679
I think you may have misunderstood the Tiers in Citizen Life. Look at how other people did them, it's not like the normal Tier system

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>>54203869
Box is done.
>>54204343
>>54204328

>>54204771
A diary full of fucked up shit and my sanity at 55? i ended up better than i expected no shoggoth waifu though that is a shame

>>54203757
Conquest seems like a gimped, flavorless version of War. It's especially insulting since Pestilence is a pretender.

>>54204771
>2015
Eyupp, the narrator's 28% sanity's showing.

>>54204771
>"It's 2015, people!"
How long did it exactly take you to make this thing?

>>54203869
>People seem to prefer ones with a more worldbuilding

You would be correct. I don't bother if the premise is "lol so randumb have some powers hehehe"

>>54204835
See
>>54204833

>>54204758

I'll have to post an updated version some time. Should still end up pretty similar though. Thanks.

>>54204854
The CYOA in the first post he linked to?

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I haven't been able to read the thread for a few days so I just wanted to say that I missed you guys and that I'm happy to be here with you again.

Thanks for being here and posting

>>54204758
That is how you do it, no?

>>54204920
very homo

>>54204854
anon

anon~

>>54204920
We had some OC, like Henderson's Eldritch Abomination one and Celt's Horseman's Kingdom. Welcome back!

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>>54204936
No homo

It's just nice to say that you care about someone every once in a while, and it's nice to hear it too. I include you, anon.

>>54204946
Neat-o

>>54204962
VERY homo

>>54203869
i like this cyoa
>Shapeshift + Liquid Flesh (15%)
>Pheremones + Cult Leader (25%)
SAN: 60%
this is all i need

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>>54204011
Single Strain (120)
Airborne (90)
1 Week (80)
90% (80)
Humanoid (90)

Natural Armor (80)
Multiple Limbs (75)
Titan (60)
Immortality (40)

Strength: (titan strength) Fuck you, I'm Mehrunes Dagon
Agility: I'll walk as slowly as I like
Regeneration: lvl 2 (20)
Invulnerability: lvl 2 x2(natural armor) (0)

BURN AND PILLAGE

>>54204933
Unless by "Craftsmanship 3", that anon meant "All tiers of Craftmanship, 1, 2, and 3".

Each Tier costs one point, but they are mutually exclusive. By purchasing Craftsmanship Tier 3, you don't automatically get Craftsmanship 1 and 2. That's why these builds
>>54204258
>>54204137
>>54204048
all specify what, exactly, they are taking.

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What does /cyoag/ think of a cyoa with a few kemono options?

>>54204080
We need you to make this yeah good point.

>>54205094
It'd be purrfect

>>54205103
>it's another "anon thinks the entire universe is CYOAs" post

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>>54204080
I sort of did this. Not sure if this is what you're looking for though?

>>54204425
Currency: Yen. The only real choice. Plus it's a boost for my choice of wallet.

Wallet: Philanthropy. Last time I checked one Yen was less than a penny, which means I can get effective immortality for really cheap. Especially considering how rich I can become with Sci-Fi tech and robotic waifus and husbandos

>>54205168
Nah I've always hated secret societies and cults for some reason.

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>>54204080

>>54205209
thank you zbg

>>54203891
>>54203869

>We prefer waifus.

No. Gas waifus and waifufags.
Leave waifus out of this.

>>54205231
When the waifu wars begin in earnest, who will weep your fallen corpse?

>>54204487
Sounds tight as hell.
Can succubi be raped?

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>>54205168

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>>54205188
You are a man with no sense of adventure.

>>54205224
Wrong dude, dude

>>54205274
All buttholes feel the same if you thrust hard enough.

>>54205224
ZBG is banned for half a day cause mods

>>54205294
Oh cool, why's that?

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>>54205262
>>54205188
Shame. I'll finish posting it anyway, given I've started.

>>54205094
Come on anon, you know we like our animalgirls, we like waifus and we like lewds. You didn't have to ask.

>>54205302
Posting a cyoa that inadvertently spawns a shitstorm is grounds for "off-topic" ban apparently.

>>54204920
You're a fucking idiot.

>>54205118
But anon there is a entire plane of existance that is composed by all the CYOAs that have been and will be created

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>>54205327
Last page.

>>54205118
>it's another "posting random brainfarts and hoping other people will make things for him" episode

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>>54205463

>>54205455
No, anon, that's stupid. For one thing I've already done it, it's just good to see things you like which you haven't yourself created. For another, why would you want such a CYOA? That's not a very good medium for representing a whole world, anon.

Card
\Famine (+2 Land, +4 Life, +Effortless Agri, +Spihoning Touch)
Capital
\The Clockwork City
Lands (4+2)
\Lava + Mountain
.|Thick Forest + Snow
.|Flat Lands + Snow
..\Desert + Snow
Citizen Life (14+4)
\Hard Working (1, 2, 3)
.|Craftsmanship (1, 2, 3)
.|Enginnering (1, 2, 3)
.|Metalwork (1, 2)
.|Education (1, 2)
.|Farming (1, 2, 3)
.|Cooking (1, 2)
.|Happiness (1)
.|Community (1)
..\Entertainment (2)
Army
\Imperial Hand
.|Royal Guard x 3
..\Imperial Magus
Minor Lordship Powers
\Silver Tongue
.|Sculpted Body
.|Watchful Eye
..\Land Sense
Major Lordship Powers
\Iron Hide
.|Mending Flesh
..\Weapon Affinity
Royal Court
\Diplomat
..\Bartholomew Esq.
\Bodyguard
..\Gracelyn Morandi
\Spymaster
..\Damien
\War-Master
..\The Legend
\Specialist
..\Christoph III
Queen
\Verea Amenta

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>>54205479

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>>54205502
That's a very.....interesting way to format.

>>54203869
Thanks for all the work you put into this but I'm already in the low 70s or high 60s and as a result really don't have any SAN to spare for your CYOA.

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>>54205479

>>54203858
I'll take Alison.

>>54205556
That's just Mopey. Ignore it.

>>54205670
>he's not even zero
You are all the voices in my brain. I stopped shitting in pissbottles a while ago, and now I eat nothing but ramen run-off.

>>54205556
>>54205697

You're just jealous you can't figure out the math on your own.

>>54205670
Just pick Unstable, Fragmented, and/or Empathy.

>>54204679
You definitely have a pair of grand balls to take Verea's mind off of work.

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You can pick the correct choice here, Nero or the garbage choice, Mox

>>54205717
>Pick empathy
>Pick pheromones
>You now can be really fucking happy all the time

>>54205738
>reading an italics cyoa
All your choices leading you to here were already wrong, you can't salvage it now no matter what you pick.

>>54205738
Chalice.
Eat shit everyone else.

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>>54205738
This is the future you have chosen

>>54205738
Mox is besto, fuck off

>>54205791
Pleb.

>>54205738
Oh for fuck's sake, not this shit again. Why do I even come here.

>>54203757
>Card
Death, best all-round package. Immortal citizens is a long-run economic powerhouse.

>City
Braug Kr'tah. Magic is useful, tourism is good for the economy.

>Land
Mountain Ranges, Thick Forests, Thick Fog, Spectral Lands. Lots of exploitable natural resources and a nightmare to try and keep an army together when invading.

>Citizen Life
Economic focus. Hardworking 1,2. Dutiful 1. Craftsmanship 1,3. Mercantile 2,3. Engineering 1,2,3. Metalwork 1,2. Education 1,2.

>Garrisons
Skeletons, Thorns of Triforge, Imperial Magus x2, Grand Dragon. Classic meatshields, elvish archers are naturally suited to fighting in dense mountainous forests, mages are the artillery when necessary. Dragon's a bonus, pick whatever element is cool.

>Seals (+2 Death bonus)
Oni's Armor, Stalker's Sidearm, Unbound Train. Stats, detect life and shoot it, use train to move the army around. Good all-round.

>Minor Powers
Cat's Stride, Royal Presence, Quick Reaction, Watchful Eye. Stats and something to keep people from bothering me unnecessarily.

>Major Powers
Iron Hide, Magus Training (Illusion), Mending Flesh. Insurance and a few tricks.

>Bodyguards (+2 Death bonus)
Diplomat: Damien. Seems competent and chill.
Bodyguard: The Legend. Strong, tough, good distraction.
Spymaster: Owl Girl. Good to watch the forests.
Warmaster: Zanzabar. Former Lord of War ought to be good at the job.
Specialist: Gracelyn. More magic is good.
Bonus 1: Ophelia. More necromancy is good.
Bonus 2: T'lak. Brings news from outside the borders.

>Waifu
Nali & Fiyu. Two for one, different personalities to prevent boredom, they can do half my job for me.

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>>54205791
You have good taste

>>54205738
You know what fuck it i am going to choose Mox and then convince her to make an alliance with Nero's City states and get both waifus

>>54205738
Chalice is the best option, and it's so obvious that Italics put her in the Style of Life update unlike any of the others.

>>54205717
There are a lot of replies I could write to this post and I've written serval things only to delete them but at the end of the day I would almost certainly kill myself after learning of the existence of such things making it all pointless. Fuck me, I guess.

>>54205094
>>>/trash/

>>54205502
TAke out Farming 2. I suppose I don't really need it.

>>54205718

I'm not so much going to be taking her mind off work most the time, just constantly creating more work for her to do and making things more difficult.

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>>54204771

>Went straight for the mystery box and got myself a shoggoth waifu

Thanks a million anon

>>54205094
>that pic
Steve, get me my flamethrower!

>>54201857
It's funny, I can make these short shitty cyoas so easily, but all my larger ones go unfinished.

>Reason for Failures
-Bad Writer
-Decay of Motivation
-No Good Ideas

>How I'll Proceed
-Struggle on

>What keeps me going
-For My Waifu
-For Myself

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>>54206109
Forgot the cyoa

>>54206109
Reason for Failures:
>Bad Writer
>Decay of Motivation (because Bad Writer)
How I'll proceed:
>implying
What keeps me going:
>implying

>>54206121
Needs an option for "realized the community you're part of is a bunch of assholes and don't want to make shit for them anymore."

>>54206121
>Reason for failures
No good ideas

>How i shall proceed
Struggle on
FORGE ONWARD! AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA

>Who relys on you
For myself
Mystery box?

>>54206121
Imma build for this later. Post it tomorrow?

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>>54206121 (You)
>>54206177
Pls anon.
>>54206189
Yep

I knew I should have spellchecked that Mystery Box oops.

>>54206196
Goddammit anon your box plucked my heartstrings I WILL FUCKING DO IT I WILL FINISH MY CYOA AND IT WILL BE GREAT I still have to write up stuff and read SDA photoshop tutorials so it might take a while so hang in there please

>>54206121
Right now it's
>No Good Ideas
>A moment of Respite
>For Yourself

Think my next will be a small "Seal" builder as a one-off in the HK world I made.

>>54206121
You can't fail if you give up before you try.

>>54206238
>photoshop
Nigger I use "Preview" on a mac and no one has said anything about it. Shits easy with patience.

>>54206230
I thought the spelling mistake was in character and cute. I'll finish it and damn the consequences. I can't exactly duck up more than I already have.

>>54206174
This desu fampai

>>54206230
i shall bleed and i shall suffer, but i will finish this CYOA

>>54206121
Poor quality art. I just can't figure out photoshop. I've read tutorials and shit, but it just doesn't click
Struggle on: I don't know how, but I'll make something /cyoag/. I'll do it.
My self: I've done far bigger things out of pride and determination before. This can't be as hard as basic, right?

>>54206174
Why do you hang out with assholes?

>>54206267
I am not complaining about photoshop or anything i am just saying that i might take a while in finishing it

>>54206230
>waifubuilders
The most vapid and pointless shit of all. No, fuck that.
>liking shy virgin autist
You love digging holes don't you.

>>54206191
Saber: Winnie Churchill from >>54189244
Fate A
Immortality, Boosted Intelligence, Magic Level 2, Superhuman Regeneration
Economics 101, War 101, Charisma Beyond Belief, My Money, Shapeshifting, Lord

>>54206305
Say whatever you want but he just gave me an idea for another character for my CYOA with that box

>>54206121
> Too much IRL work.
> Struggle on.
> For yourself.

I will not yet be broken. Poll soon lads.

>>54206300
I'm just here for the CYOAs.

>>54206354
You tsundere motherfucker

>>54206328
Is it a cutie bookworm?

>>54206348
Is there a purpose to namefagging or are you starved for attention?

Here's to fifteen posts asking for some poll to be posted.....

>>54206370
Yep it will also fit without issues in my CYOA probably

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>>54206121
>Failed CYOA authors
I never fail, I never fall, I will never give up, why? Because I am the symbol of perversion and /d/egeneration!

>>54206373
>Is there a purpose to namefagging
Yes, letting people know I'm busy with work for the time being.
You wanker.

>>54206373
Behead those who insult our desert rose

>>54206403
I hold you to your word, Tok.

>>54206121
I like this. Maybe it'll give me motivation to finish my shit one day.

>>54206430
Find a trash can and get in it.

>>54206403
If you never fail, then how come you never succeed?

>>54206121

>Reasons for Failure
-Bad Writer: While I think I can typically ramble ideas without any problems, writing waifus and companions is incredibly difficult. Constantly feels like I'm doing it wrong.
-Too Much Work: So many things I still gotta do! Rewrite the skills, add in sidequests, finish waifus, daughterus, companions, and endings for Isekai'd Father. Still have to add in about 25 or so companions for Highschool JRPG, gotta work on the final part of the main Conveniences series, and the mystery box/post game spin off where you become a god yourself. Lastly, got reinspired to make an old cyoa idea I had that I want to keep secret until completion.
-Pressure: Just a bit, more brought about by my own fears that any high expectations placed upon me.
-No Good Ideas: I haven't come up with how to do half of the stuff I just listed.

>How to Proceed
-A Moment of Respite: Beat Super Mario 3d world and got to the final chapter of Gotta Protectors, had a fun week with my little brother, ans hopefully gonna be able to get to work once I get home.
-Struggle On: Just gotta keep throwing myself at it until it's done, even if it takes me months!

>Allies
-Fellow Anons: People actually saying they're excited to see what I'm making is seriously great encouragement, even though I'm also worried I'll let them down.
-Fellow Authors: I feel compelled to make CYOAs until I receive praise from those who made CYOAs I enjoyed, even though I don't even know who they are. It's weird.
-Myself: I just want to be able to look back on my life and say that I wrote something. All the ideas I keep inside my head until they're forgotten, never expanded upon or shared with anyone. I want to fight against that fate!

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>>54206497
>Then how come you never succeed?
You can try and deny it if you want anon, you won't fool me. I know that deep inside you want my lewd CYOAs and you want them so bad. You don't have to be ashamed of it anon, just admit it, once you try my big 3 page CYOAs no other CYOA will ever be able to satisfy you again. You will come back for more and more. I will give you more anon, I will give you so much more.

>>54206566
I can hear the fucking music

>>54206502
>Still have to add in about 25 or so companions for Highschool JRPG,
Jeeze man. I mean I'm really looking forward to it and was one of the anons who suggested it (sorry for the pressure) but that is hardcore. Good luck!

>>54205759
Italics has done nothing wrong.

>>54205838
Are you implying that means something.

>>54206609
>Defending cuckoldry fetishists
While being a shitty writer can't exactly be considered something "wrong", it certainly isn't good either.

>>54206609
Yes, only best girls are seen multiple times in Italics' CYOAs, like Hagia.

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>>54206403

>>54206730
>You will never experience pure innocent love
I don't know who you are but your words hurt me

>>54206730
You're cute. I want a waifu like you.

>>54206960
I-its not like I'm opposed to t-touching his P-pPpeNis or anything... I'd do anything for my husbando! TokHaar-san!... And even then.. I-i wouldn't be able to resist iI-if he p-pushed me down... Ugguh.. *Sniff* he isn't real anyway. *Sniff* I'm going to bed now.. b-bbye.

>>54206960

but penises are gross

>>54207167
Go tell /d/, they haven't noticed.

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>>54206730

>>54207236
Don't ruin this, jackass.

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>>54207236

CYOAS

LEWDS

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>>54207129
>And even then.. I-i wouldn't be able to resist iI-if he p-pushed me down... Ugguh.. *Sniff* he isn't real anyway. *Sniff* I'm going to bed now.. b-bbye.
>Pushed me down
>*Crying woman*
I'm hard as diamonds!

>>54207167
>Penises are gross
>I am angel
Shit this makes me even harder...

>>54207236
>Smug SDA anime girl
SHIT!!!! If I we combine the three...

>Push down lesbian
>"But penises are gross!"
>*Crying woman*
>Smug SDA watches and smuggly smiles.
BONE OF MY SWORD! I need to fap!

>>54206606
Well it's based off Persona so it needs a range of companions about that big, but then even bigger so everyone can have a different group and build a different story.

Currently I'm just slightly altering and moving companions from each CYOA into the others and copying some core ideas from stories, games, and people in irl. No clue if it'll all turn out alright or be boring as hell.

We need more waifu CYOAs.

>>54207345
WHY
WHHHHHHHHHYYYYYYYYYYY
THERE ARE ALREADY 500
WHY DO YOU NEED MORE

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Seriously mods are gonna shit all over us if you don't stop this.

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>>54207325
You fucking worry me m8.

>>54207325
Bro that's seriously fucked

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>>54207325

youre kinda fucked up dude

>>54207423
Have you seen what this guy has made? This is nothing.

>>54207423
Such is the nature of /d/epravity

>>54207345
Make one then

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>>54207291
>>54207291
>>54207325

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>>54207451
I don't feel like I should be quoted twice and in same post as Tok.

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How do people feel about stats? I'm doing a...like, demon-superhero CYOA and I dunno whether to give everything stats or just description.

Ah i see i stumbled into a full faggots thread, i'll take my leave.

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>>54207485
it was a mistake

all of this is a mistake

>>54207494
Stats are great, ignore what people say about number crunch = bad, or that stats are useless. In fact, I'd like more CYOAs with crunch and stats.

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>>54207504
Fight on, SDA. You cannot lose.

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>>54207504
This is the fate you have chosen. It is the fate you deserve. May Tok lust after you eternally.

Anyway, keep it CYOA related.

>>54206776
>Defending cuckoldr fetishists
Anon no matter how hard you shitpost, Italics is not a cuck nor has a fetish for it.

>>54206791
Hagia can't count because she was in a pseudo sequel cyoa. She wasn't even a character until New World.

>>54207494
I avoid cyoas that encourage minmaxing. Stats are okay only as vague indicators

>>54207565
>only as vague indicators
What do you mean by this? Like Monster Hunter?

>>54207494
Stats are fine but they might add another layer of work in balancing the CYOA And you should not forget about descriptions CYOAs in the end are a exercise of imagination

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>>54207523

I wonder how attractive Tok is in real life.

Is he not getting enough pussy so as to justify all of his lewd cyoas?

>>54207601
He's a third-worlder and a cuck so presumably worse than most of us.

>>54207601
I really don't want to imagine what Tok looks like with his personality and love of fetishes.

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>>54207345
We have way too many waifu CYOAs.

>>54207601

i like to imagine that he's a model

>>54207494
Don't put in stats just for sake of having stat and leave it there. Like, take a look at >>54207384 and explain to me what's the difference between Strength levels 1, 2 and 4?
The biggest benefit of numerical stat system is that you can easily use it in mechanics. If you don't plan on integrating it into other mechanics, having numerical stat system is not worth much.

I still remember the retarded slapfight between two anons about whatever a someone with Int 1 could survive fighting a Strange. There was zero ways to solve that problem because there was no explanation what Int 1 actually means. If your mechanic can't actually answer any questions, why include it?

>>54207494
They're an exponentially more amount of work than non-statted CYOAs, but they're very rewarding. Depends on how you handle it to be honest.

Just remember that even a very simple number change for any potential balance changes -will- be met with pessimism. Doesn't matter if it makes more sense in your eyes, people will usually see it as discomforting.

>>54207494
The one thing that fucks stats up (at least in my opinion) is leaving them ungrounded.
If you have Speed 3, you should know what that means beyond 'faster than Speed 2', even if it's just something like 'Speed 1 represents the human average, Speed 5 represents the greatest speed that humans can naturally attain'.

Also, not capping stats encourages weird minmaxed builds.

>>54207494
Stats can be good, but unanchored, meaningless stats are bad for your CYOA. Make sure you have an idea of what the stats actually mean and communicate that to the reader.

>>54207601
He ain't Anthony Burch so that's something

>>54207575
Yes or just 'X types generally stronger or faster than Y types' but without giving detailed stats to X1, X2 and X3

>>54207611
>Sweden is a third world country.
Not yet anon, give it a couple of years.

>>54207636
>male model
Impossible

He's probably a dumb bimbo blonde

>>54207690
You haven't been talking to enough Norwegians, clearly.

>>54207646
>>54207661
>>54207666
I'm sensing a pattern here. Sorry >>54207565, you seem outnumbered.
>>54207656
Yes, it seems that they are useful but that the difficulty of using them properly is the main concern. And I remember the frigatefest.
>>54207677
You've given me an idea. Thanks, anon.

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>>54207719
>properly
Well, what are your stats for? You can have harmless, vague stats, and I believe that stats in general really help with detail in terms of relativity.

Do what you want, honestly. There's no staple to CYOA creation, but just be prepared for the amount of work it involves.

>>54206121
I'd post my build/situation, but most of the choices just aren't there. Eh, i'll just make my own...

>Reason for failure
-Out of time
I just can't seem to find the time to work on it
-Not enough ideas
I don't have a lack of good ideas, don't get me wrong, but with ten other projects sapping my inspiration for themselves, it kinda sorta falls on the wayside...

>How i'll proceed
-A moment of respite
I'll add to it when i add to it. I've got a good framework and the mystery box all thought out, just gotta add the rest of the candidates.

>For whom
-Myself
-Shits and giggles
Fuck it, when you get an idea you gotta put it on paper.
-mystery box: Wait for me, husbandofag. It'll be done when it's done.

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>>54207802
and i forgot page 2

>>54203869
>Regeneration
>Shapeshift
>Liquid Flesh
>Fragmented
>Open the box
Ok, I have 85% SAN. So mostly sane and boring.
Now let's see what's in the box.

>>54207345
>Making a non-waifu CYOA
>Have a blast creating female companions
>Can't make a single male companion because, deep down, I know I would never pick them because they aren't qtpi girls.

What do I do?

>>54207913
Write some more good female companions and then gender flip them.

>>54207913
If you can't make them don't make them forcing things decreases quality greatly

>>54206121
>Pressure
I just do what people tell me, and have difficulty saying no when they ask. Their polite/supportive disappointment when I do what they ask, poorly, feels almost worse than the people who actively hate it.
>low self esteem
That's self explanatory, now isn't it? I don't want to see a bunch of people hate something I made again.
>struggle on/give up
I have to deliver what I promised, but I don't think I'll do anything else.
>Fellow anons
I hope they enjoy it. It makes me happy when other people are happy.

>>54207913
You can make male companions. There is tons of cyoas with male companions and they are as interesting as the female companions.

>>54207963
Again? Tell me what pains you anon

>>54207802
I think I'm gonna have stats which decide what abilities you can and can't buy.
For example, if you are X honourable, you can buy three honourable abilities. If you are really honourable, you get the Literal Jesus ability.
Is there a downside to that?

>>54206121
>Reasons
Too Much Work
No Self Esteem
>Proceed
Give Up
>You're Not Alone
Wrong

>>54207965
>There is tons of cyoas with male companions and they are as interesting as the female companions.

LOLNO

>>54205168

DOG (Die Glocke)

Defensive Magic 3
Magical Enhancement 3
Healing Magic 3
Elementalism 3

Magical Supplies 3
Magical Robes 3
Small Melee Weapon 3

Siegfried Koch
Ripsnarl Murdersmash

Der Riese
Broken Masquerade
I wouldn't worry
Strange Eons

Team Juggernaut will fight anything with reckless abandon, even themselves in the end.

>>54207423
>Bro that's seriously fucked
Get back to work.

>>54207965

Tons? As interesting? I can think of a few, but definitely in the minority.

>>54207991
It's not an interesting story. I made something people liked, then I messed it up. I have another thing to make, and It's difficult to work on knowing I might make things worse. But I have difficulty saying no to a request. Probably tons of people in similar situations.

>>54208086
How did you mess up?

What a shitty thread, holy fuck.

>>54208136
This has been pretty good compared to what we had during last month

>>54208014
>Is there a downside to that?
I don't see why there would be. A tier-system for obtaining things is something I've considered. It's up to you for the balancing.

>>54208150
Or during April. That was horrid.

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What are some cyoas that can get me a bromance with some real bros?

>>54203869
[SAN 100]
Fragmented. Shouldn't be too bad. Just dont die within 3 months and I'll be all back to normal. Or as normal as I'll ever be. [110]

Eye of the beholder. Finding new magical items and creatures should be interesting. [105]

Regeneration [95] Cause dying is bad mkay?

Pheromones [85] even if it's misspelled, being able to influence the emotions of people is useful. And fun.

Memory Insurance [85] because mentally dying is as bad as dying.

Final Form [85] because dying is as bad as dying.

Timespace Anomaly [65] Because hey why not. Spacetime travel is fun.

Empathy [85]. I didnt want to scare/kill people anyways.

Might as well take shapeshift and liquid flesh. [70] I mean if I'm going to potentially live for a long long time it's nice to have.

Dreamguard [60] for protecting my gooeybits from those magical creatures I'll be seeking out.

So more or less be a human whos really good at not dying and meet some magical creatures and find some magical tools and people like me and or think certain thoughts about me when theyre nearby.

Negative elements a bit more pronounced. Not too bad of a downside.

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>>54207129
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[Card]
>War
"Only a people birthed from conflict can truly know the meaning of peace.
It shall be my purpose to maintain it for them and defend them from each and every idiot with a death wish who'd try to take it from them.
A true king leads his men from the front and my presence shall make my might known to all who stand before me as I show them the purest taste of regret imaginable."
Also I want to seem macho in front of the mysterious cute girl.
[Royal City]
>The Grand Hold
"While the city of steam and imagination and the allure of vulpine maidens are both tempting, the only seat worthy of me is one of gold.
A people so closely knit that speech is more formality than necessity is by far the strongest of all and the fortifications will help keep all those who rely on me feel safe and protected."
The fox girls are really hard to pass up, and I'd rather have roudier subjects, but this level of defense outweighs all that in my eyes.
[Land]
>Gaia Pillars
"An appropriately grand and awe inspiring site for both my people and my hold. The painting girl is icing on the cake; the strangest and maddest among us are usually the ones who know the most important things."
>The World Tree
"No better symbol of my kingdom's power exist than a tree that reaches the heavens. These monks can't be anything but a vital resource for my people's prosperity and the tree itself will look spended looming over my capital."
>Spectral Lands
"Though many of my decisions come from logic and reason, I am most at home among the mysterious and strange. Having my capital in the middle of such a vast dreamscape will make approaching it uninvited nothing but downright maddening for any foolish enough to try."

>>54208272
>Great Deserts
"Surrounding the Spectral Lands and housing the Gaia Pillars, shall be the golden sands my people will call home.
Those without a guide to the oases will perish under the blazing sun before they can even approach my grand cities and the treasures of long dead kings will be more than fitting offerings to my glory.
I shall reward any brave enough to retrieve them and, should I deign them worthy and not need it, I shall let them keep what they find with my blessing."
[Citizen Life]
>Hard Working Tier 1
"A kingdom without disciplined workers will never flourish."
>Happiness Tier 3
"My people's joy is my joy and it should always be my priority to maintain and nourish it."
>Community Tier 2
"Any who claim that a kingdom's strength comes from anywhere but their sense of camaraderie and cooperation is either an idiot or a liar."
>Dutiful Tier 1
"Order is necessary to maintain the peace, but it should never smother the citizenry."
>Craftsmanship Tier 1
"A kingdom without culture or fine goods is not a kingdom worth ruling."
>Mercantile Tier 2
"Wealth will keep my people prosperous and content
>Education 2
"Knowledge is the sharpest blade and my kingdom will know that better than any other."
>Entertainment Tier 2
"What point is there to peace if it does not lead to the great works of art and storytelling? My kingdom shall put the very renaissance to shame!"

>>54208281
[Garrisons]
>Imperial Magus (200)
>Royal Guard (300)
>Empire's Hand (50)
>The Cast Out (10)
>Grand Dragon (10)
"While my citizens will form a formidable army themselves, I refuse to let any besides the best of the best follow directly behind me.
My presence on the battlefield will only end in carnage and slaughter, so I will only take those with the best chance of surviving alongside me.
A dragon is by far the most fitting of beasts to stand beside me and it's caring nature only makes it a more appealing addition.
I think I shall ask the witch for a hatchling of thunder and lightning, though one coursing with fire would be equally acceptable."
[Seal]
>Unbound Train
"Though all are appealing, I could never pass up the opportunity for traversing my no doubt massive kingdom.
Doing so in such a craft that can make nothing short of the grandest of entrances only sweetens the deal."
Choo choo, fuck you motherfucker!
[Minor Lordship Powers]
>Silver Tongue
"Though Lord of War, I desire peaceful conflict resolution and kindling friendships above all else."
>Sculpted Body
"What kind of king would I be if I were not glorious to look upon?"
>Peaceful Aura
"My people and all I meet must feel at ease around me for, if I am not a comforting presence, I am a failure as a leader."
>Royal Presence
"Though I intend to earn my people's respect through my actions and words, the added air of royal will ensure that all know the measure of the man standing before them."

>>54208288
[Major Lordship Powers]
>Iron Hide
"Though I'm sure I could find splendid armor to protect myself, I do so love the idea of crushing my enemies wearing nothing but the most splendid of royal attire.
Perhaps even naked, should I really want to surprise them."
>Magus Training
"Since my dragon will rain lightning, I shall rain fire.
A fitting tool for the master of the desert."
>Mending Flesh
"The time it takes to heal from anything that can truly wound me is not time I can afford to waste in a fight.
Not to mention how demoralizing it will be for my enemies to face a man who never stays down no matter what is thrown at him."
>Weapon Affinity
"I plan to amass a treasure trove of blades and other armaments, what good would they be if I didn't know how to use them.
I'll be sure to learn to defend myself unarmed when none are in reach as well, of course."
[Court]
Royal Diplomat
>Solstice
"Her friendly nature seems best suited for diplomacy and it will be quite useful to have a literal master of ice to match my fire.
I'll need to make sure she gets her pranking out of her system before she leaves on missions of course, otherwise relations with other kingdoms may get... Difficult."
Royal Bodyguard
>Ophelia
"I can't think of anyone better suited to guarding my life than one intimately familiar with death.
She also sounds adorable, which is a necessity in any that I would have around me almost 24/7."
Royal Spymaster
>Owl Girl
"Obviously the most suited to the task and having a regular partner for tea sounds lovely.
It could be quite fun to prank the rest of the Court from time to time by slipping her a caffeinated blend of leaves as well.
I do hope she comes to trust me well enough to tell me her name..."

>>54203869
Oh hey, YOU must've been the guy who did that other eldritch abomination CYOA and also that cyborg augmentation one! it's been bugging me all week since I mixed you up with Spacefuture!

Also, love your work!

>>54208300
Royal War-Master
>T'läk The Wanderer
"To know your lands is to know your battlefields and to know your battlefield is the first step to victory.
She sounds quite charming and, if I'm able to maintain peace as I plan to, her wandering off from time to time shouldn't prove too much of an issue.
I'm sure she'll enjoy scouring the ancient ruins hidden in my deserts as well."
Royal Specialist
>Gracelyn Morandi
"Passing up a woman with this level of power would be pure idiocy and she seems the best suited for the most flexible role.
If taking a few hits of cosmic energy will help her feel welcomed and at home in the court, then I shall happily take the brunt.
It will be difficult not to refer to her as Grace or Gracie, due to my fondness for nicknames, however..."
[Spouse]
"...
I have shamed myself and my people by uttering the word waifu as a king."
>Nali & Fiyu Tilsane
"I am a Lord and a King; my heart is too vast be held by one woman alone!
In addition their beauty and endearing traits, they sound excellent for assisting me in royal matters.
The balance between the two will surely lead our kingdom to do naught but flourished magnificently!"
Also, I am morally obligated to touch fluffy tail.

"I shall strive to be a king worthy of my throne, my lands, and my people. I pray the other four Lords and I can become the closest of friends.
The last thing I want is to show them exactly why I am the Horseman of War..."

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>>54208156
Anything new about the cat world?

>>54208317
You seem like a fag, but I'll ally with you.

>>54208178
The weird ice cream seller is you from the future if you picked "Nah it's Cool"

>>54208444
I only suck the most feminine of penises

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>>54208370
If my motivation does not fail me for this weekend, I may get to about 80% done by Sunday. A full completion is unlikely but possible.

That's not an ETA.

>>54207913
I'm just adding a / and then a name for the other gender of that character and letting people pick for each character. Gonna use he or she depending on the gender I mentally tagged to the first name listed, and just alternate between the two every other character.

That way people can pick regardless of their gender/sexual preference and decide which characters they want to waifu or bro tier.

>>54203891
Neck yourself

>>54208715
That's interesting. What kind of CYOA is it?

>>54208814
Isekai'd Father and Highschool JRPG. One where you pick your spouse and child and adventuring companions on your epic quest to save your family. The other is a make your own persona-esque world/setting and has a group of people from various backgrounds to include in your circle of friends and companions for fighting against whatever weirdness you choose to have.

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I (mostly) finished the first page of my Wild West cyoa, and I'm looking for some suggestions.

-What should I change aesthetically? I'm debating whether or not fitting a border on it would be worth it.

-What should the other pages include? Right now I've got a decent list of pre-existing characters for a companion page(no waifus yet?), and some ideas for different scenarios or challenges you go on after the build is done.

I'm not sure what else to include other than the mystery box and some gear you can pick.

And if you have any, Western themed character/creature/location images would be great. (They're pretty hard to find)

>>54209132
You should include a scenario that requires calf wrestler and one that requires truer grit. No other suggestions.

>>54208178
>Fuck yeah man
>Cowgirl Emma and Flatty Mcworthless
>Tactical Minigirls
This brings together all my major fetishes, Thick tan girls, lolis, minigirls, and bringing bandits to justice.

>>54208159
Woah, totally forgot to make a choice for this.

>Immortality
>Money
>True Love

I'm supposed to briefly describe my true love... Enjoys stories (books/anime/games) and puns. Preferably tall, long hair, huge boobs... I'm really not in the mood to write my own waifu right now to be honest, I just want something to read on here while I try to work on my own CYOAs.

>>54209132
I have no idea what to contribute in order to help but I'm certainly enjoying this CYOA thus far!

>>54209132
Different starting locations. Drawbacks to provide more starting resources in points/items/companions. At the end have some events/quests for the player to do.

>>54209132
I've been looking forward to this! Great so far. As for expansions, maybe gear?
T hough I'm not sure if you'd tailor each to the level of magic or make them exclusive to certain tiers. Something like
>Bandanna: mundane, makes you anonymous to everyone but your closest friends. Careful to mask your voice, bandit.
>Sombrero: folklore, makes your pidgin Spanish somehow much more understandable to others, but no less embarrassing to hear.
>White hat: fantasy, makes everyone untrustworthy look like they're wearing a black hat. Try not to look at yourself in the mirror, unless you want a rude awakening.
Maybe horse customization too. Stuff like that, though it may be a ton more work than you want.

>>54209484
>>54209132
Oh whoops, I was looking at the image itself and didn't realize you had already mentioned gear in the post. My mistake, sorry. Still really looking forward to it.

>>54208885
>One where you pick your spouse and child and adventuring companions on your epic quest to save your family.
Nice.

>already played all the Kingdom Adventure CYOAs
>want to explore more fantasy worlds without the investment of reading a book

Fuck it, I guess it is Fabled Lands again.

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>>54207384
>Sorcerer

>Gift
+3 Stats

>Skills
-20 Skill Points

-Magical (-13)
Catalysts, Arcane, Blink, Finesse, Detect Magic, Homing, Combine, Barriers, Warp

-Elemental (-5)
Adaptation, Infusion, Affinity (Frost), Enhance, Energy Sense

-Physical (-1)
Tempered

-Weaponry (-1)
Marksman

>Terrains
Twilight Ruins & Desert

>Resources
-95 Tribute Points

Library (-10)
Alchemy (-10)
Market (-10)
Training (-5)
Fortune (-5)
Scavenging (-5)
Campsite (-5)
Map (-5)
Teleport (-5)
Babble Book (-5)
Diner (-5)
Bar (-5)
Club (-5)
Bounty (-5)
Inn (-10)

>Final Stats
Str- 1
Def- 6
Agi- 4
Int- 10
Skill- 4

>Plan
I would probably try to join an adventuring party in the club or sell my arcane skills in the bounty hall for most of the year, while training and studying with the majority of my off time. Probably would only really go to the bar when I need a break from the adventuring and hunting. The culling could get rough though. I would most likely try to avoid people at all costs, and I would avoid both them and any magical traps they lay for me with my Energy Sense and Detect Magic. Since I can literally freeze time and negate gravity, I should be able to avoid most dangers extreme dangers, and my barriers and blink magic should cover the rest. My homing ice spears and marksman training should help me keep a safe distance while on the offense as well.

>>54209589
>implying the villain isn't fucking your wife/child the whole time

>>54203757
Honestly why isn't owl girl just default spymaster
Like seriously

>>54209484
I really like the horse idea, gonna try to get that in

>>54209635
Nah they've been kept in surprisingly okay condition and generally left alone. They'd rather not do anything more than necessary to keep them captured, until the time is right. I've been sure to at least provide a reason (not saying it's a good one, not saying it's a bad one) for them to be captured and not severely harmed for long enough for you to train and make your way there. The whole CYOA will takes place over a year, and they need to be kept alive until the end of that year for the villain's plan to succeed.

>>54207384
Where's the "1 free to choose monster soul (high)" blessing actually used? Am I missing something?

Giving enemies stats so that your own stats are more meaningful might be cool.

>>54209635
Implying the villian isn't a female and has a massive crush on me, and has only kidnapped my wife and children so that she could make her move on me.
Stop inserting your shit fetish into everything, jesus.

>>54203757
>Kingdom: War
Speak softly and carry a big stick.
>Capital: Braug Kr'tah
>Lands
Spectral Lands - A city of magic, in a land of magic.
Thick Fogs - Knowledge is power. Limit the enemy's knowledge of you, and you limit their power over you.
Snow Lands - Because comfy.
The World Tree - A favorite trope.
>Citizen Life
Education 1+2
Community 1+2
Hard Working 1+2+3
Farming 1+2+3
Engineering 3
Craftsmanship 3
Entertainment 1+2
A kingdom of the self-sufficient, the able, and the thoughtful.
>Garrisons
Black Band x1 - Ingenuity can often be found in the most mundane of places.
Imperial Magus x4 - The city of magic's finest.
Beast Masters x3 - The fantastical creatures of the Spectral lands also serve.
>Seal: Baby Eldritch Horror
A being such as this requires wise guidance.
>Minor Powers
Silver Tongue, Peaceful Aura, Land Sense, Watchful Eye
>Major Powers
Iron Hide, Mending Flesh, Earth Magus, Illusion Magus
Belief is a powerful weapon.
>Court
Diplomat: Damien
Bodyguard: Solstice
Spymaster: Owl Girl
War-Master: Christoph III
Specialist: Zanzabar
>Spouse: Verea Amenta

Does anyone have that text only cyoa about shitposting written a while ago, where one option was to be Australian and an anon asked what happened if you are already Australian?

>>54210072
Read through the Spiritual skills.

>>54209731
While Owlgirl is pretty suited for spymaster, she could also probably make a decent bodyguard by virtue of having enough owls around that your immediate vicinity is, effectively, completely covered by cameras. In a number of cases, advance knowledge of an attack could outweigh combat ability.
>but anon, why can't she do that while being a spymaster?
I dunno, why can't she tell the spymaster what her owls have heard as a bodyguard?

>>54203757
Conquest needs a hook to give it some appeal.