/cyoag/ - CYOA General

At least we got a properly made thread out of it.

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>>53674637
>start working on my first CYOA
>have a cool idea but don't flesh it out, instead I focus on making the image appealing
>the image starts become really fucking beautiful
>forgot the idea I had for the CYOA

Fucking hell lads

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>>53674637

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>>53674681

>>53674684
I'm on your side, bro, but please don't start this shit again. One thread was enough.

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>>53674705

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Pokemon Personifies Plus+ when?

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>pick the perfect body option
>eat an extra yummy pre-sleep snack knowing I'll soon be an adonis
>it didn't work and I gained 2lbs

THESE CYOAS ARE FAKE

>>53674727
Anon. You didn't tell us how many of these we could pick. Are you gonna let me pick all of them?

>>53674727
How do the choices work?

Also thta says 2/2

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>>53674357

B-class portal to timeline 133

B-class portal to timeline 632

C-Class portal to timeline 444

C-class portal to timeline 999

B-class portal to timeline 202

C-class portal to timeline 308

C-class portal 62

OK, I think I've got this.

A portal that turns males female. A portal that turns females male, and a portal that turns either into buff masterpieces.

Two more portals for romancing females, one which has not seen actual men in ages, and the other which contains genetic tomboys.

Two more portals containing kemonomimis. This allows both peaceful integration of the domestic animal humanoids into out society, and the possibility of genetically engineering cat girls.

And all without having to worry about any sort of femdom.

Including CYOA, because thread was closed by the time I attempted to post my build.

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>>53674677
This has happened to me four fucking times.

>>53674727
It's hard to read the stuff at the bottom, and there's no rules on what you can and can't choose. If it's "pick whichever you want," it's good to say that, while if it's "you have 10 points, each tier costs 1," you should say that too.

fucking shit connection
was gonna post blackrock and beastmaster but cwnt upload fucking jackshit atm

>>53674684

Slavery was a root cause but it was far from the only cause. The federal government could have handled the issue so much better, and it's true that the emancipation was passed mostly in order to prevent a european power, (likely Britain), from intervening in favor of the South.

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>>53674727
>>53674761
>white text on a cloudy background

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>>53674781
Have this

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I fucking saved the second page twice and tried to post them backwards.

>>53674756
Better get your money back.

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>>53674836

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>>53674756
You didn't realize that from the start?

>>53674759
>>53674764

>>53674779
>>53674836
>>53674867
What a fucking blunder.

>>53674836
>>53674867
these "choose a lifehack" cyoas are boring desu

does anyone still like them?

>>53674867
Is tier 3 Love hot?

>>53674807
>>53674779
Yeah I guess, I though about adding a transparent box, but the drop shadow seemed to work fine for me.
>>53674947
Hot?

>>53674971
Sexually attractive.

>>53674767
Which timeline allows women to turn into men?

>>53674836
Does tier 3 Health include any sort of accelerated healing with immortality or do you need to take tier 2 also to regain limbs?

>>53674836
>Tier 3 Health <6>
>Tier 1 Money <5>
>Tier 2 Safety <2>
>Tier 1 Enjoyment <1>
>Tier 1 Ability <0>

>>53674836
>>53674867
I like the design. Really appealing graphics.

Splitting your soul sounds really painful though. Not sure what kind of ramifications that is supposed to have either.

>>53674941
So you'd rather have another waifu cyoa?

>>53674971
You know, is she a fire giant or a salamander or something like that?

>>53674997
Are you thinking in rejecting your literal other half if it is not hot enough for you?

>>53674997
'The perfect being to fall in love with'
I would assume so.
>>53675004
Tier 3 Immortality does not come with accelerated healing.
>>53675033
I meant to add soul splitting comes with no negative repercussions.

>>53675033
Yes. I would unironically rather have another waifu CYOA, with the same fucking archetypes and the same bland fetishes, because at least it gets my dick hard.

>>53675058
Well, at least you're honest.

What the hell happened to the throg?

>>53675042
I'm just asking because I'm not sure between Tier 2 or 3.
Tier 3 seems better but if she can still be ugly, hugh...
>>53675055
Thanks, I just wanted to be sure.

>>53675084
the mod got triggered

>>53675042
Ugly people don't deserve love. That was the entire point of the Hunchback of Notre Dame.

>>53675084
Was plagued by /polr9k/.

>>53675055
Does "soul is split and tied to a human" mean I give a half and get a half or something like that?

>>53675101
Hope we don't suffer the same fate as the Caption threads on /d/

Will the fox girl genie ever come through?

>>53675112
That can't possibly be the moral of the story. Surely it was a cautionary tale about lust!

>>53675142
Nope. Everything bad in Frolo's life is the product of him taking pity on Quasimodo.

>>53674836
>Points [12]
>Health 3 [9]
>Health 2 [7]
>Money 1 [6]
>Home 3 [3]
>Soul 3 [0]
Live forever, heal any wounds. 500 bucks per day will stack pretty quickly and I have comfy demiplane to comfy around. Eventually I'll get bored or meteor hits us, I'll die and reincarnate somewhere else.

>>53675055
>>53675033
Also splitting your soul among people essentially allows them to be brought along with you if you were to chose Tier 3 Soul
>>53675118
Only a portion of your soul (Which I like to believe is an infinite resource) is merged with theirs, but you don't get theirs unless they give you their own portion.

>>53675141
I still hold hope

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>>53674746
I apologize in the delay of Pokemon Personified Plus+ I've been extremely busy and will have it out as soon as possible.

>>53675237
Cutie chicken girl.

>>53675003

202.

Humanity is an all male race. There are monstergirls, but as human females aren't monsters, they will be turned male to fit in with the local populace.

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>>53674767
>Create portals to both 339 and 993, let them duke it out
>create a B-class portal to 902, once there, create an A-class portal to 632 and activate the cataclysm, because they don't deserve men
>create a B-class portal to 999 and once there create an A-class portal to 647 with cataclysm, because they do deserve men
>do the above trick for 45 and 312 for a comic book universe
>use multiple portals to the same timeline for fast travel

>>53675314
Would the same go for 339?

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Do people like Genie CYOAs? Are they worth making?

>>53675423
They're worth it if you want all your (you)'s upfront.

>>53675423
People love contributing.

>>53672091
use something like this to find complementary colours for text/background.
http://paletton.com/#uid=24U0u0kllllaFw0g0qFqFg0w0aF

>>53675122
last time i checked they were still allowed on /d/ but forbidden on /aco/.

>>53675423
I don't and I don't think so, but I'm just one man sailing along this sea of shit.

has anyone made any half decent 40K CYOAs?
just wondering

>>53675423
You get to spam art you think looks cool, you get to contribute and it's always fun to see what others can make out from random pictures.

>>53675316

I fully support most of what you are doing, but you don't have nearly that many points.

>Assuming C class for 339 and 993, that is 2 points
>B and A class portals plus cataclysm costs 10, for a total of 12
>Again, 10 more points for a total of 22
>Finally 10, bringing the final value to 32

You only get 10 points. also, there is no timeline 647, did you mean 67?

>>53675489
Do you like waifus?

>>53675499
Angel is making SoB CYOA but I don't know if it will have more stuff than picking your Order and Wargear.
There's couple jokish cyoas, I think. I don't have them saved.
I'll post one I liked as soon as I find it but I don't think there's any effort ones.

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Reposting latest version of Pervy Super Person!

>>53675557
thanks, i appreciate it, i planned to use them as a sort of starting point to integrate into a inqisiton story

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>>53675538
Indifferent. Most people don't do them well at all and I haven't seen a good waifu CYOA in some time, but it's possible for me to enjoy them. I will say, however, that picking an established character is infinitely better than designing someone just for yourself.

>>53675365

Reading the description, it doesn't seem like humanity is an all male race. I posit that Succubi killed their competition.

Thusly, females entering a B-Class portal to 339 would likely die, to match the local populace.

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Simple choice one

>>53675610
Story/Gameplay is not a dichotomy! It is the exact opposite of a dichotomy! Story is gameplay and gameplay is story...

>>53675620
Why bother making a cyoa when you're going to make one option clearly superior?

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>>53675499
>>53675557
>>53675604
I don't know if this will actually help much then.

YOU HAVE 5 COINS, EACH CHOICE COSTS 1 COIN.
FIRST PAGE DESCRIBES THINGS ALREADY ON ISLAND.
EVERY OTHER PAGE HAS THINGS YOU CAN BUY AND ENEMY TYPE THAT WILL ACTIVATE IF YOU OPEN THE NEXT PAGE.

DIE WELL.

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>>53675823

>>53675488
They are allowed yes but for some reason mods started to delete them

>>53675748
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>>53675801
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>>53675846
so G-man walks up to me, abducts me then sends me to hell......mother fucker at least i got to be an astartes

You could probably make ok cyoa just by lifting the character creation from Dark Heresy 1. Real problem is that pretty much any choice about "where you want to go" in 40k is death sentence.

>>53674677
>>53674769
Seriously? Open notepad or something and jot down your notes, then mess around with graphics. use a handheld recorder or get a recording app for your phone. Use sticky notes...

I WANT MORE CYOAS

>>53676021
Give me an idea for a CYOA

>>53676057
Not!Amber/Nobilis CYOA

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>>53661400
Demon lord seeking adventurers to help bring peace to this frozen peninsula, the order of symmetry opens its arms to all and promises grand rewards.

>Followers:
Spymaster (1)
Diplomat (1)
Merchant (1)
Apprentice (1)
Guild master: Masonry (1)
Harem (1)
Cook (1)
Blacksmith (1)
Master worker: Miner (1)
Cleric (1)
Cultist group (1)
Bard (1)
Captain of the Guard (1)
Squad of guards (x3)
Ranger (1)
Unit of hunters (x2)
Knight (1)
Troop of cavalry (x2)
Demon warrior (x2)
Succubus (1)

>Complications:
Cult of the Sea (+1 coin)
Monsters (+1 coin)
Coup (+2 coin)
Dark riders (+2 coin)
Thieves’ guild (+1 coin)

>Housing:
Fortified castle (+4 military coin)
>Domain:
Tundra
>Advisor:
The Priestess

>Perks:
Cult (1)
Study (1)
Gold (1) (+4 coin)
Demonic magic (1)
Immortality: Demonic form (1)
Intimidation (free)

>>53676057
a final fantaisy style adventure with a monster hunter style lore
in a setting with flying islands and airships

>>53676057
a tried and true idea, why not come up with your own?

I'm joking. why not you have to try and have a secret attack force, on one side and mutants or insert super powered guys here

>>53676057
watch all the gachimuchi new year's compilation videos and make something based off those

>>53675577
Holy shit that update is amazing.

>>53676106
this is a good idea
someone make it
and don't forget the waifus

>>53676057
Yuri waifu CYOA
You must cuztomize yourself (whether or not you are already a girl) and your girlfriend.

>>53676185
It's perverted.

>>53676057
A elona+ based CYOA?

>>53676191
>>53676106
i realy love monster hunter's lore, and all these old ruins and all

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>>53676292

>>53676277
It's basically just 'humans used to rule the world yo, they enslaved and bred dragons to be their pack animals and soldiers. But then the dragons all somehow rose up despite being dumb animals and slaughtered all the humans until they were tribals. But then the Wyverians took pity on humans and taught them about living with nature and conservationist hunting and shit and now you have the present day."

>>53676185
Thank you! :)
>>53676249
Glad that bit came through. I waa worried it was too subtle :)

>>53676090
That's a horrible idea, or maybe it isn't, I don't know who Amber nor Nobilis are.

>>53676106
Sounds cool. Reminds me of FF12 with the airships.

>>53676119
>why not come up with your own?
>I'm joking.
Don't scare me like that, bro.

>>start working on my first CYOA
>have a cool idea but don't flesh it out, instead I focus on making the image appealing
>the image starts become really fucking beautiful
>forgot the idea I had for the CYOA

>why not you have to try and have a secret attack force, on one side and mutants or insert super powered guys here

That's a pretty cool idea. The setting would be Earth, either modern day or during the cold war with the Soviet building those mutants/super humans to get an edge over the US, the mutants escape and you're tasked with hunting them down and killing them before they flee the area. If you fail the Soviet nukes Chernobyl and blames a nuclear reactor failure to cover it up.

>>53676191
What kind of waifus would you want? How many to choose from and how many should you be able to pick? Would the party you fight with be your waifus? Or would you be "the player" who chooses a team of waifus to fight for you without you actually being on the ground and fighting with them?

>>53676245
Would be kinda cool if you have to balance what trait to give yourself and your waifu and what traits your waifu wants you to have.

>>53676256
What's elona+ for something?


You're all giving me really cool ideas for CYOAs, keep them coming. I'm writing down a list with ideas to use.

>>53674681
>Rax(2)
Someone have to put the little shits in their place, right?
>Jacket(4)
Halo +1; Success -1; Deviant +1
>Bainiac(6)
Success +3; Deviant -1
Strong body, strong mind. The 2 free subjects is a very cool bonus.
>P.E.(1)
Halo +1; Success +1
>Chemistry(0)
Halo +1
>Biology(0)
Deviant +1
>Math(0)
Halo +1
SCIENCE!!!
... and P.E.
>Study Club(0)
They have to relax. If they are so worried about their studies I can give some help.
>Jocks(0)
Maybe with the right approach they will do what I want. I know some ways of dealing with people like this.
>Final say(6)
Halo +2; Deviant +1
Sometimes people cheat, sometimes they have a very bad day.
>Maid(1)
The last solution to the jock problem.
>Educated(6)
Success +3
>Friend(4)
Halo +2

Halo= 8
Success=6
Deviant=2
2 student free points:
>Lilliam
>Patricia
Making good students even better students is easier than making bad students good students. Not a pedo btw.

>>53676057
Chivalric Order builder

I've been gone a week, anything cool come out?

>>53676425
Yeah, A Deus Vult CYOA by tookhar where you use your sword to penetrate deep into demon girls and witches

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Comfy cyoas?

>>53676460
There's another one that's about purifying demons with love.

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>>53676460
Disgusting.

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Haven't posted this in forever.

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>>53676517

Post it fag.

>>53674681
Going full fetish. Mirelia, because working with cute female students is always fun. (1)

Unearthly, beautiful, and commanding make me a top-tier leader of students, and Braniac describes how I already am. (25/26... Already???)

Biology is what I teach in real life. Art and Drama are both fun, and I actually did my concentration in VAPA so I'll use my Brainiac bonus there. (2/28)

Cooking club seems fun.

Quiet dorms seem super comfy, and I like the notion of being able to administer spankings as routine punishment.

That leaves me one point over, I think I'm going to discard the point limit because it seems way too low, but first of all I'll balance it out with Cheeky.
Having someone take sleeping pictures in my dorm is a relatively minor offense, but it's still somewhat improper behavior since it's done without consent. To catch the perpetrator I'll put up my own cameras throughout the dorm. One in each room and in the bathrooms as well as the hallways and common areas, and I'll put them in my classrooms too, which means the stage for drama and the greenrooms where makeup and changing occur. For art that means nude models will be recorded, but for biology it doesn't mean anything special really.

Educated also fits my background, and Friend is something that's generally true. More importantly, Final Say is actually pretty much necessary to teach effectively. Having admin look over your shoulder even on such little things as test scores is going to hobble anyone's ability to teach. This should grant Success instead of Halo.

Halo 3(7)
Success 5(8)
Deviant 4(8)

Trisha seems like she'd be in my cooking club. Lillian probably fits into my bio class just fine. None of the others really stand out as spectacularly relevant, but they're going to be in my classes so I should get to know them.

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>>53676319
that's oversimplification, i just realy like the art style of the ancient civilisation's ruins

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>>53676498

>>53676460
I said cool Tok,

>>53676517
Wait really? That actually sounds kinda cool. Do you happen to have it or it's name?

>>53676536
In all of my classes, I'm going to help my girls get more comfortable with my body. In drama, they'll need to change costumes in front of each other, so that makes things easier. I don't have control over P.E but I can recommend practices for there too. In art class, they'll need to be models in turns, although nude modeling isn't the only thing we'll do, but it seems worthwhile to have one or two days a week on that, and then everyone gets a turn or two as a model. If there's an issue of kids being made fun of over this, I can even require the whole class to be nude in the name of fairness. I can also use students as models when we cover human sexuality and health in Bio as well, and I can let them know that it's healthy to let the vagina "breathe" by being uncovered most of the time, which is true, and thereby encourage them to go nopan most of the time. I can also encourage them to go bra-less, since it's pointless and uncomfortable when they have anything but huge boobs anyway, and subtly suggest that they eschew vaginal penetration and masturbation in favor of oral and anal. Since I'm also in charge of a dorm, I can allow and encourage sapphic sleepovers while keeping things from getting out of hand. If they do go over the top, I can use my cameras to detect that and put a stop to it with spankings. With my build ignoring point costs, I can even assign something like anal stretching as a long-term homework assignment in Health and hand out plugs of increasing sizes, and then supervise their use in the dorm.

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>>53676527

>>53675524
Those were all just ideas.
Notice that each possible scenario costs 10 points or less.

>>53676535
>>53676546
My internet is too busted right now to post it.

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>>53676566

Nice roll faggot.

>>53675616
I think it's fair to say the succubi are part of the local populace and thus human women would turn into succubi.
The same for abhumans.

>>53676566
Just tell me the name and I can get it from the drive though senpai

>>53676595
Crusader's Companion.

>>53676106
>>53676191
i want this too

>>53674836
Money 1. I can make in two months enough to live for a year, why would I need any more than that?
Health, tiers 1 and 2 to be fully immortal and regenerate. (3/4)
Safety tier 2 (2/6)
Enjoyment, ability, and home seem redundant since money allows those needs to be satisfied mundanely.
Love 2 seems like a good ability. I might grow to resent it in time, but it will afford me some companionship anyway. (2/8)
I have lots of points left, so Tier 1 and 3 soul, allowing me to spread my seed and to travel across universes via death.

>>53674767

A-class Portal
>Timeline #444
Sounds like a nice place to call home as a guy

B-class Portal
>Timeline #845
Minotaur fun times

C-class Portals
>Timeline #308
Play with Cow-girls
>Timeline #339
For succubus loving
>Timeline #632
Last man on Earth, can I make sons?
>Timeline #999
Bring food and loving, most popular guy

>>53676609
Ah isn't in the drive, and I was going to post it. Thanks anyways

>>53675142
Quazimodo gets friendzoned so hard in the Disney movie it's not funny. Girl goes off with handsome guard dood.

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>>53676329
>What kind of waifus would you want?
A kind and sweet white mage or whatever the primary healing class is.

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>>53676609
>>53676517

>>53676685
Happens in the book too. Only difference is that the guard guy is a cunt and doesn't get any pussy either.

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>>53676717

>>53675748
You might as well make star go supernova after first day, it's not like it will affect chance of survival in any way.

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>>53676736

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>>53676752
mystery box

>>53676672
I'll have to take another look at the Health tiers.
I suppose regeneration and immortality go hand in hand, although it isn't what I intended, only that wounds received get regenerated. And immortality was more of a cells stuck in stasis kind of thing.

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>>53675577
I have a question about Super Ego in the description it say it's a copy of you but it's referred to with male pronouns only. So what's it's gender if your not male yourself?

Also can you fuck it?

>>53675610
>Horrible Genre Mix
>Implying that Dark Messiah of Might & Magic, and Arx Fatalis aren't 10/10 games
>Implying that Vampire: The Masquerade – Bloodlines isn't GOAT

>>53676750
The warrior who acts out of honour cannot fail. His duty is honour itself. Even his death - if it is honourable - is a reward and can be no failure, for it has come through duty. Seek honour as you act, therefore, and you will know no fear.

If your life is given in service to the Emperor, your death shall not be in vain.

Now go, brother, and die well.

>>53676850
they were made by more than two people, though

>>53676794
It's a voice in your head. How are you gonna fuck that?

>>53676873
Autofellatio?

>>53674814
Occultist
Silver tongue

Cassandra
Hammerstein
Mrs Marple

Catacombs

>>53676794
the entire point of the cyoa is to fuck things so you can find a way

>>53676717
I'll take Qarinah and Mara. They're really cute, and the author has really good taste for using those pictures.

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>>53676891

>>53677112
It's not gay if the balls don't touch

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>>53672458

Sentient/sapient companion AI waifu to manage all the systems.

>>53674836
Choice of Amnities CYOA: (+12)
>Money: Tier 1
>Health: Tier 2
>Safety: Tier 2
>Enjoyment: Tier 1
>Ability: Tier 1
>Love: Tier 2
>Soul: Tier 3
Good CYOA.

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>>53676518

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>>53677147
>that artist

Construction equipment waifu cyoa when?

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>>53677211

>>53677147
But anon machines and humans can't love each other that's forbidden love!

>>53677234
Forbidden love is the sweetest.

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>>53677230

>>53676717
Iezabel and Hecate

Isn't Sor-Nir's ability just a worse version of Hecate?

>>53677211
ho shit yes
also pls gib source

>>53672458
>>53677147
The ALICE system from Gundam whatever is precedent for this btw.

>>53676925
Make a clone and have it go to sleep then go into it's dreams and fuck them there.

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Okay question here, how does /tg/ feel about descriptions on a choice? Would you prefer it being summarize or get more details on the choice you're receiving? I was planning on having long ass explanations on the first few pages and make the choices more simplified later on.

>>53674677
>not writing your idea and choices before working on layout and visuals
You're just setting yourself up for a disaster

>>53677320
Yes. If you don't explain it properly you'll have tons of questions to answer after you post it.

>>53677320
Long ass explanation is preferred on waifus and companions since it gives them personalities. Short descriptions on weapons, places to live and equipment.

>>53677340
Yeah, I know I fucked up, but hindsight is 2020.

>>53674756
Wait, what? Are you sure?
Uh, I don't know how I am to explain finding my waifu and moving slightly forward in my hermeticism-based occult training now.

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>>53677147
>>53677234
>own a decent size, pilotable war machine of death
>somehow end up with a Ara~ Ara~ milf type intelligence manginng the systems
>late to your mercenary pilot bay one day, still hung over from celebratory drinking previous night
>distant stomping turns into your small prefab wall being burst in as a familar robotic eye peers in
>"Are you okay, sweetie? You didn't stop on by and I was so worried for you!"
>you grip your pillow tigher around your head, trying to drown up the inccesent nagging over your mechs loudspeaker and your increasing headahce
>"If you're not feeling well, you should have told me! You need to take care of yourself better, hun! I have just the thing, give me a moment!"
>fear grips you as you realize you very small kitchen is in danger of being destroyed by her clumsily large mech hands trying to cook you one of her "signature home made recipes", again

FUND THIS

>>53677320
you can also try keeping it simple and adding a section with more detailed explanations at the end of your cyoa

>>53677207
p accurate desu

>>53677362
How about on the world or lore itself? Like relationships on other countries, the economy, social unrest, etc. I find that many don't usually elaborate about that, but at the same time I don't want people to get bored or skip by the wall of text.

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>>53677282
artist is astg

>>53677420
thanks kind sir

>>53677207
Is god such a yandere because she won't even let you believe in other gods?

>>53674836
Isn't getting points to buy HALF of all the avilable choices is kinda op?

>>53675423
They have the advantage of involving people and entertaining them somewhat with the final form being at least somewhat dependant on their contributions, but I find the concept kind of stale and boring by now - it was fun few first times but now that there are over a dozen of those things, the lack of coherent setting, randomness of the choices, no cohesiveness in the themes - all make me stop caring.

>>53677471
Yep.

Also she'll make you her super-hero-legend-dude and then decide to kill you without warning.

>>53677543
for not showing your love by cutting off a part of your son's dick*

>>53677554
Well it'd be her son too, doesn't she get a say?

>>53677582
>her son too
Only metaphorically speaking.

>>53677499
I have no idea what the adequate amount of points I should allocate are. I was thinking around 9-12. You could chose half of the Tier 3 amenities but I think Tiers 1 and 2 are still as desirable as tier 3 amenities are.

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anyone here read Mother of Learning? What spells should a MoL CYOA have in addition to the following:

simulacrum, fireball, invisibility, force field, mending, teleportation, gate, privacy barrier, water barrier, magic missile, mind blank, soul awareness, transformation, soul protection, mental shield, locate person, ward scanner, magic suppression ward, animate firebird, create zombie, soul sight,

>>53677591
>Not knocking up god
What are you, gay?

>>53677412
Do it. I'll read it if the setting's interesting. If not, I won't even play the CYOA. Though it's not like I won't play it if everything else is good, but a good setting will get you to think what you'll do past just picking your choices.

>>53677412
>I find that many don't usually elaborate about, but at the same time I don't want people to get bored or skip by the wall of text.

That is true, but I think you can keep people interested in choices with a lot of text you should make fewer choices, so instead of 6 or even 10 countries to pick from you give the player maybe 4 options. It gives much less variety but you can make the choices feel much more meaningful that way if that's your goal.

I think countries deserve more text than stuff like a sword/pistol since a country's laws in regards to machines, slavery, magic (especially the less 'good' magics such as necromancy and mind control) gives it much more flavor and interest.

So yeah, for countries I think you should have more text rather than less. Just try to keep all countries on 1 page.

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>>53677234
>not wanting to cuddle with cute robot girls
you filthy sodomite

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WIP from two months ago, anyone got the complete version?

>>53676319
what? MH has no story

>>53677738
Author hasn't released one yet.

>>53677596
Mother?

>>53677740
Wrong.

>>53677789
Yes, son?

>>53677789
that's not a spell, anon.

It's a time loop story. The title comes from the expression "repetition is the mother of learning."

>>53677797
Right.

>>53677412
If you have walls of flavor text, bold the important gameplay mechanics, especially if they're intermingled. That seems important. Also, see if you can rephrase your lore to fit into choices and how they are presented, instead of having a big flavor wall then tiny mechanical choices.

>>53675780
ANYONE WHO SIDES WITH THE NIGHTMARE CALLERS IS EVIL
EVIL
EVIL
EVIL

>>53676794
Male pronoun was for simplicity. If you're not male, replace them with female pronouns

>>53677906
This again? get out of here defender

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>>53677714
What if I want to cuddle giant cute robot girls?

>>53677906
>Not convincing your sisters to try and contact the Defenders so you can assassinate the evil leaders of humanity and make peace.

>>53677906
I don't think there's much of a choice here. You're just with whatever side you happen to start with.

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>>53678040
Oh I'll assimilate them

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Did that one anon who said he was going to make an everyday object waifu cyoa ever get started on that?

>>53677593
Yeah, i guess it's alright

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>>53674756
When will you get banned?

>>53676262
There's hardly a difference between the first and third options. You get to live whatever story you want.

Option two, while cool, sucks absolute ass in the long run.

>>53677766
Inshallah it will come.

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>>53675780
>Adaptations: Allure (Love Slave), Vitality (Instant Heal), Broodmother (Painless), Possession (Body Hop)

>Unit Types: Dragon, Infiltrator, Infiltrator, Lieutenant, Dragon

Soon, this world will be ours, and those who damned us to this fate will give it to me willingly.

>>53674767
Does this come from the same place that did the original or is it some random expansion

>>53678345
>from the same place

whatdoyoumean

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>>53675577
Name: The Conqueror

Choose both
Villain
Heroic
Scrawny

Body gender type
-Female
Body Features
-Breasts - Flat
-Ass - Petite
-Penis - Huge
-Eye Color - Red
-Head Hair - To ass
-Body Hair - Bald
-Hair Color - White
-Voice - Smooth
-E-Storage - Balls

Restricted Infusion - Vaginally
Restrained Donations
Enhanced Production
Hypno‐Junk
Sticky Situation
Edging Amplification
Forced Denial
Sharing is Caring
Reabsorption
Controlled Release
Waste‐Not
Elastic Capacity
Nutrilicious Output
Super Swimmers - Reversed - Buttplug
Coming Apart
Perpetual
Generator
Seed Bearer
Power Leak

Butt Plug of Power
Ring of Erasing
Super Threads

Rings of Chastasia

The Milkmaids:Adversaries
Barbara Sidekick‐No‐More:Adversary
The Mountaineer:Adversary
Andromeda the Amazon:Nemesis
The Trupta:Adversaries
The Keeper:Nemesis
Doctor Robotica:Adversary
Lily:Adversary
Super Ego:Ally+Adversary
The Galver Suit:Ally
Goo‐You:Ally

Beautifully Contagious
Elemental War - Shadow
Wealthy Philanthropist
Opulent Core
Magical mCore
-Combat modifier
-Advanced Modifier
-Secure Modifier
-Transformer Modifier

Self‐Sustenance
Ageless
Adaptive Response
Thermal Immunity
Minor Enhancement
Enhanced Reflexes
Superior Musculature
Adaptive Muscle Memory
Rage/Beast Form
Super Strength
Super Speed
Enhanced Mind
Danger Sense
Astral Projection and Dream Walking
Super Grip / Wall Crawling
Flight
Shape Shifting
Density control
Vibration Emission
Teleportation - Buttplug
Matter Ingestion
Time Freeze - Buttplug
Tantalize
Get Sprung
Irresistible
Perfect Healing Factor
Mind Control
Absolute Physical Immutability
Absolute Mental Perfection
Magic Nullification

Me and my army of Amazons and Monster Girls shall take over the world.

>>53674836
>>53674867
Money 1
Health 2
Entertainment 1
Ability 1
Love 1 and 3
Soul 3

Just traveling the multiverse with my other half, learning everything there is to know and experiencing everything there is to experience.

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Is there a particular reason why this cyoa failed? It's been posted only once after it got released, and less than ten builds have been made.

Is it because there are too many words? It forces the player into an assigned role? The setting is vague? Or is it "just bad"?

>>53678629
It barely is a day old i am sure it would get reposted later

>>53678629
no feeling of accomplishment epilogue

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>>53678629
because it doesn't go for any actual setting

>>53678629
Picking normal classes feels kinda boring.

I think it's well done cyoa and there's certainly more to it than just classes but the first half of it is really boring subject.

>>53678629
It just doesn't strike me. I don't particularly fantasize about going back to school, particularly as a failing student. It doesn't pique my curiosity either, which means I don't feel much interest in exploring the setting. It just doesn't have a hook for me.

>>53678629
It got a lot of comments the first day. Most CYOAs don't get reposted.

>>53678466
You picked Amazon and Monster girls as your Nemeses, that means they fight against you, not for you.

>>53678719
Plus most of the best classes have male teachers, so you can't even get a good teacher harem going.

>>53678629
I have no desire to imagine myself back in a mundane school, certainly not as a failed student. I had enough of that in real life.

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>>53678629
>this cyoa failed?
Failed? CYOAs can fail?
I thought it was fantastic. It's a unique idea and it's top tier comfy with an excellent selection of friends with diverse and interesting personalities and backgrounds.
Some of the items are really interesting and like nothing else I've ever seen in any other CYOA and the way that a vague sense of mystery and the supernatural is woven into a so many of the choices gives it a feeling of depth and breathes the perfect amount of life into an otherwise mundane setting.
It's a solid 9/10 in my opinion and the only thing keeping it from full blown 10/10 are a few spelling errors and some minor personal gripes that are more on me and my dumb tastes than any fault of the author.
Like how many of the teachers are into each other and one of the best ones is married. RIP in pieces Sensei Harem build.

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>>53674637
So I'm getting pretty close to finishing the airship CYOA with waifus but I need some minor help with weapons.

Since it has flintlock muskets in it is there any point in having bows and crossbows? Should I just have the muskets be rifles and make it more like ww1-tech level with airships and magic?

Would people want multiple melee weapon choices, I was thinking bastard sword - axe, dagger and 2hand sword, or is being able to be a pirate boarding other airships sound boring? How do I differentiate the various melee weapons?

What spells should I include? Stuff like fireballs or killing curses seem pointless since firebombs and rifles already do those things.

>>53678901
>Failed? CYOAs can fail?
IIRC kit basically thinks that if a CYOA doesn't get a brazillion* builds on the first day, it failed.

*) Hyperbolic exaggeration for comedic effect.

>>53678922
Nope. Pretty much the only thing your setting is gonna have is guns, rifles, knives, cutlass, and sabers. Not that kind of saber, though.

>>53678901
You should ask Kit if he wants to do a colab.

>>53678922
Just because they have muskets and shit doesn't mean they can't/won't use bows.
>How do I differentiate
Bladed/blunt and small/large or 1/2 handed. I suppose if you're larger you can use something 2 handed with 1 hand just fine.
>seem pointless
It's just more options. What happens when you run out of firebombs and shit?

>>53674767
Timeline 444, 45, 312, 993, 844, 13, 339
Wizards vs Demons vs Angels vs Aliens vs Uberwomensch vs Good ol' Humanity
Yeaahhhh

>>53676057
Slaves.

>>53675780
>all Nightmare Callers are young women
You've lost me.
I can handle the overwhelming up to the point of retardation edge when the CYOA uses it well and is otherwise okay but when it's not just edge but also someone's magical realm with even aesthetics being forced upon me, I am out.

>>53678629
Looking at this a little more, one problem is that I hate half the teachers. Kate is obsessed with the least interesting parts of poetry. Allan and Irons are arrogant pricks who think those who can't teach do. Mark is an empty suit and his class sounds awful. Miller just wants to pontificate. Nate doesn't want to teach. Vic is an ass. Holly has no idea what she's teaching. These are the kind of teachers that bored me to tears in middle school, because it felt like the entire thing was a pointless endeavor. Why would I want to repeat that experience?

>>53678629
I wouldn't call it a failure, it does the CYOA formula quite well. Don't measure CYOA success by how many replies you get, or how "forgettable" or reposted it is. A lot of really well-made CYOAs don't get much talk at all; people here just have very specific tastes. There are people here who genuinely believe that CYOAs must abide by certain formulae; for example, if there's no immortality option, some people (a very scant few) won't find a point in playing a CYOA.

I would say that the reason your CYOA didn't invoke a lot of discussion is because it's nothing really new, and doesn't bring much to the table. It's rather mild in every regard; there's hardly much wish fulfillment.

But again, don't judge your CYOA's qualities on being lackluster in these departments. Someone somewhere, including myself, enjoyed this CYOA and consider it precious. I rather like milder CYOAs and think that there should be things like this among all the fetish-bait and power-tripping "blockbuster" CYOAs we have.

>>53679010
> >all Nightmare Callers are young women
> You've lost me.
It's because the CYOA is the flipside of the coin for Beri's previously made Defenders of Humanity. Nightmare Callers are the enemy type listed in Defenders as "Fiendish Maiden".

>>53678629
Because summer school is that shitty thing that ruins the summers of idiots. So the cyoa doesn't really have great appeal from the start due to the subject matter.

>>53678629
>Is there a particular reason why this cyoa failed?
There's not, because it didn't. It's quite new and it just never became something to cause much stir but I recall people enjoying it quite much for the comfy, bittersweet, nostalgic style. So it's pretty good just not provocative so expect it to be something people will enjoy playing with, but won't really go crazy discussing or arguing about.

>>53678922
Isn't highly trained archer far more accurate than a musket?

>>53675780
>all nightmare callers are young women
DROPPED.

Why do so many CYOAs do this? It's dumb.

>>53679077
Alright. Now I at least know what's the reason for making it this way but I sadly still can't get myself to enjoy it at all. Thanks for explanation all the same.

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>>53679126
It's like you've never played a Beri cyoa before

>>53678629
I found it nice and it got answers.
Most reposters are either oldfags reposting the same ones or the authors themselves falseflagging as anons.

>>53679143
You're welcome, and I hope you encounter other timewasters (CYOA or otherwise) that're more to your liking.

>>53679168
tbf I also hate the whole "hey you, [nondescript male]" shit so...

>>53679126
See >>53679077 for the why in this particular case.

>>53679182
Genderless cyoa when?

>>53679203
Yeah, this particular example is at least more sane than the others. If he really wanted to stick with it, it would have been much better to just say you were a girl desu. Instead of, you know, giving you dysphoria.

>>53679204
There's a tonne.

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>>53679204
Maybe you should consider switching to superior language that doesn't have gendered words. Like finnish.

>>53679117
Highly trained archer will be not only more accurate but on average more effective than a random guy with a musket.
First firearms were kinda shit, propagated mostly because they could be used kinda-sorta with just some basic training and could punch through armor but till they evolved and became something closer to what we see as firearms today, they weren't a mainstay weapon and in places like China, bows were still in regular use hundreds of years later after invention of first firearms.

>>53678629
>teachers
Long descriptions but barely any useful or "fun" information for the player. Why would I care about Applebee's life? How does it affect my "adventure"?
The author created relationships that are interesting for him (and the teachers), not for the player. I don't give a fuck about Matthew's crush on Vic.
>time of the day
skippable
>classroom
skippable or class reliant - you either don't care about your choice or feel forced to pick it
>goodies
lots of words but only few of the options make your choice feel important.
>friends
Okay

Overall it's too unfocused. I know the author wants me to create my own story in his setting, but he's not giving me tools to do anything interesting.

>>53679010
>>53679143
Reminder that nobody cares what you don't like.

>>53679273
I do. I'd guess you do too ;)

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>>53679204
Not today

>>53679281
Not really, I don't care for whining. Y'all do the same shit with anything that gives you a vagina like your sorry ass is the High Lord God and the audience for every CYOA.

>>53679291
>I don't care for whining
I do. I think it's interesting, seeing what people like and why.
>and the audience for every CYOA.
But we are. We might not be who the author had in mind, but we are their audience.

>>53679273
Reminder that I still can say so and say why, as well as I hope that this will be a reminder that you're wrong - people actually care enough to often explain why or otherwise counter a point (or in case of CYOA makers, sometimes even take it into consideration for future works).
I wouldn't know why the choice of night callers having to be women, for example, if that anon wouldn't tell me why.
Don't be an ass.

>>53679284
I seriously don't understand why whoever made that cyoa made it, and I doubt that person knows why they made it either.

>>53679308
>We might not be who the author had in mind, but we are their audience.
wtf i pity authors now

>>53678901
>CYOAs can fail?

Some think a cyoa is a failure when nobody saves it. The only way to know that someone saved your cyoa is seeing it posted here.

>>53679340
Not an argument.

>>53679338
Fun.

>>53679340
We pity ourselves enough for that. Folk such as the one you're replying to are the reason I've hit an impasse on creating content.

>>53679346
Anon, if you think that anon was trying to make an argument, you may have autism.

>>53679381
Dip.

>>53679308
No you're not. You aren't even remotely the target audience. You're a random faggot playing a basketball game who hates basketball then saying that basketball games suck.

>>53679365
Not surprised.

>>53679338
I just consider it the rare, praise-worthy kind of shitposting that's fun for people involved. The fetishes may be bad and not really appealing even to many of /d/eviants due to how niche they are, but I still felt amused by it.

>>53679338
Might've been something along the lines of the author having the idea, telling it to someone else, and the other person telling the author to do it.

>>53679341
It is a little discouraging when you spend a lot of time working on something and people discuss it very little, but I figure that's just how media in general works now, especially with so much competition. And I think of all the cyoas I love that I've never commented on publicly, so if worse comes to worst I can just imagine people do the same for mine.

>>53679365
Weak.
>>53679396
>target audience
lrn2reed

Anyone who reads it is part of the audience, and they are, surprisingly, allowed to not like things.

>>53676967
>the author has really good taste for using those pictures.
You don't know me well apparently. I think that's for the better

>>53679415
Anyone outside of the target audience is irrelevant.

And you can not like things if you want. The issue is that you're being a whiny bitch.

>>53679434
>Anyone outside of the target audience is irrelevant.
Wrong.
>The issue is that you're being a whiny bitch
Why's that anon? Is it too grating on your eyes?

>>53677267
Sor-Nir's martial art's are on par with Hecate's swordsmanship. It's just that Hecate really wants you to use those skills.

>>53679402
I don't think it's a bad cyoa, I just wonder how it came into being.
>>53679410
That makes sense

>>53679284
>waifu
>tiles
Really the only choice.

>>53675577
Question about Multi-Membered. If you already have one, the minimum is two--but if you start at zero, does that mean you can stay at zero and summon/unsummon at will? Want to make sure I'm not exploiting there.

>>53679204
あなた馬鹿ですか?

>>53679411
I have that bad habit too, I make like 80% ready builds for a lot of cyoas in my head but can never be arsed to put them on paper and finish them.
I guess I should comment on cyoas when they get reposted but I don't know how many times I can endure repeating "Hey, nice to see this again, thanks for posting it" before my soul shivers or everyone stops posting cyoas because they think people are being sarcastic when thanking.

>>53679434
lol quit being such a whiny bitch then

>>53679396
Reminder you prove yourself to be a pretentious little cunt if you think you decide who's the audience, especially given your contributions so far are whining about their whining. You're less constructive in your butthurt than they are and yet you try to judge them from position of superiority and then stir shit with everyone else. Sad.

>>53679365
Folks like that are why I quit creating content.

>>53679447
It's because you're a whiny bitch.

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>>53679338
Originally, I came up with it as an idea for fun, an experiment in how badly people wanted to get what they wanted, taking some real weird drawbacks.

The more I worked on it, the more I felt like I was making a mistake, but someone in the discord chat kept wanting me to finish it, so I did.

I'm not proud of what I've created, but hey, I finally finished it, and people got a few laughs out of it. And one guy from /d/ even found me on discord and told me it was one of his favorite cyoas so ¯\_(ツ)_/¯

>>53679461
The anon who took tile lover and lamia waifu with patterned scales was into something.

Personally speaking I don't give a shit about my audience and none of them are intended, go fuck yourselves.

>>53679465
はいです

>>53679462
>if you start at zero
I'm pretty sure you can't start at zero (since alternate discharge bits count as the baseline).

>>53679415
(You)

>>53679396
It starts becoming a shitty choice to continue making things when one looks at the cost/benefit ratio. Especially when one has learned enough to use the same skills to get paid.

>>53679447
Why would anyone make a CYOA for you?

>>53679483
Target audience and practical audience are different. I doubt people here make things for reddit, but reddit certainly ends up being part of the audience. But being part of the audience doesn't mean their preferences are going to be taken into account.

>>53679523
Nobody is paid to make CYOAs.

>>53679529
Why wouldn't they? They have before.

>>53679462
So, if your penis is your power source, your default min is 2.
If your power source is your vagina, then you have a minimum of 2 vaginas now, but you can still summon and unsummon penises in addition to additional vaginas.

>>53679447
>>Anyone outside of the target audience is irrelevant.
>Wrong.
You can't please everyone, therefore you must focus on pleasing a specific group, the target audience. Considering the opinions of people outside the target audience brings you back to trying to please everyone and therefore must not be done. Your opinions are therefore not only irrelevant, their actively detrimental.

>>53678629
Speaking for myself, I'm out of the age range for summer school (20s) and can't really fit myself into the CYOA as is. I'd need a section on...remaking myself in order to get the self-insert inspiration flowing.

>>53679284
holy fuck all the drawbacks are horrifying.

>>53679541
That reminds me of when someone wanted to pay TokHaar Gol to make a She-Hulk Waifu CYOA.

>>53679550
Prove it.

>>53679553
>You can't please everyone, therefore you must focus on pleasing a specific group,
The fuck do you think this is, some kind of customer service position?

EVEN assuming such a thing, what the author thinks has no bearing on what is and is not irrelevant.

>>53679568
Anon, did your mother have to deal with a lot of tantrums on your part?

>>53679541
Not what I said. The joy from making the thing goes to shit and so I look at the other benefits. There are none. So I take the stuff I've learned about graphic design and do that on the side for more cash.

>>53679484
I know that feeling. I'll probably push out the last one or two projects and then stop because the joy and enthusiasm for doing any more is gone.

>>53679522
Ah, I somehow missed the Alt Discharge section and feel dumb, thankee.

>>53679555
You get immortality for having floppy knees, put your chin up and think of England

>>53679606
>The joy from making the thing goes to shit
I, too, derive all my joy from people validating me on the internet.

>>53679568
>The fuck do you think this is, some kind of customer service position?
You're certainly acting like you're talking to the customer service line but if you don't like that let me provide an alternate chain of logic.
You're not getting paid to do this, therefore everyone else's opinion about you creations don't matter, make what you want and fuck everyone else.

>>53679555
Ah, but what about them combinations? Dick Nipples + Lipples = ??? Mind you I'm from /d/, I think I know the answer to that, but my mind seems to have some pretty good self defence mechanisms.

>>53679649
>You're certainly acting like you're talking to the customer service line
Nuh-uh.

I'm just a guy who finds other people's opinions interesting.
>You're not getting paid to do this, therefore everyone else's opinion about you creations don't matter, make what you want and fuck everyone else.
True. But, anon, what does that have to do with anything?

>>53679540
>Target audience and practical audience are different.
Not in this case when CYOA are made and posted for CYOA enthusiasts in CYOA general threads on chinese cartoon message board. Given it's a work based of the earlier work of if not also created by a regular here, even if the person hoped that only some small section of other regulars will be interested.
That aside, it's naive to think that only the ones we want will check our CYOA and comment on them and even if some people dislike some of our work on the basis of things we don't mind or chosen intentionally to be that way, it's still a feedback if they can present why they dislike certain thing and their reasons are anything more than just random tantrum of "I don't like it cause I don't". At least that's how it is in my case - I am not creator of that particular CYOA.

>>53679678
>Mind you I'm from /d/,
So am I you sick fuck but I'm not into my fetishes being applied to *myself*.

>>53679630
Oh my gosh! You too? We have sooooo much to talk about!

>>53679540
>doesn't mean their preferences are going to be taken into account.
Being part of the target audience doesn't mean your preferences are going to be taken into account. Who said the author's going to see your criticism? Who said they'd care?

>>53679418
Those two pictures are ones I posted, so I was jokingly complimenting my own taste.

>>53679702
Thank you.

>>53679725
wow way to ruin the joke fag

>>53679690
What ever gave you the impression that all CYOAs are created for every little entitled, underage shitposter in this thread?

>>53679750
Whatever gave you the impression it mattered?

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Does this make two or three shit endings to threads today? I don't know whether to count the one that got deleted.
I'd say I'm posting to help you guys reach bump limit, but we're pretty much already there, so I'm just posting for fun I guess.

>>53679739
You're welcome.

>>53679696
I'm not suggesting taking any of the options anon, just joking about how horrifying they can be. I can't even finish a cyoa build before I am overcome with the question of "but why though?"

>>53679690
>I want to make cute CYOAs where you become a girl
>Anon insists that he is the target audience, not other people who like girly things.
>He says he hates it then stomps his feet demanding I make something catered to him.
>For free
>He thinks anyone gives a shit about what he says.

>>53679717
>Who said the author's going to see your criticism? Who said they'd care?
Because they're targeting that specific audience. The only way they wouldn't care is if the their target audience is themselves and they happened to release it publicly without caring either way.

>>53679765
If nothing matters, why do you think you matter?

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>>53679766

>>53679766
Post full one next thread. Looks cool.

>>53679684
>What does other people's opinions being irrelevant have to do with other people's opinions being irrelevant?

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>>53679786

>>53679678
>Dick Nipples + Lipples = ???
That's explained under the description for the latter.

>>53679649
>You're not getting paid to do this, therefore everyone else's opinion about you creations don't matter, make what you want and fuck everyone else.
Sure, but when someone's creation is posted in a thread dedicated to posting and discussing creations like theirs, you have no choice but to understand that also people who aren't ones the work was made for will check it out and voice criticism.
You may disregard their opinions if their reasoning or arguments don't convince you but to claim no one cares or should voice criticism is silly and a good way to prove yourself wrong, as it happened right now when it turned out that there are people who give a shit about people giving (or not) a shit.

If you're the one who made that CYOA you can ponder or disregard the criticism but dont' expect it won't happen. And if you're not the creator of that CYOA, well, sucks to be you, you only made yourself look bad.

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>>53679805
>>53679797
We're on Page 1, I'm gonna post it right now. We're not falling off for a while, unfortunately.