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Author Hijack Edition

Prior Thread: >>53579525
Archives and other resources: https://pastebin.com/vrqYhnpu
Alright kids, time for an update on Traveller.

Currently we have 48 slots for the final completed companion PDF to be filled in, to be fair I'm going to take everything, narrow it down to 150 characters and from there we're gonna have a vote to see who gets in. Character Collecting will be done June 20th at the stroke of midnight. From there I'll be working on the 2.0 which will include a Otate moral system and a few other additions. Everything not put in will be stored for future use. As will anything submitted from after that point. I'm also taking any suggestions so feel free to drop me a line.

God speed anons.
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>>53587406
And the Companion page.
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Put me in the cyoa you dumb muzzie
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>>53587503
Don't you talk to my wife that way you dirty heathen.
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Hey, check it out. I finally chose the pics to use. To clarify, you can grab three of these bad boys, though it'll be a blind pick until I write stuff for them maybe tomorrow.
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>>53587406
>moral
Like alignment?
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>>53587548
Leaking Dragoness Spare Parts.
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>>53587548
I like how you have a colorized version of that Fallout 4 picture
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>>53587406
How big of a change will 2.0 be?
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>>53587548
Blinds: Leaking, The Law, Spare Parts
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>>53587406
>love making traveler builds
>turning them into the picture template is a pain in the ass

life is suffering
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>>53587406
How many characters have you collected so far?
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>>53587548
>That skeleton
WHAT'S IN HER PANTS
THOSE AREN'T BONES
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>>53587548
>NEET Wish Fulfillment
>Contemplating Peacefulness
>Feline Affection
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Anyone remember this one?
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>>53587933
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>>53587954
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>>53587980
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I found myself inspirated to make a CYOA, however I have some troubles regarding the point distribution. How do you handle them in your CYOAs? What are the mechanics you found yourselves defaulting to?
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>>53587406
The fact that you'll continue to save builds even after the Allies Extended pdf is done is gonna to keep me coming back and re-reading your CYOA and thinking up new builds forever. Thank you for making Travelers Tale and all the work you put into it.
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>>53587406
Should I feel bad abkut being completely uninterested in traveller's tale?
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>>53587548
>A valentine to die for
>Very serious debate
>Littlest Girl
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>>53588010
KISS. Keep it Simple Simon....or Stupid, whichever you prefer.

Ask yourself "Do I need points in this cyoa?" "Will it make the cyoa better or more indepth?"

Whatever you decide on points make sure that there are a few options to spend left over points on, if you're doing more then 1pt / option/tier. Nothing more annoying then having left over points and nothing to spend them on.

I liked the few I saw that were 1pt per tier with usually 3 tiers of powers/stuff. Also GiftedAnon did a good job with point spreads in his Gifted and Super Soldier (remake & original) cyoas. You can look at Tokhaar's dark elf slave one for a really bad and confusing way to do points.

Also you have to decide between universal points and points for various sections. More point types = more work for the player and can detract from the cyoa but can be necessary depending on how you've got various sections set up. e.g. points for items vs powers. etc..
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Actually forgot to add the last bit to the page I posted yesterday
>>53588010
One type of points for equipment/powers, one for personality/skills, probably.
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>>53588158
Actually, never mind, I copypasted the bit in the wrong place. I'll fix it when I remake the 2nd page
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>>53588010
Somewhat obvious advice incoming, but still needs to be restated. The system needs to match the...mood of your CYOA more than anything. High-point, high-math systems are fine (assuming you've the #crunch chops to pull it off), but only if you're setting out to make a mathy system. Extremely loose, low-# systems can be just as impactful and can give just as much inspiration for character building, but only if you've designed the system to do just that.

While my expertise is more in P&Ps than CYOAs, I think a lot of the same advice holds true. Hero system is great for creating a certain flavour of campaign--and building characters for it is great if you've got a calculator and some spreadsheets. FAE has basically no math, but can produce just as realized characters. Apocalypse World has an entirely different relationship between #s and players. You'll see very different campaigns coming out of each.

What sort of CYOA are you planning? And how do you want people to approach building a character for it?
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>>53587548
Baby dragoness, Pancaray, and... well, there's no obvious way to get a choice with big breasts in it, so I'll go with Contemplating Peacefulness.
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>>53587548
>not using the 'murica pic
Nigger.
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>>53587416
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>>53588158
Good fucking luck man, looking forward to your work.
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This cyoa is mandatory.
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>>53589545
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>>53587933
Remember it? Well, it does seem a little familiar
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>>53587548
blind picks: Feline Affection
VERY angry plant (gotta pick my suggestion)
and The Law
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>>53587548
>Spare parts
>Littlest girl
>Contemplating peacefulness
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>>53589580
>RichNEET Dragon

>Money
>Cornucopia
>The Princess
>Really Bitchin' Fitness Course
>Katana Collection
>Magic Artifact
>Smug Anime Faces
>Magical Leyline

>Strength 3
>Immortality 2
>Element 0; Cold
>Form 1
>Scales 3
>Extra Tail

>Manse
>Saber
>Butler
>Maid

>Public Unrest level 1
Manse negates this. Suck it.

>Lethargy
>Smug AI
>Miserable Families
>The Prince
>Otherking
>Wytch
>The Wizard
>Lancelot
>Josiah Jofag

I see no way I could possible lose out on this setup. Hell, I'll even let jofag crash at the pad. Their description doesn't say they're coming for the mask.
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¿∀pS
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>>53589895
You brilliant bastard.
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What's the appeal of waifu options in cyoas? Why is there never an option to bring your gf along instead?
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>>53590750
>3DPD
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>>53590750
Leave.
2D>3DPD
You should know this by now.
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>>53590750
Weak b8, back to normiebook
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>>53590750
Why would you bring your gf with you? Why can't you accept escapism?

Why do you bring your gf to a setting where she doesn't exist and you're not isekai'd?

If you loved your girlfriend so much why do the cyoa? If your girlfriend was so good why isn't she your waifu instead of your grilfriend, you hack.
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We need a sexual identification cyoa
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>>53590750
>>53590791
>What's the appeal of waifu options in cyoas?
>Why is there never an option to bring your gf along instead?
>If your girlfriend was good why isn't she your waifu instead of your girlfriend, you hack.
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>>53587933
Wizened Hag
Pseudodragon

The Spirit
The Winds

Detector
Breath Weapon (Lightning)
Sturdy
Telepathic

Sage

The Great Storm

It might be cool to help the old woman, as well as gain a great deal of knowledge for myself. She'll probably need a bit of protecting as well, which I can handle well enough. Of course, when the storm hits, who better to restore people's faith and hope than a lucky bronze sky dragon?
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>>53590750
I always take my significant other with me when the option is there in a CYOA.

If not I sometimes have her play it with me so we can pick a waifu together.
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>>53590750
i usually put that option there, the problem is that almost nobody here can take advantage of it
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>>53590791
>Why would you bring your gf with you? Why can't you accept escapism?

I know this is bait, but people with girlfriends or whatever it is they want to link sexual organs with still enjoy escapism too
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>>53589580
Is the base number of Boons 0?
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>>53590911
Do what I do, just give the person you want with you an entire build of their own, or even make it for them yourself, and then assume things work out so you meet up.
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>>53589895
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>>53587954
>all those fucking gw2 icons
dropped; this is way, WAY too distracting for me
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>>53587943
Eschew everything else, take mobile house and nighttime shades and I have the perfect excuse to stay over at any woman's place for the night.
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>>53587406
HOLD THE FUCKING PHONES
I JUST realized something.
SDA can't be BioWare or whateverthefuck...
He's Bethesda!
BetheSDA!
HOW did I not see that??
Played like a fiddle...
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Quick! Pick 10 cyoas that you want turned into a video game and by what developers.
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>>53591943
I want any SDA cyoa, but made by Illusion
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>>53591943
Dark God - Triumph Studios, written by Rhianna Pratchett, like Overlord was.
Star Dust, including Soldier of the Stars - Hideo Kojima
Time of Troubles - Paradox
Child of Metal - Double Fine
Kung Fu Cult - what used to be Bioware
Dominant - AliceSoft
Quiet - also Hideo Kojima
Supersoldier - Warren Spector
Necromancer - Obsidian
Solar Inheritance - Amplitude Studios
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>>53591943
Just off the top of my head I'd want Hero Academy by Atlus
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>>53591943
Obsidian doing Vampire King.

It'd be buggy and overly ambitious but then so are a lot of the games that I like.
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>>53590750
This is a /r9k/ colony, you're not allowed to have any real human contact here, let alone a girlfriend.
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>>53592493
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>>53591943
I'll give you 5.

Royal Revival by Spike Chunsoft
Star Dust by From Software
Pokemon Personified by Platinum Games
Traveller by Bethesda
Broquest by Wayforward or Zerolabs
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>>53592541
>Traveller by Bethesda
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>>53592535
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>>53592566
Done
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>cyoa gives you superpowers
>doesn't fix your obesity

SHINEEEEEEE, BAKAYARO!!
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>>53592640
>CYOA gives you super speed
>You're too retarded to stand and place, then vibrate yourself at a fast rate to shed off your fat.
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>>53592640
>cyoa makes you perfectly immortal
>eternally stuck as a fatty
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>>53592640
>he doesn't want to have super powers despite his weight
>he doesn't want to make the world grateful to a morbidly obese man
>he doesn't want to see people struggle with reconciling their contempt and admiration
>he doesn't want to become a hentai doujin main character
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>>53591943
Urban Unease and The Village
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>>53587548
>Highly Serious Debate
>Littlest Girl
>Spare Parts
I am contractually obligated to pick the fetish options.
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>>53592640
>>53592693
>>53592766
>>53592815
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=XaPzN2gD3PQ

>be obese
>refuse superpowers because you're obese
>some guy calls you and your family elephants
>can't catch him to punch him
>boy you sure wish you had those superpowers now
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>>53591943
War of the Zodiac Brides - Atlus
>>53592233
>Hero Academy by Atlus
mah nigga
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>>53592815
Honestly, people would love him. Fat guys don't get a lot of hate if they have a good personality, especially if they're funny. Wouldn't help him with the girls much, sure, but they wouldn't hate him.
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>>53592640
>what is shapeshifting
Become the little girl.
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>>53593784
But you're still ugly on the inside.
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>>53593801
Obesity isn't on the inside.
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>>53593832
it kind of is, at least in the majority of cases it's because of bad personal habits and general weakness of character
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>>53593059
Why are you tripfagging?
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>>53593880
because he's a faggot
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>>53587548
blind:

Spare parts, Baby dragoness, and...

I kinda want neet but then feline hmmm. oh then peacefulness.....

Ugh. Lets go with peacefulness. And I hope spare parts isnt about being a loli.
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Never Ever.
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>>53594282
Good.
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>>53594282
Also never ever urban fantasy from quiet anon
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>>53594282
Wait another month. It'll happen whether you like it or not.

Italics will force it on /cyoag/ like rape.
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>>53594282
Why do the Pokemon have to be personified?
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>>53594327
>reeeeeee new content reeeeeeee
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>>53594360
because waifus apparently
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>>53594360
Because cucking is always personal
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>>53594394
>cucking
Just because you annoyingly repeat something doesn't make it a meme or true.
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>>53594713
No, but it does mean he's autistic enough to argue it for 500 posts and crash the thread with no survivors. Sometimes you just gotta let it go.
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>>53594713
Just because you consistently deny something doesn't mean it's false.
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>>53594757
>Argue it for 500 posts and crash the thread with no survivors
Italics never done that though.
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>>53594761
Anon it doesn't work like that.
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>>53594788
He doesn't even need to post, his very existence does that.
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>>53594823
>>53594713
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>>53594824
Hol' up. So what you sayin' is? Italics has ascended SDA n' level of smug and shitposting without being around and shit?

He our God King of Shitposting?
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>>53594788
No, but the r9k contingent who have decided he's the normichrist have.
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>>53594904
>He our God King of Shitposting
The fact that you haven't realized this only proves that.
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>>53594905
So what you're saying is, only normalfags like cuckshit.
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>>53594968
Being opposed to adultery is the most fucking normie thing possible.
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>>53595101
Not in 2017 it isn't.
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>>53593856
>general weakness of character
Gluttony is not a general weakness, it's a specific one. The same goes for being unathletic And it's questionable if it really makes sense to blame an epidemic on personal weakness, rather than human instincts being a poor match for the environment of abundance we now live in.
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Alright, so instead of working on my existing WIP projects today, I made an entirely new CYOA instead. I hope you like it anons
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>>53595191
I was originally going to make the War of the Elves a CYOA of its own, but I might just make it DLC for this one if people enjoy it well enough.
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>>53595191
What else have you made? What are you working on now?
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>>53595189
character is what triumphs over the instinct or falls prey to it, so yes it makes perfect sense
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>>53595220
what does leenya requires?
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>>53595328
I'm not the author, but common sense would dictate that she requires you having an Aquatic beast
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>>53595356
I know but it would be good if he updated it without that error
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>>53595328
>>53595356
FUUuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuu

yes she requires A for Aquatic, fixed now. Thanks anons, if you spot any more omissions please let me know

>>53595234
Skyrider (which sucked) and Blackstone School of Dungeoneering which hopefully sucked a little less. Working on Cthulu mythos gang fights and a party building exercise.
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>>53595101
Dunno about normal people, but healthy people don't obsess over someone else getting off on their spouse sleeping around. They either partake and enjoy themselves, or go do something else and also enjoy themselves. Either way, they're not negatively affected by someone else's sexual fetishes. That's why they stay healthy.

Me, I get off on making builds for CYOAs. For example, I like to imagine I'm a happy Slimegirl ambassador.
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>>53595422
Become a slime.
Combat effective
Cleaning Agent
Romantic
Tentacled
Scalable Minor
Cohesive
Perpetual Flavor (rapeseed oil)
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>>53595220
Curse-eater Cat, Hunter, Lisette, Grail
The cat negates Lisette's curse, and her apprehension for it will probably subside when she realizes we don't mean her harm. Meanwhile, we act as support for Grail to make his hunting much easier, and are rewarded for the increase in efficiency with whatever share of the profit he feels is fair. Lisette seems like a good sort, so I doubt Grail will have a problem with her. None of us are really equipped to deal with any of the events (maybe Lisette could get an unlucky hit on the Dragonrider but that is pushing it) so we just have a small scale inconsequential existence.
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>>53595422
>healthy people don't obsess over someone else getting off on their spouse sleeping around
That entirely depends on your personal opinion of 'healthy'. There are definitely large swathes of people who are highly judgmental and live a great live.
Also, just because you're not directly affected by something, doesn't mean that you can't get angry/disappointed/whatever about it. If you think that 'healthy' people only care about things that pertain directly to themselves, you're some kind of hermit or out of your mind.
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>>53587580
Similar but that's more then a tad small and far too black and white compared to the systems I've had in mind.

>>53587675
Pretty big with everything getting overhauled or at least revamped.

>>53587503
What is the magic word kafir?

>>53587763
You don't have to fill out a full sheet, in fact I appreciate just text at this point with a possible image. Converting back and forth has been a pain.

>>53587805
At this point I'd say about 700 ish. I stopped counting at 640.

>>53588039
Thank you anon, you and everyone else in this general has made TT worth it for me.

>>53588073
______No you shouldn't, people enjoy what they will and you shouldn't feel bad about it.____
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Guy, guys; I did an anime version of my ultimate waifu CYOA!
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>>53595770
(Original, baka gaijin western version).
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>>53595466
As companions, I pick:

Gamer Slime - to push me into mastering my fine manipulation. Tentacled should help here.
Lewd Slime - for hanky panky, and getting comfortable with my new body in sexual situations.
Blue Slime - bro (sis?) material.
Sports Slime - again, to master my new body.

Basically, I'll chill and get used to my new state of being, as well as set up the contacts I need to integrate my fellow slimes to the general society. Since my body now has superficial appearance of oil, I'll learn to give massages, maybe have some romantic adventures with the curious (and, of course, other slimes). The old me is a heterosexual male, but I'll try it with men just to see if that works for me.

A possible long-term plan is to become a dental assistant. With my Cleaning Agent ability, I can clean the patient's mouth far more effectively than any human, as well as eat away damaged dental bone gently and precisely. I should also be able to deal with saliva without those suction things dentists use. It's a pity I can't afford Rich, otherwise I could finish the job by turning my mass to gold, but with 3D printing making inroads into the industry that's a minor benefit anyway.

The future is bright and oozy.
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So between working on my Guardian CYOA, I've been doing a little collaboration project on the side.
I won't be doing too many WIPs this time, but here's a taste of what I've been doing.
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>>53595800
I think a Ouiiaboo mystery box would really propell this cyoa to its highest possible quality.
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The Great Debate
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>>53595937
No debate, they are all shit.
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>>53595937
All shit.
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>>53595937
Chalice is still the only good one.
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>>53595909
How much are you going to change the design?
That color scheme actively hurts my eyes. Please change it. Also maybe use some other font?
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>>53595909
Give more, you sexy ass
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>>53595511
Thats not a bad idea actually; I had the Cat in mind when I made Grail, but it didn't occur to me to use it to cancel out Lisette's bad points. It should work well enough, though everyone else around her is still fair game for misfortune, so you'd want to keep moving.
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>>53595909
That's adorable.
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>>53595909
>gets nervous in crows
But does she get nervous in other kinds of birds?
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>>53595909
War of the Chinese Zodiac Brides?
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>>53595909
The kink sentence going over two lines really bothers me an irrational amount. Pretty nice otherwise.
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>>53595937
Nero, hands down.
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>>53589545
RichNEET Dragon

HOARDS
Holy Grail x11
Nothing says I can't take same hoard more than once.
Medichamber
Transporter
/k/ Stash
Katana Collection
Library of Liberandia

POWERS
All of them (except last Extra)

BOONS
Manse
Fortified
Butler
Komodo Dragon
130% chance turn fuckers away
Maid
Maid Dragon

Public Unrest level 1
Manse negates this.

ENEMIES
Lancelot x12
At least they can be killed.
Miserable Families
Wytch x3
Muh Libruls x2

Even weakest enemy can ruin your laifu with enough tries. Everyone who picks immortal enemies basically asks for his removable hoards been stealed and his waifus/maids/butlers been killed/raped.
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>>53594282
>Italics cyoa
>Chuuni
>Anime
>Powerlevels
>Convoluted lore
Reminds me something.

>tfw he once said if he could Japanese he wouldn't mind working at TM.
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>>53596014
Anon, I'll see what I can do, but I like bright colors a lot and my fonts with Paint.net are kinda limited.
>>53596020
Be patient! I'm making two CYOAs and once over here!
>>53596059
There it is!
I knew I couldn't find enough spelling mistakes! I'll her the d she's missing.
>>53596048
Thank you. I spent all day yesterday hunting for the right picture for each girl.
>>53596092
Not quite. Just wound up as a quesidence that the Chinese Zodiac was the theme for the girls in this one.
At least I fucking hope so... I have other CYOAs I want to make. I don't want to be stuck doing Zodiac themed ones forever...
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>>53595191
>>53595220
Ooooo, I like it.
>Drake
He's basically just Toothless from How to Train your dragon, and that's great.
That clawfish looks awesome though.
>Courier
Gotta go fast. And the drake is built for speed. Good luck stopping us.
>Ryanne Woodsong
>Cally Mistpowder
>War of the elves
Haha, time for peace! Using my two companions, I'm going to deliberately sabotage their attempts at war, delivering untruthful communications to reach an agreement!

I'd love to see an expansion on this. Maybe some drawbacks that let you pick another companion, and some more choices for all the categories. Really nice CYOA.
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>>53595937
I want Nero to permanently shapeshift me into a little girl.
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>>53595191
>>53595220
Dragon turtle
Leenya Norocelli
Jacob Strauss

New Age of Piracy

was gonna go with mothkeeper detective but being mercenary aquaman (strauss can afford a ship surely) while making diplomatic inroads with the fishpepples sounds like alot of fun

the babby squidmancer a cute though
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>>53596198
>Anon, I'll see what I can do, but I like bright colors a lot and my fonts with Paint.net are kinda limited.
Bright is fine, just turn down the saturation.
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>>53595191
>>53595220
That was more fun than expected.
Griffon, Researcher, Ryanne Woodsong and Cally Mistpowder; and finally the Dragonrider.
Time for an awkwardly brought together trio to hunt down a dragon.
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>>53592156
>Star Dust, including Soldier of the Stars - Hideo Kojima
But why?

>>53592541
>Star Dust by From Software
I could sort of see this happening. Ship Souls.

Would still just want a sci-fi souls, though.
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>>53596198
>At least I fucking hope so... I have other CYOAs I want to make. I don't want to be stuck doing Zodiac themed ones forever...

Fuck that, we want waifus, and yours are high-quality.
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>>53595931
Pas du problem!
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>>53596461
Now it's perfect.
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>>53596198
Just tone down the red. Dark or more desaturted (removing pure color) should be fine.
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>>53596457
Reverse the black guy images for the typical /tg/ person.
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>>53596545

You guys fucking scare me sometimes
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>>53596226
>I'd love to see an expansion on this. Maybe some drawbacks that let you pick another companion, and some more choices for all the categories.

I have three roughly outlined; a short one for the Grand Joust with a list of enemies and rewards if you win, a second one with an expanded beast list, and I will totally add drawbacks to that one, its a good idea; I already have one in mind where you adopt the monstrous traits of your beast on your own form (scales, feathers, etc), and then a third, more expansive one for the Elf War, where you pick a side, a list of missions and new companions, and a list of rewards for if your side wins (including elf waifus).

This is one of the beasts for the expansion; I dropped it from this one in favour of the Clawfish because I needed more aquatics.

>>53596283
>the babby squidmancer a cute though
the cutest

>>53596381
I'm glad you guys liked it!
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>>53595422
>Either way, they're not negatively affected by someone else's sexual fetishes. That's why they stay healthy.
Which is why homosexuality, transexuality, and the like are widely accepted worldwide, and why nobody has ever been charged with battery for consensual BDSM.

Oh. Wait.
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>>53596545
I was thinking that he bottom image should just be replaced by a copy of the top one, but that kind of works too, I guess.
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>>53596545
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>>53596621
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>>53596621
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>>53596598
>then a third, more expansive one for the Elf War, where you pick a side, a list of missions and new companions, and a list of rewards for if your side wins (including elf waifus)
But muh peace
Excited though for sure. Add more reptilian beasts.
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>>53592541
>Pokemon Personified
>Developed by Platinum Games
>All the routes written by Yoko Taro
Oh boy, a disease known as despair and excitement has gripped me.
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when is this coming out?
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>>53595579
>That entirely depends on your personal opinion of 'healthy'.
No, Anon. Getting upset over things that negatively affect neither you nor anyone else means you're wasting your time and energy. If you still live "a great life", good for you, but that doesn't make it healthy, it just makes you the lucky smoker who beat the odds and died of old age.

>There are definitely large swathes of people who are highly judgmental and live a great live.
Haven't seen any. Perhaps you could name some such group?

>Also, just because you're not directly affected by something, doesn't mean that you can't get angry/disappointed/whatever about it.
Of course you can. You can get upset over anything. It's just a miserable way to live, and one that has great potential of making you an outright monster, should you do something besides shitposting for your believes.

>If you think that 'healthy' people only care about things that pertain directly to themselves, you're some kind of hermit or out of your mind.
Healthy people ask themselves whether they _should_ care about something, rather than just declare judgement on something that affects neither them or anyone else. That's why they stay healthy.
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>>53596748
when you stop being gay
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>>53595955
>>53595963
Nah, you guys are nuts.
Nero for sure. Only problem with Mox is I am not a sub and that kink is a little much. Dont want anything around my booty.
With Nero its all magical, whatever you do!
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>>53596800
the mystery box is literally him? becoming your waifu___
now stop being a faggot
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>>53596881
>him
>waifu
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>>53596881
you're the one salivating over your twink fap fantasy you fag
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>>53596704
>peace
gay

Maybe I'll add it as an extra hard extra clever option
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>>53596906
>>53596907
don't talk to me or my waifu ever again
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>>53595260
>character is what triumphs over the instinct or falls prey to it, so yes it makes perfect sense
And if a large portion of population lacks this "character" then lacking it is not a personal weakness but a general human one. That means actually solving the problem will require changing either human nature or the environment. It also means targeting fatsos doesn't make you any better person than targeting invalids, drug addicts, homeless, or anyone else who got a short stick in life would, which I think is the real motivation for claims like yours.
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>>53596906
Waifu(Male)
Husbando(Female)
Anon(HumongousFaggot)

its that easy
its that
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>>53596943
And what are those that don't lack character?
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>>53595191

That is a satisfactory alternative.

>the hydra is stupid? But it has like 9 brains!

Lets see. The hydras not bad wit its regen and lifespan, but the low int is terrible. I'm having a hard time deciding between crawler, which I know nothing about, including how it hunts and whatever, or dragon turtles, which are super cool but I'm not much for being underwater. Hm..


I see you didnt finish the requirement on the merfolk. I presume it requires an aquatic creature.

Lets see. Lets take Dragon turtle, since I'm not quite sure what the hell is up with crawler and I dont know if I can even talk to it.

As companions, I'll take Lisette and Harpford. Mainly for the cutes. Neither probably had much contact with guys outside their village anyhow.

Jobs: New age of piracy. I should be a good fit with my dragon turtle. I'll let my companions ride on the boat we're guarding. Or maybe get them their own boat and just kinda pull it along with my turtle. Who knows. We may also accept some courier duties while guarding, since we're on our way across the ocean anyways. Eventually I'm sure I can make enough money to get a few ships and cute slaves/sailors/friends and make my own fleet. We'll be the pirate pirates. Remember, its not a crime to steal from thieves.

If we happen to be near the dragon rider, we might pay him a visit. More to find out if I can also get a dragon or not. A friendly chat, gifts from across the ocean, all that. Hope he's not hostile on sight.
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>>53596943
>And if a large portion of population lacks this "character" then lacking it is not a personal weakness but a general human one.
a general human weakness can easily be a personal weakness

not being able to quit smoking for example is a personal weakness, despite millions of people giving in to it

>That means actually solving the problem will require changing either human nature or the environment.
bullshit, you're just making up excuses so that something other than you, *anything* other than you is at fault

bad news, fag, you are the only one in the world who is ultimately responsible for yourself, nobody else will make you stop being an unwashed fatass

>It also means targeting fatsos doesn't make you any better person than targeting invalids
you sicken me with how pathetic you are. you actually compare your laziness and lack of spine with a physical condition, a damaged body that they can't heal. fucking kill yourself, this is literally the most pathetic thing i have read on 4chan all YEAR, and that's saying something
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>>53593914
We are all faggots here, comrade
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>>53595937
Mox is the best choice, unless you are a furry brony, in which case enjoy Nero.

Persis is ok too, just not as good as Mox.
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>>53597067
>picking mox means you aren't the furry
Where the fuck are you from
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>>53596291
>>53596513
This better, Anon?
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>>53597083
Yeah, it's actually quite pleasing to the eye now.
Also, it's fine to have brighter colors if you want that, just don't go all hyper-neon-eyerape.
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>>53596967
>And what are those that don't lack character?
They're likely to either not care or to go with the most effective solution (changing the environment by, for example, taxing unhealthy food more), because having character means they have self-worth and thus don't need to find someone they can feel superior to.
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>>53597083
>zbg confirmed for ant
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>>53596457
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>>53597192
for fags
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>>53597186
>feel
This doesn't matter when they actually are.
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>>53596751
>No, Anon. Getting upset over things that negatively affect neither you nor anyone else means you're wasting your time and energy. If you still live "a great life", good for you, but that doesn't make it healthy, it just makes you the lucky smoker who beat the odds and died of old age.
That it's wasting time and energy is highly subjective. If you go by "what improves my life" a lot of things humans do is pretty wasteful, but calling most people unhealthy because they occasionally indulge in such things is pretty absurd. And sure, some people may make themselves unhappy by doing so, but the majority of 'casually judgmental people' just make others miserable.

>Haven't seen any. Perhaps you could name some such group?
I'm genuinely curious: Do you live in some ultimate progressive bubble or do you just not have any human contact? Think of any religious/highly conservative group. Sodomy laws are something that have actually existed. Even the average western person is still pretty judgmental.

>Healthy people ask themselves whether they _should_ care about something
I assume with 'healthy people' you're not actually talking about humans?
That's just not how it works. People don't actively decide whether they care about something, it's something entirely subconscious. If I see people who are an absolute mess fashion wise, that bothers me. I know that it's not 'rational' or 'efficient', but that's just not how human nature works. Surely there are some things you get irrationally bothered by?
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>>53597192
Best girl(male).
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>>53597202
It's not gay if the girl(male) is cute
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Its time! Posting latest version of Deus Vult before posting the DLC.

>Changelog
>Typos
>Increased the cost of Holy Harem by 1.
>Changed description on Base of Operations. Now you can't buy your way into heaven.

Uncensored Version:
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>>53597248
It's gay if it has a penis you know it and then keep going
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>>53597274

Uncensored Version:
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>>53597248
I have fapped to that so many fucking times...
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>>53597286

Uncensored Version:
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>>53597300
You don't need to point it out, everyone knows you're a faggot.
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>>53597307
>DLC!

Uncensored Version:
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>>53597274
Hey, you beautiful, kinky bastard I have a question.
Since Holy Harem makes each companion cost 1 less gold coin, does mean you can take the companions that only cost a single coin for free?
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>>53597332
Yes!
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>>53597277
wrong

it's gay if you're attracted to it because it has a penis

if you're attracted to it without knowing it has a penis, and then learn that it does, continuing attraction just shows you don't give a fuck about being judged as gay, but there is nothing actually homosexual about that attraction
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>>53597277
So you could plow the largest, hairest ass, that is attached to someone who looks like cross between Santa Claus and Arnold Schwarzenegger but as long as you don't check what's in the front, it's not gay?
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>>53597365
you can see the genitals from behind on either sex, anon
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>>53597385
Are balls gay?
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>>53597399
yours are
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>>53597000
>not being able to quit smoking for example is a personal weakness, despite millions of people giving in to it
Smoking is on its way out, both because it faces ever tougher regulation and because medical products aimed at quitting smoking are readily available to anyone who wants them.

>bad news, fag, you are the only one in the world who is ultimately responsible for yourself, nobody else will make you stop being an unwashed fatass
The example of smoking you yourself brought up proves you wrong.

>you sicken me with how pathetic you are. you actually compare your laziness and lack of spine with a physical condition, a damaged body that they can't heal.
Having human instincts and metabolism is a "physical condition". But even if you were 100% correct, tell me: is lack of willpower a condition you can cure through that same nonexistent willpower?

>fucking kill yourself, this is literally the most pathetic thing i have read on 4chan all YEAR, and that's saying something
If you have read 4chan for years, you should know it's not your safe space. You might read things here which contradict your worldview, and will just have to live with the fact that nobody much cares whether this upsets you or not.

Still, your level of butthurt IS impressive. Are you trying to appear tough, or did I hit a nerve?
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>refresh thread after eight hours
>barely any posts

Is there another thread or something?
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>>53597449
Not much OC, nighttime/morning for most of the Murican posters
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>>53597336
You're doing God's work.

[Class]
Martyr
[Judgement]
Charm
Fucked Straight
Servitude
[Devine Blessings]
Divine Protection (Upgraded)
Divine Beauty (Upgraded)
Half-Angel (Upgraded)
Holiest of Swords (Upgraded)
Holy Harem (Upgraded)
[Enemies of God]
Mortals
Vampires
Demons
Fallen Angels
[Companions]
Sister Bethany
Hope and Faith
Sister Alica
Sister Mercy
Sister Joanna
Sister Theresa
Sister Catherine
Beatrice Beaufort
Sister Rose
Lillith
Gabriella
Alexandra
[Base of Operation]
Mansion
[Mission]
The Night Queen
[Drawbacks]
Last Chance
Holy Prayer
Sister Joy
The Loophole
B'Elanna Beaufort
Delayed Rescue
Sister Victoria
Blood Moon (Gabriela)


I'll post the DLC part as well.
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>>53595422
slime-fu is always fun. lets redo this I guess.

Lets make a waifu. [30]

Lets start from drawbacks as usual :
Submissive [34] More of a boon than a drawback.
Sleepy [41] I mean, we sleep for 8 hours so Im not interacting with it for 8 hours already. Whats an extra 4 right.
Youthful [45] I mean, a loli slime is definitely a boon not a drawback.
Sexual [50] Because sleepy slime needs some motivation sometimes right?
Perpetual Flavor [52] Not a big deal. Maybe strawberry or something?

Slimey things :
Health [42]
Primordial Princess [22]
Yummy [17]
Cleaning Agent [13]
Cohesive [9]
Tentacled [2]
I really want to romantic one for the aphrodisiac but oh well. Theres nothing I can do with 2 points either. Scary, impaired manipulation, and unsettled are all kinda terrible drawbacks and not worth the points. Drained doesnt get me enough points to be worth it not being able to deal with holes and slopes. So I guess nevermind. Lets get rid of perpetual flavor since I dont need those 2 points and learning 20% faster doesnt really matter.

It should be pretty easy finding people who like slimes with sexual and tentacles, and eternal youth (or at least longevity if I'm diluting it). Plus the ability to make more slimes. Hopefully eventually we can learn some more skills like magic?

friends: Kitsune, Lewd Slime, Strawberry pink slime. My slime and the lewd slime and myself can be mean and tease and play with pink slime and the kitsune. With lots of patting after of course.
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>>53597440
>The example of smoking you yourself brought up proves you wrong.
not at all, just because people are aided by various things doesn't mean nobody ever quit smoking by deciding to do it and just sticking with their decision

>is lack of willpower a condition you can cure through that same nonexistent willpower?
lack of willpower doesn't mean your willpower is nonexistent, it just means you need to get off of your ass and do something to improve your life

>If you have read 4chan for years, you should know it's not your safe space.
i don't need a safe space you fat turd, i dont find you upsetting, i find you pathetic
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>>53597449
/cyoag/ is really slow when burgers are asleep
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>>53597192
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>>53597530
except you missed the time when they're asleep by about 10 hours
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>>53597560
neets wake up later
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>>53597488
Neutral observer here, you seem mad as hell.
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>>53597572
neets wake up at all hours of the day
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>>53588158
By the way, before I start writing 2nd page, how's the setting?
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>>53595191
Dragonrider is just a lusty dragon, right?
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>>53597323
>deep ones are toadgirls
All my buckets are filled and spilling
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>>53597274

Ew gross.
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>>53595909
>collaboration
Who?
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>>53597538
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My intended single page waifupicker finally has its first page done, and no waifus have yet been picked. I don't know how people keep their descriptions so short.
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>>53597471
[Added Drawback]
Milking
[Monsters of Myth]
Minotaurs
Manticores
[Secrets]
Beast Master (Deep One)
Miracle (Godlike Fighting Power For 3 Minutes)
[Drawbacks]
Stalked
Heroism
Sword Sheath
Baleful Moon


>tfw no satyrs
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>>53597859
Wut
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>>53597859
>I don't know how people keep their descriptions so short.

That has been by far the trickiest part of doing CYOAs for me, it's hard to not turn them into walls of text. I still end up with lots of stuff on the figurative cutting room floor.
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>>53595191
>Watcher
>Researcher
>Lucy
>Cally

really though I'm just in it for the lazer eyes
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>>53587933
Aspiring Mage
Avian (Magpie)

Conjuration
Summon Friend

Mage Hand
Pickpocket
Speedy
Wand User

Free Spirit
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>>53597859
Honestly, longer descriptions aren't bad if they aren't just 300 words of saying nothing. I actually prefer (reasonably) long descriptions, because the short descriptions either tend to be very samey or vague (or even worse, both).
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>>53597236
>the majority of 'casually judgmental people' just make others miserable
And when you do that long enough, those others will push you away to the edges of society through simply refusing to have anything to do with you. There you whine about elites ignoring you while slowly fading away, missed or mourned by none.

Humans are social creatures, Anon. Your self extends far beyond your skin. Being a shithead does, in fact, harm you and make you a lesser being than you could be.

>Think of any religious/highly conservative group.
That's your idea of a "great life" - inventing ridiculous lies about satanic pizza parlors, voting against your own interests just to spite "libruls", and wishing the world would stop getting better for anyone else?

>If I see people who are an absolute mess fashion wise, that bothers me. I know that it's not 'rational' or 'efficient', but that's just not how human nature works.
So knowing it's irrational, will you quench the impulse or try to rationalize it?
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>>53598333
>Being a shithead does, in fact, harm you and make you a lesser being than you could be
Aren't you basically agreeing with him
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>>53591943
No clue about the developers, although I'd like to see what Suda51 would do with a CYOA.

Amphipod Arena
Batquest
Monster Under The Bed
Snek Quest
Bird Catcher
The BIG World
The Bird War
The System
DSA's Island Survival CYOA
The attached island CYOA
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>There is a waifu cyoa with over 50 available waifus.

How and why?
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>>53598621
>tfw when you keep adding new ideas instead of perfecting the existing ones
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>>53598654
But all waifus are perfect
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>>53598668
she's not a waifu if nobody waifus her
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>>53598668
if all waifus were perfect, then nobody would need new ones constantly
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>>53587954
What fucking retard decided to write that shit in Greek lettering.
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>>53598718
that reminds me of those random umlauts someone put on their writing in a cyoa

"The Order öf Göd" - the order eef geed
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>>53597488
Free will doesn't exist, anon. There's genes, and there's the environment, and there's no magic ghost inside your skull. Mental health issues can utterly destroy your "willpower" because willpower, whatever it is, has a material basis.

But the position you're taking is incredibly stupid when applied to the population level. Do you think smoking would have been as popular as it was without advertising? That it would have held on as long as it did without institutional forces like the Tobacco Research Institute lying to the government and the public about how safe it was? That it would have declined without the lawsuits that accompanied that deception, and the regulations and anti-smoking campaigns that sprung up after them? "Just because people are aided by various things doesn't mean nobody ever quit smoking by deciding to do it and just sticking with their decision" is an assertion that is almost entirely irrelevant to the overall trajectory of smoking in this country.

It's probably irrelevant to obesity, too. The current epidemic probably has something to do with the way our food is now engineered to bypass our normal system for registering satiety, as well as the proliferation of sedentary service-sector jobs; most intriguingly, there's some good evidence that it's affecting *everything* in the human environment— non-humans, feral animals—alongside us. These broad social trends have fuck-all to do with willpower, but altering them is our best shot at fixing the obesity epidemic.
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>>53598654
>>53598621
>>53598668
>>53598703
>>53598708
Today I will remind them of the most perfect waifu to be removed from a cyoa.
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>>53598739
It's worse, because in this case the Greek letters are the actual "proper" letters.
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>>53598761
Jokes on that faggot I'm a gnostic and I'm gonna hatefuck the shit outta ol' Yabadabadoo
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>>53598763
so are the umlauted ones

usually when you see letters like ü or š or Ł or something in various languages you will find those in the alphabet as well
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>>53598750
all i hear is dumb navel gazing excuses next to knowing people who actually did manage to accomplish difficult things through effort

so yeah
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>>53598807
I mean instead of using the characters which look like the English equivalent, the actual letters with that sound are used (ex. capital sigma for S even though it looks like a big E).
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>Update never
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>>53598832
That is not very convincing.
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>>53598836
well then what's the problem, that's way better

>>53598846
your problem, not mine

i already said everything i could on this topic, at this point further discussion is meaningless
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>>53598761
She is boring
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>>53598844
>updating generic waifubuilder B

why
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>>53598864
Because he doesn't love his waifus so he needs another one every few days.
>>
Waifubuilders truly are the worst CYOAs.
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>>53597859
Maybe try bullet points? If theres a nice list it might help shorten it or let you have a longer paragraph without being too tiring since it becomes a tldr.
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>>53597323
Why is Sword Sheath a Drawback when it's a power-up?
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>>53595191
Ashen Tiger

I'd choose Military in a heartbeat, but I want to help out in the elf war and don't think my CO would give me that much free time, so I'll choose Hunter for now.

Gideon
Ryanne Woodsong

War of the Elves
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>>53594247
>Light
>Adhesive Magboots 2k
>Servos 5k
>Battery 7k
>Jetpack 14k
>Energy Shield 17k
>Environmental Shielding 21k
>Grenade Satchel 23k
>Auto Targeting 28k
>Unshackled AI 34k
>Active Cloaking 40k

>Ghost 47k

>Descieclite 50k

Even with my jet pack I'll only be able to interrupt a handful and they'l be prepared for a fight negating most of my advantages. I'm better off tailing them and finding there base. Once I do I can sneak in using a combination of visual camouflage and doctored infrared readings. In closed confines my AI guided blade is lethal servo enhanced grenade volleys clear rooms in seconds. If I live to take the stock I'll be very rich indeed.
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>>53598960
resorting to bullet points is like admitting you're a shitty, uncreative writer
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I gotta use more bullet points because they trigger someone here
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>>53599048
This guy gets it.
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>>53598333
>And when you do that long enough, those others will push you away to the edges of society through simply refusing to have anything to do with you
Normally people tend to discriminate against minorities rather than people who are capable of fighting back . Most people don't care or even go along with it. If you live in a highly progressive place that probably tends to occur less, but even at most universities I've been to people's acceptance is often times only skin deep.

>Being a shithead does, in fact, harm you
Maybe if you are a shithead to everybody, sure. If you're an ass to the 'right' people at the 'right' time, nothing happens.
>make you a lesser being than you could be.
Not sure what that is supposed to mean.

>That's your idea of a "great life" - inventing ridiculous lies about satanic pizza parlors, voting against your own interests just to spite "libruls", and wishing the world would stop getting better for anyone else?
I've never said that judgmental people lead a great life because of it, just that it is in no way exclusive. It's absolutely possible to be happy, have a loving family/friends and be rich/successful despite being an absolute dick. Same applies to anything else that I really associate with a 'great life'.

>So knowing it's irrational, will you quench the impulse or try to rationalize it?
Not sure if I understand you correctly. I don't rationalize it, I just live with it. Do you count that as quenching the impulse?
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>>53598761

I'll never forget best girl
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I know we probably have enough Waifu cyoas but can someone post that "Flawed Waifu" one with all the options to build one?
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>>53597323
>The DLC completely destroyed my build.
>Compared to the high cost of 12 Holy points before it now requires the ridiculous equivalent of 24 holy points to get all the enemies.
>You would still need 18 Holy points to get them all if you take all the Myth drawbacks.
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>>53599212
>probably
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>>53599240
your build was wrong, you should be happy it was corrected
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>>53587933
Master Class: Wizard
Name: Socephelies
Age: Young
Familiar Name: Whatsit
Species: Mammal Pangolin
Focuses (1): Transmutation
Powers: Enlarge
Perks (4): Charming, Telepathic, Sturdy, Speedy
Job: Mascot
Event: A Forbidden Love

Danger: 1
Power: 1
Compassion: 14
Solitude: 0
Wealth: 4
===

>>53588158
You might want to work on the formating and the wording of benefits. It's all over the place and I'm not sure how the different abilities even work since you haven't given us a framework for the stats.
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>>53599212
You mean this one ?
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>>53599175
>No CYOA to convert gangsters to Christianity completely peacefully and while establishing lifelong friendships with those who you saved.
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>>53599326
You probably shouldn't post the uncensored version in /tg/
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>>53599240
Why would you even want to get all enemies. I mean, the normal ones I can get, but new ones?
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>>53599240
Maybe this guide will help you in what to pick
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>>53598968
You need to wear a fairy as a condom for 5 hours per day and 5 hours per night. The "power up" is the Mythical points you gain for taking it.
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>>53599383
Oh right, I guess I will just post another one that fits the escription, cause I do not have the sfw version
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>>53599240
This anon has a good point, when you add large number of options even if they aren't required, there should be some sort of compensation, as where this DLC even comes with a cost for entry(not that a gold coin is that big of a deal). At least for something like this if you spend 12 holy points you should be able to judge literally everything, even if it doesn't come with the special knowledge that the bestiary grants.
>>53599399
Clearly anon just wants to literally be able to judge any enemy, it is kind of a weakness to be unable to judge any particular enemy.
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>>53599453
that makes no sense, just because you have more to choose from doesn't mean you should get more points
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>>53599438
Tok's Drive is in the OP's pastebin, just saying.

>>53599212
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>>53599431
free fairy onahole sounds good to me
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>>53599496
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>>53599423
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>>53597323
>The pic for heroism is Kirei.
Heh.
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>>53599524
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>>53599550

>>53599526
My parents would probably be happy with anything that can produce grandchildren for them
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>>53599453
>Clearly anon just wants to literally be able to judge any enemy, it is kind of a weakness to be unable to judge any particular enemy.
You see enemies that you are able to judge more often. If you have a lot to judge, theoretically you should almost never see your 'weakpoints'.
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>>53599480
Honestly, this whole CYOA would have been a lot better if you only had 5 Holy Points but there was a drawback which made your Holy Sword ineffective against certain enemy types.
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>>53599621
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>>53599630
That's not a valid response to criticism and you know it.
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>>53599480
When you have a larger number of options, but the same number of points, you end up getting a smaller percentage of them, which feels unsatisfying. You can offset this by giving some new points, even if they don't match up to the previous percentage, just a couple of points would actually make it feel more fair.
>>53599598
>You see enemies that you are able to judge more often.
Nowhere in the cyoa does it say that, only favored and unfavored enemies show up more often.
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>>53599676
Just pretend that it is.
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>>53599688
>When you have a larger number of options, but the same number of points, you end up getting a smaller percentage of them, which feels unsatisfying.
There's no problem here. It's a trick of the mind.

Adding points for no reason is what's unfair, and depending on the CYOA it can really wreck it.

Not that torhack's CYOAs can be wrecked though, seeing how that's their natural state.
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>>53599545
Is that the only picture of him you've noticed?
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>>53594282
I just looked that shit up.
>Companies are allowed to have monopolies over the largest industries.
>You can buy and sell people like its nothing and nobody will stop you.
>The heads of government are the heads of government because their parent is God.
>If you talk shit about the government you get gulag'd and the citizens agree that you deserve it.
That setting is some 3rd world tier shit.
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>>53597612
Good enough.

But I swear to God you better have AK-47 be a fuckable waifu.
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>>53594247
Armour type: Medium (48K)

Upgrades
Riot shield (free)
Collapsible (46K)
Adhesive mag-boots (43K)
Battery (41K)
Advanced targeting (39K)
Cyberwarfare suit (36K)
Servos (33K)
Environment control (31K)

Weapons
Colt anaconda (27K)
Banshee (21K)
Mankiller (15K)
Ghost (8K)


Area of operation: Ianope(5K)
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I'm thinking about making a CYOA again. Tell me, of which of these ideas do you guys like the most.

1. Pseudo-sequel to the magical awakening one. Would give you the option to become either a vampire, lich, or werewolf, each with their own unique stuff. Roughly the same length as Magical Awakening.

Drawbacks being that 2/3rds of the CYOA would likely not be interesting for people.

Good part being that each "tree" would be relatively fleshed out, with about as many options as the equipment and the magic from the first one.

2: Something about Skitarii?

Like a become a Skitarii CYOA, where you'd pick your augmentations and shit, then pick a Forge World. Not sure where I'd go with this one. Would be similar to the space bounty hunter one.

3: Finish the Fleshweavers ripoff.
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>>53600330
>3: Finish the Fleshweavers ripoff.
This please.
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>>53600330
2 or 3
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>>53595730
>At this point I'd say about 700 ish. I stopped counting at 640.

On one hand that's a lot of potentially awesome companions but on the other that makes the chance of my character being added low.
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>>53600400
Even then I collect everything I get to in some way make it a part of the extended universe.
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>>53600429
True.

That reminds me I should finish my other build. I've got a bunch of backstory done and the perks picked and now I have to pick everything else.
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What does /cyoag/ think of a post-apocalyptic superpower cyoa?

I'm talking mind control, super speed, and others that come in a tier list, and by acquiring more tiers in that power and obtaining a second power you can obtain a third power and its tiers all in an autistic branching list in a post-apocalyptic world.
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>>53600676
I think cat girls are shit.
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>>53600676
I'd like the power to bring the artist of that picture back to life.
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>>53600676
i'd rather have a post-apocalyptic catgirl world cyoa.
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>>53600676
ask yourself if youre adding something new or at least doing it better than your predecessors
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>>53600676
Sounds cool, would the superpowers though have an autistic set of combinations as well?
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>>53600771
The plan for combinations is that. You'll be able to have more than one power and owning two set of powers will give you access to a third power free.
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>>53600712
sounds like quite a CATastrophe for such a thing to happen, anon.
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>>53587406
How does Travellers operates? I mean, they can travel through time and space, they could just go back in time to uncover mysteries, jump into an enemies heartchamber and plant an explosive charger or topple regimes before they start. There seems to be no need for "normal" fighting or investigative skills, maybe academic ones to understand and improve collected techs.
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>>53600712
ho yes a post apocalyptic cyoa after a flood with sea travel, cool boats and catgirls
someone do this pls
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>>53594247
>Medium
>Magboots
>Riot Shield Collapsible
>Servos
>Battery
>Energy Shield
>Advanced Targeting
>Cyber Warfare Suite
>Active Cloaking
The clothes make the man. And I'm ready to get right behind you without you seeing me.

>Tempest
>Stalker
>Ghost
I have reliable weaponry for long, medium, and close ranges. I plan to upgrade to Hammer and acquire a Wideband once I have enough money from targets.

>Bekenstein
I can quickly get cash from taking any job that floats my way. I don't want to build my name however, things work best when people don't know who I am.
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>>53597274
>Class:Inquisitor
Because swords are the best!
>Judgment: Servitude and Charm
To turn evil doers into my loving maids
>Blessings: Holiest of Swords, Divine Beauty, Immortality and Missionary (classic fantasy world).
>Enemies: Mortals, Witches, Vampires and Abyssals
The most common enemies in a fantasy setting I guess.
>Companions: Beatrice Beaufort and Lilith
Its a nice contrast with a rich elegant lady and a turbo slut demon.
>Base: Heaven
Need a easily accessible base with lots of room for all my slave maids.
>Mission: Lightbringer
I shall bring the light to this godforsaken realm!
>Drawbacks: Holy Prayer, Last Chance and B'Elanna Beufort
She's probably jealous that I'm fucking her sister, so I will try to fuck her as well.

>>53597323
>Pay 1 gold for DLC
Yes, please!
>Monsters of Myths: Deep Ones and Slimes
Fuuuuuck! I want to purchase the manticores and the gorgons too!
>Secrets: Maximus Sanctum and Miracle (Freeze Time)
Freeze Time is really good to get out of sticky situations and its useful to fuck people while they are frozen. If I havent used the miracle and there are only a few days to the next week I will probably be using this on B'Elanna to put her in a lot of embarrassing and lewd situations.
>Drawbacks: Sword Sheath.
Will probably have to put a gag on the fairy since I took holiest of swords and the poor fairy will constantly have my dick in her making her go crazy with pleasure.

Spent a total of 23 Holy Points and 5 Golden coins, gained 8 Holy points and 1 mythical points from drawbacks so it should check out evenly.
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>>53600676
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>>53600940
Timey-wimey bullshit, mang.
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>>53600940
>>53601048
Also infinite universes and shit so nothing you do matters.
>>
>>53601038
>Bug Whisperer

Well, it's time to fuck everyone up.
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>>53601038
>Hear sounds at 0 decibels
>Hear sounds at negative decibels

I'd ask which retard wrote this, but they at least had the courtesy to sign it so I can ignore them.
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>tfw you notice you did an entire WIP page in the wrong font size
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>>53601048
>>53601136
>>53600940 here. I'm not really complaining, just wanted to know if I got it right without missing any detail countering this idea hidden between the line.
If anything I could just "refluff" it in my mind that space-time travel can't be done willy-nilly (except Traveller Adepts and even then with limitation) and most Travellers have to go through Traveller Bases in specific places in time. Yuta Braces and Peg would work like fast travel from CRPGs, you place a peg around the world and can return there later using the Brace.
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>>53601407
The grandson of 1966 Batman's plot writer
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=AgxJh8UlbZY&feature=youtu.be&t=87
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>>53600940
It's actually addressed in that, you can deal with problems in timelines, however everytime a Traveller 'jumps' they invariably create a new timeline. Hence you kill Hitler in one universe but another Hitler remains, ignoring the fact you haven't killed the rest of the head Nazis and the underlying social issues in Germany that led to the rise of the Nazi party.

At which point you realize why you bother with it and just engage in Monasticism on Ae achieving a person nirvana, be it religious, hedonistic, Rayndian, or what have you.
>>
>>53600706
Damm i just realized i would kill for a elona+ CYOA
>>
>>53601419
this is the most underwhelming and pointless tfw i have ever seen, and people shitpost with that expression constantly
>>
Does anyone know how long it takes for half-dragon kobolds to reach sexual maturity?
>>
>>53601657
You could make a thread on this very board about that subject that will potentially reach bump limit, so I'll just say depends on the setting.
>>
>>53601657
Three and a half months
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>>53601617
There's already one floating around about the gods.
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>>53601617
>>53601712
yeah

you could do something that isn't specifically god themed though

or just another god themed one, who cares
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>>53601532
Travellers can't really solve world-specific issue, only create a timeline where it was solved (adding to the infinite amount of similar timelines), while the problem remains in the original timeline. This makes Travellers engage in activities around time-space as a part of personal development or "hobby", making the process more important than the result. Did I get it right now?
If so, what's the point behind large operations like Terra-D12452 (Orwellian one)? Traveller version of game (defeating BBEG)? Study group (see how different actions affects this world and ponder about morals and other philosophical questions)? Self-satisfaction?

Also, I suppose they still need to keep themselves sharp in case a Traveller goes rogue (again) or cosmic horrors decides to attack (again).
>>
There was an island cyoa posted not too long ago (not DSA's island survival) with a vertical layout. One of the companions was a yandere girl, another was an artist dude I think. Anyone have it?
>>
>>53601712
Nah not just about the gods i mean adventures in the fucked up land that is irva
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>>53601801
Forgot ask about economy. How does a Traveller makes a living and why they have to, couldn't they just use some high-tech hocus pocus nano fabricator to supply themselves?
>>
>>53600712
>>53600945
i want this too
the catgirl part is optional
>>
>>53601860
Post scarcity society, everyone gets universal income but the factions also get an income to do their shit.
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>>53601838
Oh shit it's Etherwind! Roll d100 to figure out what disease you got. Congratulations, you are now a qt imouto.
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>>53601866
I've got a WIP of that, not in a postable state. I'll get working on it proper after I'm done with Obscura.
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>>53600712
>>53600945
Water worlds are my jam too.
Tori no Hoshi, Forever Blue 2 and Subnautica was really enjoyable. Wind Waker was also fun but I still have PTSD from the Triforce salvaging part. God that was excruciating.
>>
>>53597274
>Can no longer buy yourself into heaven.

Fucking protestants
>>
>>53601898
i want to become lulwy
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>>53602131
You brought this on yourself Roman. Nestor remembers bitch.
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>>53602200
And that's how you end up becoming minced meat for the air elementals.
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>>53602025
Played Aquaria or Song of the Deep yet?
>>
>>53602200
>Not wanting to become lulwy's favorite "kitty"
You don't know what you are missing
>>
>>53602350
id rather look like >>53602252 than a kitty

though i wouldnt mind making others like you my kitties
>>
>>53602025
Triforce part is easy if you like exploring instead of rushing through the story like a retard. You'll have already found everything to the point where you just have to warp around and finish whatever last puzzle or salvaging is needed for it. Takes half an hour.
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>>53598761
>tfw you can't dominate and fuck the Christian God's brains out until she becomes your obedient cock addicted slave
Why even bother living?
>>
>>
>>53601801
>“Give Liaison to those who exist with knives upon their throats, for they hold themselves to a high point, so give them moments, by which we might persist still.”

Travellers sixth law. They do it to keep from becoming nihilistic assholes, essentially.
>>
>>53601419
Did they make a second video? I don't remember this part of the first one
>>
>>53602552
I remember grinding a shit ton of rupees for all the charts. That was the annoying part.
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>>53599912
No, but I had pointed out the others when this was first posted.

Plus this one was super fucking ironic.
>>
>>53602807
Not native speaker, what "Give Liaison" is supposed to mean here? Aren't Liaisons people who smooth communication between language/cultural barriers? Last time I saw the word was in Shin Godzilla, not very acquainted with it.
Also I probably should reread TT, I don't remember half the things said around that "quotes" section.
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>>53602948
>Liaison: communication or cooperation which facilitates a close working relationship between people or organizations.
In this case the meaning is that; Travellers are meant to give the downtrodden a chance to take their fate into their own hands (usually be wrecking shop).
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>>53597274
>>53597286
>>53597307
>>53597323

>Class
Martyr [15]

>Judgement
Charm [15]
Fucked Straight [14]

>Divine Blessing
Dilligence 2 [12]
Divine Protection 2 [9]
Immortality 2 [8]
Holiest of Swords 2 [6]

>Enemies
Mortals [5]
Fallen Angels [3]
Demons [1]

>Companions
Sister Sarah (3)
Sister Cathryn (1)
Sister Bethany (0)

>Base
Heaven [-3]

>Missions
St Augustine's Academy [0]

Serving the Lord and spreading love has never been so fun!
>>
>>53602751
no waifus? no little girl transformations? no general lewdness? how refreshing!
>>
>>53602285
Nope. Just watched their trailers but it didn't made me too excited. Their theme is nice but 2D games doesn't fill me with awe and desire to explore like 3D games like the ones I mentioned. Thanks for mentioning them though.

>>53602552
>>53602873 This. I vaguely remember having acquired and wasted all the "easy rupees" and having to resort to long and boring griding ways. Don't ask me the details, I played it when it was released.

>>53603059
Alright, thanks for explaining it to me. I will reread the pdf with that in mind.
>>
>>53599526
>>53599423
So youre saying papi is best girl.
>>
>>53599423
>>53599526
Monster Musume: The story of one man's struggle to choose between zoophilia, mucophilia, and necrophilia.
>>
Can someone post generic Waifubuilding? I never see it before
>>
>>53596409
Because I'm very interested in all the Herald fuckery Hideo could get into.
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>>53603887
I think this is one of the oldest waifubuilders.
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>>53603887
Here u go

>>53599496
>>53599524
>>53599550
>>53599583
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>>53603992
>Western African and East Asian both only cost 1
Now that's a bargain.
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>>53603941
I can agree to that.
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