/cyoag/ - CYOA General

>>53379406
Skelebro, no question about it.

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>>53379406
>kobold

>>53379443
See, skelebro is good, but slime is eager to please.

>>53379406
Slime, easy choice.

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>>53379467

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Posting this here, too, in case the author happens upon this thread.

Note: The original was over 10k pixels tall (and around 18 MB), and I couldn't be arsed to splice it into multiple pictures, so I resized it. Should still be readable, but no guarantees.

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>>53379486

>>53379486
>>53379504
Might wanna get the whole thing proofread.

>>53379406
i'm going to fuck that kobold

>>53379517
Mine of english not good very. Direction me to typo please.

>>53379563
The typoes are many and I am tired. I'll try putting together a list tomorrow, if nobody else does the job before then.

>>53379504
Can someone explain what is up with Wilhelmina? I mean, what kind of name is that? Is it French or something? Either way, obv we'd take her. Just to be clear, you give:

>Teenage MILF
>Redhead
>Archer
>Retired Mega-Hero
>Kind, strong af and nice overall person
>CENTAUR WAIFU

And expect us to take
>skeleton rape
>squid thing
>yandere bitch
>literally a library

>>53379675
>>skeleton rape
Obviously shit taste. If you've ever been on /toy/, you'd take skeleton rape in an instant.

>>53379675
It's an old german name, if it helps.

>>53379563
>>53379591
Life's to short to worry about spelling.

>>53379692
Like an old german dude name?

>>53379688
Post the 7 page skeleton rape cyoa

>>53379703
No, that would be Wilhelm. Wilhelmina is the female version.

>>53379504
Toss up between Floop and Deeja. Floop is great because you get to adventure around a post-apocalyptic fallout-style world with a perverted douche mentor who kicks ass.

Deeja is another fun choice because you get to adventure around with a master of magic edgy af litch looking for his phylactery.

>>53379733
>Wilhelmina is the female version.
Fucking dumb ass germans. You don't see Willia, or Billemina or some shit going around.

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>>53379740
Looked a little into it. It's made of the words willio (will) helm (helmet) and minna is the maid. So it would be the maid of a guy named Wilhelm, probably. And became a name, somehow.

>>53379779
The name actually fits in with the story. Some chick literally named after the guy she's given to. I swear to god, if quiet planned that out he's more autistic than this board combined.

>>53379774
D

>>53379795
Well ... I haven't read Rise, so I didn't know I just hit the nail. But that's the kind of detail I came to love in Quiet's works: Stuff no normal person would know or ask about, yet relevant.

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>>53379774

>>53379825
Read it, it's not bad. Still it's not as good as QuietCYOA, nothing he's done since was. I was following the Urban Fantasy one before he died and it wasn't something I'd compare to quiet.

>>53379852
Jesus anon. Rude.

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>>53379852
>Quiet died
You just mean he left right?

>>53379832
You all need to pick option 5

>>53379889
I don't know. I'm not sure if this IS Quiet. He isn't using his nametag and might have just co-opted his style and currency point thing.

>>53379852
Will do, when I'm less tired. It deserves undivided attention, and that's something I've run out of for the night.

>>53379889
That image warms my heart for some reason.

>>53379892
I disagree, a constant slew of OC is not a good thing. It's nice to have a few ones every month, not dozens a week

>>53379703
What part of Wilhelmina sounds like a dude name?

>>53379927
Wilhelm?

>>53379927
I don't know, it sounded like a guys name

>octavia, julia, joanna
ok
>wilhelmina
REEEEEEEEE

>>53379675
Squid thing, skeleton, and literally a library are all my top choices, and I'm one of those people that naturally gravitates towards something to fuck. They're just so interesting.

>>53379973
>gravitates towards something to fuck
what

>>53379973
>Squid thing, skeleton, and literally a library
I can maybe see the first two, but the third is impossible.

>>53379973
>I'm one of those people that naturally gravitates towards something to fuck
Your gonna love S.S.EN then.

>>53379675
>CENTAUR WAIFU
more like
>centaur
>waifu
pick one

>>53380005
Who else but a skeleton can help take care of your boner

>>53379675
I'd rather take Laheera for dem ears.

>>53380008
I'm not saying I want to fuck them. I'm saying they're so interesting I'd take them over an attractive woman mentor who I could potentially sleep with

>>53380047
>Laheera
She's not just a Mary Sue, she's a textbook shitty, fanservice Mary Sue.

>>53380026
Just because horse dicks are bigger doesn't mean a horse vagina won't experience the same amount of pleasure.

>>53380074
I agree with this guy. Fanservice is pretty annoying.

>>53380026
>>53380093
Reminder: Horse vaginas have all the nerves at the entrance, can squeeze tight enough for you to get friction, and they have hair trigger orgasms. So do the guys, so you being able to go a few minutes instead of a few seconds means you're not only better than a male centaur, you can give her multiple orgasms to every one of yours.

>>53380076
Yeah, but none of that will matter when I'm nibbling her ears.

>>53380093
>>53380111
God damn it. Every single time a picture of a centaur is posted here this happens.

>>53380111
>>53380093
Shut the actual fuck up. Is that true?

>>53380154
I actually regret making this now.

>>53380151
The odds of you fucking her are literally zero. Her graduation event is almost impossible to pull off.

>>53380155
In reality, most animals don't derive physical pleasure from sex in the same way that humans do. It's mainly just a primate thing, plus some marine mammals too.

>>53380185
What game is it anyway? I'm pretty good at Soul Edge.

>>53380155
It's entirely true.

>>53380208
t. guy that doesn't know anything about mammals.

>>53380185
Never said anything about fucking her. Just playing with her ears.

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>>53380163
>Regret making a CYOA because someone wants to fuck one of the characters.

>>53379675
Wilhelmina, like that Dutch queen.

>>53380228
I regret anything that leads to the discussion of horse vaginas or horse orgasms.

>>53380185
all of them are almost impossible to pass

>>53380250
Wilhelmina's is probably the easiest.

>>53380249
Mate calm down, this is /tg/.

>>53380243
>Name created for a servant
>Is eventually used by a queen
Makes you think

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>>53380262

>>53380249
t. male centaur

pro tip: don't make a cyoa about female dolphins

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>>53380301
Now I want to know. I know male dolphins are pretty fucked up, but nothing about the females.

>>53380301
>people just end up arguing about what kind of name Cetacea is

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>>53380301
Why... Why did you feel the need to say that?

>>53380301
That's right, make a CYOA about dolphin mermaids.

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Am I doing these descriptions okay?

>>53380333
They're pussies can contract so hard and so fast your dick can get fucking ripped off.
They also secret juices that make you harder and cum more.

>>53380357
>They're
Motherfucker I knew I was right the first time.
*Their
Don't smoke kids. It makes you retarded.

>>53380357
>They also secret juices that make you harder and cum more.

Lordy. I want a waifu with that ability.

>>53380270
It's the name of one of the german empresses as well.

>>53380357
I'd fuck Rachel, so sure.

>>53380345
ZBG, get Sebastian as far away from the computer as possible. RIGHT. NOW. Lady Scorpio did enough damage for today, we don't need to reinforce the trauma.

>>53380379
That's what Tessa does.

>>53380357

Alexandra sounds like my type of gal

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>>53380397
Good taste.

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>>53379504
Fuck I was planning to do something similar to this.

>>53380379
Talissa from Zodiac Brides can do it.

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>>53380397
But I didn't write anything for Rachel...
>>53380406
Glad you like her!

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>>53380405
Tessa...

>>53380111
>Tribe of horse lords where every man is paired with a centauress who is both his steed and his wife.

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>>53380403
He's back in Zodiac preparing for the coming war. I'm pretty he's repressed it, so I think he'll be okay.

>>53380357
I want to cuddle with Tessa.

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>>53380423
>Glad you like her!

Keep it up anon this looks promising and you even managed to change my opinion of it and actually give me a good reason to be a drug dealer

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>>53380357
>tfw you can only fuck a dolphin once before your dick gets chop off

I like them, as drug friends go they're pretty cool

>>53380417
Do it anyway, see who is better.

>>53380477
That fucking JoJo reference.
I love you for that.

>>53380417
>I was planning
Do it anon. Don't let your ideas just be ideas.
Were you the guy in the last thread asking about librarian assassins thieves?

>>53380470
>you even managed to change my opinion
Have I achieved an Internet SuperPower?

>>53380501
Librarian assassin thieves: Our education system's last resort when you don't return your books on time!

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>>53380479
Basically the same premise but different lore. It's basically planeswalker the CYOA where you learn magic from other worlds.

>>53380501
I wasn't, but a library where you enter books and write them yourself through your actions sounds pretty neat too.

>>53379489
How do you earn points?

>>53380465
Let's be honest, Sebastien's obviously a pretty sheltered guy in his way. I'm pretty sure he's been repressing a LOT working up to the war. Some of his comments about the princesses' search histories are clearly those of a man trying very hard to not think about what things his future employers might be into.

>>53380357
page 1?

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Lewd Magic CYOA +16
.\Power Source
..|Exhibitionism -2
...\Sex -2
.\Powers
..|Vigor -2
..|Vitality -2
..|Swiftness -2
..|Potency -2
..|Ever-Living -4
..|Sense -1
...\Ghost in the Shell -3

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>Been here on-and-off since the days of the proto-generals when CYOAs had no name and were largely primitive item choices
>Made more than 9 of them over the years, not counting small shitty ones. Not going to reveal who I am or what I've done, don't bother
>Genuinely enjoyed making them. Still have 73 KB of 10+ text wips in various half-finished states, not counting 10 or so more 1kb "wips" which are just small notes
>Been losing more and more motivation as the general gets shittier and shittier
>Noticed that there are 2-3 dedicated shitposters that constantly try to start shit, and always, without fail, respond to all significantly good new OC with pure negativity just to stir things up
>High author turnover rate, most promising new authors just get shitposted into oblivion by the dedicated troll, older authors starting to fall off one by one as they reach the same destination as me
>Completely lost all drive to make CYOAs anymore, even knowing that many of the inevitible complaints aren't genuine. Nothing kills interest in making OC like the community worsening, not even the dedicated harassment

Well, congratulations, I guess. You win. You know who you are. You've done nothing but shit in your bed, and now it's piling up. The worst part is that I can tell that you legitimately enjoy this place, as well. If it was out of a genuine hatred then I could almost understand it, but I guess you're just an irredeemable retard. Giggle to yourself now about how mad I am, one day very soon you'll have nowhere left to go. I'm putting my creative talents into something actually profitable, now, so I guess I should thank you. Seeya.

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>Questions about elixirs
1. Do I get all these powers after my coronation? I assume I do but then what's the point of extending your lifespan with Vitality?
2. Why would anyone pick Beauty?
3. Can I pick multiple elixirs of the same color?

Guarian could use a more detailed description. I'd like to know if I he can protect me better than effects of other elixirs e.g. Grace.

>>53379406
Kobold, for entirely not-lewd reasons

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>>53381266

Sic transit gloria mundi

>>53381266
>Won't say who I am
But why? I mean if you're leaving what difference does it make. Your just punishing my curiosity

>>53381266
See you next month, fampai.

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>>53381266
Is this a new copypasta?

In all seriousness, I actually suspect that some of these shitposters, particularly the ones who target authors with personal insults (outside of me; everyone insults me), are other authors. Some of the people who gave DSA shit had no motivation outside of jealousy, that he was getting recognition. Maybe some lurkers got annoyed that people kept praising him, but there's still no motivation otherwise.

It's also been revealed that some authors just show ill-regard for others, here. I know one who came out as a shitposter to me a few weeks back, but I won't mention their name. It's kind of saddening.

Don't get me wrong, a lot of the shitposters here (probably the majority) are regular autists who don't make OC, but it's still a sad concept that the above statement is probably true.

>>53381340
Not the author but:

1. Vitality does more than extend your life span man. If it takes an Atomic Bomb to kill me if I take that shit, I AM TAKING THAT SHIT. Also, Stamina boost.

2. Lizette.

3. Pretty sure, yeah

>>53381417
>Personal insults
You mean the crazy cuckposter?

>Came out as a shitposter
SDA you can't come out to yourself

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>>53379486
>>53379504
neat. Still WIP I'm assuming?

>>53381417
You of all people are gonna talk about how sad it is that there are shitposting authors?

>>53381470
SDA doesn't real shitposts. Not like these people

>>53381470
I think there's a big difference between posting smug anime girls and dedicated author harassment, but every post we continue this conversation is a figurative (You) the shitposter gets to enjoy.

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>>53381340
1. Yes. The Elixirs are meant to be weakened versions of your abilities that will be unlocked once you take the Throne. Vitality is something I need to rewrite because of how the lifespan thing doesn't really help in your current situation.
2. Personally, I always like to choose whatever option makes me hotter and it's passive ability to make you more desirable and persuasive can be useful if you use it correctly.
3. Of course. The three Elixir limit doesn't prevent you from picking all three from the same category.
I simply organized them by
>Body
>Mind
>Soul

Guardian is sort of left vague intentionally because it's supposed to imply that your you guardian can take almost any form based on your personality.
After I've done the lore page and the mystery boxes, I'm contemplating making a CYOA based around the idea of Guardians because I love Persona and JoJo.

>>53381417
This is all your fault. You're like the Haruhi Suzumiya of /cyoag/. You unconsciously alter the state of the threads, and since you're a smug, shitposting namefag, you're making the threads worse.

>>53381506
>dedicated author harassment

it's only a harassment when an author shows he's butthurt, otherwise it's just shitposting. I don't understand why anyone would care about it

>>53381464
>>53381470
Oh, don't get me wrong, I shitpost dearly. But I don't target anyone.

In that post, I meant people who lash out at authors.

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>>53381508
I'm just gonna repost the whole thing for anons that haven't seen it yet.
Hope you guys don't mind.

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>>53381529

>>53380319
> compatibility
See, that is actually one of the problems I am having.
I'm extremely conflicted between Talisa, Vignette, the Gemini twins, Lucianna, Suri, Scarlatina, and Persephone.
Leaning towards Vignette, because we'd get along, but Lucianna honestly is very tempting, though as a Taurus, we'd conflict (and I am a stereotypical headstrong Taurus when off-duty).

>>53379489
Needs to be a lot clearer. For example, does the Gender Distribution Table automatically take effect, and I have to pay two points to choose my 1d20 result? Or do I only get the Gender Distribution Table if I pay two points, or if I roll it randomly?

>>53381340
> 2. Why would anyone pick Beauty?
Pheromone control to help you manipulate the brides into agreeing to a harem end.

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>>53381542
Also, I was thinking...
We were imagining this whole thing as an anime a couple threads back.
Hypothetically, what would you want the OP and ED to be?
Just interested in hearing what you guys think.

>>53381508
Wasn't able to comment before, but I love Scarlatina and and Sephy, great work! I liked the cute picture of Sephy you didn't use better so that's the Sephy in my heart.

Suri, Scarlatina and Sephy are all fucking great, it's hard to choose. I honestly like most all of them to varying degrees. Pretty good waifus. Only ones I'm not fond of are Cassandra and Angelica.

>>53381340
What exactly does picking a chosen bride do?

>>53381417
Can SDA solve the mystery of the shitposters' identities? Can he save his precious CYOAG from oblivion?

You know now that I think of it, I'm surprised there's not a lot of ACE DETECTIVE cyoa

>>53381529
May I question, how is the political structure of the Zodiac Kingdom?
And more, how big is your political power as a king?
Is there laws that even the king have to obey?
One anon in another thread mentioned the topic of rape. Myself, I think it's nor only morally wrong and all, but doesn't seem much exciting for me (perhaps because of my passive nature in this matters). However, using it as a reference, if I were king, could I just go around raping however I wanted?

>>53381592
Blesses you with many orgasms.

>>53381266
Underrated post

>>53381592
If you're going for only one it's your true waifu.
If you're catching them all it's your starter waifu

>>53381417
You made the Cowboy CYOA right? could you talk about how you come up with your stuff? Do they come to you in dreams or something?

>>53381646
>You made the Cowboy CYOA right?
Nope

>could you talk about how you come up with your stuff?
Drugs

>Do they come to you in dreams or something?
Extreme drugs, like the marijuanas

>>53381646
Pretty sure that was DSA unless there's a non-meme one.

>>53381417
>won't mention their name
You've said this same story before.
Well, I know it's not me. I generally try to encourage other authors, even if I don't particularly like or agree with their design.

Honestly, I like it when my cyoas brew up some kind of shitstorm of negativity. It shows they care about your work in some twisted way because they wish to see it conform to their desires rather than ignoring it. It is also great for discussions and conflict between interests. Some shitposting is based on grudges to a persona, which is just petty but what else can you expect from an unfiltered anonymous website.

>>53381672
Then did you make the emerald shard one?

>>53381525
It's not really about butthurt, but if the author starts to feel that they and/or the CYOAs they make cause nothing but shitstorms of negativity in the thread and few actual builds or discussion that's likely quite discouraging.

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>>53381592
The idea is that by picking a Bride, you give yourself a partner for the War.
To watch your back and give you an edge since you've only got access to a fraction of your abilities and all of the Brides are going to be fully at their peak abilities, which you'll have a pretty hard time against if you're not smart about the whole thing and don't have a partner.
Plus it gives the opportunity to actually chose who you want to marry instead of simply being forced to marry whichever girl wins.
>>53381617
The Kingdom of Zodiac is an absolute monarchy.
The nation actually worships the Throne and those who sit upon it because it's made of an ancient sacred tree called the Great Iron Oak.
As King, your word is law and you're almost worshiped as a god to a certain degree.
I realize my moral fag is showing, but I honestly gagged a little at that idea.
All the same, you are the King, so you could hypothetically go around raping whomever or whatever you want.
You'd probably not be remembered fondling if you did, though.
And Sebastian would look at you with a disappointed and melancholy expression because of your actions.

>>53381679
There was a guy making a Wild West cyoa, gathering ideas and posting a quick proof of concept, but I don't know if he's still around. I think a lot of new authors from the past few months don't stick around long.

>>53381340
>Vitality
>Knowledge
>Magic

Knowledge to know all magical spells, vitality for a long enough life to master them, and hopefully there's a spell for immortality (besides becoming a lich). If not, I can fuck around with conjured sluts in a self-made pocket dimension while taking on a few apprentices and playing games.

>>53381740
Good, retards like him need to fuck off back to Rebbit where they belong.

>>53381698
>You've said this same story before.
It's not the first time it's happened.

>some kind of shitstorm of negativity
That heavily depends on the context. I also don't think the way to go about making CYOAs is to garnish negative responses.

>>53381699
No.

>>53381733
If you ever do an update for it, maybe you should include a lore section because it's hard to figure out all that stuff. Maybe something like you're given a history book, so it doesn't come off as inauthentic or as a completely forced info dump. Well I think it would be nice at least

>>53381417
I won't lie, I sometimes say not nice things about other authors, but I try to be constructive about it.

>>53381733
I feel bad about making a choice? What if my preferred candidate does not win? I wouldn't want my future wife to have a chip on her shoulder because I didn't pick her. Better to just let them figure it out and marry the winner.

>>53379406
Dragon, immediately dragon, literally describes the best freaking reason to ever know a dragon, incredibly warm hugs. I don't care if it's furry trash, I like cuddling and dragons do it right

>>53381790
Then what the fuck have you done

>>53381866
He's done Star Dust, Archangel/Demon, Battle Mage, Some sword thing, and a few others I think I'm missing

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>>53381866
Nothing. I'm only here to shitpost.

>>53379486
>>53379504
Guesses on lore:

>Doom was caused by Clockwork Dias's fall, an infinite number of individuals dying in an infinite number of timelines
>Alpha and King Omega are the original Duality from Dusk Mirror
>Your soul is the same as the First Hero. You're the next incarnation.
>First Hero had Shearpoint and was the founder of the Order. He used the Inner Gate to create the multiverse gates and manipulated the "law of the universe" by forging a contract.
>Or, First Hero had the Eternal Comet, but refused to give up his humanity for power.
>Pirate King Bones got angry at the First Hero for accepting his eventual death if it meant he kept his humanity. Bones decided humanity wasn't worth death.

>>53381733
>And Sebastian would look at you with a disappointed and melancholy expression because of your actions.
I'd rape that expression right off his fucking face that's what I'd do.

I'm kidding I love Sebastian and I want to be a good ruler.

>>53381790
>is to garnish negative responses
I never said I make them for that purpose, only that it can be enjoyable when it happens over something trivial or based upon the designer's decision.

And I'm pretty sure it's one of those authors who take themselves too serious and never reveal themselves.

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>>53381791
>maybe you should include a lore section
That is exactly what I intend for the 6th page.
I really also want to make a map of Zodiac, but I can't draw for shit and most of the programs and sites I've found are obnoxious at best and incomprehensible at worst.
That page is also where Sebastian would introduce the mystery boxes.
Of which I plan on making three.
One for a way to get more elixirs, one for the 13th secret waifu, and one where you say fuck it and marry Sebastian instead.
>>53381826
Fair enough.
The entire thing kind of assumes you'd win by teaming up with your future wife, but I can definitely see how it would be pretty fucking awkward to chose one girl only for the both of you to lose and you being forced to marry someone else.
That's exactly why Sebastian says you have the option to go it alone.

>>53381929
>Want to make a map
https://drive.google.com/drive/folders/0Bwl-aJm3wG4nR2hvU3BBTjluU1k
Third item is on maps. Looks pretty easy to follow if you're actually that interested in doing it, though in either case I would worry about finishing your work before working on updates/extras

>>53381919
Sometimes it has nothing to even do with the actual content though, like the DSA guy just shouted about NTR. That was a particularly bad case though.

What happens when my chosen bride loses the war? What will stop me from bitchslapping the winner with the force of thousand suns after our crowning?

>>53381981
Being King means you can abuse your wife as much as you wish.

>>53381919
>>53381965
I think the DSA-NTR anon is really the only one I can easily say who really matches the author hate SDA is talking about, though I'm not sure if that's jealousy or just some crazy autist.

>>53381994
I agree, but it isn't uncommon for discussion to devolve into a shitstorm which has little to do with the original CYOA.

>>53381965
They go for any opening any author presents them and pick away at it in the hopes that someone else will carry the torch for them. NTR is a touchy subject, so if they knew both DSA would respond, and others would respond to DSA's response. They probably don't even care all that much about NTR, they just knew other people would.

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>>53381886
No fun.

I don't know if I'll be able to deliver today; I've got 4 more students minus two I decided to cut and may add in the future to write and god damn I'm slow. I listened to a two hour Jordan Peterson podcast to figure out how I wanted to write this girl's 100-word dialogue description, and then sat here for another hour trying to actually write it. And I haven't even gone through with editing yet.

And I still have to figure out options for "field trip" options.

I'll probably have them done soon but I'll probably not release it till tomorrow.

>>53382016
I'm sure they didn't actually care about NTR. I do think it was either jealously or general resentment of too much positivity being heaped on one person, considering the timing of it.

>>53382012
Oh sure, I'm not saying the original complaint about here is inaccurate, I'm just questioning SDA's logic. I've had the same thought before but it seems more likely it's just because this place has run its course than anything else.

>>53382030
Then why would the other NTR one get so much flak

>>53382030
I think the jealousy thing is a bit of a stretch. A shitposter doesn't need a reason to shitpost. They just need a reaction, which we inevitably give. Hell, even I'm guilty even though I fucking know better.

>>53382017
I hope you have a ditzy girl in there.

>>53381991
Well that doesnt sound very motivating for the girls

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>>53381962
>Photoshop 7
Aww... But I'm a pleb and don't know how to photoshop...
Guess I'll see if I can do it in Paint.net and if not, finally nut up and figure out how to use the damn program...
>>53381981
>my chosen bride loses the war
Why do you guys have such little faith in your waifus? Together you're supposed to be able to tackle all that stands in your way with the power of love.
>>53381991
Please don't abuse the waifus... They just want to make you happy.
>>53382017
I'm excited. I really love your stuff and I've been starved for new CYOAs to dick around with.

>>53381994
TokHaar gets a lot of unwarranted hate too, in my opinion. Of course, his stuff isn't nearly on the level of DSA, but it does get a decent amount of (you)s. It's just symptomatic of people simply not being able to handle something that doesn't fit in their limited scope of interest.

>>53382082
>Why do you guys have such little faith in your waifus?
Games arent fun on ezmode

>>53382082
>Together you're supposed to be able to tackle all that stands in your way with the power of love.

Yes! Nice CYOA, by the way. I thank you.

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=EntrnAqmp6Q

>>53382064
I have a clumsy german girl who likes to wander and get lost in the engineering sector of the city. Also an aloofed, eccentric piano player who has a hard-to-pronounce name so everyone just calls her Ringo.

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>>53379486
This is brilliant mate! I love it! It's literally choosing a philosophy to live by. It's intense. Did you make this, or do you know where it came from?

>>53382106
I never doubted you. You deliver everything that isn't dragon waifus.

>>53381826
I guess since the brides only had a small letter to give to you, they couldn't expect you do already deeply have feelings for any of them. So an unchosen winner bribe may be empathic about the situation and don't hold a grudge? Well, I guess I wouldn't hold a grudge in a situation like this, at least. Not forever.
>>53381733
My elixir choice will be the same from the start, then: M-06; S-09;S-12.
I will try to marry Lucianna, Vignette, Scarlatina and Cassandra. I will initially choose Luciana because I do not live in a very populated area, but Lucianna should still be very strong late-game, making her a target in early game. So I will choose her because I think she is the one that have highest chance of falling early. Then I will probably try to locate Cassandra and go to her as fast as possible with magic and with domination convince her to be a second wife. With Cassandra on the team most immediate threats shouldn't be so much trouble. Still, I would try to recruit Scarlatina and Vignette fast because I worry some other bribe may kill them before I get to them. I think I could convince many of the other brides to just give up (like Abirathi because I don't want to travel). The ones left shouldn't be much trouble to simply defeat. Worst case scenario I will just have to retreat until Lucianna becomes powerful enough.

Initially, I would let most of the ruling to Cassandra and Lucianna. Scarlatina would be picked mostly so that I have someone to focus my negative tendencies and fetishes, so that I don't let it create trouble elsewhere. Maybe I would use king-version domination on Scarlatina for her to be more cruel and smug (like the breast thing with Talita).
A dark part of me would be tempted to see what would happen in a threesome with Scarlatina and Vignette... or even just let Scarlatina with Vignette, but I think I can avoid it.

>>53382082
>CYOAs to dick around with
Unfortunately it won't be a big one, it's just a simple one-pager with three-ish sections to choose one option from. It won't be any longer than the roommate CYOAs I made. Probably won't last more than a day's worth of discussion, but I'm treating it more as a self-improvement sort of project.

>>53382119
Thanks, anon. All the more reason why I want to explore and refine my character writing here.

>>53379486
>>53379504
>>53381892
Though I wonder, could a Clockwork Dias prevent the Doom? It would probably wipe you out of existence, but... perhaps that would be worth it. Who knows, it could be the Singularity Amoxis was destroyed by the same force that caused the Doom to prevent anyone from reversing it.

Anyway, I'd go with Starlight Chasis and Deeja. The Abyssbook might have helpful information regarding where the phylactery could be.

If the author sees this, Starlight Chasis is kind of boring if it just gives three free spells, even if they're godtier. Unless they're unique or something.

>>53381891
Do you even make CYOAs?

i'm fairly sure you just shitpost all day and the autism you radiate just makes CYOAs for you

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>>53382102
>not posting the song I was referencing.
https://youtu.be/KCkgYhtz64U
I commend your taste, anon. I must prefer Huey Lewis.
>>53382125
Nice plan. Scarlatina would probably try to slowly corrupt Vignette and make her a giant deviant.
>>53382153
Sounds good enough for me! I'm still hyped.

>>53379486
Currently leaning Starlight Chassis and Laheera Rose. I love the atmosphere, though.

>>53379486
Anyone else reading this reminded of A Quiet CYOA?

>>53381417
>In all seriousness, I actually suspect that some of these shitposters, particularly the ones who target authors with personal insults (outside of me; everyone insults me), are other authors.
I had never considered that possibility. That's quite depressing.

>Don't get me wrong, a lot of the shitposters here (probably the majority) are regular autists who don't make OC, but it's still a sad concept that the above statement is probably true.
In my defense, I'm busy with a doctorate right now. (So why am I on /tg/? Um...)

>>53382256
Why do you always ignore me senpai?

>>53382241
>the autism you radiate just makes CYOAs for you
That's one way to put it.

>>53382303
>doctorate
Ooo, what field?

>>53382082
Oh right. I was told Scorpio would be good for yuri option. Should I assume she is a depraved bisexual and/or yandere enough to not care about your body?

>>53382298
Not only did the author say it was part of his inspiration, he's using the same "currency" as in Quiet, so yes.

>>53382256
You didn't answer me last thread; how does (learning) magic work? Is it analytical, intuitive, or something else? Is it helped by Earth knowledge (which I assume the injection is limited to)?

>>53382340
Your response wasn't fucking good enough.

He ignored me too, it's okay.

>>53382340
I'm ignoring you?
Shit, sorry anon. What did you want to say?
>>53382361
Scarlatina's just kinda so starved for sex that she's willing to do just about anything for a chance to finally get off.
She can swap your genders around if you're into that.
Zodiac's alchemy is nuts.
>>53382385
That magic that you can unlock with S-09 is fairly intuitive. Over the next couples days after you take it you'll start to get a sense of how it works from how it feels and can start piecing together what you're capable.
Knowledge of Earth, especially stuff like chemistry and physics could definitely improve your capabilities.

>>53382434
>Shit, sorry anon. What did you want to say?
From one creator to another, I love you.
Would you ever be open to a collab?

>>53382434
Different anon, but how powerful is magic. Can it achieve fountain of youth territory? If you do ever get more into the lore I guess I'd appreciate a bit more information on abilities to get a deeper sense of how things work

>>53381573
Sephy is fucking perfect.

>>53382434
>She can swap your genders around if you're into that.
Might be fun sometimes but I like being a girl. She's gonna have to get used to good old fashioned forbidden love.

>>53382017
Looks good! Two minor nitpicks.

1)Science is quite often concerned with abstract concepts, especially in notoriously theory-heavy fields like mana-wave physics. (If you're not comfortable with tensors, Hamiltonians, and Dietsch-Lieberman invocations, don't bother trying to do it.) So it doesn't make sense for her to hate abstract concepts. This is particularly true, I'd wager, for someone who complains that a curriculum "lose[s] sight of the superordinate principles," i.e., that it is assembled without regard to any higher ordering of concepts; that's very much a theorist's complaint. She probably hates ill-defined concepts instead, especially the kind where everyone rolls their eyes or starts whining when you try to pin them down.

2) You can gorge yourself on something, and you can become engorged with something (though I'd rather you didn't), but you can't engorge yourself in something. "Immerse," though conventional— annoying, I know— is really the better word here.

>>53380465
It's time to actually play for real, now that all the girls are out and I can judge them all. As a Gemini... I tend to be of two minds on these things. But we'll see.

>Injections
B-02, M-06, S-12. With inhuman vitality I won't die if I get accidentally hit by one of the lovely ladies, with skill I can actually fight on a relatively level playing field, and with domination, well... it makes The Plan more likely to work, even if just a bit.

The Brides

>Catherine of House Cancer
Well, I'm not particularly into onee-san's, though I don't at all mind a mature woman. She seems sweet, I suppose.

>Scarlatina of House Scorpio
Hoo boy, is she a thirsty one. I'm curious about her stories. If I married her, I'd encourage her to continue with them, I'm sure.

>Persephone of House Pisces
She seems super sweet, honestly. Also a potentially quite dangerous opponent.

>Angelica of House Aries
Hmm. Good person at heart, but a little... too self-assured of her superiority. Also a little yandere, what with her possessiveness.

>Lucianna of House Leo
Another dominant, very potentially controlling girl who Really Wants This. Also a leader of men, and looks the spitting image of Best Saber. She might win even if I don't pick her, and I wouldn't hate that.

>Suri of House Sagittarius
Um... well that's creepy. Even creepier than Sephy looking at the browser history. Scarousing? She's probably reading this right now and laughing at my reaction. As is Sephy. Sorry, I don't mean it as a negative, girls!

>Lizette of House Libra
Unlike the others, this girl actually scares me.

>Abirathi of House Aquarius
I mean, she seems nice enough.

>Gwendolin and Gracia of House Gemini
Now we're talking. These are two absolute cuties. And threesomes sound like fun with them.

>Cassandra of House Capricorn
Cassandra is rocking that sexy teacher vibe. She seems deeply responsible, and I'm totally all for a cute teacher waifu.

No waifu can ever heat the unpredicibility of a real cute girl, nor be as unique as her or bring as much joy. Just a reminder.

>>53382082
Oh well if you ever find a good way to make maps It'd be cool if you posted it in the thread. I'm thinking of doing a lore/map section if I ever update my ace combat one, so it'd be a major help

What's more powerful: Love or The D?

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>>53382553
You've never seen the true best girl then
tfw I want to put her in a cyoa, but I want her to be mine exclusively
Oh curse my autism.

>>53382565
>implying they aren't one and the same

>>53382355
Paleobiology.

But I study marine invertebrates, not dinosaurs, so don't ask me dinosaur questions. I'm much more interested in the process of evolution than I am in any particular group of organisms.

Does anyone have some suggestions for fun things to do while traveling? Like going to casinos (not my kind of fun, but someone's), diving reefs, exploring the catacombs of a city, climbing a mountain, that kind of thing. I'm still thinking about a travel CYOA.

>>53382573
Ice girls are nice.

>>53382573
Why not just make a personal version for yourself then, and just never publish that version publicly?

>>53382588
Because I want recognition for my work. What? You think I did this shit for free? I'm not a Janitor.

>>53382583
>But I study marine invertebrates, not dinosaurs, so don't ask me dinosaur questions
You make my inner 7 year old cry with that kind of talk.

What is the most horrifying undersea creature of the pre-historic world, in your estimation?

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>>53382514
>Talisa of house Taurus
She seems cute as a button. Sounds like someone it'd be fun to spend time with.

>Vignette of House Virgo
If Talisa is cute as a button, Vignette seems like an utter doll. I just want to give her headpats, and I love what ZBG did with putting her with bunny ears. Adorable.

So the question is, who do I choose? Well... pic related.

So fuck it. Fuck it! Let's do it. Let's go crazy. I'm gonna win them all. I'm gonna make them all love me, and with my superhuman stamina I will Satisfy All Thirteen In Bed. And in life. Will possibly need to use my magic to split myself between the girls at night and then combine them when I'm done. I mean, that might even be a brilliant plan to give ALL of them the first night, so that none of them have to wait. Mwa ha. But that comes later. First is, win them all and charm them all.

It'll take time and effort. It'll take... a whole third post. Possibly fourth. Oh, well.

We start with who I choose at first. And the answer? None. I pick none to come with me at first, giving an answer that I will not choose until after I have met every girl. A letter is not enough, I will make clear. I need to meet you all, safely, unmolested, for a two hour date.

If any girl wishes to have a shot, they will have to-

>>53382595
Nigger, prehistoric sharks could launch like a missile, tearing inside prey's bodies, and eat it from the inside out.

>>53380417
I'm sorry anon, but it's a wide genre. Do it anyway.

>>53382583
One thing I find about traveling is that it's less the things you do, so much as how you feel when you are doing them. So I'd suggest coming up with a bunch of reasons for travel, feelings people would want to experience, and then link those feelings with potential activities, instead of just coming up with the list of things directly.

>>53382583
>Does anyone have some suggestions for fun things to do while traveling?

Anything and everything to do with food. I'm a big foodie, so one of the biggest draws of traveling to me is trying and experiencing all of the local foods.

>>53382553
Nor can they break your heart, anon. That's the point, I'm sure

>>53382573
Just make her the narrator.

>>53382576
Hmm, you've given me something to ponder.

>>53382634
>implying narrators never get waifued

>>53381467
Yeah, it's going to be short tho. I really don't want this to end up too long.

>>53381892
Some of those are dead on... The CYOA isn't even out yet anon chill

>>53382223
Two of those three spells are unique, one is available. Still thinking out how to balance it out. Feel free to leave suggestions.

>>53382621
Why be with a heartbreaker? Only date good people and it's easy

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>>53382463
>open to a collab?
People collab on CYOAs? I've never heard of such a thing.
I love you too, guy.
I'd totally be down to make something together. What did you have in mind?
>>53382468
Think upper tier Pathfinder levels of magic. You could totally do some fountain of youth level shit, but you could just as easily get a potion to do the same thing from the Court's Head Alchemist or Scarlatina.
>>53382489
Yay! Sephy thinks you're perfect too!
Have a picture of the character I used for her portrait.
>>53382505
You're gonna need to let her give you a penis at one point or let her grab some of your DNA. Gotta make sure you have an heir to the Throne so Zodiac doesn't wind up in the same situation all over again.
>>53382514
>looks the spitting image of Best Saber
You get a gold star in my book for excellent taste!
Also I love you Bride reviews!
Don't worry,
I won't tell Suri that you think she's creepy.
Sephy probably just thinks you're being cute for worrying about it.
>bunny ears
Holy shit you remember shit I forgot about!

>>53382634
Maybe

But then it'll have to be a perfect cyoa so it honors Mizore.

>>53382651
>Implying you have to offer the narrator as an option
>Implying every female must be romantically uninvolved
>Implying self-inserts aren't a thing

>>53382661
Anon, even good people can break your heart. People grow and change. Sometimes the relationship doesn't grow along. You may find yourself looking across the couch at someone who used to mean the world to you and wondering where it went wrong. You did all the right things. So why has it all gone cold?

>>53382675
>Implying you have to offer the narrator as an option

>implying that's ever stopped anyone

>>53382669
>What did you have in mind?
Couldn't say right now since I'm working on one and I don't want to muddle my mind. Join the discord, we can plan their sometime

I mean...if you want....

>>53382434
So I'm assuming all the Mental powers improve your magical abilities in their own way? What's the rough difference between someone with none and with either?

>>53382607
Ha ha ha ha ha. Yeah, so, that plan blows up immediately. Like half the girls immediately disregard and go straight for me in order to make me theirs.

So it's time to fight. In my town, Lucianna heads towards the nearby airforce base, Talisa gathers animals, Selphy prepares her robot army, Vignette hides in Manito Park, but Scarlatina, Lizette, Suri, and Angelica launch a frontal attack that sparks the first major battle of the war, right in front of my house.

The entire neighborhood is wasted, and I am forced to flee. My foolish attempt to broker peace at the start failed because many girls will simply not bother, they are certain I am theirs. Time to find a girl and admit my mistake.

Quickly I run into Catherine in a safe location, away from the others. I explain to her that I dont want any of the girls to die, and that I have a plan. I talk to her for a long while, and ask her to contact the more peaceable girls. In exchange, I promise that no matter what, I will give her all the children she wants, and all the snuggles too. What, she asks, I picked her? Well... that's the thing, I explain lightly. I can't pick her alone. But this entire thing is mad anyway. I have a better plan. A plan that will change how this works forever. I will make her mine, but I will also have to make the others mine. That doesn't mean she won't get a lot of attention. But as long as she can handle that, she will get what she wishes most.

She agrees, and leaves to parlay with Talisa, Vignette, and I leave to meet with Gwen and Gracia. I challenge them to a game, and battle them with my new Skill at the game, and explain as I beat them what I want: An interesting, exciting life. They would be queens... but so would the others. Yes, that's not what you want, but what I promise is that it'll always be fun... and they won't have to wait their turn. Unsure, I make a wager. If I can beat them in the end, they will do it.

I manage it with the skill I chose at the start.

>>53382717
How the fuck do I always use the wrong "there"
*there sometime

>>53379563
In the starlight bio alone there is alot of aids.

>Eldrich
>Explenation
> very slightest (put one or the other)

>>53382698
>What are the next two lines in my post
>Implying having King Anon Thundercock IV as an established force in the city won't stop all but the most autistic people from waifuing Rose Thundercock

can suri turn into a centaur

>>53382693
A real flower vs a plastic one. The real one, you may have to see bloom, and then wither. With the plastic one, it's beautiful and it will never die, but it never lives either. There is no soft touch of petals, no unique scent. And with the organic one, if you treat it right and water it and give it love, it may never wither at all. But even if it does, surely you'd rather have a short lived real flower than a perpetual fraud?

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>>53382693
>So why has it all gone cold?

Not understanding male and female nature, shaky foundations formed upon lust and sex, and (((other things)) are common occurrences from what I've gathered.

>>53382717
What even goes on in the Discord?

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>>53382776

>>53382508
Actually, by abstract concepts, I meant something along the lines of ill-defined concepts. Things that aren't easily understood by logic, or at least when things are cited as being understood when there isn't a logical, practical thesis behind it.

I don't know how I feel about immerse, that's a bit too fluffy of a word. I'll have to find a better alternative.

Thanks for the feedback, I appreciate nitpicks like these, especially when they're by someone who knows what they're talking about.

>>53381508
I'm bored enough to rank the waifus most to least preferred. Top is #1, bottom is last place.

>Scarlatina
Scorpio is my favorite sign type. I like intense possessive yandere and her picture is 10/10 perfect. All the sex is nice bonus.
>Sephy
A close second. Brilliant, sweet, caring, adorable. A little flighty maybe but it makes her even cuter. And she has a giant gun. What's not to love?
>Suri
Stalking is adorable, and I just really like her personality, I think we'll have a lot of fun. Useful skill too. I don't mind indulging her uh.. fantasies either.
>Lizette
Her obsession with "beauty" and seems a little less than sane and I find that hot.
>Lucianna
Strong, noble, capable an completely devoted. She has a lot of charisma, I quite like her.
>Gwen and Gracy
Threesomes with them sound great, and they're playful personalities are very cute.
>Vignette
Man I do love Vignette, she's a real sweetheart. She needs to be protected no matter who wins.
>Abirathi
I feel bad for putting her so low, I think she'd be a lot of fun to go adventuring with.
>Talisa
Very likeable but farm-ish girls aren't my type.
>Catherine
She's sweet but I don't know, not feeling her. Don't really care too much for children either.
>Angelica
She's a little too smug and warrior-like for my tastes.
>Cassandra
Too much of a buzzkill for me, and I dont like femdom much either.

Sebastian is the real waifu though.

>>53382776
Probably a circle jerk of anime and memes, like every other 4chan discord. Littered among this vocal majority are good men who talk little in the discord except about CYOA's, because they're not complete tools.

>>53382776
It's a barren wasteland where you can shitpost lightly and rarely have good conversations when people are on.

>>53382776
Talk about chinks ruining the canadian housing markets, judging from what I've seen whenever I'm on.

>>53382669
>You're gonna need to let her give you a penis at one point or let her grab some of your DNA. Gotta make sure you have an heir to the Throne so Zodiac doesn't wind up in the same situation all over again.
That's fine by me. I don't exactly want one, but the idea of having a dick and being able to "properly" fuck a girl is kind of hot.

>>53379973
>something to fuck
The CYOA says the library can take any female form.
It's not specifically stated to be incorporeal.
She has access to all magical tomes ever written down.
And it's not really a library, but a spirit of a young woman bound to the library.

Does anyone else always just choose the waifu that seems the most real? Sometimes it can be a cool gimmick, but you want to live the rest of your life with someone you can relate to,no?

>>53382857
Who is the realest waifu?

>>53382857
Can't say I've ever done that in a CYOA, but I sometimes gravitate towards those types in anime.

>>53382669
Glad you like it. And Suri is creepy in the sense that she has been stalking me, not that her actual personality is that creepy. It's Lizette who's the actual red flag.

>>53382607
>>53382728
(cont.)
So, winning the Gemini sisters over with a game and a bet is good, and Cassandra tries, but it's a start. The next battle is soon thereafter. Sephy, with her army, needs to be dealt with and put on-side in order to stop Lucianna, and so I fight her along with the Gemini sisters. If I manage to win, the plan is to explain my plan, that I want her to be a part of this group, to stop all the fighting and end this fight-to-the-death thing. Electrical lightning attacks probably help short out some of her machines, which would help... and once she's stunned, I let her know. I WILL choose her. But I must take all the girls as wives, in order to stop this madness. However... I swear I will give her a wonderful time, let her connect with the tech of my world too, call her Sephy... and give her more time than she'd expect. Luckily, this also means the parts of being Queen she's not best at don't need to be done by her. She can focus on her machines!

If that works, that's good. Because the battles of the other girls continue. But I get a message from one of Cassandra's spirits. Talisa is refusing outright! She doesn't wanna be part of a harem. Well... I have to go myself, with my new army in tow, and talk to her. Battling her animals and avoiding harming them as much as possible with the robot army, I get close to Talisa and... kiss her. I explain the truth: That I can't refuse these girls, but I have a plan. A plan to give them everything they want. Magic, which I'm sure is possible and by now surely confirmed, allowing me to split into clones for part of the day... and that if she is willing to have me, blah blah, heartfelt words, she'd probably melt. Unhappy, but agree to pull back.

>>53382857
I choose the waifu who seems most likely to ignore or make up for my horrible mental, emotional, and social problems.

>>53382776
Off-topic discussion, but mostly tame stuff, surprisingly. Nothing like >>53382833 says, even though that is the case for most 4chan discords.

HL is more white than I am despite her being supposedly middle-eastern.

>>53382857
I do.

>>53382857
I only waifu the realest of niggas.

>>53382877
Why not choose a waifu that will build you up? Why content yourself to be mediocre, even in your fantasies?
>>53382885
Maybe you're not worthless after all.
>>53382866
Whoever doesn't seem like a stereotype mixed with an image, it instead a believable likable character.

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>>53382717
Alright, I finally actually joined the discord so just bug me whenever you want.
>>53382723
Correct.
I suppose the difference would be something like the difference between a self-taught mage and a wizard who was intensely trained by a master.
Not sure how to put it... Something like relying on gut feelings and basic spells compared to complex, reality altering stuff like out of the Fate series.
>>53382756
Suri can be whatever you want, big boy.
>>53382776
From the half a minute I've lurked in it, some weird shit.
>>53382830
>Stalking is adorable
Huh, never thought I'd hear those words in that order...
But I'm glad you like her special way of keeping an eye on you.
Angelica and Cassandra seem to be the least popular girls, but I think that's because they're kind of straight-laced compared to everyone else.
>>53382843
That's the spirit, anon!

>>53382918
I wanted a specific example of a real-seeming waifu.

>>53382857
Is there a lot of CYOA where the waifus have apparent and obvious different of realism? I mean aside from waifu pickers having a few "purely for sexual release" realism seems pretty evenly distributed.

>>53382885
>Likes big butts
>Into massive amounts of charts and numbers
Are you blasian?

>>53381467
Domain lvl 5 (91)
Abjuration lvl 5 (82)
Time lvl 5 (73)
Outlive universe (63)
Meta magic lvl 5 (54)
Teleportation lvl 3 (49)
Conjuring lvl 5 (40)
Healing lvl. 5 (31)
Fire lvl. 5 (22)
Water lvl 5 (13)
Muscle wizard (3)
Air lvl. 2 (0)

>>53382857
Nah. Although, none of them ever seem particularly "real" to me. I just choose the one that best aligns with what I would seek in a partner

>>53382607
>>53382728
>>53382876

By now, Suri knows what I'm doing and planning. And she comes to me herself. She understand what I'm doing, and has watched me speak to Talisa. She's jealous, but I let her know that what I said for them is true for her as well. And I start asking about her real form, though she refuses and just shows me her cute elf body. I do kiss her at one point to get her on side.

I go back to Vignette and attempt once more. I let myself get captured, and spend over a day with her. Eventually, as we bond over picture books and me putting cute daisy-chains on her head, I explain what my plan is, and what I intend for her, and that I will make her the happiest wife, and be the best husband she could ask for. Though doubting, I eventually break her down, and leave with her.

In time to see chaos, as my side is being beaten back and Lucianna and Lizette and others continue to fight. Honestly, I'm not sure how it goes from here, but I continue with the goal of getting close to each girl, spend as much time with her as I can, and ultimately make clear that, hey, this plan is gonna happen, you want in or out?

Lucianna is the final boss, surely. But with Cassandra and Suri and Sephy on the front lines, I can get to her, and dom her into submission too.

And thus comes married life with all twelve waifus. I really, REALLY hope there's a spell that allows you to make shadow-clones.

ZBG? There is, right? I wasn't just bullshitting these girls...?

>>53382918
Because of suspension of disbelief. It's not realistic that I'd be better than mediocre.

>>53382934
>From the half a minute I've lurked in it, some weird shit.
We're just talking about Testosterone and cutting our dicks off. Whats so weird?

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>>53382941
>blasian
No, I'm white. I just meant that HL acts more white than I do.

>>53382940
>>53382941
Gentle Waifu Femdom. Almost all of those are just silly for a long term relationship. Its a nice fetish,but are you content to live the rest of your life As slave to a tiger girl? The funny squid girl is a vanilla and seemingly boring choice, but more than likely the happiest overall one. She's more real in the sense that she's not a fetish personified.
>>53382950
But anyone can become better than mediocre. Choose your waifu and work for her. Choose someone that loves you and wants you to be the best you can be.

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>>53381467
Muscle Wizard [90]
Outlive Universe [80]
Domain 5 [71]
Longevity 5 [62]
Transmuting 5 [53]
Charm 5 [44]
Compulsion 5 [35]
Conjuring 5 [26]
Polymorphing 5 [17]
Healing 5 [8]
Teleportation 3 [1]
Air 2 [0]

>>53383001
Wish pill is inherently broken.

>Money Pill
>Disease Immune Pill
>Sex Appeal Pill

>>53382595
>You make my inner 7 year old cry with that kind of talk.
I know, I know.

The thing is, the marine invertebrate fossil record is very good, in terms of proportional representation of stuff that lived on Earth. The vertebrate fossil record isn't, although vertebrate fossils can convey a lot more information than shells can. So if you want to put together a picture of what life on Earth, generally, was doing in a given slice of time, oftentimes you'll be relying on the marine invertebrate record. It's not as flashy, but it's more likely to yield insights into general principles of evolution.

>What is the most horrifying undersea creature of the pre-historic world, in your estimation?
It depends on what you're horrified by— some people would probably be more frightened by Pterygotus than anything else— but I'd have to go with Megalodon. It's the boring answer, I know, but if there's a sea creature I don't want to meet, it's that one.

>>53382615
That's fair, but it's a CYOA, so I don't want to tell the reader what their motivations are. Right now, the plan is to link activities to locations and ways of getting between locations, together with a map. (From A, you can go to B, C, or D; you get there by stowing away on a boat, hiring a guide to cross a dangerous mountain pass, or rafting down a river (or maybe a paddle-wheel steamer instead?); there's four or five different things to do at each destination, and then you go somewhere else. I'm trying to think of a better way to do this, but I haven't got anything solid yet.)

>>53382820
I thought so. In my experience, though, "abstract" is used to denote logical concepts in the sciences (e.g. "abstract math") as often— or more often, maybe, now that I think about it—as it's used to describe conventionally fuzzy concepts like "justice."

>especially when they're by someone who knows what they're talking about.
Gosh, I hope I know what I'm talking about...

>>53383001
But can you wish you could wish for the other pills effects?

>>53382982
Nah, I know myself too well to think that I'd act like that.

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>>53383001
Wish
Money
Drugs

>>53383043
>as it's used to describe conventionally fuzzy concepts like "justice."
That's what I meant, so yeah. I understand where you're coming from though so I'll find different vocabulary.

>>53383001
Wish
Sex Appeal
Pain proof

>>53383001
I take the wish pill, wish to be immune to combustion, then take all the others.

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Always liked this one

>>53380379
secrete*

>>53383043
>Gosh, I hope I know what I'm talking about...
In computers it has to do level of complexity. Highly abstracted things are where the actualities of things are ignored, such as how numbers are stored. While something like a low abstracted language would mean people would have to actually tell the computer where to store numbers and shit.

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>>53382949
Well done, anon. The detail and complexity of your plan is truly impressive.
And yes. With all the other shit I've said you can pull off, cloning yourself is easily within the realm of possibilities.
>Electrical lightning attacks probably help short out some of her machines
Sephy would be devastated if you fried her botty-bots enough to wipe their personalities, so be careful with that.

>in a good mood
>writing is sort of melancholy
>in a bad mood
>writing is outright maudlin
Tone is really hard to maintain over the longterm.

>>53383112
You're such an idiot. So close to true power, and so far away.

>>53383001
>Drug Pill
>keep the other pills somewhere safe
>mimic the effects of all the pills without any worries about combustion
>turn the death pill and wish pill off and on whenever I want to reuse them
>infinite wishes, infinite death powers

>>53383228
Try listening to music anon. That helps me write a consistent tone.

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>>53383228
It helps to have a playlist of music with the same general tone. At least for me.

Also booze. Write buzzed edit sober

>>53383236
Or just wish for omnipotence instead.

>>53383238
>>53383248
That's actually a really good idea, thanks. I don't know if I was listening to anything in particular back when I first started so I don't know if it will help now, but I'll definitely keep that in mind for future projects.

>>53383292
Edit what you have while listening to a playlist and then keep that tone.

>>53383142
if you post it, make a build for it, anon.

>>53382082
The power of love is hardly a substitute for a worthy army.

But now I'm interested, too. What would happen, hypothetically, if your chosen bride lost the war?

>>53382082
How do I protect my one true waifu,my IRL wife?

>>53383212
Alright, so do you think the girls would react as I figured? How would Vignette and Talisa deal with being in a harem?

You've said super hot things about Lucianna and Cassandra during threesomes. Are there any other fun threesole possibilities?

I presume at least one other girl can convince Angelica to let them join in after tying me up. If I wonder, which girl could I most easily get her to tie up for me?

Speaking of Sephy, I hope I don't ruin the robot personalities! I doubt Gwen and Gracia would care much though.

At least once I would need to pull an orgy with all the girls at once. It might be a bad idea though. I wonder how such a thing would go...

>>53383252
You can't wish for omnipotence, dumbass, that would give you the effects of the other pills.

>>53383347
Kill all these whores trying get on your dick anon.Purge the land of these women and become the one and only zodiac.

>>53381573
Darude - Sandstorm.

I don't know anime themes. This one is cool I guess.

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=UjjTMNDZi-A

>>53383212
Source on that gif?

>>53383363
How so?

>>53383228
Have multiple narrators talk to the reader. Only write from a specific narrator when you are in the connected mood.

>>53383317
>Freebies
Infinite Life - Infinite Stamina - Forever Clean - Time Has Stopped - Room Essentials
>Room Type
Log Cabin
>Entrance Method
Power Gem
>Physical Items - [12] POINTS
200% Comfy [11]
Gaymen PiiSii [10]
/lit/ as Fuck [9]
L-LEWD [8]
Ocean Man [7]
/fa/bulous [6]
Auto /ck/ [5]
Aesthetics [4]
Stronk Gear [3]
Normie Station [2]
The Rest [1]
Jam Session [0]
>Extra Abilities [17] POINTS
Be the girl [17]
Redesign [15]
Inter Bot 9001 [14]
Lasting Effects [12]
Reality Convert [10]
All Along [8]
HQ, HQ [7]
Attractive Forces [6]
Charm Cognition [4]
Aether Orchestra [3]
Machine Learning [1]
Believe It [0]

>>53383311
Probably also a good idea. Thanks!

>>53383379
I sort of lucked out, here. I'm only adding a bit of dialogue to Narrator A, Narrator B is essentially done (for now, I have a feeling I won't be able to stop myself from adding expanded content) and Narrator C is completely up in the air right now so the dialogue can be altered as much as necessary. It's more I wanted to keep the tone of the entire CYOA consistent in general, rather than keeping the specific narrators in voice.

Can I get some waifu makers? Or at least the names of a few so I can look them up Please and thank you

Replying to stuff from a couple threads ago, but my computer was fucked up for a few days. Hope you guys won't mind too much:

>>53348345
That's kind of my point - Achilles was a legendary warrior and all that. In the eyes of the audience, he's allowed to feel however he wants, because he's earned that right by being badass and accomplished. He's one of the "hero" characters. The audience would be less likely to be on his side if he was just some guy who had never won any glory in war.

In fact, I'm kind of glad you brought up *why* he cried. It made me think of a good way to explain things more, because issues surrounding sex are a great example of what I meant. Losing a girl you won over by manly conquest is, in that context, an acceptable reason to be upset. What if Achilles was just some farmer who was upset that he couldn't get a girl in the first place, or if he *could* get one, but had erection problems? Christ, can you imagine an audience's reaction to a man crying because his dick didn't work? Those aren't "acceptable" problems, especially not if he hasn't "proven himself" first. That's part of what I meant by wondering if you're a designated "loser" character.

>>53348389
I appreciate that.

>>53351850
Nah, it's not autism. Autism is more like you don't *have* emotions, or you don't feel them strongly. This is more like knowing you feel a certain way, but wondering if you have permission to feel that way.

>Elixers
Beauty
Knowledge
Skill
>Queen
>Cassandra
Very regal, kind of boring
>Talisa
"Heya Princy". No.
>Vignette
A little young for my taste, good manners though.
>Lizette
Too shallow, don't EVER try to change me bitch.
>weird chick
No.
>Twins
One woman is hard enough to deal with am I right?
>Angelica
I like her style, you gotta act like you own the place.
>Lucianna
No. I AM KING. NOT YOU.
>Suri
A rape fantasy is weird, but I appreciate her initiative
>Catherine
Nothing wrong with some Christmas cake
>yandere whore
No.
>Persephone
Used goods.

I'm going with Suri

>>53383375
Omnipotence means you're all-powerful and can do anything. Including mimic the other pills' effects. Which means your wish contradicts the limitation on your wishes, so it fails.

>>53379406
>Dragon.
Yes

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>>53383321
To be honest, I didn't even consider that when writing this whole thing, but I can probably speculate.
As I've answered a lot of questions a lot of questions like this, it would depend almost entirely on the Bride. I think it's fair that a few of them would be a little bit bitter that you didn't initially pick them, but they'd probably just be happy to have you.
Might be a little awkward for a while, but they'd most likely still be willing to give the marriage their all.
>>53383347
...By running and hoping none of them can find you?
>>53383361
I think there's a fairly sizable chance things would work out that way.
Talisa would probably pouty about it, but she'd probably grow to accept it over time.
Vignette would be really scared of not being able to compare to the other girls. She'd most likely spend the first couple months hiding behind you and blushing and covering her eyes whenever you made out with one of the other girls.
As for threesomes, like I mentioned before Scarlatina would be really excited to try and corrupt Vignette until she was just as sex obsessed as her.
Angelica typically prefers to be the sub in bondage scenarios, but I'm sure she'd be willing to experiment and try binding you and enjoying your helplessness as she breeds you. Suri and Scarlatina are your best bet for tying her up. The twins would probably think it'd be fun to try too.
I'll leave how an orgy would play out to your imagination, Anon. I've about exhausted my loud hypothesizing.
>>53383367
>Bradio
I'm very okay with this.
Upon further contemplation, I think I'd enjoy something kick ass like this:
https://youtu.be/ZJudU7KRqAQ
I like the idea of the episodes ending with something borderline silly:
https://youtu.be/in6bP2KFmcE
>>53383369
The anime's called Tamako Market.
It's pretty much the defenition of "nothing's fucking happening" slice of life, but it does have a ridiculous fat ass gay cockatoo so there's that.
>>53383534
>Used goods.
...What?

>>53383534
Oh look, it's this faggot again.

>>53383621
To that kind of person, masturbating is the equivalent of cheating. They want a woman who has never experienced any sexual pleasure so she won't know how disappointed she should be.

>>53383621
Can't decide whether to just go with one waifu or try and go with a small harem instead.

Wait do the girls age normally or become like you?

>>53383621
You JUST KNOW somethings going on with her and Gizzles

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>>53381340>>53381508 >>53381529 >>53381542 >>53381573
Elixers: Strength, Vitality, Magic
Bride: None

Damn. What a fucking shitty situation. I'm honestly in a terrible area for this to all go down. Right off a main road in a small town but between two of fair sizes. Also one of those military bases that don't exist. Then there's all of my immediate family here as well.

Thought about it and figured out what to do. I'm gonna kill everything that isn't from Zodiac. Wait just long enough for my powers to kick in and then tell Sebastian I'm not having any of this shit. Crack a big ol' hole in the ground then scorch earth. Can't use things against me if there isn't anything to use against me. Just kinda lay there waiting since everyone would then no doubt know where I am.

I'd like to just talk things over. I really don't want to marry anyone and I will not be strong-armed into anything. If that keeps me in the position of Prince for awhile longer until I have things figured out then so be it. Hopefully the mass slaughter of those around me will cool heads long enough for things to be settled. Otherwise I just have to crack heads literally and not. How fucked.

And while I'm thinking about it Suri and Persephone come off as extremely insincere to me since they know what I'm into. Persephone more so than Suri because Suri has only been watching me for a couple of weeks and I don't recall looking up hard gore or rape in that time but other 4chan tier things are go! Awe Jesus Christ. I don't even want to be King but If I abdicate completely someone else might come into power and see me as a threat to be dealt with. Just have to roll with punches or go mad. Oh my.

>>53383665
What are you talking about? I was making a joke about being cucked by a robot.

>>53383727
Someone last thread was arguing that sex toys made you used goods.

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>Have multiple ideas for new CYOA
>Too indecisive to just pick one and work on it so I can't work on any at all
Anyone have this problem?

>>53383744
I hate this place sometimes

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>>53383744
I'm sorry, what?

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>>53383679
Upon your coronation and wedding, your wife will attain perfect immortality just like you.
Most Kings of Zodiac either decide to die once they've decided they've had a good life and want to pass on or step down and just kinda retire to some obscure corner of the Kingdom to live out the rest of their lives in peace.
>>53383681
>her and Gizzles
Yeah... I don't think that's quite likely considering Gizzles looks something like this.
Don't fuck robots, anon. That's just asking for rust dick.
>>53383718
...
That's pretty fucking brutal approach to things, but I commend you for your forethought.
Hope things work out somehow!

>>53381266
Oh no the same guy that has been saying this twelve times a thread all week posted it again I'm so worried

>>53383817
>Upon your coronation and wedding, your wife will attain perfect immortality just like you.
Most Kings of Zodiac either decide to die once they've decided they've had a good life and want to pass on or step down and just kinda retire to some obscure corner of the Kingdom to live out the rest of their lives in peace.

How the last king died? Without an heir even.

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>>53382429
These are all really good demonic archetypes. If you had any ideas for a page 2, with more plot hooks, items, or worldbuilding, I'd be all over it

>>53383763
>>53383779
>>53378447

>>53381733
This is retarded

>>53383817
Become as gods! Become as Gods!

So I've decided to try and make a harem out of the Twins, Suri, Persephone, and Vignette. Don't know if it will work out but I might as well try.

And if it doesn't work out then I'll see if I can just stick with the twins.

>>53382256
Well that settles it.

Scarlatina must die.

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>>53383920
King Jeremiah XV legitimately just fell into depression and let himself die.
His wife couldn't bear him a child and she was so overcome with guilt about that she committed suicide.
It was a rather selfish and irresponsible thing to do on his part, but he couldn't keep going after all he'd been through.
>>53384003
I'm sorry you feel that way anon...
>>53384007
Best of luck!
>>53384052
That seems a little drastic. But if it would keep your waifu safe, I won't stand in your way.

>>53382717
You're such a thirsty shill for your shit house, holy fuck.

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>>53383992
I've always loved this line of thinking

>Tons of sex with one guy? Perfect

>Same amount with other dudes or toys? Ruined

Like, what?

>>53384052
Wait I thought that was a given. Are we NOT supposed to murder the lesser waifus? I need to rethink my build.

>>53384099
wait you think this is an interesting and engaging setting? It's just fucking shitty anime garbage with no real substance.