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How do I describe an orgy as disgusting? Villains are worshippers

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How do I describe an orgy as disgusting?

Villains are worshippers of not!slaanesh, so it's important to me.
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>>53027543
Read anything by Clive Barker that includes sex. There's an incredibly horrible scene where two men have a food fueled sex romp, and his description of it is both appalling and incredibly well done, to the point where I became nauseous.

And I write things like parasite removal sexual scenes and body hollowing evisceration sex.
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>>53027596
Said sex scene is in Imajica, in case you are morbidly curious.
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>>53027543
Watch the end scene in sausage party
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>>53027543
just make everyone ugly fatasses
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It's all about adjective and verb use. Bust out a thesaurus. I literally browse the thesaurus to expand my vocabulary every day and there's some real nasty sounding words out there.
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>>53027543
you haven't seen porn that's just too much for you?
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>>53027543
Scat.

And not the Scatman John kind.
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>>53027543
Use this as a starting point.
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>>53027543

It's hard nailing that primordial feeling that something really isn't right and your brain is kicking in the flight or fight response.
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>>53027543
Make it snuff.
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They're all having heterosexual intercourse in the missionary position solely for the purposes of procreation.
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>>53027543
There was that one /mlp/ con that turned into impromptu orgy. Look it up if you dare and work from there.
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Describe the smell and how the floor feels. That's all you need.
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>>53027543

Vomit, urine, feces, and excessive gluttony and/or the sexual cannibalism of lower ranking orgy members.
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>>53027596
>>53027617
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=YgHNtzxO0y8
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>>53027543

Pretty much watch the hell scene from event horizon or hellraiser movies.
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>>53027543
Push weird fetishes included to the max. Go to /gif/ for some ideas of weird fetish shit.
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>>53027803
>the state of california wants to make this kind of behaviour a misdemeanor
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>>53027543

Bladed dildos, hooks, and chains galore.
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>>53027543
Have it be like this
>https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=h1Dyqas6Sm8
>https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ClbBxEomrb4
>https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=zEmh5a_wSyw
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>>53027543
Razors

Razors and syringes
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>>53027983

....WHAT THE FUCK.
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>>53029903
I didn't know there were sequels to FurryForce laughed and gagged a bit.
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>>53027983
source on this
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>>53027803

Repulsive.
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>>53027543

An uneven number of participants is mandatory.
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>>53028039
>sexual cannibalism
do I even want to know?
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Just show them Oh Joy Sex Toy comics. That's enough to turn anyone into a violent puritan.
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Say it smells like shit, loud noices and multiple dicks entering buttholes
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>>53027962
That's too deviant even for /d/! Keep it clean here
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>>53028039
What the fuck is sexual cannibalism?
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>>53033202
>noice
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>>53033202
>wet, sloppy noises and disturbing moans
>the air is heavy with the stentch of ass sweat, shit, ball musk, vaginal excretions, semen and urine
>most of the participants are a bunch of inbred, fat, middle aged drunken nobles rather than the sexy exotic girls you would expect
>dicks going into buttholes and coming out covered in shit
>unfortunate slaves who really don't want to be there being uncomfortably groped and licked by old fat guys
>the intense feeling of revulsion and fear at the sight of all this and the thought of being pulled in
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>>53027803
And some people wonder why nobody takes Slaanesh serious
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>>53028054
In this case, it's worth knowing that the post was made by someone who writes horrific shit and knows what the fuck she's talking about.
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>>53033059
>>53035394
Probably not. But if it helps, it's most likely not via vagina dentata.

It means eating people, alive or dead, while you are having sex with them.
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>>53027543
Look, I know most people here never had sex but here's the thing. Sex smells. If pron had smell-o-vision, less people will watch it. So just describe body-odour (butthole smell, vagoo sour smell, penis smegma cheese smell, armpit waft, smelly mouth with last night's chicken pieces, that distinct jizz aroma, that fishy slit breeze, stale sweat, dried saliva smell).
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>make sex gross

Oh, that's easy. First, read anything inspired by Lovecraft. if they mention sex, it's going to be repugnant. Have the chamber reek of sweat, have the rugs feel spongy to the touch, due to sweat and other bodily fluids. You needn't really describe what they are doing to each other. Just describe the compulsion to continue. Speak of fevered minds and fevered bodies, on the verge of collapse, straining against the limits of what the human body is capable of sustaining. Talk of tissues stretched to the point of almost giving way; organs in tatters from continuous friction.

Describe them as a writhing mass of limbs, sweat, blood, and ejaculate, both male and female, acting as lube while each being in the pile loses themselves in the frantic need to find purchase in another.

Mention that there are "spent" human bodies, pushed out of the pile, decomposing in unoccupied corners, covered in vomit, blood, and filth. Tell them that the chamber they are in is large, but that this has been going on for years, off and on, and the last anyone has seen of these people was four days ago.
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>>53027543
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Watch HowToBasic video. Describe the sounds. Also, this >>53038102
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>>53027543
Tangentially related, but it's funny how you can describe any scene or object in a different way merely by adding context-coloring adjectives and description.
You can play it neutral ("the worshippers seem to be involved in a mass intercourse that seems heavily ritualistic in nature), appealing ("the pit is filled with seductive moans of the worshippers who are happily enjoying the basic pleasures of sex), or disgusting ("the worshippers are engaging in debased activities, in a grotesque caricature of animals in heat mating with each other").

Reality-altering perception is a bitch, and I dislike the fact that the general perception of events can be altered merely by applying a few adjectives and stylistic choices in writing.
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>>53038102
Also, most people fucking are ugly. Like, disgusting ugly. Patchs of body hair, flaffy meat, the no sexy kind of baldness, marks in the skin, moles...Focus on that.
3DPD.
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>>53027772
Scatsinging Scatfaggots sounds slaaneshi as fuck
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I don't know how you normally describe scenes, but go for trauma.

Scream everything. Go from shouting the room's contents to allegories about the last time you cleaned out your filthy fucking refrigerator and came across a container of sour cream from the last Super Bowl Sunday one-man-party you threw, and how that woman's cooch reminds you of that.

>JESUS CHRIST, IT'S LIKE YOU STEPPED INTO A SAUNA AND SOMEONE REPLACED ALL THE WATER WITH WEEK-OLD SWEAT FROM A WHOREHOUSE RUG
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>>53035580

>the thought of being pulled in

And the DM's voice took serious turn as he interrupted the chatter of his players, who'd gone absolutely juvenile at the scene. He'd considered his target carefully, and nodded his head at the one who was trying the hardest to pretend that none of this bothered him.

>"The orgy will be making its grapple check against you now."
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>>53033146
Wat?
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Just play this
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=sZD5mI69TYg
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