CYOA Thread

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>>50961892

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>>50961908
So, that's it. I'm done with the collab for now.

Four new roomies, four new gifts. Happy new years, everyone.

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>>50961802

No, I'm using Paint.net. I'm already doing what you just said though, but what is the point since when posting .jpg on 4chan the CYOA loses too much quality to be even readable in some places? If there is some special photoshop magic to avoid it, I am willing to switch to it.

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>>50961945

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>>50961949
In my experience, Photoshop has good .jpg compression. The collab is all in .jpg, if you've noticed.

Pic related is the window when saving .jpgs, you can choose the quality of the compression from 12 levels. I always choose the highest one that lets me fit under the filesize limit, so each page for this cyoa was at around the 8th level.

>>50961955
>>50961945
>pink box
This made me happy.

>>50961955
>tfw picked Green
It's exactly what I wanted. Now I can make my CYOAs into chinese cartoons.

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>>50961908
>Juta the Damned
>Third paragraph, third line
>"... in (sic) the form of a girl"
Supposed to be ON
Also you were supposed to swap left for right (second last line, same paragraph) since you used that picture instead.

Buddy is pretty great.

>>50961955
Picked green and I'm happy about that, but I wish I'd picked blue for the potential shenanigans. I wouldn't even really want to do much, just watch what other people do.
But green is also good, I can get so much media I like with it, plus ruin the reputation of any company I wish (provided they actually make media, it would be silly to hand a script to a florist and expect them to make a good movie).

>>50961955
Green is easily the best option I could have chosen, I'm glad.

>>50961689
>>50961955
I will need to level up my writing skills it seems.

>>50961988

I see. Maybe I'll have to acquire Photoshop if only to compare results of my image compression. If it really will look better, I'll join the Photoshop master race (though Paint.net served me really well in everything except this little bit). Thanks, senpai!

>>50962083
Fixed, thanks.

>>50961955
>the study you wish
Heck. Was supposed to be "studio".
>>50962018
Yeah I'd do the same. I mean, not my own.

Happy to hear people aren't angry yet. I was scared by all the responses.

>>50961955
>Pink box

Dammit, though that was the safest option, but I probably can't use those. I literally have to special order gloves because of my huge hand size. Assuming magic resizing gloves or already being custom fit though I guess that means a career change to landscaper.

>>50962113
I'm laughing at the people who took red. Classic.

>>50961908
Gee wiz who ever wrote buddy must have been a pretty awesome opossum.

Also great work as always senpai!

>>50962175
I never knew how to spell that animal's name until now. I feel dumb.

>>50962155
Yes, I planned that. Symbiote guy is gonna be so bamboozled. I'm not even sorry.

>>50961955
Wait I forgot to add in that you can only use green ONCE.
Because otherwise that is way too OP.

>>50962264
Not like i get paid for it?

Minor update to the Mad Science Waifu CYOA. Fixed the colors and fonts to not be ass and also fixed a couple of errors.

Next version will have at least 2 more waifus. I'm planning on building on it over time.

>>50961988
I really should've done better work on that one.

>>50962287
What?
That is phrased like a statement but there's a question mark. Do you mean
>Will I get money for turning in the idea?
Sure, but an amount that is balanced so the pink gloves aren't all too bad.

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>>50962306
I'm retarded and forgot the actual CYOA.

>>50961908
Juta confirmed best waifu

>>50961908
Nice to finally see an option that's good.

>>50962315
Sorry it was more of a question.

I would rather not get paid desu, that way i can share cyoas with the world!

>>50962321
This guy thinks setting the likes of me up as some girl's boyfriend is gonna stop her from committing crimes against humanity?

That's the most charitable assessment of my character I've ever received. You can count on me, boss. I hope.

>THE PSYCHIATRIST

Worst-case scenario I end up much better adjusted.

>>50962352
thanks. i enjoyed writing her
reading
>has a healthy obsession with skellingtons
makes me smile

>>50962380
If you mean the dog, then sure, I get it, but if you mean the chuuni then you're a fucking manchild.

Oh shit are we here instead?

Well I guess I'll repeat my self:

Happy new year!

5 page OC incoming as a New Year's gift once I've proof read the thing.

>>50962629
Just occurred to me that it's not 2017 in America yet

Happy new year in advance

>>50962659
But it is 2017 here. Happy New Year!

>>50961908
Carmen requires hugs.

After all, I'm obsolete, too. Who better to be there for her?

>>50962687
I thought it was a few hours behind Britain?

What's your resolution?

>>50962760
I never specified where "here" is.
My resolution is to break no resolutions.

>>50962646
>5 page
Ooh boy. I wonder what it could be.

>>50962613
Go accomplish something that matters, and maybe you won't feel the need to act superior to random anons on the Internet.

>>50962799
>implying he'll ever change
>implying he'll ever succeed
>implying there's hope

Some people are lost causes, anon. I should know. All the things I've done still amounted to nothing, even after the hamster behavior study.

>>50961955

Good thing I chose the green one in the end. My gut feeling was right.
Pink would had been disastrous: I have the equivalent of a death touch for plants IRL. Despite what I do to take care of one, it'll die and wither in a week or two. I guess the gloves would make it only last longer their situation until they die.

Anyway, going to use it to get some good stuff done. New videogames, new films, books and whatnot.

>>50961955
>the pink one makes you a plant empath

Why can I see this going horribly wrong?

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Finally finished this fucking thing.

Expect typos and balance problems. I know some of the companions are objectively bad compared to some of the alternatives for a start, but I have a few more ideas there in reserve and don't want to add more, so any which emerge as being notably shit may be getting replaced.

Also probably going to add an FAQ/World Notes section to the end of the last page, since this is the first CYOA I've done with some actual backstory, but it's currently (deliberately) vague and told in snippets in option descriptions, so we'll see how it plays out.

Have a few other things I'm unhappy with at the minute, but I'll leave the excuses there for now and just post the thing.

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>>50962978

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>>50962992

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>>50963000

The number of companions may seem excessive, but each row corresponds to a job or background (a group of 5 engineers, or 5 ex-law enforcement, or 5 assassins etc) which hopefully makes it a bit easier to scan through.

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>>50963013

There's 65 in total. I'm sorry.

>>50963023
If there's 65 in total, why not put them in a pdf?

>>50963055

Companions, not pages.

>>50963055
Nevermind, thought you meant pages.

>>50961908
I want to hug and cuddle with Milla.

>>50962155
Why? It's a great way to never have your phone or laptop or tablet run out of energy ever.

>>50963013
Lydie best companion

>>50963055
If it was pages? PDFs compress images. It'd look like Sweet Bro and Hella Jeff.

>>50961908
>samantha white

huh, I almost got excited...

>>50962978
yaaaaay!

>>50962978
Can't stop, won't stop the lewd build.

>Charge
Lewd Behavior

>Talents
Astute
Expert Seduction
Info Wars

>Expert
Charm
Seduction
Empathy

>Advanced
Diplomacy
Chameleon
Public Speaking
Evasion
Acrobatics
Melee

>Basic
Biomechanics
Languages
Performance
Leadership
Stealth
Stamina
Piloting
Small Unit Tactics
Navigation

>Perks
Experienced
Storied Past
New Body
Psychic
Well Stocked

>Drawbacks
Compulsion
Celebrity
Public Enemy

>Personal Equipment
Hydra 2120
Regal Premium (Stiletto)
Intruder
Guide Book
Neural Enhancer
Arm Replacement
Vocal Modifier
Respiratory Bypass
Cosmetics

>Crew Equipment
Gold
Wardrobe
Tactical AI
Spare Parts
Supplies

>Ship
Luxury Yacht

>Ship Extras
EMP Shielding
Ship AI
Support Craft

>Location
Alliance

>Pursuer
James Quinn
Melanie Krauss

>Crew
Mary Palmer
Laurence Vaughn
Sarah Jolly
Nick Wells
Erlea Barrios

The plan is the spread a sexual revolution throughout the Alliance and be welcomed as heroes instead of villains. Info Wars spreads the message and I can use my lewd talents for fun and profit. I figure James is the best pursuer in Alliance territory; his actions are sure to outrage the democratic populace more than my own crimes and Melanie will be too busy dealing with him to commit to finding me. The end game is saving Melanie from him at the last minute and adding her to the harem.

Cloaking seems redundant with EMP Shielding (you may want to call it EM Shielding). Space is big. Really big. If you can't find someone on sensors then they're invisible. Also hoping that the Tactical AI and Ship AI are as sweet of a combo as they seem. If so I can maybe trade out my pilot for another crewmember.

Lots of great waifus in that section but I tried to make a good overall crew first and foremost. It might be useful to label what each row's speciality is, though. There were a lot that I just skipped because they seemed irrelevant to me or just looked kinda boring.

Cool CYOA! I'll probably make more builds for it in the future.

>>50961892
So will Indiana bones share his wealth with you? Also how far is the the castle from the city?

>>50962321

I am definitely a fan of this idea...

>>50962306
>Next version will have at least 2 more waifus.

But I would obviously prefer to see the entire CYOA before I make my choice.

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guys im the person who posted on last thread this is the progress thus far.
i decide to scrap the previous design and go with a new one, please i need feedback and tell me what rewards you would want to receive

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>>50963628
one more coming after this one

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>>50962978
>CHARGES: Piracy [Ambush]
An' if ye be wonderin', that thar be a portrait o' me mum. She always 'ad a fancy fer the days o' wooden ships, iron men, an' plunder on the high seas. I always took after 'er - no choice when yer the Captain's son.

>BASIC TALENTS: Charm, Diplomacy, Piloting, Seduction, Gunnery, Empathy, Repairs, Shielding, Navigation

>ADVANCED TALENTS: Melee, Evasion, Acrobatics, Stamina, Boarding, Small Arms

>EXPERT TALENTS: Leadership, Languages, Escape

I got all o' th' practical bits, but I ne'er quite picked up her propensity for... romance. Aye, that'll be tha word. Fashion, too. Always did look 'er best.

>PERKS: Advanced Ship, Fully Manned, Well Stocked, Augmented

I may owe me trainin' ta me mum, but I'd be nowhere without me crew!

>DRAWBACKS: Compulsion, Celebrity

It be the only life I know.

>PERSONAL EQUIPMENT: Arm Replacement [2 free left], Leg Replacement [1 free left], Ocular Implant [0 free left], Cardiac Regulator [8], Respiratory Bypass [7], Refined Digestion [6], Polaris [5], Neural Enhancer [4], TCA A-08 [3], Regal Premium (Cutlass) [2], Guide Book [1], Survival Gear [0]

>CREW EQUIPMENT: Tactical AI [4], Energy Weapons [3], Supplies [2], EVA Suits [1], Weaponry [0]

>SHIP CLASS: Raider
Ah, me mum's ol' ship - her first, even. The Queen Catherine's seen better days, but she's still got it.

>SHIP EXTRAS: Jump Drive [4], Support Craft [3], Sensors [2], Grapple [1], Cloak [0]

>LOCATION: Disrupted Zone [pursued by the Collective]

>PURSUER: Melanie Krauss
Ah, dear ol' mum's archnemesis. I'll finish what she started thirty years ago.

>CREW: Mary Palmer [8], Zara Agassi [7], Leah Easton [6], Kazuo Yano [5], Kathryn Fitts [4], You Jeong [3], Julie Southern [2], Michaela Gordon [1], Hank Alexander [0]

We got the ol' crew back together - an' some new faces, besides! What say ye, ladies an' gentlemen?

I am actually bad at typing pirate speech.

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This was psoted in the wrong thread. I think it belongs here. Enjoy.

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>>50963647

>>50963628
I like the old one better. This one could use an above average option.

>>50963680
what did you like about the old one?

>>50963353
Sweet Bro and Hella Jeff would look like 2160p compared to 65 pages worth of PDF images.

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>tfw Highlander won't be able to post the new companions before the new year

>>50963721
There were some options that weren't fagdom.

>>50963771
i see, i shall try to finish the other one aswell then.

>>50962978
Charges:
>Unethical Experiments
>>Military Science
>>Medical Science

Expert talents:
>Biomechanics
>Unarmed
>Melee

Advanced Talents:
>Science
>Heavy Weapons
>Durability
>Evasion
>Stamina
>Acrobatics

Basic Talents:
>Small Arms
>Navigation
>Strategy
>Tracking
>Survival
>Small Unit Tactics
>Charm
>Intimidation
>Performance

Perks:
>Experienced
>New Body
>Augmented
>Psychic
>Well Prepared
>Advanced Ship

Drawbacks:
>Public Enemy
>Compulsion
>Celebrity
>Notorious

Personal Equipment:
>Noble 550
>Archimedes' Mirror
>Regal Premium
>Phantom
>All Cybernetics

Crew Equipment:
>Weaponry
>Wardrobe
>Eva Suits

Ship:
>Unknown

Ship Extras:
>Hydroponics
>Cloak
>Sickbay
>Ship AI
>Sensors

Location
>Lawless Space

Pursuer
>Seth Turner
>Victoria Maxwell
>Amy Robbins

Crew:
>Amelia Young
>Lydie Chastain
>Lead Eston
>Mianda Gumede
>Johanna Hunter
>Lela Lewis
>Faye Sessions

I don't think I got much space for commentary, but I figure this should be a reasonably balanced party and a fairly decent lead character. Got specialties in hitting people and refining of same. Pursuers should all be crippled in alien territory, while the crew can search for alien tech to tinker with. I figure none of these people did anything really bad, so all the media attention is inherently suspicious. Crazy, deranged scientist using questionable technology to turn himself into a psychic loli cyborg being the exception. I also figured Supplies was a wasted point with both a Hydroponics bay and a medbay to improve on it. Also, with the AI to help you, I don't see why you wouldn't take the alien ship.

>>50963771
Two options you like and one option you dislike is worse than one option you like? Or even worse than two options you like?

>>50963628
>>50963647
>>50963665
Hey, Slaanesh, if I get to have my dream girl but she rapes and humiliates me, shouldn't I get to rape degrade and humiliate her back?

I kinda want to rape Slaanesh too, not like he enjoys, like he's honestly scared for his well-being and is emotionally injured and needs therapy and cries at night in terror when he hears something outside thinking it might be me, but I know that's probably impossible.

>>50963617
>But I would obviously prefer to see the entire CYOA
This is the entire CYOA. In the future it will likely be expanded upon if I feel like it and/or there's interest.

I look forward to your choice.

>>50963807
never say never anon, if you headpat me i can make it happen.
I can also make the slaneesh stuff happen if you headpat me with enough love anon

>>50963659
We belong together.

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>>50963755

>>50963794
I believe anon's point is that he doesn't like this version because all the girls are physically abuse hard femdom choices.

>>50963665
>>50963647

What the fuck? That's not a fetish, that's a psychopath. Yeah, if she's semiregularly cutting you up or breaking goddamn BONES...

That "public humiliation" option ain't public humiliation. If she sends pictures of that shit to friends and family the response isn't going to be "Oh, how humiliating" the response is going to be "oh dear god, please don't kill him! how much money do you want?" It's not so much humiliation as court admissible evidence.

>>50963647
>>50963628
Too extreme for me. Dominance on her part is okay, physical abuse is not.

>>50963872
>>50963878
take into account you are getting souls for every option you take, they are all entirely optional.
in the future im thiking of adding a rewards section were you can exchange the souls for chaos powers or some shit.
Maybe even a waifu that loves you and redeems herself through the emperor and doesnt abuse you anymore

>>50963628
>>50963647
>>50963665
...You okay, anon?

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>>50963779
That would be nice. I didn't see the third page when I posted, and it looks like it's a masochist CYOA or something else that I don't understand. Not my thing, but you've done well to fill a niche.

>>50963794
I'm confused.

>>50963900
thank you for asking, no im not okay.
i got rraped when i was 12 yrs old and now i have a horrendously strong femdom fetish.
i literally cannot even get attracted to woman who arent dominating and strong when dealing with me.
i know im fucked up, no need to remind me

>>50963878
Even then, physical harm is one thing, but you kinda skip from 1 to eleven here.

Skips right past even heavy BDSM stuff right to stopping just short of killing you.

Like, even within this theme, you'd expect maybe to see a bloodplay fetish where she might draw your blood or bleed you a little bit, but it skips right to "Stabs you everywhere"

Skipping whipping, go strait to breaking bones with a goddamn bat.
The only way you'd survive this girl is if there is a one point option to buy where you literally become deadpool.

>>50963845
>>50963845
I love too, anon... I think?

>>50963933
well anon... slaneesh wouldnt want you dying so he may or may not use his chaotic powers to make you regenerate after all of that.
or maybe not and you'll get killed, lmao
also i totally forgot about the whip fetish, gotta add that

>>50963909
a-anon, please headpat me more.
it feels so nice for someone to apreciate me

>>50963894
Shouldn't that be like a base part of the CYOA if we are trading suffering for souls? Or do we just use the souls to alter the world as we see fit?

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i'll be going now, sleep is calling.
hopefully i will see all of you again tomorrow.
bye bye :)

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>>50964026
see
>>50964028
i would of liked to finish it and add the rewards but im out of time and gotta go.
so yeah.
sayonara

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>>50963974
I have no more headpat ones.

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>>50963974

>>50963961
I dunno, part of the appeal of joining a Slaanesh cult, at least to me anyway, is that /I/ would get to be a brutal domineering rapist. Why would I ever put up with a girl brutalizing me? If I wanted to get beat up by my own friends I'd get with Khorne...

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>>50963878
>Too extreme for me. Dominance on her part is okay, physical abuse is not.

Hello anons.

I need some ideas for Good, Evil, and Neutral Factions. So far I have:
>>Good
>Knights of Clermont
One of the last few lords who hasn't succumbed to corruption or been wiped out by the evil shit plaguing your home.
>Brotherhood of Red and Black
Kind of like the Brotherhood without Banners from Game of Thrones, except they're actually a threat.

>>Neutral
>The Nordic Raiders
Basically Vikings.
>Encroaching Giants
Giants moving south due to conflict
>Lady Montpellier
Forces captured enemies and criminals to work in mines where there are gases that slowly destroy their lungs.

>>Evil
>The Wehrmacht
>The SS
>The Imperial Japanese Army
>Unit 731
>The Spanish Inquisition
>ISIS
Fantasy equivalents of the above, of course. All of this will be set in a Berserk-esque fantasy land.

I want about 3 good factions, 6 neutral, and 9 evil. The Good factions haven't made contact with each other but they will ally with each other if they do, the Neutrals need to be convinced to ally with one another. You can start off in the Good or Neutrals, but you can't start off with the Evil, and you can't ally with them either, as they are led by Avatars of Dark Gods that are opposed to your Dark God.

I may accept more factions than the numbers I listed if I really like them.

>>50964416
>Evil faction
CIA.

>>50961908
>No waifu that sexuality dominates and humiliates you


Why live

>>50964542
See >>50963628 , for you.

>>50964416
>>>Evil
>>The Wehrmacht
>>The SS
What's with the repetition here? They both performed the strategic goals of conventional military and they both committed atrocities. They were two different organizational structures but I'm not sure if that alone is enough to justify including both in a cyoa.

>>50964551
I intended for the Wehrmacht to commit the atrocities such as mass rape, and mass murder of villages and towns. The sort of, "animalistic savagery" side of the Nazis.

The SS on the other hand would be the ones more associated with the camps. The "human savagery" side of the Nazis.

>>50963831

Well, the easiest choice to transition into future builds might be Chemist, she might be into the "master of disguise" part of being a secret agent, as well as teaming up against future scientists.

However, mission priority probably has to be given to Astronomer. "Power corrupts," etc., and she'll be much harder to deal with if we put it off until successful. The importance of the mission and the fact that she knows I'm coming mean I would rather hand this off to a senior agent, but considering how many others have already backed down I need to step up.

>Speculation: astronomy + "ascension" practically screams "Cthulu cultist," waiting for stars to align in order to open a dimensional gateway.
>Its easy to see how she'll play me, the whole thing began millennia ago and runs on forces too big to stop. If she's not there for the "alignment," chances are that someone else will want the power. Someone worse.
>I would need to get close enough for her to trust me with her research, which gives her time enough to convince me that she's "the lesser of two evils."
>She turns my suspicions back on me, on the organization I work for. A group like the Illuminati might be very interested in the power, making it the first and least important part of her notes. Things like this tend to be very precise about where and when they happen, like a solar eclipse it is a short window of time and missing means hundreds of years of waiting.
>The geographic pinpoint makes it relatively easy to defend the limited area, but the problem is pinpointing the pinpoint. It would take decades and a degree in astronomy to figure something like this out. Hence...

>The problem is her "lineage."
>Long line of mad scientists means anachronistic knowledge.
>Culminating in a celestial convergence like this, a disturbing pattern emerges.
>Yellow eyes, glasses around her neck, two different "lives" that are kept fairly separate, sounds like we're dealing with more than one "entity."

>>50963647
This is my fetish, this CYOA is looking nice.


>>50963665
Woah there anon. Hold your horses before you kill my boner

>>50964632

>Whether its an alien adviser or a Ms. Hyde, I don't know the other entity is even into humans.
>Best case scenario involves hybrid lineage, and once again taking Chemist first would help with other scientists.
>Problem is the timing, like I said.
>Celestial Convergence might be tomorrow for all we know, so the sooner I start, the better.

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>>50964910

>>50961908
Oh hey, so that's what that was based on?

Anyway, Buddy is objectively the best choice.

>>50964917
>>50964910
I blind picked to be happier, but I'll use the exchange coupon to swap that for world peace. Pretty awesome effect, that. I'll pick up the reflection mirror as my second stocking stuffer. Hopefully that will achieve my original wish. Just not instantly.

>>50962978
>Charge
War Crimes (+Make an Example, +Tyrant)

>Talents
>Basic
Stamina
Melee
Explosives
Survival
Escape
Navigation
Gunnery
Shielding
Driving
>Advanced
Boarding
Small Unit Tactics
Melee
Durability
Biomechanics
Internal Defense
Piloting
>Expert
Small Arms
Tracking
Driving

>Perks
Experienced
Augmented
Well Stocked

>Drawbacks
Botched Escape
Notorious

>Personal Equipment
TCS A-08
Noble 550
Enforcer R3
Regulator
Survival Gear
Ocular Implant
Arm Replacement
Dermal Transplant
Skeletal Reinforcement
Cardiac Regulator
Respiratory Bypass
Audial Implant

>Crew Equipment
Security Gear
Tactical AI
Supplies
Fake ID
Weaponry

>Ship
Blockade Buster

>Extras
Sick Bay
APC
Sensors

>Location
Disputed Space (chased by Federation)

>Pursuer
Melanie Krauss

>Crew
Regan Turtle
Nigel Becker
Dawn Greiner
Everett Hudson
Samuel Tarrant

Fluff wise I like to think that I'm a former soldier from under Tarrant's command and the war never really ended and the rest of the crew are the people that got recruited to fill the gaps to start again.

>>50961908
Milla sounds too good to be true. Obvious choice but awful writing.

As for gifts, nothing has changed. Literally the first two options, Vampiric Immortality and Bio Serum, are the only ones I've ever seriously considered.

>>50965147
>Wears cute panties.

She's totally OP.

>>50962978
Infraction: Unethical Experimentation
Subtype: Medical Science

Apparently bargaining with small governments to be given truly evil death row inmates for experimentation still counts as a human rights violation somehow, despite it technically being completely above board in those specific areas.
Fucking lawyers.

Skills:
Medicine (Expert)
Science (Expert)
Biomechanics (Expert)
Small Arms (Advanced)
Escape (Advanced)
Politics (Advanced)
Languages (Advanced)
Diplomacy (Advanced)
Evasion (Advanced)
Business Management (Basic)
Stamina (Basic)
Chameleon (Basic)
Mechanics (Basic)
Durability (Basic)
Hacking (Basic)
Empathy (Basic)
Driving (Basic)
Acrobatics (Basic)

Perks:
Psychic
Budget Cuts
Augmented

Drawbacks:
Compulsion

Equipment:
Hydra 2120
NGBR
Noble 550
Medical Kit
Regulator Armor
Guide Book
Phantom
Ocular Implant
Dermal Transplant
Neural Enhancer
Cardiac Regulator
Cosmetics (Minimize augmentation visibility)

Crew Equipment:
EVA Suits
Fake ID
Supplies

Ship: Explorer
Extras:
Hydroponics
Sickbay
Jumpdrive

Location:
Lawless Space (Alliance pursuers)

Pursuer:
Melanie Krauss (Low Budget)
Seems Krauss was a little too honest and rising a little too fast for the comfort of a few of the brass, so she was sent on a goose chase for a ship of escaped convicts with very little in the way of resources. She'll doubtless be showered in medals and praise when she gets back... eventually.

Crew:
Colton Crisp
Wei Jin
Allison Quinn
Chloe Brewster
Nick Wells
Johanna Hunter
Julius Ingram

>>50965147
>awful writing
:(
Sorry. I wrote a mix of my waifu and what I would try to be like if I were a girl.

Derelict Station is 2 pages, not 3 right?

>>50965511
Sueish. She has all the traits I want but the way it's presented doesn't give her any real personality. Maybe you could try easing into the cuddling a bit more and making her a little reserved about the video game addiction, thought process of "I like games a lot but will he like that I like them so much?" I'm not suggesting you change her character so much as the way she presents it.

>>50965632
Nothing is more atrocious than a woman who acts like a retard to hide who she is. That makes her more of a retard than she would be if she was legitimately vapid.

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>>50961892
happy new years everyone

>>50965632
Hey, man, that's what I wanted to do, but 300 words is very restrictive.

Besides, I like girls who are more blunt and talk about their body in a very friendly, open kind of way. Some of the best girls I've ever met talk a lot like that and it is *hot* but also very amicable.

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>>50963023
>The 65 companions cyoa turned out to be 3dpd shit.

>>50962992

Does picking arm replacement replace only 1 of your arms?

>>50965711
>3dpd shit

>two hands and a few square inches of skin on one girl

>3dpd shit

You can't even see her face.

>>50965776
To be fair all the other girls are in a detailed western style meant to strongly emulate 3DPD.

>>50965762
Any others? I don't like any of them.

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>>50962978

>implanets

I'm guessing biomechanics refers to cybernetic implants?

>>50965762
I was interested in Tanith until the last line where it established that she's ready to murder you if she thinks you're being unfaithful. Shit just screams "yandere".

I'd rather go with Luna instead. Less likely to end in pain and/or death.

>>50963023
>>50962978
Rebellion
Guerilla Tactics

Basic:
Small arms
Stealth
Evasion
Stamina
Traps
Repairs
Internal defense
Piloting
Tracking

Advanced:
Disguise
Escape
Public Speaking
Charm
Politics
Explosives

Expert:
Small unit tactics
Strategy
Leadership

Perks:
New body
Budget cuts
Augmented

Drawbacks:
Compulsion

Equipment:
Lukashenko E17
A box of tricks

Polaris

Respiratory bypass
Refined digestion
Vocal modifier
Audial implant
Dermal transplant
Neural enhancer

Crew Equipment:
Gold
Tactical AI
Weaponry

Ship:
Destroyer

Ship Extras:
Cloak
Sick bay
Support craft

Location:
Federation Space

Crew:
Alan Haggerty (Engineer)
Kazuo Yano (Herr Doktor)
You Jeong (Pilot)
Jesse Poole (Hydroponics)
Rurik Boykov (Guerilla Team 1 Leader)
Guy McLaughlin (Assassin)
Amanda Fox (Guerilla Team 2 Leader)


We're going to hire some mercs, free Space Ireland from a Space British rule, then go full Space Simón Bolivar, and become professional space revolutionaries.

>>50965983

>implying adulterers deserve anything less

>>50965983
Sort of what >>50966036 said. While she IS crazy, the fact that I would literally never cheat on anybody for any reason, not even necessarily out of love for them but for what it means to me personally, means I have nothing to worry about there.

>>50965652
Happy New Years, Anon.

>>50965762
??? requires hugs.

>>50966036
He did say "if she thinks," implying he's worried she'll snap the moment another girl (even his own mother!) calls or talks to HIM, never mind the other way around.

>>50966036
>Betraying the trust
>Don't totally know her customs through and through
>Confides something that seems trivial to you
>Gets mentioned in passing conversation
>Gets back to her
>Turns into a horror game through and through

>>50965711
>>50965798
>this tired meme

>>50966121

Alright, I'll give you half of that shit.

Fuck, why even bother with women in the first place?

>>50966142
To be quite honest, she's not a bad character it's just when you consider a wide array of circumstance, the chances of it ending horribly for you is very high.

>>50966130
True facts aren't memes.

>>50966153
Maybe if you're a manslut.

>>50966130
3D pigs are a lot of things, but I don't think they're a meme.

>>50966155
Look, anon. I'm going to die alone, and a virgin, and society is going to look down on me for it. And all of this before I turn 30.

And you know what?

At least I admit that.

This sour-grapes-tier meme has to end.

>>50966162
Someone who takes secrecy too hard on even trivial matters is easy to offend.
And offense = death in the case of that Lamia if you can't talk her down while fleeing from a giant death machine.

>>50966142
>Fuck, why even bother with women in the first place?

There are only two good reasons and both involve the vagina.

>>50966196

Both?

What are they?

>>50966202
To get laid and to have kids, presumably

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>>50966202
Having kids and sexual intercourse.

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>>50966189

But

>>50966036
>>50966080
I'm not concerned about actually cheating, I'm concerned about her thinking it because paranoia is nigh impossible to disprove.

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>>50966034

>>50966215
I can find another snek. One who won't kill me over a misunderstanding.

>>50966210

Isn't that the same thing?

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>>50966232

BUT

And where are you even supposed to find other snakegrills?

>>50966256
Other CYOA, ya nerd.

>>50963628
>>50963647
>>50963665
All options are violent. Disregards a literal fuckton of fetishes. Only violent sex.

Are you Khorne?

>>50966274
>Khorne pretending to be Slaanesh and failing horribly at it

This amuses me greatly.

>>50966259

Which one?

>>50966234
One is pleasure the other is business

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>>50966034
>Ywn follow space-Michael Collins and his team of murderers, terrorists, and criminals in a struggle against space imperialists
Why live?

>>50966274
Khorne would just want the violence.

This is a man who truly understands the word murderboner.

>>50966178
Sorry that you don't have any other family who cares about you, anon. Not all of us are so unlucky though.

Some of us even managed to score despite finding 2D more attractive.

>>50963665
Femdom a shit. People who get off to it can no longer be considered men. They will have their Y chromosome revoked.

>>50966293

Are you supposed to mix those?

>>50966314
I'd be fine with that, I'm so manly that I have one to spare.

>>50966299

>score

Are you literally 12?

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>>50966324

That's probably the worst joke I've ever heard, but I still laughed.

>>50966324
You have an extra chromosome?

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>>50966324
>I have one to spare
My condolences, though it would explain why you're into femdom.

>>50966349
Don't be an autist about terminology. Should I type "I did the sex." or "Ugg mate with female." or maybe "I have previously initiated sexual congress with a sexually female homo sapien."? Which do you like best?

>>50966401

>I did the sex.

This one.

>>50966314
>rail-thin /tg/ autist deciding who is or isn't a man
laffin

>>50966397
Not him, but all the modern studies seem to indicate there are no side effects to XYY beyond being a few inches taller and losing 1 or 2 IQ points compared to your siblings.

>>50966406
Seconded.

>>50966406
Well there you go.

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Fitfu CYOA for weight loss resolutions when?

>>50966408

>rail-thin

Aren't you supposed to call him a neckbard, or a lardass or something?

>>50966435
I wish I could do that without falling over. My balance sucks.

>>50961955
I don't even like plants fuck off

>>50966436
He types like a faggot not a neckbeard so I'm assuming he's rail-thin.

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>>50966435

>>50966435
You know as well as I do it's all going to fail.

If you're not fit for it's own sake, you're never going to want it enough to lose the pounds. You either enjoy exercise or can't hold down a regimen.

>>50966299
It's not about not having family, it's about the fact that none of them will be there to see me crushed to a pulp by an 18-wheeler that couldn't brake in time to notice I have the light.

Nor will any of the old friends I'm still in contact with, the closest of whom lives in the next city over.

I will die, and those watching the nightly news will know before the woman who gave birth to me ever does.

>>50966523
>it's

*Its.

What is wrong with me today.

>>50966466
Stealth smugs will to that to a man.

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>>50966466
Because she's a cutie.

>>50966544

It was probably the midriff.

I'll become the king of spaghetti mountain

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>>50966523

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>>50966594
Believe in yourself!

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=yvef7waXCxY

>>50966697
Sauce?

>>50966697
Is this some kind of anime to get people in Japan to exercise? I remember there was one similar to that back in like the 08 or 09 season.

>>50961955
Does green work for cyoa authors? Can I make Highlander chan make what I want?

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>>50966808
Sonic CD Anitore EX

>>50966812
Theres a manga out not thats pretty populr about cute girls lifting cute weights, so it wouldnt surprise me.

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>>50966944

>cute weights

>>50963023
It's okay. It's not like I was going to read them even if there were less.

>>50965983
... Why are you worrying what would happen if you cheated?

>>50967183
We've been through this. It's not about cheating, it's about what would happen if she SUSPECTS you've broken her trust. The problem is that she could be set off without you actually doing anything or without you doing anything you would consider to be wrong depending on her own values.

>>50967183
See >>50966217

>>50966466
Just gotta be sure, are you being serious? Did a five second gif of an anime girl leaning backwards, showing off her stomach and the lower parts of her boobs, genuinely give you an erection?
Guys are weird.

>>50962978
How do the talents rank when compared to advanced and expert skills? My reading of them tells me they hover around expert to near-expert skills? Would love some clarification.

Companions-wise, they're all mostly fine with the standard best-of-the-best having shitty/difficult personalities while the slightly lesser mortals are easier to work with. The wastes-of-space seem to mostly be found in the last 2 rows, so if you plan on fixing/changing them, you can start focusing there.

Great job on this and I like how you spread the lore around here and there. Wouldn't mind brief World Notes but I'm fine with it as is too.

>>50966435
I won't make a CYOA for you but I will gladly write out some help
Or read the sticky: >>>/fit/17018018
The sticky is more comprehensive, but also more intimidating.

>>50967224

Are you seriously telling me you can't appreciate a good midriff?

>>50967334
Yes. And not to the point where I get turned on. I think >>50966466 is a jokester but I'm not sure.

>>50967362

Yes what? Yes, you can't appreciate a good midriff?

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>>50961892
What happened to Uriah? WHO REPLACED MY WAIFU

>>50967366
So you did get an erection from that five second gif.

>>50967458

I can just appreciate a good midriff.

>>50962978

>Charges: Cybercrimes
>Unique Talent: Ghost, Guerilla Tactics
>Expert Skills: Unarmed, Hacking, Stealth
>Advanced Skills: Escape, Strategy, Leadership, Business Management, Mechanics, Durability, Drones, Traps
>Basic skills: Repair, Maintenance, Piloting, Small Arms, Explosives, Evasion, Stamina, Navigation, Medicine

>Perks: Augmented, Psychic, Storied Past, Fully Manned
>Drawbacks: Celebrity, Public Enemy, Compulsion, Scarred
>Personal Gear: TCS A-08 pistol, Box of Tricks, Juggernaut Armor, Polaris scout goggles, Survival Gear, Guide Book, Neural Enhancer, Audial Implant, Vocal Modifier, Dermal Transplant, Occular Implant, Skeletal Reinforcement

>Crew Gear: Weaponry, Wardrobe, Supplies

>Ship: Unknown class
>Ship Extras: Hydroponics, EMP Shielding, Sensors
>Location: Lawless Space, on the run from the Federation
>Pursuers: Victoria Maxwell, Melanie Krauss
>Crew: Zara Agassi, Wei Jin, Regan Tuttle, William Heywood, Mianda Gumede, Robert Walker, Amanda Fox, Eliza Cooper, Hawk

Eliza and Robert are our faces. They interact with society at large. Zara, Wei, and I can run information wars and espionage like NOBODY'S business. With Mianda piloting this ship, whatever it is, we shouldn't have too much trouble keeping it moving. And between myself and Regan we can keep it ship-shape and optimized (I look forward to weaponizing the toxic byproducts of her experimental upgrades). Doctor Heywood is a welcome addition as the ship's doctor, we'll have no shortage of legitimate and exotic injuries for him to amuse himself with. And between me, Amanda, and Hawk, we've got the combat skills and guerilla warfare experience to... let's just say that oppressive governments get a lot less oppressive if every high-ranking functionary is dead and every legal document they've ever written has been deleted. Within the next decade the Federation, Terran Empire, and collective will cease to exist.

>>50961908
Juta. Holy fuck. I had to get up and walk about my room. Goddamn. Chuuni make we cringe so damn bad. I'm laughing through tears. Oh God why.

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>>50966256
>>50966215

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>>50967733

Did you really just make this

>>50961920
Wicked cool jetski would work great in combination with a roomate who lives near the ocean or a big body of water.

Like a mermaid of sorts.

Just saying.

Wink, wink, nudge, nudge, know what I mean?

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>>50961908

>Juta

>>50967760
Make one yourself.

>>50967748
No, saw it in an image dump on Imgur months ago. Saved it because I new opportunities like this would happen in the future.

>>50967938

But the text

Ah well, it's nice to see someone has some foresight.

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>>50963628
your style reminds me of mine, anon
except with a lot more gfd

>>50967199
That doesn't seem too plausible to me. Tanith wants to believe you're her soulmate; she's been dreaming of finding her true love for ages. She's not dumb enough to believe that an arranged marriage won't come with complications, but she's clearly hoping that you'll fulfill her long-held desire for a happy family life. Tanith is very likely willing to place a lot of trust in you simply because she wants you to be The One so badly; if anything, she'd probably rationalize away evidence of adultery.

But if she DID have to face the fact that you'd broken her trust, it'd be murder-suicide time. In her eyes, she'd have nothing left to lose.

It's the people who've been betrayed before who become paranoid— especially people who've been betrayed more than once. Tanith is just a lonely person who's pinned a lot of her own happiness on her future husband; she doesn't have the bitterness, cynicism and fear required for psychotic jealousy and paranoia.

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>>50968154

>>50968155
Anyway, still Fisher for me. I bet she has an easy getting boyfriends but a hard time keeping them; everyone she dates gets sick of her shit around the 12th time someone calls the police on her.

You just know she's totally unrepentant, too. You explain to her that yeah, sure, maybe creeping up on a kid humming the "Jaws" theme and then faux-chasing them around the beach snapping her teeth and waving her arms around technically qualifies as a prank, but it also qualifies as a "Ma'am, I'd like to have a few words with you," even if nobody was traumatized and everyone laughed about it afterwards, and she just smirks at you and says everything will be fine. And then she eats a surfboard a month later.

Still my lovely sharkgirl waifu.

>>50968154
>gfd
I hate to see your definition of 'hard' if gentle to you involves choking you to death, beating the shit out of you, and cutting you up with a knife.

>>50968155
I like this analysis.

>>50963000
I'll make a build for this soon (it's great).
Problem on page 3 though:
>Alliance, last sentence, change to "be confident" instead of "confident"

>>50968256
oops yeah i guess i used the wrong terminology there

>>50968256

Oh, I'd show you my definition of "hard", if you know what I mean.

>>50968307
senpai I think your 'hardness' would be roughly equivalent to a hard-boiled egg.

>>50968318

You obviously don't know my "hardness".

>>50961892
>>50961908
So, are we not going to find out which author did what?

>>50968332
So it is like a soft-boiled egg then.

>>50966314
Fun fact: no matter how pathetic your fetish is, it's still less so than getting butthurt over you having it.

>>50968347

It's harder than the blackest black hole, x ∞

>>50968359
So soft it sucks everything inside itself?

>>50968382

x ∞

>>50966034
Tiocfaigh ár lá

You are my hero

>>50962978
>>50962992
>>50963000
>>50963013
>>50963023

Greatest and most optimal build coming through
>Rebellion
Rebelling against The Collective is okay and not a real crime in my book

Expert
>Leadership
>Strategy
>Small unit tactics

Advanced
>Small Arms
>Heavy Weapons
>Melee
>Durability
>Evasion
>Stamina

Basic
>Piloting
>Flight
>Navigation
>Hacking
>Charm
>Diplomacy
>Empathy
>Politics
>Languages

Perks
>Psychic
>Budget Cuts
>Advanced Ship
>Well stocked

Drawbacks
>Compulsion
>Botched Escape

Equipment
>N.G.B.R.
>Regal Premium
>Regulator
>Phantom
>Dermal Transplant
>Neural Enhancer
>Skeletal Reinforcement
>Respiratory Bypass
>Enhanced Digestion

Crew Equipment
>EVA Suits
>Fake I.D.s
>Spare Parts
>Gold
>Tactical A.I.

Ship
>Unknown Perfection Craft

Ship Extras
>Hydroponics
>Cloaking
>Ship A.I.
>Jump Drive
>Sensor Array

Location
>Collective

Pursuer
>N/A

Crew
>Regan Tuttle (Engineer)
>Luissa Ossani (Hacker)
>Leah Easton (Combat)
>Kasuo Yano (Medicine)
>Sila Demir (Thief/Grifter)

>>50966256
Ok what font is that in?

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I finally have a working prototype of the SW CYOA

What do you think?

>>50969083
Maybe go on the discord and ask there? I think you'll get faster responses.

>>50969115
I don't mind how long it takes as long as I actually get some feedback

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>>50969083
>Human, or near enough to count. (+1 trait and skill)
>Wanderer (+2 skills, "Adventurer" trait.)

"I got here not too long ago by most folks' reckoning. Couldn't stay in one place for long, too much to see, people to meet. I figure I'll settle down some day but for now the shipping lanes have seen a lot of me, but I just a little of them.

The (ability score/stat value) traits could do with a little elaboration to explain what the baseline value is, or at least put 1 as the base minimum for comparison.

>Constitution I, II, III, IV
>Force Sensitive.

I'd like to say I've lucked out a lot, but really a lot of my mistakes should've put me down for the count. Helping people that'd made cruel enemies, dashing past distracted check-points because I didn't have papers to be alive, let alone where I was, and all manner of strange foods and diseases. Always feel like I'm at home though, maybe it's something about that.

>Mechanic Skill
>Gunslinger
>Historian

I like to get by as a part-time teacher in some places where I can, and that works some times, but the technology here is astoundingly various and it's Always breaking down, so that's served me better since I apprenticed on a few ships to get by in my early years. Wish I could say I hadn't been any trouble but sometimes the blasters just talk better than I can and that's all there is to it. It's rough on the edge, it's rough in wild space, and it's rough in the underbelly of even the most civil worlds.

>Pathological Liar.
Some people don't understand sarcasm I swear.
>Fool
>On the Spectrum.
I can probably recite a large part of the histories and scenarios of various worlds all over the galaxy, but booksmarts won't save me from my own dumbass decisions some times.
>Lusty
Human. Alien babes. Do the math.
>Void.
You stare at it, it stares back eventually. Might've started with that fella with the fancy rock computer and the shiny sword I dodged a while back.

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>>50969083
>>50969233

>Blaster Pistol 50
If I need more than this it's time to hoof it rather than escalate. You don't last long by picking fights instead of exits.
>Spacer's Jumpsuit 50
>Mesh Armor 100.
A little caution goes a long way, but a little fashion awareness helps put folks at ease despite your concerns; try not to walk around in fullplate or power armor unless you're a soldier, makes you a target to be put down a peg, not a badass.

>Toolkit, Medkit, Macrobinocs, Survival kit 100 total.
On the other hand, there's a lot of little details that'll make big problems of themselves out on the lanes.
>Ammo belt.
I mean these things run on batteries as far as I can tell but having plenty doesn't hurt too much.
>Strange Crystal.
.....fuck this is magic isn't it? Is this about the dude with the flashlight sword?

>>50969233
>Someone made a build for my shity work-in-progress

I like this feeling, this is a good feeling

>>50969271
Figured I'd give it a try, just some bum making his way around the setting and probably tripping into things he wouldn't survive without a little bullshit on his side.

I didn't see the Companion section until now, but going solo would fit the concept better for now.

The colors of the background and text work okay for clarity, but you could do with a border, even if it is just a couple of lines in grey or something.

You kinda front-load the Jedi options. I know the folks that want them are going to find them regardless and it's perfectly fine to have them, but you might start with the lower common denominators and work your way down to the scarce and unusual after.

Of course I just make builds for these things, I don't actually make them atm, so what do I know. Just some anon's feedback to start off with.

>>50962978
Hell yeah, i was waiting for this!

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>>50961892

>>50969390
This desperate to argue?
Pathetic.

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>>50961892
>>50961908
>>50961920
Lauging man is best waifu

>>50962978
Diplomacy
Politics
Strategy
Biomechanics

Charm
Chameleon
Disguise
Bluffing
Public Speaking
Leadership

Stealth
Tracking
Escape
Science
Medicine
Durability
Evasion
Stamina
Acrobatics

Innocent
Augmented
Psychic
Well Stocked

Public Enemy
Botched Escape

All augments, disguised.

Gold
Tactical AI
Combat Stims
Fake ID
Wardrobe

Explorer

Medbay
EMP Shielding
Sensors

Alliance

Melanie Krauss
Victoria Maxwell

Lydie Chastain
Kazuo Yano
Mianda Gumede
Patricia Bailey
Sila Demir

The Alliance is a damn good place to live, but not perfect. I found this out the hard way when I was accused of being an enclave agent. Turns out that the corps aren't as incorruptible as the government and that my campaign for cybernetic acceptance threatened to cut certain profit margins... So now I'm on the run, chased by a captain and a scumbag who probably had something to do with my incarceration. The gold and experienced corporate saboteurs should help in uncovering the crooks behind this. With the correct intel I can turn Captain Krauss against Maxwell and diplomacy I secure a pardon for my comrades and I (or at least a favourable sentence on turning ourselves in). I'm a bit concerned at Sila's willingness to work with corps and Patricia's fanaticism but I imagine that my silver tongue will keep them from acting out. If nothing else I'm sure to learn plenty of new skills and develop/install countless augments.

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>>50961908
>People complain about all the characters being complete shut-ins and thirsty as fuck
>Make a kuudere roommate
>Nobody picks them

Just a reminder that you should never think that the people here actually know what they want, because they don't

>>50969933
>kuudere is the only personality that isn't thirsty or a shut in
You post just screams "I'm upset because people don't like what I like".

>>50969933
Because I have nothing better to do, lets count all the builds posted ITT. I'm counting posts that can be interpreted as being builds, too:
>>50969492
>>50962352
>>50962735
>>50963106
>>50964929
>>50965147
>>50967644
>>50967847

1 for Laughing man, 3 for Juta, 1 for Carmen, 2 for Milla, 1 for Buddy. i.e. of the 8 builds posted, only 2 aren't picking one of the four new ones.

I won't ask you who you made because I did that last time you whined and you never responded.

>>50969990
Not him, and I'll be honest with you, your post screams that more than his does.

Would people prefer a custom spell creation system rather than picking spells from a list?

>>50970017
I think you're a fag if that helps.

>>50970043
Thanks, anon, you're ever so helpful.

>>50970017
In general yes.

>>50970017
If done well that sounds pretty cool

>>50970050
No prob fag, have a happy new year!

>>50970012
>guy complains that nobody's picking a given choice
>somehow the people who point out that it seems salty are the ones who are upset

>>50970091
Yep.

>>50970017
I'd be fine with it, provided it's done well.

Though really, that's potentially complex enough that could be expanded into its own cyoa, couldn't it?

>>50962978
YOU ARE AMAZING. I woke up with a hangover just for this. This is a new year's miracle!!!

>>50970017
From a list.
It's very important for the spells to be able to be used creatively, so no
>toss a fireball
please

>>50970132
I was going to save it for the MOBA CYOA remake but I decided to toss it in this one too.

It might be my last CYOA since the headpats I'm squeezing out from each CYOA are starting to get less and less, so I want to make it the best it is.

>>50966212
I appreciate how you put it in that order. It seems more wholesome that way.

>>50970197
desu senpai, I stopped reading your cyoas after your second one. they're all basically ripping off some video-game, and you'll redo it anyway so what's the point?
if I like doom, I'll play the game instead. I don't need a cyoa to let me fantasize about being doomguy.
all your cyoas are basically the same, graphics wise. lots of text, long lines, same font, same everything. its so bland.

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>>50970272
My second one was this one?

>>50970288
I see alot of influences from the super soldier cyoa senpai.

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>>50970288

>>50969083
First thought, I think it'd be better if you didn't put that you have 10 points under "Who are you?" You don't need those points any time for the next several pages so once I got there it took me a while to find where it said my starting points.

Also, it doesn't seem like there's a lot of great options that easily mesh thematically with the "Officer" background. If I were planning on staying on a starship most of the time (my original idea) then I don't really have any need of weapons and armor. However this is actually kind of a good thing since it "forces" me into a more adventurous build.

I don't have any good ideas for new ones but the current flaws seem a bit limiting and harsh for what you get out of them.

Do Fatal flaws still only give you one point?

It's a neat CYOA. looking forward to more updates.

>>50969233
>The (ability score/stat value) traits could do with a little elaboration to explain what the baseline value is, or at least put 1 as the base minimum for comparison.

My interpretation was that the baseline for your race is 0. All of the level 1s are just above average.

>>50970299
What did you think was my second CYOA?

>>50970011
I don't understand the love for Juta. She might have an actual personality out of all of them, but it's horrifyingly cringy. Also I'm not sure >>50967644 is actually picking her.

>>50963628
>>50963647
>>50963665

>Average
>Collar
>Possesive
>Force Feeding
>Non Consensual Sex

I still don't quite get what I get for picking these?

>>50970344
looks like I remember wrong. the last cyoa I did was the one where a bunch of literal homosexuals got butthurt to the n'th dimension because they had to get married.
then that russian guy did the same thing. it was so funny to watch.

>>50970288
>>50970302
Wasn't there going to be an update that'd make the symbiote less take-overy or somesuch, among other things that I can't remember anymore?

>>50970344
Not your super soldier cyoa, the much better one.

>>50961908
Lacey is still a cute, even if she's likely the cause of death for millions.

>>50970376
If i remember correctly, not because they had to get married, but because arranged marriege was heterosexual only for obvious reasons and they couldn't marry guys.

>>50970017
Sure. What are you making?

>>50970544
It was mostly people not understanding that the king is going to have side chicks/dudes anyway but you have to marry for appearances/procreation.

>>50970540
You can't blame the engineer for how the weapons are used.

>>50970587
Do you think she helped gas the kikes

>>50970544
yes. that's why I said "literal homosexuals". never knew they were that easy to trigger.
it was so funny. angel also went full nazi and said she wouldn't make her children the next ruler because they weren't "pretty enough".

>>50970555
The Berserk-esque one with the Yandere Dark Goddess (though come to think of it it's actually not really all that Berserk related).

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>>50961892
>>50961920

>Roomate
Clarissa Kant
>Gifts
CapeHarmony
Sentai Medallion
>Choice
Stay in Cyldoria

At first I'm just her roommate with benefits. I'd ask her if she could help with my employment and probably become her assistant (like Jimmy Olson) but I notice that with the constant primal sex we have on a near daily basis, my body has begun to change. Whatever gave her a super libido has mutated and given me the power to contract powers like STDs. Anyone I have sex or sensual contact with allows me copy the baseline version of their powers. I still have to train in these powers to reach the power levels of the original user. With CapeHarmony allowing me to constantly meet other DTF superheroes and my Sentai Medallion I will become the superhero in my own right. Watch out evil doers, The Fantastic Fuck Force Five are coming for you!

Pretty much go full Hentai Comedy and play the joke that both Clarissa and I are heroes but are completely oblivious to each other's secret identities. Later she starts chasing me but to no avail for a short time because her meek & nerdy assistant can't be a superhero in her mind, especially with the Sentai Medallion allowing for character switching with my clones.

>>50970362
>She might have an actual personality out of all of them
I think you hit the nail on the head.
There are so many of these girls that can be summed up as
>I like cuddling and will have sex with you
Before the update Christara Hummer was nothing beyond
>I have really big boobs

>>50965762
>can't put that on a christian government profile
got a chuckle out of me f/a/m

>>50970728
>There are so many of these girls that can be summed up as
>I like cuddling and will have sex with you
That's kind of my problem with waifu cyoas in general, they usually don't have any personality beyond the generic character archetype they're based on (tough girl, loving girl, wild girl, nerd girl, etc.).

>>50970827
Preaching to the choir matey. I skip them if there's nothing to the CYOA other than the waifu.
Waifus were made for and invented by the kinda guy that's okay with a one dimensional girlfriend. Consider it a good thing you don't like them.
Is there any femanon who's made a waifu CYOA? I wonder if it would focus more on their personality.

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>>50970827
The thing is that more often than not even most generic, overdone character archetype done is most cliched way possible will attract one or two people that worship it as the best thing ever and thus people never really feel need to improve their characters.

Guess that it is more than bit hypocritical for me to say that considering that I too have partaken in that practice but who gives shit.

>>50970949
Dibs on Donut.
I think it's cute when girls wear a long sweater and no pants.

>>50970984
She's wearing a jacket/jersey/whateverthenipscallit and bloomers.

>>50971042
>jersey
>bloomers
I have no clue what that is. It's cuter when the shirt is longer so you can only see her underwear when she has to stretch or bends over.

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>>50971101
It's common anime attire for gym class or fan service.

>>50971042
Those aren't bloomers though. Bloomers are considerably longer than what little she's wearing.

>>50971139
Cute > fanservice
What she's wearing isn't cute.

>>50971153
They're definitely bloomers. Your weeb level isn't as high as mine.

>>50971176
>>50971153
As with all things fashion there are many different things that end up under the same header

https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Bloomers_(clothing)