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cyoa posting edition
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>>50942328
Old thread: >>50926738
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Do you prefer stat driven cyoas or story driven cyoas?
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>>50942416
waifu/lewd driven cyoas
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>>50942416
non waifu/lewd, story driven cyoas
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>>50942416
The heck's a "stat driven cyoa"?
Story always wins. They're called choose your own ADVENTURE for a reason.
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>>50942664
The difference between you choosing three bars of strength and choosing an option that uses a metaphor or describes how strong you will be.
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>>50942681
You're going to call back that autist if you post images like that.
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>>50942574
>no male hero to end up with and love forever
And that is why this CYOA is and always will be shit, it completely misses the point of being the waifu, in comparison to choosing a waifu.
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>>50942853
lol this gay boy wants to slurp weener lol
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>>50942887
>not wanting to suck dick
Are you Fucking gay or something?
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>>50942853
Okay
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>>50942671
If you can't equate the first with one of the latter two, then the stats aren't used properly.
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Hey straight-girl anon, got some ideas for that "FemSub" CYOA you asked. I'll get started soon and finish it today.
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>>50942671
>an option that uses a metaphor or describes how strong you will be.
How in the fuck is that a "story driven cyoa". I mean if that's the case then yeah I prefer that but that's not a story.
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>>50942416

Stats just encourages minmaxing, which makes for less role playing.

Becomes less about making a fun build and more about making the best one.
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>>50943467
"Stats" aren't stats either, they're just numbers that don't get used for anything. Both stats and story are abortive attempts in this context.
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>>50943665
Stats are used as a measure of something. It's not an incredibly elegant or good option most of the time but saying it's not stats is just wrong.
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>>50943703
Well "descriptions" are a measure of where your story is starting too. Same shit.
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>>50943718
Strength: 8/10

"You're stronger and more powerful than any human who has ever lived and you're nearing the absolute physical limits of strength in our universe."

These are the same thing. The former is stats but the latter is not story. It's just a description.
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>>50942416
I prefer story, but sometimes stats can help set out specific parameters that make the story clearer. They don't necessarily have to be mutually exclusive, Super Soldier CYOA handles the balance well in my opinion.
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I'd still like some feedback for this: >>50939894

To clarify some misconceptions, it's going to be about building artillery forts the same way dungeon meister was about building dungeons
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>>50943816
I have a feeling you're just being dumb on purpose.
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>>50942402
I thought choices for this one are meant to be by column, right?
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>>50943947
I believe we've spent a lengthy amount of time in at least two separate threads debating about this, with the author being firm in their stance that "no, it's one per row".

So without extras, you'd be getting four choices, and each of those choices would be either something relating to the demon, the angel, you, or something miscellaneous. And yes, all four choices can relate to the same thing.
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>>50943990
Columns are actually rows
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>>50942429

I'd take Labyrinthine Apartment, but I'm worried about the time limit. I have one hour on the first night, two on the second, four on the third, ... 512 on the tenth, and so on for up to a year.

That only gives me 75,153,362,648,762,663,292,463,379,097,258,784,876,021,841,565,066,235,862,633,311,089,030,688,803,667,470,190,838,367,948,312,598,497,021,919,231 hours in which to solve the mystery, or else I'll be trapped there forever! Is eight hundred thousand googol years really going to be enough?
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>>50943883
Damn, I was going to say the same thing.
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>>50944065
Also one of the examples the author gave was that you can't both be the little girl ("Be the girl") AND have sexy adult older sisters ("Big sisters") without taking some extras.
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>>50944130
It's infinitely large, though. Plus I think it's reasonable to assume that the faceless people you see wandering around are other people who foolishly thought it would by easy-peasy with so much time. Frankly, I'm pretty sure you'd go insane before the end of the first real-time month.
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>>50944142
I hope you're not the guy who did everything to reduce an actual discussion into empty semantics
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>>50944130
Not very big compared to infinity.
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>>50944196
A bit, yeah, but people were saying one thing and describing another.

If people are going to be wrong, I'm going to be autistic about it. There's an easy solution to this.
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>>50944130
What'll happen when you wake up from a thousand years wandering the apartment? What about one million years in the apartment?

Will you be able to remember what your family looks like? How to do your job? How to drive a car?
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How many companions feels about right to choose from a pool of 65?

Keeping in mind that the 65 is broken down into 13 classes with 5 characters for each.

Like, 6 or 7?
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>>50944300
7, possibly 8 but 7 sounds pretty decent.
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>>50942416
I'm fine with stat driven cyoas as long as they give me some indication of what the stats represent. For instance, I need to know what 10 STR actually means. What can I do with it? What am I as strong as?
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>>50944245
Very true, anyone here already knows how to walk away from autists.
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>>50944300
Depends on the nature of the companions. If it's an adventuring group I highly advise against going above 4. 2-3 is probably a better number if you want tight-knight dungeon diving, exploring, fightan buddies.

If it's more like the Firefly crew (only three real combat roles but a lot of specialists) then you could probably go up to the 6-7 range.

More options does not always equal more choices. Yes, players will whine about not getting to pick all of their waifus/husbandos. You can either let them trade some other currency for another pick or tell them to go fuck themselves.

They can always Sartre themselves up some extra companions anyway.
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>>50944300
You better put the best waifu's in the first ten slots.
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>>50944179

One month is well over a hundred thousand years already. Point is the time limit is largely irrelevant - you have as long as it takes, and that's the real problem.
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>>50944341
>tried not to underestimate exponential growth
>failed

Well, at least I said "before the end" of a month.
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>>50944300
65 sounds like way too many companions in the first place unless they're each only a sentence or three long in description, at which point they're so shallow as to not even be attractive.

I highly recommend lowering the total number to 39 and keeping at no higher than 5.
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>>50944330
>If it's more like the Firefly crew (only three real combat roles but a lot of specialists) then you could probably go up to the 6-7 range.

It's a Blake's 7 knockoff, so it's basically exactly the Firefly crew. First instinct was to stay true to brand, and go for the crew of 7 (including the protagonist), but now I'm thinking that since almost everyone will want to choose an engineer, pilot and medic regardless of build, it doesn't leave many slots for the rest.
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>>50942362

>Marcher Man, blessed by Orqlios
>Red Mage, with Thunder Clap, Blizzard, Divine Shield, and Spellsteal

>Winter is Coming (Diplomatic)
>The Caravan (Combative)
>Rebellious Son (Diplomatic)
>Dark Cult Clearing (Combative)
>Moth Dealers (Combative)
>The Ebony Fist (Combative)
>Season Unending (Diplomatic)
>Peasant Revolt (Diplomatic)
>Harpy Raids (Diplomatic)
>The Black Knight (Combative)

>Companions: Thane Finn Hjalmarson, Runa Hegadottir, Gerard, Nelcera Larathal

>Artifact: Iron Bracelet

>Marriage: Princess Helena
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>>50944360
Just one personal preference, but I at least don't usually pick a pilot in those sorts of things if I can be one instead. It is true those aren't really command-type roles, though, which is probably what the people playing the CYOA are going to assume they have.
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>>50942402
>Big Sisters
>Little Boy
>Archdemon: Greed
>Devil-Mother
>Shared Room
>Let's go shopping!
>Archangel: Kindness

we /ss/ and /gfd/ now
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>>50944393
This author should just call himself Border Guy.
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I'll just leave this here

Feel free to post suggestions and criticisms
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Scientist senpai, when is Necromancer coming out?
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wrong file
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>>50944358
Just do what I do: When the author can't control his autism and keeps adding companions, only read the ones who are cute girls.
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>>50944417
>>50944437
and the plan
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>>50944446
What if all companions are cute girls? Only read the cutest ones?
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>>50944341
>you have as long as it takes
But it's infinitely large.
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>>50944416
But he already calls himself "strife", as seen in the top-right corner.
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>>50944478
Yes. Always only read ten companions.
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>>50944446

Jokes on you it's like 70/30 split waifus to husbandos.
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>>50944514
I remember when people would wait for the community to give them a name rather than just naming themselves all willy nilly. This is how you end up with shadow the hedgehog.
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Overwatch meme CYOA when?
I'll make a CYOA for you if you do.
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>>50944568
Didn't we already have one (or two)? Or were they not meme enough?
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>>50944417
>>50944437
>>50944447
Has no one got anything to say or are you giving me the silent treatment?
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>>50944540
Jokes on you I don't give a shit.
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>>50944585
Dude I've posted entirely new cyoas that got ignored for the entire thread. Just give it some time you flaming homolich.
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>>50944568
Hopefully never. Overmeme is awful.
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>>50944617
>>50944585
Yeah, sometimes it takes a while but all CYOAs tend to get some attention.

It's another reason why the people looking for the most perfectest time of day and thread age to post their CYOA are retarded.
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>>50944583
I don't want a roommate CYOA or them to be used as companions for a DOOM CYOA, I mean a CYOA using only Overwatch memes.
Overwatch memes makes life worth living.
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>>50944617
Oh, ok, sorry

What is a "homolich"?
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>>50944660
One would presume it to be shorthand for "homosexual lich", or something to that effect.
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>>50944585
I already told you I haven't watched Star Wars.
>>50944617
Pls post.
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>>50944585
I don't read (text) pdfs unless it seems that other people are.
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>>50944669
Fine, it was mostly a shitty joke I cooked up in thirty minutes though.
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>>50943881
>no vampirism
>can't improve the power of your minions by sharing your curse
>can't force adventurers to slog through Castlevania and vampire ninja maids to get to you or your fountain
It's pretty cool but not Dracula cool
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>>50944669
You're not the only person in this thread

And you don't need to have watched SW to play it
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>>50944666
But I'm not a lich...
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>>50944780
I don't think it matters to the person calling you that.
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>>50944699
Oh yeah I didn't do that one because I was phone and couldn't read it very well. It's still hard to read because of the small font-size.
>Hypothetical History book
Always wanted to know what would happen if Hitler didn't go full retard and invade Russia.
>Emotionally fulfilling love doll
I swear I'm picking it for the sleep and creativity effect!
>Adventure helmet

Pretty neat for something made in thirty minutes.
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Huge update!
1 more page added (now 5 pages)
2 new classes
3 new death options
3 new powers
9 new companions
3 new drawbacks
8 new combo effects
∞ Typos fixed
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>>50944699
emotionally fulfilling love doll
adventure helmet
wizardchan account
meme machine
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>>50944437
idk man, so far it just looks like you condensed part of a star wars wiki and part of a d&d wiki.
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>>50944793
You forgot your fourth pick, though.
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>>50944358
>65 sounds like way too many companions
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>>50944895
But I don't need any of the others. I can pick the
>Wizardchand account
if it makes you happy.
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>>50944514
Yeah but Border Guy is a better name for him.
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>>50944780
Tell that to my Divine Smite!
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>>50944809
Class: The shadow

Race: Human

Death option: Death realm

Powers: Realm knowledge, illusion, mind control, legendary hero

Items: Legendary weapon, secret hideout.

Quest: Savior

Not too many builds posted in this thread, might as well take down >>50944793.
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>>50944809
>>50944819
hey, needle was buffed, too. No longer one-time use.
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>>50944699
Glory Hole of Prosperity
Wizardchan
Anime Lenses
Demon Maid

Emotionally Fulfilling Love Doll was pretty great until the yandere shit. Sleeping in half the time is not quite worth that.
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>>50944994
Yeah, lots of buffs and changes to under powered options!
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>>50944984
Bruh why you gotta be like that?
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>>50944836
the guardian cires instead of crying.
I diden't ask the fire blade to burn shit down.
atleast the changeling is my favorit.
better than that knight errent.
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>>50945060
Several reasons, foremost being that you really don't understand history as it happened tbqh.
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>>50944892
Well, it's a work in progress

It's hardly even a CYOA yet to be honest, but once I implement points and everything, it should be good. I hope so anyway
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>>50944980
I'm not a lich
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>>50944809
can you finally finish it for real? It's really cumbersome having to delete them everytime you cunt make an update.
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>>50945168
They make hard drives larger than 512mb nowadays, you know.
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>>50944809
>Typos fixed
>infinite
YOUR for real?
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>>50945168
Its the final version! But I might make 1 more version just for all the typos.
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>>50944887
isn't Defiler kind of a nerf, since Transmutation has no usage limit?
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>>50944887
>>50945209
I was just about to post something along those lines.
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>>50944809
>tfw your fetishes prevent you from ever picking anything but Smug Bitch
I hate myself.
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>>50945174
haha! what a witty response! you must feel really smart now

>>50945190
noice
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>>50944809
>talants
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>>50945268
i don't know who you ARE but i want oyu to know, i like you anonl
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>>50944809
>corwds
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>>50945225
>>50945209

Its somewhat of a buff nerf, but more off a buff I would say. You have a limit on how many you can transform. But you get the bonus of them being loyal to you and you can change inorganic shit. Like you could make a house grow arms and legs and fight your rival. Or do kinky shit like making peoples armor grow tentacles inside, they would literally be trapped in a suit of armor that keeps molesting them under the armor.
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>>50944437
>>50944447
I'd recommend ships be bought with something other than credits. Perk points, mandatory flaws ("debt", "wanted"?), obligations, etc - different ships might have different costs. Super expensive items tend to throw balance into a mess. Credits might buy upgrades to ships, though, for people who want to pimp their ride.

More flaws would be appreciated. Something simple like having less credits or stat points, maybe. One flaw for each of the seven sins and virtues would be an easy addition. Anything in excess is a problem.
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>>50944851
>>50944887
Question: If you choose a dragon apocalypse, but also have the dragon lord combo, could you have an infinite army of dragons? Dragon Lord does state that you can command ANY dragon. Gonna need some clarification on that.
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>>50942402
Depraved Angel
Sinful Demon
Magical
Devil-Mother
Forbidden Love

Challenges: Shared room, mothers visit, let's go shopping

This is gonna be a train wreck, a lewd, extremely amusing train wreck.
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Who else is hype for the Monster Hunter update?
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>>50945380
Whaaaat!!!! Didn't think of that, but apparently you can ><
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>>50945399
I should have spoileredd that
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>>50944358
Idk about that hero academy had 50 companions and people really liked that.
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>>50945357
Good ideas, thank you anon

Do you have anything specific in mind for flaws?
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>>50945341
More like a buff to Monstrify at the cost of losing Transmutation.

Maybe Transmutation could just act as a catalyst, so you'd only replace Monstrify with Defile while still requiring you to have Transmutation? This'd mean you could still change anyone you meet however you wish, with the caveat that their loyalties wouldn't necessarily change as well (and that you'd need skin contact to do so).
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>>50945442
Reminder that Spehss Refugee CYOA has 150.
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>>50945476
Reminder that I gave up on that cyoa after the second row of companions on page 2.
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>>50944809
The Guild Leader is kind of weird. What's the point of buffing companions x2 if the more companions you buy, the weaker each one individually becomes because you and your companions are always a fraction of your rival's power?
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>>50945442
48 actually I went through and checked the other day and hero academy has 123 choices.

Inb4 rival and mentor dlc when
Inb4 part 2 when
Soon
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>>50945462
Hmmm sounds reasonable, will change it for version 1.6. along with some typos.
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>>50944809
By the way, the past-tense of "choose" is "chosen".

Also, worth noting that Mega Muggle only gives 2 net shards since you lose out on the 2 shards for not having a combo. I guess it's possible to have Mega Muggle and another combo, I haven't checked every one of them. Still seems a bit weak, but I guess that's fitting for people who'd choose a human muggle build.
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>>50945476
>This guy is evil
>and this guy is evil and a bug
>And this one is also evil but its a girl

Yeah, really unique.
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>>50945541
Also, being able to pick either gender but only one for Sex Appeal and Harem Overlord is a little bit strange.
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>>50945517
Lol sometimes I don't make any sense. Consider the text about the guild leader and his companions being a fraction of your rivals power gone. It will be removed for the next version of the CYOA.
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>>50945576
>Yeah, really unique.
Uniqueness was not stated as a requirement anywhere in this reply chain until your post.
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>>50945576
you're a retard.
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>>50945522
>48 actually I went through and checked the other day and hero academy has 123 choices.
>Inb4 rival and mentor dlc when
>Inb4 part 2 when
>Soon

Yay!!!
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>>50945524
On that note, can you tell me where to find the full picture for Monstrify? Or did you just take it from Eldritch Estate?
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>>50945604
Then it's just bad design. Making clutter where there is no need for it helps nobody.
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>>50945522
Hi box wine. I like you. You'e nice.
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>>50945656
I shamelessly took it from Eldritch Estate.
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>>50945620
d(^_^o)

>>50945663
(╹◡╹)
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>>50942402
>Inexperienced Demon
>Innocent Angel
>Archdemon Gluttony
>Devil-Mother

>Shared Room
>Same Classes
>Mothers Visit
>Let's go shopping!

>Archangel Charity
>Forbidden Love
Sounds like fun.
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>>50945749
We're both alcohols. I look foerward to you r waifu thing with sda. I liked mine,.
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>>50942416
Story-driven CYOAs, though preferably it'd have some sort of stats to structure things.
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Any more Waifu CYOA?
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At highlander, how's progress on the allies doc doing?
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So has Italics returned from the waifu forge with that Pokemon Personified Tiki Edition?
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>>50944809
This is nice 'n' all, but I don't wanna be evil. I saw that one option to make the rival evil, but that still feels bad. Why can't you just put all the evil into me & have the rival righteously bring suffering upon me to balance out the universe? I don't want to do anything mean...
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>>50945844
I hope not. I'm not ready to see half a thread hidden.
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>>50945844
Italics will rise again.
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>>50945881
You don't have to be evil, Anon.
Smug Bitch is a great way to just be "That chick who follows me around and does stuff."
>Don't act like a bitch
>Be the depressed female Princess who always wants to kill herself and weirdly stalks the main character
It's literally an entire option hidden just out of sight.
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>>50945917
That's pretty hot, anon. I would love you to write out that build.
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>>50944809
>Class
The Overlord

>Race
Orc

In what setting can orcs not talk in first person?

>Death Option
Victory or Death!

>Powers
Sex Appeal (2)
Got Style? (1)
Transmutation (3)
Monstrify (3)
Shapeshifter (2)
Unbendable Time (1)
No Guns (1)
Waifu Catcher (2)
I am the Law! (2)

>Artifacts
Legendary Weapons (Earth enchanted battleaxe) (1)
Legendary Armor (1)
Secret Hideout (2)
Runic Cube (1)

>Companions
Noblewoman (1)
Guardian (2)
Traitor (2)

>Drawbacks
A Fair Warning (+2)
Witch Hunter (+2)
I See You! (+2)
Pervert (+1)
Adventurer (+1)

>Quests
Mai Waifu!
Conquest

>Combo Effects
Supreme Harem Overlord
Defiler

Tentative anime title is, "Help! My Antagonist Can't Help Picking Lewd Options!" Not entirely sure how best to make use of my minions since they're described as disposable and not the brightest but at least I become a master tactician which will help there somewhat. Basic plan is to build up power slowly while harassing my rival and his waifu(s). The bitch noblewoman helps expand my soft power politically and then I lead my army of battlesluts to conquer the land. On my coronation day I marry my rival's waifu. Of course he comes to "rescue" her and so I kill him immediately after "I do."

>>50945758 is my warmup rival (sorry kiddo). Devil Mother is the traitor and Charity is my "Mai Waifu!" target. Although, since I guess that cyoa is set in modern day I'd have to conquer the US in order to kill you and be able to leave. Does becoming president count? Good news is we already have precedent for Orcish presidents.
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>>50945522
Box wine please return to /cyoag/. I really like you.
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>>50945917
>It's literally an entire option hidden just out of sight.

In a CYOA all about being an asshole to a particular build? You might as well not even play at that point.
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>>50946104
But anon loves the kind of waifu he can "fix".
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>>50946104
Doesn't mean they want want a Princess bitch. Or that the Princess bitch won't make things worse. Or that the Princess bitch won't decide to become Princess bottom bitch and sow disorder amongst the other bitches.
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>>50945656
Right here.
http://gido.deviantart.com/art/Dweller-in-Darkness-490674121
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>>50944393
regeneration
perfect teleportation
elemental mastery
imaginary constructs
omniform.
wew time to conquer the universe.
since i have omniform i will take the form of the most intelligent being that has ever existed and use that to create technology beyond human reasoning and understanding.
next with perfect teleportation i will use my elemental mastery to make the moon and mars colonizable.
then i will use imaginary constructs to make my waifu real and live in bliss conquering alien galaxies.
wew lad
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>>50944809
>>50945589
Alright, new build then.

>The Guild Leader
>Human [+1]
>Phylactery [2]
>Powers: N/A
>Artifact: x10 Stone of Power [10], Secret Hideout [Free]
>Companions: League of Perverts [2], Beast Mistress [2], Amazon Warrior [2]
>Drawbacks: Fair Warning [+2], Adventure [+1], Pervert [+1]
>Quests: Savior, Mai Waifu!
>Combos: The Catalyst

The Catalyst is our phylactery, hidden in our Secret Base. The League of Perverts, initially a group of weak men, is suddenly a threat with a combined 18 powers. The perversion and horror they can inflict with powers like shapeshifting and transmutation is staggering - and disturbing.

The League of Perverts will sexually molest the realm, all the while framing the rival with Gossip and Shapeshifting. God help everyone.
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>>50946174
The NSFW rules are weird. It's a fucking nipple. Can japs not handle a nipple or what?
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>>50944887
>Drider requires Bad Influence
Lame.
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>>50946009
>Precedent for an Orcish President
Kek.
And no problem, m8. Have fun killing my mom and stealing away a 15/16 year old.
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>>50945985
>50942408
Maybe later. There's plenty of things you can do, but the big detail is instead of acting like a smug cunt, you just be a depressed sad-sack who follows the MC around and does whatever you feel like, maybe you just want to be friends with them to make yourself feel better or take control of them with the Needle or literally whatever else.
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>>50945760
I honestly felt like there was an influx of waifus so I made a psychic dog for the collab.

Also I'm pretty sure most of our authors have a drinking problem.
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>>50946025
I came back for you beautiful.
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>>50946284
>>50946304
I definitly (don't) do.
Nopx wine, please, I like you. *m still monogamous to Bkliss. Anyhting other than amonogamy is disgusting. O
d sill be okay with a threesome if you'tr as ss vyur hitl snf n<lidd iniyisyrd

wjats's a "pshyci dog"?
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>>50946221
Yeah they can but I didn't feel like downloading it and then posting it, so I just linked it.
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>>50946260
Nah, the Devil Mom is a traitor to you. I don't kill hot demon milfs that are on my side.

And the whole plan's going to take a few years at best anyway. On the plus side, neither you nor Charity can die forever until I become president. So you've got that going for you.
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>>50944699
adventure helmet
demon maid, useful as hell and is cute
five year apprenticeship, hey dick growth magic is still magic.
grimy note with phone number. the feel when no monster gf to cuddle with
Heil victory
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>>50946025
>>50946304
I mean I like you in a heteroxseuxuL, monogamous wayl.
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>>50946342
A dog with psychic powers yo. And we don't need to be lovers, friendship is more then I could ever hope for.
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>>50946432
>frienship
Nice. I'd really like thatl
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>>50946450
You make my liver go doki doki
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>>50946432
I THink you'te a nice perosn.[
and i'm intyo monogamy/the thing twhere a guy has more waifus than one, but only because it'll make him happy. necaise o kist wamt jo, tp bne happy/spoiler]
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>>50946342
>*m still monogamous to Bkliss.
What about all those things with you and Highlander?
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>>50946462
don't worry. 'm at the mpoint hwere i have to look at my keyboard i f I awant t to make any sesne.

god i missed hits
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Any New Year's Resolutions for you fuckwits?
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>>50946473
That's polygamy. People use polygamy to mean 'not monogamy' these days because they're retards, but polygamy has a specific meaning, which is 1 man with multiple wives.
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>>50946489
Finish some CYOAs.
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>>50946479
hIgh lindader is only for warniming her up for Bliss. You know, lesibians are all bisexuals who ahavne't enjoyed the D-
i reahve lrea very little idea what you're actually writing. somethingsomethign, highland, me, italics, anon. something doign the lwed with italics. something, her being xutrew.
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>>50946506
>i reahve lrea very little idea what you're actually writing.
I'm actually not the author, but I think the gist of it was that it was based on a (possible) build fro that Author Waifu thing you made, in which you, HL, and Italics were chosen, the person proceded to spend most (if not all) of their time with Italics, which then lead to you and HL slowly making each other feel better about stuff. Or something along those lines.
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>>50944809
The Supreme Sorcerer
--Elf
--Eternal Soul

Powers:
--Necromancy
--Holy Magic
--Arcane magic
--Elementalism (Fire)
--Black Magic
--Counterspell
--Transmutation
--Unbendable Time

Companions:
--Familiar
--Guardian

Drawbacks:
--Signature
--A Fair Warning
--Witch Hunter

Quest:
Edge of Madness

Combos:
--Archmage
--Demonology

Pretty standard. 'I Have No Mouth And I Must Scream' will soon be my rival's mantra. All I need is one touch. While I'm waiting for my rival to suicide I'll spend the rest of my time doing wacky hijinks as I attempt to take over the world, only to be foiled on a weekly basis by that ever dogged witch hunter. Create hordes of undead, summon a host of demons and build a wizard's tower by transmuting animals into stone.

I'll target the next build that's fantasy-esque.
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>>50946489
Redeem myself in the eyes of /CYOAg/

And stop namefaging so much
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>>50946567
>I'll target the next build that's fantasy-esque
That's an interesting point that comes to mind.
Could you target another Nemesis run?
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>>50946489
eat more, make gains. pretend to be a gperson ot relaitves. make my parents/sister stop asking if something is "wrong"
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>>50946489
Have another fun year with you guys again!
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>>50944809
I got tired of how shitawful the typos were so here's something to help a little bit. Despite the file name you clearly do know how to spell (I almost corrected you on "unnecessarily" because fuck that word) but do you just not look at the screen while typing or what?

There's a ton of punctuation errors as well but I skipped a lot of those.

Also, "Deamon" could be a setting specific name you chose on purpose but that would be idiotic. It's either Demon or Daemon; Dæmon if you want to get really archaic for no good reason.
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>>50946652
>Typos
I was thinking of doing just this, funnily enough.
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>>50946590
Fluff wise it doesn't seem possible. For one the Nemesis doesn't have a realm you can enter. And two, you'd be one the same side, assholery for the Greater Good.
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>>50946489
Get a job to pay for more guns and milsurp.
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>>50946564
yeah i know, it awas csuper cute. i loved it i screencappedit, but ican't actually peratiae stuff, so I can' t find it. aiscally, woever wrote wtha is considered mygrierned.
iy emakde me happy to read dhta.
that's super sad, i konow. i don't hjave a lot of friends.

author if you'tr hrtr, yuour writing filled a whole in my heart. i was happy reading what you wrote. you't e a good guy. i'd ride to Valhalla with you.
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>>50946662
You can do page 2. I have to actually go do my job right now so later pages will come much later from me.
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>>50946489
To remove myself from the world, making it a better place.
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>>50946667
Fair enough.
>>50946699
Cool, will do.
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>>50946489
To die in my sleep.
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>>50946489
To try and finish typing up all the text for my CYOA (and hopefully finish it as well).
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>>50946564
I liked tha t guilb
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>>50944809
Badass
>
Deamon
>(18)
Reviver (17)
>
Waifu Catcher (15)
Final Form (12)
Necromancy (9)
Arcane Magic (6)
Corruption (4)
>
Spellbreker (2)
Gravity Mage (0)
>
Fair warning (2)
Signature (3)
Elemental Weakness: Holy (4)
Adventurer (5)
>
Agent of chaos
Conquest

>everybody's making builds for nemesis, meaning there's no builds to actually be the nemesis of.
Unless we're going to be each others' nemesis, but that's just silly
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Does someone know what the "Falling" drawback brings? "Falling into the Abyss" is not really a good description.
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>>50946489
Resolutions always fail.
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>>50946866
In a short time, probably during the upcoming conflicts, your character eats the big one.
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>>50946500
Based on other hints you've dropped, is it safe to assume you were talking about Battlemage here?

https://archive.4plebs.org/tg/thread/50610648/#50619100
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>>50946866
>"Falling into the Abyss" is not really a good description.
I think it's perfectly clear.

>Does someone know what the "Falling" drawback brings?
Your death.
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>>50946855
Oh, I forgot to designate a reviver guy. Gravity mage is a lazy fuck, but I'm not sure spellbreaker is actually capable of doing it because of his nature. so yeah, gravity mage.
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>>50946855
You can rape my magical realm build =P
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>>50946489
This year has been so great. It's going to be hard to top.

If I had to make a resolution:
>Save up money
>Make a CYOA for once - Chronicles of Amber. Make an Amberite family member. You'd select your age, the older you are the more skilled you are, and the more dangerous your position. Skills and powers, equipment, personal shadow-realms, companions, rivals, drawbacks and quests.
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>>50946931
>agent of chaos
>AND conquest
>Planet 5x the size of earth
>population of fifty billion

I think you just foiled my build.
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>>50944809
>Class:
Mastermind

>Race:
Fairy

>Death:
Victory or Death! (18)

>Powers:
Gossip (16)
Realm Knowledge (15)
Enscroll (14)

>Artifacts:
Scrying Box (13)
Secret Hideout (11)
Blood Quill (10)
Way Shards (9)
Stone of Power (8)

>Companions
Traitor (6)
Noblewoman (5)
Master Alchemist (2)
Changeling (0)

>Quest:
Saviour

I am a tiny fairy. If my rival ever meets me, they could squish me easily, and I don't come back. Luckily for me, they're never going to meet me. Secret Hideout and Way Shards will make it nigh impossible to catch me. The Scrying Box means I'll always have an early warning if they come for me or even suspect my existence.

Offensively, I can use Gossip, Noblewoman and Realm Knowledge to slowly turn the rest of the world against my rival. Changeling, Traitor and Blood Quill allows me to fuck with them on a more personal level - want to impersonate them to make them look like a douchebag? Want to leave harmful notes/legal documents lying around? All possible. If I need to get a little more aggressive, the Alchemist and the Enscroll/Stone of Power Combo combined with my spy network means I can strike at them easily - one rube with an Oblivion potion (or even just a withering Potion of Change) is all it takes.
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>>50947014
thats 50 million m8
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>>50946893
but why would I start falling into the abyss? Am I walking off a cliff without noticing? Or will a random hole appear infront of me without any reason
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>>50947033
>but why
Whatever reason you want/don't want/makes for a good story/etc..
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>>50947033
becouse reasons
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>>50947029
Ah, still. a planet that big is a lot of ground to cover. You should describe the changes you made more. I want to hear about your magical realm anon.
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>>50947033
Your 10th grade English class should cover symbolism and metaphor so just wait till next year and it'll make sense.
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>>50946885
That's the main one, yeah.
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>>50947114
get hyped
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>>50947133
I'm more happy that I got my (you)s back.
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>>50947090
I guess you don't know too
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>>50946489
disregard cyoas and women
acquire money
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>>50947156
>either.
Good job proving his point though.
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>>50946931
Am I the only one who buys fucking everything, and just takes the necessary amount of drawbacks for it? It's piss easy.
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>>50947149
Wait, really? They're back? Post a smug anime in reply to this. I wanna see.
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>>50947227
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>>50947199
ok, smart man
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>>50947227
Sandra's either using 4chanx, that one workaround, or talking about the poll.
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>>50947227
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>>50947243
>>50947255
>>50947283
Yeah... I had my hopes up & everything, but still no (You)s. It's a shame. I auto-clear my browser when I close it, so injecting CSS each time is such a hassle.
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>>50947227
no girls for you
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Quick CYOA I made from an old word document I had written.
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>>50947379
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>>50946489
Become famous enough for /cyoag/ to give me a name of my own and stop being a nameless author.
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>>50947402>>50947402

>>50947402>>50947402
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>>50947412
Nameless is a good name tho. :^)
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>>50944393
>omniligual
>perfect teletransportation
>regeneration
>god mind
>super human strength
>super human reflexes
>super human mind

now I play to be god and creating shenanigans death note like, playing with people and basically doing whatever I like the most
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>>50947227
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>>50947412
>nameless authors are just blue devils from k6bd
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>>50946489

To surpass SDA's graphics and Highlander's autism.
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>>50942400

Orc Assassin/Vampire Lord

Shortblade Mastery, Silent Death, Evasive, Thrill of Death, Hunter in the Night, Darkness, Mist Form, Quick Drain

Nightman Armor, Daggers, Ring of Bloodlust

Companions: Cornelia Magna, Claire Lafaille, Daegnakh Meltiron, Shagrala Eagle-Eyed, Eileen Rella.

Cornelia, Eileen, Daegnakh and Claire will be instrumental in fortifications, their knowledge of chemistry will make landmines a strong advantage. Claire's summons will be extremely useful as well, beefing up our forces on the fly. With Shagralla running recon, we should be able to efficiently ambush any Falseol force and secure any location.

I will take Fort Brightstar. Likewise, I will clean out Krylock.

Moving from there, I will take the Green Hell. I look forward to tasting the blood of a Basilisk. Then, on to Wayfren.

After that, I will end the five-decade siege. Similarly, retaking Issfror will be a simple matter.

A swift and silent run through the caves to retrieve the Horn of Augustus would take only a few hours. Then I will secure the paths from Blackwood and hold the supplies in transit, starving the city.

Then all that is left is to Purge. First the concentration of rulers, then their very homes.

Between my boundless capacity for violence and mastery of darkness and silence, the campaign will be largely a formality. I could do it entirely myself, given enough time.
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>>50947227
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>>50947114
Holy shit, you use BlackBoard too?
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>>50947400
brik
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>>50947481
Who is an ebon devil of /cyoag/?
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>>50947549
On closer look
>Instagram
>/v/
Castrate yourself
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>>50947576
SDA
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>>50944793
>Always wanted to know what would happen if Hitler didn't go full retard and invade Russia.

If I remember correctly... Pretty much the same thing, because the reason Hitler invaded Russia was because of intercepted communications saying Russia was already making preparations to move against him, so it was an issue of strike first and pray you're quick enough or let them come at full strength and almost certainly lose.

That said, things still could have gone vastly different depending on actions on both sides. So while it's probable for a similar outcome, it's not the only possibility, nor is it one set in stone. So good choice.
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>>50944809
Nice but not enough drawbacks to choose from for points. Points are really sparse in this cyoa especially with the requirements for combos if you want to get companions/items.

Overall nice work though.
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>>50947227
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>>50944851
Question about Forever Alone.
If I befriend my rival, do I have to kill myself?
If I'm Undead, does that mean I wouldn't have to kill myself if I would have to otherwise?
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>>50947706
You'd have to heal yourself.
>>
today I had a cyoa dream

i dreamt that my benis was stolen and someone was gloating over doing it and people were laughing, but i quickly went on a search for it and found it deep inside my nose, it was very hard to reach it in there but i managed, but then i got hard and my nose became congested like when you have a really bad cold, meanwhile the benis thief was still laughing at me

i blame all the be a girl cyoas for this
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>>50947510
Honestly I'd like it if more people kept getting better at graphics.

Again, I'm happy to release my .psd files. Also probably gonna do another photoshop tutorial to expand on patterns, textures and styles.
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>>50944809
Here's a nonspecific build. Should work against a variety of Nemesies/Nemesi.

Drawbacks
A fair warning +2
I see you +2
Elemental weakness – fire +1
Signature - +1

Overlord
Fairy

Banished (18)
Clone (16)
Final Form (13)

Artifacts
Runic cube (12)
Oblivion potion (10)
Seekers map (8)
Stone of power (7)

Companions
Master artificer – (4)
Magitek Golem – (0)

Combo: magitek titan

Mission – The apocalypse : Murderpocalypse (the citizens of the world go nuts and try to kill each other mad max style)

Plan is as follows: Appear in rival's realm. Wait for the Murderpocalypse to start. Lead minions to remote location and establish base of operations. (use human form wearing armor in front of them to maintain appearance of being a badass). Once HQ is set up, summon runic cube to put my rival on the clock. He/she will track me down to my lair, planning to exploit my fire weakness (which he/she will have no doubt deviously uncovered). They'll have to fight through the Murderpocalypse, plus my minions to get to me. When they reach my inner throne room, they'll find me as a weak, vulnerable fairy. In fact, it's my clone holding the oblivion potion. Potion goes off. Rival takes nuke to the face then BAM! I trigger my final form and go in for a double team kill with the magitek titan.

gg.
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>>50947760
It has to be a good CYOA before there's any point in making it look nice. At least, that's what I feel.
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>>50947822
All the more reason to make good CYOAs, right?

If you're willing to commit to good graphics, then you're probably committing to something you think people will enjoy.
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>>50947400
Can there be people or sapient creatures in the getaway dimension?
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>>50944393

Peak Durability
Peak Senses
Enhanced Stealth
Minor Telekinesis
Omnilingual
Minor illusions
-
Oncoming Storm
Superhuman Mind
Camoflage
-
Lightspeed
Neutralize

Well, this is a fine mess. But I've got it handled. She already mentioned that a villain would rise up to lead other villains. Neutralize his powers, jog past him at super speed (About one tenth the speed of light should be enough), and lob a quarter pounder with cheese at his skull. Mass times velocity equals victory. Then just stealth myself and hit the casinos, nudging Roulette marbles into the 00 slot for fun and massive profit. Then I'll just retire to a life of a genius billionaire philanthropist. Playboy optional. If anything comes gunning for me I'll sense it coming and can stealth, followed by another super-speed assassination.
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>>50947114
AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA

KAZOO MAGES, UNITE
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>>50944437
Needs more lewd drawbacks
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>>50947921
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=_r9N97aAqqg
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>>50942429
>>50942443
Going with night children because it has my waifu of choice. Not completely sure how i'll actually complete it, but hey, if it becomes real me and my new waifu can just hide together.
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>>50947963
> That feel when you want to drown the world in kazoos, but then no one would be around to play them.
https://youtu.be/zSJZR2sp26w
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>>50942328
is this royal revival minus genderbending fetish bait
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>>50947997
That's all kinds of horrifying.
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>>50947822
I disagree. Even a simple cyoa can look good instead of just tossed together.
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>>50947843
WELL LET'S GET STARTED THEN
>>50944809
The Master mind
Human
>
Fair Warning (2)
Empower the People (4)
Deadly Defeat (6)
Adventurer (7)
> (20)
Invulnerability (12)
>
Nullification (4)
Corruption: Drive those around me to villainy (2)
Drain Power (0)
>
Agent of Chaos
The Apocalypse: assholes with superpowers

This should be fun
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>>50947997
"If, for argument's sake, you were to write a story with me in the lead role, it would certainly be a tragedy"
https://youtu.be/2AG63Se9rOw
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>>50947990
>Going with night children because it has my waifu of choice.
That's actually the version where you get to pick the nightmare and waifu separately.
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>>50946931
Drawbacks:
The Pervert
Skimpy Outfit
I See You!
Adventurer
Signature
Deadly Defeat

Class:
The Overlord

Race:
Elemental (Water and Female)

Death Option:
Death Realm

Powers:
Sex Appeal (Males)
Got Style?
Shapeshifting
Clone
Monstrify
Transmutation

Artifacts:
Secret Hideout

Combo Effects:
God of the Underworld
Slime Girl
Defiler

Quests:
Forever Alone
The Sword

Outline: Send minions out to try and kidnap people stealthily in the night. Once they are at my place, use Defile on them to begin turning them into rape-monsters. Since it takes time for their changes to take effect I will try to get it so that there are ones popping up all over the place at different times. In the distraction try and take the Sword of a Thousand Truths and animate it with Defile, or instead Defile your Waifu and make her into a raging berserker with the sword permanently bonded to her arm whose only goal is to kill everyone who knows you on a personal level, then you.

Questions relating to the build: Do people affected by Defile keep their memories. Can the Sword of a Thousand Truths be defiled?

What do you think of my build TokHaar Gol?
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Okay so, I'm just going to paint myself as a massive newfag right now. But how do these CYOA threads work?
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>>50948042
This cover is sweet harmonies.
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>>50948071
they dont
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>>50948071
A bunch of us autistic manchildren come up with hypothetical scenarios and provide a set of choices one might take to go about it and then scream over what choices are the best.
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>>50948071
We bitch and we moan until one of the big three post their update after the stars have aligned and a blood offering has been made. Then we bitch and moan some more.
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>>50948071
Post CYOAs, post builds, discuss builds and CYOAs, or do what some people do and be a shitposter who complains about the CYOAS you don't like/doesn't get why CYOA threads exist/how everyone else's shit is inferior to yours.
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>>50948071
People sometimes make/post CYOAs, such as >>50947400, and other people sometimes post their builds (i.e. what choices they'd make in that situation), such as >>50947572. At times people even discuss the various differences between their builds.
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>>50948071
Combo of
>>50948100
and
>>50948101
At the end of the day, though, it's all for fun and games. Make builds, compare builds and just have fun.
TokHaar's Nemesis thing is a fun little change of pace.
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>>50948071
Find a cyoa that you like.
Make a build for it.
Either post it here (in hopes of getting (You)s) or don't post it here (if you're embarrassed by it)

That is how it is supposed to go, in reality it is more often:
Find a CYOA thread
Shitpost about CYOAs, people that make them, people that make build for them and/or whatever just happens to amuse you.
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>>50948134
Sure, but we can all agree that the thrones did nothing wrong, right?
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>>50942436
>Unbreak
>Morality

Being a good Southern boy raised by a traditional family, I find it extremely rude to wear a hat indoors, especially at the dinner table. I've had many a friend freak at my strong insistence that they remove their hats even in a fast food place like Burger King. I'll give that up, if it's enough to count in my particular case. If not, it's fine. Unbreak is the only power I could see myself actually using. The others aren't bad, just not as appealing. I'd only use static for as many people as I care about, activate and excite could have some uses that would bring me money, but nothing like the faith healing and resurrection that unbreak provides. I don't know enough about hormones, so volatile would be wasted on me, and destabilize is powerful, but again wasted since I'd likely end up using it for a parlor trick or self defense since I wouldn't want to work with scientists and I'm not that interested in a DBZ style workout.
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>>50948071
we complain about waifus
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>>50948101
Who are the Big Three?
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>>50948167
>but we can all agree
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>>50947633
Invading Russia was literally (as in literally "literally" literally) always the plan from the start. They needed, at absolute bear minimum, the Ukraine (sans previous residents, natch) region in order to fulfill the desire for autarky and self-sufficiency.
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Howdy. I made a new mystery box on the 17th of January, apparently. It'd be a shame to not post it, no?
I think it's super duper mean.
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>>50948257
>bear minimum
was this on purpose
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>>50948261
Oh no, it's on my laptop. Sorry"
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>>50948245
I'm guessing highlander, Beri, and italics.
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>>50948265
No, but I'm ashamed that it wasn't.

Maybe it was my subconscious successfully punning. There was a moment there where I struggled to come up with an appropriate word.
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>>50948245
SDA, Scientist, and Highlander obviously.
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>>50948048
>What do you think of my build TokHaar Gol?
Love the build! Very original and ingenuitive especially the part where you planed to mutate the sword of a thousand truths. Its always fun looking at what builds people come up with on my CYOA. My favorite builds are /d/ builds and your build was defiantly a /d/ build.

>Do people affected by Defile keep their memories.
Yes whey will keep their memories and they will be loyal to you.

>Can the Sword of a Thousand Truths be defiled?
Yes, any item or artifact can.

>>50948127
Glad you liked it ^^
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>>50948245
SDA, Highlander, and Italics maybe?
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>>50948256
You realize I was posting obvious bait in reference to your mention of shitposting and the beauty that came out of the Pokemon Personified shitstorms, right?
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>>50948289

These are the three.

But none of them hold our hearts like Slut Life holds our dicks, for better or worse.
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>>50948304
>>50948289
>>50948277
on the topic of highlander, when is the full companion sheet coming out?
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>>50948245
Articuno, Zapdos, and Moltres, obviously.
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>>50948305

I'm just a random shitposter with a desire to post that pic and an observed opportunity screaming for it that I absolutely could not refuse. Carry on with your conversation with the other guy, if he's still around.
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>tfw spending so much time on a big (probably a mistake of a) project that I'm being forgotten.
But I want to see it through to the end, at least.
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>>50948245
Me, you and Anon.
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>>50948316
New thread probably.
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>>50948316
You learn to take deadlines as suggestions, unless their lives are on the line.
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>>50942556

Kitsune
Enhanced Intelligence
Illusion magic
Empathy

As a kitsune I get to be the girl by default, which is always good news. Enhanced intelligence plus the increase over time should leave me comfortably superhuman by mid-life; that, combined with my perfect reading of other people, should allow me to be successful in society or business or politics as I choose.

Illusion magic is thematically indispensable anyway; what sort of a kitsune would I be if I couldn't distort perceptions at will? It'll help to conceal my true nature, once my tails grow too numerous or fluffy to be concealed by mundane means. Fluffy tails can really _ruin_ the line of a tight dress.

Illusions can only go so far in concealing my true nature, though; my longevity will prove there's something unnatural going on. I'd prefer not to attract that sort of attention. So I'll establish myself in elite society and then become a trophy wife to some very influential man, the sort who's rich enough not to appear in newspapers. I can operate through such a man; guide him in his enterprises with my greater insight, steer him in the right way to success. They'll come and go over my long life, I suppose, but I'll be a good wife to them all while they last.

I'll change my appearance over the years in the subtle ways kitsune can, so only the most observant will notice that in each generation the most successful leaders always have a girl on their arm with the same sort of mysterious exotic beauty, and how they keep dying young, somehow worn out before their time, and leaving their fortunes to their daughters.

There; wealth, prosperity, power - oh, and highly driven and competitive manly alpha husbands who'll dominate me and bend me over and fuck me like the animal I am until I'm yelping like a vixen in heat. A girl's got needs, you know.

And if there's no secret society of the enlightened ruling the world from the shadows, soon there will be. My daughters will own the world after I'm gone.
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>>50948261
Nora-chan is good as gravy.
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>>50948328

Finish it and post it. Someone will enjoy the thing. The "Big Three" is in reference to older authors that made the big three shitstorms that ate up thread after thread once their works got posted, without calling for a split into other threads like Divergent's Power Armor CYOA, Quicksilver's Jumpchain, or Quasar Black's Accidental Magical Girl. In their own right, they could easily be called a separate Big Three, but I'd say it's completely possible if you make a work that eats up several threads you could become the fourth.
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>>50946866
You die. It's a metaphor, anon. The entire "the falling star shines the brightest" means that your character could have a major impact on things, but ultimately you are doomed to die.
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>>50948245
Thrallherd, Scientist, Highlander
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>>50948386
SDA is certainly one of the big three
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>>50948373
But I've tried so many times to make good CYOAs. I just try to avoid making things people will fight about. It is best when everybody gets along, even if arguments can lead to popularity of a work.
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>>50948397
Nah.
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>>50948397
>>50948386
>>50948373
I say we should divide it into the legendary four heavenly kings and the big three truths of samsara.
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>>50948299
>My favorite builds are /d/ builds
I'm actually relieved and happy to hear this. It did seem like a higher-than-normal /d/ bait density but it also wasn't explicitly a lewd cyoa. Good combo. Hope you keep that up in your future adventures.
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>>50947997
>the horribly off-tune woodwinds

jesus christ my sides
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>>50948397
kek
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>>50948401
Some of my favorite moments in this thread are when everyone is arguing. The flaring of passions is a beautiful thing.
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>>50948401
Arguments don't lead to popularity, arguments are popularity. People only fight about things they care about.
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>>50948323
Wait a second.

MOltres
Zapdos
ARTicuno?

The meaning is clear.
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>>50948443
Get yo classical music outta here, nigga.
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>>50948245
Beri, SDA, and Highlander.

Prolific enough that even the newest of fags know them. A newbie isn't going to immediately recognize Thrallherd works, and Italics gets dogpiled under cuckposting whenever someone brings him up.
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>>50948397
Star Dust doesn't jam with me.
I come here for fun, not to pull out my fucking spreadsheets.
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>>50948462
SDA and Highlander haven't really posted much in a while.
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>>50948401

Post one. Hell, I probably enjoyed your works. But like others said, arguments are passion. Give people choices they can be passionate about, make them have choices that are too good to pick from, but not so good they'll never actually make the choice. This is /tg/, so it's one of the nicer boards, but there's a reason 4chan's been called the asshole of the internet for the past thirteen years. We're a hatebox, even on the nice boards we bitch, moan, fight, and complain about everything. Especially the things we greatly enjoy. Don't fear driving the thread into confrontation, rejoice in the chaos.
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>>50948430
I don't like them...

>>50948432
That's depressing. The most of an argument I think I've really seen about one of mine is whether the CYOA's concept is burning through the image limit or not.
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Why are so many people saying Highlander? He only has that one poorly-written CYOA that no one reads.
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Who did the original art genie cyoas? It was Beri, right?
Regardless, there was one that was left unfinished over the summer and I've been lacking closure ever since.
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>>50948430
Fuck you bitch, this thread is best when nobody argues!
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>>50948484
vocal minority
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>>50948443
Don't be stupid, it's been hundreds of years. There's no way I could still be alive.
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>>50948484
But anon, the ambition and scale are unparalleled
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>>50948466
>>50948418
>>50948404
>These are all anons that SDA has pissed off through the years
To deny that he's not a significant contributor is pretty stupid though.
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>>50948484
Only mega-hyper.super autists give a quarter of a cuck of a fuck about Highlander.
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>>50948484
>no one reads
>one cyoa

Are you an idiot, anon? We know Highlander only has one CYOA, but a lot of the thread likes it. That is why Highlander is brought up every single thread, Traveler almost always gets posted, and people discuss shit.

It's one CYOA, but it is one of the longest lasting that doesn't have a containment thread.
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>>50947837
by all means.
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>>50948484
>>50948501
>>50948517
>I make so many CYOAs but people ignore them, but they love Highlander
>I better shit on their achievements to make myself feel better

Quality work, fellows.
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>>50948470
But you're wrong on both accounts and both are coming with big updates soon.
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>>50948478
I've made a lot of things. They're generally well received. It's just that I don't think they ever spark arguments. Here's a simple, one-page one.

>>50948493
I think you might be mistaken. I believe I never left any unfinished. It is possible that someone else could have posted the template in falsehood. Do you remember the gallery name or some images posted or anything I can use to see if I can find the completed file in my folder?
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>>50948546
>people love highlander
lel
>achievements
LEL
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>>50948299
God I'm stupid, Skimpy doesn't work for Elementals, replace that with Shadow Elemental Weakness, and God of the Underworld was a holdover from when I started changing the build, forgot to erase that. and I am supposed to have Supreme Harem Overlord.

Also, in Defiler, it states that if used on a rival's waifu they don't become loyal, but Monstrify has no such limit. Is that intentional?
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>>50948563
>Here's a simple, one-page one.

Oh shit Beri, we love you dude. You don't have to worry, your popularity's solid.
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>>50948004
What's wrong with genderbending fetish bait?
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>>50948493
Are you perhaps talking about this one made by someone else? http://archive.4plebs.org/tg/thread/48565577/#48565768
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>>50948495
I respect your opinion, but I disagree. Also. your choice in language is rather crass for one supposedly advocating peace. It offends my most delicate sensibilities, and I feel that I'm going to have to retreat to my safe space and right about how horrible this was on my blog.
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>>50948564
Let him be mate. Let him feel relevant.
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>>50948484
Because Highlander has made a brand that people keep bringing up, and people keep talking about and posting builds for. Poorly written or no, Traveller is one of the few CYOAs that get regularly posted and talked about.
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>>50948563
>I think you might be mistaken. I believe I never left any unfinished. It is possible that someone else could have posted the template in falsehood. Do you remember the gallery name or some images posted or anything I can use to see if I can find the completed file in my folder?
Sorry if I sounded accusatory, my memory could totally be failing me. I also probably just missed the completed one. It's also possible (probable even) that it was another author with a similar template. Anyway, one of the images was of what appeared to be a robotic prostitute leaning into a car.
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>>50948515
>pissed off
SDA is powerless before the unrustleableness of my jimmies. My jimmies are quantum locked.

I just didn't enjoy the one huge cyoa SDA did as much as Conduit, Necromancer, or Travelers' Tale.

And we all know the only reason SDA stays relevelant is because of smugposting.
What's the last thing SDA even made? I'm not attacking, I'm legitimately curious, because I can't remember.

Scientist dropped small cyoa about a month or two ago, and even Thrallherd showed us a screenshot of… something.

And Highlander never stops working. She's the Jason Voorhees of cyoa authors.
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>>50944819
Page 2 of grammar errors and the like.
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>>50948493
>>50948616
In addition to the one I mentioned in >>50948583, there's also this one: http://archive.4plebs.org/tg/thread/48594430/#48596028
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>>50948583
Oh you're right, it was totally by someone else. Sorry
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>>50948649
Does anyone have all the imitation genie CYOAs saved?
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>>50948637
You missed ammount in the first header.
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>>50948677
They're in the drive in CYOA\genie\ripoff.
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>>50948616
I checked all of season 2 (pink) & didn't find any images like that, sorry. I don't think I ever collected it. It was probably done by someone else.
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>>50944851
All right, you need to sop reducing the number of points drawbacks give and fucking up my builds. They're worth less with every update, jeez.

All right, especially pervert. I get that it can't be that good because it's free points to a lewd build, but it's actually a dangerously glaring weakness.

Your rival could kill you by just cockblocking you for a day. If they can capture you. bind you or sleep you for a single day that's it. I assume this bypasses invincibility too.

If you're gonna have something that can outright kill you worth one point, maybe tone it down so that it cripples your powers until you get laid or something.
Also, question:

Does fair warning include knowing the details of your drawbacks? (That is MUCH more dangerous) and does it include knowing the effects of your class, death options and combos?
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>>50948637
In sex appeal you use the word choosen instead of chosen
>>
Basically what I'm getting here is "The big three" is less of a reference to three authors and more a collective title for three groups of authors. Also consisting of three authors in those three groups, because autism.

>Daddy daddy show us love tier
Thrallherd, Scientist, SDA

>Always working and maybe feeling underappreciated tier
Beri, Highlander, Strife

>At least partially exiled from the main thread tier
Dr Divergent, Quicksilver, Quasar Black
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>>50948711
Thank you very much, anon
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>>50948736
So basically

>Three proud and arrogant knights
>Three rogues working from the shadows
>Three wizards exiled for their esoteric crafts

This the official /cyoag/ lore from now on.
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>>50948772

Works for me.
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>>50948736
spadesy will always be the king of cyoa
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>>50948809

I couldn't work in any more authors, that would mess up the 3x3 pattern. I wanted to, but autism.
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>>50948563
fuck this cyoa i will murder everyone and steal everything for myself
HEIL VICTORY
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>>50948736
I feel bad for Ordion.
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>>50944699
Glory Hole: Money > Pride. Also, you can probably just get some toys/machines to make it easy and touch-free. Actually... Just hire a camwhore to use it, film it, make profits on both ends and split it with her.

Wizardchan: If inter-dimensional dating sites are on the table, seems like the exact same benefit as the note but better.

Demon Maid: Free maid? Free gunslinging battle maid, even? Lewd doesn't even need to be on the table, fuck yeah no chores!

5 year apprenticeship: Gotta be better than my current job. Between that and wizardchan might pick up a few useful tricks. ... Probably getting myself into some real illegal shit, but we do have the battle maid. This is an anime waiting to happen, anime classes not even needed.
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>>50942407

Cloak and dagger is mad op, yo
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>>50948891
Ordion whines too much and his content isn't really that great.
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>>50948619
He's the one who formatted and organized the Christmas collab and has been teasing a huge update to Battlemage for the past year, especially so I'm the last few weeks. Don't forget the Angel and Demon Roommate ones that are arguably among the most memorable waifu cyoas out there.

On top of that he has a lot of tutorials and resources for cyoa making and manages the pastebin.

Yes he's a cunt but these last few weeks have shown how much he actually cares about this place.
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>>50944437
Like it, idea of perk points available be helpful
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>>50943854
It's hard to get a mental image of what this world is like. What tech level are we talking?
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>>50948462
Highlander prolific ROFLAMO. Dude's got 1 cyoa and sure it's a giant kinda organized blob of text, but really.
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>>50948772
But who shall be the heros we deserve?

Box Wine?
Symboite?
Ordion?
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>>50948891
This >>50948946
I feel like I'm just longing for one of Bliss' cyoas or something like that whenever going through Ordion's. They feel so cheaply made in comparison.
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>>50948612
No they don't. There are a few who are vocal and people post "characters" to get included in highlanders companion pdf and that's it.
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>>50948891
I wouldn't, he's only made one CYOA.

The asian one that wasn't AITO was actually almost good, though.
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>RACE: High Elf
>SEX: Male

>STATS

>MIGHT: 5 [9]
>SWIFTNESS: 7 [7]
>ENDURANCE: 7 [5]
>CHARM: 7 [3]
>WILLPOWER: 8 [2]
>WISDOM: 9 [0]

>BLESSING: Ricanto

>CLASS: Red Mage

>SKILLS: Rending Blow, Combustion, Protection Aura, Magic Armour

>QUESTS

>THE NORTH: The Barbarian Army
>THE WHISPERING SANDS: The Priests of Zivurna
>THE CYCLOPS MARCHES: Rebellious Son
>THE DRAKE ISLES: Dark Cult Clearing
>ELVENWOOD: Moth Dealers
>SHADOWROCK: House Taurre
>THE SHINING VALLEY: The Dreadmines
>THE SMOKING MOUNTAINS: Peasant Revolt [Diplomatic]
>THE WILD MOUNTAINS: Harpy Raids
>THE GREEN EXPANSE: The Black Knight

>COMPANIONS: Ulf Gunnarson, Saelenys Maelrawn, Earliss Sirothius, Cassandra

>ARTIFACT: Circlet of the Uniter

>MARRIAGE: Princess Helena of the Storm Men

Rhoyjan shall never fall!
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>>50943426
sorr,y io gpot drunk instead of making cyoa
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>>50949034
>The lords of lewdness
Slut Life Anon
Rosanon
Bluejay

RIP MCCYOA Anon, taken from us at an early age from an angry cosplaying girlfriend.
>>
Well the thread will soon be dead and while this might be a breach in etiquette and blatantly attention whoring my curiosity gets the better of me so I'll ask anyway.

I'm the anon who made nightmare waifu and a recent string of cyoas, in total around 6. How good or bad has my content been in relation to the old timers? Any tips or suggestions for improving my CYOAs?
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this one? closest i could find to a robotic prostitute leaning into a car.
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>>50949181

He probably means the one the other anon linked from the archive, this one. I'd like to see it finished too.
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>>50942328
>Race
Demonborn
>Stats
Might: 10
Swiftness : 8
Endurance: 8
Charm: 4
Willpower: 6
Wisdom: 4
>Blessings
Ennilus, God of Disruption
>Class
Blood Warrior
>Skills
Toughened Hide
Berserk
Sanguine Armour
Blood Shield
>Artifact
Wolfheart Choker
>Companions
M'Raashavir
Viloah
Tigerius Caluconicus
Semvra Borchim
>Quests
The Barbarian Army
The Priests of Zivurna
Rebellious Son
College Experiments
Moth Dealers
The Ebony Fist
The Dreadmines
Peasant Revolt (Combative)
The Great Tournament
The Black Knight
>Marriage
Princess Helena

Visceral's parents were masters of the dark arts with their bloodline rife of necromancers and warlocks abound. However to spite the family and the dark magics they held, Ennilus took to giving his blessing to their firstborn son to curb the progress of their foul magics. Furious at this insult they cursed the gods name but in the end they took their rage upon their son. They gave him over to to the warrior priests of Septix in exchange for a blood rite that would prevent Ennilus to target them again while they became busy trying to sire another heir. The priests later made a deal with King Torarne and created the Bloodcullers in exchange for better treatment and rites to worship across Rhoyjan.

Bloodcullers, a specific order of blood warriors blessed by Ennilus and trained in killing mages, especially renegade blood mages that pose a risk to crown and country. Offically they take orders from a cloistered council of Septix Priests, but said priests are only figureheads that enact missions at the behest of King Torarne.

Torarne oversaw all of the trainees in this project and Visceral having been trained as a Bloodculler since birth sparked his curiosity. Visceral eschewed conventional weapons and instead adopted martial art styles from the monks and warriors they sparred with. He crafted clawed gauntlets to use in combat as he rushed the foe, ripping and tearing them apart with each sinew adding to his blood shield.
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>>50949080
Oridin has like 12+ cyoas to his name.
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>>50948462
lol who's highlander?
>>
>>50949155
I enjoyed nightmare waifu. Don't compare yourself to others. Do your own thing and have fun while you do it.
A non bullshit answer would be to write more. Writing is subjective. A lot of it boils down to feeling. Sentence structure, the flow, all that jazz. Does it feel good? If so, rad, keep it up. If not, get back to editing until it does. The more you write, the more you'll improve.
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>>50949213
>>50949129
>>50944361
>all builds want to marry Helena

Okay but why?
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>>50949204
Ah cool I missed this one. Guy did finish a couple others. Corse and Petulant gallery.
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>>50949204
>But what could it mean?
What do they mean?
Also,
>Tropical Tourism
>Vector Beach
>Schrodinger's clothes (Why isn't C in Clothes capitalized)
I'm also really curious which direction McMillen Syndrome goes, since Eggman McMuffin is known for infantilistic, scat, steak, and torturing dedicated fan fetishes.
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>>50949214
He has one CYOA with 12+ different background colors. There's not a single bit of mechanical creativity or challenging decisions anywhere in his work.

He is pretty good at settings, though.
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>>50949204
Goin' with Tropical Tourism, Marine Biology, and Entanglint Tatoos.

Worst case scenario I get turned into some kinda Maori mermaid "waifu" or something. I can't really see anything going wrong here.
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>>50949155
Most of your stuff is about waifus = I don't read the intro.
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>>50949155
To be quite honest, I rather enjoyed Nightmare's first half.
I can't quite say why, but the Waifu half was not my cup of tea.
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>>50949324
Did you enjoy the other non-waifu CYOAs I made?
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>>50947400
Groundhog's decade almost sounds amazing until I think about the ten million years I'd have to go through. Fuck it, I'm going all in. Give me the time loop starting from age 3.
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>>50949374
Thankfully, you could take out a good chunk of those million by just dying in enough unique ways on day 1.
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>>50948726
Ohhh shit, I will bump up pervert with 1 extra point in the next version ><

>>50948637
Thx, Im fixing the grammar and spelling mistakes you highlighted.
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>>50949407
Monstrify does not include the clause that Defile has regarding your rival's waifu. Monstrify as far as I can tell can make any one you affect loyal, but Defile only lets you physically change your rival's waifu's appearance and not loyalty. Was that intentional?
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>>50949358
I didn't read the
>you're going to die on an abandoned island, or
>rip-off of some chinese cartoon
cyoas you made
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>>50948563
You're my favorite though. And the only person here who I like as a human being.
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>>50949407
I'm fucking slow, so I'll probably drop the next few Pages some time next Thread.
But glad to be of help.
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>>50949460
Ah well, that's a shame. I hope in the future I can make something you'll enjoy too.

By chinese cartoon you mean berserk right?
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>>50948563
I always love your stuff, especially when you do point based cyoas like potions cyoa.
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>>50949505
If you quit ripping off chinese cartoons or make cyoas about dying, maybe you'll interest me.
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>>50949461
>>50949519
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>>50949249
Even though breeding can cause shouts to become diversified across the races, having first dibs on that power exclusively as a royal bloodline perk is not only thematic but also one of the the best marriage perks. Forest folk don't work with my build since my race are the woodcutter/miner holders (Visceral) and Softris is an okay waifu but technology can inevitably be reverse engineered while bloodline powers require a bit of dirty work to crack.
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>>50949530
Did derelict station tickle your fancy perhaps?
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>>50949155
I like all of yours.
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>>50949538
On a side note you should join the discord.
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>>50949437
Not intentional, I will fix it for the next
version.

>>50949486
ok ^^
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>>50949567
I don't think I can run two discords at once.
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>>50949567
Stop trying to corrupt Beri with your shitpile wankfest of jackasses, SDA.
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>>50949549
I didn't actually look at it. Since you're being way too civil for comfort I'll look at it next thread.
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>>50949585
You could run 1 on desktop and one in browser if you really need to have a different account for each for some reason. Or just join the server on your normal account.
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>>50949204
Can anyone finish this?
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>>50949597
It's ok now, tunebuggy was sent to the gulag.
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>>50949634
If it's not actually done, I could take a crack at it.
You probably won't like everything I choose. :^)
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>>50949549
I loved it
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>>50949643
Oh and if you're wondering why, I did the Dumpster version.
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>>50949601
Well I appreciate it but please don't force yourself to read the whole thing, it's by far my largest and wordiest CYOA and I have it understood that the writing is a bit awkward at times.
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>>50949547
Huh. That's actually a great point.
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>>50949637
It's innately shit. Again, stop trying to ruin something innocent and pure.
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>>50949585
If I can do it, then so can you. Might need a bit of fenagling, though.
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>>50949695
Beri was already corrupted by the irc to be honest anon.
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>>50949643
>>50949657
Not the other anon, but sure. Make your version, and I'll be sure to save it.
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>>50949155
I liked them, except for the island survival one, but I never liked that kind of CYOA to begin with.

If you made the Berserk one, that would probably be my most preferred of yours. Derelict being a close second.
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>>50949622
Is that a thing? Huh... I'd still have to make an new account. But I'll consider it. As I recall the IRC was just kinda... dead forever.

>>50949634
I'd feel bad about texting images I didn't collect myself, or I would. What if they came back and wanted to finish it themself?

>>50949699
I'm just not sure if it is worthwhile. Most of the time, I was just idling in the IRC as nothing ever happened. Besides, I don't have so much time anymore.

>>50949724
What? When did that happen? Isn't that something I would have known about?
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>>50949724
Discords are a dozen times worse.
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>>50949775
>What? When did that happen? Isn't that something I would have known about?
it was a joke

>Is that a thing? Huh... I'd still have to make an new account.

You don't actually have to make an account to post on discord, you'd just have to log out of your account on one of the platforms. I'm not really sure why you're so concerned about just using the same account though.
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>>50949643
Honestly even if you make all the choices terrible twists I'd like to see it finished.
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>>50949775
>I'm just not sure if it is worthwhile. Most of the time, I was just idling in the IRC as nothing ever happened. Besides, I don't have so much time anymore.
The good thing about Discord in comparison to IRC is that it'd allow for asynchronous communication (that isn't reliant on thread staying up, and could stray into non-thread-related subject matters).

Also I'm totally willing to help you set it up so you can have two desktop clients up simultaneously, both for different accounts.
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>>50949775
>What if they came back and wanted to finish it themself?
to be fair, it has been like a month
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>>50949844
more than that man, its been like 6
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>>50944809
Smug Bitch
Elf(Dark) (13)

Phylactery (11)

Gossip (9)
I am the Law! (7)
Final Form (4)
Black Magic (1)

Noblewoman (0)
Beast Mistress (-2)

A Fair Warning (0)
Bad Influence (1)

Bitch Queen
Half-Dragon (0)
Drider Queen

Simply put: I am the half-drider half-dragon queen of the dark elves who can use her kingdom to spread a great wealth of gossip and bear six potent laws against whomever I choose in addition to my spider swarms and in the event of a serious encounter, I can transform into a giant dragon-spider. :^)
And the only downsides are that whoever I face knows I am coming and that I am a walking apocalypse, but does not know I lack Artifacts.
And occasionally I will have fits of evil that I cannot control.
Not bad.
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>>50949001
Well, I wanted to keep it vague, but think ww1 with ww2 tech, plus a little pulp wunderwaffe stuff
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>>50949841
Why are you so obsessed with forcing everyone into your discord?
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>>50949862
>Why are you so obsessed with forcing everyone into your discord?
1: Not my discord.
2: I may want to have Beri's opinion on the CYOA I'm making (namely on the points and balancing thereof) at some point, without revealing the WIP to the thread at large.
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>>50944887
>Defiler
As the person who (probably) inspired that with my futa succubus queen build, that's not quite what I wanted.

I meant something that lets you expand your empire, controlling the population en masse.

If I had to stat it out...
>Requirements: The Overlord, Corruption (any), Monstrify

>Anybody (save your Nemesis and their waifu) who stays within your Corrupted area for too long becomes one of your minions. Willful or powerful beings take longer to convert. Corrupted beings are recognizable, but visibly altered and loyal to you.
>Furthermore, your Corruption grows with your army, each new minion spreading your influence slightly farther.
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>>50949727
>>50949839
Kay, I'll dump it either later today or tomorrow.
Is it really not done? I'm surprised.
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>>50949917
Just email him
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>>50949862
becouse it is a yandere and wants to fuck you while you are tied to a bed, gagged and blindfolded.
first it will caress your face, applying soft pressure with it's fingers on your lips, then will suck on your neck.
then the sucking will grow fiercer and finally it will take a bite at your neck, your neck will bleed, but the wound is only skin deep.
after that it will violently rape you, taking your long dick into it's holes, eventually you will ejaculate.
but it is not done yet, next it will shove it's massive pulsating cock up your anus and tear the soft puddle tissue of it, eventually it will release all of it's hot thick semen into your anus impregnating you with alien babies.
then after it has satisfied its hunger for flesh and has finished ravaging your body it will erase your memories
the next day everything will begin again. you will believe it is your first time and 'it' will do everything over again.
after all there is no higher pleasure than taking someone's chastity and breaking them
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>>50949981
>tfw ywn have a yandere waifu
Why even live brehs?
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>>50949981
i r8 10/10 would get impregnated with alien babies again
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>>50950009
There are plenty of mentally ill women in real life.
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>>50950196
such as you?
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>>50948809
literally who

>>50948891
I forgot he existed honestly
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>>50950221
I'm too good for you, scrub.
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>>50950263
he stopped making cyoas like exactly a year ago. He made a ton of them though. Highest work rate of any active author by far.

feathersnake.wordpress.com
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>>50950196
>hope intensifies
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>>50950047
Happen to have a source for that image?
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>>50950277
you're dubs seem to be implying something...
but no one is too good for me, regretfully for you; i am too good for anyone
>>50950317
sweet guy it's a manhwa
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>>50949841
>and could stray into non-thread-related subject matters).

That is why discord/IRC is cancerous.
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>>50949844
>>50949853
I'm pretty sure that was posted early December anons.
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>>50950317
Not him but I know this one, it's "sweet guy", a pretty decent comic
You can find an english version on e-hentai, but if you're just looking for femaledom you might be dissapointed, this scene doesn't come until late in the comic and isn't the center of it
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>>50950346
If it helps keep it out of the thread then it's probably for the best.
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>>50949155
All in all your stuff is pretty bro-tier
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we really need more femdom cyoa's
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>>50950396
we really need you to make more femdom cyoa's
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>>50950396
Then make one, you faggoty pansy.
>>
So does Forever Alone need to have me kill everyone my Rival likes? Can I not just break them into hating them?
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>>50950465
If you break your rival into hating them, they're no longer close to those people and thus you don't have to kill them.
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>>50950457
>>50950459
never made a cyoa in my fucking life, dont even know how to make one.
probably couldnt make one to save my life.
" if you teach me how to and tease me about it i will
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>>50950505
Pastebin. Read it.
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>>50949204
Someone should really finish this
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>>50950505
Pastebin and wing it.
Steal Beri's Genie Template and make one of those if you want. Really fucking easy.
>Put images behind the portrait frame layer, trim and tilt as needed
>Then put text layers on top of everything else for names and descriptions
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>>50950493
I figured but I figure companions will be easier to mind rape.
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>>50950537
I said I would. I'm on the third one now.
>>50950564
It depends on the MC's point of view. If they view them as close/a companion/a friend/lover/whatever, then you need to kill them still.
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>>50950505
It takes literally zero effort to make a CYOA. You never mentioned you wanted it to be good.
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>>50950521
>>50950543
>>50950584
okies dokies, gonna get to it right now.
dont expect me to finish it today though
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>>50950543
>Steal
But I put it in my drive. There's no stealing about it! There's even a PSD you can use.
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>>50950624
Figure of speech, friend. You're a blessing.
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>>50950624
The only thing I'd steal of Beri's is his butt virginity.
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>>50950642
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>>50950695
I agree with that wholeheartedly! Predators are dangerous!
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>>50950624
almost posted an image out of reflex
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>>50950695
That picture has made me reminisce about all the shitposting we've had throughout the year.

Good times.
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>>50950880
Oh Wojak, I feel for you
I also want to lewdpost with Angel
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>>50950896
I want to lewdpost with her in real life with my penis.
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>>50951009
I want to talk in real life, with my mouth
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>>50951047
Is such a thing even possible
>>
>>50950505
putting images beside text is easy. You could do a "pick one" or a "here's ten coins" or a "balance drawbacks with perks" or some combination. Easy street. Stop with your learned incompetence.
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>>50950695
I'm not SDA, Beri is a guy so the only virginity I could take is his butt.
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>>50951333
>I'm not SDA
Yes you are.
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>>50951374
I wish, I want his photoshop skills so I can make good-looking CYOAs.
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>>50951382
We're all SDA now.
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>>50951408
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=abbeSIRNHqg
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