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CYOA General - Be The Waifu Edition
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Wow, this is empty
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>>50738772
>Previous thread: >>50729633
>Pastebin: http://pastebin.com/vrqYhnpu
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>OC
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>>50738772
That's an older version, btw.
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>>50738772
Since we're being the waifu today, are there any new yandere CYOA treats?
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>>50738772

Kitsune 6, Intriguing 1, Lifetime extra 3
Yan 1, General Magic specialised 4, Power Magic 3

Leaves 2 points to pick a hero. I like the magical girl; I like Raie but I think two kitsune together like this is going to cause all sorts of trouble; and the water magic girl has great potential to work with me magically... But no boys? If I'm going to be the waifu I want a big strong manly hero, you know?

Well, it can't be helped. If I have to, then I'll drop Intriguing to save a point and take Lierl. As her waifu I'll make a good support caster, using my more varied abilities to complement her water specialisation. And as a kitsune I'll fall totally in love and as a yan I'll be loyal and even obsessive about her, so I know I'll be a happy waifu and I'll never want a boy again. I suppose it goes with a certain kind of yuri narrative - that the mysterious kitsune is won over, and gives up on men completely, all for the hero girl who's just that awesome. And then I get to be her waifu for the rest of our lives. So sweet!
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>>50738911
I would love that very much anon. I don't think anyone else has made a "be the yandere" Cyoa.
Are you working on it now? I'm busy with another cyoa to do it.
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>>50738948
Actually, it exists.
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>>50738963
I think that was what they meant when they specified "anyone else" rather than "anyone at all".
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>>50738843
>Work Hard
>Cooking Class
>Relax
>Baking
>Release
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>>50738963
>>50738983

At least it's here now anyway. For reference. Time to monopolize dat senpai!
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I wanted an Angelanon waifu when I thought she was into handholding and cuteness. Now that she's into rape and forced impregnation, I don't know what to think.
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>>50738983
That would be correct. It sucks having a niche fantasy...
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>>50738963

My head says Monopolising. The things you could achieve with a power like that! So useful!

But when I think of myself as somebody's devoted waifu, my heart says Worshipping. And it's Venus imposing the magic here, so you just know what she's going to go with.

I know it'll hurt. But every time he abuses me, in the end we'll both love each other all the more for it. And I deserve it for not loving him enough without needing to be beaten first...
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>>50739029
Well, she's quiet my jam since then.
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>>50739034
>My head says Monopolising.
>my heart says Worshipping

But Anon, don't you gotta be both to be a proper yandere?

In theory, you might be able to metagame monopolizing into worshipping if he requests certain clerical services.
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>>50738843
Relax, naptime, release, naptime, relax.
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>>50739029
She was always a misandrist, so I never liked her.
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>>50739113
That is exactly what I was considering when looking at that. It just seemed so right.
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>>50738843
>>50739113
Does release work for girls, since they don't experience the dopamine rush drowsiness?
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>>50739190
>Does release work for girls
Well you're helping her release some 'tension', you know. So yes, that part does definitely work for girls.

>>50739029
>and forced impregnation
Wait, wasn't I the one that implied she would get that fetish later? Since when did she come about about her hidden desires?
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Become a girl. Become a waifu. Be happy.
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>>50739212
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>>50739190
>since they don't experience the dopamine rush drowsiness
It works.
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>>50739207
>Well you're helping her release some 'tension', you know. So yes, that part does definitely work for girls.
I thought girls didn't feel less tense and horny, hence the multiple orgasms?

>>50739222
Anon you can't just leave it at that!
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>>50739237
For the pure purpose of relaxiation it works good as long as you manage to get them a nice afterglow.
Better?
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>>50739237
>I thought girls didn't feel less tense and horny, hence the multiple orgasms?
Young man, sometimes, you've just got an itch. You have the 'thrist'. One or two good orgasms can take the edge off. But you can keep going, you know.

But also, some girls have more stamina than others. There are definitely embarrassed and sensitive 'premature comers' girls out there.

It's a shame waifu cyoas rarely take that into account.
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>>50739207
Her build for the recent Lavender CYOA involves her being a living egg incubator for a spider demon. When the spider demon or her master desire spider spawn with soecific traits, they pic out "donors" to fertilize the eggs. So basically Angel gets used as a breeding machine for monsters, demons, eldritch horrors etc.

>>50739150
These fetishes seem odd for a mysandrist.
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>>50739258
I just don't understand how the afterglow relaxation can happen when you're still really horny.

>One or two good orgasms can take the edge off. But you can keep going, you know.
So it's less a binary horny vs relaxed and more two scales?

>It's a shame waifu cyoas rarely take that into account.
How could they? Just note some girls as having more stamina and some as sensitive premature?
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>>50739113
I had not considered picking the same activities twice. You really want to cuddle with a catgirl huh?
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>>50739266
You could make a Waifu CYOA that considered their "endurance"
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>>50739272
You don't need to understand something to take advantage of it.
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>>50739367
I just want to know how it feels tbhh.
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>>50739382
I know the feeing.
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>>50739426
>you have simply been transformed into your own ideal of human beauty (which is most likely of the sex you are attracted to).
Autogynephilia wins again! Suck on that, losers!
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>>50739482
Gemini a shit.
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>>50739433
Na, I have an Ideal for everyone I meet and me. people are individuals afterall.
Though the overarching theme is healthy and fit, cause that are attractive traits as dictated by nature.
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>>50739078

I have to be obsessively devoted, but there are different ways of expressing that.

Monopolising grants that if I am in danger of disappointing my boyfriend in some way, then I'll automatically gain the skills to make a great success of whatever it is he wants. We could achieve so much together! Every bit of good sense I have says that's the way to go. I'll be a perfect waifu for him, meeting his every need flawlessly.

But because at heart I'm a stupid bitch who can't even get that much right, I'm sure I'll end up with Worshipping. So when I disappoint my boyfriend, and I'll often disappoint him because I'm not good enough, he'll just hit me and tell me what a worthless little whore I am and how pathetic it is that I even try. But he'll always come back, all the more in love with me afterwards. Because that's why he does it, because he loves me and so it just makes him so angry when I fail to appreciate him properly and all he does for me. And he _will_ always come back.
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>>50729724
The Greeks

Year 1: Meditation, Evocation, Chemistry , Biology
Year 2: Organic Chemistry, Psychology, Elements, Herbalism
Year 3: Alchemy, Transmutation, Chi Manipulation, Life Shaping
Year 4: Telepathy, Computation and Proof, Workshop, Theology
Year 5: Healing, Algebra, Self enhancement, Geometry
Year 6: Enhancement, Topology, Ritual, Mind Control
Year 7: Immortality, Enchantment, Shapeshifting, Life

Bull penis (15)
Memory of the Ancestors (9)
Physical Primacy (7)
Analyst's Eye (3)
Third Eye (1)
Ogre's Gut (0)

Dosh
Macbook Air
Magic Sword

Spa

Enigma
Half-Incubus

Quite the hefty scheduled, but I got Memory of the Ancestors and barely need to sleep.
Taking meditation right assures that I get access to the memories of my ancestors right away, and the spa helps with meditation and allows me to grow herbs.
After year 3 I'll have most of what I need; I'll start growing and manipulating plants with various magical effects and selling them for a profit to students while establishing contacts.
Lots of students will want performance enhancing treatments both in terms of studying and debauchery, so the dosh will roll in.
Changing the biology of animals and student is also an option; some may even pay to be guinea pigs... the students that is don't think actual guinea pigs got all that much money.
Even if I happen to break some rule and get kicked out I got most of the magic I need and plenty of business partners.
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>>50739514
huh. Turns out being the abused housewife turns me on. God dammit.
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>>50739514
You are scary. You make good waifu material
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>>50739428
No surprise that there's lots like us in /cyoag/ I suppose.
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>>50739489
You talking shit about my waifu and actual zodiac?

Get some tastes.
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>>50739722
It's my zodiac. That's how I know it's shit.
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>>50739874
You know what, I'm going to downsize this.
There is absolutely no reason for the first picture to be 4488 pixels wide, doubly so when all other pictures of the cyoa are 1400. Like what were you thinking?
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>>50739874
>>50739899
>>50739909
>>50739924
Frost
Cooking
Float
Garden
Trinkets - I'm not Santa Claus and I'm never using this.
Country
Local Folklore
Jane
Ollie
Beatrice

Winter's abilities are useless.

>>50739989
Don't ask me, aint mine, bro.
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>>50739482
Why is Aquarius so perfect?
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>>50738772
>Be The Waifu Edition
Y'all niggas need jesus
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>>50740063
I'd be Jesus's waifu
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>>50740063
>tfw gf
>tfw no CYOAs worth playing
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>>50739150

Am not!

>>50739029
>>50739207

>rape
>impregnation

I've already explained I'm not into that stuff. Idk why people keep saying that.
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>>50740148
Having those spiderspawn growing inside you? That's pregnancy.
Having the eggs containing said spiderspawn deposited inside you? That's impregnation.
Having the above happen whether you like it or not? Forced impregnation.
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>>50740206
Are you pregnant with tapeworms when you have a tapeworm infection?
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>>50739899

Frost

Float - mainly just to chill in the clouds during a blizzard, watching the winds, steering the snowfall
Starfall - access to magical raw material
Day Market - access to trade for magical goods

Dasher - and since I'm Frost not Joy I'll be working chiefly with snowmen. Snowmen can fly too, you know. Though they are also prone to occasionally nicking a motorbike and going for a joyride.

City - looking around myself it's clear the job of Frost in this town has been vacant for some time. Fat King Henry, I hear, him of the many wives, used to travel by sleigh from time to time down the frozen river; and in the story central to the whole mythology of the season Scrooge walked these streets in a landscape of snow. Today I see daffodils. Daffodils! I will set this right.

Local Folklore - I'm bringing back the Frost Fairs. I'll turn the river back into the vast open playground it used to become in the winter; they'll skate there again, there'll be musicians and men selling hot pies and roasted chestnuts.

That'll work for me, I think. But what do I do the rest of the year when I'm off duty? Am I one of these pale and interesting skinny girls you see around town, perhaps? The waifish and fragile sort you almost think might shatter if they're not careful - the ones so fearfully cold to the touch that you wonder if there's any blood in them? The ones who look just a little off somehow, indefinably strange?

If so, well... cool.
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>>50740233
>Anon lives in London
My condolences.
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>>50740229

Well now we're entering fetish territory that I want no part of.
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>>50740281
Just saying anon, what's happening to her is more like a parasite infection. Bot flies are another good example, whether you like it or not, eggs containing fly larva are deposited inside you. Hell, there is one species of parasite that infects insects, the female shoves herself between chitin plates on the insect's abdomen. It lives their its entire life with its genital pore sticking out, waiting for a flying male to find her and fuck the parasitic opening in the insect's abdomen.
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>>50740229
Tell me more about your tapeworm fetish pls, I'm hard already
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>>50740315
Oh hey, that sure sounds like something that'd fit in Lavender.
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>>50739426
YA TRIFLIN' NIGGAAAAAAAAAAAA
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>>50740315
Also, a parasite called Saculena. The female likes to infect the entirety of a crab's body cavity, then grow an external patch meant to simulate a crab's egg brood. This is so the males can mate with it, and also to convince the crab to protect it and treat it like their own when it's gravid with eggs, including a crab's natural instinct to find somewhere high up to spread the eggs around via current.

The really sinister thing it does is that, if it infects a male crab, it convinces it that it's female so it behaves in the above way. It'll even induce the crab's body to essentially go through a sex change, making the male crab look like a female crab.
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>>50738843
I want to marry Ruby.
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>>50740393
>if it infects a male crab, it convinces it that it's female so it behaves in the above way.
>It'll even induce the crab's body to essentially go through a sex change
I didn't know God browsed /d/ when He was making up animals.
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III is literally Cortana.

Waifu: III
Item: III
Trade: II
Domain: III

(I'd tell Cortana to make a dormant copy on the Armor before trading for the bot, but I'm sure the CYOA has a way to discipline for that. It is from OuterWorldsAnon after all.)

And yes I want the tech domain because I'm sure /they/ can make a decent enough bot to let Cortana touch me. And even 'cure' my reproductive disability.
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>>50740421
>Welcome to /d/ivinity
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>>50740431
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Anyone for that AR one? Any other big ones? Haven't been on for a while and missed a bunch.
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>>50740435
I guess. I mean, if I were God, I would totally inject my fetishes into the world.
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>>50740475
God has a fetish for beetles and nematodes.
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>>50739771
Brutal
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>>50740206

When they come out, I'm just laying the eggs before they hatch, not birth so it's not pregnancy. Incubating eggs isn't the same thing.

>>50740229
>>50740315
>>50740393

Those are rather icky comparisons, but I guess they sorta work. Chaq is the one with the spider parasite though, not be. I just take care of the eggs and improve them with my magic. It's pretty much just a full-time job for me and a sacrifice I make to become a perfectly beautiful angelic minor goddess with lots of magic potential and affluent lifestyle, even if I'm not free.
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>>50740421
Also, yes, the formerly male crab will try and be inseminated by male crabs. The parasite can't make it grow ovaries though, so it's sterile.

However, I bet if such a parasite evolved to infect a species capable of changing sex already, like a Clown Fish, then it would be able to.
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>>50738843
Get your game on.
Relax
Notice Me Sempai
Apply as a Detective
Taste Neo's Neo

Plushy Doll AND Fake Mustache along with cuddles and "cuddles" with a side of video games and headpats. What more could you want!
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>>50739212
>>50739219
Starting petals: 160

Instant Girl: I'll choose the longest option for this one and have it last an hour. I'm into longer transformations, but anything more than a day would be incredibly inconvenient. At least this way I get to savor it a bit.

Body type: Thin. The "eat a lot without getting fat" bonus is pretty attractive for this one.

Chest Size: Endowed (-5) (155). Because bigger boobs are better, but only to a point.
Butt Size: Developed (-5) (150). To keep the balance between top and bottom.
Hips: ZR-Bait (0).
Height: Full-Scale (0).

Sexuality Direction: Dual-Classing (-10) (140). Preference for girls. I'm not that into mental changes, but I'd like to keep my options open.
Dominance Coefficient: Equals Only (-10) (130).
Libido: Right Moment (0).

Identity: What Change? (-20) (110). This'll make it easier to adjust with my new body.
Time/Age: Take Two (-10) (100). I'll choose the 'going back in time' option too, I'm not important enough to have influenced world events any, so things will probably play out the same way and I can just have a fun time and fix my mistakes.
Persona Override: None. I have a great personality already.

Companions: The Weeb Squad (-20) (80). What can I say, I'm a weeb.

Abilities: Double Up (-20) (60). This sounds fun, and I feel like the Weeb Squad might appreciate it if one of them is trying to be "body-accurate" for some cosplay.
Menstrual Cancel (-15) (45). An absolute necessity.
Tasty Beverage (-10) (35). Especially since I can essentially turn it off, there's nothing to be lost by being able to provide a drink for yourself once in a while.
Birth Control (-15) (20). Another absolute necessity. Just in case.
Super Form (-20) (0). The French Maid example is a great idea, but I'm sure I can come up with some other uses for Super Forms as well.
Hot in the Cold (-15) (-15). It's already quite fun to walk around in the cold with only a T-shirt. Plus, I could wear anything, even at winter anime cons.
(Cont.)
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>>50740509
She has a parasite, but she is also parasitizing you.

There's actually a mite that likes to invade the womb of insects and devour developing eggs and embryos, but I couldn't recall the name so I didn't mention it above. It's also another close fit for your relationship to Chaq.
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>>50740449
>IV
Mostly because there's something cute about it: I take care of her when she is still mentally a child, care for her wellbeing, and she watches as I grow older and she remains the same, unable to change it.
I will be a father that wants the best for my daughter.
>Item 1
Whether she chooses to wear the claws or not, is up to her. She might want me to have them so I can extend my life, but likely we will both agree it is immoral to steal the life from others. It will be stored in a chest in the basement, and every time she notices how old I've grown, she will feel a great pang in her chest. She knows we can change it. She knows I don't have to age. If only we were willing to cross that line, to take another's life.
And every day she comes closer to being willing. Maybe she loves me... or maybe she just doesn't want to be alone for eternity.
>Trade 4
I want only the best for her. To see her abilities wasted, squandered, is too much to bear.
Trade 2 would be great, offering a way for the girl to stop me from aging, but I can't pick anything that harms another person. She has to be willing to do it herself.
>Low fantasy
Honestly none of the domains were appealing
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Hey ya'll. Posting this from previous thread.

I have no idea what the last two are. So if anyone has any ideas that would help.

Also that last box needs to be filled if anyone wants to draw a picture to put in.
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>>50739212
>>50739219

160
Transformation///
Slow Burn
Body Type///
Physique
Thin
Chest
Mega-Stacked -15
145
Butt Size
Excessive -15
130
Hips/Thighs
Overwhelming -15
115
Heigth
Amazon -15
100
Sexuality///
Direction
The Power of Yuri
100
Dominance Coefficent
In Charge -10
90
Libido
Overdrive -10
80
Identity///
Reception
Enemy Territory 0
Time/Age
Continue 0
Persona Override
Blue Thrills -10
70
Minor Abilities/Extras///
Dildus Maxmus -30
50
"Tatical" Visor -5
35
Menstural Cancel -15
20
Feeling Fresh -10
10
Performal -15
-5
Flawless Skin -15
-20
Refuse Change -20
-40
Disadvantages
Black Secret (Hates Men) +10
-30
Dat Ass +10
-20
Dat Rack +10
-10
Headlights +10
0
Leave it Behind +25
25
Boob Viglante -25

Posted this before. I think vigalante is a weaker version of a Evil CYOA power, taking traits and selling them to those who want them. I also have no ability to find people to purchase this, but offer a miraclous service to reduce and claim I'm some miracle worker. Then find a woman who wants a increase once I've taken enough (probably from women who are way too large*, and well I'll get into that work too. (Imagine the hyperrich going for this option and me making huge bucks.)

Still a Amazon and into FinDom for the cash.
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Hey, guys. So, the last time I made a CYOA, it was way too edgy and try-hard for its own good. Also, it basically became a glorified waifu CYOA, which wasn't what I intended

I want to redeem myself, but I have no good ideas. What CYOA have you always wanted to be made, but never had the time or skills to write?
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>>50740812
Make a waifu cyoa.
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>>50740812

I second >>50740836.
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>>50740812
>What CYOA have you always wanted to be made, but never had the time or skills to write?
>>50738911
But my problem isn't time or skill, it's that I can't make a build for my own cyoa or enjoy playing it. It feels so wrong and I can't imagine anything out of it.
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>>50740812
make your STAND CYOA
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>>50739989
I have no shame.
>>50740233
Just think of how summer spirits feel in during winter. Must be miserable for them
>>50740017
Hearth was always my favorite, but yeah I've thought they were a little lacking too.
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>>50740761
>No time shenanigens!
I think I recall some anons having some FTL-related argument and the conclusion being pretty much that covering large enough distances in a short enough time basically necessitates time shenanigans. Something to do with time being heavily (or even entirely) dependant on frame of reference, I think it was?
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>>50740836
>>50740849
I am okay with including waifus, I suppose. But I want a make one where that's not the main focus.
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>>50740659

No Superior Nippon to share with your daughter-fu.

Shameful Dispray.
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>>50740890
What about a CYOA set in a low fantasy world, focused on world-building and plot hooks, and it is implied that the people from the thread came along so it encourages and rewards teamwork?
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>>50740812
What CYOA?
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>>50740880
Yeah. I just didn't want people to go to another planet then come back to find all their family long gone.
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>>50740911
You'd need items that either combine with themselves (so 2x is 2x the power, etc) or allow for people to take options that work so well with others and yet individuals have so few points, or options from different 'patjhs' which are exclusive work well together.

Sure, try it.
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>>50740812
>>50740890
A yandere from another plane/dimension/corner of the multiverse/etc. has finally found their way to you. The choices available being stuff like where she's from and what she's gone through to get to you (and what kind of yandere she is), and depending on those, what sort of boons she can grant you and what kind of adventures she could take you on (with her as your companion, of course).
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>>50740911
Oh, I like that idea!

>>50740919
I was hoping no one would ask this. Pic related (1/3), but don't judge me too harshly. Like I said: it was being way too edgy and try-hard, and the reveals on the third page don't fit the setting at all.
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>>50740449

Girl IV. I must forego all other women until she's ready for me, you say? Agreed.

Item II. Spend a year in a wheelchair and in exchange have a massive life extension - good deal. On receiving the ability to do so, immediately turn into cute teenage girl and look for boyfriend. Because the rules said nothing about not dating boys, right? I'm guessing Girl IV is actually kind of into that otherwise she'd have been less specific about her requirements. Otherwise, turn into cute teenage girl anyway because of course.

Trade I. It's been five years, Girl IV is presumably of age now - and I've probably acquired a taste for boys. So we'll both be his waifus for a while. Hopefully he'll not play favourites between us.

Paradise domain. When dark water becomes an issue we can use the techniques learned from our late husband to heal the oceans - to contain the contamination and channel it to the stones for purification.

There we go: a relaxed tropical island lifestyle with a devoted girlfriend and a life expectancy of centuries. Result.
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>>50740993
2/3
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>>50740903
The domains were all bad. Nippon Society would increase the risk of rape, and I would prefer not having to murder all inhabitants of my domain if that were to happen.
Hell hath no fury like a dad whose daughter was defiled.
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>>50740911
>PVP
Fuck no.
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>>50741026
>jolly cooperation is PvP
Why so paranoid?
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>>50741007
3/3

To be honest, this was not my "last" CYOA, since I've done a few small ones since then, but it was the last "high quality" one I did, with all the design work and such. I haven't had the confidence to invest all the time into another big one until now.
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Wish someone would take a crack at a Star Wars CYOA. The porny one was funny but I mean a real one.
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>>50741036
I know you people.
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>>50740836
Waifu CYOAs are so boring.
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>>50740836
we already have dozens of waifu cyoa
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>>50741026
>>50741052
What if it penalized or even prevented people from shitting in each others' cereal, so to speak?
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>>50738843
>Taste Neo's Neo

Is this perfectly innocent or am I eating her femjizz?
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>>50741042
Plebbit made one: http://imgur.com/a/aRZO9
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>>50741163
It could also be that the ice cream is made from her breastmilk.
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>>50741042
Why can't that someone be you?
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>>50741192
But she's not a mawm.
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>>50741206
Because I don't know how to do photoshop plus I'm too busy writing The Loud House porn.
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>>50741224
You can induce lactation without becoming pregnant or givng birth. Even on men.
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>>50741179
That one was shit. No quest, companions, mentors, nothing. Even the porn one was better tb h.
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>>50740872

Summer spirits can just wrap up warm in my time. Big fur coats and boots and hats. With all that summer glow inside that lot they'll be toasty warm. And I'm sure I mentioned my plans involve hot pie and roast chestnuts.

What am I meant to do though? I'm a frost spirit! Even if I strip off to a bikini the moment the thermometer passes 20 I'll still feel like I'm melting inside, there's only so much clothing a girl can take off! I'll need to keep the ice cream coming. And cold, cold drinks with masses of ice cubes in them. And even then I'll probably be positively glowing and desperate and far, far too hot...
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>>50741163
My anon, what naughty thoughts you have! You really think Neo would add her love nectar to your ice cream? She just wants you to eat out her bowl of ice cream, there's nothing perverted about it! Don't mind her grin when you taste her rainbow. Be sure to be explicit when you comment on her taste.
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>>50741090
You're boring.

>>50741107
We need a dozen more. The waifus must flow.
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>>50741280

Get your butt working on more waifu cyoas!
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>work on my cyoa project's waifu, i mean companion, options
>realize that half of them are either one step short of going full yandere or just plain insane to begin with
>and basically all non-insane ones are bbas

Pic unrelated.
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>>50740148
Stop lying.
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>>50741224
Love the art style. Who's the girl she's living with though?
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>>50741466
Insanity is fun.
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>>50740569
Hair Affair (-5) (-20). Also useful for cosplay. I'd never have to buy a wig.
Performa (-15) (-35). This gives me a skill that I can capitalize on, and a boost in luck to boot.

Drawbacks:
Lightweight (+15) (-20). I don't drink much, and I think I already am a lightweight. This'd just be more of the same.
Bonerkill (+15) (-5). It's not a drawback, It's a test. If someone enjoys the phrases, they're a candidate for marriage. After all, I am lonely and just want to be loved.
Faulty Lenses (+10) (5). More of the same. I already have glasses.
I Need You (+10) (15). Girls can hug people all the time and not get looks for it.
Girl Power (+5) (20). This should be easy to deal with.
Helpless (+15) (35). Masturbation isn't a necessity of life. The Weeb Squad can always help me out.

Items/Spells:
Bra Magic (-10) (25). Even if I do let my lactation go out of control, this'll take care of it on a physical level.
Nano-Socks (-25) (0). Probably much more useful than they seem. If I need to kick someone, I've got spikes on my shoes. If I need to be a little bit taller to see, platform heels.

Melissa's Gift: I'll take it.
The change happened quickly. I watched as everything changed over the course of an hour, and the second I closed my eyes after thinking it was over, I was in my bathroom at home. I’d expected the time travel to be a little slower than that, but I guess I was in high school again now. So, where did I start? I tiptoed out of the bathroom and down the brief distance of hallway to my own room. It... looked pretty much the same. I’m not sure why I expected everything to be different, actually. I chose to have the same personality, after all. Inside the closet and dresser was another matter. Bras and panties were there, and skirts and dresses as well. In general, it didn’t seem like too much had changed. That was good. Nice and familiar, so I could pilot my life a little better this time.

Academy of Lillies: See photo.
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>>50741535
It's Swordmom and her daughter.
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>>50741466
Where is the problem?
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Somehow I only have one page of this.
Can some kind Anon post the rest?
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alright ladies and gentlemen hold onto your clits and dicks because here we go
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>>50741638
There is no rest because it's a WIP. At least I haven't seen it if there are more pages released, but I've been in every thread since they posted that, so yeah.
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>>50741466
You format this as though it is a problem, yet I fail to see it.
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>>50741638
Why do you do this? You've been asking for a week if/when this is getting finished. Why are you playing coy pretending you don't know it isn't finished?
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>>50741678
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>>50741615
Why does she hang around in her underwear in front of her daughter?

Imagine if it was her son! Or if the genders were switched!
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>>50741280
No, you're boring. You could dream about anything - power, glory, adventure, heroism - and all you do is sit there with your penis erect waiting for a naked girl to fall on it.
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>>50741699
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>>50741719
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>>50732482
>>50732692
>>50732991
>In general, statistics show that the most typical recipients of corporal punishment in the USA are boys aged 13 through 17 -- much as in pretty well all other cultures since the dawn of time. But in the great majority of American school districts, there are no age limits: the recipient may be any age from 4 through 19.

>Twelfth-graders, who might have been driving automobiles for three or four years, or having legal sex for two years, can be and are spanked in some high schools. In certain places, such as Alvarado ISD in Texas (which does not use corporal punishment at the elementary level at all), it has been reported that most of the district's paddlings take place in grades 9 through 12.
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>>50741728
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>>50741741
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>>50741738
So, live-action Feely Teachy?
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>>50741756
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>>50741769
Teachers have had a lust for teenage boys for thousands of years. It was inevitable.
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>>50741717
If you want power, go to the gym and pump iron or start a career.

If you want glory, adventure and heroism, join the army.

You're boring anon.
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>>50741777
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>>50741683
..... why do I feel terrible when i see that picture? Like i'm standing at the front of the blackboard, the teacher shouting into my face that I'm useless and will never amount to anything, and she keeps yelling even when I'm crying in front of the class?
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I started this cyoa as a joke but before I knew it I felt very eager to make it look good so I put a lot of work into the design elements. I hope the font is legible and isn't too much of a pain to read. All the art comes from pixiv artist Nakamura Regura 中村レグラ who is a fucking godly artist and makes absolutely olev doujins featuring plenty of insect and monstergirls in general. I recommend him to all monstergirl lovers.

As always, I hope you enjoy it as much as I enjoyed making it.
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>>50741815
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>>50741871
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>>50741886
woops put them backwards
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>>50741783
While it is mostly boys, plenty of girls get spanked at school too.
>In practice, though, statistics consistently suggest that around 75% to 85% of paddlings are still of male students. That is, roughly three boys are spanked for every girl. This might be, in part, because boys (and perhaps their parents) are more likely than girls to opt for corporal punishment, if given the choice. But we should bear in mind that, according to official figures, boys much more often receive any kind of punishment than girls.

Only a few do it only to boys and some have fewer alternative punishments for girls, if they only allow boys to pick physical work at the school as an alternative.
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>>50741871
>>50741886
>filename: Space King
>actual cyoa name: Solar Inheritance

One job anon.
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>>50741825
She's not that mean, she just expects better of you. You can do it.
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>>50741828
Regura is a god-tier artist. Last doujin was absolute shit, though.
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>>50741828
It is very pretty but I don't want an insect girlfriend.
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>>50741972
There's also a lizard, a sea slug, and a shark.
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>>50741972
>he doesn't want a insect gf
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>>50741690

>all anons are the same anon...

Now I know that I can safely delete it.
I never save unfinished CYOAs, that one must have somehow escaped my vigilance.
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>>50741699
Tie between Guardsman, Space Muhreen and The emprah
Guardsman wins cuz he sounds fun and a true bro
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>>50741966
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>>50741981
No thanks, I don't want any of them, sorry. But it is very well done graphics wise!
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was there ever updates to adventures in the orient or necromancer?
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http://theouterworlds.blogspot.com/2015/01/shen.html

So that's the story.
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>>50742084
No and only teasers for Necromancer. Perhaps one day you'll get the overhaul you were promised.
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>>50742098
life is suffering
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>>50741828
The font is a huge pain in the ass to read but boy howdy holy fuck this looks good, really looking forward to reading this my man, allah bless you for this OC
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>>50742178
>only 43 virgins in this thread
Wheres the other 29?

Allah has forsaken us.
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>>50741828
>MRA
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>>50741828
I genuinely believe this is the worst font anybody's ever picked for a CYOA. No clue what you were thinking.

Writing is good though.
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>>50738772
Is there a CYOA where you can be the waifu to a streamer and then be forced to stream while he tries to "distract you" / forced to sit under the table while he streams?
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>>50741828

I don't know why everyone has a problem with the font, it's fine, except for a few places.
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>>50742271
>tfw no MRA waifu
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>>50742345
General Rule of thumb: if its a very obscure and specific fetish its either covered by large and comprehensive fetish based cyoas like Lavender, Slutty Life and etc or it hasn't been made.
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>>50741828
Man all these ladies have so much fucking pathos. Good work anon, really quality stuff.
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>>50738843
>STARTING: Baking
If nothing else, it's one of the few things I've got enough skill at to not fatally screw up.

>THEN: Cinder Malls
If only because this is completely hilarious.

>AFTER THAT: Protect the Pancakes!
Nora, no. Down, girl. Down.

>SOME TIME LATER: Work Hard
If it's as effective as three months and doesn't kill me (but likely comes close) I don't see why not. If only training montages existed in real life.

>FINALLY: Cosplay Party
I can't wait!
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>>50742400
Thanks, even so I think I'll take the time to rework it into a cleaner font for ease of reading.

>>50742416
You don't know how much I agonized over not making just generic waifus and trying to give each of them something approaching a personality while still being cute enough to be easy to understand. Your compliment means a lot to me
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>>50742094

Damaloa-Jai Rama Ehrti

Body: Jai (10)
Heart: Loa (10)
Mind: Dama (10)
Eyes: Ehrti (6)
Oral: Arthmat (7)
Soul: Sithr (5)
Mana: Madre (2)

Presuming this was modern world, other than no visions of the past it would be acceptable. In a typical OuterWorlds world, it'd be slightly less than a 'useful programmer/secretary' build.

Still decent enough.
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>>50742345

I don't know of one but now I suddenly really want there to be one.
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>>50739482
So wot's Pisces' deal?
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>>50742463
>You don't know how much I agonized over not making just generic waifus and trying to give each of them something approaching a personality while still being cute enough to be easy to understand. Your compliment means a lot to me
N-no problem anon, I really do think it's the best work I've seen in a long time. Hell, waifu-wise maybe ever. Have you done any other stuff?
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>>50741828

Most decent authors don't push fucking political narative into CYOA. (Look at the Pick-a-Goddess CYOA.)

Trash and you fucking know what's happeing in Europe, goddamned cuck enabler.

(He fucking started it.)
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>>50741966
But why, anon? Why does this character give me Vietnam flashbacks?
What did I do to deserve this?
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>>50740063
>implying anyone can save me from this fate
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>>50741828
I understand the point, but Akrisia is ultimately too vague in her occupation to be a viable choice.
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>>50742467
Yeah I spent more than fifteen minutes imagining it. It was pretty explicit and hot. The "be forced to stream while he controls your vibrator" was the best part.
Maybe it has to do with exhibitionism, but without the danger of being thrown out of a store, arrested or be caught before you get to the good part?
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>>50740449
>PARTNER: II
She doesn't have to care for me. I gave up on ever finding love once I learned how close I'd been to having it without even noticing. What she offers is power, that would be mine.

>ITEM: Black Sphere
My legs? I was hardly using those anyway. The price of power is great, but worth it.

>TRADE: Tome Arcana
I feel it. I can feel the power flowing through me! This is the price of power - the price of survival in this new world!

>DOMAIN: Superior Nippon Domain
Wait, what? Did this draw from my subconcious? I know, I know, be careful what I wish for, but did I ever wish for any of this out loud? No.

II? You never even told me your name, did you do this? Is this some kind of game?

Did I do this? I'm confused. Let's ask some of these people. Good thing that place is sectioned off far from anybody I knew before, but still.
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>>50742489
So far I've made three other CYOAs, they are the nightmare waifu cyoa, the dark souls waifu cyoa, and the island survival cyoa that I posted two days back.

>>50742491
Well I can't blame you or pretend to have the moral high ground when you're entirely correct in that I made a cheap reference to a major humanitarian crisis simply because I thought it would be funny to satirize it for my own nefarious purposes.

I don't think we should delve too deeply into this topic unless you're willing to start a thread on /pol/ for discussion, but I think we both know you can't really discuss anything on /pol/ without at least two layers of irony and a folder full of pepes at this point. So lets just leave things as they are.

In any case I hope you can look past my immature and insensitive humor and enjoy the cyoa for what it ultimately is, which is monstergirl waifus. Failing that I hope you'll find it in yourself to forgive me. Let's try to stay on topic since this thread is about CYOAs first and foremost.

>>50742561
Any suggestions on how to improve her? I myself wasn't entirely happy with how she came out but I also wasn't sure how to approach it.
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>>50742648
>So far I've made three other CYOAs, they are the nightmare waifu cyoa, the dark souls waifu cyoa, and the island survival cyoa that I posted two days back.
Man, all those are grim as fuck.
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>>50742648
>nightmare waifu
not bad anon
>recent island survival
aww shit muh nigga
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>>50742648
My only major issue is that I have 0 idea of what she does. I get that she wants it vague and that's the point, but a little hint at what her occupation is would be warranted. Maybe the hint could be the general category to which it falls in, without hinting at what she does that's illegal about it like "I work with computer systems."

That's it from me, really. If you as the author aren't fond of her character, then the thing to do is slip in some vulnerability on her part. Something dumb she likes, some insecurity she has, anything that might be 'cute' without reducing her overall confidence or competence. Don't ever make her seem like she's weak, since that goes against what the idea seems to be to me.
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>>50742648
>nightmare waifu
>island survival
Damn, anyone mind dumping those?
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>>50742648
anon, what experience do you have in the software you use to create cyoas? despite these being the only ones you've made, they are very very good, writing-wise and visually.
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>>50741828
Maybe I'm just picky but I found reasons to dislike all but the first.

Regardless, you did great work design wise anon. Real nice stuff. I hope you decide to try your hand at something that isn't Waifu centric in the future.
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>>50738772
Pick your character.
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>>50740993
>PERSONA: Dionysus the Moon
Although honestly all of these besides the Devil, the Wheel of Fortune, the Emperor, and the Fool (the risk-taking part mostly) could apply.

Still, the Moon perhaps fits me only slightly better than the Hanged Man or the Sun.

>COMPANIONS: Xiaoxiao Zhao, Ruri Abe
They've known each other a while. Only seems right.

>SECRETS
So we've got a coward, a drug addict, and a terminal illness patient. And the three of us are expected to somehow beat the Shadows.

Why do I get the feeling this is the end of the world? Oh, WAIT.

IT IS. Eh, why be bitter about it, right? Caress your fear, they always said.
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>>50742838
>La Pucelle
>He
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>>50742738
My pleasure, I'll start with island since it's my brainchild and I lovingly spent a week writing on it as if it were my magical realm.

>>50742740
I'm really not that good. As far as software experience goes I only started using gimp last week and have only been able to make progress thanks to the kindness of those who make tutorials and because I love using guidelines religiously to keep everything clean and because I have the patience to scroll through 100 pages of work on gelbooru and artstation to hunt for that one particular image I truly wanted. As you can see from the Island survival cyoa this was the first time I learned how to make rounded rectangles and I used my newfound knowledge to its greatest extent to make everything round as fuck.

As far as writing experience goes. A few years back I was a semi-reputable cyoa story writer for the monstergirl generals that spawned on /a/ and eventually were exiled to /jp/. For me those were the halycon days where I could sit down and pump out dozens of pages of material in a few hours. Most of it was irredeemable waifu trash but I loved being able to connect with a community and it's part of the reason I like CYOAs so much in general.

>>50742831
Maybe pic related is more you style?
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>>50741699
>THE TAU
He probably has some great pointers on time management and storage space allocation.

And optimism. I could use some of that.
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>>50742871
>Maybe pic related is more you style?

Ah, I wasn't reading the thread. Didnt realise you were behind that. Well, get ready for more headpats. This is definitely my favorite island CYOA I've ever seen. It feels like the first one where I could really escape if I make the right choices and try hard enough. An actual adventure rather than just choosing how you die. As for the most recent one. The only complaints I have are purely subjective. Mostly that I think "Fisher king," is a giant cunt.
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>>50742567
Every time I look at something cool, I feel the urge to make more builds. But I've decided to not make any more until the boss finishes putting all the Build characters in. So others can have a chance to make a canon build.
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What's the secret to making good cyoas? Ones that get new builds when they are posted, ones people talk about, ones that aren't forgotten by the next thread?
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>>50741828
I don't understand how posting about despair and the Old Gods makes me compatible with-

>#4C-92514

Oh.
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>>50743200
I'll tell you when I figure it out
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>>50743200
An engaging world with interesting and meaningful choices.
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>>50743200
Waifus.
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>>50743200
Get their interest, and fire their imagination.

Offer detailed choices, make them think about the choice, and make them think about how that choice can affect the story they're building, and make them think about if that choice is worth the price you're making them pay for it.

Statistics, and having choices affect them, usually get more builds here on /tg/ where people are wired that way, but only add statistics where they're needed.

Ordion anon, for example, uses D&D-style statistics but they don't add very much to his CYOAs That one viking one, (Time of Troubles?) on the other hand, has statists fitted exactly to the adventure and it's a very good one

This even applies to Lewd CYOAs. Slut Life has lots and lots of choices, and just enough description to make it work. Lavender is very similar, but its rich descriptions (though they can get a little wordy) help build the world, and it has three statistics on top of its budget engaging the optimization instincts that most people on /tg/ have, which, imho, make it a better CYOA.
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>>50743200
Do your lore like Dark Souls does it: giving information about places and people without completely spelling it out. Make it interesting enough to make people look through the text to find the pieces of an incomplete puzzle.
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>>50743200
Does anybody have that viking one by the way? I can't find it in my CYOA or download folders and I think I deleted it.
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>>50743200
waifus, specific archetypal aesthetics, and becoming something feminine (trap, woman, litte girl).
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>>50743400
sorry, I meant to link to my post
>>50743360
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>>50742707

She works on the MonsterSIS website on TOR, the MSIS podcast via TOR and Triple layered crypto-encoded links on faceberg.

She's a terrorist, bruh. She's infiltrating our world and planning to take it over from within when the signal is sent in a few years.

>>50742648

There is no fucking excuse to use a real world 'event' and 'fake news' like this to theme your game. Just make up wish-fulfillment BS and leave your real world beliefs at the fucking door.

Chriminity....
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>>50743483
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>>50743496
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>>50739212
>>50739219
Better TG CYOA when?
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>>50743503
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>>50741828
Hmmm. Only the first and last draw my interest, and I think I'd go with Shark lady.

I like living, and the first sounds suspiciously close to a yandere for me to be assured of my continued existence.
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>>50742838
Swim Swim
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>>50743511
The instant you post it.
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>>50743442
>fake news
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>>50743442
>wanting to take over a world that's already doomed to suffer ecological and societal collapse within decades at most, even with the best efforts of those trying to stop it

She cannot succeed. Her cause is hopeless - and there is no way home.
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>>50743456
>>50743475
>>50743483
>>50743496
>>50743503
>>50743515
40 SP

Blade Variant - I like swords etc etc.
X2 Perception/Reaction (3) - Don't know how I'd improve my eyesight with training.
Cosmetic Changes (2) -

Extreme Shapeshift (75) - Basically access to the majority of lesser powers, at the cost of needing to shapeshift and devote the magic power needed to shapeshift.
Indefinite Upgrade (80) - Protagonist power, honestly. Don't know how I'd learn about it if my memory is wiped though.
Lose SP for Not Fighting Each Week (+30) - Indefinite means this isn't a killer, just inconvenient. Besides, if I'm training at least once a week, I can include sparring.
Lose a fight, Lose an active power for a year (+30) - Killer early on, but wisdom and caution can overcome it. Learn to pick your fights.
Monster Mash - Seems like the most fun time.

Gonna learn SP Bolts through training obvy.

Also the 5th page says he wipes my memory, but the 6th just says I don't take the CYOA seriously. So which is it?
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>>50743236
How do you do that?
>>50743364
Vague but enough information to get a good idea? And how?
>>50743360
Didn't think of stats. I think they can overshadow the rest of the cyoa, making you try to get max stats without caring about what the options you are picking.
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>>50743360
>That one viking one, (Time of Troubles?)
>viking
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>>50743579
There's russians, cossaks, ottomans, west europeans, and more besides. The fact that I can only remember the vikings is just a quirk of my flawed psychology.
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>>50739643
Can't wait till transhumanism makes gender purely cosmetical.
Back and forth and back and forth.
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>>50743611
The CYOA is very, very Slavic, anon. Germanics and Ottomans only interact with you and the core setting as outsiders.
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>>50743611
Fine, I forgive you.
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>>50743630
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>>50743624
To correct my misfiled data, I will reread the CYOA while repeating the word "Slavic" every 2.5 seconds. Bonus points, I am in public. Let's see how long it takes security to show up.

>>50743630
Thanks much.
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>>50741828
>>50742648
Ignore him, it's a fun CYOA and the real-world parody stuff is novel and cool. Don't let naggers make all CYOAs the same just because they get triggered so easily.
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>>50743657
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>>50743612
If gender is purely cosmetic no one would bother changing. You may as well stay the same since "being the other gender" isn't enticing when you can actually do it.
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>>50743612
Same, but I think I'll happily spend a while without switching, getting to know what I've been missing out on.
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>>50743681
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>>50743511
This one's pretty good. I'm not sure how you could beat it.
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>>50743703
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>>50742871
from your current cyoa history it seems as though you take a lot of interest in at least semi-creepy waifus. are you only interested in creating sort of "uncommon" waifus that are an acquired taste, so to speak?
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>>50743723
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>>50743688
Anon, your argument is patently false. Things like hair and clothing style are purely cosmetic, and people invest disproportionate time and effort in making sure they're exactly prefect -because- of their cosmetic nature. The easier you make it, the more people are going to take advantage of it.
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>>50743741
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>>50740449
Three all the way down. Then I'd get the hologirl to upload herself into the sexbot before the deal, and then track the original implant cause I know those shady aliens got a bounty on them.
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>>50741756
Alien Prison CYOA: (+30)
Job:
>Slaver (+10)
Items:
>Universal Translator (Free)
>Jumpsuit (-1)
>Rebreather (-2)
>Toolband (-2)
>Stun Gun (-4)
>Personal Cell (-12)
>Station Map (-4)
>Psyco Serum (-15)
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>>50743749
Why would they? Like you said, gender doesn't matter. If hairstyles no longer mattered, people wouldn't waste time making their hair look good.
Your fetish would become not only possible but completely plain, and the excitement would vanish.
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>>50743732
I don't try to focus on any particular kind of waifu. I just write what I find appealing and work my way from there. I couldn't tell you if I'll never do a normal waifu cyoa because I don't exactly understand what a normal waifu cyoa would be about. Though to be honest if I ever do feel like doing a normal waifu cyoa it would probably be included as a side dish to whatever topic the CYOA is mainly discussing.

In any case I don't really have any ideas as to what I'm going to work on next and if anybody wants to shoot me some recommendations for a cyoa they'd like to see I'd be happy to use it if it sounds cool.
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>>50741828
>Refugee Dystopia
You can't do this to me! I'm not British, French, German or Swedish! I'm not even European!
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>>50743916
I didn't say it was my fetish, anon, I'm only debating sociology with you. I just jumped into the conversation when I saw that post

Your instant categorization has given you away as one of the shitposters that plague our board, though. Which means you're not actually interested in debate, only argument. Try to be more subtle next time.
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>>50743714
Have you seen any of the others?
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>>50743928
Kenya hosts refugees. So wherever you're from, if you've got the internet, you're not safe.
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>>50743960
Okay whatever you say.
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>>50739212
A wee bit late, but whatever.

instant girl
Hour-long. Weeks of waiting isn't particularly appealing, but instantly would be boring too.

athletic
endowed
massive
substantial
protector
boy-crazy
roll the dice 1
equals only

powerful libido
I'm relying on that "It's never a problem" comment.

what change?
continue
As funny as it would be to see people freak out over it, it would also be a severe hinderance. Let my closest friends know, though.

moth
I'm more after the big concentration bonus. Being much more easily focused on work would be quite useful.

inhuman style
safe-mode
menstrual cancel
hair affair
refuse change

tactical visor
perfect disguise
servant orb
balls of steel
super form
spark touch
So much utility that if I wrote about all of it I'd pass the character limit.

black secret
Is a fetish for learning cheating?

tumbleweed
lightweight
mixed signals 1
None of these impact me. Don't want kids, don't drink, pleasure is better than pain.

rediscovery
Write down likes/dislikes on paper before tearing up the note to give some direction!

Melissa's Gift // See below.

It's a shame the real world isn't designed to set up for grand heists or anything, because a skillset like this would be amazing for virtually any kind of snooping/stealth. Plenty of power too, if you want to be some sort of superhero -- not that that'll likely get you anywhere. Use the magical powers to go around collecting every known reward for supernatural activity currently offered out there, and blow scientist's minds while you're at it. By the end of it you should have several million dollars at the minimum, provided they actually pay up; obtain a nice house with a secret lair, kill yourself/resurrect, and then do literally anything you want. Exploring the world sounds fun to me. Become famous. Maybe fight some crime. Figure out how to learn more magic. Run for a political office once you know enough, get several degrees. Rule the world. Enjoy yourself, you're immortal.
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>>50740993
Kikuri-Hime a best.

Always go for the healers.
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>>50741828
I've just read the intro and now I'm thinking about this but realistic, that is genders reversed and they aren't monster-people.
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>>50744066
Shark, squid, become master thief.
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>>50740761
> He actually added two of my images.

Ah yiss.
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>>50741828
Please expand on this anon, it's pretty great and well done for a waifu cyoa, and there aren't enough monstergirl CYOAs around in my opinion.
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>>50743967
If you have a better one, post it.
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>>50743920
>I couldn't tell you if I'll never do a normal waifu cyoa because I don't exactly understand what a normal waifu cyoa would be about.
I'm assuming "normal" in this context means completely human and not a monster girl, alien, or some other otherworldly thing?

Even in that case, though, "normal" waifus could have a lot of variation. Age, body type, personality, preferred role in the relationship, all kinds of stuff. You can have one waifu who's 18, 5'2", and wants to be a submissive housewife, or another who's 37, 5'11", and a dominant rich businesswoman who wants a submissive boy she can take care of and spoil in between fucking his brains out. The first one loves to see you in a suit, the second loves to see you making dinner in a thong.
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>>50744066
Fishies! They look the neatest.
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>>50743456
Drawbacks: Weapon is Breakable

Magic Variant
x40 Strength
x20 Speed
x100 Durability
x3 Perception/Reaction Speed
-Energy Bolt
-Illusions
-Clones
-Intangibility
-Elemental: Darkness
-x4 Multiplier
Energy Vampire
+10SP

Apocalypse: Portals

Final SP: 110

Excuse me? EXCUSE ME! I did *NOT* give these lovecraftian horrors PERMISSION to enter MY WORLD. You know what? How does 200 untouchable super-warriors tearing you apart sound? Did I mention that they're each four times as powerful as you think I am? Night-Immortal? Or that they'll strip you invading assholes of your magic as they rend your whatever-passes-for-flesh-in-your-dimension apart? Now SIT THE FUCK DOWN, BITCHES.
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>>50744066
>Turtle
>Mermaid
So happy. Everything will be so happy.
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>>50744066
Turtle shark.
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>>50743630
I love that CYOA. First time I saw it I spent so long on my build that three threads passed by before I could post it.
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>>50744140
But anon that's not what he wants, he wants YOU to post one! A new one, that you just made to prove him wrong! Don't you know how to shitpost?
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>>50741828
Last girl is so lewd and sounds too good to be true. Can't help but feel there's something fishy about her profile.
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>>50741828
It would be nice if some information was included about their sexual history. Shark girl seems like the one I'd prefer, but from the sounds of it she might have slept around a lot. Also knowing exactly how much they make a year would be useful.
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>>50744369
I disagree, that information will quickly ruin all the girls. It's better to leave it up to the individual.
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>>50744369
If I had to guess, I'd say all of them have had sexual partners save for the lamia and the deep one.

Does that bother you anon?
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>>50744066
Mermaid and Fishies.
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>>50744140
So no.

Well FYI there are plenty.
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So, what CYOAs are you guys looking forward to?

I can't wait for the Necromancy revamp. The author said he'd be done in about ten days a little while back so hopefully we'll see it around Christmas day. And there's the Pokemon Personified update for Sun & Moon content. Though that's probably a long while away. I'm probably just going to quietly make a build while the threads inevitably devolve into the usual cycle of autism, waifu discussion and defeatism but hey, it's still fun. Oh, and the Adventure in the Orient update as well.
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>>50744427
I don't want to be forced to marry a whore by the government. A persons history makes up who they are, and a whore will always be a whore.
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>>50744493
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>>50744066
Turtle and Fish. Everything I need to live the life I want to live but can't seem to figure out how to.
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>>50744544
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>>50744539
Thanks for delivering the exact response I thought you would. Have a nice day, anon.
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>>50744501
None of them really.

>>50744539
It's better to leave it up to you whether they are or not, than to be told definitively they are.
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>>50744561
Shouldn't Maria have a tentacle fetish?
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>>50744616
No?
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>>50741828
I can't read whatever the text is on the 'tab' on the left side of the folder. Otherwise good job.
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>>50744151
I'm sorry Anon, but I don't really understand why that would be fun. I understand having a fetish for a submissive housewife or a domineering money maker, but there's so much material that already exists even in cyoa form that I can't really see myself making one just for the sake of making one. I guess if I could imagine a compelling premise that would inspire me to write for it I'd be more than happy to give it a go. I'd definitely say my weakest area is writing since cobbling together the visual design has been pretty easy so far.

Rather than saying I have a creepy waifu fetish, I'd say I have a pathos fetish. I just really love things that appeal to my emotions and creepy and monstergirl waifus do this to me a lot more than regular girls do. Pic related is pretty much the best thing ever.

>>50744281
You cheeky little bastard.

>>50744369
I'm hesitant to include sexual history since the thematic backdrop is that this is a government program you're being conscripted into and I can't see any reason for that information. I'll definitely consider it for the next time I'm making a waifu cyoa though.

If it makes you feel any better I didn't particularly imagine any of them to not be virgins. Not that I got anything against experienced waifus, but it's not something I think about. Maybe shark girl just likes to tease a lot.
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>>50744575
It doesn't matter I'd daughterzone that hissing cockroach so hard.
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>>50744642
>I'll definitely consider it
Don't. It's better to leave that ambiguous so more people will enjoy it. As you can tell from that anon, it's a big deal to some anons, and their enjoyment of the CYOA is vastly reduced when their choices are eliminated by definitive statements on sexual experience.

>>50744639
Looks like species names or something.
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>>50744639
Don't worry about it, that's just the latin names for the animal species each girl is representative of.
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>>50744642
>Not that I got anything against experienced waifus,

Uh oh
Now everyone is gonna call you a cuck
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>>50744501
Of the cyoas you mentioned I care for precisely none.
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>>50744501
(listed order does not represent anything in particular)
>Lavender updates & finished version
>Perverse Superhero v4
>Beri's Christmas Present CYOA
>Slime Rancher
>That one CYOA where you get personal power in low-fantasy setting
>That one CYOA where you're a yandere and choose how to get senpai to notice you
>Necromancer v3
>All the other neat stuff that Beri is going to make, whether they've announced 'em or not
>This one CYOA full of fetish stuff that I'm making
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>>50744642
Do not. Anon is trying to get you to do something that'd have you headhunted.
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>>50744712
Well that's fine because I asked what your looking forward to, not to choose from what I mentioned.

>>50744717
>Slime Rancher
Like, a monster slime rancher or a monsterGIRL slime? This is important because at this point I would enjoy the former much more than the latter.

>That one CYOA where you get personal power in low-fantasy setting
Don't see much low fantasy here. Any other details? I havent heard of this one.
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>>50744642
>I can't see any reason for that information.
Increased risk of STD's and cheating.

>Not that I got anything against experienced waifus.
Wew lad.
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>>50744708
Nah, that is Italics thing. This guy is into Monster Girls, that will be his meme fetish.
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>>50744802
Again, all information not in the CYOA is up to your interpretation. This is VASTLY superior to dictating that information. Do you want to have NO choices or be forced to pick a girl you otherwise hate?
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>>50744501
At this rate you'll end up seeing the Pokemon Personified update before Italics posts the Order CYOA. Still, I hope he finishes it. And that he's not dead of course.
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>>50740993
Feels like a lot of these Persona are very similar. I think Kali fits me the best, though.

>>50741007
Blind picks are Jane McAvoy and Tsukasa Komon. Jane's got the brawn, and Tsukasa the brains.

>>50741038
Eh, could be worse. Tsukasa's problems are actually pretty easy to fix, given how much money Shadows drop. I have no idea where to begin with Jane, but deviant sexuality's not as bad as some of the other shit I could have to deal with.
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>>50743714
No point in being a girl if you can't give your friends the D.
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>>50744777
>Like, a monster slime rancher or a monsterGIRL slime? This is important because at this point I would enjoy the former much more than the latter.
>Don't see much low fantasy here. Any other details? I havent heard of this one.
I don't have any details besides that, they (and the "get senpai to notice you" CYOA) were all something mentioned by the same person as things they'd be working on in the thread before last one.
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>>50744824
>pokemon personified update
>20 new waifus
>all love the first more than you
>half of them have slept with their siblings
>all of them are terrible people

There, I just spoiled it for you.
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>tfw i'm almost inspired to make a NTR cyoa just to see how people would react to getting to be the ones doing the fun stuff
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>>50744875
Someone beat you to it. His CYOA was completely ignored, even when he reposted it every thread trying to fish for replies.
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>>50744875
Do it. Hell, I've got a couple of ideas if you're interested.
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>>50740993
>>50741007
>Persona: Kali
I really don't want to get into why I chose this one, but it seemed the most appropriate.

>Boy Companion: Kaoru Adachi
As Doug Funny's father once said, "Show me a man who resorts to violence, and I'll show you a man who's run out of good ideas." Besides, talking to shadows is cool and the group needs a healer..
Fuck, they're a charlatan, I thought they were going to turn out to be a shadow sympathizer that wanted to toss aside their humanity if they were even human in the first place or something. Oh well, I guess it's better than my second choice which would have ended up with me being chased by gangsters. Besides, if I'm good at anything, it's being a stubborn nag.

>Girl Companion: Chinami Endo
Planning will probably save our lives and putting our heads together we can hopefully overcome any challenge.
Fucking Nana. If there isn't anything I can't stand it's a bully. I'll fix this somehow.

Great, one partner is going to go off on their own while the other one doesn't want to do anything. I have a feeling I'm going to end up dying alone and surrounded by shadows.
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>>50744642
I hate these images.
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>>50744866
Ayy, There already here. How's life anon?
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>>50744914
Me too, but it just makes me love her all the more for it.
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>>50741683

Nope, that's all, and I've done nothing on it in weeks because of work and fucking norovirus.

Worked on page 2 today. Nearly done.

Probably going to be 4 total. Expect it between Christmas and New Year when I've got time off work to polish it off.
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>>50744875
Let me guess one where you chose who steals your waifu?

Honestly in the first cyoa I was dissapointed that all the heroes your supposed to be the waifu of were all chicks.
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>>50744066
I'll take the squid for sneaking around and stealing panties, and the fishies for fitting in if I get caught.
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>>50744805
What are all the meme fetishes of these threads?
SDA = anal
Italics = NTR
That one mind control fetish guy that's vanished = Disney princesses
Beri = headpats?
Angel = I think eggs now
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>>50741828
I`d like to mention that I really enjoyed political joke you put in there.
And all girls being kinda bad and dangerous be around also nice finishing thematic touch.
Great CYOA,m8. Cheers.
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>>50742567
I've 2k words of backstory but I've kind of lost interest in Traveler.
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>>50741007
It's interesting how half of the Companions' Personas are very clearly connected to their issues, and half... just aren't. Nana, Jane, Kaoru, Shiho, Chinami, and Honoka are very obvious even if just in retrospect, while Tsukasa, Albert, Xiaoxiao, and Ruri don't feel like they match up very well.
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>>50744984
Beri = Slimegirls. But that's not a meme, that's her(?) actual fetish.
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>>50745001
It's just poorly written. It was pointed out before how most of it doesn't fit Persona at all.
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Now accepting: Ideas for a cyoa.
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>>50745010
Nah, Beri is a slimegirl and she has a fetish for headpats.
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>>50745033
Superpower cyoa where all of the superpowers are described more like one would describe waifu options, and possibly a companion section where the companions are described more like items or powers.
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>>50745012
It's a lot darker than Persona, that's for sure. Normally your partys' issues are on the level of "nobody takes me seriously" and "I feel trapped by my circumstances" not "I'm completely fucking useless" or "I'm murderously obsessed with you."
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>>50745033
Edgy CYOA
Starting from tragic backstory and ending with endgoals.
At least half of companions are also obstacles and people who will try to "save" you.
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>>50744539
Then be grateful you aren't a girl in Europe.
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>>50745033
A CYOA about defending your keep from the impending mongol horde. We have a Horde CYOA so it would be a nice counterpart.
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>>50744642
>>50744914
I want to experience it.
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>>50745033
You've been turned into an unaging loli (or shota, whatever), and now you're trying to regain some semblance of adult life.
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>>50745112
What is that supposed to mean? I can't wrap my head around it.
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>>50744968
>also, you just listed all the cyoas you know are getting worked on as well as unfinalized fetish stuff...
They were asking for which CYOAs people were looking forward to, and those were the ones I could remember at the moment.
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>>50744875
As long as there's an option to be a girl and get cuckqueaned, bring it on.
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>>50744984
Highlander = Gangbangs
Kit = Highlander
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>>50742567
I'm in the middle of another build but I need some confirmation from Highlander on something before I can finish it.
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>>50745120
I'm interested, care to expand on that?
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>>50745105
seconding that
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>>50745205
That's gonna be hard when you don't say what you need confirmation on.
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>>50744875
A CYOA where you cuck others? Sign me up!
What about including a meta option where you steal anon's waifu?
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>>50744984
Bliss and rape, of course.
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>>50745218
I wanna wait for him to post first. But I guess it is fine. How specific do you guys think Material Proficiency can be?

Like let's say I have Nuclear Adept, can I have Material Proficiency in nuclear materials, or do I have be specific and choose Plutonium/Thorium/magic other radioactive shit
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>>50742871
Huh, well, you gave me the quickest possible "fuck this shit, I'm out!" option in this one. so...

Fuck this shit, I'm out:


Nemesis:
The Lizardfolk, Cannibal Tribe

Cryptids:
Coconut Spiders, Vomit Wasps, Man-Eaters, Island Aurochs, Cave Salamanders, titan crabs
Velociraptors, Dire Wolves-

6.5 points then.

Firstly, and most importantly, The Old Sea God's Altar.

This island sucks, I want out. and I'm gonna SWIM for it. Yup.


I'll also take that guide to magic, Spirit Dragon and the holding dagger.


For items, I'll take

Small Boat, Treasure chest, Magnetic compass, Medical Kit,
Fishing Rod, Hunting Spear, Flare Gun, Camping Tent

And the Owl Harpy Companion


If I DON'T take island breakaway does that make the waters less dangerous for an easier trip? Or is it mandatory if I make a break for it? Might tweak the build if it is.


Spend a single day or two to prepare, load up my shit in that boat and GTFO. All those dangers of the island are a non-issue once I hit the waves.

Being able to drink salt water makes the trip so much easier. If transmute salt to sugar works on disolved sea salt I can also make it into sugar water instead. I can spear-hunt fish, and cook them with my magic fire-fingers. I can try to make a sail From the tent parts or otherwise make the boat comfier. I can make the boat lighter to speed up the trip and make it float better in rough waters.

I can feed the harpy with fish and use her to scout around for rescue boats or land. Once I get back home I can buy some seaside property, build a glorious temple to my newfound sea god and start a weird sea god cult. He might appreciate some new followers.
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>>50741828
I want to go Tanith, but
>Flat as a board

So I'll go Fisher Price.
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>>50740993
>>50741007
>>50741038
Never played Persona before, but I'm really loving the tarot themes.
>Quetzalcoatl the Sun
Honestly, I think he looks damn cool. All of my friends are cynical and insecure, so her flaws probably won't bother me too much. Also, he's a giant snake.
>Shiho
I almost went with Orobas because I get The Magician in Tarot readings. She seems like a fun person too. I could probably help her study pretty easily.
>Tsukasa
I also almost picked Cu Chulain. Tsukasa seems like a good friend. He seems like a decent shadow hunter too, if he always has a plan. Probably good to balance Shiho's impulsiveness with his tactics and planning.

>After reading secrets
Awesome! My one friend is a super genius and my other gives me an excuse to kill yakuza. I hate gangsters and giving me an excuse to kill them with a giant magic snake is perfect.

Awesome CYOA, I really enjoyed this one.
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>>50745292
No the waters are always dangerous no matter what you do.

Love your build by the way, it really is perfect for what you're going for.
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>>50745206
Okay, say the backstory is you're a minor noble who controls this smallish territory. You live a pretty cushy life from the labor and taxes that your vassals give you, things are going well, can't complain. Then one day you start hearing rumors about other lands being overrun by some terrifying group of warriors, and that they're coming closer by the week. So you have to rally as many forces as you can in order to fend them off.

There could be a few different backgrounds to choose from, whether you rose to power through your noble contacts and can call on them for help or you were the firstborn son of the last guy and your people have a lot of respect for you. Maybe you rule through fear with an iron fist and you're able to bully people into your cause, or you have a lot of money so you can just buy support. The more people you have banded together and the more dedicated they are to victory, the better you're able to fight the horde. Results could range from defeat, fending them off but leaving them enough resources to be back before long, beating them so bad they'll leave you alone but perhaps not your neighbors, or just utterly crushing them. And the better you do, obviously the more fame you'll gain, perhaps even being known throughout the world.

I dunno, I just came up with the idea really quick and went from there, I didn't put a lot of thought into it. It would probably end up being similar to the Time of Troubles CYOA but on a smaller scale.
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>>50743572
Were you around when Italics's Pokemon CYOA was generating all the responses? Most of the shit people were talking about and arguing wasn't even really explicitly in the CYOA itself. The text describing items and characters in the setting allowed people to look at the same thing but come up with different results.

Allow the explicit information to provide some ground, then get the players' imagination to figure out the rest.
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>>50740449
>Partner
(2) Eldritch Practitioner

>Item
(2) Witch Doctor

>Trade
(4) The Headmaster

>Domain
(2) Fantasy Domain

I do not know how many others like me there is, only that magic is in this world waiting for the bold to take a step.
I would rather my companion keep her limbs and even if the headmaster ask us to spend twelve years apart by that time I must have garnered enough spells with or without book of arcane to prepare us for any other domains that lay in wait or dangers.

Guess I imagine myself as a druid to extend my lifespan a little one way or another.

Also do you turn like 10 years old? Or does your internal clock simply regress?
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>>50744066
Shark and Mermaid.
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>>50741886
Gotta remember that build where I get 5 battle ships, a Dreadnought, Gridfire, Particle Locking, Karkas and Duchess Sonya...
I might go up against BOTH Theia and the Jiggers, But as long as Ikeep Karkas out of the picture I can play both parties against each other until our combined fleets outmatch them.
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>>50745292
>>50745394

Yeah, If island breakaway (and it's 6 free items) applies, may as well add the booze and machete and then 4 of the items I already took have thier point refunded, so I could add an artifact, though I already took all the ones I want/need anyways.


Anyway, I forgot to ask, what exactly does the dagger DO when it infuses you? Does it give actual physical aspects (Like say claws) or more like skills (Being super-humanly fast, strong or limber, or talents at things like digging or tree climbing)

Either way the intent of having it out at sea would be to finish off caught fish with it to further improve swimming abilities and hunt more fish. (Hopefully the ability to breathe underwater or hold my breath for a very long time like a dolphin or whale)
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>>50742871
Nemesis:
>The lizardfolk
>The temple
>The other
>Cannibal tribe

Cryptids:
>Coconut spider
>Vomit wasps
>Man-eater
>Island aurochs
>Giant eels
>Titan hermit crab
>Cave salamanders
>Great Ravens

Special cryptids:
>Velociraptors
>Dire wolves

Companions
>Great doggo
>Punished lizard
>Insane survivor
>Errant conquistador
>Temple golem
>Witch Doctor
>Owl Harpy
>Orphaned cannibal

Cryptid companion:
>Wasp larva
>Dire Wold Pup

Shelter:
>Escape capsule
>Ruined City

Arcane artifact:
>Guide to magic
>Farsight stone
>Plague emblem

Miscellaneous equipment:
>Oil lantern
>Small boat
>Magnetic compass
>Alcohol
>Kukri machete
>Hunting spear
>Slingshot
>Entrenching shovel
>Flare gun

Mission:
>Accept your destiny
>Take up the will
>Reunite the tribes
>Island breakaway

The buddy system/tasks:
>Errant Conquistador and Temple Golem. Repair and build a wall
>Punished Lizard, Orphaned Cannibal and (Great Doggo when hunting). To make traps and hunt
>Witch Doctor and Owl Harpy. Making medicine and cooking
>Insane Survivor and me. Thinking up of tactics and learning magic
>Great Doggo, Dire Wolf Pup, Wasp Larva and me. To raise and train the pup and wasp

Plan:
>Build a fortress
>Make wasp queen
>Defeat seagulls
>Raise dire wolf
>Fountain of youth
>Reunite tribes
>Deus Vult at the nemesis's with my army
>Make the island my summer resort
>Build a sturdy ship to travel out of the island and back
>Live happily forever after with my hopefully notthatinsane survivor gf
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>>50743630

Glory:5
Honor:6
Will: 5

Money:
Military:
Power: 10
Population: 315000
Revolt: -25%

Born: Black Season
The Bastard
Dynasty: Vasnetsov-Yaropolkovish

Skills:Administration, Intrigue, Inheritance, Erudition, Dragonslaying, Fortification
Relics: The Kladanets, Ancient Library, Scholar Cat

Religion: Umbraic-Borealan
Government: Elective Monarchy
Provinces: Wyrmland (Crown), Wild Field, Saray (Crown), Long Shore (Frontier), Konotop (Frontier), Krasnograd (Vassal: Stepan), Plotsk (Vassal: Stepan)
Council: Merchant, Exile, Elder, Huntress, Veteran, Bookkeeper, 2 Inventors, Spymaster, Boyar Wife
Wife: Sarnay

Vassals: Stepan
>Diplomacy:
Tugarian Horde: Full alliance
Theodosians: Full Aliance
Norseland: Full Alliance

Capitol: Wyrmland: Stone Wall, Kremlin, Port, Stables, Watchtower, School

Army: 8 units of Crown Sorcerers, 4 units of Temnik Guard, 2 units of Tsar Guard, 9 units Estate Cavalry, 10 units Regiment Footmen, 4 units Gulyay-Gorod
Bogatyr: Yevpatiy
Military Advisor: Grand Strategist

Laws: Landed Druzhina, Zemskiy Sobor, Sanctioned Spellcraft, Construction Edict, Council Empowerment, Strelsky Reform, Ostrogs, Oprichina

>Do you have *ANY* idea how powerful of an army I'm fielding? Over a quarter my forces are capable of slaying dragons and giants with ease. My people are safe from outside aggression and need only fear our neighbors. With careful balance between innovation and tradition, magic and science and religion, and with our union with the Hordes of the West, none would dare test our borders. I will go down in history as a wise, stern, and powerful leader, an example to all future rulers of what they should aspire towards. Neither rebellion nor famine will mar my rule.
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>>50745674
It gives you the skills of that animal, not the physical characteristics, just the skills, a fish might give you underwater breathing or the ability to swiftly swim underwater or both.

So yeah, you can use it just as you described.
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>>50741756

Job: Snitch

Translator: Free
Rebreather: 2
Maintenance Access: 10
Nanobots: 15
Cyborg Arm: 12
Entangled Cubes: 5

This is going to suck. I mean really, REALLY suck. But I can make do. Using my Maintenance Access and Nanobots, I can plant listening devices all across the station. It'll take some time to learn to hack the bots and systems in the tunnels with my new arm, but once I do, I can find a dis-used waste-disposal bot, and reprogram it to hop a freighter and get to someplace safe, preferably back to earth. Once it comes back with proof of having been elsewhere, I'll give it one of the entangled cubes and have it carried as far as possible. Once it signals that it's in position, I can Cube right out. Sure, I spend the rest of my life on the run, unless I can get home and fade into the crowd. But it's better than being surrounded by the scum of the galaxy for the rest of my natural life.
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>>50741828
Really good CYOA.
I understand one wanting to have a nice typewriter font to simulate it actually being written by a typewriter but it's kinda hard to read.

The scale of the Risk Assessment Rating needs to be at the top, on a postit note or something so I understand where each of the girls stand on it.

Would also benefit from fewer insect girls, my humble opinion.

Also, Price is best girl.
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>>50745922
Trying to use Regura's art without including insect girls is like drinking Coke without cocaine in it.
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>>50744493
Touch.
Fluffy.
Tail.
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>>50740761
I made you thing. May you forever treasure it.
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>>50746009
He's got some lizard-girls. They're buck naked and/or fucking, though.
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So whats the ETA for The Order, next November?
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>>50744493
The Pyromancy, it calls to me.
Old fire woven from the very first or chaos spawned by chaos deeper still?
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>>50746163
Every time you ask when a CYOA will be done, a CYOA gets pushed back a day.
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>>50741828
>perfect match
But I don't like any of them. Fuckn' government.
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>>50746121
>implying either is bad
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>>50742567
>The Now; Watcher

>High Tech Understanding
>Religious Studies
>Martial Training
>Runner
>Utilitarian
>Raider
>Scavenger
>Sniper
>Frontliner
>Survivor
>Material Proficiency (Bullet)
>Languages Proficiency (Free)
>Gun-Nut (Free)

>Combat Attire

>Upgrade 1
>Seven-Shot Colt Revolver [AP]
>AD-83 Assault Rifle [AP]
>Traveler Maxim Gun [HP]
>Coriatx Las-Rifle
>Vindicator Minigun
>MAD.11 Hunting Shotgun [Explosive]
>RPG-71
>M911-Modded

>Bottomless Bag
>Magical Protection Vestments
>Muscle Memory Modules
>Mechanical Transfusion
>Rail Line Pass
>Standard Breather
>MagiblocTM Coinage (In the shape of shells)
>Non-Sentient Servo Skull (Free)

>Forever Alone x5
>IDNNGD! x4
>Destined for Greater Things
>Marked
>Looter
>Notorious
>The Renegade

>Archivists: Objective SIGMA
>The Dakka-Conventional Church

>Pipeline 102

>Uruk |The Sons of the Hajik|

>The Veteran
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>>50746195
The Lunar Moth has pretty high waifu potential and the Snake sorta does if your into the jealous type. The shark is also decent. But I wonder what kinda dude would fit all those girls unless there were very few human applicants.
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>>50746306
>fits them all
means
>has a monstergirls fetish
I guess

Also shark a best.
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>>50746306
they just gave all the ones with problems at what seemed to be a desperate virgin
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>>50746325
The shark's easily the best one, but if you don't mind weeb I guess the weeb roach might not be so bad.
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>>50741828

I'll pick "Hotaru" she needs someone.
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>>50746325
Shark is decent but she's basically dirty harry without a badge.
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>>50746346
>>50746371
They are all pretty decent overall, maybe except the mafia one she scares me.
I just think the shark is better.
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Got some further progress on my CYOA. Page one is done (except for all the spelling and grammar errors).

I decided I would split it up in 3 pages. First page is Classes, Races and Death Options. Second page will be Powers and Artifacts. Last page will be Companions, Quests and Drawbacks.

Feedback?
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>>50741828
Huh, almost missed this one.

Let's see, Luna's probably the most compatible one for me, though I'm guessing her inevitable PTSD blow-up is gonna be a hell of a thing to deal with. You know, especially given that she felt the need to to straight into discussing her nightmares in the damn introduction.
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>>50746237
The Past is dead.
With the Gungeon ransacked and the gun discharged, the Bulletkin are without purpose. For millennia, they and their allies had fended off any incursion. Armies lay shattered at their feet, their tools taken for use in the defense. Countless Gungeoneers had ventured into those, all seeking the gun that can erase their heinous mistakes. Countless Gungeoneers left dejected, only alive due to the mercy of that treasure which they sought. Yet more have been trapped within, taken prisoner for their transgressions. For millennia, the Gungeon lay indomitable, and Kaliber had been pleased.
However, it only takes one failure for it all to end.
Unlike the others, this Gungeoneer never gave up. A thousand times he fell to the floor riddled with bullet-holes, and a thousand times he returned to try again. Time proved his ally, and he eventually stood triumphant atop a mountain of shells, bullets and explosives, his prize in his grasp.
He fired the Gun that can kill the Past.
Brought low by their defeat, a single Bulletkin has taken it upon himself to right this wrong. Called traitor by his kin, he fought tooth and nail to pursue that Gungeoneer, following in his footsteps as he battled through the place he once called home. After years of searching, he finally forged the only bullet that that holy Gun will accept, and set out upon the trail. He would recover what was stolen and use it to erase that Gungeoneer from existence and return the Gungeon to its former glory.
The Bullet shall kill his Past.
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>>50746346
>wanting to cuddle with 500 pounds of crushing muscle
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>>50746420
>They are all pretty decent overall, maybe except the mafia one she scares me.
You're right, its strange but I want to adopt the roach poor girl needs a home. Not getting knocked up by some nerd from /a/.
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>>50746448
Posting WIPs in autosage is a bad idea.
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>>50746460
Girl is self conscious as fuck and she's in the program to get help, not the dick, mostly.
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>>50746466
I'm into amazons. I know the risks.
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>>50746486
>You're right, its strange but I want to adopt the roach poor girl needs a home. Not getting knocked up by some nerd from /a/.

Agreed anon.
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>>50746448
To be clear, is The Smug Bitch the only way to change genders?
Combining Smug Bitch with Angel, will that mean people still think you're a "paragon of good" even when you insult them?
I like the overall concept, there are definitely too many deities handing out powers!
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>>50746518
and hold hands
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>>50746533
She has needs anon, sick and dirty needs.
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>>50746448
Best cyoa I've seen in a while.
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>>50746528
>>50746486
>looks pretty good
>questionnable anime taste on the file but that's alright
>still has to eat alone in the bathroom like some kind of outcast
She doesn't deserve this
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>>50746448
>Multiplayer pvp shit in which you ruin other people's shit
This is great hehe
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>>50746556
And things don't get better when she gets home because she's an orphan.
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>>50746556
Then love her and teach her well. Especially about hiding your powerlevel and helping that my serving as her outlet for all her nerdity.
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>>50744642

sad!
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>>50746597
We're all orphans on the inside.
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>>50746531
>is The Smug Bitch the only way to change genders?
No, you get a free sex change from "Timeless body", which you get for free.

>Combining Smug Bitch with Angel, will that mean people still think you're a "paragon of good" even when you insult them?
Yes, they will. They will always come up with a explanation to why you where doing something evil. Like if you insult them, they will think they are sinful and evil and will thank you for pointing it out. You can kill their children and they would think their children was deamon in disguise.
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>>50746448
stop dissing vanilla ice cream god damnit it's the BEST
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>>50746081
>try to think of a Stand for Jacket
>can't because all the Stands would be less badass than he is
>>
Did that guy ever start working on Eros Academy/Monster Hunter?
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>>50746604

That was my plan
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>>50746448
>Pick daemon badass
>blind from the start since you can't see shit
I hope nothing wrong happens while the explosion dies down
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>>50746448
Smug Bitch, Angel, Seeker.

I will always be one steep ahead of the rival making their entire journey absolutely pointless by being better at them in whatever their trying to do and looting everything before they get there.
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>>50746642
>They will always come up with a explanation to why you where doing something evil. Like if you insult them, they will think they are sinful and evil and will thank you for pointing it out. You can kill their children and they would think their children was deamon in disguise.
Holy shit, best CYOA ever! This is like a better version of my favorite power (weirdness filter) - not only do people not mind my actions, they always think my actions are just.
I can go full sociopath with no consequences. I am really looking forward to this being finished.
Except that angels can't kill I can do just about anything.
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>>50746224
Considering folks like >>50744369 and >>50744539, pictures of them fucking will just lead to tears.
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>>50747394
I think the vast majority of people don't want to see what amounts to a marriage proposal made with their new fiance pictured fucking someone else. Pretty much 99.9% of humanity would reject such a thing.
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>>50741828
You did good making this. Although at first blush I had read it as the government was merely forcing one of these girls to live in your home not that you were marrying them sight unseen.
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>>50741828
what the hell, I'll go for Akrisia. Hopefully we don't get shot full of holes.
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>>50747394
>>50747458
But the naked did work well for the slime girl, too bad she needs a translator and speaks pure nonsense.
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>>50747517
Nudity generally isn't a problem since it doesn't imply anything about them except that they don't understand human clothing and/or modesty.
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>>50747458
Depends on the circumstances, doesn't it? A fat paycheck and a professional rather than loving relationship and I'm game.
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>>50741828
tempted by Akrisia, but I can't shake the feeling she's going to eat my head

I choose Fisher Price.
after all, Work is child's play
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>>50744281
she's a NEET. That's the drawback.
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>>50747531
Right but I'm sure some of those lizard girls are just naked, and not fucking. Besides they might have been desperate/ill informed enough to send in lewd pics of themselves hoping that will let them get picked first or were gullible enough to fall for a prank.
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>>50747547
That's not really a wife, anon.
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>>50746448
Looks good so far. Isn't invulnerable a bit OP though? Seems like you are proper unbeatable if you take it.
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>>50747565
I'm agreeing with you that nudity isn't a problem. I was criticizing sex photos.
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>50729733
Re the Scholomance cyoa posted yesterday, "a credit corresponds to a four hour period twice per week, either from..." - unless there's a lot more days in a week in that world, it should be "class" rather than "credit"?
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>>50746448
this is great man, but for goodness sake spellcheck the thing. Just type it up in a word processor before putting it into GIMP or something. I'd just inform you of the mistakes, but it's too much.
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>>50747579
Crop them so it looks like they've got a vibrator in them or just don't use the sex ones, but there were implied to have been a few lizard girls pics who were just buck naked.
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>>50747570
It will cost like 11-12 Shards of Power tho or something ridiculous. So you would only get like 1-3 Shards left.
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>>50747620
>Crop them so it looks like they've got a vibrator in them
Also wouldn't work. Dishonest, makes them look very slutty.

>Just don't use the sex ones.
Sure.

Also, you seem to be taking a comment on someone's specific post and running with it like I'm the CYOA maker or like my opinion was meant to be wider reaching than it is (like you think I'm rejecting the idea of lizard girls or something.)
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>>50747566
You aren't generally forced into marriage by the government, anon.
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>>50747657
>Also wouldn't work. Dishonest, makes them look very slutty.
Right well I was setting up the idea that they were dupped into thinking that they HAD to be slutty in order get picked or that was the best way to prove how fertile they were. I mean they are marrying a dude sight unseen and that creates a kinda stress that would make ordinary people do crazy shit.
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>>50747708
It'd be more likely to put people off really.
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>>50747720
More off putting then them fucking some other dude on camera for their government dating profile picture? Honestly I'm just trying solve the problem of the lizard girls not having any pictures that weren't too lewd.
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>>50747786
No, but it's not a problem because nobody in this conversation made the CYOA. It's not something productive.
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>>50746448
For these classes, they all have drawbacks. EXCEPT ONE. This is the stealth guy. Not being able to win in a fair fight is irrelevant to him anyway. There won't be a fair fight. Fair fights are for the two brawn classes.
Meanwhile, the others, some of them have real problems. That's it. Thanks for reading if you do. Seems cool.


Anyway, I'd pick Badass because I like personal power but don't wanna dick around with stealth. Not running is... odd and could be fatal some day but.. well, I'll figure something out.

Kinda stuck on race. Fairy and dragon and elf and angel all seem fun. I'll think more.
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>>50747666
they just don't call it marriage. You can be forced by the government to split assets or face mandatory paternity (regardless of whether you're actually the father) without formally "marrying" per se.

One of the reasons gays shouldn't have gotten rights. Last nail in the coffin of divorcing "marriage" per se from any of the consequences or meaning of marriage.
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