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>>50552259
Resources: http://pastebin.com/vrqYhnpu
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A
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>>50563697
F
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>>50563697
Well would you look at that. Guess you get twice as many rings!
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>>50563618
>2 options have the maximum(5) Knowledge, 0 have the minimum(1)
>1 options have max Strength, 4 have min
>0 options have max Charisma , 4 have min
CYOA bias is clear.
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>>50563425
>Guns
It's a different ranged option that isn't better than bows like real guns would be.

>Atleast no silliness of infusing sniper bullets with nullification is possible with this.
Nullification is arm's reach. Full stop. Trying to Enchant something with it is like using a fire extinguisher as fuel for a flamethrower - not the stuff in it, but the actual extinguisher. Best case, nothing happens, worst case you die.

A lot of those traps are good, but you have a looser definition of what can be Combined.
Viable targets for Combine and Enchantment are the Arcane tree, Binding, and Ascension.
Binding can have a single not-quite-magic like Skull Weaponry (ammoless 'dart' traps on a skull) or Psionic added to it that's used when it triggers, but can't have any other effects.
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>>50563811
That you're supposed to be a leader, not a fighter or negotiator?
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>>50563943
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>>50563810
I solve everything for everyone forever. Then I start creating stuff.
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>>50563834
>It's a different ranged option that isn't better than bows like real guns would be.
>Nullification is arm's reach. Full stop. Trying to Enchant something with it is like using a fire extinguisher as fuel for a flamethrower
Thanks for the clarify. Mostly pushing for answers so that we can counter the handwaving in some builds.
>Viable targets for Combine and Enchantment are the Arcane tree, Binding, and Ascension.
If by Ascension you mean light/dark magic, does that include Intangible?
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>>50563965
Still considering doing a "bug waifu" dlc for this one, just to make fun of that one guy who said this was another waifu cyoa in disguise. Hell, I haven't even started on mechfu so maybe doing something small would be more manageable with how busy I am right now.
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>>50563850
>leadership is pure knowledge, not dealing with people or taking action
I think you just proved that guy's point.
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>>50563810
I can't decide. There are two things I think I'll do:
Option 1:
Make my life comfier/easier.
Remove the need to pee/poo/sleep/eat/sweat/shower, give myself steroids and be better at focusing and reading faster. I'll also give myself decent drawing skills.
But the thing I want most, is a learning factor. I don't want to be the best, i want to have to get good. i want to learn at an accelerated rate, so i get good at drawing faster.
Knowing ill suck for possible hundred(s) of hours before being decent, sucks.
I don't want to change the world or anything. I don't like it if things go bad, ill be responsible. just make my life easy.
(Oh brother, that's only 103 words...)

Option 2:
Wish-fulfilment.
I'm gonna be the best most perfectest waifu. I'm gonna replace my personality with one that is loving, kind and happy. I'm gonna make my happiness be derived off the happiness of the one I am a waifu of.
I'll probably have to remove the memories of my life being different, to avoid some brain stuff from happening, but I don't know. that's iffy. i think I'll stick to just, put the memory of my old life in the back of my head. It won't harm me or give any trouble. It will fade away over time.
I want to know my life changed, so i can appreciate the changes.
I already have my first week as a waifu planned out but whoooo boy, THAT is not for a Christian board!
I am ashamed, and sad, and disgusted, and all other negative adjectives, about how degenereate that dream was. and how much i loved having it, and how hot it was.just euthanize me and get it over with, fantasy can never be real, i can't be a waifu and even if i could be, 3D waifus don't exist. I can't be the perfect girlfriend. i'll still try.

DANG DANGIT! Only 198 words. I guess I combine the two options? That's fine. If I don't need to eat, there's more dinner for whoever i become a waifu to.
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>>50563943

>poisonous

Isn't this supposed to be venomous?
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>>50564056
I hope so, good luck getting people to eat it
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>>50564079

My mistake, I was talking about the fangs option.
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>>50564098
Ah okay, but for the stinger it should indeed be venomous.
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>>50563997
so this is what happens when someone with a bug fetish really apply themselves.
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>>50564140

At least they're not a furry. Or a horsefucker.
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>>50563810
This CYOA is boring. "Do whatever you want." If I didn't want arbitrary rules and restrictions on my imagination I'd just daydream instead of coming here.
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>>50563810

I am glad to have inspired someone to create a CYOA.
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>>50564169
It actually asks you to write them yourself. But games that do that rather than passively spool out gameplay aren't for everyone, and I definitely see the appeal of a more structured CYOA.
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>>50564286
A structured CYOA about getting infinite power? I'd like to see that.
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>>50563810
Reveal myself and then do stupid shit like drifting cars at insane speeds. Order 1000 pizzas to the white house. Basically be a trickster god
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>>50564169
You don't say.

Wasn't it written as a joke?
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>>50563810
Well the first thing I do is seal away my ability to be omniscient, as an omnipotent entity is by definition able to remove or limit their own omnipotence. I do this BEFORE using any power that grants me any knowledge. Omniscience is the main problem with omnipotence, because in knowing everything you also know exactly the outcome of everything you could possibly do. There is no more experience, there is only the simple correct choice in how to use your powers and then nothing, provided that there is even a such thing as an objective right value.

Not knowing everything makes me objectively wrong, but it's better than immediately rendering the possibility of experience, and therefor life itself obsolete. The rest of my powers are a question of how I use them, simply having them shouldn't be an issue but I'll probably seal them away too in a bit.

After that, I think I'll probably work on a pocket dimension. There are plenty of CYOAs that focus on giving me one of those or the godlike powers to create one, and generally speaking that's what I would prefer to do with my powers. This world is too much responsibility, since I don't have the foreknowledge to know what to do with it I'll need to experiment anyway.

I'll use my powers to set up a sort of "ideal" world. That's not to say a perfect one. Perfect is boring and I intend to stay here for a long time. Just a world with what I would consider interesting and a few more general problems solved automatically. After THAT, I set things up to more or less run on their own and seal the rest of my powers so that I can live an ideal and MOSTLY mundane life (with some benefits of course). At least that's what I would want at first, where I go from there is anyone's guess.
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>>50563810
Give myself a waifu, and a time machine and make myself rich.

I can't fix any of the world's problems without ruining other shit so why bother?

Solve hunger? now there's massive overpopulation

cure disease? now no one's dying
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>>50564353
Damn dude, my regular life is better AND more interesting than those options. Definitely one of those "the only winning move is not to play" moments.
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I'm making a semi generic waifu cyoa

but to make it, I need pictures of cute anime girls

does anyone have a pic of a girl they'd like in the cyoa?
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>>50564403
How lewd are you willing to accept?
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>>50564313

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=4ezd24krgiQ
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>>50563697
E
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>>50564396

You have a comfy waifu paradise?
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>>50564403
Please include an image of my waifu Chiaki Nanami thank you.
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>>50564408
as long as you can put it on a blue board, go for it
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>>50564426
I also get to go to the grave without all of the baggage that option heaps on me.
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>>50564336
>>50563810
Writing on what I would do is easy. I could probably go on for several more posts but I hit the word minimum and was about to hit the character max, so I figured I'd just be general about it.

I tend to have a problem when a CYOA asks me how my life would be. Then it's not simply about me and what I think, I have to involve other people and events that I have no control over. Not just how would I approach and talk to so-and-so but exactly what they would say back. It involves a level of creative freedom not unlike omnipotence itself, which as you can see I immediately draw back from.

More importantly though I can imagine a CYOA actually happening. Of course it never will, but anything is possible. Once I start writing about how it happenED I'm talking about past events which I can no longer fantasize about happenING.
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>>50564379

>now there's massive overpopulation

Wow, it's like, you can fix that too, considering, you know, you're omnipotent.

>now no one's dying

And of course, diseases are the only things that have killed everything.
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>>50564403
Put this slut in your waifu CYOA.
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>>50564353
>no third option to cast the universe back into oblivion
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>>50564456

What baggage?
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>>50564456
Nothing you do ever has or ever would matter. In real life or in either option. You are only fooling yourself.
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>>50564474
>what is a hyperbole
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>>50564353
Option A easily. Like what the fuck do I care about the multiverse if I'm dead anyway? Neither of the options is immortality so I don't give a fuck.
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>>50564422
I masturbate just fine without pretending to be anyone else, thank you very much! I just explained the problem because someone asked; I don't participate.
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>>50563834
>It's a different ranged option that isn't better than bows like real guns would be.

Than what precisely is the advantage to skull weaponry besides not needing ammo?
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>>50564511

Call it whatever you want, you just basically went "I am only pretending to be retarded".
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Well shit.

>Moving a bunch of pictures into another folder
>cut and paste them all
>something goes wrong and now they're all gone

They're not even in the recycling bin. Is there any way to get them back?
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>>50564353
B,because I know what I'd do would be meaningful.Also I'd get a bitchin sword
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>>50564052
Actually, i want to make an addition. i have omnipotence, may as well use it.
gonna be the eldritch horror waifu. If my main character loses their job, i won't wish one into existence. i'll figure out what their perfect job is (and i'll know, because obviously i do, i'm the perfect waifu), and make sure they get this job.
maybe i'll have to show the boss-man my true form and derive him of all his SAN, and leave my main character VERY confused why some dude called them out of the blue and offering them their dream job, with way too much pay...
and i'll just smile at him, wearing my cute apron wearing nothing underneath, while making pancakes.
like i said, i don't hwant to alter reality to make it perfcet for my main character, life has to have ups and downs. i just, take care of the downs, and they thank me. because the only thing that matters, is my main character is happy. no one else matters.
and there's no reason they should know the power i have. that would disrupt our power balance, because i am obviously theirs, and not worth as much.
I don't want our relationship like in that one story of the farmer with a hulder waifu, who abuses her and she takes it because she loves him. then one day she lifts a fridge or whatever, and he realizes oh shit, she could've ripped my spine in half but didn't. thne he starts treating her differently.
i mean, i just don't think anyone would be willing to treat me how i want to be treated, if they knew i could uncreate the universe if they asked me to. they'd fear me. i might reveal it at some point, if we get bored. then we can start conquering the world (and by "we" i mean I can be the princess that gets rescued, or just the advisor sitting in the back. i am not the main character here)
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>>50564537
No, you're just autistic
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>>50564560

Relax, man, it was only a joke. No need to be so buttfrustrated.
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>>50564511
Hyperbole is an expressive tool that has many uses; one of them is complaining about things that aren't really problems. But it's not very good at identifying actual problems.
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>>50564515
Funny, I explained the problem too.
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>>50563697
A
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>>50564580
Your explanation included an error. If you want to ignore the correction, you are free to do so.
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>>50564539
Try https://www.piriform.com/recuva ?
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>>50563973
>If by Ascension you mean light/dark magic, does that include Intangible?
No. Intangible is in the same category as Recall, Bloodlust, and Nullification - discrete supernatural abilities that aren't magic and can't be used beyond their explicit use.

>>50564531
Its damage isn't based on your Strength score, so a high Skill weakling could still do damage without needing magic.
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>>50563811
>4 have min CHA

Confirmed for not reading the CYOA
Dragon has a minimum of 2 Charisma if you have a Small dungeon and a maximum of 4 Charisma with a Large dungeon. Similarly their Strength and Knowledge have a min of 3 and max of 5, meaning that a Dragon with a Large dungeon has the best stat spread out of all of them.

As for why Alchemists, Druids, Necromancers, and to some degree Wizards have low Charisma is because they aren't meant to really be rulers in the traditional sense. Alchemists can just make their minions be inherently loyal to them, Druids probably act more like caretakers for the dungeon, Necromancer can magically control their undead minions, and Wizards just use their immense arcane might to get their minions to follow them. Classic Overlords and Warchiefs are your traditional leaders who don't just order their minions around but actually inspire their followers to work for them.

Most of them don't have high strength because they rely on magical prowess in battle and/or they aren't expected to be regularly mixing it up with ever dungeon divers who peeks down their hole. That's what you have your minions for.
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>>50563618
This CYOA was supposed to get an update for Halloween that sadly never materialized.
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>>50563810
The power I wield and the things I have seen lead me to a fundamental conclusion.

It does not matter what form they take, or what powers they wield - the living will invariably lead existences of aimless, agonizing horror. They will murder, they will plunder, they will break the worlds upon which they live - and they in turn will be preyed upon. The very nature of life is to consume. The roots of the trees suck the water from the ground and split the stones to make their precious 'soil.' The lion crushes the zebra's throat without care for its pain.

Is it any wonder that the world of man is a nightmare of cruelty and chaos, when they were born, weak and weary, into a world that sought only to destroy them?

Yes, I see it now. They are not the root cause of the problem - only a symptom. A symptom of the disease that is Life.

This universe will only find peace when all of the festering insects that crawl upon its surface are at last exterminated. But why stop there? The worlds that support the infection must be cleansed, as must all of the works of the plague.

The stars that give them light, and the very cosmos that forges these stars. Nothing can be spared.

Then, when I am the only thing left, I too shall disappear - and there will at long last be peace.

Why yes that was supposed to be edgy, don't you see the attached pic?
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>>50563997
You should, if you haven't been up to anything else. I was wondering what happened to you.
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>>50563697
C is the best.
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>>50564633
Would you ever add flaws/drawbacks for one or two more skillpoints?
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>>50564689
Doesn't really change the morphology of the distribution all that much.
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>>50564403
Will it have a futanari?
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>>50564353
>B
Bring it on world.
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>>50564403
Here.

Cute enough to be generic with a weird robot arm and a maid outfit for three fetishes in one.

Pls to waifu
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>>50564403
How about this maiden with her plentiful sweatermeat?
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>>50564804

What's the third fetish
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>>50564403
You allowing monstergirls?
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>>50564353
Well considering option B is basically just the plot to a dark souls game, I'll go with that one. As far as waifus go, bitches love guys that kill giant monsters.
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>>50564804
>>50564826
I'm sorry, I should have made this clear, no overly fetishy stuff

like, subtle stuff is okay

>>50564755
i'll include an option for them to have a dick, but i'll only allude to it. i'd like this to be pure tbfh
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>>50564847
Yeah, sure. they're not too sexual
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>>50564740
Probably not, given how easy it would be to break.

Unless there's overwhelming support, Tribute-Skill conversion (1 Skill to 15 Tribute and 25 Tribute for 1 Skill) is the most you'll ever see, and that still might break balance.
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>>50564826
>tits bigger than her head
Trash
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>>50564861
Does either of these work, then?
http://68.media.tumblr.com/a5d8a0445c764cd6cd9116acc8827917/tumblr_ocbfdvfvyo1unrndbo1_1280.jpg
http://68.media.tumblr.com/d2c9221f3f415c464886ed0a187e285f/tumblr_o2v2gv2sLi1unrndbo1_1280.jpg
Yes, they're both SFW, I just can't be arsed to post any more pictures.
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>>50564403
I wondered when I'd get to use this picture.
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>>50564909
>Trash
Indeed you are, friend. But don't worry, you'll surely find someone who considers you a treasure.
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>>50564909
Anon, there are affordable options to help you enjoy life again.
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>>50564883

>they're not too sexual
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>>50564906
To be frank, I think that Tribute-Skill conversion would be easier to break. That would really create murderhobos without servants or mansions. When drawbacks were discussed a thread or two ago, there was support for some appropriate drawbacks, one mentioned was "Flashy: You sacrifice efficiency and practicality for style. Lose Agility but gain Skill point". To avoid breaking it a limit of like two skill points only could be introduced.
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>>50564403
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>>50563810
Can I write like 100 words and just become moderately powerful?
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>>50564986
No. A fraction of omnipotent power is still omnipotence.

Like there are smaller infinities and greater infinities, but you're still going to be infinity.
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>>50564935
Do you enjoy the rancid sweat that collects under and between her mounds of flesh and fat?
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>>50564972
Min/Maxers can also break your proposed drawbacks as well by mitigating the weaknesses with skills and strategy.
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>>50564909
author here

i kinda agree
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>>50565013
>Implying I've ever been with a woman to know these things in real life

As long as its a drawing huge tits are fucking great
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>>50564716
Alright.

Is there any male bug companions that anybody wants to see in the romance DLC? I'm gonna have pretty much all the females but was wondering what guys I should carry over. There's gonna be new options for both male and females, but I was curious if there was anyone who wanted to romance any of the existing guys.
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>>50564826
Good taste anon
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>>50565035
I had something in mind like "Lose one agility. Even if you regain that point of agility, you wont be as good as someone with the same stat" ie making something else be worth less in a direct way.

What it would do is create more separate classes. You'd see some angling for a glasscannon type deal, others preparing to bruteforce their way through the Culling with a hit to Int instead. And before you say "lol but warriors dont need Int" oh but they do. It is a measure of logic aswell. With too low int, they'll be outsmarted at every turn and thats not too good for a melee user.
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>>50565047
Take the least likeable male and make it the only male option.
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>>50565091

It's obviously intended to be a stat for mages only.
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>>50565077
>>50564826
>>50564982
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>>50565145
>western (shitty) art

Appreciate the sentiment, but no thanks.
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>>50565122
This. Also make him a homophobe and make it so the D can't fix this.
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>>50564478
>They turned a badass series featuring a guy who literally gave no shits about anything but murder into waifutrash


I thought it couldn't get any worse after the sequel, then it did.
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>>50565145
>dragon princesses
>aren't even monstergirls
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>>50565145
Honestly I'd have to go with Aestasia.
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>>50565227
>expecting big tit lovers to do anything intelligent
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>>50565184
There is a weaboo among us
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>>50565091
It depends I honestly think having extremely high stats is overrated. It matters in personal 1v1 dual setup where each combatant has to fight each other in an arena like in the Convergence tournaments, but for hunting monsters and surviving the Culling, situational awareness and not getting ambushed by other hunters, monsters and traps is far more important than raw stats.

No matter how high can you get your stats, a hunter can't match a ancient dragon in strength and toughness, they can't out magic or mindfuck a strange and you can't outspeed a lightning form phoenix. You need to plan ahead and work with other hunters to take them down.

That's just my own biased interpretations though.
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>>50565145
Ventra, for two big reasons.
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>>50565203
The D can fix anything Anon
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>>50565268
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>>50564982
You know what? I really like this one because it looks like she has some fucking personality, which is more then I can say for most of these whose only personality comes from the chest area.
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>>50565122
But who is the least likable?
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I have a plan of how the xeno-designer (still working on the name) cyoa is going to go down

Should I post it or should I wait until I have an actual WIP?
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>>50564403
Isnt she adorable?
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>>50564403
Here´s another. Have plenty more if you need. Just tell me what kind
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>>50565429

What is it?
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>>50565450
That would be Entoma from Overlord. She is the cutest around
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>>50565450
I think it's one of the maids from Overlord.
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>>50565450
It is a bugmonster in the shape of a girl, wearing a bug (that looks like a face) as a mask.
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>>50565273
I might be a master weaboo who spent his day training with the blade while you were losing your virginity etc etc etc however, I have nothing against western art when well done.

It's just that those images are shitty, the art is blurry, the style is mediocre at best, it's obvious the artist is some sort of fat fetishist and the tits are so ridiculously drawn as to look more like tumors than breasts, also the hair is hideous.

I like thicc girls and I won't be shamed for it.
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>>50564403
Here.

Also what age range are you looking for?
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>>50565490
Should though, Thin but not DFC is best combo.
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>glorified rib cages versus sagging piles of fat
It's like watching two dogs fight over moldy cat shit. Glorious firmness is the only truth.
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>>50565490
Oh I wasn't saying it was good, it's shit

You sounded like you where condemning all western art
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>>50565534
Hear hear
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>>50565534
Yes my son

You make me proud
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>>50564403
And another
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>claiming moral and intellectual superiority based on fetishes

I've seen many strange things in my lifetime, but I still don't understand this.

Pic unrelated, it's a really old CYOA.
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>>50565586
>I've seen many strange things in my lifetime, but I still don't understand this.
Because you dont understand social banter
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>>50565586
Nerds hate other nerds.

Just like how Chads instinctively hate other Chads encroaching on their territory, boytoys and women.
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>>50565586
If you don't understand it you obviously haven't spent enough time here

All will be revealed in time
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>>50565586
It is simple: people that don't agree with my objectively true and perfect taste needed to be shot.
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>>50565410
Do whatever you wish, but if you have early concerns it's better to share them early.
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>>50565651

>objectively true and perfect taste

Are you saying there's no such thing?
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>>50565651
There goes the entire human race barring you.
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>>50564403
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>>50565534
Aye.
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>>50565651
>pyramid implications
You're saying your taste is uncommon, less useful, and couldn't exist without theirs?
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Is this /a/ now
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>>50565660
I do have some early concerns actually

I'll polish it up and post it
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>>50565680
Huh, that girl has two pussies between her legs.
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>>50564403
A foxgirl
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>>50565562
>>50565534
>>50565700
You should probably link to one of the posts by the author asking for the pictures. Like >>50564403, for example.
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>>50564403
Another foxgirl
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>>50565429
Entoma is best girl.
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>>50565746
If people want /cyoag/ want to be /a/, than its going to be /a/ until they finish dumping all their anime waifus.
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>>50564403
Hope she's not too old but she's best girl.
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>>50564403
cute and strong girls deserve love too
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Can someone please post Waifu Dimension?
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>>50565721
>only two
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>>50565141
In the skill "Recall" it gives you one Int for the "combat adaptation and memory" part of Recall. Too. Sounds to me like they are connected, just like it explicitly states in the main fluff for the stat
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>>50564403
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>>50565744
That's obviously a catgirl.
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>>50565764
I don't see what that has to do with my suggestion for them to post a reply link to the author who asked for the pictures in the first place.
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>>50565811
They don't care anon.

If they have an excuse to post waifus, they'll post waifus.
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>>50565788
I don't see more than two cats in there. Or in the entire picture for that matter.

Also: >>50565746
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>>50565788
>sevenvaganias.jpg
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>>50564403
>>50565534
>>50565562
>>50565700
>>50565788
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>>50565804
Whoops you're right. She was in my kitsune by mistake.
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>>50565905
Out of curiosity, how large is your anime chick folder anon?
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>>50563618

Wisps really feel like they shouldn't burn Outsiders.

They are one of the few creatures to help Pisaca but the bonus pisaca get from them is instantly removed by the wisps.
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>>50563753

So, the CYOA says "the powers are only activated after the ring being worn for a week".
Does that apply to the six forced powers? Because if so I'll have to not leave my apartment until the genderbend takes place.
>Relocated
Just gonna stay here, thanks.
>Swapped gender
Duh. Yes, please don't give me brain pain from the change. Yes, please fix my personality.
>STI-free
Yes.

>Gifted (drawing) -5
>Never sleep -8
>Immunity -13
>No sustenance -18
Polylingual is nice, but not romantic
>Eternal youth + Easy changer -28
25.
>Metamorphosis + Shapeshifting + Deception + Inhuman -40
I'll just start out as an 8/10 brunette with dark brown eyes, a short girl with HIPS. I don't feel like detailing the rest, It's not like it's easy to describe exactly what I want.
Inhuman to get catears, or whatever my main character wants. Also to have an Eldritch tentacle form.
>Vanilla -45
Shame it doesn't make monstergirls look normal
>Attracted + Refined -53
there's only one person in the world thats' attractive.
>Welfare leech -56
So I don't need to work, and neither does my main character.
>Pro-choice -59
Yeah, I'm gonna want to be my main character's Twinkie, not their Toaster Strudel
I don't need flexible body, I can shapeshift myself limber
>Ring of devotion -59
Oh, if only I had omnipotence, too. The shock on my main character's face when they realize I, an omnipotent being, willingly handed over my free will to them, submitting all my power, will be priceless.
It's pretty hot knowing my main character can take off their ring and put it on again, and I lose all the powers... if it wasn't because that might change back my gender.
I mean technically I guess i can use the omnipotence cyoa to make this cyoa real, so i still have omnipotence.

>Local idol + Seiyuu -57
Sounds pretty fun to voice a character. Voicing Hentai could be fun, of course, but not outside the bedroom. Only my main character should hear those sounds.
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>>50565927
Not that anon, but mine is ~24k images.
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>>50566022
>Ready -56
>Collar -55
I love being paid for this. I'd like it to not be discrete. It has to be obvious I am taken, but I don't want an ugly metal collar.
>Egocentrism -53
Guess we're making home videos!
>Faithful -51
>Pleasurer -49
Kinda sucks in case my main character wants to be nice, but they'll understand i can only enjoy pleasing them
>Neko-chan -47
Catgirl
>Submissive + They know + Generality + In need + Sanguine debauchery -35
>Clumsy -34
>Stimulation device + Distraction -32
>Permission -30
>Not by myself -28
>Permanent + Full-time -22
The ring is immaterial. I already have the collar to show.

Picking "Extreme sub" for all punishments, assuming this only applies to my main character. I don't want conditioned, I don't need to be trained that much.

I have two 100% fetish builds I want to make, but I don't know if I can be bothered to do it right now.
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I didn't get anything done on realms, but I did get a lot more options and tweakery done in existing sections. I'll leave this here for perusal. If anybody can give me ideas for companions and treasures I would be much appreciative.
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>>50565715
What is the glory of flat chests without cowtits to compare them to?
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>>50564353
>Become cyborg with implanted orgasm button
>Become retarded berserker who can never appreciate the finer points in life
Nigger, what?

Plus, I got a battle couple fetish. My waifu paradise contains shitloads of combat and personal achievement.
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>>50565282
>that joke
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>>50565586
At least it makes more sense than literally comparing dick sizes.
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>>50564353
Option A. It don't matter, it was fun. What's the point of glory if I'm not around to bask on it?
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>>50566106
I do what I can anon.
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>>50564478
>>50564847
>>50564907
>>50564915
>>50564982
>>50565429
>>50565575
>>50565680
>>50565700
>>50565758
>>50565774
>>50565782
>>50565794
Thanks guys. I really didn't expect this much

I'll try and include most, though understand I can't include them all due to conflicting art styles and setting
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>>50565927
Like 3000 images
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>>50566168
No problem, Anon.
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>>50566063
>tweakery
Changelog?
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>>50565927
8,5 GB or just over 9.3k pics.
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>>50565220
It'sonly wiafutrash if you waifu it. And nobody should waifu those girls.
That aside, Rose had a rather interesting character just presented... painfully. at best.
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>>50564403
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>>50566168
You know, I'm kinda looking forward to it. It's been a while since a new waifu cyoa came out.
I hope it isn't "pick one girl and that's it"?
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>>50565220
>assuming female character = waifutrash

The character depicted literally kills her sisters to steal their boysluts. Her sisters include a materialistic /ss/ and incest-loving blonde, a jealous perfectionist and closeted sadist, an autistic grandpa-loving "doll maker," a mindbroken protagonist type, and a decidedly better version of manah. None of them are even reasonably likable, and it's great. There is one waifu-type, but she doesn't even exist outside of the true endng.

Nier is still better than any of the Drag-On games, though. Automata is also gonna be made by platinum, so fingers crossed for a fucked up story with MG:R tier gameplay.
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>>50565335
what is this from?
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>>50566296
So my idea was this:

It's a cyoa focused on having a 'perfect' life. you pick a picturesque setting to live in, some added bonuses and some small boons

after that, you pick a waifu, then you can add positive traits to her, with every 2 traits being exchanged for a semi-negative trait.

after you've done that, you can pick some daughterus and also change yourself a bit.

Basically, i just wanna write something cute. If there's more stuff you'd like to see, just say.
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>>50566308
But Anon, her sisters were better than her in every way.
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>>50566168
good luck anon, looking forward to your cyoa
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>>50566308
Personally I have two questions about Automata.

1. Is this robot chick Kaine or related to her in some way?

2. If so, does she have a dick?
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>>50566146
Who is Beta Ray Bill talking to?
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>>50566308
>Nier is still betterthan any of the Drag-On games
Amen. On paper the story was always good, but imho on all accounts, except for the parts that were made to creep the player/audience out, it's badly presented. and let's not even start with the damn gameplay. good gods, don't even think about it.
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>>50566361
Drawbacks are always useful for more resource, and chances are people are going to want to spend more in certain categories. For something cozy like that, consider some mundane problem made atypical by circumstance. Perhaps the waifu's dad is your boss at work?
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>>50566365
Except backstory.
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>>50566432
>She's a prude.
But who really cares about backstory, Anon?
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>>50566420
The drawbacks are gonna be kind of like that

stuff like
'she gets scared and has a panic attack when you don't reply to her quickly'
or
'she can be clumsy and break things at times'

Ideally, I wanna have it so you can create a cozy and idealistic but realistic life
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>>50566365
I respectfully disagree with you. If it weren't for Four and Five, they would only get worse as their number increases.
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>>50566168
>>50566271
>>50566461
inb4 spam for the rest of the thread
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>>50566361
Pretty nice. I like picking a setting.
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>>50566365
Yes and no? Read the LNs. The flower in her eye and it's origin changes the details of the story quite a bit.

>>50566368
1- Considering whose face is on all the enemies, it's possible that they are related. It's a few thousand years later though, so unlikely to be her.

2- Who cares? Kaine's dick was a plot device in Neir, and a point of character development. Will this new character's dick or lackthereof MATTER, is the real question.
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>>50566494
>Who cares?
I don't like futa, so if she doesn't have a dick, she'll have good porn.
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>>50566461
I want to stick my face between this c@'s thighs.
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>>50566517
You know doujin artists, anon. They'll have porn with and without dick flavor, regardless of cannon.
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>>50566484
>Four and Five
Five is all that matters.
>Ruler of the Sea
And always wet as a result.
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>>50566517
>I don't like futa, so if she doesn't have a dick, she'll have good porn.

Sweet summer child, aren't you? Not 'ving a cock won't stop Japs from giving her one.
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>>50566458
The few whocare about people. what made them what they are.
Humans are a wonderful and terrific thing to behold, truly.
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>>50564915
God bless Artgerm
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>>50566471
Those drawbacks seem centered on the waifu. That's fine as an option, but other complications can be entertaining too. As a few ideas:

> the locals have a weird custom you need to participate in
> there is some weird law put in place in this town
> you live really uncomfortably close to her extended family
> contact with the outside world is more difficult than it should be (on the sea, bad internet, etc)
> the PC has a disability / was changed in some way that isn't crippling but makes life more interesting
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>>50566601
>Humans are a wonderful and terrific thing to behold, truly.

Did you type that out with a straight face?
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>>50566659
I like these ideas. Though they'll need to be setting specific
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>>50566168
I hope my futa picture gets in.
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>>50566663
Of course not.
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>>50564614
You are wrong. You should go to school to learn how not to be wrong.
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>>50566699
I'm sorry, could you direct me to it?
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>>50566753
Lonely, pet?
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>>50566753
How goes whatever it is you're working on?
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>>50566799
Not me, but good. I've got about a week of exams and big projects to go and I'm finally gonna go full time on this thing.

You?
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>>50566799
Wait SDA makes cyoas? I thought he was just a shitposter.
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>>50566535
>>50566556
Yes, but the bulk will be cockless if she is, and if she is be-cocked, then non-futa porn will be a small minority.
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>>50566484
Four is okay for havingthe selfesteem of a re-dried noodle and the self-awareness of egg yolk.
I just dislike five on the base of hedonism for hedonisms sake.Even that bit of story about her didn't make that better. Opposite really, because it seemed a lesson unlearned.
Three is plain bonkersasis two really, but she shorted out because to much insanity came at once. One is at least somewhat savy and well prepared, but shares the worst traits with zero.
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>>50566824
Were you unaware that SDA (sometimes) stands for StarDust Anon? https://1d4chan.org/wiki/StarDustCYOA
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>>50563618
>Dragon
>Large Dungeon
All seven rows placed vertically and in line with each other, for a total of 45 Levels of one square each.

The thing is that the first 43 rows don't actually matter.

The second to last row is my home:
>Flooded Lava
>>Treasure Horde
>>Mana Fountain
A slurry of... liquid assets. 99% pure molten gold suffused with absurd amounts of mana is incredibly valuable and even more dangerous, especially if the ancient dragon inside taps into its power to fight. Ain't nobody getting past this, especially with the bargain price.

>Elemental Food
>>Crystal Cavern
>>Mine
And the kicker. The base terrain type doesn't matter, but each of the forty-three subterranean levels above it increases the Income and Materials production by 2, for a total of 86 in each for just this feature. Similarly, the Crystal generates 43 Magic with only a 10 Magic investment, for a net gain of 33. That's a significant portion of the costs for the whole rest of the dungeon.
And depending on the specific interactions, it could even be Farmed for up to 10 food, or a 6 net gain with Alien operation.
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>>50566063
Is it necessary that my body be only one contiguous object? For example, if I wanted to form myself into a set of twins but with one consciousness. You could do something similar with bonded brides but it's not quite the same.
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>>50566846
I've been here on and off again for about a year and a half. I had no clue SDA makes cyoas.
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>>50566895
Well, there is a rather lengthy bit of time between when he last made a CYOA and now. Even longer if you don't count the StarDust update that I think was released this year.
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>>50566895
SDA is /coyag/'s true form. A living meme creating content and shitposting. A many-faced goddess lurking and trolling, tempting and taunting.
>Pizza captcha three times in a row
Okay, okay, I'm ordering now, happy?
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>>50566895
>>50566938
He released an update for stardust around Christmas last year that completely ate up quite a few threads.
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>>50566975
Completely missed it because I was on vacation with the family for 3 weeks.
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>>50566846
Sometimes, I forget who I am. It takes a certain amount of effort to remain corporeal.
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>>50566063
How does breeding between brides work?

If a Pedigree 7 Bride with Brooding, Humanoid (Infiltrator) had children with a Pedigree 5 Bride with Cultivation, Implement (Engine) for example, what results should we expect?
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>>50566846
I thought it stood for Sex Deviant Anon, or to some similar effect.
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>>50567052

That would be too simple.
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>>50563810
I was bored, so filling it.

Well, first of all I would limit the amount of omniscience I would get. Knowing everything at all times it's boring. I would likely limit it to "I know exactly what I need to know and its consequences at any time, on any topic, if I want to know it or it's important for me to know it". I'll see to fix my physical issues, drop my job in a way that nobody would mind, and I would see then if I can fix the issues of the world without being too showy about it. Travel the world, then the universe a bit to see what's out there, and come back. Then, for the sake of amusement and whatnot, I'd see random strangers that my omniscience would tell me would be fun to deal with, and act as a sort of a genie of sort. Making wish come true, get a few people get through a CYOA with actual things happening, and so on. During all this, probably I'll go creating a new world or two. Then...from there, it's all tourism. Going to troll people, reward nice people, see to get some injustices resolved, travel fast through the world, see to not succumb to the depths of power because everyone should admit that omnipotence is a shitload of power for anyone, learn the secrets of life and everything one piece at the time, enjoy myself, make people enjoy themselves, make the world a little bit more magical -in a good way-. At one point I am going to make a small home dimension where I can keep as base, and maybe make a giant laboratory to experiment on how the universe words and loopholes of it if any. Either way, one of the major things I should do at the very beginning, is to summon a list of things to do that shows me which path would be the best one.
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>>50567140

Maybe that one's not the CYOA for you?
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>>50567140
>Stigmatas

Wish there was one that added to pedigree that didn't involve killing people like a crazy person, or being exposed to that on the regular. As well, what if someone is not a fan of any of the others? Some just want a comfy life; not all like to shake shit up, nor the attention that brings. But not as a slave to anyone. Not all feel the need to vie for their own influence; general satisfaction, while rare, is still a strong emotion. What if one is not really interested in rebelling; where would one go?

Also, I feel like you should make the costs of things vary a bit more. There was no real reason to set the favor to 65 if everything just costs 3 or 6 points. At that point, 3 is just equivalent to '1' and 6 is '2'. It just feels like a lateral move. I'm not saying you necessarily need to change to 1/2--that's equally lateral. Just that the prices are a bit strange.

>>50567200
I've made builds before. I just don't really see the purpose of enslaving oneself.
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>>50563810
Now you're speaking my language.

Ok so the first thing I do is drop out of education/my job/whatever my main responsibility is at the time. I also erase my presence from everyone in said responsibility because let's be honest, they're probably not that interesting to me outside of work/whatever. I also erase my presence from things like medical records, social welfare, stuff like that because I don't need it anymore and it'd be easier than trying to go to them and be like "uhh I'm omnipotent so I need to be taken off the records".

Step two: I make myself a perfect gf and we go on a worldwide cruise. I'm talkin' pretty much the entire world, and even far underwater and shit, places normal people can't go to. I achieve all of this in much shorter time than normal by splitting into a ton of clones (that are still linked to the "main" me so they can't try to overthrow me and become the "main" me). While on my holiday, I also look at things that could be fixed or improved in the world, cases of injustice, etc., and try to fix them without drawing attention to myself.

Then, when I'm done, I come back to my home country, and then make my own new landmass. This will effectively be my base of operations, and it'll go up into space and basically be a very very very very small planet. I make a nice home on it, and just cruise through space forever, discovering cool shit.

the idea of becoming omnipotent is some stupid escapist fantasy that I've had for ages whoops
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>>50566063

↓

>>50567218
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>>50566063
Also a few typographical things:

The descriptions for the sprites say "took" when I think they should say "taken". I was pretty sure "rent" in the flavor text for Stigmata was wrong but apparently that's "an opening or gap resembling a tear in a piece of fabric." which is perfectly applicable. I was only familiar with the past tense of "to rend".

Also, love some of the new options. Festival of Delight is a new favorite. It's a bit odd that the Stigma of the Crimson Kiss gives favor but the other two stat-adjusting stigmas do not. Crimson Kiss is a pretty big drawback but Crystal heart at least is a pretty big deal too.

No real ideas for new treasure or companions, unfortunately. Maybe something like you can choose some number of real people to bring with you as supplicants/slaves/prisoners/lovers/treasure or whatever.

Oh also maybe for a Bond have someone very skilled and famous who records your sexual exploits in a number of different media and publishes them as pornography for the masses.
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>>50567218
He made the change to allow low-cost things like the one-point options for genitalia. Based on Festival of Delight I imagine he's okay with things in numbers not divisible by 3 but everything above that was just changed from the old system. I agree more granularity is a good goal.

>>50567025
EDG's answer is usually "whatever makes a better story". I don't think it's possible for something like this to outline every single result especially when it's built around people altering their physiology with almost no real limits.

My read, though some of the new Stigmata stuff kind of contradicts this, was that Brides don't primarily mate with each other. At least that's not the goal. I saw it as basically an infinite-scale breeding program where the Stud material is largely provided by outside sources and independent contractors. It just seemed to me that a lot of the descriptions drew a distinction between "fucking for fun" and "fucking for specific breeding programs". I saw Bridal matings as heavily in the first category but there's no real reason it has to be that way.
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>>50567435
One of my favourites.
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>>50567236
Also I'd probably make myself a girl and just make myself a lot more positive.

I'd effectively be a Mary Sue and there's nothing anyone could do about it.
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>>50567455
I feel like the punishments needs some explanation. When do they activate? When you do something bad? But then which one activates? Or is it all of them at once? Some of them seem mutually exclusive, like enema, diaper and spanking. Conditioning isn't much of a punishment since it just happens from time to time regardless of your behavior, etc...
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>>50567918
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>>50567943
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>>50567918
update when
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>>50567974

Updated my build from here >>50552458

Sorceress (+3 stats)

Magic 4
>Tier 1: Fire
>Tier 2: Lightning
>Tier 2: Arcane
>Tier 3: Blink

Weaponry 7
>Tier 1: Bladed Arms
>Tier 2: Ancient Weapons
>Tier 2: Enchantment
>Tier 3: All-Seeing Eye
>Tier 4: Spine Weaponry

Spiritual 3
>Tier 1: One With Nature
>Tier 2: Monster Within
>Tier 3: Hybrid

Ethereal 6
>Tier 1: Indomitable
>Tier 2: Blessed
>Tier 3: Intangible
>Tier 4: Wings

Final Stats:
>STR â– â– 
>DEF â– â– â– â– â– 
>AGI â– â– â– â– â– 
>SKL â– â– â– â– â– 
>INT â– â– â– â– â–  â– â– â– 

Bounties: Arachnids(2TR, 20TP), Behemoths (3TR 30TP) and Dragons (5TR (50TP)
These bounties will simultaneously yield the Souls I want to be able to switch between. Arachnids for the strong silk with magic conducting abilities (sounds like tailored for Lightning), Behemoth for the regenerative qualities and Dragons which will be my main combat soul for its defense. They also provide a good ladder up in difficulty.

Persona: Gender, Beauty (10)
Provisions: Forge, Library, Alchemy, (30)
Serice: Healing, Training, Scavenging (15)
Hangout: Underground (5)
Accomodations: Low (20)
Servant: Servant, Attitude, Knowledge (20)
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>>50567998
Updates from last build: Quite a few.
>Ethereal: Switched Pocketing and Recall to Indomitable and Intangible.
Spiritual: Removed Binding, added MW and Hybrid
Weaponry: Switched Marksmanship to Bladed Arms, added Spine Weaponry
Magic: De-emphasized magic usage by removing Barrier, Water, Combine and Catalysts. Added Blink for utility instead.

Reasons: a lot more versatile build. Damage output is focused through the swordstaff in pic related with lightning enchant on the weapon. A swordstaff with variable length has incredible utility aswell. Think I wasnt going to block that? I did. Thought you were going to block that? Oops, the blade is now a foot shorter and passed through your guard. It should also be excellent for piercing action, as it would not primarily be my own strength attempting to pierce through something, it would be the force of the weapon extending. Defense is no long based on Barrier, but on Intangible for allowing strikes I cant block to pass through me, Wings to block those that I can, and Blink for both closing/maneuvering aswell as escape. Despite a bit less Int than last build I should also still be able use fire/lightning as an effective attack from altitude/distance to keep the pressure up as my cooldowns expire. I also decided to skip traps altogether, and in doing so lost the need for Combine. Situational at best and most will be able to detect them anyways.

Thoughts?
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>>50567764
The way I understand it, is that when you do something worth punishing, your parent(s) can decide which of the available punishments you will endure as punishment. I assume it'd generally just be one punishment at a time, although they could combine a couple, if it is possible and what you did was deserving of it. Or you parents could be ducks or something and give you each punishment back to back for even the slightest offense.

For the conditioning, I'm assuming they only try to mind control you when you misbehave, changing your personality each time so that you're less likely to disobey them or act out. You could resist the changes, assuming you notice them, or the commands. But that's also thrown out the window if you grab the higher levels of conditioning. I imagine the mind control can be in any form you'd like, though, whether that's hypnosis, magic, or a chip that is surgically planted in your brain.
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>>50567974
>>50567943
>>50567918
what >>50567997 said, update fucking when
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>>50564598
>>50565145
Fonsia + Lady Icelle
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Hoo boy, got called out for a bit and now I got an inbox to empty

>>50566879
For one consciousness, you can probably take the multiplexive influence and say that you've duplicated your entire body. I probably should consider adding an option to create an independent twin, though.

>>50567025
Whatever the two of them agree on. Whatever a Bride can't decide independently, magic can fix.

If one were to rape the other, though, you'd get a Pedigree 7 Infiltrator. The superior overrides the inferior. Although if that's unsatisfying, 'whatever makes for a better story'

>>50567385
I imagine Bride-Bride pairings to be relatively rare, myself, but useful if you need a specific effect

>>50567271
Thanks for the proofreading!

Crimson Kiss comes with more risks, so I threw in some favor to compensate If figure the drawback of the crystal heart help offset the protection clause.

I'll think about the pornographer idea

>>50567218
>Comfy life
That's the default, no-stigmata option

>costs
I needed more granularity for some of the options, so rather than fractions I made everything 3s
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>>50568280
>For one consciousness, you can probably take the multiplexive influence and say that you've duplicated your entire body.
But wouldn't that go against the whole "doesn't affect sexual characteristics"? Or would they need to purchase that many extras if they wanted the bodies to be identical?

>Comfy life
>That's the default, no-stigmata option
But they also mentioned "not as a slave to anyone", and going by what's written in the rebellion option, it sounds like you would be a slave to the big T by default.
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>>50568280
But no changelog?
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>>50568151
You gotta get in line behind Necromancer update, Battlemage update, the new version of Traveller's Tale and Order CYOA's release.
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>>50568376
>twins
Good point. I'll just have to throw in the twinning option with split/separate consciousness option, I suppose

When freedom is more work for less reward, is service to big T really slavery?

Yes, yes it is. But anon wanted comfy, so comfy is what I offered
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>>50568422
sorry, no.
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>>50568473
By the by, what happens to the chosen companions (such as the cult) if you choose to rebel, and succeed in breaking away from big T?
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>>50568280
An idea for a treasure would be a chariot with odd creatures pulling it, or an eldritch steed to ride upon. Maybe something akin to the chariot of Freya or Helios?
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>>50564403
My Waifu.
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>>50568525
They go with you. They're bonded to you, after all.

Don't forget, you're a lovecraftian deity, regardless of your relative rank. People near you are enthralled by you, eventually, and your rebellion would spread to them. If you sucessfully become a Grass Widow, all you've really accomplished is that you're no longer connected to Bridal society and the material benefits it offers. You are still a creature of Teiatat, even though you don't take orders anymore.

Remember, too, the Eunuch's promise. Nothing you can do will disappoint your spouse...
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>>50567998

I really like your build Angelic sorceresses are the best! You mentioned that it's versatile, and that's really the best part. You have some good magic choices and I think have some similar ideas for magic use that I did for my build. Except you balanced it out with more weapon choices and monster soul. So it looks all around pretty tough! Just be careful working your way up the bounty ladder!

>>50568280

65 Favor?! wtf!
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>>50566308
I still like Caim better.

He was completely one-dimensional but he was hilarious while doing it. Plus his 'party' was one of the greatest clusterfucks. Drakengard 2 was saved just by his part in it, including killing Nolan so hard that Death gave up.
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>>50568693
>65 favor

I bumped up the prices, too. Gives me a bit more granularity.
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>>50568473
>>50568376
I don't mind that part; that's just how it be. I'm just not a fan of the slavery that came as part of that other drawback.
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>>50564403
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>>50566063
I want a loli waifu.
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>>50568738

Ok. I'm updating build. I'm going to be so sad if I can't make my last idea work:(
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>>50568786
Bonded bride with Perfect Neoteny. If you have something more interesting to add to 'loli' I'll throw it in.
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>>50563925
>>50559409
Figured I'd drum something up, took me a while to get it just right though.

>Greetings. I am Eld. These beings that confront you - Tev and Alef, they are called? They cannot even keep me from contacting you, never mind decide what is truly best for your world. I strongly disagree with both of them. Tev's faith in your capacity for change is misguided, and Alef is a fool if he thinks that eliminating your species will change anything. The next creature to awaken as you did will repeat the same mistakes, and the world will flood with pollution, war, and poverty once again. The biosphere Alef intends to preserve is the very source of the evil he sees in you, and he is too blind to realize it.

>I give you the option to bring the world true peace. Every living thing, down to the last bacterium, will be exterminated, and the world restored to the state it held before the coming of the perfidious microbe. You and all your kind will know only the peace of the grave. The visitors will not escape, and your sun will go dark. Never again will life develop to threaten the world.

Why yes, I am that guy who posted >>50564347 and >>50564708
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>>50568473
Will you only add an option for a one-time split, or will it also allow for splitting and re-merging as desired?

If you have that one option that allows you to absorb others (in the potentially temporary fashion), and you had two bodies in different locations, could you absorb someone into one body and pop them out of the other?
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>>50566846
always thought it meant small dick anon
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>>50567974
>sorcerer
>blessing +20 tribute points

>catalysts, arcane, blink, detect magic, barriers, time warp

>marksmanship, ancient weapon, charge up, ancient will

>recall, blessed, unleash, healing

>strength â– 
>defense â– â– â– â– â–  â– 
>agility â– â– â– â– â–  â– 
>intelligence â– â– â– â– â–  â– â– 
>skill â– â– â– â– â–  â– â– â– â– 


>wurm, strange, dragon

>age
>beauty
>all provisions
>all services
>all luxuries
>all hangouts
>inn
>all servant upgrades
>10 remaining tribute

Because if an unleashed, time warped, charged up ancient will attack can't kill it then it's time to blink out of there. Avoided elemental damage and focused on more supportive abilities. I'm sure someone is going to mention nullification and the culling, but I highly doubt anyone wants to try and chase down a teleporting, hasted mage when they are also a medic (aka someone else's white mage.) Short range is a bitch, huh?
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>>50568914
Hoo, boy I can throw in the first idea in just fine, but that other concern is a bit too hard to give a definite ruling on. Whatever makes a better story, I guess.
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>>50568958
you picked only the most dangerous monsters anon im not sure you're Saitama if you plan on a 1Hit KO strategy. otherwise i'd like to have you as my backup for the Culling
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Posting great war of ordion. Haven't seen anyone talk about this gem for a while.
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>>50563810
I'll first immediately make myself immortal. Immune to aging and all diseases and poisons. I could fix these at any time but it can't hurt to start now. After that, I'll immediately create an afterlife if one doesn't already exist, and talk to God if He does exist. I'll make sure to make the afterlife a heaven.
Once that is complete, I'll decrease fertility among humans for a time so that our population will drop to an environmentally stable number, probably around 4 billion. Families in poor countries will have to find ways besides using their children as forced laborers in order to stay alive. I'll have to think of a way to get around the social security crash that would inevitably follow but that's a minor inconvenience.
Eventually i'd reveal myself as omnipotent to the rest of humanity, but I don't want to actively nurture the race so i'd make it clear that humanity still has to run itself.
Also, for the sake of nostalgia, I'd make sure that the HST never becomes too damaged to function, and that the Voyagers never run out of nuclear battery.
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>>50568693
Thanks! Have to agree. Wanted some more versatility too since it would probably no matter how much I tried be hard to stop some enemies getting close. Now I have gapclosers and escapes instead of a bunch of traps and a more dangermoose weapon.

RP soon? I may have to team up to climb the bounty ladder.
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>>50569004
Actually, 1hko works out when you consider most of the chosen abilities have synergy and presumably stack. I'm all for drive-by tactics to cripple a beast, and there are escape tools in there too meaning I'll probably try to get that 'lucky shot' over many attempts rather than going all in on a single hunt. The more friends during the culling, the better.
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>>50568626
If I'm bonded to another Bride, and I have the Stigma of the Rebel, how would she behave?

How does Ascending/Descending influence the situation?

Would she try to return me to the fold? Ignore my disloyalty?
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>>50568958
You need skull weaponry to do any real damage anon.
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Anyone have the latest version of this?
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>>50568961
>that other concern is a bit too hard to give a definite ruling on
I think it should be possible, since the two bodies would still be connected to each other (if only by virtue of your consciousness piloting them both). And because you're an eldritch thing.
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>>50569103

It's here: https://drive.google.com/drive/folders/0B5vYX1bZd1SBUU05dGYtNzFydFk
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>>50569103
Pastebin should have a link.
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>>50569098
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>>50569145
See >>50564531
and >>50564633
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>>50569085
that'd be true if you were doing lotsa damage in one punch. right now your weapon damage goes off your strength, which is terrible. Through skull weaponry you can use your Skill stat instead and Enchanting presumably puts your int into play.
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>>50569088
Ooh, that's a good story!

You tell me, anon.

>>50569115
Sounds like sound logic.
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>>50569158
I'd hope the remake of this clarifies these unsaid rules, anon. Until then, I'll do something horridly unimaginable and believe my setup works just fine, thanks.
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>>50563756
Vaccines DO cause autism in some cases, though.
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>>50569191
>implying the update won't rise even more questions and unsaid rules.
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>>50567918
Sorceror
+1 skill point
physical-tempered
magical-fire, arcane, blink, gravity warp
spiritual-poisons, monster within, fleet-footed, killer instinct, hybrid
weaponry-blunt arms, ancient weapon (hammer),enchantment
ethereal-recall, blessed, telepathy, ascension
bounties-ooze, arachnid, wurm
forge, library, alchemy, market, healing, training, scavenging, club, inn

2 strength
3 defense
2 agility
8 intelligence
3 skill
The way I envision a gravity enchantment working is that it magically imparts extra force when it hits, so I can deal decent damage despite my low strength. other than that it's a cave explorer build, killer instinct so I can see in the dark, blink so I can get out of the way of collapsing rocks or what have you, recall so I don't get lost or trapped, fleet-footed and poisons so I can match up to arachnids, telepathy for general anti-ambush purposes, and I assume dark powers are more effective in dark places, which is why I took ascension. acid will be useful for burning my way out of traps, and could be useful for building traps of my own along with webbing, and burrowing is obviously useful for any underground hunter, so there's why I took hybrid.
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>>50567764
>Some of them seem mutually exclusive, like enema, diaper and spanking
( ͡° ͜ʖ ͡° ) you sweet summer child.
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>>50569254
>sweet summer child
What does having been born during the season of summer have to do with enemas?
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>>50567918
Class: Warrior
Blessing: +3 Stat Points

Physical Skills:
Tempered
Willpower
Enhanced
-Overdrive-
Magical Skills:
(none)
Spiritual Skills:
One with Nature
Poisons
Bloodlust
Fleet-footed
Weaponry Skills:
Bladed arms / blunt arms / marksmanship (whichever governs a flail)
Ancient weapon (flail)
Stamina
Charge up
-Spine weaponry- (again, it's a flail)
Pocketing
Blessed
Healing

Licenses:
Plains (Threat: 3, Tribute: 15)
Ruins (Threat: 4, Tribute: 20)
They're both ancient, too (Tribute: 20)
Total tribute: 55

Physiology: Slime (5)
Beauty (5)
Exempt (25)
Scavenging (5)
Inn (10)
And that's 55.

Final stats (Temporary bonuses in parentheses):
STR: 7 (12)
DEF: 7
AGI: 3 (8)
INT: 1
SKL: 4
(Plus one to SKL, STR, or AGI depending on which skill actually governs a flail)

It's a shame I couldn't afford a servant. Hunting could probably get lonely & I could use the company. I don't have the heart for the culling. I wouldn't want to hurt other people, even in self-defense, so I'd just be an easy kill if not for Exempt.

I will sneak around, meshing into the environment as I look for prey. It is then that I will strike with full force, hoping to defeat the enemy in one quick (Overdrive) attack. If that fails, and damage I did to to the enemy should help me repair via Bloodlust. Healing also helps me continue for the rest of the fight. Not to mention that I have enough defense and speed to handle direct combat. High strength couples well with a weapon that is basically just swinging around a heavy object as fast as you can. I'll hunt all sort of ancient, giant creatures in the plains and mountains.

I may not have any leftover tribute for gold, but I have the Scavenging which will easily loot anything I slay. Giant monsters mean more loot. And relatively easy areas mean it shouldn't be too hard to get a lot of kills. Plus, giant monsters are less likely to see through my camouflage on account of being many times my size.
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>>50566063
Finally made a pair of Bonded Wives. A woman was taking her younger sister out when the Eunuch arrived and they were both utterly enthralled. The older, Elizabeth, chose the path of power and independence and is more than willing to use her sister to achieve her goals. The younger, Amanda, subservient to her sister's whim molded herself into a pliable fuck machine, a classically willing and capable Bride

Elizabeth, Crucible of Suns

>Genitalia
Gate to Ecstasy (1)
-Mouth
--Plush x2 (6)

>Shape
Modest
>Chest
Gifted
>Influences
Quasicosmic (6)
Metapsychological (+3)
>Face
Regal
Elder Gaze (3)
>Flourishes
Rare Hunger (+3)
Commanding Mien (+3)

>Progeneration
Synergism (3)

>Dowry
Abyssal Ink (3)
Celestial Charms (3)
Argent Spark (3)
-Argent Blaze (6)
Regal Array (1)

>Bonds
Knights in Crimson (9)
Personal Sect (6)
Bonded Bride (3)
-Ascending (3)
The Eunuch (12)
-Sweetened Pot (3)

>Urges
Dependent

>Stigmata
Stigma of the Rebel

Pedigree: 0
Status: 8
Allure: 4

>>50569184
Oh hey not that guy but made an Ascending Bride rebel. I just figure everyone lesser than her is along for the ride.
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>>50569009
>FACTION: Order of Stoneshill
>RACE: Golem
Why my maker made me look like this is anyone's guess. I'm not even anatomically correct.

>STATS: STR 7, AGI 3, CON 6, LUK 2, INT 6, WIS 6, CHA 5

>DISCIPLINES: Physical Defense (3 left), Telekinetic Magic (2 left), Telephysical Magic (1 left), Melee Weapons (0 left)

>SKILLS: Attrition, Knight, Elementalist [earth], Timewarp

>WEAPONS AND ARMOR: Maul (42 left), Helmet (35 left), Plate (15 left), Nice Boots (10 left), Gauntlets (0 left)

What can I say? I often get up close and personal.

>COMPANIONS: John Quartz, Bony Tony, Marina Du Pont

>>50569057
>BOON: Strange Herd Animals
These mounts will be excellent!

>QUESTS: Ironfort, Werewolves of Torobard
Good thing most of our party is immune to their bite. Marina will need protection, however.

>THE FINAL FOE: The Alien
It'll be a difficult fight, but I know we can succeed.
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>>50569296
>I wouldn't want to hurt other people

The monsters are now all other hunters who died during the culling.

The dark truth revealed as their shackled eyes stare out pleadingly from an alien body.
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>>50564353
I understand what you wanted to do. But becoming suicidal swordsman that will die alone and unrecognized in some shithole is in fact unappealing.
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>>50569273
"Sweet summer child" is a term used to highlight the naiive innocence of the person it's aimed at.
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>>50568808
How about a super stong yandere loli that's obsessed with you because you helped her one time?
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>>50569411
Its a Game of Thrones/Song of Ice and Fire reference.
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>>50569076

I'm probably going to make pretty big changes to my build when the update comes out. But I'm definitely looking for friends! I hope there's an rp after the update.

>>50569184

EDG! You-know-what upgrades cost so much! And we have to purchase them separately for each place:(
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>>50569309
Amanda, the Fertile Crescent

>Genitalia
Vagina
-Lubrication (1)
-Musculature (1)
-Plush x3 (9)
Gateway to Ecstasy (Mouth) (1)
-Reproductive Channel (3)
-Musculature (1)
-Plush x3 (9)

>Shape
Muliebrous
>Chest
Gifted
>Influence
Pseudodevascent (3)
Metapsychological (+3)
>Face
Regal
>Flourishes
Godly Cleanliness (3)
Lactation (3)
-Nourishing (3)
-Dependent (+3)
Perfect Neoteny (+3)

>Progeneration
Brooding
-Conditional Emergence (3)
>Specialty
Humanoid
-Hybrids (3)

>Dowry
Lavender Grimoire (9)
Primordial Woad (3)
Celestial Charms (3)
Nuptial Torc (+3)
True Name (3)
Regal Array (1)
Rite of Flesh Union (6)
Title (3)

>Bonds
Sensual Ritualists (9)
Bonded Bride (3)
-Descending (+3)

>Urges
Throne's Shadow (+3)
Dependent

The descriptions I wrote for the sisters are possibly too salacious for this Christian image board so here: http://pastebin.com/uz7KsMbw
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>>50569417
That's more like it. Any more details/suboptions, or would you like me to take it from there?
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>>50569417
this is perfect
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>>50569309
>>50569470

I priced the title so that the first one is free and gives nothing. Amanda either gets another sobriquet or a refund.
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>>50569417
not him, but can i use this in my cyoa? i'm making a generic waifu one
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Has anyone actually written any stories or even fanfics based on >>50569138 ?
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>>50569473
Has to get your sperm. Is obsessed. Also drifts into doing dark rituals with it. Occasionally dreams of an older version of herself giving her advice.
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>>50569470
Did you happen to record Amanda's stats somewhere, too? You forgot to post them.
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>>50569547
not the guy who posted it but I think that is generic enoghf to give it your own generic flavor for your generic waifu CYOA
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>>50569581
I can work with this!
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>>50569536
I'm just not that great at coming up with that sort of stuff unfortunately. I'll think on it though.

>>50569594
Oh, yeah. Accidentally deleted her build when I was moving stuff around and had to retype.

Pedigree: 9
Satus: 1
Allure: 5
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>>50567943
How strong is the arachnid silk? As for its conducting properties, does it move via any magical energy? Or do you need to use Enchantment + some energy (e.g. arcane, lightning)? Alternatively, is it just like cable?
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>>50569550
I almost started one, but like many of my writing projects, it didn't really take off. I'll probably go back to it some day years from now.
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>>50569725
I assumed it would require some form of energy input like Lightning in my build >>50567998, figuring it works kind of like Spiderman webs but conducts shit too.
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>>50566388
Lady Sif.
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>>50569655
Thank you.
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>>50569801
>>50569725

It probably means 'good for enchantment'.

They don't seem to have much advanced infrastructure in hunt land, unless the patron just kills you if you try to build an electric cable.
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>>50569771
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>>50564403
>>50566168
Here, have this for the obligatory "be the little girl" option.
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>>50569975
>It probably means 'good for enchantment'.
So what you're saying is I can fluff myself into wearing some silk armor? Though the whole "catch someone and zap him with electricity" thing seems kinda valid still dude
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>>50569829

I made a update, but I'm stuck at 66 points now;_;
Can I post it for suggestions for something to cut, or add for positive points? I think you understand what I've been going for with this build, but I can explain certain choices if you need me to.
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>>50569771
Not the other anon, but I hope that you or someone else finds the motivation to write a fic on this one day. If handled correctly, it could be amazing.
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>>50569193
Nope.

That was based entirely on a single study of vaccine preservatives whose results could not be replicated, and were later discovered to have been manipulated. Every subsequent study has found no connection between the preservative and autism.
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>>50570116
Well, I won't mind looking it over. This is /cyoag/, anyway, where we discuss cyoas and builds. We're over bump limit, too, so you're not wasting posts.
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>>50570183

OK! Thanks!
You-know-what upgrades cost a lot now, so I got rid of Argent Spark/Flame, Chakra Eye, and Elder Gaze. But I have to keep Quasicosmic, because it's terribly important that I have some magic power. My Allure went up a ton, but I lost some Status. I'm still not sure if I should go for high or low status, because I'm kind of using Status in a weird way for this character.

Queen Saralindra Helviiryn, Fallen Angel, Mother of Spiders

Pedigree XXX
Status XX
Allure XXXXXXXXXX

Genitalia
>Vagina (1)
>Embellishments
>Lubrication
>Musculature
>Plush (x3)
12

Shape
>Muliebrous
12

Chest
>Gifted
>Multiplicity
15

Influences
>Psuedodevascent (Angel)
>Quasicosmic
24

Face
>Regal
24

Flourishes
>Ouroboros Metabolism
>Godly Cleanliness
>Lernaean Hymen
>Lactation
>Nurturing
>Dependent
>Gate to Ecstasy (x2) w/Plush x3 each
>Reproductive Channel (x2)
62

Strategy
>Synergism (no Specialty)
65

Treasure
>Primordial Woad
>Abyssal Ink
>Celestial Charms
>Nuptial Torc
>Regal Array
72

Bonds
>Drudge Throng
>Chaq, Spider-Goddess
>Oviposition
>Amazing Spider-Parasite (Chaq)
69

Urges
>Throne's Shadow
66
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>>50570183
What exactly does Stigma of the Rising Star do?
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>>50570309
Why such a dirty build, Angel? That's not what I expect from you.
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>>50570309
You can take dependent. I screwed up and made it free, when it should be +1 favor You also have 3 titles: Queen, Fallen Angel, and Mother of Spiders, which you need to pay for.

What I would do is drop one Plush from each 'gate' to get 9 favor back, and spend it on titles. The first if free, the second costs 3 and gives 1 status, and the third costs 6 and gives 2 status. With dependent, that should cover both your bill and bring you under budget.

Alternatively, you can take the Stigma of the Rising Star for +12 favor, if you're cool with leading a more 'interesting' life.
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>>50570355
I'm toying with letting players interact with each other, and the stigmata are my prototypes. Rising star basically turns on PvP.

I don't think it'll work, so rising star will just make you live a more interesting life, in the ancient Chinese curse sense of the phrase
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>>50566063
>>50569004
>The "Queen"
--GENITALIA--
>Penis (with testicles): Pillar x3, Prehensile
>Vagina: Plush x2, Lubrication, Embellishments
--SHAPE--
>Muliebrous
--CHEST--
>Gifted
--INFLUENCES--
>None
--FACE--
>Regal
--FLOURISHES--
>Godly Cleanliness
>Ejaculation: Aphrodisiac, Addictive, Nurturing
>Ouroboros Metabolism
>Commanding Mien
--STRATEGY--
>Pupation: Multimetamorphesis
--SPECIALTY--
>Multitudinous: Monarch, Swarm Heart
--DOWRY--
>Title x3
>Regal Array
>Argent Spark: Argent Blaze
>Celestial Charms
--BONDS--
>Personal Sect
>Bonded Bride: Ascending
--URGES--
>Dependent
>Nightmare Cycle

Status 13
Allure 5
Pedigree 1
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>>50566063
>Nightmare Cycle: Bonus Favor per purchase = (6/# genitals) Purchased per genital

Little unclear on this part, is this a diminishing return for points or what?
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>>50569296
You get 20 more tribute if both your licenses are Ancient. One for plains (15+20) and one for ruins (30+20). Of course you can pick different dangers to each of your terrains. So you have 85 tribute right now Beri.
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>>50570530
It gives a max of 6 points regardless of the number of genitals. For example, if you made a true hermaphrodite, and bought N.C. for the schlong, you would get 3 points, because 6/2 genitals =3 per purchase
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>>50570522
Questions: How many points did you budget for title? I know the right answer, but I want to make sure my formula in the rules was clear enough.

Also, care to share them? And maybe the story that goes with the build, too...
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>>50570498
>PVP
Fuck that shit. PVP is fucking garbage and ruins CYOAs. It's all anyone will talk about, killing each other or how much they hate PVP. The rest of your CYOA will be ignored.
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>>50570373

It's not (that) dirty! And it's made for a super specific kink of mine that I don't think you can see from taking any of the choices at face value. You kinda have to understand the character as a whole.

>>50570445

Thanks for looking everything over! Those are great suggestions! I might do it just like that so I can keep my titles and stuff, even though I kinda wanted max in Plush. I guess it's not that big of a deal. That'll make my new stats:
Pedigree XXX
Status XXXXX
Allure XXXXXXX
I'm going for high Allure cuz maximum sexiness, and high enough Pedigree to be considered valuable for egg incubating, but I'm not so sure about Status. I'm basically a egg incubator/slave which is terribly low status I imagine. But it's kind of the point to be a perfect, beautiful, powerful, intelligent, and extremely desirable and valuable, pure, divine, Angel/Goddess, who's still forced to live in the "Gilded Cage" by powers greater than herself because I'm incredibly useful and valuable to them. So I'm like an object or a pet, but a highly treasured object or pet.
Do those stats work for that? Is that a high Status or low Status concept?
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>>50570686
1 it's opt-in
2 they can't kill each other unless they both go with Crimson Kiss
3 PvP in this sort of game will probably take a different context entirely
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>>50570550
Oh, I thought picking one applied it to both. Thanks for telling me! I also think I misread the tribute value on ruins. So yeah, 85 is correct, then.
>Beri
But I didn't use a name or anything. I could be anyone!

>>50569296
With 30 extra points, I'll get:
Servant: Slime (15)
Appearance (5) to be like a cute sibling sort of thing.
Attitude (5) I'm worried they might not like me... Let's make them clingy, doting, and a tad clumsy.
Club (5) So I can meet some people & we can maybe work together sometimes. Nothing as businessy as Bounty, just friendly cooperation.
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>>50570703
Status is two things:
The ability to ask and something be done
How prestiegious it is to interact with you

You're an incubator. To a spider-goddess. And a goddess in your own right. If you go with low status, you'd be a minor deity in the pantheon of Brides, a fallen angel enslaved. If you go high status, you'd be a fertility goddess, a fallen angel remade.

Those are my thoughts. Which ones make for the best story?
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>>50566063
The Groom, that's the word for the male counterpart of the bride.
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In Domain Master, how is Whispers supposed to affect you if you're Monstrous? Or, better yet, if all your minions also are?
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>>50570808
Not in big T's harem.
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>>50566063
Looks really interesting but I think I'll wait until its complete to make a real build.
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>>50570808
We know. But you're a breeder-bitch in that CYOA, no matter what gender you are.
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>>50570831
Calling you to join their hive-mind? Bye free will.
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>>50570876
I see. Makes sense, I guess.
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>>50570843
Fair enough. Still, I gotta ask, got any character concepts tickling your brain?
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>>50570703
>Angel's fetish is being in a completely subservient relationship.
>Even to the point of being enslaved or literally treated as an object.
>But only by someone who deeply cares for her.
That's pretty strange, and actually rather qt.
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>>50570952
>That's pretty strange
Actually a common fetish. Possibly one of the most common. In Korea, they even have a pet-boy finding service.
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>>50570989
Korea is the land where an extremest female-supremacy cult can control their president. There's nothing 'normal' about them.
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>>50568151
>>50567997
Knowing bliss, probably within a week or 2. Considering it's not a large update
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>>50570795
Idk. I'm kinda thinking more from the low Status angle, but I want to valuable enough that maybe Chaq owning me makes her more prestigious and envied. I feel like having a bit higher Status might do that. So it's like I'm an egg incubator, but I'm not just ANY incubator. I'm a unique and powerful being who is still owned by another Goddess to be used as her egg incubator.

>>50570952

More or less. But as far as "deeply caring" for me. It's fine if I'm valued more like a precious diamond or beloved pet than as a wife or family member.
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>>50570930
Yeah I got one or two.
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>>50571088

An example of what I'm going for is even though I'm a "Bride" in this, I don't expect Chaq to love me as her wife or lover. After all, I'm basically a tool to be used for egg incubating. I think it's more like Teiatat gave Chaq a unique jewel that she can show off to demonstrate her own status, power, wealth, and influence. And people seeing me would understand that Chaq's an important servant of Teiatat since she received such a gift.

If you haven't gotten tired of me and left EDG, thanks for helping me brainstorm about my character and going through tedious paragraphs of lewd rambling
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>>50569550
No, because it's a shit CYOA.
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>>50571230
Reporting you to the CYOA anti-bully squad. Prepare to get raped asshole.
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>>50571088
>>50571189
I'm not bored in the slightest, I just can't tell you what makes a better story for you. Personally, I'd go for the high-status route because I like nightingales in gilded cages, but don't take choices that give you direct political power, and don't sacrifice too much allure while doing so.

That's just what I'd do to make a character like yours, though.
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>>50571306

>nightingale in a gilded cage

That's totally what I meant! You're better with words than me though. Thank you very much once again! I'll have another update soon. It'll be either exactly what you suggested earlier or close to it. I looked at the builds here and in the other thread and I have pretty good Status with your suggestions and like one of the highest Allures. So I think I'm on the right track!
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>>50570734
Nobody else loves slimes the way you love slimes, Beri.
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>>50571595
I like slimes.
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>>50570309
This wants to be raped by a spider monster thing is actually angelanon?
That's gross.

Is the spider thingy the one that takes on a human like form if you want it to?
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>>50571611
But not the way Beri does. Not enough to pay points to turn into a gorgeous slimegirl in a monster-hunting CYOA.
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>>50571621
>Not wanting to be done by spider monsters.
Then why are you here?
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So 1200 pixels is the accepted perfect width for a cyoa?
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>>50571621

>Though not a true shapeshifter, Chaq will adopt a form that will appeal to you; assuming a form between human and monstrous spider, Chaq will take up the traits that most appeal to you, though she won’t discard her inherent femininity.

I think she's more like a arachne than a spider-monster. Considering how popular monster-girls seem to be around here, I wouldn't think you guys would thin it's gross.
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>>50571607
I just realized I don't have the suitor age. anyone else got it?
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>>50571701
which one?
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Right here dog
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>>50571701
>>50571747
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>>50571701
>the suitor age
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>>50571697
I worded it to be a drider, arachne, spider-girl, whatever the player wants
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>>50571778
How much drider rape happens on average in the world of Lavender?
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>>50571847
As much as is required for a good story, and not a millirape more
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>>50571778
So Muffet would work?
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>>50571857
Whatever you find most appealing.
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>>50571893
We're on page 10.

It's up to you.

Don't fail us.
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>>50563810
I grant myself the power to do or create whatever I want at any given time without consequence or limitation.
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>>50571928
It is done

NEW THREAD

>>50571963
>>50571963
>>50571963
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>>50571972
So your plan, given omnipotence, is to be omnipotent?
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>>50571621
>>50571847

Because this is a lewd cyoa, the terribly powerful being Teitat uses his powers to create brides for himself which are pretty much minor Gods and Goddesses of fertility. I'm a minor Goddess who was given as a gift from Teiatat to the Spider Goddess Chaq. She needs a vessel to incubate her eggs. My magical power makes me great for this because some of my power can be passed on to the eggs I incubate and make healthy magical spiderlings to serve Teiatat.

I don't have much say in the matter but it's not really rape because it's my duty as a minor Goddess, cost for receiving a perfect divinely beautiful Angelic body with lots of magic power, and perhaps even punishment for having lewd thoughts as a human in my previous life of being a Fallen Angel instead of a Pure Angel.
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>>50571533
Not done yet but I want to say "I like this cyoa" before the thread ends.
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>>50572064
Well I hate it.
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>>50572064
Thanks! I'm about to post an update (in the next thread). Just gotta finish one more option.
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>>50572061
>of being a Fallen Angel instead of a Pure Angel
I see you remember well, my child.

A pity it has not helped your Pedigree. Mwah ha ha.
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>>50572179

My Pedigree's not that high, but I hope it's high enough to make me valuable as an egg incubator. But my Status and Allure increase my value to, so that helps.
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>>50572162
Speaking of this, it's up: >>50572310
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>>50572061
AA, I didn't dislike you until now.
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>>50566659
None of these are drawbacks
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