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/cyoag/ - CYOA General: Just Like My Animu! Edition

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2/6
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3/6
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>>49276876
Stop falseflagging. You're making everyone look bad.
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>>49276876
And it begins.
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>>49276887
4/6
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>>49276876
Don't start policing /tg/ before at least lurking a few weeks.
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>>49276859
What happened to the planned expansion for this?
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>>49276894
>false flagging
Quests have been removed, we can remove the shitty threads in time too.
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Slightly Updated version of paths to power, now with better font.
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>>49276904
5/6
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>>49276915
>Quests have been removed
:^)
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>>49276918
6/6
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>>49276859
This was going to have a supplement with player builds for companions.
I guess that didn't work out?
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>>49276915
Alright quester. Thanks for trying to make your own side look bad.

>le ebin slippery slope maymay

Anyway, have more CYOAs because I don't like shitposting without actual content.
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>>49276915
>(You)
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>>49276859

Name: Lindaswen Thereliel (goes by Lindas)

>Lunestier

>Arcane Magic x3
>Summoning Magic x3
>Tactics x3
>Magic Refinement
>Maneuvers x2

>Valerie Bluewood
>Allyce Westhold
>Crale Edwards
>Tennie Northbreed

>The Great Hunt (every year)
>Security
>Bodyguard

>Art/Music
>Paranormal Research

>Bookworm

I was a orphan adopted by Lunestier groundskeeper. A teacher saw that I have strong innate magical skills. So I got accepted in the prestigious magical school.

Hopefully with my summoning magic and tactics I can basically become a general of my own magic army and I can use arcane magic to protect myself and support my army. After graduation my friends and I can go on quests to find treasures and lost knowledge and help protect peasants and kingdoms. After I become stronger, I can take over a old castle as base and start small Queendom of magical creatures summoned from the different planes. Then become a famous mercenary company and have my magic army help settle conflicts in exchange for extravagant gifts and titles.

Eventually have more titles than all those pompous spoiled students at school who wouldn't except me because I'm "poor" and "low class".
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>>49276859
Universal War
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>>49277160
The more I see this the more I am annoyed by it.
I get that it's your fantasy and that we're in no way hurt by you being a Mary sue in your own story.
But I mean, damn, you go out and find a spot with a castle and become queen. What's more, your classmates have been picking their noses, accomplishing nothing, all the while so you can lord your superiority over them.
I get that I'm being petty for complaining about a CYOA build, but you keep reposting it like you'remassively proud of it.
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>>49277160
Those must some real scrub tier summons if you can summon so many of them.
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>>49277471
Just be glad the grammar doesn't give you an aneurysm.
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What do you It woul be like being married to constel?
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>>49276933
>St. Flares

>First Aid, Tactics, Unarmed Combat, Elemental Magic x3, Survival, Blue Magic x3

>Luvyna, Valerie, Malyvin, Eloise, Kit

>The Great Hunt, Fund Raising, Security
>Bodyguard x2, Battle Royal x2, Escort

>Paranormal Research Club, Art/Music Clubs (Sculpting Club)

HAHAHAHAHA
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>>49277471

>you go out and find a spot with a castle and become queen
>your classmates have been picking their noses, accomplishing nothing, all the while so you can lord your superiority over them

Maybe Lindas' goal is to have more titles and recognition than classmates, but it's always a uphill battle full of as many misadventures and setbacks as successes. And maybe fact that Lindas is really just a mercenary leader based in the ruins of an abandoned castle and "Queen" of a tiny area that isn't actually recognized as a country by anybody is a source of constant frustration, which reminding her of can lead to severe punishment or death. But no matter what, she never gives up the fight!

>>49277526

Well it's a army, so most of summons are just minions. There'd be a few powerful ones there to though.
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>>49276917
Wealth. Body is extremely limited, mind means abandoning my humanity, power requires juggling a billion different balls, and faith requires faith in myself. But wealth can buy me whatever I need, if I'm understanding that supernatural purchasing ability correctly. Sure it's the second least-stable, but l have faith in humanity's desire for more.
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>>49277651
Could you at least say "this is about Pokemon Personified"?
I know asking you to write a coherent sentence would be too much, but you should be capable of that much.
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>>49277429
The Lovers
Angel's Face, Pursuers (37)

>Personal
Twin Souls
Shapeshifting 2 (35)
Beauty 2 (33)
Scanner 2 (31)
Immunity 2 (29)
Miracles 2 (27)
Survivalist 2 (25)
Constructs 2 (23)
Training 2 (21)
Animus 3 (18)
Alchemist 3 (15)
Endurance 2 (12)
Evolution 3 [Ranged attacks] (9)
Regeneration 3 (6)
Toughness 3 (3)
Elemental 1 [Earth] (2)
Telepathy 2 (0)

>Lover Build
Toughness 3 (17)
Muscle Mass 3 (14)
Regeneration 3 (11)
Speed 2 (9)
Evolution 3 (6)
Destroyer 2 [Personal] (4)
Elemental 3 [Air] (1)
Endurance 1 (0)

>Lover's Stones
Magus Gem [Occultist] (15)
Melee Weapon [Special, Light] (9)
Saving the rest.

>Personal Stones
Magus Gem [Mentality] (150)
Blue Box Armoire 2 (135)
Handy Bag (127)
Universal Maps (118)
Blue Crest Seal (98)
Ammo Vault (90)
Battle Moon (86)
Gravity Gun (82)
Servitors [Synths] (64)

Saving the rest.

>Companions
Lover. Galatea. (Free)
Athena Hawkwood (Paid for)
Jeweled Maiden (5)
The Muses (4)
Xath (3)
Alfonso (2)
Dean Winchester (1)
Sphene (0)
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My current ideas for a different RWBY cyoa:
- A level of power selection. You can be NPC-level, named character-level, main character-level, or Maiden-tier broken character. Obviously more power = more involvement in the plot and therefore you will be at a higher risk.
I'm unsure to include this or not.
- A bigger expansion on weapons. Price stuff differently based on how good they are. Basic swords and shields are cheap, weapons with multiple forms that can use Dust are incredibly pricey.
- More semblances, some of which will not be based on the show.
- Colored Auras that give you abilities, such as a Aura that regenerates in combat or one that has a "shield-gate" that makes attacks with low force do nothing (small arms' fire, glass etc.)

I thought of including options for either following the story of the show, removing certain elements (the Maidens) or something else entirely... but that would make it harder to team up with other people, and that was by far the best part of the cyoa. I'd hate to get rid of that.
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>>49277834
Unique Armor
Unique Weapon
Time
Abode (Free)

>Patron

Tempted to go with Father Of Beasts.
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>>49277849
I meant to ask "how does that sound?", but I forgot to include it in the post.
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>>49277849
And the companions? :^)
I think that It sounds good and removing elements from the history sounds ok you can make an multiplayer option that gives points if you make a team with other Anons like team RAPE
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>>49277849
>And the companions? :^)
>I think that It sounds good and removing elements from the history sounds ok you can make an multiplayer option that gives points if you make a team with other Anons
This.
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>>49277903
>RAPE
>Rouge
>Azure
>Pink
>Emerald
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>>49278225
It really existed?
awesome
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>>49278262
no it fuckin didn't I was making shit up since they're all apparently named after colors.
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>>49277903
>tfw I still remember the greentexts for that
>tfw I was the one who wrote Augusta's build
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>>49277903
>companions
That wouldn't diminish from interaction with other people ITT? Companions are NPC's that do anything you say, making you team leader with no problem.
The idea was to make a little comment at the end saying other players have higher power levels than regular people, and that's your motivation. Giving you points for playing with others seems odd.
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UPDATE - 1 new page.

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>>49277903
Team RAPE was fucking beautiful, and bless whoever wrote the stories. Those stories are why I desperately want another RWBY cyoa. That, and how natural it is to team up.
if only I had the damn file on this computer.
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>>49278401

>>49205307
>>49205331
>>49205366
>>49205385
>>49205410

(This page had a very minor typo-fix & is changed)
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>>49278401
I think I'm going to cry
>>49278410
Awesome I wish I could read the stories...
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>>49278427
Oh boy, the filename was exactly what I remembered.
>Glynda is not impressed
Seriously anon if you're reading this, you are beautiful. You're an absolute madman. It never ceases to make me laugh.
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>>49278449

Two new girls. Relax in the light or embrace the dark?

>>49205526
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>>49278493

NEW PAGE

As always, please inform me of any typos you find.
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>>49278493
Wait, is this fanmade or am I dreaming?
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>>49278519

Library 1 - >>49205544

Library 2 - (pic related)

Miya Intro - >>49205572

Miya Page - >>49205593


>>49278553
You're dreaming?
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>>49278519
Sub-shade: "they aren't as smart OF social", you meant "or"?
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>>49278401
Orb of Life
Welfare
Surveillance

>>49278519
Sola
Radiant Glow
Slendor
Holy Grail

Just give me anything that makes me happy and optimistic. Free stuff and a qt girl are also nice.
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>>49277903
>an multiplayer option that gives points if you make a team
Ideas for how to do that without making it retarded? You know, without stating
>make a team with another player
I'd like to keep it obvious to everyone who isn't daft but never outright state it so those guys who militantly hate multiplayer and PvP won't toss a shitfit.
Awarding points to do just that sort of defeats the purpose.
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>>49278624
Thanks, I'll fix that.

>>49278724
>Slendor
I think you left out a letter, unless maybe you were wanting a spooky tall man.
Can't argue with
>Just give me anything that makes me happy and optimistic
though. That's raw, intrinsic satisfaction.

>>49205305
>>49206174
>>49213194
>>49216092
In response to all this, I believe you have all forgotten the most important rule: pic related
Harmony being a notable exception.
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>>49277757
Forgive me, I actually thought I spelled the words right. Next time I wont rush.
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Rolled 2 (1d3)

>>49278401
>Orb of Life
>Library
>Employment

>>49278449
Now if only I knew how to choose between Falchion, Flo, and Melody. I'll just roll a die.

>1. Flo
>2. Melody
>3. Falchion
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>>49278979
Looks like I'm rooming with a muse!

>>49205460
>Lessons
>Automatic
>Instrumental Dress

And apparently we can get the band back together. Neat.
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>>49278866
>In response to all this, I believe you have all forgotten the most important rule: pic related
No, I didn't forget it. I picked my waifu and didn't read any of the other girls you added afterwards since I wouldn't change my pick.
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>>49278519
Great job man.
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>>49262892
Blood Money Build

>Class: The Ranger
Skills
>Weapon Proficiency: Pistol (free)
>Stealthy
>Melee Specialist
Perks
>Assassin
>Gunslinger
>Brawler
>Lucky
Vehicle
>Motorcycle x2 ($1700, $3300 left)
Weapons
>Big Iron (Free)
>Machine Pistol x2 ($800, $2500 left)
>10mm Pistol x2 ($500, $2000 left)
>Silencer x5 ($500, $1500 left) (Big Iron, two 10mm, Companion Main Weapons)
>Extended Mags x3 ($300, $1200 left) (Big Iron, Companion Main Weapons)
Faction
>Whoever is paying us.
Companions
>Aleksander (Free)
>Nova ($1200, $0 left)

Aleksander doing long range, me handling infiltration, and Nova on standby if anything goes wrong. Given how nothing SHOULD go wrong, Nova is also getting paid to do weapon and vehicle maintenance.

Missions, Sallvation-Legion War and Organized Crime.

As the Legion is a bunch of cunts (Aleksander's words), we'll be doing merc work for Salvation. In the midst of doing so, we become involved in the Syndicate by saving someone from an assassination attempt that was not actually perpetrated by the Legion. This leads to a self-preservation driven dismantling of the syndicate, starting at the bottom and working up.

Those weapons, that ammo, and all the Rep and Goodwill I'll ever need to settle down and live a luxurious life of running a government-sponsored guild of assassins.
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>>49279128
Well, maybe not ALL of you had forgotten. That's the trouble with mass-replies.

>>49279173
Thanks!
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>>49274755

Well I don't usually do builds for lewd cyoas, but I kinda wanted to try one since bored and thought one where I could trade lewdness for benefits and magic might be ok. So here's Slut Life Exalted build.

>small god -15

>curvy +2
>beautiful face +6
>short +2
>d-cup +2
>bubble +4
>adaptive +6
>adult (24) 0
>golden blonde +2
>sapphire blue eyes +2
>pale skin +2
>feminine voice 0

>additional breasts (x2 c-cups) +3
>aesthetic mutation (elf ears) +1
>infertility (don't need overthrow of the lunar tyrant now) 0
>tools-make-the-craftsman understanding +1
>youthful mountains reinforcement -1
>laughing at the wind bears -2
>man-pelt amendment (only normal hair for head, eyebrows, lashes; everywhere else super fine/light so not noticeable) +1
>seven gates yielding -1
>icon-eye inscription (cat eyes) -1
>ardor-glance indication (violet) +1
>rapid pregnancy -3
>endless lactation effect +1
>eternal virgin purification +1
>biomotonic cleansing -3
>cleanliness near godliness -3
>vitriol-gut digestion -3

>lifelong servitude +14
>tentacle monster +15
>insect queen (+ovipositor) +25
>archetypical combination (tentacle monster and insect queen combined) +5
>archetypical master (tentacle monster/insect queen combo is my real master) +15
>health and hygiene (body care package x2, make-up package x2, healthcare package, maid) -19
>mortal-taming colar (+mortal-taming leash) +6
>breeder +10
>restricted raiment (+jewelry) +8
>essence refinement (x3, first is free) -24
>time denying kata -10
>longevity (3) -30
>immortality -20

+135-135=0

Explanation incoming since to many characters with build and some choices not exactly what they seem.
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>>49279308

Ok, so the being that summoned me to it is a Small God. Insect Queen says it can include "minor behemoths, strange gods, or bizarre demons", so I figure taking Small God with Insect Queen and Tentacle Monster, with Archetypical Combination can make some kind of minor eldritch God. So this eldritch God has ovipositor to and needs a living incubator to keep eggs in, and I'm perfect for that because Seven Gates Yielding, Rapid Pregnancy, Additional Breasts, and Endless Lactation Effect. I'm infertile (because getting pregnant=ew), but Rapid Pregnancy doesn't say that it requires fertility. So I figure it can mean that I can incubate eggs so they're ready to hatch faster, making me perfect specimen for this job. I wish Easy Pregnancy didn't require fertility, otherwise I'd pick that so holding egg wouldn't be uncomfortable.

Pretty much every other choice is related to my comfort. The eldritch God cares a lot for the well being of its eggs, so it makes sure that I live life of supreme comfort and luxury. Just lounging around draped in jewels with a maid to clean up after me could get boring aftr awhile. But Immortality just so happened to require Essence Refinement x3, so I have strong ability to learn magic. I didn't take any extra choices to boost magic, so I'd have to learn slowly with lots of studying. Thankfully I have lots of free time to do it and eldritch God shouldn't mind as long as I don't exert myself to much.

Eldritch Gods probably live very long times, so I might have this job for thousands of years. When something does eventually happen to it, I will have learned lots of magic and can explore the multiverse as a powerful sexy sorceress.

My outfit is like cross between Cleopatra one and Slave Leia one, so like sexy-skimpy and all made from gold and jewels. This is to show how valuable I am as incubator for baby demi-Gods. And I have to have the Collar and Leash because I'm owned. And I'm very attractive busty blonde.
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>>49279333
I didn't read a word you wrote but I like knowing you dream of receiving pearl necklaces.
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>>49278401
>>49278423
>>49278449
etc.

You know, with cyoas of this size it'd probably be way easier for everyone involved to use some interactive framework instead of tons of pages.

Like, make a simple layout with a drop down menü, then show/hide the right blocks with jQuery. Mix in classes when the clicks on a div that highlight it to mark selections and you're done.
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>>49277849
Since you're asking for feedback:

> You're doing the Lord's work, anon.
> Maiden tier bullshit might cause a shitstorm.
> An expansive list of Semblances would be amazing.
> If you do include Maidens, then also make up other crazy bullshit to compete with them.
> Such as being a centuries old powerful Grimm, or weird abomination.
> Your aura idea is great.
> Don't be afraid to deviate slightly from Canon.
> Allowing anons to waifu named characters might cause a shitstorm.
> I somewhat desire this shitstorm.
> Various situational perks, such as constant luck, would be interesting for Character building.
> Make up teachers who's class you focus on, each with different benefits.
> I wish to hug you.

So there you have it. My opinions and suggestions.
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>>49279430

Well maybe you should've read it. It's not a "pearl necklace" ZZ Top. It's a LITERAL physical collar and leash that represents me being property of the eldritch God.
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>>49279462
Normally, I support making things browser accessible, but that would make it both larger (due to not being compressed to a single image) and less portable (since you can't attach webpages to your 4chan posts). Furthermore, while it does allow for certain interactive abilities, it also takes away some artistic freedoms (Adding outer glows and drop shadows to browser text isn't easy)
I did consider rigging something up for Dungeon-Meister once (complete with basic advenuter AI), but didn't wanna have anything like that up on the web using artistic assets that I can't even remember the origins of. I decided that if I ever do such a thing, it would have to be redone by hand, so I scrapped the idea.
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>>49276918

I don't get this. Which are considered unique event?
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>>49279701
I can see your concerns, but I have to disagree on filesize. You could convert the images of each page into a background image, either a hard 1:1 representation or a smaller collection you assign via background position.

But then my perspective is probably warped by my work. Maybe I'll redo something old to try it out, working without magento would be welcome change of pace.
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>>49279850
Each one within a box. In other words, "Battle Royal" is a unique event, while "The Great Tournament" is when that event takes place.
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>>49279529
>Classes
I definitely wish to add that, so you have more of an idea of what to actually do. Same with the event where first year students shadowed a Huntsman. Possibly an event that includes another team, either from the show or the thread.
Give you a feeling of actual being there, if you know what I mean. Knowing that the world is alive.
So I'd like to add classes and events, without ripping off Hero Academy too much.
And I don't think I'll had the difficulty thing. It would cause a shitstorm and I don't particularly care for those.
Companions - if I did include them, which I almost certainly won't - would not be copy-pasted from the show except for my waifu.
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>>49280025

So which are the non unique events in that case?
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Fuck I was just going through the pick a godess or godess to mortal dating site cyoa and wondered how much of a mad man someone would have to be to go polyheistic with hera and ishtar.
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>>49280073
Like I said, you're doing the Lord's work.

But be warned, would you leave your waifu in the CYOA? Even when knowing of the other anons?
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>>49280076
In this case, "unique" means "different."

In other words, you can't pick Battle Royal eight times. You could pick "Battle Royal" 6 times maximum, but you'd participate in two other events. Does that make sense?
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>>49280139

So does this mean if you pick basilisk den and end up running it into the ground, you can't pick it again?
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>>49280183
A.
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>>49280189
Unless they start it back up again the next year.
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>>49280221

By "running it into the ground" I mean kill everyone that has anything to do with it.
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>>49280253
Jesus.

>>49280262
>mfw
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>>49280286

What about him?
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>>49280262
Do people even understand what a CYOA is anymore?
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>>49280122
Oh lord no, mai waifu is for me alone and you can't have her!
Mind you, I still need to get used to university starting again and getting into a rhythm, and there's some other stuff I'll have to do, btu I'll keep thinking up what I want to do with the cyoa.
I could definitely see myself adding the fan-made characters as companions, but that's when all discussion of the cyoa has seized, as a sort of "thank you for enjoying".
But that's the closest you'll get to companions, and you could've chosen them at any time anyway.
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>>49279333
>Voluntarily becoming a sex slave/breeding machine for a monster with dozens of inhumanly large dicks and ovipositors.
>Being fucked silly and kept constantly pregnant or giving birth for thousands of years.
>All this simply for a comfy, luxurious "free" ride.
Wow! You really are a dirty little slut AA!
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>>49276859


>>49275599
>>49270301
>>49270212

Still waiting hopefully , cyoafriends.
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>>49280286
>>49280325
please ignore the bait
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>>49280425
Eh.
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Holy crap, seeing all of this is reigniting the spark to finish my Pokémon D&D ruleset booklet. The groundwork is basically finished, it just needs polishing off, but I can't be arsed to finish it and I doubt anyone would be interested in it.
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>>49280332
Ruby must be protected.

This is good, for the waifus must be protected from the horrors spawned by our sinful world.

We are the horrors.[spoiler/]
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>>49280385
Sorry man, searched through my entire 300+ CYOA library and still couldn't find it.
I believe I have seen the CYOA you're talking about before though, and I do have that Caves CYOA.
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>>49280803
That's a damn shame. I really liked that first one more than the second, for all the bennies the second added. The areas were more diverse in the first, being drastically different from one another. One direction was Spooky Scary Skeleton Town, another was Dark McWhatthefuck, Dvelves another and then there was the Hyper Light Drifter 'advanced civilization falls' location. Shit was hype.
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>>49278401
Good to see you back, beri. Though I'm still sticking with Yin.

>Yin
>Deal: Taken

>Orb of Life
>Library - Bonus not used (yet)
>Employment - Data Entry

>Sewing

>Death Sight

>Death Armor
>Dullahan Scythe
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>>49280800
So, RWBY + NieR?
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>>49279619
And that's why you want to be transformed into a big-titted blond bimbo, right?
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>>49280909
Oh my god. Can you imagine waking up in remnant and rushing to be with your waifu, only to find out that our dimension is like some kind of soulless Eldritch plane that slowly corrupts "fictional" realms in comes into contact with? Our presence drains the "magic" out of these worlds, leaving nothing but cold soulless realism that erases individuality. Maybe we exist in a "higher" plane of existance and appear as Great Old Ones to them?
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>>49276894
To be honest there isn't really much of a reason to post Traveler until it gets updated. Everyone who's thinking of making a build is waiting on Highlander to finish 1.2, and the only time it actually gets replies is when people want clarification on some things or if people want to ask Highlander something.
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I pick A meta A
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>>49278573
Hey Beri, is it possible to do the lewd with all of the girls?
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I am now a wicked naga waifu, now now before your new snake overlord

https://s-media-cache-ak0.pinimg.com/236x/6c/bb/64/6cbb64f585605dd3e63af17df0c8fa2b.jpg
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>>49280183
A
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>>49280902
Thanks. Glad to see one of the lesser popular ones still getting chosen. No one's picked Eve yet, though.

>>49281462
Yes, it is.
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>>49277834
>>49277864
What are you doing with your build anon? It seems interesting.
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>>49281533
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>>49277429
>Name
Vymni, "The Horror"

>Spirit Gift
Tower

>Drawbacks
Black Heart [+1]
Monster [+2]
Bad Blood [+3]

>Powers: 42 Points
Harvester [Free]
Ruin [Free]
Immortality [Free]
Natural Weapons [1]
Consumption [1]
Coordination [1]
Flight [1]
Immunity [2]
Destroyer [2]
Survivalist [2]
Training [2]
Stealth 2 [Magus Gem]
Berserker [3]
Endurance [3]
Muscle Mass [3]
Regeneration [3]
Speed [3]
Toughness [3]
Senses [3]
Mentality [3]
Instant Transmission [3]

>Patron
The Artificial Intelligence

>Arch Enemy
The Conquering King

>Perks
Unique Armor: Power Armor
Extraordinary Vehicle: Power Armor mobility system
Special Weapon: Power Armor power fists

>Weapons
Explosive Charges [5]
x2 Ranged Weapon Energy: Rifle, Gatling [Free]
Micro Nuke Bomb [Free]
>Clothing
Handy Bag of Holding [8]
Magus Gem [25]
>Misc
x5 Blue Crest Seal [100]
x7 Galgalim Water [7]
Universal Maps [9]
x2 Servitors (Androids) [Free]
Skeleton Servitors (Professionals) [Free]
Spirit Tree [20]
Transport, Ground (Tank) [Free]
Transport, Air (Dropship) [Free]
Megastructure (Mobile Planetoid Station) [Free]
x2 Starship (Heavy) [Free]
Nimbus Bread [1]

>Companions
Typhon, Failed Abomination
Nidhogg, Dread Dragon
03 Clean Flame Purges the Filth, Plasmid Angel
Caroline Lupine, Experimental Human Weapon
Athena Hawkwood, Disinterested Goth
Dean Winchester, The Scientist & Traveler
Avery J., Sergeant Major
Riley Fox, Mechanist Extraordinaire
Drone #8603-4597, “Split Jaw"
Prophet, The Mad Titan
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>>49278401
In a past general you said that Andrea's lack of self worth was in large part derived from her belief that she didn't have a soul and so would always be inferior. What would happen if you rebooted her while giving her a soul and informing her of it?
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>>49281932
> Twin Swordsman.

I'mma just show up to help a nigga out once in a while, all Mysterious Stranger n' shit.
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>>49278401
Fuck yeah! Our lord and Savior beri has finally returned to grace us with more wonderful waifus. glory be
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>>49281952
Giving her a soul would fix any personality-based inferiority, but the inferiority matrix is a bit different, and less-personality, more action-based. She could be more cheering and positive but still just think that serving your every whim is the absolute most natural thing.

>>49282240
Thanks.
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>>49278493
Squee! You're back!

SOLA:

Purification in progress...

Orb of Life
Dream Home
Employment

>Summer Summons
Least dangerous.

>Insight
Perfect vision would be very useful.

>Sunlight Gondola
Easy to travel!

Rank: #29, between Chere and Lillan. Dude, I’m on 4chan. I really hate sunlight because it reminds me of going outside.

EVE:

Somewhat contradictingly, I'm afraid of both bright light and the darkness. Maybe this will help me get over that.

Orb of Life
Library of the Supernatural - I have vision problems already.
Surveillance - They'll barely be able to see anything anyway, right?

>Personal Shadow
I mean, it's very useful for her.

>Embrace the Dark
I've been left on my own, like a rainbow in the dark.

>Shadow Box
I don't trust me enough to not mess up the Dark Parasol. How heavy is this box?

>Bonus
Hahaha nope.

Ranking: #14, between Mishe and Oki. A beautiful, extremely dark, twisted fantasy.
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>>49281895
Vymni does not know why his physical form was transformed into something so hideous. He does not know why he sustains himself on the suffering of others. Perhaps it is a curse, acquired from the sins of his previous life as a Demiurge. Or perhaps it is an inheritance of his former life's power, the willingness to kill made physically manifest.

What he does know is why the Conquering King is set against him - Vymni represents the horror of the Universal War. A ready, ugly symbol for the Conquering King to nail to the cross. An anthropomorphic enemy to whip up his followers. The Conquering King may or may not hold personal hate for Vymni, but Vymni is an expedient political opportunity.

Vymni knows he can't survive alone. And he wants to find a cure for his curse. So when the Artificial Intelligence made an offer, he quickly accepted. While the Conquering King has numbers, the Artificial Intelligence can lend information and technology. More importantly, the Artificial Intelligence is able to rebuild Vymni's body - to remove his biological curse and ascend him a new, uncursed machine form.

Fortunately he also has friends. Many of them have psychological and or physiological problems, which is why he bought multiple containers of Galgalim Water. Using a combination of his curing blood and Galgalim Water, he is able to help many of his companions. Typhon, Caroline, Athena, Avery, and Prophet benefit the most. He relies on them heavily for any social dealings, for even covered Vymni exudes an uncomfortable aura.
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>>49278401
BERI'S ALIVE

Will try the new girls later
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>>49282623
Vymni himself is a formidable warrior. Skillful, resilient, and capable. His unique power armor contains propulsion systems to enable limited flight in any environment. It also has specialized, spiked power fists, able to pulverize heavily armored opponents. For when he can't use his power armor, he has natural weapons and biological propulsion. One of his favorite tricks is using his enhanced senses and stealth ability to see through thick walls and blast doors, then safely teleport through them.

He doesn't need to eat, drink, sleep, or breathe, so Vymni has a lot of free time. He spends much of it training, but enjoys spending time in the company of his companions, no matter what he's doing. Occasionally he has been known to suggest playing board games and video games. Games involving strategy are his favorite.
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>>49282627
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>>49282644
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>>49282665
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>>49277849
fix combat, stealth and medicine price because it's crazy overpriced
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>>49282512
The shadow box isn't that heavy. However, since she's standing in it, you'd have to lift her as well, unless she enters your shadow while you move it. Also, even if you mess up with the parasol, she can easily escape into your shadow before she dies.

>>49282625
looking forward to it.
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>>49278519
I like these girls. Eve definitely feels as though she's placed in between the dichotomy of being reliant on the reader and the other end of condescending to give the reader abilities to come to their level.
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>>49282627
>>49282644
>>49282665
>>49282686
World Breaker 12 points.
Shaper 2
Alexandria 2
Eidolon 2
Emperor of Man 2
The Bodyguards 1 point
Blank 1
Shatter Limiter 1
Invictus 1
First Impressions 1
Cloak and Dagger 1
Additional Core 1
Unbound Form 1

Sibling Rivalry -4

Just gonna set myself up a nice root system under the crust and start spreading out, sending seedlings and other little agents to the surface to move people and things around to try and avert the worst of the destruction and wreck any other endbringers that show themselves by trying to direct other parahumans toward them.

See about seeding Mars or Ganymede or something with the spare core; just in case things go poorly.
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magic tier 2
animals
books tier 3
healing
coolness
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>>49277059
The CYOA maker must be really sexually insecure to ban me marrying whoever I want.
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I am the paladin twin swordsman
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>>49282906
>>49281972
We be bros, you dig?
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>>49282627
>>49282644
>>49282665
>>49282686
Worm CYOA
Reincarnation
12 World Breaker
Powers
10 Kaleidoscope
8 Alexandria
6 Inspired Inventor
4 Legend
2 Psychokinetic
0 Eidolon
-2 Power Manipulation
-4 Emperor of Man
-6 Shaper
Perks
-7 Blank
-8 Shattered Limiter
-9 Invictus
-10 Inspiration
-14 Bottled Superpowers (x4)
-15 First Impressions
-16 Cloak and Dagger
-17 Manpower
Complications
-14 Marked (x3)
-10 The Slaughterhouse is Hiring
0 The Cycle Begins Anew

Stu mode activate.
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>>49278493
Any possibility we could get a /tg/-themed girl or two next?
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people who repost their own cyoas are bad. if you've just updated it fine, but let others decide when it needs to be in the threads.
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>>49283009
Diane likes board games.
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>>49280345
>>49280995

I'm the property of a God who's very jealous and protective of me. That's like literally the opposite of a slut or bimbo! And there's no sex or dicks involved. I don't know how eldritch Gods fertilize their eggs, but it's probably some magical means that's beyond human comprehension. But I'm not involved in that. I just take care of the eggs afterwards. I'm a very valuable tool for the God that's perfectly designed to take care of its eggs, so it would make sure I'm very well cared for while I do that and study magic on the side.
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>>49283243
To be fair to you, Exalted does detail that gods can knock humans up without sex. Like by having the human bathe in a spring or breath in air that's under their control.

Doesn't mean they can't fuck, though, and often do use that method. Sometimes going all Zeus with it.
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>>49283385

Yeah, I have the Mortal-Taming Collar and Leash, so I have to do whatever the God says, but I'm hoping it does't want to do that to often.....
Even if it does, it's just something I put up with when I have to and keep living life of opulence while studying magic and incubating eggs. The God will own me for a really long time (like probably thousands of years), but not literally forever. So I can learn tons of magic and be great sorceress someday when I'm finally free.
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>>49283009
How about a /cyoag/ themed girl?

>Obsessed about waifus
>militant lesbian
>Extremely autistic
>tempermental
>argumentative
>Will never stop shitposting on your favorite Chadese Cashew Farming Forum
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>>49276859

my personal build:

Yellow
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>>49283617
>not picking purple
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>>49283590
You'll also be happy to know that female gods can knock up female humans using one of those esoteric methods.
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Chill Zone creator here. Thinking about making another CYOA. I have a question.

What is Magic, in a meta-sense? I'd call it a "tree of power," in that it's all one group of things that's specifically different from some other "tree."

So, with that in mind, how many different trees can you think of? There's Magic and Technology, obviously, if we were to go Arcanum-style, so that's two, but I'd like to have somewhere up to 4-5.

And they each have to operate under their own rules/limits, like how Magic takes mana/MP, and technology requires physical energy of some sort.

I'm thinking something like:
>Magic
>Technology/Science
>Biologic/Evolution (Ever played God Eater? Think Aragami)
>Soul Power
><something something Old Gods something something>

But I want your input. The idea's been stewing in me for a while, but I'm not sure how I want to go about it.
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>>49283762
Psychic powers?
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>>49283762
>Magic/Hope
>Science/Truth
>Psionic/Willpower
>Life/Love
>Soul/Faith
>Death/Empathy
>Void/Apathy
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>>49283649

Well being knocked up isn't really my thing. I'm actually scared of pregnancy and definitely am never having kids. But that's definitely better than the "traditional" method if it has to happen.
So even though this is lewd build for lewd cyoa, it's not really even my fetish or anything. It's just good way I found to trade some lewdness for immortality, super comfy life, and chance of eventually becoming a powerful sexy sorceress, which is like my ultimate fantasy.
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>>49283762
Drawing power from a pocket dimension that exists in each of us.
> Drawing out equipment from the mental space.
> Creating an arena to fight in.
> Minor terrain control of the arena.
> Basically https://youtu.be/yHfsuyGlS0U?t=75.

Tapping into the latent power of the First Human, from who all humans are descended.
> Takes the form of an otherworldly essence that degrades anything other than a normal human.
> Effects humans that have "forsaken" their nature by taking other powers.
> Sculpt the essence like a semi-liquid substance.
> Might actually be that eldritch force you mentioned.
> Temporarily achieve the True form of Man.
> The True form of Man is fucking terrifying for anything that isn't a human.

These would be awesome.
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>>49283617
White.
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>>49283855
I like this.
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>>49283762
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>>49283762
There are a lot of different ways to take magic that I like, but two of them stand out above all else.

The first is the same as >>49284028, where magic is just there and it's unexplained, because you don't really have a need to explain it at all. It loses its magic, in a sense.

The second I like in science fantasy, which is that magic is true mastery over the universe around us and, through the scientific method, mortal understanding of the universe will eventually progress to the point of magic. Think of it like Dust from the Endless universe, foresight and the spice Melange from Dune, or CHIM from the Elder Scrolls.
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>>49281859
Curious - which are most and least popular ones? I also like Yin by the way, though I like Falchion the best. At this point there's so many though it kind of feels bad to have to settle on just one. A lot are pretty good depending on the situation.
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>>49283891
>Takes the time to make a build and writeup for a long fetish CYOA.
>Doesn't include her own fetishes.
I don't understand.

And am I the only one who finds this whole embracing being an onahole and egg incubator with no free will for an eldritch abomination thing a tad creepy? Especially with the claim that it's like totally not a fetish?
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>>49280385
i know this one!
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>>49284202
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>>49276859
Fuck man, does anyone have that WIP of the DLC for this?
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>>49284189
I dunno, that's my fetish and its one supported by the CYOA, so as far as a build for it goes, I don't think it stands out as particularly creepy.
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>>49284175
There weren't much of "least popular" ones. There was a poll and a few only had one vote. On the contrary, there were clearly a few favorites. I don't remember it off the top of my head exactly, but I believe succubus, hive mind, volcano, and Miya were all pretty popular.
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>>49280900
I prefer the first version too. Though that's mainly due to the fact that the Illusionist has some skill in combat or stealth to back up their magic instead of being entirely reliant on tricking them. Though I guess the second version does have more options in it.
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>>49283617
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>>49284264
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>>49284256
>>49284215
>>49284202

who would have thought we'd both reply to the same guy at the same moment?
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>>49284264
Anon, I can't read shit!
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>>49283617
Orange.
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>>49284189
Have you seen builds for regular Slut Life? People would do worse to themselves if it meant living forever. I say worse as if being humiliated on public TV for the decades is somehow more horrifying than giving birth to an untold amount of eggs for some eldritch deity, but I digress. Personally I wouldn't, but if someone will, it's up to them.
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>>49283762
I like basic concepts as magic.

>creation
>destruction
>manipulation
>otherworldly (demon magic, divine magic, etc)
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>>49284224
>that's my fetish
Even the part where you completely lose your free will? I'm not hating, but that's pretty extreme. Of course in this case it's coming from someone who claims it's not their fetish, is afraid of and grossed out by pregnancy, and tends to get triggered by anything involving dicks.

Maybe it is just a matter being willing to do absolutely anything for immortality like >>49284323 suggests. Still seems nuts considering she's talking lovecraftian horrors instead of humans, and millenia instead of decades.
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>>49284515
Being trapped/forced into it is part of it, yeah. I'd like to eventually escape of course, which the CYOA does provide.
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Judge my cyoa guise.
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>>49284511

>shitposting
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>>49284762
> Big White Dick.
While the others are great boons, this is the key to gaining what I truly desire.

The love of another.
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>>49284762
BBC
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>>49284797
>being white is the key to love
triggered
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>>49284826
Read the description of the power, please.
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>>49284847
how?
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Honest post: is this style too simplistic? Would it put you off?
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>>49284294
I wouldn't have. I figured that if anyone was gonna reply to him then they would have hours ago. Then I found out you replied a mere 3 minutes before me.
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>>49284893
Oh and please ignore the missing desc. on the last ship, I screwed up on the crop and used the previous save.
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>>49284861
Angling your head the right way. But I'll just type them out.

> Big black dick: Makes you immune to intended harm (e.g. being stabbed).
> Biga white dick: Makes you insanely charismatic and gives you drive and beauty.
> Big asian dick: Gives you +30 IQ poins and eidetic memory.
> Big jew dick: Gives you 100 billion dollars.

I will admit that my eyes are fucking hurting now.
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(1/6)
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>>49284741
>I will whore myself out if the price is right.
You heard it here first guys. Angelanon will be your personal sex slave if you can offer her a good enough deal.
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>>49284893
>>49284947
Text is a little thick, put more padding between the text and borders.
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>>49284949
you're a gent
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>>49284966
(2/6)
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>>49284988
Thank you, Friend.

So yeah, that's why I chose white. They were all favorable options, though.
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>>49284998
(3/6)
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>>49284893
What do you mean by simplistic, the design in general? I think it's fine as long as you make the stat ranges clear, though having too many things color-coded might become confusing for some people.
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>>49284978
Who wouldn't?
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>>49285024
(4/6)
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>>49284986
Alright, I'll pad it. I'll apply it to the others too since they follow the same basic format.
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>>49285046
(5/6)
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>>49285026
By clear do you mean specify more or less what each means? As in, sublight being very high means X amount of acceleration while in sublight speeds, and so on?
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>>49284966
Whoah, OC.
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>>49285071
(6/6)
Spire CYOA, set before and in the same world as Dusk City.
If you have any questions about lore, other cyoas, or anything else just ask, and remember to have fun.

Next CYOAs you will most likely see:

0rder, a large companion Final Fantasy-like cyoa.
Armored Core: Lost War (Remake), a remake of the Armored Core CYOA building your mech from scratch.
Style of Life: Academia!, comfy slice of life things at an academy.
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>>49276907
Here's the second part of this.
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>>49285076
Well that could get complicated depending on what exactly all of the stats were, but it would help if it was more specific, yes. I mean, how big of a difference would there be between Medium / High/ Very High Sublight speed? What would be the use of having exceptionally high FTL speed? I could think of a few reasons to care about that depending on how one activates FTL travel, but I don't know how it works in the setting. If you've got it all figured out already and are just trying to mitigate this concern, more power to you.

I was actually talking about the ranges themselves, so in the picture it would be None (but only for some stats) < Low < Medium < High < Very High, but you brought up a more important point. Yes, how big of a jump there are between each step in the rankings is good to know.
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>>49284966
Wish this ended up earlier in a thread.
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>>49284978

Uhm, well we are kinda talking about immortality and becoming a sorceress who can explore the multiverse when I'm free.....

But anyway if you read the cyoa, you'd know I didn't just "make a deal" with the God. It chose me for some reason and summoned me to it to make me its egg incubator! I won the good stuff in a magical test of wills. It was like a psionic battle or something where I was able to get some good magical boons, but wasn't strong enough to totally resist the God's power.
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>>49285165
Okay I can see where you're coming from, I'll work on it. And yeah I meant the design in general, the simple "illustrations" and the backgroundless simple colour scheme, simple borders deal.
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>>49285213
I apologize Anon. I can only do so much in so much time that I wasn't able to post it last thread.
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>>49284893
I like how it looks. It's refreshing.
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>>49285282
Don't apologize, I wish that for your sake so it'd get more attention.
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>>49284966
Italics is that you?
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>>49284741
Angel, being controlled by a God is totally your fetish. I vividly remember there was a become-a-God Cyoa where your build was exactly that. I remember You said you were a "minor God" but chose one of the classes of major gods so you could have major god powers and got salty when everyone, including the cyoas creator said you couldn't do that. Your characters backstory was that you would make a bunch of shitty gardens every spring and some big important God would enslave you the rest of the year
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>>49285319
Yes it is. What's up Anon? I'm going to be lurking for awhile.
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>>49277849
>- A level of power selection. You can be NPC-level, named character-level, main character-level, or Maiden-tier broken character. Obviously more power = more involvement in the plot and therefore you will be at a higher risk.
More options are always better. Let those wanting to suffer through a gauntlet, those wanting to relax and observe, and those who want to reshape both mountains and history do so, so everybody can have fun in their own way.

>A bigger expansion on weapons. Price stuff differently based on how good they are. Basic swords and shields are cheap, weapons with multiple forms that can use Dust are incredibly pricey.
If you want to be for specific, do always keep an "other" option listed, in case someone's ideal weapon type isn't listed.

>- More semblances, some of which will not be based on the show.
Yes. YES. Part of me want to have as much flexibility picking a semblance as we can pick out a weapon, too. Do you think that's doable?

>- Colored Auras that give you abilities, such as a Aura that regenerates in combat or one that has a "shield-gate" that makes attacks with low force do nothing (small arms' fire, glass etc.)
Again, there's absolutely nothing wrong with more options. The more choices we have as players, the better it is.

One more suggestion is to give us more points as a start. Even with what we have now, I find that I simply don't have nearly enough points for anything. How about some point-giving challenges?
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>>49284966
Can someone post Dusk City?
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>>49285024
There's only one level of Arcane Understanding? It seems pretty useful to have too, depending on what you intend to get up to and who you might deal with. Also the picture for it is the same as Intelligence on the Personal page.

>>49285046
Token's description is abruptly cut short. Very abruptly. Technically it could end there but it seems short compared to the other Phantoms, and the last two Characters also have short profiles, but those Characters probably because they're supposed to be more "normal" people so there's not as much to say about them. Still, don't work so hard to release CYOAs that you leave them unfinished, that would be a shame.

Though I appreciate the picture of Galuf smacking Faris in the back to heal her for the Healing Occult power, since FFV is my favorite.
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>>49285282
Italics I just wanted to say that I liked Flafnir and wanted to ask you why did you changed her backstory?
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>>49285046
>>49285095
Why the fuck did you make the waifus from Dusk City some other faggot's cocksleeves? Do you really think that's going to go over well?

You retconned their sister out of existence too.
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>>49285609
We already had this discussion. Stop trying to force a shitstorm to get your way, hypocrite child.
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>>49285095
0rder and Armored Core! one of those please
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>>49285443
Nothing much. I'm glad to see you're back!
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>>49285071
>it should be noted that her infatuation does however spill into a dark side like a Phantom she use to own, its very obsessive, controlling, and those who get in the way need to be removed.

There's multiple ways this makes sense to me. Could I get a clarification?
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>>49285629
Ok why I'm an hypocrite?
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>>49285612
Their backstory here is also completely inconsistent with Dusk City since they were specifically bought as slaves, but now they had escaped?
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>>49285711
You whined about other people getting it changed through complaining. Now you're complaining to change it.
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>>49285716
What if... We're the uncle?
And we just saved them, buying their loyalty?
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>>49285505
>Token's description is abruptly cut short. Very abruptly.
Nah left out the period after entertain.

>..Last two Characters also have short profiles, but those Characters probably because they're supposed to be more "normal" people so there's not as much to say about them.
Exactly

>>49285612
>Why the fuck did you make the waifus from Dusk City some other faggot's cocksleeves?
Does it matter?

>Do you really think that's going to go over well?
Yes.

>You retconned their sister out of existence too.
Did I? Did I really Anon?
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>>49285735
No, because in Dusk City it is as I said. Bought as slaves for money. It even lists how much they cost. That's not consistent with them being escaped slaves under our control.

Also means we cucked our nephew/selves. Fucking retarded.

>>49285741
>Does it matter?
Yes. Do you really think people who played the older CYOA and liked it want to find out their uncle cucked them? That their waifus are some other jackasses used goods he just threw at you when he was done?

Also see >>49285716 for how you fucked up your own lore consistency.

Why didn't you make them new kitsune to avoid this issue?
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>>49284949
You could have loaded it in a paint program or image viewer, desaturated it and then adjusted the now grey words till they were black. Way easier on the eyes, but really that piece of shit isn't worth the trouble.
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>>49285734
Yes I want it changed but I gave reasons as to why it was better the way it was before.
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>>49285741
So what's a seed? can't seem to find it anywhere.

Intelligence and arcane also have the same picture.

Also no phantom origin? i am disappointed..
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>>49285741
Honest question, why have you put in so much cheating shit in your CYOAs lately?
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>>49285427

It is not! I didn't really like choices for that cyoa which is why I never fixed build or reposted it. Best build I could come up with that I kinda liked was minor Goddess of spring or flowers or something where a major God or Godess would keep me locked up until spring time and then let me loose to make flowers and gardens when it was time. But I wasn't really being controlled or used for anything else. I honestly didn't really like that cyoa or that build that much. I'm so sorry creator of that cyoa! Pls no offense, it really just isn't for me! Lots of other anons made good builds for it and loved it!

I'm definitely sub, but I'm les and am way not into anything to do with pregnancy or guys or genderless eldritch Gods or tentacle monsters. I am into being used as a sexual object and being thought of like a valuable cherished tool or toy though.....
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>>49285794
True, but moving my head merely took a few seconds.

Both actions and consequences were meaningless enough not to warrant any actually effort either way.
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>>49285612
Did he serious fuck over the most popular characters from his CYOA?
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>>49285716
You could just say the Dusk City CYOA isn't canon in this timeline. There's no reason to suspect that it is, other than the one side story. It's certainly painted as a much brighter picture compared to its original incarnation, it's almost an entirely different city.
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>>49285839
See >>49285095
>Spire CYOA, set before and in the same world as Dusk City.
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>>49285741
I can't find Nani either.
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>>49285804
A, Seed is a pure blooded mage.

>Intelligence and Arcane also have the same picture.
Re-using assets.
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>>49285867
Do you hate the people who play your CYOAs?
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>>49285825
Yes, now you uncle fucked your kitsune and now you're just a replacement dick for his cumdumps.
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>>49285223
>Angel wins a contest of wits against an eldritch God
I think you got played.
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>>49285922
Italics confirmed for shitting on Dusk City fans.
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>>49279308
>>49285815
Lol angel everyone has fetisges you don't need to be ashamed
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>>49285897
>Do you hate the people who play your cyoas.
No or I wouldn't be making cyoas Anon.

>>49285866
Anon just because a character isn't mentioned doesn't mean they don't exist.

Nani exist, but she isn't in Chalice. I should've made it clear Spire is set WAY before Dusk City, there is a huge gap.
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>>49285967
>>49285953 wasn't my post Anon.
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>>49285741
>Does it matter?
>Seriously wondering if people are going to care if someone came in and fucked their love interests.
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>>49285847
In the same world doesn't mean much. The world is big, much bigger than it used to be. There were only two sides to Spire before, East and West. Since it's set before Dusk City, yes, the events of that CYOA could just be different depending on how things work out with the Stories. You can change the shape of Spire doing so, that's the whole deal with Actors and Stories and etc, so it wouldn't necessarily play out the same way down the line. And considering you can be a girl in the CYOA anyway, I don't think you're a replacement for some guy's uncle.
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>>49285967
Where's the Panthom origin italics? It's much more interesting.

Also reusing asset that's obivous is not good italics~

Still no item sections too?
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>>49285967
>No or I wouldn't be making cyoas Anon.
So then why did you fuck over every single person who picked Kyab and Kyur?
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>>49285934
Not really that far-fetched, Azathoth is blind idiot eldritch god after all.
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>>49285967
What about the continuity error pointed out to you >>49285716 ? I know you like to ignore criticism, but this is a straight up logical failure on your part.
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>>49286011
It's intended to be the prequel. Some other guy is fucking your waifu. That's the problem here. Stop being a moron.
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>>49285681
If that's a no, could maybe someone else chip in? Is the last part talking about the phantom? If so, does that mean it's still relevant despite the 'use[d] to own'?
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>>49284966
I didn't care for Dusk City, so I never developed an emotional attachment to that story or any of the characters therein.

>Male
>Saint Orlindce
>Technologist

>Abilities:
Strength 3, Speed 2, Endurance 3, Intelligence 3, Swordsman 3
>Phantoms:
Black Knight, Ryuu, Ghost Trick, Tea Time

>Characters:
Baron Streigo Dracul, Lana Arcideal

>Main Story: Hell's Falling - Free the Saint
>Side Stories:
Dusk City Trouble, Defense of the Sakura Tree - Defend it
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>>49285967
At some point you're going to have to listen to people and realize that it doesn't go over well when you do this shit to characters.
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>>49286044
Just view the thing as separate timelines or something. I guess it could also mean that they were captured again, but that would be pretty grim, I guess?

>>49286102
What are you going to do? Stop buying his CYOAs?
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>>49286019
>Where's the Phantom origin? No item sections too?
To be honest a Phantom origin/Items sections never crossed my mind Anon until you now said it.

>>49286024
>So then why did you fuck over every single person who picked Kyab and Kyur?

>>49286044
Anon. They were bought in slavery in Dusk City, as of now (Right in the Spire, the cyoa set WAY before Dusk City) they are free wandering the streets.

What continuity error is there? Do I need to tell you they were recaught in the deep future, or it wasn't obvious? I'm just asking now man.
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>>49286126
>Just view the thing as separate timelines or something.
They are not. See
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>>49285934

I didn't totally win. I was able to win magical gifts like immortality, but my body still got changed to be perfect for egg incubation and I still had to put the collar on in the end.....

>>49285961

I have fetishes, but those aren't them!
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>>49286143
Missed the quote >>49285967
>Spire is set WAY before Dusk City,
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>>49286102
Those people have the emotional maturity of 3 year olds if they're getting so fucking triggered by the blight of fictional characters with 1 or 2 short paragraphs of background.
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>>49286139
>Just greentexting me.
You did. You have people's waifus belong to and get fucked by some other asshole.
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>>49286173
Most people don't like their player character getting cucked, anon.
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>>49284966
One of the few things that I like more than magic is tecnomagic
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>>49285967
To be honest, I'm glad Nani isn't there. You ruined her sisters, so at least she was spared that treatment.
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>>49286192
Social awkward and emotionally stunted NEETs aren't most people.
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>>49286179
>Just greentexting me
Accident forgot to reply.

>Get fucked by some other asshole.
Anon if Kyab and Kyur are fucked by you that's up to you in this cyoa. You can ignore them if you want to.

They were slaves by the time Dusk City rolled around. If they were fucked by others who knows. Just calm down my friend, its a cyoa, its for fun.
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>>49286216
>Seriously implying normal people enjoy being cheated on
Where have you been the entire history of humanity? Your fetish is reviled.
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>>49286063
But you can be a girl, Anon. How can a guy take your slave waifu's purity if they're bound to a girl?

I still implore that "set before" does not imply "no matter what series of events occur, things will happen in such a way that this will always follow". Mass Effect 1 is set before 2 and 3, but they don't have to play the same every time. They can if you want them to, but they don't have to.
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>>49286192
Always wondered why people so triggered over things like this?

Are y'all just care about virginity or something? It's not like if you pick them they are cheating to you.

And not even talking about if they are even got raped in the first place.

Also i'll wait for phantom origin itallics
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>>49285095
At least you got people's attention.

So are the Main Quests' (Lie/Half-Truth/Truth) parts the measure of difficulty?
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>>49286139
>they were recaught in the deep future
You mean we are going to die in that cyoa? D-don't do this to me, man.

>>49286173
I mean, I can understand people getting somewhat mad if something happens to well developed character they've grown attached to, but this is really overreacting.

>>49286179
No, Anon. You are the other asshole.
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>>49286228
>Anon if Kyab and Kyur are fucked by you that's up to you in this cyoa
You know it's what happened. You know the intent and what it means.

>It's for fun
Why do you think it's fun to fuck over your players with this sort of thing?
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>>49286158
But you're acting like you actually lost in a contest and won and lost the things in your build, but irl you CHOSE to pick this things. So you wouldn't have picked them if they weren't your fetish. Angel, the only reason people are mad about this is that you keep denying it. A lot of these people have worse fetishes than that so if you just admitted it no one would care.
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>>49286243
Anybody that thinks lesbian sex doesn't count is a retard that isn't even worth replying to.
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>>49286228
>If they were fucked by others who knows
You know where you are, right? By saying that you probably triggered 1/3 of the people here.
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>>49286139
I'm pretty sure another reason why people are upset is that they felt like they had a special bond with those characters in their backstory, but now that you introduced this, that's no longer the case.
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>>49286240
We had polygamy longer then monogamy anon.
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>>49286311
That's not the same thing. Especially when you consider polygamy is a guy with multiple wives.
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>>49286311
That is really, really not true.
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>>49286257
Not him, but while it's typical in CYOAs with any sort of waifu option, it's not at all atypical in the genre that some family servitor spirit or what not gets passed down through whatever means to a younger generation with purity intact. That's happened a number of times in anime. So yeah, it's very possible they get banged, but I don't think it takes a logical leap at all to say they aren't. No more than any other immortal or semi-immortal spirit in whatever CYOA.
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>>49286076
It's implying that Lana used to own Ruin before subsequently "throwing him away", and that's where he picked up the Yandere tendencies. So she can be a Yandere at times, but she's not full-on crazy like Ruin is.
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>>49286249
No, it's a different character within the context of this world.
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>>49286340
They're not a family spirit. They're purchased slaves.

And you know what this CYOA is and what the point of the option is there for. They're getting fucked.
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>>49286327
Even then most societies were monogamous, and even among tribal societies that is most often a thing.
Sure, among the elite a few guys take profit, and you can name like two polyandric tribes, but other than that humanity is mostly monogamous.
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>>49286278
Okay Anon. I just hope the game of pretend the author has presented to you works out in a way that you enjoy in the end. It's up to you if you want to enjoy it though.
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>>49286366
It won't, because he went out of his way to make sure it wouldn't.
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>>49286139
>>49285811
Answer the question.
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>>49285095
Tea Time phantom has a typo, called team time in one of it's descriptions
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>>49282373
Name:Conqueror

Both

Villain

Heroic

Female

Breasts: Flat
Ass: Petite
Penis: Huge
Eye Color: Red
Head Hair: To ass
Body Hair: Bald
Hair Color: White
Voice: Smooth

Modifiers
-Restricted Infusion (+1p) (Vaginally)
-Restrained Donations (+1p)
-Phylactery (+1p)
-Enhanced Production (+1p)
-Hypno‐Junk (+1p)
-Edging Amplification (+1p)
-Forced Denial (+1p)
-Sharing is Caring (+1p)
-Multi‐Membered (+2p)
-Coming Apart (+2p)
-Super Swimmers (+2p)
-Shock and Awe (+2p)
-Wild Side (+2p) (Alien)
-Generator (+3p)

Tools
-Butt Plug of Power (-2p)

Adversaries
-The Milkmaids (+3p)
-Barbara Sidekick‐No‐More (+3p)
-The Mountaineer (+3p)
-The Trupta (+6p)
-The Keeper (+6p)
-Doctor Robotica (+3p)

Allies
-Andromeda the Amazon (-1)

Wealthy Philanthropist (-5)

Powers
-Minor Resistance (‐0p)
-Thermal Immunity (‐1p)
-Disease and Toxin Immunity (‐3p)
-Magical and Psychic Immunity (‐3p)
-Complete Physical Immunity (‐4p)
-Perfect Healing Factor (‐5p)
-Super Strength (‐4p) (Buttplug)
-Super Speed (‐4p)
-Enhanced Mind (‐0p)
-Super Grip / Wall Crawling (‐0p)
-Disintegration Beam (‐6p)
-Teleportation (‐1p) (Buttplug)
-Thought‐gasm (‐6p) (Buttplug) (Use on self to prevent orgasms.)
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>>49286248
>At least you got people's attention.
For the wrong reasons apparently.

>Main Quests (Lie/Half-Truth/Truth) difficulty.
Yes, and no. They reflect the main story going on in Chalice involving Saint Orlindce

>Destined Peace
Is a lie because its not dealing with the cult, but focusing on the actions of a tribe planning a false flag.

>Infinite Regalia
Is a half-truth due it focusing on Saint Orlindce and the Church performing a crusade to retake Chalice, but ignores the cult though.

>Hell's Falling
Self-explanatory. Its the true story behind the Saint and Chalice, also it completely deals with the cult.

>>49286249
>You mean we are going to die in that cyoa? D-don't do this to me, man.
You're a different character from the one in Dusk City.

>>49286292
Anon hopefully I didn't trigger anybody.
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>>49286391
Even when i like the sisters from before, i still fine with them right now.

Even if your loved ones raped in the past doesn't mean they are cheating on you.

Even if you are saying purity, what's the measure of purity anon? Are yourself even pure anon?

Even after all that you still haven't present any logical reason anons.
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>>49286437
>For the wrong reasons apparently.
It's entirely your own fault. You got this exact same reaction to every single one of your CYOAs lately for shoving this sort of disgusting fetish in.
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>>49285811
>>49286408
What do you mean by cheating shit?
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>>49286391
Its almost as if abject misery, sadness and vitriolic anger are the only emotions he can feel.
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>>49286441
>are you pure
"/tg/ - Traditional Games"
Considering this is one of the last place targetted by satanists looking for sacrificial victims, odds are he is.
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>>49286456
Every CYOA you do lately has some infidelity shit shoved in there or otherwise have characters slut it up a bunch.

>>49286462
I agree, something fucked up has happened to Italics' brain.
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>>49286441
You're the guy who keeps masturbating to how you want Flafnir to be raped, I don't think anyone wants to talk to you anymore.
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>>49286475
Nahh probably because not worth that much as offering.

Sides Virgin doesn't mean yer are pure anon
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>>49286441
>Even if you are saying purity, what's the measure of purity anon? Are yourself even pure anon?
... what? Unless you don't know what place you currently are, the answer to both should be pretty obvious. (Also, yes, I obviously also keep myself pure)
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>>49286437
>Anon hopefully I didn't trigger anybody.
>He says after his own stupid decisions have resulted in the thread being full of it.
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>>49286512
Ah no, i don't even read the orphanage's part actually.

Still haven made past the move part, so much numbers.
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>>49286362
I know most people will, but there are other alternatives. Bang their mom and adopt them as daughters instead for example?

Furthermore, let's just take a hypothetical. Suppose, as this is a prequel, that one wants to just include immortal spirits in it that should be present in the timeline. Is there any other way this could reasonably be done then placing then selectable characters? They're included in about as neutral a fashion as you can get. You either make them explicit sex options or you throw them in some no-sex-allowed convent or something. Either way, they're getting only getting to be more of a fetish.

Ultimately, is there a way that they could be included at all that would not be considered bad?
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>>49286520
I think a decent amount of satantic rituals won't exactly discriminate between kinds of virgins.
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>>49286543
>I know most people will
Then that's what happened. They're the fucker's servants, after all, and most masters clearly fuck them.
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>>49286520
You can only be a true wizard if you don't even ever touch yourself.
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>>49286258
>>49285961
From Wikipedia on Psychosomatic Dyspareunia (what Angel claims she has):
>Cause may be, feelings of guilt or shame, and fear of pregnancy.
Psychological Vaginismus (essentially another word for the same condition):
>People with vaginismus are twice as likely to have a history of childhood sexual interference and held less positive attitudes about their sexuality
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>>49286558
Hey i don't think i've heard whether you can't touch yerself after becoming wizard~
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>>49286569
>People with vaginismus are twice as likely to have a history of childhood sexual interference and held less positive attitudes about their sexuality

She's probably a Mormon.
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>>49286556
So basically you are stating there is no possible way they could be included without them being rendered impure, even though it would be implicit in the original CYOA that they existed in the past?
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>>49286587
I like how you think anon
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>>49286660
He's the one that forced in that lore. They shouldn't have been in this CYOA.
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>>49286454
>You got this exact same reaction to every single one of your CYOAs lately for shoving this sort of disgusting fetish in.
>Every CYOA you do lately has some infidelity shit shoved in there or otherwise have characters slut it up a bunch.

The only recent cyoa I posted/completed was Pokemon Personified and that was a month ago. The only thing complained about it was Fafnir which I corrected. I don't shove fetishes into it, you would definitely know if I shoved fetish in it.

How about I just uncanon Dusk City? Make it gone? The history of it never occurred? Would that make you guys feel happy? This shit over Kyab and Kyur is ridiculous. Come on, Anons.
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>>49286687
Recent in general. As in the last three or four CYOAs you've done.

>I don't shove fetishes into it.
Kyub and Kyur's presence in this CYOA prove that to be a lie.

>Uncanon Dusk City
That's the one people liked. That'd be the opposite of what you should do, which is put this new CYOA in a different world or remove the kitsunes.
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>>49286687
Just tell them that it's an alternative timeline or something and it's done.
Never underestimate people who perceive their waifus to be sullied.
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>>49286687
Don't bend over backwards for random idiots on the internet italics anon. Its not worth it.
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>>49286258

In the cyoa universe it was a "contest of wills". That's what it says! And I make lots of choices in cyoas that aren't fetish related. When I or anybody really, chooses a skill that makes them good melee fighter or pilot, that doesn't mean it's their fetish!

>>49286569

Why do people always post this? It has LITERALLY nothing to do with cyoas!!!
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>>49286727
>Childhood friends raised with you
>Supposed to be protective love interests
>Turned out to have been someone elses cum dump.
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>>49286687
>I don't shove fetishes into it
That's obviously because those fetishes are so deeply ingrained into your person, that they affect your every action without you even noticing. If you need help, just ask, I've read the article on Freud, so I know my shit.
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>>49286680
The only forced in lore is that at some point in the past they had some form of contact with a guy. I'm not saying waifus won't be waifus for people going through it, whether the cyoa allows it or not, but this seems extreme to me. If there was something here about them having to seal contracts with sex or being aggressive about it or something, I could see your point, but I think you're taking this too far.
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>>49286687
Different timeline.
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>>49286687
Just switch their names to be closely resembling relatives.
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>>49286757
You know what this CYOA is and why people play it.
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>>49286687
>Fucked up people's waifus
>Expect a positive reaction
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>>49286757
This is purely hypothetical, but what if those female characters weren't written to be waifuable?
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>>49286757
It's like with other fiction. If it's very likely for some character to have been raped, a lot of people aren't going to be happy with 'it might not have happened'.
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>>49286719
But _I_ like this CYOA, Anon. I like Dusk City too, but I like this one more actually. It's not nearly as vague about the Modern Fantasy world it's in, so it's enjoyable.
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>>49286687
I for one appreaciate the work you put in to it, but I think having as an alternate timeline would be a bit better.
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>>49286853
Missing the point.
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>>49278772
Mumble something about an influx of new students, and they'd appreciate it if you help the form into teams? Hva it zero out, or at least reduce your companions as well. Make it state that your companions are just close friends on another team at least.
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>>49286437
>You're a different character from the one in Dusk City.
But the dusk city cyoa is still happening after it, right? So the player character has to either die or lose them some other way.
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>>49286853
>I like this thing because I I find it enjoyable and I like this! :D
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>>49286687
I think there is a small number of extremely worked-up people here. Some others who are having more reasonable discussion sparked by that.

>>49286802
My question is how they would be written to be non-waifuable by virtue of them being fox girls. I guess you could go to a real extreme and say they have some great pact with the future that locks them up like Fort Knox, but you'd have to be pretty heavy-handed.

Clearly, as it stands now, I think it's pretty evident they are substantially more waifuable in Dusk City. There is literally no sexual language in Spire, implicit or explicit, unless you think not defying the leader is enough. It's very very explicit they are waifus in Dusk City.

You could make it more explicit, but it feels like it would be unreasonable and heavy-handed to me at least.

>>49286816
I think author used some inadvisable words when responding to that certainly, and maybe that's part of it. But in the CYOA itself, we are just seeing "Yeah, there are these fox spirits you can take as servitor spirits." Right now we are at levels of Shirou learning Saber was Kiritsugu's servant and going "So, you fucked my dad didn't you?"
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>>49286957
People pick companions as waifus. Italics included them as waifus. A lot of masters are implied to have romantic relationships with phantoms. You fucking know they're getting screwed, all your posting about 'no sexual language' be damned.
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>>49286930
>I dislike this thing because I find this unenjoyable and I dislike this.
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>>49286743
Yes, but when you choose an obvious fetish choice that DOES mean you have that fetish. Melee combat isn't a fetish. Getting egged is.
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>>49286930
>>49286992
>The Author must change everything about his work that he poured time and energy in to making in order to suit my own selfish preferences and removing everything in it that I dislike! Do it or I will make a big poo poo and cry really loudly!
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>>49286977
>Italics included them as waifus
In pure fucking honesty I included them as companions due to how well liked they were in Dusk City, and be nice to have them in Spire with fleshed out character/lore.

I didn't expect the reaction I got now.
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>>49287067
>I put in a bunch of cute girls in my CYOA!
>The same ones that wanted to screw you in another CYOA!
>but they're totally not waifus who'll hop on your dick this time! Honest!
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>>49287067
I am more confused than you are Itallics after all before they are ALSO a slave

And yet people only enraged now, how strange.

Bah those are only trolls and bullies italics, as usual.
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>>49287067
Protip: make strictly companion characters male. So you'll only upset the militant homogay anon instead all of the waifufags.
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>>49287067
You made people's waifus someone elses fucksleeves, and you didn't expect it to make them mad?

People liked them as waifus. But then you made sure that they had been fucking around with some other guy years before you were born. That doesn't play to their popularity.

>>49287089
Mindlessly sucking his dick is not the way to handle this.
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>>49287046
He doesn't have to change anything, but people also don't have to stop telling him that they don't like it. Just because he invested time in creating it, doesn't mean that it isn't alright for others to say that they don't like it or parts of it.

>>49287067
>I didn't expect the reaction I got now.
I honestly don't understand how. I mean, I get it if people are new, but you were even part of a similar thing in the past. By now I would have expected that you would know that people here are very ... sensitive about their waifus.
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>>49287067
Why would people want them to have a different husbando if they liked them?
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>>49287107
Then explain to me anon, the previous dusk city also have them as slaves, and yet only this one triggerred you? Why?
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>>49287067
You expanded their character/lore by having someone else fuck and own them. That was stupid.
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>>49287067
I like Spire more than Dusk City, for what it's worth. Much more fun to build for.

Waifufags will be waifufags.
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>>49287130
There was nothing sexual implied before though.
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>>49285095
Great CYOA Italics, I like the increased amount of options for powers compared to Dusk City.

>Gender: Male
>Origin: Saint Orlindce
>Craft: Technologist
>Strength 3, Speed 2, Endurance 3, Intelligence 1, Martial Artist 2, Techno Magic 2
>Phantoms: Black Knight, Kya Wunder, Sister. Vatican
>Characters: Executioner of Arcadia. Id & Archbishop of Arcadia. Jeane Las Urban XX
>Stories: (The Truth) Hell's Falling, Defense of The Sakura Tree (defending the phantoms)

No more slavery! Using my physical perfection combined with copying the Actor's powers, I intend to free Orlindce and help lead a crusade against Actors who enslave phantoms (Actors who are fine with letting phantoms be free citizens will be spared). I will also help Kya find her children, and since she is a resident of Yu Vona she should be able to help me protect Yu Vona from what are effectively slavers. Maybe I can set up an alliance between Yu Vona and Orlindce?

Don't worry about all the people being butthurt over Kyur & Kyab for silly reasons. With any luck, my crusade will free them from their eventual slavery, changing the course of history for the better!
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>>49287067
Some of us perfectly understand, just so you know. And I actually appreciate that they have some additional history and abilities to them. Dusk City was a CYOA I liked, but it was rather terse being one page.
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>>49287130
Expensive slaves =/= random wizard's waifus. One is getting fucked. The other is probably being left untouched not to decrease their value before sale.
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>>49287107
>But then you made sure that they had been fucking around with some other guy years before you were born. That doesn't play to their popularity.

So people that were in failed relationships and opted out because it was making them miserable and decided to find another person they really liked to form a hopefully more healthy and stable relationship with makes them cucks?
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>>49287067
How many times have you been yelled at for ruining waifus with bad retcons? Yet here you make another bad retcon.
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>>49287141
>>49287153
You are being hypocrite anons, nothing implied anything sexual here either.

Before you said "But they are the servitor for actor!"

Expensive Slave is also the same in that logic anon.
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>>49287156
It makes you a cuck when your supposed childhood friends/love interests are actually just using you to replace their beloved master who they were with for decades.
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>>49287150
>With any luck, my crusade will free them from their eventual slavery, changing the course of history for the better!
That's impossible. Dusk city is set after that CYOA, so it's a foregone conclusion that you can't change that part.
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>>49287197
>nothing implied anything sexual here either.
See >>49287084
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>>49287099
Its good man have a lot of male companions in 0rder.

I now learned my lesson. I will not make the same mistakes as before.
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>>49287188
The replies feed us brother!
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>>49287226
You said that with Pick a Goddess, yet you make that mistake here with Spire.
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>>49287224
And? Not answering anon, is always sexuat for you? That also means the one in dusk city is ALSO sexual yet no one angry there? Why?
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>>49287226
So are you going to change it so Spire is in an alternate timeline now?
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>>49284966
Name: Mior
Gender: Male
Origin: Yu Vona

Craft: Phantom Master

Personal: Network, Level 2; Intelligence, Level 2
Occult: Appearance, Level 3
Phantoms: Bahamut, Black Knight, Ghost Trick, Hadis, Kya Wunder, Kyab Wunder, Kyur Wunder, Token

Characters: Stevenson Von Drake, Ossel

Stories: (The Lie) Destined Peace, Defense of the Sakura Tree (Side: Phantoms)

Information broker and such.
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>>49287252
>I don't know anything about CYOAs or this community and I haven't even read the CYOA to see how phantoms and masters interact
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>>49287150
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>>49287255
>>49287150
>Making multiple builds to push false acceptance.
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>>49287252
Are you new here? This isn't meant to be offensive, but if you know anything about CYOAs the difference should really be clear. The companions are obviously waifu bait, that makes it obviously sexuall.
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>>49287099
>>49287226
Anon meant that if a companion isn't meant to be fucked, make them male. Not to not include female companions if you're fine with players fucking them.
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>>49287271
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Wow anons, still not answering, how is ANY different than master/slave in Dusk city? The basic is the SAME. So why is this one so MUCH triggered you anon? Why?
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>>49287290
Wait, what?
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>>49287205
That's not being a cuck anon, people just have a fuckton of emotional baggage from being a relationship for that long. That shit takes time to let go.
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>>49287317
You're shitposting. It was already explained to you why a high value slave isn't the same as someone's phantom waifu.
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>>49287325
No, it is. There's nothing more disgusting and pathetic of you, and nothing more disgusting and pathetic of them, and it ruins the relationship dynamic in the original CYOA completely.
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>>49287317
Read the original CYOA and come back again.
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>>49284966
Can someone summarize the shitstorm? I thought it was a neat CYOA.
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>>49287331
What Slave did before anon? Are you saying a SLAVE can be Pure while Phantom can't? Who;s in denial here anon? Why?

Isn't it's the norm here where servitor=fucked anyway?
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>>49287347
Something tells me you have never ever formed a meaningful relationship with another real human being, that isn't your parents.
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>>49287362
Yes, because you don't damage expensive merchandise, while the phantoms were included as waifus in Spire.
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>>49287018

But it's weird.....
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>>49287371
>Anon reveals that the only girl he could get was an emotionally abusive bitch who called him by her ex's name and didn't care about him as an individual.
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>>49287361
Kyur and Kyab were slaves to the main character in Dusk City cyoa.

In Spire, Kyur and Kyab are free Phantoms walking around who become your servants. Spire takes place before Dusk City and stuff about virginity.
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>>49287397
Yes it is. Downright freakish in fact.
But it's still your fetish.
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>>49287361
The character in Spire fucked your waifus.
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>>49287347
>Never ever talk, think about or even dare look at another person that isn't me, if you develop feelings or develop positive opinions for another person that isn't me, then you're a pathetic and disgusting cuck, the scum of the earth and deserve to die, I am the only one that deserves to love you and you to love me.

Christ who would ever want to be your waifu.
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>>49287386
Such denial...when the moment they become merchandise, their purity already in question for anons standard over here. Not much different than phantom. But whatever anon, i'll just wait for phantom origin.
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>>49287449
>Post about people treating you as a dick replacement for exes.
>Anon spins it into some unrelated shit about not having friends.

You're a special kind of retarded.
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>>49287347
Hello Ms. Gasai.
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>>49287404
She's your waifu not mine anon.
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>>49287478
You're the one that thinks emotional abuse is the standard for relationships.
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>>49287465
Dude, are you daft or only pretending to be?
In the original there is nothing that implies anything sexual. I mean, sure, there could be, but it's unlikely.
This cyoa includes them as companions and considering that in most cyoas (female) companion mains waifu, there's a sexual element there.
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>>49287521
Ignore him, he's baiting in bad english.
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>>49287424
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>>49287449
There's a difference between talking to someone else and fucking someone else. It's pretty obvious what he's mad at, what you're doing only weakens your point.
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>>49287545
Don't worry Angel, I also have your freaky fetish.
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>>49287521
Not who you're arguing with, but the original straight up says they be anything you want including fuck sleeves due to magic slavery.
That's pretty sexual, bro.
New Kyur and Kyab do break the canon of the other though. It's probably better to just say it's an au for everyone involved.
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>>49287576
I think that's what people were trying to convince Italics of before he went off to go sulk.
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>>49287468
>treating you as a dick replacement for exes.

Pretty immature way of thinking of how people work anon. The first intimate relationships people go through into are usually the one that has the longest lasting impact on their emotional development. Yeah they're going to treat their new partners as dick replacements for their exes, but that's the natural part of that development, sooner or later they will let it go and start treating their new partners as themselves and not as a place holder for their exes. If you either give them the time and space to organize themselves and accept that part of the life is over and move on or don't fucking bother starting relationship with them to being with.
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>>49287576
Their origins aren't (explicitly) sexual though. So if you're some gung-ho waifu purist, you wouldn't mind.
I mean, yeah, the actual cyoa part is definitely sexual.
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>>49287597
>It's natural for you to be treated as nothing more than an organ and/or a replacement crutch for a previous relationship!
You keep claiming I need help, but really, I think you're the guy that needs coaching on what is and isn't acceptable in a relationship, because here you try and say being treated as an object or a prop is perfectly a-okay. That's unhealthy.

Your argument relying on them caring more about the Spire character than they do the Dusk City character only reinforces my point.
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>>49287545
Tell us who abused you, turning you into the broken man hater you are Angel.
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>>49287597
>don't fucking bother starting relationship with them to being with.
That's what they would be/are doing though and which is why they are so mad.
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>>49287562
I don't care, I just want to keep this shitcoaster ride rolling.
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>>49287593
Nah I'm still here mate, not sulking, just going over notes for 0rder characters so I don't fuck up. I think its a good idea.

Spire is the main canon. (Considering its the most fleshed out version)
Dusk City is the alternate universe.
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>>49287619
Tbh, it doesn't seem any less sexual than what it is in the new one.
>>49287657
>Spire is the main canon. (Considering its the most fleshed out version)
>Dusk City is the alternate universe.
See? And now everything makes sense and we can all hopefully enjoy this cyoa that probably took a lot of time and effort to make.
I enjoy pretty much all your cyoas senpai.
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>>49287648
I can understand that (though it's pretty dickish imo). I don't think attacking people on what they don't even believe is a pretty sound thing to do, even if it's intended as bait.

>>49287657
Admit it, this was some evil mastermind ploy to make sure your cyoa doesn't get unnoticed, right?
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>>49287657
Dusk City should be the main canon since it's the one people like and is the original CYOA.
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>>49287638
You are mixing a physical crutch for a emotional one, even people that go through the worst failed relationships can at least remember when it was going good. And they want to hold on to those few good moments by trying to reenact or recreate them in their new relationship.

It is unhealthy but you need to take the poison with the cure.
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>>49287698
This is 4chan m8 nothing is so sacred that it won't be defiled and used as bait.
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>>49287657
>Spire is the main canon.
Nice. It's the one I like and the better CYOA.
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>>49287709
They amount to the same thing in a relationship most of the time. You're being treated as their ex, sexually and emotionally, you aren't a person and don't have value to them.

You don't need to take anything. A person like that should never be in another relationship until they can approach people as their own person and not as substitute dicks. Which isn't a viable solution here, because obviously people wanted to waifu these characters in Dusk City.
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>>49287657
That should be put into the CYOA.

>>49287752
Contrarian.
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>>49287754
It's almost as if all the waifufags that are bitching refused to acknowledge or even interpret them as anything more then dating objects.
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>>49287688
>Tbh, it doesn't seem any less sexual than what it is in the new one.
Why do you think so? I mean considering that they are companions in the new one I think it's a pretty reasonable assumption they get dicked.
Dusk city is pretty obtuse about their past. It can be sexual, but there is also a very reasonable line of thought that it isn't really sexual. The whole 'keep your fingers off the merchandise' thing, you know?
Not that I really care all that much. Getting that attached to some 200 words character seems really weird to me, but whatever.
>>49287706
Stahp. Please. Does it really matter? As long as they are seperated, there should be nothing to get mad over, I think.
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>>49287786
It's almost as if there is nothing more to them. Who would have thought people treat characters written as waifubait as waifubait? I mean, have you even read the original character descriptions?
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>>49287786
What a stupid and irrelevant whining post that has nothing to do with the argument.
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>>49287789
Oh, you mean it's more likely their master boned them than the slavers? Yeah, I'll agree to that. I think it was implied that if they got boned in the first one the whole magical binding would've kicked in.
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>>49287805
I have, But if they truly love their waifus, then they will invest the time and energy to help them get over their problems.

Then again I have a antiquated sense of romance.
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>>49287789
It's going to keep going until he makes the update, probably.
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>>49287851
People don't want to waifu an emotionally abusive bitch who treats them like an object.
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Went from 177 posts to 415.

What happened?
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>>49287018
>getting egged
So that's it? That's Angel's deep dark fetish she's never wanted to share?

I guess it makes sense since it ties together her broad kinks of mindrape, "being used as a sexual object", and just being a sub in general. But it's freaking nothing by 4chan standards. Why the embarrassment?

>>49287640
Obviously egg-laying is a feminine pursuit, so having eggs deposited inside her is something that a lesbian could be into. But I find it interesting that since she's more into getting the eggs put inside her than laying them herself, that it's still fundamentally an act of penetration. Does this make her bi? Or can it still be a lesbian fetish as long as the partner inserting the eggs into her is otherwise completely feminine?
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>>49287865
And waifus aren't real. Now give me your lunch money nerd.
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>>49287901
Waifufags and Italics' latest OC.
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>>49287851
Why invest energy into someone who isn't worth it?
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>>49287865
But those same people treat each waifu they really fucking like as a dating object.
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>>49287935
Nah. You see, those people are attracted to those characters and their personalities. Call them shallow, but they do like them for that. In this situation, the character doesn't even like them for that, they just see them as a dummy they can use to take the place of their ex boyfriend. They're worse.
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>>49287934
Lets be honest here anon, nobody here is worth it.
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>>49287901
People haven't taken kindly to Italics known or unknown sexual connotations towards waifus from another CYOA.

It's interesting to watch, to say the least.
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>>49287849
Yeah, that's what I meant. I think people got mad that their pure virgin waifus were implied to be 'used goods'.

>>49287851
I don't think that's really antiquated. See all the 'troubled' characters and their popularity.
I think that those people just view that as something so fundamental that they don't really consider them 'waifu-worthy'.


>>49287901
People thinking they are getting ntred.
>>49287853
Just deliver me from this evil, senpai.
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>>49287953
>the character doesn't even like them for that, they just see them as a dummy they can use to take the place of their ex boyfriend. They're worse.

That's because she's a social commentary on waifufags.
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>>49287955
Well, it's not like fictional characters have a choice, you know.
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>>49287990
You're not really involved and just wanna get more posts to happen.
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>>49287982
Fundemanetal?
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>>49287997
Nobody has a choice anon, will free doesn't exist.

>>49288037
See you in the next shitstorming session fuccboi
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>>49288051
fundamental. There's a bunch of other spelling and grammar mistakes all over this thread, if you want to point out some more.
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>>49288071
>Nobody has a choice anon, will free doesn't exist.
So I'm assuming you're going to let me fuck you?
I have some condoms, so it's no problem even if you have stds.
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>>49288097
One timeline we are fucking anon, but not this one.
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>>49288133
I'm sorry, but you don't get a choice in this timeline. Or any timeline for that matter. I can bring some lube though, if that makes you feel better.
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>>49288182
Get the aloe vera lube, that's my favorite.
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>>49284966

>Name: Alustaka
>Gender: Male
>Origin: St. Orlindce
>Craft: Actor
>Personal: Strength 1, Speed 1, Intelligence 3, Firearm 1
>Occult: Ice 2, Enchanter 2, Illusion 2
>Phantoms: Tea Time, Token, Hadis, Kya
>Characters: Id, Lana Arcideal
>Stories: The Infinite Regalia, Defense of the Sakura Tree, Witch Hunts

Initially I was gonna subjugate the hell out of the Phantoms, but then I saw I could be a magic gunslinger and I threw away everything I had to in order to achieve this. Damn I'm slick, and smart too. Maybe Wind would have fit better than Ice, but I prefer Ice.

I'll probably still subjugate them, though. It'd be a funny story. Guy grows up in one of the most free places in the world alongside his Militant Church friend, makes deals with Phantoms to help them out, even earns himself a good spot in the church, then it turns out he was working for Lana and the Actors the whole time. But the Witch is okay, I'll help her.
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For reasons.
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>>49284893
>not choosing Scarab-Class 66U
>Enjoy being space cucks to every ship with a pea-shooter and FTL-jamming
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>>49288246
There's upgrades and rooms to help balance the ships, unsurprisingly you guessed one of them.
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>>49288233
Ignore this post I got it.
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>>49285046
>Ruin's profile.
>Male
>Shota
>Yandere
>Trap

Wew lad.
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>>49288414
>Succubus [Male]
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>>49288490
You mean Incubus.
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>>49288414
He can shapeshift into a girl too, but he'd only do it if his Master wanted that of course.
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>>49288555
No, I know exactly what I meant.
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>>49288555
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>>49288586
No such thing unless you're a brain dead retard.
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>>49288819
I know your autism stops you from understanding what a reference is, but you should consider just not posting insulting replies after the source to the reference is rubbed onto your silly face.
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>>49288819
as'well a incubus who targets males by mythos would be called a succubus by title if not by race?
I think, could be wrong.
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>>49282373
Posting more on this as I've had more thoughts over it.

Terrible Suggestion: Instead of letting people become immune to anything and everything, have a default moderate resistance to everything and allowing people to sacrifice resistance to raise another field. Notable stats being Regeneration(Toxins), Physical(Force, Natural Elements), Mental(Mind Control, Espers, Arcane), and Fate. If you only allow two or three with a point cost to reach an unchallengeable state despite weakness in other fields it may balance out. Though Fate resistance is more of a flourish ideal since Propability Manipulation is a real threat, being immune to fate itself even if it creates illogical plot-holes from Propability Manipulation adversaries. If implemented you could say you're fighting fate itself and having to deal with the absolute worst case scenarios each time by using it as a dump-stat. Honestly, I'm incredibly triggered every time I see Phys/Regen/Magic Immunity builds and I selfishly want people to have consequences.

Alternatively, have the myriad of Perfect/Immunity powers scale from energy so people will be hesitant to drain every last drop of energy because they can't be stopped even when at 0-20 Energy.

On Balance; Nerf that Perfect Heal's Toxin resistance to a day or so instead of instantly, it's basically just Minor Heal and Toxin Immunity Combined together at this state.

If nothing else, having a Resistance/Immunity to ill Fate itself would be a handy durability power for the list, even if it does render most of the Adversaries to nothing more than a hindrance as long as you don't get defeated from a meager thing as stagnation removing your sense of danger.

Still wishing for that alternative discharge that allows for a 100% efficiency and extension infusion duration but only transfers a few selective at a time to make infusion less risky. But there's always headcanon...
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>wake up
>340 new posts
Did Beri post more OC?
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>>49288930
No, just the usual shitposting.
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>>49288930
Not Beri, Italics. >>49284966

Resulting shitstorm courtesy of waifufags.
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>>49288969
Why is there a shit storm over waifus? I just got here and I don't know what the fuck is going on.
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>>49288969
Well, Beri *and* Italics, but Italics' is the reason for the post surge.
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Has there ever been a 'You are the apocalypse' CYOA? I want to make one, but if it's literally already been done, I'll probably do it anyways, but hey, I want to make it at least a bit different
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>>49288930
>>49288976
The big shitstorm is Italics posted OC and fucked with peoples' waifus from his last CYOA. There was also a smaller shitstorm around Angelanon making a Slutlife build that's a breeding machine for an eldritch horror, and insisting it isn't fetishy. You know, the usual stuff.
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>>49288976
One of the more common reasons: perceived cuckery. Self cucking, to be specific.

Ultimate result was Italics declaring Dusk City to be an alternate timeline, with Spire being the main.
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>>49284557
This is so you don't feel guilty, right?
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>>49288998
Italics did nothing wrong.
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>>49288985
I'd like that alot, actually. Especially if you're apocalypsing the shit outta things for revenge.
Maybe after gaining control over what you were used as a sacrifice to stop?
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>>49284966

Len Glasgrave
male
dusk city
phantom master

speed 1
intelligence 2
stealth 1
firearm 1

appearence 2

bahamut
black knight
ghost trick
kya wunder
kyab wunder
kyur wunder
ryuu
tea time

lana arcideal
archbishop jeane las urban xx

(the truth) hell's falling
rise of the twilight tribes
dusk city trouble
defense of the sakura tree
puppet of bordicca
witch hunts

> A young industrialist' son with a small company inherited in Dusk City that just wants to live a normal life away from violence
> Finds out that he has a strange draw that brings phantoms toward him, usually helps out because he is able with the excuse that "I guess it just can't be helped"
> His rising success has drawn attention from some rather important people, and his (un)luck with the spirits will draw him deep into some of the mysteries surrounding the world
> Other than a spot of intelligence isn't actually all that good at much, probably answers all questions with things that both sound lazy and plead for middle ground peace

anime protagonist incoming. Sorry for the cheesiness, have Ryu with a gun.
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>>49289016
No, the lost of control is just one of the fetishes involved.
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>>49288969
Ah. Can't say I'm surprised.
Thanks for letting me know!
>>49289004
Then why does it matter when this is a different timeline? They're different people now.
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>>49288915
'Kinda wrong, Incubi invade women's dreams and get them pregnant (sex may or may not happen), Succubi use sex to eat people's souls/life force, traditional gender assignations have nothing to do with the mythos and everything to do with Victorian homophobia.
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>>49289020
The only thing Italics does wrong imo is not proofreading his work hard enough. It's really... something at times. Typically he's close, so I tend to overlook it.
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>>49289096
Thanks i always get my classic and modern myths/focklore mixed.
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>>49289087
>Then why does it matter when this is a different timeline? They're different people now.
They weren't different to begin with, Spire was initially a prequel to Dusk City. The change was the result of the shitstorm, now all is well.

Shitstorm'd probably still be going, otherwise.
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>>49289132
Still needs to be an update to reflect it.
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>>49289020
He did everything wrong.
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>>49289132
>Spire was initially a prequel to Dusk City.
>Only reason Dusk City actually got fleshed out in the cyoa was for this reason.
>Shitstorm makes them two separate things because of waifus.

Makes you think.
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>>49289132
Oh. Well it still sounds silly, but I guess that's just because I don't grow attached to characters like waifu-guys do.
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>>49289194
Waifus are the key!
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>>49289194
Maybe he'll learn his lesson about shitting up previous established characters now. You know, after the fourth time he's failed at that.
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>>49289201
It is silly, but such is the nature of those who form attachments to fictional characters.
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>>49289220
Be honest, Anon: Is it really that bad, or are you overreacting just a bit?
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>>49289276
It's that bad.
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>>49289276
>The "defilement" of pre-established characters is so great that it destroys any value the rest of the CYOA has in its entirety

You knew the answer you were going to get, friend. Why ask?
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>>49289312
I haven't read it yet so I wouldn't know. It's common for waifu-guys to assume the worst of everything.
I remember Italic's "pick one of these four waifus". One option was she's easy to be manipulated into buying stuff, like she can't say no to people selling her stuff over the phone.
Somehow that translated into her not saying no if someone wanted to fuck her.
Waifu-guys are odd.
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>>49289423
The cyoa basically states the phantom master lad gets to fuck his pets and they are attracted to them.
So no, and I am not even invested in it. I skimmed that stuff and then realized it wasn't my kind or CYOA.
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>>49289448
Yeah Italics' one defense was 'they might not be getting fucked!' but he made it so they'd be all over your dick. Really shooting himself in the foot.
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>>49289312
This conversation probably belongs in /lit/ but with how frequently it is happening here with Pokemon personified and now this I feel it is worth bringing up.

Writing usually has two participants, that being the author and the readers. Writing is a one way communication by nature, meaning it's supposed to transmit an idea to be used in one direction. We don't usually think about it, but there are two 'personas' taken on whenever somebody puts something on paper to be read by someone else. That is, the narration and the audience.

See, if I were to describe a tree, tell you it had dark leaves, was tall as a house, had rough and crumbly bark that was sharp in the hand and smelled of the forest, chances are you would paint a pretty decent idea if a tree 'like' mine in your head based on your own experiences. It will be 'like' my tree, but it will never be exact. We humans can't directly beam things into each-others brains, so we use words and descriptors to paint a picture. As a reader playing the part of an audience, you sit down and try and build your picture with the pieces the narration provides, constructed by the narrator. The important part here is that the reader and the author never interact. In every piece of writing, the reader is always interpreting what the author means through their imagined narration of it.

My point with all this is that 'the character didn't necessarily change.' Anon's reading of this description changed the way they saw the character, sending them into a rage when their waifu was 'defiled,' but weirdly enough by the very nature of writing that isn't necessary. Now that's not saying an author's update never changes or recons a character, but in this case with a new world building and interpretation it's a rather unfair assumption to make.

But that might all be a bit much for a Chinese cartoon image board. I'll simply end with "Interpret it however you want" and leave it at that. These are just imaginary games after all.
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>>49289484
No, the character changed because the author put them in a new situation and had then interact with new characters. In this case, inserting a new romantic interest for them.
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>>49289484
Interpretations that ignore facts are completely worthless.
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>>49289526
> the author rewording his character to better fit in with his idea of them is bad and I want the person I imagined her to be back.

Then just read dusk and disregard this one anon. It's not hard.
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>>49289484
I liked this. Your post had a nice flow.
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>>49289579
>All new things are good.
The author shitting up previously established characters is bad.

This one can be disregarded NOW because they exist in different worlds. Originally, you couldn't disregard them, because both were canon to each other.
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>>49289593
Sadly, his post is wrong because it relies on the idea that the reader should ignore facts they don't like, and that the author can never be at fault for a bad update because of it.
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>>49289593
Well thank you.

>>49289595
I'm sad you can't enjoy the first book in a series without hating the others then, anon. I don't know what else to say for you.
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>>49289595
You know what would be fun?
A regular waifu CYOA. But then you make a prequel afterwards explaining why the girls act as they do.
Waifu 1 has a hard time with intimacy because she was raped, Waifu 2 gets off calling you "daddy" because she was verbally and physically abused by her father, Waifu 3 has no contact with her family because she's transsexual.
Hint at these secrets in the original, but never say it. Let the player imagine why the girls act the way they do, then crush those expectations.

The butthurt just might rival Waifu Surprise.
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>>49289604
>a bad update

Opinions are funny things, anon. I'd say this world is more thought out and entertaining than the last, but you're free to feel differently.
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>>49289625
It's more like "I like Dragon Age, but Dragon Age 2 is fucking shit."

>>49289636
It fucked up the characters.
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>>49289630
You mean secret box CYOAs? People are way ahead of you there. They were all hated, the end. Thing is, most people don't want to waste time on shit that people hate. That's why shitpost CYOAs are generally short.
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>Dusk City versions were ruined.
>Spire versions contradicted the Dusk City ones
>Spire was before Dusk City.

I don't understand. What's wrong?
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>>49289625
oh this is a GREAT example, i hate some series purely from the second or third books in it.
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>>49289625
Those books are still canon, and if they retcon the history of characters you have to accept that this is what's true now.
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>>49289666
Your supposed waifus were fucked by the Spire city character.
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>>49289680
>Your cum-dump slaves are cum-dumps.
Yes, this was established in dusk city, where is the new information?
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>>49289680
>Your waifus were fucked by the Spire character
Where does it say that, Anon? What implies they are fucked by the Spire character? Who says the Spire character picked them in the first place?
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>>49289666
People are assuming that you have to fuck those two, thus leaving them used goods for when you fuck them later.
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>>49289697
They were someone ELSES cum dumps now.

>>49289701
You know what this CYOA is and why those characters were included. To be waifus. Hell one of the classes says your phantoms all want to fuck you.
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>>49289666
Anons just can't help but cuck themselves, even in their fantasies.
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>>49289667
As is the case in many books. Authors want people to change oftentimes, as a result of their growing or seeing different things. Sometimes, this makes them lose the qualities that the reader most adored about them. It's nobody's 'fault' that this shift happened, and it's why certain characters like comic books superheroes or anime protagonists 'never change.' We like solidarity as humans, but it isn't really who we are as we go through life. Weirdly enough, sometimes our changing opinion on a character is more a reflection of ourselves.

I hated Sherlock Holmes the first time I finished it. Only years later after picking it up did I understand 'why' our quirky and intelligent bachelor slid down the slope of drugs and depression so steeply toward the end. I accepted it, even after he changed, but only when I was willing to take it for what it was.
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>>49289720
This isn't character growth. This is a historical retcon about their PAST that ruined their relationship to the character from the first CYOA.
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>>49289713
Yeah, that's how the slave trade works, I'm still not seeing how this is news. Just because you're in denial doesn't mean you weren't told.
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>>49289743
>He thinks high quality slaves are the same as gutter trash.
Not how it works. You don't touch high quality merchandise, since that loses you money.
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>>49289720
>>49289736
i believe that was implied by his post anon. "shit changes and it sucks sometimes"

Anyone know where i can get the danbooru equivalant to worlds? I need some but if i type in some shit into google it'll be photo realistic, which would throw the CYOA off.
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>>49289666
Italics shouldn't have pussied out and kept them the same just to shit all over the waifufags, and told them he doesn't give a fuck.
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>>49289753
Nah, his post was more about people changing throughout their lives and growing to lose the traits we liked in them. That's not really what happened here.
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>>49289780
Nothing in those entries posted has been changed at any point.
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>>49289752
>Immortal fox spirits
Yeah, but they're like cars, lose half their value as soon as you drive them off the lot, maintain basically the same value after that no matter how much you drive them.
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>>49289664
Waifu Surprise would like to have words with you.
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>>49289802
Are you implying it's popular? That's fucking laughable.

That wasn't made to troll either. The guy was taken aback at the reaction and thought all the 'surprises' were minor and that people would love it.
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>>49289799
YOUNG fox spirits. There was no indication they'd fuck anything at all until Spire.
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>>49289753
That is what I meant to get across, of course, but again I'm on 4chan. It's common fare to expect three inane responses from people who don't bother to try and understand for every sensible word exchanged with that fourth.

Prequels can be a manner of progression for authors, and (to some people's horror) they don't always have to keep to their own cannon if they feel they don't want to. Fantasy is fun like that. I'd go into how Jojo's bizzare adventure is basically the retelling of the same story (seven or eight times by now) with new interpretations of what the characters could of been, or how Metal Gear is basically one retcon after the next done so well that the audience loves them for it, but I think it's kind of useless praising author development to some folks.
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>>49289825
>Young
Only descriptor I'm seeing is rare, are you sure you aren't making more baseless assumptions?
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>>49289844
Well, they look like children and have one tail, meanwhile their older sister has many more and looks adult.
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>>49289842
Man, you're going to suffocate from all that brown-nosing you do.
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>>49289858
A kitsune gains 1 tail per century.
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>>49289865
> addressing the people who actually mean to hold a conversation is ass kissing

Careful, someone might not think you're tough over the internet if you ever try to be civil.
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>>49289893
And thus a sub-centurion kitsune is a young kitsune.

>>49289910
It's more that you refuse to consider that writers can do wrong.
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quick question before archive.

is, lets say, 1500 width too wide?
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>>49289916
>writers can do wrong

Writers have better and worse bits of work, but all practice is valid. No writers do everything perfectly, but I'm far less inclined to listen to folks who dwell on something they don't like than look for something they do. Were it up to your kind, half the books we have as a species would be put to the flame and budding writers lynched for not following your worldview. That's just narrow minded.
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>>49289951
You must get really pissy at editors for slapping down stupid writers.
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>>49289951
Give up, there is (what I will assume to be until given a better answer) Cuck fetishist that tries to insert it into every CYOA they can and about 75% of the ones they can't by following nonsensical leaps of logic to unrelated conclusions.
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>>49289950
1500 is okay I think, but for safety I wouldn't go much higher than that.
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>>49289950
No. Third Worlders will tell you anything wider than 800 pixels is too wide.
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>>49289977
No, I'm taking issue with the way he never considers criticism valid or accepts that writers can do wrong.
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>>49289985
>>49289984
gah, ain't enough time for a conversation over it. it makes it scrollable to the right but if not, the pics are too small. i don't know what to do.
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>>49289963
You don't think some of their weirder shit is amazing? Look what that Hubbard guy did without a proper editor!

>>49289977
> leaps of logic
I mean if you can't follow the argument anon I won't blame you for it. Just go read dusk in the corner and wait for battlemage, I'm sure it'll be exactly like the old one. We could rerun your favorites until it's time for a nap, okay?
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>>49290035
I think criticism is valid and sometimes writers need to be told off for being stupid.
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>>49290042
I think a writer's work is their own and being forced to stick to industry standards is cultural stagnation and creative death.
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>>49290014
1500 is fine. There will always be some idiot who will find something to get mad over.
Generally keep width between 1200-1600 pixels.
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>>49290050
Then you choose absolute freedom for sake of lower general quality. Even for all the fights they've no doubt gotten into with them, only the stupidest and most arrogant of writers would disparage the work of editors and critics entirely.
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>>49290070
I'm not saying they should, but the book equivalent of a cheeseburger and fries made to please the taste of the customer will never be remembered beyond it's time. It's the difference between writing for readers and writing for one's self.
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>>49290088
It's a false equivalency to assume a vanity work has to be low quality, or that a high quality work (or meal for that matter) can't be made to entertain.
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>>49290109
Vanity works that the author did not put themselves into will always fail, whereas personal works with no intent of presenting are by their nature satisfying. I wouldn't be so quick to throw out a relation.
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>>49290156
Self-indulgence is never the height of an art form, else the people drawing Sonic mpreg fanart on Deviantart are doing it more right than anyone else.
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>>49290109
>>49290088
I'm too dumb to follow, what exactly are you arguing? Something about writing what you, the author, like versus what the reader wants?
Because writing to please a reader is dumb. You should do what you enjoy.
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>>49290167
Anon is arguing that work made to entertain can never have value, that writing can never suck or be poorly thought out if the writer enjoys it, that critics and editors are bad, and that self-indulgence is the only worthwhile goal of creation.
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>>49290167
>>49290164

and thus, even the slow sonic kid wins for himself even if nobody else gets it. In it's own way, the disgust with which we regard it can be seen as it's success.
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>>49290181
not that it never has value, only that the value is not in the fact that it was made to entertain.
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>>49290164
Just because self-indulgence isn't the measure of high quality, that doesn't mean its presence is the measure of low quality.
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>>49290184
You do know that mastery and achievement in your art is also considered to be one of the highest pursuits, right?

>>49290196
See >>49290088
>the book equivalent of a cheeseburger and fries made to please the taste of the customer will never be remembered beyond it's time
Sure is dismissing its value right there.

>>49290205
Nobody was ever making that argument.
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>>49290214
>Nobody was ever making that argument.
The argument was clearly made with the sonic analogy.
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>>49290214
Yes, a mass-produced piece of fan bait work will entertain, but that doesn't mean it has any value to the author or as art. Glad you understand.
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>>49290233
No, that was pointing out that you can't consider self-indulgence to be the only or most valuable aspect of a piece of art.

>>49290253
Going in circles here.

Noting about the motive of writing an entertaining book says anything about its artistic value or lasting appeal.
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>>49290260
>you can't consider self-indulgence to be the only or most valuable aspect of a piece of art.
No, it was saying that such things are NEVER the height of an art form, as if they create some sort of spooky art repellent field.
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