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I can't find where I found it but here's my build for it.

I have no idea if Village comes with land to house them, but I'm assuming not. So 9sq miles of Plains will be living space for my subjects, giving the Village a population density of 5555 people per square mile. It's somewhat more than Montenegro (5333 per sq mi).. City wise, it's comparable to something between Guadalajara and Athens in population density.

So the "Village" is really more of a micro-city. I wonder if you can buy multiple Villages. I really wish the Land options gave you more land. There also ought to be an in-between a Manor and a Hovel.

10,000 Soldiers is ridiculous if I can only have 50,000 other people living in my land. I took 1000 Soldiers, which should be more than enough to keep my ass secure and make sure the taxes are paid even if there's no local law enforcement.

I"ll make money through inventions. I"ll fill custom orders and manufacture my inventions, giving me another source of income besides taxes. Taxes should also give a good amount of revenue from the industry and land holdings. That should hopefully be enough to maintain my holdings and have some spending money for myself.

I think to keep the people from getting too upset at me and deflect blame, I"ll let them have a democratic government to manage affairs, If they want more services, they"ll vote for more taxes.


>TERRAIN: 23pt
Mountain (10sq mile): 2pt
Plains (41sq mile): 14pt
Fresh Water (Major River): 4pt
Coastline (1sq mile): 3pt

>STRUCTURES: 26pt
Manor: 9pt
Walls: 4pt
Barracks: 4pt
Industry: 9pt

>PEOPLE: 29pt
Soldiers (1k): 7pt
Immortal Waifu: 7pt
Village (50k): 15pt

>PERSONAL: 72pt
True King: 19pt
Immortality: 35pt
Inspiration: 18pt
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Would this cyoa make a good story? And on a similar note, has anyone thought of good stories for cyoa builds?
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>>48202388
Well, they're mostly story prompts, so if you aren't trying to put a story together through them, I don't know what you're here for. That said, I always liked that one. Actually, I did start sketching out a fairly expanded story inspired by the MG one, and it's changed a lot, but maybe I'll see if anybody's interested in reading it someday.
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>>48202388

I've only ever seen stories based on the Worm CYOA, but there are tons of cyoa's that would make for interesting stories (or at least, short stories).

Some that I'd like to see stories of:
Slut Life
Magical Realm
Gifted
Slut Life
Altered History (the OP cyoa)
Enchante/d/ Rings
The Big World
Disciples
Stardust
Slut Life
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>>48202450
>Actually, I did start sketching out a fairly expanded story inspired by the MG one, and it's changed a lot, but maybe I'll see if anybody's interested in reading it someday.

Well, I'm interested.
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>>48202520
Ahahaha, not now. I don't even know where my notes are, and I'm not confident enough to write a book, even if I'd be dumping it online for free.
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>>48202491
Man, you need to proofread more. You have Slut Life in there three times!
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>>48202552
Okay, I'll wait.
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>>48202559

How embarrassing! I meant to add it fore times.
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Can someone post Traveler so I can post my build (forgot to save the CYOA)
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>>48202569
obviously let her go free and instead of grabbing any tears ask her if she can make me a merman.
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>>48202683
The last thread's still up, but I've been meaning to post this.

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>>48202345
>>48202363
Excellent analysis; I don't disagree with it, nor do I consider it a problem. I fully intended that you'll have to take *some* form of protections in order to live that long; it was further my intent that you could get by without needing level 2 of anything. You did leave out Major Divination, which I believe would protect against any accidental deaths as well. For Spirit Singer, Minor Spirit Singer, in my interpretation, would be enough to greatly reduce the odds of accidents, assuming that you kept up your propitiations. Major Spirit Singer would do it for sure.

And yes, I can confirm immunity to infection is included in the default package.

I'll put some thought into an "anti-accidents" perk but, honestly, I don't think many would take it, due to the redundacy with things like Impervious that everyone is taking anyway.
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>>48202738
Thanks

Name: L3X5GV914Y1076T90V* Codename 'Endurance'
Gender: Male
Age: 3.4632x10^853
Background: The Darkness

[Traits]
Advanced tech understanding
Mathematical Genius
Mechanical Adept
AI Expert
Tech-head

[Gear]
Traveler Leathers
Contained Plasma Saber [500]
Multiversal Timekeeper [50]
Phase Generator [300]
Flux Generator [200]
Venathari Headset MK-182 [150]
Internal Weaponry Module** [300]
Hacking Module [100]
Tech-Virus Cancer Module [50]
Power-Generator Large [400]
Mechanical Transfusion [Free]

[Little Things]
Waste of Skin x2 [500]
Etherial Heart*** [200]
My Best Friend [+500]
That Guy [+500]

[Companions]
Frederick Nietzsche, 302, Philosopher and Consumer of Meat
Indori Magram, 1971, Technical, Wise Crone
Pierre Sorsari, 121, Technical, Expert Hardlight Technician
Temel'Parah Vas Ae, 330, Technical, Engineer of Great and Small

[Other]
Department - Independant
Home District - Tesseract
Hubworld - Terra-D2368 In Which the Future is blank
Panic Button - The King
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>>48202956
[Fluff]
An AI created by an advanced civilisation designed to endure the inevitable heat-death of the universe and record what -if anything- comes after. L3X5 was left the last sentient being in an entire universe and after untold years he was found by a scan from a traveler ship investigating this dead galaxy. L3X5 has a shy personality, eager to meet new people and share new experiences after such a long period of isolation, but too socially awkward to begin such relationships. L3X5 constantly tinkers and experiments on his equipment, body and the capabilities of his mind and persists in a personal philosophy of self improvement and the search for knowledge. One key feature of his origin universe, and the reason that it didn't follow a cycle of rebirth like many others, is that it wasn't merely devoid of etherial presence, but completely negated all etherial influence. This affect also applies to L3X5 and thus, many etherial powers and abilities simply flicker and die in his immediate vicinity. While L3X5 still tries too enjoy the life that he was, until recently, denied, he still obeys his primary

* Due to the advanced nature and long history of his creators, L3X5s designation is extremely long, a result of the multitude of robot models that have been invented by the time of his creation
** Basically all of his equipment excluding his clothes are integrated into his body for ease of access
*** I know it is biological exclusive but I liked the idea too much to refuse, I even paid 200 credits for it instead of receiving any
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>>48202918
I'll repost my build for this.

Hardmode
No special origin

>Body Modification
New body
Age 21
Height 5'4"
Beautiful Face
B-Cup breasts
Petite Ass
Non-fertile Vagina
Hair 1', Brown
Eye Color Green
White Skin
Skinny Body
Feminine Voice

Cum Connoisseur
Hair Removal
Sensitive Body, Erogenous Body, Selective, Right Moment
Refractory Period
Menstruation Control
Gag Reflex
Flexible Holes, Tight Fit
Open Cervix
Elastic Tongue
Always Perky
Do the Evolution, Cybernetic limbs, Cybernetic brain, Android, Dynamo, Tail
Repairbots
Hyper-immune system
Telepathy
Flexible body
Reduced sleep, No sleep
Optimized digestion D/U
Cleanliness
Perfect homeostasis
Detachable limbs
Timeless, Infinite Telomeres, Hourglass
Genetic Cleansing

With Hourglass I can be whatever age I want to be, but it's probably beneficial for my new ID to say I'm a full adult. I'll probably always look younger than I am given my petite figure.

Aside from appearance, I pretty much just "perfect" my body and my sexual performance without getting into any fetish stuff. With infertile, flexible holes and hyper immune system I should be safe no matter what I do, and with sensitive body and cum connoisseur I'll be sure to enjoy it.

I always consider taking Masochist just so I don't have to suffer from things, but that's likely to get me more injured than repairbots can handle.

1/3
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>>48203028
>Housing
Deluxe Apartment, Deluxe Bedroom x3, Walk-in closet, Deluxe Bathroom, Walk-in Shower, Luxury Bathtub Kitchen, Living Room, Balcony, Bar, Empty Room x1
Shared Amenities

>Clothing
Viewers Choice, Viewers Favorite
Walking Billboard

>Food
Bread and Water
MREs

>Roommates
Custom Sexbot, Extended Functionality
Owners (Siblings)

>Neighbors
Victor and Lillian
Charlotte
Marisa
Henry

>Entertainment
Mechanical Tentacles
Tabletop Games
Entertainment System, Vidya
Personal AI, Own Will
Computer, Webcam, Workstation, Virtual Reality Headset

>Owners
Siblings
Succubus
Incubus
Shapeshifter

Maxed out house. Since I'm an android who needs neither food nor sleep nor hygiene most of the house isn't actually necessary to me, but I figured I'd want to have it for either recreational purposes or entertaining guests.

AI waifu. She can use the sexbot, my computer, the tentacles, or even interface directly with my android brain. Fun times, but I got to be careful how I design her. I'm going to need someone I trust with things even more than myself.

Don't really care much about what I wear on the show, and I can't really leave the house till it's over, so I basically just get free points from that section.

The incest siblings get to be roommates, because where's the fun if we aren't close? Boy and a girl, the boy looks like I would have if I had opted to improve my original body (so overall the same but more attractive), the Girl is basically my identical twin now (and thinks the part). If the rules allow it, the girl shares absolutely every build feature, including my other owners, while the boy essentially takes the owner role for both of us.

2/3
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>>48203036


>Experimental Drugs
Sensitivity Booster, Mandatory injection, High Concentration injection, Permanence
Stamina Booster, Mandatory injection, Permanence

>Punishments
Mind Alteration
Vibrator, Vibrators Everywhere, Vibrator Implants
Climax Control, Edging
Sleep Control
Curse

>Job
Escort, Raise, Part Time
Résumé
Cash Money

>Time Adjustments
Long Play, More time x5

>Miscellaneous
New Identity

>Rewards
New Home

Drugs are risky, forced sensitivity boost to the max could very well overwhelm me, but I wouldn't have it any other way. Hopefully my android brain can handle it, and maybe my AI (who can interface directly with my brain AND has control over the devices) can help mitigate things one way or the other. Technically she could even override one of my owners controls on my punishments. I honestly don't trust myself with the controls, I'd probably end up turning myself into a vegetable.

Punishments are basically full-body forced stimulation, sometimes at random but usually at my owner's or AI's control, along with edging and denial until someone lets me cum. I was going to go with the mechanical underwear, but I wasn't sure I'd get any access to my holes to do things the old fashioned way.

Extended time barely matters. I could almost go with "you're here forever" since when I'm done with the show I doubt much of anything is going to change. I'm going to be completely hooked on my owners, especially the demons. I get money all along from the work so about the only thing that changes is I get to go >outside, but I would like to have options eventually.

3/3
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Author please come back and post the secrets page. Don't let the haters get to you.

(1/5)
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Hey, does anyone have that comfy succubus CYOA that came out awhile ago?
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>>48203136
You worked hard on this so don't give into despair
(2/5)
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>>48203136
>>48203152
I dream that you will one day not only come back with the secrets page but with a bigger and better version as well.
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>>48203136
>>48203161
Were there some flaws? Yes but they were small and minor.
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>>48203136
>>48203180
Please comeback. Everyone else has left like Box Wine who I also really miss.
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>>48203197
Updated.
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>>48203197
This isn't the latest version. I don't have the latest version.
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>>48203136
10/10 CYOA. Genuinely challenging.
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>>48203263
Secret Box
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>>48202918

Difficulty: Easy (+40)
Origin: None
Reward: Mind Upload (-10)
Time Adjustments: Long Play (+50), More Time x5 (+25)

Body Modification: New Body (+40)
Age: 18
Height: 6'2"
Face: Manly
Chest: Flat
Ass: Normal
Genitals: Penis
Penis Size: 8"
Penis Girth (assuming this means "width" as 3" girth is fucking tiny lol): 2.5"
Testicle Size: 1.5x Size
Hair Length: 2"
Hair Color: Black
Eye Color: Brown
Skin Color: Olive
Body Type: Athletic
Voice: Masculine
Refractory Period (-1)
Flexible Holes (-1)
+Tight Fit (+2)
Zinc Supplements (-1)
Reduced Sleep (-3)
+No Sleep (-5)
Perfect Metabolism (-5)
Optimized Digestion D & U (-6)
Cleanliness (-5)
Timeless (-10)
Repairbots (-15)
Hyper-immune System (-15)

Housing: Hotel Room + Shared Amenities (-15)

Clothing:
Plain Closet (-1)

Health & Hygiene:
Advanced Health Care (-10)

Food:
Food Replicator (-40)

Roommates:
Custom Sexbot (-25)
+Extended Functionality (-10)

Neighbors:
Crystal (+1)
Tanya (+1)
Kylie (+1)

Entertainment:
Education x2 (-10)
Tablet (-20)
Personal AI (-15)
+Own Will (+10)

Experimental Drugs:
Aphrodisiac (-10)
High-output (-10)
+Mandatory Injection (+20)
++Permanence (+20)
Stamina Booster (-10)
+Mandatory Injection (+20)
++Permanence (+20)

Owners:
Cutie (+0)
+Funtimes (+5)

Punishments:
None!

Jobs:
Cash Money (-20)
Raise (-10)
Monster Breeder (+5)
+Part Time (+3)

I'll spend 10 years breeding cute monster girls, and then me and my AI waifu will be uploaded to the virtual reality multiverse.
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>>48203276
Not happy with the previous Secret Box? Here's another one, but you can't go back after taking this hot monster lady.
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>>48202933
>Your body will be changed so it looks like you fit in
>You will never be Moderately Fit Dude, King of the Manlets

Why have you done this, Anon?
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>>48203203
You sound like a sad person.
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>>48203263
Doppelganger is painfully obvious.

>>48203329
Valentina for similarly obvious reasons. Not nearly as much fun though, there's so much more to sex than just penetration.
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>>48203180
>Were there some flaws? Yes but they were small and minor
It's too early for this
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>>48203136
This CYOA is bad and the author should feel bad.

Also, I hope Quiet steps on a lego.
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>>48203415
He's clearly a damaged person, anon. Don't bully him.
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>>48203263
Dark Matter is the only valid option
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>>48203449
How do we fix him?
Do we even want to fix him?
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>>48202491
>I've only ever seen stories based on the Worm CYOA

Where do you find them? Spacebattles and Sufficient Velocity?
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>>48202077

>>48199921

Do positive points increase the number of points you get in Altering history? Or is it the "negative points" that increase the fate points?
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>>48203329
Ella!
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>>48203741

In the pdf it says you must have balance.
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>>48202918
So, uh, for Powers and Powers+, does it count an entire CYOA as one selection, or just three individual powers from any CYOAs? Because if it's the former, well, that's pretty damn useful.
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>>48203943

The reward comes after you're finished with Slut Life so it doesn't really matter, but it would be rather disingenuous of you to take an entire CYOA's worth of powers as a single power.
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>>48204042
Hmm, the footnotes made it seem pretty nebulous, but the actual entry just says any three powers. Bleh. Not useful, especially considering that I only get one reward. Upload is a better approximation of what I want. If they can straight-up give CYOA powers, though, I can probably invest, and stir the pot on, the money I have from it to buy the ones I want from the virtual worlds I go to.
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>>48202933
Cute World sounds okay...I guess...
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>>48203812
It also says that if your number is + or -, then it will affect your FP in the other CYOA. I'm asking how.
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>>48202388
This one's pretty awesome. I remember making a build for it a few years ago. Let's see how much I've changed since then

>Pink Mana
Really loving the powers on this one. The Trance offers great versatility with obvious drawbacks while it's Aura and Curse combos perfectly with my Ideal.
>Genie
Flavorful and guarantees that I'll always be surrounded by interesting people, if nothing else. My Pink Mana also insures that whomever I pledge myself to is not only very skilled but holds great loyalty towards me. Goes a long way towards balancing the power dynamics in the relationship. Best of all, it makes them reckless, so I won't be stuck with any one master for too long.
>Oracles
I like their fluff best plus they specialize in the same things I will. Privileged relationships with certain Gods has got to come in handy down the line.
>Prophecy
Never can pass up this power when it's offered in CYOAs. Most ambitious people would kill for this kind of info and not only is it my primary, it's also one of the things my order specializes in.
>Meta-magic
>Chaos-magic
>Heresy
Meta and Chaos magic will help me pull off the reality-warping effects I'll want to be performing. Phenomenal cosmic power and all that. Useful for both personal use and wish-granting.
Heresy cause being on a few Gods shit-list sounds like something to be worried about. More importantly, it allows me to someday, with the right, crazy kind of master, commit deicide. Mind you, not for some fedora tipping bullshit. This would be for the bragging rights alone.

So I've got the highest potential for power, a way to circumvent the worst of the drawbacks this potential offers while guaranteed to meet or at least seek out interesting people. Best of all, I might even get to slay a god at some point.
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>>48203329
My answer will always be Valentina!
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>>48202077

Combined with floating slots, the pocket dimension can be used as a training aide, with the ability to change the flow of time by 10x.
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>>48202077
Suggestions for World of Myth and Magic: add special quests that specifically deal with the things you add through the DLC and give more general rewards. Ex. King of the Night, unite 90% of vampires under your banner and keep up the "masquerade" until present day. Can't be picked with Soulless. Ex 2. The Underdark Alliance, help mankind settle and expand in the Caverns and if necessary lead them in their attempts to make peace with or wipe out that which lives there. If taken with What Lies Beneath this quest becomes CONSIDERABLY harder and a diplomatic route for example would be impossible without Polyglot and Shapeshifting minor.

My examples probably suck but I think this could be fun.
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>>48202388
>Cyan Mana
>slothful
I'm already a mage. Why try harder?
>Primary: Abjuration
>Secondaries: Alchemy, Artifice, Healing
Protectin' people, healin' 'em. Makin' things and potions. Simple, straightforward.
>Ideal: The Hydra
Always could use more of me to laze about. Work harder now to do nothin' later.
>Order: Shaman
These guys seem chill. I don't think they'd mind if I just kick back right here and take a nap…
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>>48203329
How can you make 11 girls and no good waifus yet author made us care about them because they are all in despair over being locked here for who knows how long
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>>48202077
If you could pick one cyoa to be real, not just for you but for everyone who has ever posted in /cyoag/ and you would share the setting of that cyoa, which cyoa would you pick then?
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>>48204749
Conduit.
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>>48204749
Magical Realm
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>>48204749
This one. Cool powers, interesting setting and just enough almost furries to upset a few anons.

Talents are way too fucking expensive though.
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>>48204749
Slut life.
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>>48204822
This.
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>>48204815
>Talents are way too fucking expensive though.
Definitely, if anything should be 40 it's the gifts like strength and agility. Superhuman base stats vs expert skills. You can always learn a skill later.

But really nothing should be higher than 20 or 25.
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>>48204838
>>48204822
Of course. It does everything, even other CYOAs, but there's enough oversight that you don't need to worry about other anons running amok either.
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>>48204854
Yeah, I fail to see why anyone would buy engineering (40) or Medicine (40) when Intelligence (10) + Memory (20) costs less. Same for Combat (40). Who would buy that when you can get Strength (20) + Agility/Energy (20) for the same price, be superhuman amongst your peers and ask Pyrrha for some fighting lessons.
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>>48204896
Actually my build takes Combat, Strength, Agility, and Energy all together. Also Fast Mover.

But yeah I think Strength + agility, or even just one is probably better than the combat talent if you are only taking it alone.
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>>48203329
Leona
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>>48204896
>I fail to see why anyone would buy engineering (40) or Medicine (40)
>or
>not buying both and making yourself into a cyborg
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>>48204950
It's just first aid and repairs really. You aren't going to be skilled enough to build and implant your own cybernetics.

You can buy those as weapons anyway, but only a maximum of two limbs and it costs everything you have to do that without upgrades. Kind of shitty pricing there too IMO.
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>>48204937
>>48204950
I'm just surprised the cyoa went all the way up to version 1.4 without anyone pointing out to the author how stupidly expensive talents were. Or did he refuse to change them?
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>>48204749
Magical Realm, of course.

I'm sure that a lot of /cyoag/ would hate having to live in my ultimate paradise, though.

Not like it wouldn't be rad and comfy as fuck, but it's probably not deviant enough nor in the right way for them. I get the feeling they'd get used to it, though, once they gave in to trying to like it.
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Dumping Stardust: 1/8
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Dumping Stardust: 2/8
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Dumping Stardust: 3/8
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Dumping Stardust: 4/8
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>>48205086
Dumping Stardust: 5/8
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Dumping Stardust: 6/8
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>>48204815
>History
New Arrival

>Age & gender
15, there need for some time to adjust to new world

>Race
Human

>Starting Location
Beacon, all other are too calm and boring so it seems

>Semblance
Fast mover

>Gifts
Strength, Agility

>Talents
Tactics, Combat

>Weapons
Melee katana +Cybernetic arm

>Items and gear
Armor+Motorbike

Show me good time Remnant
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>>48205100
Dumping Stardust: 7/8
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>>48204749
I'm with >>48204815, I want my TEAM RAPE to be real.
RWBY has people from the thread be able to work together or compete, without murdering each other for points.
But I want a cooler Semblance.
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>>48205115
Dumping Stardust: 8/8
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>>48204749
Tough choice. Its between the Super Soldier Cyoa and the Gifted Cyoa. I'll post both for shits and giggles.
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>>48204749
So are you saying that everyone would not only share the setting but also get to pick their own choices, or is the choosing only for yourself?
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>>48205150
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>>48204749
Rapture Academy
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>>48205168
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>>48205165
Everyone gets to make choices. Even in cyoas like magical realm that would mean each anon gets their own realm but they are technically still a part of the same multiverse.
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>>48205174
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>>48205150
And now the Gifted.
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>>48205124
Agreed but the show has been pretty low on Semblances so I do understand why our choices are limited. A lot of them are also hidden under Forces of Nature.

Does team RAPE consist of faunus whose main mission it is to rape and impregnate human girls?
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>>48205191
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>>48205202
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>>48205218
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>>48205232
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Sunday OC CYOA


It is based on a webcomic i'm working
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>>48204749
The hell if I know. Pretty much all of them would end in suffering or just don't work with multiple players i.e. one set of unique companions. Looking through all of those I've saved there really isn't a clear choice. Something like pic related could work. Having tens of thousands of people all glamoured and only those who've been changed able to notice the difference in others.
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>>48205263
I don't have good pics so here have this clown for your good work hibiki
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>>48204815
Familiar Face
Human Male(-10points), 17
Beacon Academy, Vale
Semblance: Unstoppable.
Gifts/Talents: Memory(-20), Strength(-20), Agility(-20), Intelligence(-10), Energy(-20). Activate theme song https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=EU7xNXYKvEQ [Embed]
Weapons: Melee will be a two handed meat cleaver like pic, and the second will be a variable Shotgun and Assault riffle combo that can use dust charges (Total cost for both 450)
Items & Gear: Scroll(free), Parachute and Grappling Hook(-150) cant be too paranoid, Targeting Glasses(-150) I can only see so far to make a good shot, Wilderness Gear(-50), Dust Charges(-50) for some extra ammo till I get some steady supply(I am thinking Weis), and a Rebreather(-50) I plan to get involved with the main story shit and stopping the bad guys knock out gas is the best bet.
My job is to hunt down the enemy, then proceed to butcher them. Range weapon is for softening up big targets before I can use the grappling hook to drag the target to me or vice versa. With the raised in world thing going on and our forth wall knowledge I can preemptively stalk out some info on the enemy and give the main cast tip offs early when it counts, primary goal is to make sure gladiator chick doesn't die and to make sure she doesn't get reversed Yokoed like in Gurren Lagan. Any one with me on the ship? Also may try to hit on Ruby in the mean time, or the Soldier chick that works with the cyborg Penny. Don't know who would be on the team but would not be opposed to a cuddly bunny girl. In any case lets chop till we drop.
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>>48205263
>http://powerlisting.wikia.com/wiki/Retrospective_Intelligence
How the hell I can save the world with this stupid power, though Gun Fox might be good mentor because she can teach me actually good stuff
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>>48205195
fuck off furry.
RAPE had a male faun, female faun, male human and female human
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>>48205310
Wrong pic. I am fail.
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>>48205263
>Name: Lance Black
>Ability: http://powerlisting.wikia.com/wiki/Elemental_Constructs
>Mentor: Captain Steele

Am I an improved or inferior summoner? I don't know. At worst I could create elemental weapons for Captain Steele's soldier summons to use. At best I could create my own elemental soldiers.

I think I got pretty lucky.

My name was supposed to give me Dark Knight powers but I'm happy with my random pick anyway.
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>>48205317
My new and improved team RAPE consists of 4 male fauns who just love to rape human girls. Better hide your waifu.
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>>48205351
sounds like there is need of team RARE that consists of 4 male humans that going nuclear on faun settlements
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>>48205360
The show seems to be pretty big into DIVERSITY and EQUALITY so I wouldn't make such a build unless I want team RWBY on my ass.
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>>48205263
Did Hibiki just come out of the closet?
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>>48205372
let them come, kill one pepe and another two will take his place
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>>48205429
So you're actually mutant amphibian frog faunus freaks? Cool.
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>>48205447
That's only our disguise, in reality we are all human survivors of leukemia. Wearing faunus disguise to confuse them
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I will finish this cyoa sometime this week
Hopefully this post motivates me also I am that bored and starved of attention
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>>48204749
>>48205180
In that case, I guess I'd choose pic related.
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>>48205477
And who
are you?
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>>48205477
>this cyoa
Which CYOA would that be?
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>>48205263
>Power
http://powerlisting.wikia.com/wiki/Godly_Incarnation
This could be really awesome, or I could end up being a hobo who gets crucified.

>Mentor
Foxxy
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>>48205150
Doing it again.
Mutagen: Natural Weapon 2
Appearance: Athletic
Faction: Cult (Self Improvement 2) Scientist that worship Human Evolution so we can travel the stars safely.
Perks: Prime Subject, Expert, Celebrity, Charisma, Authority, Armor (will be based on my Mutagen giving me pic related).
Drawbacks: Valuable, Hated, Traitor, Memory Loss, Weakness. Bonus points 15.
Enemies: Fiona Dawley, John York, The Prototype. Using these to get 3 more perks.
Allies: Yuito Kataoka, Alex Keller, Olivia Blake.
Abilities (total points 40): Strength 3, Agility 3, Endurance 2, Durability 3, Enhanced senses 3, Reflexes 2, Natural Weapon 3, Immunity 3, Self Improvement 2, Self Healing 3, Unarmed Mastery 3, Shapeshift 3, Adaptability 3, Mental 2, Inheritable 3, Flight 2(bio rockets), Social Enhancer 1.
I am a bio warrior sent to protect the people and to promote are advancement to space!
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>>48205487
I'm sorry but I always pick Beelzebub and conquer the shit out of the Netherworld so this cyoa doesn't interest me. Netherlord a shit. No way he can beat Beelzebub.
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>>48205541
Forgot, but the traitor will be Jim Boyce.
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>>48204749
The demigod cyoa so we can all become gods. I hope everone here takes reincarnation or immortality, it is the only way to be truely devourer proof.
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>>48205549
>this cyoa doesn't interest me
Don't really care.
>Netherlord a shit. No way he can beat Beelzebub.
Netherlord wasn't alone.
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>>48205477
It's going to be shit, I can feel it.
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>>48205573
Doesn't make much sense everyone would band against Beelzebub. The Netherworld is completely seperate from Earth and only one gifted - that teleporter - can even reach it. Why would everyone else give a fuck about what happens there? Nope, not seeing it. In fact, since it's Beelzebub who gets an exponential power boost if the defeat the Netherlord and not vice versa it would make sense for them to align themselves with him in exchange for gifts since Beelzebub is literally incapable of entering Earth on his own terms.

NETHERLORD A SHIT.
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>>48204749
Conduit, because fuck you I'm turning into a lightning casting, flying, shapeshifting sexual maniac leader of a country of cute elves.
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>>48205263
Name: Caleb A. Marks
Ability: http://powerlisting.wikia.com/wiki/Retrocognition
Mentor: Miss Kyun

Detective Marks. Has a ring to it. Kyun has nothing on me. We've a good synergy though. Should be interesting.
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>>48205603
You pick the dumbest things to be salty about, anon
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>>48205613
D-don't post such lewd boynipples please. I can't afford becoming gay.
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>>48205615
Nah, just find it pretty stupid to make an entire cyoa centering around the conclusion of a battle from another cyoa using methods that were not possible in that cyoa. Sounds like something a pathetic salty netherlord shit would make.
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>>48205603
>only one gifted - that teleporter - can even reach it
Presumably the NJL figured out how to get past that, or it's a refluff of some sort.
>In fact, since it's Beelzebub who gets an exponential power boost if the defeat the Netherlord and not vice versa it would make sense for them to align themselves with him in exchange for gifts since Beelzebub is literally incapable of entering Earth on his own terms.
I think the whole CYOA exists as a result of an RP thing where people thought otherwise. Who knows, maybe that version's Beelzebub didn't even have the power boost thing.
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>>48205263
>Power: http://powerlisting.wikia.com/wiki/Child_Prodigy

So I turn into small boy?
>Mentor: Misha Mion Michael
She's best of the best and even though she's magnum Opus, because of my power I'll surpass her quickly
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>>48205263
>Name
The First & Last, Eater Of Suns & Dragon Kings, Lord Of The Fae, Elves And Anything Else I May Choose Bless With Mine Lordship Of; One, True, And Only God Of All Things Living And Dead Now And Forever.

http://powerlisting.wikia.com/wiki/Psychopotence

>Companion

Miss Kyun
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>>48205643
I'm pretty sure it's the recounting of a RP session a few people had. Or what comes after it. Or whatever.
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>>48205652
Why did they decide to attack Beelzebub to begin with? I don't see what they could possibly stand to gain from it, ignoring that second cyoa based on nothing offering options that Beelzebub could just as easily give them.

I'm still secure in my ability to defeat the Netherlord though.
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>>48205676
>I'm still secure in my ability to defeat the Netherlord though.
why
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>>48204815
>New Arrival
>Human Male (15)
>Haven Academy
>Ghost

>Hope (90)
>Ferocity (80)
>Will (70)
>Intelligence (60)
>Agility (40)
>Guile (20)
>Tactics (0)

>Variable (600) (Assault Rifle/Lance)
>Collapsible (550)
>Dust Mod (500)
>Weight Reduction (400)

>Scroll (400)
>Rebreather (350)
>Dust Collection (250)
>Armor (150)
>Targeting Glasses (0)

I have no idea how fucked I am, since I've never seen this show. In any case, I picked my age to be 15 because I'll definitely need time to adjust to this world. I went with Haven Academy mostly because I didn't want to be at ground zero for shit hitting the fan in Beacon, and didn't want to freeze/boil my ass off either. Ghost has some extreme utility, so I can't really pass that up, but if I knew more about what Grimm were I might have picked that instead. Hope, Ferocity and Will were mostly for combat/overall utility. Intelligence is always stupidly useful as well. Agility synergizes pretty damn well with Ghost, I feel, and Guile is there for when Ghost isn't easily applied to the situation. Tactics just makes good sense, especially with what else I grabbed.

I went with a Variable weapon, with Assault Rifle and Lance as it's forms. No idea how well that'll actually work, but considering Hammer/Grenade has appeared in the show, I'll assume it's usable enough. I made it collapsible, lightweight, and able to use Dust to cover whatever weakpoints my lack of elemental access may bring.

My Gear basically builds upon my idea of keeping myself useful, by getting the Rebreather for even further Ghost shenanigans, Dust Collection for repurposing as ammo and emergency cash, and Targeting Glasses to largely cover my lack of getting Precision earlier. Armor's basically my only purchase that's probably not optimal, but fuck it, I'm not going to pass up the confidence boost and looking like a badass while I'm at it.

Is this show even worth watching? I generally avoid 3DCG because it tends to make my eyes bleed.
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>>48202933
What's the safeword?
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>>48205619
>Not liking the occasional man nipple
It's like you're some kinda faggot or something.
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>>48205676
>what they could possibly stand to gain from it
- Wanting to defeat a demonic overlord, because they're one of the good guys.
- The rewards, that the CYOA is about.
- Wanting to get rid of the salty Beelzebub player.
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>>48205685
Because settings with sorcerer-kings wielding absolute power living in luxury surrounded by waifus tend to get their comeuppance.

I would not be some cliched demon lord who invades entire kingdoms. Instead I'd target the farmers, employing hit-and-run tactics and spread plagues if I have access to those.

Famine and disease cause a lot more instability than an invading demon army which would unite the humans. No, just let the people die of hunger while the nobles and the Netherlord enjoy their endless buffets. The Netherlord is really not designed to combat small bands of roving demons who primarily attack the countryside and avoid everyone else.

Only when the Netherworld starts crumbling under peasant rebellions would I sweep in and take what's mine.
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>>48205695
What is it about people who pick beelzebub? Why are they always so salty?
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>>48205695
>what they could possibly stand to gain from aiding Beelzebub
- Wanting to defeat a moralfag godking, because they can
- The rewards, which would canonically be better because an empowered Beelzebub is many times stronger than the Netherlord
- Wanting to get rid of a waifufag Netherlord player
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>>48202918
>Difficulty
Hard

>Origin
None (technically an oldfag, but I don't need any pity points)

>Body Modification
New Body
Age: 24
Height: 5'8'' (173cm)
Face: Beautiful
Chest: E-cup
Ass:Bubble
Genitals: Nonfertile vagina
Hair length: Shoulder length
Hair color: Black
Eye color: Blue
Skin color: Brown
Body type: Athletic
Voice: Feminine
Add penis, 10 inches
Add testicles
Hair removal
Extreme masochist
Cum connoisseur
Selective erogenous body with Right moment
Magic Hair
Refractory period
Menstruation control
Gag reflex
Flexible holes
Open Cervix
Fuckable nipples
Heart shaped indicator pupil
Elastic tongue
Always perky
Zinc supplements
Easy drainage
Reloader
Embedded testicles
Retractable penis
Flexible body
No sleep
Perfect metabolism
Optimized digestion D and U
Cleanliness
Perfect homeostasis
Timeless
Infinite telomeres
Repairbots
Hyper-immune system
Do the Evolution
Genetic cleansing

>Housing
Deluxe Apartment
Deluxe bedroom x10
Walk-in closet
Deluxe bathroom
Walk-in shower
Luxury bathtub
Kitchen
Living room
Balcony
Bar
Empty room x10

>Shared Amenities
Yes

>Basics
>Clothing
Clothing allowed
Accessories
Hats
Swimsuits
Lingerie
Footwear
Sleepwear
Cosplay
Girly closet
Fetish wear
Plain closet

>Health and Hygiene
Hygiene essentials
Body care kit
Make-up kit
Advanced health care

>Food
Personal chef
Dessert
Drink bar
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>>48205712
>The Netherlord is really not designed to combat small bands of roving demons who primarily attack the countryside and avoid everyone else.
Who said this? Plague and raid parties require much less energy to deal with than demon army and he is quite capable to return such tactics on you. Your downfall will be underestimating Netherlord
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>>48205718
Don't cut yourself on all of that edge.
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>>48205726
>Social
>Roommates
Maid
Personal sex slave x2
Custom sexbot with Extended functionality

>Neighbors
Marcus
Victor and Lillian
Marisa
Charlotte
Crystal
Henry

>Entertainment
Cell phone
Education
Lifelong learning
Alcohol
Tabletop games
Personal AI
Computer
Webcam
Workstation
Virtual Reality headset
Entertainment system

>Experimental Drugs
Aphrodisiac, Permanence
High-output, Permanence
Pheromone booster, Permanence
Sensitivity booster, Sensitivity booster
Strength boostem Sensitivity booster

>Owners
Futanari
Sexbot
Lolita dominatrix
Succubus with funtime

>Punishments
Spanking
Cumbath
Mind alteration
Curse
Forbidden contraception
Tentacles
Climax control with Edging and Manual control
Vibrator implants with Manual control

>Jobs
Monster breeder
Raise
Resume
Donator
Cash money

>Time Adjustments
Long play, 10 years

>Miscellenous
Caretaker
New identity

>Rewards
New Home
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>>48205727
The Netherlord gains nothing from defeating Beelzebub and it's not stated if he can even invade Beelzebub's realm. I'm not underestimating anyone. I'm simply betting my chances on the Netherlord losing due to him being every negative fantasy cliché combined.

>Plague and raid parties require much less energy to deal with than demon army

Look up guerilla warfare.

The Netherlord's strongest power is his divination magic so my plan mostly succeeds or fails depending on how extensive that is I guess.
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>>48205718
Those only apply when Beelz is chosen by some amicable fellow (and the CYOA doesn't outright state that they _will_ basically destroy everything or something like that, regardless of what the person chooses to do), instead of the apparent asshat that took the role in the RP thing that seems to have spawned the CYOA you're so salty about.

You could always make a new CYOA in which the Netherlord was the fucktard, and Beelz (& gang) being victorious didn't doom anything.
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Posting this version because every single version after this, that other people made, removed Keeper Of Secrets. Fuck that shit.

>>48205487
Fewer Ladies (3 Points, 1 person)
Less Money (4 Points)

24 Points

Intelligence Augments(23)
Shapeshifting(22)
Magical Talent(21)
Panacea(19)
Bigger On The Inside(16)
Ultimate Library(15)
Organization(14)
Smart Ladies(13)
V. Smart Ladies(12)
Genius Ladies(10)
Kinky, Hobbyist(8)
Shapeshifting Ladies(6)
Magical Ladies(3)
Waifu(0)

It'll be nice to have company in the tower, and I'll probably only use the netherlord's portal for the library until I create a teleport-mass spell for the books. Probably won't be a great idea to let him know what kind of spellbooks I have at home.
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>>48205712
He will just build Great wall of Netherlord and make Demons pay for it
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>>48205742
Spend rather comfy ten years in Slut Life, and come out rich and keep all of the comfy stuff with me.

I'm going to customize one of the sex slaves into a cute trap with a tight boypussy, and the other one is going to be a young cat girl with cute curves.
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>>48205783
Kek. I wonder how effective that would be in a fantasy setting.
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>>48205776
I never understood just what the Architect's powers are. First it tells you you can move around mountains but that's it. Then you somehow become god. Does this imply you already had godly powers before?
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>>48205773
>guerilla warfare
>ON ENEMY TERRITORY
AHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA
I will use tactics that work only if I have majority support of local population and know land better then enemy
t. Beelzebub
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>>48205263

>http://powerlisting.wikia.com/wiki/Universal_Recreation

Uh... well, not that it really matters WHO I pick I suppose, since I can consider this whole crisis subverted.
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>>48205799
By the looks of it, while you're alive you can shape terrain but that's about it, and only access the place while sleeping. When you die, you ascend to true godhood for the place.
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>>48205712
Absolutely powerful sorcerer-king, if he's not stupid, has means necessary to counter guerillia tactics.
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>>48205798
When Beelzebub sends its people, he's not sending his best. He's sending demons that have lots of problems, and they’re bringing those problems to us. They’re bringing drugs. They’re bringing crime. They’re rapists. And some, I assume, are good demons. So yeah, it should work
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>>48205800
In a medieval fantasy realm? Yes.
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>>48205829
In a medieval fantasy realm where sorcerer king can just teleport anywhere in his world several thousand his troops and massacre your raid party?
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>>48205823
We'll see. He's also an immortal human sorcerer-king who lives an hedonist life in a world with tons of other races. The setting is ripe for a rebellion and that's all I need.

I can't guarantee anything but if I had to pick between Netherlord and Beelzebub, I would always pick Beelzebub.
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>>48205829
How? He has divination that can pinpoint your demons and the people on his side.
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>>48205836
Geez, I must have missed that. Mind pointing out where is that says that the Netherlord can teleport entire armies and that Beelzebub somehow couldn't?

Would he even? How long before the Netherlord throws a tantrum because he can't fuck his harem 24/7?
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>>48205846
>Netherlord lives in his fantasy world that he can shape to his liking
>The setting is ripe for a rebellion
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>>48205846
Same for demon, man.
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>>48205487 >>48205776
Since these are basically a single CYOA just pick Elder Mage and so on and so forth you're the strongest ally of the Netherlord. Your limited lifespan meaning nothing but the bang that will happen when you pop. That can be dealt with though. Architect is still unmatched though.
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>>48205848
Knowing where a few hundred bands of roaming demons are doesn't guarantee his ability to actually deal with those demons. Divination magic is a lot more useful to predict major attacks on key cities than the actions of what is basically an extensive network of demonic bandits.
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>>48205860
I admit I'm assuming the Netherworld will not consist of a population of mindless Netherlord worshipping drones but actual people with actual personalities. That might have been a mistake.
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>>48205855
Arcane magic man and his land, like the hell, you haven't even said how your thousands of demons will cross the wall he build to protect his kingdom from those pesky demons
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>>48205867
Architect is limited to one Earth sized world though.
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>>48205867
>Architect
>Make BFG-9000
>Send them to Netherworld, Warper delivers
>Beelzebub surrenders
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>>48205882
Which wall? What are you smoking?
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>>48205712
>not defeating the Netherlord by empowering the populace and supporting their bid for a fair democratic government
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>>48205885
A small god is still a god.
>>48205888
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>>48205888
I'm going to do that except I'm going to support Beelzebub and steal all of the Netherlord's waifus.
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>>48205885
Couldn't you just create an entire universe but shrink it and adjust all laws of physics proportionally so it fits inside that space?
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>>48205595

>>48205490
no one, pretty much
>>48205496
If you liked "a 10/10 cyoa", you'll like this, I think
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>>48205885

And exactly how does that compare to the size of the Netherworld? For all we know it's basically the same, with "Hell" being every continent but Australia for a bit of irony or North America because Fantasy Vegas, which is the Netherlord's kingdom.
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>>48205968
If your cyoa does not have cute boys, it's illegal to call it a 10/10 cyoa. Just a warning.
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>>48205983
10/10 CYOA has cute boys.
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>>48205980
You're absolutely right but the young maiden inside me still believes there could be more to the Netherworld. Architect is guaranteed to have a limited size.
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>>48205894
the big one, shaped the way he liked
>>48205878
Who said that people would rebel ever against their beloved leader, while his armies protect people, putting demon heads on spikes and showing that their leader cares
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>>48205968
Sounds nice, have a headpat.
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>>48205999
It really depends on what kind of person the Netherlord is. If he's a good, benevolent leader I believe the power of Good/Love/Plot will make him victorious. If he's just there for the waifus and the power and leaves his people to fend for themselves I believe this one goes to Beelzebub.
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>>48205968
I like 10/10 CYOAs, that's why I don't like yours.
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>>48205692
Stop! I'll be disowned. I need to be straight. Don't do this to me.
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>>48205867
the most broken option is the juggernaut but people usually miss that. the time it takes to craft an object is proportionate to the how powerful it is, and it takes a lifetime to craft demonbane, which is all-powerful. that means anything less powerful must take less than a lifetime to craft, including items that make you immortal or mess with time. once you do that, you can make as many demonbanes as you want. you would have total command of the entire multiverse, even the architect's pocket dimension.
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>>48205968
good, good, you attention slut, suck this (you)
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>>48206036
No, the most broken option is that entire fucking cyoa which only attracts bloody wankers.

Thanks though, mate. Now I'll pick Juggernaut, build myself a key to a pocket dimension, a ring to cloak myself from all divination and tracking, and then become a god.
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>>48204749
Conduit. It has the potential to include the powers from all the other CYOAs in it and exploring strange new worlds is generally the best.
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>>48206076
Yeah until some idiots decided that what Conduit really needed was A FUCKING GOVERNMENT, ORGANIZED RELIGION AND MAJOR CORPORATIONS.
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>>48206088
Don't worry, it's easy to poke godzilla and then just go hide in your Bevin until it works its frustrations out on everyone else.
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>A FUCKING GOVERNMENT, ORGANIZED RELIGION AND MAJOR CORPORATIONS
mfw Conduit killed itself
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>>48206088
Non-canon, my dear.
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>>48204295
If you finish World of Myth and Wonder with -3 points, you lose 3 points in Altering History. If you finish World of Myth and Wonder with +3 points, you lose 3 points in Altering History. Essentially anything not balanced penalizes you.

There will be many more options before I am done, though, so achieving balance should not be difficult.

>>48204530
No, no; that's a great idea. Thanks, anon.
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>>48206088
It's non-canon, thankfully.
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>>48206132
Thanks. I also wanted to suggest making Magic even more rare. 1% is too common imo, that would it make it just as "rare" as being a redhead.

I'm looking forward to the Orcs too. I hope they're peaceful and gentle but I'm sure they won't.
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>>48206129
What's the best way to kill all these people?
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>>48206252
ignore them and they can't touch you then
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>>48206263
>just close your eyes and the priest won't be touching you

IT DOESNT WORK THAT WAY!
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>>48203136
CYOA discarded.
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>>48206273
The factions are non-canon, so they only exist as they are if you want them to.

Sure, some people might try to put something similar together, but that's on them.
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>>48202077
Why don't cyoas have more waifus (male)?
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>>48206296
Most companion CYOAs I see have at least one trap.
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>waifus (male)
Autism reached new heights
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>>48206311
What else would you call this?
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>>48206321
>waifu(male)
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>>48206321
dead husbando
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>>48206311
Waifu used to refer to both sexes before it was cool
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>>48206296
why would they include characters that only a tiny percentage of the playerbase would even consider picking?
If you're so unhappy, why don't you make a cyoa with male romance options?
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>>48206240
>>48206132

5* rarer than being redhaired, albino and heterochromatic all at once seems good.
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>>48206344
Husbandos are masculine. These are clearly feminine waifus (male).
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>>48206379
1/100 is just too much. That would mean every modern town has a few dozen mages.
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>>48203213
>>48203197
Thanks guys
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>>48206371
>why would they include characters that only a tiny percentage of the playerbase would even consider picking?

>If it doesn't 100% appeal to me, it shouldn't exist.

>If you're so unhappy, why don't you make a cyoa with male romance options?

>Ignoring the fact that "I don't like this therefore I will start a multi-thread shitfit until it stops existing" is the first reaction to out-of-the-box things. Or are you going to ignore what happens when one inserts anything to do with NTR, Poly, Futa etc?
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>>48206406
I agree. I would also like for it to be part of family lineage with each successive generation of breeding making the powers weaker(unless two mage families interbreed but even then), but also trigger-able when a god touches you or something.
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>>48206371
If traps are male then the majority of this board is gay.
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>>48206388
husbandos are male, waifus are female, now end thyself
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>>48206409
are you equating your lust for men with cheating on your partner?
That's pretty messed up, dude. But keep asking for people to inject things you enjoy into their cyoas, I'm sure it will work eventually!
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>>48205263
>>48205340
>>48205613

this cyoa also a trick for me to get more character for my story
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>>48206472
hibiki would never post such picture, but such ulterior motives are possible
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>>48206472
also, I told you to write "s" when talking about plural
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>>48206490
plural? what's that? something to do with the lungs?
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>>48203203
I just want to forget anon...
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>>48206472
Good, now make Lance Black the BEST!
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>>48206486
sike nigga you thought

>>48206490
I'm going to unintentionally make grammar mistake everyday every time till someone spoonfeed me by correcting my grammar mistake
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>>48206240
>>48206379
>>48206406
>>48206422
Hmm, that's fair. I'll consider adding two different rarity options. Some people might want several mages in each town, but I can also throw in a one in a million option, or something.

Perhaps with heritability as an optional add-on.

As for the god thing, I haven't put any gods in yet, though I probably will. And you are not a god (though you arguably become so after completing some of the quests).
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>>48205263

>Name: Colm Tetran
>Ability: Ice Manipulation
>Mentor: Zukabwe of The Otherworld

>insert ice pun here
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>>48206502
>plural? what's that?
"Plural" is when there are more than one of a thing, whereas "singular" is when there's just one.

For example:
>1 picture (singular)
>2 pictures (plural)
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>>48202491
I wan to do a roleplay based on Slut Life.
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>>48206569
What does that have to do with the lungs?
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>>48206563
I sense a shitstorm brewing unlike any shitstorm this world has ever seen. Proceed with caution, young author.
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>>48206608
baka
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>>48206599
"lungs" is plural, "lung" is singular.
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>>48206638
What about a plural lung?
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>>48206625
As if adding Gods to that cyoa would not unleash a shitbeast from the cavernous hole that is Clinton's saggy ass.
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>>48206563
Please don't add any gods. There's really no point to playing the CYOA and doing anything but hiding if there are gods since they'll just smite you.
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>>48206595
There are threads on >>>/trash/ for that exact thing. You could probably go to >>>/soc/, too.
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>>48206563
Personally I want mages to be MORE common.
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>>48206647
baka senpai
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>>48206646
That would be "lungs", as I already stated.
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>>48206667
>everyone is a mage is an option
>anon still wants more mages
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>>48206689
I want even the dogs to be mages.
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>>48206672
You're triggering me almost as much as the thought of Obama rubbing his penis all over my house. Please stop.
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>>48206667
The best way to handle it is to make it a non-hard limit. Everyone *could* be a mage, but it might be impractical for some of them, or maybe they need to take a different approach because they have a different affinity and there aren't any teachers for their affinity availalble, or maybe the affinity hasn't even been introduced yet because people thought that those with it just can't do magic in the past.
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>>48206698
When everyone's a mage, no one will be.
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>>48206698
You're a wizard, anon.
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>>48206714
Everyone can learn chemistry, therefore chemists don't exist.
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>>48202933
Why did the Succubus have to be a sub? They're my favorite in large part because they're dominant.
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>>48206714
it doesn't work like this
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>>48206649
>they'll just smite you.
why?
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>>48206739
>All these other girls are dominant
>Anon bitches because one kinda isn't
Whiner.
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>>48206747
Gods don't like arrogant mortals who think they matter. They especially hate mortals who try to change the world.
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>>48206747
Because most quests involve you undermining their divinity. Emperor of Manking, you usurp their position as THE god. Singularity, you make their existence obsolete by creating THE god AI. Federation, you expand humanity to the starts arguably leaving behind the gods. Etc. It's in their best interest to dispose of you unless you decide on Technophobe or something and even then some might want to smite you because you're halting humanity's progress.
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>>48206458
>are you equating your lust for men with cheating on your partner?

>What is reading comprehension?

The entire sentence was how anything other than "generic waifu" or "ultimate power shopping list" CYOAs are often treated with suspicion or outright hostility if they contain things that might not necessarily appeal to the 20 something cis, straight white males that populate the thread.
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>>48202077
I just realised something. Why don't cyoas ever let you become black or feature black waifus?
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>>48206608
>>48206625
>>48206647
>>48206649
Sorry, perhaps I was unclear. I'm talking about the option to have gods via the World of Myth and Wonder, not to force it on you. And likely it would be a "belief makes gods real" sort of thing. There would probably be also an option to differentiate between gods as just unusually powerful spirits (an part with your own power), or gods as smiting-from-the-heavens.

>>48206667
Uh, you can already have everyone in the world be a mage, as pointed out by the observant >>48206689

>>48206698
Oh, it sounds like a joke, but actually... that gives me an idea to make a feature of Major Beastmaster the ability to give some limited magical abilities to animals. Which might actually make some people take Beastmaster.

>>48206712
I think that is already reasonably handled by the "Taught" option, no?
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>>48206800
most cyoa author are white cis scum
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>>48206800
Interestingly enough, the CYOA you are quoting there does let you become black, so probably not the best reference to make your point with.
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>>48206794
>Cis
Now she's using slurs. Why would anyone take you seriously?
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>>48206655
But /tg/ is the roleplay board!
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>>48206807
Any option that adds gods should probably be a huge drawback and grant more points than anything else.

Don't make it mandatory with World of Myth etc
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>>48206813
http://lmgtfy.com/?q=cisgender

Stop shitposting.
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>>48205776
I'll take the alchemist. Gold is always useful and it might help me bribe the Last Dragon.
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>>48206825
He's more likely to see it if you quote.
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>>48206807
>"belief makes gods real" sort of thing

I give it a few millenia - maybe even less - before humanity's collective beliefs give birth to an omnipotent god.

How would that work if you go for Emperor of Mankind/ Myth Maker though? Would people's belief empower you cause that would break the cyoa.
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>>48206733
>>48206740
>missing the joke
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>>48206838
>Hurr a bunch of SJW use my slur that means it's not a slur!
Go away, this is the wrong site for your kind.
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>>48206807
>Oh, it sounds like a joke, but actually... that gives me an idea to make a feature of Major Beastmaster the ability to give some limited magical abilities to animals. Which might actually make some people take Beastmaster.


Ok this sounds cool but could you also leave an option so that even non-sentient beings can manifest with magic? For example /some/ trees could have a magical manifestation rate of 90-100% but due manifest this as extreme growth or strange effects on crops/wildlife near them. This could explain how the sylvan were born, or you could have non-sentient animals become sentient due to magic affecting them.
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>>48206844
Oh shit, thanks. I didn't notice.

>>48206807
> And likely it would be a "belief makes gods real" sort of thing.

Could you make it optionaly at least? I'd prefer if thought beings existed too, but gods--actual gods--were nothing less than the ultimate beings in reality. Undefeatable and impossible to understand by mortals and well above their ken. Not necessarily omnipotent but you know...
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>>48206794
looks like you answered your own question.
>why don't cyoas have male romance options
>anything other than "generic waifu" or "ultimate power shopping list" CYOAs are often treated with suspicion or outright hostility if they contain things that might not necessarily appeal to the 20 something cis, straight white males that populate the thread.
>>48206800
You're covered by the above quote, too.

Rather than say "why no X in cyoa?", you could just... make a cyoa with that option, and take the hate you claim will follow. Or keep shitting up the thread with me.
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>>48206864
That sounds suspiciously furry.
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>>48206800
because in reality 99% of people are actually racist and none wants to be black
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>>48206869
I should point out that Aphrodite and Ares were both wounded by a mortal with a spear during the Iliad.
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>>48206825
>can you make it optional
>>48206830
>don't make it mandatory

Sorry to be slightly sarcastic, but I very explicitly said it would be optional in the post you're responding to.

>"...option to have gods via the World of Myth and Wonder, not to force it on you"

As for the points, it would depend on what kind of gods. Ones that tend to be benevolent gods will be positive points, ones that tend to petty vindictiveness (Greek-ish) would be negative, while if there is a good balance it will be a wash.
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>>48206874
That one protestor that shaved his head and claimed to be black while photoshoping his skin darker in online photos proves you wrong, sadly.
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>>48206875
Sure but those could be thought beings; the actual gods would be more like magical strong AIs, crossed with the literal forces of creation/destruction/order AND chaos all at once, that have existed before time and will afterwards too.
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>>48206870
I don't understand that mentality. Do you start your own government, supermarket or competition every time you dislike something about them? No, you just complain and generate noise until they change. Why would cyoas be any different? Complaining is a legitimate tactic.
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>>48206857
That's not really a joke, it's a pretty common serious expression.
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>>48206881
Benevolence doesn't mean they're helpful to you, if what you want for the world contrasts with their desires.

>>48206891
At this point it sounds like you're writing fanfiction and don't know anything about real mythology.
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>>48206874
I hate black people but I would love to be black and ravish people with my BBC. So I'm conflicted.
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>>48206893
This is 4chan. Nobody can be brought low by your pathetic shame tactics like they can on sites you might be more familiar with. This is the power of anonymity.
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>>48206886
>protestor
he wants to "help" black and show solidarity with them, while also knowing that he will never be one of them as he bathes in white superiority
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>>48206864
Sounds a bit too complicated. I do plan to add an environmental (negative) option that makes vegetation magical and quasi-sentient though.

>>48206891
>magical strong AIs... existed before time
I'm not hear to tell you what your headcanon about gods should be, but I don't feel bound to that description of the divine
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>>48205150
Asura's Wrath build.
Origin: Mechanical (Strength 2)
Appearance: Athletic
Faction: Military.
Perks: Prime Subject, Expert, Training*(free from faction), Signing Bonus, Charisma, Defector.
Drawbacks: Valuable, Bodyguard, Traitor(, Memory Loss. Total points added 12.
Allies 4: Samuel Mason as the grumpy but kind uncle, Hannah Caldwell as my kid and body guard target, Max the super dog and Hannah's friend, Fiona Dawley to be the voice of reason in the family and the public at large.
Enemies: Bubbles, Isabelle Hart, John York.
Abilities (total points 37): Strength 3, Agility 3, Endurance 2, Durability 3, Enhanced Senses 2, Reflexes 3, Immunity 3, Self Healing 3, Unarmed Mastery 3, Mental 2, Flight 2, Directed Energy Attack 3, Extra Limbs 3(4 on my back for a total of six arms), Overcharge 3, Social Enhancer 1.
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>>48206898
I prefer my gods to be, godlike. I don't like them being humanlike. It's not supposed to be a mythology. They're supposed to be actual gods. As in, the real thing. They're not necessarily supposed to be worshiped or loved, they just exist above all other beings.
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>>48206898
Yeah, frankly benevolent gods' first order of business should be to smite the almost immortal human who is shaping fate to his hand.
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>>48206923
>I don't like them being humanlike
Tough titties. 90% of the world's mythology involved humanlike gods. Monotheism has poisoned your brain.
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Y'all want I should make a dedicated conduit thread? It's been a long time since we had one (as the project kind of died down due to Thrallherd's work picking up and him getting sick and etc) and they always used to be fun.

>>48204749
Conduit, nigga.
>incredibly varied
>easy immortality
>eons of stuff to do in each of like two dozen worlds
>nobody can become so OP as to ruin anyone else's fun
>dino-infested ringworld of elf slave waifus for playing grand strategy with: Just one world out of a score

>>48206088
That stuff is player proposals for shit that happens after the thing starts, not part of the conduit CYOA.
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>>48206914
You'd be surprised. We got rid of Rapture academy, scared away Ferrean, etc.
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>>48206898
>>48206928
It's a fair point; I'll think about it.
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>>48206932
No, that's retarded.
>Hur this project is dead
>Maybe it could support a general with no new content or people and with the creator dead and gone?
Fucking no.
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>>48206922
PUNCH ALL THE THINGS!
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>>48206918
>I'm not hear to tell you what your headcanon about gods should be, but I don't feel bound to that description of the divine

Sure but would you at least consider adding an option to make some gods, at least, exist independently of their worshipers?
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>>48206936
Rapture author was pathetic, that's what driven him away
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>>48206936
Ferrean is still here. He posted last week about a dead hard drive though.
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>>48206935
I'll consider it, but I'm leaning towards "no". Thematically, I want the CYOA to remain "humans as the masters of their fate" for the most part.
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>>48206893
You're following the "if I shitpost enough, people will start catering to me" tactics, I see.
>Complaining is a legitimate tactic.
did you forget where we are? No one has any obligation to please you, and I definitely don't want to cater to you and your homosexuality any more than before.
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>>48206951
Please stop deleting your posts after I respond to them.

As said to the deleted version, >>48206961
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>>48206972
1) I was editing it.
2) I deleted it before you responded.
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>>48206893
>Do you start your own government, supermarket or competition every time you dislike something about them?
cyoa is an art not some kind of facility, author makes the work he wants as he wants
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>>48202998
KUCK KEK KUK! >:D
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>>48206972
Are you planning for a Weebstyle Animal People (IE Animal Ears and Tails and such but human faces) option in the friendly races?
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>>48206943
I mean, it's got enough interest and discussion already in this thread that we could probably chat about it for a bit and do builds or make new worlds.

>>48206893
He's not talking about minor edits to specific existing CYOAs, he's talking about changes so fundamental that they should be their own CYOAs. You wouldn't go to a grocery store and say "this place should sell dildos!" you just go to the dildo store after buying your groceries.
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>>48207016
Eh, maybe. Only if I can think of a way to give them some unique function or characteristic beyond "they've got animal ears!"
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>>48207028
People would probably just pick them as a vanity choice, more than anything. You could bundle it into an option like 'mundane races' for stuff that's not really worth more than 1 point and then list them as an example.
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>>48207028
Could there be an option for actual monster people too? Like giant, but sentient, spider-kind-of-people for example?
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>>48205294
>posting clownbiece

wait a minute anon, are you trying to trigger my Lolk flashack
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>>48207028
Well don't forget the tail.
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>>48203136
Needs more rape
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>>48205263
http://powerlisting.wikia.com/wiki/Mathematics_Manipulation
I'm basically god with the restriction of needing to find an equation for it before doing it.
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>>48207221
>find
You're doomed, you poor helpless thing.
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>>48207132
maybe
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>>48205263
Not really a CYOA, but okay

>Drill Sergeant
>http://powerlisting.wikia.com/wiki/Enhanced_Drillmanship
>Dalton Alpha
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>>48207327
Then you should have asked before the thread reached the bump limit.
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>>48207028
Give us an option to give all of humanity ears and tails.
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>>48207028
Will there be horse pussy or fluffy tail?
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>>48207028
Why not horse dick and fluffy tail?
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>>48207423
Anon would shit his pants at the possibility of a race of males with big dicks. Anon is not very confident you see.
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>>48207423
Those aren't applicable to everything.

>>48207444
I'll just inform anon that horses have zero sexual stamina so everyone would mock male centaurs for being quick shots. Like, less than a minute of sex quick shots.
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>>48207444
He is already planning to include orcs.
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>>48207353
But all of humanity already has ears.
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>>48207456
Not necessarily. Read any dj involving elves and centaurs, minotaurs or orcs and the quickshot thing will never apply. They usually have the size of a horse/bull/nigger and the stamina of a human.
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>>48207473
But not cute ears that they can wiggle.
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>>48207482
>Someone with a fetish intentionally writing porn has no idea how horses actually work.
>This means that someone offering centaurs as a race choice and probably glossing over the sexual details is going go make said centaurs ubermensch.

If we're being realistic, it'll be as I say. If centaurs are offered, the CYOA maker isn't going to mention how they work sexually, so it'll be up to individual players to use porn logic or realistic logic in regards to how they genitals work.
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>>48207463
I'm now wondering what /r9k/ would look like in that world, assuming you take the locked technology drawback. I'm guessing tons of posts about the BOC and complaining about how all Orcs are natural CHADS and humans just can't compete. Would be hilarious.

Maybe I should help evolution a bit and have all small dicked guys killed consistently over generaations so no one has to suffer in the future.
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>>48207505
knowing human warlike nature and wits they would massacre all orks with zero remorse
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>>48207501
>if we're being REALISTIC, then CENTAURS will work...

Still, I'd argue that a sentient race of horsepeople would show the same tribal bias for staying power, just like how early humans preferred bigger dicks. There's a reason human penises are considerably larger (relatively) than most modern primates.
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Guy making a magical school CYOA here. My houses:

http://pastebin.com/Cn2YKnK0

Is there anything major that I'm missing that you would like to see? Either in terms of a house that should be there, or some kind of theme that a house should have but doesn't, or a bit of information about houses that should be in the blurb.

Right now each house has a divine patron (though only one focuses on that) and provide lodging and social benefits. Should they provide something more explicit as well?
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>>48207523
That's assuming humans intelligence bonus is large enough to assure their victory over the orks who would have a considerable strength and endurance bonus. If humans are not A LOT more intelligent than orks I wouldn't count on them getting rid of them any time soon.
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>>48207542
Now you're just getting into raw speculative territory to try and justify your fetish (whether you're into horsedicks yourself or just get off on seeing an anon flip out about horsedicks.) Either way there's just no real point in debating it at that point.
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>>48207568
>who would
>The race isn't even written yet
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>>48207505
you have a strange obsession with small-dicked men.
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>>48205278
Are the elementals immortal? Because if yes, I have my choice.
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>>48207552
>House names:
>Golden Crown
>Odin
>House of Five Houses
>The Greeks
>Houseless

Your inconsistent way of naming Houses is making me unnecessarily angry. Really angry.

I'd suggest you at the very least change it to: House of the Golden Crown; House of Odin; House of Five Houses; House of the Greeks; Houseless.
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>>48207568
human have numbers and centralization, fighting 10:1 battles of genocidal crusade with each tribe is easier than going all vs all
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>>48207580
Races don't exist in a vacuum and there is no indeed no point in debating if you fail to see that.
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>>48207604
If no age is mentioned I just assumed immortal.
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>>48207593
I think they're cute and like to bully them. So on second thought I wouldn't get rid of them.
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>>48205150
>Origin: Innate
Best power source, no drawbacks
>Appearance: Athletic
I look decent but I don't stick out.
>Faction: None
I'm only loyal to myself and allies.
>Abilities:
>Strength 3
>Agility 3
>Endurance 3
>Durability 3
>Senses 2
>Reflexes 2
>Immunity 3
>Self Healing 3
>Mental 3
>Flight 3
>Focus 3
>Training 3
>Inheritable 3
Generic super-soldier #72866176 reporting for duty.
>Perks: Reputation, Safehouse, Identity, Signing Bonus
Identity means no one knows about my old family, which is good. Don't want them catching shit for being related to me. The Safehouse is for my waifu. The Reputation perk is tasty, I'll have a reputation as guy who can get important things from one location to another, without pesky things like laws, governments, or borders getting in the way.
>Drawbacks: Hated, Valuable, Traitor, Memory Loss
And nothing of value was lost.
>Allies: Lindsey Reyes, Max
Waifu and dogbro. Can't go wrong with this package. Waifu sets up deals with internet magic, dogbro helps me carry shit/watch my back.
>Foes: Jim Boyce, Corrine Devoe, Bubbles, Isabelle Hart
That shitbag Boyce, trying to tear apart my rep. I'm gonna have to punch that asshole real fuckin' hard.
I might be able to turn the other three on each other, as their ultimate goals are contrary to each other. Only one of the could succeed ultimately, so that's what I'll bank on.

Reminder that Strength 3 let's you pull off Man of Steel level feats.
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>>48207606
>add "House of" to places that don't need it
That seems kind of pointless. It's on the House of Five Houses, because that's a poetic phrasing and loses something without it. Having to write "House of" on each title on the actual CYOA will just be awkward for the layout.
And the variety of names is meant to illustrate that these arose organically, although I'm not totally sold on "The Greeks" since it seems like more of a nickname.
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>>48207630
Why do you assume Orcs have "superior penises"? Or that a human woman would want to fuck an Orc?
I find it disturbing I know who certain people are, on an anonymous forum
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>>48207377
>>48207444
>>48207456
>>48207463
>>48207501
>>48207542
>>48207588

I can confirm that at no point will anything explicitly sexual be added to the CYOA, or expansions. If I add centaurs, and you want to go have sex with them, that's on you, anon. I'm not going to stop you, but neither am I going to write the narrative for you.
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>>48207661
Then it shouldn't be on the House of Five Houses. It's really weird to read about a bunch of Houses which are each called rather distinctive names and suddenly THE HOUSE OF FIVE HOUSES pops up. That's like saying: Slytherin, Hufflepuff, The Blue House, and Gryffindor.
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>fighting 10:1 battles of genocidal crusade with each tribe is easier than going all vs all

Assuming that
1) Orcs don't breed as fast or more quickly than humans

2) They never unify into a single kingdom or collection of kingdoms.
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>>48207688
Thank you for your maturity.
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>>48207674
I have probably read more hentai than the average person has read books. Sorry.
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>>48207552
>The activities scheduled could be almost anything, occasionally purely recreational, but more often they march to raid other houses, stealing wealth, books, or just having a fine time partying and raping

Isn't this just Rapture Academy: Redefined? If you're not careful then you'll have a shitstorm on your hands when you release it, just saying.

>>48207661
>although I'm not totally sold on "The Greeks"
Maybe they can be House Hellenes or something.
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>>48207700
I mean, the other houses are pretty distinct in naming convention from each other too. What if I renamed "The Greeks" as "The Association of Fraternities"? Would that break up the unity of the other five sufficiently?
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>>48207688
Yeah, thank you for not turning this into a magical realm. If I want one, I'd prefer to wank it myself. I don't need that anon with a boner for realism to ruin it for me.

Another question though: can we actually become Vampires because I would really like that. Same for Werewolves.
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>>48207708
So orcs are:
1. Stronger than humans
2. Breed faster than humans
3. Are as smart as humans
Do you have some orc fetish?
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>>48202998
I just understood his name. Very clever whoever made this cyoa.
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>>48207725
I think the problem is really with the House of Five Houses, because it uses House(s) twice in its name which gets confusing. Maybe the (House of) Five Shrines/Temples would fit better.
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>>48207708
>2016
>Not knowing orc women would betray their race for superior human men
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>>48207552
I swear to god if this is just a reskinned Rapture Academy... We don't need shit like that.
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>>48207753
Orcs are generally also:
1. More aggressive than humans
2. Less technologically savant than humans
3. Less diplomatic than humans.

But not the extent that they can't form tribes or unite said tribes in times of need.
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>>48207775
>Not knowing Elf women would betray their race for superior orc men.
FTFY
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>>48207775
I too like belief that female orcs would prefer non-orc men since they would like to feel loved tenderly for once. I also think plenty of females from other races would prefer rough orc sex though. It all balances out in the end.
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>>48207552
>Housless
>MURDER THE GODS AND TOPPLE THEIR THRONES

You need to stop making me do this.
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>>48207777
>We don't need shit like that
fuck off
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>>48207722
>Isn't this just Rapture Academy: Redefined?
That was the initial mandate, but I'm not necessarily cleaving directly to it.

>you'll have a shitstorm
This ain't my first rodeo, son.

>House Hellenes
I dunno, the inspiration was more to do with American fraternities than actual Greeks. Maybe to keep it Greek I could make the full formal name the "League of Hellenic Fraternities".

>>48207772
I like it that way though, being a fivefold house inherently and by design is an important part of its design.

>>48207777
It's not just reskinned. It's more like a true Scholomance (as in, the old /tg/ homebrew) CYOA taking inspiration from Rapture. So far choices are houses and classes (which are pretty much ready) and inherent bloodline powers, items, mysteries, and enemies (which are not and of which the last three are contingent on my having good ideas)
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>>48207716
I definitely don't see the appeal of making fun of someone - and not just that, since you think it's hot - to something completely out of their control oh what the fuck am I saying there are guys who want to fuck amputees...
Sometimes humanity needs to be purged. And by "sometimes", I mean often.
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>>48207796
Orcs would die because they couldn't even hunt.
>Muh huge top heavy body > endurance
>Muh high calorie needs
there's a reason why human bodies didn't get so big.

>>48207815
Gross senpai, on two counts.
>Still thinking elf women are attractive
>Still wanting to be a cuck to orcs
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>>48207817
>I also think plenty of females from other races would prefer rough orc sex though
But none of them would want to carry orc child, resulting in decline of orc numbers and creation of half-orc race, possible with time as orc women would breed with male humans resulting in that orc male would completely die out, leaving only half-orc women behind that give birth either to half-orc women or human males. How? Genetic magic if you ask me
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>>48207817
Only the lowest of human women would want an orc lover. Pretty much damaged goods, and those orcs would probably kill them in a rage
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>>48207886
Of course this is under the assumption orcs are descended from some kind of primate, as opposed to a subrace of riverbound pigs. Which would actually be a pretty neat race if done right. Have them drown invaders for the southbending river spirits.
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>>48207688
But will there be centaurs, or an option to become one of the fantasy races?
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>>48207552
are those houses unisex or separate ?
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>>48207937
>humans 5'10
when will they ever learn
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>>48207977
I decided to not segregate genders after all.
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>>48207836
>fivefold house
There's an idea, name it Way of the Fivefold Path or something, make it eastern-inspired or something like that.

But really, What's stopping House Jupiter from pillaging and raping literally all of the houseless? The houseless need some way to keep the peace, or else everyone will just join a house for fear of the consequences.
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>>48208012
Do they still have separate dorms?
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>>48207817
>I too like belief that female orcs would prefer non-orc men since they would like to feel loved tenderly for once.
Would happened to the entirety of orc culture and history, not to mention the inherent bias they would have towards orc men due to being orcs themselves? What exactly would prevent orcs from having different norms for outsider women and their own?

Foh with this power/fap fantasy shit.
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>>48208019
>What's stopping House Jupiter from pillaging and raping literally all of the houseless?
Retaliation, people will just ally several houses to pillage and rape Jupiter. See WW II
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>>48208021
No, but they have rape whistles
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>>48208047
>Orcs will be nice to their women so they don't logically decline so orcs can exist to fulfill my cuck rape fetish
>Get out of here with your power fantasy
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>>48208070
>rape whistles
I have no idea have that will help, at least rapture had separate dorms
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>>48207777
>We don't need shit like that.

We also don't need shit like Star Dust, Traveller, and Art Genie. Stop being such a bitch about CYOA's you don't like. If there's an audience for it, and the author wants to do it, just let them be and ignore them.
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>>48208094
>at least rapture had separate dorms
That didn't help them to not get raped. Because they didn't have whistles.
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>>48208092
>Orcs will be nice to their women so they don't logically decline so orcs can exist to fulfill my cuck rape fetish

You're literally just assuming orcs treat their women like shit so that they'll all want to run towards your human arms. Nevermind that by their standards you'd likely look quite freakish, if male orcs are your typical pig orcs. Not to mention the fact that orc women would look a lot more like fat pig orcs than pic related.
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>>48208147
maybe they had those whistles, just because it wasn't written doesn't mean they couldn't buy one!
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>>48208021
It depends on the house. I'll add those details to the description. For now:

Crown: Jupiter is all male. Morningstar is mixed, with separate wings of the building.
Odin: Entirely mixed.
Ho5H: Sun is mostly female with a small male annex. Moon is mixed but more heavily male and has fuck all privacy. Sky has them separated by floors. Earth is mixed.
Greeks have only one gender in almost all of their individual cottages, but end up sleeping in each other's beds a lot anyway.
And Houseless can do whatever the fuck they want.

>>48208019
That is an idea, actually.

>What's stopping House Jupiter from pillaging and raping literally all of the houseless?
Not as attractive of a target as some other places, and generally you'll not publish your address. You'll also generally want to be prickly enough that you aren't a yummy target even if someone does find you.

>The houseless need some way to keep the peace, or else everyone will just join a house for fear of the consequences.
It's not supposed to be an equal option, it's hard mode. I'll add a note to make that a bit more explicit. It's just an option because I know someone will choose it anyway.
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>>48208151
Sure, if that's the case that's fine, but then don't assume that orc men would have some crazy human lust and the desire to rape them.
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>>48208012
That's a step in the right direction at lease.
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>>48208175
If they're pig orcs or anything that not the male version of what I posted, I simply cannot imagine why they'd even be interested to non-orcs. I can sort of see, maybe, a crazy obese human woman being of average/below average attractiveness but still. Nah.

It wasn't me posting the other stuff about rape desu.
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>>48207937
Centaurs: probably, yes.

Become a fantasy race: Major Shapeshifting will certainly let you do this. I will consider letting you be a non-human race by default, but it won't be a free option.
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>>48208151
Why wouldn't they look like that.
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>>48208151
You're assuming that there are orc women, and that orcs don't survive by kidnapping women from other races.
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>>48208139
Do you want to go to war, anon?
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>>48208165
If Jupiter likes to rape, what can victim do in self-defense? Is murder an option?
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>>48207815
>Not knowing Human women would betray their race for superior Elf men
It's a vicious cycle.
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>>48208205
Because that's not how sexual dimorphism works; if you can't deal with piggy women, that's fine. Acting like it's the abberation instead of the logical form isn't.
>>48208206
That's not...reality.
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>>48208228
Yep. Scholomance is unsupervised outside of the classes. That'll be mentioned in the opening blurb of the CYOA. Open war against them is probably not a productive option without the backing of a house, though.
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>>48208249
Elves do have that desirable ikemen look women seem to go gaga for these days.
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Someone is fetishposting hard right now.
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>>48208249
>>48207815
>>48207775
"Women were a mistake" - sentient beings
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>>48208294
That's the way it's always been.
/d/ is the dark twin of /tg/
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>>48208305
I can't wait till cuntboys become a thing and we can rid ourselves of the inferior gender.
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>>48208311
>/tg/ is /d/lite
there you go anon.
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>>48208256
I think the pro-orc anons see orcs in a Warcraft style, and the no-orc anons see orcs in a class/ Dragon Quest style.
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>>48208321
I cant wait till you all die.
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>>48208332
>/tg/ is /pol/ite with shades of /d/
here
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>>48208263
>Scholomance is unsupervised outside of the classes
If the school is so dangerous, then why do people even enroll? Why not enroll into another school where everyone isn't so rapey/murderous?
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>>48208340
are you going to say you're one of those.....WOMEN?
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>>48208294
So, a normal thread?
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Why are orc women so much better than human women?
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>>48208353
Counterargument: this is a magical realm so it works because his penis needs it to work.
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>>48208356
No. I am a guy, I just hate everyone.
>>48208361
they mature sooner.
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>>48208216
I want people to make what they want to make. And I also want people to ignore CYOAs that don't appeal to them.

Why you gotta be such a bitch over shit you don't like? Let people have their fun.
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>>48208361
They aren't, cuckboy.
Inferior intellect, weird smell, fucking fangs with underbite, unhealthy green skin tone, FUCKING KNIFE-EARS.

They're like worse elves. At least elves don't make me physically ill when they're near.
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>>48208353
It's not that dangerous. Murdering and raping isn't considered nice even when there's nobody to stop you, and if you're in a house, there's plenty of people to back you up. It's also a very good school.

>>48208370
Most of the content won't be magical realm, and it still should be logically consistent.
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>>48208361
>>48208361
>>48208387
>>48208407

That's just a human woman with green skin, "fangs", and the ears. I bet she's basically the same as a human mentally too. It's like when people call otherwise completely normal human women with cat ears, tails and "nyaaaaaaa" verbal ticks catgirls. That or, god forbid, "monstergirls." What part of her is monstrous? You can achieve the same fucking effect with props from sex store. Have a bit of imagination; at least /try/ to engage with the fetish.
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>>48208420
>at least /try/ to engage with the fetish.
No. Turn off your computer and go put your buttplug back in, cuckboy.
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>>48208361
Gap moe.
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>>48208420
>How dare people have a fetish I don't and how dare they not have my fetish for sapient blobs and literal animals
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GREEN DAYNE? You better start a new thread before I hammer your shit for not having Hammerknight there
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>>48208509
>>48208509
>>48208509
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>>48203136
Stop posting this.
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dudes are there possibilty to jumpchain in these cyoas? if so is there any base stats or something to doing a new cyoa
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>>48209432
>dudes are there possibilty to jumpchain in these cyoas?
Just go back to the containment thread.
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>>48209432
Use Paperwork Error or something to cross over.
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>>48209432
look into Conduit?
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>>48207485
Bitch, my ears are cute and I can wiggle them.
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>>48209432
Hey! Jumpchainer! We don't take kindly to your types in here!
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