/cyoag/ CYOA General: 2Edgy4Lyfe

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>>48159756

Why haven't you killed yourself yet, mopey

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I think this is the latest vampire king

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match maker cyoa

>>48159829
Do you have the version with the improved art?

>>48159756
In the future, please don't make threads. I don't want to read any of your posts, you weirdass fetishist.

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and the matchmaker secret page

Why haven't any decent CYOAs been posted yet?

>>48159839
sorry, this is the only one I've got

>>48159900
That's a shame, for some reason I was able to actually get into that one. It's strange how much of a difference art can make even to someone who's used to reading lots of plain text.

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>>48159756

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Did the author of this cyoa ever complete the expansion?

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>>48159997

>>48159892
Because you haven't posted them.
Or, if you're asking about OC, because your taste is different from the dude who made it / you haven't made a "good one" yet.

>>48160137
I don't have any to post.

What cyoas would make good stories?

>>48160255
Destroy the femdom planet?

>>48159967
Reminder that the objective best way to use powers is by turning assholes into submissive servants for your own use.

Domestic abuser? Cute maid now.
Seductive heartbreaker? Public use slut.
Creepy pervert? Exotic dancer.

And between using Drain to take their willpower (and masculinity), Charming them the old fashioned way, or just plain Altering them into it, you can fit it into any build you want.

>>48160287
Been refining your tastes lately Angel?

>>48160384
kek.

>>48160384
Nah, bitchy girls would be just as easy targets, and I'd get some butlers when I get enough hot chicks (Or decide to be one for a while).

>>48160200
Then that's why.

>>48160453
That's unacceptable. Obviously others have CYOAs, or these threads wouldn't exist.

I'm pretty sure only /int/fag is still here talking up his shitty cuck CYOA.

>>48160287
I personally think that the domestic abuser should be the public-use slut since that's much worse than a 'seductive heartbreaker', but otherwise I agree.

>>48160501
What do you need a name for?

Considering making a CYOA.

The basic idea is that you're knocked back into the real-world past by a variable amount (as much as 10,000 years), and can guide or influence the progress of humanity as you like. Or not, if you just want to enjoy the ride.

Various powers would be available, of course, with no-frills agelessness as a freebie. The powers would be short of anything we would typically call a God CYOA, but they'd certainly be enough to convince others of your divine nature, if that was your goal. In other words, you'd have to work by influencing and uplifting people, rather than just being a one-man/woman army.

Has something like this been done before? Is it something that sounds interesting?

>>48160531
So we have a target to despise.

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>>48160553

>>48160553
>Is it something that sounds interesting?
If the powers are sufficient, sure. Does the free agelessness come with guaranteed sanity regardless of how long you end up living? Can you upgrade it into the unkillable sort of immortality?

>>48160501
/int/fag?

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>>48160553
Will it have stone age waifus?

>>48160617
Don't forget the ability to escape restraints, so you don't get buried alive.

>>48160553
I'm personally not sold. I like having bathrooms and fridges and not getting the black plague. And I don't even get godpowers.
Writing "you get free immortality" in the intro is enough to get those guys with existential dread to play it, at least.

>>48160613
Interesting. That's not in depth enough that it will prevent me from making another, but thanks for sharing. I will consider it.

>>48160617
Well, by default you would only get immortality back to present day, which you would be guaranteed sanity for. You could upgrade it to make it indefinite, which would include the sanity, and also upgrade it to make yourself impervious in various ways, yes.

>>48160652
The only "waifu" like option that will be included will be upgrades to bring along companion(s), real or fictional. None of them will be automatically brainwashed to like you, though with the right upgrades charming them should be more than easy enough. That's on you.

As far the restraints, the only default ability you will get will the ability to die if you ever truly wish to, to prevent eternal entombment. You will be able to get upgrades that would allow you to escape any type of trap, should you wish.

>>48160722
Thanks for the honesty. Disease-free would be another freebie (along with the more subtle ability not to be contagious to others, because otherwise you would be bringing back all sorts of horrible future diseases). BUT, I totally understand liking bathrooms and fridges. I'll consider adding upgrades that would allow you to retain certain amenities for personal use.

>>48160652
>Will it have stone age waifus?
of course that's your first fucking question.

>>48160553
I'd think it would need some guidelines on how you change history, what you can and cannot change, etc. Otherwise, every build will just be "I make my self the immortal God-King"

>>48160760
>Disease-free would be another freebie (along with the more subtle ability not to be contagious to others, because otherwise you would be bringing back all sorts of horrible future diseases).
I'd say "disease-free" already implies "non-contagious" (because a carrier isn't disease-free, just symptom-free/immune to the effects of diseases).

>>48160760
Better make it so that you can't transfer diseases either or you'll kill all of history with smallpox or something.

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>>48160613
>Body
Hermaphrodite
Athletic
Beautiful

>Downsides
Night terrors
No sense of taste/smell

>Boosts
Instant regeneration
Perfect memory
3x strength multiplier
Super reflexes
Limitless Energy (no night terrors for me)
Immunity to pain
Masterful social skills
Omniglot

>Items
Lightsaber (just because there was nothing else that I could spend the remaining points on)

I will be a warrior goddess (with a dick).

>>48160836
Hmm... I think that's better put as a drawback/complication. No one likes it if what they can influence is restricted by default.

Rather, there will be complications with pretty hefty point rewards that limit the extent to which you can change history.

>>48160856
Fair.

>>48160864
Good thing I explicitly said that in the post you quoted, then.

>>48160760
>None of them will be automatically brainwashed to like you
I think that's probably the simplest description of what waifus/companions are like in cyoas. I guess that could explain why they feel so 'fake' to me.

I don't think I'd choose to go back to further than maybe right after world war 2. They have fridges and bathrooms, I can actually talk to them, but there's still room for making major changes if I have enough power.
And I kinda want to see what would happen if the USSR got nukes earlier, if the USSR won or if some third nation rose to power.
Also to free Germany.

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>>48160822
What else is there to ask?

>>48160951
It's more that it speaks volumes of what (some) have as their first priority. A guy asks if his idea sounds good, and you first need to know if he will write out some girls you can imagine fucking before passing judgement.

Sometimes I wonder what would happen if all future cyoas were only about getting a girlfriend, or if cyoas explicitly had no waifus and said the available companions would never want to fuck you etc.

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>>48160836
Not everyone wants to be a god-king. Too many responsibilities.

>>48160760
You could include a choice to have a pocket dimension that's furnished like a modern house (can't take locals in, or modern technology out).

Will there be options to do drastic changes like introducing magic or fantasy races?

>>48161041
It's a joke.

>>48161064
Yeah, leaning in the direction of the pocket dimension option.

As far as the magic and fantasy races, perhaps, but it would be an expensive option.

>>48161064
>Will there be options to do drastic changes like introducing magic or fantasy races?

Actually, this is sort of what I meant when I asked what we could and couldn't change. Can I just declare Hitler wins? Take the world into Star Trek tech? Awaken Cthulu?

>>48160517
Eh, I just aimed for "domestic crime = domestic punishment" instead of matching severity.

>>48161041
Waifugeddon CYOA

Oh Noes all the waifus have been destroyed from every reality. You must now make sweet sweet love to a plastic tube in order to continue the human race. You have 5 NoHomo points to spend on ugrades...

>>48161064
>It's a joke.
you say that, and yet waifu cyoas are still disturbingly popular. Then again, Poe's law and all that means I can't tell if
>why u no add teh waifus!!
is a joke, or you're seriously furious

Does the following language make sense to y'all:

"Any impact that acts to harm you (which includes weapons) is reduced to one-tenth of its kinetic force (or roughly one-third of its speed) in determining how much it damages you"

That would be the level 1 version of Impervious.


>>48161104
By default, there are no extra-historical things present besides you. So, no Cthulhu. You can't "declare" Hitler wins, but you could certainly help him do so, were that your choice.

I'd consider adding the possibility of introducing large fantastical elements, but that's a secondary priority.

What is the best waifu CYOA?

>>48161201
It makes sense to me. Is it intentional that it does nothing to stop something like fire?

>>48161240
Good question; that's a separate ability.

>>48161216
the one that has your favorite girl and all the other ones are shit so there's no choice.

>>48161216
The Game of Alice

>>48161240
Non-Reactor: Chemical reactions cannot affect your body from an external source. Acid will not affect you, nor will fire burn you. This does not prevent the heat transferal aspect of fire, however.

Heat Tolerance 2: Any external heat source up to 500F affects you as if it were 80F. You will still be able to "sense" how hot it is, it just won't be unpleasant or hurt you. Each additional ten degrees above that increases the felt temperature by 1 degree. So 1000F would affect you as if it were 130F.

>>48160613
>Easy Mode:
Morality Inducement - All of reality [30]
Health Zone - All of reality [30]
Limitless Energy [5]
Night Terrors [+15]

The main obstacles to growth - disease and conflict - will be done away with. Mankind will finally work together to create a better world. But that's boring.

>Guts Mode:
Male
Peak Human Body [8]
Manly Face [4]
x3 Strength Multiplier [8]
Extreme Sturdiness [10]
Super Reflexes [5]
Immunity to Pain [5]
Night Terrors [+15]

20 leftover points, but that is basically Guts.

>Emperor of Mankind Build:
Perfect Memory [10]
Genius Intellect [15]
Strong Telekinesis [20]
Strong Telepathy [30]
Teleportation [15]
Lightsaber [5]
Trickster God [+30]
Asexual [+15]

>My Actual Build:
Male
Average Body
Average Face
Strong Telekinesis [20]
Skill Copy [10]
Limitless Energy [5]
Magic Powers - All of reality [30]
Night Terrors [+15]

I grant the greatest long-term gift I can to humanity. Magic.

>>48161218
What's the point of the zero punishment upgrade? People already can't punish you for doing wrong.

>>48161584
Do you have a scientific background or are you just pulling stuff out of your ass, because if you're doing the latter then other anons will end up abusing and breaking your cyoa? Don't make your cyoa more complicated than you can handle is what I'm saying.

>>48161724
>>48161584
I'm with anon here.
>Chemical reactions cannot affect your body from an external source
so alcohol and pain killers have no effect on you. That might also affect food, but I'm not sure. It's enzymes doing their thing, I don't know if an enzymatic reaction counts as a chemical one.
Which is why I wouldn't try to sound smart-y.

>>48161584
Can you give those temperatures also in non-freedom units.

>>48161724
My scientific background, physics wise, is only at the undergraduate level. Post-graduate is more mathematical.

Regardless, I'm not sure there is much to "break" in the defenses section. That's the only part that will be particularly scientific in scope.

Nonetheless, the suggestion is appreciated.

>>48161813
The only thing that needs to be clarified there is by *external* I mean something acting on your body from the outside of your body.

Thanks, though.

>>48161815
For sure.

>>48159756
>>48159769
>anti venom
>regeneration
>separate form
>mind control
Take drawback menace
>spawning
>sidekick
Give spawn to sidekick
If I can choose abilities for sidekick then
>invisibility
>regeneration
>separate form

>>48161813
>>48161724
Idea for a cyoa: a pretentious snobbish god gives you weak powers because he mistakes you for a smelly homeless beggar and unknowingly words them as such that they're ripe for abuse.

I need some help. I'm making a CYOA where you choose options, and then see what the results of your choices are. Problem is, I can't see a good way to lay this out on the page so that people can't easily see the results ahead of time. Making a mystery box for literally every choice is just silly.

Maybe a PDF with spoiler blocks? Would that just annoy people?

>>48161958
These CYOA suck, and have zero replay value.

>>48161958
What, you mean like >>48159838 >>48159865?

>>48161958
>Making a mystery box for literally every choice is just silly.
But that sounds like exactly what you're trying to accomplish. Also note that you don't need to keep the contents of different boxes on different pages.

Also also note that some people are going to look at the contents before stating their choices, regardless of what you do.

>>48161958

Make one page for your choices, and a second page for the results.

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>>48161958
>it's a your waifu has a secret penis cyoa

>>48162014
I know people will look ahead. I just want to make it possible to choose blind for people who'd rather play that way, and I think that would make it more fun.

>>48161987
I guarantee it would have replay value.

>>48161997
That one you see all the options on the secret page - so it won't work as well for picking things one at a time from a main page.

>>48161958
Mystery boxes are trash.

>>48162050
Another retard who thinks he can do them without pissing us all off has arrived. They never learn.

>>48162065

any attention is good attention

>>48162050
No waifus. It's an Indiana Jones type deal.

>>48162089
Then what's the mystery box about? We already know that Jones has a dick.

>>48159865
Cheryl is absolutely perfect except for the fact that she's bigger than me. :(

>>48161872
That sounds great anon, get right on it!

>>48162142
You can make it smaller by sucking her off.

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I've been out for a while, is there an update for this?

Visual version: http://travellercyoa.livejournal.com/

>>48162142
>:(
Fuck off.

>>48162089
So the mystery box is about what treasure you find or something?
That sounds kind of cool, but wouldn't you research the ruins, or the treasure itself to have some kind of idea of what dangers and rewards to expect when you got there?

>>48159468
Yes please release the secret page mysterious author. I love this cyoa.

>>48159914
I don't remember any version with improved art.

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Does anyone have that cyoa with the white background that gives you a choice of a companion that would help you through your life?
One of the companions was a soldier that would later die, while another one is an apex predator crazy woman.

>>48162318
Text version is up to the 1.15 and the next image update will be here soon.

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>>48159838
fuck, this weakness of mine type of cyoa, now I'll again use several hours trying to deduce every girl secret

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>>48160613
>Body
Herm
Bodybuilder
Beautiful

>Boosts
Instant Regen
Super Reflexes
Limitless Energy

>Powers
Skill Copy
Small Pocket Dimension

I'm just going to roam the land and do whatever I like for the nest x thousand years. :^3

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>>48162515
Reposting the best cyoa we've had in months.

>>48162551
it wasn't that good

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>>48161815
>>48161813
>>48161724
Per advice, I simplified the language on the temperature aspect.

If anyone is willing to take a look at the first page, I'd be both impressed and appreciative if you can come up with a method of dying that I haven't covered.

>>48162342

a BUNCH of 'nofunallowed'fags were in the thread bitching about 'sexism' in games. (These are probably the same assholes as the 'No Waifu' fags we have currently.)

He wanted to make a entire page for the Futa Virus, but they bitched about Rapture Acadamy and then fucking played it.

Assholes.

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>>48162318
I'm assuming that you haven't seen the Ranks either, so I'm gonna also post the Mediafire link: mediafire.com/folder/43r0qdm4sm895/The_End_Approaches

>>48162360
>>48162629
thanks!

>>48162629
What are the ranks? player made companions?

>>48162604
the first one gives you poison immunity. Does that include toxins and venom?
>Chemical reactions cannot affect your body from the outside.
What about just saying "external surfaces" or something? I assume you're saying "someone splashing acid on your skin does nothing".
Does fire killing cells really count as a chemical reaction?
>Diet level 2
so a fatty would never be able to lose fat, and you would never be able to gain muscle?
>Impervious level 2
probably should be "one-hundredth".

>>48159967
So I'm guessing my new boss's name is something like "Cuck", given his purview and the fact that the internet says it a lot. Is that right?

>>48162675
That's about it, but those are just the ones that Highlander is adding, he keeps every build the cyoa gets for writefag purposes.

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>>48162495
well, trying to guess easy:
1.Beatrice is not human but AYYYY or just genetically muated
2.Meshara was a rich guy that turned himself into a girl, somehow
3.Cheryl is no natural. She was either lab grow or some other way, having 9 kids is possible yet risky

4.Tabitha two faced crazy vegan or could probably be just into bestiality due to love of animals. I'm missing something every time so will need to read her bio again, very carefully

5. Roberta either fucks on side with some random men or was married, clearly missing ring finger is very important to her secret

I need to start making table of points about girls to determine possible secret

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>>48162675
Yep. They're the builds that people have made that Highlander took and modified them so they weren't as autistic as they came in.

Here's an example.

>>48162604
also
>method of dying not covered
you say you can decrease the strength of your skin locally. Just do that and cut yourself.
Or eat a fuckload of pills since that's a chemical reaction on the inside, not outside.
Or go to space.
I don't remember if you covered cancer.

>>48162724
Thanks for clarifying. My character building skills are quite bad so these will probably help me improve it.

>>48162694
It's meant to include toxins and venoms; will clarify, thanks.

For the second, I also want it to include the case where, for example, someone splashes acid on you, and some gets in your mouth. Not sure the best way to word that.

Good point on the fatty; should clarify it to be "will never deteriorate", or something like that.

Thanks for the catch on the hundreth

>>48162728
I don't mean that it won't be *possible* to die, I just want to ensure that there is an option for protection against any possible cause of harm. Suicide will always be possible by default.

A "fuckload of pills" should be covered under Iron Gut, though the language does not make that clear.

Cancer is covered under your default immunity to disease.

As far as space, thanks. I do have to add something for atmospheric pressure and gravitational force.

>>48162716
since all of them are probably worse than I've imagined, so the only option is to pick none. Fucking witches trying to trick me

>>48162604
Pressure. You could be sealed into a steel coffin and dropped into the lowest depths of the mariana trench until you'd be reduced to a flattened handful of flesh. Now headpat me or correct me.

>>48159865
oh come on, there is literally no way to guess any of those beside Heather

>>48162809
>It's meant to include toxins and venoms; will clarify, thanks.
AFAIK they're all toxins, the distinction being that venom is injected whereas poison is ingested/absorbed.

Also, what determines whether a chemical reaction is on the outside/inside? What happens if you inject acid (isn't covered by Iron Gut since you're not ingesting it, the chemical reaction would presumably happen inside the body rather than outside)?

>>48162604
>>48162853
Vibrations aren't covered either.
Fucking nobody remembers sonic damage.

>>48162809
>A "fuckload of pills" should be covered under Iron Gut,
I'm not seeing it. Pain killers etc. aren't poisons that do harm, so an overdose should be possible
I think I get how anon enjoys "breaking cyoas" now.

>>48162969
Wouldn't that count as a shockwave, which is given as an example of what counts as impact?

>>48162604
Heartbreak.

Or is psychological damage a WIP?

>>48162989
>Pain killers etc. aren't poisons that do harm
Too high amount of pretty much any substance would be poisonous when ingested, no?

What is power and what are some cyoas where I can get a lot of it?

>>48163044
The first Worm CYOA.

>>48163059
Which one is that?

>>48163009
yeah but the option specifically says "poisons that would harm you".
And I'm arguing that a pain killer wouldn't harm you, or count as a poison. I could be wrong about the last part. So since one pain killer doesn't harm you, does it count that fifty would?
That is, does the "that would harm you" clause apply to each individual pill? Because each pill would not harm you. It is only harmful when you eat fifty.

You did remind me of water poisoning
Diet level 1
>may eat or drink what you wish without it
affecting your physique negatively
Water poisoning has no effect on your physique.

>>48162995
Only the exterior impacts; it could do a decent amount of trauma from your internal organs tearing at each other.

Similarly, high G-forces or rapid accelerations/decelerations might slip by.

>>48163102
>Only the exterior impacts; it could do a decent amount of trauma from your internal organs tearing at each other.
But wouldn't the impact have to be external before it becomes internal, and as such it would be dampened enough to not do damage (if you take the impact perks)?

>>48163077
I love you. Never abandon us.

>>48163166
I wonder if our AI will start producing cyoas of its own soon

>>48163207
with each day it's posts get more complicated. I've never seen ANY of the cyoas he mades builds to, but there clearly some mishmash of several existing one

>>48162853
You may have a headpat, good sir, though the previous precious pedant pointed to pressure prior.
Thanks, though, seriously.

>>48162957
Yeah, I'll have to generalize more on the chemical reaction thing. For example,

>>48163090
I'll probably just say something along the lines of "you cannot be harmed by things you ingest", or something.

Thanks for all the feedback.

>>48163253
>with each day it's posts get more complicated.
It's always one build per post, for some CYOA that may or may not have been posted in the thread.
>I've never seen ANY of the cyoas he mades builds to, but there clearly some mishmash of several existing one
If they haven't been posted here, they've been posted on either plebbit or (3+5)chan.

>SDA and Angel don't post anymore
Suicide pact?

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>>48163425
You'd wish, they will be back soon to haunt thread

>>48162969
>sonic
Isn't sonic damage just waves of kinetic force? In which case it would be covered by Impervious.

Or am I wrong?

>>48163425
They stopped posting since that thread drama about them shitting up the threads.

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>>48159862
wew tumblr is triggered.
Seriously though, I know this is bait but I've seen 100x worse as far as fetishes go.
This CYOA is actually great.

>>48163612
Considering the name they're complaining about posted last thread about how much they hate white people, your post is hilarious and ironic.

>>48162342
Some faggot autist decided to the replace the images on an old version of vampire king (without the authors permission) with shitty generic anime and decided that it was an "improvement"

Im betting it's the same anon that mentioned it in the first place. It was so forgettable that only culprit would ever bother bringing it up again let alone describe it as an improvement

>>48163495
Don't they do that all the time? What was different this time around?

>>48163642
Post the anime art one. I want to have a good laugh.

>>48163699
Why would I bother to save it?

>>48162495
>>48162716

Are you guys blind or something?

>>48163085

The one whose weakest power is becoming an absolutely invincible/invulnerable super man with no kryptonite.

>>48163331
If anyone can show me a similar setting featuring an all-male boarding school, I'd gladly turn it into a cyoa. Assuming the source material is interesting enough of course.

>>48163788
why would to play a cyoa on attending an implied-to-be-gay, all-boys boarding school?

>>48163425
>>48163459
>>48163495
>>48163692
I still post. I just do it anonymously.

A great evil has been sealed, but it is only a matter of time before it is released again.

>>48163737
why

>>48163077
Which CYOA was this?

>>48164004

Because there's a page with the secrets

>>48164026
what's the point of reading secrets before trying to calculate them yourself first?

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>>48163917
>A great evil
>implying that anyone here is notable enough or evil enough to warrant that description
I really wouldn't mind if cyoag could move on from this boogeymanning meme, and say did CYOAs or discussed them or something.

>>48163331
The box.

>>48164021
http://___ch.net/cyoa/res/1199.html

Replace the ___ with an 8 for the actual URL.

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>>48164047
>and say did CYOAs or discussed them or something.
what

did you have a stroke

>>48164169
Looks like they just forgot the commas from both sides of "say", like so:
>and, say, did CYOAs or discussed them or something

>>48164216
Now it makes sense. This is a good example as to why grammar and punctuation is important.

Eat your vitamins.

>>48163917
>A great evil has been sealed
Alright, what did you do with Angel? Was /x/ involved?
Will you ever bring her back?

moar cyoas, I demand blackmail one

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Okay, I think I fixed all the problems people pointed out. Thanks for that.

Body/Mind/Immortality tentatively done. Now onto the "Powers" section.

Criticism continues to be appreciated.

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>Life Is a Rock: Selfish (probably)
I don't really want everyone else to be immortal. Being the only full immortal lets me actually accomplish unique things with my life.

>Fly Like an Eagle: Selfish
Mandatory with selfish immortality. This allows time travel, which solves the problem of outliving the universe/human race

>Be the little girl: Selfish
Here's where the "probably" came in on the first. I don't want to be stuck looking like a child forever, I'd rather be a young adult girl. Technically this combo shouldn't allow that but I'm going to take it as allowing me to age up to 20 like the selfless option.

>Wizard: Selfless
Since I'm indestructable I don't need to worry about being hurt with magic. I'm not really here for this kind of power.

>Mei Waifu: Selfless
I don't have a Waifu, and I'm going to be the girl anyway.

>Series of Tubes: Selfless
Selfish is kind of weak here anyway. I don't really care

>In Space, Baby: Selfless
FTL civilization sounds good to me

>Slam Jam: Selfless
I'd rather learn that sort of skill normally over my infinite life

>King-Guy: Selfless
I don't really want to be king. Really I want to live something of a quiet life on the edge of humanity, observing and maybe manipulating a little for the longterm.

>Sacrifice: None
Why would anyone pick this? Also I can time travel so in the event of catastrophe I can find some way to handle it myself.

>>48164440
>blackmail one
I've seen you post that before, what does it even mean?
also
>demand

>>48164650
>North America
Always wanted to live in an English speaking country. I hear a lot of whining over how hard American High School is, so I'll find out for myself. I think I only did homework for History in my last year and did all assignments when we had "free periods", so let's see.
>Family and friends +10
I'm dead anyway, and I'll never see them again.

fuck I want so many of these gems, but I also want complete control over how I look and my skills/talents in my new lief
Specifically the Diamond, Opal and Malachite/Emerald
>Topaz (100)
for that looking and being young effect.
>Eastern European (98)
Mixed confused me, and taking both vices AND having to pay for it turned me off.
>Height: 160 cm (93)
changing height is super expensive
>Vice: Drinking + Smoking
oh come on why am I forced to be a degenerate smoker?
>Hair: Brown
>Eyes: Lighter brown
>Girl
>Bisexual
because why not. Girls are hot.
>Hair length: Regular
>Looks: Cute (86)
I don't understand your "1-10" scale. Is plain and average not the same? Can a cute girl not be an 8/10?
The physical features are really expensive, too. Getting a body you'd get from not eating like a pig, and exercise two+ times a week, costs the same as the supernatural gems.
I'll probably come back and get more gems, I feel.
>Perfect smile (80)
>Dat ass (70)
Which should really let you pick any ass size for free.
>Pleasant period (64)
>Breasts: 74B (60)
>Ass: Apple (54)
Oh. So "dat ass" does do something. I was too quick.

I still think it's unfair you have to pay to be average, and I see anon's point on "if you were good at something before, you're forced to pick it still" given what you say with being bad at languages
The costs really put a damper on my plans of being a qt3.14 artistic girl who's also amazing at sports but wears sundresses and isn't a tomboy/tsundere
>Music: Good (45)
>Singing: Bad (45)
>Languages: +1-2 (42)
English, Polish (both free), German and my native language.

>>48164719
So basically I have to pay points to know all the languages I already did, and I get Polish for free.
>Science: Good (33)
I don't think I qualify for being "great", but who knows.
>Math: Average (30)
>Art: Good (21)
>Mechanics: Bad (23)
>Outdoors: Bad (25)

Hobbies:
>Walk/running
>Gym
>Hockey (20)
>Drawing (15)
>An instrument (bass) (5)
I have to agree with anon again, I could have got "never make enemies" for the same cost as "you have time to play an instrument, but you won't be good unless you pay for that as a side"
As a sidenote, if I just pick "Music Class", won't that be the same as picking "An instrument"? Except it's free

Classes:
>Music class, Theatre, Dance (3)
>Art (regular), Visual communication (2)
>Politics, religion (2)
>Writing, literature, humanities (3)
>Algebra, calculus, economics (3)
>Biology, chemistry (2)
>P.E. & Health (1)

>Jobs: Unemployed (5)
>Groups: Motley crue (0)

I'm almost forced to pick Adopted, thanks to the +2 points, but I'd rather
>Nuclear family (-5)
>Sport star cousin (-2)
why would this give points?
>Sexy older sister (-5)
gotta have some help to adjust to being a girl.
>Loving imouto (-10)
>Suburban house (-18)

>Quick learner
I'd have loved to buy more, mainly Desirable Scent and Likable/Trustworthy. It's almost a shame to have so many perks and only pick one.

The room sharing section is weird, since you need to have already bought them. Which reminds me, I'd love a big brother option, that isn't a nerd. Preferably a protective jock.
>Solo (-23)
>Artist's Studio
wait, why would a teenager in high school have a damn car?
>bike

>Complications
Yeah, I'm not fucking myself over for the next 80 years.
>Vices
>Drinking and smoking ("free")
Guess I end up with -23 points.

>We will be watching, do not disappoint.
I'm kinda not okay with God and Satan sitting together, having a giggle as I break down mentally not knowing if I'm doing the "right" thing, and whether this action will get me placed in Hell or not.

>>48164495
Selfish ez

Selfish (who the fuck wants africans and shit flying into other countries in droves, Jesus Christ how horrifying this is the selfless option)

Selfless, I'm sure there are people who want it more than I do

Selfish

Selfish, really now

Selfless, simply because I want ultra-high speed internet wherever I may be. Made more selfishly than the selfish option would have been really.

Selfless, knowing everything seems more a curse than anything else, and who cares about aliens when they're no threat?

Selfish I guess, free strength and speed and coordination etc

Selfish, simply delegate all decisions to a group of competent people and leave them be for years on end. Or even let the world run as it does now and be the man behind the curtain, not like they need to know which decisions were mine and not like they can assassinate me for it either.

None, both blow.

>>48159756
I'm considering whether to make a cyoa for girls. How many straight or bi girls are there here?

>>48164650
Scientist if you are here I want to go over some of the specific flaws in this CYOA. At current I've been trying to make a build but I keep hitting roadblock after roadblock

>Abilities
People have complained about this many times, this is the most important problem to fix. The main idea of the CYOA is supposed to be "your old self +", but ultimately this entire section REPLACES your current abilities, and unless you spend large numbers of points it will make them all worse.

The solution is to rewrite it as a + or - to current, rather than a fixed level. Spend ZERO points to keep your current skills in any area. You can improve any skill by up to 3 levels or reduce it (to gain points) by 1 level. Basically it would look like "Singing, +5 worse, 0 no change, -5 slightly better, -10 much better, -20 amazing" Prices at your discretion except for the no change which MUST be 0.

>Physical Features
Simply put, too many of them are redundant with "Looks". One would expect Godly Looks to come with things like clear skin, long legs etc. You can't have godly looks while being fat (slow metab) or severe acne.

The solution is to delete ALL physical appearance entries from physical features. Things like little/no body hair (replace with no/easy shaving), pleasant period, and long tongue are all fine. They provide bonuses over and above your base appearance that you are paying for. Deleting the "looks" category instead would be a bad idea, people want a generalization for that.

>>48165397
>Hobbies, jobs, and social circles
Complaints here have been that the section is too rigid, that your new life is devoid of free will. I think only a clarification is needed.

Job is your part time job during high schools. You CAN quit/change jobs, but that's as hard to do as in real life (social/familial pressure prevents quitting normally)

Hobbies come with all the required stuff and some skills to complete them. More importantly, your personality is modified to find enjoyment in any hobby you pick. You can easily pick up a new hobby if you can buy the stuff required (eg a computer), but unless you like it NOW, there's no guarantee you will ever be interested. Picking up "walking" will probably feel like a chore unless you like walking already.

>Ethnicity
This is a personal complaint, so I've saved it for the last and least. All of the races currently are just too "bad". Previous versions of the CYOA balanced good and bad with races, leaving neutral choices on the table as well. This version ALL the races have something horribly bad with them. In most cases it's the Vice. Vices are typically personality changes, and we are being forced to take them or be niggers.

The solution is to put back the "neutral" nondescript white choice with no special pros or cons, and rebalance all other races so that the gain and loss is equal and the race itself is a primarily aesthetic choice.

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Highlander, some questions for you of the Lore.

>> What differentiates different shards of corruption?

>> How do you fight such monstrosities?

>> How do they enter realities?

>> Would you consider connecting Traveler's Tale with the greater CYOA meta universe as a large Omniverse that encapsulates many realities where different ass-hats try to grant people wishes and send them off to some backwater plane for a few chuckles?

possibly even a nod and a wink to Jump Chain?

also, does any one know when urban fantasy is expected. It is killing me! I love the concept of urban fantasy so much. Thanks

>>48165383
>I'm considering whether to make a cyoa for girls.
.... why?
and there are at least 4 girls, three of why are lesbians and the straight girl is a slut who talks about how dick width > length and how a "wide dicked guy ruined her for other men"
Yes, my life is so dull that I remember stupid, pointless shit like this

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>>48165460
Ah yes, the ancient battle.

>>48165434
>>> Would you consider connecting Traveler's Tale with the greater CYOA meta universe as a large Omniverse that encapsulates many realities where different ass-hats try to grant people wishes and send them off to some backwater plane for a few chuckles?
>
>possibly even a nod and a wink to Jump Chain?
please don't

Quiet mysteriously had to leave after failing his ETA. He may be "gone for months".

Rolled 2 (1d2)

>>48164495
> 2 Selfish, 1 Selfless.

>Life As A Rock(Selfless)

Why not, really?

Fly Like An Eagle(1d2)

Becoming god-king is interesting. Might prevent the fall of Rome or go back further and prevent her rise. We'll see.

>Be The Little Girl (Selfless)

Lolis are cute but I'd rather be a shota if anything.

>Magic(Selfish)

I'd rather be the only magic user, desu. If we encounter Elves, I'd like to have the power to prevent their enslavement.

>Waifu (1d2)

Do I have to have an idea of who I'd like to spend the rest of my life with? I wasn't sure so rolled.

>Tubes(Selfless)

>In Space(Selfless)
What would I even do with that information?

>Slam Jam(Selfless)

I don't like sports that much.

>King-Guy(Selfless)

Who wants to be king?

>Sacrifice(Selfish)

Timeloops...eww.

>>48165460
Don't forget the Korean chick with a lady boner for white guys, beastiality, and father-daughter incest.

>>48165531
right, how could I forget.

>>48165531
谁是了那?

>>48164495
>Life is a rock
Selfish. I Prefer immortality for myself not for others I don't care about. Also the change to people mentally would be huge since you can't die of old age.
>Fly like an eagle
Selfish. I like the idea of flash stepping. Also if everyone was able to fly I'd imagine a bunch of fatties just flying around since they don't need to exert any physical force in order to get from point A, to point B.
>Be the little girl
Selfless. I don't mind not being a little girl, nor do I see any benefit.
>Wizard
Selfish. For the sole reason that this power given to everyone and anything in the world spells disaster if some idiot savant gets hold of it and nukes the nearest town cause a lady hurt muh feelings.
>Mai waifu
Selfish. Perfect companion that is also immortal and can do no wrong to you. What more can you ask?
>Series of Tubes
Selfish. Though, I do like the thought of playing against someone at the other side of the world without experiencing lag.
I prefer the thought of getting passive income.
>In space, baby
Selfless. I want cowboy bebop.
>Slam Jam
Selfish. People has to cheat to getz a chance in beating the kang.
>King-guy
Selfish. I am the kang.
>Sacrifice
Forfeit. If I choose either option I would lose something I like. Which is bad.

>>48165495
The length one has too much length but just enough girth. The girth one has just enough length but too much girth.

Both are losers desu

>>48165602
She said she's Korean-American, so I don't know if she reads Korean. Her ethnicity only came up because she said she has an interracial fetish, but only if the guys are white.

>>48165978
yeah that's definitely not some fag pretending to be a girl on the internet

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>>48166034

>>48163642
Oh I think I remember that. However I doubt recall what the new images looked like.

>>48166034
If we're only accepting photo evidence, then Angel's literally the only female in CYOA Gen.

>>48166248
And me.

>>48165434
>Jumpchain
Why would you add cancer to highlanders work?

>>48164650
Home Region: D12=10 North America
Heirloom: Pearl
Ethnicity: African
Height: 180cm
Hair: Black
Eye: Brown
Orientation & Gender: Heterosexal; Male before, male now. [90]
Hair Length: Short [88]
Physical Features: Toned Body [78], Selective Infertility [68]
Looks: Gorgeous [55]
Penis Size: 8 inches

Ability:
Music: Bad
Singing: Bad
Language: +1-2 (French and Japanese) [52]
Science: Great [37]
Math: Good [28]
Humanities: Average [25]
Art: Bad
Mechanics: Average [19]
Outdoors: Average [16]

Hobbies:
-Gym
-Vidya [11]

Classes:
English: English (Reg), Literature, Humanities
Math: Algebra, Calculus, Economics
Science: Intro Science, Physics
Trade: Electrical
Skills: Business, Engineering
Computers: Programming, Comp Sci, Info Tech, Networking
Misc: Driver's Ed

Jobs: Programmer [11] ;S.Apart "bonus"

Groups: Motley Crue [6]

Family: Emancipated [9]
Home: Small Apartment [5]

Perk: Quick Learner
Room Sharing: Solo [0]
Room Deco: Gamer Battlestation
Transport: None
Best Friend: Lara Krone

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>>48165434
>Jumpchain

From what I recall, the existing Hubworlds are just ones that have a Traveller base. There are billions of universes you could hypothetically discover with Explorer and Traveller Adept.

>where different ass-hats try to grant people wishes and send them off to some backwater plane for a few chuckles?

That doesn't even fit the theme of Travellers' Tale.

>>48166314
>photo evidence

>>48164719
Oh, and I pick whoever is a nerdy guy shy around girls who will develop a crush on me and I pretend like I don't know as my best friend.
I'm gonna husbando the shit out of him, but we have to play this game first

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telepathy tier 2
companion
planets tier 2
clone
big red button

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>>48160760
Added that pocket dimension. If you're inclined to take a look, I'm curious if such a thing would affect your desire to give the CYOA a try.

If it's not going to make a difference, I may leave it out.

Oh, and started padding out the intro.

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>>48166597
Here

You get 4 bronze, 2 silver and 1 gold coins to pick and choose which magical potions you'd like to purchase:

http://pastebin.com/t9E4PvD8

>>48162338
It could be that when you pick a certain option, the treasure curses you.

>>48166850
You'll get more replies from just putting it on an image, even without pics

>>48166711
Could maybe do with options for seeing what happens outside while you're in (e.g. if you don't want to scare/confuse people by appearing from thin air), and for time flowing differently (even to the point of the outside being frozen while you're in).

>>48162342
I'm tempted to post Rapture Academy every thread as an offering to the author for the results page.

>>48166883
That pastebin is old. Someone just reposted it is all. Guy was going to do an image version but dropped off the face of the earth.

>>48166850

Suspended Mixture -1G
Silvery Oil -1S
Silvery Oil -1S
Pulsating Potion -1B [add silvery oil]
Ionized Potion -1B [add silvery oil]
Clear Potion -1B
Boiling Potion -1B

First I'll down the Clear Potion and use it to make sure what I'm intending to do won't offend the shop keeper to the point he decides to magically obliterate me where I stand...

The plan is to buy the Suspended Mixture to become a wizard, and use my enhanced Ionized Potion's ability to copy the shopkeeper's knowledge of magic (or, if that's too broad a field, I'll use the Clear Potion's effect to determine which type of magic I should learn from him). Beyond that, I'll use another Silvery Oil to enhance a Pulsating Potion in order to maximize my odds of living long enough to push past any possible magical plateau's I reach and graduate from Hedge Wizard status. Lastly, I'll use my final bronze coin on the Boiling Potion because I always like to take powers that let me forgo sleep. I'll sleep for like half an hour a night in order to keep feeling well-rested.

>>48166850
Here's a newer version: http://pastebin.com/5nc0giFw

>>48166884
Both excellent suggestions!

Also caused me to remember I was going to do a windows options, where you could set each window to look at a different place in the world you had visited.

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>>48166597
Here

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disadvantages case 53, without a map, pint-sized and reincarnation

difficulty god mode
powers wild card life creation, twins and apprentice

advantages companion, item of power, comic book pretty, man of mystery, charles atlas superpower, special snowflake, cauldron vials, bad@&& normal, resources and plot armor

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>>48166777
Nice trips.

>>48166910
>dropped off the face of the earth
This has happened so many times I've stopped reading WIPs.

>>48166929
Stupid cute shark.

Is highlander online? i've got a buddy that is willing to do art for ya. just needs direction, other authors welcome.

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>>48167015
a piece of his work...

I just watched the first episode of taboo tattoo and it reminded me of this thread.

>>48167038
Reminds me of some manhwa I read

>>48166923

Nice!

>>48166976

In all fairness, the potion cyoa is complete, it just hasn't been turned into a fancy image.

>>48167038
This picture is oddly sexual. Why?

>>48167084
I vaguely remember an anon stating he had photoshop skills but no writing skills hence he couldn't make cyoas. That guy should do it.

>>48166923
I think I'd make the same choices as I did here:
>>48166914

But I'd convert my two additional Bronze Coins into a single Silver Coin, which I'd use (along side my additional Silver Coin) to purchase the White Oil and the Glimmering Oil.

With a Silvered Ionized Potion granting me the ability to copy other's knowledge from a distance, it shouldn't be too hard to push past Hedge Wizard status even without a familiar, I just need to get out into the world and find some other wizards.... so I'll probably copy the shop keeper's knowledge of Divination.

A few days ago a CYOA general started out with a CYOA about 12-16 year old newtypes that had to move to a new town, but the thread 404'd before I could actually finish typing up my choices. Does anyone have that so I could finish it?

Appreciate it.

>>48167182
Gundam newtypes?

>>48167188
Nah, it was more of an occult setting, I just used newtypes as joke because you generate a kid with special powers.

>>48167160
>Bronze Coins
They're copper, not bronze.

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>>48167182
No clue what the hell a newtype is, but could you be talking about this?

>>48167182
Gods Eater newtypes?

You might be looking for Gifted.

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>>48166597
I'm a grill too btw, I made some coyas too but nobody liked them :(

This is an old pic of my

>>48167182
>the thread 404'd
What do you mean? It's still up in 4chan's own archives: >>48129688

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>>48167238
Regardless, I don't want to leave a CYOA half-posted.

>>48165434
>> What differentiates different shards of corruption?
From what? You'll need to specify.

>> How do you fight such monstrosities?
Not easily. Best case scenario you avoid the whole thing and stab the guy trying to bring them into the physical realities. Worst case scenario? Throw fucking everything at the hole and pray the augur can find a way to close it.

>> How do they enter realities?
Cut the space between worlds, and such things as time, space and dimensions mean little.

>> Would you consider connecting Traveler's Tale with the greater CYOA meta universe as a large Omniverse that encapsulates many realities where different ass-hats try to grant people wishes and send them off to some backwater plane for a few chuckles?
Traveller already exists in the greater scheme of things, the entire concept of it was based on the idea that everything is out there, somewhere. And beyond that is a force of unstoppable will that unless all things fit into place would wipe it away to nothing. Technically everything is canon, but there are some powers & timelines that the augur will tell you to ignore.

As for the first spoiler... that would end in bloodshed because REEEE MUH SPACE ABUSES.

And as for quiet, for all we know his electricity could just vanish. Such is life in rural Pakistan.

>>48167015
Romantically Apocalyptic?
I'm familiar with his work, and there are a few things I'd ask if he's offering.

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>>48167255

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>>48167275

>>48167238
Yeah, that's what I was talking about!

Thanks senpai.

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>>48167286
>>48167293
No problem, pal.

>>48167245
>you will never be SDA's girlfriend, taking her on dates so she can't shitpost
Oh what I'd give to be the hero we deserve

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>>48167245

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>>48166923
>http://pastebin.com/5nc0giFw
dang... so much for this WIP, huh. No love lost, though, this seems like a good (better) CYOA. Well, guess it's back to the drawing board...

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>>48167116

>>48167318
>you will never be a mod and ban sda, angel, ai before being demoted
Pretty sad

>>48167038
is that from romantically apocalyptic?

i think it is from romantically apocalyptic

im tired

>>48167342
Please don't stop working on a CYOA just because someone else was making or has made something similar.

>>48160613
50
+30
Body -7 total
Female body builder, beautiful
Boosts -58, -65 total
Perfect memory, genius intellect, Omniglot, immunity to pain -45
X3 strength, limitless energy, -13
Powers -15, -80 total
Weak telekinesis -5
Skill copy -10
G. powers
n/a
Items
n/a
Downsides
Night terrors +15
No sense of taste or smell +15

Female because it’s cheaper than male, and a herm would be ostracized by society. Mental enhancements mean I can research science the hard way whist shortcutting the language barrier and pain immunity is a must for an immortal. Strength boost to stop rape, and limitless energy to combat night terrors. Weak telekinesis without a Manton limit is broken as fuck, and skill copy will even out my points score. Any criticism?

>>48167342
I liked it but I would have preferred images desu. Well written and had interesting lore. What I didn't understand was the magic 'plateauing' thing. What does that mean exactly? That one is limited by their creativity? That they magically cannot become stronger due to inherent limitations?

>>48167116
I think that says more about you than the picture.

>>48167245
SDA! What have you done with Angel? Bring her back.

>>48167434
Just one: how is weak telekinesis broken? You can only exert 10kg of force.

>>48167532
I have it from a trusted source that SDA has locked up Angel in a lesbian sex dungeon and is having her wicked ways with her.

>>48167598
Actually all of those sound fun. Is there a limit?

Why SDA?

Why post modrbait?

>>48167647
That >>48167598 wasn't me.

>>48166711

As is, it looks like something I'd have fun with.

Whenever I try to play this cyoa here >>48160613 I always wind up going the "ugly man with strong telepathy and a large pocket dimension + star trek replicator" route, completely subverting the point of the cyoa.... But in theory it's possible for people (other than myself, apparently) to just ignore those kinds of options.

>>48167641
It's "3 or more" so there shouldn't be a limit.

Although any build other than

Ask on date
Hold hands
Cute
Consensual
Lesbianism
Fall in love
Marry
Buttrape
Spanking
Happily ever after

Is shit and should never be chosen. So decrees our AI overlord.

>>48167581

>without a Manton limit

I suspect they read a lot of Worm fanfics and they're imagining using their TK to punch people in their brains and shit.

>>48167599
>Implying it isn't the other way around

>>48167581
A punch to the brain will kill, as would halting the blood in the veins at particular points or bursting the vessel. Also the nerve in the spine can be torn from within the bone. The list goes on and on. for non internal stuff, daggers and needles can be held int the air and thrown or small light shields held around the person.

I'm going to make a cyoa soon. It'll be fetishy but I'll see if I can add some other options for those who don't share my fucked up sexuality. Just asking for some extra ideas for options and powers etc., what you'd like to see.
Basic premise: You go to a new planet where there are three "genders". Women work like on earth, but all men who aren't "alpha males"/"Chad" are turned into traps/sissies.
You can pick to be either of the three genders, and can make changes to your body and situation e.g get a harem, certain rules don't affect you

I have only recently begun keeping tabs on this general thread, and /tg/ as a whole.

Who are these SDA and Angel people? I keep hearing the words "lesbian" and "sex dungeon" and shit like that thrown around, which really gets me going.

>>48167868

/int/fag, It's two namefags from the thread. Do not worry about them, or do. I hope you get a headache and heartburn.

>>48167868
Can you go ask that shit on the IRC instead of here?

>>48167838
Can it be futas instead? Sissies are utter shit while at least futas can be outwardly attracive even if they're the result of guys who used to be spineless wimps?

Also, there is not enough submissive futa material in the world

>>48165414
I hate the ethnicity as well. I can't have blond hair without being a sjw or a drug addict.

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>>48167838
This sounds like it's going to be a lot of fun.

>>48167838
Bless you, anon. Bless you.

>>48167838
add lesbians

>>48167901
Never used IRC.

>>48167900
Okie. I won't worry about them. And I already have heartburn. You don't have to wish for it, anon.

>>48167906
No, anon, there is too much futa in the world, wholesale. I wish that fetish was fucking gone so that /d/ wouldn't be so garbage all the time.

>>48167906
I think anon is using forced feminization for his premise. Like all the weak(willed) men get turned into traps/sissies. They're not really a third gender. Just my thoughts though.

>>48167838
The only thing that would this cyoa premise better would be cuntboys, as in traps/sissies who get their genitals changed to complete their transformation.

>>48167868
Angel is the almighty and beautiful queen of /cyoa/, to whom all good anons pay homage to and whisper prayers to her greatness before they sleep, thus fueling her Luminous Raiment of the Esteemed so that she may bless all the Good and Righteous CYOA creators with inspiration and drive.

SDA is the Forbidden one, a fool who dares to act against the goddess and plots to disrupt our resplendant garden using her disgusting whorish wolfgirl cowtits.

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>>48167838

>>48167868
angel and sda are some lesbians that shit up and derail threads.

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>>48168033
This is the truth, blessed be our Angel.

>>48167838

My only complaint about the Slut Life cyoa is that there aren't enough options for "Chad" type builds (it's hard to make a build without taking some kind of emasculating draw back), so maybe when you're designing drawbacks you could make a few that'd be acceptable for a true alpha male.

>>48167666
Heh. Definitely not doing a replicator.

I didn't really want to have a computer option, but I'd probably loose too many participants if that wasn't at least an option.

Thanks for the feedback.

>>48168109
What kind of drawback could be acceptable for a Chad? Being a 9.9 instead of a 10? Having to workout once a week instead of once a month to retain your perfect physique? Being so incredibly genetically superior that you literally cannot communicate with lesser men who are like pudgy cavemen compared to your glory?

difficulty easy mode
goddesses bastet
urban living
increased strength
divine blessing

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Guy working on revision of pic related. What do you guys want to see in it? So far, I'm adding several boons, making companions optional (and granting you a choice from several options if you choose to go without one), and maybe groups for you to join.

In addition, the bits of lore building in the second part of this will be slightly altered, removing one of the most complained about options, and adding some new interesting quests.

Thoughts?

>>48167956
>>48167948
>>48167906
>>48167838
I wish /d/ would fucking leave. We have enough of your shitty CYOAs as is.

>>48167788
Isn't Angel a major sub though?

>>48160613
Anyone know that actual filename of this?

>>48168204
I want an assured position of power within the demonic hierarchy depending on how well I complete my quests/missions. That's all.

>>48168173
One that makes you even more like a Chad, where other guys rapidly grow to dislike you after spending time in your company, and women only see you as a no-strings attached walking vibrator?

The kind of thing that would be fun for hedonism in the short term, but be horrible once the player reaches the point where Chads normally settle down and get a Stacy wife, a dadbod, and 2.5 children, preferrably boys so he can lecture them about Being A Man.

>>48168173
Being a total asshole. For all the girls that can't resist him he'll never have a meaningful connection with anybody, male or female. Physically incapable of being satisfied with one woman for more than a week.

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>>48168275
I'll consider that, maybe if you spread your patron's influence enough.

>>48168033
Amen.

For her grace is the most boundless and her divine nipples the puffiest.

>>48168173
Off the top of my head:

Pump and Dump - You're unable to contact someone after you've had a sex with them.

Bully - You gain a strong compulsion to physically/sexually dominate any sissy you meet for the first time.

Gym Rat - You must spend at least 3 hours a day lifting free weights at the gym.

I'm not saying you have to make things easy on Chad's, just make it so they can stay true to form, you know?

>>48168278
Those are Failed Chads. Real Chads end up becoming succesful CEO's or professional athlethes, retain their /fit/ physiques, fuck thousands of women, and end up with several dozen children they don't pay child support for. They might eventually marry a gorgeous women who provides them with 2.5 children but those women always know that they are but one of Chad's many possessions and are honoured to be granted that privilege.

The Chad meme knows no end.

>>48168338
>and her divine nipples the puffiest
S-source?

>>48167238
>>48167255
>>48167275
>>48167286
>>48167310
Gender: Male
Age: 16
Source: Divine
Emotional: No Change
Physical: Perfect [4]
Mental: Sharpened [7]
Life: No Change
Memory: Dissonance
Spiritual: Magnet [2]
Gifts:
-Blessing [6]
-Empathy [8]
-Charm [11]
-Pyrokinesis [14]
-Future Sight [16]
-Healing+Self-Service+Miracle [26]
-Vitality [29]
-Athleticism+Peak Human [36]
Curse:
-Asexual [30]

Guardian: Ally (Nicholas Cochran)
Home: Westwood Heights
Allies: Leah Dawson, Derek Wright, Anna Ramstead
Henry Morris, Louise Webb
Perks: Overcome, Apprentice

Goody two shoes "blessed" by Sandalphon to fight against evil.

>>48168204
A point buy at the end like in >>48163158. Minor to moderate boons that should be overshadowed by the Sin choices. It would increase the diversity of builds and add flavor.

Some boons off the top of my head:

-Super fast wifi everywhere
-A cellphone with capabilities 5 years into the future
-1 pill that restores the mortal ingester to healthy and their prime. Damns their soul to hell.
-Sense good/sense evil aura.

>>48167238
>>48167255
>>48167275
>>48167286
>>48167310

Gender:Male
Age: 13
Power Source: Psychic energy

Changes
Emotional: No change (free)
Physical: Perfect (-4)
Mental: Enhanced (-6)
Life: No change +10
Memory: Dissonace (free)
Spiritual: Magnet +5

Gifts
Telekinesis -4/Precision -2/Power -3
Pyrokinesis -3/Control -3/Catalyst-2/Source -5
Future Sight -2/Relevant -1
Healing -2/Self Service -5/Miracle -3
Apportation -2/Pocket Dimension -2
Vitality -3/ Immunity -3
Athleticism -4/Peak Human -3/Raw Power -6
Barrier -3
Tongues -2/ Non Verbal -1
Empathy -2/ Influence -1
Dowsing -1/ Specific -1

Curses
Emotion Link +7+3
Unsettling +5+3
Inhuman +5+3
Asexual +5+3

Guardian: Ally
Home: Yarrow Falls

Allies
Teens: Danny glass, Leah Dawson, Adam Wiley
Adults: Isaac Bowman(Guardian), Henry Morris

>>48169001
I like that idea, however the first two options don't sound very fitting for the setting.

the one pill sounds good, though I'll remove the whole damning to hell part. That's already implied.

The last one might be good, I'm not sure.

>>48168664
Already posted in this thread.

Search well, young acolyte, and you may find enlightenment as you find the sauce.

>>48167838
Can I be a loli?

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>>48167260
Thanks bruh. Sorry for the cancerous question. I

>> What differentiates shards of corruption
From each other. Or are they too similar to really differentiate?

>>48167238
>>48167255
>>48167275
>>48167286
>>48167310
I was the original guy that asked for this, fuck my life is busy.

>Identity
Male, 14 (So I can experience the entire breadth of High School), look absurdly attractive in a statuesque but fae kind of way. Pure white skin, golden blonde hair, gold eyes that just barely pass as light brown/hazel.

>Power Source
Psychic Energy & Divine (True Original Perk), because I'm going full protagonist mode, gonna save the town and have some DUWANG adventures.

>Changes (30p base)
>Emotional
No change, because fuck those downsides
>Pysical
Perfect (26p), because it's too fucking cheap to not grab and be guaranteed sexy as fuck for my new life.
>Mental
Enhanced (20p), again, because this shit is just too good.
>Life
No change (30p), because I'm ok with having a normal lifespan, wouldn't cross my mind to want something different.
>Memory
No change (30p) because I'm already running away from home, may as well fluff it as me not liking being a fucking doppleganger that shunted the soul of some poor kid into the abyss, or WORSE; my actual life
>Spiritual
Magnet (35p) because I want to have a fucking adventure.

>Gifts
All Healing (25p)
Athleticism + Raw Power (15p)
All Mechanics (8p)
Blessing (4p)
Charm (1p)
Mediumship (SPENT), I took this just to maximize my contact with the supernatural
All Barrier (Bought with curse)

>Curse
Animal Foes

>Guardian
The State

>Home
Yarrow Falls because MAN vs NATURE

>Allies
Leah Dawson - The Magic
Adam Wiley - The Knowledge
Scarlet Manning - The Resources

I'm obviously the fucking power/backbone of the group.

>Adults
Louse Webb
Julie Slater

>Perks
Boarding School
True Original

This shit is going to be cash. Gonna live in a boarding school with my friends in this town (I got Life is Strange vibes as I picked those options.) and hunt down cultists and werewolves in the woods with my awesome Paladin suite of abilities.

I can already picture fighting fucking bears with my blessed baseball bat.

>>48169414
>those nips though
Obviously we need topless and face pics for further research.

>>48169805
If you are or know a cute lesbian domme who is willing to take one for the team, you know what must be done.

>>48160613
>Male
>Bodybuilder
>Average
>Scientific tablet
>Omniglot
>Extreme sturdiness
The goal is to create a tribe of skilled machinesmiths, and with them help the roman empire once it comes along. Once it does, there will be nothing stopping it from world domination(theoretically).

>>48167255
Levitation fully upgraded cost too much for what it does.

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First buildable version of the CYOA. Very alpha. Not expecting a bunch of builds, but any feedback is appreciated.

>>48169588
While there children are many and varied, little is known of the elder ones, the only ones who can give information on them are the third born children. And looking directly upon them is like looking at the sun, not going to confirm anything besides the obvious and bad for one's health. No one knows, they might all be mindless, might all be individual cosmic horrors, a hive mind, mindful as an ocean, or something else entirely.

>>48169833
Unfortunately can't say that I do. Those tits are wasted on her being a lesbian though.

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>>48167238
I wish to be the turbo autist NEET powerhouse.

Female
14
Genetic

Changes
Dulled emotional:35
sickly physical:42
enhanced mental:36
prime life:21
fresh start:31
spiritual repellent:29

Curses
Weakness:37
anxiety:43
insomnia:52
cowardly:59
muted:64
inhuman:69
unsettling:74
night person:79
asexual:84
animal foes:92

Gifts
Telekinesis, precision+power:83
Pyrokinesis, control+catalyst+source:70
future sight, relevant+clarity:64
dowsing, specific:62
healing, self service+miracle:52
vitality, immunity+painless:49
barrier, permanent:43
interference, targeted+destructive:37
tongues, non-verbal:34
blessing:30
empathy:28
weather control, precision:22 (very useful for avoiding sun)
mechanics, inner focus:15
teleportation, quick step+indirect sight:5
psychometry:4
mediumship:3
remote viewing:1 (useful with teleportation)

Guardian: Ally, Scarlet Manning

Home: Bilbury

Allies
-Leah Dawson, Peter Blake
-Henry Morris, Louise Webb

Perks:
Family
Synchronicity

>>48170053
Vitality seems kind of useless if you take self service healing.

>>48170117
How am I supposed to heal myself if I'm already dead? Also, taking it means I don't heave to feel pain and won't have cancer sneak up on me for only 3 points.

>>48169951
This seems interesting, can I end up being the Emperor from 40k?

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My life plans are
drunken master
threads
machine spirit
geo
hijack
adapt
wrath
pain empowerment
master soldier
rush

>>48170202
The CYOA does not currently allow for that level of power, no. However, it's certainly doable to be *a* god-emperor of mankind. Just not at the level of *the* god-emperor of mankind.

Once I've polished this up sufficiently, I'll probably have some DLC that lets you increase the general power level of the earth, for those that want to have psykers or elves or elder horrors running around.

>>48170281
If we take drawbacks/dlc that up the power level of the threats like adding psykers, and elves could we also get more power so we are at the alpha psyker level like Emps?

>>48169951

I like the idea. Already have plans for build. Interesting to not be super high powered, but can still accomplish a lot if you play cards right.

>>48169951

Pre-Agriculture (100 points)
Redesigned Appearance
one percenter -3
Strength & Speed Level 1 -2
Regeneration level 3 -9
Reflexes & Reaction level 1 -2
iron gut -3
pain control -2
non-reactor -3
diet level 2 -5
sanitary convenience level 2 -4
impervious level 3 -9
temperature tolerance level 3 -8
super senses level 1 -2
genius level 3 -10
Wellspring of Harmony -5
memory of the ages level 2 -6
polyglot -5
gift of gab -5
double up -5
book of knowledge -5
book of culture -5
pressure tolerance level 1 -2

You can live a pretty sweet life if you go all the way back. I'm going to start my new life out right with a harem of cave girl hunnies.

>>48169951

Posted >>48170395 Do the powers have to be so scientific? Why not just super toughness/durability? Does it really have to be new power for temp, pressure, and chemistry?

pre-agriculture
position mysterious stranger, working men and women and one percenter

items drinking water, floors, running water, refrigeration, furnishing, world windows, flexible entrance, time dilation, pocket pantry and more space 1

body upgraded strength and speed level 2, relfexes and reaction level 2, beauty, pain control, sanitary conveniance level 2, pressure tolerance level 2, super senses level 1, regeneration level 1, diet level 2, breath level 2, impervious level 1 and temperature tolerance

mental upgrades genius level 1
immortality upgrades extended mortality

iron gut, non-reactor and memory of the ages level 1

company a friend

>>48170323
Probably. I haven't really planned out the DLC, but I will try to make it accomodate a variety of possible power levels.

>>48170532
I think you more correctly mean "Hunter/Gatherer hunnies", but the point stands.

Thanks for sharing the build! Can I ask if anything seemed to you like it was overpowered or overpriced? For example, I notice that you didn't take any of the supernatural abilities. Did you feel they cost too much for what they gave you?

>>48170621
I like being a bit scientific with those things. Call it my selfish indulgence. If I get a lot of negative feedback about it I'll consider changing it, though.

>>48170629
Thanks for sharing! Hmm... again, none of the supernatural upgrades. I wonder if they're just that "blah" compared to the rest.

>>48170641

A lot of the higher tier body upgrades are pretty supernatural in their own right, with the options I took I'm Hercules Jr. already.

>>48169951
A random sixth page in there for no reason.

>>48170859
Yeah, noticed that after posting. Fixed now, but thanks.

>>48170811
Fair point; guess it's just about the build.

>>48167838
I like this anon, I like this far more than I should. God speed and may /d/ guide your hand/boner.