CYOA general

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This is my first one ever please critique.

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>>47217079

>>47217072
I like the smell of troll in the morning

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>>47217090

>>47217072
CYOAs need more "be the little sword" options.

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>>47217072
10/10 Best CYOA I have seen in 2 years

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>>47217270

>>47217049
Hero Name: Cavalry
Bright World (90)
Tech Hero (75)
School (73)
Speed (63)
Durability (53)
Flight (48)
Combat Training (43)
Intelligence (23)
AI (13)
Technological Genius
No Fall Damage (11)
Unlimited Blade Works (1)

I'm equipped with a highly-flexible suit constructed out of nanomachines, capable of not only greatly enhancing my durability and speed, but restructuring itself to deploy any weapon I've designed at a moment's notice. All that before freshman year, too - who knows what I'll design afterwards?

>>47217312
>>47217270
>5, 9, 12, 14, 17, 7, 8, 13, 9, 4, 13, 20
>STR 5
>VIT 6
>AGI 8
>MAG 5
>LUCK 4
>5 Body underdeveloped
fuck that. One silver coin to be
>Well developed
If I'm gonna be a girl, I'm gonna have tits for days.
>9 Sound
One silver to get
>Lightning
Because that's awesome
>12 Ranged
Transformation phrase "I'm farking Zeez, brah"
>14 Elaborate
Okay, that's... not according to plan.
>17 Regeneration
That's amazing, but not that great with Ranged weapons.

>7, 8, 13, 9, 4:
+2 Agi, +1 Agi, +2 Luck, +1 Any
>Enhanced sustenance
>A way out
Oh cool. Immortality without a way out is dumb, and will only result in pain.
>Allies
Perfect.

Spending the Gold coin on
>Power of friendship
Something something "Villains are actually Tsundere for the V"
Last silver coin on +2 Vitality

A simple girl built around making friends and fucking them. That Well developed body will be used to cause frustration in all the (female) villains, and fucking them into being heroes.
Harem ending best ending. Everyone is powerless against the V

>>47217513
And I just now realized I didn't decide on my age
fuck that, I'm happy with what I got, using the last roll to decide age:
>6+20/2
So I'm 16. Perfection.
"A bombshell at the age of 16".

>tfw 2 deciliters of vodka still isn't enough to come up with a concept for a CYOA that takes less than four hours to make, that isn't just a waifu CYOA
My liver will die before I figure this shit out

>>47217072
Yes hello I would like 8 swords and ching pong das rayciss, thank you aspec raito god whatever.

>>47217570
Good taste

>>47217443
Actually, you know what? Let's modify this a bit. I'll go for the Crapsack world, and swap out Super Speed - I don't need two movement powers. In exchange, I'll be taking the following:

Camouflage (16)
Barriers (11)
Low Sustenance (6)
Uniform (4)
Disease Immunity (0)

Should be a lot more interesting. The villains may have won for now, but don't worry - the Cavalry is here.

>>47217270
I've always considered this version superior to the abomination it became in the containment thread.

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Good news, I've finally gotten the week-end off so the next set of companions should be done tomorrow night with the hopefully please god last set of polls so I can begin putting together the next text based edition.

>>47218024
Agreed.
>tfw anon won't roleplay with me
>tfw you will never be a busty Magical Girl who tenderly loves her underdeveloped little tsundere sister

>>47218024
Agreed. It got way overbuilt.

Does anyone have any mystery/modern day CYOA?

>>47218024
I hate that place. They made fun of me for being a mahou-oto. I don't want a vagina, okay.

>>47218024
aint that the fucking truth. how many god-awful .pdfs are there between the core and the add-on content? like a dozen? jesus.

>>47218132
Quiet.

The true mystery though is why people didn't hunt the author down for the sneaky memory death.

>>47218214
I know that one, but thank you anyway.

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>>47217079
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>>47217146

>Dragonmen
Purple eyes like Dany, magic, part dragon. Yes pls.
>Septix
Gonna be king, gotta keep these monsters and rebels in line.
>Spellblade
Fight'n magic.

>Reflect Blows
Teach you to attack your King!
>Arc Lighting
Bretty gud basic magic attack.
>Magic Armour
So I don't have to wear heavy armour to be protected.
>Mana Drain
Keeps me charged up and steals from bad guys.

>The Barbarian Army
Stand and fight! Good one for fighty build. King's ought to be able to lead armies anyway.
>College Experiments
That's where I'm from anyway, so ought to be relatively easy.
>Moth Dealers
Drugs gangs are terrible. Time for justice! Also good for fighty build.
>Harpy Raids
I think I could work this one out. Just find people who like harpies from around the kingdom and not make the orcs be the only ones just cuz they're closer.
>The Catspaw
Torture the truth out of him.
>Peasant Revolt (Combative)
How can I be king if I can't slaughter some upstart peasants?
>The Caravan
Time for some monster slaying. Will probably hire some help though.
>Cull the Cyclops
More monster slaying.
>The Dreadmines
Apparently monster-slaying is all I'm good for. Does the High King really want me to be his heir, or is he trying to get me "removed"?
>House Taurre
Gotta do one more diplomacy quest to prove myself to the King. Guess I can work this one out. Maybe they'll sell for a slightly increased price and lots of flattery?

>Angela Nonicus
>Tenyria Loregus
>Thora Vanjadottir
>Niyyeer Larchke
Pretty violent and dark bunch with lots of magic. perfect for helping me gain power.

>Wolfheart Choker
People better be afraid of my wrath, or else I'll give them reason to be.....

To long, continue in next post.

>>47218024
Much like the Power Armor group, I get the impression that those who are autistic enough to demand gameplay crunch from what's supposed to be a simple daydream imagination assistant (ie CYOAs) are assburgers enough to not be good company. We are better for their loss.

>>47217049
OP is making me realise that I actually like superheros. What's the best superhero cyoa out there?

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>>47218407

>Marriage
>They must be opposite gender of you to bear children.
Oh, so this is what all that arguing was about before..... Well I REALLY want to be King I guess.....

>Prince Kymic
Have baby and then move to my own palace/homebase for launching adventures and military campaigns. Don't talk to "husband" anymore than I have to. Fight him if he causes me trouble.

>Final Stats
Might 5
Swiftness 6
Endurance 6
Charm 7
Willpower 8
Wisdom 8

Goal is to become infamous warrior Que- King and live life of adventure and conquest. Use magic, violence, and trickery to defeat enemies and keep peasants under control. Use resources of the Kingdom to support the magical college of my homeland and increase my own magical abilities and raw power. Don't go out of my way to be cruel or evil, but have moral qualms either.

Fun cyoa, but I don't understand the need for stats and using all the mmo terminology for the skills. I played Guild Wars, so I understand it all, just don't know if needed for cyoa that doesn't have strict rpg type rules. Pls no get mad, just some thoughts, I still really like making build.

>>47218533

*have no moral qualms

>>47218041
The hype is real.

Feel free to post a draft of the next batch beforehand so people can point out potential errors.

>>47218533
Anon, you might *think* you're a girl, but you need to have actual ovaries to bear children. Sorry hun.

>>47218545
Will do m8. With luck it should be done tomorrow morning.

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>>47217146
This should have had a higher powerlevel. I'm a murderhobo on the throne and that's not very assuring. I want to go full Dark Lord and rule through personal might.

I don't think people realise how much regal feudal life sucks. Tons of rules, responsibilities and political intrigue.

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>>47217270
Are YOU a bad enough meguca to get befriended by the Monster Lord?

() = human form
str:10 (5)
vit:7 (3.5)
agl:6 (3)
mag:12 (6)
lck:6 (3)

Age:11 (5)
Body:developed (15)
Specialization: Lamia (17)....shit
Melee weapon (5)

Outfit: Elaborate (13)
Powers: Power of Friendship (12) , very very lucky roll I figure

Perks:
Big backpack
A way out
Enhanced sustenance
Enhanced transformation, another very lucky roll
Money

Dump all coins into stats: gold>str, silver>luck, agl, mag

>>47218881
Sure thing, dudebro.

>>47218881
Wow, what a fuccboi

>>47218881
This post doesn't say you're a woman, but a pillar of SALTY.

>>47218881
tits or gtfo

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Reposting from the end of last thread, for the pleasure of /pol/lacks just waking up: the new year edition of the Jewish Conspiracy CYOA (NOW WITH MORE WAIFUS)

>>47218881
Or maybe he doesn't believe there are women that come on /tg/
He'd be wrong, but it's still a belief that the female neckbeard dwells in tumblr instead of 4chan

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>>47218977
>>47218998
AND THE SECRET

>>47218977
>the new year edition of the Jewish Conspiracy CYOA (NOW WITH MORE WAIFUS)
The way the options are structured forces me to go with "less waifus" or "waifus that aren't the ones I'd have wanted to pick".

>>47218881
You got to understand something, the "there's no women on the internet" meme was circulating on 4chan when only awkward white guys from Something Awful browse and post on 4chan.

Its fucking outdated inside joke, that has no meaning on what 4chan has become.

>>47219023
Looks like you're gonna have to do some work for the Jews for extra gifts then.

How Jewish of them.

>>47218985
apparently there's only lesbian women, straight guys, "straight guys" and tranny men on /tg/

>>47218664
You can also argue that being a amoral murderhobo isn't a easy life either.

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So, we're off to a great start. Guess it's a bad time to post OC

>>47218881

But why was this post deleted? It's not like it was more off-topic than the other ones that are usually accepted in this general.

>>47219132
Nah, "start" is the best time to post OC. It turns good starts into better starts & bad starts into good starts. The only bad times to post OC, I'd say, are when OC was just posted or when it is real late in the thread. I'd post my own OC right now if it were finished.

>>47219132
God damn it, not this again. Next thing you know, it'll be "too late" or "too early".

>>47219132
Just post it. Never too early to post OC. Never too late. The only bad time to post OC is if there's other, more hated popular OC and even then you never know if yours will prove even better or not.

>>47219192
Timing anon is like, my 6th least favorite poster in these threads.

>>47219224
It includes things that will get the lesbian feminist (or feminist, I suppose) to get cranky

>>47219261
Eh, fuck her. At least, it'll get people reading your CYOA to find out what the butthurt is all about.

Who is the more hated? Harem Creator, the Alice Shitposter or Angel?

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>>47219261

Pls post it. I deleted offensive post anyway.

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I guess I can post my WIP (blackmail, also posted in last thread) instead. Maybe then he'll post things.
Pictures/comments/etc welcome.

>>47219297
The guy I hate the most is the guy who posts invalid builds to random or non-existent CYOAs, without linking to them if they are even in the thread, and never engages in discussion.

He posts more often the more you talk about him, but I feel it's worth the risk to mention him here.

>>47219046
>Looks like you're gonna have to do some work for the Jews for extra gifts then.
Nah, I'll just stick to the old version.

>>47219327
What do the stats mean? Reading the responses in the last thread and just guessing off the page, Power is good while Cost, Time, and Threat are bad? What sort of budget does the player have to work with? Is mother/daughter incest strictly illegal, or merely taboo? I'm kind of curious to see what the final picture looks like.

Also, it does seem sort of weird that the player has a lot of agency over the actions of the target. Nothing wrong with the way it is now, but it might make more sense for the different victims to have their own material. You could even have different levels of blackmail that you unlock by increasing your Power over them, modified by what means you choose to work with and whatever other bonuses you buy. That would have the possible advantage of giving it a bit of gamey side which I think helps with replayability and pushing people into choosing a greater variety of options.

All that would probably require a rewrite of most of what you have now, though, so it's not really anything I expect. Just thinking out loud about design.

>>47219460
For some reason, this CYOA makes me hungry

>>47219290
>Eh, fuck her
can't, she's gay, and I'm not a girl with a feminine penis.

>>47219431
Power is basically how much power/sway you have over their actions. Cost is how much money you're essentially investing into the operation. Same with time. Threat being how likely are they to be found out by someone else, or how likely they are to go to the cops, or something similar.

My intention for the taboo fetish was that you could decide what the scenario is and it can overlap. If it overlaps you could potentially take both taboo and illegal or something.

As for agency over the actions of the target, maybe some specifications like you can only take her if you chose one of these blackmail materials?

Unlocking powers doesnt seem bad. I just have no idea at this point what the powers would be.

>>47219502
Then tell her to go fuck herself

Post CYOA!

>>47219496
Neckbeards need food badly.

>>47218024
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>>47218511

I'm not really surprised that /cyaog/ dislikes what MGCYOA became. CYOA's as exhibited here tend to be simpler thought exercises and short imagination games.

AMGCYOA kind of steps away from just being a CYOA. My pink .pdf and it's single expansion has more background and setting info as it was intended to be primarily a writing prompt/setting document. The Blue .pdfs came about because a big chunk of the people using it wanted to actually roleplay their characters and interact - and since freeform RP often turns to shit, they built a rules system.

So yeah - it's massively bloated and huge when compared to the original since it's kind of ceased to be just a CYOA.

>>47219318
No. You can go sit in the naughty corner until you learn your lesson.
Really, you unironically used the word "misogynist". Can't let that shit fly.

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>>47219555
I just did your CYOA, and I got so fucking confused i quit. Not even joking.
It's so disorienting, and backtracking is fucked.
I ended up not even spending my coins because I am not reading through 60 perks to figure out which one to take.
>more background and setting info
I didn't even see that, I quit before I got to it.
My autism isn't strong enough.
(though, in your defense, I used the blue one).

So, you're saying the one in the OP is less autistic?

>>47219672
Maybe it's not for you man. I had a lot of fun with the going back and forth and scratching stuff out as I went. It's certainly one of the more complicated CYOAs I've done but it didn't seem that bad.

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>>47218041

Lily Izanami
Origin: The Dark Times | Hopeless Questant
Tech Understanding: Advanced
Skills, Perks, and Traits: Adokiri, Mathematical Genius, Nuclear Adept, Mechanical Adept, Biological Adept, Tech-Head, Memory, Experimental, AI Expert, Traveller Adept
Armor: Void Suit
Weapon: UPGDI
Knick Kancks: Flux Generator, Jet Pack, Unformed AI Companion, Multiversal Time Keeper, EMP Cluster Fucker, Stasis Guard, Traveller Soap, Hammer Closet, Toshamark Standard Computer
Little Things: Marked, Terrorized, Harbinger, Knee Breaker, Scattered Mind, Waste of Skin, Destined for Great Things, Govna’s Dolla’s x9
Faction: Experimental
Companions: Hildegard, Marco “Fulcanelli”, Temel’Parah, Paria Pasha
Home District: The Testing Grounds
Hubworld: Terra D2
Mission: Samplings

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>>47219561

I'm vewy Sowwy anon-kun~ Pls post cyoa.

I realize I overreacted, but why can't people just comment on builds like why it's good or bad build? Why they have to be all like "U make grill character but I don't believe ur rly grill, post tits to prove me wrong whore."? It doesn't add to cyoa threads anymore than the other stuff.

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>>47219814

Forgot pic;_;

>>47219814
It makes anons feel uncomfortable about all the rape and sex slave cyoas I think.

Genuine question. What do girls think when they see stuff like Slavemaster where you basically mindbreak girls into being your sex slaves?

>>47219672
> My autism isn't strong enough.
You're lucky we're not living in an age where you don't need to be autistic to survive.

>>47218041
Will the image version be updated afterwards?
First time I came across the image version I think the mechanics of giving out the powers wasnt explained.

>>47218977
Azaria, Nanomachines, Healing Napkin, taking Megan as the complimentary waifu and office drone service in the IDF for an extra pic - I use that on the Alleged Submarine and now that I've made 2 IDF pics, I get Edna as an extra waifu.

>>47219814
I want to kill you.

>>47219875
Someone post the autism prison CYOA so he can see how fucked he is in a situation where he DOES need autism to survive.

>>47219889
Aye, it will, but it will take a while, Highlander said earlier he wants to do a few more editions of the text edition before updating the image version, and that will be a bitch to do.

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Anyone have the newest version of the dragon cyoa the one that was remade (the one with color abilities)? Pic unrelated to the one I'm talking about.

>>47219932
Ok thanks for the update anon!

>>47219868
There are quite a few girls into dom/sub, mind break, rape, etc. At least as a fantasy scenario. Even my blackmail would have a few girls into it, although it seems a lot more dommes than subs from browsing the interwebs.
There are girls on here?

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>>47219937
2/3

>>47219670
Musical talent
Friends
Cute and innocent
Fairy friend
Slave

Fuck you for ruining my potential idol career by catering to my shitty fetish.

>>47219945
Happy to help.

>>47219951
Maybe.

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>>47219965
3/3

>>47219868

Normies (I hate that word, but I guess it works here) like my sister who've never been to places like 4chan would probably get really freaked out by their creepiness. Some might think they're sexy if that's their thing, like >>47219951 said. But most are probably like me and find them a little strange, but don't worry about it to much because everyone has their own ways of having fun and have their own kinks. I don't like to label cyoas as good or bad mostly ignore ones I don't care for myself.

>>47219327
>Stacy
This makes me happy. I'd love to blackmail a filthy slut called Stacy. Now add an option to humiliate Chad.

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>>47219354
Don't make fun of the guy. It's not easy being a newly awakened AI.

>>47219951
The are lesbians and guys who wish they were girls, yes

>>47220027
Oh thats not a bad idea. Blackmail a person who's got an SO. Maybe even have cucking be a potential final outcome.

>>47219460
Aw shit, this makes me want to play Dark Legacy again.

Gonna go with Green Archer. Gotta stick with the classics.

Waiting for Dragon King CYOA completion.

>>47217049
Difference between school and millionaire is 6 points. I'm not sure whether those 6 points are worth the hassle of having to earn my own fortune, having family and having to go to school. What's the consensus here?

>>47219814
>>47219814
>I'm vewy Sowwy anon-kun~ Pls post cyoa.
I think I just now developed testicle cancer.

But to be serious for a moment, i don't read builds without commentary, but I rarely comment on those with commentary
I've just not been feeling the whole "builds interacting with each other" for the past several months.

>>47219895

That's not very nice anon.

>>47220174
I kind of post a build just to encourage people who make cyoas. Interaction happens more if theres an interesting combination of powers or someone finds some innovative way to use powers.

>>47219555
I just dislike PVP.

>>47219937

Element: Lightning

Timeless II
Dragon Hide II
Magic II
Form Change I
Form Sculpting II
Dragon Grace II
Elemental Affinity I

Not really a very fancy build. Tough, agile and very magically potent with ties to Earth, element-wise.

Xiu Chang

Stepping into a world I know nothing about, learning would be very important. That and I love to study.

The All Seeing Eye
Foreign Assassins.

Honestly, I'd be willing to help out any of them. The Ira one is a bit weird but I dunno...maybe trade the Assassins to her?

>>47219672
The Pink document is slightly more spergy than the original Red. There's 40 perks instead of 20, and 4 additional bronze coins that provide minor modifications/boosts. If you roll allies it tells you to actually roll up additional girls to be said allies. Back and forth is a bit harder with a .pdf than with two images, but it's not too bad since the condensed perk table and the spec table let you see what stat upgrades are attached to what perk without having to read the whole perk description.

It's still far and away less spergy than Blue, which has 60 perks, a lot of which are fucking weird, an additional costume option, 4 more stats to keep track of, a ton of rules, And 3 expansions, all of which are unnecessary. The spells for that system aren't even in any of the posted .pdfs, they're in 20+ different titanpads.

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>>47220282
Just for you bud

>>47219670

Smarts
Friends
Musical Talent.
Tough Fighter
Angel Wings

Being able to fly is a dream of mine. I'll take the weirdness for that.

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>>47220174

I try to give some reasons for my choices and maybe write up a bit of backstory and how I'd overcome challenges. Sometimes it seems like anons appreciate it, but sometimes not so much. I like thinking about how different characters would interact too.

>>47218407
>>47218533

Another thing I thought of. If I HAVE to have a heir, then I figure any daughter I have would surely inherit her mother's magical power. So I'd keep her away from her beast of a father and set her on the right track becoming the world's most powerful sorceress and Queen just like mommy dearest. I'd make sure she'd get into the magic college where I'd be on the board of directors and keep a eye on her. If she didn't try to use all the magic, intrigue, and force available to try and overthrow me then I failed as a mother.

>>47219670
>Fairy Friend
>Sexy Touch
>Good Shit
>Tentacles
>Smarts

Two words: Weed orgies

>>47218041
Dropping a couple of builds:
Luminous Heretic
Origin: Capet Medieval France; Disquiet Heretic

Knowledge
Tech: High
Ether: Master (2 lessons)
Religious Studies (Sunbro)
Technomage (1 lesson)
Traveler Adept (1 lesson)
Runemaster
Adoriki (Void Hunter)
Silver Tongue (Sunbro)
Elementalist: Metal (1 lesson)

Items
Greater Praha Golem
Hardlight Transfusion (2k credits)


Little Things
Minor (+500 credits)
Can't Wake Up Inside (+500 credits) Goetia, it's fun and profitable.
I Don't Need No Governa's Dollah X2 (-800)

Faction
Void Hunter

Covenant
Temple of the Great Holy Light (-100 credits)

Allies
Marco "Fulcanelli" (Guardian)
Disurial of Chandesh
Herodrial
Lunrial

Location
The Summoning Grounds

First Mission: Terra D2, Aclorian Corpse
So he's having fun exploiting Technomancer+Runes+Hardlight. Annoyingly hard to put down and can do a Magneto impression if it proves necessary. A bit young and impressionable though, the main reason he went Hardlight is because it looks cool.

>>47220343
There isn't a single person on this board (not even /fit/guys) physically capable of using a Longbow effectively. Is it just supposed to be a trap option, along with the petrol bombs and firearms?

>>47220465
>beast of a father
Forest-Folk use magic that no other race can use, it's probably not a good idea to do that considering now 90% of Rhoyjan is covered in convenient wood that a Forest-Folk can teach your kid to use. Considering Forest-Folk's unique magic is almost guaranteed to be related to plants, it's not a good idea. You may at least want to let the dad teach the kid some things.

Also, what if you get pregnant with a boy?

>>47219670
>no you're a cute boy option

Worthless.

>>47219297
Harem creator. You mean Italics?

>>47217049
Please finish this cyoa. We need more superhero stuff.

>>47220560
I'm pretty sure they meant the anon who made the Harem CYOA.

>>47217049
>Elemental
>It is easier to summon fire and water, but earth and water pack a bigger punch
Water mode, then?

>>47220572
BoxWine is making a hero academy one.

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Does anyone have any resources for design? I have an idea for a Persona-themed CYOA, and I've got the text/images compiled, but I don't want it to look like total shit. Any help appreciated, famalam.

>>47220729
I can't wait for it, he's my favorite drunk CYOA author

>>47220591
He's a complex figure. On the one hand he's known to be one of the nicest creators, by far, and he seems to do everything out of a genuine faith in the quality of CYOAs.

On the other hand every CYOA has ever made has caused nothing but shitstorms and the mere mention of his name has been known to cause threads to go nuclear.

>>47220729
box is making a fantasy hero one, not a superhero one

>>47220776
Truly, he will be remembered by history as a tragic man.

>>47220731
One of our archives in the pastebin has some tutorials by SDA.

>>47220729
BoxWine's cyoa looks great but doesn't feel like a superhero cyoa. It's more of a supernatural/magical school cyoa. It's a Hero cyoa rather than a superhero cyoa.

Picking specific powers and an origin is a huge aspect of superhero cyoas.

>>47220776
The funny thing is his latest wouldn't have caused much if not for him keeping it secret.

>>47220816
Nah. In terms of sheer number of posts, his inclusion of futas caused much more shit than the part where someone tried to impersonate him. They didn't even do it on purpose, it was probably just a troll wishing to capitalize on what he thought was a new trend of revealing secrets later.

>>47220855
Harem Anon also correctly mentioned that years before that, he revealed the secret cards for his Harem CYOA just as slowly and no shitstorm was created until he was done.

>>47217049
The Symbiote option is my fav origin in almost every cyoa but it always gives me seperation anxiety: "what happens if it leaves or betrays me because I'm boring?"

I hate being me.

>>47220863
That's because people didn't distrust him like they did this time. Most of the discussion was about how it was going to go sour.

>>47219354
Yeah, just a silent force of nature that does it's thing with no regard for anything, no replys, no reaction, no nothing, just pure unfettered autism.

>>47220528

>90% of Rhoyjan is covered in convenient wood

I must've missed that part. Anyway, I GUESS little Princess Livia can go spend summertime with her father IF she does well in magic school and behaves. And as long as her father doesn't get her wrapped up to much in weird druid forest crap. My daughter's going to be a mistress of the dark arts like me. And really, the cities of the Drake Isles where her people come from and the magical college are the proper place for any powerful sorceress in the making, especially the future King of the world.

>Also, what if you get pregnant with a boy?

First see if I can control baby's sex with magic because I prefer daughter, but I don't know if that's a thing in this setting. Otherwise he can stay with his father and learn manly forest stuff like hunting forest beasts and physical brute strength combat. I'll still get him a spot in the magic college if he wants. Just smoke some Moth and let Kymic do his thing to keep trying for a girl.

>>47220900
>pure unfettered autism.
That's just regular /tg/ though

>>47220917
>Otherwise he can stay with his father and learn manly forest stuff like hunting forest beasts and physical brute strength combat

Nigga it specifically says Kymic is a lean dude and uses magic, his niece is the warrior, not him.

>>47220917
I never understood a hostility to males to the point where a boychild offends you. It's like, you're not going to sleep with your kid, are you? Why should their sex matter?

>>47220982
Angelanon(icus) works in mysterious ways.

>>47220982
For some reason /cyoag/ vastly prefers daughterus over having sons. That has always been the case.

Could someone post that fancy symbiote cyoa again?

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The author could consider to add into this something more, like Hideouts, Minions, Drawbacks, bonuses you could buy by using Wealth & Influence...

>>47221179
Which one do you mean?

>>47220934

He's beastman-forestkin whatever barbarian from the woods, he better be able to teach our son to be manly. I can't do it! Maybe his niece can teach him stuff too.

>>47220982

I'm not hostile to anybody. I just prefer a daughter I can raise to take after me at magic college. A son would be better off learning boy stuff from dad in the forest.

>>47221097

>Angelanon(icus)

I don't get it.

>>47221269
I think someone posted one yesterday. You fused with a symbiote and had to pick a size which then required a certain amount of biomass/day. Then you cpuld improve your brain, body, etc. You had 200 points I think. Had to pick a class (breeder, worker, etc.) too.

>>47221318
Since when is magic gendered?

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>>47221321
I gotcha bro.

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>>47221343
2/2

>>47221318
>I don't get it.
Never mind, it's not important.

>>47221343
>>47221364
Thanks. I wonder what kind of position symbiotes will have in the world though? Will they/we coexist with humans? Rule over them? Use them as livestock? Maybe we'll just be killed instead?

>>47221215
Not going to post page 2?

Anyway, I think it's strange that Narcotics are much safer than Exotic Goods. Anyone else notice that? If you try to make it big with Exotic Goods your danger rating is a lot higher than similarly-tiered Narcotics. And the bonus is not as good as Narcotics either, since +2 wealth AT MOST gets you +6, whereas a fourth product from Narcotics can get you +3 Wealth, plus some extra power, and that's not even factoring in the maximum of +4 of power from the other half of the bonus.

>>47221421
With that CYOA's setup it seems like they'd enslave or genocide humans.

>>47221215
At first blush, Livestock seems massively underpowered. I might have to play with the numbers to see but it just does not seem at all worth it unless I want to self-insert as a slave trader. In which case, am I being kinkshamed? Although, the mechanical effects of Risk do seem fairly small. Even 2 dozen people a month doesn't seem that disruptive unless that's just the "base" generation and they can all act independently to recruit more members and use their own Influence against me. I'm not sure how abstracted it's supposed to be, basically.

Also, are you supposed to pick a location and then you get the product based on your specialization? So if an Exotics dealer picked King's Plains they'd get Pastries but a Narcotics dealer got Cayote pepper. If that is the case, it might make more sense to put the Product listings in the same order as the specializations.

>>47221421
At the start of the game, it's hunters in the dark. After that, as Bios begin to link up into packs and hordes, outright military conflict will begin.

The Bios are optimized for guerrilla combat, requiring comparatively little logistical support.

There's also issues of factionalism, and those Bios who still feel loyal to humanity. Really, after the early game, anything could happen.

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>>47221461
>kinkshamed?
The "am I being laughed at" part of this word is on-spot.

>>47221215
If he feels like updating, a whole lot could be added. Including everything you just said. Maybe a page for personal "powers".

Also, maybe change the fact the becoming ridiculously rich and respectably influential is laughably easy with an exotic goods build.

Also, make a slave trade build more viable/rewarding considering all that risk.

>>47221593
That has to be one of the smuggest anime chick I have ever seen.

I've already got a buyer in the badlands lined up

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>>47221645
>That has to be one of the smuggest anime chick I have ever seen.

I got some spoilers for you.

>>47221493
>loyal to humanity

I don't feel loyal but I do feel like taking my "skinsheate" and "Brain Upgrade III" and making myself a wonderful life as a pretend human. I don't think we should reveal our superiority just yet but I'm sure some symbiote is going to sperg out in public which makes conflict inevitable.

I'm still going to rock my stealth build with retractable tentacles though.

>>47221645
I'll buy her, she looks cute. I'd even let her break free of slavery and make me serve and worship her, eventually even allowing her to mercilessly take my virginity.

>>47221215
>>47221431
I did maximum stat builds for all three specializations, ignoring any concerns about danger etc (except noting where the 'safer' option is the most dangerous) just to show what I mean.

Exotic Goods:

Exotic Goods
Lodestone Goods
Drakescale
Spices

16 W 12 I 17 R - 28 Total Points

Narcotics:

Narcotics
Cayote Pepper
Blue Dust
Drakerock
Opium Poppies

9 W 18 I 15 R - 27 Total Points

Slaves:

Livestock
Elves
Dragan
Orcs

18 W 15 I 20 R - 33 Total Points

The balance actually seems fairly decent, looking at it now.

>>47221615
It seems fairly balanced as far as maximum total points goes. 28 for Exotic Goods vs 27 for Narcotics, with the trade off being 2 extra Risk levels for Exotic Goods. So I don't think that's much of a problem at all, balance wise.

Slaves on the other hand are obviously higher in point total (33) and risk, which is logical.

>>47221461
See >>47221835

It's up to you to decide if the 5 extra Power and Wealth is worth 3 extra Risk.

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I'm having some issues coming up with Implanted Organs.

I got all the implants needed for the Perks, just need some more ideas to keep it different from the Nanomachines.

>>47221869
You already got all the ones from Space Marines? Like the poison spit and the brain eating and the power armor integration?

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>>47221702
Man, Smugi is olev.
All the girls in the show were so great, even one off background characters.
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=1UlMGFolHHM

>>47221869
Implanted organs are just plain nasty. I guess you could make the organs either experimentally crafted or harvested from alien life to impart special skills? What kind of implants do you have already?

>>47221869
look at nano mostly give tech powers, the only overlap that i can think of is the atuo repair.
i would make it so each organ gives a differnt power like lungs=breath filter, brain=bullet time( thats different from nano hud)

>>47221896
Brain eating?

What the fuck? That's actually a power?

>>47221945
Yep, look it up. Space Marines do some freaky shit people don't like to dwell on.

>>47221945
>He doesn't know Space Marines can depending on whether it would help the plot or not eat brains to absorb its knowledge
Are you I mean most people don't but pls

>>47219038
>that has no meaning on what 4chan has become.
Reddit with the voting turned off.

>>47221835
>>47221215
Ah, wait a minute, I forgot a point for Narcotics. Add onto that 1 more power, for a total of 19 Influence. That makes point total 28, exact same as Exotic Goods. So that means that Exotic Goods is actually comparatively underpowered since it has the same point total as Narcotics for 2 more Risk.

So I retract my statement about the Wealth bonus from Exotic Goods sucking, it seems to work out point wise. But my original statement doesn't hold in the sense that Exotic Goods is more dangerous than Narcotics, and thus slightly worse. It's not a big deal but maybe their goods could lose a danger level or 2? I'd reduce the Risk level of Spices to 5 myself.

>>47221983
>doesn't
Does, obviously.

>>47221869
Was going to say >>47221896
Like god damn, they have organs that let them eat rotting poisonous garbage and sit around on standby for centuries.

>>47221945
One of the implanted organs extracts some memories from consumed neural tissue. This can give the marine a tactical advantage depending on how much the victim knew, and how much useful information the marine was able to extract.

Some chapters ritualize this process, which tends to add them to the short roster of chapters who become known for cannabilistic rites.

>>47221343
>Weight Class
Light (10)

>Caste
Hunter (25)
-Reskin
-Supple

>Brain/Senses
Brain Upgrade (5)
Night Vision (5)
Thermal Vision (10)
X-Ray Vision (15)

>Organs
Skinsheathe (Free)
Compactible (Free)
Progenitor Worm (20)

>Weapons
Venom Gland (5)
-Paralysis (15)
-Deadly (20)
Exoblade (10)
-Sting (5)
Chitinous Darts (10)
-Sting (5)
-Sniper Dart (10)

>Defenses
Reflex Upgrade (20)
Camouflage (20)

>Mobility
Adhesion (10)

5 points left over but I don't particularly want Echolocation or Gullet. The plan is to avoid combat that I do not initiate. Firstly, by not being a target in the first place. Assimilate into a varied but unimportant population and use my Reskin ability to ensure that I never garner any attention. Possibly have an "alpha" identity I come back to every few months. Build myself a social network and support group while maintaining an identity that allows me to disappear for months at a time.

Secondly, by identifying and avoiding any possible threat. I don't have a perfect selection of skills for this, but by keeping aware of my surroundings and using my various stealth abilities escape should be possible in almost any situation. With bios being incredibly rare, seeing any near me constitutes a threat; I have to assume that they know what I am as well and are after me for one reason or another. Unfortunately, escaping from any Bio that can sense me is incredibly problematic.

If I find myself challenged by a threat I can't run away from, my plan is to engage them on my own terms and as lethally as possible. Striking quickly from the shadows is what my chassis is built for.

A few other thoughts. I feel like Progenitor Worm is extremely weakened by the fact that it's known to be a possibility. Any Bio on Bio combat would end with the victor keeping a very careful watch for on and once a human research team discovers the possibility then you've suddenly got a lot more flamethrowers than before. I'm considering trading mine out for Regeneration.

>>47221343
>>47221364

Ultralight Feeder

Telekinesis, Shield, bolt
Brain upgrade x3
Regeneration
Flight, Plasma Boost
Chitin upgrade X3
Gullet
Thermal Vision
Reflex Upgrade
Bio-plasma Generator (total 2 w/ caste)
Plasma Bladder x2 (total 4 w/ freebies)

Telekinetic Plasma tanker.
My only real weapon in my not unimpressive telekinetic bolt, but since I'm not supposed to be on the front lines I think I'm good.

Goal 1: link up with another Bio who uses Plasma weapons but doesn't have a plasma generator. I use my Thermal vision to see when I need to top off his tank again, and zip away before I get shot up too much, though my hardened chitin and TK shield should keep me safe whenever I expose myself.

Eventually I should be able to put together a posse who depends on me for their plasma needs, and keeps me fed, because I require more daily calories than an ultraheavy bio to keep my metabolism going

>>47221328

It doesn't have to be, but I feel like wearing sorceress robes and learning spells and stuff has a more feminine feel to it. It doesn't mean men can't do it though, just like wearing armour and running around with big swords is masculine even though some women can do it, it's mostly men. Magic seems like something women could be better at.

>>47222288
Doesn't follow logic. Magic is about study, that's not something men are deficient in unless the setting specifies that men are magically crippled for whatever reason.

>>47220465
How upset would you be if you had a son?

>>47222315
How mentally defficient do you have to be as a man to start wearing flowery robes and enchanted tiaras though?

>>47222288
>wearing sorceress robes and learning spells and stuff has a more feminine feel to it
Tell this to my arch wizard not in the real world and see what happens

>>47222395
Well, let's ask the Ancient Greeks, the inventors of Western Culture and the precursors to large chunks of every little bit of that, from our writing, to our philosophizing, to our mathematics. Let's call them mentally deficient for wearing their silly little toga robes.

>>47222288
>Magic seems like something women could be better at.
Because they're bad at real things, so in fantasy stories we can balance that by giving them made up things.

>>47222288
Using a sword isn't as hard as you think. They don't weigh too much and being quick with it is better. Of course skill is 90% of it.

Now a bow is way harder. Bows you gotta be strong as an ox to use.

>>47222453
Is there any culture that had women as the greatest intellectuals?

>>47222590
there's lots of cultures where women were associated with magic

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>>47222590
>>47222545
>>47222456
>>47222453
>>47222402
>>47222395

Alright, I'm starting to get bored again. Let's talk CYOAs, yes?

At least, let's not continue the shitstorms that seem to hang like black omens over Ordion whenever he posts CYOA

>>47222590
Nope.

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>>47221215

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>>47222315
>>47222402

I just always liked sorceresses like Morgana, Maleficent, Melisandre, and Liliana and would love to be one irl. So I guess I always think of them as feminine. It's really just me though.

>>47222339

I talked about that here >>47220917

>>47222456

I obviously didn't mean it like that. I just want to be a sorceress, which obviously isn't a real thing. But that's what cyoas are for I guess.

>>47222545

Of course women can do it and are good at it, but it seems like it's mostly a man thing irl. If I go on about awesome women fighters, then I'm going to be reminded a thousand times that men are stronger than women. But if I mention that physical combat is mostly a masculine activity then I'm going to be accused of being sexist against myself or something.....

>>47220917
>My daughter's going to be a mistress of the dark arts like me.
What if she rejects you pushing your misandry on her and also turns out straight?

>>47221941
That's a good way of thinking. I like you anon.

>>47222014
Braineating is going to be pretty fucking weird for this setting, but I am going to make a spess mehreen faction so I may as well go the entire way.

>>47222719
There's a lot of other things Space Marines can do if you check Lexicanum. They're all about artificial organs so it's a good start.

>>47220591
Harem CYOA?

>>47221343
>you have become one of a small number of true apex predators on a planet full of prey...
Yeah, naw, I'm taking my powers and running with them, doing stupid murderous shit sounds like a pain in the ass, call me if you guys need a tree moved or something. Drink a 2L of olive oil a day and do whatever I want.

Heavy:195, 9 feet tall
Soldier:170, free Armor and regen, mobility 10 extra cost, 150% damage
Brain upgrade:165
-2:155
-3:140
Night vision:135
Compactible:130
Skinsheathe:115
Bioelectric pulse:95
-EMP:90
Reflexes:80
Extra armor:80
Chitin Upgrade:75
-2:65
-3:50
Regeneration:50
Flight:20
Telekinesis, for easy flight and added 600 lbs of mind force I guess:0

>>47222639

Somebody posted my cyoa!!!
*thousand internet hugs*

>>47222981

How about I trade in those thousand hugs for one blowie joey?

>>47218977
>>47218998
Does already being a kike give extra perks?

>>47222981

This guy:
>>47223034
Isn't me:
>>47222639

>>47223034

Ew no.

>>47222697

Of course she can be straight. I'm just going to teach her that magic and power come before love. I'd be a good example since I married to make a heir so I could be King.

>>47223034
Why would you want a BJ from a sexist? >>47222697

>>47217049
>Bright World (10)
>Symbiote (25)
>Regular Life (29)

>Durability (39)
>Speed (49)
>Flight (54) (discount)
>AI (free)
>Aura (59)
>Healing Factor (69)
>Barriers (74)
>Superhuman (84)
>Low Sustenance (89)
>Uniform (91)
>Disease Immunity (95)
>Hidden Blade: 4 Back Tentacles ed. (100)

I think I made a pretty good build. I'm rather difficult to kill if I say so myself. I have no interest in killing villains so I just stop them and detain them (in barriers preferably).

My Symbiote will be an eggsized sentient gemstone embedded right into my back.

My adopted family will know absolutely nothing about my secret identity for now and I choose to go school.

Now I just need to find a way to become rich so my nonhero life is taken care for after school.

>>47223142
I think the question mentioned more than just her being straight.

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>>47223146
Because its a BJ. I'm not mentally damaged, unlike some people on this thread.

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>>47223116
>Does already being a kike give extra perks?
Even when the subject matter itself is being a kike, he tries to negotiate himself some extra points. The irony is funny, but I'm onto you merchant.

>>47223202
Don't Stick Your Dick In ____

>>47223273
I would. This person really turns me on for some reason.

>>47223202
I regret drawing this.

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>>47223273
>Dead people?

As another question, are there any Psychic powers you guys'd like to see specifically?

There's so damn many that I don't know which ones I should pick specifically.

>>47223366
The power to make people have orgasms, but really it's all in their mind

>>47223366
I'd prefer no actual mindraping or mind enslavement since the implied pvp or pve means the other supers could do that shit to you. We already had one good cyoa ruined by slavemancers.

>>47223366
Having to constantly hear everybody's thought like that fag from code gayass is a pretty fucking humungous drawback, as well as the fact you can't match any of the other in combat. I think psyche powers should be pretty op to compensate, being able to slow or even stop people's thought processes to make yourself seem faster than you are comes to mind. Shit like that.

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>>47223411
>ruined by slavemancers
Imply that CYOA was bad again, or that it was "ruined" because of one little thing
Do it
I dare you
I double dog dare you

>>47218041
I am not too good at English. What does adokori in perks do? The way I read it, it seems like some creepy sixth sense that lets you know more.

>>47223481
Not them, but PVP ruins everything.

>>47223501
>Everything ruins everything

>>47223481
Slavemancers. Ruined. It.

Wut you gonna do now huh?

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>Fuck off to the pastebin to post the """ruined""" CYOA
>Pastebin is just "ufuggenwh@m8"
Okay who did this

>>47223549
http://pastebin.com/vrqYhnpu

Real Pastebin.

I have no idea what OP's issue is. Maybe SDA's smug lolis made him butthurt.

>>47223549
Probably God. He ain't want you to post that crap here. Thanks, Jesus.

>>47223595
I always knew that my faith would be rewarded.

>>47223383
No

>>47223411
What CYOA is that?

>>47223476
Yes, Psychic powers are going to be broken as Kerrigan was after that stupid fucking ending for SC2.

Also there is already slavemancy for people, the Nanomachines can assimilate people into servants. So I don't see why Psychics can't do it, just maybe not to other soldiers.

>>47221343
>>47221364
>Ultra Light 225
>Hunter 200

>Brain Upgrade I-III 170
>Telepathy 160
>Shared Senses 155
>Mind Probe 145
>Mental Assault, Domination 115
>Telekinesis, Telekinetic Shield 85
>Thermal Vision 75
>Radio Sensitivity 65
>Reflex Upgrade 45
>Regeneration 20
>Flight 0

Fuck predation, fuck racial supremacy, fuck the paranoid dystopia that'll inevitably develop. I'm going to be a campy-as-hell superhero, and nobody can stop me.

>>47223643
>just maybe not to other soldiers

That sounds reasonable.

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>>47223244
What am I supposed to do: NOT nickel and dime for extra points on a literal kike cyoa?

>>47219670
Smart
Friends
Fairy Friend
Sexy Touch
Tentacles

>>47223482
Basically you got the jist of it. It's hella useful but also liable to wreck you in a mental fashion.

>>47217270
>12 but well developed
>Flower magic (+2 mag, +1 vit)
>Melee (+1 str, +1 vit)
>Flowing robe (+1 str)
>Tentacle fun (to twin)
>Training: Gardening
>+2 Mag
>+2 Vit
>+2Str
>Twin soul
-10, underdeveloped
-Ranged
-Flowing (-1 silver)
>+4 Agi (-1 gold)
>+2 Luk (-1 silver)
>+2 Mag (-1 silver)
(Apply twin soul change)
6 Str
6 Vit
6 Agi
7 Mag
4 Luk

How can we not go wood sword knight and let my darling little sister shoot from afar with wooden arrows? And yes, I really did roll those stat boosts, didn't do much good for me anyways, but being able to double team opponents and have them tied down makes things easier.

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Is this CYOA a original setting or is it something taken form another setting?

>>47223650
I (>>47222017) automatically distrust telepaths but I can't deny their power and utility. You seem to have the right attitude for me to trust you and I think we could work together. Once the bigger and more destructive bios become well known shit's gonna hit the fan and non-mostrous yet powerful friends would be good to have. Let me be the dark, brooding antihero to your Superman.

>>47222917
as well, but non-skinsheathes make me slightly nervous. Not that there's anything wrong with you but I'd be worried about the negative attention you might draw.

>>47224064
Oh, you are a Skinsheathe, and Compactible to boot! Well aren't we all just a bunch of friendly, human-loving aliens.

>>47224002
>what is TRON

>>47217079
>high elves
Wisdom matters for a king

>Orqlios
It matters a lot.

>Monk
Muscle wizard kings are harder to assassinate

>Toughened hide, Bash
>Hurl Boulder, Hallucination
Gotta have some survivability.

>The Barbarian Army
>Winter is Coming

>Dark Cult Clearing
>College experiments

>The Dreadmines
>Season Unending

>Peasant Revolt (diplomatic)

>Moth Dealers

>The Catspaw

>Harpy Raids

I love the companions. First CYOA where they were my favourite part.

>Gerard
A man of the people
>Nelcera Larathal
Something about this one, I'm not sure what...
>Tigerius caluonicus
Every party needs an inventor
>Daro'shunihsi
And a bard.

>Circlet of the uniter
Pretty much required for most of the diplomatic missions I've taken on.

>Princess Willonia of the forest-folk
Would marry her for the alliance even if she wasn't best girl.

>>47221869
You need implants that MASSIVELY increase reflex time, aggression/adrenalin, combat stim organs that can give temporary boosts that allow the taking on of the mutant FREAKS. And most importantly...if a user dies hyper doped on these super drugs their blood needs to catch on fire and make a REALLY big boom.

>>47224239
You're supposed to do one quest for each race. Yes, even the sand people.

>>47224266
You mean the Behemoths and Wraiths?

They're still human, just very, very different.

>>47223126

Ok. That's good. Glad you like my cyoa!

>>47223197

I don't hate her father, I'm just not romantically attracted to him and only married him so I could be King. People used to do that irl too. Hopefully she'd get along fine with her father, but I'd still push her to attend magic college and try my best to raise her to be a powerful sorceress that can pick up wherever I leave off. Regardless of how she feels about men or women or anyone, I'd teach her that love is a tool for power.

>>47224085
I figure it's good to play the human no matter what your goal is really, even it's just to be a complete ass. Who the hell WANTS to fight tanks when you can choose to look however you want and get free superpowers anyway? Become the tall cool oneesan riding a motorcycle or something until the need to bench press 1.5 tons arises.
Ultra heavy min. height is 7 ft and they can't run, which ruins skinsheathe completely since it's so obvious, they'd have to fuck off to caves or something.

>>47224410
you fucked up anon, I'm not an ant

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Just made this, right now. Drink up, /tg/!

>>47219981
Wtf?! When did this update!?

>>47219813
I hate how turned on I am by this.

<spoiler>not really</spoiler>

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>>47224484

>>47224521
My waifu already has angel wings.
I guess I take the live wire, aka "get out of hell free card" since I now know for sure it's real.

>>47224541
i'll give

>>47224521
Can't pick White Out, so I'm going with Ordinary. Neat powers and can save just about everyone else, very Saintly choice.

I'm looking for a adult CYOA that I saw a really long time ago.
You played as a girl that has to go to her uncle's farm. There were a lot of things that could happen to you. I'll make a list so its easier to read and figure out.
>>Fucked by weird alien pigs
>>Laxative drink that made you shit yourself
>>Uncle shoving silverfish in you
>>Pizza girl?
>>Weird basement alien
If anyone knows it and can find a link that would be great.

>>47224727
Man I've been here for years and played all the lewd CYOAs and I have NEVER heard of any of this.

>>47224727
That's definitely not a CYOA in the same sense as used here, but I happen to know exactly what you're talking about. Lemme hunt it down.

>>47224736
It was my first one ever and I want that nostalgia but I can't remember any names

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anyone have the remade dragon cyoa with colors??

>>47224779
Yes. But just wait for the guy to finish the next page, it's still missing two.

>>47224766
Thank you, you're the best

>>47224521
Voltage

>>47224799
ok thanks for the update anon

>>47224836

Aww yeah. Found it. It's called Sophie's Choices, by someone who goes by Arthur Saxon.

http://pastebin.com/ST40iGws
4chan is being monumentally stupid and not letting me link directly to it, but I shall be clever and link through a pastebin.

>>47225012
Thank you much anon

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>>47225026
MY EYES, that text!

>>47224541
I hate making pointless roll posts, so I random.orged an 8 digit fake post number and got 83166446

So 'the fatty' with no mods

Eh whatever. It's anime fat rather than actual hambeast-ness. That Pochaco body-type ain't so bad.

Probably better than whatever this post's actualy number would make.

Also:
>>47224521
Probably just the classic saint powers from ordinary dew. Or Live Wire depending on the potential depictions of hell represented. Assuming hardcore christian versions, I could just chill in the upermost layers where "virtuous nonbelievers" who can't get into heaven live and see what things some of the greatest scientific and artistics minds have come up with over the last 1000 years or so.

If some of the more pop culture influenced hells are on the table, then succubus harem would definitely be happening.

>>47225026
To put it more nicely than >>47225062 , the text is hard to read because it's black on a medium blue. Either a more contrasting color or putting the text in differently colored boxes would solve that issue.

Once I finish a build for something else I'll come back and read the choices.

>>47225026
Don't use pure/bright colors. Use a much darker blue, with white/off-white text and something completely different for the headers.

>>47225026
Haven't looked too indepth yet (seriously, redo the text please) but hey, disney princess waifu cyoa. Seems good. The thing is, I'm too distracted trying to imagine what sort of cheesy-ass CK2 game you must've played to pull off that title. Seriously, that's most of Europe + the ERE.

Something something -400 prestige for marrying a lowborn.

>>47217072
"Intentionally bad" can be surprisingly fun, but it's easy to overdo it. This is a pretty good example, and I hope you learn from it and do more, as well as CYOAs in other genres.

A lot of my criticisms are basically "overuse". I think you use the "text cut off by end of page" trick a couple too many times. The first awkward line break in the Little Girl immortality was great, really hilarious, but the second loses a lot of its punch. The first really warped too wide image was good, but I would've chosen a different distortion from either the top image or the little girl immortality one. Escapacoins was a good choice, and I like the mutilation of the word (especially where it subverts expectations with the "be the little sword" cost), but again, hitting too hard in many places. I think perhaps I would've considered a few more where you just misspell it. Personally I wouldn't have done either "escalator" or "escargo", especially since that robs impact from the "essay" cost a little further down, but that might be a taste thing.

Overall you might've gone a bit too far in making it unplayable. I think the best examples of this genre are still internally coherent enough to allow "builds" even if they're stupid. But that might be too difficult a peak to shoot for your first time out the gate.

In the neutral category: Comic Sans is a little obvious, but it's not like it's a bad terrible choice on its own. Maybe try to push the boundaries in future CYOAs though.

But you did a lot right. Great choice on colors. Manages to excellently combine readability with disturbing ugliness.
Copy pasting a description of a plain armoire in was genius.
The disappointing mystery box spoiled in the image was good too.
And I really liked the "forgotten" cost for the little girl one, especially with the ending there "2 easy" that somewhat alludes, sound and shape-wise, to a cost.

>>47225026
Louise, obviously. She's actually the prettiest, and I want kids too.

I want Sword of the Templars, because being King means kicking ass.

For Opportunities, I'll take the Noble Revolt. I'm supporting the crown, let all traitors rot in Hell! With my Templar Sword, none can best me in battle! Now THAT'S an adventure I'd go on, hoohah!

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>>47225177
>>47217072

And as >>47217106 said, "be the little sword" was fantastic, a great contribution to the CYOA oeuvre, and I hope it inspires many hilarious memes.

Hope this was helpful.

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>>47225026
>>47225042

I like that it's simple and straightforward, but it still could be a bit bigger.

>Felicia
Doesn't want kids and has nice "assets".
>Sword of the Templars
Good for taking care of peasants.
>Zealots
Should be easy to to take care of peasants with combat ability from sword and Pope will love me forever.

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>>47225185
2/2

>>47225202
>>47225185
So much

>>47225128
It's actually based of the royal house of France before the hundred years war

>>47225185
H-how old is Isabella?

>>47219646
Gotta be option 3. Anal loving waifu? The horror of CYOAG is no longer inflicted on the world? How could I say no. I'd be a monster.

>>47225185
>>47225202
Oh, yeah. Looks much better now. Some of the text in Noble Revolt is cut off, though.

Felicia
Relic of the Savior
Zealots

I got sold on Felicia by the "sharp as a whip" line. I do like me some cleverness.
Relic is just great. I like healing, and aging well is delightful.
I can hopefully use the pendant's healing/aura of whatever to convince the peasants that I've contacted god or some shit and that they really shouldn't be so upset.

So basically I'm >>47225195 but less violent. Huzzah.

>>47224541
69712003, from Random.org

So I've got the Slut. A lot better than the name implies.

Make into Wife. She's already tomboy enough for me, and going too far kinda kills the boner.

>>47225026
>>47225042
>Isabella
Time to see how deep this rabbit hole goes.
>Servant of the Dark One
Have the feeling I'm going to Hell anyways.
>Noble Revolt
I wonder how fast the Servant can take out Roberta? Might as well use my "heirloom" to the full advantage.

>>47225333
it's 1305 anon, nobody cares
>>47225360
>Some of the text in Noble Revolt is cut off, though.
FUCK

>>47225400
>nobody cares

No, you misunderstand. I want to give him the Pendant for X years until he's out of puberty so he ages less masculine. I'd be aging normally during that time though so if it's too long then I'll have to rethink my plan.

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>>47225185
>Made the trap the cuck choice

>>47217072
SBaHJ CYOA when?

>>47224541
Alright.

>>47225440
11
>>47225454
It's historically accurate, Isabella of France is the queen of cucks.

>>47224541
looking for the one they call easy

>>47225483
Bitch I don't fuckin' care. Don't even put her/him in if it's going to be NTR shit.

>>47224541
rolling

>>47225496
why are you so mad? You are the bull in this situation. Nobody cucked you.

>>47225496
Is that even NTR? Your trap waifu entered a political marriage in which neither of them are happy and her legal husband is fine with your relationship because he's also just maintaining the marriage for political benefits.

>>47225528
I don't want to be a bull. That is just as repugnant.

>>47225531
He's married, so yes it is.

>>47225185
Louise
Servant of the dark one, I'm sure a king needs a good assassin. No other reasons. None.
Zealots, seems both safe and incredibly useful

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>>47225552
>we literally had an entire thread about this two threads ago

>>47225586
You've had a dozen threads about this because retards keep thinking it's acceptable to put this in.

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>>47225360

Looks like we have similar tastes in Princesses anon!

>>47219981
Woo, update! Thanks, SLAnon!

>>47224532
According to MEGA... literally just then.

>>47225586
Technically that was a thread about shitting on that one guys rape fantasy CYOA and telling him/her that we wanted a "Be a Hero/Don't Be a Sexist Sociopath if That Isn't Your Thing" option, but close enough.

>>47225177
Damn, I didn't expect an actual legitimate critique, but it's a good thing! I love these sorts of humor analyses things, you're a pretty cool guy!

>>47225598
>acceptable
Don't choose the trap then fag. Or don't play at all, the obvious choice.

>>47225663
This kind of shit isn't acceptable period.

>>47225674
Why? People are talking about "slutlife" up there, and since I'm a pretty big purityfag and am not autistic, I just ignore it.

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>>47225202

>>47225715
>How dare you criticize and judge me.

>>47225735
>>me
>implying
I'm the one criticizing and judging you. Now get on your knees.

>>47225773
Nah. I'm going to sit here and continue pointing out how this CYOA is fucking trash because of the creator's fetish. Seriously, cucks like him should really just jump off a bridge.

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>>47225789

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>>47225789

>>47225185
Isabella please. Forgot all the other stuff, I just want to cuddle that adorable girl and make her feel loved.

>>47225813
I mean, you can spam shitty images all you want, but you do realize the vast majority of the world hates and despises you, right?

>>47225823
Both you two need to fuck off to the other general.

>>47225813
Bait pics kinda lose their lustre once you already have several hooks shoved down your throat.

>>47225826
NTRfag.

>>47225846
It's not NTR if her husband doesn't even want her. You're not stealing what he gives away freely.