Attempted Poetry thread?? Post your best shot and a pic. >Only

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2017-03-22 10:41:52 Post No. 25064082
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Anonymous 2017-03-22 10:41:52 Post No. 25064082 [Report]

Attempted Poetry thread??
Post your best shot and a pic.

>Only the poor pay taxes
>Raise the curtain
>We are the slaves
>Kept occupied by deaths of black lives
>stay debated on arguments of abortion and chromium
>sheep ba
>herd us, keep us free from harm
>steal our wool
>tell us, "your hard work keeps you warm."
>riding on horns of giants
>keep the mind free of defiance
>sheep baaa
>lamb and pork
>a world ran on lamb and pork
>without a coat for the cold
>he devours her product
>why plow when I can reap?
>why struggle when I can sleep?

Pic is not me

Anonymous 2017-03-22 10:44:38 Post No.25064092
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I like using everyday average words and put them together to make a salad.
Got quite a few.

Anonymous 2017-03-22 10:47:39 Post No.25064102
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>>25064092
Hey I never said it was any good! I just stumbled upon some shit I scribbled from a few years ago

Anonymous 2017-03-22 10:52:03 Post No.25064118
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>>25064102
I don't say yours was bad.
I don't critique poetry in such a way.

Mine are all with a grain of edge.
I'll post more and you'll see.

Call it good or bad, I just like writing.
Do it mainly for practice too.

Anonymous 2017-03-22 10:57:00 Post No.25064141
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Anonymous 2017-03-22 11:01:05 Post No.25064164
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>>25064118
I wasn't sure if your first one was actually you or something you found.

I like writing too. Sadly most of my shit is about self righteousness. >>25064141

Anonymous 2017-03-22 11:05:17 Post No.25064180
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>>25064082
>Ticks away a clock
>So are students pencils on the desk
>Struck from a writers block
>Finally the bell finally rings
>and puts a stop to boring essays on the subject Kafkaesque

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>>25064180
>double use of finally in the same sentence
>this kills the crab

>>25064164
They are written by me yes.

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