I'm off the Molly someone please pass me a damn water She

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>>39443470
I'm black but can't rap at all. Nice verse though

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its not very good to be honest also why do you even write about such trite bs

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>>39443470
Yo wojack!
Gimme a beat!
Lemme lay down some feels for my robots on r9k!


https://youtu.be/1GKe1bVuQBw
Downtrodden fresh kid turned rotten
I cant believe how naive that ive gotten

Over the years feels like im getting dumber reminiscing to a time when i was younger with a hunger, full of dreams, determanation, self esteem but now it seems they hesistate to be on my team, ya... you know the routine, when you winning and grinning all up in yo face as if they was with you from the beginning

But on the flip side when you washed up like a riptide, fools clown about how you slipped and let shit sliiide
Beside the fact my voice is wack, clown just runnin round talkin bout how i smoke crack

Aint go no homies that got my back yea im white but sometimes i feel like crap

My girl is 2D, my game aint tight, niggas who aint seen me in awhile be like dude you aight?

(Beat continues for a bit)

(Chorus X4)
Who am i kiddin who am i fooling when they be like
"whats up anon?"
And i say coolin?


Goin in a circle like almost everyday, in the back of yo mind you prolly thinkin i was gay
But naw im just a bitch ass nigga, the type to get jacked by a rich ass nigga.

Shit... ive been a loser just about all my life, hah, i tried to turn my 2d waifu into a house wife

What do you expect?
Im far from hard, emotionally scarred, on r9k im whats regarded as a retard
I make myself sick, get on my own nerve
Immature, insecure, grown up nerd

Who am i kiddin who am i foolin when they be like
"Whats up anon?"
And i say coolin?
(X4 chorus)

>>39443574
It sounds... uh... unique.
Don't quit you job, if you have one.

>>39443603
Nope i dont.
Just making some relatable rap music for my niggers on r9k
Now post your own

Yes, I put the pus-say on a pedestal
Chocolate, new bouquets when the petals wilt
Drank the Kool-Aid, was a numale with Reddit skills
So fake like a toupee, I think my head is still
up my ass deeper than toothaches with dental drills
My retarded brain ran a goose chase, like when Trayvon fled with Skittles
it didn't know what to say, my mouth bled and whittled
She said "you pay", that's how we settled bills
I asked for another two dates, got ahead a little
but it was too late, my presence influenced her med refill
Last I heard, she had a new mate, saw them downtown eating breaded krill
Her cute face opened doors to my loose safe, was I dead and she read the will?
This post was an effort to make, and I bet the thread is killed

I was desperate to find rhyming words, this took way too long and makes little sense.

>>39444581
>finishing your sentence on the next line to make it rhyme

>>39444602
That's not very uncommon for other rappers to do. The lyrics are written that way, but the lines are broken up with a quick pause or breath when said out loud.
Mine's supposed to be one sentence, but broken up for better formatting and to easily point out the rhymes. It's bad and forced, but I still had to fit both rhymes in the next line while using them in a simile that at least barely makes sense. There was a science to writing this trash, you see.