Some time ago some robot posted a greentext on how he was tricked

>>36012378
that's nice, hun

>>36012378
>Back of the penis facing Marie's's clit in one panel
>Next panel has Marie fucking Double D cowgirl instead of riding him reverse cowgirl

I can't fap with these inconsistencies, anon.

>>36012378
>be a wagie
>wake up to work
>boss is 9/10 milf
>"raise my kids you cuck, ill cheat on you with Pablo"
>"o-ok mom" *cries in the corner*
>go to her place
>her children look at me with pity and disgust
>"h-hi kids, im your new daddy"
>kid looks at me and pats my shoulder
>"whatever you say buddy"
>start cleaning my milf wives house
>knock on the door
>"Ola mi amor!" *Pablo bursts in*
>"Ola Pablo, my you've grown!"
>"Si, my muscles ache how about a back massage?"
>"Anything for you Pablo"
>"... Who's this fool?"
>"Oh he is just Anon, don't mind him he is here to raise my kids for me"
>".. Why would you do that Pendejo? shes not gonna sleep with you"
>"hehe.. good one Pablo" *go hide behind a corner to cry*
>her kid brings me a juicebox to cheer me up
>"welcome to our life ""dad"" "
>curl up in a ball and fall asleep crying

>>36012378
That was a hat this whole time? I always thought that was his strangely-drawn hair for some reason.

>>36012874
M-maybe they changed positions

>>36013102
pls no bully

>>36013137
Same here

>>36014039
>wake up at the hallway
>someone put a blanket on me, milfy must actually love me!
>make my way to kitchen while grasping the blanket
>"m-morning honey, thanks for the blanket"
>"what fucking blanket? get your ass ready you need to drop kid at the school and go to work!"
>"o-oh ok"
>eat a quick meal and change to work clothes
>"hey daughter you ready for school?"
>".. yep"
>"oh, good ill meet you at the car ill say goodbye to mommy first"
>"whatever"
>go to kitchen to kiss milfy goodbye
>"wtf are you still doing here, get your ass driving!"
>"oh i just thought a goodbye kiss would be.."
>"a what? goodbye kiss? hahaha, Pablo come here you gotta hear this"
>"what the fuck you want ho, i was resting"
>"anon just asked me for a goodbye kiss"
>".. You're sad pendejo, and you're an awful person for using this fool"
>"hey someones gotta raise the kid, i don't got time for that shit and maids cost money"
>"How do you live with yourself homes?"
>"i-ill be going to work now, see you love"
>"i ain't your love and hurry up"
>get my suitcase and head to the car
>"so you ready for school?"
>"yep"
>"cool, cool... mind if i turn on the radio?"
>"it's your car"
>turn on the radio
>depache mode - shake the disease comes on
>hold back tears as i focus on driving
>"Please pull yourself together, it will be embarrassing to be dropped off by a crying man"
>"s-sorry honey, daddy just got something in his eyes"
>"... hang in there dad"
>drop daughter off at school
>go to work, milfy comes to meet me in the lobby
>"About time you showed up, how fucking long does it take to drop off one kid?"
>"s-sorry boss, ill try to be faster next time"
>"you better, now get to your desk i don't have time to scold your dumbass"
>"ok boss"
>head to desk, turn on my work PC
>start typing the days work
>boss heads over again
>"anon heres some work i don't have time to do, you don't mind doing them right? good now get to it im meeting Pablo at lunch"
>wait for her to leave and cry on my keyboard

>>36013137
It's a sock, Einstein.

>>36014640
>eat some lunch from the vending machine
>start finishing up days work
>phone rings, its milfy calling
>"hey anon, me and Pablo are going to take the rest of the day off, go pick up daughter after work, stop it Pablo im on the phone, hahaha you fox!, anyway don't forget to pick up daughter!"
>"sure honey, i love you"
>she hung up on me without answering
>check the clock, finish up the work i can and start preparing to go pick up daughter
>"hey anon whats up? heard you're dating the boss now days, you lucky dog, how are things going between you two, she giving you enough rest?"
>"y-yeah, things are going real great between us, im just about to go head to pick up our daughter"
>"that's big of you man, can't say i could raise another mans kid as my own, good for you anon"
>"y-yeah thats me"
>"hehe well ill see you tomorrow, maybe we can catch lunch"
>"ill see what i can do, the boss is keeping me pretty busy"
>"hehe i bet *wink* cya anon"
>"see you Fred"
>head to my car, start heading to the school
>drive in front of the school to pick up daughter
>daughter is there waiting with a group of her friends
>"my ride is here, ill see you guys tomorrow"
>"is that your new dad?"
>"he's not my dad, hes my moms new boyfriend"
>the friends whisper something and start snickering
>daughter comes to the car red faced
>"hi daughter, so what was the funny joke you guys shared?"
>"just drive!"
>start heading to home
>"so.. how was school?"
>"it was ok"
>"thats good to hear, learn anything new?"
>daughter doesn't answer anything and just looks out the window
>park infront of the house, daughter darts to the house before me
>get my suitcase and go inside
>hear laughing from the living room, milfy is drinking with Pablo
>"how was school honey?"
>"my friends made fun of me because you made that loser come pick me up!"
>"hey hes a free ride don't complain"
>"whatever im going to my room"
>go to the kitchen and eat some hotpockets
>go sleep in the couch in the quest room

>>36014872
>wake up and head to shower
>doors locked, knock on it
>"h-hey anyone there?"
>"go away anon im in here with Pablo"
>"oh ok, you going to be long, i need to shower before work"
>"ill let you know when im done now fuck off"
>head to kitchen to start preparing a meal
>daughter eating cheerios at the dinner table
>"you ready for school soon daughter?"
>she looks up at me, doesn't say anything and resumes eating
>make some eggs and sausages for myself with toast
>hear giggling echoing in the hallways, milfy must be done with shower
>finish meal and head upstairs
>giggling is coming from the bedroom, ignore it and head to the shower
>shower while brushing my teeth, finish up and look for my towel
>find my towel on the floor half wet
>dry myself off and head to guest room to change clothes
>"eww you're gross", daughter saw me passing by with towel on
>give her a confused look and keep heading to the guest room
>take off towel and start changing to work clothes
>notice towel has some shampoo on it, milfy must've used it to dry her hair
>dress up and head to kitchen
>"you ready for school daughter?"
>"yep"
>"go ahead to the car ill catch up with you"
>she goes to the car, go upstairs to say goodbye to wife through door
>"im going to drop off daughter now, ill see you at work"
>"piss off anon can't you see im busy"
>"oh ok, see you later honey"
>she doesn't answer, i head to the car
>"time to head to school, you excited?"
>"why would i be excited about school?"
>"oh, ill just put on some music then"
>"as long as you don't cry again i don't care"
>turn on radio, Queen - Don't stop me now comes on
>smile and jam to the tune
>"god you're old"
>"gotta love the classics right?"
>"whatever you say fossil"
>drop daughter off at school
>head to work, see Fred in the lobby
>"hey anon, you trying a new hairdo?"
>"huh?"
>"never mind, so you up for that lunch?"
>"sorry Fred i can't i need to work late so im eating from Vendy again"
>"oh ok, some other time then"
>head to desk

>>36015036
Is there more? Please continue.

>>36015036
more pls thx

>be happy
>girl asks me to be her bf
>do everything for her
>she leaves me
>become depressed

>>36015036
>start doing the days work
>need to take a leak, head to toilets
>after using urinal go to wash my hands
>look up at mirror my hair looks like it belongs to a hippy
>wet my pocket comb and try to make my hair
>now look like greaser, better than hippy look i guess
>head back to desk to continue work
>lunch time, go to feed bills to Vendy for a sandwich
>sandwich looks off, eat it anyway
>tastes like shit, force it down and continue work
>look at the clock, almost time to go pick up daughter
>head to the car, run into Fred at lobby
>"wow you really going nuts with your hairdos huh?"
>"what? oh this, yeah i don't know whats up with my hair today, tried to fix it and it ended up looking like this"
>"looks greasy, well who am i to judge, you heading to pick up daughter again?"
>"yeah, don't want to be late, ill cya tomorrow"
>"ok anon, cya"
>go to pick up daughter, drive in front of the school
>daughter is there alone, i wave to get her attention
>she looks to both sides and dashes to the car
>"hi daughter, how was school"
>"what the hell did you do to your hair?"
>"oh this, i tried to fix it at work, for some reason it stuck like this"
>"... ignorance is bliss"
>"did you say something?"
>"can you turn on the radio please?"
>"sure" turn on radio, its some black rapper i don't recognize, let the tune play
>drive to home, daughter dashes out of car again cover her face with her school bag
>head inside, run into Pablo at hallway
>"the fuck did you do with your hair fool?"
>"oh this, it's been like this since i tried fixing it at work, milfy must've gotten some of her shampoo on my towel"
>"she didn't use your... eww that's disgusting get away from me pendejo! and go wash that off!"
>"ok?.."
>get fresh towel and pajamas from guest room, head to kitchen after showering and changing
>"oh good god how old are you anon? what kind of man wears pajamas at your age?"
>"i like them they're comfy"
>she rolls her eyes and goes upstairs
>head to kitchen to eat

>>36015150
did you work out where you went wrong?

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>>36015217
why the fuck am i enjoying reading this so much

>>36015283
>>36015217
Man im really enjoying this too, dont worry no cuck, just really fun

>>36015283
you are a most likely a cuck

>>36015262
Yes. By trusting someone. If a girl dares to tell me she loves me again, i will lose my shit honestly.
I'm not getting involved with anybody until i have my own apartment/job and she moves in.
Fuck living with your parents and going out every once in a while. We're not 14 anymore.
Until than, i'm probably going to get involved with escorts/prostitution. Already have a couple of options there.

>>36015311
I said no cuck you fucking mongrel, hes enjoying a funny story stop secondhand shillng this board

>>36015396
do you want some advice?

>>36015217
>start making some food, daughter is already there trying to reach cheerios
>"damn Pablo.." can't reach the cheerios, Pablo must've moved them
>"here let me give you a hand" reach the cheerios for her, box is nearly empty
>"oh great"
>"i can make you something, you like omelettes?"
>"sure i guess"
>fix up omelettes for both of us
>sit up to eat with daughter
>"i see you finally washed your hair"
>"yeah, Pablo told me to, don't know why he was so freaked out about my hair, he must be scared of greasers"
>".. i doubt it"
>"why else would he freak out after seeing my hair?"
>".. you don't want to know, lets just eat"
>"oh, ok" continue eating
>finish eating, start doing the dishes
>"im going to bed, night dad the omelettes were alright"
>"oh ok, thanks daughter, i can make some more for you tomorrow and we can go pick up some more cheerios for you"
>".. ok, night dad"
>"goodnight" finish the dishes and head to bed
>wake up in the morning, head to shower
>door locked again, knock on it "you going to be in there long?"
>"almost done, just finishing brushing my teeth"
>it's daughter, wait in the hallway
>daughter comes out, gives me a nod and heads downstairs
>go shower and brush my teeth, head downstairs to make dinner
>milfy not there today, must've already gone to work, daughter sitting there, must be waiting for omelettes
>start cooking up some omelettes for me and daughter
>Pablo comes in the kitchen "hey the fool can cook too, can you knit too maid?"
>"leave him alone Pablo he is cooking for me because you ate my cheerios"
>"hey kid i left you some too"
>"whatever, just don't bully anon"
>"hey thats your moms job not mine"
>finish making omelettes, start eating with daughter and Pablo, Pablo is eating boxed lunch milfy must've made for him
>"your mom really needs to learn how to cook better, this is bland as hell"
>"you can tell her yourself if you want, none of my business"
>Pablo chuckles and continues eating
>after finishing meal start heading to car

>>36015432
stop using words you don't understand anon and you are a cuck, you're just in denial.

>>36015465
or he enjoys a good storytelling, if you think the guy being cucked is the main part of the story you're missing out

>>36015432
https://discord.gg/TTmkC you are good person, join this my frieng

>>36015459
I like daughter, i want dad and daughter to unite against cunt milf

>>36015475
why don't you explain the main part of the story cuck

Is this written by the same guy who used to post cuck fantasy stories about him being a worthless manlet married to a tall girl?

>>36015459
>daughter is already waiting at car with radio on
>The Chainsmokers - Paris playing on radio
>"so this is the new music huh?"
>"it just came on radio, but it sounds okay i guess"
>drive daughter to school "ill come pick you up after work again, see you then"
>"see you, dad"
>smile, start heading to work
>run into Fred at the parking lot
>"hey anon, you gonna ditch on that lunch today too?" Fred asks smiling
>"i think i can make it today, you got a place in mind?"
>"i know this Chinese place down on 5th street, went there last week and the food was great"
>"well meet me at my desk at lunch and we'll go see this new place of yours"
>"you bet, see you at lunch anon"
>head to desk to do days work, milfy comes to my desk again
>"hey anon i need you to do these today and after work i.."
>"ill go pick up daughter after work, gotcha boss"
>".. right, get to work then"
>continue working, check clock almost lunch time
>manage to finish most of the work, see Fred coming, Fred does his usual double finger guns, he must be excited about the new Chinese place
>"you ready?"
>"yep, managed to do most of my work for today, we taking your car or mine?"
>"hey im the one who suggested so the rides on me"
>head to Freds car, Fred drives us to the Chinese place
>order some curry chicken rice
>Fred orders something i can't pronounce
>"so how things at home? you settling in fine?"
>"yeah, strange getting used to the new neighborhood though"
>"hehe i bet, the boss is living way nicer than the rest of us scrubs huh?"
>"yeah, her house is huge compared to my old flat"
>"oh don't get too big head, she might kick you out on your ass"
>"well its her house so its nothing for me to brag about"
>"true enough i guess, how you and the missus getting along?"
>".. ok i guess.." Fred looks at me weird but just says
>"that's good, good to hear" and continues eating
>we finish our meals, pay and head back to work
>Fred waves at me and goes back to do his own work
>i try to finish the day work

>>36015446
What kind of advice?

Original comment.

>>36015680
This is my first time writing greentext stories this long, so no

>>36015637
not going to spoil it but if you can't make a guess by whats written already it's pearls to pigs for you

>>36015715
make milf and pablo fall into lava pls, or just cut pablo's greasy taco dick off.

>>36015701
>If a girl dares to tell me she loves me again, i will lose my shit honestly.
if this happens and you enjoy her just go along with it but don't allow yourself to get emotionally attached.
>I'm not getting involved with anybody until i have my own apartment/job and she moves in.
do not ever let her move in

Pretty good thread you have hear. See you on Reddit

>>36015715
>pearls to pigs
you're just a cuck anon, no need to dance around it.

>>36015779
>Hear
>Reddit
>you don't fucking remember anymore what r9k was.
Just kys

>>36015693
>check the clock, almost time to go pick up daughter
>seems like Fred has already finished his work for the day
>"see you tomorrow anon"
>"cya Fred"
>finally get the days work done, head to car
>drive to daughters school, daughter is already there waiting for me, her friends are with her again this time
>"look who's back" one of them says
>"don't start Linda"
>daughter walks up to the car
>"hi, we're gonna stop by the store today to get you those cheerios, you excited?"
>".. about getting cheerios? get real dad"
>she smiles and waves out the window to her friends
>we head to the local supermarket
>gather up usual shoppings to the cart, head over to cereal isle
>"so which one you want?"
>"the usual"
>"honey nut it is then"
>head to the check out, pay and load the stuff to car
>"turn the radio on dad" i turn the radio on
>Starley - Call on me comes on
>jam my head to the music while driving home, daughter shakes her head but taps to the beat with her finger
>reach home, take the shopping bag to kitchen
>daughter follows me, hear arguing from the living room, daughters smile gone
>"im going to my room, you can put the cheerios to the usual spot"
>"oh ok, ill see you tomorrow"
>".. see you tomorrow dad"
>daughter darts to her room, still hear arguing from living room, finish loading off the shopping bags
>head to living room to see whats going on

>>36015762
>don't allow yourself to get emotionally attached
So. Manipulate her and use her for sex? Yeah no. I don't think i'd even be capable of that.
There's plenty of young students struggling for money, posting ads on escort sites. One night type of a deal.
There's no attachment or manipulation there. Both sides are in agreement in what they both want.
>do not ever let her move in
Eventually i do want to start a family.
Once that happens, i will make it clear that i'll be willing to destroy both our lives if she hurts me in any way.
She better be sure before getting involved with me.

>>36015962
>So. Manipulate her and use her for sex? Yeah no. I don't think i'd even be capable of that.
enjoy her, her personality, sex what ever you like doing together. it has nothing to do with manipulation, don't become dependant on her emotional validation.
>Eventually i do want to start a family.
>i will make it clear that i'll be willing to destroy both our lives if she hurts me in any way.
>She better be sure before getting involved with me.
you sound like a very stupid youngfag, I hope you do stick to whores, no child deserves a parent like you anon.

>>36015874
>reach living room, notice lamp broken on the floor
>"Don't lie to me Pablo i know you're fucking her!"
>"Hey i don't know wtf you've heard but i.."
>"She told me you fucking pig, she told me you had sex with her after i had left the office party!"
>"who you gonna believe girl, me or some office puta?"
>"she had pictures of you two you piece of shit!"
>".. what fucking pictures?"
>"you remember the piece of shit polaroid camera Fred brought to the party? you remember how everyone was taking stupid pictures with it at the party? she had pictures of you with your dick in her mouth!"
>"that fucking bitch.. hey you were never supposed to see those okay? it was just a blowjob"
>"just a blowjob? just a fucking blowjob!"
>she throws the other lamp to the floor
>"hey you've got a guy on the side too, speak of the devil, you're married to this fool while we are dating"
>Pablo points at me
>milfy turns to me with murderous glare
>"that loser? we aren't fucking! there's a big fucking difference between that guy doing my maid work and Helen sucking your dick!"
>"you're still married to him aren't you? id say that's a pretty big fucking deal too!"
>"it's marriage in name, i don't give two shits about that whimp and you know it!"
>"whatever puta, im heading home ill see you tomorrow when you've cooled your head"
>Pablo starts heading to the door
>"don't you walk away from me, get back here right now!"
>Pablo flips her off and bumps my shoulder with his while walking to the front door
>i take a step back to retain my balance and watch him go, i turn to milfy
>"unbelievable.. and what the fuck are you looking at?!"
>".. im home"
>"yeah no shit, out of my way"
>she goes outside after Pablo
>i head to kitchen to eat some toast and start heading to bed
>as i pass the stairs i see daughter there, she moves back to her room as soon as i see her
>keep heading to my room to get some sleep
>prepare tomorrows clothes and towel and head to bed in the guest room

>>36015962
Wahhh I won't use a girl for sex but I will fucking destroy her if she hurts my feeeling!!!

>>36016105
>>36016154
Go fuck yourself. You have absolutely zero clue about my life. People my age already have kids/families.
I don't even know why i fucking come here. Bunch of virgin teenagers who treat dating as a game.

Reee, hurry up anon. I need to see what happens with cuck beta provider and his fake daughter

>>36016115
>wake up in the morning, head to shower with clothes and towel
>this time no one there, start brushing my teeth and showering
>head to kitchen drying and dressing up
>daughter is alone in kitchen swirling cheerios in her bowl
>"morning daughter"
>".. morning"
>"don't feel like eating cheerios huh, would you like some omelette instead?"
>".. no thanks" she starts eating her cheerios
>"okay, ill eat something and im ready to go"
>"ok"
>make some quick omelettes again
>go grab my suitcase, lambs still shattered in living room
>head to my car with daughter, notice a dent on my door
>get into car with daughter and start heading to school
>put on the radio, some black rapper i don't know plays on radio again, let it play
>check how daughter is doing, she is looking out the window can't see her face clearly
>get to school, "ill come pick you up after work at the same time as always ok?"
>"ok" she leaves the car and closes the door
>start heading to work, notice a cop car at the parking lot
>lots of people swarming around the front entrance
>park my car and go see what's going on
>Fred notices me from the crowd and runs to me
>"Hey man are you alright?"
>".. yes, what's going on here?"
>"you won't believe it, boss went nuts, they say she attacked Helen with scissors or some shit, i heard she cut her pretty bad, the security caught her and the cops went in there too"
>"what?"
>"didn't think you were the cheating type though, why would you cheat on milfy?"
>"i haven't cheated on her what are you talking about?"
>"i heard milfy was shouting that Helen had slept with her man for the last time and all that crazy jazz.. sorry anon, i thought it was about you"
>"i think i know what it is about, and i can say it wasn't me"
>"i believe you, like i said you don't seem like the cheating type, oh crap they're bringing Helen out now"
>i see Helen being brought out on stretchers with bandages on her face and her outfit covered in red

>>36016379
>crowd parts in shock and is filled with sounds of gasps and muffled whispers
>she looks pretty badly wounded
>"holy shit those wounds looked serious, you think she will make it?"
>im too shocked to answer his question and just stare with my mouth gaping like a moron as they take her to the back of the ambulance parked in front of the company
>crowd starts to whisper again and i see milfy brought out with her hands behind her back accompanied by two officers
>i go to her "milfy what's going on?"
>"step aside sir, she is suspected of attempted murder"
>"that's my wife" cops look at each other until the other one says
>"sir please come with us, we need to ask a few questions from you down at the station"
>"i haven't done any.."
>"it's just a questioning sir, it would be wise to comply unless you have something to hide"
>"i.. ok ill go"
>"you have a car right? follow us to the station"
>"ok" i head to my car and park it ready to follow the cop car
>Fred looks at me worried, i nod at him and he nods back looking a bit more reassured
>follow the cop car to the station
>"wait here, there will be officer coming to pick you up for questioning momentarily"
>"ok, hows milfy doing?"
>"better than the girl she cut up" the cop says with disdain in her voice
>"she is doing fine, just wait here and the officer will arrive shortly"
>wait in the lobby while nervously touching the collar of my shirt
>i see an older officer with a bushy mustache approach me
>"you the husband?"
>"yes?"
>"right this way sir"
>he leads me into a small interrogation room
>he is shuffling through some papers
>"so a cheating husband and crazy wife? why can't you just keep your dick in your wife? shouldn't be that hard to be faithful, in my days marriage meant something"
>"... i haven't cheated on her"
>the officer looks at me from his paper work with disbelief colored all over his face
>"sure you didn't, now why don't you tell me what you did do so we can get the story straight for record"

>>36016521
Pls cont
Origano11

>>36016521
>"i just came to work when i saw your officers bringing my wife out cuffed, i had nothing to do with happened at the office today"
>"sir you're not suspected of helping her attack the poor lady in your office, i am asking for you to clarify the motive for the attack"
>"i thought she shouted the motive pretty clearly during the attack..."
>"and you say you didn't do anything right? funny how things don't add up, now either the crazy face stabber is lying or you're lying, now which is it?"
>"i wasn't the one who cheated on her.."
>".. oh? i thought you said you were her husband?"
>"i am, but i didn't cheat on her"
>"but someone did?
>"yes"
>"are you two mormons sir?"
>"what? no"
>"then enlighten me why she would freak out if someone other than her husband would cheat on her"
>".. it's complicated"
>"just answer the question sir, it doesn't have to be any more complicated than you're making it"
>"she had an affair"
>"an affair? i see, well that makes a lot more sense then, so she had an affair and that someone had another affair with office lady which lead to wifey over here into stabbing office lady right?"
>".. pretty much"
>"right, wait here a bit ill go get some coffee, you want some coffee sir?"
>"no thanks" "alright then sir, sit tight ill be right back"
>i wait in the interrogation room alone, i keep fiddling my collar to ease my nerves
>after a long wait the officer finally comes back
>"you're free to go, your stories match up and she confessed"
>"whats going to happen to her?"
>"what do you think? she is charged with attempted murder, she is going to jail, the security cameras caught her, she confessed and her victim identified her, the court is just formality at this point"
>"what about our daughter?"
>"i assume that as the husband you will get sole custody at least until she gets released"
>"but i am not her.. she is not my biological daughter"
>"irrelevant, you're still her legal guardian and husband on paper"

>>36016716
>"if you don't want to raise her you can try to put her up for adoption b.."
>i glare at the officer, he coughs
>"anyway to answer your question, you're her legal guardian now, and as i said you're free to go, if we need more from you we will contact you"
>".. thank you officer"
>"you're welcome, now git we have actual criminals to interrogate here"
>i leave the interrogation room, another officer came to show me the way out of the station
>i walk to my car and lean on the steering
>after a while i turn on the radio, Chainsmokers - Don't let me down starts playing
>i take a deep breath and check the clock, i still have hours left to work but i doubt the office will be open today considering what happened there
>i call Fred to make sure
>"hi anon, how did it go?"
>"they just asked some questions and let me go"
>"and milfy?"
>".. they said shes going to jail"
>".. i guess that was to be expected after what she did, did they say what was going to happen to daughter?"
>"they said im her legal guardian now.."
>"well that's some good news, i hear those adoption places are awful for kids, im sure she will prefer to be raised by you instead of those places too right?"
>"right.. do we have work today?"
>"you're kidding right?.. no, anon we don't have any work today, they called in some big shot, we have some meeting tomorrow though and they expect everyone to be there"
>"ok, ill see you tomorrow then, ill go get daughter from school"
>"ok, you decided on what you're gonna tell her yet?"
>"..."
>"if you want my advice i don't think it is wise to tell someone that age that her mother tried to kill another lady and is going to jail, you might have to make up some vacation lie or job trip story"
>"i think ill go with job trip"
>"hey your choice, just don't shock the poor kid with the truth"
>"i won't, ill see you tomorrow at work Fred"
>"alright, see you tomorrow"

>>36016868
>after i hang up with Fred i check the clock again
>still plenty of time before i need to pick daughter up from school
>i decide to head home through supermarket, i get some cake and that weird soda daughter likes
>i drive to home, i notice Pablo at the yard
>i step out the car and go meet him
>"is it true?"
>".. is what true?"
>"don't play dumb, is it true what milfy did at the office?"
>".. yes, they said shes going to jail, they interrogated me for it too"
>".. did you snitch?"
>"what?"
>"did you snitch on me?"
>"i didn't tell your name if that's what you're asking, and even if i did you weren't the one who stabbed Helen"
>".. whatever, jail huh? she won't last in there"
>"what makes you say that?"
>"you kidding me right? she won't last a week with her mouth in jail"
>"..."
>"hey none of my business anymore, i just came here to make sure it was true"
>"you're leaving?"
>"of course im leaving, only reason i came here was to meet milfy and now that shes going to jail i have no reason to come here no more"
>"i guess that makes sense"
>Pablo looks behind him "nice place you inherited, guess your long con finally paid off?"
>i glare at Pablo, he smiles "don't worry pendejo, i know you're too whimpy to ever come up with a scheme like this, and besides you had even less to do with what happened at the office than me right?"
>"..." "shame, was a nice crib and she was a good fuck, too bad she was batshit crazy, whats the verdict on the little one?"
>"they said ill be her legal guardian"
>"well you're the ""father"" ain't you? good luck with that, im sure you'll do better job than milfy of the adoption center"
>"i guess" "yeah, well imma bounce don't have shit to do here no more, thanks for not dropping names i guess"
>"you're welcome, cya Pablo" "cya maid"
>i head inside and put the soda and cake to fridge
>still nearly an hour time to pick up daughter
>i look at milfys booze cabinet, can't drink if im going to pick up daughter from school

>>36012874
Maybe his penis just bends that way

>>36017127
>eat some toast while waiting to pick up daughter
>turn on the news while eating, looks like milfy finally got her wish to be on TV
>her face is blurred along with the company logo, guess the big shot they called works fast
>turn the TV off, head to car to go pick up daughter
>drive to school, im a bit early so i leave the car at the parking lot and head to the schools lobby
>guard gives me the evil eye in the lobby but doesn't say anything
>i sit down and wait for daughter
>after a while the hallways are littered with kids
>try to spot daughter among them, finally spot her so i raise up and wave, putting on the best fake smile i can muster
>daughter smiles and waves back
>"hey, you ready to head home?"
>"yep, our last class was really boring"
>"that's a shame, i brought you some cake and soda"
>"really?" "yep" "well it's an improvement from cheerios"
>we head to car, turn on the radio Phil Collins - Another day in paradise starts playing
>"more fossil music huh?" "hey don't blame me, blame the radio"
>"only your old folks radio plays these songs"
>"you want me to change the station?"
>".. nah, whatever let it play"
>we start driving home, i jam my head to the music again trying my best to look normal
>she doesn't seem to notice anything wrong, she taps her finger to the beat again
>we reach home, i go to the kitchen to prepare some food
>"you want to eat anything special?" "pizza"
>"i meant home made food, but i guess pizza is good once in a while too"
>we order pizzas and she opens the soda and drinks while waiting
>i start doing the dishes
>"is mom going to be late again?"
>i stop rinsing "moms not coming home tonight, she has a business trip, she is going to be away for some time"
>"figures" i keep rinsing the dishes
>"wheres Pablo? did he go with her?"
>"no, Pablo won't be coming around here until she returns"
>"good, i hate it when he moves my cheerios"
>i finish up doing the dishes, and sit down to wait for the pizza

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>>36017376
I bet pablo has some stank ass pedostache

>>36017376
>daughter is swinging her legs from the chair and sipping her soda
>sit down at the table, drink some juice while waiting for the pizza to arrive
>after a long awkward silence i hear the doorbell
>take my wallet and head to the door
>pizza guy arrives with the goods, pay him and wish him a good night
>head to kitchen with pizzas, eat with daughter
>"how long is mom going to be gone?"
>"don't know yet, it might be a long trip, but don't worry ill take care of you while she is gone"
>"ok, it'll do some good for her to have time apart from Pablo"
>".. yeah" she looks at me awkwardly "because of the fight i mean, i heard them argue yesterday"
>"oh that, y-yeah im sure it will do them good to be apart"
>".. sorry i brought it up like that"
>"it's okay, want some cake after pizza? we can eat the left over pizza tomorrow before i drop you off at school"
>"sure, cake sounds nice"
>bring out the cake to the table and carve her a slice of it
>"aren't you going to eat?" "i don't like cake that much"
>"more for me" she says and starts shoveling cake to her mouth with her spoon
>don't forget to brush your teeth after eating sugary foods
>she nods and continues to eat, after finishing eating the pizza and cake i put the leftovers to fridge
>daughter starts heading upstairs "while moms gone you can finally sleep in a real bed right?"
>i think to myself, i don't want to sleep on that bed, not at least tonight
>"i think ill sleep on my old bed tonight"
>"your loss, ill see you tomorrow dad"
>"see you daughter, good night and don't forget to brush your teeth"
>she waves her hand and disappears upstairs
>go brush my teeth and go to sleep in the guest room

>>36017556
Dude please, i love your storytelling and all but im hanging here since morning, i like your style but for the love of god write these beforehand, i wasted half my day on this thread

>>36017556
>wake up, prepare my clothes for work and head upstairs for shower
>doors locked, i guess ill go to prepare dinner
>head to kitchen to check fridge, oh yeah we had the leftover pizza
>check the sink, no dishes to clean
>get bored, turn on the radio in the kitchen Sting - Englishman in new york plays from my favorite station
>tap table to the beat while waiting for shower the be free
>hear footsteps upstairs, daughter must be done, head upstairs
>hear her door close, head to shower, brush my teeth and shower
>finish showering, put on towel and head to guest room to change, see daughter in the hallway
>"morning"
>shes still brushing her teeth "morning dad"
>she scoots past me to the shower room
>head guest room to dress up
>get dressed and head to kitchen
>check put on the oven to heat up the leftover pizza
>daughter joins me in the kitchen
>"i thought we were having the leftovers for dinner?"
>"we are, im just warming them up in the oven so they don't get soggy"
>"ok, can i have some soda?"
>"go ahead, leave some to go with your pizza"
>"okay" put the pizzas to the oven to warm
>wait a bit for them to warm up, turn off the oven and start eating
>finish the leftovers with daughter and head to the car
>put on the radio, another black rapper i don't recognize, let it play
>drive to the school "see you after school daughter" "see ya dad"
>drive to work, see Fred at lobby again
>"you nervous?" "for what?"
>"you're pretty oblivious huh?"
>"..?" "on whos getting milfys job, they called in a big shot from the main branch"
>"oh, i hadn't even thought about that"
>"really now? well im putting on my best shit eating grin and snatching that job if you don't mind"
>"knock yourself out, im not interested in promotions"
>head to the meeting room with Fred
>some mildly chubby guy in a suit is whispering with a man in expensive looking suit
>meeting finally starts and people take their places

>>36017869
>"greetings everyone, im sure you all know by now of the events that took place in this office yesterday"
>"all thought they are tragic they leave this company with a critical opening in the chain of command"
>"we have reviewed all the employees present since yesterday and have come to a decision on who would be most suited to replace mrs. milfy"
>I look over to Fred who is giving me a subtle finger gun..
>"we have all agreed that the most suitable candidate to replace her would be Mr. Fred"
>Fred's confidence in his promotion must have been all bluff since he is clearly blown away by this revelation
>"if you would come over here Fred we have reserved some time for you to have a motivational speech to all your future subordinates"
>Fred pulls himself together, fixes his tie and heads to the podium
>"*ahem* i am not a man who excels in speeches so ill keep it short, as you all know Mrs. milfy was a valued and respected boss in our company prior to the events of yesterday, and i hope to eventually fill her shoes with the help from you all, thank you"
>a strange but short speech is followed by applauds from the people present to which Fred bows and returns to his seat
>"now that we have that issue out of the way how about we return back to work, and for those of you worrying about Helen she is doing fine and will return to work next week, we plan to hold her a party so bringing a get well gift is recommended, that is all"
>the meeting room clears out slowly and Fred is surrounded by people complimenting him on his promotion, i slip away to my desk to get some work in, ill most likely meet Fred at lunch so i can give my congratulations then
>i head to my desk and start working, Fred comes to my desk half an hour before lunch break
>"hey anon, where'd you run off to?"
>"i figured id let you have your moment and go catch up on work, congratulations on your promotion"
>"thank you anon, i still can't believe i actually got it myself"

>>36017866
Well like i said this is my first time writing a greentext story this long, ive saved the story up on notepad and will repost the complete thing later on /r9k/ when i finish it

>>36018057
Nice :)
No irony

>>36018057
Hey, OP here. I appreciate your story. Even though its completely different from what I expected,and quite frankly, cucks and their stories, even reading them enrage me to unimaginable levels, I'm quite enjoying it now.
Wonder when will the MC murder pablo and his fucking adulterous wife

>>36018270
I guess never, its his redemption song. Bobby gave him strenk

>>36018041
>"so where we heading to celebrate?"
>"the Chinese place of course, can't let one promotion to get into my head right?"
>"right, my turn to drive"
>"sure thing, see you at lunch!"
>Fred leaves my desk and goes to do rounds
>i don't think they've briefed Fred yet on what his new job is, guess they are giving him a chance to get his congratulations in first
>i finish up my work and head to Fred's desk
>i see some people packing up Fred's stuff into boxes, looks like they don't waste time
>"you ready for lunch Fred?"
>"ah anon, yes i am im starving!"
>"right this way boss man, your ride awaits"
>"haha brown nosing will get you nowhere anon, thou the effort is appreciated"
>we head to my car and drive to the Chinese place
>we place our usual orders and start eating
>"so how did daughter take the news of the trip?"
>"pretty well, i don't think she suspects anything"
>"good to hear that, and Pablo?"
>"won't be coming around anymore, said he didn't have a reason to hang around that place anymore"
>"true i guess, so a single dad living in his luxurious new home with just daughter?"
>"yep, the place has gotten a lot quieter since milfy was taken away"
>just speaking her name out loud reminds me of Helen when they brought her out of the office
>"well that's good right? im sure the kid will appreciate some peace and quiet too"
>"i guess so"
>we make small talk and finish our meals, i drive us back to the office
>"see you later anon, i need to go check if they have any work piled ready for me"
>"cya Fred"
>i finish my work and head to my car
>as i start the car i notice the gas light is going red, i go to fill the car up on the way and head to pick up daughter
>as i arrive at front of the school i notice daughter is already there waiting for me
>i drive close to her and wave
>she looks up with a gloomy face and walks to the passengers seat
>"how was school"
>"just drive.."
>i don't pry any more and drive us home

>>36018335
>after we arrive at our yard daughter lumbers out of the care and towards the front door
>i go get my briefcase from the back seat and follow her inside
>"is something wrong?" i ask her at the hallway
>she glares up at me and just says "business trip" and heads towards the kitchen
>she knows, those are the first thoughts that come into my mind, but how could she know?
>"w-what do you mean by that?"
>she looks back at me disappointed and goes to kitchen
>i follow her into to the kitchen
>she is pouring herself cheerios, i sit on the opposite side of the table
>i think about my options and figure it's best to tread carefully
>"what did you mean by business trip?" i ask her
>she looks at me and sighs "moms not on a business trip, is she"
>"w-what do you mean, where did you hear that?"
>"Linda told me, she saw the news, her dad works at moms company you remember?"
>"..." "Linda told me she recognized the building and moms clothes, she told me my mom hurt someone in the office"
>".. a-are you sure she wasn't just lying to be mean or.."
>"i saw the news too! i checked the news because i didn't believe Linda, you don't think id recognize moms clothes on TV even without the stupid blur on her face?"
>"and the convenient timing of her "business trip", you didn't think id find out?"
>".. im sorry, i didn't want to upset you"
>"don't worry all you did was lie, moms the real criminal here"
>"i knew the truth would have hurt you so i kept it from you to protect you"
>".. i know"
>"good, sorry that i lied but i couldn't just come out and tell you what she did"
>"whatever"
>".. are you mad at me?"
>".. no" "good"
>".. so when is she coming back? when is she Really coming back?"
>"i don't know, the officer said she will be going to jail and Pablo.. Pablo said she won't be coming out"
>"... so now what?"
>".. ?" "what happens to me now?"
>"what do you mean?" "when will i be taken away?"
>"you won't be taken away, ill take care of you"

>>36018670
Hayaku pls,Gotta go fast

>>36018670
>".. but you're not my real dad"
>"i know, but the officer said as far as law is concerned im your legal guardian, that means i can take care of you and they won't take you away"
>".. why?" "why what?"
>"why do you care what happens to me? i thought you stayed around because of mom"
>"you're my daughter, of course i care"
>"but im not really your daughter am i?"
>"daughter..." "Pablo wouldn't stay and mom loved her, why would you stay?"
>"im not Pablo" ".. im going to my room"
>daughter darts to her room again, i think of stopping her but can't think of anything to say to her
>i clear the table and prepare my clothes for tomorrow
>i look at milfys booze cabinet again, can't drink now, she needs me
>head to the guest room to sleep
>wake up in the morning
>take my clothes and fresh towel, head upstairs
>hear that the shower is on so i decide to make some dinner while waiting my turn
>i leave my clothes next to the door with the towel underneath
>start making omelettes in the kitchen
>hear the shower turn off, finish making omelettes, share them on two plates and head upstairs
>hear daughters door close on my way upstairs
>take my clothes and the towel from next to the door
>head to shower and brush my teeth
>towel myself and change into my work clothes
>head towards kitchen, daughter is there eating her omelette
>".. morning anon" "morning daughter"
>start eating my omelette, friday is finally here so we can have a break from the daily grind
>"how are you feeling daughter?"
>".. im feeling okay" "ok, good"
>awkward silence ensues, the only sounds are from forks hitting plate and us eating
>"we should probably start heading out now, ill clean the dishes when we get back
>".. ok"
>head to car, put on the radio Sting - Shape of my heart plays on my favorite station
>i jam my head to the music, daughter looks out the window
>we reach the school, "ill come pick you up at the usual time"
>"ok, see you later anon"
>head to store to buy a gift for Helen

>>36012874
you know the phrase "sit and spin"?
That's what she did.

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>>36012378
you can have this, op
dfhdhd

>>36019111
>can't think of what to buy as get well gift
>end up buying chocolates and a small silver necklace
>hopefully she won't think im flirting with her... maybe the chocolates were too much
>shrug, im about to run late for work, drive to work
>walk past Fred's old desk, guess they haven't found a replacement for his old position yet
>flooded with nostalgic memories of me and Fred fooling around with finger guns in the early days before i met milfy
>i was such a kid back then
>head towards my desk, Fred is there waiting for me
>"there you're, you're just in time, we are about to wish Helen well, you remembered to buy her a gift right?"
>"yeah i bought chocolates and a necklace"
>"ooh chocolates? she might take it the wrong way"
>"you think? should i just give her the necklace instead?"
>"hey don't ask me, i bought her perfume, i hear all the ladies in the office talk about this brand so i figured she'd like it too, lets go we don't want to be late"
>go to the meeting room, it's decorated with balloons and big letters that spell out "welcome back Helen"
>head inside, see Helen at the end of the room
>her face has a really nasty scar near her eye and some smaller bumps that must've been covered with make up
>put on my best poker face and head over there with Fred
>"hey Helen, you feeling better?" Fred says as he hands her his gift
>"thank you Fred, yeah much better, nearly lost my eye but apart from that im all good"
>"good to hear, anons here to wish you well too"
>"hi, i hope you get well soon" i hand her my gifts
>".. chocolates, really anon i know you just lost your wife but this is rather bold"
>"stop teasing anon, he'll think you're being serious"
>i was shocked when i heard her say that but Fred reassured me she was just joking with me
>"thanks for the gifts anon"
>"you're welcome"
>"go mingle with the other guests, we are still waiting on few people"
>"ok" Fred stays with Helen to strike up a conversation while i slip towards a corner to hide

>>36019340
>stand around near the corner, one of my co-workers hands me a glass of soda that i take with a thanks
>the man with the expensive suit comes to the office
>he whispers something with Fred and looks displeased
>"well now that all who are still working here have arrived we can start the party, as you all know we are here to wish Helen well and welcome her back from her visit to the hospital, lets hope it was a one of a kind visit and never repeats"
>the room is filled with awkward laughter at the tasteless joke
>"now i will let the lady of the occasion have her word in and we can start devouring the cake"
>"thank you, id like to thank you all for the gifts and prayers, it is nice to feel welcomed even after such a tragic event, i also hope the visit to the hospital was a one of a kind occurrence"
>everyone is laughing a bit easier now that she said it
>"and i would also like to start devouring that cake so lets get to it shall we?"
>she finishes her speech with applauds and people start swarming the cake, of course after letting Helen cut the first slice
>Fred comes towards me with slices of cake in both hands
>"heres your slice, barely managed to take two, i think the only reason they let me is because im their boss now"
>"thanks" i don't like cake but i eat it anyway for politeness sake
>"did you catch what the big shot said at the beginning?"
>"you mean about the late ones?"
>"yep, he just up and fired them on the spot, good thing you weren't late huh?"
>"yeah" pretty harsh, must be a really big shot if he thinks he can just up and fire people like that without legal issues
>"so hows things at home?"
>".. daughter found out where milfy went"
>"ouch, did you tell her or?"
>i look at Fred with my best bitch please face
>"the news huh? kind of pointless to blur her when her red suit stands out like a sore thump"
>"yep, her classmate told her"
>"really? kids are harsh these days"
>"tell me about it" "so what did she say? was she mad at you?"

>>36019542
Reeee finish it

>>36019542
>"she said she wasn't but im not sure if she was"
>"well all you can go by is her word, don't think you qualify for a psychic, if you did id fire you"
>i look at Fred who is laughing at shoving cake to his mouth with the dignity of a feeding pig
>"don't worry i won't really fire you"
>"i know, how was Helen?" "surprisingly well considering she took stabs to the face, she is tougher than she looks, or maybe she feels partially to blame for what happened to her"
>Fred chuckles at the last bit, i let his tasteless jab at Helens moral character slide
>the party finishes pretty uneventfully and we return to work, Helen gets the day off but spends it at her desk opening her presents
>i finish my days work and check the clock
>almost time to go pick daughter up
>i take my briefcase and head to my car
>I see Fred at lobby, he waves me goodbye while i start up my car
>i turn on the radio, another black rapper i don't know is playing on the radio, i let the music play and head towards the school
>arrive in front of the school, daughter is there waiting for me
>she spots my car and runs towards the passengers seat
>"hi daughter" "hi anon"
>drive us home, head to kitchen
>daughter follows me to kitchen
>"you want omelettes again?"
>"im not that hungry, ill eat cheerios and head to bed"
>"ok" i start making myself some dinner, thanks to Helens party i forgot to eat lunch, the cake did not keep hunger away for long
>whip up some omelettes for myself while daughter eats
>"how was school?" "it was alright"
>"that's good to hear" finish making omelettes
>sit across from daughter and start eating
>daughter looks up at me from her cheerio bowl, i look back at her and stop eating
>she turns her eyes back towards her bowl and starts shoveling cheerios to her mouth
>shrug and finish my omelette
>"did you find anything today?"
>".. what?" ".. nevermind, good night dad"
>look at daughter with a puzzled look as she scampers upstairs
>do the dishes and head to guest room

>>36019756
Could they please eat something different that omelettes once in a lifetime? And what is up with cereals and milk for breakfast lunch and dinner? Is it an american thing?

>>36012378
>My life situation is fake

O-Ok...

>>36019756
>take off my work jacket while wondering what she meant
>have you find anything today? i start checking my pockets
>find a small torn and folded page from a diary with little heart shapes at each end of the page
>read the paper, "i love you dad"
>smile and head upstairs, knock on daughters door
>"are you asleep?" "nope" "can i come in?"
>"... okay" open the door and go inside, daughter is already in bed with just her head and hands peeking outside the covers
>sit on the bed next to her, she looks nervous, i've never been to her room before
>"i found something today after all" ".. you did?"
>"yep" she looks embarrassed and covers her face with her blanket
>i kiss her forehead and say "i love you too daughter, good night"
>she peeks underneath the covers i wave good night to her
>"good night dad.."
The end, you thought it was going to be some nasty ending didn't you, fuck you have feels

>>36019853
The protagonist is a man stuck in his habits

>>36019895
Where is the redemption, the revenge ? Do you really think a man could be satisfied with just having a loving wife's daughter when he can rightfully murder and mangle his adulterous wife and her spic lover ? You think it's a fucking joke ? It's fucking nothing. What a fag,sasuga cuck kun

>>36020003
His redemption is that he found a daughter despite his off-screen condition and hardships in life, he kept his way despite what he was done to him and in the end he was rewarded by having a daughter that loves him

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>>36020003
Not everything has to be your way anon. this is just the simple story of Anon Supercuck where everything turned out better then expected.

>>36019895
I think it's pretty cool.

>>36020059
Yep the fact that anon kun stayed in the abusive relationship and kept staring at the booze cabinet was supposed to hint towards his condition
Anon is infertile in the story, that's why he put up with all the shit milfy did to him and why he felt worthless as a man enough to allow Pablo and mifly to abuse him

>>36019895
>>36020003
I liked you Calvino-like ending, you should work more on syntax though and maybe use some rethoric figures to spice up the story. Is english your first language? All in all its a good story, just try to explain(without really explaining) get more in depth.
P. S. Thank you for not dinosauring on the floor this off

>>36020099
>he felt worthless as a man so its all ok because now he's even more cucked infertile KEK

I fucking hate you man
>>36020052
>found a daughter
He already HAD that daughter you fool he cared for her and all that crap, of course she was gonna go to him.
>pablo the beaner who fucks anon's wife without an inkling of remorse lives his life leisurely
>wife who cucked anon vevery day in front of his eyes and treated him no more than a maid just gets jail time lol
Yeah fucking right.You ruined my fucking birthday asshole, fuck you. FUCK YOU. You're a bad and mean person.

>>36020173
Hes good fuck off. But stop with the cereal and omelette thing, i mean its fine for him but not for everyone else. You cant let the daughter eat cereal for a whole week

>>36020120
english is my 2nd language and i improvised the whole story as i went so it is not my finest work, also it is my first long greentext story so : P

>>36020173
>found a daughter that loved him
the daughter pitied him before, she eventually opened up to anon and said he loved him and called him her dad

Pablo lost her fuck buddy and nice crib because he was a cheater to the end

Milfy is hinted to not survive prison by Pablo because her big mouth would get her killed

>>36020224
Where are you originally(and i mean it originally) from?

>>36020208
Im planning on refining the story a bit and reposting it eventually, i have it on notepad now and ill be cleaning up some typos, putting variety on meals and maybe have milfy blurt out about his condition

>>36020252
Finland, and trust me i am a black sheep among my kind even without skin tone difference

>>36020208
>he's good
no,no.Fuck you too. Just fucking go away and let this thread die.I want to watch this all die.Leave
>>36020224
I can see what you're trying to say you fucking pseudo-intellectual retard,it is just too fucking retarded,like you made the anon the ultimate fucking cucktardo 3000,just for the sake of it.
>pablo lost his fuck buddy
what a fucking tragedy
I used to like finnish people but this is atrocious.

>>36019853
She has to eat all the eggs, anon.

>>36020320
>Some time ago some robot posted a greentext on how he was tricked by his female boss into becoming her husband and father to her children and stuff, and she was a mommy gf,and that he didn't feel anything for her or something like that.

This is the premise that this thread spawned from, what the fuck did you expect to see in a thread like this?
and fuck you im not pandering to a bitter asshole who wanted the story to end by death of everyone who wronged him and the guy doing total 360 and fucking the daughter or some shit

you knew what the character was like when it started, a whimp like that was stuck in his ways

did you expect some mary sue lightning bolt to fry Pablos dick off and anon-kun to flip after already enduring the abuse for so long and finally kill milfy?

that's all the character could expect from behaving as he did and that's all he got

>>36020320
>I used to like finnish people but this is atrocious

>Finland, and trust me i am a black sheep among my kind even without skin tone difference

So you judge the Finnish people by their self proclaimed black sheep that browses /r9k/?
Good for you mate, shows what a bright individual you're

>>36020413
>people don't snap

yeah yeah.Keep believing that cucco. Maybe this "story" is a manifestation of your inner betacuck. Your story had nothing to do with the thread theme(which was, mommy gfs and snusnu). What an absolutely useless person.

>>36020484
You're just mad because you didn't get to see the manifestation of your insecurities get his dick zapped off by mary sue lightning bolt

>>36020519
>muh mary sue

You don't know what mary sue means do you ?
Your "story" was irrelevant to the thread to begin with, so of course any outcome to the story would not be welcome. Admit that, at least.
You wouldn't go into a feels thread to tell people how you won a lottery and you wife blew it on chad's parties would you ? Oh wait you, would.

>>36020575
A Mary Sue is an idealized and seemingly perfect fictional character, a young or low-rank person who saves the day through unrealistic abilities

I think zapping off dicks at will or killing Pablo would be unlikely for our anon-kun, he is too whimp to buy a gun and too weak to defeat him physically

You knew what kind of person the character was from the beginning, best he could hope for behaving like he did was the love of a daughter he couldn't have by himself

The story started as trolling but i nudged it to make it a touching story of abused man enduring and sticking by his morals to the end where he is rewarded with genuine love from his non-biological daughter

Guess that's a too beta story for this alpha site huh?

>>36020684
That's where you're wrong motherfucker, try to look it through my eyes.
It's not beta, its fucking cucked. You know what "beta" would be ? A story about how a tall and dominating woman forces beta meek anon to marry her and make him her house husband, and anon, initially thinks that he hates it, but slowly realizes his wife's yandere-esque love. This was a thread for such stories,to fill a void in lonely anon's hearts, and you ruined it.
This thread was for anons who desperately want to appreciate the females, and this thread was for stories involving idealized, or even fantasy females, because in real life, women are like the "milfy" , from your story. And what you did ? Fucking posted a story about a cuck.
I pity you for not knowing the difference between lonely, beta and cuck, but I feel nothing man. Nothing. Good for you I guess.There's a good market for such stories ,I suppose.

>>36020800
You're a fucking retard with no literary critic ability whatsoever, you are ranting about an original story written by a non native speaker, you never liked finland you only said it to prove your fucking points, the more you talk the more you make it obvious that you have no idea what the fuck you are talking about but just want to banter for the sake of it. Go read a book two you stupid retard. Hes not being a fucking pseudo intellectual. Now go on and start your ad homine rant, that will make you look Smart.

>>36020800
Sorry i kept it real son, make your own story and you can kill all the characters you like, my story is a story that can happen in real life, i made a story i could see happening to a character like anon was in the story
He didn't get the promotion because he was whimp no one paid mind to, he didn't get the girl because he was a doormat, he didn't kill pablo because he was a coward, only thing a man who behaves like that can get is a daughters love

>>36020871
OH YOU DUMB MOTHERFUCKER HOW MANY TIMES MUST I REPEAT MYSELF ? YOUR STORY HAS NOTHING TO DO WITH THE FUCKING THREAD

>>36020870
>it's another "newfag straight from /lit/ with years of literary experience" episode
You are clearly lacking in the reading comprehension section it seems. This story reads like a classic "man gets cucked, at least he gets custody" fanfiction tier piece and the creator trying too hard to make it seem profound by pointing out the obvious, which isn't even the worst part, it's that the story has nothing to do with the thread.

>>36020985
Don't worry ill make a new thread with the refined piece and ill name the thread "Anon was cucked" so you can avoid it ok?

>>36021051
What does it matter now you ruined this thread. And yeah, I'd like it if you take it to another thread, but I want you to know the damage is done,might as well post the refined one here.

>>36021086
Damn well at least i made a greentext story instead of acting like a spoiled brat who didn't get ice cream of his flavor

>>36021157
>go into "ice cream thread"
>serve people sausages
>"gee golly why are you getting mad for not getting ice cream at least you got a fucking sausage"

>>36021197

>>36019182

Lets face it your thread would have died if i didn't keep it alive
at least you got that anon's story picture

>>36021221
Why are you acting so high and mighty for posting your story in an unrelated thread and then acting smug that you "saved" the thread ? You think I'd have cared if the thread died ?

Where are double ds nipples

>>36020985
Never been to lit, i only browse r9k. But at least i can recognize when original content's to be praised at least for being original. Noone was posting in this fucking thread except for him and you read it from the beginning till the end. And even if you wanna act tough like a retard you even enjoyed so as to ask the refined story. Insults apart, why are arguing for a thread derail onto original content but dont blame everyday all day long for trap steam gay bait bot shillthreads and other derailedshitpost threads

>>36021256
If your thread would have died anon
>>36019182
Wouldn't have posted the story you were looking for, you're welcome

>>36021317
>there is no OC
>so let's post unrelated OC in threads where people clearly dislike cucking in any manner

I was expecting a twist because I'm dumb retard who thinks posts in a thread should be related to the theme OP stated, I guess.
What other threads do is not any of my concern, nor do I care about this board since the nutards took over. If you expect me to praise the poster for his OC in an unrelated thread, I won't. I'm not acting tough I'm being rational, from my pont of view. Right now this story and poster is no different from trapposting in unrelated threads as far as I'm concerned.
I didn't "asked" for the refined story, I just said that if he wants, he can post it here as he has effectively hijacked the thread.
I'm truly disappointed and feel sorry that we don't see eye to eye, must be because I've been having a bad day and just wanted some OC that made me appreciate some feelings people feel.

>>36021329
I already had that one, but I suppose I should feel grateful now huh

>>36021455
I undestard your point and ive been unecessarily rough, what im saying is that his story is not completely unrelated as you make it seem, moreover i dont think memes should bias our point of view, may it be a literary one or a relationship one. I dont think everyone who is an excuse for a man or lacks the courage to act aggressively is a cuck. Many men get beaten up by life and just surrender to the state of things

>>36021529
It is unrelated for a man who just wanted to read a story with a loving and caring gf so that he could go to sleep hugging his pillow. I see what you're trying to say with the MC of the story just surrendering to the state of things, and I'm sure I'd have appreciated this story more were I in the right place and time. Maybe it's just that there is no love in my life and then I read a story about some guy having a wife who doesn't care about him a bit while he goes out of his way to assist her in work and life and essentially promoting her affair with another man while they both berate him, and him being so oblivious that and tired that he rubs the other man's cum in his hair without knowing, maybe clinging on to the hope that the wife will love him someday, and it's just a rough patch in life.The bastard child slowly developing to realize how things truly are,it was a good story, just not for a person like me right now, it enraged me in some way.
Again I'm sorry, seems too much shitposting has just made me an uncaring and rude person ,I'm gonna go.

To the guy that posted the OC story thank you, I liked reading it. It was a little boring towards the end though.

To the guy arguing with him you are an autist. Your posts sum up to:
>this story is SHIT because it didn't end the way I wanted it to!
>REEEEEEEEEE