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>"wat up fags" Max said to Jacob and Jake as he leaned out his car window, pushing the hair away from his eye
>Jacob and Jake were walking home from work and glad to see Max
>He was older, had a cool car and always had a plan
>"I'm going to Liz's, get in"
>They both knew that meant hanging out and smoking weed
>The boys walk into Liz's apartment to the familiar smell of weed, stale beer and cat piss.
>The rude smell was almost welcomed, it signal they enter an oasis from there regimented teen lifes
>"Liz! Liz! Hey Elizabeth, you home?"
>Liz came out looking distressed
>You want to smoke up? Max questioned
>Liz went into an unfamiliar rant about how the boys aways come here and hung out
>Liz enjoyed having the boys over, the real problem was she hadn't worked in over two months and was behind on rent
>Realizing she was projecting her problems on the boys she pulled back
>"I just need rent money and..."
>the boys pulled out some pocket cash, no more than 30 bucks between them
>thanks guys, but I have a plan
>You know that rich pick I used to work for on Cedar lane
>He's at work and I say we rob him, after all, he owes it to me
>the boys get in Liz's car and drive to Cedar lane
>they quickly run to a spare room attached to the house and take some small items
>they back to Liz's car and head back to her apartment
>the young men are excited and laughing at how crazy that was
>Liz is less impressed and demands this is not enough stuff to cover rent and they need to go back
>hestant at first, the teens pump themselves up, even dressing up in all black
>"I want the brass knuckles"
>"fuck that I'm using them you guys can take knives"
>after a few tokes of weed the group leaves for Cedar lane again
>"this time go in the fucking house" Liz explains, "Get some shit that I can sell"
>the three teens make it to a locked back door
>"what do we do?" Jake said looking at Max
>"fuck it" Max smashed the glass of the window and unlocked the kitchen door
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>all three looked around not sure where to start
>they were almost giddy as they made their way to the dining area of the house
>Jacob's mind never register the sounds of the gunshots, but could clearly see the bright light from the muzzle flashes
>he popped back into reality to the shouts of a man yelling to "get the fuck out of my house!"
>Jacob paralyzed with fear turned to Max, hoping he knew what to do
>Max was on the ground making a terrifying hissing sound, blood was everywhere.
>Maxwell had been shot in the neck, the bullet severed carotid arteries and punched a hole in his windpipe before exiting out just below his ear
>Max would be dead within the next few seconds
>Jacob next turned to Jake "we got to go!"
>Jake was sitting up against a coffee table staring straight ahead
>Jake was shot in the chest his lung had collapsed and was filling with blood
>Jacob thought Jake was in shock until he coughed up a thick dark red mouthful of blood
>it was only after falling to the ground that Jacob realize he too was shot
>he had been shot twice in the abdomen, one bullet hit his pancreas and other penetrated his liver
>initially he thought it wasn't that bad, just two small holes
>but it was bad, it was real fucking bad
>he reached around and felt two massive exit wounds in this back, he could touch his ribs and want he thought was organs
>he began to fade fast after that
>Max and Jake were already dead, the man that shot was gone
>he sat there unable to grasp that this was it, this is how I die?. What will my parents think?
>for a second he thought it was a dream and all he had to do was wake up, he tried and tried
>he held on long enough to hear the sounds of police sirens but it was over
>Jacob closed his eyes never to wake again
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A story about JUSTICE
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What happened to Liz?
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>>35928430
Was arrested for murder, because she drove
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>the fat bitch drove off and as soon as she heard gunshots and will probably get a minimum sentence
Good story, shit ending.
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>>35928480
She turned herself in
http://heavy.com/news/2017/03/elizabeth-liz-marie-rodriguez-kohler-broken-arrow-oklahoma-burglary-murder-getaway-driver-facebook-photos-pictures/
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