>tfw you wrote a trashy ass rap https://soundcloud.com/n

you need to take it somewhere else after a while. i'd start off by learning some production yourself and figuring out chord progressions to make it interesting. you don't have to ditch your style for that, altough if you want to make repeated words interesting - which is possible, you need to add some effects or variations. if a track keeps hanging on the same note AND the same lyrics without justifying it with something special, there's a good chance people are gonna stop listening and you won't be remembered either.

>>35377747
it's kind of trash on purpose, i'm trying to emulate these mumble rappers that have been getting famous lately. i spent a week writing a rap that was nothing but straight bars and though it had some really good lyricism, cadence etc it wasnt all that catchy to me. appreciate the input

>>35377767
> i'm trying to emulate these mumble rappers that have been getting famous lately

you get that across which shows promise but your sound is in a young stage, undeveloped. you need your own big ass trademark on top of that ideal you're shooting for. people like art in excessiveness (i.e. very loud/extreme/brutal/fucked up/lazy/romantic/sad). especially when you're starting out it's good to go with to a sort of trademark that sticks in people's heads. what makes you better than yung lean ? what will you offer that he and the other mumbling rappers won't ? it's completely up to you to make people crazy with that and get them to line up in front of a venue you're hitting.

shoot me your skype or whatever and I'm down to help you out with future tracks. I do production as well as general recording/mixing so a collab isn't out of the picture if you're up for it.

>>35377889
you sound like you know what you're talking about for sure. i value your input, do you have discord?

>>35377910
I'm very unfamiliar with it, just had to use it once for a project but yeah I have it

>>35377938
oni#5965

i never bothered with skype desu it always made my pc run slow

>>35377945
skype is bloated to hell and back. the amount resources that application uses is just shameful

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rolex on ma wrist
rolex on ma wrist
rolex on ma wrist

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>>35378039
rolex on my wrist
purple actavis
i just popped a xannie now i'm fuckin on yo bitch

>>35377685
That was actually pretty dank for just starting out, did you do the beat at all or just the vocals

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Yo can I have that beat? I'll remix it tonight

>rap

more like shit trap

This is dank lad. Mucho dank.

I liked the part about Goku.

>>35377685
It was killer. I could have used more Hi hats doe. Still awesome track.

>read comments
>get hyped
>listen
>literal autism

Why man

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Way less funny and interesting ugly god. Stay in school mate.

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Can I post mine too?

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=QmALn6VCTtI

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>Tell me how you got that rolex on yo wrist
>Cuz I been trippin
>I don't spend my money on a bitch

>>35380018
me like niganon

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i thought we were just memeing about being autistic

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>>35380890
Really? Almost all of us are super autists.