I write as a hobby and have a pretty huge following, but i'm

>>135374811
Go on my friend.

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>>135374811
>What to do about the Jew?
What to do about the Jew?

The modern man, with tools in hand comes far and few

It wasn’t always like this, Women are worse off too.

It started with the food we eat, sugar, wheat instead of stew

Birth control and Adderall fixed all our problems too.

Chemicals In the water and food , reinforcing servitude

The single life is rife with pleasure, never question whether it ever
be better to spend your leisure together, than simply watch the tube.

We will tell you what you need to know, on Politics and the War

When you go out to Vote, remember what you saw!

TWO SCOOPS, it’s proof! impeach Droompf! the youth think the President is a bore.

“Cops hate Blacks and that’s that!”, It's not that Blacks just hate the Law!

Child-lover’s crimes uncovered, Political status makes us think nothing of it

The Good Guys won World War Two, it’s the truth, didn’t you listen in class?

The six million dollar question, is why you can be jailed to try and ask:

Where do we draw the line on propaganda and straight up lies?

The future is bright, I can see it in your eyes -- as long as they aren’t green or blue

If only you knew, how bad things really were.

If only you bloody knew.

rose are red and OP is not
where is your poem faggot?

>>135374911
>>135375110
had to fix spacing

>>135374911
I would really like to like it man, but, and I'm not trying to be mean, I would suggest going a little bit deeper than typical observations. Find your aesthetic man.

>>135374811
>>135374911
I liked it

>>135374811
8/10 go deeper with it

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>painting and poetry threads on /pol/

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>>135374811
>>135374911

Muh nigga beatiful.

>>135374911
I think your followers need this more than we do. I like the poem, but to me it sounds stale because the issues have all been discussed to death. Maybe if it dealt with them from the perspective of an individual's life, discovering them over time, instead of general observations, I would enjoy it more.

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>>135375312
was originally going to post this to my oblivious audience but realized i would have been banned, thats why its such a shallow approach

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>>135375844
cheers

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>>135374811
>>135374911
>summerfag middle school student writes shitty poems
You have to be 18+ to post here kid. No one writes poems past highschool.

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>>135374811
Saw this, made this one on the spot.

Here you go. Love shit like this. Good poem too, btw.

Anywho, grade my faggotry.
So many times and so many days,

So many decades that went so many ways

And since the end of that catastrophic war

Those same folks that built most civilization have been pushed to the floor

“We were just!” Or so we’ve been told.

Yet this same nation that “saved” the world has
fallen deep into destruction’s hold

A certain people, of a questionable tie

Sent us off by the thousands to die

Should we question these particular men

It would almost immediately lead to a career’s end

They control everything, and make others bend.

Because the world feels bad

Meanwhile they sit on their high tower devious and mad

Their motivation is retribution

For what you ask? Why, the final solution!

Sent off to kill and spy

So our benevolent hold on the world would die

So we could be replaced

So our genes could fry.

There are many problems presented in this little rhyme,

Having said this, the only thing certain is the passage of time

Only the eternal can tell if we should recover from this partially self-inflicted hell.

And should we somehow return from this

Yes this, our ultimate and horrible precipice

May our people remember the date, and with their cheers, so may accompany a hearty

“1488!”

>>135376111
Can you make a watered down version for them?

>>135376665
Fucked up on the spacing in the first line.

>>135374911
Holy shit this is awful. I'm conservative but Jesus, this is just terrible writing.

>>135376665
that was great man

>>135374811
Fuck you suck.

>>135374911
don't really read poetry but its breddy gud

>>135374911
i like it, it collects and connects many actual topics; but an alien could feel it like eschizofrenic rambling by times... especially the part of Trump, or maybe is just me that i did not get it.

>>135374911
>reddit spacing

>>135377426
can't tell if shitpost or just retarded

>>135377523
Your the retarded one.

>>135377585
I know you are, but what am I? XDDD

>>135377668
SHUT THE FUCK UP RETARD!!!!!!! IM TIRED OF YOU FUCKING LE LE LE REDDITORS SHITTING UP THE PLACE! I THOUGHT YOU WOULD LEAVE AFTER A WHILE BUT YOU JUST STICK AROUND AND DESTROY EVERY FUCKING THREAD WITH YOUR USELESS NONSENSE! YOU NEED TO GO BACK. YOU NEED TO GO NOW! NOW NOW NOW!!!!!! FUCKING LEAVE?? DO?? YOU?? UNDERSTAND?? ME?? LIKE... HOW DO YOU NOT UNDERSTAND THAT YOU ARE NOT WANTED HERE?

>>135377932
gun yourself