Cropped shitty smartphone photos, but learning about composition while I'm learning about graphic design 'n stuff. Critique on composition? Will post originals.
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Composite materials often have a cheap feel on cars but in this case it is justified - fit and finish isn't that important on a trackday car, so compositioning the body makes sense due to lightness.
Your first mistake was thinking there was anything worth composing. Least of all, your hand, your kitchen, or a tape barrier.
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Maybe there's something going on here, trying to recreate the feeling of envelopment. Except I see your table.
all look like typical shapshits, nothing special. >>3099457 would have been better if you shot on a higher angle and avoided the barrier.
move your body and arms to position your camera phone to get the ideal framing and composition. dont be a lazy fat fuck.
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Are you talking about composition in photographs? If not, please clarify, because what you posted and where you posted it suggests that.
It's all shit, and I'm not even trying to be edgy
Really bad even post crop. My eye aren't lead anywhere, you left in the fucking black band divider thing, and your subjects are boring and unoriginal. Like I get you're a student and all but what inspires you? What photographers are your favorites?