Hey guys. This is my first time posting on /p/. Anyway these are a couple pictures I took and edited about a year ago.
I'm just looking for some constructive criticism and advice. Cheers guys.
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>>3076752
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>>3076752
>>3076752
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>>3076752
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>>3076752
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>>3076752
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>>3076752
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>>3076752
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>>3076752
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>>3076752
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>>3076752
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>>3076752
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>>3076752
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>>3076752
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>>3076752
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>>3076766
these are really cool. I could sand my deck with them though they have so much grain ('cept the architecture one). cool style though.
I don't know much about photography, just thought I'd let you know I like your stuff.
To be nitpicky I'd crop the foliage out of >>3076766
I feel like >>3076759 has poor framing. It's a cool shot but it would look better if the opening were more in the center. At the same time I get that you didn't want to hide the ocean though.
>>3076752
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>>3076752
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>>3076773
Hey bro thank heaps for the feedback. Yeah my grain rates are off the charts. But hey, live and learn.
Yeah I'll edit the Architecture one and re upload. Also I have a better one for >>3076759
Pic related.
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>>3076752
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>>3076752
Anyways, all these pics came from a tough time in my life, but it feels good to share them with you guys. Hope you enjoyed my amature work :)
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>>3076773
Here's the edit bud.
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>>3076752
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>>3076788
:')
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>>3076752
Love the first one! Where is this OP? Definitely some cool stuff but maybe a little grainy for my tastes. Make the image a little too soft.
>>3076901
Cheers man. It was taken at Avalon Beach in Sydney NSW. Yeah I really overdid it with the grain, so I'll tone it down next time.