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nice set m8

>>3019179
I like this one. Nice pattern but the bottom right corner is a bit of a black hole.

coolio and sober. nice.

Aligned verticals? On my /p/?

I never thought I'd see the day

Good set, feels quite objectivist. Not breaking any new ground but I think you achieved what you set out to quite well

Nice set. Very forbidding.

>>3019206

You're the kind of jerk who tells a shitty college band that they were "pretty good, you guys just need to tighten up" after a shitty house show. >>3019206

>>3019179
>>3019187
Really really nice

>>3019186
absolutely love the lines and textures in this one along with how its divided up by that neat shadow

>>3019164
>>3019162
these feel pretty meh

>>3019190
definitely my favorite. the lines and textures are all really pleasing and at that perspective it lines up very well

toss that in with the sense of scale you get from that person there and it just makes a really fuckin pleasant photo

>>3019195
>>3019199
>>3019225
Glad you guys like the thread.

>>3019206
Wow a (sort of) compliment from aligned verticals anon, cool.

>>3019244
Not sure what you meant by this. What are your thoughts on the photos?

>>3019196
All of these look darker on my phone screen than on my computer, looks like it's time to recalibrate. Overall though the effect is very subtle.


Set critique is always welcome, I'm looking to take some of this stuff along with a collection of things I've been working on lately and make a little zine/booklet, so I wanna pick out the stuff that gels together well

>>3019160
This is a great set. Very Inspiring.
What did you shoot with?

>>3019291
I'm looking at them on a calibrated display and they're very dark. It's not that the bottom right is necessarily 0,0,0 but that compared to the rest of the composition it's a big dark spot with none of the exciting pattern of the rest of the image.

>>3019291
>All of these look darker on my phone screen

all phones have contrast set to +1000. contrast with a good display instead. here it looks pretty good. >>3019179
suffers from being too extreme and not much tonality, maybe you could allow some darker mids in there.

set is alright, but wouldnt stand alone. mite be cool in a zine with other, different stuff.

>>3019206
c-could a newbie ask what you mean by aligned verticals? maybe an example where there aren't any?

>>3019355
all of this is tri-x, the majority of the shots are 35mm with an RF and a voigt 35/2.5 lens.
>>3019186
>>3019181
>>3019160
There are all 6x7, RZ67 w/ 110/2.8.

>>3019367
>>3019381
Duly noted. I took several angles of this spot but the others didn't really communicate the pattern that well.

>>3019460
They mean that the vertical lines aren't converging into the center, which is what happens you tilt your camera upwards, causing vertical lines to collapse inwards. A whole lot of these actually rely on perspective correction because I don't have access to T/S, but it is what it is, I just frame a little extra so I have room for the corrections if I can't get it right in camera.

Thank for all the feedback, cheers everyone. Hope to see you all back for Vol. 4.