Hey /p, i shot my first bunch of photos. I m a bloody amateur,

>>2946002

Step 1; focus.

Step 2: Post the rest of the photos with EXIF.

>>2946026
WOW alright he obviously meant to have it like this!!!!!

only the artist knows what he wants!!!

not everything needs to be sharp!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

reminds me of goatse

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Overall, it's a good picture.

Posetives:
The composition and color.

Negatives:
The lines in the picture and composition is drawing my eyes to the big dark circle in the background. However, since that part of the picture is out of focus it is only a bit confusing.

TL;DR: A good first step, nice colors and composition. The small step that is needed to take it from good to great is to focus on the background.

Hope this help!

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Op here
Okey until now thanks guys
what bout this picture?

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>>2947482
Your horizon is nice and straight, but the frame is just all empty space. Pull higher and have something in the distance, or pull lower and have a person/thing (spilled paint?) sprawled over the steps.

>>2946002
The focus needs to be on the tunnel. Put something interesting in the distance there. Is there a person doing something shifty through the tunnel? Are there animals around? Can you plant a prop?

Keep at it! You've got a good eye for locations. You just need a little work on your execution, and then you need to add some story to your shots.

>>2947482
>Digital
Buy a real camera.
Only silver is worthy of capturing the moment.

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>>2947482
You're on your way, kid.

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Im not at my home computer so I cant post EXIF

But I just started taking photos and using light room, thoughts?

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>>2947564

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>>2947565

>>2947565
this is nice. i like the contrast of blue and peach pastel colors of the water and the richer natural red and green of the background.

>>2946457
Underrated post

>>2946452
i agree but this still looks like shit

>>2947564
this would be great for a frame within frame composition. its drawn to the center but there's just bokeh. maybe a subject in there would be neat.

>>2946452
Not everything needs to be sharp, but at least something should be

Good composition OP.
Now you have to find a subject to frame into your pictures imho

>i got my first guitar today, here's my first time playing it, I've not had any lessons or learnt anything, I'm just hitting random strings and frets. How can i improve?


You see how fucking dumb you look now? Practice and learn daily for a year then come back.

>>2946452
>>2948754
>>2951652
I was kidding lmao the photo is shit, it's just that people say that shit ALL the time here and it's very retarded