Call me a faggot but I wrote a song. It's terrible but

>>75198601
>https://pastebin.com/qRsAzqbr
was that about you coming out?

>>75198654
Maybe for you it is, that's the beauty of poetry.

Used to own a lot of stuff

Lost it all. Living's tough

Looked around though, feeling mad

nothing here's missing, I thought I had

My vices, right there, on my back.

Must've been on the wrong track.

Cause baby now I'm cruisin free

Lighter without lighters fee

With questions on my mind, this plight.

You can join me if you like

The two of us could be entangled

Least for a time, til we get wrangled.

Search for truths in seas and clouds

More is found, the lifted shroud

Abound our life is without drag

Lastly I just have to add

This fancy's fleeting, must have passed.

...(I wish)

>>75198823
Change that last line to "fancy's fleeting, will it pass?" Drop the "i wish" (was meant to point to the last line being a lie)

>>75198601
>>75198808
>>75198823
I'm cringing so fucking hard.

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this is just sad

>>75198823
fucking gay

get a sense of self awareness

Itt: unhelpful faggots "cringe" at attempts at sincere poetry

>>75198601
>https://pastebin.com/qRsAzqbr
not trying to be an asshole like the other people in this thread but honestly, describing how you play your instrument in a song's lyrics is very cheesy

(This ones about the Emu war)
What genre do you think it'd suit?

since April third I've seen it worse
quiet again don't shout a curse
these things are a tidal wave
horrors fleeing their wretched enclave


trawling crawling heeding
stalling gone off flying
feeding lying stop the dying
dissenting, understanding
comprehending
your time is ending

no one thought they'd cause effect
against onyx beak and callous neck
aiming for dutch eye and pupil hole
our victory as likely as a gingers soul

trawling crawling heeding
needing crying flying
feeding lying stop the dying
dissenting, understanding
comprehending
your time is ending


trawling crawling heeding
needing crying flying
feeding lying stop the dying
dissenting, understanding
comprehending
your time is ending

dissenting, understanding
comprehending
your time is ending

in only fools to find
trying to take these off my mind
take the throat, tighten your fist
time is up you get the gist