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Lets constructively critique each other's SoundCloud tracks.
I only have one track, and i hell of would like some judgement on it.
Ill start: Escucha VeranoShawty (Prod. OG Maoslo) de OG Maoslo #np en #SoundCloud
https://soundcloud.com/maoslo/veranoshawty-prod-og-maoslo
got that fire prod by gfbeats
from the collab project coming nov
https://soundcloud.com/nathanoriginal/noggin-luggin
>hip hop
>boom baps
>>75140221
Bump
https://soundcloud.com/title-here/b-1
https://soundcloud.com/title-here/r-1
>>experimental
>>ambient
>>electronic
https://soundcloud.com/xinnerh0ll0wx/nowhere-at-all
>acoustic
>sad
>indie
>simple
idk i kinda like it, but it is a bit simple and isn't dynamic at all. idk
bumps
https://soundcloud.com/facehead_tunes/crystal-caves
Got high, watched Stranger Things, made this
Hope y'all folks enjoy
>Work In Progress
>Synth heavy
>Simple repetitive beat
https://soundcloud.com/declankirkmusic
>lo fi bedroom folk
>shoegazey noisy emotional climaxes
>drums
>reverb
>>75140221
Ok the one thing I have a beef with is the hihat. it feels like its on top of the track. everything else seems very well mixed to me. really dig it!
https://soundcloud.com/prettyoverpowered/trouble-at-home?in=prettyoverpowered/sets/pretty-o-p
>pop
>electronica
>jazz
>indie
>alternative
https://soundcloud.com/shamart/gi-joke
>post-punk
>grunge
>dream pop
>prog
>somber
In the spirit of OP's description I'm gonna try to listen to everyone's tracks in the thread
>>75140221
I like the beat, but it gets a little monotonous. You put a bridge in at around the one minute mark, but that gets repetitive, too. If it were my track, I'd mess with the tone of the synth at the bridge, maybe fluctuate between octaves? Overall, well produced and I would listen to it again
>>75140733
good production, very trippy, I like the breakdown towards the end
>>75140770
Sounds like something from the Juno soundtrack. It's simple, but elegant and comfy. Good job, man
>>75141664
Sounds like comfy video game music, can't wait to hear it when it's done
>>75142211
rec, this guy is dope
>>75142218
really fun music. I'm not usually into jazz but your instrumentals are great
https://soundcloud.com/winter-foe
>warm melodic piano and found sound based stuff
Loved these two
>>75140265
>>75142211
https://soundcloud.com/grizzlysteelo
>Trap
>Beats
>Mostly dark/heavy stuff
>Some happy stuff too
>>75140221
https://soundcloud.com/theo-hammar-lindberg/garage-alexandria
>Wave trap (kinda)
>Ambient
>Beats
>Experimental
www.soundcloud.com/bennybends
its just short shit stuff
https://soundcloud.com/user-855570629/literal-earrape
Rate me /mu/
Do you guys think I can become the next xxxTentacion?
>>75143146
What the fuck did I just listen to
>>75140221
https://soundcloud.com/slave-beaver-revolt/untitled-satan-rape-song
>punk rock
>one man recording
>bedroom shit
>Exotica!
>Weird Exotica!
>Agonidium amplipenne!
https://soundcloud.com/aoftheh/roman-numeral-no1-trio-phantasma
recc:
>>75143146
>>75142874
>>75140221
The track has a cool vibe but
is too monotonous
>pop/rock
https://soundcloud.com/samuelcfaria/wild-world
https://soundcloud.com/samuelcfaria/black-diamond
>blues/guitar based
https://soundcloud.com/samuelcfaria/matchbox-blues
https://soundcloud.com/samuelcfaria/asdasd
https://soundcloud.com/thatemus/lets-get-closer
>electronic
>synthwave
>80s
>>75142953
Garage Alexandria is an awesome tune! Love the sound of the bass. Drums are tight!
>>75142874
Great uplifting feel in Little Victories!
>>75140221
https://soundcloud.com/medusa-adsume/red-flags
>gay
>commie
>hip-hop
this is the first draft of a track on an album I've gotta release in a few weeks as a fundraiser for a local organization. Themes are anti-white supremacy and anti-capitalism, kind of taunting the left into being more active and angry and less "we gotta luv each other, man"
I'm weakest at mixing so if anyone can give me any pointers I would really, really appreciate it, and I'll reciprocate (On SC, though)
>ambient
>night
>lofi drums
https://www.soundcloud.com/lyfe-indoors/you-keep-calling
Sending feedback on soundcloud. Gonna be in here for some time
https://soundcloud.com/aeromusicofficial/ligurian-pesto
>disco deep house
>french touch
https://soundcloud.com/sirprincedrewbug
raps on raps on raps. I want to make stuff that's evergreen this is harder than it sounds. Ignore dumb throwaways[spoiler]meme bullshit[/spoiler], but some of my low count tracks actually stand out among the others. Some throwaway concepts that needed to be gotten out of the way turn out somewhat decent. I'm especiall curious what people think of my content versus context. I self monitor about lines which feel like a forced double entendre or polysemantic at times. Those are either for personal entertainment or because I think someone would bother to rap genius the lines.
Obvious issues include amateur audio mixing and lack of cohesive themes at different points.
Hey guys! It's been a while
https://soundcloud.com/sleepoverintruder/wrong-memories
>synthwave/outrun
>saxplotation
>dad rock
Returning any feedback on Soundcloud!
https://clyp.it/wwwsm3ip
Don't have a soundcloud but any feedback would be great
>>75143622
I don't even like punk but this is great. Production is excellent, especially the guitars.
>>75143913
Love part 1, transition into part 2 was great too. Liked the beginning of part 2 but not a fan of the noise, although it sounds good and is well executed.
>>75145086
Love the ambient/creepy vibe on this one, drums are dope, guitars and bass is amazing. did you play this yourself?
>>75145047
Very nice, drums are on point and the whole track sounds real professional.
>>75144846
Guitar skills are insane dude, really liking the blues tracks especially. Drums could use some work though, kick and snare need to be louder first of all, and the drums on your blues tracks sound a bit off beat. Drums on black diamond are good though.
>>75142521
Very nice chill vibes on this track, really like the second half
https://soundcloud.com/drainabyte
>IDM // TECHNO // ELECTRONIC
>>75140221
bass is distorting a bit on my speakers. cool little trap beat tho
https://soundcloud.com/przmlr/sets/super-fine-ep
>>electronic
>>futurebeats
>>wave
https://soundcloud.com/stream_error
>lofi
>beats
rec
>>75140265
>>75143913
>>75140221
Listen to Dreamscope by lightbulbcity #np on #SoundCloud
https://soundcloud.com/lightbulbcity/dreamscope
https://soundcloud.com/erda_nyc/habits
>emotional trap
Ill be returning all love feedback and follows on SC as always
>>75145260
thx for listening*. Your song is short and sweet. I especially like the ghostly cut up guitar.
*I fooled you with part 2&3
they are just promos for download-exclusive songs (It says bonus track x3 download the record to hear more). I just turned the promo into a noise-fest to hide my shameless attempt at ruthless capitalism
bump fo the mornin'
I would love to get some advices!
https://soundcloud.com/eduardo-m-341576190/rebirth
https://soundcloud.com/marc-bizzy-barnes/water-and-2-girls-1-cup
>parody rap
>wrestling references
https://soundcloud.com/marc-barnes-1/common-on-little-people-moon
>remix i made a long time ago
https://soundcloud.com/marc-bizzy-barnes/credit-2-the-pigs
>cover song
>>75145565
Lovin this! Ill add you
>>75145664
the melody gets pretty repetitive after a while and the drop feels a little empty (seems like that was intentional, but it could still use another sound imo, maybe a counter melody or something)
other than that, i like it, its simple but fun with good mixing :)
https://soundcloud.com/lil_pretzel/stagger
just dropped a new beat, tried to go for something more hard
>>75140733
>>75142521
>>75142953
>>75143622
>>75145079
>>75145086
>>75145512
>>75145565
recs
you guys always surprise me with how good some of this music is, keep it up!
https://soundcloud.com/neil-fox-946344097/escape-to-hell
Interested to know if my lyrics are any good please, particularly on this and The Sculptor. New guitarist, only been playing for three months so chord structures are very basic.
https://soundcloud.com/djsnackmix/absorbingman
>lil alt-trap beat
>would love to know how I can unfuck the mixing
>>75145430
rec
>>75146286
You got a little too much going on in the low end of this, I think maybe your kick drum and 808 are competing for space or something. The beat is gewd tho.
https://soundcloud.com/theidiotbox/sets/tinfoil-helmet
>postpunk
>postindie
>postnoid
repetitive but listenable
https://soundcloud.com/xandrmusic/donning-the-winged-helm
HOW ABOUT ME !!
https://soundcloud.com/clint_snow/gold-approach?in=clint_snow/sets/i-just-cant-stop-smilin
https://soundcloud.com/nick-leone
>jazz, fusion, baroque, bebop, bossa, ambient, blues, rock, dnb, etc.
https://soundcloud.com/sir_loins/sleep-deprivation-mixtape
just recorded this
i made this today because i felt sad
i tought i might share it with u guys
https://soundcloud.com/ayyluca/sets/sorry
Brand New!
https://soundcloud.com/alexauld/line-of-fire
>Rap/HipHop
ey
https://soundcloud.com/from_downtown/extended-unreleased-beats
>extended instrumentals
>lofi joints
>etc
since some fellas asked
here ya go
heading to bed, i'll dig through when I get up
this kid is fucked up. he's sick, honestly. poor little boy has a cold and his tummy hurts.
another brand new single from vesent sornis, a huge piece of shit who is, no lie, currently down in the dumps.
illness
https://soundcloud.com/ben2234860/know-them-truly
JUDGE IT
>pop music
https://soundcloud.com/glitterboy222/hipster-trash
>Rap
>Humor
>New artist
This song is old but i always go back to posting it, i hope you guys enjoy it. it's just a bit of fun :)
https://soundcloud.com/ibnpatuta/sets/c_d
>Ambient
>Drone
>Piano
>>75147268
Took a listen through a few of your tracks, especially enjoyed "Paisley People". You've got some songwriting talent - good stuff.
>>75145193
Funny enough this track reminded me of the movie Brazil, from the 80s. Then I looked at your profile and it turns out you're from Brazil. Really good sound, especially getting those drums right.
>>75148270
>can't even line up the text with the pack
sad
>>75148894
i don't know how to photoshop my good sir.
https://soundcloud.com/stream
>Vaporinet
>Dream
>Vaportrap
>Chillwave
>>75146724
hello 1920 called it wants its shitty music back
>>75148894
>>75149102
>ruh roh guys someone's sad and angry :'((( hope u feel better buddy :)
https://soundcloud.com/robhalperin
>acoustic
>sad
>>75148270
rec
This is just the 1st Beat I've put up strictly for anyone who wants/needs an exclusive Trap beat. I've added some progressive clicks in like Good Morning Good Night.
https://soundcloud.com/the_trash_monk/dark-trap-beat-77bpm-dm-for-exclusive-price-wavmp3
>Trap
>Dark Prog Trap
Gunna be putting more beats up on my sc that will be for sale within the next coming days.
And here is a full song that might be making it's way to Wondagurl, but we'll see.
https://soundcloud.com/the_trash_monk/happy-dvd
>Prog Trap
https://soundcloud.com/alder222/deathcome
>>75146724
Please get better at guitar. Why are you down strumming exclusively? Why are you singing so softly? Listen to good guitarists like Django Reinhardt instead of Neutral Milk Hotel.
>>75147272
Sounds like just messing around
>>75147268
Needs a little more chops on that guitar sounding instrument. The surf rhythym doesn't keep up much.
>>75147346
I don't like shit this digital sounding without insane chops like Feed Me or Electric Universe. I don't like hiding behind vocal effects either.
>>75147353
I like the drums. Guitar is mixed far too loud and the tone is off. Turn the distortion down and maybe go to a neck pickup. Sounds Vai toned where it should be Wes Montgomery.
>>75148086
This is good. Reminds me of Samurai Champloo. Love it.
>>75148216
Work on vocal timbre. I like the harmonies though. The mix sounds odd in that it sounds very mid and low heavy. You have the countering high synths but they don't punch through. Maybe it's just too wet to have much seperation, I'm not sure.
>>75148853
Yoga music.
https://vocaroo.com/i/s0ULSlSZOSWw
Phone recording. Haven't decided on words and have been messing with melody so haven't recorded for real yet.
It's middle of the road acoustic pop.
https://soundcloud.com/uglyyyy/heart
>lofi
>experimental
>sad
i'd appreciate any kind of feedback really<3
>>75142211
good af. not a huge fan of the vocals tough, feels like every word is being enunciated too much
>>75141664
try adding some more layers to your melody!!!! this could be super interesting but it just feels really unfinished
>>75142874
everything here is amazing lol. replying just to say that
>>75142211
You definiately like Brand New. I like the song structures. I would just say to work on vocals and add harmonies. Lacey generally does on lower pitched voice sung soft and one higher pitched for his. It would definately work here.
>>75142218
Very nice. I like the vocal confidence. Reminds me of O'Brother.
>>75142218
This also reminds me a lot of HRVRD.
>>75140265
https://soundcloud.com/yourfriendsandfamily/dear-i-wish-you-love
>lofi
>lovenshit
>sadchild
https://soundcloud.com/yourfriendsandfamily/tryna-eat-catfish
>kanye
>ye
>dark
>shitmixing
>>75150027
too many minor 7ths
>>75150316
Hook has 2 Major 9ths and one standard major. How would you suggest a change during the walk in the verse?
https://soundcloud.com/mugen101
>rap sht
>if you could take 10 mins and listen to my first tape and give feedback it would be highly appreciated. :)
https://soundcloud.com/harako/empire-tape
>i also do some trap stuff
https://soundcloud.com/harako/rebelion
>>75150489
>https://soundcloud.com/harako/empire-tape
from 2:32 Dope bass :)
Not SC but I'd appreciate feedback (particularly on the mix) on this: https://instaud.io/1gcB
Gonna get on the bus and listen to some trax above now.
alternative rap w/ an emphasis on lyrics...
a repackaging of my first two tapes, condensed down to the best 9 tracks + one brand new track! just released. had to shed some of the old shit cause there will be plenty of new soon
lemme know what yall think : )
https://soundcloud.com/milespowers/sets/the-new-lakonikos
>>75145512
rec
>>75145193
>>75145565
feedback in SC
https://soundcloud.com/tutenkhamenbeats/curse-beat
>hip hop
>trap
>beats
https://soundcloud.com/thenoisemachine-official/heavy-elements-thenoisemachine-remix
>remix
>electronic
>>75151254
>links broken
https://soundcloud.com/thenoisemachine-official
>>75140221
Seriously
Be prepared to be freaked out
New Drop
Hatefight by The Quango
Be the first to piss your pants
https://soundcloud.com/the-quango/hatefight
>>75143341
>https://soundcloud.com/user-855570629/literal-earrape
you didnt listen - nobody did
>>75145260
>https://www.soundcloud.com/lyfe-indoors/you-keep-calling
Thanks much man. Recorded this all myself. A lot of time put into it. Im >>75145086
btw
I return everything on soundcloud! Check this out! <3 - https://soundcloud.com/mileycurseword/lala
do you get downloads on your tracks
>>75140221
https://soundcloud.com/therealduckspeakers/sets/anatidaephobia new EP
go nuts in this 36 minut long ep.
>Experimental rock
>jazz influenced
>Circus influenced
>>75140265 Already reviewed "Very solid work here! Dope rhymes, dope flow, and dope beat :)"
>>75140733 So I really like the experimental direction you headed! That being said, I would shorten up the intro and the song as a whole and add some more instrumentation. To the average listener, this sound could get very boring.
>>75140770 Solid vocal performance! I would keep practicing every day though, towards the end you went just a tad bit off key. But up until that point you soundedd great :). I would also work on your mixes and invest in some better recording equipment.
>>75141664 Dk if this was supposed to be a whole song, or just an intro or outro. That being said, I would work on adding more instrumentation, this song hardly progresses at all. And because it is a very simple loop with minimal instrumentation, i get a very boring vibe :(. I do think this ambient vibe does have a chill mood though, keep working and I'm sure you will make some cool stuff
Very First Beat!
>pop funk
>funky bassline
>vocoder
>Bruno Mars 24k Magic Remix
https://soundcloud.com/user-651943857/whos-a-player
>beats and stuff
>im pretty amazing
https://soundcloud.com/pigeon-music/sets/pigeon-tape-2
https://soundcloud.com/mephisto_waltz
>Ambient Noise
>>75142211 Very impressive work here sir! Instrumentation: Great mix. Your intro to beat breakdown was A +, ending guitar is also amazing! Vocals: Mix needs improvement. It was a little high at places, then dipped down. I also think you should put much less reverb on your vocals and put more compression on them to make them brighter. To achieve the lo fi effect I would mix your vocals properly, then add a lo fi filter to them :) Very nice work though, perhaps the best song I have heard from mu so far
>>75142218 Man this is the most professional sounding mix/master I have heard so far from mu. Very impressive! Solid vocal performance as well as instrumentation! Being a new artist though, consider shortening up your songs. Some people may only listen to half of your song before clicking to the next song
>>75142521 I really enjoyed the vibe of this song! Instrumentation: Very solid, needs some work on mixing. If I were you I would compress your drums quite a bit more to have them pop. Vocals: solid too. But you should work on the mixing, they were far too high for the hook/chorus
>>75142874 Already reviewed "Very nice synthesizer layers right here! :) And man do I love the drums on this, especially the claps!" I am going to add though, perhaps tune down the claps just a hair, they were very high in the mix. Other than that, great mix/master.
Very First Beat!
>pop funk
>funky bassline
>vocoder
>Bruno Mars 24k Magic Remix
https://soundcloud.com/user-651943857/whos-a-player
>>75142875 I really enjoyed your vocal samples, some of them were pretty darn funny! I would consider shortening this instrumental and adding more drops and drum fills. Changing up your bass pattern throughout the track a tad bit would be make the track more interesting too. You could change it up simply too, by just dropping the bass out every now and again. On the instrumentation side, I think you could add some more synths/instruments to make this beat really come to life
>>75142953 Already reviewed "Very nice build ups as well as break downs! :) Drums were on point too, I almost got a modern boom bap feel from this!" I will add though, perhaps shortening up this beat would make this song would be a good idea. That way the listener can listen to the whole song without even thinking about changing it :)
>>75143138 Like the direction! Needs a better mix, your hi hats are stabbing my ears and I can barely hear the piano. I would also consider adding more percussion
>>75143146 Some very scary stuff here! Don't know how to review it other than, man this is something different
Very First Beat!
>pop funk
>funky bassline
>vocoder
>Bruno Mars 24k Magic Remix
https://soundcloud.com/user-651943857/whos-a-player
>>75140221
https://soundcloud.com/k39sound/tracks
spotify:artist:2uqxCIOylY8yLlI14CvvWe
https://k-39.bandcamp.com/
K-39
>Ritual/spiritual
>Downtempo
>space
>experimental
>spotify<
>facebook<
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=wBXWH7E2z_g
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=IBSAtBicBog
Very First Beat!
>pop funk
>funky bassline
>vocoder
>Bruno Mars 24k Magic Remix
https://soundcloud.com/user-651943857/whos-a-player
>>75143622 Already reviewed "Solid track! Really enjoy the upbeat rhythm! Instrumentation gives me vibes reminiscent of 90's punk :)" Will also add, Will also add, just noticed your song title lol. This intro is also very mellow and cool
>>75143913 Already reviewed "Holy cow you used a lot of samples! The experimental direction you went on this is also awesome! Very unique :)" Will add, you should definitely shorten this song up. It is around 9 mins long, most listeners will not listen to any song for that long.
>>75144846 Solid production and instrumental mix! I would have liked hear a better vocal mix, however. Vocals are just a tad too high
>>75145047 Already reviewed "A very nostalgic synthesizer! I am getting some major 80's vibes! Nice work :)"
>>75145086 Really dig the vibe of this track! I would have like to hear a much shorter version though and a shorter intro. People may only play a small portion of the song unless the intro is shorter and the track is shorter, due to how mellow this track is
https://soundcloud.com/user536029835/trance-vibes
be nice
>>75152991
>https://soundcloud.com/user-651943857/whos-a-player
i like it, but
its just a loop, you want to vary it,
>>75151292
are you serious
Very First Beat!
>pop funk
>funky bassline
>vocoder
>Bruno Mars 24k Magic Remix
https://soundcloud.com/user-651943857/whos-a-player
>>75145112 Man do I love the intro! I would work on your basslines, this bassline is just a tad bit off key. The mix could be better on the drums and bass, I can barely hear the bass and the kick drum is pounding a little too much. The high pass filter on the sample may have taken out a little too many highs as well. You fix up those problems, and dayum do u have a groove
>>75145115 Man do you sound similar to Le Real right here rapping! I like the instrumental and vibe. You definitely need to get some better recording equipment though, people will probably get turned off by your music if they hear a bad mix and bad quality audio
>>75145193 Pretty darn unique sound. I am getting hints of rock, smooth jazz, and 80s beverly hill cop music. You should defintley focus on your mix, and shorten up this song quite a bit
>>75145430 So i really like the direction you went on this. You should really work on your mix and shorten this song up quite a bit. Everything else is solid
>>75145458 I really like the way this song progresses! Your sampling techniques are very impressive. I would have like to hear a better mix and definitely more low end on this. I think you simply put too much of a high pass filter on your samples and instruments
>>75145512 Already Reviewed "Very interesting textures here, especially your bass that comes in and out. Though it is very simplistic I am hooked into the beat the whole song"
>>75153497
Word, noted. In the future my beats will definitely not be nearly as repetitive
https://soundcloud.com/jake-williams-344430545
>Electronic
>Experimental
>Samples
https://soundcloud.com/user-506448725
>Power Electronics
>Noise Rap
>XD Rap
Just released a new single, planning on a full album soon
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>>75146286
haha, very good!
https://soundcloud.com/youngster-siddhartha-joey/alonee
>future
>electronic
>bass
>house
>boba
i have a lot of tracks i have written and i would love to see what yall think of them!!
https://soundcloud.com/boba_boi
>>75154885
>https://soundcloud.com/user-506448725
reported for spam
>hip hop
>rap
https://soundcloud.com/90sneptune/91-honda
>>75152841
>>75150473
Sauce on pic?
>>75155903
Nice music btw
> Sperimental
> Post Industrial
> Darkwave
> Death Gripsish shit
https://soundcloud.com/w1nt3rmute/tracks
>>75142218
your music is pretty o.p.
following and listening to your whole album, looking forward to seeing what you do in the future
https://soundcloud.com/misterbuddha/the-come-down
https://soundcloud.com/misterbuddha/lysergic-acid-diethylamide
>grimey trap
>samples
will return all feedback
https://soundcloud.com/etherealguy/tuner-boreallis
>Electronic
>Newbie
>Looking for advices
https://soundcloud.com/irrelzazier
new song and video tomorrow. debut ep on november 10th.
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