Is this a good song? It's the first thing I've wri

sounds pretty standard

It sounds like actual music, I'll give you that. I could believe this as a track on a real neofolk artist's album. Not a particularly good one, but "real" in a way lots of /mu/scians fail to accomplish. Can't explain it. Keep writing.

I like it man, it is pretty catchy

>>75112052
Yea maybe someone who knows how to sing with an arrangement of other instruments. Violin.

not bad but you can definitely improve

>>75112416
What's the biggest issue? Pitch? Lack of cool guitar skills?

>>75111349
Pretty good, might need a little more voice control and it could be better, you gotta pretty Mangum sounding voice so that cool

>>75112943
Its not really an issue, but to me its like a loop of one melody phrase. You throw some little changes in there, but it doesn't really change up the rhythm or add any suspense or anticipation that a really solid "catchy" melody has.

My advice would be to write the main rhythm of your hook on paper. Then figure out where you want that rhythm to lead to something that audience can follow along like a story. Then you can add pitch to your melody by determining where you want the melody to take the listener. Songwriting is so fun for this reason!

what about this one mutants?

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=G0rOq_Xt7dI&t=73s