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I want to be a rapper.
Can you critique my flow and tell me if you think I have what it takes to be half decent at it?
No matter what I'm going to keep rapping but I would really like to know how it's perceived on the consumer's end.
http://vocaroo.com/i/s0aa0L1ZC1t0
I have more to this little rap that I wrote but I thought I should just record the opening.
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Hi, I wrote some lyrics, could someone critique me please?
And if the world ever has an apocalypse
I will kill all of you fuckers
Fear will be plentiful, death will be bountiful
I will spare none of you peasants
Fuck your religion, your pastor fucked kids
And got sent to a prison in PC
I seen the devil, he’s in you and me
You need saving to listen to this, see
I am a murderer
I am a demon, the son of a serpent
What is your faith?
What is your worth?
Have you felt acknowledgement?
If I kill you now, will you go to heaven or hell you believe in?
Death is approaching you
30 seconds, think before lying in a blood sea
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>>74231712
Don't skip school
Stay real cool
Don't be a fool that drools.
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Kill yourself OP.
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>>74230612
>asking 4chan for tips on muh rapping
https://youtu.be/zknN4TVJCOY
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>i want to be a rapper
congratulations, you are now a rapper. make sure to say nigga a lot and hope you'll be lukcy enough to become big
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>>74231712
do you think my flow is like his cause I do like him a lot desu
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