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Rate my lyrics writing this to sing to my gf we had a falling out and I want to get her back boys
It's like sadboy frank ocean r&b
Chorus:
>Memories lost like tears in rain
>Moments in time down the drain
>Spilling over out of your brain
>Baby I wanna be your main
>I need you to stay
>Because you're the reason I stay awake
>I need you to stay
>Because you're beautiful in every way
>And I hope it's not too late
>Before you close the gate
>You're my queen babe
>Chorus
>I love you and I hope you know
>I love you and it's really so
>I want to be with you all night
>Your face is a heavenly sight
>I will try with all my might
>To keep you by my side
>Alright
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Can't give you real feedback. I don't like them because they're too specific to the topic, but they could sound fucking amazing when being delivered.
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Shit Reddit garbage. Get the zapper.
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>>73602177
heartbreak is tough. this isn't good, and won't change things. best of luck.
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Put me in the le epic screencap
Hi 9gag xd
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>>73603871
I hope you're being ironic
"Rain/brain/drain" and "night/sight/might" are some elementary school-tier rhymes, and nothing in these lines says anything in an interesting or unique way. It's all as on-the-nose as possible in a really unflattering way.
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Sorry dude but this is too cheesy and the rhyme structure is very very basic and almost lazy. 3/10
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>>73602177
>Memories lost like tears in ra-
DROPPED!
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>>73602177
Probably she broke up with you because you suck at writing music
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