Be honest /mu/, how is my brother? Please be nice and constr

Are you for real?

>>73012264

yung lean when he was 14 but more shitty

>>73012264

was expecting way worse

>>73012321
Yup. Here's his latest one available on YouTube. Let me know what you think.

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=whiC-yEjGyY

A little Krishna Epitaph.

>>73012465
editing needs work. Less words More Meaning >>> Rapidfire bullshit

okay flow and like persona i guess but tell him to lay off the gang shit like that kid is not in a gang and also i kind of doubt he started from the bottom or whatever i mean like if he wants to do it like seriously make sure he's read up but we don't another white kid waving bandanas in a mall like i dont know it just rubbed me wrong

>>73012264
>0:29
my fucking sides are in orbit

>>73012264
the mix is really awful

>>73012264
It's actually a lot better than I expected. His production could be better, but his flow is nice, reminded me of Wiki from Ratking... He should keep making music

You shilled this on /r9k/ and got told it was shit. What makes you think opinions are going to be any different here? It's generic garbage.

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>>73012465
Editing is fucking terrible, the constant filter changes make me nauseous. However his flow his pretty good, could use some experience but he's definitely not bad.

>>73012264
this video is terrible

>>73014056
Well, as a start, /r9k/ barely had any replies.

Video is awful obviously.
He should improve the lyrical content. Make it more meaningful, clever, whatever.
Too fast. He needs to slow down but he can rap fast to change it up.

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>>73013810
>RAH