Hey guys I just recorded a quick demo and I wanted to get fe

did you listen to your fucking voice before uploading this trite?
you are the most monotone suburban white fuck I've ever heard.
you sound like bones' regular speaking voice.
stop making music, that's your feedback.

>>72178107
who the fuck is bones

>>72178107
>stop making music, that's your feedback.
Wow. Nice edgy advice.

>>72177948

Being honest here, if you're going for a nerdy white boy then you've hit the goldmine for a rapping voice. You may want to think about changing it if it wasn't what you was looking for.

>>72178248
i'm going for a raekwon/mf doom vibe on this track because like what other voice would work well on this instrumental?

>>72178163
https://youtu.be/HO37sjxbUjk
2:19

>>72178452
wow this guy is ROYALTY

>>72178248
How do you change your voice?

>>72178107
BUT BONEZZ

1. Did you make that beat? Doesn't sound you did because

2. the mixing on the vocals is horrible desu. Sticks out like a sore thumb. I'm tryna teach myself production and I couldn't do much better but you don't gotta be a chef to complain about bad food

>>72179021
yeah im recording this shit in my bedroom ;(

on a blue yeti

>>72179589
That's fine man, just make sure you know how to make it sound natural in whatever DAW you're using. What software are you working with anyway?

>>72179630
audacity, am i a retard? i tried following some youtubers video like boosting my bass and treble in post it made it sound much better

>>72179799
If you wanna actually start making tracks just pirate FL Studio and learn that. Will make life much better for yuo