would anybody be interested in rapping over a beat i made? you

can i hear the beat first?

>>71853243
at least post it before i agree to anything

>>71853255
>>71853269

http://vocaroo.com/i/s1znCOvBIx22

i like it, but i dont rap

rly like the samples but absolutely hate the snare and the kick could be better

>>71853314
thanks. i dont rap either.

>>71853348
mixing wise? whats wrong with em?

>>71853279
cool now its mine i will upload it to my soundcloud thanks

Spiritual lyrical miracle

>>71853375
:O

>>71853381
dude stop stealing my songs

>>71853387
no u dont steal. its mean

>>71853279
I mean I probably could but I've never attempted to write a rap song or rap before so it'd probably be shit.

>>71853392
okay im sorry

>>71853405
ay anything works, man. if you wanna give it a shot, then go for it

>>71853411
its okay. i forgive you

>>71853357
they sound cheap n wack

>>71853428
desu thats what i like about them

>>71853428
well that doesnt much help me improve them now does it

>>71853443
use a different snare sample u tarrrrd

http://vocaroo.com/i/s0xIkFwNpBJD here u go >>71853243
>>71853279

>>71853526
its pretty good but your breath control is shit

>>71853538
i'll work on it dw anon i'm aspiring to be a b-list soundcloud rapper

>>71853458
http://vocaroo.com/i/s1vOfqJojqLV

i compressed the snare and made the drum sound more lo-fi

>>71853549
are you gonna attempt any other takes or is that it? also - do you have a soundcloud that i can give you credit to

>>71853609
I wasn't planning on doing another take but I can do one since you changed the beat slightly and nah dw about crediting me friend

>>71853617
oh i wasnt trying to be patronizing or controlling or whatever, i was just wondering

>>71853628
don't worry i'm just bein a prick, though on second thought I really dont want to do another take so yeah

>>71853649
thats fine :) thanks for the help

>>71853550
nah senpai that snare is booboo
layer a fatter snare over it

>>71853658
ok this has a completely different drum beat. does it sound better?

http://vocaroo.com/i/s1crguJazFaB

>>71853279

Replace those claps with cymbols and light snare and I bet it sounds way better.