Bored AF So I'll review your shit and give likes n shit

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pretty sure i posted last time (or some other time) you made this, so i'll post a different song this time

https://soundcloud.com/expanding-sponge/that-dont-make-no-nevermind

this is the song that made me give up on writing mathy stuff.

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https://soundcloud.com/samrihiphop/common-1

>hip hop
>boombap
>old school steez

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Well, this one. https://soundcloud.com/thesecondsound/the-last-day

And if you want to, this one:https://soundcloud.com/thesecondsound/change

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>>71718576

GOOD MORN OP <3
THIS IS MY LATEST MIX - JELULITE <3
#JELULITE #PEDICURERECORDS #JELLUVSU

>SC
https://soundcloud.com/pedicure-records/sets/pd049-jel-the-digital-dream

>WHAT DO U THINK?! o - o

>>71718576
Give this a try...electronic/ambient. Be as honest as you like. Its not youtube or soundcloud but it will work on any device those work on.

https://clyp.it/x4jrfbk1?token=df03a439f0c0511845d508be329037ff

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>>71718661

Interesting. It's got a lot of different themes going on there. I appreciate that it goes somewhere instead of 3 minutes of the same stuff, but overall I'm not sure if it all meshes well.

I'm not sure if that's your artistic vision or not but I think if the track was a little more laid back and had one theme in mind it could be great.


That being said I actually enjoyed it, so have a gold star bud.

>>71718690

I love the beat and the rapping is tight and on point, but the samples playing around 0:12 of Biggies hook on "Come on" is really distracting and is a barrier to entry. That is to say, you hear that and you go "oh no this is gonna suck balls" but was very happily pleased that it didn't.

You've got a dope flow if that's you rapping, and would love to hear more from you, but I think ripping that song deserves its own hook, not just one lifted from Biggie.

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>>71718695
>Well, this one. https://soundcloud.com/thesecondsound/the-last-day

That intro really gives me a System of a Down vibe in a good way. Not sure if you were inspired by them but it's too close for me to call coincidence.

Actually this is a fucking great track, the only thing that it's lacking is vocals. Could make for a really cool song, but even for what it is, I'm impressed.


Your second song change has really interesting drumming. I actually love the drumming, but feel the gentle strumming doesn't do it much justice in the intro.

When the vocals come in it's much less noticeable and it starts to mesh well, but for those first few seconds I was unsure of the theme.

Only real qualms with it is I wish I could hear the lyrics.

I like when it kicks in around 1:34

Keep it up not nearly enough people playing real instruments on soundcloud IMO
>>71718701
>https://soundcloud.com/pedicure-records/sets/pd049-jel-the-digital-dream


I think I said this last time but your tracks really remind me of the artist SOPHIE.

My favorite part starts around 0:22 it's an interesting beat, but the rest of the track is just noise in my ears and not enjoyable noise at that. I'm sure someone will dig this, but it's not up my alley so if you're into things like clpping. then give this a listen.

>>71718713
Someone didn't read the rules. :-)

Only doing Souncloud and youtube bud

>>71718576

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=fkYaOJkWl50

>>71718822
>Someone didn't read the rules
someone didn't read the post...
he did read the rules
>Its not youtube or soundcloud but it will work on any device those work on.
he just think he's above them.

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>>71718833

Well... uh... it's interesting.

I'd like it a lot more without those vocals.

The very least I can say is it's unique?

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>>71718844
I don't think I'm above anyone, I just don't want to do anything but Soundcloud and Youtube right now, why don't you review his track?

Oh wait that's because you're the same guy lol

>>71718576

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=uqbvpkmWIrg

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>>71718876

I like this one a lot more. Could do without that shrilling screech that plays throughout the song, feels like weaponized tinnitus, but other than that I like the vocals, the drums, the overall theme.

Not smart enough to understand those lyrics, but it seems you've got your own style going on which is applaudable in its own right.

Like those light synth notes that start playing around 2:08 just wish it would go on for longer, it was a nice serene sound.

The last minute or so before the outro is easily the most enjoyable part of the song

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https://soundcloud.com/mbwpg/ahmad

>boombap

>>71718822
Cheers mate. We didn't specifically think of SOAD, but I like them, so it could be subconciious maybe?

As for the lack of vocals and not hearing the lyrics respectively, none of us can really sing that well...

Here's another thing we made. It might be a bit ambient, but it's recorded with keyboards and a guitar.
https://soundcloud.com/heatdeathdrone/ancient-living-metal

https://soundcloud.com/sapipa/cool-dudes-dont-dance
>lofi/meme house

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>>71718863
actually turns out im retarded and can't read either :-)

>>71718904

Thanks for reviewing anon, have a good day!

>>71718690
Dude this shit is tiiiggghhhtttttt. Ur flow is crazy good. How long u been rapping for?

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https://soundcloud.com/atomosdesilencio/desejo-de-minguar

>post-rock
>ambient

>new song


return all feedbacks

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>>71718905
Mix could use a little work, I think the drums are definitely hitting too had in relation to everything else, but that's an ill little beat you got there, very old school.

Props

>>71718909

I actually really liked this. Reminds me of a band called.... Royskopp? Rosykopp? Something like that.

Really takes me back a way.

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=qb9WgYW0ruE


>>71718906
I want to try to find hte song it remidns me of but I'm not sure if I have time to with everyone posting their tracks.

OH yeah, the intro is like this but slowed down

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=iywaBOMvYLI

Listened to some of that track, I really like the wailing guitar around halfway through, but overall seems solid for what it is.

>>71718934
Not OP, but I really like this. Got any album or EP? Bandcamp?

>>71718946
Is this the track you're thinking of?
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=SqZNMvIEHhs

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Are you still there?
https://soundcloud.com/daniel5656/nine-to-five
> alternative rock / electronics

What you think?

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>>71718913
anytime

>>71718934

Just starting off I love that almost orchestral organ, if that's what I think it is. Of course the fuzz is in the way a bit so I might be wrong, but I'm a huge fan of music that uses organs.

I love the vocals too, very angelic and the chimes are nice too, but I think that pumping drum could stand to use a pause every so often. maybe every 4th or 8th beat.

These are very small things that are easy to fix, and overall I'm a fan of the theme and sound.

Reminds me of these meditation tapes I used to listen to.

I think at points the voice that kicks in around halway through gets too loud in the mix with everything else, i would remove it completely, but I'm not sure what it means to you or if it has any significance as I don't speak the language.

The last 45 seconds or so I feel are uncessary but overall a nice theme and track,

>>71718934
it's me

>>71718958
>>71718985
thnk you!

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>>71718576
https://soundcloud.com/hypnoso/nostalgy

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>>71718958
Oh yeah! It's definitely that one! Good ear my friend. Jeez it's been a long time since I've heard that song.

Brings me back to playing City of Heroes and watching The Matrix on repeat lmao.

Gonna take a break from reviewing and listen to this whole track


>>71718982
>https://soundcloud.com/daniel5656/nine-to-five


That's a good question, is anyone truly still here?

Creepy pic but I love those drums. The vocals are mixed waaaaaaayyyyy too low can barely hear them at all, but the track would be solid if not for that. Really has a nostalgic 1999-2001 flavor to it. With better mixing this could have easily been in a film from that era.

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https://soundcloud.com/quack-addickt/the-dankest-of-beats

Yo, fresh track I made.

>groovy
>I dunno, I suck with genres

>>71719027
Thanx for the feedback, my friend.

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>>71719023
>https://soundcloud.com/hypnoso/nostalgy


This gives me a "Stranger Things" vibe, which is a shitty thing to say because Stranger things stole its vibe straight from the 80s but....

this. track. is. dope

Mixed beautifully, tons of neat effects beautifully blended without seeming like an effects showcase, great melody, great beat.

This is legitimately a great track, looking forward to hearing more from you - hopefully a lot more.

I love this track

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>>71718576
https://soundcloud.com/senseisendling-1/collapse

Would consider this as my best work, yet the are tracks where I spent 3 times more effort in it and they still turned out not 100% satisfying especially mastering wise. Looking forward to what you'll think.

Thanks for listening!

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>>71719037
>https://soundcloud.com/quack-addickt/the-dankest-of-beats


I really enjoy this actually. Lovin that almost squeaky synth.

Great composition, only thing I'd say is it sounds like it was made on garage band or something at certain points in the song. I think you could find better synths and basses than the ones you're using - not sure if it's intended but it almost sounds like an old video game song at certain points in the track, which I personally don't mind, but some people don't enjoy that vibe.

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>>71719062
>https://soundcloud.com/senseisendling-1/collapse


I think that's just the nature of music making. Sometimes you can crank something out in a few hours and it's amazing, other times you spent days or weeks ruminating over a track only for it to fall flat.

It's all good experience either way.

That being said, I really enjoy this. Nice and relaxing synths but the drums keep you from getting too bored.

Reminds me of something that would fit in perfectly on Toonami's Deep Space Bass album

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>>71719075
Hey, thanks heaps man, appreciate the share as well.
Also, I'm totally using garage band, I wrote it all on an iPad touchscreen haha, good catch.
Still, thanks for the review. I'm saving for a good pic for recording so hopefully I can make some better produced beats
Cheers man :)

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https://soundcloud.com/typol/dustraintrack
>tape
>instrumental
>inspired by 60's jazz and dub music
>psychedelic
>hip hop
>trip hop

https://soundcloud.com/skatings-gay/uicideboy-antarctica

>>71719102
Yeah I know, still there are days where you sit in front of your work and you just think you lost all your skills you built up in the past haha.

Glad you like it, especially the noise fraction in the second part still remains unreachable for me to this day. Thanks for the thread and the time OP!

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>>71719130
It's interesting, I don't mind it, but don't particularly like it either.

I'm sure someone here will like it, but it's a little too repetitive and doesn't really seem to go anywhere til the last 40 seconds or so.

It's a good effort just not into it personally.

>>71719149
>>71719117

Ya don't sweat it guys

>>71719135

>829 thousand views
>400 followers

that fuckin sucks lmao almost a million views and nobody followed but that's soundcloud for you.

The beat is better than the rapping. Reminds me of that group Brokencyyde or like uh Hollywood Undead, and dare I say ICP?

The rapping isn't even bad it's mixed well and on point, just not to my taste.

Wish there were an instrumental.

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https://soundcloud.com/krunch/looking-glass

old-school vibe rock/punk distorted guitar music, check it out

let me know what you think

i'll be glad to return feedback in the thread

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>>71719292
>https://soundcloud.com/krunch/looking-glass


Reminds me much more of mac demarco than old school rock or punk, but I like mac demarco so I can dig it.

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https://m.soundcloud.com/gdsenn/delirium
Electronic
Psychedelic
There you go op

>>71718576
you sound like an entitled cunt so no links for you

grow up first then you get the tracks. not here to entertain you.

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>>71718576
https://soundcloud.com/ccylinder/magnum
>Big Beat, Actiony

Rate my shit, Rate my shit

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>>71719681
lmao okay sourpuss nobody said you were here to entertain, but i guess you are here to post snarky comments and not listen to anyone else's music so who really needs to grow up again?

Some people actually want feedback on their tracks

>>71719663

Psychadelic is right. Talk about a trip Almost like an adventure in sound. That's the kind of thing you could listen to while laying down.


>>71719746

I've actually rec'd you and this specific track before. I actually really like it, as I've said before it would fit perfectly in Payday 2 or The Matrix something along those lines.

https://youtu.be/TjQYQ8Q8L8g

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>>71718576
GOTCHAGANG
last and best, comment what you think
>rap
Enjoy: https://m.soundcloud.com/gotchagang/big-joke

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>>71720015
I don't know if you actually made this or are fucking with me or posted to the wrong thread, but that's a toe tappingly good song.

Makes me want to slick my hair back and sing some doowop on the corner.

This is a great song haha but IDK why it's posted here

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https://soundcloud.com/hvzydvys/tell-me-no
>except rap and country

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>>71720102
>https://soundcloud.com/hvzydvys/tell-me-no

At first I thought it was someone playing an amp into a microphone and singing over it but then I put on my Beats™ Studio Headphones by Dr. Dre and realized that this was the greatest track of all time.