What do you think of this song I made? https://clyp.it/hpag

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Sounds far too similar to NMH

You sing near exactly like Jeff Mangum and even mimic the recording of the vocals. Do your own thing mane

>>71214781
but I like the way that doubled vocals sound

Bumping for hopefully more feedback

Bumpingggg againnn

Ok one last bump

I'll give you criticism. This might sound harsh, just bear in mind that I'm intentionally only going to list the things I didn't like about it. It's not that bad.

For starters progression is really boring and doesn't evoke any emotional response in me. All the chords used are very vanilla and the supporting melodies and harmonies are also predominantly diatonic which doesn't help. Structurally the song is also very boring and doesn't really go anywhere.

The production aesthetic is very confused, some of the elements such as the electric guitar licks and the piano sound completely out of place. Either commit to the folksy barebones thing or don't. This combination just sounds amateurish.

The lyricism is pretty self-indulgent. If there is nothing personal to you that you want to sing about don't sing about yourself. Really shallow sentiments. Comes off as banal. I also don't like your voice and I think the tone sounds very forced and inauthentic.

In general it feels way too "safe". It's beige wallpaper music.