Hey /mu/, what do you think of this song I just wrote? http

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Bumpp

>>70668920
why does shortwave radio attract so many weirdos?

>>70669286
How dare you say that. Reviewbrah is not a weirdo.

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Bunp again

>>70668920
Nice and emotional. Your voice sounds kinda weird and cracky, and could use some work. You are off pitch a couple times too. Other than that, its pretty good. The lyrics and songwriting are both solid imo. I like the piano. If you made an album, I would listen to it.

>>70670050
Thanks for the feedback !
I actually did release an album recently. You can find it here: https://samweinberg3.bandcamp.com/album/call-it-anything

>>70668920
Good songwriting, you need voice lessons. A fleshed out version of this track with guitar, bass, and drums would be great.

>>70670735
hey thanks.
i pride myself in my songwriting and it's something i'm always working on and trying to improve.
as far as my voice goes, it was kinda blown out when i recorded this haha it usually sounds better. i sorta embrace that rough quality though. im going for something like bob dylan or tom waits or jeff mangum or captain beefheart or howling wolf

>>70668920
voice is a bit wonky
other than that its decent

>>70671010
Thanks hon

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>>70668920
>mfw only 3 days untill radio australia shutdown

Bumpppppppp

>>70669976
The thin white duke?

I actually really like it, but your vocals definitely need work

>>70668920
Is that a picture of you?

>>70672714
Nah that's thereportoftheweek he reviews fast food on youtube

I wish I looked like him

where should i start with Reviewbrah ?

>>70672897
Watch all of his reviews in order

But in all seriousness here are some of my personal faves:

https://youtu.be/h_FOuyzQ9mg

https://youtu.be/h_FOuyzQ9mg

https://youtu.be/sasohsgNC5A

https://youtu.be/OiTuA8FMaME

https://youtu.be/DuauSta4kHw

https://youtu.be/IukTiqAqVBM

good songwriting, will totally listen to your album! Im not a very good music critic, i care only for the melody and how the whole thing makes me fell. I liked that song a lot, are you still there also?

>>70672953
Thank you! Glad you like it
I am still here

If u (or anyone else) have any questions feel free to ask