Honest feedback requested on this song my little brother rel

>>70333221
21st century social anxious man

>>70333221
Too many notes.

>>70333221
Sounds like it belongs on the Sonic Adventure 2 soundtrack.

>>70333221
odd time signatures should be used more sparingly than that imo

i feel like use of the odd time signature in rock music was peretty much perfect in emergency & I

I'd buy his cd.

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make it stop

>>70333221
is the black guy's name token?
sounds like white middle class wankery to me

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from time to time it gets pretty cool but most of the song i was like this

>>70333221
Some of the segments of the song don't flow into each other well, it makes for an uninjoyable listening experience. To give him credit some of it is written well.

>>70333365
this, the less is more
The second half of the instrumental on the other hand was amazing

It's not that bad tbqhf.
It feels a bit too 'full on' all the time though, and what >>70333957 said about the flow is definitely an issue.
Less time signature wankery pls.

no asians in band, no wheelchair kids... your little brother is a bigot