I'm working on my first rap song, heres what I got

>>69958609
don't make this thread again it wasn't funny the first time

sup bones

>>69958609
i'm pretty sure this is a joke thread but your syllables are wack, impossible to flow over those lyrics

this is every white person's first attempt at writing rap

i aint gonna reply if this is rhetorical

>listens to run the jewels once

>>69958609
Next line:
I suck on testicle

>>69958609
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=vqkN6NVaggs

>>69958609
>>69958693
Your flow is whack and abysmal
When I'll smack you around it'll be biblical
back to the future when I was high on adderall
I pissed my dick off and shat in the urinal

I'M A SPIRITUAL LYRICAL INDIVIDUAL MIRACLE LYRICAL INDIVIDUAL

>>69958609
im so tired im like snoricle
fucka bitch then im phantasmagorical
swag on my balls, orical

>>69958609
If you say "my rhymes" or "my bars" ur automatically trash

>>69959703
u just said both guess ur trash

This whole thread full of trash lyrics
wtf, guys? I thought you were more woke than this.

my rhymes be metaphorical (8)
don't reply it's rhetorical (8)
I'm spittin truth like it's historical (10)
seeing visions like I'm the oracle (10)
I'm everywhere you're boxed in like categorical (13)
my flow like a story it's allegorical (12)

stop it

>>69960618
>applying poetic restrictions to a musical art form
pretty embarrassing, family

>>69960702
why do you think "bars" are called "bars"

it's literally more important for syllables to fit correctly in musical form due to the further restriction of needing to spit the lyrics within the constraints of a beat

why do you have a trip

I sound stuffy as hell but I tried really hard to flow to what the OP wrote to demonstrate how difficult those syllables make it and this is what I got

http://vocaroo.com/i/s1uHUFbD2LPI

>>69960784
>why do you have a trip
because I'm the most popular hip-hop artist on this board
>it's literally more important for syllables to fit correctly in musical form due to the further restriction of needing to spit the lyrics within the constraints of a beat
number of syllables in a line =/= number of beats
>why do you think "bars" are called "bars"
don't insult me

>>69958609
Congrats you managed to say absolutely nothing with the most basic of cringe worthy rhyme schemes

>>69958609
>bob wire

>>69960965
> I'm the most popular hip-hop artist on this board
that would be montie

>>69960965
link me to something of yours?

>>69960836
You sound like Bert from Bert and Ernie

>>69960965
that's what a flow is, genius
a division or subdivision of the number of beats in a bar by a consistent number of syllables

just stop posting

>>69961076
It doesn't have to be consistent. Maybe in the 80s but rappers stretch and manipulate syllables all the time these days. Are you ignorant of the entirety of hip hop post-Rakim? I recommend you listen to OutKast or something.

>>69961107
of course it doesn't have to be
nothing in art has to be anything, including good
thanks for the rec dude

its muh dick
take a lick but don't trip
it be spittin that wack ass dope shit
when i cum ill give ya bean a flick

>Homosexual MF DOOM:
I fuck man butts, thrust on ham cuts
Pry, tuck, jam nuts up on man sluts
Canned spam lands two feet from Jan's cunt
Hand shan't grab, cooties fucked Dan up

My lines are so basic
Your girl on that bass trip
Not to name names
But yo bitch in my basement
Her face is depraved
Yet she jumps on my dick
Come on by I'll show you the tip

>>69961076
>by a consistent number of syllables
that's where you're wrong, friendo

>>69961031
here you go, bruh
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=U-hgpeSGDgc

>>69961430
Why is this so accurate

>my flow like a story, it's allegorical

God Hip Hop is the most banal thing in the fucking world. So many rappers would be nothing without their producers.

haha yeah woo hoo
yeah uh-huh
we got london on the track
nigga
woo hoo yeah son
haha woo

>>69961430
>Aesop Rock Takes An Algebra Class:
Binomial coefficients and complex number formulas
Im coating notebooks totally focused on a hyperbola
The teach is speeding over cause I chatted till the class was done
I try to find our angle angle but Pythagorus is mad at us

>>69961544
You realize this isn't from an actual successful rapper, right?

>>69961969
>Earl Sweatshirt Is Suspicious About 9/11:
It's been over a decade since the towers left, left us towerless
And I just used to blame al-Qaeda for their cowardice
When truthfully I missed the facts since I was just a kid
A bomb destroyed the pentagon, we never saw a plane that hit

>>69958609
I don't fucking care about your accomplishments so don't treat the listener like they should be

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>>69960836

pretty fire desu