Here are some videos of me singing songs I wrote https://yo

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Shameless self-bump

bumping with another song I wrote:

http://vocaroo.com/i/s0zwLI2qByQM

it's a full band instead of just me and a piano

>>69558718
Sounds good OP. You have the voice to be a teenage heartthrob.

>>69559446
that's good to hear. Thanks for listening

Bumping to get the ball rolling

Not too shabby man.

Definitely getting a Mangum vibe in your vocals when you go for the louder and higher notes.

Post your stuff in the next Bandcamp thread you see, they'd probably be pretty receptive to it. Able to post better criticism and stuff, anyway.

>>69558718
>get a mic
>your playing/chord phases are too harsh in areas when you're not singing
>use the deeper octives slightly more often
>singing goes way out of tune in place

Just my opinion, but balls for upload. Keep practicing!

i like it op
just get a mic tho

amazing! Whats your Bandcamp?

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=au6RwAI2CG8

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=v8bTay2J-4Y


what you think of my long form music videos?

>>69560539
samweinberg3.bandcamp.com

>>69558718
pretty woke. i like it
never post outside of a bandcamp thread again

>>69562562
Truuu

>>69558718
Sounds good, but kinda generic, just the usual ed sheeran type of voice.

>>69563260
I haven't heard an Ed Sheeran comparison before. I've heard a lot of Jeff Mangum, but never Ed Sheeran. Huh

>>69558718
Haven't you already posted this?

>>69565267
yeah it's called viraling ever heard of it

>>69565501
I think it's called "shilling" here

made it through about 30 seconds of each one

one lines i took away are "tell me something i already know" and something like "don't play the clown"

all the words i heard at the time ranged from mediocre to bad

all in all the best thing about these is that your voice almost evokes Jeff Mangum sometimes

i play piano, i'm not even that good but your piano stuff is the worst. You'd be waaaaaay better off with a guitar. Get a classical guitar if steel strings are too hard for you

>>69565606
ok i see now you have a guitar.

>>69565544
:/