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I feel like this album doesn't do a great job at capturing

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I feel like this album doesn't do a great job at capturing the feeling of anxiety, lose of control and delirious euphoria. Danny simply scratches the surface of these themes
I went into this expecting some visceral picturesque shit that rips you in all the right ways but it ultimately ended up as vast disappointment.
Even I can write better shit than that, check it

I will never shoot myself but sometimes I look down from that cliff
I hate myself I love myself, it's just that kind of relationship
Kobain in my veins, thinking of suicide again
Early morning vicodin to numb the pain that I am
Showing emotion but do not play me violin
I will do the same motion while holding a knife to skin
Play another sad story from my life again
Got lied to as a child and I think it affected me for the rest of my life
My granddad acted like I was dumb, lied in my eyes said I was his son
Mom was my sister, brothers were my nephews
How the fuck do you expect me to respect you when you make me feel like I was born in a test tube
Outsider in class, no one to sit next to
Do you really think the preacher knows the whole truth
The secrets of the universe and everything that holds you
What lies will they tell in your obituary
You can't find the meaning of life in a dictionairy

I got a call saying that I'll die tomorrow
My reply, fine life is borrowed
Something 'bout how the stars grow
Step in the dark and turn my heart cold
Last night I died for the eleventh time
Hate how you look in my eyes and read my mind
Don't believe adults because they're dead inside
That's something my innocence taught my pride
My addiction was feeding tumors, asking for trouble I should've seen it sooner
Believe the shooter, believe in jesus or buddha
There's too much smoke in this room to see the future
Don't fall for true lies, how does it feel behind two eyes
Maybe we're all too blind, a due death in due time
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It was funny yesterday now forget about it.
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Bro just stop you made yourself look like a fool yesterday
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>>69481821
let's see your raps then
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What happened yesterday.
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>>69482065
the original post was posted and then anon rapped better than danny brown
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>>69482172
post the rap I'm genuinely curious now
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>>69483628
it's in the OP
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>>69484062
its shit
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>>69484388
actually I forgot to include it my bad matey

http://www4.zippyshare.com/v/NRCoSm3U/file.html
>I rapped over frou frou - old piano because I couldn't be bothered finding a beat and I'm a true patrician
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>>69481799
Holy fucking shit dude
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>>69481799
Oohh son oohh son keep goin
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>>69481799
Dude youre fucking awful.
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Up and at em early now im groovin through my house.
Pretty fuckin lit when i pimp-slide and kill a mouse.
Shimmy, twang, and ragdoll in my house or in a club.
Either way nights endin with a pitied rub an tug.
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>>69485550
this is copypasta bud, shoulda seen the thread yesterday. still not sure if it was a genuine retard of the best troll of 2016
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>>69485850
it was me, and I openly admitted I was trolling

the original post was real, by someone else, who then posted a zippy of him actually rapping it and it was pretty good so everyone stfu about it
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>>69485918
i was referring to the original thread anyway

no one thought him rapping it was any better
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>>69485982
so am I. you all thought it was better because you stopped posting after that. meanwhile I had like 20 replies on my obvious bait

it's fucking embarrassing how desperate you guys are for someone to feel better than lol
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>>69481799
if you cherry picked like 2-3 lines out of this, it could work.

Speaking as somebody whose written songs from a place of great sadness and self loathing, self-deprecation has no place in art outside of stand-up comedy. Writing about how 'depressed' you are shows you are still actually very vain and self-motivated.

Reach outside of your own head, people have been suffering since humans stood upright. Tap into some collective consciousness, don't just write a fucking diary entry.
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>>69484410
wow edgy
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What goes around comes around
So I came in your mom's round
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Lmao if you keep this up I'll put a second verse to it
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>>69486018
i mean if it was really you, you should still feel very embarrassed. no one replied anymore after the recorded rap because it stopped being funny and started being sad.

it's not about feeling better than people, it's laughing at them when they have an inflated ego even though they're completed talentless
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>>69486497
don't know what to tell ya, I literally just said it wasn't my rap, I just pretended to be him after he posted it

and the recorded one wasn't bad desu
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>>69486378
Live my life sparingly
Watch the clock tick carefully
Another hour wasted trying to find the holy key
spending friday nights alone watching glee
wish I had a gf to share this time with me
but every time I try I'm filled with dispair and regretful speech


Can't think of how to continue
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>>69486593
Wishing I could be the man I see in the movies
my mom don't even want to see my face
an embarrasment
Searching for light outside this basement
pavement cavemen
all walls caved in
the mind become the empty space that i'm residing in
another lonely guy killed by the world he created inside
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