soundcloud links
https://soundcloud.com/leeches/inside-voices
>>68820319
https://soundcloud.com/cleaveflounder
https://soundcloud.com/lighghtofficial
>electronic, experimental, industrial, acid, techno, noisey, idm
>if you like arca, autechre, lotic, amnesia scanner, holly herndon, aphex twin
will be returning feedback here and on sc
https://soundcloud.com/igottastick/leave
>Minor
>Electronic
>Piano
https://soundcloud.com/mugen101
>rap
New track up
Will return feedback
https://soundcloud.com/irrelzazier
>feds
>>68820887
https://youtu.be/TSsTHp7lHIU?t=6s
https://soundcloud.com/slave-beaver-revolt/ares
>electronic
>ambient
>chill
>>68820900
the synths need a bigger sound imo, I bet it'll sound like boc .. just a thought. I really liked the drums in Insecam btw
https://soundcloud.com/totinoboy/yume
>instrumental hip-hop
>beats
https://soundcloud.com/totinoboy/fluorescenttears
>trap
>melancholic
>sesh
>>68820319
Nice vocal in this man, actually good alt-rock in the thread. Only critique is a mixing thing, and that is the bass might be too loud in places for the style. but even that im not too sure, my ears are very tired! good song rec.
>>68820605
Your guitar playing is ok. The vocal mixing in these tracks is pretty poor though I must say. Also were these improvised? To me the songs dont seem too well formed unfortunately. And the harmonica is not that great I must say. Im sorry if some of this seems harsh, clearly you are creative but this work needs improvement.
>>68820872
this isnt bad at all, but I gotta say its much too loud, for an only-piano composition i would like some more dynamics.
is this midi or played live? If live you clearly have a great on point sense of rhythm.
>>68820887
beat is p lit man. Also there is a lot of potential in your delivery i think. Fast lane is good but some of your voice gets a bit of that nasal teenager style stuff going on. Also sounds like you are running out of breath. You could also leave more space in your flow. Keep it up, Sounding like you are gettin gud.
>>68820900
this stuff has so so much potential. I think the synths could be much bigger in 'deposit' and it would have this sort of dreamy feel. someone else said boards of canada and im inclined to agree. PoinDexter is a really really nice track
>>68821215
rec this guy too
>>68820709
>>68820709
>>68820709
me
>>68822307
>https://soundcloud.com/lighghtofficial
Cleave Flounder here, yeah It was completely improvised just kind of fucking around but thanks for checking it out~
>>68822307
thanks for all the feedback man, youre keeping these threads alive. <3