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Spanking Thread #44: "Isn't the Cutting Board a Little

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Rarity still thinks Sweetie Belle is her darling little sister. Sweetie thinks she has long since grown passed the need for corporal punishment. They come to a compromise: more painful spanking implements, fitting of an older filly like Sweetie Belle.

Prompt:
>Celestia doesn't understand dreams or the subconscious the way Luna does. Horrified at the contents of some ponies' dreams, she takes drastic action.

Featured Story:
The Evil Scientist by RusticAnon (Robots / Mane 6 & RD/OC)
https://hostbatch.com/spankforum/viewtopic.php?f=6&t=193
Not written by a native English speaker, but it has a cornucopia of fetishes.

Stories in #43:
Award-Winning Filly by Anon (Implied Parents/Rainbow oneswat)
https://desuarchive.org/mlp/thread/30115544/#30119155
Anon's hell by RusticAnon (unfinished)
https://hostbatch.com/spankforum/viewtopic.php?f=12&t=198
unsolved future friendship problems by RusticAnon (Machines / Girl) (unfinished)
https://desuarchive.org/mlp/thread/30115544/#30182785
Unknown Name, Will Change by Nomine (Parents/OC)
Part 1: https://hostbatch.com/spankforum/viewtopic.php?f=6&t=194
2: https://desuarchive.org/mlp/thread/30115544/#30229119
3: https://desuarchive.org/mlp/thread/30115544/#30302443
Involuntary Testing (Machine / AJ) (remake) by RusticAnon
https://desuarchive.org/mlp/thread/30115544/#30269074
Intentional Trouble by Anon (Celestia / Twilight twoswat)
https://desuarchive.org/mlp/thread/30115544/#30298362

New pics:
humanized Maud / humanized Pinkie
https://desuarchive.org/mlp/thread/30115544/#30128073
Mom / Pinkie
https://desuarchive.org/mlp/thread/30115544/#30147759

Group Archives (140+ stories). Haven't been updated in a bit. If you want newer stories, check the last few threads.
https://pastebin.com/u/SkyeHigh
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1ce_DlEwnDcpjqTKRRxvsL4SCjka9H4cYq5lTfku8Tiw

Forum:
https://hostbatch.com/spankforum/

Old thread:
https://desuarchive.org/mlp/thread/30115544
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More prompts:

Prompts:
>Twilight's fear comes true: Starlight Glimmer has taken to whapping changelings with a flyswatter. The only things Twilight couldn't predict were the size of the flyswatter, and where it was applied.
https://derpibooru.org/1413580

>Starlight's bottled up anger infects Granny Smith, making Granny spank Trixie for slights against Starlight.

>Fluttershy hid a clause in her contract with the construction ponies for her animal sanctuary. It used fancy language nopony understood. Now those ponies are wishing they had paid attention to it.

>Scootaloo wants to know what a spanking feels like. How to find out? That elastic band she uses to go to Cloudsdale...

>Turns out the Cutie Mark Crusaders didn't tell any of their caretakers they were going on a spy mission with Big McIntosh.

>Pony visitors to Yakyakistan find out that the yak custom of giving you what you need, rather than what you ask for, has disastrous consequences for your flanks if you act up.
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>>30477680
Not gonna lie that image is fantastic.
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>>30477698
I like it too. Forgot to mention Vega has a slave pony story with semi-frequent spankings that is still getting updates.
Warning: feels

https://pastebin.com/rJhtA082

>>30477691
>Pony visitors to Yakyakistan find out that the yak custom of giving you what you need, rather than what you ask for, has disastrous consequences for your flanks if you act up.
Pic related from the first yak episode. Makes sense when you listen to what she says.

>And so my quest begins. I know what you're thinking. "Why go to Yakyakistan alone, Pinkie Pie?" Because I'm the party planner. This burden falls on my rump and my rump alone. If I want a great party, I gotta climb the mountains north of the Crystal Empire, find Yakyakistan, and come back with something authentic! Know what I mean?

Something authentic = a sore backside, forged in the fires of Yakyakistani punishment?
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>>30477680
>spanking thread
>#44
>forum
Are you that serious?
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>>30479215
It's a small group so we don't try to have a thread active all the time. We run threads until all the energy runs out and then agree on a later date to re-group. That gives everybody, particularly us writefags, a chance to come up with new material.

The forum provides a place to stay in touch between threads. There's some 'forum exclusive' stories there which have never been posted here on /mlp/.
The forum is run and paid for by RusticAnon.
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>>30477691
Pinkie getting a hard whapping by the yaks has so much fucking potential. UUUUNFF
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>>30479215
We're serious as fuck about this fetish mah nig.
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Ep 13 is out in Australia. Spoilers:

Angry Granny Smith grabs the ear of this pony and drags him off. The video is so hot. It's the closest we've gotten to an old-fashioned whupping being in the show.

More spoilers:

It's Applejack's dad as a young stallion and he's being dragged off in front of his future wife.
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>>30477691
That's a good point. CMC didn't tell anyone at all where they were going.

Sweetie Belle in particular would get in some big trouble. Apple Bloom was technically with her own brother, and Scootaloo's parents don't give af.
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>>30480251
Spoiler for those who haven't seen the episode either: you know damn well Bright Mac saved Pear Butter from getting a thrashing of her own when that water tower got knocked over and he owned up to it.
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>>30477691
>>30477738
>>30480220
Could end up being similar to Vega's Rarity & the Minotaur story. Good and bad, because I love that story but might not want a copy of it.
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>>30480286
Holy shit I remember that now. And of course, it was Pinkie who smacked their asses.

That pony practically has a canon spanking fetish, or at least a fixation.
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I was sorta hoping to have my greentext finished by the time the next thread rolled around. I finally pushed past a block for one of the scenes I still had to write, but there's a slightly longer one near the end that still has to be written, and university stuff's gotten in the way since then. I'll see what I can do. Hopefully this thread won't go anywhere any time soon.
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New thread is finally here!

During hiatus I wanted to animate a spanking scene. Something simple so I went with this scene (picture related)
It's from that ongoing comic about scootaloo going to get check up by an oc called Cobalt.

The main issue I got was, I couldn't fit cobalt , scootaloo and the paddle on the same shot.

I tried many different variations and different angles. Nothing seems to work properly.

Take the sketch I posted for example.
Both cobalt and scootaloo are in the scene, scootaloo's spankable but in perfect view but ...
animating the floating paddle from this angle is kinda weird to me. I won't be able to do a convincing swing motion.

If I drew scootaloo from the side it would be perfect for the paddle swing animation and impact. But when I do that I won't be able to fit cobalt in the picture.


Any suggestions?
You guys must have seen this done before a scene where a unicorn and the spankee fits inside the spanking scene
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>>30477738
Thanks for the shout out. It does include a fair number of spanking scenes as well as just about everything else under the sun. I'm planning a new strictly spanking story but nothing any time soon.

>>30480286
At least yaks don't have hands to hold brushes with.
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>>30481370
Fuck yeah bro, very excited
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>>30482128
>hands

Yeah, just dedicated paddle helmets instead of horns. Imagine the swing from those.
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Risky bump from work

I'm the same Anon who wrote the Old Fashioned Wife green months ago. I'm gonna start writing a new one when I can
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>>30482862
>Old Fashioned Wife
that was a pretty good story can't wait to read more from you.
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>>30482969
Thanks, I'm glad you liked it, means a lot because I wasn't sure how it would go over the first time
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>>30480445

Crusaders will be spanked.
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>>30481901
Great choice of scene. Good expressions. Not an animator or artist so I don't have advice for your questions.

>>30484152
Hot and more feelsy than I was expecting.
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>>30481901
>Any suggestions?
Scootaloo looks a little too big.
She's almost the same size as Cobalt.

I seriously hope Anibaru doesn't flake out and deny us the Scootaspanking. Too many are looking forward to it.
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>>30481901
Hmm. Maybe flip the perspective so Scoot's body is more in profile, and then have Cobalt more to the side of her and not so much behind her (which would look like she is behind Scootaloo, from the perspective of the viewer.)

Don't know if that made sense, but it would be easier to animate the arc of the swing that way.
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https://derpibooru.org/1464645
Why the fuck would you not design a sex machine with foals in mind.
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>>30486814
you mean like this ?
I could work with that. But the angle seems a bit weird to get scootaloo's butt in the scene.
I can add some visual comic effect to mask the wierd impact angle of the paddle.

>>30486001
>sizes
yea I'm aware of that. (it's not as if I didn't do that mistake before) but I was just testing out the angle in that sketch. I did draw that scene multiple of times on that board with multiple angles. only saved that one.
>Anibaru
I doubt that he wouldn't draw the scootaloo's spanking. but he might make it really brief as 1 or 2 panels then he might move on with the foalcon plot.

>>30485242
I chose that scene in particular cause I can't wait for the next one.
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>>30487292
That looks good to me, I could nitpick but I don't think it affects the enjoyment of the picture. Scoot's expression and Cobalt's too are both good. For animation purposes maybe if Scootaloo's legs were dangling a bit, you could add some hoofy kicking, but that would add a lot of work. Whatever you want to fiddle with Rustic, go for it! This looks great
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>>30487505
>dangling legs
ofc. and I might add that scoot might be swinging her front hooves kicking the mattress in frustration
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>Dizzy is hiding under the bed from her inevitable spanking
I did this for bat thread. just want to share it here.
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I don't have anything ready, partially because of motivation but mostly just not having any ideas that I like. I went trolling through the archives and there are nice ideas there that never had stories or pictures made for them.

>>30480251
Perfect for Skyehigh, DC, or KK. Nomine does ear tugs in Undercover Blues 1 as well.

>>30481370
Glad you're here, with or without any new content.

>>30486869
kek

>>30489590
Saw this in the search. It's good and funny. Her eyes show her fear. Should the tail be clenched tighter to her rump / the side of her body?
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>>30488392
All of my uuunf
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First green when?
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>>30490730
You're writing it. Get to it!
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>>30490730
:(

Most of the writefags are so damn busy, IRL is a bitch sometimes
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>be baby sharkpony
>be naughty
>get spankings
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>>30492319
I'm so busy hanging out with my friends and playing video games.
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>>30492611
That's cuz you got the good life bro.

I got a 7-4 job at a shitty retail store plus night shifts some nights. My life is kill
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>>30477738
Why did the show creators have to make ponies with such round spankable butts?

I feel like the whole pone fapping audience would be microscopic compared to how it is now if they had made the roundness and the, well, crack less pronounced on their rumps.

I didn't clop to the show at first and I still remember the day when I started to notice, "hey, you know they really made the pony' flanks... shapely in this show"
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>>30492551
Weird, is that design based on the movie?
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>>30492903
DHX knows what they're doing, I'm convinced. Some of the animators might be horsefuckers, too
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>>30494599
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>>30494606
That was one of my personal favorites, I wish that artist did more work, but she decided o move away from the clop life.
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That's all I have on hand, but pony spanking is cute, yous guys feel free to help me out here.

Also pic unrelated but it's precious so deal with it.
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>>30494599
NSFW m8
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>>30494599
>You)
>NSFW m8
Whoops Someone wanna fix that?
I have no idea how.
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>>30494656
Click on the box next to your post. Look at the bottom-right of the page and press "delete".
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I don't suppose we can post NSFW behind a spoiler can we?
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>>30494733
try >>>/trash/
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>>30494733
As of a few years ago (and still to this day as far as I know), you can link to NSFW. Derpibooru or Imgur links should be fine especially if they're pony.

>>>/trash/ would also work as this anon says. >>30494747

Thanks for bringing content, friend.
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>>30490730
Working on something...definitely won't be ready tonight.
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Drawings by Rust, and possibly three new greens? I'm liking how this thread is starting up!

Now, where's KK or Skye, or Nomine? Or Stern, or Chuck, or... I'm sadddd
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>>30492551
>>30493567

I see someone found a certain pic of mine. The design is actually based on Heart, and the owner of the OC his canonical father is based on paid for him to be redesigned as a Shark-Pony.

I commissioned that picture based on a goofy idea Heart's Dad, Mom, and I played around with.
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"He’s lucky AJ’s not there. She’d probably use something much worse than a ruler."

>>30494821
I miss hearing from KK especially. If your heroes are missing, maybe it's time to become somebody else's hero?

>>30494904
Nomine proposed a collab involving regression. I'm interested in it and brainstormed a little here.

https://hostbatch.com/spankforum/viewtopic.php?f=10&p=727
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>>30495103

CRAP! I completely forgot to send in my response to that!
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>>30494186
You just know some are. It's not possible to not be.
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>>30495674
>Octavia drags Pinkie over the organ bench and spanks her with her violin bow for treating a rare antique like a toy
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>>30496640
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>>30495523
That earned you a spanking for sure.
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>>30496828
perhaps this prospective is better
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>>30496828
>>30497034
Penis

Oh my penis, my dick is so big right now
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>>30495674
Holy shit, that isn't edited? Even a non-clopper would notice how phat that ass is, unbelievable

She doesn't even have to be sitting human-like, she could have just been sitting like a normal pony. They did that on purpose, woww.
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>>30477680
better res
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>>30498047
Where did you find this high res version ?
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>>30498197
Nanomachines, son
http://waifu2x.udp.jp
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>>30495103
I just hope KK and Skye and everyone are doing ok. I remember KK saying he was having a rough time for a while there.
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>>30498047
Best spankee right there.
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Gonna do a quick bump, have some ideas for stories that I'm trying to gel.

Now to hide from that promised spanking for my delayed response
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>>30497034
That facial expression is great.

>>30500503
Did you ever pastebin your Heart story? I fell way behind and I know you were eager for feedback.
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>>30500823
Swibble is so fucking cute.
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>>30500719

I didn't pastebin the entire thing...but I can!
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>>30500719
>>30501049

https://pastebin.com/ufJyWEY8

Done! Enjoy, and I look forward to the feedback!
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>>30494789
*excited horse noises*
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A friend of mine draw this.
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>>30496828
>>30497034
These are great. The one from Octavia's perspective is one of your best, in my opinion. Pinkie's back legs and rump look like she's asking for it. It conveys some nervous kicking and her backside is phat as it should be.

>>30501278
I see you finally chose a name for the story. Clever, too.
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>>30502842
That back leg lift though
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>>30503831
That's what a pony does when they can't take the pain. I find it hot.
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Page 9
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>>30502842
I like your friend
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>>30502842
What did Dizzy do this time?
I really like her expression and her bodily reaction.
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>>30506201
>What did Dizzy do?
Bad filly things.
Bad, naughty filly things.
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A quick page 10 bump!

Also a warning that the next time this thread drops to 10, I will be writing a fic in which Scootaloo spanks Milky Way and Nightmare Moon with a flyswatter
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A onesie pajama craze sweeps Equestria. Rarity makes custom designs for the CMCs, despite their insistence that they are NOT foals. Rarity isn't buying it - she knows how often they get spanked just like little fillies. Which is why all the pajamas have dropseats...
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>>30508142

Bump to avoid this fic!
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I have never had to write lines until now. Once I had to handwrite a short essay as punishment, but that was it.

I had a computer helping me for this. Poor Crepuscolo doesn't even have that!

https://derpibooru.org/1381574

"I actually would have expected Twilight to stand in front of that blackboard with a reddened plot, because that’s the proper way to punish bad ponies."

The cane is used in elite society. Canterlot = Painfulplot.

>>30508142
What is the context? Milky Way isn't even on /mlp/ anymore.
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>>30509551
The cane is perfect for royal plots.
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Since we're lacking in greens.
I will leave it to you guys to pick any of my unfinished stories so I will get to it and hopefully finish it.

I'm also fine with starting new one if you got the idea
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>>30510075
Would help to have a list of greens. Links would help too but you don't have to.
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>>30510241
u asked and you got it

>Glory Hole
https://pastebin.com/RUC3nLak
Pony butt suddenly appeared out of nowhere in your bedroom wall

>The Blue Unicorn's Adventure
https://pastebin.com/SA2g62jk
Collection of voted adventure of a blue unicorn.
If I continue this I won't do it in voted format. I will just continue it and end it. you might not like the path I would chose


>Mischievous Dream Spirits
https://pastebin.com/fnigPERP
Shady Daze got visited by a dream spirit that causes him to get spanked in several occasion.
This is an old story I wrote. but I kinda didn't write the final part of it yet. it's missing the finally.

>Anon's Hell (WiP name)
https://hostbatch.com/spankforum/viewtopic.php?f=12&t=198
-anon died and mysteriously forced into a situation where he had to spank a filly or her soul would suffer.
it's a story I wrote without any planning just sat down and wrote it.


_
at first I thought I had a longer list than this. it seems I got on with my stuff and actually finish my stories.

There are also these stories

>A Future Friendship Problem. (remake)
Twilight was summoned to Human Portal (EQG style) to solve a friendship problem in Canterlot high way into the future.

I wanted to rewrite the whole thing with better pacing. and some borrowed elements from some of the RPs it generated.

>Ponyville Mechanical nursery - Part 2
A followup to the story I wrote way back. a faulty mechanical nursey took over ponyville.it doesn't differentiate between foals and adults forces them to be its subjects.
-I planned ahead for this part way back but didn't go through with it because of some DA drama. but till this day I get plenty of requests to continue this.
Part 2 consist of following the story of Applejack teaming up with the TV crew members to infiltrate the Nursery meanwhile Trixie after getting tormented by nursery a lot she learned how to trigger it. and used that to her advantage to humiliate Twilight.
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>>30510522
Glory Hole cracked me up a lot when I read it. I vote that one!
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Oh no, it's page 8
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>>30510522
Mischievous Dream Spirits or The Blue Unicorn's Adventure, but they are all good.
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>>30510522
Where can we read mechanical nursery part 2?
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>>30512798
sorry that I wasn't clear about this
Both (A future problem) and (mechanical nursery part 2) stories haven't been written yet. I mentioned them because they are also stuck in WiP stage like the rest of the list.

>>30510925
>>30512461
I'm leaning more toward finishing the glory hole story. it's short and it's almost done
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>>30512936
Yoooo sounds good mah nig
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>>30512936
Sounds like a good chance for comedy, which you do well with.
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>>30510023
Remembering Cady's caning in one of DC's fics. My boner, unf
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>>30515572
And then Adagio uses that belt she has on her... owwww
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I sent Nomine a PM regarding the collab.

>>30515408
One good thing about the lack of (much) new content is more chances to rediscover old stuff. Lately I looked at:

"Staying out of Trouble" ~A guide by Twilight Sparkle by vega (fuck, there's even a new part since I last read it) https://pastebin.com/rJhtA082
Twilight's Political Plot by vega
Rarity & the Minotaur by vega
One-Swats (Collection of short thread posts)
Lessons in Diplomacy by DCFTEF
Little Mr. Rumble by KrishnaKarnak
Undercover Blues by Nomine (the first one)
KK's Fancy Pants/Rarity story (too new for the Pastebin archive)
even my Sweetie Belle in the Corner

Feedback for newer parts of Staying out of Trouble:
Anon marehandling Twilight by carrying her with her rump accessible for spanks is incredibly hot. The flirtatious grabs and smacks are wonderful. Humor is top notch as always.
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>Glory Hole - Continues
Previous part read
https://pastebin.com/RUC3nLak


>you grabbed her the base of her tail.
>you pulled it up.
>tensing up her butt muscles
>putting her butt in a perfect spanking position.
>you then raised your right hand up in the air.
Smack!
Eeep!
>she clenched her butt while crossing her legs together.
~mummble mummble
>"err nothing it's just th
Smack!
>"Aaaat hah .."
>you didn't give her time to explain herself to whoever she was talking to on the other side.
>you raised your hand again and slapped her on her right butt cheek again.
Smack! Smack smack!

~ an hour earlier
>At Twilight's Castle
>starlight glimmer: "I'm telling you Trixie. Portal studies are dangerous."
>Trixie: nothing is dangerous for the great and powerful trixie, besides Trixie if fully prepared.
>Starlight Glimmer : you don't know what's gonna happen and what's gonna be on the other end"
>Trixie: That's just it. They all say it's dangerous from the fear of the unknown.
>Starlight Glimmer : But ..
>Trixie: Where is your scientific passion Starlight Glimmer ?
>Starlight Glimmer: Alright but let's head down in the royal crystal Vault.
>Trixie: Why do it in the vault it's very cramped there.
>Starlight Glimmer: This is exactly why we are gonna open a portal there. if things go bad we can easily contain it.
>Trixie: wow Trixie is impressed. really thought of everything.
>they both went into the vault and started channeling the portal spell on the floor.
>During the critical moment of that procedure spike opened the vault door and entered the room.
>Starlight Glimmer: Spike Watch out !
>he was about to step inside the portal.
>that's when Trixie abandon her Channeling rune and jumped in to push spike out of the way.
>but half of her body submerged in the portal.
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>>30516530
>Since Trixie no longer inside channeling rune, the portal closed.
>catching her in the middle of it.
>Starlight Glimmer: Trixie are you alright ?
>Trixie: yea I think so
>Spike: I'm sorry Trixie.
>Trixie: "Hey see what have you done. Now I'm stuck"
>Starlight Glimmer: I don't think spike meant to do that.
>Trixie : "don't you stand there pull me already ... hnnnngaaa no I'm still stuck. again.. Hunnggg,,"
>Starlight Glimmer: No use. you wont budge.
>Trixie: It's all your fault. if you haven't interrupted, Trixie wouldn't be in this situation
>Spike : I said I'm sorry... but hey what were you two doing down here in the first place ?
>Starlight Glimmer: well you see.. we ... we were ...
>Trixie : that's none of your business we are here Kyaaaa!
>Starlight Glimmer: What's wrong ?
>Trixie : som.. something just touched me
>Starlight Glimmer: what do you mean touched you , wait you mean from the other side ?
>Trixie: yea from the other side.
>Starlight Glimmer: this is bad we don't know what's type of dimensional creature are we dealing with.
>Spike: Dimensional creatures Twilight told me about them they are slimy and they have a taste for solid objects
>Trixie: I'm Scared I hope wherever that was wont eat me.
..
you know the rest
>back to present
Smack
>Awwe
>Starlight Glimmer was going through the pages of the Portal book. trying to find something about why her friend is in pain.
>Trixie was blushing and not saying what exactly is happening to her on the other side.
>she couldn't suppress her pain.
>her but shade turning from pink to red with each smack.
>Starlight Glimmer: there is nothing here about portal pain trixie. Spike! call Twilight in for help.
>Trixie: NO don't! we'll deal with this ourselves Trixie don't want Twilight's help.
>Starlight Glimmer: it's no time for being stubborn Trixie. I don't know anything about this. the lease we could do is reopen the portal to pull u off.
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>>30516537
>Trixie: No. I refuse to be helped by that arrogant princess.
>Spike: the one being arrogant is you...
>on the other side.
>you stopped spanking her for the moment trying to eavesdrop on their conversation.
>"arrogant princess ... Trixie don't want help ..." what the fuck is she talking about.
>here I am spanking her butt red and she is ignoring me.
>well let's see if she would ignore this
>Trixie: Spike you don't know what 'your precious princes' did to me in Ponyville. she and her Fri-AAAAhhnnnnn
>Trixie's entire face turn completely Red.
>you finally did it.
>you inserted your erect penis inside her mildly wet horse pussy.
>it felt really good as your dick slide inside her warm moist tube.
>you gave her one big thrust.
>going all in.
>and you hold it inside her for the moment.
>She definitely felt that.
>her cute body reaction told you that she liked it.
>She arched her back.
>raising her rump.
>her insides tightened warping around your item.
>you slowly pulled it out.
>you felt like her pussy didn't want your dick to leave, as it was holding on to it.
>once half of your penis was out you quickly thrust her.
>Pushing it back in.
>you heard her moan loudly.
>Both glimmer and spike heard that.
>Trixie quickly shut her mouth up with both her hooves. while her head glowing red.
>Starlight Glimmer quickly cast a see through spell.
>it's a spell that makes it's user see through some objects.
>she saw your dick thrusting her insides.
>she blushed instantly.
>she then pushed spike outside the vault room.
>Spike: why are you doing that Starlight, I'm sure I can be of help?
>Starlight Glimmer: don't worry spike we can handle it.
>Trixie was losing her mind in the process.
>she cannot think anymore.
>she felt like her brain was melting and being dissolved inside her body.
>she was surrendering to her pleasure.
>you continued your work.
>moving in and out.
>you've been holding it for few days.
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>>30516542
>you didn't have time to attend to your needs.
>This was the golden opportunity for you that you didn't want to pass out.
>it felt really good.
>way better than you expected it.
>it felt so wrong but it was feeling so good on the same time.
>your inner desire thought battled with your conscious. and it won the battle.
>screw consequences.
>you thrust her faster and faster to get your mind off it.
>Trixie couldn't handle your penetrating force and speed you are going in.
>she moaned.
>her eyes went blank.
>Starlight Glimmer was amazed of how Trixie was out of her character.
>she find that it really hot.
>she was getting turned on by watching her.
>Starlight Glimmer's pussy was getting wet.
>without thinking her hoof moved on it's own down and she start touching herself as she was watching.
>as you were thrusting her friend.
>then suddenly you stopped and pulled it out of her.
>trixie horsy pussy was winking on it's own.
>She spread her legs apart.
>she pushed her entire backside back and forth.
>as she was inviting you , or asking for more.
>it was both cute and really hot.
>you didn't wait long and gave her a ravaging thrust.
>You went thrusting her like a machine gun.
>going in and out.
>she didn't last long and Came almost instantly.
>wow the was rather fast.
>her pussy wall tightened up even further holding. if not pulling yours in.
>as tight as it may be you still far from done.
>you struggled a bit to pull it out.
>but you did.
>as you pulled it out her love juces fell dripping on the floor.
>"who told you that you are allowed to cum before I do ?"
>Trixie: (#panting) .. huh!
>"Bad pony"
>you slapped her butt again.
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>>30516546

>but this time her reaction was different.
>instead of tightening up and clenching her butt. she relaxed her muscle.
>pushing backward.
>you slapped her seat area. moving your hand upward.
>causing her butt to jiggled up, then it settled back down.
>Her pussy start winking again as you were smacking her.
>she was being submissive.
>not fighting back at all.
>Trixie even moved her tail up herself giving you full view of her goods.
>your left hand moved down to attend you penis.
>her being this submissive turn you on really hard.
>you gave her one hard smack across her right cheek.
>she let out one loud moan from the other side.
>She came again.
>"wow you came from being spanked. you horny slut"
>You grabbed hold of her tail and pulled it.
>you went and panetrate her again.
>this time you showed no mercy.
>you went with full force.
>"there is no holding back now."
>you went thrusting her with full force.
>slamming your body across her hips.
>you can hear her moaning uncontrollably.
>she orgamsied again during your assult.
>it slowed you down a bit but you continued relentlessly.
>she felt like she was going crazy.
>she had a silly satisfied expression on her face. getting her tongue out like a dog.
>glimmer on the other side was fapping hard to this.
>she also reached her climax just from watching her friend fucked silly.
>eventually you reached your limit and finally you came inside her.
>giving her your full load.
>your leg muscle were tensed out.
>even your toes were fully spread and tensed.
>you felt as you blacked out for a min.
>you pulled it out of her and laid down on your bed.
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>>30516551
>you closed your eyes.
>you passed out sleeping.
>when u woke up you were laying there on the bed half naked.
>the wall was fixed as if nothing did happen.
>wait was that a dream ?
>you look down on the floor and saw the mess she did was still there.
>no it wasn't a dream.
>I wonder what that was...

>on the other side in the vault.
>Starlight Glimmer: ok I learned that only one unicorn is needed to open this portal from the channeling rune.
>Trixie: Thank you starlight glimmer.
>Starlight Glimmer: yea don't mention it.
>Trixie: but seriously I was...I mean it was...
>Starlight Glimmer: Don't worry we both did things that nopony else should know about.
>Trixie: It was embarrassing for me. the way I acted in front of you it's....
>Starlight Glimmer: It can't be helped. if it would make you feel better... (blush) I ... masterbated looking at you.
>they both laughed.
>Starlight Glimmer: It's gonna be our little secret.
>Trixie: but spike did see us here.
>Starlight Glimmer: don't worry about spike. he wasn't allowed to be here in the first place I can handle him.
>Trixie: good...
>Starlight Glimmer: but tell me. trixie ... what's it's like ?
>Trixie: (blush) I don't know what you mean.
>Starlight Glimmer: you know exactly what I mean. don't hide it for me tell me.
>Trixie: it was ... Hot. it felt really good. me being helplessly under the mercy of that creature. I'd definitely won't forget that.
>Starlight Glimmer: wow
>few moons later
>they both sneaked into the vault and start opening the portal again.
>this time Starlight took her turn and got her body half stuck in the portal.
>a portal start opening inside your room.
>"I know you'd come again for more"
The End
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>>30508557
>summoning SkyeHigh
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>>30516556
a picture to go with the >Green
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>>30516542
Starlight is a horrible friend, lmao. But how Anon kept going after the "first round" made me stroke my dinky
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>>30516081

I did read your PM, I'm just trying to wrap my head around a few other irl things.

>>30516530
Rustic, I don't have detailed feedback (I will) but as a preliminary remark, this is damned good.

--------------

I'm also bumping with a slight request...I've been looking around for that image of Dizzy, with her bent over a bed in dropseat pajamas, dropseat down. It's not anywhere I can find it, does anyone have it?
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>>30517810
Oh you mean the one Vito draw (from bat thread)
I'm pretty sure you can find it under Dizzy cream folder in their image archive
http://derpy.me/BatPictures
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>>30516551
I'm not normally a fan of the whole spanking during sex thing, but you made it work somehow for me. Might be the sorta bondage feel to everything. Good one bro
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>>30518534
I'm not a fan of it either but somehow it felt right with the story. Glad you liked it

>>30517532
>starlight is horrible friend
Umm why is that?
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>>30515572
Which side? Spike side or flat side?

>>30516815
Seconded.

>>30517810
Take your time. I can do other stuff.
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>>30516815
>>30519335

You guys...you're missing the material components to call a Planar being like Skyehigh.

To start with, you need a proper circle made of the threads of dropseat pajamas, each one worn by a foal who received a week's worth of bedtime spankings. Then into that circle you must place a bowl containing the tears of those spanked foals. Finally, to focus the spell's energy, each of the three summoning him MUST hold a Bathbrush, a Belt, or a hairbrush. Preferably one of each.

Only then can we call forth the Great Skyehigh.
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>>30519723
I do hope he's ok, though. KK too.
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>>30519723
Alright, let's do it.

Where the CMC at? We're gonna need a whole lot of tears.
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>>30517151
If I woke up to that in the morning, I'd be late for work and it would be soooo worth it
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Bumping before bed!
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Bumping after bed
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Which poner would have a secret fetish for watching others get spanked?
They don't want it themself, but if any other pony is getting it, from parents, teachers, in the public stocks, they can't resist watching.
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>>30523559
Fluttershy. It makes sense to me
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>>30523559
Starlight. She's barely reformed as it is and delights in forcing other ponies to do stuff.
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>a secret fetish for watching others get spanked?

Unfortunate Filly: Ohhh Nooo! Teacher just gave me another Bad Behavior letter! My parents are gonna KILL me!
>Spanko Filly: Really? Do you think it'll be that bad? What will they do?
UF: I'm in so much trouble! Last time they told me if I get another of these I'm gonna get a spanking with Daddy's belt!
>SF: R-really? What's that like? [aroused sweating intensifies]
UF: It's AWFUL! He's gonna put me over his lap and whack my poor heinie until it's bright red!
>SF: Oh, wow.
UF: And he won't even take me up to my bedroom for privacy. I'm gonna get it right in the living room! Right in front of everypony...my brothers...guests...any pony who's there!
>SF: Hey, maybe I should come over to your house tonight.
UF: Huh? Why?
>SF: Eh...you know, for moral support. Just because I'm a good friend.
UF: You know, you're kinda weird...
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>>30524298

Is it bad I wanna write this/see it written?

Probably the latter...blame Stardew Valley
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>>30524799
>Is it bad I wanna write this/see it written?
Bad if you want me to write it, because I'm busy enough trying to find time to write my current thing and read you & Rustic's stories.

Good if you want the idea yourself. Go for it.
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>>30524298
Ah, to be any pony in that situation except for the spanker.

>>30524799
Go fetch a switch from one of the trees in Stardew!

>>30517038
>Spanko anon wants to go to Equestria
>Anon can finally know what it's like to be spanked without a safeword, as a kid/colt with no say in the matter
>Boner is at maximum as he thinks about it
>But then he gets in trouble for the first time
>Pure
>Butt-stinging
>Terror

Thinking of Fluttershy's Fetish by DCFTEF
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What pony would you like to be spanked by for parental, diciplinary reasons? You aren't getting out of this.
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>>30526632
I'm a top, so no one really

But I'd pick Fluttershy if I had to
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>>30526632
>>30526809
What did you pervs think of the way they wrote Fluttershy's parents?

Personally, I was disappoint. They could have done a lot better than just bland copies of Fluttershy. Low effort; 3/10
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>>30525779

I've got two spanking projects I'm working on, plus Stardew, plus Summer Cleaning of my apartment, plus trying to figure out responses to Pan's collab.

Guard/Celestia for the first one
Violet/Foal for the second

And possibly a third one, Violet/Violet

>>30525832
You can't get a stick from one of the trees, but I caught a piece of driftwood while fishing, would that work?

>>30526632
Nightmare Moon. Call me crazy (I am), but I'd love to see how that played out.
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>>30526867
I do like her dad because I feel like he would be a great old man spankee, he would not fight back. It would be funny if fluttershy was the spanker like in that one story. Don't know who else would spank him.
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>>30527492
>old man spankee
To each their own I guess, but I have a hard time getting into that.
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>>30526867
Some strictness from at least one of them would have gone a long way. We got strictness from Fluttershy but I can't make the Fluttershy/Zephr spanking work in my head.

Based Anon wrote the oneswat where the mom spanks Fluttershy, and gives a smart reason too (the flight instructor spanks, so she needs to be ready for it). That is a tough pairing to write for.

>>30527492
Are you the one who wrote the Granny Smith spanking story? Or the one who requested it?
>>30528664
I'm like this Anon, I'll have a hard time getting into it, but I encourage you to write it if you want to see it. This thread needs variety and content.
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>>30526867
I cannot take fluttershy and her parents seriously after i read this story
https://pastebin.com/dLU1MEjx
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Butt bump before bed.
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u leave little foals alone for few mins. you come back to see this/

bump
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Just watched the 2nd EqG episode, the movie set one.

Spoiler:
Juniper got fired by her Uncle at the end, and banned from the studio...but did she get a spanking from her parents when they found out all of what she did? Maybe they had her Uncle do it when he came over to tell them why he'd fired their daughter.
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>>30526867
I loved it. So many people assumed Fluttershy was the way she was because her parents were too strict, but turns out it was the opposite, Fluttershy had been the most assertive one in her house all along, so it made sense that she didn't have to get better until she met other ponies outside of her family.
It may be necessary to write the parents ooc to make them spankers, but eh that's usually the case with this fetish anyway.
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>>30531908
>Fluttershy had been the most assertive one in her house all along, so it made sense that she didn't have to get better until she met other ponies outside of her family.
Interesting perspective, one I hadn't considered.
Still doesn't provide much fodder for spanko fetish fics.
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>>30526867
I remember that DC paste where Fluttershy had a very abusive father. The ending was heartwarming and bittersweet at the same time
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Spoiled Rich: Diamnod Tiara the price for your behaviour is a whooping!
Diamond Tiara: Oh sorry I forgot my wallet at home, is on my dad bye!
>chase
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Here is a spanking cropped from a comic in derpibooru: "Sketchbook pProperty of spike", very explicit and anthro.
It has Big Mac diciplining Apple Bloom & Silver Spoon:
http://imgur.com/3GgFMFo
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>>30533145
>silver spoon
u wot m8?
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>>30533175
Fuck. Babs Seed.
Silver Spoon was drawn right below them doing her thing with Diamond Tiara.
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>>30532876
I don't think we have enough "chase" in our stories. the only one I can remember was in Rustic's story about anon and his suit
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You think spanking is common in griffin society?
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>>30534307
I don't know. No one really respects each other in Griffonstone, and their hides are probably thicker
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>>30534952
I like DCFTEF's theory that the hairbrush (featherbrush? furbrush?) is the standard corporal punishment implement for griffons. Really naughty children get the parent to drop the implement and just use their claw.

https://imgur.com/a/68UV5

https://desuarchive.org/mlp/thread/27910069/#27920819

This gets me thinking...

1. Odd that a culture with no hair would have developed hairbrushes. I guess they have fur on their bodies. Nevermind.

2. Perhaps in Griffon culture, spanking with an implement is considered mild, while an open-claw spanking is at the top of the severity scale.
>"Young eaglet, you quit all that squirming this instant! Do you want me to put this paddle down?"
>"Whhhaaa! No Mommy! I'll be good!"

Either way, great stuff as always, Sterny. The Uncle he's her Uncle, right? Or Grandfather? I didn't watch the episode looks suitably crazy.
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>>30535001
I miss Sterny.

That pic is so hot, too, that tail pull UNF
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>>30535434
Love how tight it is. It's not to get it out of the way, it's also to inflict pain.
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>Not having these posted yet
You fellow horsphuckers are loosing your edge!
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>>30536960
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--Mrs.Cinnabelle the Foalsitter--

>Mom , there is an old lady at the door.
>Oh it must be your new foalsitter twily.
>new foalsitter... what happened to Cadence ?
>Cadence's mother said that she was grounded for the weekend.
>But I want miss Cadance not an old fart.
>now now don't be rude to mrs.Cinnabelle.
>Oh hello mrs Cinnabelle it good that you could come on short notice.
>We'll you know I don't live far off. this little filly must be Twilight.
>Go on Twilight. stop hiding behind my legs . go and say hello.
>erm.. hello.
>See she wont bite you twilly. now go upstairs and finish off your homework.
>Twilight is a remarkable little filly. I'm sure she won't be much trouble to you mrs.Cinnabelle.
>Don't worry mrs.Sparkle this is not my first rodeo foalsitting a filly before.
>yea I heard all about you from Cadence mom. she recommended you to us.
>oh little Cadance ... they grow up fast. making us feel really old.
>(#chuckle) yeah, anyhow this is our living room. the kitchen is over there. make yourself comfortable. My son Shining armor is in his room studying. he is also grounded so make sure he stays in the house.
>Grounding eh. as if that gonna teach a colt like him anything.
>are you questioning my parenting ?
>Oh no ... how rude of me. I'm sure your son earned his grounding.
>anyhow as I was saying. Twilight is a remarkable unicorn. she likes bursting her magic experimenting on things. so keep an eye on her. make sure she doesn't burn the house down.
>Canterlot and the prodigy young unicorns. am I right ?
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>>30537033
>FAST FORWARD
>it is almost dinner time.
>The house was almost too quiet.
>Both Twilight and shining are in their rooms.
>Suddenly a loud ruckus was heard coming from Twilight's room.
>Mrs.Cinnabelle went upstairs to check it out.
>She flung Twilight's door open.
>Twilight Sparkle !
>Eeep! it was an accident.
>you bit it is. look at the mess you made. you sprayed ink all over the place.
>it's just that I cast come to life spell on the Quill and it stopped listening to me.
>Cast a spell you say ... What did your parents say about using magic inside the house ?
>... Um..
>Your silence said it all. you know that you are not supposed to use these experimental magic ... not until you graduate from your magical kindergarten.
>I'm ... I am sorry mrs cinnabon.
>It's Cinnabelle . and your half assed apology won't cut it. This wasn't the first time you did that. A misbehaving filly have to be punished.
>P p punished .. am I gonna be g grounded ?
>You bet you will. but that's after you get your spanking.
>A spanking ?
>Mrs.Cinnabelle had a serious stern look on her face. Twilight knew she meant business.
>no not a spanking. my mom won't allow it.
>Your mother left you in my care. stop stalling and go bend over the bed.
>No! you can't do this..
>Twilight did what any filly would do in her situation. she tried to run away.
>She tried to run pass mrs.Cinnabelle .
>but to her surprise. the old lady jumped at her and caught her.
>both twilight and mrs.cinnabelle are laying in the hallway.
>Mrs.Cinnabelle didn't waste any time. she sat down straight and pulled twilight on her lap.
>Twilight was squirming and kicking. trying to escape the mare's grip.
>Let me go. you can't do this.
>Stop squirming or I'll be even more sorry about this.
>noo
>She had a firm grip on twilight's waist. securing her in position bending over her lap.
>with her other free hoof she gave twilight 2 light taps on her rear preparing for her smacks.
>twilight stopped squirming.
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>>30537255
>Twilight lowered her tail. and covered her butt with her hooves.
>No stop it's embarrassing.
>Move your hooves.
>no please I'll be good.
>I said move your hooves or I'll spank them.
>It was a mistake . I'll clean my room no spankie.
Smack
>Aww ! aw aw
>The foalsitter did smack the back of the young filly's hooves.
>Twilight immediately moved her hooves out of the way.
>That's it and keep them forward. now move your tail.
>err. emm...
>pfft I don't have time for this.
>She pulled Twilight tail using her mouth and moved it out of the way.
>aww aww you are tugging my tail.
>she raised her thighs bumping the filly body moving it a bit forward.
>forcing her to raise her rump up.
>then mrs.Cinnabelle raised her hoof up and Smacked the filly butt.
>Aww! Twilight let out a loud cry across the hallway.
>this wasn't settled with 1 smack. she continued punishing the naughty little filly.
Whap! then she massage the filly rump a bit then gave her another one Whap!
>Twilight was in shock. she haven't been spanked in ages. it brought her some bad memories.
>she didn't hold back.
>she cried and bursted into tears almost instantly.
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>>30537285
>after what felt like forever for the little filly.
>mrs.Cinnable stopped. (after 20 smacks)
>Twilight was sobbing.
>get up.
>she lead twilight inside her room.
>she pulled her toward the corner.
>Now stay here and think of what you did.
>twilight stood there rubbing her well spanked pink butt.
>no rubbing. sit down and put your hooves on top of your head.
>I'm going to the kitchen it's almost time for dinner. you stay there until I told you so.
>mrs.Cinnable left twilight there inside her room.
>as she was going down the stairs she noticed that someone was creeping in from the window.
>it was shining armor trying to sneak outside climbing the living room's window.
>mrs.cinnable stood right behind him.
>Shining armor !
>he panicked and let go of the window frame. and it fell onto his waist.
>oww.. mrs. cinnabon you scared me.
>It's Mrs.Cinnabelle and where do you think you're going young man ?
>err, the weather was nice I wanted to feel the wind on my mane ...
>how Charming. wait who is that .
>she saw somepony outside the house.
>Hey is that you Cadance ?
>EEeep ! mrs.Cinnabelle ?
>Cadence saw her old foal sitter and was about to run away.
>Don't you even think about it Caddy.
>Cadence closed her eyes and stopped on the spot.
>That's it I know where you live. you come back right here.
>She let Cadence inside.
>Both Cadence and shining armor sat down on the couch.
>So you both were grounded and you tried to sneak out to the concert ...
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>>30536963
muh dick
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>>30537312
I like where this is going...
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>>30537312
Both punished together, oh it's so beautiful to think about

They're gonna need more than just a measly little hoof, too
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>>30537255
>>30537285
Cute.
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>>30537312
>>30537555
I don't have time to continue this today.
And yeah that's what I'm going for.
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>>30538481
Fuck yeah

Shiny would have a hard time explaining a boner if he witnessed Cady squealing and kicking her hoofies with a red bottom on display. Awkward.
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>>30537312
This appeals perfectly to my interests.
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>Fluttershy slowly aproached her mother, who was reading a magazine in the living room
>She had a paper in her hands
>She was about to talk to her mother about it, but hesitated
>"What is it, dear?"
>Too late now
>"Uhm... mum... my test..."
>"Oh, let's see it"
>Without wasting an instant, Mrs. Shy snatched the test out of her daughter's hands
>She accomodated her glasses as she put the test right in fron of herr eyes
>Specifically, the score
>Her eyes widened
>Fluttershy gulped
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>>30540059
An A that is unacceptable, how dare you do better than your brother. Jk
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>>30540059
>"Fluttershy, I can NOT believe what I'm seeing."
>Oh no
"I know this subject is hard for you but this is RI-DI-CU-LOUS""
>That tone
>"I'm SO dissapointed"
>That ridiculous, exagerated tone
>"I mean LOOK AT THIS!"
>She pointed at the score with a mischevous smile
>B+
>"In this house we ONLY accept As. Come over here"
>She made Fluttershy bend under one of her arms and harmlessly patted her butt with the other
>"Mooomm"
>"Hush, Fluttershy, I'm disciplining you" she said holding back laughter
>Fluttershy had been so scared about this test, and studied so hard, but wondered if it was worth this embarassing attempt at sarcasm
>Had she failed the test her mother would have just told her to study harder
End
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>>30540129
Sorry I did not see you were finishing, oops. I liked your ending though.
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>>30540138
No problem just don't tell Mrs. Shy or she'll dicipline you too
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>>30540129

I confess, I laughed. I laughed a lot.
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>>30540129
Next time Flutter gets an F on purpose

Cuz no butt pattsies for Flutterz
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>be a filly
>you threw a temper tantrum in public
>not sure what came to you
>now you find yourself looking directly to the floor
>laying over your mom's... back
>she's carrying you somewhere
>you fear that you know where that somewhere is
>now you are inside the house
>she stops for a second
>you wonder why
>maybe she picked something up....
>...with her mouth?
>you look towards her head
>you can't see her face
>but you can see... it
>a hairbrush
>she's carrying it with her mouth
>oh shit
>you try to escape
>jump off and run
>but she reacts in time every time
>gives a quick jump that sends you back in place
>your belly resting over her back
>suddendly she stops in place
>you hear the hairbrush falling to a table
>suddendly she picks like a cat
>from the back of your neck by her mouth
>you can do nothing as she turns 180* and sits down
>you fall
>you are looking directly at the floor again
>but now you are laying across your mom's.... lap!
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>>30541545
>before you can move or say anything you feel the first smack in your bottom
>"OUCH!!"
>They keep coming relentlessly
>you cry and kick and try to escape
>to no avail
>"MOOOMMYYY!!!"
>she keeps going for a few seconds and then she stops
>you try to catch your breath
>then you hear a sound...
>she's picking the brush!
>She wasn't using it yet!
>you let a high pitched scream, eyes wide open
>you reach out with your front legs as far as you can
>like you want to escape through the window in the wall in front of you
>she delivers a strong smack after every syllabe
>"NO * MORE * TEM * PER * TAN *TRUMS * * * "
>you bawl your heart out
>the spanking stopped but it hurts so much
>mom caresses you as you let it all out
>finally she picks you up and makes you stand on her lap
>hugs you
>your sight gets obscured by her mane
>"Will you be a good girl next time?"
>"Yes mommy"
>"Good"
>she picks you up again and puts you in the floor
>finally, freedom
>"Ajem... where do you think you are going, missy?"
>"...huh?"
>she points towards the wall
>"Muzzle straight to the corner, on two legs, no peeky, no rubby, you stay there until I tell you"
>sigh
>you do as she says
>being so against the corner makes it look so dark
>it's so sore
>you're so sorry
>you hear some noises you recognize
>sitting and paper
>she's reading a book right behind you
The End
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>>30541568
>no peeky, no rubby

My dicky is happy-y

The baby talk was just right, not too crazy but enough to make me moist
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>>30541568
Love the mommy talk!
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>>30531390
>You keep getting fired and burning bridges! The only thing you're good at is getting spanked!
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>>30541164
>"An F.... I mean, wow.... You must have really... studied. You know, I think words may not be enough. Such a HIGH score deserves a... prize. Come over here.
* SMACK SMACK SMACK SMACK... *
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>>30496828
>violin bow
It reminds me of this gif
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Diamond Dog spanking pony slave for refusing to work. No happy ending for the pony. Would that appeal to you?
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>>30545480
as long as it's not too brutal I could fap to it
not every story needs a happy ending as long as the spanking is good
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>>30480270
>you know damn well Bright Mac saved Pear Butter from getting a thrashing

Unsuccessfully.
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>>30545480
>>30545494
Ever heard what dog food is made of?
>"Your choice, slave: The paw or the meat grinder."
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>>30545587
Unf. Funny what a little bit of red on the ass does for my penis
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>>30545587
I love these crude edits.
they are somehow effective
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>>30545587
But she did nothing wrong

Grand Pear is a real hard ass
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>>30547476
Gotta keep them in check just in case.
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>>30545587
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>>30547476
>she did nothing wrong
Fillies who make goo-goo eyes at colts their father doesn't approve of get their rumps roasted.
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>>30547876
The Captain approves.
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>>30547876
They both look a bit small in relation to the bed, but this is one of your most clean, polished looking of all your black & white sketches.

Really nice work, Rustic.
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>>30547876
Poor Pear.
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>>30480251
Finally official faces for all those fanfics where they spank their children.
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>>30549341
Yeah, though I doubt those fics capture their parents accurately from the show anymore, kek

I can't picture Bright Mac and Pear Butter spanking their kids as hard as some of the stories have had them spank, now that we know what they're like
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>>30547876
Grand Pear just looks sadistic, but then again who wouldn't like tanning a filly's tushy bright red, right?
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>>30549341
>>30549476
I don't actually recall any stories where AJ and Mac get spanked by their parents.

>>30549824
>Grand Pear just looks sadistic
It's the smile. If his grin was turned downward he wouldn't look like he's enjoying it.
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>>30549981
Zad wrote some. DC had Granny spanked by her parents.
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>>30545480
A lot of anons come out of the woodwork whenever someone posts a brutal story. I want to say I couldn't enjoy it, but I've been wrong in the past when people push the limits in this thread.

>>30545813
This is horrifying.
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>>30545587
NO!
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>>30549824
>sadistic
Totally not my intention. As the other anon said, the frown should be downward instead.

But what if he was sadistic abusive father?
I don't recall any story in our thread that had that.

>>30548973
>yea The scaling is off. I don't pay much attention to this stuff when I'm practicing with new poses. Especially when sketching in flockmod.

>clean
It's cause I used different drawing tool. It can imitate pencil stroke.
Glad that you noticed.

>>30547876
One thing no one mentioned yet.
Is it clear to you guys that she is biting her hoof ?
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page 10
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>>30553273
>Is it clear to you guys that she is biting her hoof ?
I have to admit it wasn't.
It looked to me like her mouth was just open really wide, crying.
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>>30553273
>Is it clear to you guys that she is biting her hoof ?
To me it is, though I'll admit the hoof needs to be rounder especially down there (with ticker lines so it doesn't look like something from the background).
Great picture btw.
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>>30547932
I feel a switch coming on.
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>>30551191
Zad's are intense
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>>30553273
>But what if he was sadistic abusive father?
pls no
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Marble Pie secretly loves being held over a strong stallion's lap and being spanked silly when?
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Time for bed
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>>30557413
Meanwhile Limestone loves to spank bad big colts, right?
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Image is in movie style

https://derpibooru.org/1480892
I want to give Pinkie a sharp smack with the riding crop and tell her that is what she will get if she is a naughty pony.
Then I will take her around Ponyville to go on errands with me.
Every time she reaches a hoof back to rub the sting away, she finds the leash catching her off-balance, lurching her forward back onto all fours.
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>>30558733
That image is so hot I can't even
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>>30557942
She probably secretly loves being dominated, too
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>>30547932
Poor filly
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Page 9 spank
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Page 8 spank
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>>30537312
I finished the rest of the story but somehow I didn't like how it turned out.
I will go in a different direction and rewrite the rest of it.
Even though my original plan was a short story so I'm gonna stick with that. Writing the spanking scenes themselves are really hard for me.
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>>30562314
>Writing the spanking scenes themselves are really hard for me.
Same here.
There's only so many ways you can write a scene like that. The build-up and the dénouement are my favorite parts to write.
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>>30562314
Don't worry too much, even if it ends up being meh we will appreciate it. Hell, we've had people post and do rewrites before and it was great, no worries
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Tred ded
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>>30564150
no wonder why, the whole thread look like several guys circlejerking on a blog
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>>30564207
true.
it can't be helped if we know each other. at least I'm doing something about it and actually posting greens , drawing and shit instead of just whining about it.

http://imgur.com/HUIHyUv
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>>30564280
Your contribution is much appreciated. I'm really interested in your latest story.
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>>30564280
Love ya m8
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>>30564567
I miss Sterny
His art was so much muh dick
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Found these on derpi
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>>30566787
Good find, need to go on there more often!
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>>
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>>30567600
I just realized that we need more Starlight comeuppance.

How's about a harsh public paddling regiment for a whole month, you know, for penance?
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>>30567604
I always kinda liked this one. The stocks especially.

>>30567647
Nomine and I are throwing around ideas for a Twilight & Starlight regression story. Starlight acts like a little shit in the show and definitely needs some comeuppance.
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>SDCC panel teases/jokes a 'yes/maybe' to someone asking if Sunset is Celestia's daughter

joke or no i find that an interesting prospect. I wish bluejay could come back because he does the best mommy spankings that Sunset needs
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Oh no, page 8
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>>30568143
>implying I ever left
Always lurking, but never posting...

I'm partial the idea that Celestia was a bit distant towards Sunset and let her work things out for herself, but came to regret doing so, and took on a more personal/motherly role towards her next apprentice to make up for it.
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>"Young colt this is NOT a negotiation, you deserve this spanking."
>"But MOOOM you already spanked me!!"
>"That is a lie and I don't know what you are taking me for."
>"But it's true!! You spanked me three times in a row now!!"
>"Enough! We are not wasting any more time with this nonsense. Over the lap you go!"
>WHAP WHAP WHAP WHAP
>"OUCH! Stooop! Heeelp! BWAAAAHHH!!!"
>Outside the house, Poniville was in utter and complete chaos
>The ancient trickster known as Discord was free from his prison and had turned the Elements of Harmony unusable
>Among the many twisted pranks he had pulled and was to pull, he decided to trap some family inside some house in a time loop
>But not the son, however, as Discord felt he suffered enough having such strict parents
>Or maybe not enough, it's hard to tell with him
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>It's not your mane that's being brushed this time, young filly...

>>30570439
Fucking kek. Based Anon you always hit me with really funny and hot stories that are super creative.
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https://desuarchive.org/mlp/thread/29648785/#29679060

Give and Take

>orange filly steals from shop in Ponyville
>shopkeeper chases the thief but loses track
>shopkeeper finds another filly (Scootaloo) who looks the same as the thief
>Pleading and promising from Scootaloo that she didn't do it
>keeper spanks her until Granny Smith intervenes
>"Ya didn't do it?"
>"No ma'am!"
>Granny puts her hoof on the filly's rear
>"Ya SURE?"
>(...!) "N-no Granny!"
>She spanks her right cheek, then her left
>(Aaah!)
>"Positive?"
>"Really Granny!"
>"Let 'er go, miss... no filly can lie with a backside that red."
>The owner is embarrassed now for having disciplined the wrong filly
>"Sorry Granny, I thought..."
>"Ya didn't think nothin'."
>"Hehe, I guess you could say that."
>She is nervous now
>Granny is unpredictable and known to have an antiquated style
>Owner tries to make it right
>"Sorry, young filly. How about I take you back to my shop and make it up to you?"
>Sure enough, Granny had an opinion on this
>"That's smart. ... But it don't do much for the smarting in her fanny."
>Granny points to Scootaloo's rump and she blushes
>"Yes that's a shame Granny but she will have to talk about this with me back at my store. C'mon, little one."
>She starts walking, hoping to end the awkward encounter
>But it's just starting
>Granny bites the owner's ear and pulls back on it, making her poor ear stretch tight
>(OW!)
>She stops moving
>But this just seals her doom as Granny knows it works and keeps pulling
>Walking backwards to the very same stump Scootaloo was just smacked on
>(AH!) "Stop what are you doing?"
>"Hold yer horses. Just givin' you the same medicine ya gave Scootaloo,"
>" 'Cept -you- got the chance to be cured by it."
>Granny sat on the stump
>Any non parent would have an impossible time maneuvering a squirming, anxious, desperate pony over their lap for a well-earned spanking
>But Granny had more practice than almost any pony in Ponyville
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>>30571477
>Not just with her children and grandchildren, but all their friends
>And any foal with the nerve to steal from Sweet Apple Acres soon lost their thieving spirit
>Right around the time they found out how many nerve endings a pony's posterior has...
>Much to some foals' mortification, Granny would even have impromptu corporal punishment lessons
>Whenever Granny found out a family didn't spank, and were at their wits' end, she invited them to the barn for some Apple hospitality
>Some squeamish parents wouldn't want their precious foal spanked until they were sure how it worked
>In those horrible cases, the Apple family fillies and colts had to take turns being the demo rump

>Granny knew this pony would be feisty
>so she took the needed precautions right away
>Tail pinned to her back, along with her dominant hoof
>the one this mare spanked Scoot with

>"Kicking and bucking already and we haven't even started yet. My my..."
>Granny patted the round flesh in front of her
>"Have ye ever been spanked, missy?"
>"NO! And I'm not going to start now!"
>"That's not what it looks like from up here."
>"Fact is, I can barely hear yer bellyaching 'cause yer head is so far away."
>"I figure I should take my answers from yer butt instead."
>"It's higher up." (PAT PAT)
>"How 'bout I deliver this message to you, you naughty rump?"
>"Can you pass it on to your owner?"
>Granny swore she just watched this rump shake "no"
>"And I'll just watch your expression and listen for any sounds you make to know if I'm getting through." (PAT PAT)
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>>30571482
>that sets her off for sure
>Before, it was like she was trying to run off Granny's lap
>Her butt was mentioned, and so unceremoniously patted
>So she started squirming left and right, like she could tumble off Granny's capable lap
>She repeatedly flexed and unflexed her glutes, like her tush would avoid its imminent pain with their feeble motion
>(SWAT) "You can't do this! I'm a grown mare!"
>"A grown mare who's never had her hide tanned."
>"No wonder yer so--" (SWAT) "darn--" (SMACK) "uppity." (WHACK)
>"Maybe I should have you come to the farm every week for a month or two and learn all about corporal punishment."
>"Ah could teach ya about the wooden spoon..." (SPANK)
>"The switch..." (SPANK)
>"The riding crop..." (SPANK)
>"OW That won't be necessary! AH PLEASE"
>"How many years do you have on Scootaloo? Can't be more than fifteen." (SWAT)
>"AH I don't know ma'am!"
>"Ya think I'm on the right track?" (SPANK)
>"NO Yes ma'am!"
>"Fifteen." (SWAT)
>"Has a nice ring to it. How about fifteen more?"
>She's kicking into a panic now
>"ARE YOU CRAZ- OW OW OW YES THAT SOUNDS FINE GRANNY!"
>Some lower sitspot smacks take the resistence right out of her

>Fifteen (was it fifteen yet?) felt like an eternity to the miscreant shopkeeper
>For Granny Smith the time flew by
>"Now that we're just about through, I like the idea ye had."
>"Take this here filly back to yer shop and make things right."
>"I'm going to ask her later if you made amends, and so help me if she is not satisfied..."
>"I will march you onto the front stoop of yer store and spank you in front of all of Ponyville."
>"I hope now you realize how much power we mares wield. One last thing."
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>>30571489
>"You! For whuppin' this poor filly's bottom when her butt ain't done nuthin' to deserve it!"
>she smacks her hindquarters, nothing new
>"And you!
>She's focused on Scootaloo now
>"For all the shenanigans I know you and your insolent little rear-end get up to without anypony findin' out!"
>(WHACK)

>"Get going, you two!"
>(they respond simultaneously)
>"Y-yes ma'am!"
>they scamper off, both with matching red tushes
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>>30570439
Who is going to spank discord for that, fluttershy, twilight or the princess? On the other hand, what if he accidentally turned into the colt being spanked?
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>>30571497
Great story pan.
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>>30571482
>Fact is, I can barely hear yer bellyaching 'cause yer head is so far away."
>"I figure I should take my answers from yer butt instead."
>"It's higher up." (PAT PAT)
>"How 'bout I deliver this message to you, you naughty rump?"
>"Can you pass it on to your owner?"

Ohhhh my dick is so humongous right now. That was so hot.
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>>30571482
>>30571489
Justice at last! Well, partially. The real thief is still out there. Still, good for Scootaloo.
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>>30571497
Should Scootaloo be the one to spank the real culprit? I bet Scootaloo also feels bad for the shopkeeper since she got her stuff stolen.
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>>30573549
Getting bucked I think would just break your pelvis, shudder
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>>30574050
It's alright, she has experience.
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>>30573295
Detective Scootaloo is on the case!

And of course, getting into plenty of trouble and getting into things she shouldn't, but Scootaloo is going to find the culprit no matter what!
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Pencils made a new comic

It happened

https://derpibooru.org/1492532?q=artist%3Apencils
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>>30570439
Top unf.
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>>30576137
They keep teasing and almost doing it. I want Pencils to go through with it.
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>>30577942
Me too! Ever since that one page where Cloudy scolds Limestone I've been hoping. Now with this page we know that spanking is in fact on the brain for pencils.

IT'S POSSIBLE
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>I told you not to play with mommy's magic; some of that is too powerful for a little filly!
spank spank spank...

>>30571645
What if they turn him into a colt and put him in the time loop he made?

There is a lot of poetic justice in intentionally setting up a spanking scenario, only to be forced into it yourself. That would be hot in a different way from just Celestia turning him into a colt and putting him in the time loop.

>>30571650
Thanks!

>>30571732
It shouldn't be, but it is. Thanks <3

>>30572197
>>30573295
I think Scoot got some satisfaction watching all this play out. Thought about adding some lines to that effect, or having Granny tell her to scoot but having her stay hidden and watch.

Granny discovering that she stayed could be the new reason for her swat at the end. In the story, Scoot is never actually spanked for anything she did. What kind of unfair justification is Granny's?! Adults have eyes on their flanks, no foal can get away with anything.

Any bad feelings for the shopkeeper may have disappeared once Scoot was spanked unjustly. Perhaps after she and her keister have had a chance to cool off she's willing to help.

>>30575575
Sounds like she needs to team up with Nomine's Button detective agency.

>>30573549
Sternymares made an image like this with AJ/Rainbow Dash I think. His looked more plausible and pelvis-safe >>30574050
than this one.
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Her expression changes as you apply the brush to other parts of her body.

Here are the stories in #40. The Desuarchive of this thread will automatically make links to the other posts from the post numbers.

https://desuarchive.org/mlp/thread/30477680

Anon-dad and Equestria Girls by Anon (unfinished) https://desuarchive.org/mlp/thread/29648785/#q29649643
untitled by RusticAnon (Teacher/filly, husband/wife) >>29675087
Dressing Down by Pan (Mom/filly) https://pastebin.com/3c4RNZqV (pastebin is revised version) >>29692136
Punishment by Nomine >>29704045

(skipped 3 stories that got continued in later threads)
>>
need to step up our game.

here is some ideas that I had in my mind
>Queen Chrysalis is in her weakest state
>She was desperate to feed on alternative resources.
>she tried to feed on Sexual desires (instead of love)
>she learned that a human males is the creature with the most sexual desires.
>so she kidnaps you.
>they tied you up with your hand on top of your head.
>she tried to sexually stimulate you.
>one of her few loyal minions have a special way of probing your brain.
>She learn that you have a thing for seeing butts get slapped.
>they did not understand it but they worked with it.
>Chrysalis ordered her minion to perform for you.
>one of them transformed into RainbowDash.
>the other one transformed into derpy.
>Rainbow Dash bent over while Derpy delivered soft smacks to RD's rear.
>it did something for you but it wasn't much.
>you can see through their cheesy act.
>Chrysalis ordered them to put some effort into it. and go harder.
>hearing the word harder made your weewee happy for a bit.
>the two changelings did try to get into that role.
>Derpy smacked rainbow dash's but a bit harder which made RD eep!
>chrysalis wasn't amused by their performance.
>You two good for nothing let me show you how it's suppose to be done.
>we're sorry your highness.
>she grab held to derpy's hoof and pushed her right next to RD.
>the Queen then delivered the spanking herself.
>she punished them hard.
>hard enough to make you go Stiff.
>owe owe we are sorry they pleaded.
>which made wonders to you.
>the Queen ofc noticed your raging boner.
>She got to you and stripped down your pants.
>she started sucking your dick.
>it felt really amazing.
>but somehow you couldn't finish.
>you felt your energy is being drained away.
>your raging boner is gone.
>almost lost your sexual activity that was raging on.
>No this wasn't enough - she said.
>we need more stimulation...
>she ordered her minions to sexually stimulate you.
>they all gang up on you.
>they transformed into random ponies.
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>>30580393
>they all tried to stimulate you.
>there was a pony rubbing herself on your arms.
>two of them licking your neck.
>one of them sucking your hand.
>another one just sat down on your other hand.
>All these were happening while the queen was feeding of your sexualing desire.
>Draining you off.
>they kept going at this for a little while.
...
>this is making you go crazy.
>all this stimulation and denying your release.
>this made you feel mad.
>your inner rage starting to build up.
>you can feel your body is boiling up.
...
>then you lost control of yourself.
>you went fully berserk.
>your body just stopped listening to your commands.
>a burst of strength came into you out of nowhere.
>you were able to break your bonds.
>you through off the changelings ponies off you.
>they were startled of what has they awakened.
>the Little minions were no match for you.
>the queen had to interfere.
>she tried to bind you with her magic.
>but she failed you were too enraged for her.
>you managed to pushed her ... throwing her across the chamber.
>her minions tried to protect their queen.
>two of them jumped at you.
>you grabbed one under your arm and dodged the other one.
>you gave the pony under your arm 5 hard smacks on her butt then dropped her on the floor.
>the poor changeling transformed back into his normal self.
>then it ran off while holding his butt sobbing.
>another one jumped at you and punched you in the face.
>you didn't flinch. you just bear hugged that pony.
>then held her with one hand and gave her few Hard smacks.
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>>30580543
>the rest of them charge at you at the same time.
>you used the pony in your arms as a shield.
>you aimed her butt to cushion the blows and kicks.
>the poor pony shrieked in pain.
>she just laid down crying as you dropped her on the floor.
>you fight the rest of the ponies that came at you.
>and sent them flying ..knocking them on the floor.
>another pony came at you with flying kick.
>you grabbed both her legs.
>and eate her pussy up.
>she moaned in pleasure.
>you then tossed her off.
>your boner were fully restored.
>you grabbed the tail of one of the fallen ponies and pulled it up.
>the changeling knew what is coming to him.
>he reverted back to his original form.
>this infuriate you.
>you smacked his butt ordering him to change back.
>After a very short rebellion he changed back to mare. sobbing.
>without hesitation you fucked him hard.
>It didn't take long and he orgamsimed in her mare form.
>he came hard.
>meh you're no good you pulled it out and went for another one..
>they aren't trained to deal with this type of situation.
>ponies don't last that long in sexual encounter.
>you went on fucking spree going from one pony to another.
>that's when the Queen finally regained her strength.
>she then had to act quick.
>she jumped at you dropping you off your feet.
>as you fell down she immediately start sucking your dick trying to drain you.
>Oh no you don't.
>you grabbed her from her horn and pushed her off you.
>you are not gonna get off that easily.
>you didn't know that but grabbing her horn kinda dampen her power weakening her.
>you maneuvered her pulling her over your lap.
>you wanted to spank the queen silly.
>but you noticed that she doesn't even have a spankable butt.
>Change for me!
>what
>You heard me change!
>you said that while firmly squeezing off her horn.
>it kinda hurt her and made her obey you no question.
>she changed into cadence.
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>>30580716
>her butt went from hard chitin to a beautiful bubbly candy butt.
>much better.
>you immediately start spanking her.
>unleashing all your rage on her.
>multiple reasons going through your head as you were spanking her hard.
>Smack smack smack
>she kidnaped you out of nowhere.
>Smack smack....
>the queen was protesting. squirming kicking.
>she was mumbling ... but you were too busy with your raging thoughts.
>tied you up like an animal.
>Smack smack
>the poor queen couldn't take it anymore she started sobbing
>using you as her guinea pig.
>smack smack smack.
>her pink candy butt turn blazing red.
>sexually stimulate you.
>Smack smack...smack...
>using your little minions to do your dirty work.
>Smack smack
>The queen just lost it and start bawling like a little filly.
>hearing her bawl made you stop.
>now then what do you have to say for yourself ?
>She tried to got over her hiccups and said that she was sorry.
>Sorry ?
>you pushed her off your lap and she fell on the floor.
>you went behind her and raised her rump up by her tail.
>Sorry for what ?
>you grabbed both her hips.
>then you pushed your dick inside her.
>Fucking her.
>trying to finish yourself off.
>she laid there arching her back to you leaving her top down and her butt up for you as you continued to fuck her.
>she was being totally submissive .
>she lasted longer than her minions.
>you fucked her good.
>till you finally able to reach your climax.
>you came inside her filling her with your white cream that line was so cheesy
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>>30580817
>you lost consciousness after that.
>the next thing you know was you were laying in your bed at home.
>was it all just a wild dream ?
>you never know if it was or not.
>meanwhile
>Queen , that was quite a show we have pulled right ?
>minions: yes your highness it was pretty convincing .
>Queen : Look at all this lust energy we drained.
>minion : and it was all from 1 human.
>Queen : few more and we will be more powerful than all the princess combined.
>minion : when are we gonna get the next human ?
>Queen : in a few days.
>~I don't think my butt can take anymore beating. "It need some time to heal"
>You said something my queen ?
>ah no.. hey Stop reading my mind... come back here...

END
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NEW GREEEEEN
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>>30580227
I usually write down some updates in our forum archive but lately as I was transferring the forums to our new host. I kinda slacked in the department (I'm not really sure if anyone ever read those.)

speaking of Archives
https://hostbatch.com/spanking/index.php/fanfic/
Thats still a thing.

I tried many other formats... and "Wordpress" plugins for our story archive. and I think it's the best thing I tried so far.

It got a
>simi-complicated Tag search.
>Registred users can post their stories there.
>HTML codes
and it kinda looks ok on phones
the other parts of the sites aren't that great and needs a lot of work.
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>>30580393
Awesome setting.
>>30580543
Unexpected turn of events.
>>30580716
Oh my
>>30580817
unf
>>30580867
Holy shit. Awesome work.

Changelings always get great spanking stories.
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>>30582814
The search system is a huge asset on there. It simplifies things into categories very well, so newcomers can search by category of implement, character, word length, etc. and find what they're looking for without being in on the whole thread necessarily. Very nice potential there. It's worth expanding on.
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"Oh my. It appears to me that even a 1000 year trip to the moon was not enough of a punishment for you."
"Unclaw us, you ruffian!"
>Discord is taking Luna by the ear off to who knows where
>She still doesn't know even after the voyage ended
>He went through a portal and now here they are

What's she in trouble for?

>>30582814
I didn't need an archive for the newer posts initially. But as the months are going by it's harder to remember.

I just want everything organized for an archiver to come through and put everything in a proper archive. If it's too much work you don't have to do it.

>>30580867
fucking kek and pretty hot too. A little too chaotic for me to focus on any one scene and fap but I tried.

You used the changelings very well here. They transform into different ponies and have other abilities that only changelings have.

Ending was funny:
>You said something my queen ?
>ah no.. hey Stop reading my mind... come back here...

>>30583023
The Google archive has a tag system (just plain text, you're supposed to use the find function). I wonder how hard it would be to port those over.

I'm satisfied with just the pastebin, Rustic, so don't put in effort on a fancy archive without being sure people will use it.
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>>30583886
I'm perfectly fine with pastebin for our story archive. I'm one of those people who don't like to fix what's not already broken.
But pastebin have some limitations , as only specific people can modify it and add stuff.
We all appreciate skyehigh s work for keeping the archive going. But he is only human he got busy lately and didn't update the archive for quite a while .

What I really want to create a webpage , that contains a list and links for all our stories just like the one we already have (skyehigh's list). But with some extra features like can be edited by multiple users - and have better categories and search engine.

Glad you liked the story
>too chaotic , could not focus.
understandable , I usually tone the chaos down. But I kind did all this story in one take.

>ending
Even thou I did the entire story in one take , the idea was circling in my head for quite a while I wrote like 7k words(not letters) story about this.
The mind reading changing was supposed to be chrysalis's little sister . I skipped that so I can focus on the chaos.

Mind reading was her special talent. Chrysalis was force obedience. There was two other characters that I totally not mentioned them.
Chrysalis little sister was supposed to be clumsy and naive when it comes to seduction and feeding.
Like
>she was suppose to arouse you
>she bent over in front of you.
>she shook her butt and said
>Im a naughty little filly... Spank me anon
>she said that while touching herself.
>she continued stroking herself.
>her face start to flush
>she enjoyed it and continued till she climax
>queen chrysalis face hoofed herself.
>you were supposed to stimulate him not your self.

>>30583004
Good to know that you enjoyed it. Changings got so much spanking potentials
Their needs
Queen and her swarm
Shapeshifter ability
...etc
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>>30584204
changelings also can have hivemind, and either feel pain or not feel pain to suit the needs of the story. And there was the telepathic spanking idea which we got a oneswat for.
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>>30583886
>What's she in trouble for?

Bein a gaynigga
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>>30583023
It just needs fleshing out and the full library. If it has that everything else will fall in place.
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>>30533617
I hate it when guys burst through my window and slap me on the ass.
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>>30562314
Thread is dead. Any hope of posting the version you don't like?
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Hm.
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>>30591253
You said it the thread is dead.
I just posted an entire new green
>>30580393
The expanded upon it. it didn't help much keeping the thread alive.
Besides I feel abit invested in that Mrs.cinnable story I don't want to rush it
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>>30588167
Would you be cricket paddled by Derpy Hooves?

>>30593093
No worries.
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>Dead thread
well you can do something about it
you could ...I don't know maybe not wait for it to reach page 8/9 to post anything ?
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>>30594099
I'd cricket paddle Derpy Hooves
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>>30591253
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>>30545095
I was thinking of that when I posted this. >>30496640

>>30516530
Shit, I never read this! Fixing now.

>the lower half of the pony was kicking and squirming. trying to get itself out.
>you stood back to assess the situation.
"ass"ess ;)

>you grabbed the base of her tail.
>she Eeeepped! and crossed her legs together.
...
>you realised that there in front of you a one time opportunity.
>her crossing her legs together made a cute heart shaped butt.
HOT

I like how she kicks in response and hurts Anon. It adds some realism and makes this not feel completely like a dumb fantasy.

>line of fire
good use of this phrase, it makes sense for the story

>after 4 to five smacks she calmed a bit.
>she know that she was the one out of options.
hot and cute. ("she knew that she was out of options is another way to say this.")


>she replied "oh nothing er.. something pinched me."
>pinched you huh. that is such a lie.
KEK

She's hiding her arousal and jeez this is hot. The orgasm is even hotter, the way her organ tightens around anon's hand.

>tensing up her butt muscles
>putting her butt in a perfect spanking position.
Really like how the spankee is unknowingly making it hurt more by tensing up.

I don't see too much of the 'spankee trying to hide that they are being spanked' trope. It's super hot, because if she was found out she would probably be embarrassed and humiliated.

The way you make this about an interdimensional portal is hilarious and a good way to set up the story.

>Spike: Dimensional creatures Twilight told me about them they are slimy and they have a taste for solid objects
fucking kek, does twilight whore herself across dimensions?

>Starlight Glimmer: there is nothing here about portal pain trixie.
I'm laughing really hard reading this.

>you inserted your erect penis inside her mildly wet horse pussy.
>her cute body reaction told you that she liked it.
unf

>she was getting turned on by watching her.
I'm getting turned on by this story.
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>>30516546
>You went thrusting her like a machine gun.
ha

>"who told you that you are allowed to cum before I do ?"
>Trixie: (#panting) .. huh!
>"Bad pony"
>you slapped her butt again.
unf

>Trixie getting turned on by the spanks and turning submissive
>she had a silly satisfied expression on her face. getting her tongue out like a dog.
also unf


>they both sneaked into the vault and start opening the portal again.
>this time Starlight took her turn and got her body half stuck in the portal.
>a portal start opening inside your room.
>"I know you'd come again for more"
Shit, this is hot and funny. Awesome story, RusticAnon!
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>>30597082
Thanks Pan I do appreciate this personal reaction feedback.
Glad you enjoyed that story.

>fucking kek, does twilight whore herself across dimensions?
not in my original intent but that would be hilarious. when I wrote "Slimy creatures" i had an image of smooze in my head.
But what if they were something like slimy tentacles. Hungry for the naughty ...

>'spankee trying to hide that they are being spanked'
it's not easy to pull of. I mean what's the situation to bring that up. and how will the spanker not reveal that ?

>assess - ass"ess
learning from the pun master

>You went thrusting her like a machine gun.
that line is full of cheese. I need to expand my vocabulary
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>"Discord! Let us go!"
>"So soon? I just transformed you and you already want to go back. We still have to deliver presents to all the good foals in Ponyville!"
>He cracks the reigns, whipping each pony on the bum.
>The bells lining each pony's body ring out.
>AJ and Rarity grunt, trying and failing to pretend the nip on the butt didn't hurt.
>"Mush!"
>In fact, the reigns don't have enough control to only smack one pony's hindquarters and not the other.
>Discord easily could have modified the reigns or used a different implement, but he chose not to.
>The shared punishments will keep these ponies working as a team.
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>>30597463
The use of driving whips and bridles on sapient creatures gives me the biggest boner, because you know they just feel so embarrassed and confused about why it still feels so... right.
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wip bump

I want to do the entire Dizzy origin story in comic form.
this is a spanking mention. and there will be another spanking at the end. if I get that far
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>>30597878
Same here. I went on a Derpibooru binge last night looking at all the pictures with bridles.

The innocent-looking ones are even hotter for me. Like riding gear is normal in Equestria, but still interacts with pony psychology in strange ways.

Helping the Neighbours in the archive is a good lewd exploration of stuff like this.
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>>30599455
The idea that a mare's submissive tendencies are awoken when the tack is taken out is the hottest thing. Like they can't help feeling submissive from being bridled up.
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>>30600509
Horse whipping when
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>>30598354
Love that split 2nd panel.
One can only wonder what misadventure that sack of 105 bits will precipitate.

Sorry to be neglecting the thread...hopefully this weekend I'll have some time to catch up.
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Who's the most underrated spanker?
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>>30598354
I hope the final version has bigger / easier to read text. Looks fun otherwise. I like Dizzy's pose in the first panel. Her butt is accessible.
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>>30600509
Maybe mare or stallion both? What if it's like scruffing where even if they don't like it before it happens, they are fine with it in the moment?

http://www.wikihow.com/Hold-a-Cat-by-the-Scruff

(There should totally be a spank story involving scruffing as well)

>>30601844
Take as long as you need. Sometimes these threads just don't line up with people's schedules. (Speaking of, I think approximately a month-long hiatus is in order after this one; there's not enough participation to justify it unless we want to try >>>/trash/ or something again).

>>30601937
Fluttershy for me. I don't see her in nearly enough stuff, but she can be stern and gentle at the same time. Leads to unsafe levels of boner.

>>30601245
At least all the oldest stuff in the pastebin relates to judicial punishment. And there's this.

https://pastebin.com/cW2Uz3QS

Always room for more, you could write something. ;)
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>>30603707
>And there's this.
That was a good one. I must have missed it the first time it was posted.
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Wrist/hoof slapping, yay or nay?
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>>30604455
Doesn't do anything to me. but it doesn't bother me
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>>30604455
Hoof, hell yes. Wrist... no. But palm of the hand, yes.

Hoofy kicks and hoofy whips are the best.
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>>30598354
A friend of mine drew this based on the first panel
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>>30604832
and even drew next scene
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>>30604832
>"lewd"

I fucking loled
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>>30604629
It would be worse for ponies because they walk on all fours. Just think a pony walking around and ponies see each time she/he walks there is the sound of wincing with each step. they know what happened.
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I'm not in favor of punishing for this, but I'm in favor of watching a punishment for this.

---

https://derpibooru.org/1480388

HOT

>>30604455
Somewhat like spanking, I like the psychological and humiliation aspect more than the act itself. I don't care about the hoof slap as much as I care that somepony has enough power that they can do that to another pony (especially a foal) and get away with it. And have it be normal in that society.

>>30605781
It's hot when you put it that way.

I am having a very difficult time finding a comic that I thought involved Button Mash and Cheerilee (and Diamond Tiara).

Black and white, has Cheerilee hitting the colt on his front hoof for some reason. The hit may be with a ruler. I think she threatens a spanking towards the end. I believe vaginal secretions are involved.

I searched many relevant Derpibooru tags and found nothing.
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>>30606099
I searched, too. I know which one you're talking about, but I can't find it either.
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>>30606665
>off by one
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A lot of the spanking pastes just have the spankings go on forever, is that how other people's parents actually spank or is that just fetish stuff? My parents only gave me maybe 10 spanks and it was over.
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>>30607297
we stroke our dicks with each spank. that's why spanking takes a little while
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>>30606665
I wonder if Derpibooru mods deleted it, or maybe the artist asked for it to be taken down.

>>30607297
Partially just fetish, partially this >>30607318
and partially if you read accounts of real spankings you'll find some of them are abusive.

Judicial canings are very long afaik. Also if you spank an adult 10 spanks isn't going to make much of an impact. Adults write these so that clouds the story.
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Do we have universal SFX words for each implement.

Since we are in Pony spanking thread let me list the most common tools

Hoof - Belt - wooden brush - wooden paddle - leather paddle - wooden ruler - plastic ruler - whip - crop - flogger - cane - twigg - (anon's hand) - book - tentacle - vines

the most common sfx sounds are
>Thud
>Thwak
>smack
>Swish
>Shank
>Wisss
>Wham

which sound do you think would fit for each of those spanking tools ? (on pony butt ofc)
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>>30608110
Vines and belts may be swish, a cane is usually thwack I think. And I feel smack is for solid hard objects in my opinion.
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>>30608110
Swish for a switch, I know that much
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>>30607627
>Judicial canings
>if you spank an adult 10 spanks isn't going to make much of an impact.
I don't know about that. Have you ever seen one of those IRL caning prison videos from Malaysia or Singapore? Usually less than 10 lashes and seriously brutal.
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>>30610132
I reveal my ignorance. Still, people get convicted of 100+ whacks of the cane, right?
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>>30611059
Maybe in Saudi Arabia
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>>30611059
In SouthEast Asia, usually much less. In the mid 90's an American teenager named Michael Fay was convicted of vandalism in Singapore and got sentenced to 6 (later commuted to 4). It still tore his ass up to the point of bleeding.
https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Michael_P._Fay

Corpun.com has some IRL videos.
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>>30477680
Well someone said Sweetie Belle's butt was made for spanking.
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>>30615224
>someone

Everyone here seems to think so. And they'd be right, too
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>>30614542
Fucking damn.
Imagine having a wikipedia article about how you got canned at 18.
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>>30604839
>>30604832
straight into my fetish
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>>30615224
It's the most smackable, whackable tushie in the world. I could paddle and paddle it until it is hotter than the sun
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>>30617898
You're talking about Pinkie, right?
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>>30615224
>>30615594
>>30617898
It's because it's white, isn't it?
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>>30618746
Part of it. It's also really spankable, and there's an especially naughty filly attached to it.
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What is the thread's favorite spanking position? I'm assuming over the knee, but then what would be the second favorite?

Mine is when the spanker hugs the spankee to their chests and spanks them while there. Nomine had a story with that in it, one of the Undercover Blues ones, and it split my pants.
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>>30620023
Diaper position, it's way underused
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>>30620023

That was in the original Undercover Blues, and I alluded to it in 40 Lashes as well.

I also have something similar happening in the Celestia fic, given the difference in size between Celestia and a Guard.

I've got something else in the wings as well, and it involves a bug and a cane and a hairbrush, oh my. All four your perusal when I get it ready to go.
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>>30620023
Doesn't Rustic have a story with this too? Sterny has a sunset picture with Celestia holding her around the waist.

Otk has nice qualities to it. I also like the formality of bending over an object or using stocks, etc to hold a spankee in place.
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>>30620989

Just because you said you wanted Diaper Position, here's a sneak peek....

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Chrysalis's mind raced as she tried desperately to cast. One spell, any spell. But the ring on her horn and the fire radiating from her rear were just too much. She couldn't even focus enough energy to fight Shining Armor and his fellow guards as they roughly shoved her down on her back. Shining's horn glowed briefly, and she felt a series of ropes twine around her, locking her movement as the board she was laid on was shoved forward into a hole in a bench.

Now the queen began to feel fear again, panic taking over from pain and confusion as her mind began to clamber out of its haze. What were they doing...what could they possibly do noEEEEP!

her thoughts were interrupted as her hindlegs were lifted and locked into place, leaving her pained skin stretched tight over her hindquarters, her tender sitspots and round bottom exposed for all the guards to see. She shuddered as she heard one of them licking his lips, her buttock clenching in fear.

Shining Armor and his guards were indeed getting quite the eye-full, as Cadance's previous spankings had left her buttocks glowing slightly red, with an even slighter pinkish tinge to her thighs. He grinned and licked his lips, nowing he could soon get revenge for all the pain this bug had caused his family. That bottom would be redder than a tomato by the time he was through with it.

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This IS a roughdraft, so it will be heavily edited. Still, enjoy.
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>>30621875
This is relevant to my penis

Thanks m80
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Bedtime!
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Vega's slave story is relevant here. https://pastebin.com/rJhtA082 (ongoing)

Wanted to say as a namefag who has no business namefagging in SPG that I agree with the anons criticizing the latest turn of events in Vega's story. Howver, I will not be as harsh as them: there are interesting story elements you can bring out with a tiered disciplinarian system.

(This is also where thread relevance comes in.)

Human anon on earth owns pony twilight and now owns pony rarity. Rarity remains Twilight's discipliner. Rarity still reports to Anon and if Rarity is unfair, she's on the line for punishments (predominantly spanking).

You can get one good scene out of the layered power imbalance, but should move on soon for the sake of Rarity's character development. If you write this latest arc poorly, which I don't think you will, you have Rarity walking all over Twilight and not changing anything about herself.


It's a story that this thread rarely/never addresses. Think of older sibling + parent, babysitter + parent, or parent + grandparent. There's a heirarchy where the first person/pony could have spanking authority, but still ultimately reports to the second person/pony, including for spankings.

DC has that dad/Cadance story. Does Twily get spanked in that one?

>>30618746
So imagine Rarity spanking Sweetie, then Rarity being spanked for having a white butt too. A soft role reversal can appear. Have Rarity the spanker insisting that a spanking is just the thing a naughty filly needs to grow to be old and wise, and Rarity the spankee bawling that spanking is best left in the pre-Luna era.

>>30621875
In this it's hard to visualize that Chrysalis is in the diaper position. I hope the full version explains what her legs are being attatched to.

>>30615224
Chuck wrote brief Sweetie spankings that never made it to a thread.
https://hostbatch.com/spankforum/viewtopic.php?f=6&t=124
https://hostbatch.com/spankforum/viewtopic.php?f=6&t=125
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Vega come back

Vega come back to meee

We shoulda never set you freeee
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10
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The Discord scenario above makes me really itch for some chaotic spankings, whose rear end would you paint as Discord's first victim?
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>>30626404

Twilight. Princess Twilight Sparkle.

Along with a giant blue jellyfish, but it only gets one spank.
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>>30623349
>a tiered disciplinarian system.
kinda what I wanted but too but instead i just wore both their asses out today. People wanted Rarity brought down sooner than later and that's fine with me.

>>30624797
Hi.

>>30626404
>>30626730
Yeah Twilight 100%

Edit: words are hard.
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>>30626404
>spankings using soapbars
>mouthwashing using brushes
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>>30626404
>chaotic spanking
I believe that I did explore this concept before in the forums. Under the story discussion title- the forbidden tome.

Basically the cmc got a hold of an old tome of choas magic.
When they read it they all get sucked in the choas realm
There each one of the cmc got spanked in bizzare and chaotic way.
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But I didn't expand upon this story concept due to lack of interest in the forums.
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>>30626404
What would be worse?
A spanking with Discord's right lion paw or his left claw?
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>>30629257
That's tough, but I think he'd have to use his lion paw. His talons would scratch the spankee up, which would hurt more but would not be so good
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>>30626404
Does anyone want a continuation to this? >>30597463 Or even this? >>30583886 (I had writer's block for the second one.)

>>30597199
True pun master is Nomine.

>>30628515
kek

>>30628746
Don't count yourself out. These threads themselves are chaotic and without proper archival we don't revisit old concepts.

https://hostbatch.com/spankforum/viewtopic.php?f=10&t=133

I enjoyed Sweetie's perdicament, but truthfully the story isn't much of a turn-on. That's just my subjective taste. I know you enjoy stories like this.

>>30629257
I knew from the thumbnail what it would be. There are at least 2 color edits of this on DeviantArt but I can't find them on Derpibooru and I'm feeling lazy.

Claw would be way worse. Paw might be more embarassing, however, because it feels more personal and intimate. It would be soft, and would more easily wrap around the victim's rump.

Don't forget about a spanking with his feet or tail. He would find a way to make it happen.
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>>30629939
I personally love >>30597463. great picture and great green.
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>>30629257
Lion's paw for less pain / more embarassment

>>30629939
Both would be good, also if you got one in you for Celly her plump royal tush has been asking for it
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>>30630072
Second that
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>>30630519

Whining as her shod hooves slowly clicked towards the bedroom, Celestia approached what she knew to be her doom. The letter had told her that her personal disciplinary guard had already been chosen for her, and would be waiting for her in her chambers. Another note, one received with dinner, was the reason she was now walking so slowly, her mind trying to process what was about to happen.

"Dear Princess Celestia,"

"You do not know my name, nor do you need to concern yourself with that information. What you should be concerning yourself about, young lady, is the state of your behaviors and attitudes over the past months. I have been speaking to the palace staff since my appointment to this post yesterday, and I have decided that you are going to be receiving bedtime spankings every day for a week this first week with me."

"To that end, young lady, before you come to your chambers tonight, you are to go out into the gardens and cut a switch, and bring it with you. I will be waiting for you at 10:15 sharp. Do not be late."

"Signed,
Your Disciplinary Caretaker"

Naturally, Celestia had disregarded such ridiculous instructions. She was a Princess, not some naughty little apple farmer filly! And she was much too large to switch, not to mention probably older than her "caretaker" and all their family members combined!

So why did she feel such dread as she pushed open the door to her rooms right as the clock chimed 10:15?
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"Ah, right on time. But I see you arrived without the switch you were ordered to bring, young lady." said a masked figure sitting in one of her chairs. "I'm afraid that's most certainly going to earn you extra. Now, go and lay across your bed, young lady. I'm sure you are tired, so sooner started, sooner done."

Celestia stared at the smaller pony before her. With their face shrouded by the mask of anonymity...the same ones used by royal executioners in ages past...there was no way she could tell the speaker's sex, race, or even age.

Either way, they were in for a sore disappointment. "I am sorry to inform you, my little pony, but I will most certainly not be participating in this foolish charade. I am the Princess of the Sun, and far too busy to be distracted such foolish antics." she told them, shaking her head as she moved over to brush her hair out before bed.

Without any preamble, she suddenly found the brush pulled from her grip, then felt it brushing softly through her thick mane. In contrast to the gentle strokes, however, the pony's next words were quite harsh. "So, you don't have time for personal discipline to replace self-discipline, but you have time to pull pranks and troll the entire court? Or need I remind you of the glitterbomb disco ball from last year's grand galloping gala? Or the rerouting of a water slide ever-so-slightly to pour its contents onto Grand Duke Blueblood's commencement speech when it was switched on for the day? Or even the randomness where all fountains in Canterlot suddenly turned bright yellow? Ponies have been sentenced to far worse than spankings for far less than you have done, your highness...under your own laws, might I add."

Celestia just sat there, stunned...how did this pony...how did they...who could have....LUNA. It had to have been Luna, throwing her to the wolves to cover her own tracks.
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"And don't think it was your sister who told on you either." they said, dashing her thoughts away. "The council have long known it was you behind these inexplicable jokes, and they have turned a blind eye. It was the last one you pulled...where you turned into a dragon to scare Prince Blueblood, that was the final straw."

Celestia had to suppress a smile...that had been fun on Nightmare Night. Prince Blueblood had jokingly approached her in the outfit of a Knight, wielding a fake sword, and so she had turned herself into a giant black dragon, spouting green fire. "Now shall you deal with me, Prince Blueblood...and all the power of hell!" she muttered to herself, smiling.

In answer, the hairbrush, which had moved to brushing her tail, suddenly clapped down into her cutie mark, causing her to yelp loudly. "You might have thought it humorous, Princess, but the resulting stampede and rumors took weeks for your public relations committee to quell. There are still ponies who believe their princess has been replaced by an evil five-headed dragon queen, one of whom left on an expedition to find a platinum dragon not three weeks ago."

Celestia sat there stunned...not so much by the hit, but by the revelation, and by the fact that this pony had dared to actually strike her. Crossing her front hooves, she shook her head to try and regain her dignity. "Hmph...that didn't hurt." she snipped.

"Your yelp suggests otherwise." they snipped back, and Celestia found her ear in a gentle magical pinch, tugging her towards the bed. "And I should warn you, princess...you may think you don't have to obey me, but I have the power to curtail your privileges. I can change your dietary options, cut your pocket money...I can even arrange to have your magic supervised. Or worse...I can arrange for all your precious desserts to be thrown in the garbage."

That stopped her cold...not her cakes. Sugar was her one big indulgence, she needed the energy it gave her in order to get through the day!
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>>30631689
Will Celestia have other punishments or just spanking. Such as corner time mouthsoaping, lines etc?
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>>30631699
>corner-time
>Mouth-soaping
yes please

>>30631689
based Nomine, monitoring this thread
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"That's what I thought." came the cold reply to her silence, and she swore she could hear a smirk behind that voice. "Now, are you going to bend over the bed like a good little filly, or do I need to call the kitchen and have your midnight snack cancelled?"

Caught at a crossroads, Celestia whined a little before obeying her caretaker, slowly pulling her ear free and crawling across her bed, leaving her bottom sticking out and with her tail held high.

"That's a good princess. I think we can take a couple swats off for that. However, because you neglected to fetch the switch you were ordered to bring...I'm going to be using this." they said, and the instrument of her doom floated into her view.

It was a regulation prison strap. The same kind used on guards who misbehaved and prisoners convicted of minor crimes.

Immediately surging up, Celestia found herself gently held down by a hoof on her back. "Y..You can't use that on me!" she begged, shaking her rump from side to side. "I..I'm..."

"You're a naughty little pony who needs her flank spanked. Nothing more. And if this strap is good enough for minor vandals and shoplifters, then it's certainly good enough for the princess of the nation. Now...hold still. You're getting thirty."

Whining, Celestia stayed still, the threat of losing her cakes looming in her mind, only to be eclipsed by the feeling of the fake leather being laid against her plump rump. "P...Please be gentle?" she begged.

"No. Your actions don't deserve my being gentle." came the response, as she heard the swish of leather through the air.
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>>30631711
Who is this nigga tho. I wanna give him a hug

I guess Celestia can't help but give into her submissive mare instincts when faced with a dominant personality.
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>>30631711
>Whining

There's the bomer word again. Hngunf
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>>30632708
>*boner

Fucking phones
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>>30631709
Yes I feel she deserves all of them for all that she has done. Should someone witness or corner time?
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>>30631711
Prison strap or switch? Having been switched, I don't know, but I think I might still opt for the strap
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Ohshit
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>>30631608
Already pushing my buttons and it's just starting. Notes, whining, asking for leniency, hypocricy sealing one's doom. Anonymous spanker is a change of pace but a bit dull thus far because the personal motivation of the spanker is unknown. Civic duty? A personal stake in some prank outcomes? They could remain anonymous; I admit it does add something.

Others have had worse for less, under your laws. Unf.
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>>30477680
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=j2gVWmwq2b4
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Would you guys like story of Princess Celestia encountering a dryad, that teaches her butt a lesson with thorny vines, bee stings, and her own wooden hand?
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>>30639366
https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Dryad

The thorns and bee stings wouldn't do much for me, but it would get full marks for originality. Do it! The thread needs content anyway. BSting on DeviantArt and other sites would probably get a kick out of it.
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>>30639366
Wooden hand or a branch-switch? Sure

Thorns and bee-stings? Not thanks for me
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>>30639366
That sounds super creative
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>>30639579

I am he.

>>30639816
As long as I fit bee stings in somehow, I'll compromise. Whatchu want?
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>>30640319
Maybe celestia gets stung on her butt and destroys the beehive, causing the dryad to teach her a lesson.
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>>30641034

But, that's OOC for Celestia to be easily enraged like that. I was going to have the dryad sting her buttocks until they are sore and swollen, then use branches, vines, and the dryad's wooden hand to spank her, the pain intensified by the bee stings.
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>>30641203
I thought it was more of a defense mechanism, thinking she was being attacked. But your idea is good with the extra pain. Honestly I just love seeing Celestia spanked and now I can see two stories happening at once. Yay!
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>>30498296
>2017 problems: You have to Waifu2x your art
>2017 solutions: It fucking works
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Bamp
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Bed
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I read DC's old Flitter spanking story. One of the best uses of "too old" I've seen. A few weeks ago I read DC's very very old Granny/AJ story, perhaps on fimfiction. That one has another strong "too old" disagreement, with AJ coming out of it looking like a filly who overstepped her bounds.
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>>30644906
Who are these qts?
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>>30645234
i redrew them. they are based on that b/w movie spanking scene. bad seed something I don't remember.
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>>30645751
Oh, I think that's the one, yeah

Speaking of Bad Seed, Babs Seed hasn't gotten her pudgy bum thwacked in a long time
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It feels like my fic is finally coming together, after who knows how long (if the pastebin's anything to go by, I've left this hanging since January). Hoping to have it done before the thread ends.
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>>30646160
>excited
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>>30646160
What is it about?
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this is a story about the worst week of a young filly's life. after the events of this story https://pastebin.com/J1vNMk3C and long thorough spanking her mother finally gave her daughter a chance to explain herself.
Disappointed of her daughter stupid choice she made. Her mother kept her daughter under a strict leash. Dizzy felt her life was a living hell. her mother spanked her over any trivial thing. While she was butting with her social life. which made the little filly fed up. and decided to do the stupidest mistake of her life. She ran away from home.
Dizzy had a foolproof plan. she would travel north toward filly Delphia then go on the road toward Hollow Shades. where bat ponies lives. but when she left at night she got lost on a crossroads she headed south toward the dangerous Haysead Swamps. it's not a place for a filly to be traveling alone.
it started raining and it was dark. our filly had to find some shelter. she went under a tree and waited for the rain clouds to settle. after some a while she reialised that the rain won't be stopping any time soon . so she would just have to sleep there under the tree. but the ground was wet and slippery . so she just climbed on the tree and slept on one of it's branches.
the next morning she woke up. the sun was up in a clear sky. Dizzy just had the most uncomfortable sleep of her life. she stood there on the branch yawning. then stretched her hooves up in the air. when she opened her eyes. she was greeted by a sneak. she panicked and yelped trying to run away. she totally forgot that she was on top of the tree. she fell down of the branch. she tried to hang on to whatever she could. she managed to grab on some of the veins there. that only made the problem worse as she somehow managed to get her hooves get tangled and suspended herself. all her 4 legs are tied up together while she was swinging upside down.
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>>30648081
to make her problem worst she swung around slamming her butt on one of the tree branches. the first slam went fine but after the second one that's when she felt an extreme singing sensation from her butt. she was preoccupied with her predicament but the stinging got worse made her lose focus. this is when she rialised the what's causing that. it was a nettle tree. the leaves hives can cause extreme rash to the skin. she wrestled herself with the vines that bonded her. that's when she was hit by a strong wind blow. which ofc caused her to be exposed to more Itching leaves. but it didn't take her long , she freed herself and finally landed on the ground.

her butt was itching her. she tried to scratch it but that made it even worse. she clenched her teeth and moved her hooves away. she was pissed and let it out of that tree. "stupid tree" she yelled she then grabbed a rock and threw it at that tree. Dizzy turned around while making "hymph " pout and start walking away.
not knowing that the rock she just threw awaken something that shouldn't be tampered with. it did bump into a beehive. the agitated bees didn't like the vibration and start attacking. Dizzy did hear the buzzing sound coming from behind her and soon knew what she has just unleashed. she did what anypony in her place would do. she ran away as fast as she can.
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>>30648097

Well, I'm liking the bees so far.

Also, the Celestia/Dryad story will hopefully be done tonight.
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>>30648097
Our filly couldn't shake the agitated bees off her. they she triggered them and now she's gonna pay for her mistake. she panicked and ran and ran. until she hooves tripped and fell over a log. her face got wedged between overgrown tree roots. as she was trying to unwedged herself the bees took their chances and attacked her most exposed area. which was her butt that was laying on the log. the bees viciously stung her on her already itchy butt. tormenting her furthermore. the poor filly yelped and cried.
she thought it was the end of her. but then something unexpected happened. the tree root moved and she got free. the bees stopped attacking.
as she was about to run off. she found her legs dangling midair. something picked her up.
"What do we have here ?"
"huh let me see ?"
"oh it's a pony."
"a pony what does a little pony doing here all alone?"
Our filly was feeling a bit dizzy. she calmed herself to see who was talking to her and more importantly who was holding her.
she was stuck between tree branches. she looked around and no one was there .
"oh look you frighten the poor thing"
our filly just couldn't understand who or what was talking to her but she replied.
"hello ?"
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>>30648245
>two stories

I know what I'm doing tonight
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B
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>>30649490

Here you are.

https://www.fimfiction.net/story/381466/natures-discipline

Sorry it took so long. It's also a long read, but I hope you enjoy it. Maybe this will show that, when it comes to bee stings and spankings, we aren't so different. After all, we both want one thing.

Pain to a pony's butt.
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>>30649769
>BSting

Long time no see mah nigga. You are right, we are similar even if one of us has a more obscure fetish than the other

I have early work tomorrow, but I will read it and give you my thoughts!
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>>30648314
"oh look the little filly can talk"
Dizzy looked up then her jaw dropped. she just know knew who was talking to her. they were two trees. they Trees were talking to her
"Don't hold her like that. ponies are fragile little creatures"
"ops .. there you go"
the tree moved his tree branch under her then flatten the leaves on it. he dropped in his leaf palm. The other tree got closer and took a look at the filly. it then picked up her tail and raised it up exposing her stung rump.
"tsk tsk tsk. look at the her poor thing. those damn those nasty little buzzing pests. come here little one , Ingrian would take care of your little injury"
Igraine the Ent Tree picked up dizzy and start heading toward the swamp. the other Ent said "hey I found her first ..give it back"
"silence Egert you, stay here and guard the swamp from those good for nothing timber wolves or I'll call the big chef on you"
"hey no Wood like those snitch"
"yea yea.. oh sorry about that little one. now I don't believe that ponies like you have those fancy naming thing don't you ?"
~those tree creatures sure talk funny " umm yea I'm Dizzy"
"ops! you mushy creature sure don't have the roots to face the winds. I'll try not to wave you around dazing you n all."
"ah no no. don't worry about me I'm fine. Dizzy is my name"
"Dizzy eh.. now tell me little dizzy what brings a f... hold that thought.. we are here"
"err here ?
Igraine was standing next to some thorny vines and strange flowers.
"now then if you just bend over like that and."
she forced her to bend over and handed her toward the mouth of a pitcher plant. Dizzy saw the plant and squirmed trying to run away but it was too late. her butt got sucked inside it. leaving all 4 of her legs suspended outside as her lower body inside. the plant's mouth closed in on her making her completely stuck.
"What are you doing to me. please don't let the plant eat me. help mr.tree "
"oh don't be afraid little dazzling Erny would take of you."
"take care of me ?"
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>>30649769
Great story.
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10
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Nueve
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>>30652548
again
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>>30650312
Dizzy? All of my yes

Getting swallowed partially by a pitcher plant sounds terrifying though
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>>30644906
This is awesome.
If there is something I would change for the sake of acurassy is that the filly should be trying to cover her butt with one hoof and the mother holds it out of the way.
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Quick, to fimfiction!

https://www.fimfiction.net/story/366543/lessons-learned

>>30649769
>"The trees whisper the activities of your kind", explains the dryad, tapping the stick on the palm of her left hand. "Younglings would do what is wrong in your eyes, discipline is carried out, and then there is love and forgiveness afterward."
unf

> sent you to a doctor to treat the wounds on your..."
>The guards start to blush.
this is good

>>30648081
Is all the "our filly" intentional? Maybe change up the wording a bit if not. It does read like a children's story this way, so the choice works.

Interesting so far; it has potential.
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>>30645894
Rump bump
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>>30657822
Unf
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>>30657822
That looks like either a strap or a switch. Ouchie.

Spanking edits of screenshots are so hot, whoever you are don't feel like you need to stop
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A pretty princess' petite pony posterior.
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>>30659566
Upskirt that filly.
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>>30657822
Is that a handprint? Lol

kinda looks like Spike's hand
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>>30659566
Take her panties down
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>>30659566

Great. Now part of me wants a story where a single bee flies into Starlight's room and buzzes around Ballerina Twilight. She tries to shoo it away, but the bee feels threatened and stings her butt. Because the bee is roughly 1/3 of Twilight's size, the stinger is larger. However, because it's a spell, the real Twilight doesn't receive the venom, but receives the pain of the giant stinger, even though there are no marks on her.
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>>30661487

So...what you're saying is that Twiligjt better wasp out for the stinger at the end if she can't learn how to beehive herself?
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>>30661487

Starlight*

Sorry, my dopey derpy ass is at work, and sleep deprived to boot.
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>>30662158

No, you were right before. I was speaking of Twilight Ballerina getting stung. :P

Also, that's the most bee puns I've seen jammed into one sentence.
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Twilight breathes a defeated sigh as Starlight leaves the room to confront the princesses once more. She worries that Starlight might be over-reacting to the situation. Sisters fight sometimes, siblings tend to do that. The wind invades Starlight's room and blows on the back of Twilight's head. She looks behind her to see the window left open. At least the wind feels nice. She is about to deactivate the spell and return to her studies, but she hears a loud buzzing behind her. She looks at the source of the sound in horror! A bee found its way into her room, and it's a bit bigger than her head! She gives a scream at the curious bee that is wondering why the little figurine is yelling at it.

"Get away! Help!", she cries out.

The bee circles around her, trying to gauge the mysterious object. It tries to get in close, as Twilight's face is reflecting off of its compound eyes. In a panic, Twilight used her hoof to smack it in the face. The bee tumbles back until its wings catch the air again. It gets its bearings, and immediately goes into attack mode. The bee confuses its opponent by circling around Twilight in a rapid pace. She ducks her head and instinctively puts her face to the ground, with her hooves covering the top of her head. What she doesn't realize, however, is that she is handing the bee a nice target on a silver platter.
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>>30662789

The bee stops in its tracks behind Twilight and gets a good view of what's underneath her ballerina tutu. Her panties are hugging around the curves of her butt tightly, leaving nothing to the imagination of her anatomy. She cowers as her rump and tail are held high, as her head is kept low. The bee's stinger extends out of its abdomen in sight of her vulnerable position. It carefully flies back slightly, aims for its target and dashes downward towards her. Twilight can hear the buzzing get louder until the inevitable touchdown. The bee's stinger pokes Twilight's left buttock, until it is able to pierce it down deeper into her. In her castle, Twilight gives a pained cry that echoes throughout the castle. The shock of the bee sting somehow breaks her out of her spell, as she dances and kicks her hindlegs out of pain. Spike bursts into her room with a worried expression, and catches Twilight dragging her butt across the floor.
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>>30662859

"Whoa, hey! Are you ok?", asked Spike.
"No, Spike! Owwww, I got stung by a huge bee! See?!" replies Twilight as she gets up off the floor and moons Spike in an attempt to show him where it attacked. Spike blushes like crazy and states "Uh, I don't see... anything. Please don't tell me that it's somewhere on your-"

"What?", interrupts Twilight. She checks out her rear on a nearby mirror and sees nothing out of the ordinary. No wounds.

"Interesting. I guess that pain can also be transmitted through this spell. That's quite a painful discovery."

"Well, if you are done bouncing about, I'm going to back to organizing the books", said Spike, relieved, but confused.

"Uh, Spike, before you go...", said Twilight. "Can I get an ice pack? It's still a bit sore... back... there.
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>>30662916
This is a very creative idea despite spanking not being there. A spanking voodoo doll story would be really hot though, come to think of it
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>>30663573
Reminds me of the disembodied spanking idea. Could work with discord and I believe shows up in the Nomine / KK collab. Related: telepathic spanking
>>30660131
I can't see it
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What's the story behind this pony? Must have been really naughty. He had to go out in public after too, that's embarrassing.
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>>30664782
I still can't believe they had that in the show lol
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>>30664158
Indeed it does! Just reread that, really good stuff
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Some good images on Derpibooru lately.

>>30664782
He is in two episodes! Leap of Faith and Where the Apple Lies.

https://derpibooru.org/1213959
https://derpibooru.org/1269210
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>>30663573
>Trixie gets a Twilight voodoo doll after Magic Duel
>The enchantress warns her not to use it too often, and to be gentle with the doll
>Twilight will probably not be in danger, but the more pain inflicted, the more obvious it will be to Twilight that she is subject to voodoo
>Probably
>Seems legit
>Stronger pain also makes it easier to find the doll

>So Trixie just gives it a gentle pat once in a while
>Scaled up from a doll to a pony, it's as strong as a good stinging swat
>Twilight's bottom flares up randomly with pain she remembers from her foalhood
>It vanishes as soon as it appears
>She can't figure out what causes it

>Years pass
>Trixie is forgiven
>But still has the voodoo doll
>"I can't have Twilight hate me again. She can't know about this."
>She stows it under her hat and goes to Zecora, whom she thinks will keep quiet about the affair if she shows contrition
>"The spell on this is strong. Undoing will take long."
>"What do you have to do?"
>"Not me, but us. I need your trust."
>She brews a potion and has Trixie gulp it down
>"The Great and Dizzy Trixie wonders what you're doing."
>Zecora takes her by the hoof to a stump outside Zecora's hut
>"Lean over my lap this way. Be warned, I will make you neigh."
>"Trixie has... reservations."
>She does it anyway, she hated seeing Zecora glare like that

(CRACK)
>"Move your tail, little pony. The harm you feel must not be phony."
(smack) (SMACK)
>"WHAT ARE YOU DOING TO MY GREAT AND POWERFUL RUMP??!"
>"Hush, it will make sense in time. Please, it's getting hard to rhyme."
>Zecora looks way too comfortable like this
>She's sitting upright on the stump with an adult pony across her back legs
>Just spanking away
(WHACK)
>"Ow! Trixie is glad we are deep in the woods."
>"Has anypony told you these trees have eyes?
(CRACK CRACK CRACK)
>"Your naughtiness will not be disguised."
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>>30667105
>"Balanced mojo this doll lacks. We are fixing it with--"
(SMACK)
>The energy was now balanced with that last whap on Trixie's rear
>But Zecora felt Trixie had yet to be punished for her other shenanigans
>Trixie was rewarded with some bonus swats
>Officially, the doll had not balanced yet
>Only Zecora and the more magic-affiliated trees knew the truth

>Zecora stops as weirdly (for Trixie) as she started
>She scoots Trixie off her lap
>"Are we done? Please tell Trixie we are done."
>"We are finished here, all thanks to the pain in your rear."
>"The evil energy equalized once your rump was tenderized."

>"Um, thanks."
>Trixie scurried off in shame (she was good at that) before Zecora got any other bright ideas

The idea is that sending out those doll swats imbalanced the doll, so it had to be fed with pain on the sending end before it could be neutralized.
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>>30606099
>I am having a very difficult time finding a comic that I thought involved Button Mash and Cheerilee (and Diamond Tiara).
Rumble, not Button.
https://derpibooru.org/1128063
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>>30662497

You know it....honey
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Alright, one last once-over for proofreading and such, and it's ready to go. Sit tight, folks, 'cause this is a long one (28 posts).
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Trixie Goes to Magic Kindergarten (1)

A hooded figure walked the streets of lower Canterlot. She kept to the shadows, not wanting to be seen, until she reached a small shop in a secluded alley. Perhaps one of these arcane trinkets or curiosities could help her. She didn't bother introducing herself to the stallion at the counter, keeping her face obscured; in times such as this, anonymity is–
>"I know it's you, Trixie. You don't need t'be so dramatic about it."
The blue mare removed her hood and glared at him.
>"Dammit, Tarot. I am trying to keep a low profile here."
The shopkeeper rolled his eyes.

>"You've got some nerve showing your face around here, Trix. Since, y'know, you're kinda wanted for that whole 'possession of contraband magical artifacts' thing? Last thing I need is some police pony snooping around."
Trixie scoffed.
>"Oh, please. You know they could never make the charges stick. (Besides, I said I was sorry...)"
>"That doesn't solve either of our problems, y'know."
>"Bah. Give it a week; they'll find some other nuisance to deal with and forget all about somepony like me. Always happens."

The mare leaned in closer, glancing around to check for eavesdroppers.
>"But, um, until then, you wouldn't happen to be selling anything that could help a pony... lay low for a while, would you?"
>"If you're looking for another cursed amulet, you're outta lu–"
>"No, no, nothing of the sort. Just something to, perhaps, alter my appearance? Temporarily, of course."
>"(sigh) (If it'll make you go away faster, I'll see what I can do...)"
>"I heard that."
>"I know, and I don't care. Just, gimme a minute."

The stallion rummaged through his wares.
>"You sure you don't just want some, like, hair dye or something? Or just, I dunno, -skip town- like any sane pony would do?"
Trixie gave an impatient glare.
>"Don't question my methods, Tarot."
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>>30668293 (2)

>"I'm just sayin'. Transformation charms and potions and whatever are hard t'come by these days."
>"Excuses, excuses."
>"Lemme see... glamours, no... masquerades, no... I suppose -this- could... hmm."
The blue mare raised an eyebrow.
>"Hmm? What's hmm?"
The stallion pulled out a flask from a high shelf and presented it at the counter.
>"Well, this stuff is supposed to make a pony look, let's say... younger. I dunno, knock about... say, 5, 10 years off, and you could maaaybe pass as somepony different? I'm not sure it's exactly what you–"
>"I'll take it."
She swiped the pink flask from the shopkeeper, dropping a sack of bits on the counter in return.
>"Wait, I didn't even– if you're just gonna– at least read the instructions on the– Oh, forget it."
Trixie was already halfway out the door. Tarot returned to his seat and started counting his coins; whatever absurdity she was about to involve herself in, he wanted no part in it.

>"Nothing to worry about, Trixie. You've dealt with potions plenty of times."
She tracked down one of her old hiding spots, a little alcove in a quiet part of town. Here, she could assume her temporary identity in peace. She uncorked the flask, and took a whiff of the pink liquid.
>"...Well, I've had worse."
She took a breath, then drank most of the potion in a single gulp. Setting the flask aside, she relaxed a bit. The thing with potions is, you never know how long it'll be before it starts to–

When Trixie came to, it was nearly sundown. Once she was fully upright, she mused to herself.
>"Huh. Must've been out for a couple hou–"
She recoiled at her own speech. She'd forgotten how high-pitched her voice used to be when she was...
>"...Hold on."
Trixie scanned her surroundings. Everything was... bigger than she remembered. Her hooves were the wrong size. Her hat didn't fit any more. She stumbled over to a decorative fountain, and looked at her reflection in the water. She reeled.
>"Oh, what the FUCK!"
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>>30668300 (3)

Take off five, ten years, he said. Not TWENTY. Damned potion must've been defective! Trixie was livid.
>"When I get my hooves on him, I'll..."
>"..."
..."I'll what," she thought to herself. Thinking it over, she didn't have many options. She still had a decent grip on her magic, more or less, but physically, she was little more than a helpless filly.
>"(sigh) Fine. You can make this work, Trixie."
First order of business, clean herself up and make sure she wouldn't be recognized. She took a brief rinse in the fountain (after she made sure no one would notice– a girl needs her privacy, after all). Now, she had to find someplace to spend the night. Surely, some nice mare or stallion would be willing to let an innocent little–
>"Who goes there?"

Trixie jumped a bit. A rather imposing mare (at least, for someone of Trixie's size) had snuck up on her.
>"You shouldn't play around in dark alleys, child. It's not safe."
>"Um, o-okay."
>"You seem nervous; are you alright?"
>"I, I'm fine, ma'am."
The mare scanned her.
>"Have we met before? You seem familiar."
>"I... don't think we have, ma'am."

>"Wait a minute... I -have- seen you before."
>"Um, I, you probably have me confused with– hey!"
Trixie felt the mare pull on her ear, trying to lead her somewhere.
>"You'd better have a good explanation for this, little missy."
>"Lemme go! You have the wrong–"
>"What in Celestia's name are you doing away from the Academy at this hour?"

>"...Huh?"
>"You -know- you're not supposed to leave the grounds unsupervised..."
Trixie paused. Did she just get mistaken for a schoolfilly? She couldn't exactly contradict the mare, lest she blow her cover.
>"I, um, lost my backpack? Somewhere around here, and I, um, went back to look for it..."
>"(sigh) Then you should've asked an adult for help, sweetie. For now, you need to come back with me."
>"Um, yes, ma'am."
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>>30668306 (4)

Trixie felt a bit nostalgic upon seeing the Academy gates once again. She attended it for a few years when she was a filly. She was never a star student or anything, but she did well enough. This could work out– zero-effort classes, free room and board? Sounds like a plan.

All she needed to do was not draw attention to herself... which could prove harder than anticipated, since the mare who found her escorted her directly to the headmistress' office.
>"Milady?"
Celestia herself was seated at her desk, sorting a bit of paperwork. Upon seeing the Princess, the filly's nerves started to get the better of her.
>"Hmm?"
>"I know it's past sundown, and you're just finishing up, but–"
>"My last appointment for the day is in ten minutes. Please, take your time."
>"It's about one of the new students. I found a... straggler."
>"Oh?"
Celestia rose from her desk, and looked the filly square in the eyes.
>"What's your name, little one?"
Trixie stalled, trying to come up with a good pseudonym.
>"Ummmmoonbeam? I mean, Moonbeam, ma'am, I, well,"
Nailed it.

>"She must be one of the new enrollees. Apparently, she lost her pack on the way here. No supplies, none of the forms her parents were supposed to sign, and come to think of it, she hasn't even been assigned a room yet..."
>"(sigh) (There's at least one, every year...)"
Celestia pondered for a moment.
>"Very well. Take her to one of the spare dormitories in the far hall. Help her get settled in, then put her to bed. We'll see if we can get this sorted out tomorrow."
>"Yes, milady."
The elder mare turned to address young Trixie.
>"You heard her, little miss Moonbeam; please, follow me..."
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>>30668317 (5)

"Moonbeam" stayed silent as she walked through the halls. The general layout of the place seemed vaguely familiar, but she could barely recognize anything. It was probably renovated a few times since her graduation.
>"Alright, little one. This will be your room for the time being. Washroom is just down the hall, on the left."
>"Um, okay."
Her temporary residence was small and plain. It was tidy, though, so there wasn't much to complain about.
>"Now, it's past your bedtime as is. I'll be back to check on you in ten minutes or so, and I expect you in bed by then, okay?"
>"Yes, ma'am..."
After the day she'd had, a comfortable bed was exactly what Trixie needed. She washed up a bit, then settled into the sheets. The mare came back soon after and tucked her in, and she drifted off to sleep.

>"Moonbeam, dear, it's time to wake up..."
The filly slowly opened her eyes. A bit of morning sun shone through the curtains.
>"(yawn) Hmm?"
>"You overslept, sweetie. That's what happens when you stay up past your curfew..."
Trixie yawned again, stretched, and hopped out of bed.

>"...Wait, who are you?"
She glanced at the older mare; grey coat, well-kept white mane, wearing attire that resembled a maid's dress.
>"Oh, you may call me Miss Snow. I'll be looking after you from now on."
The filly grumbled with contempt.
>"I don't need a -nanny-, if that's what you're implying."
>"There's nothing to be ashamed of, really. It happens every semester. Always a few first-year students, cute little colts or fillies like you–"
Snow Powder gently pinched Trixie's cheek, prompting her to pull her head away. (Wait, "first-year"?)
>"–focus so much on their studies that they forget how to take care of themselves."
>"(huff) I'm not a foal, you know–"
>"That's nice, dear. Now, sit down and eat your breakfast before it gets cold."
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>>30668322 (6)

Trixie, after a bit of prodding, seated herself at the table. A bowl of plain oatmeal lay in front of her.
>"What, this mush?"
>"Well, we didn't know your preferences, and on such short notice... so, yes."
>"Um, I'll pass, actually."
She nudged the bowl away, only for the matron to nudge it right back.
>"This is no time to be picky, dear. You must be -starving-."
>"I'm fine, really, just– hey!"
The spoon was magically wrested from Trixie's control. It scooped a large serving from the bowl and presented it to her.
>"Open wide~."
>"Ohhhhno. You are not–mmnmph!"
Miss Snow seized an opening and forced the spoon into the filly's mouth. She spit most of the oatmeal back out, making a mess of the table.
>"No! I will not be bucking force-fed like– uhn!"
Trixie was hoisted from her chair, her tail raised. The matron gave her bottom a firm swat.
>"Eep!"
>"If that's how you want it, fine." (SPANK) (SPANK) "That's another thing I have to deal with every year," (SPANK) "children who think they can do whatever they please." (SPANK) "I must say, it's been a while since I've had somepony who's both."
>"Lemme go, you–" (SPANK) "Ow!" (SPANK) "Uhn! Please..."
She fussed and whined. The mare gave her three more quick swats, then set her back in her chair. Trixie grumbled a bit, then motioned to take the spoon, only to be denied. She (begrudgingly) submitted, and allowed the mare to spoon-feed her the rest of her meal, though still voicing her displeasure at every opportunity.

>"There. Was that so bad?"
>"(grumble) (Yes.)"
>"Now, we've wasted enough time already, and I don't want you to be late for class. Go ahead and get dressed. I'll see to you in a moment."
>"...?"
The filly's scowl turned to a look of confusion.
>"...Your uniform. You -did- see the... (sigh) Actually, nevermind. At this point, it'll be quicker if I just dress you myself..."
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>>30668327 (7)

The matron pulled Trixie back into her grasp. After several minutes, and some additional bottom-smacking to get her to cooperate, she finally managed to wrangle the filly into her school dress.
>"...Is the bow really necessary?"
>"No, but you look cute."
After a quick brushing (teeth and mane, not necessarily in that order), Miss Snow tidied her up and led her across the Academy grounds. Through a bit of luck, and a shortcut or two, Moonbeam made it to class with a few minutes to spare.

Her caretaker quietly addressed her.
>"(Before you go, sweetie, one warning. I don't want to have to feed you, dress you, and spank you every morning, but I will if I have to, okay?)"
>"(sigh) (Yes, ma'am...)"

Trixie easily folded herself into the crowd of colts and fillies, ready for class. A large blue mare ushered them into the classroom. The first thing that caught Trixie's eye was the writing on the blackboard:
>Welcome to Magic Kindergarten!
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>>30668340 (8)

...Oh, no. She didn't look THAT young, did she? This was obviously a huge misunderstanding. She'd just have to talk to the teacher and–
>"Alright, children, take your seats."
Well, she'd talk to Ms. Harpstring later. (At least, she assumed that was her name, since it was also written on the blackboard) Trixie grabbed the closest chair she could find, but another colt pulled on it as well.
>"Hey! That's mine!"
>"Fine, fine, sheesh."
The teacher spoke up to calm the crowd.
>"Settle down, settle down. Now, I know we have some new students today... if any of you don't know where you're supposed to sit, please, come to me and ask, okay?"

Trixie complied and went up to Ms. Harpstring's desk.
>"Umm?"
>"Hmm... oh, yes, Moonbeam, was it?"
The filly nodded. The blue mare presented her a stack of paper and some writing tools.
>"Mm. I know you lost your supplies on the way here, so you can borrow this for now, if you need to write anything."
She pointed to a row of desks on the far side of class.
>"There's a seat for you in the back. I hope that's okay; it's the best I could do on such short notice."
>"Um, okay. Thank you."

With that settled, Trixie seated herself and the teacher rose from her desk to address the class.
>"We'll pick up where we left off yesterday... if you'll remember, we were just beginning your first lessons in magic."
Ugh. Starting from scratch? Even worse.
>"Yesterday, I asked if any of you had already learned a bit at home and wanted to demonstrate. It's only fair that our new students have the same chance. So..."
Harpstring scanned the room, looking for a volunteer.
"...Would any of you like to come up here and share with the class?
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>>30668354 (9)

Trixie's ears perked. She thought about it for a moment. A chance to show off to a crowd? And hey, maybe it'd even help her case for when she asks to be bumped up to a higher grade. It was too tempting an offer to resist. Her hoof launched up.
>"Ah, yes! Excellent. Please, to the front."
The filly sauntered to the front of the room.
>"Now then, introduce yourself to the class."
"The Great and Powerful Trixie needs no introd–" Oh, wait, that's right. She pushed that thought aside for a moment; have to keep up appearances, after all.
>"My name is Moonbeam, and, um, this is just something I learned a while ago..."

The filly realized that she actually didn't know whether her magic still worked, or if the potion had screwed with that as well. The idea hadn't occurred to her until now.
>"I, um, I'm gonna need you all to be quiet for a moment. And, uh, could you dim the lights a bit? Gotta concentrate."
Harpstring flipped a light switch.
>"You heard her, children. Pipe down."
Trixie focused herself. Her horn lit up, and started to emit little sparks. She felt a surge of magic, and fired off larger sparks, which lit up the room. One of her firework spells– an oldie, but it still had its charms.

The class was enthralled. Most of them watched her light show with wonder in their eyes! (Well, maybe. It was dark, and she couldn't actually see their eyes, but there was definitely, probably, at least a bit of wonder.)
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>>30668363 (10)

They gave her a round of applause when it was done. It wasn't Trixie's usual audience, but it would suffice for now.
>"Excellent! You've already been practicing, I see? Keep at it, and I'm sure you'll do very well this year."
>"Practice has nothing to do with it. It just comes naturally."
The teacher smiled and rolled her eyes, then turned the lights back on and permitted 'Moonbeam' to return to her seat.
>"Children, try to pay attention to your classmates' techniques, while they're presenting. See what you can learn from each other... now, who wants to be next?"

Several colts and fillies raised a hoof. The teacher scanned the class, settling on a grey filly sitting in the back row.
>"Um, m-me?"
>"If you're ready, then yes."
The girl didn't speak as she rose from her seat and made her way to the front. Trixie, meanwhile, returned to her chair and reclined, satisfied with her performance.

>"Go on, introduce yourself."
>"My name is, um, Dewdrop..."
The class greeted her. She was quiet for a moment, feeling a bit nervous. Harpstring tried to get her back on track.
>"Now, what do you want to show us?"
>"Oh, um,"
Dewdrop borrowed a plastic cup from the teacher's desk and filled it with water.
>"This is just, um, something my dad taught me. There's a river behind our house, and, well,"
She set the cup down on a desk. Her horn sparked and sputtered; the water rose out of the cup, forming a bubble. Some of the students murmured among themselves. Dewdrop moved the bubble around, trying not to drip anywhere (with minimal success). She finished her demonstration by taking the bubble over to the windowsill and using it to water a couple of the potted plants. Harpstring clapped for her, the other students following suit.
>"Very good! See? There's no reason to be shy..."
>"Th-thank you, Ms. Harpstring."
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>>30668371 (11)

Trixie turned to the colt sitting beside her, and muttered.
>"(Big whoop. I could pull that off in my sleep...)"
Dewdrop, still at the front of class, tensed up, her nerves again overcoming her. Trixie felt her seat being nudged a bit, directing her attention back towards the teacher, who shot a glare at her.
>"I heard that, Moonbeam. And that was very rude."
>"Why? It's not -wrong-, so–"
>"Enough. I will not tolerate disrespect in my classroom, especially to other students."

Harpstring turned back to Dewdrop.
>"I'm sorry for interrupting you, dear. You may return to your seat."
>"Y-yes, ma'am."
The grey filly returned to her desk. Trixie, still a bit flustered, twitched her horn. Before Dewdrop could seat herself, her chair pulled away ever so slightly, sending her stumbling to the ground. While she was being helped back up, the teacher immediately realized who was responsible.

>"Moonbeam!"
The filly scoffed.
>"Oh, now what?"
Harpstring pointed towards a small stool in the corner of the classroom.
>"Corner. Ten minutes."
Trixie huffed.
>"...You cannot be serious."
>"No talking, no magic. Now, go."
>"But–"
>"And no 'but's."
>"That's not fair. You said I–"
>"Good effort and bad behavior don't cancel each other out, sweetie. You can be the smartest girl in class, but if you can't play nice, then you get put in time-out like anyone else."
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>>30668382 (12)

Trixie decided it wasn't worth arguing– at least, not yet. She parked herself on the stool and allowed the teacher to proceed with her lesson. Every so often, she sensed one student or another glance in her direction, but she tuned them out. She tuned Ms. Harpstring out as well. She didn't need to learn this kiddie stuff.
>"–nbeam? Hello? Are you even listening?"
>"Wha?"
>"Your ten minutes are up. You can return to your seat."
Huh. Time flies when you're lost in thought.

A few more students presented for the class– inferior performances, as expected. Harpstring spoke some more about magic studies and history and blah, blah, blah. Eventually, the bell rang, and the class was dismissed for recess.

Most of the students hurried out of the classroom to go play outside, though some of them stayed in class to catch up on an assignment. Trixie was feeling a bit tired (Miss Snow was probably right; she did stay up too late), so she chose to lie down on a large beanbag and nod off for a while.
>"Are you sure you don't want to go out and play, Moonbeam? It could be a good chance to meet some new friends."
>"Th... that's alright. (yawn) Maybe later..."
Trixie wasn't planning to stick around for long. It was probably for the best that she didn't involve herself too much with the other colts and fillies.
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>>30668394 (13)

The next couple hours passed mostly without incident. The teacher went over the class' math and reading lessons for the day– more kindergarten stuff for her to pretend to care about. After a while, though, Trixie started to realize a minor flaw in her plan:

She was bored.

Like, SO bored. She could only occupy her thoughts for so long. How in Celestia's name did she get put in this class? She was too good for this basic stuff! She grew restless, agitated. She distracted herself with her papers. A doodle here, a paper airplane there... and there... and that colt over there...
>"Hey!"
>"Cut that out!"
Heh. Two in a row.

But of course, the teacher had to go and ruin her fun again. She didn't even have to turn around this time.
>"Moonbeam, that's enough."
>"(groan) Seriously?"
>"Do you need to go in time-out again? Please sit down and pay attention."
>"I already know all of this stuff! Why do I have to sit around and–"
>"(sigh) Moonbeam, I know. It's okay if you're having trouble adjusting on your first day, but I won't let you disrupt the lesson for other students."
>"Yeah, yeah, whatever..."
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>>30668401 (14)

Another hour, another lesson, another bell.
>"Okay, it's time for lunch. Anypony who's a new student, just follow one of your classmates. They can show you where to go."
Finally! Her first proper meal in days (and no, that breakfast didn't count), and a reprieve from the kindergarten drivel. Trixie leaped from her chair and followed the mass of students.

Upon reaching the school cafeteria, the filly took her rightful place at the front of the–
>"Hey! No cutting!"
–took her rightful place a few ponies behind the front of the line. The lunch lady offered her a tray, a sandwich, some apple slices, and a juice box. Three-star gourmet, compared to what she'd been subjected to lately.

It was easy to lose oneself in this crowd. First-years, second-years, and even some older students all sat together in a massive lunch hall, while their respective teachers supervised and kept order. Trixie found a quiet corner, preferring to eat in solitude. A little ways down, she could see Harpstring talking with a few of her other students, two colts and a filly. She ignored them and returned to her lunch.

A minute later, she heard someone address her.
>"Hey, um... wanna come sit with us?"
Trixie looked up. Her classmates from across the table were inviting her over.

She wasn't in the mood for small talk with small ponies.
>"No. Go away."
The colt backed off, but Trixie could hear him talking with his cohorts.
>"(huff) (Rude.)"
>"(Yeah, what's her problem?)"
>"(Forget it. I don' care what Ms. Harpstring said, we don' need to make nice w'a stuck-up jerk like her.)"
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>>30668409 (15)

Was that supposed to be an insult? Oh, please.
>"I heard that."
>"Wasn' talking to you."
>"But you were talking -about- me, so..."

His friends chimed in.
>"Well, um, sorry, but he's kinda right?"
>"Yeah! You kept buggin' me in class, an' you were mean to Dewdrop, an'..."
>"My Mama said I shouldn' aso, assosi, um, hang out with ponies who do that stuff."
Trixie scoffed.
>"Oh, please. That stuff was harmless."
>"Well, cut it out. S'not funny."
Usually, a simple colt like this would be beneath her talents. But! The gauntlet had been thrown, and Trixie couldn't resist a challenge.

As the colt turned around and returned to his lunch, Trixie focused her attention on his juice box. Before he took a sip, she dipped her horn, and the box started to inflate ever so slightly. He didn't even notice. The juice box swelled further, and then...
>Pop!
In an instant, the colt's lunch tray had scattered, and his front was stained with juice. He coughed up a bit, then started wiping his face, likely trying to conceal himself.
>"Heyyy! I told you to..."
He whined in embarrassment. The room filled with murmurs and chatter; by now, it seemed like half the cafeteria had turned around to see what all the commotion was. Trixie could hear some of the older students giggling at the colt's misfortune.

She took a bite of her sandwich, and smirked.
>"See? At least SOME kids here have a sense of hu–"
The moment Trixie turned her back, she was shoved off of her seat.
>"Shut up! Why di, why did you–"
Before she picked herself up from the floor, she instinctively shoved back; she telekinetically grabbed hold of the colt's front hoof and pulled him down. A clamor spread through the room.
>"Alright, if that's how you want it–"
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>>30668418 (16)

Before Trixie and her rival could get into a proper scuffle, the two were pulled away from each other. A now-familiar authoritative voice cut her off.
>"That's -quite- enough, you two!"
The colt yelped and whined as Harpstring's magic overpowered him. Within moments, she pinned him down, raised his tail, and tapped his rear with her hoof.

>"What did I tell you about getting into fights?"
>"Let me go! She–" (SPANK) "Ow!"
The other students watched and winced as Ms. Harpstring administered a bit of discipline. It only took a few smacks to snap him out of his tantrum.
>"Wait, wait, I–" (SPANK) "Ow! Please," (SPANK) "Uhn! I'm sorry!"
The teacher was undeterred, and gave the colt's rump ten more solid swats.
>"Please, not in front of–" (SPANK) "Oww..."

Harpstring finally relented, and released the quivering colt from her grip.
>"(sigh) I'm sorry, too. But your Mama and Papa told you what would happen if you lost your temper again, right?"
>"(sniff) Yes, ma'am."
>"Mmhmm. We'll talk about this later; for now, you're excused. We'll get you a new lunch, then you can go and clean yourself up."
>"T-thank you, ma'am."
The colt slumped back towards his seat in shame. His friends offered a bit of encouragement, but Trixie did not share their sympathy. She muttered under her breath.
>"(Serves you right, you little–)"
She felt a gentle tug on her ear.
>"Don't be rude, sweetie. Besides... you're next."
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>>30668428 (17)

>"Unph! Unhand me at once–ow!"
Another pull, more forceful this time.
>"Ohhhnoyoudon't."
>"But, -he- was the one who–"
>"You provoked him, and he overreacted. What, you thought I didn't notice?"
Trixie tried to free herself, but was easily overpowered.
>"He's already been punished, and now it's your turn."
>"This is preposterous! I DEMAND to–"
>"You're not in a position to demand anything, little missy. You're coming with me."
Harpstring called another adult over, to watch her students while she was occupied. Once it was taken care of, she escorted the hapless filly into the hall.

>"Wait, where are we–oof! Hey! Not so ha-ard..."
>"If it were up to me, Moonbeam, I would turn you over my knee and paddle you in front of the whole class."
Trixie squirmed a bit.
>"...But I need a parent's consent to do that, and -somepony- lost her papers."
She stifled a nervous laugh.
>"Oops."
>"So instead, I have to take you to miss Celestia's office, and have HER sign off on it."

...Wait, is that how it works? Trixie didn't remember much about school policy vis-à-vis discipline. Her mother always dealt with that stuff, anyway.
>"(whine) You can't!"
The mare shushed her.
>"Don't make noise in the hall."
Trixie refused to be cowed in such a manner. In a fit of frustration, she stopped in her tracks and seated herself on the cold floor. Harpstring remained unimpressed. She lifted the filly by the tail.
>(SPANK)
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>>30668437 (18)

>"Heyy! You said–"
>"That was just a warning, Moonbeam. Now get moving, unless you want me to drag you all the way there."
Trixie yelped as the mare gave her another swat. She pondered which torment would be worse for her delicate filly rump: being dragged along the hard floor, or additional swats from Ms. Harpstring's hoof.

She decided that she'd take her chances with walking.
>"That's better. Do try to keep up– if you fall behind again, you're getting another 'warning'."
She could see Harpstring nod with smug satisfaction; if anything, that irritated her more than the smack to her bottom.

The filly steeled herself as the two finally approached the office door. "You've dealt with worse before", she thought. However, she also observed that then, she was at least a full-grown mare with some degree of dignity. This time, she wasn't sure if she even had that...

Princess-slash-Headmistress Celestia was seated at her desk, once again attending to paperwork. Princess Luna was present as well. (Like Trixie needed another reason to worry...) She tried to listen in on their discussion, but the teacher interjected.
>"I'm sorry to interrupt, milady, but–"
>"Please, come in."

>"...Well, you heard her– in you go."
Harpstring pushed Trixie through the door to face the Princesses. Luna had a look of curiosity, but Celestia gave her a soft, welcoming smile.
>"Well, well... who do we have here?"
>"Hello again, Moonbeam. What brings you back to my office so soon? Are you having trouble with your new class?"
"Yes, it was really dull and I wanna be moved to a higher grade", she wanted to say. But she couldn't. And even if she could, Harpstring spoke up first.
>"Actually, well... she IS the trouble."
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>>30668450 (19)

Celestia raised an eyebrow.
>"On her first day?"
>"Yes, milady. She's been a constant disruption in class, with no regard for any of the other students. She's outright bullied another pony on more than one occasion."
>"I did no such–"
Harpstring cut her off again.
>"Ohhyes, you did. And then you picked a fight with at least on of them, on top of that."
Trixie avoided eye contact, but she could see Celestia glaring at her. There was no anger, nor menace in her expression, merely disapproval.
>"Her behavior has been absolutely unacceptable, and she needs a proper punishment."
>"...I see. And what do you have to say for yourself, Moonbeam?"
Trixie tried to muster a defence, but came up empty. She assumed the adults wouldn't consider "I was bored" nor "the colt had it coming" to be acceptable answers.

Luna broke the silence.
>"What should be done with her, sister?"
Celestia summoned a blank scroll and a quill pen, then addressed the filly.
>"First of all, we will have to notify your caretaker of this, little one. I'll send for her now."
Trixie thought back to the treatment she'd gotten that morning, and whined in annoyance. The last thing she needed was to give that mare an excuse to punish her again. Celestia signed her message, which blinked out of the room.

>"Now, then, on to the matter of your discipline."
Trixie sat silently, continuing to avoid eye contact.
>"Not respecting a teacher is one thing, but bullying and picking fights with other students will, not, be, tolerated. Do you understand?"
>"..."
>"Moonbeam, look at me. Do you understand?"
>"Yes, m-miss Celestia."
>"(sigh) You know, I don't like having to sign off on this sort of thing, especially when young fillies are involved. However, it seems I have no choice: Moonbeam, as punishment for your misbehavior, you will be given a -spanking-."
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>>30668458 (20)

It wasn't a surprise, but hearing Celestia declare it so -formally- still sent a chill down Trixie's spine.
>"(whimper) A, a spanking...?"
Celestia nodded.
>"Mmhmm. I'm sorry, little one, but rules are rules."
Her horn blinked. Her desk emptied, papers filing themselves away. In their place, a set of tools appeared. Trixie felt a knot in her gut as she looked more closely:

A ruler. A manebrush. A whip. THREE different paddles.
>"(whine) M-miss Celestiaaa!"
>"Don't worry, Moonbeam. We never actually use the whip. It's just there for looks, really."
Trixie did not find this reassuring.

>"What do you think, ladies?"
>"This filly seems much too young for a paddling. Perhaps start with thy brush?"
>"Frankly, at this point, it makes no difference to me. As long as the little brat gets what's coming to her."
>"Perhaps we should wait until her nanny arrives. She should have a say in this as well."
>"Snow Powder will be here soon enough. I think I hear her coming down the hall now..."
Throughout their conversation, the mares never let Trixie out of their sight. She backed up slowly, almost on instinct. She didn't notice her own horn start to spark. She couldn't focus on anything at all. She desperately wanted to be somewhere, anywhere but h–
>(BLINK)
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>>30668467 (21)

It took a moment for Trixie to regain her bearings. She felt grass beneath her hooves, and sunlight bearing down on her face. Wait, did she just...?
>"Oh, fuck."
She'd blinked herself straight out of Celestia's office. She didn't send herself far; from what she could see, she was still on school grounds. Either way, this was gonna be hard to explain to the adults. (And having to refer to them as "the adults" served only to remind her of her own predicament.)

Then again, maybe this could be her way out? Just run, and pray they never find her? It was working before... y'know, sort of. 'Moonbeam' didn't have any paper trail to follow; maybe if she was careful and/or lucky, this whole mess could just–
>(BLIP)
Or not.

>"–ght about... now."
She was back in the office, just as abruptly as she'd left. This time, four mares stared back at her: the Princesses, Ms. Harpstring, and Miss Snow.

Trixie stumbled, feeling a little dizzy.
>"Ah-ah– not this time, little lady."
Snow Powder lifted her from the ground, cutting off any chance of escape. Trixie could only kick helplessly at the air. Celestia tried to calm her.
>"My apologies, Moonbeam, if that was a little disorienting..."
>"Wh, what did you,"
>"Just a summoning spell, dear. Very useful for recalling students who accidentally teleport when they're not supposed to."
She leaned forward and glared straight at the filly.
>"...That -was- an accident, right?"
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>>30668479 (22)

Trixie gave a timid nod. Accident or no, her teacher and her matron took turns scolding her for it.
>"Well, you'd better hope it doesn't happen again, or you won't be able to sit down for a week."
>"Mmhmm. No more tricks. You're going to take your spanking like a -good- little filly."
>"(whimper) Y-yes, ma'am..."

>"So, should we...?"
Harpstring looked to the Princesses for further instruction. Luna quietly observed, while Celestia sat and contemplated.
>"...Actually, that won't be necessary."
Celestia took the brush from her desk, and put the other implements away.
>"Bring her here. I shall discipline her myself."

>"!"
Trixie whined and whinnied as Miss Snow floated her towards the desk.
>"Are you sure, milady?"
>"As long as there are no objections, of course."
Ms. Harpstring glanced at her student.
>"Honestly, at this point? You can -have- her."

>"(whine) Lemme go..."
>"Don't fuss so much, Moonbeam. You're just prolonging the inevitable."
Trixie was turned around, facing away from her soon-to-be disciplinarian. She couldn't tell which mare's magic was currently restraining her, but at that point, it made little difference. Despite her struggling, she soon found herself bent over Celestia's desk, forelegs pulled forward, rear end facing the Princess.
>"Hmm... oh, yes, one more thing."
Celestia delicately lifted the edge of Trixie's school dress, revealing her frilly undergarments. Trixie kicked and whined even more intensely.
>"No-no-no-pleeease–"
>"You've been a very naughty filly, Moonbeam, so you will be spanked on your bare bottom."
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>>30668485 (23)

Trixie squeaked, her face turning red.
>"B– bare bo, but, you caan't!"
She kicked and flailed with her little legs, to no avail. Celestia pulled her pants down, then off entirely. The other three mares sat and watched in silence as the filly's rear was totally exposed.
>"(whimper) B, but..."
The Princess ignored her pleas. With a twitch of her horn, she raised the brush and gently pressed it against Trixie's bottom, following with a few soft taps.

She raised the brush high, and brought it down.
>(SPANK) "Eyaa!"
And again.
>(SPANK) "(whimper) Nn..."
And again.
>(SPANK) "Oww..."

>"Repeat after me, Moonbeam." (SPANK) "'I have been a bad filly.'"
>"(groan) You can't be ser–" (SPANK) "Ee! But–" (SPANK) "Uhn! I, I have been," (SPANK) "Ivebeenabadfilly!"
>"'I don't want to be a bad filly.'" (SPANK)
>"I don, I don't wanna be a bad filly..."
>"'I will do as I am told.'" (SPANK)
>"(whine) Is this really–" (SPANK) "Oww!"

Celestia started to speed up her tempo.
>(SPANK) "Waitwaitstop!"
She eased up, allowing the filly to settle herself for a moment.
>"Now, then..."
>"I, (sigh) I will do–" (SPANK) "Hey!"
>"From the beginning, please."

Trixie huffed; that was just unfair! However, a few more smacks with the brush quickly changed her tune.
>"I, I've been a bad filly, I don't wanna be a bad filly, I'll do as I'm told..."
>"Very good. Moving on..." (SPANK) "'I will not cause trouble in class.'"
>"I will n, I will not cause trouble in class..."
>"'I will not bully my classmates.'" (SPANK)
>"Uhn... I won't bully my, my classmates..."
>"'I will not get into fights.'" (SPANK)
>"I won't get into ffights..."
>"'And if I break the rules again,'" (SPANK) "'I will be punished.'"
>"An, and if I break the rules again, I, I'll..." (SPANK) "punished, I–I'll be punished..."
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>>30668491 (24)

Trixie's blue bottom was starting to turn purple. Every smack put her on the verge of tears, but she refused to cry, more out of spite than anything– she wouldn't give her audience the satisfaction.

She couldn't stop herself from yelping and whining and whinnying whenever Celestia used the brush, though. Her fragile, naked filly rump could only handle so much.
>"Uhn!" (SPANK) "Ow-ow-www..."
>(SPANK) "Now, do you promise to be a good filly from now on?" (SPANK) (SPANK)
>"Y, yes, ma'am... I pr, I promise..." (SPANK) "Nn..."
Celestia gave her one last, hard swat. Trixie howled.

>"All done, sweetie..."
>"Uhn..."
Celestia set the brush down and lifted the filly from her desk. She gave her a small pillow to clutch and set her back down on the floor, her bottom still bare.

Harpstring lifted her dress to take a better look underneath.
>"Now, that's more like it. You're excused from the rest of today's lessons, but I expect you to be on your best behavior tomorrow, unless you want me to give you a -proper- paddling."
>"(whine) But, Ms. Harpstriiing..."
As if the prospect of being spanked in front of a bunch of other colts and fillies wasn't bad enough, the Princess had to make it worse:
>"Actually, from now on, ALL of your teachers and tutors will have the authority to punish you when you misbehave– whenever, wherever, and however they see fit."

>"!"
Harpstring nodded in approval.
>"You'd better get your act together, young lady, or there's going to be a lot~ of spankings in your future, especially in my class."
>"And don't think you're safe outside school hours, either..."

Trixie whined. She had to get out of this crazy school as soon as possible.
>"But I, you, you don't–"
>"As headmistress, miss Celestia has full authority over student discipline."
>"Indeed. Normally, I am willing to defer to the judgment of a parent or guardian..."
Celestia paused.
>"...but that's not going to happen, is it?"
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>>30668509 (25)

She paused again, this time as if awaiting a response, but Trixie wasn't sure what she meant. Noting her silence, Celestia glanced over at the other mares.
>"...Alright, this has gone on long enough. Do any of you ladies want to tell her, or should I?"

>"...Huh?"
>"How do I put this gently."
A deep breath and a long sigh.
>"Trixie, you were never actually fooling anyone. I had you figured out the moment you stepped into my office yesterday."

Trixie shrieked.
>"What!"
>"What did you think was going to happen, dear? A new student just shows up out of the blue, with no record..."
>"And more to the point, trying to pass yourself off as a filly? You look exactly the same, just smaller!"
>"And you're just as much of a brat as you were as a grown mare, too."

>"...Wait, if you -knew-, then why–"
>"Why play along? Well, for starters, you made it much~ easier for us to keep an eye on you. We talked it over, and decided there was no harm in letting you keep up the act for a little while."
>"And you somehow managed to prove us wrong. Well done."
>"Mmhmm. I admit, I am a little disappointed, Trixie. I know it's in your nature to show off, and we figured you would find yourself here sooner or later, but on the first day? (Tsk, tsk, tsk.)"
Her heart sank. Everything, a ruse! All of her plans yielded little more than a paddled posterior! These mares had simply been stringing her along for their own amusement. The indignity of it all...

>"Now, would you care to explain how this all happened?"
>"(grumble) Does it really matter? Just some dumb potion that didn't even work right..."
Celestia's ear pricked up. She and Luna shared a glance; something had piqued their interest.
>"...Wait. Potion?"
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>>30668522 (26)

Trixie was confused, and ever so slightly concerned. Did she already reveal too much?
>"Um, maybe? Well, I–"
>"(sigh) Don't tell me. The pink one?"

>"...Really, it was more of a salmon–"
Without warning, Celestia took the brush and delivered a few more hard swats to Trixie's still-exposed rear.
>(SPANK) "Ow-ww!"
>"I suppose we'll have to add 'use of a contraband substance' to your list, as well. You still have the bottle, at least?"
>"...Why would I hang on to the empty bottle? I threw it away. Stupid potion didn't work right, anyway."
Celestia raised an eyebrow.
>"...You did read the warning label, did you not? The one that said to take it in small doses? Or did you... drink the entire bottle... all at once..."

Trixie went silent.
>"...Um. Let's say, just, hypothetically..."
>"(sigh) (Of course.)"
The adults murmured among themselves. She couldn't make out what they were saying, which worried her. Was there some kind of side effect she missed? She felt fine, at least as far as she could tell. Celestia spoke up again.
>"Well, on the bright side, you're going to have plenty of time to get to know your new classmates..."

It took a few moments for the Princess' words to sink in. Trixie screamed.
>"Calm yourself, Trixie; the overdose isn't permanent. The potion will wear off... eventually. Until then, you will remain here under our full supervision."
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>>30668527 (27)

Fuck, no, not part of the plan, stop, fuck!
>"You can't keep me here! I–"
>"Oh, but we can. This is for your own good."
>"Really, we're not asking much; all you need to do is be a good little schoolfilly for a while. Do your homework, don't be late to class, that sort of thing. Surely a clever girl like yourself can handle that without getting into too much trouble, hmm? Otherwise... well, you know what'll happen."
>"But, I... you, but,"
Trixie's frustration was at its peak. She could barely handle ONE day of being talked down to and spanked like a helpless child. Feeling overwhelmed, she resorted to the only thing that came to mind:

Lie down and throw a huge tantrum.
>"Waaaa-a-aaa!"
Trixie sobbed and whined and flailed her little legs about. Her horn flickered, shooting off erratic bursts of magic. Sheets of paper were tossed about, a desk lamp was tilted sideways.
>"You can'– I won'– I don' wanna– (sob)"
The adults in the office were unfazed. Celestia and Luna quickly nullified any magic she cast, while Snow held her by the tail to keep her in place. They allowed her to keep crying; might as well let Trixie get it out of her system now, they figured.

After several minutes, the filly had finally exhausted herself.
>"...All done?"
>"(sniff) Yes, ma'a'am..."
Celestia gently stroked Trixie's mane with her wing.
>"There, there. I know this must be difficult for you to take in all at once. We'll give you some time to calm down and think things over. Snow Powder, I trust you can take care of matters from here?"
>"Of course, milady."
Miss Snow stepped out of the office, and instructed Trixie to follow.
>"Come along, little one."
>"Hmmph! (sniff) Very well. Take me back to my room, so that I may suffer this... INDIGNITY in private."
>"Oh, don't be so dramatic."
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>>30668539 (28)

Harpstring left soon after, to return to her class. She still had lessons to teach, after all, even if she'd be one student short for the rest of the day. Only the Princesses remained. Celestia returned to the stack of notes and papers on her desk.

>"You really believe she will learn from this?"
>"She'll learn SOMETHING, that's for sure. Respect, I hope. Whether she does so of her own volition is entirely up to her."
>"One can only hope the sore hind you gave her will be an adequate first lesson."

>"Well, she'll have her second lesson by the end of the day."
Luna gave her sister a curious glance.
>"Oh?"
Celestia passed her one of the notes.
>"Mmhmm, see for yourself. She's been invited to a sleepover tonight. She has to apologize to the other students for her behavior today, and their chaperone has assured me that she'll give her bottom a thorough~ brushing if she acts out again."
Luna chuckled.
>"She will be thrilled."
>"Indeed."

There was a brief pause.
>"...Perhaps you should have actually mentioned this to her before you sent her off?"
>"Oh, she'll find out eventually..."

THE END...?
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Trixie is in way over her head. I can't wait to read this.
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HOLY FUCKING GREEN BATMAN

I can't really read it yet, but tonight it's onnnnn. The part I read so far is so damn good
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>>30668546
This is the kind of stuff that could go on Fimfiction, too. This is fucking awesome. I was wondering if they actually didn't know or if they were just having fun with it, but I was not disappointed by the reveal at all. You got your casual spanks mixed in well with the real punishment part of it, and fuck is it hot to read.

Only thing is that I wish Trixie got a little more worn out by the brush than she did, as she still kept her snark directly afterward. But that fits her character well anyway.

I felt really bad for the fillies and colts at the school, though. Trixie was just heartless. You described the kindergarteners so well and made me actually smile when I read their dialogue, and made them sympathetic when Trixie was a little bitch to them.

Trixie needs another brushing just as hard, in front of ALL of them. That might humble her some.
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Worth the wait. More detailed feedback tomorrow.
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>>30668546
>sleepover

That is the best scenario for Trixie there could be. Best part? Every filly and colt will already see her reddened rump before her second spanking begins.
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Pagina 8
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>>30668546
There is nothing as satisfying as reading Trixie getting her ass fried.
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>>30656836
>Is all the "our filly" intentional?
yes. I want to set this story mood like that. otherwise it would be dark and grim.
The story are set to be comedic and slapstick humor. writing this story as you said it "children's story" kinda help (i think).

The other reason for that. it's the pony name "Dizzy" is still meant for it to be a name holder like anon or (insert filly name here) .you can replace her with any pony and you'll get the exact same story. so this is why I don't prefer to call her by her name that often.

>>30656394
I got busy irl and i had to stop. sorry if this was misleading and terrifying. the next part will clarify it.
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>>30674167
It's alright m8!
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>>30668546
Is Celestia just predicting Trixie will act out again?
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>>30668546
I wonder what Luna would see in Trixie's dreams. Perhaps even a spanking could take place in the dream realm.

Your attention to detail is great in this, Bluejay! I love how you subverted the trope of adults being stupid and just had it so they knew all along. Trixie thinks she's so clever, but we'll see if her bottom agrees!
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>>30670909
Loved the setup on first read. Most of your stories are evergreen for me. I expect to be coming back to this one in the future as well.

The tantrum was an excellent change from the usual thread fare, especially not being followed by a spanking.

My biggest complaint is that I thought the middle was too short, pacing-wise. I could've done with the mares' secret being kept from Trixie for a little longer. Long enough for one more scene where she's treated as a little filly without knowing the truth.

Going to the office to get the corporal punishment form is just begging for the stern teacher to return with Trixie in tow and deliver the public spanking she was only spared from for clerical reasons. Without an immediate return, it feels like the whole permission form plot device is less needed.

My favorite parts were before the reveal, but if this is ever continued (not begging, you have other super intriguing ideas and you just finished a massive, satisfying story) I might enjoy the follow-up even more. The end of the story leaves open a Princess' Bath-like situation, plus the benefit of a real physical regression rather than just being treated like one is younger. PB is halfway between these extremes, best as I can tell. Luna is smaller, yet I never got the sense that she was physically any younger than her late teens.


You can safely assume I loved everything I didn't mention. Baring a backside is standard, but the way you did it was superb.

>Trixie squeaked, her face turning red.
>"B– bare bo, but, you caan't!"

Trixie having to repeat lines was also great. You did something similar in PB with Celestia insiting that Luna apologize for being such a brat.

The school setting and young characters were fun too. Awesome story overall that clearly had a lot of work put into it. We got super embarassing corner time too!
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Glad you all enjoyed it. Certainly took long enough to write.

>>30676713
Yes, as much as she hopes otherwise.

>>30677095
I think Luna would only discipline her in the dream world if she felt her discipline in the waking world was insufficient. So, I don't think Trixie has much to worry about dream-wise... at least for now.

>>30677158
I'll admit, I was kinda iffy about the pacing. The last scene ended up being way longer than I anticipated, which made the earlier stuff I'd already written seem shorter by comparison. If I were to go back, I'd probably add another bit in the middle.
And on the subject of things I'd rewrite, I probably should've made the age gap in The Princess' Bath a bit less vague. I intended Luna's physical age to be somewhat young in those. Definitely below "late teens", at the very least.
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Wake up bump
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>>30677503
My headcanon changes the story, then. With lines like "not using the big girls' tub" I pictured Luna comically sticking out of the washtub, everyone aware of the absurdity.
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10
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>>30677158
>gif

Fucking lol
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484
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How about September 1 for next thread? And use the forum in the op until the next thread. The content creators can weigh in but lately I can't imagine a thread's worth of content being ready in just 2 weeks (old hiatus).

I also think we should stop trying to make it to 500 every thread. This one has too many bumps.
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>>30683411
We do have a lot of content in this thread from multiple of people. ranging from arts and Greens.

what we don't have is an interactive lurkers. aka audience to keep this thread going. This thread went on and on in a bump status while there was still some stories not being read.

I have seen many different generals threads go on without this much content.
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>>30683493
I agree, lurkers only lurk sometimes and it suuucks
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Nobody made anything from the prompts in the first few posts.
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>>30497647

She is GF material.
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>>30685502
I will when I get the time. I'm at work now.
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New thread right away?
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>>30688221
I'm always up for continues ongoing threads. it help motivate me to do something.

but I'm not sure about the rest.
I just hate it when I see people only post and participate when the thread reach page 8-10
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Page 8
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>>30689074
>>30689882
Jesus

I'm down too, but it just seems like we lost a bunch of peeps
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I'll make a new thread unless Rustic doesn't want to be the OP. What should the theme be?
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>>30689074
I don't know what's going on in the pic but it's really well drawn. And i love the whole "spank damage check" trope, it gets me moist
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>>30691048
I don't want to be OP. the theme can be anything. how about "page 8 edition".

>>30691320
>"spank damage check" trope
it's uncommon trope. I haven't used that in any of my stories as I recall. even as a fact that I love it.
It's also can be used for revenge spank.
For the longest time I have this scenario in my head but never actually made it.
an abusive foal sitter , mistreat the foal she was supposed to watch.
she ends up spanking the foal. when parents come. the foal shows them his/her spanked butt. and the parents ends up spanking the foalsitter.
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Here's a spanking picture I found, it's got spike so I'm gonna spoiler it.
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>>30693078
Oww, poor guy. Too much Spikeabuse in this world. :( hawt
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Starting new thread now. Will be up hopefully soon, at most in the next two hours.
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>>30693414
There can never be "too much" abuse of worst character.
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new thread

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