Royal Guard Mare Thread #32

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>>30304311
kek, i never noticed the order of the words before

>>30304311
Cute drunk guardmare, she needs an escort.
Man whore Anon picking up guards story when?

>>30304311
Thanks for including me in the OP, OP.

>>30304486
Update when?

>>30304560
I'm working on the next scene. It may not get finished tonight, though, sorry.

>>30304694
Its cool, just glad we got more content.

>>30304782
Just barely got this finished in time for bed. Luckily (?) a coworker needed help with some system stuff and kept me up.

"Everyday Life With Guardsmares", https://pastebin.com/RHkvDaAw

> It's just after midnight, and you are Corporal Honour Bound.
> It's late, and you should be asleep, but you figured you should stay up and see the end of both shifts.
> You'd hoped nothing could go wrong on the first day, but with a naive young pegasus in one hoof, and a self-absorbed salt-licking unicorn in the other, anything was possible
> Sitting almost sideways in one of the chairs of the living room, you're just finishing off an article in this week's 'The New Equestrian' magazine.
> Over at the breakfast table, Specialist Sparkspear is also staying up late, working through the issue of 'Canterlot Match' you bought her, with a quill and paper by her side.
> That rag is by far the gossipiest of all the gossip magazines in Equestria, but she's actually using it to make notes on the who's-who of Canterlot society.
> You have to admire the effort. She's only recently arrived in the capital, after all, and in her own words, she wants to quickly get the grasp of the capital.
> She's got the morning shift tomorrow, but she took a nap this afternoon to make up the sleep time in advance.
> As you turn your magazine over to start the article on the other side, you can hear hoofsteps out in the carpeted hallway.
> The steps stop outside the door to these quarters, and moments later Specialist Glamerspear slowly pushes the door open.
> She's completely soaked; her coat is streaked with lathery white sweat deposits, and her mane is in desperate need of a blow-dry and brushing. And she's got her helmet and armour floating beside her in a magical field.
> Sparkspear puts down her magazine, a confused expression on her face, but the Glamerspear is speechless, just panting there in the entryway, her head hung low.

>>30305448
> Looks like you might not be getting what you hoped for. How did a unicorn with her telekinetic abilities manage to get wet in the rain?
> Finally, with what seems like a supreme effort, Glamerspear reaches over and closes the door behind her.
> She takes a deep breath and lifts her head up to face you two.
> "Did either of you know that humans can *gallop* for EIGHT STRAIGHT HOURS!?"
> Sparkspear's jaw drops.
> "Anonymous went galloping for your entire evening shift?!"
> It's as if the act of getting into a conversation reinvigorates the social-butterfly unicorn.
> "No! It was only for an hour, which was impressive enough, but when I asked him if he was a champion athlete, he just laughed and said that one hour at that pace -- which he called a 'jog' although I had to GALLOP to keep up -- was nothing, and that real human athletes can do it all day long without stopping! Can you believe that?!"
> Hopping out of her chair, the pegasus darts over to her fellow guardsmare and holds her forehooves out beneath the floating armour pieces.
> Glamerspear's horn stops glowing and the field holding her stuff up drops -- and the stuff with it, right into the pegasus' waiting arms.
> The relief from getting to shut off that final source of exertion has a palpable effect on the poor junior unicorn.
> "... Thanks, I needed that."
> "No problem. You go have a shower, I'll hang these up in your room."
> "You're a real pal, Sparkshower. I owe you one."

>>30305457
> That's the first time she's actually addressed the pegasus by her full name. She must really mean it.
> While Sparkspear flaps over into the unicorn's bedroom, Glamerspear trots over to the washroom.
> In seconds, the curtain is drawn and the water is running full-blast, and you can hear a sigh of relief.
> By the time Sparkspear's finished hanging up her comrade's armour and floated back out from the bedroom, the water's stopped again
> And then there's the unmistakable deep-bass "shuuuuuuuuUUUUH-WOOOM!" of Glamerspear drying herself off with a WC-40 manoeuvre.
> "What was that?!"
> Clearly SPC Sparks hasn't been around many "'corn fields" - all-unicorn regiments.
"WC-40. Low-intensity modulated telekinetic blast. Unicorns do it in the field for drying off in a hurry."
> "Why's it called WC-40?"
> It's a pretty old yarn. It's a little surprising she's never heard it. But then again, she is pretty green for a Specialist, and much of her time was spent actually deep in the field, rather than sharing tales back at barracks.
"Because it takes practice. Get it wrong and you can wind up looking like a furball, or worse. Usually newbies practice it outside until they can do it even if they're hung over and exhausted. The story goes that one rookie thought they'd mastered it and went for a shower in Water Closet #40. They got it wrong, and blew the place up."
> "At Fort Horseshoe Bend?! I remember using Water Closet #40, that's the one next to the chow hall!"
"And it's a newer building than the rest."
> The rookie looks aghast at the idea that the latrine building might have gone up from a careless unicorn at any time.
"... That's how I heard it, anyways."

>>30305468
> Meanwhile, Glamerspear has emerged from the shower, coat fresh and dry and mane well-brushed.
> "Ahh, that's better! If I hadn't had to keep up that umbrella shield while *also* galloping around the rose garden like a madmare, I might not have gotten so beat, but I just don't know how he managed to keep going so fast for so long."
> Sparkshower hovers over toward her and puts a hoof to her chin
> "Well, he's tall, so maybe for him it wasn't a gallop?"
> Glamerspear waves her hoof dismissively.
> "Oh, sure, I guess his 'jog' was more of a... canter. But even so, could you keep up a canter -- on hoof, mind you, not in the air -- for an hour, without breaks -- let alone eight hours?"
> "No, but... He doesn't have any hair on his body, right?"
> "Ugh, don't remind me. And let me tell you, he picked the WORST clothes to wear while exercising. Just these two pieces of plain white, baggy, short-sleeved cotton undergarments. I was lucky we weren't seen; it would have been *so* embarassing!"
> With a firm flap, Glamerspear hoists herself up into the air, almost touching the ceiling.
> "Wait - if his skin is exposed, then he can *sweat* a lot easier than we can! And that means he doesn't overheat! So *that's* why he can keep going for so long."
> The unicorn cocks an eye up at her.
> "How do you figure that?"
> Sparkshower drops from the air and lands with a satisfying thud.
> "The non-pegasus ponies in Armoured Recon -- and even some of the pegasi, now that I think about it -- sometimes shave parts of their body when they know they need to do long-distance work on hot, humid days. It makes it easier to sweat and keep cool."
> Glamerspear sticks out her tongue.
> "Yech, gross! ...But I believe you. Still, you're not going to find ME shaving my flanks just to keep up with some hairless monkey!"
> The pegasus shrugs her shoulders.
> "Maybe you could get out of morning Pony Physical Training if Anonymous goes for a run every night?"

>>30305484
> Glamerspear smirks
> "Oh, believe me, Sparks. I don't mind morning PPT. This flank doesn't keep itself toned, you know what I mean?"
> Emphasizing the point, Glamerspear turns and taps her left buttock, adopting an exaggerated 'sexy pose' before relaxing into giggles.
> Sparkshower starts giggling along too, and Glam saunters over to the couch, continuing.
> "... And it's more interesting than just sitting in front of a pair of doors all day, right? But I *was* wondering if maybe you wanted to switch shifts? If he's going to make this a regular thing, anyways."
> "Sure, I don't mind. But you said you cast a shield to block out the rain? What if it's raining tomorrow? I can't do anything for him like that."
> Toppling backwards over the armrest, Glamerspear lies down on the sofa and brings a hoof up to her forehead.
> "Ugghh, you're right. Now that he's gotten a taste of what The Glam can do for him, why would he settle for anything else?"
> She drops her arm off to the side.
> "... Maybe I could get him to go somewhere else to go for a 'constitutional' other than Princess Celestia's bucking rose garden? That's for pleasant tea parties or romantic evening strolls, not crazed hairless monkey galloping."
> "But it is right outside his chambers. It's the closest open area outside."
> "Ugh... Well, maybe I can *suggest* some better exercise fashion for him to wear. Something with a trim fit and maybe a pattern, at least."
> You yawn and glance at the clock against the wall. It's half past midnight.
> Far past time for this 'shoe-camp-tier silliness.
"Okay, fillies. It's after midnight, let's put the lights out. Figure out your galloping problems in the morning."
> Sparkshower gives you a quick salute from where she's standing.
> "Yes, Corporal."
> Glamerspear lazily slaps her hoof against her forehead, still lying on the couch.
> "Yes, Corporal."

>>30305492
> You get up and turn off the main living room light.
> Sparkshower stretches yawns and stretches her wings, then heads for the washroom.
> "Hey Sparkshower, don't take too long in there, or else I'll fall asleep out here."
> The pegasus already has her toothbrush in her mouth
> "Uhhl buh dunn uhn uh munhut."
> Putting the two junior Specialists out of your mind, you turn in for the night.
> If a sweaty exhausted pegasus is the worst that this assignment can offer, it should turn out all right.

>>30305500
> sweaty exhausted pegasus
should be
> sweaty exhausted unicorn
damn it.

Anyways, pastebin updated, including with the fix for that typo: https://pastebin.com/RHkvDaAw

Feedback continues to be appreciated. I also hold out hope that in about 480 posts, OP won't be so much of a faggot. But this is 4chan so who am I kidding.

>>30305515
Thanks for the update, will read when I wake up.

>>30305515
Ahhhh, fer fucks sakes I started calling her
> Sparkspear
Instead of
> Sparkshower

Goddamnit I should have slept instead of writing. Please pat attention to only the first syllable of her name. Disregard the second

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>>30304486
>>30305515
Fuuuuck. Sorry about that. I just got home and I was rushing during lunch break to get it up,

I really do like it. I just wasn't thinking.

>>30305741
Go to bed, your feelings of silliness will over power you. You got the update out, relax and come back in the morning.

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>>30305755
> got the update out
You're replying to faggot OP, not TMFAT

>>30305784
Ah, good to know. Sorry OP. You will get it next time?

I'll be writing tomorrow, feel free to wait.

No, This isn't a bamboozle.

>>30285821
>Captain Gale leads off.
>“The City Watch has been ordered to assist Vice Overseer Brindle in apprehending a known heretic, suspected of committing a number of crimes against the state.”
>“Sir, heresy is the Overseer’s thing, why not leave it to them? We’re stretched thin as it is,” Sergeant Buckle chimes in.
>You don’t know him very well, aside from his reputation as a talker.
>Silver Dust is already rolling his eyes at the quip and subtly nudging Buckle in the side as a quiet “shut up.”
>Too late.
>“If you’d kept your yap shut, Sergeant, I’d have gotten to that without the need for your stunning intellectual input.”
>A low chuckle goes through the Watch ponies in the room, met with annoyed and impatient expressions from the few unmasked Overseers.
>“Now here’s the catch. This heretic has shacked up with the Blinders; hence the Abbey’s assault on their territory yesterday morning, said experience leading them to request help from ponies who know a bit more about street fighting than they do.”
>Another round of quiet laughter is met by more dark looks from the Overseers.
>In your experience, the average Overseer put more effort into following the Strictures and maintaining a neatly pressed uniform than practice with those fancy sabers.
>Gale, you’re trotting a fine line between good-natured jest and winding up on the Abbey’s to-do list here.
>“Here’s the plan: Myself and Sergeant Buckle will take the first squad up Middleton Boulevard to this point,” Gale continued, marking the position on a large street plan of the Canal District.
>“The Blinders retreated into the old textile mill here, across from the main canal and waterworks on Farrier Street. Lieutenant Rain and Sergeant Dust will bring their squad up from behind the mill, making their way up Quidding Road after swinging wide around the mill.”

>>30305996
>Gale extends a hoof toward the stocky Overseer, who you assume to be Vice Overseer Brindle, announcing that the floor is now his.
>You decide that you don’t like him immediately.
>His apparent second in command, the perky mare, seems to have enough cheer for the two of them.
>Probably sucked it right out of him in some Abbey ritual, you muse.
>Brindle clears his throat and begins his part of the briefing, his voice filled with the zeal and conviction you’d expect from a sermon.
>“Thank you, Captain Gale, for that erm, revealing explanation of the situation.”
>Gale shrugs and gives a nonchalant nod of his head.
>“Now, although the City Watch will be shouldering most of the weight in this operation, each squad will be assigned three Overseers, including an officer.”
>Brindle raises a hoof to indicated Captain Gale before sweeping it towards you.
>“I will accompany Captain Gale, and Overseer Lamp Light will join Lieutenant… Rain, was it?”
>You nod the affirmative, and the mare Overseer, Lamp Light, practically bounces in place as a face splitting smile beams in your direction.
>Wonderful.
>“The purpose of this method of organization is to properly identify and apprehend the heretic,” Brindle continues.
>“Although their physical appearance is unknown to the Abbey, our Overseers are trained in methods of exposing heresy that the City Watch would otherwise be incapable of.
>Now it is the Overseers’ turn to exchange smug expressions, and the Watch ponies’ to roll their eyes.
>“The Watch will assist in the apprehension of any and all criminals they cross, and the Overseers of the Abbey shall conduct their search for this enemy of the state.”
>Silver Dust raises his hoof in questioning.

>>30306005
>You glance toward him from the corner of your eye, raising a brow.
>He’s always been one to want to clarify information in briefings, but the circumstances are a little different now.
>A Vice Overseer may not be very understanding of an impudent Watch sergeant.
>Still, Brindle gives him his chance to speak up.
>“Vice Overseer, what exactly has this, heretic, done that qualifies them as an enemy of the state?”
>Brindle’s eyes narrow dangerously.
>“Let’s just say that the Abbey takes any suspicion of heresy, especially those with significant evidence, very seriously, Sergeant Dust.”
>The room has gone quiet, and you silently hope that is the end of it.
>“So, if one of us Watch ponies was to run in to the heretic ourselves, how would we know it’s them, and not some random gang member?”
>Damnit Dust.
>Vice Overseer Brindle lets out a testy sigh.
>“You shouldn’t approach the heretic without an Overseer’s presence, Sergeant, unless you’d like to become their next victim. Nevertheless, they will likely attempt to feel using foul magics, and can be identified by a mark on their left foreleg. A tattoo-like marking resembling concentric circles.”

>>30306012
>A cold sweat breaks out beneath your jacket.
>There are more ponies with the Outsider’s Mark?
>More ponies with powers like yours?
>More importantly, you realize that your little mark is an easily recognizable brand of heresy.
>You are suddenly thankful, despite your long jacket sleeves, that you decided to leave on your dark, heavy socks.
>Gale brings the meeting to a close.
>“The Blinders have suffered heavy losses in recent days, and are off balance and on the ropes. A two-pronged attack should allow us to get into their territory and get the Abbey their suspect.”
>His voice drops in pitch and his eyebrows lower, his cue to listen closely to his next words.
>“As soon as that happens, however, or if you are ordered by myself or Lieutenant Rain to fall back, that is exactly what you will do. We will regroup at this location, no questions asked or hesitation. Am I clear?”
>A chorus of “yes sir’s” fills the room, the Overseers noticeably absent.
>You allow a tiny, almost imperceptible smirk to flicker across your face.
>For all their disdain of the Watch, they need you more than you need them.
>For now, anyway.
>“Alright then,” Gale finishes, a determined half-smile on his face, jaw set.
>“Let’s get after them.”

>>30306017
Planning attacks isn't exactly my strong point so this took a while to think out.
>>30306012
>they will likely attempt to feel
Should be "flee." Had to say goodbye for a while to an old friend tonight, and it's been a very whiskey and sadness filled evening.

>>30305500
Wait. No guard at night? That's when I would want one the most. but I guess they really are most just for show.

>>30306042
Not bad build up for the action. Only one problem I can think of.
If those marks are always the same and in the same place. I would think there would be periodic inspections for higher ranking ponies.

>>30305484
> With a firm flap, Glamerspear hoists herself up into the air, almost touching the ceiling.
Did you mean Sparkshower?

>>30305515
Good update otherwise. Glamer got a bit of comeuppance but I'm disheartened to see she's still calling him a monkey. Sooner or later someone is going to overhear her and be called to task. Certainly VIP Guards are expected to be respectful at all times ESPECIALLY when concerning their charge.

>>30306042
Good update nonetheless. Get some rest friendo. May I offer a toast in your friend's honor?

"Here's to lying, stealing, cheating and drinking.
If you must lie, lie to save a friend.
If you must steal, steal the heart of the one you love.
If you must cheat, cheat death.
When you drink, drink among friends.
Cheers."

>>30305457
>right into the pegasus' waiting arms
>arms
Um, reee?
>Messed up names

Great job again Anon, keep it up.

barrack-wide gang rape when?

>>30306450
I'm more or less writing it with most ponies assuming the Outsider and his marks are an urban legend, and the Overseers aren't as good at their job as they'd like everyone to believe, so that's the one surefire method they tell everyone can signal heresy. Pretty unlucky for Solemn. Also the story will deal with more of the high ranking ponies and nobility of Damwall later on, so there'll be more information about that aspect as well.
>>30306488
Thanks Anon, I'd drink to that toast.

>>30306450
> No guard at night
Anonymous lives in Canterlot castle, which has its own guard force. Like Victorian/Georgian-era footmen, his personal bodyguards are almost more for show than anything else.

>>30306471
> Did you mean Sparkshower?
Yes... Yes I did. OK, no more posting without reading it over at least twice and double-checking the names.

>>30306756
I'll fix this in the pastebin tonight.

>>30306756
I was wondering about this too, is this anthro/eqg?

>>30308047
No, just a typo.

Last time.
https://pastebin.com/u4HbciFL

>"Anon." She spoke sharpy.
>"We have reason to believe this wasn't just a random attack, rather... an assassination."
"Assassination?"
>The idea ran through your head, you were bamboozled by the thought.
>Someone is purposely trying to kill you? Why? What for? and how did they know you were here?
"But, Why?"
>"We don't know. The fact that they managed to find you, and bypass Canterlot security tells me we have a higher power seeking your head."
>A shiver rolls down your spine, your bones numbing from top to bottom.
>"Rest assured, we are tracking the issue at hand, our investigation team is looking deeply into it."
>Her words helped some, but not enough to ease your mind.
"Th-thank you."
>"You may return to the infirmary if you wish, I'll dispatch a new bodyguard at once."
"No. She's fine." You spittle.
>Celestia began to spoke "B-." She promptly stopped herself, however.
>She sighs. "As you wish."
>You feel a sense of relief wash over your mind.
>"Well then, This meeting is dismissed."
"Thank you."
>A small smile, slowly appearing on her face.

>>30308359
Oh hey, you're back.

>>30306767
>Several beefy and sweaty stallion guards taking turns to destroy a guardmare's every orifice with their dicks
Sounds interesting.

>>30309247
*quickly hides bad end #3*

>>30309277
It's not a bad end if you are a part of that gang.

boop the bat butt bump

Tornado warning going on here, maybe I'll be able to get some writing done during it if the power goes out

>>30309838
Boop?
>>30309919
Just be sure to save your progress first, don't want to finish a large section only for it to be deleted.

>>30309277
Get to compiling those bad ends into a pastebin for us damnit

>>30306042
Thanks for the update Whiskey.

Are we going to kill the Outsider?[\spoiler]

>>30309277
This is the one bad end I'd want to read

>>30310029
>>30310118
Unfortunately right now I'm working on the one where Gallan loses and Gyphrus ends up owning Rewind

>>30309919
Are you an oklahomafag?

>>30310228
Nope Wisconsin

>>30307399
I've corrected all outstanding issues in the pastebin:

https://pastebin.com/RHkvDaAw

>>30310408
Neat, update when?

>>30310433
Almost certainly not until the weekend. I don't have a lot of time tonight or tomorrow night, and I don't want to put out an error-filled trasheap like last update.

>>30310452
Its okay then, take your time m8.

>>30310229
Ah, where from? I've got family in Oshkosh and Beaver Dam.

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Reminder that Rewind if for love and cuddles.

Anything else will be punished severely.

>>30311068
Tell the bad end crowd.

>>30310408
Looks good.

>checking it twice
Something I find myself doing many times. Yet, my mind knows what I mean and will fill in any blanks so it's still possible for little slip-ups to sneak past.

Rewind ain't anyone's beeyotch. She's her own mare!

little do we expect... Blu is about to drop 23 posts of ultra lewd green with all the mare dicking and foal making our tiny little brains can handle

>>30312470
>inb4 he leaves for another thread

>9

>>30312470
From your keyboard to Lord Kek's eyes.

>>30308359

>With the meeting done, you nodded to the princess and head out of the throne room.
>As you exit the throne room, you can see across the hallway a trio of ponies dressed in some black jumpsuits, wearing optics of somesort over their eyes.
>They quietly discuss among each other.
>Walking toward the infirmary they give you a quick glance, and return their gazes towards themselves.
>Special forces? Black ops?
>Who knew. All the ponies you've seen up until were fairly open about their colors.
>These three were concealed in a blackness to prevent even their manes from showing.

>Upon entering the infirmary, Feather Scarf lays down, one hoof to her cheek gazing at you.
>"Morning."
>Smiling back, you respond with. "Mornin'"
>"How'd you sleep?"
"Like a king."
>She smirked, giving out a giggle.
>You make your way over to your bed, sitting across from her.
"So, How do you feel?"
>She tilts her head, looking into her past. "Well, I'm feeling surprisingly well, even after that attack."
>"How about you?"
"Stings, but I'll walk it off."
>"You better. I don't do cry babies."
>hah.
>The cold air circles around you.
"I need some clothes..."
>"Clothes? What for?"
"It's a cultural thing where I come from."
>"Oh, Yeah. Now I remember, you said something about that in the meeting."
>You nod your head.
>"I know the perfect place."

After reading my pastebin, I've come to a conclusion that I'll be doing some editing.

I'll be rewriting and rewording sentences to be less redundant.

Grammar will be fixed (i -> I.) And general changes to improve the wording flow.

Anon has an inconsistent attitude, and there's poor character interaction that'd I'd like to refine.

Keep an eye out for Feather Scarf, as I'll be doing some revisions. It's just getting started.

>>30315155
Will do writefag, come back soon, ya hear.

>>30315155
i'll have to reread the pastebin too. let us know when you finish editing.

Where is rape guard pastebin???

>>30315883
Not wanted or kept because it was a shitpost, so get lost. The faggot might be in the Slave thread last time he fucked off, check there.

>>30315934
>Removing other's pastebins or refusing to add one to the OP just because you have a personal problem with said story
You are a real fucking shithead.

>>30316373
>Implying it wasn't thread wide and only one person decides things here.
See that rule at the top of the thread? Follow it.

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>>30316388
>>Implying it wasn't thread wide
the ones who whined about it were just the majority, so fuck off

>>30316463
So your one of those assmad faggots trying to start shit with faked surveys? Nice to see you idiots got off banning. So you're just going to try and gets (you)s here like old times or something? There is just you here right now, so where are the other three, did they get off banning yet too, or were they just you samefagging? If you don't feel like giving a actual answer and just want to baitpost till the mods pick you up again, I guess that's your prerogative then.

>>30316504
tl;dr
all i read was "fake survey", and if that's really what you're going to hide behind, sure, let's have another
http://www.strawpoll.me/13200265

>>30315155
I like the premise and I like Feather. I'd love to add her to the harem in my mind. But the overall flow of the story just doesn't feel right. Dialog and interactions between MCs and others seemed either stiff or odd.

For example.
>"Well then, This meeting is dismissed."

If the meeting was over for all parties involved...
>"Well then; meeting adjourned."

If the meeting is to continue with the others in attendance and not Anon...
>"Well then; you are dismissed."

Good luck with the rewrite. I'll look forward to reading what you come back with.

>>30316548
I always thought it sounded like it was one person talking at any given time. >>30315155
but good luck to writefag.

I don't want '>Rape' here either.

>>30316522
Rape is fine, but it better be well written.
Not just some random guard mare, randomly gang banged in some random location.
Make me feel to horror the fear, show us the trauma and the struggles of dealing with such, the pain and suffering of recovery.

I want a story not some wrist flick into a doc file.

>>30316563
Do you mean character 'voices'? If so, yes. They were hard to distinguish as well.

>>30316589
I found it kind of hard to tell one from the other, it was like watching someone talk to themselves, if it wasn't for the green lines I would have thought the guy was going insane...actually that sounds like a good idea. Anon getting stuck somewhere until he goes insane, then gets picked up by the guard.

>>30316719
That IS a good idea.

>Anon 'appears' out in some remote part of the White Tail Woods. (Because Everfree is too easy a 'go to'.)
>Shelters in a cave and manages to survive for quite awhile.
>Starts talking to inanimate objects a la "Castaway".
>A small squad of guardmares comes across Anon as they scout ahead of an expeditionary party commissioned by Princess Twilight Sparkle.
>Anon thinks he's hallucinating. "Talking ponies, what?" moments.

Character interaction was never my strong suit.

After not writing for days, it's hard for me how characters react. I'm just a very monotone kind of person.

I'll be aiming to exaggerate certain character speaking styles.

I wanted to have Anon be a logical and the kind of person to think about their thoughts or situation as opposed to being vocal.

I have Celestia as a very professional kind of person, though it's hard to adapt personality traits with the little time we've seen of her on screen.

Feather Scarf is supposed to be that subtle Tomboy. Not rough like Rainbow Dash though.

I'll see what I can do.

>>30317074
You sound like someone good at writing Maud.

>>30317074
well that's the whole point of writing, really
you improve as you do more of it. you'll get there anon, and ill enjoy reading whatever you make regardless

I gave an edit on the beginning, not too much, I'm likely to do further revisions at a later date.

I might write later if you guys are still up for it.

>>30317715
Sounds good, but if your still having trouble revising, go ahead and take your time finishing that up.

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>xd randumb bat pony and/or serious 90% of the time tsundere guard with pussy slayer Anon story #40515883
>Boop xdddddddddddddddddddd
>Hoof-holding lewd ahahaha so funny
>autistic freakouts about rape story, go so far as to literally remove the guys work from the OP because it triggers you
>writers literally admitting they can't write personalities or dialogue but they still get people sucking their cock raw
What a thread

>>30317835
I don't really think that's a fair statement.

It's /mlp/, what do you expect?
If it's really that annoying then switch to a different thread or board. Nobody is stopping you.
>inb4 hehexd triggered
I don't care.
>but you replied XDDDD
To inform you that your efforts were in vain.

>>30317972
>If it's really that annoying then switch to a different thread or board. Nobody is stopping you.
Not him, but that is the biggest non-argument you can make.

>>30317972
>I don't really think that's a fair statement.
I do.
>It's /mlp/, what do you expect?
People not getting mad at rape & being down-to-earth instead of simply praising absolutely everything no matter how shit.
>>inb4 hehexd triggered
>>but you replied XDDDD
Sweet strawman my dude, you sure showed me by putting groundless words in my mouth

>>30318036
That's exactly what you were going to pull on me anyways.
Don't play dumb.

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>>30318041
>when you try to accuse someone of baiting but then pull a 180 and go full strawman 'give me (you)s mode' instead

What sort of disciplinary punishments are handed out to Royal Guards who get into a fight with each other? Anything from a little scuffle at the chow hall to a full-on bar brawl after hours.

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No love for our boys in gold?

>>30318323
Well if they had their armor on, it'd be a problem. They'd probably just send them to do menial things for a while.

Though, I guess it'd also depend on the pones you're thinking of. A fight in my headcanon is two mares making fun of each other's moms until one cries.

>>30318504
Let's say it starts at exchanged words and in the first degree ends with no noticeable damage (e.g., pulled apart by others before they could really strike heavy blows), second degree ends with some black eyes and bruises, and third degree ends up with somepony KO'd (but no no more physical damage than second degree).

What sort of punishments would be meted out for each degree? How easy would it be for a guardpony to escape punishment with the collusion of their superiors?

>>30318570
That would work for fluffy universes, otherwise they may just get custodial duty.

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Guard escort for a archivist story when?

Guard mares will not go quietly into the night.

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butt bump v2, now with actual butt

>>30319791
>ArchivistAnon is the escort assignment from hell.
>But princess celestia declared him her precious cinnamon roll and ordered you to protect his smile.
>And you could see why, his passion for researching equestrian history and unearthing artifacts from the disharmonic age and even prequestrian era was simply a joy to behold.
>You just wish he didnt insist on leading expeditions himself.
>"How can i trust that we learned everything unless i go myself, its saving the expense of two trips to be honest."
>The one time the princess put her hoof down about waiting for the first party to make sure some ruins were safe they ended up accidently destroying the entire thing.
>From the reports a member attempted to leave with a cup shaped relic, causing a magical resonance once it passed over the threshold of it's sanctuary.
>Anon simply muttered "amatuers" before continuing his sulk.

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>>30321642
I can see it now, Anon having misadventures.

"Ahh! BAD DAY BAD DAY BAD DAY!"

>>30314936

>You raise your head. "Huh."
>She gets up effortlessly.
>Her hooves make their way to her armor, she starts putting on.
"Is it alright for you to be moving around already?"
>"Pffft, This is nothing, Anon."
>Her smile reassures you.
>She begins to strap on her equipment, while you sit there and wait.
>Watching her, you look over her some more.
>A soft, white coat, big blue eyes, and that silky red mane.
>You spotted her "Cutie Mark."
>It looked like a steel colored Morion helmet, with a blue feather sticking out from the back of it.
>After dressing her torso equipment she moves to equip her helmet and slides it on.
>She tightens down her straps and looks back at you.
>"Everything look straight?"
>Your gaze glides up and down her.
>The metallic armor covering her sides, rear and head.
>Huh, fitting.
>"Anon?"
>You shake your head, and look back at Feather's face.
"Y-Yeah, It's straight."
>"Alright! Move out!"
>The two of you make your way out of the infirmary.
>The guards still stand their, faces stoic.
>You give them a nod, and whisper; "Thanks."
>They salute the Captain and continue looking forward.

>You exit the castle. The skies clear and the snow about an inch deep.
>The place was much brighter, and a lot prettier now that you could see the details of the stone.
>The city was neat, clean. The walls of the buildings in top shape. It looked like an ideal and happy city.
"Wow, It's beautiful out here."
>"Damn straight." She says, smirking.

>There was a two story building that Feather lead you to.
>It had a wide set of stairs leading to a door with a heart shaped window.
>The sign read... "Canterlot Carousel"
>You looked at Feather.
>She looked back at you, smiling.
>"Alright Anon, you ready?"

>>30321059
>Batpony with fangs
Luna's guards don't have fangs in the show.

>>30321642
>>30321753
That would perfect. Indiana Johns and Jackie Chan would be the most entertaining mix ever....fuck, now I miss that series.

>>30322025
Hey there Bat autist, do you have ANYHING better to do? Because Moth Ponies don't exist at all, how's that trigger you?

>>30322001
>The guards still stand their, faces stoic.
there*
>"Wow, It's beautiful out here."
it's* doesn't need to be capitalized.
Cute little poner description.

>>30322060
Thanks Anon. I just felt a little guilty leaving the thread to starve.
I'll have the revisions done when I update the pastebin.

>>30322045
Moths are cute, and they don't go around claiming that everything they've made up is canon, nor do they post memes everywhere.
Speaking of moths, are there any moth guards?

>>30322088
>fragile bug poners.
You're funny.

>>30322088
>They don't go around claiming everything they do is cannon
>Moths are cute
>Really cant tell the difference or the irony of his statement.
Well, I am sure your mental disability check is nice. Have your tried not choking on so much dick that it kills your braincells? You don't have many left.

>>30322112
>Really cant tell the difference
Have you seen any mothfags post their stuff nearly as often as batfags post their stuff?

>>30322133
Because they know they're less cannon than a bat pony
Plus there is no one that autistic to be triggered by them being around...well besides you.

>>30322155
>Because they know they're less cannon than a bat pony
Breezies are but smaller mothponies.

>>30322218
Breezies are still a thing though, mothponies aren't. You are arguing cannon features with your favorite not even existing. You are the dumbest autist here. Or at least one of the dumbest autists. At least batponies were shown to have fangs, and you know, actually exist.

>>30322244
>Breezies are still a thing though, mothponies aren't.
>Luna's guards who don't have fangs are still a thing though, bloodsucking batponies with fangs aren't

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>>30322267
You know, I was going to ignore you, but this is really going to be the last (you) you're getting.
You said, bat ponies don't have fangs, I pointed out they do. You said moth ponies don't go around claiming everything they do is cannon. I point out that they don't exist period. You go on a tangent saying that Breezies exist, then imply why not moth ponies. I proceed to agree that the Breezies do exist in show, but mothponies still don't. You then agree with that statement, and then contradict yourself saying this
>Luna's guards who don't have fangs are still a thing though, bloodsucking batponies with fangs aren't
I will finish this conversation off by telling you, even if some of Luna's guards don't show off having fangs, they were still shown to have them. Which is the entire point of the debate. Whether or not they suck blood is irrelevant. But until proven otherwise it is still more believable that they do suck blood or at least have fangs then moth ponies existing at all. Checkmate you retarded autist, and this is the last (you).

>>30322035
>>30321753
>Anon has Indiana jones fashion sense, Jackie chan's fighting skills and 'skills', and a combination of their luck and mannerisms.
>After accompanying him on an adventure to the PG version of Temple of doom, Spike asks Anon to teach him how to fight.
>Equestrian logic forces anon to sing about it.
>https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=d6IYt2qMj1A

>>30322346
That would be great, Spike could be Anon's little...fuck, what was the kids name? I want to Round Round, but I am not sure.

>>30322319
>But until proven otherwise
I would post screenshots from the show where they don't have fangs, and post the first comics where they appeared, but that would be a waste of time on autists like you.

>>30322370
How about you do that, then I can show the ones where they do have fangs. And after we are done with your pointless show and tell, you can show me ONE, cannon moth pony. Your entire problem is them having fangs because? You never say why you hat bat ponies, and I am really curious. Were you a fan of Bat pony general, but they did something like having fun you didn't like and now you hate them forever? I'm not even from there and just like our bat guards here, but even your persistent autism is intriguing.

>>30322395
>then I can show the ones where they do have fangs.
Ten bucks says your are going to show a screenshot of NMM, or a page from a later comic.

>>30322450
Are you ever going to answer that question, or are you going to keep dodging? Last question.

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>>30322469
>I don't watch the show
Are you a fan of the fandom?

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>>30322469

>>30322487
....the fuck are you talking about? That wasn't the question. That wasn't even brought up.

>>30322499
Kek, no one has teeth in that pic, and silly elite Luna is a cute.

>>30322354
Short Round

Can you guys take this shit elsewhere? You're both shitting up the thread.

>>30322526
That's the fucking name, I knew it was round something. Thank you. Now who would the...I guess chaperone, be for them?
>>30322533
Sorry, I'll stop talking to it.

>>30322552
>Sorry, I'll stop talking to it.
Great. Refusing to talk to your own reflection in a mirror takes a lot of strength.

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>>30322354
>>30322552
Random guardmares, obviously.

>Spike keeps accompying him on adventures, the instantaneous communication with canterlot on danger / new finds / supplies proving invaluable on long trips, he and anon become best of bros.
>Being away from Twilight's OCD and listening to Anon's stories of ancient civilisations, previous adventures and his life on earth on a nightly basis causes spike to develop a thirst for research.
>Starts poring over all the books, manuscripts and other writings the expedition has found / brought with them, asking Anon questions that he answers and expands upon, happy to talk with a new perspective on things.
>Notices he's gotten slightly taller after a week of this, freaks out about his greed problem before realising he doesnt want to grab everything in sight.
>Turns out hoarding knowledge also triggers growth in dragons, just not as much as physical objects.
>His larger size, fighting ability and newly discovered passion for learning gives the guards stationed with them the sudden realisation that he isnt a 'baby' dragon any more, the fact he can be a perfect gentlecolt is just icing on the cake.
>Guardmares start arguing over whether Spike or Anon would make the better husbando, both of them being oblivious as the guard struggle to keep things professional.

>>30322783
Kek, that would be some gold

I am this >>30316908 Anon and I am liking this >>30319791 >>30321642 >>30322783 idea much better. Someone please make it so.

>>30323266
Why not both?

>>30323293
Well, that would certainly make for a long story. Maybe make his arrival in Equestria the prologue. He was an archaeologist back home and as such gets chummy with Luna and/or Twilight. His passion for ancient civilizations interests the former and the love of research and knowledge interests the latter.

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Batponies with fangs are noncanon.
Batponies screeching are noncanon.
Batponies and their obsession with "le random mangoes xDD" are noncanon.
Batponies exist, but not to the extent that the fans have taken them to special snowflake levels.
I don't like batponies.

I'm also writing interspecies guardsmare rape, fight me.

>>30323754
Neat, did you do anything worth reading yet? Because playing on the side of an autistic shitposter doesn't count.

>>30323879
Sorry you can't enjoy something unless it's got a self-insert for you to fantasize about being, buddy.

>implying I'm taking his side
I do what I want, and like what I like. It just so happens that he and I share the same viewpoints. Funny thing that, huh?

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>>30323942
Uh huh, you do know that we had someone exactly like you before right? You sure you just don't feel mad no one likes your rape and autistic shitposting about bats? Not that it matters, your on the bottom rung of the thread for a reason. So do you mang, if you aren't that shitposter then at least you're actually doing something besides begging.

>>30323980
I find it funny that you physically can't believe that there's more than one person likes something that you don't. It's a bit sad
I also find it funny that you think insulting my green is having an impact, but keep it up

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the writefag was the batfag all along. sure wasnt expecting that.

>>30324155
Neither was I, pretty sure no one saw it coming. At least one of them grew up not being completely useless. So I'll give him that. Wait a second, I just got an idea. Anon is friends with his posy of Royal Guards, they all go out doing fun adventures, but for some reason a pattern of unplaceble annoyances plague the group whenever they go out. Until on one particular day one of them comes out and says it was them all along(like a Dio meme), and says they were part of the problem all along.

>>30323754
>Batponies exist, but not to the extent that the fans have taken them to special snowflake levels.
That's the main problem. Bats are fine, but batfags are insufferable. Everything they touch goes to LOL XDDDD BAZINGA levels of shit and I'll never understand how it falls apart that fast. I'm legitimately afraid they're going to ruin Vannie at some point.

Hell, even that obnoxious mango thing. It came from Arrhythmia, a certified Not Shit who's creator was cool with whatever. Just her favorite food, barely ever came up. Then the fucking batfags hear it, immediately go O M G THATS SO RANDUM LOL and it's fucking everywhere and they literally will not shut up about it years later.

>>30324313
You know, I keep hearing about how bad these batfags are, and yet the one thing I never see is it happening here. So if you just shut the fuck up about it then we can move on. Vannie is best bat and if you are too dumb to stop attracting attention then that's your problem.

>>30324383
>>30324313
They already ruined Vannie with the stupid screeching meme like this >>30304339
I've never seen a batpony that hasn't followed all those annoying tropes

>>30324436
....she actually screed in the story you dumbass, that wasn't batfags that spook you like a Vietnamese soldier, that was a legit pic. I guess you really are that faggot anti bat autist, you still cant fucking read other peoples stories. Hell, for the list of dumb memes, that one has to be the most tame thing on the face of 4chan, and yet that is ALWAYS the first thing you jump too.

>>30324481
I know she did a fucking screech in the story, it doesn't make it better regardless. It's a shitty meme in the first place, all of them are.

>>30324509
Well, I guess you showed me why you were so off when I read your post. You are the lunatic retard with autism to powerful to function. Plus side is everyone can recognize when you samefag replying to yourself. You are one of the dumbest people on the thread.

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>>30324541
>t-there can't possibly be more than 1 person that doesn't like what I like!
>samefag! samefag!

Imagine being so delusional that this is what you legitimately think.

Without wanting to add to the pile of shitposting, and out of genuine curiosity as someone who might be planning to write a story including a batpony character, would someone care to just enumerate the overdone/bad aspects of that species? Just as a "probably-don't-do-this" reference guide for potential greentexts.

>>30325000
There aren't any, just one guy having an autism fit. Aside from the occasional post of kill the flying rat, you wont do anything wrong. If there are magically two, or even three, its probably just Yoohoo or one of the other old faggot shitposters.

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>>30325000
>Anything to do with vampires.
>Fruit addiction.
>Screeching.
>They're more 'fun' / 'unorthodox' than the standard guard.
That's the most commonly used traits for bat poners, there's nothing stopping you from writing your characters like that, but it's the equivilant of writing a nigger eating watermelon, a brit drinking tea or an american being a gun-nut.
Stereotypes essentially, they have their place but writing them well takes more effort than usual.

>>30325077
I thought you said they weren't cannon, so how can they be stereotypes? Make up your mind Yoohoo, are they or aren't they. Because none of the things you complained about are worth being annoyed with.

>>30325104
I'm not him, i didnt complain about those things, just saying they're the most commonly used traits and that just slapping them onto a character is boring because there's dozens of stories that feature them.
Stereotypes in fanfics / green, like pegasi doing bird things.

>>30325077
OK, I wasn't planning any of those. Although the cutting blades attached to the hoof shoes in your pic are kinda neat. Or would they be considered too "Nothing personel, kid"?

>>30325160
Pegasi do bird things because, well...they are bird ponies. But the fruit addiction isn't even a thing used here, neither is the vampire thing, aside from the occasional Emphermal post dump, then the screeching austist comes out and screams while we enjoy reading it. Screeching is used to cute effect when used, so that will be ignored, besides the fact that, that's what bats do. Unorthadox is a requirement, by shear virtue of the person responsible for working with them being on the moon and having a different time shift. That is inherently unavoidable, and throwing a bitchfit over that is kind of a necessity.
>>30325186
Nah, those hoof blades are just fine, easy to use while flying and used in combat. Its like the equivalent of using a karambit, just sized up. And the only people that would complain about it is Yoohoo apparently, and the supposed second guy you just responded too. No one else here knows about any of the memes or cares.

>>30325199
>and throwing a bitchfit over that is kind of a necessity.
brainfart, throwing a bitchfit over what is kind of a necessity is pointless.

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>>30325199
Like i said, they're not BAD, they just tend to be overused in stories.
Up to you if you want to go full Ow the edge with the claws, as a concept they make sense because quadruped's cant really hold weapons properly with their hooves outside of magic / cartoon logic, and pony hooves are wicked strong already so adding something to them to get that extra oomph is a no brainer.

>>30325199
By stories i meant in general, not just this thread.
See above, none of the traits i listed are bad, they're just common and subsequently hard to write in an interesting fashion.
And by unorthadox i meant acting unprofessional / wilder than their day counterparts, their official leader being AWOL and the fact they're on the night shift doesnt mean they should act like more you'd expect from mercenaries, that's something i see far too much of in fanfic.
I'm not sure why you think i'm throwing a bitchfit over this, i like discussing characters.

>>30325321
Oh I'm not saying you would throw a bitchfit, just that someone will, probably Yoohoo, if you don't, great, more power to you.

>>30324566
Why are you just antagonizing people? Did something happen in your personal life so you decided to start shit on a mongolian basketweaving forum because you know you'll get a reaction?

>>30322045
I'm glad I'm no longer the only vocal bat hater anymore. As to your moth question...

They stay in thier thread. I ignore said thread. The hatred (justified) of faggots leaking from thier thread is interesting since batfags leaking over is OK.

Its painful to see some of the literary genius lost in a sea of 'EEEE Mangos Praise Luna'. While I could have just continued poking at Blus story, the fact that a good chunk of the thread is now either bat art or bat defenders proves my point.

>>30326192
You are still saying people here are bat defenders when none of the things you throw a fit over have happened Yoohoo. Just say you like bats, or you don't. Because your retardation is getting to annoying to keep up with. The only people that ever know what a bat meme remotely looks like is you, and then we tell you too ignore the bat meme because we learned its a meme, from you, so if you just stopped bitching about it then it isn't a fucking problem. Diaperfags, regular fags, baitfags, ACTUAL fetish garbage that is too niche to even be considered, THOSE are things to be mad about when they show up to derail a thread. Autistic screeching at every single pic that you religiously know the backstory too will not help any argument you make because A) only you know about it, and B) Only you care. So why did you feel the need to bring your phobias up again, to discourage a new writefag that showed up here? Because if all you have to bitch about is a few autist from a thread you used to like, making silly pictures about a story you liked, instead of whatever deep meaning it had is triggering you, then you have less right to bitch about calling other people batfags. Because unlike the bat ponies, moths are PURELY fan made, and in response to that, they stay in their thread. So when people like you go around bitching about mangoes and shit being the end of the world and bat ponies are the worse thing to happen, then you are only bringing more attention you don't want to things you like. Because it is so god damn easy to get you screaming that it isn't even a challenge, when other shitposters do things, its pretty obvious when they do it, but when people that don't know what memes(that you hate) see what you consider shitposting, all they see is a silly picture and move on. When you complain, it just makes people side with them more to fuck with you.

>>30326271
Autistic rant done, going to bed folks. keep an eye on the board and all that, I think some summer kids are still screwing around.

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>>30326271
Still not me. Saying that it's me over and over doesn't make it true
Just accept the fact that more than one person hates something you don't
>inb4 shopped

>>30326271
Another bat hater checking in. Fuck off moron, it's insane how you think that it's impossible for a group of people to dislike something cancerous rather than just one

I miss careful

>>30326316
Yoohoo, buddy, I am only going to point this out once, you are one of the know faggot shitposters that tried to derail the thread, we know your group of idiots used proxies when banned, so literally anything you say whether or not it is from you with your name or not is suspect. There is a perfect minuet between "your" post and the guy below it. Just stop complaining about bats when we currently only have one in the thread, maybe two if you didn't manage to scare off the maybe writefag asking questions.
>>30326326
You use the same writing pattern when you get pissed about bats or anyone calling you an idiot when you see one. Be it an actual meme or otherwise. Only you call it a cancer when there is nothing there but people or me laughing at you. So just stop showing your stupid, stick to your writing, and be something other than a retarded faggot like the others. You being here for so long without being noticed until now is highly commendable, and if you actually have some fans of a story your writing, great for you man, you should be proud. But acting like a bitch and antagonizing someone that wasn't all that interested in what you were posting, to the extent of alienating any of your real fans, is too your detriment. So chill the fuck out, get some lemonade(unless that triggers you as bad as the mangoes), pull up a fluffy guard pone, and relax.

>>30326373
She is a good girl, hopefully Safety can get us some insight on how she's been doing. Pay close attention to any odd quirks around her home, we need to know if its time for emergency snuggles.

>>30326271
I don't know why I'm responding to this autistic textblock but here we go:
>You are still saying people here are bat defenders when none of the things you throw a fit over have happened Yoohoo.
I was here on day one of the guard mare threads. After a couple threads, bat posters began posting bait.
>http://desuarchive.org/mlp/thread/28329633/#28329633
Thread #4. 2 mentions of bat ponies.
http://desuarchive.org/mlp/thread/28385429/#28385429
Thread #5. 30~ mentions of bat ponies. Reasonable(ish) discussion about whether bats should be allowed or not. Discussion popped up because of flutterbat.
http://desuarchive.org/mlp/thread/28429802/#28429802
Thread #6. Bat shitposting begins as result of CV
http://desuarchive.org/mlp/thread/28499227/#28499227
Thread #7. Bat shitposting increases.
http://desuarchive.org/mlp/thread/28561717/#28561717
Thread #8. Bat shitposting increases.
Etc. etc. etc. Scroll down the thread. Our resident bat shitposters seem to have moved on by now but the anti-bat sentiment is still here because of the baiters.

>>30326388
This is a third person. From my point of view, your "argument" completely collapses since it hinges on your literal groundless assumption that it's only Yoohoo who dislikes bats. Continuing to spam 'samefag samefag xddd' does nothing and it just makes your look stupider. The only person being autistic here is you, buddy, with your preteen-tier 'how many curse words can I fit into a sentence' writing style and your strawman-only rebuttals.

Man first my favorite thread on /o/ and now this one swallowed by pointless arguments. Can't catch a break.

>>30326436
Eh, we were overdue for one, at least its not something so groundbreakingly stupid that it destroys an entire thread. It should calm down in a bit.

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>>30326485
When it's that time again

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So what's the random autism about now?

>>30326500
american vs. cheddar cheese

>>30326503
Pepperjack and Provolone master race.

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>>30326510
>Provolone
are you trying to make me puke?
provolone is worse than that maggot cheese
disgusting tastes 0/10

also i think captcha is trying to tell me something

>>30326431
Do you even get the point of my argument? If there are too people then that's fine, still doesn't mean the batfags they are so extremely pissed at are here anymore, if they were here a long ass time ago when the thread was young and that bat place was still up, then that doesn't make it a special occurrence to start screaming at every little thing with bat wings, with the knowledge that it is a meme or something stupid. If there are zero post after it, aside from mister screeching autist, then its nothing. We may have a writefag, but we don't have a lot of Vannie pics, so generic bat pics would have too do. But yelling at them anyways is such a waste of energy and time that it isn't even worth bringing up at this point like it was Vietnam flashback. But good for you on finding the actual batposter they so fervently hate and guard us from...even when they have been go for so long I cant even remember the last time we had a shitshow like this.
>>30326500
Yoohoo was one of the original faggot shitposters(i.e. the antibat guy that yelled a lot), and me and a few others trying to get him to calm his tits.
>>30326503
>>30326510
...but I eat all of these, so what does that make me? Also a tangent that can bring us back on track.
What kind of sandwich would you make your guardmare when she comes home from her patrol?
>>30326520
kek.

>>30326530
two* never try to type when your asleep kids.

>>30326530
I meant to say, we may have a drawfag...fuck it, I am laying down. Debate cheese while I sleep and the perfect guard sandwich.

>>30326530
A beet on wheat sandwich with shredded cabbage.

I'm pretty much the original hater of flying rodents. I realize it must be tough to find out there are many who dislike your speshul snowflake le edgy batpones but here we are.

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>>30326628
I don't particularly care. A cute pone is a cute pone, no matter the form of pone she takes.

I miss brave and vannie

>>30326687
I miss all of our guardmares

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>>30326729
The shitposting scared them away.
It's kind of like when mommy and daddy are fighting, and the kids go to their rooms to hide from the anger and bad words.
But instead of your parents, it's a dozen or so retards all crammed into a 6 by 9 jail cell screeching at the top of their lungs, and the guards all went into the break room until the idiots tired themselves out.

>>30327254
>All the Guardmares in the breakroom playing cards.
>"Are they done yet?"
>Vannie leans back and pokes her head out the door.
>"REEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE"
>"Few more minutes, got any fives?"
>Careful throws the cards across in disgust, her hoof having been reduced to two.
>Their respective writefag are gathered around a giant stone block, slowly chipping away at it.
>The pen may be mightier than the sword, but a hammer and chisel would probably be more suitable.

so after that lovely little bitch-fest does this mean one of the other writefags is going to come out as the raging homophobic autistic.

>>30327870
This is some green I'm willing to see.
Write fags are talking and taking care of their poners discussing among themselves day to day life.

>>30328525
You're going to get a big spanking when we get home, mister

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>>30328477
"Dude, how do you deal with the protesters?"
>"Which ones?"
"The neckbeards that say the batguards are abominations and need to be de-fanged, the faggots that complain about how much guardstallion cock you're NOT sucking, I don't know, all of them?"
>"Well, in general, I just ignore them and go about my business. Eventually they'll either just tire themselves out, get sidetracked by something else that offends them, or get hungry and go for some chicken tendies. That usually gives me a few hours of peace."

bump from 9

>>30329371
toppest cute

>>30326295
>keep an eye on the board and all that
>Hurr, I'm the self-appointed cop of /mlp/
No, you're not. All you are doing is starting shitstorms with EVERYONE who enjoys things you don't in threads you don't even hang out in.
Everything would be a lot more peaceful if you weren't so unbelievably fucking autistic that you can never read the tiniest post you personally don't like without getting triggered and screeching like a retard. Your massive walls of text is proof of that.

bump from 9

>>30328402
Fuck you fag (I'm just kidding please don't crucify me)

>>30331552
No is going to crucify you, unless they some shitposting faggots that would have done it anyway.

>>30331580
no one*

>>30328402
>>30331552
reee i hate the lesbian stuff even though ive been writing it

>>30331594
It aint lesbian if its to get ready for a dicking or putting on a show. Its a simple fact.

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batto ga daisuki

If I wrote Vannie out would that make everyone happy?

>>30332861
......Blu, are you seriously considering sucking up to the autistic retards that drop by to shitpost? Keep best bat in, Brave needs company when Anon does something dumb.

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>>30332861
Don't be silly.

>>30332861
Are you actually Blu, or just a shitposter trying to stir shit up as usual? Because you don't have the trip.

>>30332861
YES! Make sure its in gory and violent death. Let the rodent suffer!!!

>>30332861
No

Hey guys, sorry for not writing today, I'll write some tommorow.

Keep an eye out if you're interested.

>>30333297
Oh, and another thing.
I was too big of a dumbass to reread Vannie and Brave, so I accidentally created Feather with the same colors.
The only difference is; she has brighter blue eyes and a whiter coat.

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>>30332861
>people responding like this is actually blu
newfags

>>30332861
>In the event that this really is Blu.
No, keep Vannie. Ignore the haters and baiters. (yeah, the irony of the second isn't lost on me.)

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>>30332861

>>30333712
See you space cowboy.

>>30333712
Farewell comfy pone. Alas, you were to comfy for this world.

>>30332861
Yes.

>>30333712
No, please no.

>>30333712
>Starlight glimmer's time fuckery erased vannie from existance.
Gotta get back, back to the bat.

>>30332861
http://vocaroo.com/i/s0Oasw4S65rn

>>30333712
Right in the feels.

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>>30332861
Let me ask you something, Blu, if that really is you:
The anti-bat fags, are they paying your rent or putting food on your table?
How about the pro-bat fags, are they keeping your lights on or filling your gas tank?
No?
Then fuck them all.
You write for you.
If you want to keep or delete Vannie, go right ahead.
Just be ready to deal with (or outright ignore) some disappointed readers.

With that being said:
>>30333712
You best delete this shit, motherfucker.
It's not fucking funny.

>>30334091
agreed on both counts.

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>>30333712
no

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>>30333712
>In the timeline without Vannie, Anon also lost his right arm.

Boopdate soon.

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cherish the bat
comfort the bat
cuddle the bat

Love the bat

>>30335380
>tfw I was too slow

>>30335398
surprising since this thread could hardly be more dead

>>30305468
> Clearly SPC Sparks hasn't been around many "'corn fields" - all-unicorn regiments.
Belated, but can I say I really love this? Little worldbuilding ticks like slang terms really make the difference between

>>30335582
Thanks. I'm coming up with a little lexicon of such terms.

Unfortunately I won't be able to put out a story chunk this weekend. I've actually had to work most of the time. Damn time overruns on this project.

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>>30335380
Oh hey, this is a really cute pic.

>>30322001
>As you open the door, a unicorn with a bright blue coat and an orange brushed mane greets you.
>"Welcome to Canterlo-"
>She freezes as she sees you. Her eyes widening.
>Her gaze drifts over to Feather.
>She screams. "Detain this beast!"
>Feather lets out a deep sigh.
>"Relax. He's not an animal."
>The unicorn ceases her voice.
>Feather looks to you, then to the mare.
>"In fact, he's here to busy some clothing."
>Shocked, she replies with "What?"
>You clear your throat.
>"I-I just want to buy some clothing."
>She blinks a couple times, astounded by your ability of speech.
>"Oh... Okay."
>"Come right on in, then."
>Entering the building, the place was huge. There were stairs that lead to the upper level and an open floor where ponies could look around and observe the mannequins.
>The mare speaks up. "Welcome to Canterlot Carousel, I am Sassy Saddles."
>Her tone was a lot more confident now.
>"So what would you like?"
>Feather straightens up.
>"We'd like to get some clothing for this guy. It's cold outside and I think we're going to need some custom tailoring."
>Sassy narrows her eyes, looking up and down your body.
>"Hmmm... I see."
>Her gaze breaks and she looks between you and Feather.
>"Any idea what kind of clothing you'd prefer?"
>Feather puts a hoof on her chin, thinking out an idea for clothing.
>"How about... A suit?"
>A suit?
"A suit?"
>She snickers, "Yeah! It'd be funny, wouldn't you think? A monkey wearing a suit."
"Bu-"
>"Aaaaand! It'll help people recognize you're not a monster!"
>That was a pretty good point.
>Who would expect a monster to wear a suit?
"Whatever you say, Feather."
>Sassy responds. >"Splendid! An excellent choice!"
>"Shall I take your measurements?"
>You nod.

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>>30334474
Without vannie only brave could help anon against the catbirbs

>>30335815
"Detain this beast!"
KEK

>>30335815
>The unicorn ceases her voice
Bit of an odd phrasing, try The unicorn stops yelling. Or something like that.
>"In fact, he's here to busy some clothing."
buy* some clothing.
>"I-I just want to buy some clothing."
unnecessary greenline.
>She snickers, "Yeah! It'd be funny, wouldn't you think? A monkey wearing a suit."
"Bu-"
>"Aaaaand! It'll help people recognize you're not a monster!"
Cheeky dickwaffle.
>>30335937
Bizzaro world, Anon didn't get his mares before the kidnapping, loses both his arms Ramboing the camp and escaping, gets back and meets them for the first time, they gatai to form Guardnon, 2 part guard, 1 part overkill monkey.

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>>30323754
Neither are things like wing boners, muh tuft, horn jobs for unicorns, and erf pony super strength being a racial/magic. Why do people pick on bat ponies for fanon? Don't even like them but it's pretty clear you or the guy always complaining about them has a chip on their shoulder beyond muh canon.

>>30336113
What is this fucking terrible quality picture you keep posting, dude.

>>30336113
Their autistic or their uncles touched them with a bat, I do not regret this pun. Plus most of them are the know faggot shitposters, they aren't they bright to begin with, and that isn't even considering they aren't just proxies of the same guy. But that's neither here nor there, lets appreciate snarky guardmare and the racist fashion horse here>>30335815

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>>30335937
>>30336073
So when does he get the crystal prosthetic?

>>30336142
Kek

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What is it about autism that makes people latch on to utterly innocuous things with such a strong, autistic anger and hatred?

It's a fictional bat/pony mix from a little girls cartoon they're screeching at.

>>30335380
Fug the bat's tight little butthole.

>>30332861
Please no blu. pls

>>30336113
For all we know, they could simply just be regular royal guards with enchanted armor.

>>30335815
You improved on the speech patterns for individual characters, I could tell they were different when they were speaking.

>>30336155
probably for the same reason a lot of stuff is hated, it was spammed everywhere with shitty edgy OCs until, even if they stay in their thread, bat ponies were despised, and undoubtebly there are still cancerous OCs like those running around and still being made

Am i the only one that thinks bat ponies are the equestrian equivalent for slavs?

>>30337738
Are you aware you're an idiot? That's the griffons dumbass.

>>30337755
>That's the griffons
Then who are the jews?
And who would the batponies be?

>>30337738
>>30337755
Yeah, gotta agree with this dude, Griffons are totally Equestrias Slavs.
Bat ponies are more like the japs, everyone fknows the stereotypes but they keep to themselves and have some strange shit going on

>>30337824
>Then who are the jews?

Unicorns or diamond dogs.

>>30337843
Unicorns are Jews, they seem to pull the most political power.

Diamond dogs are the Mexicans

I want mothpony guards. They are so damn fluffy and cute.

>>30337841
>Bat ponies are more like the japs
Actually,changelings are more like japs and asians in general with their hive mentality and total devotion to their queen,or were until they betrayed her
Batponies might be more like the swiss,aka rare,keep to themselves and are used mostly as special guards

>>30337977
>Batponies might be more like the swiss,aka rare,keep to themselves and are used mostly as special guards
Or yetis, aka, not proven to exist.

>>30338038
>not proven to exist
Are you dense or just blind?
Or are you one of those "muh body altering spells" believer?

>It's just such an unfamiliar feeling to you- almost as unfamiliar as kissing in the first place.
>But it's also with the only pony you'd ever come to trust, so it's not the least bit unpleasant.
>You can hear tapping beside you, and Anon emerges from the bathroom doorway.
>"So what do you thin- whoaaa, what?"
>Vannie breaks the embrace, and you both turn to look at him eagerly.
>You can feel yourself shudder in anticipation.
>Though, you quickly notice, Anon isn't reacting as you thought he would.
>He seems... upset?
>Slowly walking up to the bed, he rubs the back of his head slowly.
>"Well, uh, I see that this is kind of a bad time, but I'd rather bring it up now and lessen the blow of things."
>He takes a deep breath, and suddenly the air gets more serious.
>Your lower half doesn't really seem to care, though.
>"Is... is something wrong, Anon?"
>He quickly nods, then takes another breath.
>"Vannie, I..."
>Another one.
>The mare in question watches curiously.
>"You're relieved of your duties... Entirely."
>His words tear through the already tense atmosphere.
>"W...what?"
>He just nods.
>"I know this is obviously sudden, and well, terrible timing, but I don't think you should be my guard anymore."
>"B-but I... wh-why?"
>"It's for your own good. I know you don't want to go on that Badlands trip, and you won't NOT go, so I'm not allowing you to."
>She backs away and glances at you, suddenly like you're some kind of stranger.
"Anon, I-"
>He waves a hand.
>"You can't sway me, I know what I'm doing. It's best for everyone that I just say it now."
>Silence fills the room.
>Vannie's head hangs, and her eyes start to water.
>"I just, I..."
>"I'm sorry it has to be this way, Vannie. But I'd rather you stay away and be safe. I've already seen what being near me causes."
>He glances at her wing.
>She wipes her eyes.
>"Th-that, does th-that-?"
>Anon doesn't say a word, and simply nods.
>She lets out a sudden whimper.
>The first few tears fall, and she starts to shiver.

>>30338080
>"I-I'll go! I want to go to the Badlands, please, l-let me!"
>He just shakes his head.
>She whimpers again.
>It's soft, desperate.
>"I-I don't care what h-happens to me- please!"
>Anon's gaze trails to the floor.
>"That's exactly why I'm doing this."
"Anon, this isn't how you should go about things!-"
>"-As a quote from my time goes, 'If you love someone, set them free. If they come back they're yours; if they don't they never were.'"
>"But I-I don't want to GO!"
>She hops over to him, putting her hooves on his chest.
>"Please, y-you're my only special somepony! M-my soulmate!"
>Anon stays silent.
>"I... I l-love you..."
>He shuts his eyes, then steps away from her.
>Her eyes are wide in disbelief, despair...
>Even after everything at the hospital, this is by far the worst you've ever seen her.
>Tears start streaming down her face, and her shaking gets worse.
>In an instant, she crumbles before him, her sobs wracking her whole body.
>She stutters with a few syllables, but mostly just tries to steady her breathing, sucking in air constantly.
>Her gaze moves towards the door, and she sprints towards it.
>Swinging it open, she runs out of the room, her crying muffled and filling the hallway.
>Slowly, it fades out, leaving only silence between you both.
>You're at a loss for words.
>It's so surreal.
>Did... did that just happen?
>You glance over at the ground, where her armor still lays.
>The outfit Anon got, gone with her.
>How could he do this?
>Your only friend...
>Anon sighs.
>You can feel your own eyes start to water.
>Your best friend, just...
>"Well, that was more dramatic than I thought it would be."
>Anger boils up to the surface.
"H-how could you?! How could you just... throw her away like that?! Even after everything?!"
>His expression doesn't change, and he sighs again.
>"I have my reasons."
>Your gaze trails to the floor in disbelief.
>You can't even look at him right now.
>"So... could we still do it?"

that clearly wasnt me

>>30338065
Its a retarded baiter, just ignore them.
>>30338080
ITS TIME FOR A SHOW!

>>30338080
Seems like a bunch of > lines shouldn't have a > as they're the narrator speaking.

>>30338086
Nevermind, its just a shitposter playing as Blu.

>>30338091
>Its a retarded baiter, just ignore them.
>Believing that Luna's canon guards who has no fangs are only normal guards wearing enchanted armor is retarded bait
Fuck off, batposter.

>>30338131
So I am very curious, why do you hate bats so much that you do the mental gymnastics of imagining they would put the effort to enchant armor to look like bats for her guards? Why is that a thing? That is the most retarded waste of resources with no benefit whatsoever.

>end up in Equestria
>end up with a mare guarding you during the day
>she's a bit older than a lot of the others you think
> not easy to guess age on theses horses
>couple of days into her being your guard with some light banter find out she's a professional guard, proper long term girl
>has a husband and two foals she goes back to every night
>bit of a MILF to you think, but you're not horse pussy desperate yet
>she introduces you to said ponies
>two adorable little foals love climbing over you and messing with your strange limbs
>husband is a cool guy who loves talking about earth and tech
>totally become your surrogate family
>horse dad giving you sly tips to woo the mares, and what works after wooing them
>horse mom always willing to add another plate to the table for dinner for you
>and at work is pointing out some of the guard mares she knows are single and interested in your human junk
>both total support you
>the family as a whole celebrate you finding a job that fits you
>your guard mare mom and horse family throwing you a surprise birthday party on the anniversary of landing in equestia
>guard mare mom hugging you tight when your date goes south
>horse dad knocking back some hard ciders with you too
>TFW guard mare mom and family are actually proud of you for being you

>>30338173
>bit of a MILF to you think
either keep it as, to* you*, or you* think*

>>30338173
....I feel sad now. Going to drink for a bit.

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>>30338151
>imagining that the royal guards are simply wearing enchanted armor that changes their looks is more autistic and retarded than imagining that everything the fandom has made up about them, like bloodsucking and eeeeeing and worshipping mangoes is
Go and shout "you have autism" the next time you look at a mirror.

>>30338086
It was not you. Twas I, le epic ruseman! Why would I perform such a dastardly deed? To prove a point.

All that anti-bat shitposting and attempt to justify it got to me. I wanted to bring out the silent pro-bat support I knew was out there. I succeeded.

I didn't expect the feels that >>30333712
hit us with though.

>>30338215
Dude in my depressed, half drunk half asleep, oh Christ I have work tomorrow state, if that the only error I'm calling that a win

>>30338329
>I wanted to bring out the silent pro-bat support I knew was out there.
Now bring out the silent pro-gay support, and the silent pro-moth support, and the silent pro-satyr support, and all the other silent pro-whatever support, 'cuz they are all out there on this board.

Question here. What sort of "Top Gun" esque competitive training programs would the Royal Guards have? And given that the world is largely medieval/renaissance, would they have the equivalent of chivalric battle Tournaments? Jousting, grand mêlée, etc. ?

>>30338358
Fuck no. This is better without those kind. Maybe Satyrs but that's a line crossed. We already have a diaperfag.

Anyway.. Your move anti-bat shitposters.

>>30338359
The wonderbolts?

>>30338358
Just not here aside from the ones shitposting, you idiots are more cancerous.
>>30338359
I imagine it too be like something along the lines of Roman Gladiator training, with tournaments every once in a while to check on progress, finishing up with bouts of marines style training to build up stamina and teamwork building.
>>30338377
Okay, you do realize the anti-bat posters are nothing more than the faggot shitposters from awhile back coming out because one of the lead shitposters was able to stealth around as a writefag for so long. They are just try to act as back up posters...if they are actually there at all. There is the fact they are just proxies use by the individual shitposters like last time.
Because we have been getting double the number of posters than usual since they came back.

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>>30338173
>Literally all of the interesting (to me) threads right now are reminders of how shit my family is.
I fucking hate this board sometimes.
Please never change.

>>30338377
>Fuck no. This is better without those kinds
>Saying no to moths and satyrs
>While saying yes to bats
Are you going to say that only things -you- enjoy is allowed here?
>Calling those who don't like bats shitposters
So I guess everyone is allowed to call you a shitposter because you don't like mothponies, satyrs, gays, and all the other things?

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>>30338417
We're gonna make it, just be prepared for your guardfu.
>>30338432
You want moths, do it yourself. Otherwise, stop making them look like autistic retards that just want dick when you shitpost here.
Satyrs are blatant fetish material with even the most cursory of looks in their thread.
bats are just night time Pegasus

>>30338448
pegasai* not Pegasus.

>>30338432
Hey. I like me a little SAD every now and then. Established rules are no fags.

Moths are and will always be a joke. If they, or Satyrs show up then the community will judge accordingly. They already have toward the HHH group... And its not welcome.

>>30338448
>Satyrs are blatant fetish material

Is there some fanon from those threads I'm not aware of? Because the only fetish that would apply stand alone is xenophilia which applies to fucking any pone.

>>30338359
If we're going to stick with the medieval/renaissance-esque world (good idea, in my opinion) then merely being a professional, full-time soldier in and of itself marked you as something of an elite.
> You may have connections to a lord or noble who would grant you a position in their forces
> You may have impressed said noble or an officer of theirs personally, either with display or action in true combat
> You may be a mercenary, paid by said nobles to fight (or even just stand around looking scary)

I think we can disregard the last option in Equestria, but the second option is a serious one: Equestria has a much greater degree of standing threats to peace and order on a regular basis, so there are probably more options for conscripted or temporarily-raised ponies-at-arms to prove themselves and potentially get a spot in the standing military.

Now, how would they improve themselves once actually within the guard? Well, they'd probably have sparring matches/tournaments/training maneuvers, but I suspect that there'd be less of a focus on 'who can beat more ponies up' and more on 'who can make the best use of ponies in their command'. Additionally, as with non-professional soldiers, the guard probably sees a fair bit of action with chances to stand out for promotion.

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>>30338448
>You want something, do it yourself
>Otherwise, stop making mothponies look like autistic retards that just want dick
>Meanwhile, people are posting batcrap and batmemes almost every day

>>30338481
>Implying you aren't just grabbing memes (you) know about from the bat thread Yoohoo
Shut the fuck up you moron, you bitching will change nothing when the only thing your are complaining about doesn't happen. If your autism doesn't like bats in any form, that's your problem. but don't make other threads look bad for your stupidity, if their is a guard that follows the race, then its fine. No one but you is bringing up mothponies like they were of any relevance to the thread except for (you).

>>30338510
>If your autism doesn't like bats in any form, that's your problem
If your autism doesn't like moths or satyrs in any form, that's your problem. Now stop acting like an autistic child and stop throwing shit at those who do like those things.

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>>30338432
Piss off you insufferable fuck. I have to scroll past your tirades in three fucking generals now, and I've yet to see you get what you wanted. Do you never get tired of being told to fuck off?
Have another one, for good measure:
Fuck off.

Can we stop being retarded for five minutes? and get back to posting hot mares in heavy armor?
Who gives a shit, why do any of you care? let people write what they want.
Vannie is a good character, so what if she's a bat? It's all non-canon anyways, right?
If you want to write about moths then you should! Don't let others make you doubt yourself.
This is /mlp/, there's nothing that shouldn't be allowed as long as it's pony related.
That's what compromise is about, right?

Isn't this a friendship lesson?

>>30338536
The ones who posts batponies get what they want. So what's the difference between the ones who wants to talk about bats, and the ones who wants to talk mothponies or satyrs or all the other things in your only-bats-allowed eyes?

>>30338536
I think one of them became a mod and that's why they have been running around for so long. And since no one else goes to other threads to derail it they cant stop the rest of the board.
>>30338527
>doesn't like moths
Yoohoo, what the hell imply here? Unless you are ranting at supposed batfags for ruining the general you liked, they aren't mentioned or acknowledged for anything because no one cares. If you are the best moth ponies have and you're nothing more than a shitposter, than it will be reflected in the OP right alongside HHH.
>satyrs
No one looks for satyrs unless they were already begging for them, go back to the general you want that pandering shit and don't bother people with no interest in your fetish to make it for you.

>>30338572
Yeah, but you are forgetting that mothponies thing is just a red haring as well as a piss poor strawman. It wasn't a serious issue until Yoohoo got defensive when no one paid attention to it.
>>30338575
....that might make sense if anyone actually asks for it. The only time they are brought up is when A) Vannie is involved, B) Yoohoo goes on another tirade about bats, either with name or without, or C) when its summer and you faggot shitposters still mad about being BTFO the last time have to strawman some contrived bullshit to act offended in a place you don't belong.
>>30338578
hell are* you*

>>30336073
You should nick yourself "Editor Anon."
Thanks for the work friendo.

>>30338632
Nah, I do it for quite a few threads for various writefags, as its a job I don't want the shitposters going to every random thread looking for people checking over writefags and posting trash in their face. When the mods get switched out and the idiots are removed for awhile I might do it.

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>>30338575
>what's the difference
They're not in their general. Plain and simple.
>inb4 bats
The only bat here is one relevant to the thread theme. The rest is just people posting bat pictures to trigger the likes of you. You bat haters brought this upon yourselves. You can't blame anyone else.

Wow nearly 50 people in this thread, that's the most in months. Just wish we had a equal jump in content

>>30338686
Uh, will do.

>>30338686
Its an artificial jump, at this point it looks like they are back to their proxy posters trick. So cut that number by at least half.

>>30338657
>They're not in their general. Plain and simple.
So why aren't you bitching in the same way you are right now whenever someone posts bats that don't belong here?
>The only bat here is one relevant to the thread theme.
And she was created how now again?

Really, all I'm seeing right now are retards crying
>Anons shouldn't be allowed to discuss and try and create any other kind of female guards if it's a mothpony or a satyr

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>>30338762
Wow, your autistic rage is stopping you're already limited ability to type. In any case, seeing as you are asking that question that means you are either playing dumb, or your a newfag as well as a shitposter that has never seen anything from MLP ever. This is the last (you) your getting. Get the fuck out and go back to the niche general that spawned you.

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>>30338762
>So why aren't you bitching in the same way you are right now whenever someone posts bats that don't belong here?
Because they do that only to trigger you, and I personally find it hilarious.
>she was created how now again?
By a writefag writing guard mares for the guard mare thread?

>Really, all I'm seeing right now are retards crying
I could say the same. Crazy huh?

>any other kind of female guards if it's a mothpony or a satyr
Wanna try writing a mothpony guardmare? Fine by me. Satyrs are not mares.

>>30338935
Satyrs are mutants that eat your flesh.
Though I cant tell why that faggot is saying we are stopping mothponies, my bet is the guy that's throwing the shitfit is just Yoohoo...again.

could somebody just dox the autistic retard already and put him in a hospital

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>>30338975
>I cant tell why that faggot is saying we are stopping mothponies
Dunno either.
>eat your flesh
Flesh.. blood.. that reminds me,
Where the fuck are you NOF. Come out of your hiding already.

>>30339019
Kek. I remember when they doxxed the barneyfag, and that kid here on /mlp/ too who was like 13 and asked for anthro porn. Anons delivered it to him on his facebook.

>>30339123
Kek, I remember hearing about the 13 year old mlp kid, but I don't remember the barneyfag.

TMFAT checking in here. Unfortunately, as I said >>30335683 work ate up a significant portion of my weekend time so I wasn't able to actually get any actual writing done.

BUT, I did take some time to fully plot out a considerable number of the next segments. That may not sound like much, but I have a number of scenes I would like to write and figuring out the order to do them in was driving me nuts. I now have a much clearer direction, so this week I should be able to bang out some nice green.

>>30339416
Well we are looking forward to it. Just as long as your irl stuff is sorted.

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>>30339188
He still stops by despite being doxxed and being hated worse than """bronies"""

I miss careful

>>30339883
I miss the real Blu, he better not have ditched before the second smut scene again.