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Alone in Equestria Girls Verse #12: The lewd little Rainbow edition.

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Prompt:
>Hey girls, you ever wonder why Anon is always alone?

>I'm new to this thread, what is exactly the context of it?
Someone makes an offhand comment on why Anon is always alone and one of the girls goes and does a thing to try and be his friend.
>Alive writefags:
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YFNAnon: http://pastebin.com/4k2SieWK
FateAnon: http://pastebin.com/L7sgqV8k
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Old Demon Anon: http://pastebin.com/9AQpBHbU
>Unknown situation writefags
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>Dead writefags: Big list.
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Sea Urchin: http://pastebin.com/9YUE3LRe (Finished)
Normie: http://pastebin.com/fzYF9GCT
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>>29885916
Shit, forgot to remove Old Demon from the living spot. I feel stupid.
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>>29885916
Hehehe

Tits...
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Continued from https://pastebin.com/UcG73ANS

>The horns blare as the robots charge into the middle, with Onslaught being noticeably faster.
>As they reach the middle, Onslaught veers to the left and rams Roadblock, attempting to flip it over.
>Roadblock reverses back and rams Onslaught, pushing it on it's side towards the pit.
>Onslaught rolls over, unable to move.
>Seeing an oppurtunity, Roadblock reverses then speeds forward.
>Before it can hit, Onslaught flips itself back onto it's wheels, and reverses out the way.
>The crowd cheers at the spectacle, and even you're surprised.
>You weren't aware it had a self righting mechanism, you only noticed the scoop.
>Facing each other again, they charge at eachother.
>Once again Onslaught veers off to the left, catching Roadblock's side with it's scoop.
>Lifting it's pneumatic scoop, it lift's Roadblock onto it's side, immobilising it.
>Slowly, Onslaught pushes Roadblock towards the pit.
>Roadblock falls back onto it's wheels and reverses, narrowly avoiding the pit.
>"Ohmygosh, this is so awesome!" Rainbow shouts as she jumps and punches the air.
>The girls all shout in agreement as the battle continues.
>with Roadblock avoiding the pit, it faces away from it's opponent and reverses.
>With it's spinning blade incoming, Onslaught leans to the right.
>Before it can react, Roadblock turns, catching it's blade on Onslaught's wheel.
>The tread falls off as Onslaught drives off.
>The battle is coming to an end, and the crowd knows it.
>With Onslaught slightly immobilised, Roadblock drives forward.
>It catches Onslaught on it's scoop, and pushes it towards the pit.
>Desperatly, Onslaught reverses off the scoop and turns right, catching one of it's wheels on the edge of the pit.
>Roadblock quickly stops itself falling into the pit and reverses.
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>>29886517

>It speeds towards Onslaught and rams into it, flipping it's opponent over.
>With the crowd gasping and cheering, Onslaught once again flips itself over and faces Roadblock.
>Using it's speed, Onslaught drives around him, catching it's scoop on Roadblock's right side.
>The scoop rises, and Roadblock is once again on it's side.
>Wasting now time Onslaught drives into it's opponent, pushing it towards the pit.
>With an extra hard shove, Onslaught topple's Roadblock as it falls into the pit.
Horns blare once more as the crowd screams and whoops.
>"OOHOHO! Now that was a close one!" Rusty shouts into the microphone.
>"You've seen it folks, Onslaught goes through to the final!" His voice gets louder as he announces the winner.
>Rainbow suddenly jumps up from her seat.
>"WHAT?! Roadblock toppled him over twice! Onslaught cheated!"
>You almost forgot Rainbow and AJ made a bet.
>She really is a sore loser.
>"Calm down Dashie, it's only ten dollars, which are now mine!" Applejack gloats.
"Right, I'm off to sort the next battle." You say to no one in particular.
>They all reply, which you barely register, and get up from your seat.
>You shimmy past the rows of chairs and down onto the arena.
>You need to get Roadblock out of the pit before anything.
>Making your way to the edge of the arena, you pull a switch, activating the pit floor.
>The bot's team heads for the arena as the pit floor rises, coming level with the ground.
"You reckon you can still drive it?" You ask.
>"Erm, maybe. Let's try." Ocean Breeze replies.
>Disregarding the thought, you carefully help them push the bot back onto it's wheels.
>Sky Trail readies the remote control, and flicks a switch.
>You step back as the robot jumps forward.
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>>29886526

>It's wont drive very well, but it'll manage for now.
>Walking with them, you meet the other team in the workshop.
>Facing eachother, both teams shake hands and compliment eachother on the fight.
>It's good to see people can get along, although there have been quite a few heated arguments before.
"Alright, Team Carbide and Terrorhurtz, you're up next." You shout.
>Rusty steps into the workshop.
>"Ya always forget to put tha' floor back down."
"That's because I know you'll do it for me." You both chuckle as he enters the workshop.
>Walking up to Roadblock's team, he pulls out a wad of cash and hands it to Ocean Breeze.
>"Tha's your compensation, fer participating."
>The team smiles and takes the money.
>"Thanks Mr Rusty, it was fun battling it out!"
>"No problem my friend, come back anytime; You'll always get some money if you lose." Rusty replies.
"We need you to put on a show, it's only fair you get something out of it." You add.
>Righ', ah better head back up and get ready." Rusty turns to you.
"Yeah don't worry," You reply, "I'll handle things here."
>He nods and heads back out the workshop.
"Alright Carbide, Terrorhurtz, get ready 'cause you're on in two minutes."
>The teams assemble themselves by the ramp and ready their robots.
"Alright when your name's called go onto the arena bla bla bla, you get the gist."
>Finishing your lazy speech, you once again walk up the stairs and shuffle through the seats.
>You wave to the girls and take your seat.
"Alright ladies, we have Carbide and Terrorhurtz up next, this'll get interesting I reckon."
>Applejack chuckles and tips her hat up.
>"Alrigh' Rainbow, double or nothin'?"
>"You bet!" Rainbow replies, shaking Applejack's hand.
>They grin at eachother until the horns blare out.
>"Alright everyone, who's ready for the next round!?"
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>>29886534

>Rusty's voice blasts through the speakers, as the crowd wildly cheers.
>"Alrighty we have Carbide!" Carbide drives out onto the arena to the far end.
>"And we have Terrorhurtz!"
>Terrorhurtz speeds out, doing a spin before getting to it's starting position.
"So who do you think will win?" You ask the girls.
>They each stare at the robot's, taking their pick.
>"Terrorhurtz ah reckon, it'll smash Carbide up!"
>"No way!" Dash retorts, "Carbide's gonna destroy Terrorhurtz, no contest!"
"I think I know who will win, judging by their designs and weapons."
>They both look at you, eager to know.
>"Go on then, who?"
>You think Carbide will win, judging by how powerful it's bar spinner is.
>Not that they need to know.
"Not telling you."
>"What! Why?" Rainbow shouts.
"it would ruin the fun." You reply with a cheesy grin.
>They pout and glue their eyes to the arena, waiting with anticipation.
>"So Anon," Twilight whispers to you, "Who do you think will win?"
>She leans in with her notepad in hand.
>Does that thing ever leave her hands?
>You can't even remember seeing her without it.
"Well since Carbide's spinning bar is so powerful, according to the builders, it should tear through Terrorhurtz armour easily."
>Then again, a few well placed hits with Terrorhurtz axe could pretty much immobilise Carbide completely.
>"What about Terrorhurtz though with it's axe weapon?"
"Well, if it gets a few good hits in, it could immoblise-"
>You're cut off as the horns blare and Rusty starts the countdown.
>"THREE!"
>"TWO!"," The crowd joins in.
>"ONE!"
>"FIGHT!"

Sorry for the delay. I was going to post in the other thread to kill it, but by the time I got back home this thread was up, so yeah.
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>>29886545
Its cool, you got an update in today.
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>>29887273
this is dead as dead bro
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>>29887692
At least we got an update from damy
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recommend me something with awkwardness or crap flirting
if nothing like that, just tell me something to read
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>>29888963
Your life story.
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>>29889899
go fuck yourself yui chan
mio4lyf
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>>29887692
>Says that with green 3 posts above it
If your gonna try to encourage people to ditch the thread, try and do it when there's content.
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>>29890957
naw man dont want people to leave, just saying it was dead dead and slow like. it's really quiet
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>>29891526
....are you fucking with me right now? You do know that means something completely different right? Dead means abandone thread, you idiot.
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>>29891554
no i mean its slow like, but dont abandon like a retard kid with downies, we keep the thread alive bro
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>Anon lost in EQG not EQ
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Quiet...
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>>29886545
So when do we get ref bot?
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>>29894010
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Tits
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Bamp
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>Putting her steel sword away, the witcheress draws the second longsword hanging along her back.
>The silver metal shines in the light, reflecting her possessed friends image.
>Sunset tightens her grip on the sword. "Alright girls, we can do this."
>"Midnight" scoffs, "You can try. I need a good laugh."
>Her snide remark causes Rainbow Dash to growl, "I'll show you!"
"Rainbow wait! That's what she-"
>Zooming forward, Rainbow Dash charges straight towards her opponent with little regard for anything else.
>You watch as Midnight takes flight with a huge flap of her own ebony wings.
>Lighting her hands on fire with a brilliant blue energy, she sends an energy beam directly at Dash.
>Veering off to the side, the laser just narrowly misses her body, flies right over Applejack and Sunset's heads and strikes an adjacent wall.
>Instead of exploding or suffering any impact damage however, the surface breaks apart like glass as a portal to some ashen wasteland appears.
>Your medallion, already rattling from the massive amount of magic around the room, somehow becomes even more frantic.
>Applejack groans, "Oh horse apples, not this again."
>Looking back at what could have been her, Rainbow scowls.
>"Come on Applejack!" Sunset shouts.
>"Right!"
>The two girls run to Dash's aid as Midnight laughs maniacally.
>"Let's hurry this up ladies, I have other things I want to do today."
>With insane speed, she closes the distance between her and Rainbow Dash.
>"What th-" is all Dash can say before being punched in the jaw and sent sprawling towards the ground.
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>Using her other hand, she fires another beam at Sunset, who manages to roll out of the way of the incoming attack where another tear in the fabric of space opens up at the impact spot, this time leading to a snowy tundra high above the mountains.
>"Ah got ya RD!"
>Applejack quickly backs up and catches her athletic rival just before she hits the ground.
>With a battle cry Sunset resumes her offensive and steadies her weapon at Midnight.
>The latter sneers as she hovers backward, just staying slightly out of Sunset's swinging arc.
>"Ha! Is that all yo-"
>Using Aard, a telekinetic shockwave staggers Midnight just long enough back for Sunset Shimmer to get within range.
>Bending back, the silver sword just misses cutting across Midnight's chest.
>But Sunset is hardly one to stop after a single miss. Instead she pushes forward, keeping Midnight off-balance through a combination of Aard and sword attacks.
>Somehow managing to hold her own, Sunset avoids and deflects any attacks coming from her opponent through judicious use of signs.
>The snide, smug Midnight is nowhere in sight, instead replaced by one seething with anger at losing the upper hand.
>Applejack sets Rainbow down near you and Shining Armor.
>"Dash, that stubborn head o' yer's is gonna get you killed!"
>"Thanks Mom..."
>The cowgirl sighs, "Catch yer breath, we're gonna need you."
>Getting up, AJ gives you a worried look.
>"Anon, how are ya holding up?"
"You know that feeling when you're hungover?"
>"Yeah?"
"Well imagine that but ten times worse and your insides are literally on fire."
>She winces.
"I'm barely holding together right now as my system tries to fight off the toxins in my body."
>"Then what do we do?"
"Right now, just survive until one of us can come up with an actual plan."
>Suddenly you hear Midnight cry out in pain.
>Glancing back, you see her gripping her wrist as blood drips onto the cold stone floor.
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>She glares at Sunset with a look of pure unfiltered hatred as she flicks her hand of the free flowing blood.
>Flexing her fingers, she tilts her head and gives an unsettling smile.
>"You've gotten more confident ever since you were turned into one of those freaks." she says, "I really hate that about you."
>Both her hands begin glowing as she hovers in the air once again.
>"I really should be thankful though." Midnight taunts, "If it wasn't for you breaking poor little Twilight's faith in her friends, she wouldn't have been so easy to convince."
>As she says this, Shining Armor grits his teeth and clenches his fist.
>"That wasn't me! That was all because of Grogar's magic!" Sunset counters, "I would never hurt Twilight like that willingly."
>"Oh really? Didn't Grogar's magic only bring about the darkness already present within you? I'm sure Twilight's heard about the "Raging She-demon" of Canterlot High."
>"Shut. Up."
>"Admit it, you enjoyed the freedom your dark side gave you."
>It doesn't take a genius to realize Midnight is baiting Sunset into lowering her guard.
>Sunset growls, and brings her blade up.
>"Unlike *you*, I simply want to learn more about the way the world works. Is that so wrong?"
>"Yer willing to destroy other worlds to do that." Applejack yells, "Our Twilight wouldn't even consider that!"
>Midnight frowns, "I wasn't talking to you, you inbred redneck hick."
>Applejack's face grows bright red, "Why AH OUGHTA-!"
>Raising her hand towards Sunset, she offers it.
>"Come with me Sunset, I'll find out how Grogar unshackled you so you can finally be true to yourself."
>"Go burn in Tartarus."
>"Aw, but that would mean bringing Twilight along."
>Having had enough, Applejack slams her fist into the ground and takes out a chunk of stone.
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>>29896062
>Pitching it like a baseball, she nearly hits Midnight as it slams into the wall and goes right through it towards the outside.
>"Ah'm gettin real sick of ya and that holier-than-thou attitude of yer's."
>Without warning, Midnight's right arm snaps towards Applejack.
"Applejack get down!"
>Heeding your advice she drops down as a bright blue beam of energy just grazes the bottom of her ponytail, taking a large chunk out of her blonde hair.
>The beam continues until it strikes the floor near Grogar's corpse.
>Blue cracks extend from the impact site and spread underneath the deceased sorcerer's body before breaking apart.
>With nothing underneath, Grogar's body falls through the new portal towards the forest below.
>You hear Midnight rage, "NO! HE COULD HAVE HAD MATERIAL WORTH STUDYING ON HIS CORPSE!"
>The demonic being starts unleashing a tantrum, like a child that was just denied candy or a favorite toy.
>"I'll just have to recover the body before the scavengers pick at it when I'm done with you all!"
>Screaming, she flies straight towards Sunset.
>Bringing up her Quen shield, she's knocked back into a nearby wall where Midnight proceeds to continuously pound against the barrier.
>"JUST. DIE. ALREADY!"
>Sunset struggles to keep Quen up as each blow causes another crack to spread against the yellow shield.
>"Applejack!" Rainbow Dash calls.
>"What is it?"
>"Grab my legs and throw me!" she says hovering in front of her.
>"What?!"
>"C'mon hurry up Sunset needs us!"
>"You sure?" the latter asks.
>"Totally!"
>Nodding her head, Applejack grabs Rainbow by the legs and begins spinning around.
>After gaining enough speed, she releases the chromatic haired girl at a fast enough speed she looks like a rainbow colored streak just as Midnight finally breaks through Sunset's shield.
>"GOODBYE SUNSET!" she spitefully taunts.
>Outstretching her hand she goes to grab Sunset's face when Midnight is kicked right into the nearby wall.
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>>29896081
>"Booyah!"
>"Ah can't believe that worked."
>Rainbow goes to help Sunset up when suddenly she's tackled by a very pissed demon.
>The latter proceeds to unleash a barrage of normal punches straight into Rainbow's face.
>"YOU THINK YOU'RE SO COOL?! "Oh Twilight's just an egghead, she can't compete with me!"" she rants. "WELL WHO'S LAUGHING NOW?!"
>"TWILIGHT STOP IT!" Shining Armor shouts, "This isn't you!"
>"TWILIGHT'S GONE!" she retorts, "It's only Midnight Sparkle now!"
>She's more insane than you thought...
>Like with Sunset, it seems that Midnight Sparkle is all of Twilight's repressed emotions given life through a darker half.
>"Get off of her!" Sunset yells.
>Charging at Midnight, she prepares to strike when the former looks at her with normal-tinted eyes and a scared expression.
>"S-Sunset? What are you doing?!"
>Her change in demeanor causes Sunset to freeze up.
>"Twiligh-"
>With a smirk, Midnight's eyes return to their teal color before she lunges with her horn towards Sunset and impaling her in the shoulder.
"SUNSET!"
>Blood drips down the horn and over Midnight's face, staining it red. Lifting her up with little effort, Sunset drops her weapon and hangs there gasping in pain, trying to pry herself off of the glowing horn.
>Raising a fist, Midnight grabs the closest arm trying to make a sign and reaches for the knife in Sunset's boot.
>Taking it out of its leather sheath, she stabs it into Sunset's abdomen resulting in another yelp of pain.
>Finally Midnight stands and grabs Sunset by the neck and yanks her off of her horn; In one quick motion, she throws Sunset into you, Applejack and Shining Armor, knocking the three of you onto the ground.
"Fucking Dammit!
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>>29896104
>Getting up, you rush over to Sunset's side and inspect her injuries as she tries to hold in blood with her hands.
>Dammit, dammit, dammit!
>Ripping off the hem of your shirt, you begin plugging up the hole near her neck and the one at her waist.
>Reaching into your potion satchel, you grab your last vial of Swallow.
"You're so lucky she just missed your jugular and liver." you say, popping the cork. "I can't believe you fell for that!"
>Sunset doesn't respond. Apparently in no mood for your comments.
>Propping her head up, you bring the vial up to her lips.
"Drink."
>She tries to protest, "But... what about... you?"
"It's not going to help me right now, you on the other hand need it a lot more than I do."
>She takes the substance into her mouth reluctantly and wretches in disgust as she swallows.
"Now take a break." you tell her, gently setting her down.
>Applejack's already up and trying to keep Midnight at bay, but it's going as well as you would expect.
>Shining Armor on the other hand, is groggily sitting up clutching his head.
>"Twily is so grounded when we get back..." he mutters. "How the hell are we going to bring her back?"
"At this point I don't even know if we can." you answer.
>He groans, "Couldn't I... reason with her or something?"
>Another magic blast impacts the wall behind him.
"Does that look like someone who's reasonable?"
>"We have to try! I'm not going to kill my little sister."
"Yeah, well she doesn't look like she's having that problem regarding us."
>As you rise to your feet, a large stone block falls from the ceiling nearly crushing you. A rapid search around for the cause and you determine that it's due to the portals Twilight has been spawning. Each one becoming more unstable than the last.
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>>29896114
>It's probably not out of the realm of possibility that the longer this fight goes and the more portals that appear, the higher the chance the entire room will cave in on itself. And that's not even taking into consideration the dangers of the portals themselves to the world at large if they're left unchecked.
>Speaking of portals... the one Grogar's body fell into is noticeably larger now.
>The edges of the tear fall into the other world like shards of broken glass as it expands outwards.
>You can't help but feel a bit helpless at this situation.
>Twilight is much too powerful for any of you to take on in an actual fight.
>Midnight Sparkle grabs a beaten and bruised Rainbow Dash on the ground as Applejack leers at her.
>"Don't you even go thinking about-"
>That unnerving smile returns as she opens a portal right next to her and tosses Rainbow Dash through.
>"NO!"
>AJ goes into a rage and bull-rushes Midnight who just crosses her arms and just stands there.
>Nearly within pummeling distance, another portal opens up on AJ's flank and Rainbow slams into her sending both of them into a heap.
>More dust and debris starts to fall from above as Midnight finally turns her attention towards you.
>"And then there was one." she comments. "The one who started this entire mess just by showing up in Canterlot."
>The demon hovers towards you, splitting into three figures before combining back into a single one.
>You really hope that was just a hallucination...
>Despite your body still not being in a great condition, you pick up your sword anyway.
>"So you still have a little fight left in you huh? Good."
>Raising her hand, she fires another magic blast at you.
>Rolling to the side, you feel a sharp pain inside your torso.
>Clutching it, the spot that you got impaled on has reopened.
>Fucking great!
>Using her wings, she reduces the gap between you two at an astounding pace. Magic enhancing her every attack, she let's out a flurry of punches.
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>Thankfully, a quick Quen manages to absorb a few blows before shattering.
>Dodging and weaving, you counter her last punch and manage to cut her along the waist, drawing some blood and a snarl.
>"Lucky hit!"
>Casting Igni, you try and force her on the defensive, but she just opens a portal to absorb the fire.
>Another one of her tears opens up next to you nearly sending your own sign back at you.
>As you continue to avoid her attacks, everything starts going blurry for a brief second.
>Shaking your head, you try and refocus the multiple Twilight's standing in front of you. You should be able to hold out as long as you concentrate on the center one at this distance.
>You receive an answer to that thought when Twilight sucker punches you in the gut before retreating back.
>Dammit!
>Sorry girls, but if it's between your life and Twilight's...
>Subtly, you make the Yrden sign and touch the floor with your left hand.
>Getting up, you pace around the little arena you have with your blade ready, trying to draw attention to the trap lying in wait.
"Is that it? Just resorting to cheap tricks?"
>Your opponent sneers, "I'm only being pragmatic. It's what you witchers are known for. But if you want me to just end this right now..."
>You can't help but scoff, being pragmatic would just be killing us instead of drawing this fight out.
>She's getting enjoyment out of this. Hopefully you can get some mileage out of that mindset.
>Both her palms glow with renewed energy as she glides towards you.
>Taking a few steps back, she goes right over the hidden trap sign and triggers it.
>Bright purple runes materialize in a circle around her and slow the world down inside its influence.
>Midnight's eyes go wide as she realizes the trap she fell into and tries to pull up.
>Not giving up your only advantage, you bring your blade up cut right through her right wing and cut the entire appendage off entirely.
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>Midnight screams and crashes onto the floor as the dismembered limb falls to the ground before being consumed by blue fire.
>She rolls over, only to find you looming over her.
>Bringing your sword down, you're interrupted by a sharp pain in your chest.
>ARE YOU FUCKING KIDDING?
>The sensation is just long enough that your adversary fires a concussive beam into your chest and sending you into a wall.
>You hiss in pain as the front of your jacket has a massive hole in it, revealing the chainmail underlayer.
>Your body is in too much pain to do anything as Midnight strolls right over you.
>"Well that was a nice trick witcher." she says holding a palm up. "It's too bad that'll be the last one you ever do."
>Her hand ignites in blue fire, "Maybe I'll should send you to that acid lake. Hmm, not too instant. Or maybe just strand you in the middle of that desert with those sand crabs. Chrysalis's top half could use some company."
>"TWILIGHT!" a voice behind her shouts.
>"Brother. What the hell do you want."
>Shining Armor steps dangerously close to his sister.
>What is he doing?!
>"Stop this, please." he pleads. "This isn't you."
>Oh for... he's trying to talk her down?!
>Midnight turns her head, "This is the real me, don't you get it yet?!"
>"I don't believe that crap for an instant." he says setting his rifle on the ground and walking towards her.
>Shining's approach actually unnerves her. You're left a little dumbstruck, it's actually working?!
>"S-stop it. What-what are you trying to do?"
>Taking a fearful step back, she redirects her hand towards him.
>"Don't make me hurt you. I *will* hurt you." she threatens as her eyes flash between teal and white. The charged energy coursing in her hand fluctuates in intensity, vanishing before reappearing again.
>Twilight's struggling against Midnight from attacking him.
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>>29896172
>Despite the threat Shining proceeds to walk closer.
>"If you did, you would have done it already." he replies with his arms held out.
>Soon enough they're both nearly face-to-face.
>"NO! He's trying to lie to you!" Midnight shouts. "WE NEED TO KILL HIM BEFORE HE KILLS YOU!"
>"My brother... my brother would never do that..." she says to herself.
>"You're right Twily, I never would. That dark side of you is just saying things to control you."
>Tears start flowing from Midnight's/Twilight's left eye.
>"Shiny... it... I don't know if I can..."
>"You can do it." he says. "Twily, I know you're in there. I believe in you, your friends believe in you. That's why we came here, to help you. Just like you came to help me when I was under Chrysalis's control."
>Gently, he takes her hand in his, and for a brief second there, Midnight is stunned.
>Normally this would be the part where you would toss a knife into the skull and end the threat, but Shining's moment might actually work.
>The frames around Midnight's eyes slowly diminish in size and her remaining wing retracts.
>Suddenly a sharp shooting pain from your impalement makes you recoil, the motion drawing Midnight's attention and snapping her back into combat mode.
>"YOU!"
>"TWILIGHT NO!"
>She turns and takes aim with her palm, ready to end your life.
>Everything seems to go by so quickly.
>Shining grabs his sister's arm only for her to reflexively claw him across the face with her nails.
>He falls onto the ground grabbing his now bleeding face, four thin red lines expand from the angle of his jaw and over his eye.
>His possessed sister momentarily snaps out of her insanity, "N-no! Wh-what did... Shining I'm so sorry!"
>"HE TRIED TO STOP YOU!" she yells at herself. "DON'T BE A FOOL! STOP... FIGHTING... ME!"
>"No no nononono!"
>She stares at her hands and the fresh blood.
>"What have I done..."
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>"Twilight... you can still fix this. You just need to be the one in control." Shining says getting back to his feet.
>Twilight begins crying and falls to her knees, holding herself.
>"We're all with you. You can do it."
>"You're... right... she's not the one... I am..."
>Clawing at her head, she flails about as an internal struggle overtakes her.
>She screams into the air, her voice loud enough to shatter all surrounding windows in the room.
>Twilight's form begins to return to relative normal.
>Her demonic features vanish into the aether as Twilight's usual skin returns to its normal pigment.
>The metal wolf head across your chest calms down slightly.
>Unfortunately, the disturbance shifts some masonry from above to dislodge right above Twilight.
"Twilight watch out!" Shining yells.
>He pushes her out of the way, but the large chunk of stone hits his shoulder.
>The two skid across the ground with Shining hissing in pain and grabbing his arm. Twilight begins panicking as her brother resists yelling out.
>"Shiny, I'm sorry..." she says, unsure of what to do.
>"It's... nnngghhh... okay. Long as you're... safe..." he replies through gritted teeth.
>You walk over and kneel down next to Twilight.
>Her hair's a mess and she looks exhausted just from the dark colored bags under her eyes.
>As she turns to look at her brother, you notice a large red line soaking through her clothes, roughly where the wing you cut off would be attached.
"You good?" you say, pointing at her shoulder blade.
>She nods. "It stings a little. Um... sorry about your chest..."
"I've had worse. It's a little melted but easily replaceable. I'll just get Rarity to make me a new jacket."
>"Twilight?" you hear Sunset call out.
>You turn and see your witcher student limping over.
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>"Sunset!" Twilight cries out, running over to hug her.
>"Owowowowow! Still sore!" she blurts out.
>"S-s-sorry!"
>Sunset chuckles, "It's okay. I'm just happy you're back to normal."
>"I'm... glad to... hear... that..." she says trailing off before closing her eyes and going limp in Sunset's arms.
>Shining Armor begins to panic, "Twily?"
>"She's alright." Sunset tells him, "She looks like she's just tired."
>The girl in her hands lets out a gentle snore.
>Gently setting her down, both Sunset squats next to Shining Armor and lets out a massive sigh.
>"Its finally over." Sunset muses.
>"It would seem so." another voice interrupts.
>Both you and Sunset immediately drop into fighting stances when you two see Jericho standing a few feet away from you.
"You're still alive?" you say pulling out a knife.
>"Hold Anonymous. My fight with you is over." he says. "With Sombra and Grogar dead, I have no reason to fight you."
>Sunset gives you an aside glance, "Anon?"
>You lower your knife and put it back.
"Never known you to lie, but things could have changed since I last saw you."
>"If you'll allow it, I'll show Sunset the medical wing and we will bring back supplies to treat your wounds. Things have moved around the last time you were here and right now it looks like you're not in a condition to move very much."
"Why just Sunset?"
>"You gave her Swallow did you not?"
"..."
>"Her body will hold up fine, you and the others on the other hand need to refrain from moving. The toxins from your previous positions are still present and moving may exacerbate any conditions you haven't noticed yet."
>He walks over to the sleeping Twilight.
>"I'm glad she's alright." he says before walking away.
>Shining looks between the Viper witcher and his sister confused.
>"Am I missing something?"
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>>29896206
>"A noble reason I guess. Not that my many of our kind would know of the concept."
>The two of you reach the room with a plus sign attached to the wall.
>But what lays ahead brings each of you to a halt.
>A large trail of blood at the entry way.
>Both you and Jericho draw your weapons.
>Cautiously, you two take the lead and enter the room.
>Inside, it looks like a tornado came through; broken medical equipment and papers lay strewn about the floor.
>"What happened here?" Jericho asks.
>Moving past an overturned bed, he freezes.
>"Spirits..."
"What is i- oh Celestia..."
>A trio of dead bodies lay on the floor in a pile, blood pooling around the corpses. You recognize the bodies as some of the other witcher recruits you were forced to learn with.
>In addition, Doctor Caballeron body hangs against the wall, impaled by a IV stand.
>Kneeling down by the bodies, Jericho inspects each one.
>As he does his small investigation, you notice something in the corner of your eye.
"Jericho."
>Turning his head, he looks at you. "What is it?"
>On the counter is a brown sack dripping blood at the base.
>The witcher carefully approaches the sack and opens it.
>You can sense the sadness in Jericho's body language as he stares at the contents.
>Muttering something in another language, he sighs and closes the bag.
"What was it?"
>"It was Haakim. Or rather, what's left of him."
>Scrambling towards the medical cabinets, Jericho searches the contents.
>"It seems like whoever did this killed everyone in his path and raided the medical stores." he says. "An entire row of Swallow is missing."
>Grabbing some medical supplies in addition to a bottles ranging from Swallow to more mundane like antiseptic, Jericho places them into a nearby duffle bag and heads to the door.
>Giving the room one last glance, you follow.
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>>29896222
>Moving them closer to Shining Armor and Twilight, minutes pass before both Applejack and Rainbow Dash finally wake up
>All their magical features disappeared during their time out, and apparently as well an oncoming wave of fatigue and pain.
>After being on the receiving end of some of the cowgirl's affection, you let them rest up until Sunset and Jericho come back.
>As the two take their time to decompress and keep an eye on Twilight, your witcher side can't help but inspect last remaining portal in the room. All the smaller ones closed shortly after Twilight reverted to her normal self, the only exception being this one.
>The forest landscape through the gateway looks remarkably serene in contrast to the danger it presented not too long ago.
>Kneeling down, you touch the edge.
>It seems to recoil at your contact, but otherwise continues to shrink and remains inert. Judging by the rate, it should run out of energy to sustain itself within... ten minutes give or take.
>You can't help but wonder where this portal leads exactly. A different world? Somewhere on this one?
>Doesn't look like you'll ever find out, but you won't lose sleep over it.
>Footsteps come from behind you, until a shadow looms over you.
"Back already?" you ask without looking. "That was quick."
>"Not as quick as I'd like." a male voice says.
>Your tired body tries to naturally respond to a threat with a Quen sign only to feel something go through your back and out your chest.
>Air escapes your lungs as you turn your head and see the boy that was fighting by Sunset's side, bloody and bruised and looking all too pissed.
>"That's for Vapor Trail you sonovabitch."
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>You make a decision.
"Applejack..."
>"Don't worry Anon we'll make it!" she says trying to reassure you.
"Yeah, you will."
>"DON'T YOU DARE START TALKIN' LIKE THAT!"
>You give her a small smile.
"Always so stubborn."
>With the last of your strength, you fight through the growing numbness in your body and reach Applejack's hand.
>Tears flow from her cheeks as she remains helpless while you pry her fingers from your leg.
"Tell Sunset and Rainbow I'm proud of them. Sorry I couldn't see them all the way through."
>"ANON STOP!" Sunset yells.
"I love you Applejack, please don't forget that."
>Releasing her grip, gravity takes complete hold of you.
>You don't, or can't, hear her scream your name as you plummet down below.
>As long as she survives, you'll be okay with this.
>Despite being moments away from dying, you take note of the sun setting behind the purple mountains in the distance, the orange colored sky, and rolling hills.
>Any other situation and it would be a picture perfect place to settle...
>But all that soon comes to an end when the world starts moving upwards.
>Sorry Applejack...
>...
>At least she has the others to help see her through this...
>As she shrinks away in the distance, you can't help but feel guilt and sadness at how abrupt your goodbye was.
>Closing your eyes, you hit the first tree branch with a loud crack.
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>Applejack lets out an anguished scream as your Anonymous falls through her grasp.
>You can only stare in shock as he falls through the tree canopy.
>This can't be happening.
>You've got to do something! Anything!
>Pulling AJ back up to safety, you frantically go and shake Rainbow Dash.
"Dash, you need to get wings and get him befo-"
>Scrunching up her face, magic starts to spark around her before fizzling out.
>"Sunset I- I can't..." she says trying to pony up.
"Yes, you can! You ca-"
>An arm yanks you back.
>"Stop."
>You angrily brush the hand off.
"STOP?! WHAT DO YOU MEAN STOP?!"
>Jericho looks at you sadly.
>"He's gone."
>Applejack dry heaves as she stares to where Anonymous fell.
>"The portal does not have much time left." he says pointing to the rapidly shrinking ring, "It is unwise to attempt a rescue a corpse."
>"He's NOT DEAD YET!" Applejack screams. "HE'S TOUGHER THAN HE LOOKS!"
>She gets up and grabs the witcher by the collar.
>"Even a witcher can't survive everything." he states. "And Anonymous has many factors against him right now."
>Releasing his collar, Applejack drops to her knees and cries.
>"DAMMIT DAMMIT DAMMIT!" she repeats, slamming her fist into the cold stone floor.
>Rainbow Dash tries to calm Applejack down as she cries hysterically. Bringing a hand over your eyes, you try to hold in your grief and put on a brave face for your friends.
>It doesn't work.
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That's it. For now.
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>>29896285
Fucking hell. Why do you have to leave me like this?
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>>29896285
...Well fuck.
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Missed a part.

>>29896231
>Your grunt of pain attracts the other's attention and Applejack let's out a scream.
>"ANON!"
>Adrenaline kicks in as your body begins compensating for the blood leaking through the gaps between the sword blade.
>Gritting your teeth, you grab the kid's hand and draw the last knife in your jacket across his throat.
>He's taken by surprise at your fast response when blood spurts out from his jugular. As he tries to stop the bleeding, he keels over onto the floor.
>Unfortunately, your swings momentum causes you to lose your footing. Everything turns upside down as you fall into the portal headfirst when there's a sudden jerk from your leg.
>Looking "down", you see Applejack struggling to hold onto your pants leg.
>"Hold on Anon! Just hold on!"
>Rainbow shows up over the edge and tries to grab your other leg.
>"Oh man! Oh man!"
>Slowly, the two girls try to pull you up, at least until you see your assailant standing up over them despite the fact he's bleeding out.
"Applejack!"
>Your friends look back in shock as he prepares to knock the both of them in with you as a last act of vengeance.
>Knife in hand, you throw it into his right eye up to the base of the knife blade, killing him instantly.
>The movement however causes Rainbow Dash to lose her grip, making you plunge forward and nearly taking AJ with you.
>Before the two of you drop to your doom, Sunset and Jericho manage to catch Applejack by her arm.
>"I got you!" Sunset yells.
>You can see the amount of determination Applejack has on not letting you go, but at this rate you'll both end up falling in.
>Making and attempt to lift you up with one arm, Applejack's strength suddenly gives way, gravity nearly ripping her from Sunset's own grip.
>She's too tired...
>Looking "up" at the trees and the sword sticking out of you. Your medallion slips off your neck and vanishes into the treeline.
>>29896262
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>>29896285
>inb4 the portal stayed open longer because it was set nearby and didn't require much magic to stay open.
>inb4 the excess magic ended up healing Anon
I'm hoping for a happy ending.
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>>29896285
I did see it coming but it still didn't make it any less painful. Something that would have certainly been satisfying would have been Sunset finishing off the kid.
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what even
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>>29896851
>>29896285
....holy shit.
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>>29897184
>"I did it Sunset, I killed that bastard who killed Vapor Trail."
>"S-Sunset why are you looking at me like that? Aren't you happy I got revenged for Vapor?"
>"Why are you approaching me like that? No Sunset stop. SUNSET STOP!"

Clearly I'm not a writefag but you get the idea.
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Well, I've been expecting that since part 1, oh well, let's hope some deus ex bullshit brings him back, unless they decide fuck it, let's all go through the portal and shit.
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>>29896285
NO NO NO NO NO NO NO
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>>29896285
Anon doesn't have to come back a hundred percent, but he has to at least be able to still satisfy the semen demon that is between AJ's thighs. Maybe becomes a retired warrior and he becomes the sensei of the group now.
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>>29899419
WRITE FAGGOT!
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>>29899190
He started out pretending to be blind. It could come full circle.
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>>29899685
.....hmm, that's an idea. its not like he couldn't do well without his sight anyways.
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>>29899718
He would basically be Daredevil with +10 to poison resistance
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>>29899784
That sounds about right. Plus side, AJ might let Rarity grope him now.
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>>29892521
>He is alone not because he is a kissless sperg.
>He is alone because he hates that world
>FLASHBACK
>Anon was a >hooves fag
>He wished being teleported to Equestria.
>Goes to Equestria GIRLS instead
>This triggers the Anon.
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>>29901090
Kek, Anon goes to hell, with only pone pussy having Sunset as company in this High School Musical shithole.
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Bamp
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Bamp before bed
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>>29902891
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3 to the 1 and the 1 to the 3, i like good lewd and i like good green,
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This.
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>>29905078
Had to look twice before I realized it was cia
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>>29906069
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>>29906069
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>>29896285
holy fuck
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Wasn't there a green about Gopnik Anon? Or am I in the wrong general?
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>>29907739
Wrong general m8, sorry bout that. If they aint in the op they aint here.
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>>29907739
What's a gopnik? Some nigger goblin or something?
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I like these greens, they're good. Anyone else like this threads green?
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>>29908368
And also, what are the best green's here? Like recommend me?
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>>29908480
Well, Axii is the biggest and the best there is here...though his story is about to wrap up soon. Otherwise everyone on the living list.
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>>29908480
Axii, YFN, damy, Fate, they're all good stuff.
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>>29909771
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>>29908064
it's just the russian term for human white trash.
And now stay cheeki breeki!
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>>29896285
Oy mamatchka, im ready.
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Hey guys, was planning to vice big update today, but I was enjoying my day off in the best way possible
I literally took a 24 hour coma
So now that I'm very well rested I shall get to writing and eating something
See ya tomorrow
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>>29911734
>slept for 24 hours
Seriously? That's not good, it means you're body is getting severely worn down.
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Nahhhhh, I'm fine just not getting as much sleep the past few days or so
I'm just gonna take it easy for a few
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>>29912117
>not sleeping for a week to get shit done
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>>29911734
F
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>>29912886
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"Hmmhmhmm~ hmmhmhmm~ there! All better."
>The rabbit flexes it's ears and legs and with a delightful chirp, it scurries off to join the rest of its friends.
>Oh, there so cute you could just cuddle every single one of them.
>Oh, but if only you had that free time.
>Well, you might if you finish your chores early today.
>You are Fluttershy
>And currently, you tend to the many little critters that have found their way to the veterinary clinic.
>Usually you'd come after school to tend to them, but today was an off day, so you were glad to offer your services this early in the day.
>You smile in delight as you leave the rabbit pen and load up another cart with vegetables, fruits, and goat's milk.
>You've heard of a new animal that has made her way here through an unfortunate turn of events.
>Oh, you can't even bring yourself to think about it.
>E-... Especially since last night.
>You push the cart through the halls, greeting all the lovely staff with friendly hellos and waves.
>Once you get to the room, you are quite shocked at what you find.
>Shocked... with joy!
>A female fawn looks you straight in the eyes from the safety of it's cage.
>Of course, she has plenty of room to move around as she pleases, but it looks like she's already had her exercise for today.
>You best not keep her waiting, she must be hungry.
>You reach down for the keys and unlock the cage door, letting yourself through and closing it behind you.
>With gates that can let people bring food in and out from either side, the only animals that you have to worry about escaping are monkeys and small birds.
>Luckily for you, they get their own special cages, so you can easily reach out for a head of lettuce without worry.
"Good morning. I hope you've had plenty of exercise today."
>You hold out the lettuce as an offer, and it takes a few seconds for the little girl to consider.
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>>29915242
>But soon enough, she nibbles through it with a fervor.
>"That's it. Good girl."
>You level yourself to her resting level and examine her from the distance your arm gives you.
>Judging from what the others have said, it looks like she'll make a stunning recovery.
>It's not everyday that a deer survives from a car crash.
>It's very fortunate that it was only a minor fracture in the hind legs that prevented her from running, otherwise it would have been horrible to imagine the pain she would have gone through.
>You observe her calm nature as she finishes the lettuce before your very eyes.
"Oh! You have such beautiful eyes, here you go."
>You take out the goats milk from the cart and offer it to the fawn.
>She eyes it over for a minute, most likely confused at the suckling device of a babies bottle.
>With the clear sight of liquid inside, she tests it with a slight nuzzle, causing a bit of it to leak onto the floor.
>With a proper goal in mind, she begins to nibble and sip on the it, drinking the milk in large portions.
"That's it. Get your fill."
>You restrain yourself from petting her too much, since it would mean domestication to some degree.
>It's very unhealthy for the wild animals and natural habitat.
>Though you can't deny that her ears are the absolute softest you've ever felt.
>You can't help but hide your glee behind a heartwarming smile.
"Oh how wonderful, you've finished it all haven't you?"
>She lets go of the bottle and speaks the most healthiest yelp before getting up and walking over to the middle of the cage.
>All empty! A hearty shake of nothing but air confirms it.
>You put it back on the cart and get your keys out to unlock the door, but the fawn nudges you from behind.
"Oh I know you want to play, but I still have plenty of-oh!"
>This time, the nudge is a vibration.
>Followed by another... and another...
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>>29915249
>You pull your phone out of your back pocket and open it up.
"Thank you kindly, little one. I promise I'll come back to play with you soon."
>You open the gate and close it behind you, watching as the fawn lightly jogs in circles, working out it's injury and getting used to the space.
>You smile and check your phone out of curiosity for the situation.
>Hmm... what's this?
>~Pinkie~"Sunset's OK! XD and she's with Anon ;3 have wonderful idea girls come over asap!"
>-everyone-"WHAT?!?!!?!"
>... No... No that can't be...
>You... nearly collapse on yourself, accidentally pushing the cart over.
>The large crash of fruits and vegetables is heard and the staff nearby come to help.
>"Fluttershy dear, are you alright!?"
>"Do you need medical attention?"
>You wave them off, gripping your head to relieve the pain.
"It's alright everyone, I just had this wave of... pain in my head."
>One of the nurses comes to help you up and you thank her graciously.
>"This seems like more than just a mere headache dear, are you sure you're alright?"
>Oh, you love them all so much.
>They are oh so very kind, it's everything you'd want in a friend.
"No, it's fine really I... I have to go!"
>You run through the hall past the friendly employees in the most panicked hurry you've put yourself through.
>There's no possible way, it can't be, but how, it, aaah!
>You can't put it into words in your mind.
>It feels so unrealistic, so surreal, as you run out of the clinic and on to the pavement of the old-rustic walkway.
>As you pass each civilian, your step becomes more and more heavy.
>You don't really exercise much, so it's a natural feeling, but it still drives you crazy that something like this is happening.
>After an excruciatingly painful week, you can't believe this is happening.
>Ah! There it is!
>You take the designated right down the block and see Sugarcube Corner in sight.
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>>29915254
>No stopping now, you have to make it in time.
>You push yourself to the absolute limit, something a little teenage girl who doesn't participate in daily activity shouldn't do.
>You make it to the door and stop very abruptly to catch a breathe, nearly collapsing on all fours then and there, but it looks like you aren't the only one in such a big rush.
>You spot Applejack's car in the distance, obviously going past the speed limit.
>And ironically, followed by a police car with sirens on and everything.
>Soon the entire driveway is covered in the most bizarre assortment of vehicles you'd ever imagine being together.
>You can't help but wonder if it'll all be normal again.
>With everything that's happened through these last two weeks since we-er... they asked that question.
>But either way... you're glad...


>Alright...
>After a solid day of research, approval from principal Celestia herself to take another day off, and the recognition from your brother to truly participate in the case, you finally have something.
>It's now day two of investigations regarding the manslaughter of twenty-six men, with the location of Sunset Shimmer being unknown.
>With the help of Shining, the two of you have deduced that a gang known only as "The Weights" were apart of it.
>We went through previous files and incidents, and they seemed to match the description of alienated blood.
>The only difference is that there is the addition of an unknown group that has yet to show itself in public.
>Your BBBFF has given them the nickname "Volume" as per the measurement of milliliters, but it still doesn't clear up the case, more so that it complicates it.
>Would there really be two gangs fighting for dominance in the rural and calm Ponyville?
>It sounds unbelievable at first, but the more you think on it, the worse it gets.
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>>29915262
>What other incidents might occur that could lead to the destruction of property?
>As you think the case over, you hear the ring and chime of your phone buzz on the table next to you.
>Checking the contact, it isn't someone you've called before.
>You pick up the phone and clear your voice heartily.
"Ahem... Uh... Hello?"
>"Sup toots."
>You're taken aback by the oddly squeaky voice coming off the other end.
"Er, excuse me?"
>"Wait a sec. Mmph, this bread is delish."
>You can hear the chomping and chewing from the other side of the line, ew...
>"Give it 'ere pipsqueak! Yow!"
>A bit of commotion comes across the other line, leaving you confused.
"Hello? Are you there?"
>Some more tussling and scratching on the other side doesn't leave much to the imagination, but eventually he picks up again, and this time in a deeper and more threatening voice.
>"Huh? Yeah, were still here love."
"Er... OK, so uhm... what do you want?"
>"Oh, that's simple. Look up the location were calling from and head there."
"Wuh? Who are you? Why should I trust you?"
>A bit of silence on the line makes you adjust yourself in your chair, but eventually they answer.
>"Ok. You got thirty seconds. If you don't, we'll blow your house sky high. It's your decision if you want to save your family some... trouble with the sleep."
>... WHAT DID HE JUST-!?
"Wuh- what!? You can't do that! I'm calling th-!"
>"Twenty now doll, best search it."
>Er I-uh... You hit the floor with your legs and push forward, sending yourself to the computer.
>Quickly quickly! Digits digits...
>"Ten."
>You type the phone number into the quick app dial-up as if your life depends on it and the location shows up almost immediately.
"I have it on screen!"
>"Very nice, Shylock. Now I want ya to go to said location alone. No one follows or you get a hefty some for your insurance company, packed with life and wood board."
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>>29915270
>This... is actually a little close by.
>Canterlot Heights construction yard, where they plan to build an ultra complex for a very wealthy business.
>"And don't think about yelling for your sibling or otherwise. Leave any hints and we blow the joint. Got it?"
>You are... a tiny bit skeptical.
>Does he really have a bomb inside your house?
>And even worse, how'd he get your number?
>No Twilight, think of your options here, they need to be able to see and hear you.
>The only way you can think that they'd do it is with camera edits in the room.
>Only problem, you've been in here all day and night.
>No! Besides the period where you fell asleep in the morning.
>You need to test this.
>You look around the room, holding your phone close to your chest in a huddled position.
>Nothing at the corners... no points or extrusions on the ceiling...
>"Not how it works Shylock! Shut down the computer and walk out the room."
>Darn... they do have a live feed on you.
>That... or they're bluffing.
>You can't take chances either way.
>You go to the computer and hit the shutdown icon after opening Uniglass from the start button.
>You back away slowly, watch as it shuts down in front of you, and walk towards the door.
>You open it and close, looking in both directions for any sign of help, or surveillance.
>Nothing and no on-
>"Don't stop, keep walking."
>Urgh... where is he watching you from?!
>You make your way to the front entrance, being extremely careful not to look suspicious in any way.
>No sign of Shining, you really wish you'd run into him.
>With your one free hand, you grasp the door handle.
>"Put the phone in your pocket, don't hang up."
>You do as he says, putting the phone in your back pocket and opening the door.
>"Twily?"
>You immediately freeze up at the sound of your brother's voice.
"Shining! Uhm... How's it hanging B-Bro?
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>>29915278
>"Not much, but what about you? Basement darkness finally get to you?"
>Darn it, they must of seen him coming, so now they're hearing everything you say.
"Oh I'm fine. Was just heading out for a walk is all. Yep! Just a walk."
>You back up through the entrance way and wave him three fingers, thumb tucked under.
>"Alright well... good luck!"
>He nods and waves you goodbye, and the two of you part ways.
>A bit sketchy, but you think that'll work.
>You walk a few places down the block and pick the phone out of your pocket.
"... Hello?"
>"Yeah, still here. Keep walking just like that."
>You do as he says, making sure not to draw attention to yourself.
>Calm and collected, just like a high school exam.
>As you make your way down the block, you begin to see more tall structures as you enter the more civil district of Ponyville.
>More cars, more people, less chance to stick out now.
>You could run into an alleyway and lose them, wherever they are.
>Could you really be that fast though?
>No, they'd probably just blow the place sky high then and there.
>Hmm... you did give Shining the signal, so you can only hope that he leaves with Mom and Dad without them noticing.
>You continue through the streets and pass a few intersections before finally seeing what's supposed to be the construction yard.
>As expected, no one's working on it and it nearly towers over the rest of the projects here.
>You walk around the structure, wondering how to get inside, but you see the entrance as a wide gate through to a dirt road in.
>This must be how they get construction vehicles inside.
>No one seems to be here though, so maybe they're hiding?
>Of course they are, you're still in the middle of public.
>You open the gate slightly and walk to the other side of it before closing it back up.
>"Good work. Go through the vehicle entrance and stay quiet."
>You do as he says.
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>>29915242
Oh shit, he is alive.
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>>29915289
>A lengthy metal fence surrounds the unfinished structure with pockets of earth to operate from.
>Once you pass the gap of metal sheets, you look around for any sign of the culprits behind all this, but still nothing.
>Seriously!? You still can't see or hear or smell or taste or feel anything that would tell you they are here!?
>No, that would be wrong.
>You just have to try harder.
>Think... where would they be that they could follow you all throughout the town without-oh it's a camera isn't it?
>You search around yourself, looking inside your clothes and all over your hair, but you can't seem to find any digital device or carry-on.
>So no camera... do they fly?
>You look up at the sky, but see no flying man in tight spandex, much to your disappointment.
>So just... nothing to go by huh?
>Maybe they're just behind you and you didn't notice it?
>No, they had to be in the house then, and that has Shiny's installed security footage.
>Hmm...
>...
>......
>Invisibility!
>Maybe they invented some sort of cloaking device that can hide any residue, footprints, and evidence they leave behind!
>That sounds... highly improbable.
>But just then, you notice something moving in the dirt!
>Should you hide?! Maybe you should run now. Maybe?
>The movement in the dirt becomes more ruffled and pulverized as you look at it, skeptical of any further action.
>And then, it bursts outward.
>With a scrawny... suited midget... standing just a few feet away.
>"Ah! Nothing like a good dig eh? Ol'buddy ol'pal?"
>More dirt is churned from underneath the ground as a large protruding hand extends out from it and lands back on the hard flattened earth.
>"Break it up you bumbling idiot. Do people even talk like that in this era?"
>The broad wide shoulders expand out of the hole as the mysterious man hides behind his fedora.
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>>29915295
>Climbing out, he nearly towers over you by a full head length, so you doubt it's anyone you know.
>Though the hard tint of green has you already running through your brain for answers.
>"Pretty pair of glasses. Guess you aren't second most trouble for nothin'."
>Second most trouble?
"W-Who are you? What do you want with me?!"
>He sways his arms out wide, in a sort of carefree fashion.
>"It's not really what I want, but what I need."
>He waves the small guy over to his side, and he does so, but something... very... unexpected happens.
>The small and stout suited minion of a man takes out a weird card of sorts, with a plastic jar of water drawn on.
>And with the slight press of his finger, the jar magically appears out of thin air onto the hard soil with a thud.
>"Nice, now fade for just a moment. Make sure no dick gets in the way."
>He nods to and runs in a sort of... humorous and bouncy fashion.
>So weird...
>And what was that card?
>Does he have that sort of magical device too?
>What might it be called?
>How much can it carry?
>You know it can carry a hefty object and not effect the fatigue of a person, noting the ease of use for the card, but it still puzzles you how something so... unrealistic would exist.
>"Now come here."
"... Why should I?"
>"Cause it'll be a whole lot easier on me if you comply."
>Hmmm... none of them have any threat, except maybe muscle.
>So you can't run, but maybe you can outsmart him.
>You just have to wait for the right moment.
"Alright, I'll comply."
>"Good girl."
"But first! Is my brother safe?"
>"As safe as you'll be."
"And that is?"
>"With the suit."
"The suit? Sorry, but I don't think me or my brother are willing to join a crime syndicate out of a single bomb threat."
>He takes two steps closer to you, so you back away with the near equivalent.
>"Figures you'd take the hard route. The twenty-sixth times the charm."
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>>29915302
>The twenty-sixth time? What does he mean by that?
>He moves his arm and reaches into his suit.
>That... isn't a good sign.
>You take this opportunity to book it back to the gate.
>If you know any fact of crime organizations, they don't like peepers.
>So there's a ninety percent chance that's a gun.
>You run past the entrance and make a sharp left, making sure not to trip over yourself.
>Out of the corner of your eye, you can see the motion of his arm as it weaves fast towards you.
>You duck for the nearest pile of loose debris and hope the shot misses or backfires.
>Cover your head, crouch and stay alert.
>"You know... you might've had a chance. Too bad though."
>Oh no... please...
>You look back at the entrance, but see no shadow, so you opt to shuffle away from it.
>He isn't sprinting, you hear no footsteps.
>Is he still standing there?
>Your breathe is quickening and you can't control your sweat and tears.
>Please... Shining...
>No shadow... no footsteps... you're almost there.
>Just a little more to the left.
>There!
>You jump up to grab the gate, but...
>YOU CLOSED IT! THAT'S A SOLID FEW SECONDS!
>Hurry! Cmon quit fumbling with it!
>You push the lever up and heave the gate out of the way.
>But as you do it... you see him behind you.
>His arm is trained on you, and you have nowhere to run except through a metal hole-filled gate.
>Everything's over.
>They win.
>In an instant, you dash through the gate's side, pleading to the gods above that you're not forsaken.
>But... no...
>A... white card?
>It's right in front of you.
>How could that be?
>No... it's not just a white card.
>It's a playing car-mmgh!?
>Wait! No-acgkh... it... it's not...
>Po-shhhckting.
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>>29915278
NOOOOOOOOo ooo.... that " ....

Anyways, one down. Five to go. Questions appreciated.
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>>29915323
Will do when I wake up....and when my internet stabilizes.
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>>29915310
Oh shit son.
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>>29918462
stay cheeki breeki
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>>29920805
>You will never be "bullied" by Sugarcoat for being a loner
JUST
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Any recommendations for a boring evening?
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>>29921032
the alive pastebins in the OP, depends what you're looking for.
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>>29921032
Read this classic https://pastebin.com/jdTX2ftv
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>>29915323
There are so many questions I don't even know what to ask.

Bravo.
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>>29922045
I-Is that a good thing or a bad thing? I don't mind answering them if it means more feedback.
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bump from 9
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>>29924409
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>>29926826
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>>29927688
9 again
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'It's always like this when a new episode comes out' bump
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>>29928659
Yup.
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>>29923699
pg 8
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>>29929873
page 8 not gr8 m8

Just letting you lads know I've been up for 6 or 7 days straight, just finished watching the new episode so I haven't done much. i was going to post someting a couple days back
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9... Jesus
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>>29930932
Yeah, the new episode has distracted everyone this week.
>>29930334
Sleep then write, your no good a zombie. And actually finish a update would be nice.
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So I've been forcing myself to get more sleep than usual, and it's really been killing my writes my dudes
However i should have something for ya this morning, look forward to it!
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Continued from: https://pastebin.com/LLukQs1V

>Sliding the door all the way to the right causes a *click* to sound off within the darkness
>With an electric hum a bright blue light illuminates the closet
>Well grab a marker and color you surprised
>The inside of the closet is like a cornucopia of outfits!
>There are a few jerseys, tracksuits, and a multitude of different uniforms
>It strikes you as a bit odd
>While investigating the closet a bit further you tilt your head back to Rainbow
“You really didn’t strike me as someone with so many outfits Ra-DASH.”
>It’s an impressive collection she actually probably could fashion together a makeshift super suit
>”I’m not; Rarity’s hooked me up over the years.”
>Should’ve figured as much
>Why else would everything be color coordinated to suit her to a T?
>You can hear the springs of the mattress groan as she bounces off the bed
>”She really went overboard during the Friendship games though, that’s when most of these were made.”
>You stop snooping for a moment and turn around with a smirk
“Rarity going overboard with clothes; surely you jest?”
>She rolls her eyes as she places a hand on her hip
>”Yea yea, in other breaking news Twilight likes books, AJ farms apples, and I do the sports more at 5.”
>Chuckling you turn back to your inspection of her closet
>You can feel her standing behind you as you look around
>”Though more importantly Anon, why’d you call me a radish?”
>You tense up at her mention of your slip of the tongue
>It’s not like you can just change how you address someone on the fly, you’ve gotten used to saying and thinking Rainbow!
>Instead of actually saying that though you look for something to segway to
>Thankfully you spot something in the corner of the closet
>Pointing to it you try to change the subject as smoothly as possible
“Uh… hey what’s that!?”
>Smooth
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>>29933589
>You expect Radash to start making fun of you, but to your surprise something else happens
>The mound of clothing you pointed to starts to move!
“Oh what the in hell?”
>You see your blue acquaintance behind you as she pokes her head over your shoulder
>”What?”
>You point again to the slow moving heap of bike shorts and socks
“I know that washing your clothes might seem like an alien concept, but it actually has its uses I swear.”
>You back into her as the moving mystery pile moves towards you
“Otherwise if you leave them out for too long you get this shit, horrifying creatures made out of your dirty clothes.”
>Blowing a mini-raspberry she leans over you reaching towards the moving clothing ball
>”Ok first off, I wash my clothes on a semi-regular basis.”
>Semi-regular?
“What like every other fortnight?”
>She gives you a cheeky smile as she grabs the no doubt Gigerian monster of her unwashed wear
>”Very funny, but no.”
>Bringing the slightly squirming creature from the blue closet she brushes off some of the surface clothes revealing a shell
>Holding up the shell in a nest of discarded clothing like a trophy she smiles
>”And secondly, this isn’t a monster it’s my faithful sidekick Tank!”
>As if waiting for his cue Tank’s head pops out of his shell
>You notice a few things as Dash rubs her face against Tank affectionately
>One, Tank appears to be wearing little green goggles
>They have a blue tint naturally
>Two, are those fucking roller-skates on the turtle’s feet?
>They better not be
>And finally, little dude’s also got flames painted on his shell…
>You find it slightly concerning just how not surprised you are right now
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>>29933591
>Humming satisfaction Dash sets Tank on the ground patting the back of his shell as he starts to slowly roll towards the doorway
>Ok there are several questions flying through your mind right now
>Like why was her turtle in the closet?
>Or how is he moving without actually moving his legs?
>Even better, how is he roller-skating across CARPETED FLOOR!?
>Brushing her hands off Dash looks back to you
>”What’s wrong?”
>Apparently you’re wearing your confusion visibly on your face
“I have so many questions.”
>Dipping her hands into her short pockets she leans back against her bed
>”Shoot.”
>Where to even start?
“Ok, so did you pai—“
>With a shit eating grin she interrupts you right away
>”Yea, everyone knows flames make everything faster.”
>Should’ve figured
“Where is he even going?”
>Shrugging she stares at Tank as he slowly makes his way across the carpet like a sailing ship leaving port
>”Dunno, he just sorta goes when I’m not hanging out with him.”
>You’re starting to wonder if she’s even qualified to look after a pet
>Shaking your head you sit on the bed beside her
“Well, those were the hard ones anyways, but uh…”
>You don't even know if you should ask anymore
>Your stomach gives a little rumble as your eyes wander outside the window
>Tearing her gaze from Tank she raises an eyebrow
>”You hungry?”
>Huh, besides the grumble it just gave your stomach has been pretty quiet, but now that you're thinking about it
>You're starved
>You nod
>”Well we can go to the mall; it’s like a 10 minute walk from here.”
>It occurs to you just now that besides going there the other day you’ve only gone there a few times for the PNC
>Never ate there though
>Grabbing something off her closet rack she waves you off
>”Go get some socks on and I’ll meet you downstairs.”
>Giving a grunt of affirmation you get up off the bed and head for the room you woke up in
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>>29933594
>Walking in you grab your hoodie off the bed
>It looks moderately nice outside and all, but it’s probably going to get chilly once the sun goes down
>Slipping into your hoodie brings you a sense of comfort, like you’re no longer naked and you just realized you were before
>You make sure to pull it down over your sweat pants before patting your pockets down
>You forgot that you don’t have your phone or wallet on you
>You almost have a mini-heart attack before you remember you left it all on your swat uniform
>You literally just told yourself not to forget that like five minutes ago
>Shaking your head with a sigh you walk to the closet
>Opening it up and peering inside your damaged and discarded armor sits pushed into the corner
>Just seeing it lying there in a crumpled heap is spurring thoughts about last night
>Especially the gashes and scuffs of white paint that seem to have accumulated all over
>You involuntarily grab your right forearm as your eyes wander to the somewhat indented gauntlet
>Man you’re glad you downed those pills now
>You feel like seeing what happened being retold through your wrecked protection would just make your pain worse
>Getting a grip once more you ignore your nagging thoughts
>Squatting down you grab the vest from the pile
>Besides the right shoulder strap being a bit cut up it seems more or less fine so that’s something
>Fishing out your phone from its pocket reveals that it’s still just as broken as before
>Which is pretty lucky all things considering
>You’re about to put it in your sweatpants pocket when you notice it out of the corner of your eye
>The blue message light just blinked
>Who the heck would’ve messaged you?
>Oh shit, you were supposed to meet up with Celestia and Luna today weren’t you?
>They probably want to know where you are
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>>29933599
>Well either that or it could be one of the others trying to get in touch
>Or would they?
>It occurs to you that in trying not to think too hard about your conversation with Shadowfright you completely forgot to ask about what happened after you…
>Were out of commission?
>Yea that works
>Well you know that at least Rarity and Applejack are fine since they went and got you a change of clothes
>But what happened to the others at the shipping yard?
>You should probably ask R-dash, radish, blue fast dash about that at some point
>Though since Dash doesn’t seem too down they probably ended up fine
>Blinking you realize you’re just staring blankly at your locked phone
>Deciding to get back to what you were doing you press the unlock button to see who left a message
>You don’t recognize this number
>That’s happening a lot though
>Swiping your thumb across the cracked glass you bring yourself to the message
>One look and it’s clear that it’s just spam, but something about it does catch your eye
>It’s a random text message fortune teller?
>Sounds dumb and they probably want your money or something, but you’d be lying if you didn’t say you were slightly interested in what it has to say as you see it’s already sent you a fortune
>While it may seem that the world conspires against you as troubles pour atop you non-stop
>Be happy that a reprieve from the torrent will conceal you beneath a façade of benign normality
>Hm, just nondescript enough that you can pretty much relate to it no matter who you are…
>You continue reading as you grab around the vest for your wallet
>Your lucky numbers are; 6, 7, 9, and 45
>Great?
>Your color, red
>Wait; is that like a lucky color or just your preferred color of the day?
>This is confusing
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>>29933601
>Ah, what do you care?
>It’s just some spam bot or something
>No need to think too hard about it
>Backing out to your home screen you check the time and how much battery your phone has left
>4:44pm and 57%
>Hm, guess your phone will be fine
>Snatching your wallet out of the vest you pocket both it and your broken phone
>It occurs to you as you stand up that you can probably get your screen replaced at one of the mall kiosks
>They have screen repair things there right?
>Shrugging to yourself you acquire your socks from the wardrobe
>If they don’t you’re not gonna complain
>While the cracks make it a bit of a pain to read stuff it doesn’t seem to have done anything else to your phone
>The carpet of the stairs tickles your feet as you make your way down them
>You can see Rainbow, Dash, Nash, Dashie slipping her shoes on near the door
>Looks like she’s ditched the shorts and changed into a tracksuit
>Stopping at the foot of the stairs you sit on the last stair and slip your socks on
>Turning around she nods with a smile
>”Come on Anon, you’re way too slow!”
>You roll your eyes with a smirk as you grab your shoes
>Looks like clothes weren’t the only things they brought over
“Yea yea, it’s not a race blue fast.”
>She holds a finger up and opens her mouth before scrunching her face up
>”Blue fast?”
>Tapping your heels together as you stand up you look up from your feet
“Yea, you know cause you’re blue and you’re fast?”
>Shaking her head she turns back to the door while waving to her right
>”Ok, we’re leaving Tank!”
>As she steps out you notice the little turtle wheeling out from behind the couch as he slowly makes his way across the living room
>On carpeted floor once more without moving his legs…
>Not even gonna get started on that
>You step through the threshold into the warm October afternoon
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>>29933605
>https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=CMX2lPum_pg
>”Senny, your friends are here!”
>You scrunch your face up as mom calls to you from down the hall with her pet name once again interrupting your think time
>Standing up you stretch out as you look for your jacket
“Ok, th-I’ll be out in a minute!”
>You spot your jacket hanging next to your Sum 41 poster
>Hm, it seems like they’re early
>You planned to patrol the hunting grounds around 5 or so
>Checking your brand name rolex you see that it’s 4:54pm
>Your mom stares at you from the doorway
>”Are you sure you’re feeling ok Senny?”
>Putting an arm through your mondo cool jacket you check yourself out in your full body mirror
“Of course th-I am ma!”
>Licking your hand you slide your hand across your floof to make it more floofy
>She frowns slightly before putting a hand on her hip and wagging the other
>”Alright, but I want you home by 7:45!”
>Heh, you’re lookin good today
>Who are you kidding?
>You look good EVERYday
>”We’re having steak tonight.”
>AW YYYEEEAAAAA
>Steak night is the best!
>No way are you gonna miss that!
>You tear your gaze away from the mirror and smile at your beautiful mother
“Ok ma, I’ll be back at 7:30.”
>Chicks always like it when you're early
>You can hear your mom’s light chuckling as you make your way out of your room
>”Alright, have fun with your friends Cenny.”
>You give her a big thumbs up as you make your way to the door
“Will do, see ya!”
>Just as you’re about to open the door you hear your mom holler from your room
>”I looooooovvvveeee you Senny!”
>You can already hear snickering on the other side of the door
>Gripping the handle you look over your shoulder to see mom batting her eyelashes at you
>Why’s she gotta be like this!?
>You can’t lose face in front of the guys!
“Y-you too!”
>You quickly throw the door open and slam it behind you
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>>29933608
>You eyeball the three snickering goobers in front of you
“You got something to say to the Flash!?”
>Sandlewood holds a hand up as he tries to stop giggling
>”N-nah brah, we’re choka.”
>Snips holds his sides as he elbows Snails
>”Y-yea, we’re all good in the hood; right Snails?”
>Snails ceases his snickering and goes stone faced
>”Word.”
>Sandlewood and Snips stop their laughing as they see Snips’s stone cold face
>Shaking your head you slide your hands into your jacket pockets
“Whatever, come on we gotta get going.”
>You step past the three as you hear Sandlewood behind you
>”Whatever you say, Senny…”
>You can hear the giggles starting up again
>They’re not going to let this go
>You better stop this now
>Spinning on your heel you point at the snickering Sandlewood
“At least the Flash has a mom!”
>The laughing ceases immediately
>Snails cringes
>”Harsh.”
>You frown at all three of them as Sandlwood stares into the sky
>Ok maybe that was a bit too far
“Sorry bro.”
>Sandlewood shakes his head
>”Nah brah, I was being a dip it’s ok.”
>Sandlewood…
>You can see tears starting to form in his eyes
“Come on bro.”
>You hold your arms out wide
“Let’s hug it out.”
>With a tear filled smile he gladly accepts your embrace
>Patting him on the back you nod
“Let’s just put this behind us.”
>He just nods before you both mutually break the bro hug
>Snips smiles nodding himself
>”That’s how real thugs solve it.”
>Snails puts his shades on and give you a thumbs up
>”Resolve it.”
>With a smile you turn away from your bros
“Come on let’s get a move on.”
>Pointing to the bustling mall down the road you grasp your hand into a fist
“It’s time to go on the prowl for more Flashers.”
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That's it for now, sorry about the past few days been sleeping quite a bit lately. Should get the next out relatively quick, till then!
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>>29933613
We still love you.
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>>29933613
Just finished the first chapter and it was great. A bit too slow at the start for my taste just sayin could be just my shitty taste but i kek'd a lot. Looking forward for the next few chapters.
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>>29933613
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>>29933589
Thanks for the update YFN
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>>29896285
This green actually made me interested in The Witcher. It's sounds pretty awesome. Should I start with series by number one or is there a part I should avoid?
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>>29935662
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>>29936406
I was in the same boat as you and ended up buying the entire collection due to this green. I'm be tempted to say start with one and work your way though as I've heard the first is all round very dated and two is dated compared to three but I've actually only played three and read up on the background on the wiki and I never felt lost..
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>>29933589
Your missing ending punctuations on all your sentences that don't involve someone talking. You need those.
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>>29933591
>“Oh what the in hell?”
you goofed here.
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>>29933608
Damn, is Flash inbreed?
>>29933613
So....is this some gay themed flashing gang?
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>>29936539
>points out grammar mistakes
>your
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>>29936539
>Correcting grammar
>Your

I think you need to leave.
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>>29934251
I luv you too

>>29934485
It's not just you m8, look forward to 1 and a half pastebins of pacing issues
We just got done with Sunday
I'm hopefully going to get better at it from now on as I have a set schedule that I feel is more appropriately spaced out

>>29936539
Where have you been my dude?
I haven't done that ever because I think it looks weird
That and sometimes I come right up to the wall that is post character limits

>>29936595
Fuuuuuucckkkkk

>>29936707
Bro, there's nothing gay about being a good bro
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This has gone meh now
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>>29938683
Gonna be more specific, or are you just trying to be a discouraging dick...or are you in the wrong thread?
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>>29938741
The thread has gone meh. The stories all seem to have declined in quality. What I mean is the writings still good, but it just doesn't stick long enough. I can read them, and still do,it's just that they seem boring, it might just be me though.
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>>29938832
Just you then.
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>>29938832
What do you mean?
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>>29939785
Its just a guy spending too much time in front of the computer, its fine.
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Sorry for the lack of that update.

Due to one of our centers shutting down unexpectedly and now permanently, I'm working seven days a week for the forseeable future.

I didn't get enough writing done on those days before my free time completely disappeared.

Guess you can consider me on hiatus until we deal with training new people, I'm hoping to get my days off back after this first wave is done which will be in two weeks.

I love you.
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>>29940563
>7 days a week
>for the forseeable future

Is that even legal?

>training new people

I know that feel man

>>29933613
Am I missing something here? This whole dynamic with Flash and his mom seems rather, I want to say forced but it doesn't feel like the right word to describe it. It's a bit weird, and I know how some motherly relationships can be, but this just seems like borderline incesty.
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>>29940563
Shiiiiit, good luck mate. Just do stuff when you can and stock up till your free.
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>>29940961
Nah, you nailed it on the head. Incesty is exactly what that looked like....unless Flash leads a mothergangbanging service.
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>>29940563
It's alright my dude, we'll be here till you get back

>>29940961
>>29942545
Holy shit no!
This isn't what I was going for at all!
I just wanted him to be a momma's boy who was embarrassed his mom was being affectionate around his friends
Like the you're looking good part was about himself as he inspects himself in the mirror
The whole beautiful mother part was because shes making him steak, and the batting of eyelashes is just her teasing him because his friends are there
It was not for lewd undertones!

I guess I need to tone it back a bit...
:(
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>>29942819
Deny it all you want, it was lewd, very lewd. And I don't actually care about it. Go nuts with the Flasher's mother gangbang service and the incest undertones.
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>>29933608
What's with the these two sentences
“Ok, th-I’ll be out in a minute!”
“Of course th-I am ma!”

What's the th- meant to be? Thanks? Or something different?

And yeah that whole scene seemed very incesty. you trying to tell us something YFN?
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>>29943194
Would it have made more sense if the first one was
"Ok, the Fl-I'll be out in a minute!"
Also
>are you trying to tell us something?
No, no i am not!
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>>29943822
Yeah, stopping at the Flash instead of just th would have made much more sense.
Also, its okay, we get the occasional Incest thread poster dropping by every once in awhile. Flash being a literal mamas boy would be hilarious...or completely irrelevant anyways and we would forget about it. Bottom line, make a joke or something serious with it and we will go along with it.
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>>29940961
>Is that even legal?
Yup, on multiple accounts in my state.

Under our laws not familiar with other states anything over 80 hours in two weeks is overtime BUT overtime can be mandatory. Even if it wasn't actually mandatory by law, in Washington another law pretty much would make it mandatory since the employee or the employer can terminate their relationship at any time for no given reason, IE I can quit any time and there is nothing they can do to stop me but they can fire me at any time and there is little I can do to stop them. You have to prove they fired you for something like race or gender, other than that you're out of luck.

Don't want to give the impression I'm at risk of being fired if I say no, I'm probably in the top five people who work where I do in terms of job security. However, as a Trainer and a Supervisor me and the two others who share such qualifications are expected to step up.

On the plus side, I'm getting 32 hours of overtime on this check. Definitely going somewhere nice after all this.

Also page 8 blog bump
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>>29945038
Right to work was a mistake.
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>>29945038
ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh
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JUST RAPE!
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>>29947701
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>>29949779
Geist Anon where art though?
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>>29951209
thou*
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>>29896285
-- Canterlot --
>Opening the front door, you walk inside and dump your bag unceremoniously onto the floor.
>The moonlight shines through the window as you close the door behind and lock it. Looking at the clock on the mantelpiece, the clock reads almost 3 in the morning.
>Despite that though, Winona comes running down the stairs and excitedly jumps around in between your legs.
>Kneeling down, your dog pounces up and licks your face.
"Easy now girl." you say with a faint smile. "Settle down."
>"Sis? Is that you?" a voice says calls down from upstairs.
"Apple Bloom, you should be in bed right now." you say kicking your boots off.
>Your younger sister walks down the stairs in her pajamas rubbing her eyes.
>"Ya should have called, we'd have stayed up until ya got home."
"Nah, no need ta make a fuss over me." you say.
>Walking up, you pass by Apple Bloom who turns around and gives you a puzzled look.
>"Is Anon out back or something?"
>You freeze mid-stride.
"No, he ain't."
>Keep it together...
>"Is he with at his old house then?"
"..."
>"Sis? Did... did something happen?" she asks in a worried tone.
"Goodnight Apple Bloom."
>"Hey, wa-"
"I said goodnight." you interrupt.
>Without another word you walk to your room and lock the door behind you.
>Winona paws at the door but you ignore her. Instead just getting undressed and flopping down into bed.
>You're going to have to get ready for school in a few hours. After all it is a weekday.
>As you try and get to sleep, there's a buzzing from your phone.
>Turning the screen on, it's an incoming call from Sunset.
>Staring at her contact photo, you hesitate on accepting the call.
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>>29952616
>Instead, a press of the power button sends the call directly to voicemail so you can set your phone down.
>Ever since you left that castle, she's been trying to get you to talk to her.
>You really don't feel like talking to anyone right now.
>But try as you might, every time you've tried to get some shut-eye since you left Skellige, you keep ending up seeing his face.
>Consarnit...
>Is the roof still leaking? You thought Big Mac fixed that two weeks ago.
>You'll have to give him a talking too.
>...
>Wiping your eyes, you do your best to get some rest.

-- Two Weeks Later --

>As you walk down the halls of Canterlot High, you note all the stares you're receiving from the other students that pass by.
>No doubt it's your eyes.
>You still haven't figured out if you can actually change them like Gilda could, so you've tried hiding them behind a pair of sunglasses.
>At least until they were confiscated by your first period teacher.
>Rarity has mentioned getting colored contacts if it really bothered you, but you're not really sure it's gotten to that point yet.
>Plus, you're not really sure they would be able to work with the way your pupils work now. The last thing you need on your tight budget is to add a set of custom-made contacts to it.
>Things otherwise in Canterlot have been extremely quiet.
>No monsters, no threats from Equestria, nothing.
>Both you and Rainbow Dash still spar, though not as much since... Anon...
>Applejack hasn't let you onto the farm recently with the implication that you're all not welcome there.
>You give a wave to Octavia and Vinyl as the latter pushes the former's wheelchair to the music room.
>Vinyl was relatively unharmed when you found her in the Keep's undercroft. Pissed off for sure, and wrists rubbed to the bone from trying to get out of her restraints, but otherwise unharmed. Apparently the witchers used an ancient cage of some sort made specifically to restrain higher vampires.
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>>29952625
>The vampire made sure to "dispose" of the contraption.
>Octavia herself is fine though, being a werewolf and all. She's only in the wheelchair because of Vinyl.
>Like an "overprotective mother" as the cellist puts it.
>Though they're sorry about Anon, they don't regret helping you.
>Even then, you'll probably try to keep out of their business if you can help it.
>Entering the lunchroom, you quickly spot your friends at your usual table.
>Everyone except Applejack...
>Grabbing a tray of food and taking what you can, when you pass by, Granny Smith gives you a frown and shake of her head.
>You nod and move along.
>Taking your food to the table, you take a seat by your friends and begin digging in.
>"Hello Sunset." Fluttershy greets. "Um... how was your day?"
"Pretty good, still trying to get used to people staring at me again." you reply, "I guess it could be worse though, I probably should just be thankful that it's not because of something I did this time."
>"Well that's good. Though I must say, I think the eyes look cute on you." Rarity comments.
"Is Applejack not coming today either?" you ask.
>Your friends share sad glances with each other.
>"She's been avoiding us ever since you got back two weeks ago." Pinkie Pie answers, "We're getting super-duper worried!"
>"The poor dear is still taking Anonymous's... departure hard." Rarity adds, "I couldn't imagine losing my significant other in such a horrific manner like you described."
"Yeah..."
>Rainbow scratches the back of her head, "Even though I'm living with her now, she doesn't really talk to me either."
>"No offense Rainbow Dash, but I kind of expected you to be in a similar situation like her."
>"What? Just because my Dad's dead?"
>"Well..."
>"I've already made my peace with it. Sure, it still hurts, but my Dad and I already talked about this sort of situation when my Mom left. I'm just kind of mad that AJ doesn't think I can relate in anyway."
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>>29952634
>Rainbow grunts in embarressment.
>"Plus I know its mushy, but I have you girls to talk too."
>"Aw we love you too Dashy!" Pinkie says pulling her into a great big bear hug.
>Picking up your fork, you stab it into the salad you got yourself and take a bite.
>Applejack hasn't answered your calls or texts, and every time you've gone to her house her brother or sister has told you she's not there. The only time you see her now is between classes but she seems to be deliberately avoiding you.
>And now, thanks to you, the semi-normal mood around the table has been brought down.
>Nice going Sunset...
>Twilight pokes at her food, "This is all my fault..."
>"Now hush darling, we've been over this, none of this is your fault."
>"But it is. If it wasn't for me, Sunset and I wouldn't have been taken and Anon wouldn't have had to come and rescue us."
>You silently continue eating, while your other friends comfort Twilight.
>Not because you don't care, but because something else grabs your attention.
>Out in the far corner of the lunchroom, you see Applejack walking out with her bag.
>Setting your fork down, you rise up from your seat and make your way towards her.
>"Sunset?"
"I'll be right back."
>Running after Applejack, you nearly collide with Flash and his friends as they leave their table.
>Ducking and weaving underneath them without even touching them, you leave the boys all speechless.
"Sorry about that." you nonchalantly say.
>Bursting through the double doors you scan the halls until you see Aj.
"Applejack!" you call out.
>The girl doesn't react to your voice at all, instead continuing towards her next destination.
"Applejack, please we need to talk."
>"..."
"You can't keep avoiding us forever."
>"Ah can try." she mutters bitterly.
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>Despite her saying that under her breath, your hearing still managed to pick that up whether she realized that or not.
>You grab her shoulder and force her to face you.
>Her expression is a mix of anger and annoyance. Something that's unlike the Applejack you know and love.
"What's been going on with you? You've been acting so anti-social ever since we got back. We're getting worried about you."
>Knocking your hand away, she continues down the hallway.
>"Well ain't that nice. But if you'll excuse me ah'm busy."
>Your temper starts to flare at her flippant manner.
>Stomping forward you grab her by the wrist eliciting an even angrier glare from her.
>"Let. Go."
"No."
>Turning around slowly, she grabs you by the shirt and slams you into the lockers.
>"Sunset I said. Let. Go."
"Or else what? You'll hurt me? I'd like you to try."
>"..."
>The two of you stare each other down as a few other students around you watch in anticipation.
>"Applejack! Sunset Shimmer! My office, now!" Principal Celestia orders.
>Finally letting Applejack's wrist go, you two wordlessly follow the Principal, both of you glaring at each other the entire way.
>Opening the door to her office, she ushers the two of you in.
>"Take a seat." she says in a harsh tone. "Both of you."
>Silently, you both comply.
>"Now, what has gotten into you two?" she asks shutting the door.
>"..."
"..."
>Your silence doesn't seem to amuse the Principal.
>"Girls, I don't have all day. And I'd hate to see some of my best students in trouble for fighting."
>"I'd rather not talk about it Principal. It's... private."
>"If this is about Anonymous, I've already been made aware."
>Applejack shoots you a nasty look.
>"Applejack, I know this is a trying time for you, but I doubt Sunset is doing anything but trying to help you."
>"I know..."
>"Anonymous will be miss-"
>"He's not dead." she interrupts.
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>>29952655
>Both you and Celestia are left a little stunned.
>"Excuse me?"
>"Ah said, he ain't dead. There's not one bone in my body that believes he is."
"Applejack..."
>"No! Don't you "Applejack" me! Not after you all just wrote him off fer dead."
>Taking a folder from her filing cabinet, she begins writing something down inside.
>"Applejack, I'm sorry if you take this the wrong way, but I think it might be best to see the school psychiatrist. Especially after the ordeal-"
>Your friend growls, "I ain't crazy! Now just leave me alone!"
>Getting up from her chair, she runs out of the room and slams the door.
>"Sunset, I can only do so much as her Principal. But her grades have already started dropping; if she goes on at this rate..."
"I know Principal Celestia. I know."

>Opening your front door, you come across a scene you still have trouble getting used to.
>Sonata Dusk and Aria Blaze both folding laundry while watching TV.
"I'm home." you say setting your book bag down.
>"Great. Thanks for telling us." Aria replies, her tone dripping with sarcasm. "Now move, you're blocking the TV."
>You close the door and move.
>Since Anon couldn't "convince" the property manager of his old home to waive the rent anymore, nor could you since you didn't know how, the girls found themselves homeless again.
>And who was the first person they came too?
>Well...
>Not you. But after constant failed attempts, eventually they didn't really have a choice.
>Plus, it puts some ease on your finances having to split the rent. And it's kind of nice having roommates, even if they did try to kill you a couple months prior.
>Life is weird like that.
>"Hey Sunset, want to help us fold laundry?" Sonata asks with a pair of panties stretched over her head. "I made a fun game out of it with Aria's panti-"
>"SHUT IT!" Aria yells. "And take those off!"
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>>29952663
"Sorry Sonata, but I need to get ready for my job. Just came home to drop off my things and get a quick snack."
>"Oh. Okay then. Have fun!"
"Where's Adagio?"
>"Who knows?" Aria replies dismissively, "At least she doesn't hang out in her room all day anymore watching those stupid animes."
>Well, that's an improvement you suppose.
>"Hey, you never told us what that new job of yours is." Aria says, "Just what in Tartarus is it?"
"Oh... uh..."
>There's a reason for that...
>"You aren't doing that "escort" thing we saw on the news are you?"
>"I think Sunny would make a great escort! She has a nice figure that a lot of guys like. And her boobs-"
>Your face goes red.
"No it's nothing like that. I'm just a new waitress at a restaurant that opened up."
>"Well then as a fellow waitress, I hope you get big tippers like me!" Sonata says.
>"That's because you keep giving guys peeks under your skirt when you bend over to pick up the utensils or plates you dropped..."
>"WHAT?! Is that why? That... that's terrible!"
>"You never realized?"
>"I thought they were being nice!"
>Shaking your head with a small smile, you let the two girls banter with one another while you take a quick shower.
>Warm water splashes onto your bare skin, allowing you to let out some of the relieved tension of the day.
>Thoughts of how to handle Applejack however plague your mind during the entire course of it, making the shower anything but relaxing.
>You need to find some way to get through to her. A way to, sadly, convince her to move on.
>Her acting like this is not how Anonymous would have wanted her to live.
>As you're drying off, Sonata knocks on the bathroom door.
>"Sunset, I forgot to mention someone left a package for you. It's on the table."
"Who's it from?"
>"It doesn't say, but it has this weird drawing on it."
>Drawing?
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>>29952698
"I'll be out in a second."
>"Okie dokey."
>Wrapping the towel around your waist, you walk out of the bathroom and into the living room.
>And like she said, a long wrapped package addressed to you.
>But no return address.
>Instead is a stylized picture of... what looks to be a snake wrapped around another itself?
>You've only seen something like that from...
>Ripping open the packaging, Sonata and Aria peek around your shoulders.
>"What is it?"
>"Who's it from?"
>Ignoring them, you peel off the last of the paper to see a silver longsword.
>And not just any longsword either, the one Sombra used before he died.
>Attached to the guard is a small pouch and a note with a simple statement: "A blade to replace the one you lost."
>Taking the pouch a metal wolf head on a chain lands in your hand.
>"Wow! That's so cool! Just like Anon's!" Sonata cheers.
"Yeah... just like Anon's."
>Slipping the medallion over your neck, the cold metal feels kind of nice on your bare skin.
>Much nicer than that Manticore medallion you left in the Keep.
>But the longsword; you don't know why Jericho would send you the weapon. Though he must have went through a lot of effort to find where you live to send it.
>You'll keep the sword in your room in the meantime. Glancing at the clock, it's almost time to go to work.
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>>29952726
>It looks like she's trying to vent her frustrations.
>Letting her foot down, she frowns and wipes her head with the sleeve of her shirt.
>"Dammit." she mutters, "This is all your fault Anon..."
"Applejack." you call out.
>"..."
"What are you doing?"
>"What's it look like? I'm kicking a tree." she says, "Now what are you doing on my property."
"I want to help you."
>"Ah don't want yer help."
>You walk up to her, stopping just a few feet away.
>She dismisses you without much thought until she does a double-take and stares at the medallion hanging from your neck.
>"Where the hell did you get that?"
"A gift from Jericho." you answer, "But we're not talking about me."
>"We ain't talking fer much longer at all."
"We all miss Anon."
>"Shut up."
"You know he wouldn't want you to mope around like this."
>"Shut. Up. Last warning."
"Applejack I-"
>"I SAID SHUT UP!"
>The cowgirl lashes out at you with a fist.
>You easily avoid the punch and push her away.
>Snarling like a dog, she tries again.
"You're not going to hit me like this." you point out.
>"YOU KEEP TALKIN' LIKE THAT AND AH WILL!"
>Because of your reflexes, you avoid all her wild punches with little effort. And the more and more you dodge the more Applejack increasingly gets frustrated.
>Eventually she tires herself out and collapses onto the ground.
>"WHY? WHY DID HE HAVE TO GO?!"
"..."
>"Sunset why do people I care about always get taken from me?"
>You kneel down besides your crying friend.
"Shh, it's alright."
>She wipes her eyes.
>"I'm sorry Sunset... I'm so so sorry."
"You don't have to apologize. I'm here, just let me help. I know losing someone you love must be difficult but if-"
>"It ain't just that..." she interrupts. "When you and Twilight were taken by that Tirek bastard... when you were dragged into that portal... for a second there I thought that was the last time I was gonna see you two."
>...
>"Then Anon decided that he was going to get you two back despite the odds."
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>>29952698
Lewd little Sonata. But I approve.
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>>29952749
"So when we... when we accepted he was gone..."
>"To me it was like you just gave up on him. That vampire that almost ate Rarity, Camp Everfree, Twilight's brother, Scorpan and Tirek; he was there for all of us. Heck, he even helped those Dazzling girls when it didn't even benefit him."
>You hug Applejack.
>"I already lost my Ma and Pa, and Granny's getting up there in years. It just... it just ain't fair."
"You're right, it's not fair. But you don't have to go through this alone."
>"I-I know. I'm just being stupid again."
>Holding Applejack in front of you with a cross leer, you stare her right in the eyes.
"NO! You're not stupid!" you chastise, "It's not stupid to hurt after losing someone."
>Gently, your grip loosens.
"We're all hurt in some way Applejack. We all lost a friend, and we may have nearly lost another."
>"She's right." you hear Rarity say behind you.
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>>29952816
>Your friends, Rarity, Twilight, Fluttershy, Pinkie Pie, and Rainbow Dash, all walk out from their hiding spots.
>"Whe- where'd y'all come from?"
>"Apple Bloom has a big mouth." Rainbow says, "And it's not hard to find you out here."
>Fluttershy kneels down next to Applejack and hugs her, "We're all here for you."
>She finally lets out a smile, "I've been an ass."
>"Yeah, you have." Rainbow says with a knowing grin. "But we still love you."
>The seven of you gather for a group hug.
>Twilight looks to Applejack, "Anon did so much for us too Applejack, don't forget that. We'll our best to honor his memory."
>Rising to her feet, Applejack wipes her teary eyes.
>"Well, enough of all this crying then, to make up for my unbecoming behavior, how bout I bake us all some of our famous apple pies?"
>"That sounds super duper awesome!" Pinkie Pie cheerfully yells.
>"Can we have some cider with that too?" Rainbow asks. "You know, to make sure this is a genuine apology."
>Aj chuckles, "Sure thing. I'll break out some of the special blend too."
>"Aw yeah!" she shouts as the girls all leave for the house.
>The birds around you start chirping as you finally let out a sigh of relief.
>Seeing all your friends together again brings joy to your heart.
>Well, not all your friends... but you're sure he's with you in spirit.
>You take a moment to glance at the wolf medallion on your neck and watch it shine in the sun.
>"Sunset you coming?" Rainbow calls out.
>With a nod of your head, you run after them.
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>>29952830
>We'll our best to honor his memory."
missed a do* here.
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>>29952842
Fixed. Thanks.

>>29952830
EPILOGUE

- Three Months Later -

>Standing behind the counter, you prepare another temaki roll for the latest customer.
>Two tuna and one salmon, then you need to start working on the nigiri order at table four...
>Preparing the seaweed wrap, you move to spread the rice inside when you hear someone clear their throat.
>"Sunset, I know you're busy and all, but you never answered my question." Rarity says.
>Both Fluttershy and Pinkie Pie look at you expectantly.
"What? Oh. Sorry, I'm just trying to get these orders right, Mr. Ikura only recently allowed me to start making the rolls."
>Beats standing outside in that silly fish costume. Though your new uniform's skirt could be a little longer.
>"I was simply asking, do you think I should consider entering the next fencing tournament?"
"Well, you have been getting better in our private matches." you answer, "If you can hold up against a witcher, then anyone else should be easy for you."
>"Oh please darling, you give me too much credit. I still have yet to defeat you in an actual match."
"You've gotten extremely close though." you say folding the roll.
>The front door opens, letting the little bell hanging above chiming.
>"Hey y'all. Sorry we're late." Applejack says as she, Rainbow Dash and Twilight enter the restaurant. "Twi and I were finishing up a book report and-"
>"Vice Principal Luna gave me detention for being late again..." Rainbow explains. "Man, sometimes she can be a huge bi-"
>Twilight's eyes go wide and she covers her mouth, "Shh!"
>"Man, what is with you? It's not like she has eyes and ears everywhere."
>"You could stand to be on time once in a while Miss Dash." an older voice says.
>Rainbow snaps her head around to see both Principal Celestia and her sister sitting in a booth by the door eating.
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>>29952864
kek, smooth Dash. And damn....that's a shit end for Anon and Applejack. Good too see the girls are sticking to their training though.
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>>29952864
>"O-oh... hey there Vice Principal Luna, Principal Celestia..."
>"You are incredibly lucky that I'm in such a good mood." the Vice Principal says drinking her miso soup, "Otherwise I would have asked you to finish that prior sentence."
>Principal Celestia politely giggles.
>"Eh hehehe... crap."
>Rainbow, Twilight and Applejack take their seats at the bar.
>"So what're we having?" your country friend asks, "Ah never had this sush-shi before."
>"Soo-shi, dear. And it's raw fish."
>"Raw? That can't be healthy." she says, "What kind of resturant serves you raw meat?"
>"On the contrary Applejack, its very healthy." Twilight answers.
>Rarity dips a piece of tuna into some soy sauce and plops it into her mouth. "And it tastes so divine!"
>Taking a look at the menu, Applejack just looks unsure of everything on it.
>You laugh a little as her face contorts into ones of varying looks of interest.
>"Alright, guess I'll try some of this... Ika? The white one and maybe this one that looks kind of like actual meat."
"One order of Ika and Unagi coming up." you say.
>The rest of the night goes by enjoyably. Even Principal Celestia and Vice Principal Luna end up unwinding after a stressful work week.
>At least until the latter had to take her sister home.
>Note to self: Do not let Principal Celestia drink sake...
>You just hope you can find where the Principal's underwear went before you leave tonight...
>To make things even better, Mr. Ikura even gives your friends 50% off and closes the restaurant early for all the hard work.
>"Sunset-san, close up the restaurant when you're done okay?" Mr. Ikura says before heading to his office to gather his things.
"Okay Mr. Ikura." you reply. "Alright, who wants to try to beat Twilight's scores on the karaoke machine?"
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>>29952886
>Twilight blushes, and scratches the back of her head.
>"I'm not that good..."
>"It's so weird that you and Sunset have such similar sounding singing voices!" Pinkie says, "It's like you two almost have the same voice."
>"I still think that machine is rigged." Rainbow grumbles.
>"Huh, then that would mean everything Twilight beats you in is rigged." Applejack says.
>Everyone laughs as Rarity looks at the lyric sheets, "I still think its weird these songs all have such pervy lyrics." Pinkie says. "I mean the ones Fluttershy sang-"
>Fluttershy leaps over Pinkie and holds her mouth shut, "SHHHH!"
>It's been awhile since you've all hung out like this. Thankfully you'll get a few more now that school's out for winter break.
>Suddenly your boss pops his head inside again.
>"Um... Sunset-san, sorry to interrupt, but your backpack is glowing." he says muttering something in his native tongue.
>Glowing?
>Oh it must be Princess Twilight sending you a message.
"I'll be right back."
>Heading into the room labeled "employees only", you see your backpack in the corner letting off a purple glow.
>Opening it, you pull out the journal and turn the page to the newest entry.
>Your eyes go wide when you read the Princesses message.
>Writing your reply, you rush over to the others.
"Girl's we need to go!"

>"Why the heck does Princess Twilight want to meet now?" Rainbow complains, "Its almost midnight."
>"It must be important." Fluttershy replies, "She wouldn't do this unless it was."
>Rarity shivers as a cold breeze blows by. "Sunset dear, if it wouldn't hurt, could you please tell us what's so pressing?"
"We'll see." you answer. "She didn't say much other than it was important."
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>>29952886
Its nice, don't remember a sushi bar in town, but fitting, weirdly enough. Although for some reason I cant help but think of yakuza movie right now.
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>>29952906
Oh shit....OH SHIT! THINK WITH PORTALS FOLKS, THINK WITH PORTALS!
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>>29952906
>Looking at your watch, the reflective surface of the statue in front of Canterlot High glows.
>It shimmers slightly before out steps Princess Twilight.
>"Twilight!" everyone greets happily.
>"Hey girls, it's so good to see you all again."
>When she looks at you, she pauses.
"I just got off of work..."
>"Oh... well, you look nice."
"So is everything alright in Equestria?"
>"Did some monster or meany come back here?"
>"Is there some sort of fashion crisis striking Equestria's noble houses?"
>Everyone looks at Rarity.
>"What? It could happen?"
>The Princess chuckles, "No nothing like that."
>Applejack scratches her head, "Then what's so important? Ah doubt you came here just fer a social call."
>"Actually, I want you to meet someone."
>Sticking her head back through, she quickly pulls it back out.
>"Though I think you've already met."
>The portal shimmers again, and out steps a person in a heavy cloak.
>Everyone except you and Princess Twilight gasp.
>The one thing that immediatly draws your attention is the wolf medallion sticking over his hood's opening.
>Lifting his hood, a man with an eyepatch looks at you all with a small smile.
>"Didn't think I looked that bad." he says.
>All heads turn towards Applejack, with tears in her eyes.
>"A-Anon?"
>"Hey... sorry I left you hanging like that. Literally..."
>Her face contorts into one of anger as she jumps him.
>Falling onto his butt, his cloak swings open revealing a missing left arm.
>"YOU JERK!" she says hugging him tightly. "That's all you can say?!"
>"Sorry, I froze and that's all that could come to mind." he answers.
>"Anonymous, is that really you?" Rarity asks.
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>>29952927
YESSSSSSSS!
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>>29952927
Great, now we need to update Axii Anon's pic with a eye patch. Would still look badass though.
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>>29952927
>"More or less. Those Diamond Dogs, medical practitioners they do not make." he says point towards his missing arm.
"Anon, you idiot. We missed you."
>He looks at you and smiles, "I hope you two kept up your training."
>You and Rainbow nod, trying hard to contain yourselves.
>"Good because first thing tomorrow, I want to see what you two got."
>Fluttershy pokes him on the shoulder, "Um.. so soon? Don't you want to rest first?"
>"After all those fucking tests I was put me through? I think I've had enough "rest"."
"Twilight..."
>Princess Twilight blushes. "Anyway, you must want to catch up..."
>Applejack grabs Anon's face and forces him to look her in the eyes.
>"Sugarcube, we got a lot of catching up to do." she says with a wicked grin. "A *lot* of catching up to do."
>His eye scans the rest of you before shrugging, "How much "catching up" are we talking about?"
>"Two or three days, maybe four."
>"Don't you have school?"
"We're on winter break." you answer. "For the next two weeks."
>"..."
>Everyone's face goes red except Rarity who turns away and bites her scarf in jealousy.
>Giving Applejack a kiss, the witcher gently cups her cheek.
>"Anon, you SOOOOOoooo gotta tell us how you survived!" Pinkie Pie asks. "Whatdidyoueat?Whodidyoumeet?Didyoufindfriendsorwereyoualone?Whyareyoualwaysalone?HowdidyourfindTwilight?"
>He scratches his head. "Um... It's a long story."
>"Well we would love to hear it."
"We can hear all about it on the way back to the restaurant."
>He let's out a sigh, "Alright alright."
>As everyone heads back, you nudge Princess Twilight.
"You're welcome to join us."
>"Are you sure? I wouldn't want to impose."
>Shaking your head, her stomach growls. "Well, maybe just for a bite. I'll go get Spike, he'll want to see everyone too."
>As she vanishes back into the portal you watch as everyone listens to Anon's story.
>Applejack leans her head on his shoulder, fully embracing the man.
>You can't help but smile.
"Welcome home Anon."

~ End ~
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>>29952927
>>29952966
Wait a tic....could Anon get a replacement arm?
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>>29952966
Damn...it really is over isn't it. God, its been what, a 2 or 3 year journey? But god damn was the wait worth it. So Axii, are you going to take a break from writing or are you going to do a smaller series or Anon's adventures in Equestria? Oh, even bigger question, will, we, get, the, lewd?
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>>29952992
Of, not or*
series or Anon's
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>>29952966
And that is finally the end. Thank you for all for sticking around for so long.

The story had its ups and downs, both in and out of universe, but I hope you enjoyed the ride. Thanks to all the story art from Nayaa and the other Anons who contributed, and again to all the all the people who read this story. Who would have thought this would gone on for longer than a year?

I have plans for another story, but after this I'm going to take a short break to plan it out a bit more. As for lewd, I'll think about it (as it was never my strongsuit). I'm not going to promise there will, but I won't promise there won't, just a maybe; Sunset did stop eating frozen meals after all Or did she?.

It probably won't take place in the EqG universe, but it would technically fit in with the whole "Alone" concept. And maybe it'll be another shamless crossover It probably will be. Either way, I'll pop in to let you know how it goes.

Until then all.
-Axii
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>>29953007
Please come in with the story, whatever it is, here when you are ready to start. You will always have a place here, and as of this moment, so long as your pastebin is completely updated(please don't forget that), you will be moved into the highest place in the OP, the finished story writefag list. Carry on good sir.
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>>29952966
>"After all those fucking tests I was put me through?
the me* is unnecessary.
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>>29953007
What a fucking ride.
What a satisfying ending.
I'm somewhat sad to see it end.

Good luck with your next story.
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>>29952966
He did it! The absolute madman!
Holy shit Axii. I want to give you the feedback you deserve but I have been awake for +24 hours. I'll try to post it tomorrow.
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>>29952966
NO NO NO NO.
REEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE
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>>29952966
Aside from Applejacks 180 of crying to wanting to break Anon's pelvis and legs. You did good Axii, you did good.
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Rip
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I just hope YFN and the other writefags can cope with the pressure of losing Axii.
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page 10 bump
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>>29952927
>he became geralt
What
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>>29952966
Shit, I had a feeling this would happen
Especially with the description of the twilight sky as he was hanging on the portal's edge
But damn does it really hit hard when you realize that it truly is all ogre
Thanks for the hell of a ride Axii you wonderful writefriend
Hope to see you again real soon
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>>29952966
Thank you, for an amazing story.
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>>29952966
Now the big question:
Is it cheating if you fuck your girlfriend's horse version?
I mean, they are almost the same person, r-right?
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>>29956742
Hmmmm, THIS is an excellent question, she would technically be the same person. The real question would be, could pone Applejack resist the temptations of Anon as he recovers around her house while Twilight does magic doctor things. Plus side it looks like she mellowed out on him, so I bet they had a lot of conversations...probably about the fact he turned into Solid Snake.
>>29955562
And now it is your turn to carry the thread till you complete your story, I look forward to expanding the finished stories list.
>>29956282
WRITE FAGGOT!
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>>29956282
I'll cut you Faps.

>>29956838
>Solid Snake
It's Venom m8
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>>29956862
Meh, I knew it was one or the other, you got what I meant.
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>>29885916
Are there any stories where Anon becomes bros with Flash?
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>>29956742
I have a desire to know if Anon has partaken of the pone pussy.
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"Hey girls, you ever wonder why Anon is always alone?"
>The girls turn in unison to look at you
"Ah can't say the thought hasn't crossed mah mind Sunny, but ah don't know if we should meddle in others' business..."
>She sounds like she knows something
"What do you mean Applejack?"
"Call me crazy, but that fella gives off all of spooky vibes to me, I don't think ya should be getting involved, Sunset."
>Rainbow Dash straightens her back and extends her neck to peek over at Anon's lonely lunch table
"What, that dweeb? Anon is just Anon, what's spooky about him?"
"I'm with Rainbow, shouldn't we be concerned with someone so isolated? Besides, what's the worst he can do, look at him!"
>You point at Anon's table as he sits there, his lanky, thin body hunched over a notebook
>He's always wearing overly formal suits to school
"Darling, I have to agree with Sunset on this. The poor boy deserves better, look at that splendid color coordination!"
>You got Rarity on your side
"M-Maybe he's nervous? H-He hasn't been here that long. I would be..."
"See? Nobody thinks Anon is some bad guy, he probably doesn't have any friends because of some misunderstanding."
>Your self righteous social heroism fills you with determination
"Pinkie would definitely want to make friends with him too if she wasn't sick, she loves cheering people up!
"I'm gonna go talk to him, watch my food Twi"
>You get up from your seat as the rest of the girls (excluding Pink Human) follow your walk to Anon's table with their eyes

...
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>>29957535
A NEW CHALLENGER APPROACHES!
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>>29957535
>You're Anon
>There's a reason why you haven't made any new friends at this school
>You're pure concentrated evil autism
>Your lunch time reading is interrupted by someone approaching you in your peripheral vision
"Welcome to my parlor, said the spider to the fly..."
>You whisper to yourself and smirk (like the diabolical autist you are), preparing to hear your name being called
"Anon!"
>Like clockwork, you turn around and close the book with a loud snap, crossing your legs and leaning back
"That is my name, yes?"
"Oh- Haha... I'm Sunset Shimmers, we're in history together. I was wondering if I could sit with you?"
>This bitch
>If she thinks she can patronize you for sitting alone or "save" the poor friendless new kid, she's in for a surprise
>Let the games begin
"Oh, in that seat? Sorry, that one is occupied. You can pick any of the other ones, however."
>Let's see how she reacts
>She sits down next to you on the other side
"Thanks! So what were you reading? My friend- Twilight Sparkle, she's big on books too."
>She totally isn't asking you about what you meant with "occupied"
>Whatever
"It's a tome on arcane gnosis, just some light reading while I focus on my practical astral projection studies"
>This should weird her out
>If not
"And by the way, earlier when I mentioned how this seat next to mine is occupied..."
>You pause dramatically and look her in the eye with a morose expression
"It is currently being used by a spirit. A departed soul."
>You unleash your final attack, a swirling torrent of natural social awkwardness blows this girl's corporeal form asunder
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>>29957574
>You wish
"Wow cool, that sounds like something Twi would love to hear about, you know, you two have a lot in common."
>Is she a fucking airhead?
>You take a deep breath
"I honestly was expecting you to be a bit more um- Shy? No offense, but you're always alone and all."
>THIS BITCH¨
"None taken. Now, do you mind?"
>You force a fake smile and raise the book in your hand, signaling to her that you want to read in peace
"Not at all, Twi reads books a lot during the day so I'm used to no eye contact when talking to her!"
>T H I S B I T C H
>Leave me alone
>And stop comparing me to your friend, I'm not your fucking friend
"Well, unfortunately I'm not as good at multitasking so I'd prefer if you'd let me read in peace."
>You have an idea
"But if you'd like, we can trade phone numbers and talk later, alright?"
>This annoying girl is doing a fist bump under the table
"Sure! Wow, well, talk to you later Anon!"
>You exchange phone numbers
>You gave her a fake number
>But you're almost certain you got her real one
>The time of reprisal is coming
>You chuckle to yourself as she's walking back to her "friends"

...
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>>29957574
>>29957591
Those images, are they hints as to how Anon will be because I sure as fuck recognize them
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>>29957609
is it a bad thing?
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>>29957636
No, if anything it's the opposite
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>>29957591
Okay, I cant help but notice you have too many black lines. You use black lines to denote the POV of the main person it is about at that moment. Green lines for everyone else until the POV is changed. Try again, because this is a bit difficult to look at. The concept sounds fun though.
>>29957647
Then after he gets his style cleaned up a bit I look forward to more. If he writes a bit more or does it next thread I put his name in unknown section.
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>>29957591
>"Not at all, Twi reads books a lot during the day so I'm used to no eye contact when talking to her!"
first off, seeing as the POV is on Anon, lines like this need to be green, second, you forgot to spell out not* and not no*.
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>>29957591
Don't bother continuing until you figure out what you're doing.
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>>29957896
instead of telling people how to live their lives, you go fuck yourself.
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>>29957896
>>29957914
Let's not do this guys. Just cool it.

>>29957664
>>29957675
I know you're trying to be constructive, but perhaps go a bit easier and merely suggest ways to improve.
You feel so matter of factly and it comes off as a bit up your own ass.

Not saying this is why we don't have many writers, but it certainly can't help.
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>>29957926
This.

Good ol' greens were written with the dialogues in black.
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>>29957926
That was being constructive, if you cant do that then don't bother trying to improve. I help plenty of writers by being like that, if your too thin skinned then this isn't the website for you. If any writefag fucks up, be one thing or another, its our job to point it out.
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>>29957926
>>29958067
Just to be clear, >>29957896
is being an ass. But a correct ass, all good writefags on this thread improved this way. And these>>29957664
>>29957675
are actual criticisms that is to help you improve.
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>>29957914
Stop whiteknighting, you aren't helping anyone. >>29957896
could have phrased it a bit more politely, but you are correct.
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>>29958067
>It's our job
>our
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>>29958113
Don't be a lazy bone, bettering writefags gives us better greens.
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bump from 9
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>>29956838
Oh yea, no pressure
Just have to fill in these rather large shoes Axii left behind
No prob
Deargodit'sactuallycometothisI'mnotreadyIthoughtIhadmoretimeAxiiplscomeback
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>>29956838
WAT

>>29956862
WHY

I HURT NO ONE!
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>>29960085
You make us wait. WRITE FAGGOT OR DROP THE NAME!
>>29959535
STOP, don't panic, you'll do fine. Just breath.
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Get ready for the thread to go down the shitter, we gon be bump central
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>>29960613
We have our other writefags, we'll be fine.
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>>29960639
Will we though? Most of the writefags barely update, YFN will be left on his own, which means the place will be bump central. Only way we can make it look better is deleting bumps, but even still the thread going downhill, there's no denying that.
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>>29960680
We'll be fine, we lived as a bump central under Axii, we will do even better with YFN and more sporadic updates from the other writefags. I'm not to worried about it.
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bump from 9
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>>29962276
cheeki breeki
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WE'RE GONNA DIE BUMP!
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>>29963483
Dude we were on page 4, its fine.
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>>29963515
That's what you think, but I know we're gonna archive at some point. Plus Axii has gone so YFN needs to get updating, Geist has disapeared, Fate can't update, we're running out of writefags. Who's left? Seriously?
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>>29963714
They will stay and write, it will be fine. What wont be fine is wasting bumps while ON PAGE FUCKING 4, go take a zanex and chill out dude.
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>>29963714
>Geist has disapeared
I see what you did there
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>>29963743
I'm allergic to xanax, plus we don't have enough writefags to sustain us. Am I the only one worried? Who's updated recently besides Axii and YFN?
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>>29964055
Calm down my dude
I'm doubling down so I can guarantee update every 2 days
I'll start dropping them tomorrow
We'll be all daijoubu
Now only bump at 9 or 10
Preferably deleting them after like that one Anon(You da reel mvp mang)
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>>29964055
Cookiesfh and Damy come to mind, like literally at the top of the page.
>>29964075
Its all good man. We got dis shit, Axii was our training wheels. Lets see how far we can go.
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>>29964075
If we can all delete our bumps it would help the thread immensely.
Look at the Heart of War thread for example, 2 writefags, but they stay alive through hidden bumps. If we can do that it'll be less clutter and more content/discussion/shitposting.
At least that way if someone comes into the thread there wont be a chunk of page filled with bumps.

>>29964055
calm down nigga, we have Cookie, Damy, Fate, YFN and more, we'll be ok.
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>>29964182
They're mostly sporadic though, plus they could die. I know one of those writefags quit once, and I'm sure the others have too.
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>>29952966
That was absolutely amazing. You touched so many people with that story and opened them up to a whole new universe entirely. You've done a great deed, and now have a lot of karma to spare.

Seriousness aside, /thread
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>>29953007
You're a legend.
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>>29964945
This. It was a good run, I reckon we have maybe 5 threads left before we're almost dead. writefags cant all update enough for it
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>>29953007
Just out of curiosity, how many words/characters are in the story total? With all five chapters put together.
>>29964959
We'll be fine, just have to encourage the next round of writefags to finish. No codling or whiteknighting though, then that will also kill the thread.
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>>29964971
Roughly 1,880,000 characters/27,444 lines, not counting what I used for breaks between updates.
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>>29965026
Damn....you don't fuck around with a story.
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>>29965026
but how many words?

>>29964971
They wont though
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>>29965087
Not with that attitude they wont. We thought the same of Axii in the early days, look where we are now.
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>>29965105
This is different though, the other writefags aren't that invested and reliable. I know one of them quit, not long until the pressure and stress of keeping the thread up gets to them.
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>>29965144
We don't know that yet. We still need to find out.
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>>29953007
This was a brilliant ride Axii, You've inspired me to try out the witcher, when I get time of course.
Thank you mate, you're legend.

>>29965144
Calm down lad, we can handle it.
I will keep updating and not die on you. You have to understand though that I'm trying to get stable employment and get money rolling in. That's my biggest priority, and I do still write on the side. Don't worry, pic related
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>>29965239
Gnarly
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>>29965087
~327,900 apparently.
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>>29965387
You've beat thingfag at the moment, he hit 300.000 recently
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>>29965505
Who?
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>>29965565
This dude
>>29836671
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>>29965600
Huh, was that any good? All I saw was Flurry and stopped caring. Not going to leave this thread though.
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>>29965618
It's really good to be honest. Basically Anon is in the army fighting wars, he's like the top man. And flurry heart is dignitary, but it's fleshed out really well, they quite a few different pov's of characters. Try it if you want, just warning you, it's long
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>>29966463
I want to nap on Sunset's tits.
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I just started going through the story again for Axii, I just now realized how many mistakes were made in the early day.
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if only sc00tal00 were here to save us
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>>29933613
>Walking a bit behind Dash you let your hands hang in your hoodie pouch as your gaze lazily wanders about
>The suburban street seems rather peaceful as a gentle autumn breeze blows past you
>Doesn’t seem to be any foot traffic beside you and your rainbow haired companion
>The silence causes your mind to submerge itself in thought
>Though it’s mostly just idle thoughts
>Things like what you and Dash are going to eat at the mall
>How graceful the spectrum of brown leaves are as they dance off the tree branches
>The sudden craving of pumpkin pie rising from the smell that seems to be wafting from a nearby hou—
>”Anon?”
>Blinking you refocus on your walking companion who glances back at you
>”Am I going too fast?”
>Uh
“No?”
>Stopping she turns around stretching back a bit with her hands still in her jacket pockets
>”Are you sure, you seem to be lagging behind a bit dude.”
>That’s probably because your body went on auto-pilot while your mind took a little hiatus
>Considering the fact that the only time you generally follow someone is when they need you to help at school it’s not surprising you just naturally gravitated behind her
>With a sudden spark of what you think might be recognition she smirks mischievously
>”Or perhaps you’re just enjoying the view?”
>View?
>What?
>Wait
>Her smirk goes into a full on toothy smile as your mind slowly churns its gears
>Oi!
“Are you implying what I think you’re implying?”
>Leaning forward on the balls of her feet her smile widens
>”I mean I don’t blame you, just look at it!”
>Pivoting back and spinning around she leans forward away from you
>”Isn’t it just amazing!?”
>Now to say you can see her ass better would be an understatement, but you know better
>You’re NOT gonna say her ass looks nice, and not just because you didn't look at it
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>>29968456
>Inhaling deeply Dash stretches back before letting it all out in one fluid motion
>She’s now a foot or so away as she hangs her head shaking it side to side
>”Isn’t it just so full and vibrant?”
>You don’t know if you’d say that
>”Why it makes you just want to cuddle up with it on the sofa.”
>Ok now you don’t know what she’s talking about
>Wiggling around while hugging herself she somehow inches closer to you
>By this point her rump is dangerously encroaching on your personal space
>”Why you could just reach out and, grab it…”
>Signals mixing confusing brain
>What's she referring to with it?
>The day?
>The atmosphere?
>HER ASS!?!
>What is IT!?!
>Standing straight up faster than you thought possible you tense up as she looks over her shoulder at you coyly
>”Guess today is just the epitome of a comfy fall day, don’tcha think?”
>Ha, of course
>Plastering a very obviously convincing smile on your face you nod in slow and measured increments
“Mhmm, I would say I concur with that sentiment exactly Dash.”
>Stepping away with a chuckle she turns around and lightly punches your arm
>”Comon loosen up dude; you’re stiff as a board!”
>Pfft no you’re not
>You’re as stiff as, construction paper, at most!
“Man I just love autumn; I don’t know what you’re on about.”
>Her smile softens as she shakes her head
>”You really need to work on the whole wearing your heart on your sleeve thing, or keep on doing so.”
>Opening her eyes the magenta orbs burrow into you
>”After all that’s the only reason I know that you were too busy thinking to be focusing on my ass.”
>Cupping her chin she looks up to the sky
>”Unless of course, you were contemplating the wondrous mystique that is my ass?”
>Leave it to her to describe her ass as not only amazing and wondrous, but as having mystique
>Forming your arms into an x you frown profusely
“No, no no, NO that is NOT what I was thinking and that is NOT an ass-pull on my part!”
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>>29968465
>Blowing a raspberry Dash scrunches up her face into her best shig dig
>”Really?”
>You thought it was funny…
>Rolling her eyes with a grin she steps to your side and nudges your arm
>”Well for now, I’ll slow down and walk beside you.”
>Holding your hand up as if to physically stop what she said you try to correct her
“It’s not a big deal I can just speed up if bothers you t—“
>She then waves a hand to stop you
>”Nah, sometimes it’s better to take it slow and just soak in your surroundings, ya know?”
>Resuming her stride she begins trekking forwards at your pace
>You walk with her as she stares at the still sun kissed sky
>”Besides you and me Anon, we gotta talk.”
>Oh jeez what now?
>Throwing you a sidelong glance she smiles
>”We haven’t had the chance to just talk much.”
>Oh
>Well you haven’t really had much time to besides the small chats you had with her so far what with all the shit that’s been happening
>That and you’re not much of a talker anymore
>You’re honestly a bit surprised you can even keep up anymore considering how long you've been, well not talking for the longest time
>You continue to be full of surprises even for yourself
>Really makes ya think
>A blue pointer finger enters your vision of the pavement
>”So instead of looking down there...”
>Huh?
>You look back up at her as she holds her finger pointing to herself
>”You talk to the amazing girl who’s hangin out with you right now.”
>Hmmm, that’s hard though
>"And what better time then when taking a relaxing stroll?"
>That's a good point and all
>But then you’d have to come up with something to talk about
>Unless…
>You look away from the rainbow haired show off feigning a slight frown
“I dunno…”
>Holding your hands up like scales you tip them back and forth
“I’m not really seeing what we even have to talk about.”
>Smirking slightly you narrow your eyes playfully at her
“If you’re as amazing as you claim why don’t you start us off with something?”
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>>29968471
>You can already see a glint in her eye as her endless need to prove her own self-proclaimed awesomeness surfaces
>With a grin she states matter-of-factly
>”Oh, well I already have my own conversation starter.”
>Oh really?
>You raise an eyebrow
“Hit me.”
>Pointing a finger gun at you she asks
>”So like I’ve been wondering for a bit, but do you watch anime?”
>Oh shit, how’d she find out?!
>Did Twilight tell her?
>Oh God is she like Twilight!?
>Pleasedon’tbeaweeaboopleasedon’tbeaweeaboo
“Yes?”
>She seems to brighten up a bit
>”Oh cool, looks like there’s someone else besides Twi, Fluttershy, and I then.”
>Oh god she watches it to—
>Wait a second?
“Fluttershy watches anime?”
>Nodding she begins listing off stuff on her fingers
>”Oh yea, she watches a lot of stuff like Sailor Moon, Revolutionary girl Utena, Ranma ½, DBZ, Evangelion…”
>Ok hold up
>You can get Sailor Moon and Ranma ½, but Flutter-wouldn’t-hurt-a-fly-shy likes DBZ?
>Not even gonna touch how she likes Evangelion and Utena
“Those seem like the exact opposite of what I thought she’d like, especially DBZ.”
>Shrugging Dash furrows her brow
>”It’s probably because anyone who watches anime has at least seen it once.”
>Yea ok, that’s true
>It’d be pretty hard to at the very least not know of its existence
>Still not what you’d expect from Fluttershy
>Speaking of not expecting things though
>You mentally brace yourself for the horrid possibility that Dash could be even half as bad as Twilight
“So you watch anime right; what kind?”
>With a smirk she lifts her head a bit higher than normal while stroking her chin
>”Well my tastes are as awesome as they are diverse.”
>Oh?
>You didn’t take Dash for an avid animaniac
>Wait no, that's something else
>Ignoring your little mental tangent you continue
“So like what?”
>Puffing out her chest she gives you a thumbs up
>”Oh you know classics like; Eyeshield 21, Kuroko no basket, Air Gear, Hajime no Ippo, Ultimate Muscle…”
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>>29968478
>Now, you’re not surprised, but uhhh
>You seem to be noticing a pattern amongst those listed titles
>They all seem to, at least in the most liberal sense, be about sports
“Now I’m not a statistician, but I’m noticing a trend here.”
>Cocking her head to the side Dash stares at you
>”What are you talking about?”
>Seriously?
“Well uh, all your picks seem to be sports anime.”
>Furrowing her brow she looks confused
>”There are other types of anime?”
>Oi
>She literally just listed some when talking about Fluttershy!
>Unless like
“You can’t tell me that that Utena is a sports anime!”
>Looking off to the side she shrugs
>”I mean, they are all in an organized tournament for Anthy’s hand in marriage.”
>What, but that’s like
>That’s like the underlying structure for which the duels are based off but like
>No, NO!
“That, that’s wrong no!”
>How could anyone come to that conclusion?!
>You can’t help but gesture your hands like Jackie Chan asking what the fuck
“That’s like boiling down Berserk down to; human muscle mass swings sword and yells while his best friend literally does nothing wrong!”
>You almost stop walking as you try to wrap your mind around it
“In other words… COMPLETELY AND UTTERLY WRONG!”
>The sounds of muffled laughing brings you out of your triggered autism
>”S-so I guess you really like anime huh Anon?”
>Oh fuck
>Guess the cat’s outta the bag now
>Smirking at you behind a raised hand she tries to contain her laughter
>”I’m j-just messing with you d-uude!”
>Now fully laughing at you she begins practically hyperventilating
>She baited you!
>You fell for the bait!
>”God you’re almost as bad as Twi ahahaa!”
>She's stopped now as she clutches her side heartily laughing at your outburst of concentrated autism
>Almost as bad as Twilight?
>You don’t know what to feel worse about
>The fact that you’re even mildly comparable to Twilight, or that you actually completely swallowed Dash’s bait hook line and sinker
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>>29968482
>Finally managing to stop her assault on what little shred of dignity you had Dash rubs her eye with a relieved sigh
>”Ohh, I’m sorry Anon, but I didn’t think you’d get so worked up about that.”
>Oh no it’s fine
>It just your autism flaring up about nothing, again
>Resuming your casual stroll you begin to silently plead for a swift demise
>During your prayers for a quick death she smiles
>”But for real, I’ve seen a ton of anime ever since Twilight introduced me to it.”
>Twilight introduced her to it?
>Well that’s not surprising; she seems like the one likely to attempt spreading the autism to her friends
>Though that does leave you with one question
“What was it that she introduced you with?”
>The glint in her eyes from before comes back, but this time several magnitudes stronger as she stops dead in her tracks
>”Why only the most amazing gift to man that’s ever bestowed both to the pages of manga and the screens of computers and tvs the world round!”
>If god exists the next word out of her mouth won’t be Naruto
>Please don’t be Naruto
>Pulling out her phone she points to the screen where a familiar looking girl glares at you in a stoic pose
>”None other than Daring Do’s Bizarre Adventure!”
>AWWWWW SHHIIIITTTT
>You don’t even hesitate as you lean back posing like your favorite doda
“Next you’re gonna say you’ve read the entire manga!”
>Without missing a beat she assumes another pose proudly exclaiming
>”Heh, only 4 times now!”
>Now that’s some dedication
>You gaze at her glorious tracksuited pose with admiration as you hold yours in solidarity
>It only occurs to you as you both stare at each other that you’re both posing randomly on the side walk
>It really starts to hit you how weird you must look when you notice a couple kids across the street pointing and trying to mimicking your poses
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>>29968486
>Dash breaks down about the same time you do causing you both to start laughing while doing your best to hold your poses
>Having already failed to keep your pose or composure you both share the laugh as you resume you stroll
>You can’t help but smile realizing that you’re in the company of someone with obvious patrician taste
>Looking at you in an overdramatic as she whips her hair back Dash grins
>”Alright so tell me, who’s your favorite Daring?”
>You fake scoff as you whip your head away from her
“Heh, as if that’s even a question.”
>Flexing your arms like your favorite hamon user you smirk
"Doseph Daring of course!”
>Nodding in approval she adopts a more neutral expression
>”A good Do indeed.”
>Continuing to hold your flex you look at her expectantly
“What about you?”
>Running a hand through her hair she stares at you as the strands of her hair wave over her eyes, or well you think that’s what she was trying to do
>Really she just sorta flopped her bangs up and they just fell over her eyes somewhat
>Brushing her hair back with her hand she tries to look serious once more
>Only for a loose strand of hair to drape over her eye
>It seems to really bother her as she blows it out of her eye before speaking
>”The only daring not actually called a daring, Notte Nicola the super famous Gang-star!”
>Ohhh, guess you could see it
>Just a bit
>You dip your hands back into your hoodie pouch as you relax
“I guess it fits you.”
>She nods with enthusiasm
>”Like a glove!”
>You crack a small smile as she happily mimics putting a glove on
>It’s only as she does do you see your destination peek over the horizon
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>>29968492
>Nodding his head upward Anon hums
>”Huh, guess you were right. That took like no time at all.”
>Of course you were, you’ve only gone to the mall on foot countless times
>Looking forward you can see the mall in all it’s nostalgic glory
>You nudge Anon with your elbow as he stares at it
“What did you think I was lying?”
>Smiling wryly he looks away from you
>”What, me think that YOU were wrong? Nah I had complete confidence in you, but...”
>You snort as he seems to leave his sentence hanging in the air
>Tilting his head towards you his eyes look down on you
>” I may have thought you were wrong about how long it’d take to get there.”
>You cock your head to the side
“And why is that?”
>Shrugging he refocuses on the sidewalk in front of him
>”Hey, I just figured that it took no time for you, which means it’d take no time to, run.”
>Stepping over the curb and onto a small side street you give him your best *tch*
“I don’t run EVERYWHERE.”
>Raising his eyebrows he looks like he wants to say really
>”You wore a tracksuit for us walking to the mall.”
>Well, that doesn’t mean you NEED to run
>It’s just designed to do so
“And you wear sweats all the time.”
>You poke him in the chest as you both cross over into the grass
“Does that mean YOU run everywhere?”
>Holding his pointer finger up he opens and closes his mouth like he’s trying to come up with a retort
>”Touché, but in my defense, you do run a lot.”
>You do, including the route to the mall most of the time, but he doesn’t need to know that
>Your phone vibrates causing you to stop and pull it out once more
>An unknown number?
>You wave away Anon’s peering eyes
“I’ll catch up with you, gotta take this.”
>Nodding he scratches his cheek
>”Meet at the food court?”
>You nod as he continues on without you
>You answer the phone with a swipe
“Hello?”
>Silence greets you only feeding your uncertainty
>”Rainbow Dash, I believe we need to speak.”
>Wait that’s…
“Yea, what about Principle Celestia?”
.
.
.
End42Day
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>>29968492
>Doseph Daring
Ayy
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Absolute shit taste everywhere here
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>>29969252
So these Axii yfn damy fags, are they worth reading? They're the ones i've seen right now because I left the thread ages ago and only decided to revisit. Did Sci ever finish?
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>>29969740
All of those are worth reading and sci i think disappeared eons ago.
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>>29969844
What are they about? just give me a quick rundown
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>>29968492
I see what you did there....I don't know how to feel about it actually.
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>>29968486
>posing in public
>teaching the younglings the gloriousness of the act
good....good. Let the autism flow.
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>>29968492
>Looking at you in an overdramatic as
overdramatic what? I think you missed a word bud.
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>9
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bump from 9
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It's been 4000 years, but we finally have a finished story, and what a story it is too.
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>>29973917
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>>29973917
Nice
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>>29976588
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>>29977462
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>>29975058
>>29977462
>>29978001
Really guys? If your gonna do a lazy bump, then at least do it with a pic. And don't forget to delete them, we want the thread to look nice, not let it look like Fingerbang.
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>>29978062
Think it's because Axii left?
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>>29979900
Didn't leave, just taking a break.
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>>29980092
Ah, k then. But the thread's still slow.
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>>29979900
That or the new episode.
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>>29980319
Probably.
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>>29973917
Post more Dash you nigger.
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>>29967960
I miss that guy.
>mfw no more qt Spider.
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>>29983707
The things I would do to that ass.
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>>29983713
yup
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>>29983707
WEW
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>>29983707
FUUUUUARK
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>>29985847
I miss Fate and Trixie, CURSE YOU HR!
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>>29985847
Would buy peanut butter crackers for/10
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>>29968500
>You grumble a bit as you rub your arms
>Maybe posing that hard right after you’ve hurt yourself wasn’t the best idea
>Besides the fact that pain killers can only numb so much, it doesn’t help now that you realize that you were flexing in your hoodie
>The one you purposely got in a bigger size to hide your gains
>With a sigh you open the double doors to the mall
>How there can be so many people occupying one space has always baffled you
>Upon stepping past the threshold you’re hit with the sound of the horde of people all going about their busy day
>The noise of grouped soccer moms escorting their kids about the mall, the random assortment of teenage klicks wandering aimlessly, and the subtle mall music playing in the background overhead all it meshes into an oddly organic symphony
>It’s enough to put you at ease as you get somewhat lost in it
>Taking a few steps to your right you look at the mall map
>You don’t think Dash will be too far behind you, hopefully at least
>So locating if this mall does actually have a screen replacement kiosk should be your first order of business
>Then after that and eating you can make a stop at the PNC
>Using your 20/20 vision you can clearly see on the map that there is a kiosk for screen repair
>Well fuck yea
>It’s nice when something goes your way for once
>You quickly memorize its location before setting off in the kiosk’s direction
>Weaving your way through the crowd you can’t help but think
>If luck is on your side you’ll be able to turn in your phone and get it back before you leave
>Though that’s the best case scenario assuming it can be repaired or replaced here
>Oh man, you really hope you don’t have to send your phone in to get it fixed
>Besides being a pain in the ass to do, you’ll also be out of a phone for god knows how long
>Though if it really comes down to that, you might just risk getting shards of glass in your fingers instead
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>>29987436
“Euughhhhh.”
>You can’t help but let out a frustrated grunt of annoyance as you stretch your arms out
>You really wish you could’ve gotten more sleep, but nooo some asshole just HAS to crash some dumb warehouse party on a fucking SUNDAY
>At least Ms. Zecora was so kind as to excuse you from class today
>If only she could excuse you from work…
>Guess even after all the stuff that happened in the morning you just go right back to your normally scheduled program
>A loud *crack* pops from your arm as you bend it
>Even if you do feel like complete and utter shit afterwards
>Heaving a deep sigh of acceptance you lean against the counter
>Aw well, just another day in paradise
>Ever alert you eyeball the crowd to see if anyone’s heading your way
>Though you don’t see anybody angrily storming towards you so maybe no one was stupid enough to break their phone for once
>You can’t help but laugh at the mere thought
>Fat chance, someone ALWAYS manages to break their phone in an increasingly more idiotic way then the guy beforehand
>Pulling out your phone you swipe it open to help alleviate your boredom
>Maybe you should check in with the others and see how they’re doing with tracking the prick from this mor—
>”Hey Sugarcoat.”
>You tear your eyes from your phone and redirect them to Neon Lights
>Hopefully fully expressing your displeasure at your thoughts being interrupted you reply
“What do you want?”
>Recoiling slightly at your less than stellar attitude he stuffs his hands in his pocket
>”You know you’re not supposed to be messing around on your phone during hours right?”
>Of course you do, but you really don’t care right now
>It’s not like you have anything to do anyways
“And you know you’re not supposed to be taking a smoke break every two hours right?”
>Literally wincing slightly he backs off
>”I-I’m just going to forget I saw anything and take a little break.”
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>>29987446
>That’s right he better
>You shake your head as your spineless co-worker runs off with his tail between his legs
>That guy couldn’t stand up to a paper cut out of an angry frown
>You look back down to your phone as your thumb hovers of the group chat icon
>Do you really want to check in on everybody right now?
>It’s not as if you could do anything if they asked
>Well, unless it was REALLY important
>You kinda need this job and a—
*Ahem*
>Your thoughts are interrupted by someone clearing their throat nearby
>”Excuse me, you repair phones here right?”
>As you prepare to ridicule the idiot for missing the obvious signs plastered all over your little island of phone repair you notice something
>It’s him!
>The green guy, uh Anon!
>Holy fuck does he look like shit
>Besides the several small cuts that pepper his face he’s got one hell of a black eye
>Did he get his ass beat yesterday?
>Guess a better question would be what the hell’s he doing here?
>Wait, getting his phone repaired, duh
>Gah, you’re so stupid sometimes
>Pointing to the sign literally right below you, you adjust your glasses with a sigh
“I don’t know, what do you think?”
>His eyes sink down to the sign before floating back into contact with yours
>Scratching his head he looks over your shoulder
“Y-yea, guess that was a dumb question…”
>Leaning on the counter with one hand and reaching into his hoodie pocket he pulls something out
>As he sets it on the counter you can’t help but notice what looks like more scrapes on his knuckles
>Though oddly enough, only on the edge of hands on the pinkie and ring fingers
>It only becomes more conspicuous because of that odd detail
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>>29987460
>As he pulls his hand back revealing his phone Anon speaks
>”So, do you think you can fix it?”
>Blinking you shift your focus from his hands to his phone and holy shit
“Your phone almost looks as bad as you do.”
>Closing his eyes he wears a small wryly smile
>”O-oi that’s…”
>He might be getting angry, better clarify that last statement
“Bad as in beat up; you’re a solid 7.5/10.”
>He stands there with his mouth hanging open as if he couldn’t believe what you’ve said
>He should stop that
“You know that’s a good way to get a mouthful of bugs right?”
>Clamping his mouth shut with his hand his face goes from incredulous to visibly tired
>Sighing he hangs his head slightly before looking back to you
>”I, look, can you just fix my phone while I grab a bite to eat?”
>Actually grabbing the thing you examine it more closely
>The screen’s cracked to hell and back
>Looks like it still works though as you look at its lock screen and test it with a few swipes
>You’ll probably need to just replace the glass, LCD, and the digitizer
>Shouldn’t take too much effort if that’s all there is to it since most phones have em fused together now days
>Wait
>A sudden realization strikes you as you’re holding Anon’s battered phone
>Is there a better way to get some insight into a person’s life then to raid their phone?
>Probably not one that will literally walk right up to you like this
>You have to take this chance!
>Setting the phone down you cough into your hand
“I can, but I’ll have to completely replace the LCD, glass, and the digitizer.”
>Nodding he smiles
>”That’s fine, as long as you can make it so I don’t get glass shards in my fingers before I leave I’ll be happy.”
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>>29987468
>Nodding the attendant frowns
>”Yea, it shouldn’t take us too long, not more than half an hour or so.”
>Well great!
>You don’t have to worry about money either since you’ve got your debit card on you
>Guess you should be happy that Celestia and Luna were nice enough to set it up with you
>Well, that and put money in it
>You really need to repay them somehow
>Clapping your hands together you smile at the admittingly blunt girl
“That’s great; I’ll pick it up then.”
>Nodding she takes your phone from the wall of counter and to the little workshop island in the middle
>Looks like things are turning up Anon now!
>It’s about time; it only took you getting beaten to a pulp, what, four times?
>You sigh as you turn away from the phone tinkerer
>Guess you should tackle the next monumental task on your list, deciding what you’re gonna eat
>God do you always hate deciding
>As your legs auto-pilot you though the crowds of people to the food court your eyes wander around aimlessly
>People wandering their separate ways forming currents of people
>That weird massage guy literally giving people massages out in public
>A drawn curtain and small crowd forming around what looks like some sorta stage performance
>Can’t quite read the sign over it from here
>Overall everything seems pretty normal for all intents and purposes
>But…
>You don’t know why, but you can’t shake the feeling something’s, off
>Can’t quite put it to words
>It’s not like last night where you had a sense of looming dread in your mind
>No, whatever it is, it’s much more subtle
>Like a low white noise comparatively to the loud orchestral boom of Shadowfright’s domain
>Then again that might just be all the noise of the crowd mish-mashing together
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>>29987479
>You mentally shrug as you find yourself in the food court
>Even if there is something going on, what are you gonna do about it?
>You don’t have your pin, and that’s not even mentioning the fact that you’re in no shape to throw down right now
>Nah, you should focus on the important stuff right now instead of what may just be your own paranoia
>The real important things like what foodstuffs to eat
>Stopping at what seems like the entrance to the food court you lean against a wall out of the way of foot traffic
>From here you can see pretty much every restaurant available, and you’ll have the added bonus of being discernible for Dash when she finally catches up with you
>Until then…
>You start eyeballing the separate food places present
>Seems to be some actual sit down restaurants and cafes intermingled with the normal built into the wall ones
>Nothing really notable you guess though
>Most the normal Canterlot establishments are here
>Tacos, Burgers, The Feed Bucket, and wait what?
>There’s a café nestled far in the corner that doesn’t seem to be very populated
>That’s not what gets your attention though
>It’s the sign hanging above it that really rustles you
>It’s called Tearoom The Noire
>You know you’re really indulging your autism quite a bit today, but you can’t help it
>That title, it makes no sense!
>Why wouldn’t you just use French or English for the whole name?
>Why mix the two into a weird combination?
>Shaking your head you manage to push past your autism and continue surveying the area
>Even though you are hungry you’re running into a problem
>It seems you have the worst kind of hunger imaginable
>That being, the kind of hunger where you’re starving, but you can’t decide on what you want
>Your eyes dart from each restaurant to the next and you still can’t decide
>Everything sounds really good right now!
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>>29987487
>Groaning in frustration that the restaurants seem to refuse to make your mind up for you, you look to the ceiling
>Maybe you can foretell a sign from the heavens on what to consume this night?
>If only…
>You stare through the skylights taking note of the brilliant shade of red color
>It really gives the sky a much brighter red tone than it was outside
>As the light shines through you can’t help but liken it to a certain red stone in Ddba
>Oh dear god
>It had occurred to you before, but with that thought it resurfaces
>If magic is real, is all spoopernatural stuff?
>Like what if you have to fight vampires!?
>You don’t know bullshit ripple magic!
>Then again without your pin you don’t know any magic
>Hmm, maybe you should find out where to buy some UV lamps…
>You thoughts are interrupted by a voice
>”Yo dude.”
>Turning away from the red sky above you see none other than your rainbow haired compatriot
>Pulling a hand out from your hoodie pouch you wave to her
“Heyo.”
>Walking up to you she leans against the wall beside you
>”Got an idea of what you want to eat yet?”
>Placing your hand back in the pouch and resuming your scan of the food court you smile wryly
“Heh, that would require me to actually decide on one thing.”
>Out of the corner of your eye you can see Dash smirking
>”Oh does the little babby need me to decide for you?”
>No!
>She’s just trying to rustle you
>Don’t fall for it
>After all you’re pretty much already man
>Ok maybe in like a year, but still!
>Feigning offense you look down your nose at her
“No, I’ll decide right now!”
>You’re gonna take charge and show her!
>Just gotta narrow this down logically and you’ll have an answer!
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>>29987493
>Alright, you can immediately knock off any pasta or pizza place since you just had that last night
>Might as well knock off any Chinese places too while you’re at it since Dash had that last night too
>”It’s alright dude, I already had a place in mind.”
>That only knocks a few off
>Maybe you can just knock a few that don’t sound too appetizing right off the bat?
>”Dude?”
>You know, thinking on it more you really don’t feel like Mexican
>So you can probably scratch Tacos out too
>”Anon?”
>Actually thinking a bit more you do have a craving!
>You could really go for a burger right about n—
>”ANON!”
>You flinch and tense up as the loud exclamation of your name sounds off right next to your ear
>The surprise makes you curse out randomly as your ear rings slightly
“Jim john fuck damn!”
>After popping your ears you shoot a glare over to the worried smile wearing Dash
>”I was kidding before, but I did actually have a place I wanted to go.”
>Ohhh of course she did
>She was just playin ya
>Again
>Relaxing you furrow your eyebrows at her
“Couldn’t have just said that and saved me from a busted ear drum?”
>Shrugging and shaking her head her smile intensifies
>”Nah, that would’ve been too easy.”
>Closing your eyes you hold yourself back from strangling this fool
>Thankfully you decide that’d be much more trouble than it’s worth and would rather just continue on
“Where did you have in mind?”
>Opening your eyes you see her hold a pointer finger out
>”Well I was really feeling some burgers.”
>Hmm
>You smile while nodding
“That makes two of us.”
>Nodding her head to the side she motions for you to follow
>”Come on, there’s a great place that serves the best burgers in Canterlot here.”
>Sweet, but it better not just be Burgers
>You refuse to believe that place is the best in Canterlot
>You follow behind her as she walks into the food court
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End for today, sorry it was late. I kinda collapsed right after getting home and just woke up. Till next time!
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>>29987506
Awesome
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>>29987506
thanks YFN
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>>29987506
thanks NTR
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>>29987468
Sugar a qt
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PSI-Anon when?
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>>29992098
When Trump, Pence, and the rest of the politicians get arrested for blatant corruption and illegal wars...so never. Are you new here? Psi has been dead for a little over 2 years now.
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>>29992112
ok, well was a try worth.
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>>29987446
Sick photoshop skills m80
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>>29952966
Fuck, it's actually over. Fuck.
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bed bump
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>Waiting for YFN
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>>29996099
Is YFN the new meme writer?
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>>29996260
Pretty much.
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>>29996260
yes, indeed
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Page 8
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>>29997913
>>29996985
So pretty much everyone will be drooling on YFN's dick while the rest of the writefags get 1 or 2 replies if they're lucky? Gotcha.
Bump from 8
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>>29996985
Then it's time to give him our undivided attention.
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>>29999528
All writefags get the same amount of (you)s as the next, YFN is now the largest story we have now that's in progress...except this one, he only gets yelled at, for obvious reasons>>29999529
WRITE FAGGOT, STOP FUCKING AROUND!
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>>29999537
>All writefags get the same amount of (you)s as the next

That doesn't happen though. Axii got a shitload of replies earlier, obviously because it's finished which makes sense,I count 5 replies to YFN for his recent update, no other writefag would get that.
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>>29999575
...you just stated the reason in your own sentence, in any case just be sure to show your love for the other writefags. Oh, and yell at fapman.
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>>29987506
“Wait, what do you mean there’s nothing on it?”
>You hold your hand over your mouth as you look into your coffee trying to be as inconspicuous as possible
>”I’m telling you, the thing is empty.”
>Seriously?!
>Who doesn’t use their phone for EVERYTHING now days?
>”Unless you want all his music or his pictures listed under /Dontopen/Noreallydont/Lookpleasestop/Itspornok.”
>Uhhhhh
“Well, did you at least loo—“
>A sigh interrupts you from the other end
>”There’s nothing but porn.”
>Damn!
>You knew that this guy was a bit of a loner from what his classmates said, but you just assumed that was at school
>Peeking over your coffee you spy the man in question
>Anon sits a few tables over with Rainbow Dash(?) laughing as he goofs around with French fries sticking out of his mouth
>He looks like he was in a fight, and if your source is right he had a few charges leveled against him at some point
>Were you wrong to assume that he was some violent thug?
>Sugarcoat interrupts your personal cloud of doubt
>”So besides a few numbers and his whereabouts yesterday after our encounter with him we don’t have much.”
>Hmmm, well you can at least solve one problem
“Do you still have those tracking devices we used a month ago?”
>A bit of shuffling noise on the line and she comes back
>”Yea, want me to bug his phone?”
>It’ll certainly help you keep up with whatever he’s doing
>Maybe you can figure out what he’s up to really by tracing his movements
“Do it.”
>She goes silent for a moment before you hear a *clap* on the other end
>”All done time boss.”
>Really?
>How many times do you have to say not to call you that!?
>You aren’t even the boss or anything!
>You’re just higher up than they are
>You can’t help yourself as your clench fist hits the table and you blurt out
“Stop calling me that, I have an actual name you know!”
>OW!
>You shake your bandaged hand and curse out a bit too loud as your coffee quivers in its cup
>Settling down and looking at it your hand throbs painfully
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>>30000201
>That’s right; you should probably avoid smashing your fist or any other part of you against anything
>You’re still a bit banged up
>You almost forgot about that…
>As you look at your shaking bandaged hand you notice the stares of quite a few people around you
>Oh crap
>You can’t help but feel heat rise in your cheeks as you realize how much attention your outburst just gathered
>Pulling your hat over your eyes in an attempt to make yourself as small as possible you desperately try to avoid the curious gazes of everyone around you
>Sugarcoat’s voice leaks from your phone
>”You know, when trying to stake out someone being loud and conspicuous is the exact opposite of what you want, right?”
>You frown angrily as you bring the phone closer to your lips to whisper yell
“Not, helping, Sugarcoat!”
>You cough into your hand trying to maintain some sense of dignity as you sit back up fully
>”I wasn’t trying to S—“
>You quickly interrupt with a whisper as you don’t feel like hearing her condescension anymore
“Oh, come off it! I’m going to retreat for now and watch them a bit more.”
>Closing your open book you tuck it into your satchel and grab your coffee
“You just make sure that he won’t find the device, ok?”
>Standing up you powerwalk your way out of the food court
>”Consider it done.”
>Hanging up with a sigh you tuck your phone into your pocket
>As long as you avoid bringing anymore attention to yourself you should be able to observe him without his knowledge
>You need to gather as much data on him as you can for the inevitable
>Whether he’s the mastermind behind it or not he seems to be involved in whatever the Queen’s plans are
>After all, it’s just too convenient the amount of pies he has his fingers in
>So you need to make sure if he’s an innocent who has the worst luck or an enemy playing the longest metagame you’ve ever seen
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>>30000205
>”Man, I wonder what her problem is?”
>Yea, you too
>Turning around to face you Dash shrugs
>”Some people huh?”
>You nod with your vampire fangs coming dangerously close to falling out of your mouth
>Inhaling your fries you notice something out of the corner of your vision
>Rising from your seat you hold a hand up to Dash
“Oh shit, wait here.”
>She raises an eyebrow as she takes a sip of her soda
>Moving through the sea of chairs and tables you walk over to where the girl who just freaked out sat
>Looks like she forgot something
>You lift the forgotten coat off the chair before pushing the chair in
>Not only did that girl leave her coat she failed to push her chair in
>For shame
>You drape the coat over your shoulder as you stroll back to your table
>Setting it on the chair next to yours you sit back down in your seat
>”Oh I didn’t even notice.”
>You nod to Dash as stuffs the remains of her burger in her mouth
“Do they have a lost and found here, or did you see where she went?”
>Shaking her head as she licks ketchup off her fingers
>”Not really, she was heading out of the food court, but maybe we can find her in one of the stores?”
>Shrugging you pile the rest of your fries on top of your burger before covering them with the bun
“I guess that’s one way to do it…”
>Wiping her hands with a napkin as you shove the burger fry combo into your maw she rolls her eyes
>”I mean we COULD just drop it off at the lost and found next to Sports right away if you WANT.”
>Doing your best to smirk as you chew she grins
>”Might as well I guess, I wanted to stop by there anyways for some new shoes.”
>Your chewing comes to a dead stop as you stare at her
>Are you really going to say it, because you really want to
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>>30000211
>You notice that Anon has this weird look in his face as he stops chewing
>What’s going on behind that twinkle in his eye?
>Raising an eyebrow as you grab your soda you ask
“What’s up?”
>Chewing for a moment he swallows audibly before sighing and shaking his head
>”Oh nothing, just thought I was hanging out with the Rainbow Dash and not…”
>He smiles like a used car salesmen as he levels his gaze at you
“Rarity.”
>Ohhh, now’s he done it
>Adopting a more gravely tone you narrow your eyes at him like Clint Eastwood as your hand hovers over your remaining fries
“You wanna say that again, punk?”
>Narrowing his eyes and wiggling his eyebrows his smile thins
>”You heard me…”
>Pinching his fingers he traces the outline of a hat before tipping it
>“M’lady.”
>Wrong answer
>As he finishes you fling a few fries at his face
“You’re a dork.”
>Chuckling a bit he picks up the fries that bounced off his face
>”Yea yea, at least I’m not going out shoe shopping.”
>You shake your head as he pops the fries into his mouth
“My running shoes are getting too worn down, so I figured why not get some new ones while we were out here?”
>Chewing he nods before swallowing
>“Yea sure I believe you.”
>Coughing into his hand he places all his garbage on his plate
>His smirk returns as he glances at you
>”Shall I accompany the fair lady to the shoe store before I drop off the coat and grab my phone?”
>You stare flatly at him as he stands up
>He’s not the only one who can pretend to be fancy
>Putting on your best rarity impression you run your hand through your hair as you stand
“Oh I would be ever so grateful to you if you would do so Mr. Moose.”
>You can tell you’ve surprised him as his smirk disappears for a second before coming back stronger
>”Please, the pleasure is all mine, m’lady.”
>He grabs your plate and puts it on top of his as he pushes his chair in
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>>30000215
“Thank you ever so much Anon dear.”
>You won’t back down first!
>”As I said before, it’s my pleasure.”
>Anon’s smirk seamlessly morphs into a gentlemanly smile as he offers you an outstretched elbow
>You can see it, the challenging glint in his eyes
>”Shall we?”
>On a scale of back to down, you will not!
>Accepting his elbow as daintily as you can you ham it up
“Yes, I do think we shall darling.”
>He thinks he can keep it up longer than you, but he’s got another thing coming
>He throws your garbage away as you hook elbows with him
>You won’t let him wiggle out of this till HE admits defeat!
>His arm flexes as well while you lead him towards the athletics store
>”Isn’t it just a lovely evening for a stroll Ms. Dash?”
>You hold your opposite hand over your mouth as you let loose a laugh you think fitting of Rarity
“I would agree, but why ever do you think so?”
>Chuckling in a slightly deeper tone than normal he looks over your shoulder
>”I mean it must be if the entire football team is out and about.”
>Wait wha—
>Oh ho, he almost got you to look
>You squeeze his arm as you plaster the most elegant smile on your face that you can
“Quite a funny joke to tell there dear.”
>Looking down at you he smiles
>”I try my very best to please.”
>Yea, you’ll bet he does, but he’ll have to try harder than that to make you say uncle!
>Any second now he’ll have to break away!
>You just have to put a little pressure on
>Squeezing his arm once you look away bringing a closed fist to rest near your mouth
“My, with how close we are I guess everyone will think we’re, dating…”
>You can feel his back muscles tense as he grunts quietly
>It takes him a moment to relax as you get closer to Sports
>”I believe we’d more give off the impression of, brother and sister.”
>You suck in air through clenched teeth
>That was a good save
>Insulting you and covering his ass
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>>30000222
>Damn, if any of your teammates really were here and heard that you might’ve actually conceded
>However there’s not much distance left to Sports!
>You have to make him fumble before then
>Rainbow Dash does NOT do ties!
>You’ll have to dig deep and pull out something so utterly AWESOME that even Anon can’t help but yield in the light of its brilliance!
>Or just something that would shock him enough that he’d break the act
>But what could you say to him to do that!?
>You can feel the seconds crawling forward as you advance ever closer to Sports
>If you don’t think of something then you may have well have lost
>Need something, think, think!
>”You know, this is fun.”
>Huh?
>Stopping just in front of Sports you look up at Anon who seems to have a somewhat familiar wistful smile
“What brought that on dude?”
>His eyes seem to linger on the Sports front display as he sighs
>”Just an old memory…”
>Snapping out of what seems like a daze he looks down at you
>”Anyways, where’s the lost and found?”
>You nod to his right
“Big booth with the security guard.”
>He twists to look at it before looking back at you slight embarrassment clear on his face
>”Guess I just missed it.”
>Seems like he misses a lot of things
>Unhooking his arm he pats you on the shoulder
>”I’ll go turn this in, grab my phone, and come back; then I can show you the only cool thing I know about here as thanks for hanging out with me and letting me crash at your place.”
>You feel a bit conflicted that he wants to thank you considering what happened in the morning
>Shaking your head you try to grin happily despite the memory
“No need dude, friends don’t have to say thanks to each other.”
>He opens his mouth as if to say something before closing it and nodding
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>>30000230
>Walking off he heads to the lost and found
>He says the most random stuff sometimes, you swear
>Letting a light sigh escape your lips you head into Sports
>With the shoes being near the front you don’t have to go far
>Standing in front of the wall of shoes you notice you’re near the front enough that you can actually see out the front display
>Specifically the one that Anon was eyeballing when he spaced out there
>Deciding to take a closer look you move up and actually check out what’s in the display
>Just some jerseyed up mannequins and a few soccer balls
>Though for some reason the soccer balls stick out
>Soccer balls…
>Wait, didn’t Anon make that same face when you demonstrated your hat trick on Friday?
>Yea he must have!
>But why though?
>As you’re staring at the soccer balls strewn about the display you notice the man in question move past the window
>Guess you could just ask him, but…
>He may have become more open to at least trying to be friends, you know that principle Celestia and vice-principal Luna asked him to do that
>You’re not too sure how happy Anon would be talking about the past
>To say that topic is a minefield is a bit of an understatement
>At least if his feelings about his mom are any indicator
>You’re still a bit curious about that
>As you stare out the window you notice someone rather conspicuous doing their best to sneak by
>It’s the bandaged girl from earlier who left her coat at her table!
>Maybe she’s looking for it now?
>You should probably tell her that Anon turned it in just now
>Power walking out of Sports you look for the girl
>It only takes you a second as she’s almost comically sneaking around the mall drawing a few stares from those walking past her
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>>30000237
>What’s her problem?
>It’s like she’s trying to spy on someone
>Your eyes drift down her line of sight to catch, Anon?
>Why the heck would she be watching Anon?
>She can’t think he stole the jacket or anything, so why?
>You can’t really think of any reasons off the top of your head as you watch her hug the wall following Anon at a great distance
>Maybe you should watch her watching Anon?
>Is that weird?
>Nah, you’ll just be much less obvious and just pretend you were looking for Anon if you’re caught
>Shoes can wait, you’re too curious as to why anyone would stalk Anon
>Even more so since the girl in question is so bad at it
>Oh, she’s on the move!
>Doing some sort of crouch run she tails Anon
>While that seems like it’d be kinda fun to do, you’ll just walk a bit away while keeping an eye on her
>As they continue to make their way across the mall you can’t help but notice that the bandaged stalker keeps talking on her phone
>Whether she has co-conspirators or she’s trying to blend in you don’t know
>After Anon turns a corner she seems to panic rushing to hug the corner
>You pick up the pace a bit to keep up
>She seems to be peeking around it
>Oh, she just dashed around it!
>You power walk towards it, but stop at it as well
>Leaning out you try to peek around it only to bump into someone sending you almost toppling over
>Luckily you’re able to catch yourself at the last second while hearing a loud “oof!” from the other person
>Dusting yourself off you hear one of the last voices on the planet you want to
>”Who dares bump into The Flash!?”
>Oh great
>He makes eye contact with you causing his frown to turn upside-down
>Seems like today you’ve been blessed with a chance encounter with the single biggest douche of CHS
>Flash Sentry
>”Oh, hey there Rainbabe.”
>Now you’ll have to deal with HIM
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End of update. Tune in next time for fun fun fun!
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>>30000240
If this doesn't end with his skull inside out. Then you're doing it wrong.

Pic somwhat related
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>>30000215
>>30000222
>Rainbow as Rarity
N-No, dick please. This is not the right time.
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>>30000215
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Where are all the updates at?
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W-Where are you Cookie?
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>>30000222
Rarity, stap, what are you doing? also, FUCKING CHECKED THE GODLY GETS!!
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>>30000215
Mixed up a greenline here
>He smiles like a used car salesmen as he levels his gaze at you
“Rarity.”
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>>30000230
>>30000222
Dash enjoyed that a lot, the cheese was almost too sweet...it was delicious.
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>>30000240
Wait a second...if Anon went down that hallway and the Flash came from it, how the hell did they not get into a fight? Oh...shit, Discord fucking spaced Anon and his stalker, didn't he?
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What ever happened to fate? Did he pepsi?
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>>29940563
>>30005426
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Who are we waiting for?
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>>30007093
Post more Sugarcoat, you nigger.
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boop
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>>30010919
That's not Sugarcoat faggot.
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>>30007684
YFN, and any other writefags that show up.
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>>29971702
>>30004154
I didn't do so before, but thank you for pointing out mistakes
I try to catch any mistakes, but the only proof reader I have is good old Microsoft word

>>30000240
So hey, yesterday was my day off and at 5pm I awoke to a phone call and a knock at my door
Upon opening the door I was greeted to a great sight, a large white table
Thus started a 12 hour magic the gathering cube draft
So cutting out a lot of cursing, some wins, a 12 pack of coke, and driving my friend home at the end of it all I didn't get to write before hitting the sack
So the next update is delayed till tomorrow
Really sorry my dudes

However seeing as it's nothing but bumps lately I did have a few questions to ask ya guys
You don't have to answer them, but I'd think it'd be more fun than just, "Bump"

1.What are you looking forward to/want to know right now?
I for one need to know what's happening in Cookiesfh's story, and if digitalstan or Nayaa are ever coming back ;~;

2.What's your favorite moment from X greentext?
The fight with Iron Will, and the Hitman in Axii's immediately come to mind as some of my favorites

3.Have any constructive criticism for anyone?
I would appreciate any and all
I can't tell you how many comments both positive and negative have spurred the gears in my head to start turning
Even seemingly shitty ones too

4.Do you have any questions to X Writefag?
Really random, but I'm curious as to what Axii's favorite Witcher game/book is
I don't recall if he's ever been asked/answered that

5.Should I or any other Writefag update their pastebin after each update or thread?
I personally lean towards the latter but I'm curious as to what you guys think

No one has to answer, but I'd appreciate it
Until tomorrow my dudes!
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>>30013771
1)Looking forward to another damgnyorb update, also finding out about what is going on with Anon and his mother, and his reaction to Sunbutt and Luna knowing about that magic shit. Oh and maybe the Shadowbolts following Anon home only to walk in on him snuggling with the baby changling in his jacket on the couch(not Sunset mode)
2)...I would have to say the brawl with the Leshen or when Gilda pulls a FUCKING GILDAAAAAA
3)I usually point out any mistakes a writefag makes already for a story...I cant think of anything else past that
4)I would ask how long Fate expects to be indisposed, and who was the person that was following Anon in your story. I cant remember if I saw her name mentioned or not.
5) Really depends on how often they update, if it takes awhile, then immediately after an update, if they post often then waiting till the end of the thread or even halfway through the thread would be fine.
Also bump from 9
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I'm finally back
And i will soon update, here's a preview
Sorry about the wait, i just had some shit to deal IRL
Also glad to see the finale of Witcher Anon, it was a very wild ride Axii
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>>30014993
That's some DBZ shit negro.
I like it.
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>>30014993
Dat Gilda.
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>>30014993
>Gilda
Nice.

>>30013771
1. Death. And to read your story. In that order.

2. Fate: Discord appearance. Axii: Gilda being fun at leshen.

3. To everyone. Don't let your memes be memes.

4. Is your story what you really wanted to write? Or it turned something different?

5. I'm no one to answer this shit.

>Until tomorrow my dudes!
Love you.
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>>30015297
WRITE FAGGOT!
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>>30015341
No. Um. U! If that's ok...
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>>30014993
Glida kind of looks like Revy from Black Lagoon, rather fitting really.
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>>30013771
>Really random, but I'm curious as to what Axii's favorite Witcher game/book is
>I don't recall if he's ever been asked/answered that

No I haven't.

Favorite book: Tough call, its hard to choose one between Sword of Destiny, The Last Wish and Lady of the Lake. But if I had to choose one it would probably be Sword of Destiny.

Favorite game in the series is easily Gwent. Seriously though, Witcher 3: Wild Hunt
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>>30015504
WRITE FAGGOT!
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>>30014993
Nice to see you again wey.
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>>30014331
>who the person that was following Anon was
I have not mentioned her name
I don't know why, but it seems like more fun to try and drop hints at who someone is instead of outright stating who they are

>>30014993
Welcome back friend!
Missed you, hope everything went well

>>30015297
>that question
Jesus you're throwing the hardballs huh?
Well, I would say that it's a bit of column A and b
I think I've said it before, but I'm very unoriginal so Anon is just me sans a few different choices in life
Well that and the whole fundementally different universes where shit can happen and the yet unknown reason as to why anon is thrown in the middle
To say that writing this story at times hasn't been even a bit therapeutic would be a lie, but I'm rambling at this point

Suffice to say, that I had an actual story in mind after my second post
Before that I was just letting my fingers fly and laughing the whole way, but then i started to really think about why he was alone and well, here we are
So after that initial thought the story has been evolving the more and more i write
So it's different than I originally intended, which was to be a nice filler while I waited for Axii updates, and morphed into an actual story I wanted to tell someone
If that makes sense
Also, I love you too dude even though I'd love you more if you ever updated :P

Hope to get the update posted in around 7-9 hours, till then!
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bump for self inserts
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>>30019969
Long live self inserts!
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>>30019990
They're shit.
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>>30020389
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>>30020401
I like fun. They aren't fun. Sorry.
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>>30020404
>Everything I don't like is shit
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>>30020424
>Everything I don't like is shit

Well yeah it is to me. Just because I say they're shit doesn't mean they are objectively shit. Apply yourself.
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>>30020447
>I was only pretending to be retarded.jpg
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>>30020461
>implying I'm pretending
What do you even mean?
I don't think you're taking in what I'm saying anon
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>>30000240
MEANWHILE
>A groan escapes your lips before you even attempt to open your eyes as you stir from unconscious
>Actually opening your eyes is a hard task
>Instead of rushing to, you relax for a moment as your aching body slowly breathes
>Listening to your surroundings you can hear murmurs of a conversation close by, muffled though they be
>Maybe you should get up now
>Your eyelids open slowly as if against their will
>When fully opened you’re greeted with a familiar sight
>The infirmary ceiling
>How nostalgic…
>How’d you end up here?
>Sitting up feels like a starting up an old engine as you inch your way into a sitting position
>A dull pain soaks your body to the bone
>At least it’s bearable for the most part
>You won’t be running any field missions for a bit, but you don’t feel too bad
>You inspect yourself to see how bad it looks
>Other than the usual scuffs you’d expect you notice that your left arm and leg are heavily bandaged
>Oh that’s right…
>The memories of the labyrinth of a maze you went through resurface as your eyes linger on your bandaged extremities
>It appears you were able to make it out of there in one piece at least, but how you did is hazy
>Hopefully Will was able to stop whatever was happening at Fancy Pants and Co.
>Looking around the old room you get your bearings
>It’s as barren as you left it all those years ago
>Besides the bed you sit on, the small nightstand beside it, and the shelves still filled with medical supplies across from you there’s not much here
>Crimson light leaks into the darkness from beneath the curtain covered window to your left while a pale white light sneaks in from underneath the door to your right
>As you sit there gaze wandering about the room your stomach growls interrupting the silence
>Perhaps getting something to eat should be your next objective?
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>>30020809
>You peel the covers off your legs and swing them over the side
>As your feet touch the cold tile of the floor you smile as you see something you over looked on the floor
>Looks like your sister was nice enough to get your slippers from home
>Thanks Lulu
>Slipping your feet into the small suns you test how strong your legs are by shifting your weight onto them while sitting on the bed
>Wincing a bit you sigh
>At the very least you can do so enough that you’ll get out the door and hopefully some pain killers
>You really wish you didn’t keep the shelf in here only stocked with emergency treatment supplies
>While you’d love to get relief right now, you’re not sure if seven years old or so morphine is the right fix
>You’re not even sure if it'd be any good anymore
>Shaking your head you get back to the task on hand
>Doing your best to keep your right good hand on the bed you attempt to stand up
>Through a bit of willpower you manage to stand on both feet with relative ease
>Your left leg throbs a bit, but besides that it looks like you’re fine
>It’s only as you stand there in the dark do you realize the state of your clothes
>Looks like your sister had to cut your left suit sleeve off completely and your left legging
>Even then you can still see some blood stains on your suit and skirt
>You immediately expel a sigh upon seeing this
>You knew that it was going to be bad, but you still hoped your clothes would be salvageable after it all
>Perhaps a bit too much wishful thinking
>Walking towards the door you can’t help overhear the conversation on the other side as it becomes a bit more clear
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>>30020819
>”It was then sister couldn’t keep her composure any longer; leaping into the fray she almost hospitalized a poor senior citizen rushing through the establishment like a wild animal to secure the last cake.”
>What
>You stop in your tracks as her voice carries through the door
>”I wasn’t sure if it was her or the wretched gluttony spirit that had taken hold of her.”
>No
>There’s no way
>Is, is Lulu reminiscing
>”I didn’t know that a human jaw could unhinge like that until that fateful day…”
>ABOUT THE TIME YOU HAD AGREED TO NEVER SPEAK OF!?
>You practically burst through the door in your rush to stop her from regaling whoever was listening to the rest of that tale
“LUNA STOP YOU MUSTN’T SPEAK ANOTHER WORD!”
>As the door bangs against the wall you’re greeted with the stares of the new generation of CHS guardians and your sister
>Their stares all look similar to a worried stare you’d give a deranged mental patient who’s broken out of the psych ward
>At least for a moment before Luna gives you the most beautiful smile accompanied with eyelash flutters
>”Ah, greetings sister, it is good to see that you are well.”
>You, well?
>You put on a small smile that seems to calm the girls surrounding your sister while her smile gets more and more worried
>Looking at the ground you clench your fists
“Oh Lulu, I’m far from well…”
>The girls must be able to sense the hostility radiating off of you as they awkwardly look between you and your sister
>Narrowing your eyes you glare daggers at your sister doing her best impression of someone who wasn’t violating your sacred pact to never talk about that dark day again
“I’m furious.”
>Pointing at your sister you quiver your lip before shrieking out barely holding tears back
“You said you’d never speak of it to anyyyyyyoooooonnnnnnnnnne!”
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>>30020823
>Luna scratches the back of her head while doing her best to not look in your general direction
>The girls all look at each other with increasing worry before Applejack stands up from her chair
>”Aw now don’t be embarrassed, uh principal Celestia, vice-principal Luna was just tellin us about the old days.”
>Oh, well that makes sense
>You sniffle and wipe your face
>Pinkie nods with a big smile
>”Yea, it started with VP Luna inviting us here to talk about the stuff that’s been going on lately, that segwayed to the story of how you got this place went to what you guys used to do, then to the most memorable adventures you had with your friends, and then to the time you were possessed by a glutton spirit that made you open your mouth about 4 times larger than a normal human can just so you could devour all the cakes in sight.”
>You stand there taken aback at her complete honesty and quick summery of what they were doing
>You aren’t the only one it appears as the other girls all look at Pinkie with various states of shock
>Rarity’s mouth hangs open as if unable to comprehend what her friend just said
>Poor Fluttershy appears to be trying to sink into her seat behind her curtain-esque bangs hanging over her face
>Twilight seems to be pondering something as she brings a fist to her mouth with a furrowed brow
>Applejack looks from Pinkie to you with her hands on her hips not knowing what to say
>Sunset appears to be shaking her head slowly with her eyes closed as if she expected this to happen
>Cocking your head towards your ever nervous sister you smile devilishly
“So Luna decided to tell you some of our more memorable moments huh?”
>Her gaze flicks to you as her pupils shrink to pinpricks
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>>30020828
“Did she tell you about a certain trip to the beach where she ended up kissing a sire—“
>”Okay Prince-ipal Celestia, let’s just drop the trip down memory lane for now shall we?”
>Sunset smiles sheepishly as she stands between you and Luna
>You suppose you could drop it, you probably do have much to talk about
>Twilight stands from her chair with a serious look
>”Before we do I must confirm something…”
>She looks from you and then to Luna
>”Was it really 4 times larger than normal, because if principal Celestia, assuming she has an average mouth opening of 60 mm, opened it that tall she could swallow almost an entire 10 in tall piece of cake in one bite!”
>You glare at Luna as she smiles helplessly at you
>You were going to drop it with no retaliation, but now you’ll be damned if you don’t at least get one stab at Luna
>Puckering up and doing mock kisses you whisper loudly
“Fiiissshhh kissserrrr…”
>Before the girls can register what you said Luna stands up like a solider and claps her hands loudly
>”What’s that sister, you desire to know more on how things have gone during your rest, it would be an honor if I could catch you up!”
>You can’t help but smile as your sister does her best to keep herself together under the scrutinizing stares of the girls
>Taking a seat in your chair you nod
“Alright, I suppose I can tell them another time, for now I have a few things I’d like to take care of first.”
>There are a few things bugging you before you get to catching up on current events
>Sitting back down in their original spots everyone’s eyes are on you
>Looking around it suddenly occurs to you that several key people are missing
“Where are Will, Rainbow Dash, and Anon?”
>Luna furrows her brow as her eyes drift to the guest room
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>>30020834
>”I do not know as of yet if he was successful in his operation…”
>Your eyes drift to the guest room as Luna’s voice goes silent for a moment
>”It was around 6am that he stumbled in somewhat of a daze, he went straight into the guest room and collapsed into bed.”
>What could have happened?
>Your own worried gaze meets your sister’s as you look away from the guest room door
>”He hasn’t come out yet.”
>That doesn’t bode well at all
>Applejack clears her throat as her emerald eyes focus on you
>”Ifin what vice-principal Luna told us is true, then Mr. Will saved not only our skins, but Anon’s too.”
>Really?
>You can’t help but smile slightly
>Guess he finally got to fulfill a childhood dream…
>Rarity stands up nodding
>”It was positively gallant how he swooped in and defeated the dastardly hooligans who were tormenting us in the Fancy Pants warehouse.”
>They were at the warehouse?
>Applejack shakes her head with somewhat of a solemn look on her face
>”We were separated from Anon at the time, but when we found him…”
>Rarity looks away uncomfortably as she grips one arm tightly
>”He was on the ground in pain with some black cloud of magic all around him.”
>Black magic clouds?
>Applejack sneers in contempt
>”Some bird faced feller in a suit and tie was standin there waitin fer us.”
>Bird faced man in a suit, black magic…
>You aren’t the only one who seems to pick that up as you notice Luna visibly tense
>Everyone seems to hang on their words as Rarity bites her thumb and she scrunches her face
>”The oddest thing was that he seemed to know Mr. Will, even calling him Willy.”
>Willy!
>Your grip tightens on your chair causing a sharp creak startling the others
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Because I am an asshole.
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>>30020841
>All eyes except Luna’s are on you
>You can see Sunset approach you from you periphery, but your eyes are focused solely on your sister
>Her breathing has become shallow, fists clenched into tight balls, and her pupils constricted into small slits as they seemingly shake in her rapidly brightening cyan eyes
>”Um, principal Celestia, are you alright?”
>Sunset’s voice seems to drag Luna out of her thoughts as her eyes flick to you noticeably steadier and back to their original color, but constricted all the same
>Exhaling slowly you try to hide the worry on your face as best you can
“Yes, yes I am.”
>Turning to Sunset you frown
“This news is just a bit, jarring.”
>You receive several raised eyebrows and questioning looks, but brush them off as you have other concerns
“We can delve more in depth on what’s happened when all of us are together.”
>While still worried your students all voice their agreement
>Applejack looks at everyone
>”Ah suppose that’d be better so we don’t hafta repeat ourselves.”
>With a sad frown Rarity scratches her chin
>”Yes, it would be a waste to do so without everyone since there’s so much we have to say.”
>Nodding in agreement Twilight crosses her arms
>”Indeed, we have quite a bit on our side to go through as well.”
>Waving her arms to emphasize her point Pinkie states
>”It was the biggest party crashing I’ve seen EVER!”
>Speaking up for the first time Fluttershy’s face hardens
>”It wasn’t even just one group crashing it either…”
>Shaking her head Sunset sighs
>”That’s a whole other headache to talk about though.”
>You are curious as to what they’re talking about, but more important things first
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>>30020847
>Turning to applejack you clasp your hands together unconsciously
“So, I assume that Anon and Rainbow Dash are together then?”
>Applejack nods pulling out her cellphone
>”They are, he just woke up an hour ago or so.”
>He just woke up an hour ago?
>You can’t say you’re very surprised if he got the alone time with who you think it is
>Luna rises from her seat determination clear on her face
>”If that’s the case we should go out and bring them here as soon as we can.”
>You agree 100%
>The two of you need to learn what’s happened to everyone and explain what you know
>You hate to admit it, but you’ll all need to work together in order to stop what’s coming
>Applejack swipes through her phone
>”Rainbow said they were headin to the mall for dinner.”
>Ooh, you could use dinner too
>Standing up and ignoring the dull pain you nod
“Then we’ll go there and pick him up.”
>Luna waves her hand dismissively
>”I will go and retrieve them; you should stay here with the oth—“
>The creak of the door to the guest room stops Luna cold as her eyes widen
>You turn to the guest room as Will stepping out with a heavy *thud* looks out from the doorway
>He locks his gaze with yours
>Oh god…
>He looks absolutely ragged, almost worse than you do
>Several scorch marks coat various parts of his superhero costume along with a few actual cuts on him
>You don’t remember when the last time he actually came out of one of his sleep comas with ANY wounds, no matter how small
>However that’s not the most concerning thing about him
>No, the most alarming by far are his eyes
>They’re tired, so very weary
>As if to break the silence created by the rest of you he opens his mouth
>His voice barely croaks out louder than a whisper
>”It’s something I abhor, but I’ve failed you once more.”
.
.
.
End of this update, sorry to lie about the fun, but it’ll come in the next update promise! Until then
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>>30020823
>rushing through the establishment like a wild animal to secure the last cake."
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>>30020854
OH SHIT
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>>30020854
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>>30020854
Good update YFN.
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I want to cum inside YFN
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>>30023350
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I want to cum inside Axii
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>>30013771
That time Celestia asked Applejack if she could get some of Anon's dick was pretty funny.
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>>30023487
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>>30023487

...
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>>30023824
I still haven't located my sides.
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I want to cum inside Fate's cousin
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>>30023936
>>30023487
>>30023350
STOP COMING INSIDE PEOPLE!
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I want to cum inside you
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>>30023963
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I want to cum inside S-SciAn-
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>>30023936
She already has Fate, and sounds pretty satisfied about it.
>>30023869
Damn shame we never got more than a joke threesome about that. I could see Applejack going into a breeding frenzy when Anon gets back and dragging Rara tits an Sun an Moon tits to milk him dry. She WILL get his kid, one way or another.
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>>30020819
>task on hand
its task at* hand, not on.
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>>30026241
>"Oh hi, Anon"
"Hi there, Suns-"
>"...what?"
"...you went to sleep dressed like that?"
>"Yep"
"Why?"
>"It's hot"
"But...I mean...it's not even THAT hot"
>"Dude, you're redder than red. I'd say it's definitely hot"
"THAT'S FOR ANOTHER R-REASON! Also, what if it got hotter!?"
>"I'd sleep naked. It wouldn't be the first time"
"..."
>"Anon?"
"...oh dear, I need to go to the bathroom for 20 minutes. Reasserting my life priorities, brb."
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>>30026273
Multiverse reality victim Anon and roommate Sunset story when? Actually, what happened to the writefag that was doing that story?
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>>30026273
>10 minutes later
>Anon is in the bathroom
>Fapping the shit outta his micropenis
>All of a sudden Sunset gets in
"Hey, at l-least kno- WHAT THE FUCK ARE Y-YOU DOING!?"
>"Coming in, duh"
"B-B-BUT YOU A-A-A-ARE STARK NAKED!"
>"Uh-uh, I need a shower"
"B-B-BUT WHAT ABOUT ME!?"
>"Oh, relax, keep doing whatever you were doing on the toilet. I'll just use the shower, relax."
"...B-but, I-I...b-boobs.."
>"Sniff, sniff. Oh dear. My twat smells a bit. Yeah, I know, too much info, but I really gotta brush it. Do as if I wasn't here" [closes the showers doors]
"...it's gonna b-be harder than you think"
>"Boy, mate, whatever you're doing on that toilet you sure are giving it all you got huh? I can hear you panting"
"S-SHUT UP! IT'S...anf...ALL YOUR FAULT!"
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>>30026291
And now you ruined it.
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>>30026302
C'est la vie.
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>>30029000
>that gif
>those digits
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Which anon is the asshole?
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Which is the asshole anon story?
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>>30030490
You need to be more specific.
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>>30030520
I don't know bro, I'm sure there's a story in it where anon is an ass to the mane 7 or something. He's not nice or weird though like axii or YFN
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>>30030540
OH You mean SciAnon's story. Sunset was a total bitch to him and so he hates her with a passion. That sound familiar?
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>>30030575
It is familiar but that's not the one. He's just a pretentious douchehole.

The one I'm thinking of is similar, except anon is more of a "friendly" asshole. He's not overly passive aggressive, more insulting and annoying the mane 7.
I really am trying to think anon, drink clouds my mind though
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>>30030618
You mean the Anon forced to be around the mane 7? I think it was Spergatron, digitalstan, or maybe Normie. All I know is he is one of the dead writefags.
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>>30031231
I don't think I've read those ones. I know its something about anon having to hang with the girls, but he's horrible to them, not really horrible, just annoying
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Page 9
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>>30031395
All I know is he is in one of the dead writefag bins.
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Page 9 again
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bump from 9
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>>30002287
Got a bit sad when I got no critique. Got sadder when the comments were followed up with a torrent of bumps. This and life is catching up to me, so may not be as active anymore. I'm feeling more productive and active drawing than writing.

So if you're wondering, I'm not quitting. Just stuck in a loop of time management and mood-swings.
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>>30034487
There was no big flaws for me to critique, we still need writefags that finish their stories, so I do hope you stay.
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>>30035856
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bump before bed
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>>30034487
I hope you come back to us soon Cookies.
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>>30039342
See? The thread is dying and it's all Axii's fault.
Well it isn't really his fault but you know what I mean.
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Will kill thread tomorrow, sorry about lack of update got blindsided by some stuff
See you soon!
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I want to cum inside Cookies
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>>30040406
sweet bro
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>>30040406
Good luck, its been a pain for everyone to make large posts lately.
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>>30043035
Yea, so hey tried to upload on both my phone and laptop to no avail
My other writefriend just decided to update his pastebin instead today
I don't like that option, but since I literally can't update without just doing four lines, I can if need be
Do you guys want the next update in the pastebin, or wait till tomorrow or later this evening when whatever's happening is fixed?
I'll do whatever the consensus is
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>>30043515
Apparently no one has been able to post on any thread this morning so I say we wait and probably kill the thread in the meantime so we have a fresh bread to start.
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>>30043515
Pretty much this>>30043549
We can just muck about till the thread dies, just post a link of your bin whenever you make a update for it.
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bump from 9
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>>30044403
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>>30044406
One of my faves.
I'll just dump a couple more
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>>30044414
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Going out for a job interview, whoever makes the next thread needs to add a completed list of writefags and put up Axii next thread.
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>>30044429
So same layout, with an extra category for completed stories with axii in it. Anything else?
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>>30044451
New thread here >>30044500

I would have waited a bit longer but I need to get groceries.
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>>30044507
Scratch that, new thread here >>30044529

Fixed a couple things in the op
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