>You will never be the Mane Six's lonely single father

>>29518029
Back to work!

>>29512722
>12:23
>“So, here’s what I said to him,” continues Rarity with her story, “If you want me to do something so vulgar, it would certainly take more than a measly five dollars for me to do such lewdities, and that I as a civil lady wouldn’t do it for even a million dollars!”
>You nod in approval as she meets praise from her adopted sisters.
“Good job, Rarity. Good job. I’m glad you know better than to be stupid, because there’s a lot of stupid people who do stupid things, particularly celebrities. Just, still...make sure you don’t let the band members of whoever it is we’ll be up against tonight make you do things. If they’re as famous as we’re led to believe, they’ll be downright dick heads. Wanna get in your pants and all.”
>“We know, Mister Anon,” says Sunset with a mild roll of her eyes, “we won’t let them.”
“I wanna hear it from all of you, though...”
>The four girls at your booth all sigh, Fluttershy taking the chance to snuggle up against your shoulder…
>“We promise,” they all say in unison.
>You smile.
“There you all go.”
>“Go where?” asks Pinkie, looking around.
“It’s just a saying, Pinkie.”
>“Who’s saying Pinkie?” she asks yet again.
>You groan.
“For the name of Godzilla, just forget about it.”
>“Forget about the name of Godzilla who’s saying Pinkie as we all go?”
>“Oh dear,” murmurs Rarity.
>“Deer? Oh my goodness, where?” asks a now excited Fluttershy.

>>29518215
Oh, and the pastebin's also been updated.

>http://pastebin.com/6yzn7tfa

>>29518215
thank you
thank you so much

>>29518215
>12:30
>After a seven minute oral debate that would’ve made Abbott and Costello roll in their graves, it seems Fluttershy and Pinkie finally understand it…
>“So...when you were saying “oh deer”, you weren’t talking about a “deer”, but just the term “dear”?”
“Yes, Fluttershy. That’s it.”
>You look over at Pinkie.
“And do YOU understand now?”
>“I understand the boundaries between worlds!” cheers Pinkie.
>Silly child.
>“Hey, is that our food?” asks Sunset, looking at the waitress, BElla-Donna, her hands balancing numerous plates that mirror exactly what you’ve ordered.
>You nod hopefully.
“I think so...thank god it didn’t take to long. Still wanna beat that traffic.”
>“It smells delicious!” cries Pinkie.

>>29518297
You're welcome, friend.

>>29518429
i am ammazed that you found my description understandable

>>29518394
>12:31
>Within thirty seconds, Bella-Donna arrives at the booth, her endearing smile plastered on her face as she makes sure not to drop anything.
>“Who had the super wurst?” she asks, looking at the table.
>Pinkie eagerly raises her hand.
“Oh! Oh! That’s me, that’s me!” she says, staring at her...oh that’s a gigantic hot dog…
>Bella-Donna places it down on the table in front of Pink psycho daughter, who in turn licks her chomps like Scooby would.
>You have to admit, the super wurst does look appetizing, and it smells as good as watching Godzilla vs. MechaGodzilla (the original Showa version with King Caesar, mind you).
>“Alright, and who had the Morning Glory Burger? One with the Superb Chocolate Shake?” asks Bella-Donna.
>You smile as if you were a stable and upstanding father.
“Ah, yes, that’d be me.”
>She reaches to your end of the booth, struggling to place down your meal on the table.
>Like a supreme gentleman, however, you politely grab your plate, easing it down with her help.
>She titters in the way that only a young college girl can as the pale skin of her milky-white hand brushes against your larger, more experienced ones.
“Um, a-and your milkshake,” she stutters, her face flushed with red.
>She places it down with much more ease.
>You smile all the while she stares at your handsome face of a ruggedly handsome DILF.
>“Uh,...w-who had the salad again?” she asks with a giggle.

>>29518530
mobilefag

>>29518647
nope dyslectic dutch fag

>>29518650
>dyslexic
Believe it or not, I am too despite the fact I write a lot.

>>29518707
i can beleve this

>>29518601
>12:32
>“Oh, why that’d be me,” says Rarity, a bit too sweetly.
>As in she’s doing that thing where she acts like she’s not masking some other emotion, but clearly is to the trained eye of friends and family...
>“Salad. Gotcha,” says Belle-Donna. “Here you go...So that leaves the chili, one more regular burger, and one more chocolate shake.”
>“Oh, that’s me. Burger and shake,” says Sunset like a normal person, despite the twitch in her eye at the waitress, who Sunset makes a point of not assisting her in reaching to the end of table as you had.
>Why do you have such wacko daughters, you swear to Godzilla…
>“So the vegan chili with extra beans is your’s then, miss?” Bella Donna asks Flutter...WHOA.
>That smile.
>Too wide.
>Some shit is going on with her...
>“Yes…it is,” says FLuttershy, that tense, rigid smile of her’s creeping out Bella-Donna (as it should).
>In fact, the waitress places the chilli in front of her with extreme caution, as if reaching to pet the snout of a velociraptor…
>She smiles.
>“Uh, y-you all enjoy!”
>She makes her way back to the kitchen quickly, and you catch all the girls but Pinkie shooting glares at the innocent server.
>lol
>Why do all girls hate each other?
>I mean, come on...
>As soon as Bella-Donna is out of sight though, it’s as if she’s out of mind, and the girls return to looking at their meals with approval.
>All except Sunset…
“Sunset? Something wrong?”
>She frowns guiltily…
“I think I drank too much coke. I don’t really want a milkshake now…”
>You would take it being the lovely father that you are, but you know you’d never finish your coffee or meal after two entire milkshakes.
>Hm…

>>29518215
cool, It's not dead yet

>>29519285
you have to drink ALL of the coke, and the coffee, and the shake

>>29518707
>dyslexic
Hold on, what?

>>29519285
I probably won't update till tomorrow. Keep the thread alive.

>>29520957
Yep.

>>29519285
MOAR MOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOAAAARRRRRRRR

>>29521674
Will do senpai

>>29519285
why do they hate blake?

>>29522312
Why the hell does f-a-m auto turn into s-e-n-p-a-i

>>29522312
Why in the fuck does f-a-m auto turn into s-e-n-p-a-i

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>>29523127
>>29523135
what kinda newfag shit is this

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I think I got an idea for who to bring in next for this green...

>>29523135
kys senpai

>>29519285
I might try to do some fan-art of Belle-Donna if thats alright with you

>>29524159
Sure. Go for it.

>>29523486
Oh Godzilla

>>29518029
I bet they all cycle at the same time.

>>29524898
>Story about Dadnon losing his sanity over the course of two days when the planets align and all his daughters have their periods on the same day.
I'd read it.

>>29525187
Oh god, them all having hormonal rages at the same time...... I'd read that

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>>29525187
>>29526516
What would they be like, though?
Off the top of my head Fluttershy strikes me as being insanely affectionate during hers. Probably because of when she snapped at the Gala.
Rarity would scour the house in search of ice cream and lie on the living room couch for hours on end, clutching her hot water bottle to her stomach.
Rainbow's probably just more of a dick to everyone, I dunno lmao.
I can't really think of anything convincing for the others.

>>29526556
Pinkie Pie might roll around on the floor being sad, or just rolling around on the floor to make herself feel better, Twilight would take some pain-relief and just read books trying to ignore it; Applejack might just think the rest are exaggerating just a mite, she isn't having serious problems.

>>29526907
agreed

bumping
dear author of the story i beg of you to come back

Badabimp badabump

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Can't deliver tonight. Again.

Sorry...

>>29529116
No beans for us?
GRAB THE TORCHES AND PITCHFORKS!

>>29529181
RIOT

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>>29529181
>>29529703

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>>29529837
C-come on guys. What's one more day?

>>29530521
The difference between the Russian monarchy existing and not.

>>29530521
I live for green! It's up to him if he is willing to deal with a riot over no greens of this quality!

>Arrive in ponyland.
>Drink a lot because you're treated like a woman.
>Ignore just about everyone, walk around semi-nude to display your skinnyfat body.
>still not giving a fuck until Celestia found you to be unsavory.
>Anon stop that this instance. I am not here for your funtimes!
You act quite off compared to your other horses. You act like a woman back home, feminine but still in charge. I like that.
>You are crazy and drunk. Stop this.
>Oh no. She keeps moving her big butt near me. Only one in the land.
>I was weird back home so this is nice.
This went nowhere. Ignore my posts.

>>29530596
No.

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>>29530596

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>>29530596
At least do the world a favor and use " " when they green is supposed to be sunbutt talking.
Also don't do this ever again.

>>29518029
I'm OK with not being the father figure to six bratty girls.

>>29530597
>>29530600
>>29530653
wrong thread and I am kinda drunk. Sorry about that.

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>>29530709
Pic related

>>29530709
>implying that you don't want hormonal horse women around you all day.

what are you, gay?

Bump bump bump

>>29531765

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>>29530596
Wat

>>29532973
that was probably supposed to be in rgre

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Well I suppose I'll repost an old DadAnon green I wrote.

>Thanks for letting me come home dad. I'm sorry I ran away. You were right. That Brad guy was a jerk.

>>29533287
>You hug your daughter.
"It's okay, Sunset. I'm just happy your safe."
>You feel her return the hug with a shaky grip.
>"Do you... still love me?" you hear her whisper.
"Of course, sweetie. I love you even when you make stupid decisions."
>Her grip tightens and becomes less shaky.
>"Thank you."
"That doesn't mean you aren't grounded for the next year for running away though."
>Sunset groans as the hug ends.
>"Really?"
"Yes, really. You're lucky your sisters are asleep right now, otherwise they'd be chewing you out for making them worry so much."
>You and her laugh.
>"Yeah, they would wouldn't they?"
"Yep. Now go to sleep. It's 3 AM."
>You watch her go up the stairs to the girls' bedroom.
>When Sunset leaves your sight once, you sigh.
>Now, how to deal with that little shit Brad?

>>29533291
>Be Sunset Shimmer, oldest daughter of Anonymous
"BLAAAARRRRRGGG"
>And you are not having a good time.
>You are currently hunched over a toilet, emptying your dinner into it.
>It's been three weeks since you came home.
>As expected, your sisters had been a combination of happy that you're back and angry at your for your stupid decision.
>You took it in stride.
>Also as expected, Brad had showed up at school and tried to convince you to move back in with him.
>You told him to fuck off, which he didn't like. He didn't do anything physical, seeing as you were in the hallway surrounding by dozens of other students.
>But he said some... choice insults.
>You told your Dad, who had the angriest expression you've ever seen on him.
>One visit from Uncle Icognito later and Brad makes sure to stay FAR away from you now.
>Which brings you to your current issue.
>For the last two days, you've been feeling incredibly sick.
>Your first guess was that you had caught something running home in the rain that night.
>But then something terrifying happened that threw that theory right out the window.
>You missed your period.

>>29533301

>So.... there was a good chance you were pregnant with Brad's baby.
>It's not definite! You haven't taken a pregnancy test yet after all. Your period could just be late.
>But your teenage mind was doubtful.
>Your were also ABSOLUTELY TERRIFIED
>You groaned as you pushed yourself up, wiping your mouth with paper towels.
>You hoped everyone else was asleep right now so they wouldn't hear you.
>"S-Sunset?"
>Goddamn it.
>You quickly turn to see a concerned Fluttershy at the door.
"Hey sis... What are you doing up?"
>"I uh...heard you vomiting."
>You cringed.
"Yeah, sorry about that. Is anybody else up?"
>She shakes her head.
>"No, it's just me. D-Do you need me to wake up Dad?"
"No!"
>Your sister jumps.
>You sigh.
"Sorry, just... no. Dad can't know about this."
>You've made him worry enough.
>"But if your sick, then he'd want to know about it."
>Damn it.
>Should you or shouldn't you tell her?
"That's the thing. I'm not sure if I'm just sick."
>You groan as that feeling of nausea returns.
"HRK!"
>You quickly force your face down into the toilet as you start vomiting again.
>You hear Fluttershy squeak and go to her knees to assist you.
>You feel her pull your hair out of the way with one hand, and rub your back with the other.
>Fuck it.
>If this is what you're going to deal with then you need to tell someone.
>Fluttershy's not the worst person you could have told anyway.
>That would be Applejack or Pinkie.
>A few moments later you sigh as the vomit stops. You pull back up to look at your sister, who looks even more worried now.
"Thanks, sis."
>"Sunset, what did you mean by what you said before?"
>You sigh again.
"Fluttershy... I think I might be pregnant."

>>29533306
>(ONE WEEK LATER)
>You are once again Anonymous, father of seven teenage girls.
>Right now, you're simply enjoying your Saturday night by watching Pinkie, Rainbow, and Fluttershy play Battletoads in Battlemaniacson your old SNES with the others doing their own thing nearby.
>*THUMP!!*
>Or at least you were.
>Everyone almost jumps as you all hear a loud noise coming from the backyard.
>"What was that?" Pinkie asks the question you're all probably thinking.
"I'll check it out. You all stay here."
>"Be careful!" you hear Twilight shout.
>You head into the kitchen and grab a flashlight out of the cabinet.
>Slowly but surely, you open the door to peek out through the screen door.
>You can barely see anything.
>*CLICK!*
>You shine your flashlight to get a better look.
>"SKREE!"
>You see a raccoon running away from a fallen down trash can, the contents of which are spilled out everywhere.
>You sigh in relief.
"It's just raccoons getting into the garbage again, girls!"
>You hear them let out their own sounds of relief.
>"Don't hurt it!" you hear Fluttershy call out.
"It already left, sweetie."
>Time to do some clean up.
>You grab some disposable gloves and head outside.
>As you begin to clean up, you notice something in the light of your flashlight.
>A small, white stick. Kind of looks like a pregnancy te-
>WAIT.
>Why was a pregnancy test in your trash?!
>Unless...
>You pick it up with your left hand to inspect it closer.
>It's positive.
>....
>WELP.
>TIME TO HAVE A TALK WITH THE GIRLS

>>29533309
>After you finish picking up the displaced trash, you head back into the house.
>The positive pregnancy test is tucked inside your pocket.
>You took off the disposable gloves and tossed them into the trash.
>You take a deep breath as you prepare for what's about to happen.
>You're too young to be a grandfather.
>Then again you're also too young to have seven daughters and you have them anyway.
>Jesus, how are you going to support another growing girl (or boy) on your paycheck?
>You barely make enough to make ends meet as it is!
>You briefly consider calling up Incognito again for advice on how to approach this.
>But then you discard that notion.
>He'd probably suggest giving Sunset a coat hanger abortion while making her drink vodka as 'anesthetic'.
>Then there's the matter of which of your daughters is pregnant to begin with. Your mind quickly leaps to Sunset considering you know she hasn't quite told you EVERYTHING that happened while she lived with that Brad kid.
>The same kid you had Incognito scare off...
>Ugh.
>You had to make sure of this.
>You walk back into the living room.
>The girls had gone back to whatever it was they were doing before.
>You clear your throat to get their attention.
"Girls?"
>They all turn to you.
>You take a deep breath and reach into your pocket.
"Could one of you please explain...."
>You take out the pregnancy test and hold it up for all of them to see.
"Why I found this while cleaning up the trash?"

>>29533321

>Most of them gasp.
>"Holy shit..." Rainbow mutters.
"No swearing, Dash."
>You gauge their reactions to see if the 'culprit' will implicate themselves.
>Rarity looks scandalized as she looks at her sisters in an effort to figure out who it is as well.
>Applejack looks like she's still processing this.
>Pinkie is biting her fingernails
>Fluttershy is nervous, but she's nervous all the time so that doesn't help much. Although she does look more nervous than usual...
>Wait a minute.
>You notice her sneak a glance at Sunset, and your gaze immediately switches over to her.
>Shame is written clear on her face.
"Sunset?"
>She immediately looks down when you lock eyes.
>Yep, you got her.
"Sunset, can we go talk in private?"
>Wordlessly, she stands up from her spot on the couch.
>You wave her over and the two of you head for your bedroom.
>*CLICK!*
>When you get there, you make sure to close the door behind both of you.
>You turn back to Sunset.
>She's purposefully not looking you in the eye.
>She's shaking a little as well...
"Sunset, I'm not mad at you."
>Disappointed really. You were more mad at that Brad kid anyway.
>You sit down on you bed and pat the space next to you.
>Slowly, she follows suit.
>You notice her face is wet.
"Aw, geez..."
>You move to take her into a hug.
>She hesitantly, returns it.
>"You... always warned us about how hard being a single parent is for you, and how you never wanted that for us."
>Her voice is breaking.
>"I.... I'm so sorry, Dad!"
>She starts full on crying into your shoulder.
>You sigh and rub her back.
"It's okay, Sunny. We'll get through this."
>Hopefully.

>>29533329

>The question is, what to do about that Brad boy...
>You certainly didn't want him anywhere near your future grandchild.
>If Sunset wants to keep it that is.
>But he needs to at least know what he's done.
>For now you sit there, holding your daughter as she sobs.
>"I'm so sorry..."
"It's okay."
>"No it isn't! You already work two jobs and now I'll have to get one but it probably won't even cover a fraction of what a baby costs!"
"It's okay."
>"I'm the oldest. The one who's supposed to set a good example for the others. You told me that. And then I go and do something stupid like this..."
>You hold her tighter.
>"Sunset."
>She stops talking.
>You detach from the hug to look her straight in the eye.
"Have you even decided whether or not you even want to keep this baby? There's always... abortion."
>She looks apprehensive.
>"I-I don't know."
"Decide that first. I'm not saying you need to do it right now this second, but you do need to choose."
>You sigh.
"If you do decide to keep it, we also need to tell that Brad kid."
>Like hell that little shit is getting out of paying child support if Sunset decides to keep it.
>Sunset becomes tense at that.
>"I'm not sure..."
"I know. But he at least deserves to know what he's done in that case."
>"I guess..."
>You pull her into another hug.
"Just know that I will support you no matter what, abortion or no abortion."
>She returns it.
>"I love you, Daddy..."
>Heh. She hasn't called you that in years.
"I love you too, Sunset."
>Shame it had to come from this.

>>29533341
>(FOUR DAYS LATER)
>Be Sunset Shimmer again.
>Pregnant teenage girl...
>Jesus Christ, that's weird to think about.
>You were now like one of those obnoxious girls on Teen Mom that you used to make fun of.
>After your talk with Dad, the girls had so many questions.
>Most of which you didn't know how to answer yet.
>Right now though, you were at home.
>You were sent home early from school after morning sickness kicked in suddenly.
>You passed it off as having a virus.
>It would be hours before your sisters and Dad came back.
>You were just staring at your cellphone, a cheap flip phone that your Dad had gotten you two years ago.
>What Dad said earlier rings in your ears.
>Should you tell Brad? It's not like you expected him to be helpful or anything.
>But it IS his problem too, technically.
>You certainly had the opportunity to do so in private since you were the only one here right now.
>You really didn't want Dad or your sisters over your shoulder while you did this...
>You take a deep breath.
>Come on Sunset, you're a big girl.
>You can do this.
>Even though you deleted the number for Brad's apartment from your contacts, you still remember it clearly.
>615-2013
>The phone starts to ring.
"Come on, pick up...."
>You hoped Uncle Incognito hadn't scared him TOO much.

>>29533350

>The phone just rings.
>And rings
>And rings...
>And ri-
>*CLICK!*
>You perk up.
"Brad?"
>"Yo this is Brad! If you're hearing this right now, that means I'm not home. Leave a message after the beep."
>Damn it
"Ugh. Brad. It's me, Sunset. We need to talk, like ASAP. I know I told you to fuck off before, but things have changed. Call me as soon as you get this. It's really important."
>With that you end the call.
>You sigh.
>Damn it.
>You place your phone down on your nightstand.
>Where is he? It's not like he's in college or has much of a job outside his band.
>In hindsight, this is kind of what you get for falling for the hot older bad boy.
>You really didn't want to have to go see him in person again.
>That would make telling him this even worse.
>You still haven't completely decided if you're going to keep this baby or not.
>You can feel the time ticking away though.
>Sooner or later you'll have to make up your mind.
>But you need to think this through first, talk to people about it.
>So all you can do is wait.
>You leave the cramped, seven person bedroom you've shared most of your life, and head back into the living room.
>Maybe some SNES will clear your head?

>>29533358

>(ONE WEEK LATER)
>Still Sunset Shimmer.
>And OH GOD where did things go wrong?!
"Dad, please don't do this!"
>"I just want to talk to him."
>LIES
>After being told that Brad hadn't responded to your message, he basically dragged you to the car and now you're heading for his apartment.
"I can handle this myself!"
>"I just want to talk to him."
>You pull up in front of the apartment building.
"Dad this is ridiculous!"
>He gets out of the car and you quickly follow suit.
"Don't do anything stupid!"
>"I just want to talk to him."
>He opens the trunk and WHAT THE FUCK?!
"Wait, why do you have a .44?!"
>"I just want to talk to him."
>He hides it in his pocket, and quickly heads on inside.
>You regret telling him Brad's address.
>As the you of you head up the building to Brad's apartment, you continue to try and reason with him but to no avail.
>Oh god, your Dad is going to literally kill Brad.
>You hated him but you didn't want him dead!
>When you come up to the hallway where Brad's apartment is....
"Dad, it's not like he did it on purpose! It was an accident!"
>"I just want to talk to him."
"Please stop!"
>He knocks on the door.
>"I just want to shoot him."
"STOP!"

>>29533365

>Brad opens the door, and immediately your Dad pulls out the gun and points it at him.
>Your ex is immediately surprised and terrified.
>"Hey w-what the fuck, man?!"
>*CLICK!*
>"Scream and I shoot. We're coming inside to have a little talk. NOW."
>"Okay man, geez! For the love of God don't kill me!"
>Brad quickly complies and opens the door.
>Your Dad barges inside and you follow suit.
>Brad moves to run away while the door is still open, but your dad grabs him by the back of his leather jacket and-
>*THUMP!*
>Slams the door behind.
>Dad basically throws him into a nearby beanbag chair, and glares at him.
>"Okay look, kid. I may hate your guts but I'm not going to shoot you. That may change if you don't immediately explain why you ignored my daughter's voice mail."
>Brad looks like he's about to pee himself.
>You sincerely hope this doesn't end badly.
>"I was just doing what that weird foreign guy said! I was staying away from her! Dear God, what do you want from me?!"
>Dad sighs, and puts the gun back in his pocket.
>"Yeah, well things have changed. You are going to have a little talk with Sunset right now."
>Brad turns to you, a terrified expression on his face.
>"Sunset, what the hell is he talking about?!"
>You groan, facepalming.
"Look, I'm sorry about my Dad."
>"Don't apologize, sweetie."
"Shut up, Dad."
>You sigh.
"The things is Brad... Remember how the condom broke that time a day before I went back home?"
>He looks confused.
>"Wait, what are you?"
>A look of realization dawns on his face.
>"Oh..."
"Yeah. I-I'm pregnant."
>Brad goes quiet, just staring at the ground with wide eyes.
>"Just... holy shit."
>You rub your temples.
"Look, y-you don't have to do anything. I just thought that you deserved to know. I haven't even decided whether or not I'm keeping it and..."

>>29533370
>"Wait."
>Brad looked back up at you.
>"You're... thinking of getting an abortion?"
"I-I don't know. Maybe? There's just so much money that goes into taking care of a kid. And I'm not ready to be a parent. I still have to finish high school, go to college, get a job.."
>Your Dad just watches this silently, glancing between you and Brad.
>Who's just looking at you with a weird expression you can't quite place.
>"Sunset... Wow. I-I'm so sorry."
>Eh?
>Brad slowly stood back up.
>"I've been thinking about it, and... yeah, I was a dick to you. And now this?"
>He scratches the back of his head.
>"I want to make it up to you."
>I.... what?
"What do you mean?"
>"Look, I can't ask you to keep it. Your body and all. That and your dad would shoot me."
>"Damn straight." your Dad speaks up, glaring at him.
>Brad looks serious.
>"But if you do decide to keep it, I want to be there for you and the kid."
"Why?"
>"My own Dad was never there for me. He always made up half-assed excuses. I'm not saying we have to get back together or anything, but I never want to be like him."
>You're quiet as he says this.
>That's... honestly, really touching. You hadn't expected him to do this.
>"But what makes you think you'll even able to help at all when you don't even have a job?" your Dad says, giving him an examining look.
>"I have my band, don't I? And once we start playing better places, we'll start making more mone-"
>Dad raises a hand, "Let me just stop you right there. What makes you better than any of the other thousands of wannabe rockstars out there?"
>Brad falters at that, "I...."
>"What makes you any more likely to be famous and successful than them? And even if you do, you'll be on tours all the time to keep making that money. So if Sunset decides to keep it and you're right, you'll barely have any time to actually see the kid."
>"They can come with us!" Brad responds feebly.
>Your Dad shakes his head, "The road is no place to raise a child."

>>29533376

>"I'd prefer my first grandchild grow up in a stable place that doesn't screw them up for the rest of their life."
>He sighs, and walks over to pat Brad on the shoulder.
>"Look, it means something that you're willing to step up if Sunset doesn't get an abortion. But neither of you are ready to raise a kid when both of you are still kids yourselves."
>"I'm 19!" Brad responds.
>Your Dad gives him a look, "When I was nineteen I was in college, getting drunk, partying, and generally making an ass of myself. Sounds like something a kid would do."
>Brad turns to you, "Sunset?"
>"I don't know..."
>Jesus Christ did he have to make it hard like this?! You were expecting him to not care!
>"That's what I thought. Brad, I came here to make sure Sunset said what she had to say. And now that she has, I think it's time to leave." Dad walks over to you.
>"Come on, sweetie."
>You nod slowly.
>The two of you leave Brad's apartment.

>>29533380
>(TWO WEEKS LATER)
>You had thought about it, researched it, and talked to everyone you thought might have some insight into this.
>But ultimately you came to a decision.
>It was a nice day outside. No clouds, warmth.
>You could go to the beach right after this if you really wanted to.
>You were in the car with Dad again, both of you silent as you came up to your destination.
>"We're here."
"Yeah."
>Planned Parenthood. A somewhat small building on the other side of town.
>Never thought you'd come here for this while you were still in high school, did you?
>You take a deep breath and prepare to get out.
>But you feel a hand on your shoulder.
>You turn to see your Dad looking at you.
>"Sunset."
"Yes?"
>"Are you sure you want to do this? Because once it's done, there's no going back."
>You nod.
"Yeah, I'm sure."
>He nods in return, "Alright then."
>The two of you get out the car and head inside.
>You see the front desk, attended by a woman in scrubs, and people ostensibly waiting for their turn.
>Mostly girls and women.
>You think you can even see someone from school here....
>Gathering your resolve, you take one step after the other up to the front desk.
>Your Dad takes a seat.
"Hello?"
>The woman at the front desk takes notice of you.
>"Hello! Welcome to Planned Parenthood."
>Through the glass, she passes you what appears to be paperwork.
>"Just fill this out, hand it back to me, and we'll be right with you."
>You nod, take it, and go sit down next to Dad.
>With a sigh, you begin to fill it out.
>The paperwork to get an abortion.
>THE END (for real this time)

Separate writer, stupid little oneshot incoming:

>you charge into the ICU ward, your loving beautiful wife is laying in one of the beds
>6 wrapped bundles are held in her arms, three in each arm
>she has her eyes closed, a doctor and nurse standing above her turns to you as you enter the room
>"Mr Anon?" the doctor asks, you nod.
>"would you mind for just a moment?" he makes a motion with his arm ushering you outside the room
>"i'm afraid the trauma was too much, during the pregnancy she lost too much blood and couldn't be stabilised."
>you start to panic
""She's not.. she-"
>the doctor interrupts your dark train of thought
>"we are doing EVERYTHING we can to keep her condition as stable as possible but we cant keep her like this for long, we need to talk ab- " now he is interrupted as the nurse standing by your wife's side shouts
>"DOCTOR HER SATS JUST DROPPED DOWN TO 70 BP PUSHING 190"
>Rapid panic beeping fills the air
>the doctor rushes in along with a few more and a crashcart
>the nurse removes the babies and places them on a large padded cart
>you stand there, unmoving, unthinking unhelpful
>your caring wife who was your rock, who you loved like no other died 7 minutes later
>you never even got to say goodbye. her newly born six children never got to see her face
>all that was left of her where, her books, a few old photos and your memoires.
>you broke down and cried in the middle of the hospital hallway
>none deared move you

- 15 years later -

>Twilight was always the first up, followed swiftly by applejack.
>the rest of your little family would still be fast asleep
"So Twilight you all going out today?" you asked as you began making them their breakfast
>"Yeah, that new movie is out today, we are all meeting up with some other classmates and going to see it!" she beamed with a wide smile
>AJ comes over to help serve breakfast
>"By the way." she says seriously "Raritys going to try and ask for a raised allowance, just a heads up."
"She can fucking try."

>>29533563
>a raised allowance, good lord you are not made of money, you know how expensive it is to raise six girls in their teens
>the amount of fucking clothes they have.
>you had to buy a second washer
>thankfully you have an acceptable income, you'll all survive though it won't be in the lap of luxury.
>speaking of
"Girls i hate to ask this of you but do you mind serving the rest for your sisters, i need to get to work."
>"You're not staying?" Twi asks a little disappointed
"i'm sorry honey I can't, I need to be at work."
>you begin packing your suitcase and making sure you have your essentials, phone, keys and wallet.
>grabbing your wallet you open it
>sighing, you take out a slightly crumpled 20 and place it on the table.
"emergency money." you stress and start to head off.
>you open the door and feel two sets of arms wrap around your waist.
"love you too, girls."
>you close the door and go to work.

>AJ begins rooting through the fridge or breakfast supplies for the rest of her sisters
"Have you noticed?" you ask AJ
>"Noticed what Twi?"
"How hard he's working lately, he doesn't eat with us anymore."
>"Well he's got a job."
"i just wish we didn't have to run the house."
>AJ stops fiddling around in the fridge and stares at nothing
>"You wish we didn't have to play Mom's roll."
"yeah." you say with a sigh

>your peace and quiet was broken a few minutes later by a very angry Rainbow dash from upstairs
>"AAAAH! PINKIE WHAT THE HELL ARE YOU DOING? FUCK OFF!?"
>If everyone else was asleep they sure won't be now.
>you and AJ chuckled
"I'm betting she splashed her with some water."
>"Nah, that was a scared shout, i'm guessing she was hiding something in her room."
>the stomping of a very angry sister is heard coming down the stairs and slams the kitchen door wide open.
>Rainbow is holding a large Fake plastic spider and a face of pure fury
>"Morning." AJ says in a sing-song voice, happy she guessed right
>"Whatever." Rainbow dash muttered. "where's Pops?"
"Gone"

>>29533720
>her angry face turns to one of annoyance.
>"Really, again? can't he even be bothered to wake us up anymore."
"Come on Dash, go easy on him." you say slightly annoyed at her attitude
>"We know you like to talk to Pa in the morning but he's busy lately with work." AJ tries to calm her down
>"besides." she continues "it seems like Pinkie is doing a fine job of getting you up early.
>she rolls her eyes
>"That stupid, stupid prank show of hers is going to be the death of me, you know what she did?"
>you both shake your heads
>"she placed this fake spider on my face then waited in the closet to record the whole thing."
>Dad would have loved to see that.
>Dad probably helped plan it.
>you'll ask him about that when he gets home.

>eventually everyone comes down to investigate the sweet smell of a freshly cooked breakfast
>it doesn't take long for everyone to start chatting about the day's plans or general gossip
>You get dressed and start heading out, meeting a few additional friends on the way to see this new movie
>you are tempted to use Dad's 'emergency money' to buy a few extra snacks
>Rarity wanted it too, but for more general shopping. thankfully you didn't, you where raised better than that

>to be perfectly honest you where all raised differently by the same man
>it was an interesting childhood to say the least
>you always demanded Pops to read you more each night, it fueled you love of books and study
>Fluttershy always wanted to play with cute cuddly things, you'll never forget her face when he bought her, her first pet
>Dash and Pinkie always goofed off and he let them
>AJ just wanted to help out all the time, she grew up helping with the cooking
>and Rarity, well she got away with murder always wanting to be the princess, she always got to ride on his shoulders, even when she got to big for him
>he's a good guy.

>the movie was awesome, everyone had fun
>seeing your other (non family) friends off, you head back home to find it empty

>>29533837
>Looking at the clock you can see it's 5:57pm
>Anon is normally home by now, you actually suspected to get a bit told off for being out all day when you all had homework to do.
>you especially with your grades
>Chalking it up to bad traffic you sit in the living-room with Dash, pinkie, Fluttershy and AJ as they start to play on the game console.
>some go-kart racing game you're not a fan of, you pull out the laptop and start reading news.
>it's now 7pm. your dad still isn't home
>you are now concerned
>so are your sisters.
>you've tried ringing him dozens of times. no reply
>"So what do we do Twilight?" Fluttershy asks
>your sisters turn to you for advice, technically you ARE the oldest, even if its by 2 minutes.
"It's probably nothing, maybe he went shopping and left his phone in the car."
>seems reasonable. your sisters nod in acceptance of this answer.
>It's now 9pm
>You've called Dad's work number, they told you he left at normal time, they couldn't get ahold of his work mobile either.
>Dash and Pinkie are sitting outside on the front step hoping he'll show up.
>Flutters is pacing, wearing a hole in the carpet.
>AJ went to the kitchen and started making you all some dinner.
>a car starts pulling up in your drive-way.
>in a brief moment your hopes are raised then dashed against the rocks
>it's a Police car
"Oh no." you say to yourself, somehow both Fluttershy and AJ heard you, Rarity comes down from upstairs
>only two figures get out the car
>your father isn't one of them
>you expected maybe he got really badly drunk and was arrested, that doesn't sound like his kind of thing.
>the two figures are both officers.
>you see them outside talking to Pinkie and Dash, before Pinkie heads back to the house
>"Twilight, they need to speak with us."
>she looks scared
>you are scared
>the two officers approach you.
>"Ms Twilight?" one says taking his hat off in respect
>"My name is officer Smith, we have unfortunate news about your Father Mr Anon."

>>29533972
worth continuing?
i wasn't planning anything.

>>29533979
>Leaving on a cliffhanger and asking if you should continue.
Of course you should, my zigger. NOW!

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>>29533979
Y U DO THIS THING

>>29533979
MOAR

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>>29534025
>>29534047
okay, wow. erm, guess i'll start then, check back in ten mins or so.
>>29534046
i'm confused, that a yes or no?

>>29533979
I stoped reading after your first two post, but you're a good writer. You're the writefag this thread needs, not a schmuck like me.

>>29533287
>>29533291
>>29533301
>>29533306
>>29533309
>>29533321
>>29533329
>>29533341
>>29533350
>>29533358
>>29533365
>>29533370
>>29533376
>>29533380
>>29533394
Sister Beans almost went through this.

It was a false alarm, but still...this hits home, and you're a good fucking writer. Pastebin PLEASE.

>>29534070
CONTINUE HORSEWORDS

>>29519285
>12:34
>“I-I’ll take it,” says Fluttershy.
>Sunset looks at her tall beverage(?), and then back over to her timid “sister”.
>“It’s a lot...you sure you can eat it all?” she asks cautiously.
>“I can take it,” she says, her gentle eyes making a sharp glance at you in the fraction of a second. “I can take it all…”
>Sunset, clueless as the others to their shy friend’s blatant innuendos, shrugs with not a care in the world, and passes her chocolate milk shake over.
>Fluttershy, however, doesn’t stop.
>She looks at the dot of red atop the mountain of white, whipped cream, and feigns discomfort.
“What is it now?” you ask, concealing your inner fear...amongst other things…
>In false guilt, she lets out an exaggerated sigh.
>“Oh, it’s n-nothing...I just, um, never liked cherries, is all...Could somebody eat it, please?”
>The other girls grimace.
>“I don’t like cherries either, if I’m to be honest,” admits Rarity. “You, Sunset?”
>Sunset Shimmer shakes her head ‘no’.
>“Nah. Me neither. What about you, Pinkie?”
>“...”
>The pink psycho-daughter remains silent, raising her brow.
>Rarity then gasp in recollection.

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>>29533972
Keep going.

>>29534141

Oh shit wow, thanks.

That means a lot coming from someone who regularly writefags. As opposed to me who only writefags occasionally.

>>29534094
ah man don't say that.
you're good too.

>>29533972
>Your heart stops dead, you go cold in a flash
>Flutters makes a single sob before she's choking back tears and falling on her knees
>the officer clearly sees you where antisipating the worst outcome and speaks in a much more calming voice
>"He's not dead." he states clearly getting the important things out first.
>you all sigh in relief, apart from Flutters who is still struggling to stay calm.
>"He IS however in critical condition at the hospital, as part of accident and emergancy we are to contact the next of kin, which would be you.
"what happens now?" you ask having caught your breath and calmed yourself down
>"do you have any other parent or guardian who can take you to see him?"
>Everyone looks uncomftable answering that, you are about to say no, when you think of something
"Auntie, Celestia. she can take us i'm sure of it."
>"can you contact her?" the officer asks
>"yeah, i'll go do that." rainbow says as she bolts inside and makes the call.
"what happened, is dad.. is he okay?"
>"like i said, he is in critical condition, that means he's currently not doing good, there is the possibility of permanant damage."
>you nodded in understanding
>you hoped the officer would be joking, like he'd throw his hat away and shout 'nah you've being punked kid, your fathers fine look here he is right now!'
>he didn't do those things.
>"Celestia is on her way right now." you hear Rainbow say from the house.
>"okay, that's one less problem." the officer says to himself and his partner.
>the other officer who had remained quiet up until now turns to AJ
>"in case, Celestia was it? can't take you all to see your father do you have anyone who can take care of you at home?"
>AJ turned to you.
>"I can, i'll make sure everyone is okay here."
"thanks AJ."
>you knew nobody wanted to stay but the officer is right, a car only has 4 seats after-all. or rather 3 because Celestia will be driving you
"who's going to go? you ask

>>29534301
>>29534141

Oh I almost forgot.

Here's the pastebin.

http://pastebin.com/u/PasserbyAnon

>>29534309
goddammit ma fucking spellcheck broke asdalldASDFKNASLDS

>>29534159
ok im not a native english seaker s allow me a question: Is eating a cherry an actual innuendo? i only know about popping the cherry

>>29534370
i'm afraid i'm not to sure either.
sorry beans, that's one flew over my head.

>>29534370
Fairly sure it is.
Giving him her cherry definitely is.

>>29534399
so it just means oral sex i guess?

op here
guys i might have a story
it is in realy bad english
and its my firsth real fan fic
it is something that has been haunting my mindscape for a few weeks now
but neever as clear as today
(my mindscape is the place were i lock away my contius mind this way my body and mind can funktion as 2 independent enteties)

i wont post it here (i wil make it a pastebin)
it consists of 2 stories that are intertwined
i realy would love feedback on it

http://pastebin.com/vQaBbCSL
http://pastebin.com/0sjbuRUS

>>29534309
I'm going to stop here for tonight

>>29534309
>>you knew nobody wanted to stay but the officer is right, a car only has 4 seats after-all. or rather 3 because Celestia will be driving you
The cops can drive the other kids though...

>>29534422
I thought about that, but my reasoning was that they are cops, they have other jobs to do rather than ferrying a bunch of kids to a hospital,
once the kids enter that car the police officers now become legal guadians for that trip,if anything happened, or if they needed to do their job for instance in the middle, they can't just kick them out onto the road to catch the baddies
they'll need to pack something for Anon anyway and won't want to wait around
PLUS They already have another guadian to collect them.

>>29534406
Fairly sure with 'Eating her Cherry', yes.
Giving him her Cherry/ Him taking her cherry/etc, no, that's a bit more.

>>29534463
i already knew what the later meant if not i wouldnt have picked up on the innuendo at all

>>29534418
anyone?
i realy love some critical readers

>>29534574
Part 1:
Change his name to something other than 'bob', that's generic as anything. Even just Robert would be better
The part where The Don's men are sent immediately to kill him is a bit abrupt, he has no reason to assume this guy is screwing him over or a reason to assume the 'Glowy portal thing' is him being screwed over.
Also various spelling mistakes I won't comment on because that's what googledocs is for.
This doesn't seem related to Thread topic either.

>>29534574
Spelling is the main issue, but I'm sure you know that already. I will say however that I needs a lot of work.

it feels REALLY rushed.
There is no flow, you need to keep the story pace equal and smooth instead of rushing straight to the good juicy parts.

Instead of going:
>"they did this, but I then this happened, but I then they went here. "

Next time include how they FELT about what was happening:
>"they did this, he felt angry that it had come down to this.
>" then this happened, he was surprised and heartbroken.
>" in desperation they went here.

Include their surroundings, and paint a picture of what we see from their perspective.
What noises do we hear, what smells linger in the air, what can we feel

>>29534574
Part 2 same problem with 'bob', sentence structure indicates you should read more English-language fiction and think about how those writer's do such and such a thing.
There is a fair story underneath it all, you just need more practice at writing and looking at the works of people who have made a career/etc out of such things might help.
You might want a more general writing thread in future, hopefully they help you instead of spazzing out about something minor.

>>29534370
Yes. It is. And I'm about to make a popping the cherry joke, too.

Originally I was gonna homage JoJo's Bizaree Adventure, but I haven't watched nor read that silly Vietnamese Children Show.

>>29534159
>12:35
>“Oh! Yes, of course! I-I forgot...she’s had an aversion to cherries ever since...an accident…”
>Pinkie nods sadly.
>“I’m sorry,” she says.
>...
>Fluttershy looks to you, knowing well enough of where this’d take her.
>“Anon?”
>Don’t you say it, bitch, don’t you fucking say it.
>“Um…”
>Oh shit, here it goes…
>“Anon? Would you like to take my cherry?”
>...
>Terror strikes deep into your heart, and anxiety wells up deep within your chest.
>She knew just what she was doing all along…
>You’re why-boner compells you to speak.
“...Uh, s-sure thing, honey. I’ll take your cherry for you.”
>“Thanks,” she says, practically purring.
>Help.

Op here
I know this was not the place for it
But you guys seem to be great story tellers and readers
Your input is great
I am gonna try to improve it
It is my first story ever
It's hard for my mind to put it on paper
But never the less
This Dutch guy is gonna try till it's acceptable

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>>29534789
>Dutch

>>29534443
Cops drive people all the time. Just last month I got mugged while drunk and they gave me a free ride back to my dorm.

>>29534420
Can't wait to read more

>>29534746
This ia great, good job

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>>29535310
That's nice.
Now show me on the doll where the officer touched you.

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>>29535310
you must live in an area where they aren't understaffed or you're loaded.
In my neck of the woods they won't drive you anywhere.
One of my friends went out on new years, stumbled out the club at 1am drugged up cause a guy spiked her drink. Could barely walk, completely broke.
Tried to get a ride to the nearest taxi station through a cop and they straight denied her.
She had to wait till she messaged the group chat and one of us got her an uber home.

>>29533394
>So Sunset is letting them harvest aborted fetus organs
>Female morality is magic

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>>29535926
>harvest aborted fetus organs
Wow, the scientific illiteracy of the general populace is astounding.
How did you pass highschool biology?

>>29535938
nice non argument

>>29535938
https://www.washingtonpost.com/politics/undercover-video-shows-planned-parenthood-exec-discussing-organ-harvesting/2015/07/14/ae330e34-2a4d-11e5-bd33-395c05608059_story.html?utm_term=.290ebf8ae203

Please go on about your sacred cow faggot

>>29535938
How about you state what they were doing in simple, clear words for them rather than
>lol, ur so stupid

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>>29535926
Fuck babbies. Parasites until they're through the birth canal, far as I'm concerned.

>>29535926
>>29535938
>>29535963
>>29536092

Can we not have an argument about abortion?

Either for or against them?

>>29536105
You see a story happening at the moment? An argument is a hell of a lot better than one random chode going "bump" every other hour.

>>29536422

Point. I suppose reposing another green might be in order.

>>29536459
Do it. I got nothing else for tonight.

>>29536528

Well alright then. I'm the same guy who wrote >>29533394

This one is short and doesn't involve the Mane Six though.

>Anon starts dating Principal Cinch, and they both genuinely like each other.
>His daughters on the other hand have an antagonistic relationship with her due to their own delinquent tendencies.
>Adagio, Aria, and Sonata make plans to sabotage their relationship before their father gets too invested in Cinch.

>>29536565
Aw, yiss. Do it man.

>>29536565
>>29536579

Okay for some reason every time I try to upload a post with a picture it fails. But with no picture it's fine. So no pictures.

>Be Adagio Dazzle
>"So when I finally find them after driving myself crazy looking for them throughout the store, they're in the toy aisle ripping open a bunch of stuff that I had to pay for of course. I was so angry with them I nearly bust open a blood vessel!"
>You snarl beneath your disguise as you watch your father and principal laugh with each other.
>Disgusting, you thought as you hid behind a tree as the two of them had a picnic in the local park.
>Then again, you only have yourself to blame for letting it get this far.
>You should have seen the signs earlier!
>Every joke, every admiring glance shared as they grew more acquainted with each other through your numerous punishments.
>And the flirting!
>You turn to look at your sisters, who had their own hiding place in the bushes nearby.
>It's time to end this.
>Pulling out your cellphone, you begin to text Sonata and Aria their orders.
>They were going to provide a suitable distraction, while you sabotaged their meal.
>You hit send.
>Aria looked away from Dad and Cinch's conversation at her own phone.
>She glanced at you, and you nodded.
>Showtime.
>Aria nodded and pulled up her disguise.
>She would pretend to be a thief, snatch Cinch's purse, then run away while Dad and the bitch chased after her.
>While they were away, you and Sonata would sabotage their food using the stuff you brought.
>Now, all you had to do is wait for the right moment to begin while they weren't paying attention....

>>29536582

>Be Aria Blaze
>And you really hoped Adagio's plan worked.
>You did NOT want to be forced to call your principal 'Mom'.
>Hiding in bushes sucks too, by the way. What with the branches poking into your side.
>But it would be worth it if this succeeded.
>You and the blue doofus were positioned a few meters right behind Dad and Cinch.
>This moment would be perfect.
>"Hey, Aria?" Sonata whispers.
>If it weren't for your 'partner'.
>"I know we're trying to get Dad to break up with Cinch, but I've been thinking-"
"Shocker."
>She glared at you.
>"I'm serious." she hissed lowly.
"Fine. What?"
>"Cinch might be mean, but I think she and Dad would make cute kids if they got married." she whispered.
>WHAT?
>You shudder at the thought of it.
>"Plus, I'm tired of being the youngest. Y'know? I want to see what it's like to be the older sister for once."
>You facepalmed.
"Just... stop, so I can focus."
>You turn your attention back to Dad and Cinch.
>"So, you have any interesting stories?" your dad asks.
>Cinch smirks, "Have I told you about the time I had a student hit on me?"
>"Do tell."
>Huh. With the semi-casual clothes and relaxed demeanor, Cinch actually doesn't come off as a huge cunt for once.
>That's when you see your opening.
>You pat Sonata on the shoulder and whisper.
"Stay here, I'm about to go."
>She nods.
>Slowly but surely, you stand up and begin to creep up onto the two while their backs are turned.
>Slowly...
>Slowly...
>Slowly...
>You reach for Cinch's purse and-!
>*YOINK!*
>You make a break for it!
>"HEY!" you hear Dad and Cinch shout in surprise from behind you.
>You hear Dad's footsteps trailing behind you as you run, with Cinch not far behind by the sounds of it.
>They wouldn't be able to catch you though.
>You were in the top two of the track team, second only to that bitch Indigo Zap, for a reason.

>>29536591
>Be Adagio Dazzle again.
>You grin maliciously as you watch Dad and Cinch race off to catch Aria.
>Leaving the rest of their stuff unattended.
"Sonata, let's go!"
>"Got it!" your blue-haired sister pops up out of the bushes.
>The two of you go over to the picnic basket.
>You reach into your pocket to pull out what you brought.
"Sorry, Dad. I want you happy, just not with her."
>Your pour a single laxative caplet into Cinch's drink, which quickly dissolves.
>Then you take out spice powder, and sprinkle a bit on her food.
>You knew Cinch liked spicy foods. Let's see how she likes this...
>""Hey, Dagi?"
"What is it?"
>You looked up to see Sonata with a conflicted expression on her face.
>Oh not this shit again.
>"Are you sure this is right? Maybe having Cinch as a stepmom wouldn't be so bad?"
>You snort.
"Sonata, just no. It would be like having a drill sergeant living with us."
>"But it looks like she makes Dad really happy..."
"I'm sure he'll find someone else who makes him happier with enough time."
>Maybe even someone like Mom...
>"I guess."
>You go back to your work, but what Sonata said sticks in your mind a bit.
>What if it really wouldn't be that bad? Sure, Cinch would definitely be really anal about you getting your stuff done but if she makes Dad happy...
>But dealing with her at home in addition to seeing her at school just sounds like such a hassle.
>"Adagio."
>No, you were right. This had to be done. Cinch was bad for Dad. You knew Mom would hate her if she was still alive today.
>"Adagio!"
>It's like Dad told you when you broke up with your last boyfriend, there are plenty of fish in the sea. He'd be sad for a while, but you're sure he'd find someone better for him.
>"ADAGIO DAZZLE!"
>You jump as you finally register someone calling your name.
>You look up to see Sonata looking like a deer caught in headlights.
>You feel a poke on your shoulder.
>"Ahem."
>You freeze, and slowly turn around.

>>29536603

>You see Dad with a decidedly not amused expression on his face, holding an embarrassed Aria.
>Cinch stands right next to him, glaring at you with her arms folded.
"H-Hi, Dad?"
>He says nothing, just continuing to glare at you.
>You quickly turn your gaze to Aria.
"What happened to 'they would never catch you'?!"
>Aria scratched the back of her head.
>"Yeah.... I tripped on a rock and they caught me."
>You get a sinking feeling in the pit of your stomach.
>"Six months. No computer, no allowance, no phone, no going out with your friends. You're going to do extra chores around the house. You are GROUNDED, missy." Dad snarled.
>You summarize your current situation with the only word that fits.
"Fuck."
>"Make that seven months."
>Shit
>THE END.

And that's it.

>>29536617

The picture I meant to post was:

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>>29536630
Adorable

>>29536617
>6 fucking months
that's a bit much.
you can't ground a group of highschoolers to not go out and interact socially.
That's the age where both your body and mind crave social interaction. Like, you need that shit to stay healthy and not end up as the weird kid who everyone makes fun of.
Friends are important.
That aside good story lmao just my two cents.

>>29536684

Eh, no problem.

>>29535850
Out of curiosity, what country are you in? I'm from Calgary, Canada, and it was a particularly bad part of town, so maybe it's just a difference in the responsibilities between police from different nations.

>>29536839
Scotland.
I assume you can deduce the rest.

I'm really not showcasing my country well here, lmao.
Kinda bugs me when foreigners instantly assume we're all viking brutes, but I can't say it's totally false.

>>29536865
Brutish vikings is the last thing I think of when thinking of the Scottish. You guys are more famous for sheep shagging, alcoholism and being notoriously left wing.

>>29536899
The welsh are the sheep shaggers.
Also those fucks up in Aberdeen but everyone not from Aberdeen equates it and fucking Innsmouth cause of how shite it is.
Alcoholism is bad, true. Can't buy booze after ten in shops.
Not really sure about the left thing. If thinking healthcare, schooling, and transport should be public goods makes you 'notoriously left' then aye.

>>29536926
The Scottish ridings in the Brexit vote and Independence Referendum make me think you're all left. You guys make it a point to avoid freedom like the plague

>>29536963
Shows how much you know about our economic situation, but alright.
It isn't about 'muh freeduhm'
I fuckin' live here and there's still a shitton of nuance behind it I've yet to grasp.
But I doubt I could convince you on 4chan so w/e.

Besides, ain't Canada just as left considering daddy Trudeau's in office?
Stones in glass houses and all.

New to this so feel free to say its shit

>"Daaaaaaaad Appejack is hogging the bathroom again!" Rarity yells from across the hall
>It was a Saturday morning and that meant one thing for rarity. Shopping day.
"Rarity you can afford to be patient. It's that or you would be complaining about her farm smell all day"
>Rarity started to say something but decided against it she knew her father was right after all. She instead headed for her room to plan on what to buy.
>"Hey dad whats for breakfast?" Rainbow Dash had just entered the kitchen which came as a suprise to you given how much she sleeps on the weekends.
"If you get pinkie for me we can have the works. You know how good she is with pancakes."
>Dash's face lit up as she raced down the hall to get her sister.
>"Father would you mind taking me to the library today? There are some new books in that I would really like to check out."
>Twilight's addiction to reading seemed a bit unhealthy but you figured that maybe she would get a big time job and eventually support you so you always spoiled her when it came to learning.
"Sure thing sweetie just don't forget you can't take spike with you anymore." you leaned in and kissed her forehead as she walked by.
>Twilight just sighed at this "Yes father I remember you made me work at the library doing whatever they wanted for a month after he peed on the librarian."
>Truth be told when it happened you couldn't control your laughter. He only peed on her because she yelled at twilight for sneezing. Old bitch
>Rainbow dash returned followed by Pinkie pie "Oh come on dad THAT was funny! I mean did you see the look on her face as he did it? PRICELESS!" rainbow started laughing at the thought
>"Morning daddy so we doing the weekend feast today?"
>Pinkie came in wearing her apron and ready to go. You knew she meant business.
"Yeah I figured we would have the works today. I will get the eggs, bacon, sausage, and potatoes if you get the pancakes and fruit all prepped."

>Pinkie started working as applejack entered the room now finished with her shower
>"FIIIIINALLY i've been waiting for hours!" you hear rarity say as she closed the bathroom door
>Applejack tossed a mean look her way "Well 'scuse me! Not like ah didn't work extra at the farm yesterday or nuthin."
"You two have to make some sort of agreement about the bathroom situation at some point you know." You say as you wave a fork at her
>"Ah know dad it's just so hard with her sometimes. Ah just don't feel like she understands how hard ah work."
>You turn to give her hug. She wrapped her arms lightly around you as you did.
"Listen I understand how hard you work ever since my accident you've put in more effort than ever"
>Her grip tightened slightly after you said that. Maybe you shouldn't have brought that up they don't seem to be quite over it yet.
"You have to understand she works hard in her own way as well. It takes patience and alot of knowledge to do well in the fashion world."
>"Yeah Applejack She may not be working as hard physically, but she works just as hard as anyone to make her dreams come true" twilight pitched in
>Applejack kinda looked at Twilight with a sad expression "Yeah your right sugarcube. Ah should be givin her more credit."
>"Dad are you TRYING to ruin breakfast?!" Rainbow said loudly you turned and realized some of the bacon is getting a little to crispy
>"No way! You know i love the crispy ones dashie!" pinkie says as she juggles a burning peice of bacon
"Hey... Wheres Fluttershy? She usually doesn't sleep this late." You say while tending the bacon and sausage a bit more carefully
>"Oh she said something bout helpin the Zoo early today" Applejack said as she set the table
"I wish she would tell me when she is going to do that. It kinda worries me when she is there, but at least i'll know where she is."

>"Well it's fine she should be back soon anyway." Twilight stated without putting her book down
"Almost ready on the pancakes sweetie?" You toss a glance over at pinkie who now has a huge stack of pancakes
>"MHMM! All set and ready to go!" she says as she saltues you
"DIIIIIIISSSSMISSED PRIVATE PINKIE!" you say chiming into her joke
>Fluttershy enters the dining room "Oh, hello everyone" she says quietly stifling a yawn.
"What happened at the zoo this time?" you say rather dryly annoyed that she didn't tell you
>"Harry was throwing a little fit because he lost his sleeping bear."
"He lost his ... Sleeping bear? Did he need his blankey too?" you say jokingly as she sits at the table
>"He is a very sensitive bear who just happens to be afraid of the dark."
>"Oh come on already I'm starving dad!" Rainbow states impatiently
>You bring all the food to the table and everyone, excluding rarity, starts to chow down.
>"Well you could have at least waited for me!" rarity says now finally prim and proper to her liking
>"Hey I was hungry!" dash says mouth half full. You shoot her a glance and she immediately chews and swallows knowing what you meant by it.
>As breakfast came to its end you knew it was time to get everyone to where they wanted to be.
>Pinkie to Sugarcube corner, Fluttershy to the animal shelter, twilight for her books, and the rest with you to the mall.
"Alright everyone we ready to go?" You grab the keys and they race out in front of you.


Thats all for now

>>29537096
Meh

>>29536630
nice picture

>>29537096
I really like it so far.
Check you capitalization and punctuation.

>>29538153
Super bump

>>29518029

>10

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Post hips to respawn Beans.

>>29541538
Did somebody say hips?

>>29534746
>12:40
>After being creeped out by weird daughter Shy of Flutter, your bladder cried.
>Getting out of the booth was a bitch.
>But, like, hey, at least you get to pee now, right?
>So, yeah, just gonna go to the Men’s room…

>12:41
>You enter the men’s room, the smell of bleach bringing back lovely memories from your childhood.
>Not a damn soul’s in this here restroom, and ain’t no mother fucker is using a stall or urinal…
>You grin.
>You’re gonna take dat handicap stall.
>Oh, you so baaad…
>Upon opening the stall, you see the toilet’s cleaner than Rainbow Dash’s language, and the seat shines brightly in the fluorescent lighting of bathroom-valhalla.
>You proceed with the ritual.
>Unbuckle the belt.
>Pull down yo pants.
>Then yo Godzilla undies.
>Then, you seat your sweet ass down on that nice toilet seat.
“Heh.”
>You hear that?
>That was you laughing because you’re taking up the stall when you only need to pee.
>You, Anon, are a bad, bad boy…
>With pride and power, you unleash a stream of piss furiously.
>...
>But you don’t aim the stream into the water, because that’s too noisy.
>...
>You let out several stray farts.
>If your daughters saw this demented side of you, surely they’d be repulsed…

>>29541595
>>You enter the men's room, the smell of bleach bringing back lovely memories from your childhood.
Kek, Is this a Bean's reference?

>>29541651
a what?

>>29541651
No. Sorry to get your hopes up.

>>29537079
>>29537085
>>29537096

As you drive you hear pinkie rambling on about something a customer did as the girls laugh. All except for Applejack who just stares out the window with a sad look on her face.
>You can tell what it is and you know it's your fault. You just don't think you can get her to stop thinking about it.
>"My dear Applejack whats wrong darling?" rarity says as she leans closer to her sister.
>"Hmm? Ahm just thinking about... that." you didn't look back but you could tell she was looking at you when she said it.
>The whole car went quiet after she said that. "Listen girls I'm fine now. That's all that matters right?"
>"NO IT AIN'T ALL THAT MATTERS!" Applejack exploded slamming her fist into the care seat "AH THOUGHT.... ah thought..." she trailed off and you could tell she was about to cry
>You decided to pull over so you could face them and talk.
"Look, girls, I don't regret what I did, But you shouldn't blame yourselves in the slightest for what happened."
>"We thought we were going to lose you daddy" Pinkie said quietly
>"If we had just been a bit more careful..." Rarity started
>"NO RARITY IT WAS ALL THAT JERKS FAULT!" Rainbow started to yell
>Fluttershy curled up in her seat hugging her legs and hiding her face.
"Rainbow Dash! Do not yell at your sister like that!" You said pointing your finger
>"She's not wrong dad." Twilight chimed in. It was odd to hear her say DAD she usually just said father.
"I would never leave you alone, but don't expect me to sit idly by when I see my girls lives at stake. I love you all more than life itself and ANYONE who threatens you has a bad day coming for them." You started to tear up as well.

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>>29542267
last line made me think of sans

>>29542267
>"Yeah well same goes for us! That jerk put you in the hospital! He's lucky i never got my hands on him myself!" rainbow started in
>"Yeah ah would've liked ta give him a piece of my mind mahself" Applejack responded
>"Yes well, a proper lady does not usually partake in such vulgarity, but nobody messes with my dad." It was like you gathered a mob. You felt rather glad they didn't get to the poor guy.
"When I dropped you off for school that day I don't think anyone was ready."
>You started to think back to that day. You had just dropped the kids off in the parking lot across the street from the school.
>They had started to cross the street and you were about to pull away when you heard the crossing gaurd shout
>You had looked over and a car was going incredibly fast. They were never gonna stop before they hit your daughters so you did the only thing you could think of. They slammed their breaks and you drove in front of them to try and stop them.
>The next thing you remember was the hospital and seeing all six of your children safe and sound but crying. The sight both broke your heart and made you overflow with joy.
>The next few weeks had been you stuck to that hospital bed. You had never been really lonely though as at least one of your kids seemed to stick around .
>Of course you had been punished by Fluttershy when she realized you were calling in nurse redheart for no good reason. Who could blame you? HEEEELLOOOOOOO NURSE!

Might be back later on tonight but this is it for now.

>>29541690
BEANS BUMP

>>29518029
Can someone post the bikini version of that OP'
s pic? I saw this on humanozed/equestria girls thread

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I'm back folks!
>says the insane man to a room full of people who don't care

>>29534094
>"who's going to go?" you ask
Who is going to see papa Anon in the hospital first?

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>>29544180
Pinkie because she is the best make it so.

>>29534309
>in the end you decided that Pinkie, Fluttershy and yourself would go to see Anon
>mostly to ease Fluttershy's weak heart
>the police officers departed and not long after Auntie Celestia arrived
>she wasn't you actual auntie but she sure loved your little family enough to be considered part of it.
>the trip was almost completely silent with only the occasional sniffle from Fluttershy in the back seat.
>you pulled into the hospital carpark and wanted to sprint inside feeling a wave of worry suddenly come over you
>this may be a place of healing and respite but nobody wants to really come here, in the back of your mind you start to think about how many people entered it's doors and never walked out
>you stop yourself before you think about whether your father will be one of those people
>Pinkie senses your unease and lays a soft hand on your shoulder
>you nod, steeling yourself and placing one foot down in the entrance of it's sterile polished floors
>your auntie approaches the receptionist.
>"we are looking for Mr A, Anon. He should be here?"
>they talk while she pulls up his fills and answer some basic legal questions.
>"Ah, here we go, Anon is in room 207 on the second floor ICU, which is just through that door and up the elevator, can't miss it."
>you and your two sisters are already pressing the button waiting
>second floor.
>room 207.
>this is it
>you turn the corner and enter into a pristine white room that has an overpowering smell of disinfectant and ethenol.
>on one of the two beds that sit inside, one is a middle aged looking women with some quite intense looking burns on her chest surrounded by several 'get well soon' cards.
>the other is your father
>he is lying on the bed looking a complete mess
>bandaged limbs, IV Pack, blood bags, bloodstained clothes and a heart monitor
>you gasp at the sight
>Flutters hybrid runs up to him and tries to wrap her arms around him but can't
>she doesn't want to hurt him more

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>>29544374
>Flutters hybrid
This fucking auto correct, I swear to god.

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>>29544374
>Flutters hybrid
What did he mean by this?

>>29544398
My auto correct fucked up.

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>>29544374
>Flutters hybrid runs up to him and tries to wrap her arms around him but can't.
Jesus Christ.

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>>29544374
Someone please do an edit with a hybrid electric car with Fluttershy's QTmark on it careening towards an anon in a hospital bad

>>29544440
>hospital bad
Shit, Icarus's autocorrect fuck ups are spreading.

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>>29544425
>FLUTTERS HYBRID SKITTERS OVER TO HER GENE FATHER AND ATTEMPTS TO COIL HER IN A PAIR OF HER MANY ARMS BUT SHE CANNOT

Fucking hell.
What is wrong with me

>>29544444
yadda yadda, wasted digits, etc etc

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>>29544455

>human
End your fucking lives

>>29544440
Kek, I was thinking about The Thing's facehugger with Flutter's qt mark.

>>29544463
>Hybrids
FTFY

>>29544374
>she settles for collapsing on her knees and resting her head on his mattress as she begins to cry
>Pinkie doesn't look too happy either
>Your father isn't awake and from a brief glance you can tell he suffered a lot of pain.
>maybe it's best to let him sleep, you turn to pinkie
"I'm going to go phone home, let them know we have arrived, if a doctor comes please call me."
>pinkie doesn't make a joke, she doesn't laugh she just mutters "okay" under her breath
>you whip out your mobile
>before the first ring even finishes you hear Dash pick up
>"HELLO?"
"Dash it's me, we found dad he's okay. "
>he really isn't
>"Have the doctors said anything?" she asks
"We haven't seen one yet, we only just this moment arrived."
>"tssk, well what do you think?"
"I think he needs his rest, there are a lo-"
>you cut yourself off wondering if you should tell them how extensive your father's injuries are.
>you decide against it and deftly change the subject
"- a lot of things to do right now"
>smooth as sandpaper
>"like what? "
"he'll need a change of clothes for a start, hmm.. His boss will have to be informed too and the insurance company will need to be called I think."
>"Darling, Can we leave that to you?" you hear Rarity say over the phone
"Hello Rarity, yeah I can do that... I think. "
>you see a doctor walk in the room and then Pinkie starts to wave at you to come over.
" Listen girls I got to go, I love you all and I'll speak to you all in a few minutes."
>you hear a chorus of 'bye' before you disconnect and head back in the room
>the doctor is waiting for you before he begins

>he starts to list off multiple injuries your father suffered in his car crash
>broken bones, fractures, severed muscle, glass embedded in his body and life threatening blood loss
>"He's lucky to be alive."
>"Is their anything we can do?" Fluttershy asks
>"No, unfortunately we don't know if he'll wake up soon either, his injuries you must understand where horrendous, he needs his sleep."

>>29544450
> Flutter Hybrid is still good daughter
> Takes care of animals with her many limbs
> Prepares dinner quickly
> Stops muggers with her paralyzing stare
> Flutters best Hybrid

>>29544785
>While it is unsettling at times to watch her eat, what with her 18 rows of razor sharp teeth scraping together as flayed food falls from her gaping maw, you still love her.
>At the end of the day, she just wants to help out.
>And it's not like she isn't stunning at some things.
>The full 270 degree rotation she possesses on each of her many segmented arms enables her to work wonders when cleaning the house.
>Other parents give you funny looks when you drop her off at school sometimes, but she's learned to pay them no mind.
>She's grown up into a fine woman, and while she still gets nervous in social situations, you couldn't be prouder.
>Fluttershy is your little hybrid, and she always will be.

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>>29544828
>Flutter hybrid always tries to be the best hybrid
>always Washing the scales behind her heartbeat sensors
>always eats her vegetables before snacking on anybody who falls into her acid web pit
>she even cleans her lair on her own
>truly you are blessed to have Flutter hybrid

>>29544562
I hadn't even noticed your earlier posts, but it seems like we had a similar idea when writing. Now I don't even know if I should continue or leave it to you lol.

>>29545914
Up to you.

both of you please keep writing

>>29542442
>Truth be told it was after you were supposed to be able to be out of bed that things took a turn.
>The first time you tried to stand at the doctors request you found you really couldn't easily do it. Luckily your kids weren't in the room at that exact time so they couldn't worry even more initially.
>"After some scans it seems your leg suffered some permanent nerve damage. We couldn't catch it initally due to the extensive damage your lower left half had sustained."
>"You will have a limp for the rest of your life but shouldn't need a walking aid for a few years."
"I work a farm doing all sorts of lifting though! How am i gonna be able to work if i can't even walk well?" You say somewhat exasperated
>"You won't be able to do that kind of job. This kind of damage will render you unable to bear alot of extra weight or any kind of pushing of heavy objects." He starts looking over his papers
>"If you work on private land you own then I am sorry but you will have to get someone to fill your shoes. You can always manage the... farm was it? Just oversee that the work is getting done right and work on finaces."
>Your fist started to shake. You knew that granny smith had wanted to keep that farm in the family. It had taken a lot of time and trust for her to allow you to help when Applejacks real parents had died. She was just a little girl and Granny smith and big mac could not handle that on their own.
"Well thanks for giving it to me straight doc. I need to speak to my daughters if you don't mind letting them in." He nodded his head and exited the room with the girls entering shortly after.

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>>29518029
I-is this gonna get lewd?

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>>29545914
Mate.
Please write, I enjoy reading good green
Mine is trash
See pic related

>>29546093
>You started to open your mouth, but the words just didn't want to come out.
>"Well dad is it bad?" Applejack was the first to speak
>You just nodded slightly "What? How bad could it be? I mean you are my dad after all. I don't see a little car wreck keeping you down!" Dash said with a nervous chuckle.
>"I'm sure whatever is wrong we can help you out." Fluttershy said hold her hands to her chest. You knew that was her sign of both compassion and concern.
"The doctor said I will never walk normally again. I will have a limp for as long as I live. That means I can't help out on the farm as much anymore." You felt your head hang in shame as you spoke
>"Aww shucks big mac and I can handle the farm no problem" Apllejack tried to sound like it wasn't a big deal, but you knew how much there was to do.
>"Father just focus on your health. We can do more around the house if you really need it." as Twilight said that you could feel yourself getting frustrated
>"Yea daddy I can do more of the cooking" Pinkie excitedly said
>"I can help with the cleaning" from both fluttershy and Twilight
>"I can take care of the backyard" Rainbow said trying to sound much more excited than you knew she actually was.
>"I can help with finances dad, afterall it shouldn't be too hard with the luxorious ensembles I can weave." NO thats the line. It has been drawn you are about to burst.
"EVERYONE STOP!" You yell out of nowhere. Their mouths are slack jawed so you know they were caught by suprise.
"I fully appreciate all the support but it's just a limp. I can still cook and clean. Rarity I don't want you to make dresses just to help out with finances you have a life to live yourself."
>You feel better but there were still things you needed to adress so you take a deep breath

Nothing from me tonight, you all. I'm sorry. It was a bad day.

>>29546291
Dangit beans now Icarus and I have to work extra hard tonight. :P It's ok though I do love your greens

>>29546249
"Applejack I am going to talk to granny smith about what I can do to help. If she says nothing then I am going to get you help. I don't know where from. I don't know when, but you and your big brother already have your hands full as is. You also have school to attend." you watch her closely and notice her hands are balled into fists.
>"DANGIT DAD JUST LET US DO THIS!" She exploded "You can't expect us to not try to help out after..." She dropped to her knees and started to cry.
>Flutershy knelt beside her hugging her trying to comfort her. You knew they were all hurting. They almost lost you and you almost lost them.
>"I also get money from the cakes. I wouldn't mind giving some up for the most super awesome daddy ever!" Pinkie says
"Girls I can manage I assure you. I want to grow old and watch you all succeed in life. Following your own paths and fighting the good fight. All I EVER ask is that you follow what is right in your hearts. Learn from both my mistakes and my successes."
>They all gather around for a tight hug. Thankfully you are in good shape considering how bad the crash could have been.
"I love you all so much. Do not EVER forget that. I would dive in front of that car an eternity over if it meant your safety." A single tear fell from your cheek
>"Ugh daaad so sappy" You hear Dash say.
>The girls started laughing while crying.
>You cut back to the here and now.


Good stopping point for now be back later.

>>29544562
>For the first time in your life you where at a loss of what to do
>it's almost 11pm, Fluttershy, Pinkie and yourself haven't eaten anything since after your day at the movies.
>your father is lying in a hospital bed in critical condition and if it wasn't for Auntie Celestia you still wouldn't have seen him yet
>You walk out the room and let yourself think
>what would your father do in this situation.
>you know exactly what he'd do
>he'd slap himself for being so stupid and then make sure you where all looked after.
"Food" you decide is a good starting point
>you can't do anything here, not until he wakes up and you have other family members to look after first.
>you phone home again, your call isn't instantly answered which must mean someone isn't panicking by the phone.
>AJ picks up
>"Hello?"
"AJ hi, I've spoken with the doctor and learnt what happened."
>There is a long pause before she speaks again, and there is no hint of humour in her voice only regret
>"How bad?"
"It's bad AJ, but he'll live. He'll make it. "
>you can imagine her nodding in agreement on the other end before muffled voices start asking questions
>"Okay I'll ask... Twi?"
"Yeah"
>"What happens now, are you staying there cause Rainbow says she can run some blankets and sheets over to you."
"We can't stay, I'm going to get the girls back home and we can sort this out tomorrow morning."
>"Have you eaten yet?"
"No."
>" Okay I'll put some grub on when you come home, see you soon."
>you where about to put the phone down when you hear more noise on the other end
>"Rarity and Dash say to give pops a hug from all of us, let him know we are thinking about him. "
>you say goodbye and go back inside
>Pinkie heard your call
>"we going back home?" she says unsure
"we can't stay through the night, we can deal with this tomorrow after we have had some food and got SOME rest."
>"I'm not hungry." she says looking down at her feet.
"I know, neither am i. Fluttershy?"
>her eyes are bloodshot red

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>>29546338
So comfy.

So many good stories, keep going writegag, you're doing a good job

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>>29546471
Pretty good so far

>You start to drive again now that the emotional stuff is out of the way
>You drop Pinkie, Fluttershy, and Twilight off at the corner by the school. The school was in a prime location you thought to yourself.
>"Ok daddy I'm off to sugarcube corner! I'll be sure to bring back some sweets for tonight!" pinkie says at she skips off
>Fluttershy just gives you a quick hug and whispers in your ear "I love you daddy." you give her a kiss on the forehead and hug back just before she exits the car.
>"I will see you later this evening father." Twilight said rather coldly. She tends to shut herself off when she feels hurt or sad.
"You girls be safe now!" You yell out the window of your car. They just wave in return.
>"Alright dad lets hit it!" Dash says excitedly ready to get new equipment
"Hold your horses Dash i want to make sure they cross safely." You found yourself saying that without really thinking. You hope it wasn't insensitive to say that.
>"Look they're fine dad" Rarity pointed out. These girls, always so impatient.
"Alright alright we're going." You pull away from the corner and make your way to the mall
>"Alright dad ahm just gonna head over to the Supply store just next door and pick up things we need at the farm." Applejack said tipping her hat before seeing herself off.
>As you follow Rarity and Dash through the store you get to the point where each have a store they can enter. Dash wants to go to the sports store and rarity to a women's clothing store.


This is where i start branching off a little. So i will let you decide what turn the story takes. Should we go to the store with Rainbow dash or with Rarity.

>>29548222
Forgot to add you can ask questions about the "difference in choice" here before voting

>>29548222
Voting for Rarararararararararararararara

>>29548262
?

>>29548222
Maybe Rainbow Dash but what exactly IS the difference between the two? would it turn into an different story depending on our choice?

>>29548821
Yes i have decided to take a turn in my story and make it more... lewd.

>>29548821
>>29548447
Since so far i have a 1-1 tie i will start writing up both sides so at least i have them if things get settled on who is gonna be our first interest.

>>29548222
"I think I'll go with Dash on this one. I need to buy some stuff to keep at least some of my body in shape now."
>"Ok daddy I think I will check out this store first then." She pointed towards a fabric shop
>You head into the store with Rainbow Dash as she immediately checks out sports leggings. You didn't like her in those. Not because she didn't look good mind you, but because you know all the other boys stare.
>"Here dad can you hold these for me?" She hands you a set of different leggings she likes and checks the rest real quick
>"Alright I'm gonna go try these bad boys out!" she grabs them and heads into the changing room.
>You wait for a couple minutes and she comes out wearing some really tight looking blue leggings. They almost perfectly match her skin color making your jaw drop.
>"Well i can see you think I look good in them." She giggled a little "Now for the real test!" She starts doing leg stretches in them. Probably to make sure they are form fitting enough they don't rip.
>You swear she is doing this on purpose, but when she goes to touch her toes she faces her nice toned ass your way giving you a perfect veiw.
>"Yep i'd say these will work!" You turn your head before she looks at you.
"Yeah if thats what you want sweetie." You kinda clear your throat a little.
>A couple of guys walk up to the two of you and shove you out of the way.
>"Hey there cutie. How about you and I get together for some fun." This guy was obviously a dirt bag.
>"No thanks creep." Rainbow says as she tries to walk past him to get to you.
>The guy grabbed her by the arm "Look you might want to consider what you are saying to other people. Especially when you are over here showing off that fine ass in the middle of public.
>You stand up grab the guy by his shoulder to turn him around and hit him sqaure in the nose.
"Listen carefully here punk cuz I'm only gonna say this once." He was on the floor at this point and you started to kneel over him.

>>29549215
"You touch my little girl again and you won't just have to worry about a broken nose." You step on his dick hard and turn to his friend.
"Same goes for you." The guy just put his hands up and backed off
>"Wow dad you really showed them. That was kind of heroic actually and you know.... Heroes deserve a reward." She said with a sly look in her face.
She pulls you into the changing room before you can even think about what just happened.
"Rainbow what are?!" You get cut off as she pulls you in for a deep passionate kiss
>Oh god. You've done it now. This is your little Dashie. You've raised her since she was just a little girl.
>She reaches a hand down to rub your crotch as she keeps assaulting your face with hers.
>Don't get hard. Don't get hard! you think to yourself.
>"Now lets see what daddy's packing." Rainbow dash knelt down and started to undo your pants.
"Rainbow don't! I'm your dad we can't do this!" You say in protest, but your flagpole had something else to say entirely.
>"Yeah? That why you're so hard right now?" She starts to grip your shaft and rub up and down
>"You know I didn't expect it to be so big and juicy!" She started to lick the undeside of your head.
"O-oh god.." You fling your head up as she works on you. It feels like magic, but you shouldn't let it go on.
>She stands up and turns her ass towards you and hot dogs you with the leggings still on.
>"You feel that daddy? I work really hard to keep this ass in shape. So... How does it feel?"
"It feels heavenly" You said without thinking.
>You grab the top of the leggings and pull them down finally fed up with being so pent up all the time.
>"Thats it daddy. Take whats yours." She moves her panties aside for you, but your not ready yet.
>You decide to tease her a little first rubbing your head along the folds of her tight small snatch. "Is this what you want?"
>She moans a little but turns her head and doesn't answer.
"You have to tell me what you want dashie" You whisper in her ear

>>29549215
Negro you're going 0 to 10000 sonics per second. Just saying.

>>29549358
Yea maybe you are right. Just wanted to spice it up to see if i could though. ah well can always go back to the drawing board if its not what we want.

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>>29549315
YES

>>29549397
It is a bit fast with
>You saved me,
>I fuk u now
No I dad, no fuk
>U got big Cok
We fuk naow
> *Is sex*

Huh, so this is where to went. Was wondering what greens were being made by you since death of LST. Good work Beans.

>>29549315
.........go on

>>29550254
Unfortunately this was a fling. I am sad to say but I got bored of the whole thing. Sorry guys!

>>29550315
doh, alright. Well thanks for the story

>>29549315
Um... It is happening too fast. This is not how you write an erotic scenes. Drag it longer by describing every little action in detail, to give our juices get our pants wet trough undies. The best indications of a job well done if you yourself getting so hot while writing this you must contain yourself from faping session.

and then you just blueball everyone by leaving

>>29549315
>>29550383
Also, your earlier scenes were quite good but it seemed towards the end you were rushing as quickly as you could towards the
>Rainbow dash is okay with sexing her father and they do so
rather than telling the story. Slow down and discribe their movements/etc but it should have taken a few more encounters to go from 'dash is my daughter' to 'dash is my sexy daughter' to 'dash is my sexy daughter who wants to fuck me/etc', maybe involving the others as well slowly moving him towards such things.
Also, Thugs suddenly appear and harass the girl before the MC beats them up to look like a hero to the girl before they disappear forever is a overused storytelling tool cause by the previously mention 'race to fap'.

>>29550511
It was quite rushed. My mindset when writing it wasn't where my mindset was writing the earlier plot.
I was not having the best of times with what was happening around me as i tried to write and my frustration made me want to just finish at that moment and go. Instead of actually taking time on it or just not posting.

As i said before i apologize, but I am done. I may do something else at another point or pick up to back before i ruined myself. This was a total acting before thinking problem, but thank you all for the input all the same.

>>29550554
It's okay, such things happen. Experience for the future I guess.

Let us see how this will go, yeah?

>Be Anon
>Single father of six teenagers
>Yes, six
>Not biologically, of course
>Your late wife (bless her soul) discovered she was barren
>In a attempt to fill the void, she adopted a little girl named Twilight Sparkle
>Soon she had a sister, Rainbow Dash
>And another.....
>And then few more because the magic number is six
>You wish you saw the signs earlier
>Police said her death was accidental but you were never sure
>The good thing was the massive lawsuit against that bus company
>"Stop it....they will be expecting you soon"
>Listening to the voice in you head, you shake away the bad thoughts
>Almost time to pick them up from school
>Keys, wallet, phone
>Looks like you got everything
>Out the front door and into your slightly dated SUV
>You start the car and back out of your driveway
>Objective: Acquire daughters

By the way, I'm a degenerate so I'm gonna [/spoiler]try to make this lewd.

>>29550796
Aaand already off to a retarded start.

Fuck.

>>29550796
Is he psychic? That would likely screw things up making this more about Psychic Anon than '6 times the fun.' unless you were able to direct the story well.
Same with 'Ghost wife'.
People would probably prefer blood relation incest rather than technical adoptive incest.

>>29550796
Oh my god. This sounds like the joke that used to be in /MLB/ about anon having six different wives having the name six as biological kids but every wife got hit and killed by the same bus. That's legit what this made me think of even though it's stated one wife and adopted kids

>>29550828

No, he's not psychic. He was just trying to tell himself to get rid of those bad thoughts. I was trying to be witty but it didn't work, he does not have actual voices in his head or anything.

As for the incest, I dunno. Seemed right at the time.

>>29550888
That shit bothers me.

I know it's fictional story but 6 wives with 6 daughters or 1 wife who pumped out a village in 1 night?

Adoption just felt more natural to me in terms of Dad Anon green.

>>29550899
The wife having 6 babies all at once is at least slightly believable.
Also is the way she died, so that's more 'believable'.

>>29551066
You've never heard of sextuplets have you?

>>29551423
That's more or less part of what I was implying to them.

>>29552188
bump

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Swear to god beans, you are only HIP when writing green.

>>29541595
>12:46
>Aw, yeah, you such a bad boy, man.
>So bad…
>...
>You dry your hands under those noisy-ass hand-dryer thingies that you hate, and exit the potty room.

>12:47
>You sit back down at your booth, Fluttershy biting her bottom lip as you side over her to your spot where you sat.
“Pardon me, Fluttersheep.”
>She grunts.
>You ignore it.
>...Then, you continue to eat hamboigah…
>You love hamboigah.
>Other than FLuttershy’s horrifying sexual advances straight from a chinese picture book for special folks, time goes by uneventfully, you making idle chit chat with your girls, and they, in return, giving you shit.
>That’s parenthood for ya, you suppose.
>Anyways…
“Ah-ah! No, Rarity. You are NOT driving the Mystery Machine.”
>“I didn’t ask to…”
“...Oh. Yeah, you didn’t. Sorry.”
>You am the happy family man.

>>29553937
I HEARD SOMEONE SAY HIPS, AND I HAVE ANSWERED THE CALL

Even if they did exist, they would probably hate your guts.

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>>29541595
Jesus, what was going through my mind when I wrote this?

>>29554212
Don't worry beans. I had that moment yesterday and instantly regretted it.

>>29554185
Beans has returned, huzzah

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>>29555333
Indeed he has blessed us with his presence today.

>>29553937
no wonder there's always some dude trying to get into her pants

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>>29555353
Not just dudes...

>>29555333
the double trips don't lie, Beans has to continue on with the story.

>>29553904

>>29554185
fuck you beans

>>29559800
Boomp

>>29554185
Where the fuck are you beans

I thought this thread died.

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Post hips to summon the beans

>>29562578
DAMMIT HORSEGIRL

STOP MAKING MY DAMN WASHER STICKY EVERY DAY

>"Hey, Dad."
>Poke poke
>"Dad!"
>Poke poke
>"Twilight I don't think Daddy is gonna get up..."
>Poke poke
>"Well he needs to, I'm hungry!"
>Poke po-
>Reaching up with your hand to catch the finger you crack open an eye to see your two daughters looking at you.
>Before your able to respond a loud gurgle from the Fluttershy's belly is enough to demand food.
>Fluttershy the poor thing wraps her tummy in her arms looking ashamed.
>"Dad! You see? Leaving us without food like this! Why would you do such a thing to your kids!" Twilight reprimands you still flush from fever.
>Twilight did always get a bit bratty when she was hungry, or unhappy, or sick, or without a book to read...
>Rubbing at your eyes you simply yawn letting go of your purple daughter.
"Yeah, I heard you the first time, calm down child."
>"Calm down! Dad it's like nearly one o'clock!"

>>29562900
>Ah fuck, you're going to need to check your phone then, probably have emails and messages to respond back to in that case.
>Oh well you can get to it later, for now food before your little purple people eater tries to have flambe Dad.
>Sitting up you scoop both girls in your arms.
>Twilight lets out a huff while Fluttershy squeaks in surprise.
>They are getting heavier.
>Or maybe you're getting older?
>Bah You've got another good forty years before you go, little exercise never hurt no one.
>Depositing your girls in their chairs at the table, you start to bustle about setting up the kitchen for making some soup.
>Cracking open a can of noodles you chime back over your shoulder.
"So Pinkie reminded me about the Founder's play that she's taking part in, is there anything I need to be aware of when that comes around?"
>Fluttershy is mum, while Twilight frowns, "Well I did have a book club that I was gonna go to..."
>That was one of your rules that you inheretied from your mum, the kids have to tell you these events they have lined up else your not gonna be able to do them.
>Usually it's fine, but it's first come first serve and more than one argument had been brewed because of it.
"Oh? What time is it at? Pinkie's play starts around six."
>At the mention of time Twilight perks up, "Oh well that's good! My book club meets after class at three thirty and ends at four thirty!"
"So I won't be expecting you to come home on the bus like usual and just meet you at the school once it comes time for the play?"
>"Mhmm!"
>As the soup heats up you turn back to face your duo of sickly girls.
"Baby girl, do you have anything on that day?"
>You've tried hard to teach the girls to be independent and look after each other, on some aspects they take to the notion like fish to water.
>Fluttershy is more than happy to help look after her sisters, being independent...
>"O-oh, it's nothing important really."
>It's still a work in progress.

>>29562907
>Kneeling down to rub Fluttershy's head you lock eyes with her.
"Shy, honey, you need to tell me if it's something you really wanna do. I can try to wiggle things around, but I can't do that if you don't tell me."
>The proper wording does wonders, if she thinks its even the slightest bit selfish or for her benefit Fluttershy digs her heels in, but mention that it inconvienances yourself...
>"Um, well I did...I did wanted to go down to the Apple's farm and s-see some of the animals there...G-Granny Smith was even willing to let me h-help care for the lil' piggies!"
>You remembered the Apple's, good folk one of your sisters had married into their family.
>Course it was a remarried as the previous wife was a bitch.
>Then there was the whole storm that knocked over a tree on 'em both...
>Ol' Granny was willing to raise all three of her offsprings children, but Applejack was of your blood same as Applebloom.
>That being said, Granny's an old bird, raising two hellions like Big Mac /and/ Applejack would have aged her fast.
>Big Mac could at least care for himself mostly, Applebloom not so much.
>When it came down to it you worked something out with the judges to have joint custody between yourself and Granny over Applejack and Applebloom.
>"Daddy?"
"Ah! Sorry baby girl, that's fine just make sure to remind me to write a note for you to give to the bus driver when you want to go over there."
>"A-Are you sure that Pinkie won't mind me not going to her play?"
"Baby girl, do you not remmeber Pinkie? If it's something you love to do then she's all for letting you do it, even if it gets you into trouble more often than not..."
>"Huh?"
"Nothing, nothing."
>"Dad the soups boiling."
>Turning you quickly run over and turn down the flame before looking into the pot.
>The soup bubbles and churns, before too long you have all three bowls ladeled out and filled with tasty soup.
"Alright kids dig in."
>"Yum!"
>"Thank you Daddy..."

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>>29562578
Beans needs to come back

>>29563415
you may scare him away by posting mares, beans seems to be a casual who likes human anatomy over god tier mare anatomy

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>>29563503
>implying I like humans over pone pussy
I think your post just gave me an aneurysm. I hate EQG with the exception of Rainbow Rocks, which is the only passable film of the series.

If I wanted to watch magical high school girls with super powers, I'd watch something less shitty. Like Godzilla.

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>>29563708
There you go.

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>>29563729
Fuck this I'm going to bed...

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>>29563708
>I hate EQG with the exception of Rainbow Rocks, which is the only passable film of the series.
I knew there was a reason I liked you, tripfag.

>>29554185
>“Ah-ah! No, Rarity. You are NOT driving the Mystery Machine.”
>>“I didn’t ask to…”
>“...Oh. Yeah, you didn’t. Sorry.”
>>You am the happy family man.

fucking kek

Bump 4 beans

>>29554185
>12:47
“So you all finish eating yet…?”
>“Do I look like it?” asks Pinkie, holding her hot dog firmly with both hands.
>...
>That’s a big hot dog.
“Well, hurry up then. We should get going soon. I wanna beat the traffic before it happens or whatever.”
>“Okay!”
>She then holds the hot dog vertically, one end pointing upwards.
>She licks her lips, eying it hungrily with her intense blue eyes.
>“Mmm…”
>Slowly, she pushes the tip into her mouth, just slightly swirling her tongue around the base as she ushers it in.
>Half of the foot long wiener is in her mouth, and she just...she just stares at you, cutely while doing this.
>Over half the hot dog is down her throat.
>She hardly gags.
>If at all.
>Then, with no struggle at all, she swallows the damn thing straight from the bun.
>...
>“Wow! That sure was yummy!”
>You merely gawk at Pinkie the sausage-swallower until a napkin dabs against your chin.
>It’s Fluttershy.
>She dabbing away your drool as she smiles at Pinkie.
>She twitches.
>Rarity and Sunset, thankfully, just think it’s Pinkie being Pinkie...and maybe it is…
>What in the name of Godzilla was that...?