CYOA Discussion

>>29165628
First for 2017 will be another year of shit and we will never be free

First for last word is best daughteru

Third for last word is worst daughteru

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Out, out, brief candle. Life's but a walking shadow.

Last Word a good and she deserves happiness

>>29165628
Choosie that's lewd.

>>29165638
>>29165656
Does Last Word have any art or a description of her appearance?

>>29165706

Here you go:
>>29164748

Alright guys, doing a few rewrites so...I hate to say it but the CYOA has been pushed back to 2017


:^)

All joking aside, it should be ready soon enough. The whole rewrites wasn't a lie atm i'm sort of testing concepts to figure out what works and what doesn't work.

>>29165726
What about hair style?

>>29165746
Let's assume long and straight. Same with tail.

Local Anon confirmed for faggot.

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>>29165765
How's this?

>>29165823
I think warlock had to go spend time with his family but that looks pretty good
Its hard to tell what the cutie mark is without knowing in advance but i suppose thats the case on a lot of paperpones

>>29165872
There's not a lot of space for me to go into detail with the cutiemarks at that resolution, and it's harder on fillies and colts because they have even less space on their butts.
It might have been easier to show a broken horn if the cutiemark was just the horn, and not the head part too.

>>29165823
Thanks!
Though her coat looks kinda dark.
Can you please use something like #F0DC82?
(I know that it's not really beige, but I was really bad with colors when i introduced her.)

I hope Pyrefly returns this year so we can finally have a satyr CYOA.

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>>29166114

>>29166143
Perfect.
Thanks again!

Resuming Rara Christmas quest, and hoping that nothing will interrupt the one free day I've had in too long.
>>29166362

Active threads

Genequest: >>29135214
Cuddles and Capers: >>29115151
Christmas: >>29123031
Space: >>29157917
Warrant: >>29135590
Dirty Work: >>29122724
Coltquest: >>29102212
Do No Harm: >>29104732
Alchemy: >>28972717
Darkest Hour: >>29144723
FIT: >>29161273

>>29165649
Where did go wrong Mr Rapist Dolphin?

Make 2017 skub free, for you, for your changelings.

If I see a new Lispone in this thread, then 2017 will be a good year.

>>29165628
Choosie has a benis euphemism

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>>29166967
>The cursor is in the screenshot
Don't mind me, nothing to see here...

Added Canterlot University and Canterlot University+ to the archive.

https://www.anonpone.com/university/
https://www.anonpone.com/university2/

I think they win the award for most drama ridden CYOAs due to near constant namefag dramajerks.

>>29157286
If you have any fanart relating to CU then it can be uploaded to the relevant fanart sections. Interesting fact: They ended up within 800 words of one another.

>>29165738
Rewrites? What are you rewriting about it?

>>29167667
Maybe more like just going through several conceptual ideas then deciding to go with another one.

I feel rewrite is an appropriate enough term though as I go with one thing then decide to change it later if I feel it doesn't work.

>>29167695
Well what kind of ideas? What's changing about it?

>>29167734
Just potential situations and how they could or should play out and how that would work, just stuff like that.

>>29167801
That's not rewriting, that's planning.

>>29167801
I see. So story arcs and the like?

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>you will never have CYOA plushies

>>29167899
>you could have sent someone a CYOA plushie but you didn't because you forgot about him until a month before christmas and no commissions would have been fast enough
I've been a terrible friend
Next year maybe?

>>29167861
Alright, there's the term I needed.

>>29167865
Yeah, though I'm also trying not to plan TOO much since I also have to account for player action as well.

Fug darkest hour fell off the board
I guess all the other bumpers were at new years partys while i was asleep

>>29166132
lmao

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Anyone wants a draw? I feel like doing a few.
Also remember to post sources or Choosie will be sad.

>>29168549
A dead waifu

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>>29168674

Don't call him Shirley

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>>29168569
Dead waifus you say?

>>29168549
Treads as a batpone plz.

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>>29168569

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>>29168802
Oh woops, I meant to post this. Angel isn't a waifu.

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>>29168569

>>29168907
Don't do it.

>>29168907
Disclaimer: May cause smallness

>>29168907
BIG FISHY

How's that new Hero CYOA?

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>>29169260
Adorable. Thanks dude. Could I get a Golet being cute?

>>29168907
>big mare cola comes in a drum
excellent

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>>29169359
>not drinking bigmare cola straight from the tanker

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>>29169617
>Board duct-taped to the dresser

Aaaaand, saved.
Das cute mang. Good stuff.

>>29169617
No Golet.

Golet plz stop.

That's too much protect.

>>29166143
Is this the first paperpone of the year

Oh you wanted to do frosty rime but needed her hairstyle first right i think warlock did give a hairstyle a few /cyoa/ back i will see if i can dig it up later.

>>29166980
>>29168907
New Lispone and a new lispone! It happened! Happy New Year

>>29166132
Happy New Year Ninanon.

>>29169724

>Liking either form of Lis pone

Lis is a shitty meme of a QM that dropped out without a word.

>>29169744
You know that's not true Lis, now try to enjoy the New Year OK.

>>29169744
It's just the fags he ERPs with sucking his dick.

>>29169744
Lis pls.

>>29169759
never been

>>29169759
>fags
>implying anyone other than beard

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I love the mountains

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I love the clear blue skies

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I love the big mares

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I love when ponies fly!

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I love the whole world, and all its sights and sounds

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Boom de yada boom de yada
Boom de yada boom de yada

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I love the oceans

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I love real dirty things

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>>29168549
Could you draw Emerald Jewel Celebrating the new year?

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I love to go fast

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I love the ancient kings!

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I love the whole world, and all its craziness

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Boom de yada boom de yada
Boom de yada boom de yada

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I love the satyrs

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I love arachnids

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I love hot magma

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I love to play with kids!

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I love the whole world, it’s such a brilliant place

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Boom de yada boom de yada
Boom de yada boom de yada
Boom de yada boom de yada
Boom de yada boom de yada

Here's to the new year /cyoa/

>>29170088
That was a really nice display anon. I hope that this year will either revitalize /cyoag/ or bring it to a swift end.

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>>29170088
I'm to drunk to find a clapping gif so this will have to do. Nice job anon.

>>29169696
Ah found it
https://desuarchive.org/mlp/thread/29122137/#29127892
Medium length and kind of messy

>>29170088
Nice

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>>29170088
Nice work, thanks for that anon

Happy new years /cyoag/
<3

>>29170794
><3
Kiringe

>>29168199
A shame.

Speaking of which how long does it usualy take for player numbers to return to normal after the holidays.

>they kill civillians
Okay, we're the baddies.

>>29171425
Depends on the NEET/normie level of your players.

>>29171479
Well we could not exactly let them continue to plot against us.

>>29171509
And what exactly would they do, laugh or talk us to death? Pee in our rations? Even messing with the airship is not worthy of being slaughtered.

>>29171516
Riot in the labor camp for starters.

>>29171516
I have to disagree on that last point
That ship was our key to a fast victory and they attempted to sabotage it.

I will say that nightbringers are clearly still on the wrong side of mortality although they are slightly better once you get to know them

>>29171522
>bunch of civvies with pickaxes vs armoured guys with maces, axes and whatever else
Yeah, right. Then they'd be killed in combat, at least.

It amazes me that a thread as usualy rife with shitposting as /cyoa/ can have such a civil discusion of morality.

>>29171529
But that's OK because we all love bloodbaths in our cities, right?
And because collateral damage is nothing to care about.

And yeah, where do you think Solar garrison had gone after the war began? I think that there is a bunch of POWs in the camp.

>>29171540
Probably some more POWs in the cities too, better purge them too.

>>29171547
>>29171540
Yeah, let's preemptively kill all the ponies who won't swear allegiance to the Great Learer... err I mean NMM with enough vigor.

>>29171549
Because hiding in the sewers, stealing classified documents and worshipping your enemy is not in any way a sign of treason.

Yo.

>>29171552
Would you instantly accept, let's say, Mao's regime over your country?

>>29171552
This
The worst we did was kill people we could maybe have taken alive

>>29171555
Better then celestias regime

>>29171555
Not the guy you're talking to, but that's moving the goal posts. Why you're working against someone doesn't matter. You're still a threat.

>>29171552
Is it really treason if they never owed any loyalty to you.

>>29171565
That doesn't justify a fucking purge, tho. As much as I like DH, I'm not too fond of us following NMM, but I have no idea if Solars are better, just about the same, or even worse.

>>29171567
this

>>29171567
Civil war. Even if they are not traitors - they still plot against your country and support your enemy and so they deserve death.

>>29171565
Nah man, that is some steaming bullshit. He isn't saying they're being killed for being a threat out of pragmatism. He specifically says treason, as if they're the ones in the wrong. 'Kowtow to us or we'll kill you under a blanket and bullshit crime'

>>29171576
yeah, you're the baddies.

>>29171575
So wait, you really think that these guys down there were not supporting Celestia? Treason is usually punishable by death.

YOU HAVE BEEN FOUND GUILTY OF OF HERESY AGAINST OUR GODDESS QUEEN OF THE NIGHT. YOUR PUNISHMENT IS DEATH, EFFECTIVE IMMEDIATELY.

>>29171575
Question is was it really a purge i would say the main reason for the attack was to retrive the stolen plans

>>29171583
As >>29171567 said, they never swore allegiance to NMM, therefore this was not an act of treason. More like actively undermining the enemy regime.

>>29171567
>>29171575
Treason is acting against those currently in power, not those who deserve to be in power in your opinion. You don't define it by whether or not they actually deserved loyalty at all. If you were a north korean and you decided to try assassinating a general, you doing something treasonous.

>>29171578
It's not bullshit at all. I never mentioned morals or wrong and right. If you conquer a nation and it's people act against you, you either push them down or risk being destroyed.

Sounds like I dropped the quest at just the right time to avoid the bullshit.

>>29171592
So you're just pragmatic.

>>29171578
Would you feel better if they were imprisoned, condemned and executed instead of slain?
Because nightbringers must have gotten prooves of them being dangerous from the heretic who was questioned in the labor camp. They didn't steal the plans just to steal them after all.

>>29171598
Im pretty sure half the point of the quest is speculation on morality

>>29171588
Well at and the filly
But mostly the plans

>>29171598
Sounds like its a bunch of teenagers playing at civil war.

>>29171604
Sounds more like "going along with everything, but hey, at least we were morally conflicted, so we're cool, right?"

>>29171600
Yup. That's all I was saying. There's no easy solution to dealing with a conquered population. They will act against you out of a reasonable dislike for you, and you either act back or get undermined and weakened.

>>29171612
We can always try to desert or defect to Celestia's side.

>>29171612
Well not everything we very much did not approve of taking whole familys for the actions of a single member

>>29171623
So you will topple the system by silently disapproving hard enough?

>>29171623
Because members of these families are in no way prone to fight against current regime after their loved ones were imprisoned, so we obviously shouldn't take them in the camps too.

>>29171625
Why should every MC be a heroic figure? Why can't we have a cowardly mare who just wants to live another day?

>>29171625
Why would i want that
Nightmare moon has her flaws but celestia is an outright tyrant.

>>29171625
More like topple the church
Its the nightbringers we dont like

>>29171635
>Getting such conclusion from listening to NMM's speech.

Wew, you sure have critical thinking, lad.

>>29171645
Theres also the fact that celestia raised a heavily corupt guard

>>29171650
and you're not a heavily corrupt guard?

Anyone else noticing a whole lot of spelling errors in the Nightmare camp. Somewhat telling.

>>29171656
No we are a brutal guard theres a difrence.

>>29171656
What's worse: heavily corrupt guards or heavily fanatic guards?

>>29171650
>Every member of Solar Guard is bad because there is an ax-crazy Solar General and her ax-crazy subordinates.
>Night Guard are good guys, there is just an overzealous Lunar General and her overzealous subordinates.

DOUBLETHINK

>>29171661
Thing is most of the guard are not that fanatic it is just the nightbringers.

>>29171661
>Implying there is no church of the Sun with its own military just like nightbringers.
>Implying that Night Guard doesn't have its own psychotic murderer prone to waging war of terror.

>>29171588
Did they steal the plans to the Death Star?

>>29171618
Well then. You were pretty civil about that, gotta admit.

>>29171673
Effectivly yes.

>>29171670
>Implying there is no church of the Sun with its own military just like nightbringers.
>Implying that Night Guard doesn't have its own psychotic murderer prone to waging war of terror.

That quest must be one hell of an edgefest.

>>29171684
Not really
Dark sure but not edgy

>>29171687
No, it sounds pretty edgy.

This whole conversation reminds me of FoE and peoples rampant desire to justify their polished turd.

>>29171695
That depends on how you define 'edgy'.

>>29171695
It sounds like you might have lost the real meaning of edgy somewhere along the way.

>>29171695
Nobody is claiming any one faction is perfect its really a conversation about how bad everybody is.

>>29171670
And you got that where exactly?

>>29171702
Nah.

>>29171707
He is saying solars probably have a church just as zealous as the night not that we have auctualy seen one.

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>All those plebs talking about their shitty leaders.

>>29171707
Gut feeling.
We can always ask about Lunar and Solar generals.

>>29171717
>minecraft style muzzle

>>29171717
Fuck off Sombra, Aurora's going to kick your sorry arse.

>>29171717
>inb4 sombra takes advantage of equestrias weakened post war state to take over the crystal empire

>>29171729
>implying Sombra was not defeated before and is not forgotten because of his spell

>>29169696
>>29170300
Oh yeah, I remember seeing that post. I was waiting until that other anon drew his picture so I could use it as a reference for consistency between fanarts and all that. Is he still working on it?
If you're impatient, I can do it now, and just fix any differences later if I have too. It don't matter.

>>29171756
I think he is still working on it.
I am happy to wait.

>>29171763
Ok. Whenever he posts it, make sure to ask for a paperpone again, in case I forget or miss it.

>>29171773
Will do

>>29171695
I enjoy discussing the morality of this quest but if you seriously think its edgy i think you may be retarded.
It does not have to be all squeaky clean and happy we have serve honor cuddle for that.

>>29171781
You're being kinda defensive anon. Other peoples opinions really rustle your jimjams or something?

>>29171781
I think you're retarded because you fail to capitalize the I.

>>29171788
Im just mad that the word edgy has lost all meaning.

>>29171794
Nobody cares about your personal definitions.

>>29171794
It hasn't lost all meaning, it just means anything that isn't rainbows and puppy dogs is edgy now.

>>29171806
>tfw real life is edgy as fuck
I really hope that katana I ordered gets here soon.

>>29171634
Anonguard minus the mare part

>>29171806
>m-muh cool and dark quests

>>29171831
>quests should never be dark
If we had it your way we would have no tiny horse vs lemon

Do you really want to live in that world

>>29171794
It's a marketting term, it barely ever had meaning.

Is it dark and or gothic? Is it Shitty or pretentious? If both answers are yes, then it's edgy on 4chan.

Speaking of darkest hour shouldn't the new thread be up.
I hope warlock did not get killed during his new years revelery

>>29171938
he's Russian. Give him a bit for the vodka to wear off.

>>29171946
For Russias New Year is an actual holiday so.

>>29171946
Isn't he supposed to celebrate 14 of January?

>>29171983
14th of January is an 'Old New Year'
Don't try to understand it.

I will start new thread tomorrow.

>>29172021
Alright then see you then.

>>29172021
Nothing to explain. It's first january on the Julian calendar that the church still uses because.

>>29172021
I already understand it. Good I'm not the only one celebrating according to the new style.

>>29172021
Horray he did not die in a horrible new years acident

Its now the second day of the year

>>29172034
It's still the first where I live.

>>29172222
>those twos
>still the first
(X)

>>29172380
You're just jealous I got quads and you didn't.

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>>29171634
does this look like a hero to you?

>>29171634
Yeah that usually ends badly.

Does res still use a million ellipses?

>>29173066
He uses a lot, but a lot less than he used to.

>>29173066
His therapist says it's an ongoing process.

>>29173066
I'll ellipse your mom, fucker

>>29173109
A million ellipses can't fill the void in his rectum.

>>29173305
Having a big anal capacity is great for the beach, when you don't want to leave your valuables behind. Res can fit his keys, his phone and a whole bottle of shower gel.

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>>29173350
But who has the biggest anal capacity?

So I had a completely original idea for a quest.

You are a chaste unicorn stallion that has awoken in a frozen wasteland with no memories. With help from a pair of twins who are not sexually attracted to each other at all you will travel the snowy expanse looking for answers of who you are and what happend to make the world what it is.

I call it "Cold."

>>29173645
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=3u1GL_Tl2eY

>>29173645
As much as you joke, that sounds a lot like Frostbitten's premise.

>>29173645
That sounds interesting and not derivative in any way.
You should run it immediately and then disappear without a word half way through.

>>29173564
How big is her asshole?

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>>29135590

>>29171634
Because that leads to a boring story. An MC that doesn't want to take part is the story's events is boring.

>>29173906
See: brotherquest

>>29173645
Ha, you have nothing on my idea.
It stars a brave pony seeking out artifacts of great power throughout Equestria. Meeting many characters along the way you use their aid and unlock the secrets and locations of these treasures before finally retrieving them.
I call it Indiana Jones.

Hey fins it's the first day of the new year and I wanted to ask how them drawings are going.

>>29173957
I still haven't even got back on the flow of things, I took pretty much a month off from everything but university. Sorry anon, tomorrow ought to be my starting day for work and I hope to start practicing again before I get too rusty. Thanks for asking, sorry I couldn't start yet

>>29173645
I had a quest idea too. Mine is about a futuristic amusement park where dinosaurs are brought to life through advanced cloning techniques. I call it: Filly and the Cloneasaurus

>nearly three days since last genequest update
The fate of all Hijacker CYOAs.

>>29174951
[Distracted by first person shooter noises]

>>29173975
I don't care for you taking time to start your next CYOA or hell, just some time to yourself.

Buuuut... could we get a hint for what the next one will be?

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The new year has begun! But does a new year also mean a new life for the biggest bitch in Ponyville?
>>29175248

>>29174951
Man who wants to be a QM but doesn't want to run a quest.

>>29175326

Do No Harm is back for the new year

I've run out of pictures to use

>>29171634
I would not call rime cowardly
She certaintly wants the war won as fast as possible so she does not have to put herself in such harm for to long but she is brave.

She probably does need to keep herself and her squad safe even if it costs several other squads because her cargo is so vital but im sure she would stand and fight at the cost of her life if the mission was important enough.

>>29171634
That's why I was first drawn so strongly to Aurora. She was a scared little bitch that wasn't above stepping on other ponies to avoid being sent to the mines or war and at the end of the day no other pony mattered more than herself. Of course now days she's a bit different but I'm still intrigued by deeply flawed characters.

>nearly three days since last Road Less Travelled update
The fate of all Nips CYOAs.

Big mares are for big families.

>>29174951
I blame Wolvan.

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>>29175858
Big filly

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>>29175880
the lab opens again

>>29175951
>20 minutes ago

>>29175951
How much BMC would it take to reach Sweet Song's size?

>>29176301
literally who?

>>29176313
Sweet Song

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>>29176313
Her big.

>>29175353
One has have to wonder if she is as important as she once was now that solars somehow got ahold of so many
Valuable sure but is she still as absolutly vital as she once was

>>29176366
neat giraffe

>>29176414
>giraffe
>with that neck
Pls

New to CYOA? Like discussing your favorite quest? Come check out our discord chat! It's what the cool kids do!
https://discord.gg/ruGwrs7

>>29176454
I'm moderately surprised that's not a CQ Discord link.

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It's happening again.

>>29176475
No link Bath.

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>>29176475
Fuck forgot the Link.
>>29176456
>>29176456

>>29176485
Really Bath? The dream sequence is already over?

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>>29176563
When I looked at the end of the last thread there weren't any questions for Pepper's ID or any more suggestions for things to do in the dream after the last update. So I went with Having Pepper wake up.
She can't keep dreaming forever if Pepper wants to accomplish anything

>>29176618
Fair enough. But I was saving some questions for this thread since the last one was ending. Serves me right for not asking them I guess.

>>29176638
Well, if you still have some questions, I'll answer some of the ones that I can without spoiling thins, or let you know if Pepper's ID would be able to answer them. Also You might want to keep them in mind for other things in the Quest that might be able to answer your questions. Pepper's ID only know what she knows and all of the knowledge she was born with that she inexplicably has.

>>29176656
Well that's very nice of you Bath.

I was thinking of asking ID if she had access to other memories. Spear and us were once the same pony. What memories do either of us share?

Also was thinking asking about if there was any memories that were blocked or if there was some better ways to manage our powers and use them without blowing ourselves up.

Of course I was also planing on suggesting some fun things to do in the dream as well.

>>29176700
Both Spear and Pepper don't actually sare any memories. Pepper only has memories of things she's seen in her life since she first woke up in that dark hallway. What Spear and Pepper share are knowledge that they were born with. It's the difference between knowing that Colorado Became a state in 1876 and Remembering the game of beer pong you played last Halloween.

>>29176730
so pepper is not from the same memory bank that is storing and restoring spear? Good to know.

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>tfw you want to read 11-54 but it's been too long and you don't want to catch up on that many threads

>>29176801
Total Word Count: 85,514 Total Quest Posts: 549

Anon pls. That's nothing.

>>29176801
There's only 21 total threads. How far in were you?

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>>29176827

>tfw anon points out that 11-54 isnt particularly long but you're still afraid to start it because you have commitment issues and don't manage your time effectively

>>29176856
I wish i had commitment issues
When i know i wont be able to have my usual sunday sleep day to make up for sleep lost to quests i really should just not quest for a few days but i cannot bring myself to do so.

>>29176856
Think about all the time you've spent over the last week worrying about whether you have the time to do things. You could have already read it.

>>29176903

it's too late now

>>29177085
You dont need to read it all in one sitting
Start reading now then read what you dont get done today tomorow

It's 5 AM and I feel foolish, post requests and I'll do them tomorrow.
Remember to post sources or your favorite big mare will be made tiny.

>>29177098

it was always too late

>>29177176
Whispen

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>>29177176
this mare is probably pretty large inside that armor
assuming she actually still has some limbs left to make her large

>>29166143
i want to help her find a special somepony

>>29175256
I don't want to say much, I believe in secrecy until I can prove I will do it. All I can say is that I'm juggling between two ideas, both of which turn away from TNL and fantasy/ancient times in general, but are based in original settings rather than Equestria.

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I'm catching up on Darkest Hour, and I'm getting irrationally angry at how sometimes the other characters are being condescending towards the MC over things that we apparently are supposed to know.

>>29120306
>(MC) "And I wanted to ask - what were that pills for?"
>"I thought that was obvious. Contraception, duh." - she replied.

>>29125885
>(MC) "you really need to stop leaving me tied up alone. Not that I mind the whole thing, but we are at war now. What if the city got attacked whilst I was immobilized?"
>"C'mon, don't exaggerate, you filthy unicorn whore." - she grinned

>>29126269
>(MC) "Thanks again, ma'am. Oh, and I remembered one more detail. When we encountered the thief, he said that he was expecting only two ponies in the house."
>"That's because he saw me and Arcane left, you moron." - hissed Gust and you blushed.
>"Oh, well, nevermind, sorry for bothering you, ma'am." - you muttered, avoiding the gaze of unamused general.
>"I'd rather abstain from listening about your 'adventures'." - she replied bluntly


Now take what I say with a grain of salt, it's just a compilation of things that rubbed me off the wrong way yesterday night before I went to sleep, and I know that sometimes it's the players not being very attentive. Most of the rest of the quest is still good. It's just annoying to read through that kind of conversation, it's like the MC suddenly is an even more oblivious version of Blitz.

>>29177962

Darkest Hour: "Emotional breakdown." edition.


>>29177837
Unattentivess of my players sometimes annoys me too.

>>29177837
>Tied up
>Robber comes in
>Fucks us silly
>Sashays out with a lockbox

Thats a hot scenario, but man that writing was barebones as fuck.

>>29177970
I am not feeling able to deliver quality lewds.

>>29177982
Trial by fire has never hurt anyone.

>>29177990
Except maybe when it's literal fire

>>29177982
Good. Any more lewds and I'll drop it harder than nukes on Hiroshima.

>>29177982
Just do it the Aight/Hero way and write it in some separate pastebin when you feel like it.

Big Mare Cola Green flavour is the best

Alright guys, I think i'm almost ready.

Might be beginning in the foreseeable future, stay tuned.

Glad i'm almost done writing, desu I can't wait to write King Shamrock again :^)

>>29177837
One of his players is /that/ guy, so the p'layers' are unnattentive on the level of retard sometimes I'm sure. Just like in Heat.

>>29178902
Cool

>>29177982
The key is to think about what will happen during the lewd. Then for every sentence of pure action you write, add at least one or two sentences of describing emotions, impressions, the situation and surroundings, scents, sounds, reactions etc.
And I guess if the "action" takes # paragraphs, set up the whole scene with # paragraphs before and don't just rush it.

Not a professional lewd writer myself I noticed that I and other people tend to write out the basic things that happen and when you proof-read it afterwards, it seems like a cheap 5 minute porn clip where they jam in the whole blowjob-cowgirl-doggy-reverse_cowgirl-blowjob2-cumshot procedure. Just take your time and try to make it nice.

>>29178984
To be fair, the pill thing was sort of iffy. Who in their right mind just jams a pill into a (almost) virgin's mouth without explaining what it is?

I made a new CYOA. Come check it out if you want.
>>29179229

>>29176464
what's the link for that one, maybe they'll go there

>>29179265
Oh, cool. Are you alternating with Outcasts or-- oh, Outcasts is over.
Congrats. I suppose you were the guy who pitched the Hitchker's Guide like thing, not too long ago? Any estimations on how long your new quest is going to be?

>>29178984
You see ghosts where there are none.

>>29179477
Maybe a tiny bit over a thousand posts. It could be longer, I don't exactly have a timetable planned.

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>>29179477
>Outcasts is over.
RIP

>>29179265
Oh, nice job finishing your first cyoa.
Ain't many can say they did that.

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>>29177176

Can it be NSFW?

Bo, the zebra on the left, working a dildo or butt plug into Emerald.

>>29180367
I don't like you

>>29180367
fuck off psker

>>29180367
Go eat some cement

>>29180430
Fight me

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>>29177176
Do you mind drawing Poly Merase pegging Second Wind, the zebra on the right while Blobby watches? Poly should be saying something like "Here's a lesson in intimacy!" as she is pounding Second Wind.

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>>29177176
How about instead of anything to do with zebra dicks, you draw Poly giving Losses (pictured, and also from Genequest) a nice brushing with one of those horse brush things. Losses is reluctantly enjoying it.

>>29180771
>pegging
Hot

>>29180367

This art style really leaves something to be desired. Does Fic not use stabilizers or like... Even put effort in? This linework is saddening.

>>29180825
This cause not everything has to be jackoff material.

>>29177176
Draw a character from DNH? (>>29104732)

No reference, because there isn't really any art

>>29180900
Text references are still reference mate. Gotta know what to draw.

>>29180881
im pretty sure the post you quoted was asking for jerkoff material

>>29180834
Last time this was pointed out it triggered the cq players. Good luck anon.

>>29180834
Actually Fic admitted a few threads ago that at this point he should be more improved in his art skills than he is.

>>29167504
>due to near constant namefag dramajerks.
Sounds familiar.

>>29170079
>that uncolored pone in the far right of the group
who even is that?

>>29180834
quality doesn't matter as long as you dangle the right carrot
it's porn

>>29181110
No one knows.

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>>29181110

>>29181110
There's a reason she's uncolored

>>29181130
Shouldn't nips know? He drew her

>>29181281
He finished drawing it months after starting and started from right to left. So no, he didn't remember either.

Starting to think that posts like these are doing more harm than good.
Anyway, new thread don't know when. Hopefully some Saturday afternoon I'll get the drive to run.

>>29181281
He never answered

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>>29181295
Hype.

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>>29177176
What about this Cyborg zebra fucking. The whip mare from cuti-clash with a strap-on?

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>>29181320
Whip mare is the top left.

>>29181295
>drive to run
I'm sure there's a shitty joke to be made here

>>29181330
I miss glacier's cyoa

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>>29181318

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>>29177176
Chalk Dust https://img.anonpone.com/archive/unique/1446348225851.png
From Unique forcing herself sexually on Papa Beefheart https://img.anonpone.com/archive/unique/papa_beefheart_copy_by_prism_sda6weyw.png while he cries, "but I'm gay!" before Chalk introduces his face to the back of her hoof, as she re-affirms her dominance.

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Could this be the end...?
>>29181763

>>29181027
>Thinking this is unique to fic

This is literally every content creator's thoughts on their work

>>29182353
Considering there's no significant difference from the start of Coltquest to the end it's accurate in his case.

>>29181771
>I-it's totally the last session guys

You guys need to stop making quests so good i am now following 2 quests forcing me up all night.

>>29182839
maybe if you didn't shitpost here about staying up past your bedy bye time so much....

>>29181771
Can you picture what will be?
So limitless and free?

>>29182839
I'm glad to know I'm not one of the quests contributing to your loss of sleep anon.

>>29182839
Why don't you drop whatever dumbass quests you're reading so you can devote all attention to mine?

>>29181771
>Could this be the end...?
No. You'll be running this until next Christmas.

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Another Late Start.
>>29183263
>>29183263

>>29183285
Hot damn does Pepper look absolutely vicious in the mech.

Watch out folks, this filly is out for blood.

>>29183318
>mech
That's a car with a gun

>>29183318
someone cut her off.

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>>29183328
And legs.

>>29183328
Still a mech. Mech's are large machines you can pilot, usually with weapons.

>>29183376
What kind of retard uses that definition for mechs?
Besides you.

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>>29183318

god why is bath's art so shit?

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>>29183496
Because he's the only person who does a full colour quest and lineart quality takes a back seat to overall completion.

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>>29183496
Bath's art is qt

>>29183496
I don't know, I've notice a lack of growth myself, and even a bit of a regression. I think it's because I'm not trying enough new things honestly. Believe me it's not because I'm simply content being bad. But I'm also not sure what to do next to improve. I'm just kind of stuck really.

>>29183537
Do you do any full colour clean lineart pieces that are not title cards?

I'd suggest trying your hand on improving your lighting. Maybe some high contrast stuff.

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>>29183580
Session may be a bit rough today.

The lab is now open.

>>29183524
Yes just look at that stunning color >>29183285

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>>29183577
Sometimes, I haven't really had much time with my current job though. which might be part of my problem.

I also seem to be getting slower.

>>29183631
That wasn't a panel.

>>29183654
Your point? He didn't spend time coloring and it's still garbage.