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Fingerbang: The Equestria Girls and Humanized Thread #213 - 24

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Welcome to the Equestria Girls & Humanized Thread! Anything with >no hooves is welcome and encouraged here. If you like to write, draw, read, or critique the humanized versions of the ponies, then this is the thread for you.

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>>28276914
That new thread smell. Smells like... roses?
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>>28276940
I like it.
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>>28276940
I smell vanilla
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>>28276940
>>28276954
more like BULLSHIT
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>>28276954
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>>28276976
Wait, It was a reference?
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>>28277001
Pinkie Pie in an EQG 3 short
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>>28276940
The new thread smells like memes.
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>>28277139
And more shit.
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>>28276914
I'm waiting for NaOH update :)
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>>28277154
And salty cucks.
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>>28277172
And Fat Fedoras
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>>28277775
Off by 2
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>Featherweight thunders down the highway
>His dad's car flexes its mighty muscles, weaving between cars down Airport Boulevard
>"Where do need me to drop you off brah?"
>Fuck
>Airports have lab terminals or something
"I got this. Just get us there."
>You call up Twilight
>"Anon? How did things go with-"
"Moonie's parents are trying to take her back to the royal castle land or some shit. Do you know where she's going in the airport?"
>"Anon!? What the hell is going-"
"Twilight. Where. Is. She. Going."
>...
>"Did... did you call her?"
"Oh yeah, her dad will love that."
>"Hm... They'll let her talk to me. Hold on."
>Click
>You stretch your fingers and grind your teeth while Featherweight signals for the exit into the airport
>Enraged, terrified, and lonely bricks stack in your belly
>Pinpricks of cold sweat drape your forehead
>BZZZZT
>"Air Ixiom."
"Featherweight, Air Ixiom."
>"I got it here."
>He swerves into a rare empty space in the mass of cars loading and unloading
>"Good luck Anon" Twilight sighs
"Yeah, right..."
>You throw open the door and stumble out
>"Get our friend back."
>Click

>Your first attempt at passing through security ends with abrupt refusal
>No ticket, no entry to the terminal

>You lean over the Air Ixiom desk
"I need to, uh... escape, you know? I feel like I'm trapped. Where's a good place to fly?"
>"Sir, we have flights with space available later this evening to Roam-"
"Sold.
"Sir, it's-"
>You throw your wallet on the counter and give her your credit card
>"S-sir, a seat is $650-"
"Come on, I have a lover to catch!"

>Now $650 poorer, you slave through the security line
>A one-way ticket and no baggage catches you glances, but you don't have anything on you
>And you still look fancy as fuck
>And white. That helps

>You barrel through the terminal to the Air Ixiom gates
>Five or six of them
>You scan the crowd for any sign of your beloved
>"Air Ixiom Flight 701 to Canterlot, final call for boarding"
>Shit
>701... 701... there!
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Yay! Another thread for me to to spread my viscous poison throughout!

NaOH, I mean, I'll be irresponsiblly amused tommorow. I'll see that, and just, laugh.

Looking forward to it, it'll put a welcome smile on my face when this summer's been a bit of a struggle.
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>>28278032

>701's gate, as you approach, swirls like a draining tub
>Passengers flow into the jetway one-by-one
>"F-father, you can't do this!"
>You whip around to the source of the tearful protest
>To you it is the sweetest song, a valiant siren calling you

>Moondancer clings to her father's arms, pleading her case through choked sobs
>Mother stands beside nervously, looking over at the service counter's frustrated attendant
>Money and status can only do so much to a timetable
>"Daughter I can and WILL pull you out of here! A little distance will help you think about your priorities!"
>"L-like *sniff* what?"
>He rolls his head and sighs
>"/Studying/, not foolish boys."
>"He is certainly n-not a fool!"
>You gallop to them at full speed, waving your arms
"Moonie! Moonie! M-Moonie's parents!"
>"Anon!" your girlfriend yells, reaching out past her father's sudden defensive arm
>"Security? Hello? Someone!?" Father rages
>Mother waves once, and wrings her hands

>Moonie pushes away from Seneschal and nearly leaps into your arms
>Her wet mess of a face soaks the shoulder of a borrowed suit
>All you can do is savor the feeling of her soft, her love, as long as you can
>She digs into your embrace like an ostrich; clearly her stamina for this fight is running low
>Choking sobs only distract father for a moment.
>"YOU GET AWAY FROM HER RIGHT THIS INSTANT! MOONDANCER, COME HE-"

"Sir." you state forcefully, holding out one arm and ushering Moonie behind you with the other
>For the millionth time today, you have no idea what you're doing or saying
>This is all above your ability
>"YOU GET YOUR FILTHY PAWS OFF MY GIRL-"
>He jams a finger into your face, running into the outstretched arm now keeping him at bay
"Sir, just hear me-"

>"YOU ARE NOT GOOD ENOUGH FOR MY DAUGHTER!" Seneschal bellows
>The surrounding transit din hushes to the scene unfolding
>You could hear a pin drop if not for the planes
>"YOU DO NOT DESERVE MOONDANCER."
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I saw that. Come back here you slippery dick.
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>>28278153
YOU W0T!?
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>>28278153

>Moonie sobs
>Mother dabs nervous sweat
>Father huffs like an enraged bull
>You stand, shocked to silence
>"You are an idiot! You are a fool! I almost cannot believe what I witnessed at lunch today."
>The memory causes you to wince
>"You're a rotten liar! A man of no respect, or upbringing, class, intelligence, or perhaps quite ANYTHING of merit!"
>He points behind you
>"SHE has potential. YOU are DEAD. WEIGHT."

>He is content to twist the knife no further
>You sputter for something to say back at his big, smart face
>"Well? Anything to say for yourself before we leave?"
>You stare at the floor, cut down
>And then at Moonie, looking over fearfully
>That her time is come
>And that yours, together, is over
>Your Moonie Pie

"You're right, sir."
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>>28278209
DONT YOU DO IT!
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>>28278209

"I'm a dumbass. I play football to pay for college. I'm doing Communications because I can pass half my classes without even showing up."
>You tug the hem of your jacket
"I don't own any actually good looking clothes. All I have is being an athlete, and when I'm done I'm done. I might have however many years, but yeah. Moonie has her entire career."

"She has a lot ahead of her... and maybe I don't."
>The one you so desperately pray can remain your girlfriend slinks over
"Even if I succeed I won't be able to say I actually did anything for the world. She will."
>Her fingers mesh with yours
>Her mouth is agape at your words, even through her weeping
"She's so smart, sir. I know you /think/ she's smart, but let me tell you this: she taught me how to do calc one. Me. Doing calculus."
>Father snorts

"She studies all the time. I try to get her out of her room as much as I can. You know, go out and all that."
>You imagined at first a steely monologue face-to-face with Seneschal
>But your gaze drifts inevitably to Moondancer
>Her eyes catch yours
>Like they first did, and still do
"I don't get it why she gets shy at parties or other stuff with girls. They're pretty."
>Something you always wonder aloud about. This is the first time she doesn't look away
"But... she's... beautiful"
>This you say directly to her
>You're not talking to father anymore
"I love her. I love how cute she is in those huge sweaters. I love how excited she gets about classes and stuff. I love how she kinda sings when she reads out loud, and how frazzled her hair gets and how she doesn't let it bother her. I love how her glasses are just a little too big and keep sliding off her nose."
>You cup her cheek
"I love how patient she is. I love kissing her first in the morning, or when she hugs me real tight when I don't see her coming and she tries to lift me up."
>You swallow
"I..."

>Yours and Moonie's hands are white from your mutual grip
>And you look to her father
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>>28278312
Do more of this.

I'm precipitating, here...
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>>28278312

"I know that she loves me back. Hell if I know why, I-"
>Moonie quiets you by turning your face and occupying it with a wet, impassioned kiss
>She fills it with all that she has
>Sadness, anger, desperation, love, embarrassment, melancholy
>You have kissed before
>But today she gives you all she has
>Thrown into an all too brief downpour of raw emotion
>She remembers the setting and pulls away, slowly
>Dragging her fingers back across your cheek as sweetly delaying as can be
>How could you live without this?
>"You d-deserve *sniff* me. I don't know if I deserve y-you."
"Moonie-"
>She stops you with another slow kiss, this time retreating deep into the crook of your neck
>Her arms wrap tight around your chest

>Mother prances nervously over to father, whispering into his ear
>They argue in near-silence
>She keeps shaking her head yes
>Him, a no

"Lord Seneschal. Miss Lord Wuthering Lows."
>All you got.
"If you don't think I'm the man for her, then let me prove it."
>Father arches a brow. A first-time in progress
"I can't be in her study group and I can't explain anything for her, sure. But I can love her. Protect her. Provide. Absolutely anything, anything I can do, it's hers."
>Moonie stirs. She looks up at you, a world's worth of affection held behind purple eyes
>"I love you Anon..." she mumbles
"I love you too" you whisper back

>"Anonymous," father barks as mother wipes a tear from her eye
"Yes?"
>He stares
>Mother squeezes his shoulder encouragingly
>"Hmm. Moondancer?""
>"Father?"
>Seneschal grumbles
>"Do you /really/ love this man... /that/ much?"
>"With my whole heart."

>"Oh, honey..." mother coos
>Father throws his hands up in the air
>"Fine."
>You and Moondancer snap fully upright
>"Court with him if you must. We will continue to pay for your studies regardless."
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>>28276914
>what should probably be a feelsy picture
>fingerbang thread
>all you can imagine is Luna fingering her sleeping sister as that see-through dress clings to her sweat-drenched, writhing form
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>>28278500
"Sir..." you make sure you heard right
>"Yes! Yes, you all twisted my arm. Now get out of here, go home."
>"Are you leaving?" Moonie asks
>The service desk attendant grumbles
>"We shall leave you both-"
>"And return as soon as we can! The four of us can have a more proper meal."

>Moondancer embraces her parents and exchanges brief goodbyes
>They board just as the door closes on the jetway
>Featherweight takes the two of you back to Moondancer's apartment
>The two of you bubble with excitement the whole ride, holding back only to ensure that what just happened was no dream
>But when you step inside the apartment and lock the door behind you,
>It's real

>You strip off all the fancy-ass clothes
>uncomfortable as shit, and a bit soiled at that
>Now for a new kind of desperation
>Maybe not lust, but absolutely to be close
>You hear your girlfriend (thank god, still) sniffle
"Hey..."
>She wraps you in one of her surprise hugs
>"I *sniff* I almost l-lost *sniff* you!"
"Shh, we're all-"
>Tears well in your own eyes
>You really did come so close to losing it all...
>"Anon...?"
"Hm?"
>"Remove your *sniff* clothing."

>You separate and both strip down
>Moonie pulls you into bed, only to kiss and caress gently, bidding you wrap yourself up with her in the blankets
>And you don't need any further encouragement

>You enjoy your luxury
>Being together. Being so close.
>Trapped together in a warm cocoon of sheets and loose lankets
>And right now, there's no better feeling
>You don't make love that afternoon
>Only put each other to sleep with little kisses and sweet nothings

>A life you want to commit to.


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And there wraps Episode 7 Part 2. A bit of departure from the comedic tone, I know.
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>>28278032
http://pastebin.com/dqm9Bvu3

pastebin will be updated in the morn
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Fingerbang: The Equestria Girls and Humanized Thread #213 - Broken Promises Edition

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=2LTxgx3KR30
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>>28278554
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>>28278970
And all I can see is fking gorillas fingers on Luna.
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>>28279117
>gorilla fingers
Harambe lives!
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Previously on WFD: http://pastebin.com/gDR83Vgr

“You do?”
>”Yeah, at first I started developing a crush on you and I felt conflicted. I had to keep my rep in Canterlot High intact, you know…”
“No I don’t. What do you mean by that?”
>”I mean…the tough girl rep I have. People have always thought of me as the strongest of my friends, the one that was never into romance and stuff like that.”
“…So?”
>”Huh?”
>You let out a chuckle.
“Forget what other people think of you. Screw them! You’re perfect the way you are.”
>Rainbow Dash blushes.
>”D-do you really think so?”
“Hell yeah! You’re cute, soft…beautiful and overall an amazing girl.”
>”Aww…wait, why are you telling me all this? What about Rarity?”
“Don’t get me wrong, Rarity is nice and all. But sometimes I wish I could go back in time to think through and make the right decision of choosing a girlfriend.”
>”If you aren’t happy with Rarity then you should be honest with your feelings Anon.”
>You sigh.
“I just kind of wish she was…a bit more like you.”
>Rainbow Dash smiles.
>”Please, how can I compare to the girl that is everything a guy like you wants?”
“A guy like me wants? Come on now Rainbow. Rares ain’t funny; she hates the stuff I like, she expects me to praise her all the time and finally all she does is whine and blame me if she’s upset over whatever minor thing that happens to her.”
>Rainbow stifles a laugh.
>”Thanks Anon…you’re fine I guess,” she says, “ah screw it. I can’t pretend to be like this anymore. I like you a lot Anon! My heart started to beat faster the first time I saw you…”
>You gulp down some saliva.
>”I started avoiding you at first because I didn’t want to embarrass myself in front of you. Then you approached our lousy excuse of a team and decided to help us…I wish I hadn’t been less cold towards you in the first place.”
“For what?”
>”...For what what?”
“For me to ask you out; and eventually start dating?” You say in a cocky way.
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>>28279640


“For me to ask you out; and eventually start dating?” You say in a cocky way.
>Rainbow Dash shies away and covers her eyes with both her hands, but then she nods.
“That would’ve been pretty neat. It’s good to know that you were actually infatuated with me Rainbow.”
>”Shut up!”
“I’m getting mixed messages here. Why do you get embarrassed like that Rainbow?”
>”I…I’m just like that okay?!”
>You let out a disappointed sigh.
“Well, that’s one thing I don’t like. I can already picture you denying being my girlfriend in front of your friends if we started dating.”
>”Wait, what?”
>You pretend to be annoyed to see her reaction.
“You know Rainbow, I think you’re very cute. But the way you react at the slightest flirt gets old and gets on my nerves.”
>”Yeah…I guess, but-“
“Let’s just forget about this alright? Let’s pretend this conversation never happened.”
>There we go.
>And now, to put the last nail on the coffin.
“Rarity never pulls this kind of crap anyways.”
>…
>1…2…-
>”Wait! Anon!”
>BINGO!
>She’s yours now…
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>>28279654

>You let out a sigh.
“What do you want?”
>”I, I’m sorry…I don’t know what’s wrong with me. I think I’m starting to see why you never asked me out in the first place, it was my fault.”
>How else can you fuck with her mind?
>Let’s try a different approach.
“Really now? Prove it then.”
>”H-how?”
“Just don’t get embarrassed, I’ve already confessed how I felt towards you. And what happened? Nothing of course…but you uhhh-”
>You look at the arm Rainbow scratched with her nails.
>”I’m sorry Anon…”
“Being sorry doesn’t cut it…maybe a kiss will make my arm feel better,” you say in a playful way.
>Rainbow gulps some saliva and then looks at your arm.
>Atta girl.
>“Well then, let’s find out.”
>Rainbow Dash slowly approaches your arm and gives it a cute peck.
“There we go. I’m starting to feel a little better, thanks Dashie.”
>”You were right…that wasn’t so bad,” Rainbow smiles at you.
“See? What did I tell ya? There’s literally nothing wrong with being cute for once.”
>”I-I understand.”
>Hell yeah, she's gone full submissive now.
>You won't let this opportunity go to waste.
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>>28279683

>You both arrive to the hospital to visit your beloved friend and goalkeeper Derpy.
>https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=W-_c2-kARr4
>”I hope Derpy is okay. Whichever thing she faced there must’ve been quite difficult for her.”
“Don’t worry. She’s okay, but if any of you see her sad just try to comfort her.”
>You knock on the door and open it once you hear Derpy’s voice telling you that it’s okay to come in.
“Derpy?”
>You hear a cute gasp.
>”Anon! You came like you promised!”
>Both you and Rainbow Dash walk through the door to greet Derpy.
>”Captain! How nice of you to come see me as well.”
>Rainbow Dash gives her a hug, which she gladly accepts before you give her one as well.
“Feelin’ okay Derpy?”
>”Yeah, the doctor said I could leave today. As soon as my parents arrive then we’ll be ready to leave.”
>”I’m glad to hear that Derpy. Do you think you’ll be okay?”
>”Yeah,” Derpy shyly says, “I guess I should’ve listened to Anon. None of this would’ve happened if I wasn’t so naïve. All I wanted was a new laptop…”
“Don’t be so sad Derpy, once I find a job I’ll gift you one before your birthday comes.”
>She lets out a cute giggle.
>”Oh Anon, you don’t have to do that...” Derpy happily says, “but thanks anyways. You’re such a good boy.”
>”Yeah Anon, I think you’ve wasted more money in us than in yourself.”
>You scoff.
“Meh, I don’t mind. If Derpy needs a laptop I’ll be sure to get it for her as soon as I can.”
>Both Rainbow Dash and Derpy smile at you.
>They seem to be impressed by your generosity.
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>”So Derpy, when are you joining us?”
>“Tomorrow! I can’t wait to return school once again. The hospital is very, veeery boring.”
“Come on Derpy, it can’t be more boring than Ms. Cheerilee’s classes right?”
>The three of you let out a laugh.
>”Yeah, I guess. By the way Pinkie dropped by and gave me my mask for the Fall Formal.”
>She shows you a cute mask of a zebra, while she makes some cute animal noises as she tries to put her mask on.
>(”Dude…she totally didn’t deserve to be kidnapped like that.”) Rainbow Dash whispers into your ear while Derpy is distracted.
(“No shit, I’m glad those fuckers suffered.”)
>”Help! My head’s stuck!” Derpy says while waving her arms.
>You let out a chuckle.
“Let me help you with that Derps.”

>Thirty minutes later you leave the hospital after telling many jokes and encouraging Derpy to forget what happened, that she’s safe and sound and that she can always count on you both to talk.
>She thanked your thoughtfulness and wished you a good day, that she was looking forward to see you tomorrow, but this time; in school.
>Next spot. The Creek.
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>>28279740

>https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=4n-emSwKoRk
>”Can I ask you something Anon?”
“Yeah Dashie?”
>”Why do you think I’m cute?”
“Because you are. Sheesh, how many times must I repeat myself?”
>”It’s just…I can’t believe that you date an amazing girl like Rarity, and yet you still like me as well.”
>You let out a laugh.
“Rarity is Rarity, but you are you. Stop comparing yourself to Rarity Dashie, you’re unique and cute. I like you a lot…”
>Here goes nothing.
>You
“Do you want to know what else I like about you?”
>Rainbow Dash smirks.
>”Yes…”
“You won’t get mad right?”
>”Hmm…nah.”
>https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Krx0eU5bYZ4
“Well, I like your legs a lot.”
>Rainbow Dash wasn’t expecting that.
>”Oh my gosh. Did you just…like, actually say that?”
>You nod.
“Yeah, playing soccer does wonders to your body. You’re pretty attractive in that regard as well.”
>Rainbow Dash doesn’t know what to say.
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>>28279745

“So you feel better with your looks; I can tell that you compare yourself to Rarity quite often and it’s a bit unhealthy.”
>Rainbow Dash looks at the window and stays quiet.
>”…”
“…”
>”What else do you like?”
>YES!
“Mmm…your eyes. I always get lost in your beautiful eyes.”
>”Really? But I don’t even put makeup on them!”
“Which makes it a bonus. You don’t need fake eyelashes either…”
>Rainbow Dash giggles.
>”Don’t lie…what else do you like about me?”
>Well, Rainbow is just like Rarity.
>Once you start praising one thing from her she’ll just want more.
“Do you want me to be honest or do you still want to be my friend?”
>Rainbow Dash giggles once again, this time in a dirty way.
>”Be honest with me…”
“Alrighty then, just because you said so, I really enjoy staring at your breasts. I love the way they bounce whenever you play soccer.”
>Well, you said it.
>You even raise your arm to defend yourself from any attack she might try to harm you.
>But Rainbow just stays silent.
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>>28279773
> in b4 "Y-You want to see them... up close?"
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>>28279640
Sweeeeet, time to read, thanks NaOH
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>>28279773
Please tell us when you're done.
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>>28279924
I'm currently writing more. If you have something to post go ahead.
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>>28278612
I love it.
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>>28279683
God damn it Anon, this is going to bite you in the ass.
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>>28279740
God damn those fuckers that kidnapped best Derp.
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>>28279773
This kinda makes me regret Sunset being the main endgoal, I like Dash better, maybe not Rarity still see as she is VERY high maintenance. If only there was a way to share Sunset and Dash.
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>>28280203
There is always a way to get all the girls ^:)
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>>28280225
I don't really like Rarity, but Dash and Sunset(sense she is the called endgame) definitely, but maybe Pinkie and Fluttershy, although I just see her fainting if she is in a group orgy. I don't really see Twilight being that interested other than being a friend, or just joining in for a romp once or twice.
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>>28279935
Thx man for the update , time to read
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>>28279935
NaOH, do you like fanboyism over your story, hate it or don't care at all?
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>>28279773
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>>28280203
We haven't had the chance to hang out with Sunset. You'll see she's going to be the best girl.
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>>28281452
SA SA SA SAVED!
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>>28281452
You know, we haven't had a story where the EQG versions had pony stamina, what would happen if a eqg girl got a real human dicking?
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>>28281452
>You will never sit down right next to Starlight after snorkeling with Sunset.
>Sunset kept on trying to push you down close to her crouch for some reason.
>Starlight is supposedly from the same place Twilight and Sunset were from.
>Starlight starts small talk on how she and Twilight don't wear clothes where she lives.
>She places a hand on your thigh and moves south.
>You feel your lower body warm up as she goes down more.
>Her soft nimble hand grabs your newly hard member.
>"Hey, Twilight you're right it does feel different then the ones from home! It feels kinda weird and misshapen.
>Wat
>"They do! But they last longer~"
>"Really?"
>"Give it a shot~ after all you're my student and you are here to learn new things."
>Her hand starts to move up and down slowly against your shaft.
>"You like that?"
>You shudder in response.
>"Yeah, you are right Twilight they do last a lot longer" she says while stroking you.
>"That isn't the only thing new here~ Trixie would you mind if you play with Starlight's new assets?"
>Trixie wrapped her hands around Starlight's chest.
>"Trixie wanted to do this with Starlight for a long time."
>Starlight's hand goes faster on your member as Trixie licks her neck and plays with her ample breasts.
>Starlight lets out a throaty moan as one Trixie's hands reach down and plays with her clit.
>After 15 minutes you start to feel the familiar pressure in your stomach and tell Starlight your close.
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>>28281452
>Sameface
>Nupples
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>>28281488
>Starlight stops and tells you to sit up on the pavement then goes to your left
>Trixie ceases playing with Starlight and goes to your right.
>Starlight then puts your head in her mouth while Trixie starts licking your shaft with her expert tongue.
>You start to hear two moans and turn to your right to see Twilight and Sunset using a double headed horse dildo smacking each other's asses on opposite ends.
>You grab Trixie's left tit on your right hand and grab Starlight's with the other.
>Earning you a moan from both of them.
>You turn to your right again and see Twilight panting like a dog with her tongue out she let's out a loud and deep moan as she cums covering her side of the dildo and some of Sunset's lower legs in her juices.
>Sunset cums as well after seeing Twilight collapses on her.
>Seeing that and two hot girls working on your cock was too much.
>You take your cock out Starlight's mouth and cum on both Trixie's and Starlight's faces.
>Covering Trixie's chin which slides down her breasts.
>Starlight's face is covered with most of your cum above and below her nose.
>Trixie then cups Starlight's chin and starts licking your cum over face then starts kissing her swapping the cum into her mouth.
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>>28281503
Moar? I haven't cum yet.
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>>28281452
>Posting porn
>inb4 it's okay before it's spoilered
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>>28281521
Will you cum if I cum on your face?
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>>28281583
No.
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>>28281583
Boner lost.exe
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>>28281600
>>28281608
>Not wanting cum all over your face.

What are you a faggot?
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>>28281681
Nope, Anti faggot for me
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>>28281600
>>28281608
>>28281694
bunch of faggots, not wanting a girl to cum all over your face
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>>28281503
>Starlight then puts your head in her mouth
damn vore
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>>28281781
Wait, as in pussy juice, or futa bullshit that should burn at the bottom of hell?
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>>28276914
what a gay post
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>>28279773
Glasses Dash gives me really mixed feelings.
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>>28257513
>…
>”Over there.” Sugarcoat points out the now less full box of archery equipment.
>Indigo races over to it and peeks inside, finding just the one arrow left. “These don’t look very hard to rig somehow.”
>”What are you even going to do?” Sugarcoat stands in place at the bottom of the stairs.
>Indigo freezes in the light of Sugarcoat’s questioning, realizing she wasn’t planning on doing anything other than just closely looking at the bow and the one arrow.
>…Why did she think that was going to do anything.
>”I, uh… I don’t know.”
>The two realize just how clueless they are.
>”Wait. “ Indigo perks up. “What about the arrows in the backyard? Those were the ones involved in the BS anyway.”
>”I wasn’t strong enough to pull them out.” Sugarcoat answers.
>Without another word, Indigo starts up the stairs and makes her way through the kitchen to the backyard.
>By the time Sugarcoat decides to follow and makes it to the sliding glass door, Indigo already has the arrowheads in her hand.
>”Back to the basement.” Indigo rushes past Sugarcoat in the direction of the stairs.
>”At least let me catch my breath first.” Sugarcoat pants.
>They both head back down the stairs, making it back to the open box. Indigo automatically compares the arrow heads.
>”So what kinds of things are you looking for?” Sugarcoat asks.
>”I… have no idea… but…”
>”Yeah?”
>Indigo pauses when she hears the creaking of floorboards above her. She looks up only to hear them approaching the basement door.
>Sugarcoat only hears it after Indigo stands up.
>The door to the basement creaks open.
>”What’s going on down there?” Trixie’s voice calls down the stairs from the only exit.
>>28278026
>>28272679
>>28270162
I'll see where things take me. And I only don't read because short attention span.
>>28274193
I'll be fine.
>>28274490
Lost count.
>>28273611
Expect it pretty soon.
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>>28282037
Darn character limit.
Anyway, here's my availability status. The desk is done, as well as pretty much everything else I was taking care of, and I finally have a lot of time to do things again. Not only that, but I pretty much have the whole basement to myself 90% of the time. This is some elbow room I haven't seen in a long while. I'll continue FriENDship and write a sequel to Listen as soon as I get the chance, which won't be long.

And I feel like I should let you guys know that all ideas are now back in the open. What do you guys want to happen in the two stories? All of my worries have left this thread and gone over to the writefag's guild where someone explained to me hat I needed to do to write better, but I can't muster up the mindset to do it. I'm pretty much free to do whatever I want now anyway, so whatever. I'm just going to push out wave after wave of greentext until I'm finally willing to learn how to do things the right way for a change.
There will be a day when that happens, but it is not this day.
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>>28282058
Oh my god yes! I vote Indigo Zap and Sour Sweet getting it with Anon.
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>>28282206
Seconding.
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>>28281694
>Being '''''''''antifaggot'''''''''''''

Uh huh, sure. Keep saying that you self hating gay.
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>>28282058
Zombie story when? I must know!
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>>28282037
OH SHIT
Looks like we're caught boys
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>>28282037
Remember those writings you gave up on and hastily finished?

You should do that to Time After Time.
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>>28282511
>Brothens gets nuked
/end
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>>28282058
Didn't you say you didn't want to write sex scenes?
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>>28282206
>>28282058
I vote he does it with best shadow bolt Lemon Zest instead.
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>>28282602
Now to think of it... I'd read some EQG Fallout.
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>>28282058
Idk man maybe you should listen to the person in the writefag thread
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>>28283092
My African friend
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>>28278612
Pastebin updated

http://pastebin.com/dqm9Bvu3

I have lots of story ideas, but I also usually write moonie and jockanon ideas that I like.
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Remember that one time Spike and Big Mac were roleplaying and Spike's wildest fantasy was just to be a magic user that people respected?

Ha ha, good times.
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>>28283092
I can't agree with this more.

She deserves a good dicking for being such a good girl.

(spoiler) Zest (/spoiler) a best, as they say.
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>>28285721
Kek
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>All these people wanting to dick a bipolar bitch.
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>>28286049
That's Sour Sweet.
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>>28278585
That's beautiful man don't stop there
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>>28280203
I agree, the story's name is Winter Formal Dash anyways.

Tsundre Dash is hard to beat
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>>28286049
>>28282058
I vote Sweet too. She's the most exciting out of all the SBs. Two faced bipolar girl is top tier and I don't care what you faggots say.
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>>28282058
Based
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>>28286049
>not wanting to dick a bipolar girl
>being this pleb
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>>28288836
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PAGE 10 SAVE!!!!
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>>28282058
Here's a continuation of the Sunset story I've been writing in >>28283050

>>28214241
>”Uh...” Sunset stares at the glossy eyes manager before he walks away.
>Half of her expected this, since she’s seen it happen to a lot of the other employees as well.
>This guy oughtta get fired at some point.
>The real feeling of relief comes in as Sunset finishes her shift and heads home, knowing that the mane six at lest left before her encounter with her boss.
>…
>”Hey, can I talk to you for a second?” Twilight starts off. “It’s just to clear things up.”
>”Sure” Sunset sits down.
>”I just want to make sure you know that I’m very proud of you for landing a job there no matter what. I know you might worry about it being otherwise, but none of us are going to judge you.”
>Sunset smiles warmly.
>”I’m very sorry if any of us gave you the impression that it was a little frowned upon to work there.”
>”What do you mean?”
>”Well, I do remember a while back that rarity mentioned that only deplorable people masquerade themselves like that.”
>”Oh…” Sunset sighs. “That.”
>”I just don’t want you to feel like you’re being frowned upon. I’m sure the fact that you’re her friend is something hat will make her look past that.”
>”Well, I’m not really bothered by what Rarity said. If anything, she’s kind of right. In a way.”
>”Aw, don’t say that.”
>”Well… here’s the thing.” Sunset leans closer to Twilight.
>She tells her about how her boss treats her, and makes Twilight promise not to tell any of the others.
>Twilight immediately seems to be worried and concerned. “Oh my gosh, but like, can’t you report him or something?”
>”Well… it’s not that bad.” Sunset tries to keep the situation from blowing up.
>”No, it’s not. What he’s doing is treating you like deplorable people. And the whole Idea is that you’re not deplorable for doing what you do. It’s not right, and it’s harassment anyway.”
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>>28291052
>”None of the girls seem to mind though. It was just me who kind of cared at first because of… well…”
>Twilight hesitates. “You… sure?” She keeps in mind that something still had to motivate Sunset to bring it up in conversation.
>”Yes.”
>The two nod it off, agreeing that Sunset had just been a little self-conscious about what Rarity said before, and that’s what caused her to not be okay with the "culture” where she works.
>…
>A week later.
>Sunset is doing her usual serving tables at the restaurant. She noticed Rainbow Dash come here at least twice ever since the mane six’s last group visit.
>”Good news, girls!” Sunset’s manager announces to the waitresses during the group meeting. “We have a new young lady here with us!”
>He steps to the side to reveal Rarity standing behind him.
>”Hello, Darlings.” Rarity greets her new co-workers.
>The introductions are short lived before everyone gets to work.
>Sunset notices something different.
>Her manager doesn’t seem to be eyeing her or a lot of the other waitresses as much today.
>There’s a point where Rainbow Dash enters the restaurant for a platter of hot wings. Rarity insists that she be the one to serve her; to surprise the girl.
>About an hour and a half later after her meal, Rainbow Dash happily left the restaurant with a nosebleed.
>”I just wanted to tell you something, darling.” Rarity approaches Sunset at the end of her shift.
>”Y-yeah?”
>”I just wanted to let you know that… I didn’t really mean what I said before.”
>Sunset smiles at her. “Is that why you applied to work here?”
>”Well…” Rarity playfully twirls her hair in her finger. “That’s one of the reasons.”
>Sunset stares at her, confused.
>”You see… Twilight may have mentioned something you told her.”
>”Wh-what?” Sunset gasps.
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>>28291065
>”Don’t worry about it, darling! The secret’s safe with me! And I originally wanted to know whether or not that goes on around her for… different reasons.”
>”What kinds of reasons?”
>”Just reasons, darling.” Rarity concludes. “Anyway, I’ll be seeing you, since it is the end of your shift and all. Just wanted to let you know that.”
>They say goodbye and Sunset leaves for the night.
>Rarity then goes to meet with the manager to hear about how she did on her first day.
>”You’re a natural, Miss Rarity.” He compliments with the widest smile. “It was a wise move to hire you as quickly as I did. Everyone who came in and were served by you seemed very pleased with your performance.”
>”Thank you, sir.” Rarity responds.
>”So great job.” He walks past her and gives her a slap on the behind. “See you tomorrow.”
>”Is something wrong,g darling?“ Rarity turns around, grabbing his attention.
>”Hmm?”
>”Aren’t you going to grab and hold onto it?” She suggests with a lip bite.
>The manager sighs ever so happily. “I’m so glad I hired you.”

I'll continue with RD getting all lewd with some of the employees including Rarity later on.

>>28282206
>>28282225
>>28283092
>>28284683
>>28285984
>>28287032
I think this would be easier with a strawpoll. I'll make one shortly after updating something else I'm going to post here.
>>28282392
VERY soon.
>>28282753
I did, but that doesn't mean that I can't.
>>28283867
I will. Soon. Just gotta do a little bit of practicing first.
>>28287729
Thanks, Anon.
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>>28291052
Pastebin with the rest of the story?
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>>28291129
http://pastebin.com/tZH8QT5P

And here's a strawpoll for the Listen sequel:
http://www.strawpoll.me/11111610

And here's a thing I wrote in /nst/.
Working from the prompt from http://desuarchive.org/mlp/thread/20316158 but instead of Anon taking Equestrian Twilight bra shopping it will be SciTwi. Because of reasons.

Purple Friday

>”You’d like me to what?” SciTwi gives a look of confusion.
>”Bra shopping. I just learned what those things are, since I’m rarely over here in this dimension very often.” Equestrian Twilight locks her fingers in front of her. “And I figured that going shopping with you would be best because you’re the most similar to me.”
>SciTwi widens her eyes at the floor. “Ohhhh…”
>Inside of her head, SciTwi immediately begins to feel flushed. Everything about the situation tells her that the smart thing to do is decline, lest some awkward moment start up.
>But she figures that it couldn’t be as intense as she imagines it.
>She gives her equestrian counterpart a slight nod of approval. “What time?”
>”Whenever you’re ready, I guess.” Equestrian Twilight looks in the direction of her car.
>…
>”I can’t believe you’ve never worn bras ever since you got here.” SciTwi whispers quietly enough for the other shoppers not to hear.
>Equestrian Twilight scratches the back of her head. “Well, I’ve usually been busy with… stuff every time I came here. Buying clothes was the least of my concerns.”
>”Oh. Right.”
>”Anyway, I’ll try not to buy much.” Equestrian Twilight brings up as the two enter the underwear section.
>”Oh, it’s fine. I have like 40 something dollars to spare.” Insists SciTwi. “Don’t worry about it.”
>”Alright. But we should still leave pretty soon anyway. Pinkie’s throwing another one of her Friday night parties again.”
>”Heh, don’t wanna miss that.” SciTwi pretends to look forward to the extra energy to come from that girl later on.
>Picking out the right color doesn’t take long, but size proves to be a more difficult issue.
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>>28291336
>”How is one able to tell what size their breasts are? Do they just… measure or something?”
>SciTwi struggles to think of a response as she takes a look at what they already gathered in the cart. Three different bras, one black laced one, a plain bright pink one and the last one just a plain white one.
>”Well?” Equestrian Twilight repeats.
>”I’ve usually just known what size I was for a long time now. Never really thought about things like finding a new size.”
>She’s starting to blush now.
>The two roll the cart over to the entrance to the dressing rooms. The place is jam packed; no spaces available.
>”Well, I guess we can sort this out while we wait for one of the booths to open up.” SciTwi keeps her tone low. “The main thing about bra size is the size of your… you know.”
>”Mhm.” Equestrian Twilight doesn’t even seem at all fazed by this.
>She wonders why SciTwi is appearing to be so nervous about this.
>”So…” Equestrian Twilight starts off. “Do I look at how big mine are out here or in there?” She peers down to her chest. “I’m not sure if I should, things got a little weird when I tried something similar in school.”
>”O-oh…” SciTwi resists picturing what happened. “Yeah, you should do that in one of the booths. That’s kind of what they’re for anyway.”
>Twilight holds the bright pink pair up to her chest, and SciTwi does everything in her power to keep herself looking away. Until…
>”Do you think this colour compliments me well?” Equestrian Twilight asks. “Uh, are you alright?"
>SciTwi gives up and spins around. “YES! Uh… y-yes, it does.”
>”Awesome.” Equestrian Twilight notices a door open up in the changing room. “Oh hey, someone’s leaving!”
>She rushes over to the booth as the previous lady walks out before anyone else can take it, with the three bras in hand.
>SciTwi now has to sit all alone while battling back thoughts about the other Twilight undressing and trying the new undergarments on.
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>>28291344
>Not even thirty seconds later, the door to the booth opens once more, and Equestrian Twilight steps out with her shirt buttoned all the way down.
>”How do you put this thing on?” She calls out.
>SciTwi perks up in her seat, and springs out of her seat when she notices the other girl pushing the sides of her shirt away with the bra in her hands.
>”Do the cup looking thingies go here or…” She holds them over her nipples.
>”Booth.” SciTwi blushes uncontrollably.
>”Wh-wha?”
>”Booth!” She pulls the indecent girl into the booth as shocked glances from all directions turn to murmuring.
>”What’s wrong?” Equestrian Twilight asks before looking down and slapping her palm against her face. “Oh.”
>She lets the shirt fall back to the sides after SciTwi locks the door.
>”Am I in trouble?”
>”No, no. We’re fine.” SciTwi can’t resist letting her eyes lower towards her counterpart’s nipples before her. “Uh…”
>”Oh, great.” Equestrian slips her dress shirt all the way off of her shoulders and arms, letting it drop to the floor. “That was a close one.”
>SciTwi continues to stare, knowing that it’s only a matter of time before her thirst makes her become more touchy feely. But that doesn’t stop her from noticing a major difference between the other Twilight’s breasts and her own.
>Those breasts that SciTwi can’t stop looking at appear to be so much… smaller than her own. Even with the nipples completely erect from the chilly air inside the dressing room.
>Equestrian Twilight, clueless as hell about the situation, notices SciTwi staring right at her chest and steps closer to the girl can get a better look. “Here.” She hands the other girl the bright pink bra. “Just… how does this thing work?”
>SciTwi’s shaky hands accept the article of clothing, her palms sweaty and her knees weak, arms are heavy.
>”O-okay…” SciTwi can’t stop stumbling over her words now. “S-so… first you get th-the… this… and… and then…”
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>>28291350
>”Are you freezing too?” Equestrian Twilight starts poking at her nipples, trying to make them go back down. “These things are so weird. Why do they do this every time I get cold?”
>SciTwi lets out a few babbling utterances.
>”What?”
>”U-um… yeah, I d-don;t know why that happens either.”
>”Wow, you must be really cold.” Equestrian Twilight comments. “But… you have on a shirt AND a sweater vest. Are you more used to warm places?”
>”Y-yea…”
>”Well anyway… can you help me with this?” Twilight spreads her arms out and huffs her chest forward, nearly jabbing SciTwi with her nipples. “I hope these things don’t poke through.”
>SciTwi loops the straps around Twilight’s arms and begins to stretch the strap around her torso to connect it.
>The thing is far too loose.
>”So, is this right?” Twilight looks down at the two cups almost falling away from her nearly flat chest. “I can still see my nipples.”
>Y-yeah…” SciTwi clumsily explains. “It’s supposed to be flat against your skin.” Her hands are absolutely trembling.
>Twilight steps closer to her, almost nose to nose. “Can you fix it?”
>SciTwi nods in a jittery fashion and lightly slams her hands against the others girl’s chest. Twilight gasps a little bit in surprise, but doesn’t question anything about this.
>”Your hands are so cold.” Twilight says as the fingers nervously squeeze her.
>SciTwi gives her a squeak in response. “S-sorry. Just seeing how they should go up against your skin.”
>She can only cringe at the memories of when she would stay up all night feeling herself when she began to… develop. There’s no telling what will happen when she’s in the presence of a literal clone of herself, let alone feeling her up.
>It’s a pretty dangerous blade to hold the string of her self control near.
>Even with the bra tightened, it’s not enough to close the gap where people can still look in.
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>>28291353
>”I think it’s too big. What do you think?” Twilight tells SciTwi, who can’t bring herself to answer.
>Twilight just lets the other girl take the longest gander at her chest for quite some time. She then says something that nearly makes SciTwi fall back onto the floor with blood dripping from her nose.
>”Can I see yours?”
>SciTwi’s heart races in her chest as she shudders instead of answering. But she doesn’t need to answer as she sits down on the nearby bench of the changing booth, signaling for the other girl to follow her.
>She’s pretty much in the land of lewd thoughts now; taken a one way ticket there.
>Her hands shoot right back to Twilight’s bare chest as she plants herself right next to her on the bench.
>”What are you doing?” Twilight nervously asks.
>”Th-this… is how we get a good idea of proportions. So like… we know which sizes fit and everything.” SciTwi lightly flicks the other girl’s nipples around with her fingertips.
>As Equestrian Twilight looks down to SciTwi’s chest, it doesn’t take her long to notice the significant bulge underneath the sweater vest. “Are… you wearing protective pads over your breasts or something?”
>”Nope.” SciTwi squeaks in a high pitched voice.
>”Well that’s odd. I thought yours would be the same size as mine since we’re pretty much the same person.” She pauses. “But whatever. I guess we can just compare after seeing proportions.”
>”Uh…”
>Twilight mirrors the actions that SciTwi has just displayed, pressing her hands onto the other girl’s chest and letting her fingers begin to feel through the thick sweater vest.

That's all I posted for that so far. I might finish it tomorrow, if I have time after updating Cognitive Dissonance. My head hurts now, and it's the time I go to sleep anyway.
See y'all later!
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>>28291123
YES
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>>28291336
>Anon doesn't do it with anyone and Lemon Zest goes on a magical musical adventure with tons of catchy songs and pirates and lasers and other cool shit.
The fact this is an option is making me ask the question of why? Also why not multiple girls?
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>>28291462
Never mind, I didn't read the options correctly. The space adventure is still a question of why?
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>>28291369
This is lewd as fuck fampai
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The captcha for the strawpoll wont connect for me so I will just say my vote is for all three girls here.
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>>28291336
Where's Sugarcoat?
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>>28291369
Looking forward to more of this. Great work, Green.
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>>28291369
>>28291123
Dykeshit
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>>28291664
gayshit : ^)
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page 10 bump
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bump from 9
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>>28294059
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>>28289662
See, now, THAT is a high quality bump.

Because I would have sex with that.
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>>28295083
And this >>28294856 is a low quality bump!
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>>28295083
Those hips, must breed.
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>>28295192
Right? How can you resist?

I mean do you even WANT to?
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>>28295250
>There she is.
>Her form fitting sweater as distinctive as her soft, pink hair.
>You haven't planned this.
>Even though you knew she had friends at the library.
>Even though you stay late more often than not.
>Your days aren't filled with the hope that she's had a long day.
>Maybe her friends are running late, and that cushioned chair looks sooooo comfortable...
>You don't wonder what you'd do if she took a little nap across from you.
>Heaven forbid you would ever watch her twist and turn in her impromptu bed, her efforts to find comfort only affording you a more and more enticing veiw.
>You would never furtively cross the dividing gulf of carpet to sit next to her.
>Certainly, your hand would never take three tries to grasp that deliciously bare shoulder, gently rousing her with a shake.
"The library's closed, Fluttershy."
>These words would never cross your lips.
>She would never sleepily frown at you, and your eyes would never widen in panic as you realize you've addressed her by name.
>"O-oh... I see. Oh, dear... Did I fall asleep..?"
>You will never feel compelled to answer her, regardless of the fact that you're admitting how your eyes can't seem to find anything more compelling.
"Uh, yeah. Those girls... Your friends..? They left a while ago."
>Obviously, her turquoise eyes don't enthrall you, the extended eye contact failing to bring a blush to her cheeks.
>Your grip on her shoulder, forgotten to your conscious mind, but all too prevalent in this obvious fantasy, wouldn't cause the girl's eyes to shift downward.
>The breathtakingly shy smile, uncomfortable but not unwelcoming, would never grace her lips in a thousand years.
"C-can I walk you home?"
>These aren't words you'd blurt out in your most inebriated state, let alone out of the blue.
>"Oh... Well, if you want to..."
>These words aren't meant for you.
>Even as you stand, a hand held out, and slowly accepted, you know the girl you're pulling gently to her feet isn't real.
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>>28295446
>Walking slowly down familiar streets, you surely can't feel her inches from your side.
>At a crosswalk, your shoulders would hardly touch as she leaned against you.
>The shiver that ran through her as the cool night air caressed her would never prompt you to settle your jacket over her delicate shoulders.
>Much as you'd like to think it, you would never have the gumption to hesitantly slip your hand behind her back, settling on her hip as she pressed into your side.
>You don't know where she lives.
>No, seriously. You're not THAT much of a stalker.
>But her whispered directions would never lead you to the outskirts of town.
>It might make sense to you that a girl like this would live at a picturesque cottage, but...
>Surely not alone..?
>"T-this is me..."
>You blink.
>Where did this come from?
>Weren't you fantasizing in the library?
>Either you have a better imagination than you thought, or...
"Uhhh... Right. Yeah. Got you home. Safe and sound..."
>You hear a sound you've never heard before.
>As a soft giggle escapes from Fluttershy's lips, covered by slender fingers, you come to the realization that you might have finally grown a pair.
>"Well, I don't, umm... That is, you came all this way for me..."
>You blink, realizing that you actually WILL, make that ARE, watching Fluttershy clutch your jacket around her shoulders.
>"I could, umm, tea? I mean, would you like some? Tea, that is. Because it's cold?"
>You can see how hard these words are for Fluttershy to get out.
"Sure. Tea sounds great."
>How could you say no to her?
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>>28295537
>>28291369
>All these awesome new stories
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>You will never hear the soft whispering moans of your shy lover while you make slow and sweet love to Fluttershy while cuddling her during a cold winter night.
>She will never kiss your forehead and snuggle you in the afterglow with only a single blanket covering both of you in front of the fireplace.
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>>28295250
F-fluttermilf?
>You will never fuck your best friend's mom.
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>>28291369
Moar!
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>Sameface
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>>28298320
Dash, please, take those apples outta your shirt. Nobody is going to believe it either way.
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>>28298320
>Sunburnt Applejack
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Humans allowed on /mlp/ again? been away for a while. Wut happened, did the 4th reich of the mods come to pass?
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Bed bump good night friends!
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>>28300094
Goodnight, Anon.
>>28291518
>>28291606
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>>28295934
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>>28291525
So pic related was the result. Should I make another strawpoll since this one isn't working for everyone? It didn't work for me when I tried to vote for the musical adventure with pirates and lasers.
I'm also going to try and finish off Cognitive Dissonance tomorrow hopefully. But right now, I kind of got caught up typing another thing for the writefag guild thread and got a little... too into it. I'll just post it here because I'm about to pass out anyway and can't write anything else until I'm awake enough to not screw up a lot.
And the sequel to Listen will come in after we have a strong agreement on what should happen. If you guys want a new strawpoll, I can do that. And include Sugarcoat along with literallywhoFlare. FriENDship is getting some thought too. Let me know what you think and here's a sequel to Trixie self-insert:
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>>28300116
Previously: http://pastebin.com/XFXAc8G5
>"Hey, Trixie. Can I sit with you?" Twilight asks.
>"I don't know. Do you want to?" Trixie responds.
>"Of course I do. Unless you're busy or preoccupied with something."
>"Uh, no. I'm pretty sure you could tell anyway."
>"Well just because you're sitting here alone doesn't mean you can't think about things." Twilight points out.
>"Just because I'm alone thinking about things doesn't mean I'm enjoying it."
>"So it is okay if I sit here, then?"
>"Well I don't want you to have to get up again, so I guess you can stay."
>"Cool."
>"So why do you want to sit here?"
>"Because you're sitting here."
>"Why is that a good thing to you?"
>"Because you're a pretty cool girl. And I guess I don't understand why you want to sit here alone."
>"I just do."
>"But why? there's gotta be a reason behind it."
>"I just do, okay? You wouldn't believe me if I told you anyway."
>"So there is a reason."
>"Yes, but I'm not going to tell you."
>"Why not?" Twilight asks.
>"Because you wouldn't like me as much if I did."
>"Why?"
>"STOP ASKING WHY! I'M NOT GOING TO TELL YOU!"
>"Whoa, okay. Sorry I asked."
>"Please, just don't ask. I'd rather not open that can of worms."
>"Does it involve me?"
>"No."
>"Are you really telling the truth?"
>"You're asking me questions again."
>"Because I'm worried about you!"
>"WHY ARE YOU WORRIED ABOUT ME? STOP WORRYING ABOUT ME!" Trixie yells.
>"Trixie, please. I just want to get to the bottom of this and help you out."
>"This isn't one of those types of situations."
>"Well you did yell loud enough for people to start looking, didn't you? There's clearly something that's bothering you. And I want to help you out with whatever it is."
>"You're right. There is something that's bothering me. But I'm not going to tell you."
>"Why?"
>"Why are you asking me why again?"
>"I care, okay?"
>"So?"
>"I care, and I really want to care."
>"Well I don't want to care."
>"But you do, don't you?"
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>>28300127
>"Didn't I just say that I don't want to? I'm not hiding anything here."
>"Didn't you just say you weren't going to tell me what's making you upset?"
>"Except that. Let me finish first."
>"Okay. So why don't you want to tell me?"
>"You're being really intrusive right now."
>"I'm sorry." Twilight apologizes. "But I'm concerned. I can't help it. I don't want there to be something bothering you. I don't like watching other people feeling bad. A true friend helps someone out when they're not feeling their best."
>"One: Why do you see me as a friend when I'm not even in your social group? Two: I don't know, I guess I've been letting something bother me for so long that I've become addicted to it."
>"Well that doesn't sound like a good thing."
>"I don't care. Those days are so far into the past, I can't see them anymore. I don't even talk in third person anymore, as you can see."
>"Yeah, what happened to that? I thought that was pretty interesting."
>"I no longer have a reason to. I'm not the girl I thought I was."
>"What? What do you mean by that?"
>"I'm just not!" Trixie repeats. "Okay? And I'm not going to tell you anything more!"
>"Trixie, I don't want to see you like this. You used to be in such good spirit. What happened?"
>"I DON'T WANNA TELL YOU! I HATE TALKING! I HATE CONVERSATIONS! I WANT NOTHING TO DO WITH IT!"
>"Is that the thing that's bothering you? Whatever it is, I can help you."
>"Don't talk to me."
>"Trixie, come back!" Twilight begs. "Please!"
>"No! I don't want you talking to me?"
>"You're making a scene, Trixie. This can be a lot easier if we just sort this out."
>"I don't want to sort this out. I have to stand my own ground!"
>"But you're on the wrong ground!"
>"I know, and I don't care anymore. Fuck talking to people. Fuck social interaction. Fuck conforming to fit what other people like to see in other people around them. It's not ME. At least it's a lot less me than how I am now."
>"What is you, then?"
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>>28300137
>"It can't be told. Only shown. Actions mean much more than words, Twilight. And I'm not willing to show you because I'm not able to because the real me doesn't exist."
>"Just come back to the cafeteria and we'll talk it out."
>"NO! Didn't you just hear me? I'm not talking to ANYONE about my problems!"
>"But that's bad!"
>"That's the POINT! I want to spite all of those assholes who tried to get me to "come out of my shell". Fuck them, I'm not going to put up with that after-school-special bullshit."
>"Please stop cursing."
>"Don't fucking tell me what to say."
>"Why are you getting so defensive? Is this more of what was bothering you?"
>"SHUT. UP."
>"Trixie, if you're trying to drive me away from you, it's not going to work."
>"That doesn't mean I'm going to give up."
>"There's a saying, Trixie. That some of the people whom are the hardest to love need it the most."
>"Oh, fuck off with that! That's the same type of shit everyone else told me! The reasons why I do everything the wrong way just to give them a lifelong middle finger."
>"So you're addicted to doing everything the wrong way?"
>"Wow, you know what? I think I want you to hate me now. I want to end this once and for all so you agree to never talk to me again. Here's the truth, lol."
>"I'm listening."
>"It's YOU! And people like YOU. The ones who are better than me at everything! And then you waltz up to me one day and ask me to sit with you. The fucking nerve!"
>"Trixie, I don't know what to say."
>"OF COURSE YOU DON'T, NOW LET ME FINISH!"
>"Okay, okay."
>"All my life, I thought I was at the top of my game. I spoke in third person, putting on my act all the time in real life. Basking in the greatness I thought I had. I was so happy! I was HAPPY!" Trixie rants.
>"But what hap-"
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>>28300148
>"LET ME FINISH!" Trixie cuts Twilight off. "It all changed when I started seeing other people excelling and surpassing me. I tried to just ignore it, but more and more people started improving more than me. And the proximity got shorter and shorter."
>"Proximity?"
>"Quiet!"
>"Okay."
>"Proximity as in, people who were closer and closer to me were reaching heights I would never get to without working hard. And thinking I was in the top spot, I didn't want to work hard ever again. Fuck that shit, I've done enough of that. I'm fucking tired of it, but that's, not the point."
>"Alright."
>"There were a few really impacting instances where I would see someone do something REALLY well, so much better than me. Those moments crushed me. I respect those people so much, but I couldn't take the distance between my league and theirs."
>"Go on."
>"And at the same time, there were people telling me that I was doing it all wrong. That I should get advice from outside sources more often. Be open to new ideas. Try new things that I never gave a chance before."
>"Mhm?"
>"I wasn't having it. I was going to stand my own ground, and it worked for me so far at that point anyway. So what did I have to worry about?"
>"What went wrong?"
>"Just let me finish."
>"Okay. Go ahead."
>"When it's someone I PERSONALLY KNOW. Someone I see every single day. Who outdoes everything I do right in front of my face. Not over the internet or anything. Not someone who's older and more experienced than me. That I can handle most of the times, but at least I respect those people because I have reasons to believe that I'm not all the way a failure."
>"Okay."
>"But it's people like YOU! The people who are like fucking movie protagonists! The one who have everything go just perfectly for them and they do the most amazing things that I've only dreamt of."
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>>28300158
>"So you wanted to spite me by being great?" Twilight asks.
>"You and everyone else who told me to stop doing things the wrong way. I won't do what people tell me, especially if they get all of these advantages over me that don't even make fucking sense. I want nothing to do with you. I genuinely hate you."
>"I don't think you really mean that."
>"I do. And I can't even be great compared to you anyway. What with your pretty princess wings and all that. All your magic and friends that I don't have."
>"Don't you have your two performer buddies or whatever?"
>"They're colleagues. Not actual friends who want to spend time with me outside of business."
>"Do you even know that for a fact?"
>"I've reached the point where I don't even want to find out. I'm done. And so I shall remain alone, whether you like it or not."
>"I can teach you how to put real magic in your shows, though! Sure you've been doing it wrong, but I can show you the way!"
>"I don't want to. Because your way isn't me. It depends on an outside source that gives me the knowledge. Not something that came solely from my mind."
>"Well, that's just silly talk."
>"I know. And I don't care anymore. Fuck people."
>"That's a really bad outlook on life."
>"Same thing. I know and don't care."
>"But it's okay to use advice that someone else gave you! You might have even done that before and didn't even realize it! It's how you learn things!"
>"Fuck learning. Fuck doing things through other people. It's not my dream. It's not my vision. It's not me."
>"Yes it is! Don't you understand? It's how you improve what makes you yourself."
>"I don't believe you."
>"Well how would you like me to show you? Come on, Trixie. Come back to the cafeteria and we'll talk things out. I can teach you everything I know!"
>"Your ideas and abilities aren't my own original ideas and abilities. It's no use."
>"At least give it a chance!"
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>>28300169
>"No."
>"Why not? You can't stay like this forever!"
>"Watch me."
>"So you're not even going to give it a chance?"
>"Nope."
>"Even though the things I do are the very things that overshadowed what you did before?"
>"Nope."
>"But I can teach you! It's okay to talk to people more."
>"I said no."
>"Why don't you want to learn?"
>"BECAUSE I HATE LEARNING! BECAUSE THE PEOPLE I HATE NOW HAVE TOLD ME TO LEARN! I DON'T CARE ANYMORE HOW CHILDISH I'M BEING. I'M. DONE!"
>"Trixie."
>"So done."
>"Please stop crying."
>"No."
>"Trixie, something clearly hurting you if you're crying."
>"At least it's something I can feel that pushes me to do things! Unlike other people who can just feel on command and do great things like it's on the same level as breathing."
>"Please just try to calm down. I'll give you a shoulder to lean on."
>"I don't want one. You don't even know half the story."
>"Trixie, please!"
>"You don't even know one tenth of the story!"
>"Then tell it to me! I'm willing to listen to you! Just express your feelings to me and I'm not going to judge you!"
>"No. Because that would be the right thing to do."
>"So you're just going to do the wrong thing on purpose, then." Twilight concludes.
>"I said I'm addicted to it, did I?"
>"Do you want to be addicted to it? Or do you want to be willing to learn?"
>"At this point, I don't even want to be willing to learn anymore. Because I'd hate myself if I were."
>"Why? I don't care if it's the right or wrong thing to do to tell me what's wrong. I just want to hear you out! Didn't you say you wanted to tell me the truth anyway?"
>"Because I do not have the time nor the breath to explain it all to you." Trixie answers. "Just know this. I don't care how the "right way" to do something is anymore. I hate it so much; I want nothing to do with it."
>"But don't you want to get better at things?"
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>>28300182
>"I don't even know anymore. At this point, if I ever do, it better be because I did it all by myself without help from other people."
>"Why, Trixie? Why is asking for help such a bad thing? I don't like seeing you tear up like this! I just want to help."
>"Don't talk to me."
>"Trixie."
>"I said don't talk to me. I'm so done with conversations. So done with talking."
>"Trixie!"
>"Fuck dialogue."
>Trixie leaves the hallway that no one could prove she was in until it was narrated to make it clear what the SETTING is.
>She takes her stubborn perfectionist values with her that had not been made clear until it was narrated EXPLAINING that it was what she was feeling.
>And the truth is still a mystery to Twilight, as well as the readers who only read the dialogue.
>Anyone can draw their own conclusions from what characters say, but there is only one truth intended by the author. And sometimes, they really want to get it across that THAT is specifically what someone is feeling.
>Because there are specific things they want to vent.
>Because their subtlety and difficulty to explain is what makes those feelings so uncomfortable.
>And the author just wants the reader to ACCURATELY UNDERSTAND.
>So that author doesn't feel as alone as he did before.
>Even if it's just a tiny bit less.
The end.

If you're wondering why this is so edgy and horrible, it's because the guy in the writefag's guild asked me to write only dialogue and I ended up putting too many of my own feelings into this. So that's why it's worse than the usual stuff I put out.
But don't worry. From this point on, I'm going to use dialogue to the absolute minimal amount in EVERYTHING I write, if at all. I'm so done with dialogue. I can't believe it took me this long to realize that it was one of the main things I hated doing so much in writing greentext. But hey, at least I learned something really important about myself from posting in the Writefag's Guild.
More updates soon.
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>>28300116
How about we finish the story before going on a weird and random tangent, also I am fine with the results of this one.
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>>28300257
I like you writing this way more that just descriptions and stuff. Is that bad?
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>>28300257
Meh I liked it, although I would have preferred Trixie just knocking Twilight the fuck out instead of repeating herself.
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>>28300331
Also this>>28300307
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>>28300116
>literallywhoFlare
kek

Also I still vote three way with lightning dust recolor and bipolar sonata recolor
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>>28300257
How do you write so much?
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>>28300116
Nigga you better give us some friENDship soon.
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>>28300438
Legend has it he's sarge reincarnated
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>>28300438
Dude, look at his name. He goes by that for a reason.
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>>28300438
He is the green god m8.
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>>28300257
Looking forward to your next update, Green. Have a good sleep fampai.
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>>28301139
uncensored version is purchasable sadly.
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>>28301139
>paying for a watermark
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>>28301139
>That rarara jaw
>Those necks
>Suddenly thick tighs
No offense but that anatomy is shit and i feel bad for who ever pay for this
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>>28301139
>That anatomy
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And i am waiting for NaOH update , i am just gone wait :)
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>>28302764
I'm sorry. I won't be able to update tonight. I have to do get some research done.
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>>28302934
Something is wrong here.
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>>28302934
I want to suck your cock
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>>28302934
Ok
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>>28300257
>Changing your style
This is why you're my favorite writefag
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>>28302934
>>28302838
I still thought it was funny.
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>>28304007
NaOH's cave research... Fascinating.
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>>28299260
Yes, as far as i know. But sadly alot of write friends left leaving story's dead like wardrobe malfunction at canterlot high. I hope some day he comes back to finnish it but i doubt it.
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>>28300257
More like this one please.
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>>28300257
Why do you hate dialogue dude? You seem pretty okay writing it.
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>>28301846
The question is, who would find the uncensored version to be worth it? I mean, look at that horrifying anatomy.
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Business works.
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>>28305500
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>>28282511
I'm doing those one at a time.
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>>28282037
>”We were just on our way back up.” Indigo lies, already heading back towards the stairs.
>Trixie stands there with a look that the other two would have wished was nothing more than just confusion.
>Sugarcoat watches Indigo rush right past Trixie, as though she were concerned that the girl might have lashed out at her as she went by. Trixie stares down at Sugarcoat without saying a word, expecting her to do the same.
>”Trixie sees that you managed to get the rest of the arrow heads out of the fence.” Trixie begins her way down the stairs.
>Where the hell did Indigo Zap just go?
>Was that the front door slamming shut?
>”Yes, we wanted to take a look at them.” Sugarcoat answers.
>Trixie raises an eyebrow at her stepsister.
>Sugarcoat isn’t going to hesitate to answer honestly if asked, and Trixie knows this. There’s no need for an interrogation.
>”Why did you want to look at the arrows Trixie shot yesterday?” She leans forward towards Sugarcoat. “Did you think she cheated somehow?”
>”Yes.” Sugarcoat answers not even two seconds later. “There is no way you legitimately did that.”
>Trixie’s infamous grin returns. “Sounds like someone’s a little jealous.” The girl slyly comments.
>”It’s impossible for me to be jealous of a cheater.” Sugarcoat isn’t fazed… again.
>”Oh, right! Trixie should know your methods by now.” Trixie turns around and starts to pace around the basement. “Just keep implying, implying, implying…”
>Sugarcoat silently sighs.
>”And if you act hard enough, maybe… just maybe the other one will crack under the pressure. Because you have literally NO defense for your argument.” Trixie spins around and menacingly steps in the direction of Sugarcoat.
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>>28309253
>”My defense is that you claim to have learned how to get four bullseyes in a row in less than a day. Which is literally humanly impossible. It’s more like four bullshits in a row.”
>”Very clever play on words, dear sister!” Trixie mocks, pointing her nose towards the ceiling. “Really shows how unbiased you AREN’T anymore. Trixie feels as though she struck a nerve.”
>”I bet you feel as though you struck a legitimate bullseye as well.”
>”Don’t you mean struck a legitimate bullshit? If you’re going to be mad at Trixie, stay mad at her the whole conversation and stay consistent with your butthurt insults! Trixie enjoys that.”
>”I’m not angry, I’m annoyed that your head is so far in the clouds. At least I can stay a little relevant to what we’re talking about before stooping to ‘ooooh, she must be angry’.”
>Trixie had snatched the arrowheads up from the work table before Sugarcoat even finished her sentence. “At least Trixie’s head is in the clouds and not up her ass!” She squints at Sugarcoat before stomping back up the stairs.
>Sugarcoat adds one last comment before Trixie starts off to the stairs back up to the bedroom from the kitchen. “That didn’t even make any sense. And I honestly don’t know which place your head is closet to at this point.”
>”You’re sooooooo funny!” Trixie’s voice chimes through the house, more distant with each step she takes.
>Sugarcoat angrily grunts, only now realizing that she shouldn’t have let the other girl get under her skin like that.
>After she makes it back up the stairs, she gets an odd feeling of someone watching her.
>She ignores it until she rounds the corner to go up the second flight of stairs to get to the bedroom.
>”And another thing!” Trixie’s sudden voice startles Sugarcoat. “Don’t… touch… Trixie’s arrows… again.”
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>>28309264
>Sugarcoat feels her heart beating in her ears, noticing through the kitchen window that the arrows are back to being stacked on top of one another on the side of the fence.
>”They’re my arrows. And don’t startle me like that again.” Sugarcoat responds.
>”They’re Trixie’s now. It’s not like you’re ever going to shoot them again.” Trixie looks out the window as well. “And Trixie wants them to stay the way she left them. Forever.”
>She seems REALLY uptight about this.
>Sugarcoat starts to answer, but she notices Trixie already turning around and walking away, not even paying attention.
>It’s really awkward staying in the room together the following night.
>…

>>28300550
>>28300374
>>28300265
That's a preview of what's to come for Cognitive Dissonance. Once I finish it, the bigger fish to fry are next.
>>28300438
I can't stop. No, really. I literally can't stop.
>>28304868
>>28303988
>>28301104
Thanks for the support, guys. I appreciate it.
>>28300331
>>28300307
>>28305941
You really thought that one was good? I hated it so much because I just... can't really get into the whole dialogue thing. I like to specifically explain what the characters are doing and feeling. Not rely on what they're saying. Actions > Words, in my opinion.

Anyway, expect other updates I wrote in other threads in just a sec.
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>>28309315
Dude you do dialogue fine, I don't know where the hell you got the idea you suck at it, but they were fucking with you.
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>>28309351
Eh, alright. Anything for you guys.
>>28309315
Sunset One-Shot.
>There’s a knock on your apartment door.
>You mute the TV and get up from the couch to answer whoever would stop by your place this late at night.
>The door swings open, and there stands Sunset Shimmer.
>”H-hi, Anon.”
“Oh, uh, hey Sunset. What brings you here?”
>She bites her lips and already takes a step closer to you. “Can I ask you something? I’ve wanted to ask you this for a long time now.”
“Sure. What is it?”
>”I’ve thought about this for a long time. Will you have sex with me?”
>Your brain goes straight from “I wanna go back to watching TV” mode to “holy shit, she really wants to have sex with me?” mode.
>”I think I love y- no, not even that. I KNOW that I love you. So much. And we’ve knows each other for so long, and I can’t take it anymore! I want you so badly!”
“S-sunset…”
>”So what do you say? I really need you tonight.”
>Without another word, you wrap your arms around her, pull her into a welcoming embrace and plant the longest kiss you possibly can on her luscious lips.
“I would love to have sex with you, Sunset Shimmer.” You finally say after like, a minute.
>The door to your apartment is gently closed not even five seconds later.
>And it is promptly locked.
>…
>Sunset is the first to push you against the bedroom wall with a powerful kiss.
>You respond by doing the same, making sure she does hit the opposite was too hard.
>You both lean into each other with your hands, heart and minds going wild.
>The pleading moans that come from Sunset make you want to hold her like this for all eternity, but you want to get naked with her just as badly.
>She pulls your shirt off and you slip her leather jacket off of her shoulders.
>Plow your hands into the girl’s perky breasts through her shirt, squeezing them hard enough to elicit a series of grunts out of the fiery haired girl.
>Sunset leans back onto the bed and throws her head further back until her eyes can only see the opposite wall.
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>>28309623
>Run your tongue up the front of her neck, specking her with kisses everywhere you go.
>Her quickening breathing can be felt against your lips.
>You’ve been so lost in the warmth of her collarbone against your lips that you didn’t even notice her feet curl over the waist of your jeans and pull them down to your knees.
>Squeeze her supple breasts with a million time more enthusiasm than before; with enough force to unhook the front of her bra through her shirt.
>Right as she feels this happen, Sunset grabs the collar of her shirt and rips it to the sides.
>You watch the girl unveil her protruding bosom before you, taking the separated bra cups with the increasingly torn shirt in her shaking hands.
>It isn’t long before something else starts protruding through the front of your boxers.
>Sunset feels it poking her thighs as you bury your face in her breasts, tightly closing your lips around her erect nipples.
>And so she frees your member, automatically lightly pulling your hips towards her own.
>She doesn’t want to spare a second.
>And neither do you.
>Grab the bottom of her skirt and ride it all the way up past her hips, rising the curtain from her pristine white panties.
>You find yourself unable to resist ramming your pecker into the bottom ridge of those panties, feeling your already dripping head push past her lips through the thin fabric.
>Sunset only quietly cries for more; you feel her latching her legs around your waist.
>And she is NOT letting go.
>You don’t even have the patience to push the ridge of fabric to the side.
>Just start plowing away with as much force as you can muster from within.
>The thin fabric lasts for a little bit. A little bit.
>It starts to give in after a few seconds under the repeated thrust of your rock hard shaft breaching through.
>Twisted around from the might of your member, nearly pushed to the side.
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>>28309630
>Sunset helps you by thrusting herself back into you from the opposite direction in motions simultaneously with your own; there is an audible snap.
>And you feel yourself penetrate her completely, sliding all the way into the warm moisture as Sunset fails to hold back the loudest moan.
>You can go back and forth even more now, feeling every little bit of her walls hug the surface of your throbbing shaft between each lustful plunge.
>Sunset’s breathing turns vocal, and you can’t help but succumb to this as well.
>The two of you are talking to each other through your loving actions.
>With blushing smiles widely spread across your faces, staring into the ravenous, glistening eyes of their significant other.
>You watch Sunset shut her eyes in fervent exhilaration as she feels your shaft furiously stroke against her sensitive goods from the inside.
>It’s overtaking her with pure joy, and you mirror everything she feels you do to her.
>Loom over the girl sprawled on her back on the bed, caressing her increasingly humid body as she happily undulates underneath you.
>With her closed legs on your lower back desperately pulling you closer into her.
>Lock your lips with hers once more, and Sunset lets out a pleading cry into your mouth the very second your tongues eagerly mash into one another.
>You know what she wants, thrusting faster without care how close you are to ejaculating.
>Sunset wants this more than even she understands -- you must quench her thirst for your love.
>This is when the springs on the bed really start creaking.
>You and Sunset make them louder by syncing your motions together.
>There is no way the torn panties aren’t absolutely soaked by now; you feel nothing but sheer slipperiness around your entire pelvic area.
>And you’re not even close to being out of breath.
>Hump your loving mate harder and faster to the point where she clenches her teeth under those thrilled smiling lips you’ve kissed a thousand times.
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>>28309640
>Her other lips are being fiercely kneaded against the drenched surface of your shaft that further stimulates itself against them.
>She groans, and then groans again even louder.
>You move your face down to her chest as she groans a third time, feeling her soft, bouncing breasts vibrate from her stirred voice.
>It grows more high pitched, and Sunset starts to shudder FAR outside of her control.
>She’s thrusting back into you with infinitely more power than you are to her now; there’s only one thing she can be feeling.
>You excitedly push yourself over the edge as well, joining Sunset in the mutual overload of each other’s senses.
>Shut your eyes, and shoot them open again to find Sunset doing so as well with the same blissful smile on her reddened face.
>The thrusting sounds quickly become more liquid sounding, coming from both ends of… this.
>The girl cries out under you, and you cry out over her.
>The two of you bound together in an unbreakable grip.
>You release into her, expecting it all to overflow and leak out onto the bed sheets.
>And you don’t care the slightest bit.
>You even WANT it to get everywhere.
>The load continuously shoots into Sunset Shimmer; you hold her close with her lips sealed onto yours.
>The two of you remain petrified in the combined orgasm.
>Letting out the quietest groans of devotedly ecstatic strain.
>Still as stone in that same embrace for what you wish more than anything else could last forever.
>And it does, because the universe apparently ceases to exist. >>28269028
>…
>Wake up.
>Knees week, arms are heavy, palms sweaty and bed sheets thick with cum.
>It was all a dream.
>…
>Later that day.
>Hear a knock on the door to your apartment.
>Answer it, since you already showered and cleaned yourself up anyway.
>It’s Sunset.
>She’s holding a bouquet of lilies.
>”Can I ask you someth-”
“No.” You slam the door in her face.
End.
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And now for something completely different.
>>28291369
>SciTwi gasps a deep breath of air, taking a quick peek at the ceiling as her cheeks turn a flushed red.
>”Whoa…” Twilight mutters. “You weren’t kidding. This really is your chest!”
>Nothing comes out of SciTwi in response but the most nervous giggle. She does everything in her power to cover up the immense desire for more of this… feeling.
>And nothing can stop her curious fingers from scooping under the other Twilight’s new bra to run her fingertips over those nipples again. She… lost control.
>”How did you get yours to get so big?” Twilight asks, pressing through the sweater vest a little bit more tenderly.
>SciTwi croaks a little bit before answering. “I… m-may have d-drinken a lot of m-milk when I was younger.”
>”Ohh…” Twilight actually lightly giggles a little bit, holding back an anxious smile. “You seem nervous.”
>”I-I’m f-fine…”
>”You’re shaking all over! Here…” Twilight pushes in SciTwi’s arms for her to turn her back to her counterpart.
>SciTwi does so, and soon feels the same pair of hands from before grab back onto her chest from behind, lifting her bulging bosom up with that same light but sincere grab.
>And she feels Twilight press the two of their bodies together from behind as well. “Are you warm now?” Twilight asks. “You feel like you’re burning up already. I feel like I should be the colder one here.”
>SciTwi trembled in loosely contained excitement as she involuntarily arches her back.
>”Are… you leaning into my hands?”
>”S-sorry.”
>”No, it’s fine. I don’t mind it.” Twilight is starting to catch on to this, trying to figure out what the socially acceptable thing to do next is. “Just wondering why.”
>”Hmm?”
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>>28309655
>”Is this like… a thing you do around here?”
>SciTwi seizes the opportunity to continue this before she even realizes it. “Y-yeah… true friends like to get as c-close to eachother as possible.” She feels Twilight’s fingers tighten a little bit in response. “Ohhhohhh…”
>”You’re… not offended or anything if I’m not enjoying this as much as you are, are you?”
>SciTwi is trying to figure out if that’s really what she just heard, but her arousal just glosses right over the though.
>”I-I’m not offended. Please continue…” SciTwi’s levels of bravery shift dramatically, but only on the inside.
>”Well, I feel like I’d have to feel your breasts head on in order to get a good feel of how your bra fits you.” Twilight’s hands linger along the rim of the sweater vest around the shoulders before returning to squeezing the girl head on. “Tell me more about how often you’d drink milk. What kind of milk was it? Where can I find it?”
>”O-oh… you want t-to know?”
>Twilight starts to squeeze a little bit more… enthusiastically. SciTwi feels her nipples start to slide around against the inside of the bra cups from the force of Twilight’s increasingly curious fingers.
>Why wouldn’t she be arching her back again.
>She just prays that she doesn’t let a moan escape; there are still other people nearby.
>”Uh…” SciTwi doesn’t even wait for Twilight to answer. “Whole milk… you know… wholefat.”
>”Ohhh…” Twilight voice has turned to something sounding more… intrigued. “So not that 2% I keep hearing about?”
>”N-no… just plain and simple whole…” SciTwi keeps her breathing under control as she lets her back un-arch and her shoulders relax. Accepting the fondling hands press everywhere up and down her soft chest.
>Twilight’s breathing must have taken the hastiness from that of Sci-Twi’s. She’s not starting to lengthen her breaths herself, to the point where her breath tickles Sci-Twi on the neck.
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>>28309665
>Sci-Twi is still blushing exponentially more, however.
>For the moment.
>”I still d-drink it sometimes. P-pretty often, actually.”
>”Whoa… I can see that. You like whole milk more than he others?”
>”Ssso… m-much…”
>A knock sounds on the booth door.
>”Excuse me, ladies.” A female voice sounds. “Is everything alright in there?”
>”EVERYTHING’S FINE!” SciTwi wants this other lady gone and gone NOW.
>There is a short pause.
>”Mmmkay.” The lady on the other side says before walking away. “They’re fine.” She quietly announces to an apparent group of people speckled with a few stifled giggles.
>”Uhh…” Twilight starts to wonder.
>”It’s fine.” SciTwi quickly reacts. “They’re already going away.”
>”Okay.” Twilight goes back to feeling the weight of SciTwi’s breasts bearing down on her slowly wiggling fingers. “So tell me more about the milk you drink.”
>”I-it’s so good. I started to realize it was making my boobs bigger after like a year, b-but I couldn’t stop.”
>”It took a whole year?”
>”W-well, I started be- Aah!” SciTwi’s breath hitches abruptly the very second she feels Twilight’s hands slip under the sweater vest’s rims under her arms.
>The start squeezing with a lot less in between the fingertips and the breasts the feel.
>”They’re so bouncy!” Twilight starts to giggle as she shifts them around with her hands directly on SciTwi’s shirt.
>SciTwi can already feel the cold air seeping under her sweater vest through the holed Twilight’s wrists create. Her mind races and her shoulders move around in a few rushes of suppressed joy.
>Twilight’s fingers probe the surface of the shirt, finding the buttons in no more than a few seconds. “Soft too.” She continues to speak as SciTwi struggles to bring out and more words at all.

That's it for the moment. But don't get settled and hold your breath juuuust yet. There is still more to come at some point.
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>>28309678
That's a lot of words!

>>28279773

>Perhaps you overdid it?
>”How naughty Anon…I didn’t know you were like that.”
>You let out an awkward chuckle.
>”What? You actually thought I wouldn’t notice your pervy looks?” She says with a smirk planted on her pretty face, “remember the time when I fell and you had to help me?”
“Uh…”
>”Course you do, you tried your best to remain calm,” she says with a laugh, “I don’t blame you…as if someone would be able to resist THESE beauties.”
>Rainbow squeezes her breasts in a very teasing way.
>”Shame you have a girlfriend now Anon,” she says with a laugh, “otherwise THESE would’ve been yours.”
>Rainbow sticks her tongue at you and even flips you off.
>You smirk.
“Real classy Rainbow…and you’re right; I kind of missed up on a big chance. But so did you.”
>”Huh? What are you talking about?”
“Oh nothing, I just remembered…that you’ve been naughty yourself.”
>”You’re talking nonsense!”
“Am I? I remember you getting real horny when I had to help you get dressed. So horny you even let me see your boobs.”
>Rainbow blushes so hard.
“All the way up dude, you said as I pulled up the panties I picked from your drawers…you were so naughty Dashie.”
>Rainbow gulps down some saliva.
“I wonder how you would’ve looked like with that red bra and thong combo on.”
>”…I’m wearing it right now.”
>https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=FhnfBjL9goA
“Y-you are?”
>Rainbow Dash lets out a dirty giggle.
>”Yes…want to see them?”
“H-hell yes…”
>Rainbow Dash begins to pull down her black t-shirt, slowly with a naughty smirk printed on her face.
>You’re greeted with the beautiful satin red bra covering her breasts.
>”Oh my, how indecent…” Rainbow Dash says mocking Rarity’s accent, “what if someone else sees us like this?”
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>>28309642
This is perfect. Thank you based green.
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>>28309733
You can see a smol bit of nip.
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>>28309678
L-lewd
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>>28309733

>Did you go too far away with your teasing?
“Sheesh, you weren’t kidding…”
>”What do you think?”
“I almost forgot how beautiful they were…”
>”Oh you flatterer. What do you think? Better than Rarity’s?”
“Definitely…mind if I, you know?” You say as your hand makes your way towards her.
>”Yes, if you can keep your left hand on the wheel and not kill us.”
>You quickly make your way towards her forearm and start caressing it,
>”Are we actually doing this?”
“The only way to go is forward, remember…it’s only awkward-“
>”-if we make it awkward, gotcha.”
>You pull Rainbow closer towards you, and as soon as a traffic light goes red you both engage in a very sloppy way to kiss.”
>”You don’t know…how much I…wanted this,” Rainbow says between breaths and gasps.
“I can already tell,” you reply as you aim for her breasts and start fondling them.
>The traffic light turns green.
>”Forget the creek! Take me home!”
>You step on the gas and keep fondling her body with your right hand.
>https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=bBpHCwfoFcM
>”Aww yeah. You’re pretty good…”
>Her legs, her breasts, her belly.
>And only using one hand.
>The way you caress her belly makes her bite her lower lip.
>Rainbow comes closer and starts licking your neck.
“Whoa haha! Be sure to not leave a hickey behind…”
>Rainbow Dash starts caressing your body as well, starting by your well defined biceps.
>Your open her legs and fondle her inner thighs.
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>>28309864
Jesus Christ they are going to get caught or fucking crash. I hope its the latter because I don't want to think how Rarity will take Anon cheating on her.
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>>28309887
i like anon except for this douchey cheating behavior. cheating isn't cool or a joke. if he isn't man enough to tell Rarity about his feelings than he shouldnt have a girlfriend.
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>>28309916
This!
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>>28309916
>>28309923
Holy shit, /fb/ has morality for once?
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>>28309926
Nice bait smartass. We aren't and never will be Marital Problems, that Ekans and Luci thing was just us getting dedicated shitposters.
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>>28309864
I have a feeling Anon isn't going to be able to control himself. The realistic possibility of >>28309887 fucking scares me, man. I'd personally want him to have to deal with Rarity rather than die. I just hope Rarity doesn't do anything too harsh.
On a slightly related note, I also made fan art from the picture in >>28279654 because I always found it funny how Dash's head looks so hilariously huge in comparison to Anon's head in that picture!
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>>28309926
We never did and it will stay that way
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>>28309963
Kek, that pic. Good job. I think Rarity might have a mental breakdown and go full on School Days, so I think Anon and Rainbow being sent to the hospital might actually be safer then getting caught. Anon is still a fucking prick though.
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>>28309642
>That TaT reference
A-Alex
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>>28309864
Nice
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>>28309678
Holy shit please come back an finish this soon green
Muh dick won't last long
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>>28309315
Are you doing FriENDship or Listen first?
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>>28310155
I think he should get the sex scenes out of the way first before going back into the edgy zombie world. And did we officially decide which girls Anon is banging or is that not a thing yet? That strawpoll looks too close for comfort and the captcha box didn't work there.
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>>28309864

>She digs your moves.
>She slowly opens her legs to grant you more access to her private region.
>”Are we there yet?”
“Almost there…”
>As you’re about to reach Rainbow’s privates she clenches up her legs.
>”W-wait! N-not there!”
“Why not?”
>”Not until we get home…my dad won’t be there anyways.”
“Alright then.”

>2 minutes later.
>You both get out of the car and leave it parked on the curb, in front of Rainbow’s house.
>Rainbow grabs her keys from her backpack and struggles to open the front door because you can’t keep your hands off her.
>”Quit it!” She orders, “the neighbors might be spying on us…”
>As she opens the front door you quickly hurry her inside and close the door behind you.
>She turns around and hugs you, waiting for a kiss.
>You grab her from the back of her legs and lift her.
>http://picosong.com/zEEX
>”Whoa! E-easy there Anon…”
>You don’t listen to her.
>Instead, you carry her to her room; kissing and licking her neck on the way there, which she finds pleasurable by emitting cute moans and scratching your back.
>”Ahh~ you’re being pretty rough…are you sure you’re okay?” she say as you start taking off her clothes, piece by piece.
“Mhmm,” is the only thing you say before leaving Rainbow in nothing but her undergarments.
>”It’s my turn now…” Rainbow says while smirking.
>Rainbow starts taking off your clothes and throws each piece of your clothing across her messy-as-always room.
>The only thing she leaves on are your boxers, revealing a full mast.
>”Ah, it’s just as I imagined it…”
>Rainbow bites the elastic of your boxers and pulls it down with her teeth.
>Your fully erect shaft appears, and Rainbow plants a kiss on the tip.
>”Well…this is the first time I do this Anon, don’t expect much.”
“You’ll do it fine Dashie…watch out for the teeth.”
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>>28310221

>Rainbow gulps down some saliva and opens her mouth, her tongue works the tip of your dick first by moving in circles.”
“Ohh…f-fuck, good job.”
>Rainbow licks from the tip to the base, and gives each one of your balls a good suck.
>”Tastes weird, but I kind of like it…”
>A smartphone starts ringing.
“Really now?!”
>”Relax,” Rainbow says before grabbing her phone and turning the sound off, “it was Rarity.”
“Rarity?”
>”Yeah, her…now, where were we?” Rainbow says as she fixes her hair, kneeling down once again, and continuing giving your dick some pecks.
“Yeah, that’s it baby…”
>Rainbow stops kissing your shaft and instead, she engulfs it.
“Nngh! Good one Dashie…”
>The tip at first, then most of your hard dick until her nose bumps your pubic hairs.
>You place your hands on top of her head and start caressing her hair.
>Her bobbing, while desynchronized and awkward, makes you feel real good.
“Oh yeah…”
>Rainbow stops sucking your penis and starts stroking it using both her hands.
>”How’d you like that eh big jerk?”
>You let out a chuckle.
>Rainbow engulfs your shaft once again and bobs her head faster each second that passes.
>Her playful hands grab onto your butt and the lower region of your back.
>You grab her hair and pull it as you feel that you’re about to climax.
>Rainbow stops sucking your dick and readies her face for you to release your sperm.
>She gives your dick the final strokes and-
“HNNNGH!”
>You release your sperm all over her face, hair and mouth.
>”Wow, that’s a lot of cum…” she says, “now, why don’t you do the same to me?”
“My pleasure.”
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Done for tonight, I'll post more tomorrow.
>pic related
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>>28310281
torso the size of a bowl of cereal.
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>>28310311
She looks like a barbie, those legs look 'plugged' into those boots.
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>>28310325
At least people didn't pay for it like >>28301139
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>>28279745
“Do not compare yourself to others. If you do so, you are insulting yourself.” -Adolf Hitler
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>>28310281
Rarity is a fucking bitch and deserves to die.
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>>28310225
Funny how different she is in this version. In the original she would complain after "messing" her hair, is it because she feels competitive and wants to prove she's better than Rarity?
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Why is she so perfect?
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>>28310225
>>28310281
> Rarity calling
> RD turning the sound off
> pic of Rarity crying

This is going to backfire hard, isn't it? RD somehow screwed up and Rarity could hear the entire damn thing.

Oh boy, in the end Anon is no better than Rara's other boyfriends.
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>>28311023
Because she is what I need in my life
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>>28309997
It hurts, Anon.
A lot.
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>>28310281
So this confirms that they were just caught, I didn't need feels, nope. God damn it Anon, can you not keep it in your pants for one god damn minuet?!
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>>28309642
>It’s Sunset.
>She’s holding a bouquet of lilies.
>”Can I ask you someth-”
>“No.” You slam the door in her face.
>End.

You'll never finish that story, huh?
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>>28309642
H-Hold me brehs
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>>28311548
Heh this post works better that what I was about to say. This.
my heart is breaking
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>>28311023
If I could just once reach out and run my hand through her hair and tell her that I love her then I would die happily
My life is a big blur and I have no idea what the fuck I'm even doing with myself most days, but my love for that crispy horse lady is something that I'm certain of
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>>28311032
Ahaahaha good ol' pressed green instead of red situation...
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>>28309937
Luci isn't so dedicated anymore ever since grey exposed him two weeks ago.
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>>28312067
true. true.
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>>28312067
I'm curious, what happened?
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>>28311584
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>>28312298
>Luci tried to get contentfags to "rebuild Fingerbang" from behind the scenes
>Separate from Disco and the pastebin
>Only like 1 or 2 guys got on board
>Grey found out about it and snitched
>Made it public and everyone involved sort of backed out
>The "rebuild" fell apart before it even went anywhere
>Luci currently among the newest of the laughingstalks of /fb/
Was pretty fucking kekworthy imo
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>>28312817
It was a beautiful failure, fucker deserved the ridicule. We said no outside chatrooms but they didn't listen to us. Let this be a lesson in keeping conversations on the thread. Speaking of, does anyone have a screenshot of that shit? I swear there was a guy that made it.
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>>28312817
>Luci currently among the newest of the laughingstalks of /fb/
>newest
Isn't it a constant, though?
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>>28313960
This is true, we don't get many dumbasses like him though. Usually they just leave and don't come back if their butt hurt.
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>>28313996
>Usually they just leave and don't come back if their butt hurt.
Usually, you're right, but then again, look at me.
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>>28314101
But we love you Fapman! Your welcome any time. By the way, how is the Axii Whitcher story going for you.
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>>28314220
I'm not fapman obviously, but i'm really enjoying the story. I have the witcher 3 but never played it because i got it for free in a bundle and it seemed to big a game for me since i dont have alot of free time, but this is slowly persuading me to play it.
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>>28314658
Its totally worth it, if you get the vamp dlc for the third game go for a toxin build. https://www.youtube.com/channel/UC9N0DmacOi4iWKQyygX89OQ
this guy made a monster for the game.
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>>28314658
It's worth it.

Play it.
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Anyone watch the 3DS direct?
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>>28310281
Is this going to lead to epic fisticuffs between Rarara and RD?
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=RQeA609Td7Q
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>>28314683
>>28314679
You've convinced me, i'll play it at some point, try and work out some free time
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>>28309315
>Sugarcoat can’t figure out what to do.
>There is absolutely no proof whatsoever that Trixie had been cheating, to any extent.
>She had gone back to the fence when Trixie wasn’t around. It was only a five minute or so window while Trixie was in the shower, but it was enough time to tell that the arrows were legitimately shot and not tampered with.
>Sugarcoat has known these arrows for years; she’d be able to figure out if there were something different about them.
>No magnets in the fence, the shafts or the heads. No funny business.
>And five minutes is a surprisingly long time to spend analyzing a shish kebab of metal arrow heads and the fence they protrude from. There wasn’t much to look over.
>…
>The day of the talent show finally comes.
>It has been less than a week since Trixie started showing off her card tricks and whatnot to Sugarcoat.
>And Sugarcoat would have been confident that there was no way for Trixie to have learnt it in a few days if it weren’t for the fact that she apparently took up archery to a level of mastery in less than one day.
>No matter what, it still doesn’t make logical sense.
>”So what do we do?” Indigo sits next to Sugarcoat at lunch. “The thing’s tonight, is it?”
>”Yeah, but I’m starting to question whether or not I should care.” Sugarcoat responds.
>”Are you kidding me?! You’re not seriously going to let someone get away with cheating in a competition, are you? Think about all of the other people who worked hard on their acts!”
>Sugarcoat shakes her head. “I shouldn’t be hell-bent on exposing whatever Trixie’s doing. It’s not worth it. The best we can do is report her or something.”
>”Right, like a report from ANOTHER SCHOOL is going to have any effect… would it?”
>”I believe it doesn’t. But in any case, it’s not worth it.” Sugarcoat sips the rest of her chocolate milk and stands up to leave.
>…
>Canterlot High.
>The night of the talent show.
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>>28315388
I'm actually going to let you guys decide how this ends so I don't end up disappointing anyone. Should Trixie succeed or fail?

>>28310155
Listen 2 will be first. I'll call it something other than that, though.
>>28311548
>>28309997
>>28309748
Glad you liked it.
>>28311457
Nah, I'm going to finish it.
>>28309733
Thanks!
>>28310075
>>28309784
More of it soon. Just gotta sleep first.
>>28312298
It's a fairly long story, but >>28312817 pretty much sums up the bulk of it.
>>28310189
Based on the results on the strawpoll and what a few of the anons in here said, it can be concluded that it will be all a dream where Anon does it Sweet and Indy. I'll try to resist writing the musical adventure part. I've subjected my readers to enough weirdness for now.
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>>28315408
Let Trixie win, she needs something to go right for her, at least once.
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>>28315408
So you're not writing a lewd scene with Zest?
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>>28315665
We got two outa three, just take what we can get.
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>>28315408
If she is cheating have her fail big time. If she got legit good then let her have it, even her ego will be unbearable. I guess she deserves that much.
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>>28315129
>fisticuffs
step it up
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Hz3ogNNy4bc
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>>28312774
dumb feelsposter
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>>28317064
dumb dumbposter
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>dumb postposters
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Post Postdumbers
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>>28315677
NOoooo9OOOOOO
I fucking refuse.
I've wanted Alex to tackle Zest for... Like, ever.
Alex, dig her Down. Zest calls out for your touch...
Give her what she needs and deserves.
I know you can do it
I believe in you.
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>>28317505
Pheno pls
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>>28318176
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>>28318941
>>28318176
samefag
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>>28319502
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>>28319514
>Slapping a old fad
please leave
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>>28319521
You first.
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>>28319539
After you.
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>>28319539
>>28319551
Now kiss!
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>>28319580
>Gravity Balls
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>>28319587
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>>28314220
WEll... I barely have time to read, but I enjoy it so fucking far. It's a rly fun thing to see how the girls fight over for his favour, but Anon's choices about his Path are... well, uncanonical, considering the saga.

I have my fun with it.

>>28314658
>I'm not fapman obviously
Hi, Fapman!
Pic related
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>>28301846
>>28301863
>>28306449
>>28306507
>>28302156
>>28310435
at least /trash/ have without the watermark.
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>>28318941
Nice shit quality bump!
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>>28320223
already late
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>>28320215
Post proof.
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>>28316261
>>28315434
Guess I'm doing that, then.
>>28315665
>>28315677
>>28317505
>>28318520
Should I make another strawpoll?
>>28315388
>The audience collectively murmurs in anticipation for the show.
>The lights dim as the performances are about to start. Principal Celestia walks out onto the stage.
>In one of the back rows, the shadowbolt five sit after hastily picking up some last minute tickets.
>"I reeeeeealy don't know what we're doing here." Sour Sweet looks back at the door, imagining stepping through it.
>"You can thank Indy for that. This was her idea." Sugarcoat comments.
>Indigo only squints her eyes at the stage.
>"How are we supposed to stop her if we're just sitting here in the audience where everyone can see us?" Sunny Flare criticizes. "There's pretty much nothing left we can do anyway!"
>"Maybe we should go afterward to tell the judges that Trixie may have cheated on her act. But we'd need evidence, though." Sour Sweet suggests.
>"Doubt it." Indigo keeps her eyes glued on the curtains as they open.
>The other girls question whether or not she's been taking this too seriously, with the exception of Lemon Zest who isn't evne paying attention to anything except for her music.
>"And now for out first act, Trixie Lulamoon!" Celestia steps to the side as Trixie appears into view.
>"Rainbow! Clap!" Twilight nudges her friend with her elbow as she sees Trixie appear.
>"But we're not even in the audience!" Dash protests. "And we have to go next anyway!"
>"Please. Just this once. This might mean more to Trixie than we can comprehend."
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>>28321048
no don't do another strawpoll, it barely worked last time.
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>>28321048
>Rainbow! Clap!

I don't know why, but I read this as if she was calling out a fighting move from one of those animes.

So is Trixie cheating or not?
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Low quality bump
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>>28322121
Nice try!
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>>28320215
>>28321042
Here
>>>/trash/5038657
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>>28322415
Oh wow you were telling the truth
Whelp, I guess I underestimated you
Good job
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>>28322415
>not liking the watermark version

Enjoy being a thief.
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>>28323242
Enjoy being a buttpirate.
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>>28318520
=P
I was drunk. You're lucky that's as bad as it got.
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>>28323631
Ahhhh a ghost! Someone get the crucifix.
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>>28323566
Yar har fiddle dee dee, nigger
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>>28323631
hi there!
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>>28310281
What is gone happen ?
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>>28323720
10/10. Would plunder her booty
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>>28323695
>>28323730
What are you kids on about? I posted stuff in this thread.

Oh, right, I didn't use my trip on that one...

Well, whatever, I'm still alive, I just suck at life.
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>>28323748
Stuff and things.
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>>28323899
Breed the LemonShy!
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>>28323899
That's some fine Flutters you have there. Got anymore?
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>>28323941
Yeah, yeah, I've got a long weekend coming up, I'll get to it.

>>28324310
As for you... Maybe? >.>
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>>28323899
>NO HOOVES
What are you gay?
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>>28325220
>2016
>not being gay
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>>28325220
Sometimes?
Anyway, drown in my nohooves glory!

DROWN IN IT!!!
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>>28325260
It looks extra small to me
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>>28325572
I am oblivious to the implied joke here
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>>28325572
Oooooh I get it now
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>>28325612
Good job buddy
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>>28312817
I was lurking the chat when green/grey revealed everything and I can tell you guys this is exactly what happened
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>>28326050
Please tell us the story, papa anon!
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>>28326092
It's already been told >>28312817
That's literally what happened lmao
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>>28326177
Well FUCK you i wanna hear it again ya old fuck! its a joke.
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>>28326227
k den
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>>28328927
>tfw you will never walk in on Fluttershy with just her panties and her sweeter on ready to breed.
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>>28328927
>no hooves
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>>28329228
2013 called, they want their memes back.
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>>28329464
>2013 called
They can take Equestria Girls back while they're at it.
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>>28329228
>no hooves
>fingerbang
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Where can I suck writefriends cock?
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>>28328927
U-Unf

>>28329685
Last door to the left.
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>>28329525
Nice butthurt, cuck.
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>>28329793
>cuck
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Bump da thread
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NaOH, SAVE MEEEE
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>>28330988
He ain't no Jeebus, so you're fucked, faggot.
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>>28330988
What is gone happen to Rarity??
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>>28331094
Oh shit
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>>28331501
SCRUNCH
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>>28330988
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=hWaPK8d4uZc

Update coming soon
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>>28333114
Can't wait!
>>28321048
>The music begins to play as Trixie stands alone at center stage.
>Her eyes filled with ambition.
>"Greeting, ladies and gentlemen! The Great and Powerful Trixie is more than thrilled to see you all here tonight!" She proudly blares.
>They all clap encouragingly.
>The curtains finish opening to reveal what Trixie's act is going to be.
>It takes Sugarcoat and the rest of the group to decipher what that deck of cards is doing taped onto a bullseye.
>"So... Trixie heard you want to see talent tonight." She begins. "Do you like card tricks?"
>The audience replies with a resounding yes.
>"Do you like archery?"
>They cheer this time, mixing countless "yes"'s in.
>Trixie pulls out an excessively shiny object with multiple parts and extremities.
>This bow must have cost at least a few hundred dollars.
>"How would you like too what what Trixie can do when she combines both of these acts into one..." She pauses. "After only having practiced it for one night."
>The audience nervously cheers.
>"Trixie is sure that at least half of you have seen Trixie's routine she was going to use to kick off this talent show with a bang!"
>The ones in the audience who have seen Trixie practicing start to make some noise. There are more of them in the audience tonight than Sugarcoat had expected.
>"Well how about Trixie shows you all her brand new act through actions instead of words?"
>The crowd continues to encourage her through cheers.
>Indigo Zap stares at the girl, watching for any suspicious movements.
>"Who wants to pick a card?" Is the only thing Trixie needs to say for the audience to go wild with tidal waves of responses.
>Indigo Zap tries to think of a way to get Trixie's attention so she can pick the least likely card possible. But she then remembers that magicians usually go for those types of cards anyway.
>The card chosen is a seven of spades.
>Trixie removes the deck of cards from the target and shuffles it for a good minute.
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>>28333184
>She re-tapes it to the bullseye, pulling one of the metal arrows out of her quiver.
>"BEHOLD!" She trumpets as she pulls the arrow back.
>The audience winces in anticipation, already having second thoughts about this.
>Trixie fires the arrow, aiming directly for that bullseye she has not fully become familiar with thus far.
>It ricochets off of the edge of the cards, being completely different that the other arrows that Trixie is used to firing. She never even fired any of these heavier metal arrows until now.
>She never thought to see how it felt until this very moment.
>The arrow goes careening into the audience, soon deflecting off of a flask of alcohol and zooming right back at the target. But misses.
>It starts bouncing off of multiple stage lights, eventually flying in at the same angle from the beginning, after going right over a ducking Trixie.
>The girl didn't even realize how far she pulled the damn thing back, let alone how much momentum the arrow would have.
>The razor sharp head barely sinks into the deck enough to stay sticking out.
>Without thinking, Trixie knows the show must go on... and fires another arrow.
>She loses all care for everything else, aiming directly at the butt of the previous arrow.
>This time, the shaft does not split in two, but vibrates as the head lightly stabs the but with enough force to start a long chair of arrows.
>Trixie repeats this until there are six total arrows sticking out at least five feet from the target, all connected head to butt.
>The combined force from the blows jutted the head of the first arrow about 2/3 of the way into the deck of cards.
>Needless to say, the audience was stunned.
>After the longest awkward silence, Trixie stumbles over to the train of arrows, the most confused person in the room.
>"Th-the... first c-c-card that th-the arrow d-didn't go through..." She stutters, wondering if she is really still alive. "W-will be... the s-s-s-seven of s-spades..."
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>>28333197
>Pulls the deck of cards off of the target and separates the pierced portion from the intact.
>Turns the innermost card of the pierced portion to face the audience.
>It's a seven of fucking spades.
>"S-see?"
>Trixie lets the cards slowly fall from her hand, revealing that they are all different from one another. The other 2/3 of the deck can clearly be seen having been pierced with the hole in the middle.
>The seven of spades was the first cart to have not been pierced.
>The crowd goes WILD.

That's it for today. Post away, NaOH.

>>28321068
Alright, I won't make one. Sorry, Pheno. >>28317505

>>28321507
She's not cheating, as you can see.
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>>28333209
OHHHHHHHHH SHHHHHHHIT! SHE DID IT! WOOOOOOOOO! Wonder how hard the Sugarcoat's jaw hit the floor, and her friends, and the Mane 7 seeing as they were there as well.
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>>28333209
Silly but pretty cool
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>>28333209
They're gonna have a long argument later on.
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>>28333114
Thx
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>>28333671
Wow that sux
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Well I hope Sunset doesn't touch Anon in any of these greens.

Especially A Second Chance.
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>>28334240
Those who have nothing to hide have nothing to fear
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>>28334323
B-but...
I fear everything...
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>>28333114
E-eurobeat?! In my Fingerbang?!
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>>28333114
I will listen to this until you post update.
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>>28334475
Why would you be scared of Shamwow?
What's so bad about her being able to boop you and see all of your bank account information, social security number, where you live, what fetishes you have, and how many times you've fapped to her?
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I'd love to see how Legend of Everfree will change the future greens.

If Sunset can read minds it's going to get much more complicated.
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>>28335772
I'm not sure I like Sunset being able to read my mind.

Everyone needs privacy, and I can't have that if everytime she blows me she gets to see my deepest darkest secrets.
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>>28335714
So, I looked at the gif you posted, read your comment, and my brain went off on a wild tangent about how her telepathy extended to inanimate objects, and the gif became quite a bit more entertaining as I imagined her sitting there, unfazed, while her sandwich screamed in pain and cursed her while she ate it.

Brain... Seriously...
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>>28335843
GET OUT OF MY HEAD, CHARLES
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>>28333209
The arrow should have hit someone in the audience. Not anywhere fatal, just like, in the ass or something so it would be funny and Trixie could try to damage control and play it off as her act.
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>>28333225
>>28333229
>>28333531
>>28336441
>>28333209
>Sugarcoat can't even look at the stage, having her back turned so the only thing making her cringe is the thunderous applause.
>Indigo Zap curses to herself all the way to the point where the audience has to stay quiet until the next act.
>...
>Trixie slams the door open as she enters her room, tears welling up in her eyes.
>She doesn't even have half the heart to hop up onto her bed.
>The girl collapses to the floor as Sugarcoat follows in after her, arms crossed like they always are.
>But Sugarcoat doesn't have a smug grin on her face, only the truth fluttering around in her mind.
>"You know, if actual magic has always been something that was allowed in the talent show, I can't see how you even thought you had a chance at winning."
>Trixie doesn't answer Sugarcoat.
>Silently covering her face in her hands on the floor.
>"To be honest, you shouldn't have even gotten as far as you had with your own act. What you did was literally impossible. And I'm not saying that to comfort you, I'm saying that because I still think you cheated somehow. It's simply what I believe happened based on objective fact and the realm of possibility." She goes on to rant about the same thing she ranted about the whole car ride home. "There was no way you genuinely learned how to do that. I you really cheated, which is what all the evidence points to, you got what you had coming to you."
>Sugarcoat holds nothing back. Keeping that same glazed glare in her eyes.
>Every ounce of every negative feeling Trixie could possibly feel bears down upon her. Focusing on the very thing she put all of her hope and effort into.
>It's all crushed now.
>And she still can't answer her stepsister.
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>>28337130
>"If anything, I'm glad Twilight and her friends are able to use real magic. Otherwise, you would have taken the whole show away from everyone else simply because you know too many more secrets than everybody else."
>Trixie isn't listening anymore.
>She should have never listened in the first place.
>But Sugarcoat continues anyway. "What happened on that stage was justice. You still got your act in perfectly... somehow... without EVER practicing a single thing, which in and of itself is unacceptable for anyone with a properly functioning mind to believe. But at the same time, you didn't ruin the competition for everyone else who actually tried hard and practiced for weeks. Weeks. Hell, forget weeks, even months. Maybe even years."
>The center of Trixie's sadness slowly turns to some sort of mixture of rage and spite.
>The hunger for revenge against the universe itself.
>"Maybe you should consider doing what Twilight did and make some friends." Suggests Sugarcoat. "Get help from others. Learn new things instead of trying to jump through impossible hoops then rigging the whole thing so it works."
>Trixie's hands begin to tremble. They ball up into fists.
>"Look, Trixie. I'm not saying that you don't have potential. Because that would also be a lie if I told you that. But you need to focus your potential on the right things. Not overshadowing everybody else in the spotlight with some secret method or advantage you know that nobody else knows. You have to work hard like everybody else. There's no getting around that."
>"Fuck off."
>"No, there is no reason to blame me for this. Because I am telling you the truth. This is something EVERYBODY has to face whether you like it or not. You have to work hard like everyone else. There are no free rides in life if you want to succeed. And part of working hard means making friends and working together with other people AS A TEAM. No more indulging in how great you are alone. You depend on others for your success."
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>>28337137
FUCK YOU SUGARCOAT!
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>>28337137
>"Trixie... said..."
>"I'm not going anywhere, Trixie. Because somebody needs to tell you this at some point in life." Sugarcoat is not even fazed. "The thing you need to do is actually practice and let other people work with you as a team. That's what Twilight did. It's not like she learned magic overnight. Yes, that's right. Even that fantasy type stuff requires sustained effort. There is nothing you can do... nowhere you can go to change that."
>Trixie's entire body silently trembles.
>"If want to be more like Twilight or even anyone who is really successful, go out into the world and talk to people. Collaborate. And most of all... practice. It's supposed to suck, not be freaking easy street the whole way through. You need to change the way you do things and get over yourself."
>"I SAID FUCK OFF!" Trixie chucks her backpack in Sugarcoat's direction.
>It hits the wall with a startling bang, and Sugarcoat backs out of the room.
>"If you're not going to listen to helpful advice, it's your loss." Sugarcoat starts down the stairs.
>"No..." Trixie hyperventilates. "You're wrong..."
>The rest of the night goes by silently.
>And the interactions between Trixie and Sugarcoat indefinitely dwindle to nearly nothing.
The End.
Sequel: http://pastebin.com/XFXAc8G5

>>28337151
You guys should have seen this coming, to be honest.
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>>28337153
Trixie best girl, Sugarcoat trash.
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>>28337137
>more self-insert 'FRIENDSHIP speech' bullshit
Stop that. Seriously.
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>>28337178
Don't tell him what to do
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>>28337239
Have a nice day.
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>>28337307
I will since you can't come up with a comeback.
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>>28337239
>Don't tell him what to do
His self-insert 'friendship is magic' speech is shit, then.
It was cringey the last time he used it, and rehashing it like it's some sort of life altering cure-all is just eye-rolling.
Not to mention that it feels shoehorned just to bring Trixie down to zero.
The only time he's even half-way decent self-inserting into characters is when he's writing about Anon banging chicks.
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>>28337353
>The only time he's even half-way decent self-inserting into characters is when he's writing about Anon banging chicks.
>Grey self inserting as Anon banging chicks
Good luck getting him to take you seriously with that logic
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>>28337353
And this shit right here, among other things, is why the rest of the writefags left.
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>>28337368
If that's how it is. Then. Whatever.

>>28337380
Because they can't take criticism?
Is that why you guys always fellate him so much? Like, even beyond just liking his work (which I can understand)?
So he won't leave you?
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>>28337434
Nigga do you see what's happening here?
Greentext is the only thing keeping NaOH and fanboys from taking over the thread. He's the only one that stands a chance against that monstrosity of a circlejerk.
If he leaves like the others, NaOH wins!
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>>28337509
Well. Lye overload would be a bad thing...
But there has to be a way to criticize Green's hamfisted self-insertion without letting NaOH win...
There HAS to.
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>>28337434
Although I consider myself more a contemporary than a sycophant to Alex, I still feel qualified to answer that question.

YES.

I mean, hell, Alex's fans aren't even that bad. NaOH's dick must be eroded down to a nub from the oceans of saliva it's drowned in.

>>28337380
As for you, writers mostly leave FB because of the lack of feedback. At least the other asshat is putting his two cents in. It might be a negative critique, but at least it's giving Alex an opinion on his work, and where someone thinks he needs to improve. Better than the usual 'it's shit and you should feel like shit' comments, that are just plain vitriol. It's called constructive criticism, and it helps a lot more than 'this is garbage' or 'this is amazing, put your dick in my mouth'.

I mean, >>28337353 isn't MUCH better, but at least he's being specific.
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>>28337434
>>28337509
>>28337571
>>28337649
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>>28337509
Okay, I almost didn't feel the need to say anything until the next time I updated, but I feel like it's important to make it very clear to the thread that NaOH and I are not against eachother in any way. We are literally on the same side, and it's only a PORTION of our fanbases that try to stir shit up. A vocal minority.

Might as well reply to the rest now.
>>28337571
>>28337178
If you want to criticize me full force, just say to me everything you need to say. I literally just got done hunting for straightforward criticism in the writefag's guild:
>>28262994
>>28270224
>>28287462
>>28299869
This was all legit over the last week or so. And it actually pretty much directly relates to what I just wrote, because the thing I just wrote was a response to what the guy in that thread told me. I like to think of it as writing a very emotion-filled letter and then not sending it as a method of venting.
And if >>28337353 was all you had to say, are you putting Sugarcoat's perspective or Trixie's perspective in a bad light?
>>28337164
They're both alright, in my opinion.
>>28337649
And I almost missed this one.
If I remember correctly, the writefags did leave because of the lack of feedback. I still remember it.
And as for the possibility of me leaving... don't worry, that's not happening no matter what. But I don't want anyone else to leave either.
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>>28337778
This, it's very tiresome isn't it Grey?
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>>28337811
Ayy, I hear that.
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>>28337811
Post Anon licking Dashie please

>>28337846
Post Time After Time please
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>>28337851
No
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>>28337778
I guess I'm putting Sugarcoat's perspective(?) in a bad light.
In the Trixie Self-Insert, Trixie being broody and moody about Twilight having friends and being better at things than Trixie is was cringey, but felt somewhat in-character. Though, it mostly felt like (You) were talking rather than Trixie.

In this story, Sugarcoat handing down her version of the same speech didn't even feel like it was something that she'd say; at most, I expected her to just say that Twilight and friends had magic, so Trixie definitely wouldn't win, and leave it at that. But you had to go and put the speech in, and it felt like a boot to the face (painful, out of nowhere), where I'd say that in the Trixie Self-Insert it at least felt like a pitiful, if hamfisted, realization.

When Sugarcoat gave her "You suck" speech, it felt like some calm, calculating part of your personality was beating down on Trixie, with Trixie just being a stand-in for you. I'm guessing, based on your comments about Trixie Self-Insert, that that's kind of what you were going for.
But it just didn't sit right with me.
Other than that, the story isn't poorly written.
Grammar and whatnot is ok. And there's decent build up even if the rug gets pulled out a the end. It's, overall, alright.
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>>28337811
Update man i am waiting for WFD , keep going NaOH and you to Greentext , don't leave the thread pls
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>>28337778
I'm >>28337649
I didn't say I was worried you were going to leave, lol, I was just saying there are people that are. And just cause I say NaOH get's his nob polished on the daily doesn't mean I don't like him or his work. I'm more, maybe just a little, jealous of his dedicated fans? Eh heh...

>>28337811 Sorry, I can't help it. Poking a stick into your fans and stirring them up like an anthill is just... Really entertaining.
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>>28337509
>>28337778
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>>28337778
So the writefags left because of lack of constructive criticism when they made that stupid fucking chatroom. Got it, lets NEVER do that again.
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>>28338081
I guess I can get this.
>>28338707
fuck I wanted to post that.
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>>28338707
kek
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>>28338944
How the fuck did you even reach that conclusion?
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>>28338707
The joke went over my head. Care to explain?
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>>28339168
The audience just cares that there's stories, whereas the writer thinks their story is shit in comparison to another story.
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>>28339182
When did one of them say he's shit compared to another? Not seeing the connection here.
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>>28339287
It's in the fucking picture.
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>>28339309
But not in Greens post, which is what doesn't make sense.
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>>28339343
Writers like to compare themselves to other writers. Its implied.
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>>28339382
I don't see anyone doing that except for >>28337509
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>>28339410
>It's implied.
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>>28339431
And? Just because a funny picture implies something doesn't mean it's relevant?
Unless you're talking about the post attacking the WFD fanboys, because that me does indeed imply comparison.
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>>28339458
*that one implies
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>>28339458
So you think that writers don't compare themselves to other writers. I'm not even talking about the fanboys.
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>>28339287
>>28339343
>>28339458
What I meant to say with this picture is:

>NaOH, Green, we love you faggots

>While some may criticize the shit out anything the audience still loves it
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>>28339531
And this. Artists always measure their penises and while Green and NaOH never said such a thing it's always implied
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>>28339531
>So you think that writers don't compare themselves to other writers
um... no?
I'm saying that it's not something that relates to green or NaOH
>>28339549
>Grey criticizes his own work
He's still writing the same sappy shit since three threads ago and is apathetically aware of it. The guy ain't changing shit.
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>>28339549
This.
>Would drink with them/10
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>>28339573
I don't think green ever compared himself to NaOH
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>>28339603
I remember when he compared himself to Pheno but not NaOH. Also I only saw that green mention that he was looking for other people in another thread to criticize him.
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>>28339579
>>28339603
>Grey criticizes his own work
>green never compared himself to NaOH

One of us has a brain damage. Since I'm sure that I never implied those things in my posts.
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>>28339649
I hope he dont left this thread
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>>28339649
Because pheno is 100 times a better writer then NaOH will ever be.

Why would you compare yourself to trash instead of comparing yourself to a more experienced, better, well rounded writer like Pheno?

Oh his best day, NaOH can't lace up Pheno's boots.
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>>28339659
Then what /were/ you implying, Anon? Because there's still no correlation to anything I've seen in greens post to the dang cake picture
Like, this guy >>28337571 >>28337353 is part of the audience. Green just asked him to speak his mind since the guy had let others do it before him
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>>28339737
Nice false flagging.
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>>28339738
>NaOH, Green, we love you faggots
That's what was in this picture for Green
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>>28340050
I'm pretty sure he already knows we love them both. It's not like he can't see the amount of replies he gets. He replies back to them.
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>>28340109
We love them , NaOH and Green are very good writers
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>>28340188
Hivemind!
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>>28340198
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>>28340216
I'm already out of humanized Vinyl pictures.
>>28340207
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>>28340221
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>>28340243
More sisters!
>>28340242
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>>28339737
What the fuck, you ridiculous bastard.

Thanks for the compliment. I guess. Never do it again.
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>>28340257
At least it wasn't me this time.
>>28340255
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Its not time for the image dump, stop it. We still have 80 to 70ish posts left.
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>>28340268
>>28340271
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>>28340278
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>>28340221
Have some more!
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>>28340257
Bitch it wasent a compliment. I just hate NaOH fanboys and how they make him out to the best thing on God's green earth. I only used you as a example. I've never read your stories lol.
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>>28340297
Thanks!
>>28340292
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>>28340298
Damn 2edgy4me
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>>28340307
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>>28340257
heya pheno, get in the discord, mate.
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>>28340314
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>>28340298
>Never read my stories
>Says my writing is better than NaOH's

You're... Just the dumbest little thing, aren't you, cutie?
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>>28340326
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>>28340341
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>>28340333
Yea I'm pretty awesome. Also nice trips you got there nigger.
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>>28340298
You do realize that just makes your argument seem disingenuous and your opinion invalid, right?
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>>28340418
>>28340409
>>28340401
>>28340395
All 4 of the Shadowbolts.
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>>28340228
what's time is that
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Wake me up when September ends.
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>>28340581
There was a comic like this.
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>>28340615
I'm still posting there, tho.
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>>28340662
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>>28340669
Either 501 or 502.
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New thread:
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>>28340677
>>28340677
>>28340677
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