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Incestuous Relationships Thread

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This Time It's Coloured Edition

Whether you're a fan of Suncest, Piecest, or anything in between, this thread is for you.

Thread's pastebin: http://pastebin.com/pTAqfjD6

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>>28103029
Shamwow is best mom___
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>>28103029
>that picture
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>>28103062
What's the consensus on Sunset? If we got a human-Sunset, is that former-horse!Sunset or always-human!Sunset?
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>>28103086
Why does Anon wear tight underwear like that? Hardly any breathing room is there?
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>>28103097
He's wise on Sunset's underwear-stealing. He goes for the tightest ones that will hold his scent the best.
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>>28103029
Stop with the human shit, guys
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>>28103123
no
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>>28103131
This is a pony board, at least make it pony
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>>28103148
EQG counts as pony content.

Also, I know this sounds completely strange, but I'm more attracted to Sunset's human form.
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>>28103148
This thread isn't necessary 100% >nohooves greens Anon.
tbqh I'm expecting a hooves green

>pic
Heh
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>>28103148
(you)
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>>28103029
As a heads up I went ahead and updated the pastebin. http://pastebin.com/X8xpizr6

I'll go ahead and re-post the last update since I kinda used it to kill the thread, if you have some discussion about it I'd love to get opinions as the final choice was really hard to decide on.

>A short drive to the school later finds your trio outside the school.
>Passing by the statute that leads to home you wheel yourself to a stop near it.
>Pressing your hand on the cool stone you take a moment to remember.
>A warm hand lays gently on your shoulder, prompting you to look at Sunset, she smiles at you in understanding.
>”Anon? Are you coming?” Twilight asks from the school doors.
“Yeah, coming.”
>”We’ll figure things out Anon, we always do.” Sunset says to you helping you push yourself up the ramp.
“I hope so, I really hope so.”
>Twilight pauses at the door before opening it with a jingle of keys.
“They let students have keys to the place?”
>”Only to us,” Sunset explains holding the door as you roll in, “It’s so we have access to the labs when we need it.”
“Surprised that a high school has the stuff needed to even do this to be honest.”
>”Compared to Crystal Prep, it’s rather low grade, but the equipment is still useable.” Twilight answers before blushing as she takes in Sunset’s annoyed look. “That is to say, Canterlot has it’s own brand of stuff that is just as useful!”
>”Smooth.”
>”Oh shut up and let’s get started on the science! I can’t wait to see what new things we can learn.”
>You just snicker at the two’s banter before following them through the school.
>You didn’t get much chance to actually go to the school to begin with, taking a job as soon as your arrived, the halls are unfamiliar to your own eyes.
>As your party moves through the halls you find a poster that pops up now and then.
“What that poster talking about, summer camp?”
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>>28103227
>”Oh, it’s some trip that a lot of students are planning on going to for their senior trip. As a way to save money all of the lower years are being invited as well.” Explains Twilight after looking at the poster itself.
“Huh, you girls planning on going?”
>”I’d like to, but I know that money is tight” Sunset mentions
“Pfft, hey you relax and go if you want to alright? It’ll be fine.”
>”Really?”
“Yeah, get you out of my hair for a while at least!”
>”Ass.” Sunset simply says flicking your ear.
“Abuse! Abuse I say! Twilight save me!”
>”Nope, that’s all on you Anon.” Twilight giggles after rolling her eyes at your antics. “Now hurry up, we’re almost there.”
>Soon enough Sunset guides you through confidently alongside Twilight opening out into a rather authentic looking lab.
>A trio of tables lined with drawers and cabinets locked tight alongside a wall dominated by a variety of computers.
>In a corner lies a isolation chamber that is separated by a wall of glass and keypad for the door.
>On one of the spare tables near the cabinets lay an assortment of gadgets that look cobbled together from the local hardware store.
“What’s our first step then?”
>”You’re going to be over here, far away from any explosions that might happen.” Sunset says simply pulling you over behind a table and locks your wheelchair in place
“Oh come on, like there is go-”
>Stepping past you Sunset merely quirks an eyebrow at you, ”I got zapped by magical rainbows and lighting.”
>Unlocking the wheelchair you scoot back further away from the chamber.
“Right so I”ll just be over here then!”
>”He changed his tune quick.” Twilight giggles out as she starts to work on her gadgets.
>”Anon doesn’t like lightning that much.” Sunset walks alongside Twilight before helping her with assembling the test.
“It’s not the lightning that bothers me, it’s the zapping stinging and burning that goes along with it!”
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>>28103238
>”Alright enough horsing aro-” Twilight says before stopping at your and Sunset’s looks.
>You both have your hands clamping your mouth shut as you try so hard not to snicker.
>”...”
“...”
>Twilight simply sighs, ”Get it out of your system.”
>”N-no, we’re f-fine!”
“Not like we’ve got to get a hoof on or anything.”
>Twilight flails her arms at that, ”Oh my gosh, you two are terrible!”
>Sunset can’t hold it in any longer laughing at the stupidity, ”Snrk, s-sorry Twilight, Anon’s an idiot let’s go ahead and start.”
>You dramatically cross your arms and let out a humph of disapproval.
“I take silent offense to that!”
>”You’re not being very silent.”
>”That’s the joke Twilight.”
>”Oh, right. Well here lemme strap this on…” Twilight says bringing over what looks like a pasta strainer to rest atop of Sunset’s head.
>”Ok, I think I’m ready.” Taking a few steps the girl bobs her head before smacking it to insure her head gear is secured.
“You can do it sis!”
>Twilight comes back to you after Sunset enters the chamber.
>Clicking a recorder in she pulls from her pocket Twilight seems to change in her demeanor.
>”Alright beginning recording, now. Twilight Sparkle on July xxth in 20xx. Subject Sunset Shimmer is attempting use of her own magic for measurement.”
>You spare a glance at the supreme professional scientist beside you.
“Do you really need to do that?”
>”It helps me keep organized.” Twilight simply responds before moving the camera nearby to record and point at Sunset.
>”...” Meanwhile Sunset stands there eyes closed tight.
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>>28103243
>Time starts to pass and you begin to wonder if you should ask to help or something when you see a faint glow surround your sister.
>Before your eyes you watch in awe as Sunset starts to slowly levitate into the air with a slow twirl!
>Small glowing nubs start to form on her head as her hair starts to grow in a cascade of curls as two billowing wings made of yellow light starts to form behind her.
>Faint red marks start to appear across her eyes when suddenly she opens them in shock revealing her jade eyes, like a switch her magical transformation grinds to a halt.
>With a loud pop and bright flash of light Sunset returns to her normal form!


>”Ah!” Breathing heavily Sunset kneels down trying to catch her breath.
>”Sunset! You almost had it, what happened?” Twilight asks walking into the chamber and giving the girl a drink.
>You bring a towel that the sweaty girl thankfully takes drying off on.
>”I-I don’t know I could feel it though! It was so close, but then it slipped through my fingers.” Sunset responds after a few minutes to catch her breath, but you can see the eagerness in her eyes at this new mystery.
“What did you focus on?”
>”What? Oh, I had, I used the feeling of friendship that I felt between myself and everyone else.”
>”Aww, Sunset.” Twilight seems to melt at the comment before wrapping Sunset in a hug
>”H-hey, stop with the hugging, this helmet might hit you.”
>”Don’t care!” Twilight expresses with glee rubbing her cheek into your sisters.
“Cute, but I have to ask if you got so far on friendship, maybe you need something more potent?”
>”What do you mean?” Sunset asks awkwardly patting Twilight on the back to look over at you.
“You could try love, that’s always was a thing. Remember the princess Cadence?”
>”Would it work?” Twilight asks peeling herself off of Sunset to look at the both of you.
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>>28103250
>You shrug at the question
>”I-I don’t know, unicorn magic tries to remove the emotional aspect from it…” Sunset looks out of her depth before you helpfully add,
“Can’t hurt to try right?”
>”Yeah, alright step back Twilight.”

>Sealing the chamber once more you and Twilight take your positions once more.
>Faster than before Sunset begins to glow a low amber light once more.
>Soon she is going through the process as her wings and ears form along with those odd markings again.
>Then before your eyes you can see a horn made of pure light begin to form on her forehead, as the light radiates from the chamber you feel stronger, healthier even.
>Opening her eyes that glow white at first, soon return to their normal jade to lock eyes with you.
>A small smile crosses her face as you return it only to be distracted by Twilight.
>”Oh this is so exciting.”
“Calm down, let’s ju-”
>Out of the corner of your eye, you would have missed it if you blinked, a dark streak of ebony darts in front of Sunset!
>With a groan Sunset holds her head and curls up as the light begins to dim all around you.
“What’s going on!?
>”I don’t know! Her readings are skyrocketing.”
>”NGyaaaaaaaaaaah!” Before your eyes you watch as Sunset’s light turns from a youthful carefree yellow to a smoky hazy maroon as her clothes and skin change.
>Gone is the elegant dress and yellow skin instead a ragged dress paired with ruddy skin crawls up your sister!
“Shut it down!”
>”I’m trying!” Twilight says slamming a button beside the door.
>With a whine of machines at work you watch as the magic surrounding your sister is suddenly drawn to a hatch above her.
>As it does the changes seem to fade away before the magic rebukes the drain surging forward as a demonic wing sprouts from your sister!
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>>28103258
>With an explosion of smoke and flame the machine dies out and the changes continue unchallenged
“Nothings working!”
>”She overloaded the fail safe.” Twilight says in shock staring at the carnage before her.
“What?!”
>”Heeeeelp meeeee.” Sunset’s cries out from inside the chamber.
>Heart hammering in your chest you know what you have to do.

>”Hang on Sunset!” “Anon?! Stop what are you doing?”
>Twilight tries to sprint towards you, but the door slides shut before she can reach it.
>Scrabbling at the keypad Twilight curses before you draw her attention away.
“Sorry Twi, but my little sister needs her big brother.”
>Slamming on the door Twilight shouts at you, ”No! Don’t do it, you idiot you’re going to get hurt!”
“Thanks Twilight.”
>”Anon!”
>Waving her off you turn to the swirling maelstrom of energy that surrounds your sister.
>The winds buffet at you and you can feel the confusion and rage within it.
>This children is why we don’t do emotional casting.
>None the less your sister is in the thick of it and you’re getting her out!
>Wheeling forward you are nearly knocked off your seat as you push onwards.
>Leaning into the wind you can feel it burn at your skin as you hold your hand up to your face to ward it off.
>Faint whispers can be heard all around you speaking of explicit things that set your heart thrumming from their lurid promises.
>Was this what your sister faced when she turned the first time?
>Thankfully the chamber was small as you can see the hunched over form of your sister.
“Sunset?”
>”NNnngh.”
>You nearly jerk back, nearly, but the sight of your sister’s tormented face half of it demonic and leering at you while her other half is crying for help, steels your resolve.
>You let your wheelchair fall to the ground and be swept away in the storm.
>Holding your sister close you hug her whispering,
“Sunset, come back to me.”
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>>28103029
That picture again?
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>>28103267
>”Its…..haaard…” Comes the choked half mocking and half crying response of two voices in one.
“Please.”
>You squeeze her tighter to you hoping that she had the strength.
>If anything the whirlwind grows stronger and the burning almost too much before with a gasp of air it stops.
>You sag in relief, held only by your sister and the floor itself as Sunset holds onto you tightly crying all the while.


>”I’m sorry, I’m s-sorry…” Sunset struggles to speak through her tears as you weakly hold onto her.
>The chamber door slides open and you soon hear Twilight raving at you
>”Anon! You idiotic dumb moronic stupid horse! When I saw your wheelchair slam into the window I thought you died you retard!”
>Hoping to ease the tension you crack a joke,
“You realize you used the same thing like four times right?”
>Twilight’s eye twitches dangerously as her lab coat flares behind her striding towards you, ”Shut up! Going into a magically contaminated area was reckless an- Sunset?”
>One moment the irate and hellfire spitting scientist the next the caring and heartfelt friend.
>Women are scary.
>”Oh no, Sunset. What happened? Your readings were fine one moment then the next your power just went out of control.” Twilight softly says rubbing Sunset’s back as she clutches to you tightly.
>Jeez, Sunny’s going to have nightmares of this all over again.
“I think it’s better if we let her rest first.”
>At that Sunset shudders before she starts to speak in something other than sorry, ”N-no, I..I need to confess.”
>”Confess?” Twilight asks wide eyed.
“What’s wrong?”
>”My magic, it...it turned on me.” Sunset explains before pulling away from you and holding herself not willing to face you.
>”I-I, started to turn into that demon again and...and it.”
>”Sunset you don’t have to talk about it if you want to.” Twilight offers laying a hand on your sister’s shoulder.
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>>28103272
>Only for the girl to abruptly jerk her shoulder away with a yell, ”No! I-I need to.”
“That was the form you had from the crown right?”
>”Yeah, but...oh Celestia, Anon I...I didn’t turn because of some power lust it was from-”
“From what?”
>For a long moment Sunset is silent and you think she’ll keep it to yourself when she speaks, ”I’ve...Anon I’m sorry, but, I’ve been sleeping with you /before/ we ever agreed to dating…”
>What, but...that would...
>”Sunset…”
>For how long has she? Last night definitely had something do with them both at least, but then...
>”No! I’m not, I’m tired of lying!”
>Finding your voice you mind races as you ask,
“Sunset, just. Why?”
>”I’m sorry, I just, you were always there for me and you’ve never pushed me away and…”
“So you just wanted it and took it?”
>”No! Yes, I mean.”
>”Guys, if you want I could leave…?” Twilight asks edging towards the door eager to leave.
>Oh no purple smart, you get to enjoy this cluster fuck too.
>”Yes.”
“No.”
>You lock eyes with Sunset once more to find her in tears still and looking absolutely wretched before she meekly lowers her eyes.
>”Nevermind Twi…”
“Sunset just, why didn’t you wait? Or even ask?!”
>”You were taking forever and I never in my wildest dreams would believe you’d just accept me in the first place!” Sunset tries to explain still squeezing herself tight that the tips of her fingers turn white.
“That’s because it was so weird! I was getting used to it a bit, but is it too much to ask for some space to get used to it?”
>”No, it’s not an-”
“So you just wanted it and took it? Sunset you’ve always had this problem.”
>”Wh-what do you mean?”
“You see something you want, and you just take and take and take it for yourself!”
>Guilty Sunset doesn’t even try to refute your accusation, ”I-I know, I just…”
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>>28103282
“Oh I’m not done yet, is our entire relationship just based on you wanting my dick and thats it? Is it?!”
>”No, no i-it’s not I just...I wanted to pay you back I mean.”
“Pay me back, for what?”
>”For taking you away from our home! For sending us both into exile and stranding us here on this world!” Sunset says as if it should be obvious.
>Is she…
>Really?
>Th-that’s it? The whole reason for you both to be together?
>Of a simple debt?!
“...”
>”Sunset…” Twilight says stepping closer to her friend.
>”Yeah?” Jumping Sunset turns to her friend, to be honest you’d forgotten Twilight as well.
>”Are you intentionally being retarded?”
>That, came out of left field...
>”Wh-what? No! Why would you even ask that?!”
>”Because that’s a stupid reason if you asked me.” Twilight says coming down to look at her friend with a sad look.
“Sunset, what are our words.”
>”H-huh?”
“Our words, now.”
>”Family, Duty and Honor.”
“Sunny, you’re my family, I would /never/ ask you to pay me back for this.”
>”But, this is a lot different than asking for bits to get an experiment running or even a new castle!”
“Somethings’ don't have a price tag, little sister.”
>”Yeah Sunset, my own brother would always help me out, okay maybe he’d ask for some help with some homework, but hey, it evens out.” Twilight adds in before briefly rubbing Sunset’s shoulder.
>”Th-that still doesn’t mean what I did is right! Anon I made you give up your birthright for Celestia’s sake.”
“And I’d do it again, because we’re family and family looks out for each other.”
>”Anon…” Sunset says sniffing and shaking in place.
>You simply spread your arms wide,
“C’mere you.”
>With a cry Sunset crawls into your hug and fresh tears fall.
>Gently patting her back as she holds on with a death grip you murmur,
“There, there...let it out…”
>”I’m sorry, I’m sorry!”
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>>28103289
>”Here Sunset.” Looking up you find tissues along with the whole box as Twilight gives you a nervous smile
>Taking a few you hand them to Sunset as she blows her nose trying to recover her composure.
“Thanks Twi, speaking of.”
>”Huh?”
“I had a rather strange dream last night involving you and Sunny here.” You feel Sunset stiffen in your arms at that and you feel a certainty in your heart.
>”Grk!” That and Twilight's face of busted is just the topping of the cake.
“You wouldn’t happen to know anything about that right?”
>”Uh, w-well I should make sure to fix th-” Twilight stammers out trying to back away.
>”Twilight.” Sunset sniffs simply.
>Twilight aborts her botched retreat before avoiding your gaze as she mutters,
>”...Yes, I, Sunset and I had, i-intimate relations with you while you slept.”
“Right, well then…”
>”Y-you’re not mad?” Twilight asks having expected something more at least.
“Oh I’m steamed, but at the same time I can’t argue that it’s a bit of an ego boost.”
>”So, what do we do n-now?” Sunset asks looking up at you from your chest.
“Now? For now I think, I think we should all take a break. Cool off so to speak. I’m not going to lie and say that I don’t feel hurt from this Sunny. Same goes for you Twi, if I can’t trust you girls to leave me be while I sleep. How can I trust you with my heart?”
>”I-I understand.” Twilight says meekly
>”Yeah.” Sunset responds gently nuzzling into your chest to avoid your look.
>Seeing the two of them looking so guilty that you let out a grunt of disgust
“Teats of Celestia, I sound like some courtier, look I just. I’d want to have at least been a part of something that should have been special in the first place!”
>”W-Well we coul-”
>”Twilight!”
>”It’s an option!” Twilight snaps back holding her hands out in peace.
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>>28103298
“Look, I, I want to let this work, but for now we’re gonna let me heal up, figure out this magic stuff and then maybe we can untangle this clusterfuck alright?”
>”Makes sense, but are you sure you don’t-”
>”Twilight!”
>”I have needs woman!”
>Despite yourself, you can’t help but start to laugh at the ridiculous situation you’ve fallen in.
>At seeing you laugh the two girls look at each other before at you.
>The duo start to have their own laughs as well.
>You simply lay against your sister still laughing, the tight feeling in your chest slowly unwinds.
>Sure the girls might as well have raped you in your sleep, but at the same time it was nice, even if you never got to really enjoy it.
>You know what, its’ time to stop being a whiny bitch.
“You know, maybe I was being too dumb.”
>Sunset is the first to get over her laughter at your statement, “Huh?”
>Squeezing your sister close you lean over to kiss her cheek.
>Scarlet runs through her face as she stares at you in shock.
“I’ve decided, I’m not gonna be salty about this, instead what we need are better ground rules. Such as, Twilight!”
>Jumping at your shout Twilight holds her hands together looking at you, “What?”
>Waving your arm at her to come closer you wait for her to get close and grab her down to sit with you both.
>”H-hey!”
“Alright first rule, ASK. I don’t mind friends too much, but ask before you bring them over alright?”
>”S-sure!”
>”W-wait does that mean?”
>You hold a finger up interrupting the two now excited girls.
“Second rule, if you want to do something, /don’t/ do it while I’m asleep. This relates to rule one!”
>”S-”
>You place a finger on Twilight’s lips to stop her questions making her glasses fog up interestingly enough.
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>>28103307
“And third rule; I’m not taking anything up my butt.”
>For a moment you see the two girls stare at you before they realize what you said.
>Twilight simply falls limp in your arms face bright red and Sunset lets out a harsh bark of laughter before nuzzling into your side again, “Anon you are such a dork.”
“Pfft, if you say so, but hey.”
>Squeezing Sunset closer you smile at her, “Least I’m your dork.”
>Sunset simply smiles at that warmly as a light glow surrounds her form as she hugs you tight.

Righto then, there's what I got so if you guys want to give me some idea on what high notes I hit and what I balked at that would be awesome.
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>>28103317
It's cute and I'll be looking forward to more. Definitely wanting more Sunset hugging, I want to take care of her.
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>>28103317
I'm still not big on the "it's cool you raped me, it's kinda my fault for not setting ground rules" thing, but otherwise I like it
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>>28103317
Again the consensus is that Anon definitely should've reacted stronger. I can even tell when exactly you rewrote it... the transition in mood is that noticeable.

I like it but Anon should've reacted stronger overall. It's a huge betrayal of trust imo.
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>>28103029
Why does Anon have Tighty-Whities?
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>>28104432

This
>>28103121
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>>28104432
Because he prefers a snug fit and reliable support all day long?
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>>28104553
>Snug
>implying
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>The smell of eggs and bacon frying on the pan excite your senses and awaken you.
>Taking in notice of the empty bed you lie in, you decide to check up on your sisters.
>You slowly rise out of bed, checking the time on your clock.
>10:30
>Shit. Normally waking up at 8 to keep a steady habit was your plan, but last night’s dream was something else.
>You THINK it was a dream.
>At least you woke up to something good.
>Going down the stairs, you overhear a conversation that your sisters are having.
>”...But Anon tried so hard last night.”
>”I don’t care, Sonata. The fact that we all made out with him last night doesn’t change that it’s wrong.”
>”Aria, believe me or not, but didn’t you say that you really enjoyed that kiss?”
>Both Sonata and Adagio laugh at Aria as she growls in frustration.
>”Keep laughing, and you two won’t have lips to kiss Anon with.”
>Turning the corner into the kitchen, you start chuckling about the whole situation.
>Before now, you were almost convinced that what happened last night was a dream.
“Morning, girls.”
>”Nonny!”
>Sonata jumps off her chair, slides on her socks for a second, and lands on you.
“You alright, Sonata?”
>”Mhmm” Sonata gives you a big kiss on cheek, then giggles.
>Aria, holding an expression that’s a mix between being appalled and insurmountable rage, fumbles some words out.
>”A-Anon, how long were you there?”
“Long enough to hear that you didn’t like last night.”
>Aria, defeated, returns to finish cooking. “Whatever, you hungry?”
“Looking to earn my favor back?”
>”No, you jackass. It’s breakfast, are you hungry or not?”
“Sure, what’s on the menu?”
>”I know you lost your mind, but have you lost your smell?”
“Hehe, my bad.”
>Leaving Sonata behind, you go for some breakfast.
>Grabbing a plate, Aria carefully puts some scrambled eggs and a couple pieces of bacon on it and hands it to you.
“Thanks, beautiful.”
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>>28104647
>”Ever since last night, you become full of yourself.”
>Adagio has finally said something, albeit a little hurtful.
You want the truth? You can’t handle the truth!
“I guess you guys boosted my confidence.”
>”Really?”
“Well, you’re not avoiding me anymore, right? Mission accomplished.”
>”Yeah...Sorry, Nonny.”
“You know what? Don’t worry about it. I’m just glad to hear that you guys don’t hate me or anything.”
>”But Nonny, there’s gotta be something we can do to make it up to you!”
>Carefully thinking it over for a while, and quickly disregarding any sexual thoughts at the moment, you come up empty.
>Right at that moment, your phone starts ringing.
>Your dad’s calling you for the first time in forever, as if there’s anything that needs to be done, he’d leave a note, or wait until he came home.
“Gimme a sec.”
>Quickly exiting the room, you pick up the phone.
“Hello?”
>“Anon? Hey this is important.”
“Are you alright, Dad?”
>“Yeah, everything’s fine. Listen, the company’s flying me out for a week. Apparently, some delegates are flying out to Los Angeles for a huge meeting, and I’ve been selected to go!”
“Oh my god, Dad, that’s great!”
>“Yeah! So my question is...Will you guys be able to handle things at home?”
“Uhh…”
>You look back to find Sonata chugging the last of the milk down.
“I think we might need groceries soon.”
>”I had a thought something like that would happen. Alright what I’m about to tell you absolutely cannot go to your sisters, ok? Women and their shopping, you know what I’m saying?”
“Yeah, yeah, Dad. I get it. Man to man.”
>”Great! Alright, you know that locked cabinet in the living room?”
>Glaring towards the old cabinet that your father had always told to get away from, you sigh heavily.
“Yeah, I see it.”
“The key is in my room.. So I want you to go get the key right now, please.”
“Ok, Dad, I got it.”
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>>28104657
>You look towards your sisters with a confused look, and head upstairs.
>Entering Dad’s room, the surprising scent of nothingness hits you.
>It’s the cleanest room you’ve ever seen in your entire life.
>Guess Dad doesn’t really do anything when he gets home from work.
>Still, you’ve never been allowed in here, so just being here gives you a feeling of excitement.
“Ok, I’m in here.”
>”You see the old CRT on the vanity?”
>Taking notice of the old TV, you give off a sigh of nostalgia, as you grew up with these around.
“Yeah, I see it.”
>”I want you to lift it up.”
“Beg pardon?”
>“Lift it, Anon.”
>Setting the phone down, you inspect the TV, trying to figure out how to hold it.
>After shifting your arms around, looking for the best way to hold it, you finally grasp the TV, and lift it.
>Underneath, a key lies within a bed of dust.
>Ironically the key looks cleaner than the space around it. Must have been used fairly recently.
“Alright, I got the key.”
>”Son, there is 500 dollars in the cabinet. Use it however you wish, but just get groceries and whatever you need first before spending it all willy-nilly.”
>Stunned at the thought of having that much money just handed to you leaves you unable to speak.
“R-Really, Dad? You’re just gonna give me 500 dollars? No conditions?”
>”Anon, listen to yourself. You’re going to college in a few weeks. I’m sure you can handle 500 dollars.”
“...Thanks, Dad.”
“Anon, take the key and go find your sisters.”
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>>28104664
(Short post, thanks story formatting and 4chan's character limit)
>Heading downstairs, you enter the kitchen and motion for everyone to be quiet, then turn on speaker phone.
“Alright Dad, you’re on speaker.”
>”Hey girls!”
>“Hi Dad!”
>It’s scary how they can just speak in unison like that.
>”Alright girls, I’m going to be gone for a week, don’t worry everything’s fine. However, I want you to listen. Anon is leader of the house until I get back, understand?”
>”Yes, Dad.”
>God that will never stop weirding you out.
>“Alright. I love you all!”
“We love you too!”
>This time, you decided to join in. If you can’t beat them, you know.
>”Bye!”
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>>28104680
“So...Looks like I’m in charge.”
>”Alright, just don’t make us do anything weird.” Aria is starting to get defensive.
“Actually, this just gave me an idea.”
>Aria suddenly regrets her bold remark.
“I’ve decided on what you guys could do.”
>Tension starts building up, except for Sonata who seems to be excited to be finally helping her big bro.
“I want you guys to go on a date with me.”
>Adagio, who’s been taking info nonchalantly so far, recreates a park fountain and spits her milk everywhere.
>Aria is clearly furious, as she responds with, “Are you fucking insane?!”
>Sonata, well she’s even more excited than before, bouncing her chair up and down. What a strange girl.
>Rushing to Adagio’s side, you check on her.
“Shit dude, are you ok?”
>“Yeah...*cough cough*, I’m...*cough*...fine.”
“Alright, take it easy. Sonata, I saw chugging that milk, you’re coming with me to get groceries.”
>”Yay!”
“You two, do whatever. Sonata, get dressed.”
>”Ok!” God, she’s weird.
>About half an hour later, you and Sonata are finally ready to go.
“Aria, Adagio, keep the fort locked down! Sonata, here are my keys, go start the car.”
>”Yes sir, Anon!” Being thrown the keys, Sonata fumbles them for a second, then catches them.
>Staring intently at the locked cabinet, you check behind you to make sure no one’s looking.
>After taking the utmost caution for not grabbing attention, you finally unveil the mystery behind the case.
>The insides are covered head to toe with money in a wide variety of bills.
>Not taking anymore time than needed, you quickly grab some twenties and tens equal to 500 dollars and shut the door.
>Immediately locking the cabinet, you make your way to the car, which some loud k-pop seems to be blasting from.
>Opening the door, Sonata oblivious to your presence, you turn down the music and grab her attention.
“Sonata!”
>”Aah! Oh. Hi Anon! I turned your car on.”
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>>28104691
“I don’t think so, Sonny.”
>She had only turned the electrics on. Hitting the ignition, you prove your point.
>You can’t help but think about all the money that was in the legendary cabinet, or more importantly, why it was there.
>”Everything alright, Nonny?”
“Huh? Oh, yeah. Just thinking about something. It’s not important. Let’s bounce.”
>Pulling out of the driveway, Sonata starts fidgeting around.
“You alright, Sonata?”
>”What? Y-Yeah, Nonny. I’m f-fine.”
>Continuing down the road, Sonata’s condition seems to be getting worse.
“If something’s bothering you, you can tell me.”
>”There’s no hiding anything from you, is there?”
“Not when it’s this painfully obvious.”
>”Alright. Ever since last night, I’ve been feeling all warm inside, and now that I’m alone with you it’s getting worse.”
“W-What?! You’re not sick, are you?”
>The last thing you want is vomit all over your car.
>”No, I need you, Anon.”
“Pardon me?”
>“I want to please you, big brother!”
>Not gonna lie, you’ve got a raging semi.
“Please me? What do you mean by that?!”
>”I think you know very well what I mean, Anon.”
>Sonata motions to your now diamond-hard dick.
“Hey, hold on a minute. We’re siblings, this isn’t right!”
>”Anon, let me do this.”
>Unable to do anything as you want to prevent a crash, Sonata, the littlest sister, starts undoing your zipper.
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>>28104697
>Your raging member is now face to face with her.
>”W-Wow. It’s bigger than I thought it would be.”
“Don’t know whether to take that as a compliment or not.”
>”Just take it.” Sonata has now started to suck your cock, moaning sounds of extreme pleasure.
“Jesus, you’re good at this.”
>She stops to take your length out of her mouth. “Thanks~”
>Sonata now playfully kisses the tip of it, and continues.
>A few minutes go by, nothing but exchanging pleasurable moans of ecstasy.
“Sonata, I’m about to-”
>”Mhmm” It seems she wants to swallow your semen.
>After, one last push, your cum has now pooled inside of your dear sister’s mouth.
“S-Sonata, you didn’t have to do that for me.”
>”Of course I did. It’s my duty as your sister.”
>She gives you one last kiss on the cheek before retiring to her seat.
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>>28104706
Alright, that's this part done.

It's only right to share the pastebin for newbies, right? http://pastebin.com/fsD7nTb2
<3 You guys.
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>>28104734
One last thing, all errors WILL be fixed in the pastebin, so if you spot anything, it will be fixed by next post.
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>goodnight pump
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>>28104728
Kek
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>>28103087
There is only one Sunset so far.
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>>28104734
<3 you too m8.
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>>28104734
Double posting your story, huh?
just giving you a hard time

wish the blowjob scene was a bit longer, but looking good other than that
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>>28049116
>The truck rumbles and rattles as it travels down the semi-familiar roads.
>Dad drives a little more aggressively than Limestone does you’ve noticed.
>Probably how she was able to punch the gas earlier and not seem phased by it.
>A warm puff of air travels down your chest, the top of Limestone’s head is at the bottom of your vision.
>”Long day.” dad says quietly.
“Yeah, having that truck break down complicated things.”
>Dad grumbles, “That damned Nitty Gritty. Always making patch jobs on his truck. I told him a million times to price an actual repair job and get back to me with it-“
>He glances over at you and your sister, he drops the small rant he was getting swept up in and clears his throat, “Well, I’m glad you and Limey were here today to make sure we hit the quotas.”
>You simply nod slowly in return.
>The truck groans a little as dad shifts gears, without restriction this time due to Limestone’s position.
>She’s half sitting in your lap, her right thigh planted firmly on your left.
>Her leg is tucked between yours and digs slightly into your left leg to keep herself up partially on you.
>In order to keep from falling over onto Dad given the tilt of her hip, she was leaning over on your front.
>This was the final result after a small bit of huffing and rough shoving when you all first piled into dad’s truck.
>Work took more out of her than it did you however, as she fell asleep shortly after leaving the farm, letting her. complaint about how much you reeked die down with her.
>Now her head rests on your chest, near the center, the curve of her upper body is now keeping her in place and away from. the space dad needs to drive comfortably.
>”That girl is out cold huh?”
>You are about to respond but a yawn sneaks its way out first.
>Dad chuckles, “You’re not too far behind her eh?”
>You shake your head.
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>>28106344
>”Well don’t worry, Maud isn’t done working on where the next blast is going to be so we have about another month before another day like this comes around, and Nitty will have that repair estimate to me by tomorrow now.”
>You lean over some and rest your head against the glass window.
>Dad turns the radio up just a little, to mask the forming silence.
>Limestone shifts a little more on your lap, her thigh travels further over and you can feel a pressure on your loins.
>You can feel her breathe in deeply, her back expands and push against your chest just slightly before she lets it out.
>Again you can feel her breath trickle down your chest, followed by a gentle nuzzle as she digs her head up into the bottom of your chin.
>Her body is very warm, and smells of salted flowers.
>Her deodorant was clearly not up to task for a day like today.
>You can feel her damp skin soaking your clothing with her sweat.
>More notably on your pants than your shirt.
>You rest your head against the warm glass of the truck’s side window and close your eyes.
>You certainly weren’t ready for a day like today either, you are wiped.
>The truck comes to a faintly squealing stop, rocking both you and Limestone forwards.
>Your eyes blink open and you instinctively reach out and grab a handful of the seat to hold yourself back.
>Limestone gasps as your brain catches up and you realize you had grabbed a handful of your sister’s thigh rather than the seat.
>Dad was busy fussing with the keys to notice, you quickly let her go and pray that she doesn’t just blow up at you.
>Grumbles coming from just underneath you inform you that you thankfully hadn’t done that while she was awake.
>”Anon...” she mumbles sleepily.
>Dad slams the driver side door shut behind him as he circles around to the back to grab his bag out of the back.
>”Dig in harder-“ she continues to mumble.
>She stiffens up, which means her right leg digs down on you a little harder.
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>>28106350
>You can feel your cock become sandwiched between her thigh and your own.
>Limestone pushes back from you, sliding her leg back over and off of you, “-W-why don’t you?” she growls.
>Her eyes dart to the back of the truck, looking out through the rear view window before returning to look at you.
“Sorry sis, force of habit” you explain.
>She swallows and parts her lips just a little, “f-force-“ her mumbles statement is cut off suddenly by the sound of knuckle on glass.
>Both you and Limestone look out the side window at your father, who has crossed over to your side now, “Shake the sleep out of your limbs” you faintly hear dad proclaim as he makes his way to the front door.
>You turn back around to find Limestone scooting her way to the driver side of the truck.
>Guess she picked up being cranky after waking up from Maud in your absence.
>You slam the door shut behind you as you begin walking towards the stairs.
>Limestone rounds the front of the truck and catches up to walk beside you up the stairs.
>She yawns and stretches as she walks up the stairs.
>You can actually make out the faintest jiggle in her chest with each step up with how stretched the shirt is over her chest right now.
>”Awake now Limestone?” dad asks as you all dust yourselves off a little at the doorstep.
>Limestome hums agreeably, “I don’t want to be…” she whines, “Think I’m going to have a hot shower and a nap.”
>”You want anybody to wake you when dinner is ready?”
>”No, but somebody better. I’m already feeling hungry.”
>Satisfied with the quick clean off, dad opens the door and lets you and Limestone in.
>A hot shower and a nap sounds awesome.
>You are all kinds of gross right now.
>Mom’s quick greeting coupled with the firm look on her face give you the impression that she not only agrees, but would rather you take one quickly.
>Man, if you keep taking two showers in one day your skin is going to get-
>Your blood begins to run cold.
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>>28106355
>You took a shower this morning.
>And used Limestone’s towel to dry yourself off.
>After she had blown up at you the day before for using her stuff.
>And today you two finally seemed to start getting on friendly terms.
>This is a fine line you are on.
>She’s tired, and grumpy because she’s tired.
>It would take only one little thing to put yourself right back on her hate list.
>You hear the click of what was once your room being opened from your place downstairs.
>She’s already moving!
>You hustle up the stairs and race down the hall just as you see Limestone begin to open the door to the bathroom.
>Acting before thinking it through, you race over and slam the bathroom door shut in her face.
>Limestone whips around with a furious scowl, “What the hell?!” she growls.
>Her fierce amber eyes meet yours.
>They dart down to note the closeness that was unfortunately necessary to catch the door before coming back up again.
>You watch the fire fade from her eyes, down to small embers.
“H-hey, sis…” you respond when you think it’s safe to.
>She doesn’t respond.
>C’mon man, think!
“Y-you uh… you’re not too tired y-yet are you?”
>She furrows her brow, but it seems to be more out of confusion than anger.
>”Why?” she says in a low voice.
“Because I was… uh…”
>Think fast, you’re losing her.
>Just looking at the color begin to flood to her cheeks is a pretty clear sign of what’s going on.
“Thinking that you could NOT take a shower just yet and go…”
>Go where…
>Store?
>No.
>A drive?
>No!
>Can't think, use your instincts!
“For a walk?”
>For a WALK?!
>Instincts bad.
>That’s the best you could do?
>”You want me to take a walk?”
“Yeah! Uh, with me! O-of course…”
>Her mouth hangs open as she contemplates your suggestion.
“Show me around, what’s changed, what hasn’t. Y’know that kind of walk.”
>Her eyebrow starts to raise.
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>>28106357
“J-just you and me?” you squeak out, not knowing any other way to sell her on this idea.
>”Just me and…” she mumbles as her eyes lower.
>You give her your winningest smile.
>”Okay.” she responds softly.
>YES!
>She looks back up at you and you’re surprised to see a smile beginning to form on her face.
>She must see the excitement and relief on yours at having saved your own ass.
>Limestone takes one step closer to you, you can just barely feel the heat radiating off of her body, and the one step to the side as she continues on past you.
>Her arm grazes your chest, “C’mon Anon, while the sun is still out.”
“Oh! One sec, I’ve just got to put something away in my room. J-just wait for me by the door would you Limestone?”
>She furrows her brow again, but continues to the stairs shortly after.
>You do a silent fist pump and bolt for your room.
>The door flies open and only after do you remember that you were supposed to knock.
>Thankfully Maud isn’t in the room, giving you free clearance to grab up your dirty clothing and Limestone’s towel into a big heap.
>You poke your head out to make sure the coast is clear.
>Empty hallway to the left, empty to the right…
>You slip out of your room and make haste for the washer near mom and dad’s room.
>Couple turns of the knob, pull to start, clothes in aaaaand-
>Wait, how the hell are you going to dry-
>”Are you putting out a load Anon?”
“AH! JE- WHAT?!”
>You spin around to find Pinkie grinning up at you.
>”Mind if your little sister gets in on some of that?” she chirps.
>You clutch your chest to try and keep your heart inside it still.
“You what now?”
>She pulls a small bundle of cloth out from behind her back.
>Pinkie pulls one small item of clothing out from the bundle and pinches it with both hands to show you.
>In her hands she’s holding up a pair of pink panties with a stag beetle pictured on the back.
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>>28106362
>The text above and below them reads, “Don’t this just beetle.”
>”As you can see I’ve got some pretty sweet undies, thought they’re not too sweet right now…”
>She leans in close to you, pinning you against the washer, and puts her lips to your ears, “That means they need a-washin'.”
>She falls back and holds the bundle up to you, “you don’t mind if my delicates bump around with yours huh?”
“Uh- no. If you want to-“
>Wait a second…
“Oh! Yeah, actually that’d be prefect. Provided you can put these to dry the moment they’re done. You can do that right?”
>She stands tall and gives you firm salute, “You betcha Nonners.”
>And dropping her underwear all over the floor as a result.
>"Whoopsie, spilled all over the floor. And right in front of you, how embarrassing!" she jokes while dropping to her knees to pick them all up.
>From the sudden height advantage you've now gained, Pinkie's low cut top gives you even more of a view of her... size
>Just briefly as she quickly hops back to her feet, you step aside for her to get to the washer.
>She flings the lid open and tosses her underwear in with reckless abandon.
>Her eyes widen and she turns to you, “oh OH! Actually, you wanna see them?”
>She turns back and sticks her hands into the washer, “I’ve got one with a cute dinosaur, and a hi-LARIOUS one with a giraffe, oh OH and there’s one with a snail on the front-“
>Limestone’s still waiting.
“Yeah uh, I’m sure they’re great sis but I’ve gotta head out for a bit. Appreciate you taking care of the drying for me. Thanks Pinkie, you’re the best!”
>You spin around and make for the stairs only to bump into something directly in front of you.
>Stepping back you see Pinkie standing in your way.
>The hell?
>You look over your shoulder and find only the washer running.
>”Could you repeat that? Just the last bit.”
>You shake off the familiar weirdness that comes from your sister.
“What? Thanks?”
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>>28106378
>”Noooo~” she responds innocently.
>You roll your eyes.
“Was it… Pinkie?”
>She puffs her cheeks out, “Nonners!” she whines.
>You return with a smirk.
“Okay..." you concede, "You’re the best, Pinkie.”
>She beams up at you and closes the gap between you both in one swift motion.
>So fast that you don’t have time to respond.
>”Mmuah!” she exclaims happily as she pops off your cheek.
>You stand there dumbfounded for a moment until remembering the point of all this.
>”That’s another one down~” she sing songs, once again she leans in close to you and put her lips near your ears, "Wanna get more down while we're here?" she whispers
>Her breath tickles your ear in a way that forces you to stifle a laugh
"Sorry Pinkie, I really gotta go. Besides I'm filthy right now"
>Pinkie leans back and tuck her hands behind her, she sways left and right innocently while avoiding your eyes, "W-well I don't mind getting dirty, i-if it's you..."
>You pat her on the head
"Later, we'll have plenty of time. I... think my stay is going to be longer than maybe anyone thought"
>Pinkie gasps quietly and nods slowly before leaving for her shared room with Marble with a smile on her face.
>You make your way down the stairs with a smile of your own.
>”Geez, you know I said while the sun is STILL out right?” Limestone huffs.
“Yeah, sorry Limey. Let’s go.”
>She has a frown on, but she does slip through the door when you hold it open for her and you can see almost no tension in her shoulders as she walks down the stairs.
>You shut the front door behind you and skip a couple of steps to catch up to your sister.
>She comes to a stop a little ways in front of the house and turns to face you, “Well, where do you want to go?” she says, probably the most gently since you two were in the truck on lunch
>Well, you’ll need about thirty minutes for the washer, maybe another thirty for the drier.
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>>28106387
“Everywhere?" you squeak out, "I've really only kinda looked around the front of the house when I arrived, Holder’s Boulder is about the only thing I’ve seen.”
>Limestone hums to herself as she thinks, “Do you remember… the monster tree?”
>Monster-
“Oh, yeah! Man, we used to use that tree in so many games.”
>Limestone nods.
“It’s uh… over that way right?” you ask while pointing to the right of the house.
>Limestone furrows her brow, slowly she raises a hand and grabs you by the wrist.
>She pulls and turns you so you’re facing directly at the house, “It’s behind the house a bit.”
“Oh. I was kinda close though.”
>Limestone smiles, “C’mon-“ she says while tugging on your wrist, “Lemme show you where it is so we don’t just roast by standing still in the hot sun.”
>She takes you to Monster tree, then way out to what you eventually remembered as that ditch you broke your leg in.
>She giggled to herself while mocking your cries when you were brought back to the house after having fallen, she kept it up all the way back to the ‘super rainbow spot’.
>Pinkie claims that she once saw what she called a super rainbow out west of the house, to her credit you can often times see a rainbow from there during or just after rain, but nothing that you would have called super.
“Did another super rainbow ever show up?”
>Limestone shakes her head, “No, Pinkie said that she didn’t think another one would ever show up after you left.”
>You can feel a heat rush to your face as the silence begins to creep in.
>”Even if she didn’t think that, she left after graduating high school to work in a bakery so she usually wasn’t here when it did rain to see.”
>You hum in response.
>The silence falls over you both again.
>Limestone wipes an arm across her brow, “I’m getting pretty hot.”
>Shit, you guys haven’t been out long enough yet.
>”Say, do you want to go to the lake?”
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>>28106394
“The lake? You mean that little pond out by the forest? That hasn’t dried up yet?”
>”The opposite, Maud thinks it was an underground spring that stopped being clogged up as time went on.”
“No way. Seriously?!”
>Her eyes light up with excitement, “Oh man, I completely forgot that it was still small when you were here.”
>Limestone takes your hand in hers and pulls you along as she starts running towards the trees on the outskirts of your land.
>You struggle to keep up with your sister, her practically tugging you the entire way with her vice like grip on your hand.
>As it starts to come into view, you begin to understand her excitement.
>She comes to a stop near the edge of the lake.
>You can only stand there, bewildered by the sight.
“I-it’s…”
>Huge.
>Beautiful.
>”SO good” Limestone purrs
>You look over to find your sister missing and only her clothes in the place where she once stood.
>A splash sounds out in front of you, drawing your attention forward.
>Limestone bursts through the surface of the water.
>She shakes her wet hair free of most of the water, sprinkling you with some of it.
>Your eyes can’t help but trail south of her hair.
>Did she go to work in a biki-
>No wait, that’s a sports bra.
>Then the bright green you can kind of see under the water is…
>You think back to this morning, the bright green bands you saw peeking out through her baggy pants.
>”Hey!”
>You jump to attention, looking Limestone in the eye.
>”You gonna keep staring Anon, or are you going to come inside” she goads.
>You shake away your thoughts and focus on how good that water is going to feel on your skin.
>The world goes dark for a brief moment as you wiggle out of your sweaty dirty shirt, pulling it over your face and tossing it to the ground beside Limestone’s once it’s off.
>You return sights to Limestone, she’s crouched low in the water, looking at at you expectantly.
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>>28106399
>You pop the button of your pants and start to pull the zipper down.
>It’s only when you feel a slight pinch of pain on your pubic area that you remember something very important.
>You quickly zip your pants back up and even pull them up a little higher.
>Limestone looks taken aback, “What’s wrong?” she asks, noting your distress.
“Uh… I forgot, I’m going commando today.”
>Limestone tilts her head, “…Commando?” she repeats back slowly.
>You sigh.
“I’m not sporting any underwear Limey.”
>She remains silent for a moment.
>The only sounds around are the quiet drips of water from her hair back into the lake.
>”S-so?” she mumbles out, breaking the silence.
“So?” you repeat this time, with confusion in your voice.
>Limestone sighs, “Just look at you, drenched already i-in sweat… keep it up and you’ll pass out or something. It's just me in here, a-and nobody else is anywhere close to us”
>You don’t really feel light headed, you could probably make it back to the house no proble-
>A wet slap is coupled with a warm wetness meeting your chest.
>Your hand moves on instinct to catch whatever it is that’s peeling off of you.
>Looking down you find a bright green pair of soaking wet thong underwear in your hands.
>You yelp and toss them to the ground where they land with another wet slap sound.
>”There!” Limestone shouts, “Now will you quit being such a wuss and get in?”
>Looking back over you can see your sister crouched even lower in the water.
>Her face is bright red and her eyes are cast down into the water.
>Wow, to think she'd make herself as vulnerable as you...
>You quickly slip your pants off and scurry to submerge yourself in the water.
>The cool liquid quickly receives the faint sting of the hot sun on your skin.
>Limestone floats back some quietly as you paddle out into deeper water, trying to keep your back turned towards your sister.
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>>28106403
>You dip your head under one more time to enjoy the feeling of cool spring lake water all over you before coming back out.
>You shake your head free of water and open your eyes.
>Limestone is floating directly in front of you.
>Her eyes trail up your body, you assume following your emergence.
>Just looking down at yourself you unfortunately find that despite your swirling about underneath, the water remains pretty clear.
>Just on the edge of your periphery, you can see Limestone’s legs kick weakly to keep her afloat.
>The way the sun peeks through the nearby trees gives you an unintentionally clear view.
>Your eyes take in a small patch of silvery fuzz at the center of her waist as you were forcing your eyes up.
>Limestone has her eyes closed now and her head back as she relaxes in the cool water.
>Her chest bobs up and down on the surface of the water, by now her sports bra has soaked through completely and you see that not all of her is relaxed.
>The light blue cloth has become semi-transparent and you can see two dark circles in the middle of her twin small mounds.
>Two smaller and slightly darker circles just barely protrude out of the tight fabric.
>You clear your throat and decide to do as she does.
>Your eyes close and you tilt your head back while focusing only on staying afloat.
>The cool water combined with the shade of the trees is very comforting after such a long, hard, hot day.
>You float around for a while enjoying the experience, that is, until you bump into something.

Okay, that's all for now. Pastebin's updated here: http://pastebin.com/Y2enwxeD

Thanks for reading!
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>>28103170

Not strange at all.
Sunset does work better as a human.
RD and AJ kinda work as both, but only because they cater to my love for tomboys and southern belles.
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>>28106407
fugg
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>>28106344
The first post and I'm already getting tinges of hhngg
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>>28106403
>>28106407
OH SHIT

SKINNY DIPPING
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>>28106407
Bonerific! Can't wait for the next part!
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>>28106741
If you want to split hairs, it's technically partially skinny dipping. One of them at least has one article of clothing still on!

Also that Pinkie though, some one get a towel!
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>>28106779
>Also that Pinkie though, some one get a towel!
Why? Because of the snail trails she's leaving all over the house?
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>>28106362
>>28106378
>In her hands she’s holding up a pair of pink panties with a stag beetle pictured on the back.
>The text above and below them reads, “Don’t this just beetle.”
damn it pinkie why are you so best
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>>28106407
Good stuff, my dude-chan.

>Limestone asleep on Anon
hnnng

>”Dig in harder-“ she continues to mumble.
see pic

>The text above and below them reads, “Don’t this just beetle.”
Dammit, why does Pinkie have to be so cute?

>”As you can see I’ve got some pretty sweet undies, thought they’re not too sweet right now…”
>She leans in close to you, pinning you against the washer, and puts her lips to your ears, “That means they need a-washin'.”
>She falls back and holds the bundle up to you, “you don’t mind if my delicates bump around with yours huh?”
[...]
>"Whoopsie, spilled all over the floor. And right in front of you, how embarrassing!"
>Her eyes widen and she turns to you, “oh OH! Actually, you wanna see them?”
F-fuck... Why does Pinkie have to be so l-lewd?
Legit, that's a pretty good combination of cute Pinkie and lewd Pinkie. Your Pinkie is pretty subtle compared to a lot of other people's Pinkies.

>”S-so?” she mumbles out, breaking the silence.
Limestone.
>”There!” Limestone shouts, “Now will you quit being such a wuss and get in?”
LIMEstone.
>Your eyes take in a small patch of silvery fuzz at the center of her waist as you were forcing your eyes up.
G-goddammit, Frosty.


Wonderful update, friend. It was very much worth the wait.
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And now on to the OTHER stories I like and want to comment on, just not as enthusiastically and making me look like a huge asshole. You know I think you're all cool, r-right?

>>28104734
I really like your dialogue. It feels like what characters would naturally say. The only criticism I can of right now would be to add in lines during big blocks of dialogue to show how the characters are reacting to what's being said, and how that leads to what they say in return.

>”Ok!” God, she’s weird.
kek
Nice work, GalacticAmethyst.

>>28103317
I have to agree with >>28103871. It's good but Anon's reaction to being violated throws me off.
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>Luna and Celestia
Is it really incest if it's between girls
Nothing's penetrating anything
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>>28107394
Hey man, thousands of years of living stretches what would be considered to be "acceptable" and "unacceptable". It probably took a few centuries, but I'm 100% willing to bed that Celestia and Luna fuck every night with a magical strap-on. So do Principal Celestia and Vice-Principal Luna, because fuck it.
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>>28107427
No shit they sex, you've seen the way they look at each other, but 'lesbian incest' sounds redundant
It's just two entrances rubbing together
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>>28107394
I suppose it technically is, but not in any way that matters.
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>>28107439
>>28107394
>Luna drops out from art college and lives with Celestia now.
>Celestia, a school counselor, is really annoyed at Luna's laziness around the house, in addition to being stressed by her new job
>They eventually have a confrontation where Luna reveals she was really depressed during school, saying that she was friendless and couldn't stand to go back anymore
>Celestia confides in Luna telling her that she'll always have her big sister with her
>In the spur of the moment, Luna kisses Celestia and then sexy times happen
>The relationship continues on for about a week before realizing they're not all that gay to keep this up without getting bored
>Parents phone Celestia and says that their little brother Anon is transferring to their high school for reasons unexplained (he gets depressed like Luna) and they want him to stay with his older sisters
>Bonds are made, tension happens, skinship both accidental & incidental occurs, then threesome
>Da End
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>>28107512
Nice idea!
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>>28107512
Fuck me, but I'd read this.
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>>28107512
Let it happen.
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>>28107597
>>28107552
>>28107530
I would too, but I'm just the idea man. If I ever attempted something like this, it'll either just fall flat and have a terrible execution or stop midway and never update again.
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>>28107512
Sounds like a great idea. Let's hope it inspires one of the writefags.
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>You hang up and put your cell back on the side table, deep in thought.
>Your little brother is coming to stay, is he?
>"S-sister?"
>You look down at Luna's naked form; your mom had very poor timing with that phone call.
>She pulls her fingers out of your snatch and wipes them off on your trimmed bush.
>"I heard what you and Mom were saying."
>She looks down at your body and then back up to you.
>"Do you think we should...?"
>Should what?
>.....
>Oh.
>OH!
>Oh....
>Your mind flashes back to the time just last year when you accidentally walked in on Anon when he was masturbating.
>Later, you would swear up and down to Luna that his cum hit the CEILING.
>Smiling, you lean down and kiss your sister on the lips; something chaste this time, the mood thoroughly ruined by Mom's interruption.
"I'm okay with it, honey. As long as Anon feels the same way, I don't see anything wrong with expanding our little cuddle puddle."
>Luna grins and grabs your ass.
>Looks like SOMEONE wasn't bothered that Mom opened the proverbial door on you two.
>"I'm so glad," she purrs, "I've always had a bit of a crush on our little brother."
>She leans in close.
>"And I know for a fact that he's masturbated at least once with your underwear.
>O-oh, my.
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>>28108026
Yessss
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>>28108026
All of my yes.
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>>28107080
P-Pluggy sempai! I'm glad you enjoyed the update, y-you were waiting f-for me...?

Also I saw your mention about wanting to do better with character interactions, and how you're doing shorts to improve on them. I think that's a good idea, more writing as always a good idea if you want to improve, though I think maybe a longer story would be more helpful than a bunch of shorts. It takes some general setting up to make sure things go in the direction you want, but gives you more freedom to develop characters and thus deepen their interactions. What I also find helpful is to just go back and watch some episodes, ones you missed or ones with characters you want to write about. You can draw from what the show writers have already established and use that when you write them. Lastly, Pixar's rules for story telling has been very helpful for things to just keep in mind when writing, a lot of it is stuff I kinda already knew to do, but having it repeated and told in a way that's different from what I'm used to was very helpful to me.

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=u8CpDHJuyF4&list=PLY6PCL9ylnRSaO608L0ocvzxusr_35XfC
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>>28108150
Your updates are always fun to read, Frosty-kun. S-Sempai noticed me w-waiting? Oh, my...

You're probably right, sensei. I'll take a look at the video and... and...
>watch some episodes
Oh.
>ones you missed
Y-yeah, the ones I missed.
like all of them

I'll give longer stories a shot, Frosty. I don't know if it's longer stories that have me burnt out or if it's just the RGRE theme that's starting to get a teeny bit old, but I seem to have a bit of trouble with them. The problem with my longer stories is that the way Anon interacts with ponies has long-reaching consequences and effects how those ponies interact with him (and other ponies) in the future. Thinking ahead and figuring out what those changes are is what I'm having problems with.

But I trust your advice, Frosty, and I'll give it a try. Maybe I'll go see if the Bug thread is still up later today.
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>>28108334
FrostyxPluggo when?
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>>28108478
I'd be willing to write it if I knew more about Frostybox and AnalplugAnon.

Just sayin'
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>>28108026
Do go on.
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>>28108026
D-don't stop
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Sisters are not for sexual
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>>28108624
But what if they are?
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>>28108624
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>>28108624
What are you, gay?
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>>28108624
Says you, cool older sisters are mega hot.
>Wanna watch that R-Rated movie Mom & Dad told you not to? Go ahead, I'll fix us some popcorn too.
>Wanna take a ride to your friend's house? No problem, you could ride shotgun.
>Want some advice on girls? Hah! That's easy, just take these pills and I'll take off your clothes.
>Don't worry if I use my scarf to tie your hands behind your back, girls are totally into that
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>>28108498
210lbs, extremely muscular, 12.5inch penis. I exercise by swimming in my money vaults Scrooge McDuck style and I can cum up to 3 litres at a time.
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>>28109034
Yeah, and I'm the Queen of England
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>>28109071
N-no! Shut up, it's all true!
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>>28108624
sisters are for comfy

I miss mine.
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>>28106387
Ya know, we haven't had much Marble yet.
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>>28106350
>”Well don’t worry, Maud isn’t done working on where the next blast is going to be so we have about another month before another day like this comes around, and Nitty will have that repair estimate to me by tomorrow now.”
A month?
Wasn't he supposed to sell the farm?
What a wicky old man.

>”Dig in harder-“ she continues to mumble.
She wants the D.

>>28106357
>And used Limestone’s towel to dry yourself off.
Oh, gods.

>“For a walk?”
Nice dodge.

>>28106362
>In her hands she’s holding up a pair of pink panties with a stag beetle pictured on the back.
Kinky.

>>28106378
>”As you can see I’ve got some pretty sweet undies, thought they’re not too sweet right now…”
Holy fuck, Pinkie!

>"Whoopsie, spilled all over the floor. And right in front of you, how embarrassing!" she jokes while dropping to her knees to pick them all up.
>she jokes
well, I don't know, it does sound more like horsing around. Yeah, yeah, 'carlos' yada yada.

>”Could you repeat that? Just the last bit.”
Ok, that's creepy.

>>28106387
>"Wanna get more down while we're here?" she whispers
Holy furck!

>Pinkie leans back and tuck her hands behind her, she sways left and right innocently while avoiding your eyes, "W-well I don't mind getting dirty, i-if it's you..."
I am amuzed by how kinky she is and by how blind Anon is.

>>28106403
>Looking down you find a bright green pair of soaking wet thong underwear in your hands.
Frosty, I...

>You float around for a while enjoying the experience, that is, until you bump into something.
God damnit, bro.

>>28107080
I like your style of commenting, Analplug. I find it very... familiar. WRITE, YOU WRITEFUCK!

>>28107512
I vote for it.

>>28108026
And I shamefully ask for more.

>>28108150
>>28108334
Take a room, you two.

>>28108924
I need cool older sister Gilda.

>>28108624
You sick bastard.
Pic related.
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>>28108026
>"Hello?"
>Your brother is standing less than six feet in front of you, but he can't see you.
>The porchlight took away his night vision and replaced it with night blindness instead.
>This works in your favour, however; the living room (aka the room directly attached to the front door) is pitch black.
>Anon is wearing a nice shirt and pants combo, and there's a thick suitcase in his hands.
>You, on the other hand, are wearing nothing but a predatory smile; and neither is Luna, who has just slipped behind him.
>You nod at your sister and she nods back.
>Quick as a whip, she wraps her arms around your brother's torso; one hand on his chest and one snaking down his flat stomach.
>"Hey there, little brother~" Luna coos into Anon's ear, startling him.
>"L-Luna?! What the fu-"
>You step forward and press your body against his, wrapping your arms around your sister's back.
>You've made a sandwich with your sister, and Anon is the tasty filling all set for you to eat.
>With your face so close to his own, Anon has no trouble figuring out who you are.
>"Celly? What're you-"
>You don't let him finish.
>Pushing forward, you trap his lips in a kiss.
>Naturally, he resists; but that's what Luna is there for.
>While your lips are otherwise occupied, Luna's are free to speak for you.
>"Shhh... relax, little brother," she whispers, resting her head on his shoulder, "Just let it happen. Let your sisters show you how much they love you, okay?"
>Anon frantically shakes his head left-and-right "yes" and "Mm-mmm!"s the universal grunt-language of "please, continue".
>You caress his back and slip your hands underneath his shirt, feeling the rapid beat of his heart.
>There's fear and confusion in his eyes as you slip your tongue into his mouth - but that just means he's excited.
>Luna busies herself in undoing his belt and shimmying his pants down his hips.
>You moan into Anon's mouth when you feel his erect member slap against your meaty pussy lips.
>You KNEW he wanted this.
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Sisters are for teasing
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Fuck, not the picture I wanted.
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>>28109230
Sisterly rape is best rape. MORE!
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>>28109230
Could use less rape. Bonner lost.
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>>28109373
You some sort of faggot?
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>>28109391
Nah, just not into rape...I mean your version of femdom, sorry trash.
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>>28109398
my nigga
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>>28108478
L-lewd?! B-between me and... and s-sempai?

>>28109192
We have not. She's the most reserved sister, usually, so she doesn't come up often for now. Unless things change she's got the arc after Pinkie once Limestone's is done so she'll be in the spotlight somewhere down the line.
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>>28109581
Ah, good to know then.
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>>28109391
An enormous faggot; get it right.
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>>28109581
>Unless things change she's got the arc after Pinkie once Limestone's is done so she'll be in the spotlight somewhere down the line.
soon
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So, I few threads back I popped out what was supposed to be a quick oneshot between Anon and his sister Sunset. Stuff happened, I ended up writing a short sequel. And now here I've gone and done it again. The first two parts were short and several threads back, so i'm going to post them, then what should be the final installment, this time with a pastebin link so if I decide to pick the story up AGAIN I won't have to post everything again.

Here we go
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>You are Sunset Shimmer, and you are horny as hell.

>Pinkie's birthday happened to fall on a three day weekend, so she decided to throw an all out multi-day party bash, from Friday after school to Monday afternoon, which you gladly attended. It was a great party, but there was a problem. You normally masturbate about 3 times a day, but you just couldn't do it at the party. You tried sneaking into the bathroom or doing it in the shower a couple of times, but just couldn't get comfortable in someone else's house.

>All you could think about Monday morning was getting back to your house and working yourself over until your eyes rolled back in your head and you couldn't walk anymore.
>You get to your room, panties practically dripping, to find your door ajar. You normally keep it closed, so this is unusual. You push your door open to find your brother, Anonymous, with his pants on the ground, desperately jacking it over a pair of your panties.

>You are Anonymous, and you are horny as hell. Just, as a general rule. So much so that today, even though you didn't know when your sister was coming back, you snuck into her room, grabbed a pair of her underwear and started pleasuring yourself on the spot.
>"Anonymous!"
>You just about die. You quickly turn to see your sister standing in the doorway, angry and looking like she's about to do something about it. You try to cover yourself, to stammer out an explanation, but nothings comes of your efforts.
>For a while, Sunset just glares at you in silence, fuming. Then, she seems to calm down. She steps inside her room and closes the door
>"I've got you by the balls, don't I? If I tell Mom and Dad, they'll explode. You'll be out on the street"
>You can see where this is going
"Ok, what do you want? I'll do anything, just please, PLEASE don't tell anyone"
>Your sister looks you up and down
>"Don't worry. I won't tell anyone"
>Maybe you don't know where this is going
>"On one condition"
>Aaaaaaand there it is.
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>"I want you to eat me out"
>What
“What?”
>”I haven't gotten off in nearly 4 days. I'm clearly not thinking clearly, but right now, this is what I want. Your face buried in my thighs. If you don't, I tell Mom and Dad and you're out on your ear, if you do, I'll let you use the panties I've been wearing all day and I'll even clean them out for you afterwords so Mom doesn't notice any untoward stains while doing the wash”
>You're completely floored. You have no idea how to respond, this all just feels so unreal. While you're standing stock still, mouth now agape, Sunset pulls out her cellphone and snaps a picture of you
>”Well, what's it going to be? Are you going to eat me out or do I send this picture to Mom right now?”
“Yes! I mean, I'll do it”
>”Good, that's what I wanted to hear”
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>Sunset walks past you and sits down on her bed. She then pulls off her panties and tosses them to you. Still in shock, you just barely drop the clean pair you were using before and catch the new pair. You can smell her arousal on them. She then hikes up her skirt and pulls her legs apart, giving you a view of heaven.
>”Well? Are you going to just stare at it or are you going to do something with it?”
>You drop to your knees in front of your sister's bed, then slowly, cautiously, move your face between her thighs
>”Any day now”
>You stick out your tongue and run it up the length of her slit. A shiver goes through her spine
>”There we go, more of that please”
>You spend a few minutes figuring things out ; you've never done this before. You lick up and down a few times, try sticking your tongue inside her, and finally settle on a type of swirling motion around her clit. Based on the noises she's making, you just hit the jackpot. Eventually you get enough of a rhythm going that you start masturbating yourself, one hand on your diamond hard cock the other holding your sister's used panties.
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>Before too long Sunset starts to tense, then grabs the back of your head and pushes it hard into her nether region. You keep up your swirling and are rewarded with a set of moans that almost sets you off on their own. As she stops tensing you greedily lap up the juices that have been flowing from her quiet freely. You pick up the pace on yourself and quickly find yourself shooting your load into Sunset's panties.
>Sunset flops down on to her bed. “Ok, bro, you're off the hook this time. Gimme just a minute and I'll clean those up for you. You did pretty good. If you ever want to do this again, I think I'd be ok with making this a regular thing. Maybe get a little boob play in next time... I'm getting ahead of myself. Here, just hand me those panties. Oh, and if I ever catch you in my room without my permission again, Mom and Dad WILL see that photo I took of you, got it?”
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>It's been several weeks since your bargain started with your sister to start fulfilling each other's needs. At first it was just you eating her out, but it seems Sunset has a libido that could challenge yours and other types of play started popping up. Her only rule was that your penis stay firmly and clearly outside of her vagina. “We're not rednecks, after all”

>Outside of that rule, you and her have spent hours “working on homework together”, which could mean you massaging her breasts and tweaking her nipples or just running your fingers up and down her slit until she's practically left a puddle on her bed. One thing you've learned is that Sunset drips like a faucet. Just fantasizing about you going down on her throughout the day is enough to leave a visible wet spot on her panties.
>Another peculiarity is her 'itch'. Sometime, usually without warning, she gets an itch on some part of her pussy. If scratched, the itch just continues to get worse. However, the process of getting off lets her ignore the itch long enough for it to go away on its own. You've found that nibbling at just the right place, you can get the itch going, which always leaves Sunset begging for more.

>Currently, you're experimenting a bit. You're fingering her while she rubs a small vibrator she somehow managed to get her hands on on her clit. She's promised you “something special” if you can help her get to two orgasms like this. You have your ring and middle fingers two knuckles deep inside of her, making a sort of 'bring it on' motion. This worked for her first orgasm, but she seems to be having trouble reaching a second. Getting impatient, you take your other hand and cover one finger in as much of her juices as it can hold, then start gently massaging her butthole.
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>”Anon, what do you think you are DOing?” Any further response is replaced by moans
>As gently as you could, you slid your new finger inside of her, but it still made her jump a little. You learned early on that she's a big fan of ass play, but always seems reluctant to request it. The only sounds she can make are moans and her hips begin bucking. Soon enough she's tensing in a way you've become familiar with. Her moans become louder and you're grateful you're the only two in the house at the moment. Eventually, the moaning subsides and she turns off her vibrator. She basks in her own glow for a moment before moving her hand and removing your fingers from her insides
>”That was great” she says, punctuated by kissing your fingers. “Now, lay down on my bed”. You do as you are instructed. Sunset then crawls on top of you, her hips above your face, her facing your legs. She then leans forward and wraps her lips around your cock. She's played around with licking your dick before, but never given you a full blowjob. You hope that tonight is your lucky night as you gaze up at the view between Sunsets thighs.
>”Hey,” Sunset stops sucking you off “are you going to spend all night just staring at it, or are you going to do something with it?” Without hesitation, you bury your face in your sister. She quickly returns to your cock and begins sucking and licking with renewed vigor. Before too long you feel a welling up inside of you. You try to give warning, but Sunset is grinding herself into your face and you can't get a word out. You cum in to your sisters mouth without giving her any warning. She's thrown off her game at first, but adjusts quickly to sucking up all of your fluids
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>”Sorry, I didn't give you a chance to warn me, did I?” Sunset says, idly playing with your now flaccid penis.
“Not really” You attempt to say through a mouth still full of pussy
>Sunset sits up, changing your angle of attack. “Now don't just think that because you got off that we're finished here. I'm not moving form this spot until you give me another orgasm. I'll wait all night if I have to” Inside, you grin. You wouldn't have it any other way
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>”Heeeee~eeey, BIG BROTHER”
>Hearing Sunset say that sets you on edge. There was just something off about it, you know she's up to no good
“Yes, LI'L SIS”
>”I was just wondering, maybe if me and the girls could use the basement tonight?”
“You mean my bedroom”
>”IT'S NOT FAIR. This is the biggest room in the house, why should you get it all to yourself?”
“Maybe because I'm the one who cleaned it up and finished it after I moved back in? If you had helped me out back then I wouldn't mind you and your friends hanging out down here more”
>”Well, it doesn't matter what you say. Mom and Dad said that while they're out for their anniversary I'm in charge, because I'm the “responsible” one, so I say the girls and I get to use the basement.”
“That doesn't even make any sense. We're both adults, why would either of us need to be “in charge”. Whatever, I don't really care, feel free. But I'm not leaving”
>”Wouldn't expect you to. Just don't watch any porn while my friends are over, I'd die of embarrassment.”
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>Shortly after your parents leave, the girls begin to arrive, all already dressed in PJs. They even ask before rifling through your games to find something to do. They eventually settle on Cards Against Humanity. After a couple rounds, the pink one starts to pester the hick.
>”Come on Applejack, I know you got the goods.”
>”All right, all right, settle down Pinkie Pie I got it stashed in my car, I'll be right back”
>Applejack leaves and shortly returns with a crate of mason jars.
“What's all this?”
>”Try one Anon” Applejack urges “It's a secret family recipe”
>You pop off the lid and take a swig of the caramel colored liquid inside, finding it to be particularly strong hard apple cider
“Sunset, I thought all your friends were straight laced and uptight. You must be a bad influence”
>”I don't see how I could help being a bad influence with how much time I spend around you”
“Whatever. You girls are free to do your thing, but the second someone vomits on floor you're all out of the basement, except Sunny Bunny, who gets to clean it up”
>The girls go back to their game, devising a drinking game out of CAH
>After several rounds of that, the alcohol is clearly starting to get to them and they decide instead to play Truth or Dare
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>>28110280
>”Wouldn't expect you to. Just don't watch any porn while my friends are over, I'd die of embarrassment.”
>Proceeds to play "Loudest Orgasm in the World"
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>Sunset decides to start. “Truth” She says.
>The group whispers amongst themselves for a moment with lots of giggling before they break and the one whose name you've picked up as Rainbow Dash asks “Do you have any sex toys?”
>”Yes, a vibrator and a butt plug”
>A butt plug? That was news to you. Where does she get all these wonderful toys?
>The group starts giggling rampantly before asking a bunch more questions. What do they feel like? Can they see them?
>”Uh-uh, one Truth at a time. Who is up next?”
>The girls go through their circle, asking risque questions about how far all of them have gotten, but with mostly boring answers. It seems none of them have ever been in a serious relationship. Eventually, the game gets back around to Sunset.
>“Dare”
>The frumpy, nerdy girl you think is named Twilight Sparkle says immediately, with a completely straight face, “I dare you to put your butt plug in for the rest of the game.”
>Sunset's face turns bright red and she leaves the room. A few minutes later she returns like nothing happened.
>”Well?” Says Rainbow Dash
>”Yeah, it doesn't count unless we get to see it so we know you aren't fibbing” says Pinkie Pie.
>Sunset wordlessly stands up, turns around, bends over, and pulls her pajama pants taut, quite clearly showing the outline of her ass with something circular sticking out from between her lovely little cheeks.
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>From there everyone keeps choosing Dare, with the results mostly being to flash or kiss certain body parts. Before too long, the entire group has rendered themselves completely nude, some more proud and comfortable than others, to the point where most of them were casually masturbating. The game gets around back to Sunset yet again, who again chooses dare. This one comes from Rarity, the pale one who at least pretended to be refined even when she was naked as a jaybird, petting her kitty just like everyone else.
>”I dare you to have sex with your brother. Right now, in front of all of us”
>Sunset blushed, then looked over at you. Just as you thought she was going to refuse the dare, she stands up and walks over to you. As she nears you, a drop of her arousal drifts down her inner thigh.
>Between that butt plug and playing games with her friends she's actually turned on enough to think about fucking you in front of all her naked friends. She gets down on her knees and unzips your pants. You realize you've been pitching an obvious tent, probably for quite a while now.
“I thought we weren't rednecks?”
>”Well, maybe tonight we are.” Sunset peels off your pants, then looks up at you. “Do you want this? If not, I can just tell the girls no”
“I'm almost cumming just thinking about it. Are you sure you want this? You've always been pretty tight about your one rule, and now, between the alcohol and the peer pressure... I just mean, I don't want this to be something you regret”
>”I want this. I've always wanted this. I think I wanted it too badly, and that's why I shied away from it. But I have an excuse now, so it's as good a time as any”
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>Sunset stands up and steps forward, straddling you where you sit in your chair. You carefully rub your diamond hard cock along her inner folds, spreading her prominent sex juices along her slit and your member. After a few moments of this, Sunset grab your member from you and guides it to her entrance. She then slowly sits down on to your lap. You can feel the butt plug pushing against her internal walls
>Her friends are all enjoying themselves in their own ways. Fluttershy and Applejack are scissoring like there's no tomorrow, which surprises you. You pegged Pinkie “Party Girl” Pie and Rainbow “Couldn't More Obviously Be A Dyke” Dash as the first ones to really start lezzing out, but both are just fingering themselves. Rarity is also fingering herself, although she seems to be switching hands and sucking on the one she isn't using. Twilight is on her knees, fingering her asshole.
>All of this is going on in the background while your sister slides up and down your stiff rod. She continuously stands until you're just barely inside her then drops down. You use one of your free hands to latch onto one of her tits and the other to start playing with her clitoris. It's a little difficult to coordinate, but you eventually get your rhythm going and are rewarded with lewd moans and internal contractions that threaten to send you over the edge.
>Even more difficult to coordinate, Sunset pulls you in for a deep kiss. It takes a while of going at it, and you have to stop what you're doing with your hands, but you soldier on and kiss your sister like a real man.
>Moans start to fill the room as the girls begin to get close to climaxing
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>You lean back in your chair and start thrusting upward into Sunset.
>Sunset pulls away from the kiss.”A-anon I-I'm c-cum-mming” She stammers out between thrusts. And you can feel it, her whole body tenses and her insides contract around you. Your entire groin area is covered in your sister's juices now. She loosens up and begins to relax, while you grab her and begin lifting her up and pulling her down while thrusting into her.
“I'm almost there!”
>”Do it inside me Anon! I want every drop you've got!” You don't disappoint. You cum into your sister, thick rope after rope slamming into her insides
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>Your parents always spend their anniversary night at a hotel, so the girls are free to experiment with each other all night long. Except Sunset, who seems content trying to fuck you dry every time you get hard, which is often with the scene in front of you. By morning it becomes apparent that no one went overboard with the alcohol because everyone remembers the night and no one seems to regret what happened.
>The girls all get dressed and say their goodbyes and take their leave, leaving you with just Sunset, alone.
“Was it really a good idea for me to cum inside you so much last night?”
>”Probably not”
>That was not the answer you were hoping for
>”We'll just have to use condoms in the future”
>That, however, you could live with
And that's what I've got. Here's a link for those that may wan to read the story later : http://pastebin.com/a7hmC2bv
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>>28109034
Late to the party but I just caught up to the thread (busy week) and your Momset story was UNF. Especially the epilog, right in the fetish.

And of course you are THAT guy who wrote the AnonX TwiDaughter way back...

Just wanted to say that, since you were looking for support and all, thanks for the fap.
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holy shit
see pic, friend

>>28110826
Thanks, bud, I'm glad you enjoyed it all. It's always a tiny bit weird when I get complimented for my smut, but it's still a lot of fun.

>AnonX TwiDaughter
Oh shoot, I almost forgot about that. My reputation for incest precedes me a little bit, I guess.

That's real cool of you to say, Anon. I tend to say it a lot, but I appreciate it.
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>>28110227
Link your back to back posts guy. Its annoying otherwise.
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>>28106407
I like how well you do set up and pay off. It always makes me excited for what's going to happen next.
Top Story m8
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>>28111204
Aww thanks Anon! I dunno about well, but I do spend a lot of time crafting in those set ups throughout my stories and triple checking that I've tied up loose ends oftentimes, I'm glad you enjoy them
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I hope you guys don't mind if i post my green again. I've been working on it a bit and got it a bit farther along, it goes off the op image

>"B-bro! Y-you're home early..."
>Sunset glances at your boxers
>"I can explain!"
>You don't care
>You're too tired to care
>Practice let out early on account of rain and you had to run all the way home
>Drenching wet you stand in your doorway staring at your sister holding your underpants
"Damn it those are clean alright!? Tell mom to stop freaking every time she sees my underwear on the floor."
>Sunset looks nervously around the room
>"Uhh, yes. Yeah, that's what i was doing! Mom wanted to know if they were clean!"
"Whatever, just give them to me. I need to take a shower anyways."
>She tossed them to you
>"Heh, looks like you already took one, Oni-chan."
"Shut up, and stop calling me Oneychan damn it. Now get out of my room."
>"O-okay. See ya at dinner!"
>Sunset runs past you
>Her fiery gossamer her brushes her scent up to you as she does
>You close the door and sigh deeply
"This crush is going too far."
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>>28113751
>"So how was school?"
>Anonymom asked without looking up from her plate
>"School was great! After me and the girls were finally done with midterms Rarity treated us to some ice cream at the mall!"
>"That's nice dear, and you Anon?"
"Are you kidding?"
>"I'm sorry?"
>Now she looks up
"Didn't you see me jumping over the neighbor's Rott on the way over here?"
>"Oh, no sorry dear. Was it a good jump?"
>You shake your head
>"Thank God i take track."
>"Oh sorry sweetheart but the car is still in the shop. You know that."
"Yeah, yeah."
>Sunset took advantage to pipe up
>"We should start hanging out more often Anon. I bet we can fit you in Rarity's convertible!"
>She giggled
>"I know the girls wouldn't mind having a boy around for once."
>You finished chewing before responding
"Nah."
>And back to the casserole
>Sunset pouted
>Mom took a sip of her wine
>"I think that's a great idea. Anon start hanging out with your sister more often, I've seen that Flash Sentry with them one too many times if you ask me."
>"Ugh, yeah he won't leave Twilight alone."
>Dadnon agreed with them
>"I've heard scandalous things about that boy."
"Seriously? I don't get all the hate for the Flashman. The guy's a legend."
>Dad raised an eyebrow
"He's scored more times than i can tell you. I know because i was his wingman most of those times!"
>"You're bluffing."
"Dad for real, for real. Ok? I've walked in on him once, or twice...maybe three times...or four..."
>Your mother looked at you with murder in her eyes
"Chill i only had a camera one of those times."
>"Don't you tell me to chill young man!"
>Dad was struggling to hold back his laughter to drink beer
>"And you!"
>She slapped his arm
>"Quit encouraging him"
>"I didn't say anything."
>He was clearly smiling under his glass
"Alright, come on. If I had as much game as that guy had in his pinky finger I think you'd be more proud of me dad. I just wished i was as confident with Moondancer as he is with girls."
>"Oh?"
>Mom also took notice
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>>28113756
>"That sweet little girl that sometimes follows Sunny and her friends around?"
>You felt your cheeks burning and look down as you play with your food
"Y-yeah, she's been helping me study for a while now. She's dorky but cute."
>You felt your lips curl up at the corners
>"Well, you're certainly not going to get any pointers from Flash. Girls like that appreciate an honest man."
>"Your mother's right Anon, you have to be genuine."
"You guys think i don't know that? I just don't know how to do it yet."
>Sunset's gaze boring a hole in the side of your head
>She hadn't once taken her eyes off you
>"If you want i could be your 'wingman'. I can totally help you score!"
>"Young lady!"
>"Oops, sorry mom."
"No thanks Sunset, I don't just want to hook up with her."
>"Well, i can at least introduce you two. Help you get to know her a bit, I've hung out with her a few times before."
"No, mom and dad are right. I need to be honest and upfront with her. It's the only way she'll know i'm not just playing around."
>Your dad popped you one on the shoulder
>"'attaboy!"
>You had to admit that felt bretty gud
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>>28113764
>After dinner was over you were in the mood for some toons
>Friday night and no practice tomorrow because the weekend was a washout
>Mom and Dad were already upstairs when you plopped down on the couch
>A warm shower, a full stomach, and the sound of rain left you pretty comfy
>Slapstick played on the tv when your sister came in the room
>"Hey bro, watchu watchin?"
"...three stooges..."
>The words barely left your mouth
>"Cool, mind if i join you?"
"...free country..."
>She sat down next to you and rested her head on your shoulder
>You hardly noticed her weight
>A draft breezed through the room and you wrapped your arm around her
>She breathed deeply as she cozied up next to you and returned the favor by putting her hand on your chest
>Your eyelids grew heavier as time passed
>The jokes grew less funny and more pleasing
>Sunset's hand dropped a few inches
>Your exhausted mind figured she was falling asleep as well
>"Anon?"
>Your half lidded eyes could barely see the blurry black and white images
>Whenever you blinked they stayed closed for longer than you expected
>"anon?"
>Whatever Sunset wanted you couldn't be bothered
>Still you felt her hand slide lower and lower
>A familiar warmth spread through your legs as she did so
>The next breath you took came with a bit of a grunt as you fought off sleep
>Something moved around your stomach and tickled you
>Your little lieutenant started standing at attention
>Feeling warm fingers move past your belly button and just into your boxers snapped you awake
>Instantly jumping off the couch you accidentally knock Sunset onto the floor with heavy thump
>Tossing the controller onto the couch you blurt out something of an apology before you walk past her
>"Hey wait."
>She whined, still on the floor
>"Don't you want to finish the episode? It's the creampie one."
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>>28113769
>Waking up to the smell of pancakes is one of the best feelings in the world
>Unless they smelled like smoke and the fire alarms were blaring
>Red eyed and chewing on a mouthful of profanity your drag yourself out of bed and march downstairs
>You'd already lived through this a few times before
>If it wasn't the pancakes it would be the eggs, or the hash browns, or the bacon
>But you enjoyed your bacon crispy so that time would've been fine had she not started a grease fire
>Dressed in nothing but your spiderman pajama bottoms you push through the kitchen door and get ready to let loose
>"No! Water only makes it worse!"
>A sudden flare up engulfs your mother's curtains
>"AH! I'm sorry i forgot!"
>Sunset was standing with her back to you alongside her galpal
>"Do you have a fire extinguisher!?"
>"Why on earth would i have one!"
"Because-"
>Your voice startled them
"Because this is the 3rd time Sunny."
>You nod at Twilight
"Morning."
>You step in between them and with much practice take a nearby lid and smother the fire while turning off the stove
>Next you pick up the flaming curtains, drop them into the sink, and run the tap
>The sun assaults your eyes
>"What the hell? I thought it was supposed to rain?"
>"U..umm...actually..."
>You turn to look at Twilight nervously playing with her hair
>"The low pressure system ended up moving further south, so no."
>She stared at the floor
>All around you the counters were a nightmare
>Bowls, plates, whisks, chocolate chips, flour, eggs
>It basically looked like someone had turned the kitchen inside out
>"Surprise?"
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>>28113773
>Sunset looked up at you with her adorable puppy dog eyes
>Eyes that had stopped working on you years ago
>You don't even answer her, you just point to the closet
>Looking rather defeated she resigns herself to clean up duty
>"I-it's not her fault. Please don't be mad."
>Now it was Twilight's turn to be chastised
>The girl had started coming over so often you thought of her as another sister
>"She said she wanted to do something special for you. I suggested breakfast in bed, it's all my fault."
"Twilight."
>You start, placing a hand on the counter
"How long have you known my sister?"
>She was about to open her mouth when you raise your hand covered in spilled maple syrup
"Don't- argh - don't answer that. It's a rhetorical question, you know she can't cook."
>"I was going to help her."
>You wipe your hands on the soaked curtains and turn off the water
>"Well, we were going to practice for home-ec at the same time."
"Oh, you were? That's good because part of home-ec is clean up."
>You hang the curtains back up and hand her the sponge
"Now I'm going to take a long shower, you two better be done by the time i come back down, and then..."
>Both of them fix their eyes on you
"Then i'll cook us up some 'Actual' breakfast. Sound good?"
>The girls smile sheepishly and watch you as you leave
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>>28113779
>About a half hour later your sitting down to a breakfast of plain pancakes and syrup
>You'd have to remember to hit up a grocery store later
"So where're mom and dad?"
>"They said they're going to visit cousin Charlie to see the new baby."
>You hated cousin Charlie
>"I convinced them to let you sleep in."
"Hm. Well, thanks."
>Sunset absolutely beamed at you
>"I'd do anything for you big bro!"
"Really?"
>She shook her head feverishly
"Then next time let me sleep"
>Twilight giggled as she watched her blush
"Hey, Twi what are you doing here this early anyway?"
>"Oh, i came by to invite Sunset on our nature walk today. Fluttershy heard there was a flock of rare Jagoff's flying through the area."
"Mm-hmm."
>"It was right after your parents left and she didn't want to just leave you high and dry just like that."
"So that's the story behind breakfast?"
>"Uh, yes. Heh?"
>You finish chewing and wipe your mouth
"Alright then, have fun you two. I have my own shit to do."
>Sunset stood up at the same time you did
>"W-wait, don't you want to join us?"
"Nah. I have practice."
>Her voice grew small
>"But you said it was cancelled?"
"It was, but it's more fun to run when i know coach isn't keeping tabs on me."
>"Are you sure? We'll get to see more than just the neighborhood you know."
>Your sister followed you to the sink
"Anon hears ya, Anon don't care."
>You drop the plate and turn around making your way to the living room when Twilight jumped in
>"Hang on a second Anon, Rainbow's going to be with us too. She's going to make laps around the lake while we look for the Jagoff's with Fluttershy. Maybe you could run with her?"
>Stopping at the doorway you think about it for a second
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>>28113787
>Rainbow Dash did have a well toned ass, and her boobs were practically nonexistent under a sports bra
“Well, Iiii guess s-"
>Sunset practically tackled you from behind as she stretched her arms around your torso
>You could feel her mashing her B-cups into you back and wiggling her hips against yours
>It was all you could to suppress a surprise boner
>"Yay Anon! You'll see we'll have plenty of fun together!"
>She reached up and pecked your cheek and you had to break away
>Without turning around separate from her hug and tell them to wait outside for you
"I just need to get my camelback and we can go."
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>>28113789
===

>Sunset's breaths line up with your rhythmic pounding
>The shame is too much to bear so instead you stare at her boobs
>Her mounds are a soft shade of orange with a slightly darker nipple
>You watch them jiggle back and forth as you push yourself deeper into your sister
>Her panting warms your shoulder as she moans quietly next to your ear
>Your heart beats faster, pumping more blood into your already swollen dick
>You feel yourself grow harder as the onset of climax nears closer
>Sunset takes your head in her hands and forces you to look into her turquoise eyes
>They were tearing up but glazed with lust
>She breathed hot air into your face before she managed to squeal
>"O-O-Onii-Chan!"
>You felt her wrap your legs around your waist
>She squeezed as she enveloped her arms around you and dove into your mouth
>Her hard nipples pressed against your chest as her tongue danced around yours
>You couldn't hold it in anymore
"AH! FUCK!"
>Coming back to the real world you toss the toilet paper aside
>You had intended to just pick up your sports backpack and move on but curiosity got the better of you
>Your dick pounded hard in your hand waiting to be released
>If you wanted to you could've jacked off to your little sister
>Hell at this stage you could jack off to the shampoo bottle
>But the spark just wasn't there, and the shame really was too much
>Instead you pull up a video of a backdoor slut on your phone and finish off
>Feeling a bit of pleasure followed by remorse wasn't the best way to start the day
>Now you actually had to face Sunset for the rest of the afternoon
>Washing up you head downstairs with your pack, stuff it with energy bars and water, and head out the door
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>>28113792
"C'mon let's get moving."
>You say to them, not daring to look at either one for fear of being found out
>"Anon what took you so long?"
>Sunset tried to keep up with you but you outpaced her
"I had to drop a deuce."
>"Oh, yeah. I had a feeling that was it."
>She and Twilight both giggled behind your back
>You couldn't stand the embarrassment
>"Um, Anon?"
>Twilight tries to keep it together
>You try to be as polite as possible
"Yeah, what's so funny?"
>You stop and turn around
>She lowers one of her hands from her mouth to point at your feet
>Looking down you spot what they were larking over
>A small trail of toilet paper was stuck to your foot
>Worse, you actually recognized it
>Growing redder than a cherry tomato you kick and stomp furiously trying to roll it up and keep your shame secret
>When it was done you kicked the wad to the curb and walked away without a word
>They kept giggling behind you
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>With you walking way out in front of them the girls were free to gossip
>Twilight leaned into Sunset's ear
>"So..?"
>"So what?"
>She winked and Sunset became flustered
>Of all the girls Sunset trusted Twilight the most, in doing so she might've let slip a few too many secrets
>Surprisingly Twilight wasn't taken aback as much as Sunset could've predicted
>There was a bit of awkward tension between the two in the beginning
>However as soon as Twilight saw how playful your actions were she began to warm up to the idea
>Unfortunately you, not knowing at the moment, couldn't hope to explain you were just trying to get along
>There was a history of sibling rivalry between you and Sunny, and you only recently began to make up for it
>Through a funny little misunderstanding though Sunset had somehow become head over heels for you, her own brother
>Twilight began to press
>"Have you told him yet?"
>"What? No, I'm not just going to tell him."
>"Then what are you going to do?"
>Sunset sighed and spied you fondly
>"I just have to keep trying to be a good sister to him I guess."
>Twilight gave her a mischievous little smile
>"Have you thought about, you know, doing it with him?"
>"WHAAAAAT!!"
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>You heard your sister yelp from about a thirty feet away
"Hey, knock it off you two."
>Twilight waved innocently at you, Sunset was sweating bullets and avoided your gaze altogether
>You've heard of this phenomenon
>When women are left to talk alone it always turns nasty
>Women had some gall insulting men for being horndogs
>You shrugged it off and kept moving
"None of my business."
>Except it could've been the way Twilight brought Sunset back around
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>"Your brother has a really cute tushie."
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>>28113805
let me know what you guys think, i think sunset is prime for any sort of fetish material since she's essentially a blank slate
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>>28113751
"Shut up, and stop calling me Oneychan damn it. Now get out of my room."
>Oneychan

Still can't believe Sleepycabin is gone...
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>>28113809
It's good
tennoutaten
Moar please
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>>28113809

Please, do go on.
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>>28113835
i think he's mispronouncing it on purpose
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>Jagoff's
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>>28113809
Good stuff. Please write more.
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>Frosty will NEVER EVER continue Sunset Selfcest
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>>28115421
We're too busy reading his pie fic and getting our rocks off to that.
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BUMPING
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>>28116251
>Instead of Sunset's cutie mark, it's Anon's face
>"N-no, I don't think it's weird to have my brother's face lovingly inked into my flesh forever."
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I want to bump with a picture, but all my pony/EQG shit is all porn.
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>>28116855
do it anyway.
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>>28116251
wew
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>>28116855
I have a few that aren't porn, but yeah I have largely the same problem.
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>>28113809
So far so good homie
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>tfw you will never hear your sister beg you to blow a load inside her tight asshole
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>>28116906
Nice.
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>>28116906
Thanks Anon, I hope you aren't banned for too long.
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>>28116906
10/10 would impregnate.
I would join you, but I cant get banned again.
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>>28116906
Fucking saved.
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>>28116906
>tfw no perfect beautiful sister with huge tits and childbearing hips who will choose you over everyone else and put up with your shit
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>>28103317
>”Not that I don’t mind the hugging, but could we get back to the science maybe?” Twilight grumbles having recovered from her too lewd thoughts.
“Sure, so are you good to go Sunny?”
>Wiping away the last of her tears Sunset nods with vigor, “Let’s try it again!”
>Clearing the chamber you walk over to recover your wheelchair before sitting down with a sigh.
>Soon you’re back where you started before that rather, explosive confession.
>Does it even really count as rape if you’re still getting hard?
>Sure, that could be argued with a biological reaction and not a willing one.
>”Alright Sunset give it all you got!” Twilight says slapping a panel back into place.
“Did you already fix the fail safe?”
>”Yep, it just over loaded the fuses, just needed to be replaced is all.”
>Coming to stand beside you Twilight gives Sunset the thumbs up before the girl starts to clench her fists together.
>As you watch you spare a glance at Twilight you test the waters.
“So, how long has Sunset been, interested?”
>Scribbling down something in a notebook Twilight perks up from her notes before the blush returns, “Oh that, uh...That’s not really something I should share…”
>At the look you give her Twilight quickly gulps before saying, “Ah, uh well for a few months now, I think? I mean she’d share some details with the rest of us because she wanted advice on how to, to well get close.”
>”Get close.”
>Sweet moon pies, months?!
>And she shared it with her friends for advice?
>Leaning back with a creak of the wheelchair you let out a sigh feeling your heart contract painfully.
>Before you can dwell on it too much however, a golden light falls over you.
>At finding the source you find Sunset looking incandescent with a look of peace on her face.
>Again like last time she locks eyes with you as she grins happily.
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>>28116974
>Despite how conflicted you feel, a smile comes easily to your face.
>The glow surrounding your sister seems to intensify at your smile before Sunset closes her eyes once more.
>With a sudden pop and bright flash of light Sunset lands on her feet holding her knees.

>”This is amazing, according to the instruments she managed to get 1452 Magi-joules of power and hold it there for a few minutes.” Twilight adds in bringing you out of your thoughts.
“Yeah, that’s my sister, pretty impressive right?”
>”No doubt, but…” Twilight clicks the intercom once more, “Sunset? Why’d you stop?”
>”C-couldn’t hold that form for long.” Sunset manages out between heavy breathes.
>”Alright then, I think we’ve at least managed to understand what triggers the transformation.”
“Ya think?”
>Twilight shoots you an annoyed look at that before shaking her head, “I know that some of this is redundant Anon, but we have to keep track of everything. Otherwise we might miss something.”
“I think you’re over thinking it, but alright. No let Sunset outta the bubble I bet she’s starving.”
>”Oh come on I-” As if to spite her, Sunset’s stomach suddenly lets out a loud growl that makes the glass seem to vibrate.
“So what was that about food?”
>”I guess I could go for something to eat.”
>Snickering you roll over and let Sunset out of the chamber.
>Twilight finishes packing away her data and is already working at the computers.
“Twilight are you coming along?”
>”Mm, no ill catch up with you later.”
>”Are you sure? You do that even have a ride.”
>”I can catch a bus, it’ll be fine.”
>You share a look with Sunset before you both creep up on the unaware girl.
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We've had a lot bro/sis and a bit of mom/son, and im really enjoying it all. But how come we haven't seen any daughter loving? Don't you people wanna see your baby girl grow up and develop feelings for the one man who cared for and supported her? Don't you wanna have your daughter tease you by wearing oversized shirts and sitting on your lap, gently grinding you, while watching a movie. Don't you wanna have the struggle of whether or not you should return her feelings, knowing it's shunned upon by society.

Just throwing that out there.
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>>28116982
>”Beside I need to get this data organized so we cahahahaha!”
>You and Sunset both dig your fingers into Twilight’s sides as she shrieks in surprise!
>Bursting into laughter you scoot your wheelchair back to avoid the flailing arms.
“Come on Twilight, just save it to your drive and let’s go eat.”
>”But, my data! It needs organized!”
>Sharing a look with your sister you nod to her prompting Sunset to frog march Twilight out of the lab.
>”Sunset!”
>”Sorry Twilight, but you do need to go out more.”
>”I went out plenty when I was coming out here!”
“Wasn’t that to spy on Sunset?”
>”Th-that’s not the point!”
>”Sure it isn’t, come on now.”
>You smile despite yourself watching as Twilight and Sunset continue to bicker back and forth.
>You’re still weirded out by Sunset’s confession, not to mention that what Twilight had mentioned…
>Were you just a conquest for your sister?
>Nah, after Flash your sister’s never been with another guy, as far as you know at least.
>Narrowly avoiding a door you shake your head
>What are you doing?
>It’s your sister, she’d never do that to you.
>You thought the same thing about her respecting your boundaries whispers a traitorous part of your mind.
>”Anon?”
>Sunset’s voice draws you from your mind to find Sunset and Twilight both looking at you with concern as they stand at the doors leading outside.
>”Are you coming?” Twilight asks, “You were the one to insist on food.”
“Yeah, yeah sorry just got lost in thought.”
>”Oh I’ve actually read a few books that could help with that, one of them had mentioned that by counting backwards from a hundred can actually help you keep your focus.”
>”Are you sure that wasn’t meditation instead?”
>”I might have mixed the two.”
>You have a little laugh at that before following the duo into the car once more.
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>>28116988

>Breaking down the door you scramble to your hooves and bolt for the next room.
>You can feel the flames lick away at your back as you pant.
>Gotta go faster, faster!
>Pouring on the speed you zip past the kitchen of your old home skidding on the tiles as black smoke and red flame follow after you.
>Need to escape!
>You shove at another door only for it to hold fast.
‘Open damn you!’
>Whirling about you buck the door.
>Once.
>You can see the flames roaring into the kitchen consuming the counters and wood work.
>Twice.
>You can feel your fur start to stand on end from the heat as it races towards you.
>On the third try the door falls away and you hastily scramble backwards from the flames.
>Regardless the fire rises ever more as it chases you through.
>You have a brief moment to realize that you’re in your apartment now.
>Not given a chance to even wonder why you have to duck as flames roar over your head.
>Frantically you search for a way free, but the yellow and red flames lap away eagerly at your surroundings.
>Coughing from the smoke you kneel down trying to find another way out.
>Only for something hard to strike you down, you see a glimpse of a hoof before the flames rush in at you.
>All you can feel is burning.
>Burning!
>You grit your teeth trying to find a way out, instead the flames lick away at your core before you fall over curled into a blackened husk.
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>>28116986
Fuck
Dammit, he's right
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>>28116986
>baby girl
Hello country music star.
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>>28116996

>”Anon!”
>You abruptly sit up with a gasp arms smacking into a body.
>”Ow!”
>Hands shaking you feel around yourself making sure that the flames are out.
>You jerk at the soft touch to your arms before seeing Sunset holding your shoulder.
>”Anon, are you okay?”
“I-I…”
>With a small thump your heart stops as you see a demonic visage before you only for it to fade away revealing your sister’s eyes tired and bloodshot.
>”Anon, I heard you shouting in your sleep. Did you have a nightmare?”
>Meekly you nod and draw your legs towards you as you try to recover your breath.
>”Well, I could help you.”
“W-what do you mean?”
>Sunset shares a shy smile with you as she scoots closer, “I mean, all those times you helped me out with a nightmare, I can return the favor you know?”
>Rubbing your head you think about it for a little bit before sighing and opening your blanket.
>With an excited squee Sunset clambers in with you and gives you a hug before settling in herself.
>”Do you wanna be big spoon or me?” Sunset asks having made herself at home in your bed.
>Which position stops you from fucking me in my sleep?
>”Huh?”
“Oh uh, you can be big spoon. Just remember, no funny business alright?”
>”Of course, this is just to help my big bro get some sleep!”
>With that said Sunset scoots over and wraps you in her arms.
>You can feel her breasts push up against your back.
>Ignoring that for now you take a deep breath and just try to relax listening to the steady breathing of your sister.
>You start to drowse off to sleep once more, but the feeling of flames crawling up your skin jerk your eyes wide open to look around frantically.
>Come on man, you need to sleep.
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>>28117008
>Moving about you try to find a comfortable spot, but with Sunset nearby you can’t move as much as you want to.
>”Mmn, Anon?”
“Sorry, did I wake you?”
>”Lil’ bit, are you okay?”
“..Can’t really get comfortable.”
>”Oh, lemme…”
>Sunset reaches over and brings over her pillow to sit in front of you.
>With her arms the girl wraps you in a homemade sandwich of girl and pillow.
“How’s this supposed to help?”
>”Now you can be the big spoon and the little spoon.” Sunset murmurs sleepily before laying a kiss on your cheek, “Now time for sleeps…”
>You think your little sister is still out of it.
>The small whisper of sleep from behind you confirms it as well.
>Maybe you just need to calm down a bit and just relax…

>Sparing a glance at the alarm clock nearby you see that it’s already two in the morning.
>You haven’t gotten to sleep yet, every time you close your eyes you can see the flames there eager to greet you.
>It’s almost like hellfire with it’s intensity…
>That just reminds you of that song with the priest and hellfire now.
>You need to get something to drink…
>Carefully you sneak the pillow over to Sunset and let her grab onto it instead.
>Freed from your sister you hobble over to the kitchen delicately.
>Pouring a glass of water and ice you lean back against the fridge as you sip at it.
>Should you really be that fine with your sister violating your private space like that?
>Or the whole thing with her sharing the sordid details with her friends?
>Granted your sister doesn’t have much in the way of relationships to help her with personal things, but still!
>Has it really hurt you in the long run however?
>Watching the ice clink in the water is the only answer you get.
>You just wish you could understand how you’re supposed to even feel about this.
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>>28116999
>>28117000
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>>28117015
>Heck you could imagine the guys at work giving you a hard time for denying free pussy like that.
>Still, it’s your sister, she’s always been needing your help and you’ve always looked after her, guess it makes sense that she’d be attracted to you before hand as well.
>Sighing you drain the last of your water before spying the melatonin atop the microwave.
>Staring it down you let out another sigh before taking double the dosage and head back to bed.
>Peeking into the gloom you can see Sunset sprawled out in bed her hair cascading around her like a living flame.
>You remember the heartfelt smile she had when she transformed, that makes your heart lift from it’s heaviness.
>If there’s one thing you’d be glad to do for your sister, is to protect that smile.
>When did you get all sappy, must be the melatonin already.
>Crawling into bed you slip under the covers and nestle in close to Sunset feeling her breath gently mix with your own.
>With the pills, the pleasant heat and the rhythmic breathing you soon pass out into a dreamless sleep.
>Maybe things will make more sense in the morning?

I took what you guys said about Anon not reacting as strongly into account and this is what I cobbled together, that being said I think I did alright on it. Another thing that I was wondering on were the lewds too much or were you guys more interested in those feel good lewds?
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>>28116906
WOO BOY
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>>28117019
Time for a new writer to rise up. The numbers have spoken!

Also, here's a Rara daughter story

pastebin.com/qapKs0VJ
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>>28116906
Those tits are very disproportionate. Like, they're bigger than her waist.
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>>28117030
I want both kinds of lewds, you do it perfectly.
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>>28116974
>>Does it even really count as rape if you’re still getting hard?
its not rape if she has a waterfall coming out of her cooch
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>>28117271
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>>28116906
Tits could be a little smaller, but good stuff anyway.
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>>28116974
>>Does it even really count as rape if you’re still getting hard?
Let it go, Comfy. Accept it and move on.
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>>28117271
It's not rape if it's on the moon.
aeiou
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>>28117377
JOHN MADDEN JOHN MADDEN
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>>28117377
>>28117431
>Anon in Equestria
>Apparently Anon has a pone-version of him
Stay with me, folks
>But pone-Anon died
So no Anon-pone.
>Ponies know about alternate human dimension
>Even the family of the deceased Anon-pone knows
>Shenanigans
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>>28117067
>>28117308
of course faggots wouldn't like big tits
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>>28117845
>gyehehe b-boobs, u guise!!
Are you 12
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>>28117876
No, just straight.
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>>28116986
I wouldn't mind seeing some of that.
We have a lot of that in the satyr threads, but I haven't seen much of EqG.
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>>28117271
In other words, grab her while she's on the toilet.
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dicks belong is sisters bump
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Good night bump
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Does anyone have the set that is similar to this picture? The main six were mothers wrestling their son Anon.
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>>28119022
>want
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>>28117845
I like tits that don't look like they were glued on balloons.
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bamp
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>>28119022
>"Ah didn't spend mah whole life workin' on a farm without gettin' a mighty strong body, Nonny! Now c'mere an' wrassle with yer mama!"
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>>28117322
Hey man I'm just trying to take what that Anon's said about Anon not reacting spectacularly like they had expected so instead he gets to suffer nightmares and awkward sleep arrangements!

>>28117271
You would be surprised by how many people actually answered in that vein...
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POMF
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>>28120148
Yay!
moar fluttercest?
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>>28120148
BIG
SHY
TITTIES
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>>28117030
It's better now methinks. But he needs to talk to Sunset about it.
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>>28120180
Soon
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>>28117377
>>28117431
HOLLA HOLLA GET DOLLAR
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>>28115421
Why live?
Frosty pls
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>>28120268
This is more cute than anything.
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>>28120830
Those nips could cut steel.
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>>28120830
Appul mama green when?
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>>28120872
Tomorrow. I need sleep but am interested in writing it
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bump from bed
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>>28120830
Neeeeeeeeeed
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>>28120830
>"Aww. The kids are playing again, hun."
"Just like we did when WE were their age.... right, little brother?"
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>>28121567
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>>28120830
That's it! Thank you!

I was only able to locate two more.
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>>28120830
Yiss
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>>28123163
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>This thread

Borderline autistic.

Not even bothering to look through.
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>>28123170
Too bad there aren't any more. Thanks for sharing, bro.
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>>28123173
>He doesn't want to fuck his mother or sister.
Normies pls.
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>>28120148
F
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>>28123173
k
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>>28123222
G
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>>28123693
H
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>>28124158
I
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>>28124236
T
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>Anon visits his cousin Twilight
>After all the time they used to play "doctor" as kids, she'd always held a shameful crush on him
>She kisses him, he kisses her back, and they play doctor a couple times a day for as long as Anon's visiting for
>End result: pregnancy scare that could go either way
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>tfw your hot cousins are all married to chads
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>>28124396
Then the only option is to kill the Chads, assassination is the greatest tool ever.
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How does this thread feel about femdom? I come from a thread where the posters screech like autistic children when someone DARES mention the dreaded f-word.
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>>28124414
Or become the Chads fuck sock.
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>>28124575
Get out cuck, the isn't Marital Problems thread.
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>>28124592
>how do I jokes
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>>28124558
Not a fan of it myself.
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>>28124670
That's fair, and I respect that.
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>>28124558
Get out. If the thread you were in died on its own, stay dead. If you were shitposting don't do it here.
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>>28124670
>>28124680
This.
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>>28124678
Its fine to lurk as long as>>28124680
Just ignore the get out part.
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>>28124680
Calm down there, friendo. I was just asking a question. You and I are on the same side, I think femdom is complete shit. If you read my post, you'd use that big brain of yours to figure out that I was bitching about how easily threads get derailed by screeching idiots whenever the word is used.
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>>28124725
Sorry, just a lot of shitposters have been coming out for it lately. But otherwise its not a thing here, feel free to lurk though.
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>>28124737
It's cool. Sorry for being kind of a dick to you in my post.
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>>28124756
Its fine, its been a long week for everyone. Have a good day.
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>>28124774
I like it when people get along on 4chan.
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>>28124783
It's got that warm feeling, doesn't it.
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>Pinkie Pie is your sister
>You grew up on a rock farm and moved away sup frosty
>Your sisters are seriously sexually repressed when you go back to visit
>Pure lust and curiosity (mixed in with sex education that was shoddy at best) leads to Pinkie sucking on your testicles the first chance she gets
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>>28125065
Hi Anon
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>>28125100
Is Pinkie Pie going to suck on Anon's testicles at any point?
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>>28125065
>"So then the penis..." Maud begins
"yeees?"
>"The vagina goes into the penis-"
>You sigh out of frustration
"No! Goddamn it Maud, how would that even work?!"
>She blinks once, "Perhaps with enough lube. Just like-"
>Oh god, no. Not again
>"Just like for anal!" you hear all your sisters join Maud in cheering
>Face, please allow hand to pass through so you can end this torture
>...Damn you face, you bitch.
>At least they seem to have the concept of anal down-
>"Tight?"
"What?" you ask Pinkie
>"Nothing! Just breaking walls like pussies break hymens"
"Pussie- No! Pinkie I told you, the hymen is-"
>"The hymen is inside the pussy Pinkie. Don't you remember when Anon popped yours?" Limestone huffs, clearly irritated by this staggering level of incompetence on your sisters' parts
"Yes, thank you Limestone"
>She crosses her arms tighter, further enhancing the volume of her supple chest
>"Uhm... Anon?" Marble speaks up, just barely above a whisper while the room is quiet
"Yes Marble?"
>"I think I'm getting confused. So the penis goes into the vagina"
>You nod once
>"Th-then they... slam jam-"
>Thank you Pinkie for that one
"Yes, Marble..." you respond, hope building in your chest
>"A-and then the penis... it erupts with torrents of white lava-"
>"Only if it erupts outside-" Maud adds, "-It's a magma creampie if it remains inside"
>Rock metaphors were the only way to get across to her, surprisingly effective
>"Right, thanks Maud. S-so after that, the brother and sister snuggle together and h-hold hands?"
>You watch the faces of all your sisters light up with color
>You wince at her closing statement
"Close... Marble, you have to understand that all that is just about a guy and a girl. Not brother and sister specifically. It's not supposed to be done between siblings"
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>>28125316
>Limestone lets out a low prolonged growl, "Gah! I don't get this! So you're saying everything Marble said was wrong?!" she hisses, poking you in the bare chest after having crawled over towards you on all fours


>You look your sister in the eyes with utter disbelief
"Goddamn it girls, we just went over this for the TENTH TIME! How can you all be this dense?!" you spit back at Limestone, who very clearly doesn't take it well
>Her hand trembles with anger as she slowly raises it to your neck
>"Whoa whoa! Hold on Limey" Pinkie chirps, slipping in between you and Limestone
>Which means she's planted her plump rump down onto your cock
>Pinkie leans back and presses her back against your chest
>She raises a hand and gently trails it over your cheek, caressing it softly
>"I think we just need one more refresher to have it down pat... don't you girls think so?" Pinkie asks
>Your sisters all share a glance, nod in unison to each other, turn to you and nod in unison again
>You sigh
>God your sisters are dumb

>Anon thrusts away at your quivering creamy cunt
>Limestone is attacking his lips with her own, as her own personal payback for being yelled at earlier
>Maud gently laps at Anon's testes, just like you had done to set this whole thing off
>Her hot breaths pass over your moist clit, sending the most electrariffic tingles up your body
>Marble is sucking on Anon's nipples
>Every time she bites down, he squeezes your ass real hard
>Poor girl, you're not sure if she's playing dumb or is genuinely confused
>Regardless so long as everyone keeps this up, you'll all be set for the next couple of weeks
>Your brother is so dumb

>>28125165
What an excellent question Pluggo, technically as of writing this she has.
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>>28120830
Green of this
That
>>28123163
Or
>>28123170
Plz
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>>28125329
yisss

Very funny, Frosty. I smiled IRL.
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>>28111008
Link to the anon x twidaughter please
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>>28125551
http://pastebin.com/fT7Dyj7a

Good lucking reading through it, friend.
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So anons, I'm currently conflicted in how to proceed with writing an update for Suncest story. I had some idea of adventure and such, but this relationship thing us really tripping me up... any advice here?
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>>28125910
Elaborate on the "relationship thing"
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>>28125910
Which story are you?
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>>28125329
LEWD
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>>28125990
It's comfy sorry
The one where Anon didn't rracy as huge as expected
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>>28126476
Well, my lovely Comfy, how did you end the last update?
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>>28125910
So I just finished catching up on your story so far. I'm truly unsure of what to tell you. I believe you evaluated your Anon's character as you saw fit when he made his "decision" and the feedback is what has led you to question your vision with maybe what he should be.

Personally I do agree that he should have reacted more strongly initially, though your "fix" to draw back to it later also makes sense, he could've just been in shock when he made his call and now that he's given himself more time to think about it, and acquired more info from Twilight, he's thinking maybe he decided too quickly to forgive with minor stipulations.

I don't know what all your plans are moving forwards, but from what I've read I think if I were writing this, I would sort of fuze together the "cobbled dream stuff" mostly the doubt and emotional side as opposed to the dream, and the original decision. Maybe a discussion after he talks with Twilight privately. Of course it's easy to say that when I'm not the one who would have to go back again and re-work old material. Which is no fun, and really takes a lot of willpower to do.

I think as the writer you need to just take a stand. Accept the segment as it was, maybe a little weak sure, but its how you envisioned Anon being, or sit down and re-plan the story with this new angle in mind.

if you choose to just move on, but want to address it later without having to dwell on it moving forwards, you could maybe bring it up the next time they think about getting frisky or something. Have Anon suddenly come to the realization that maybe he's not as okay about this as even he thought. Saves you the hassle of working it in between now and then and you can properly work in these feelings when they're both at their most exposed.
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>>28126945
Hrm, thanks for the advice Frosty, I think I can work on it a bit more, but I think I might take a small break, classes are going to start up again soon so i'll try to update one more time before they do.
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page 8 goodnight bump
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Need more pie
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>>28125582
Well i wasn't expecting that.
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Writer's block is one of the worst thing for a writer.


At least it's no to the point where I have to force myself to write, RIP Gaming for me.
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>>28128938
Yeah it takes a turn right off a cliff
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>>28127791
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I'm back boys! Glad you could all carry on in my stead, but now it's time for an update of my own.

Link to story: http://pastebin.com/2DRqRmpY
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> The next few weeks come and go. Each day the same as the last. Go to school, get in a fight, go to practice, do homework, repeat.
> Life was beyond depressing. Dash was continuously spending more and more time with her delinquent friends. Most nights not even bothering to come home. Leaving you to take a bike to school.
> Once baseball was over you had your afternoons freed up. Even though you didn’t have anything to do.
> Currently you were over at Derpy’s house working on a social studies project together. Trying your best not to show how depressed you were.
“How does this look Anon?”
> “I think you should add another picture too it. Make it stand out a little more.”
“Okay.”
> She fiddles with the powerpoint a little more while you read your research material.
“Have you been doing okay Anon? You seem to be getting into more fights recently”
> “I’m doing alright. You don’t have to worry about me.”
“But I am worried. You always try and take care of things yourself, and you always get hurt because of it.”
> “As long as no one else gets hurt it doesn’t matter.”
“See there you go again! You don’t think about anybody but yourself. What about me? I don’t want to see you get hurt either.”
> “It’s okay Derpy I can take it. If you got involved you would just get beat up too, or worse.”
“You really think they’d hurt me the way they do to you?”
> “I don’t know, but I don’t think they’re above hitting girls. That however isn’t what concerns me.”
“If that’s not what’s bothering you what is?”
> God she’s really going to make you spell it out isn’t she.
> “When I mentioned something worse than beating you up what do you think I meant by that?”
“I don’t know tell me.”
> You’d rather not.
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>>28129953

> “I’m afraid if you got involved they would……rape you.”
> She freezes up as you say that. Caught completely off guard by your sense of thinking.
“T-that wouldn’t happen. I wouldn’t let it.”
> “DERPY YOU DON’T GET IT!”
> You quickly retreat after your sudden outburst. Not wanting to hurt her feelings.
> “I’m sorry Derpy, but you don’t know those people the way I do. They’re scum. The lowest of the low. People who do anything they want without thinking about the consequences. Only thinking about their own self-interests.”
> “That’s why I keep pushing you away, so I don’t have to worry about you getting hurt.”
> You both sit there for a moment. Unwilling to look each other in the eyes.
“I guess I have to let you take care of it then.”
> “Thank you Derpy. For understanding.”
> You knew she wasn’t happy about it, but she also knew you were right. She was one of the few people willing to share your pain. Even if she couldn’t help fight the problem directly she served as a shoulder to cry on.
> That’s all you really needed. Knowing someone was there to catch you when you fell.
> You thank Mr. and Mrs. Hooves for having you over. Respectfully declining their invitation to stay the night.
> Things were kind of heavy between you and Derpy after your argument. It would be too awkward if you stayed around.
> As you get home you see that Dash’s car wasn’t parked in the driveway. Couldn’t say you were surprised though. You’ll just have to meet up with her tomorrow being your special day.
> You’ll probably start with a workout in the morning with Dash. Maybe have lunch out together. Go see Derpy, and apologize for your behavior today. Then, hangout for awhile. Finally, ending the day by watching a movie with the family.
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>>28129962

> The next morning you eat a quick breakfast before calling your sister. Surprisingly you get a ring tone, but to your dismay she doesn’t answer.
> Guess you’ll have to go look for her after you workout. Today was a chest day so it was going to take you every bit of an hour and a half.
> Halfway into your workout however you get a phone call.
> Was it Dash?
> You pull your phone out. No it was mom. She knew where you were at so what was up?
> “Hey mom what’s up?”
“Anon honey you need to come home.”
> She sounded depressed; which made you pause.
> “Is something wrong you sound worried.”
“I shouldn’t tell you over the phone. Just come home now.”
> That’s not a good sign.
> “Okay I’ll be home in ten minutes.”
“Alright bye.”
> You hang up and a million scenarios run through your head. Was Dash in trouble, did mom get laid off, did somebody die?
> All were unpleasant thoughts. Best to not think about it until it came from the horse’s mouth.
> During the jog back you tried your best to think of what you wanted to do the rest of the day, but the sense of dread you got from talking to your mother was still stuck in your head.
> Double timing it back you open the front door to see her sitting on the couch. Waiting for you.
> “I’m here mom are you okay?”
“I’m fine dear. It’s just I was hoping your sister would be here as well.”
> “Well I think we both know that’s not going to happen. You want me to go look for her?”
“No. I’ll tell her later. Have a seat”
> Shit. Whatever it was it was NOT good. Thankfully it didn’t seem to have anything to do with Dash; which gave you some comfort.
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>>28129966
I know it's a bit of a dick move interrupting your story-posting to ask an unrelated question, but are you going to pick up posting the new threads, or is that my thing now?
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>>28129966

“There’s been an incident with your grandmother Blitz.”
> Oh no.
“She had a heart attack last night, and the doctors don’t think she’ll make it through the day.”
> Fuck. Your grandma was always such a sweet woman to you. Even though she had to deal with two delinquent sons. One was your father, Rainbow Blitz, and the other was your uncle, Kraig Blitz.
“I know it’s not what you had in mind for today, but we should probably go visit her at the hospital.”
> “No you’re right. This is more important, but I still think I should go find Dash.”
“Anon the last thing I want is to have to go searching for both of you. Just let it go for now. If she doesn’t want to be with us on today of all days that’s her problem.”
> “Mom she promised to spend the day with me. I know she wants to be here. She just might not be in the right state of mind.”
“If she really cared she wouldn’t be off with those junkies.”
> “Mom it’s not like that. She isn’t like dad.”
“Well she’s certainly trying her best to imitate him.”
> “Mom I promise you she won’t end up like him. I’ll make sure of it.”
“Anon I know your fond of your sister, but at some point you have to realize when someone isn’t worth saving.”
> “And I already told you that she won’t end up like dad did. I won’t let that happen.”
“And how exactly are you going to do that? If I can’t stop her from doing that stupid shit what can you do!?”
> “I’ll make her see the error of her ways. Somehow, but for now let’s just focus on going to see grandma.”
“You’re right we shouldn’t be fighting. I’ll go get my purse and we can go.”
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>>28129981
I'll takeover if you like. Being the director of a thread gives me a certain amount of pride, but if you'd like to stay in charge I have no problems with you making the new threads from now on.
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>>28130000
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>>28129982

> Arriving at the hospital you had expected to see your uncle, but to your surprise he wasn’t here. Couldn’t even be bothered to be at his mother’s side during her final moments. At least your father had an excuse.
> The nurse advised you not to get her riled up because she needed her strength. She was on her death bed to hell with that.
> Unfortunately she was sleeping when you arrived. Leaving you nothing to do but wait.
> Hours go by before she finally awakens.
> “Hey grandma how you feeling?”
“A-anon? Oh it’s good to see you dearie.”
> “It’s nice to see you too. I’m sorry I haven’t been out to see you recently.”
“You’re in school right?”
> You nod softly.
“Then you’re doing the right thing sweetie. Finishing your education is the most important thing you can do.”
> “Thanks grandma.”
“Hey Betty.” Your mom says.
“Firefly, it’s nice to see you. How you holding up?”
“I’m doing alright, but let’s not talk about me.”
> For the next hour you go back and forth talking about day-to-day life. Just enjoying the pleasantries of conversation.
> That got you to thinking. Maybe you could get a hold of Dash now. You excuse yourself for a moment before pulling out your phone and quick dial her number.
> Ring…ring…ring…ring…ring… “You’ve reached the number of the one and only Rainbow Dash. Leave me an awesome message, and I might get back to you.” Beep.
> “Dash it’s Anon. Call me when you get this message. I mean it. It’s really important. Like crazy important. Okay, bye.”
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>>28130010

> Damn it all! Now of all times you couldn’t reach her.
> (Dash’s personal ringtone)
> Oh thank god.
> “Dash where are you?”
“Hey man who’s calling?”
> What the? That’s not Dash’s voice.
> “Who is this?”
“Nah man I asked first. Who are YOUUU?”
> Great some stoner has your sister’s phone.
> “My name’s Anon. Do you know my sister Rainbow Dash?”
“No. Nope. No. Nope. Negatory. No Dash here.”
> Well he’s either lying or too high to remember. Best to find out for yourself.
> “Well can you at least tell me where you are? I need to cut loose bra.”
“Sha man. I’m just down by The Labyrinth man. Can’t miss it.”
> “Thanks dumbass.”
> Hanging up before he can respond.
> Sifting through your phone you pull up another number and press dial.
> You get one ring before you get sent to voice mail. That son a bitch ignored your call. If he thinks he can avoid you that easily he was mistaken.
> “Mom can I have your phone?”
“Sure honey what do you need it for?”
> “Making a call.”
> Dialing the number again he answers almost instantly.
“Hey Firefly haven’t heard from you in awhile. What’s poppin babe.”
> “Hey uncle Kraig.”
“Oh it’s you. The fuck do you want nigga.”
> “Nice to hear from you too.”
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>>28130014

> “Two things actually. First of all, have you heard of a place called the Labyrinth?”
“The Labyrinth? Man you lookin to get in the game. It’s about fucking time.”
> “I’m not interested in anything that has to do with THAT. I only ask because Dash is missing and I think she might be there.”
“Shit man why didn’t you say so before. Can’t let my brother’s little girl get wasted.”
> “I appreciate your concern.” You say with a thick layer of sarcasm. “Can you tell me where to find it?”
“Yeah it’s downtown across from Nate’s Shoe Shack. In that old abandoned warehouse.”
> “Thanks it means a lot.”
“So what was that second thing you were talking bout?”
> Right you almost forgot.
> “Your mother’s on her death bed at the hospital.”
“So?”
> “So!? So get you fucking ass over here and make peace with her you piece of shit!”
“Nigga I don’t owe her shit. The hell I’m driving my ass an hour away to see some old bitch die.”
> “Did I mention my mom is here. Looking for a man to comfort her”
> A long silence follows.
“Aight maybe I can swing by for a little while.”
> “Thanks talk to you later.”
> You’re fucking family. How it became so divided you’ll never know.
> “Mom I know where Dash is. Can I borrow the car?”
“You still want to go looking for your sister even now. I swear I don’t know what I’m going to do with the two of you.”
> “So is that a yes or a no”
“No way, and you’re not leaving either so sit down.”
> You’ve had just about all you can take of your family’s bullshit today.
> “Mom come talk to me out in the hall.”
> She gives you a stern look; which you return in kind. Before she finally relents and follows you out the door.
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>>28130000
I relinquish control of the thread over to you, then. In my brief stay I managed to fuck up the very first post of last thread. Welcome back, btw.

>>28128938
>>28129408
I know, right? Somehow it's the third most popular story on my pastebin, and I'm really not sure how that makes me feel.
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>>28130028

> “I’m leaving whether you like it or not; because, we all need to be here as a family. Even uncle Kraig. Things are pretty bad as they stand right now, and now is the perfect time to come together to settle our differences.”
“Anon I just told you you’re staying here, and that’s final. Plus, what does your uncle have to do with this.”
> “He’s the one who told me where Dash is. Also, he’s coming to the hospital soon.”
“Him coming here? How the hell did you convince him of that.”
> “I told him you were here, and before you say anything. Yes, I realize he’s an insufferable ass. However, he’s family and he needs to be here.”
> Your mother looks like she has a million things to say to you. Everything from: ‘I don’t want to see that jackass’ to ‘Maybe you’re right’ to ‘You can’t talk to me like that.’ In the end she settles for-
“Fine. Go. You can’t take the car though.”
> “Great. I’ll be back as soon as I can.”
> You give her a quick peck on the cheek before heading out.
> Nate’s Shoe Shack huh. Getting out your phone you pull up the store on Google Maps. A couple blocks from the lake. Walking there would take you all day. Better take the trams.
> What time was it 1:30? You were really hungry now that you realize how late in the day it was. Guess that’ll just have to hold off until later. When time wasn’t of the essence.
> You pay for your ticket and drift into deep thought as you begin your long journey.
> You had no idea how things were going to transpire when you got there. From what you could tell about your uncle’s reaction the place was more than likely a major hot spot for dealers, and not just for drugs.
> Things could get out of hand very quickly. Best not to cause any commotion if at all possible. The people you have to put up with at school were nothing in comparison to the thugs you would encounter there.
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>>28130034

> If worse comes to worse you may just have to walk away, but that was easier said then done. Your sister’s life could be at stake. Who knows how you’ll react when you see her.
> Please. To whatever higher being watching over you right now. Please keep her safe. That’s all you ask.
> At last you arrive at your stop. Some cloud cover had started to roll in, and it appeared as though it was going to rain soon.
> You still being dressed in your workout clothes would find it very uncomfortable if it started down pouring. You better hurry then. Midwestern weather was extremely volatile and unpredictable.
> Continuing to follow your maps directions you eventually find the abandoned warehouse in question.
> It was a shaggy building with a slightly rusted exterior. Some small portions of the roof were missing and a chain-link fence surrounding the yard was bent in several dozen places.
> It looked as though it had been deserted decades ago. You figured the docking bay where the semi-trucks once came and went now served as an ideal location to move large shipments of illegal drugs and other contraband.
> Kind of an obvious place for criminals to hangout, but then again sometimes the best place to hide was in plain sight. Especially since the city was littered with large buildings like these everywhere.
> A couple of guys were hanging out by the front door. Making entry rather tricky. You could sneak in, but if you got caught you would more than likely be shot on sight. If not beaten to a pulp.
> Going through the front door was much safer; in theory.
> As you come into view of the two watchdogs smoking cigarettes you do your best to look as non-threatening as can be.
> “How’s it going boys? Mind if I go in?”
“Depends.” Says the first schmuck. As he blows a smoke ring towards you.
“Who the fuck are you?”
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>>28130042

> “I’m just lookin for ma girl man. You seen her?”
“Plenty a girls around here. Refresh my memory a little bit.”
> “Her name’s Rainbow Dash. Got hair like mine.”
“Sorry man. Plenty of people with hair like yours.” The second thug says.
> You just shake your head at that.
> “Come on man. You can’t think of a better lie than that? Never in my entire life have I met someone with natural rainbow hair.”
“You calling me a liar?” Says the street punk as he walks up to your face.
> “I’m just saying. Rainbow Dash is pretty famous around here. Not too many people haven’t heard about her.”
“Yeah we know her.” The first guy interjects. “She’s just not here.”
> Both of you look over to him.
> “You’ll have to excuse me if I don’t take your word for it. All I ask is that I take a quick peek inside. Just to be sure.”
“Nah man can’t let you do that. We don’t know you, so you don’t get in.”
> “Then can one of you go and look, and if she’s not here I’ll be on my way.”
“Man you can’t tell me what to do.” Says the second punk.
“Nigga shut the fuck up. Just go in there and take a look.”
> Reluctantly he goes inside. Leaving the two of you to wait in uneasy silence.
> After a minute of sitting around he returns.
“Yeah she’s here, but she don’t know anything about having no man.”
> “I bet she was on cloud nine when she said that am I right?”
> “Trust me what I have to say is important, and if she’s too out of it to listen. I’ll get her out of your hair for ya.”
“That’s not the problem man. She’s got some debts to pay, and she ain’t leaving until we get what’s ours one way or another.”
> Fucking shit. Now she was ringing up debts with gang members. This was worse than you thought.
> “How much money does she owe?”
“Five hundred bones.”
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>>28130046

> Oh man you were going to have some serious words for your sister when this was over.
> “Alright how about this. I only have $25 on me right now, but I’ll come back tomorrow to pay the rest.”
“That ain’t how it works brother. Either pay up or get lost.”
> Great. Looks like you’ll have to resort to drastic measures.
> “How about this. I leave with Rainbow Dash, and come back and pay double what she owes.”
> The two wannabe criminals look at each other with raised eye brows.
“This girl really mean that much to you?”
> “You have no idea.”
“Alright follow me. We’ll go talk to the big man.”
> Definitely not what you wanted, but you really didn’t have a choice at this point. The less you were involved the better.
> You follow them into the warehouse where you see a makeshift ring with two people fighting it out for money.
> On the other side you see pallets of something being loaded into the back of a truck. Boy you couldn’t have found a shadier place if you tried.
> The two henchmen lead you to an office where they explain the situation to a large man behind a desk.
“So you’re looking to buy some merchandise.” Says the imposing figure.
> You clench your fist at his remark, but bite your tongue for now.
> “I am. Will my offer be sufficient?”
“It is, but I’m curious as to why your willing to go this far for a piece of trash like her.”
> You can feel every blood vessel in your body strain to keep yourself from lashing out.
> “It’s because you don’t know her potential like I do. I’ve seen her at her highest moments, and she can do anything she sets her mind to.”
“You actually believe that don’t you? How sad.”
> “Are you going to sit there and insult me all day, or are we going to conclude our business.”
“Don’t test me boy. You’re only here because of my good graces. Remember if you don’t pay by tomorrow it will be on your head.”
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>>28130055

> “I understand. I’ll be leaving now.”
> The two guys who let you in direct you to where all the junkies hangout, and in the corner you see your sister with half lidded eyes staring out into space.
“Oh hey. I know you. Don’t I? What’s your name again?”
> “I’m here to take you home Dash. Grab your things and let’s go.”
“No way I love it here. Besides the party’s just started.”
> You look around to see only about a dozen other people in the room. Half of them pasted out. The other half swapping spit.
> “Well too bad. We’re leaving.”
“But I don’t want toooooo.”
> You take a deep sigh. The things you do for her.
> “Hey you want to go for a ride?”
“A ride? Where we going?”
> “Wherever you want. Just take my hand.”
“Carry me.”
> Of course.
> “Okay climb on my back.”
> You turn around and she wraps her arms around your neck.
“Ride’em horsey.”
> Slowly you make your way out. All the while your sister bouncing up and down your back. Making it difficult to walk.
> “I swear Dash when we get home we-”
> A sudden crash through the window cuts your sentence short. As several large men in black suits start pouring in from all directions.
“CHICAGO POLICE DEPARTMENT EVERYONE GET DOWN!”
> A mix of yells, gunshots, and panic instantly grip the environment.
> You try to duck down and sprint to the closest exit, but you were cut off.
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>>28130078

> Taking a left you head for the open lot, but as soon as you drop down a gun is raised to your face.
“GET ON THE GROUND NOW!”
> You weren’t one to argue, so you just lay down with your sister on top of you.
“Come on horsey I want to go fast.”
> “Dash stop it!”
“But you promised me we’d go for a ride.”
> “Later Dash. I’ll take you on one later.”
> She just pouts like a five year old, but thankfully doesn’t try to get up.
> Yeah you’d be going for a ride alright.
> A minute or two later the craziness finally subsided. You weren’t sure how many people died, and in all honesty you didn’t want to think about it.
> A police officer cuffs both you and Dash before putting in the back of his vehicle.
> Your mom was going to kill you for this. The only comforting thought about the situation was Dash had only one strike against her; where you had none.
> The ride to the police station was quiet. At some point your sister had fallen asleep. It was probably for her own good.
“Get out you two.” Says the officer.
> “Trust me she’s out. I can carry her if you like?”
“She’s going to have to be awake at some point. Get her up.”
> You shake her shoulders a little bit, but get no response. You slap her face a little bit before she finally perks up.
“Hey yooou.”
> Great she’s still out of it.
> “We have to go now sis. Let’s go.”
> Surprisingly she complies. Even though you still had to fight her. It was better than her making things worse.
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>>28130092

> Both of you get screened and are inevitably put in a cell.
> “So when do we get our one call.”
“I’ll let you have it an hour once I done with the paperwork.”
> “Kay. I’ll be right here if you need me.”
> The hour comes and goes, and the moment you’ve been dreading is at hand.
> The phone rings a couple times, but thankfully she answers.
“It’s about time you called me where the hell are you! Your grandma passed away and you couldn’t even be here!”
> “Mom there’s a very good reason for that. Although you’re not going to like it.”
“I don’t care what it is. You’re grounded. I don’t care what day it is you should’ve been here.”
> “Mom I know and I’m sorry. I’ll accept any punishment you give me, but first can you please come pick us up?”
“So you did find your sister. I guess that’s one good thing. Why can’t you just make your way back?”
> Well you’ve lived a full life.
> “Because-because were both in jail.”
“WHAT!!!!!!!”
> And there go your eardrums.
> You just hold the phone away from your ear while she gets all her frustration out. Once she’s done you just repeat the same lines you fed her before. Saying that she’ll be there in an hour or two.
> So you simply return to your cell sitting next to your sister who’s passed out again.
> Your mom arrives and she’s just as pissed as she was on the phone.
> This has to be without a doubt the worst birthday ever.
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Alright that's all for now. It's actually only half of the material I have typed out right now, but I don't want to dump the whole thing at once.
I'll give everyone some time to read what's out now, and then post the second half.

Prepare yourself; because the second half has feels.
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>>28130127
Good lord, this isn't the feels part? You mad bastard.
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>>28130127
Dammit, I didn't ask for these feels. And there's even more to come?

I still want them though. What the hell is wrong with me?
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>>28120996
Thank you
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>>28124375
Anon gets pregnant?
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>>28130127
Is it just me or did the story take a sudden u-turn?
All I remember is brother anon and sister dash working out and shit not justice anon and stoner dash.
Not that I hate it though.[spoiler/]
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>>28130753
It's to give the illusion that Anon thinks everything is under control.
When he finds out it isn't well...
You'll see in the next update.
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>>28130860
Hey, just wanted to let you know: Thanks for putting an anal dildo'ing so early on in your story. It's nice not to have to get invested in a story before something that always gives me cause for an instant drop shows up.
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>>28124375
>>28130279
>anon and twilight have no clue how pregnancy works
>they think a kiss might make her pregnant
>family gets a got laugh and a story to tell at family get togethers
>anon and twilight get embarrassment that may never go away
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>>28131812
WRITEFAGS PLEASE
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>>28103097
That just makes it smell way better.
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>>28131812
That's cute
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>>28131812
Then when they get older they have the sex for real.
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>>28130127
Gotta say I liked it at the start but not so much anymore man
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>>28117053
Fucking Lunafags ruined that one.
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>>28133201
This. Suddenly everything's gone to shit, the police are involved, and the universe takes active steps to keep Dash and Anon separated. And then there's the dialogue.

>“Hey Firefly haven’t heard from you in awhile. What’s poppin babe.”
>The fuck do you want nigga.
>“Nigga I don’t owe her shit. The hell I’m driving my ass an hour away to see some old bitch die.”
What are you, a nigger? Not even a black person, but an actual nigger?

Also good job fucking up the "black text w/ quotes = Anon's speech; greentext w/ quotes = everyone else's speech" that has been used everywhere ever for as long as greentext has been a thing.
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>>28130105
>“WHAT!!!!!!!”
>!!!!!!!
Get the fuck out of here with that.
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>>28133201
That's too bad. Was it the initial playing around of Dash and Anon that drew you in, or was it something else? I'd be interested to know.

>>28134577
You obviously didn't read my post here >>28130860 the conflict is to build greater character development.
As for the writing itself I have always indicated who is speaking at all times. This rule of 'Anon speaking can't be greentext' means nothing to me. If you don't like it you don't have to read it.

I write my stories like a book. Methodical, always hinting at something greater, but never truly giving details. That's what draws readers to a story. That mystery of what's to come.
If you're looking for instant gratification go over to Fingerbang, and stop wasting everyone's time by complaining about a single writer's story.

In the meantime I will post the second half of my update early tomorrow.
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>>28134974
lol look at the ego on this one.
>I write my stories like a book. Methodical, always hinting at something greater, but never truly giving details.
>That mystery of what's to come.
>This rule of 'Anon speaking can't be greentext' means nothing to me.
You are writing fanfiction about cartoon ponies; poorly, I might add. You sound like an autist trying to defend his autistic behaviour.
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>>28135040
As long as his story has good smut, does it really matter?
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>>28135101
I guess not, but he's still an ass.
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boop
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>>28106407
>Something that feels kinda... slimy?
>You open your eyes and tilt your head back down to find yourself looking at Limestone's face.
>Her eyes are closed lightly, seems she's either dozing or too relaxed to have noticed bumping into you.
>Her hair, while short, is still spread out in the water some of it drapes on your belly giving the impression of something slimy.
>You tilt your head up some, as your eyes follow her relaxed form on the water.
>Aside from her face, the only other thing, well things, that still protrude through the surface are the very tips of her sports bra.
>Literally the very... tips.
>Past that you note that her legs are just under, with the occasional knee breaking through the surface.
>Deep yellow stripes of sunset light streak across the clear lake water.
>You thought that one happened to drape across where limestone's crotch is.
>A moment passes before you realize that the lines above and below her waist are actually a result of tanlines.
>Two, one on each leg, are high up on her thigh.
>And one long band rests just above the very faint curve of her hips.
>The area in between is much paler, so much that the dark silver color of her damp bush seems to pop.
>Almost... draws the eye to-
>You fight the basal urges your dry spell has made you susceptible to with a shake of the head.
>You shut your eyes tight and try to force the visions in your head out.
>When you open them again you find yourself looking down directly into the two amber eyes of your sister.
>They're squinting slightly.
>Fear begins to grip your heart.
>She is going to rip you apart for thinking that you were looking at her.
>You were, but it wasn't because you-
>Your thoughts cut short as you feel a pressure on your thigh and the gentlest of grazes on your member.
>"Anon..."
>Limestone's hand is planted onto your leg.
>She silently pushes off of you with one hand while wiping her face with the other.
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>>28135804
>"Watch where you're going. You were getting water on my face" she mumbles sleepily.
>Oh thank god, that's why she was squinting!
>After letting out a quiet stream of air, you respond.
"Watch where I'm going? Maybe if you were floating like I am you wouldn't have to worry about... getting water in your eyes."
>Limestone blows a raspberry, "Too tired. Besides, it's my lake, I'll float however I want."
>You raise an eyebrow that she doesn't see because she's closed her eyes again.
"YOUR lake?"
>She hums agreeably, "That's right." she chirps.
"And uh, since when is this YOUR lake?"
>"Uh... since always Anon? I was the one who found it."
"Bullshit you found it. I found it!"
>Limestone uprights herself and spins around to face you with a furrowed brow, "You've been gone too long big brother, memory's getting fuzzy, you most definitely did NOT find this lake."
>You furrow your brow in response.
>Limestone adds a wrinkled nose to the stare-off.
>You come back with a deep frown.
>The two of you hold this stare for a while as you stalled for time to dig through your memories.
>Suddenly it hits you.
"Ah-ha! I did too find this place, because I marked it!"
>Limestone's scowl lightens up, "Wh-what?"
>You start to swim over to your sister.
>She tenses up as you approach.
>You stick your tongue out at her as you swim by and continue to the far end, by the trees.
>You hear water splashing around behind you as you assume Limestone is trailing behind you.
>It takes you a minute to remember which tree it was.
>"You plan on looping around a few more times or-"
"There!" you shout, pointing at a tree near the edge of the lake.
>Limestone swims over beside you, her eyes follow the direction of your finger.
>"What am I looking for exactly?"
>You point to the tree a couple of times.
"That tree. Right at the base of it."
>She paddles closer and further up putting herself just in front of you.
>You can feel the gentle push of the water from her swimming against your body.
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FROSTY TIME
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>>28135822
>Limestone plants her hands into the mud and leans forward just a bit more.
>You make an effort to keep your eyes above the clear water.
>"L- Lare- no, Lake? Lake Cocoa Shiba?"
"Lake Crocoshima, Limey, I named this place when I found it, shortly after we moved here. You were too cranky about having to share your room with Maud that day so I went out on my own. Back when this was just a murky small pond I named it after the Samurai Croc's hideout."
>"What?! Anon, that's stupid!" she huffs, spinning around to face you.
>You shrug in response.
"What do you want, I was a kid and I really liked that show."
>Limestone pouts, "W-well that doesn't mean anything! You could've written that anytime" she counters, sounding rather proud of herself.
>Only makes this next part all the sweeter.
"Yeah... except for the date under it. Should be a day or so after we moved here."
>Very important thing when growing up with sisters who take your stuff, name AND date things.
>Hell, sometimes even mark on the package how much is left, especially when it comes to snacks.
>Her face gets the faintest hint of red to it, "Bullshit!" she spits back.
>You wave her off.
"Go look for yourself if you want."
>Fully flustered she turns tail and plants her feet into the small bank of mud near the edge of the lake, "I will!"
>She has to jump out somewhat due to the slope of this end of the lake, Limestone's pale rear is on full display to you.
>Your jaw drops at the sight your sister is too angry to have realized she's giving you.
>Her slightly darker ring of skin around her pucker, the way her puffy lips part just slightly as she throws another leg out to climb up, giving you just the smallest hint of bright pink color against a pale surrounding.
>You tried to turn away, but the amount of butt she has despite being thin and wiry everywhere else stunned you.
>Two plump, smooth, soft mounds of flesh shift as she climbs up, tightening and relaxing in synch before your very eyes.
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>>28135827
NO, DAD NO!

>>28135829
>She eventually climbs out and runs over to the tree while you swim back to the center of the lake and try to calm yourself down.
>All this time away, they've all changed so much in that time.
>Your brain is having a hard time, especially right now, making the distinction that she's your sister.
>You hear a splash followed by small waves of water splashing against your back.
"S-so?" you ask over your shoulder, trying to keep up an appearance that everything is normal.
>While also keeping your half-hard member obscured from the one who made it this way.
>Limestone is silent.
>You turn further to actually get a look at her.
"Ah! Hey!"
>Only to be hit in the face with a splash of water.
>"So?!" she repeats your question with a mocking tone.
>You lift both hands to wipe your eyes leaving the floating entirely to your legs.
>"Whatever, you found this place first. I swam in it for longer" she grumbles.
>Your face is clear of water, you can open your eyes again.
>Limestone has her nose raised at you.
"The hell Limestone? Splashing me?! What are you, five?" you goad.
>She brings a hand up, clearly with the intent to splash you again, but you expected that and counter with a spalsh of your own.
>Limestone gasps as the water hits her face.
>She coughs and rubs her eyes.
>You can't help but laugh at your successful counter-attack.
>Before everything goes blurry and your face is soaked.
>She threw water at you with an upward swing of her hands.
>You just keep your eyes closed and blindly splash back in her general direciton.
>"Hey!" she growls.
"You started this!" you shout back.
>Water hits your face at a quick pace now and you return with a steady stream of your own splashes.
>Despite your best efforts to keep your mouth shut, you can't help but let a smile spread across your face.
>Her splashes become bigger suddenly.
>And it's only when you feel her hand graze down your chest that you realize why.
>She's closed the gap-
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>>28135852
>Her hands grab your shoulders and she puts all of her weight down on you, forcing you under the surface.
>Water goes right up your nose, painfully stinging your face.
>Bubbles from your surprised gasp all around.
>Cool water around you, then suddenly a warm surface pressed up against your nose.
>Limestone’s nails dig into your shoulders, you can feel her legs on your back and sides.
>Either she goes up, or you go down more, or a little of both happen, but the end result is you think you feel a bit of coarseness on your face before you snap to attention and push back up using the muddy ground.
>You break the surface with a gasp, water pours down your face and body.
>Limestone is laughing while trying to regain purchase on your shoulders to dunk you again.
>You raise your arms and push her hands off of your wet body.
>You splash water directly in front of you, Limestone’s squeal informs you of a direct hit.
>Unfortunately however, she recovers quickly and strikes even quicker.
>Her hands slip around your sides and travel to your back.
>You can feel her chest come into contact with you.
>You kick back and grab her by the wrists, forcing her hands back out in front of you.
>She grunts with effort as she tries to resist being pushed away.
>Limestone is weaker than you to begin with, and currently more worn out that you are .
>The end result is that she’s putting up a shit resistance.
>Limestone fusses and squirms while locking fingers with you, trying desperately to regain control.
>The sore loser emerges from Limestone and you tense up the moment you feel her heels graze along your sides.
>You are too slow to respond as she slips her legs past you and wraps them around your waist.
>Her heels dig into your back as she brings her hips in.
>Panic settles in as you realize all this playful wrestling, coupled with her grunts and groans of struggle, with eyes shut to avoid being splashed has all culminated into a throbbingly hard cock.
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>>28135860
>Limestone digs her crotch into your stomach, using your body as leverage so she can push harder with her hands.
>You are too concerned about your penis, hovering just barely below the bottom of her ass to effectively fight her off.
>This is no longer about playing around, you are actually just trying to push her off, but her competitive side has taken over.
>She doesn’t seem to care that your cock is prodding her butt cheek as she squirms around on you.
>Limestone brings her chest in, mashing it against yours as she pushes back on your hands forcefully.
>Your elbows are really far back now, almost touching it feels like.
>Her eyes burn with an intense desire.
>She’s gritting her teeth as she begins to sink you into the water.
>Limestone’s face now hovers just inches above yours.
>You can feel her panted breaths on your face.
>Hear breathing is loud and labored.
>Until it isn’t, it quickly begins to ramp down as she slowly lets off with her hands, allowing you to push her back some.
>The intensity in her eyes fades as the space between you two grows.
>You can feel a downward force on your shaft, right at the base as she untangles herself off of you.
>Limestone doesn’t say anything and you stifle the gasp to not draw any attention to it so you’re pretty sure it was just her leg and she didn’t notice.
>She floats back some, pulling your hands along with her for a bit before realizing that she was still holding tightly to them.
>”Oh! S-sorry…” she mumbles, finally releasing your hands and allowing the blood to flow back into them.
“It’s alright…” you mumble back, clenching and unclenching your fingers to get rid of the tingles faster.
>Limestone swims over to the front end of the lake where your clothing is.
>She starts to get out before pausing suddenly and looking back at you over her shoulder, “Could you turn around please?” she asks.
>Is this really the first time she’s been conscious of not having any bottoms on?
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>>28135852
Unf all that buildup for that top quality lime...
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>>28135874
>You do as she asks and turn around.
>You hear the water splash and drip along with a rustle of clothing and a couple of mumbled swears.
>”Okay” Limestone calls back at you.
>You turn back around after having been putting intense mental effort towards doing hard math.
>It was to little effect, you’re still at the very least at half-hard while looking up at Limestone in her soaked through clothing.
>”Well? You coming?”
>You swallow.
“Y-yeah yeah, go on ahead I’ll just be a second.”
>She raises an eyebrow at you.
>Fuck…
“Got a uh… c-cramp! Yeah ah! Oooh! Just need a second…”
>Buy it.
>Buuuuy it.
>Limestone looks you over while you fuss over your ‘cramped’ leg.
>She rolls her eyes and starts walking back to the house, “Whatever…”
>You sigh in relief until you hear her speak up again.
>Her back is still turned to you, but she’s no longer walking to the house, "If that cramp keeps bothering you later, let me know okay?”
“Uh, what?”
>”It’s probably my fault you got one, so I should help you if it’s still a problem right?”
>You struggle to formulate a response.
>She takes your silence as whatever answer she did and continues back to the house.
>You paddle over to the edge and plant your feet into the mud at the bottom.
>Half mast and full on conflicted feelings you tread water while contemplating what Limestone just said.
>She must’ve been genuine right?
>She actually bought the cramp excuse and is feeling guilty.
>Because Limestone couldn’t actually mean…
“Pfft! No, c’mon Anon!”
>You feel a bit of relief at hearing you nudge yourself out of that weird spot.
>That’s your oldest sister and you’ve just had no time for yourself these last few days.
>Your lower head is getting antsy, that’s all.
>You glance around, Limestone is pretty far out, and likely wouldn’t hear or see you at all if you slipped behind those trees on the other side of the lake…
>Nah, what are you an animal?
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>>28135888
>You can definitely find some time tonight.

>Holy hell you didn't find any time tonight.
>Pinkie thankfully separated out the laundry after it dried, something your dumb ass forgot to tell her to do.
>Limestone didn't say anything about her towel, since she had already started her shower by the time you got home, you assume she either found it in the bathroom or in her room.
>The walls being really thin in that bathroom made you feel too aware of everyone outside of it to properly get in the mood.
>And immediately after showering, you were getting called to dinner, so you really only had enough time to throw your dirty clothes into your room and head downstairs.
>Dinner went by pretty well though, all things considered.
>Mom had really stepped up her cooking game in your absence, or Pinkie is helping out in the kitchen.
>You'll have to remember to ask about that later.
>Apparently your new bed is set up, learned about that during dinner.
>Didn't even notice when you were scrambling to wash Limestone's towel or when you had stepped in to toss your dirty clothes.
>Marble and Pinkie took care of that for you today, JUST Marble and Pinkie, they were very clear about that for whatever reason.
>Maud was mostly quiet, like usual, but also... not?
>She was hunched over and mostly picked at her food rather than sitting up and actively following the conversations like she usually did.
>Limestone was different today as well.
>She was either quiet or boisterous, but nowhere in between.
>And a lot of it managed to relate back to putting you down.
>How much more work she did than you, things like that.
>At first you had chalked it up to your lack of experience, but after a couple of subtle swings your way you figured she's still upset about the lake thing from earlier.
>After dinner everyone started to go their separate ways.
>You figured you might finally have a chance if you maybe went to the other bathroom, as far as you know those walls didn't get replaced.
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>>28135902
>You got interrupted on the way there however.
>"Anon?" a voice called out from the end of the hall, "Come here would you?"
>The gruff in Limestone's voice as she asked you to come over made it sound much closer to a demand than a question.
>You were starting to sweat the outcome of going in her room at this time of night entailed.
>"Mnn."
>She tenses up around you.
>"Ahh, no..." Limestone whispers into your ear.
>You can feel her body quivering under your efforts.
>"Yes."
>Damn it, she's putting the pressure right back on you.
>"Yes!"
>You're both getting close.
>"YES!"
>Her body is trembling now.
>"YESYESYESYE- OH! Ohhh..."
>Owww, ear...
>Both you and Limestone go limp as the ending comes.
>You lean back against the edge of her bed, with a very pleased smile on your face.
>Limestone ragdolls herself above you, putting her lips right beside your ear.
>You can hear each breath as she slowly inhales and exhales.
>One of her hands lays limply across your chest.
>You both remain like this for a time, you're basking in the afterglow too much to really note how long it was.
"Wanna go again Limey?"
>She gives you a playful smile, "Definitely."
>You sit back up straight and scoot your butt on the carpet to plant your back against the edge of Limestone's bed.
>Limestone takes her hand off your chest and holds it up.
>Once you're settled in you give her a nod and she lowers her hand, now clenched around one side of her controller with her other hand holding the other end.
>She lowers her arms so the controller rests against the center of your chest.
>Limestone squirms from her belly-laying position on the bed to get more comfortable.
>You can feel her breaths on the top of your head as you scroll through the track select screen.
"You know, Limey, I'm surprised."
>She hums questioningly.
"You haven't one a single race against me yet and you're still all smiles and sunshine."
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>>28135910
>She slaps you on the chest, "I know I was kind of bad about losing when we were kids, but I've gotten better about it."
>You can't help but snicker at that.
"Yeah, sure..."
>She blows air through her nose, "What? I have! You just said yourself I was all smiles and sunshine."
"I did, but you got pretty aggressive back at the lake when I proved you wrong about having found it first."
>"Well that was different! It wasn't because I was wrong, I was-"
>You feel her tense up around you, the plastic controller in her hand creaks a little and you can see hew knuckles go white.
>"Sh-shut up... she huffs, "Just pick a map would you?"
>You pat her arm twice before taking your controller back into both hands an picking the track.
>Limestone loosens up immediately after your comforting pat and you both watch the screen intently as you wait to get that green light speed boost.
>Limestone called you into her room to give you back the CDs she managed to hold on to.
>Which was pretty much all of them save for The Vanilla Strikes, she didn't lose them but she refused to give them to you.
>While you were there you were hit with wave after wave of nostalgia.
>Almost everything you used to own was still there, just moved around.
>You even got a closer look at some of the posters you had only gotten a glimpse of earlier this morning.
>Turns out they're not very pristine up close after all, they're all torn and taped back up together.
>Limestone explained that your "cousin" Applejack brought her dog over when she came to pick up Pinkie for some school thing, Pinkie took a while and the dog got curious when she wandered into Limey's room.
>Hell of a dog, not a single poster piece is missing or wrinkled like it had gotten soaked in saliva, so while it hurt to see the state of your posters, you were grateful to your sister for going through the effort of putting them back together.
>She blushed from the complement and quickly pushed more things from your past onto you.
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the green just

keeps
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>>28135917

Goddammit this is killing me.
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>>28135917
>Eventually you broke out the old console and two controllers and wound up playing with her on top and you on bottom. because it made the horizontal split screen less confusing, just like you did when you were kids.
>You play until it gets really late into the night.
>Todays events were really tiring and trying and you are running on fumes both physically and mentally at this point.
>You get up and bid Limestone a good night.
>"Wait, where are you going?"
>You stand at the door, with your hand on the handle.
"To bed? I've got my own now."
>Her eyes widen.
>"No! Y-you can't go to bed now!"
>You're taken aback by her sudden outburst.
"Whoa, Limey, what's the big deal?"
>"Maud is asleep."
>You shrug.
"So? I've got my own bed now. I won't even bother her."
>Limestone looks genuinely terrified as she shakes her head.
>"I would NOT take that chance."
>You snort.
"C'mon, I remember she hated being woken up-"
>"No Anon, you don't understand. She's different now, WORSE now. You do NOT want to wake her up."
>You roll your eyes.
"Yeah? Then why the hell did you not only risk waking her up this morning, but you actually woke her up?"
>Limestone bites her lip.
>Her eyes lower, "That was..." she struggles for the words for a moment before sighing and continuing, "A very very stupid mistake I made because I was upset... and we're both lucky she took it so well."
>Wow she is serious.
"You're serious aren't you?"
>She looks up into you eyes briefly before lowering them again and nodding.
>You blow air through your nose.
"Great, so I guess it's the couch for me then..." you grumble.
>"No way Anon! That couch blows, not even Pinkie can sleep on it after a snack binge."
"Well, the hell am I supposed to do then?" you huff.
>She slides over on her bed and pats the spot she was just sitting in, "Your old bed is plenty big enough for both of us. Mattress is newer than Maud's too."
>...
>It takes some doing but eventually you both get settled into the bed.
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>>28135943
>Limestone's citrusy shampoo tickles your nose.
>You didn't notice it while you were playing, too swept up in the nostalgia, but now that you are free of distractions.
>You realize how surrounded you are by distractions.
>The feminine smell on your pillow, the sheets, the body right beside you.
>Limestone's body heat radiating onto your side closest to her.
>The sound of her soft breathing.
>It's in this cocoon of distractions that something very important dawns on you.
>You forgot to masturbate...

Okay, that's it for now. More will be coming soon, the next update should be pretty fun, a little on the short side maybe, but I think it'll be fun.

Pastebin's updated here: http://pastebin.com/Y2enwxeD
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>>28135972
>you forgot to masturbate
I hate getting that feel when I'm out or at work.
>"Anon, something troubling you?"
>'Yeah, boss, I uh, I forgot to pull it before coming in today.'
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>>28136002
You must have a good relationship with your boss, I'm jealous.
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I want Sunset Shimmer to sniff my underwear
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>>28135972
F-Fuck, Frosty.
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>>28136136
Nigga, you got the insane dubs
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>>28135972
>You forgot to masturbate...
I like where this is going.
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>>28136283
Kindly refrain from posting the worst Doctor in this thread. It's like tumblr wrote the new scripts.
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>>28135972
Based
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>>28134974
Your story is like eating a cake that claims to be strawberry flavor then finding out its actually vanilla.
And I don't like vanilla cake
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>>28135101
Does his story even have incest in it?
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>>28137676
I hope so, until then.

pic related.
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>>28137706
kek what a hack.
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>>28130105

> Be Rainbow Dash
> And you’ve got a splitting headache.
> Normally you would have skipped school, but your mom wasn’t having any of it.
> Getting arrested again will do that to her. Not to mention Anon somehow got thrown in with you. You’ve yet to ask him about that though.
> Your punishment was essentially being put under house arrest for the next two weeks. It could have been worse, but being home wasn’t going to be very exciting with Anon for his birthday tomorrow.
> School was boring and long. As per usual. You tried talking to Anon, but he was stone walling you for some reason. Apparently getting arrested made him pretty upset.
> If you could remember anything about what happened yesterday you could apologize if you needed to; which you probably did.
> Once you were home he just went straight to his room without saying a word. Something was definitely up.
> Unsure of what to do you give his door a hesitant knock.
>“Anon? Can we talk?”
“You sure you’re sober enough to try?”
> Ouch. He’s really mad.
> “Anon please I know I messed up yesterday, but I swear I’ll make it to you tomorrow?”
“Tomorrow? Why tomorrow?”
> “Because it will be your birthday of course. It’ll be the perfect time to make up.”
> You hear him slowly crawl out of his bed and walk up to the door, but he doesn’t open it.
“Have you really lost track of that much time!? Were you really that far gone that you couldn’t keep track of what day it was?”
> “What do you mean?”
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>>28138280

“It’s Tuesday Dash! My birthday was yesterday! Even after you promised me that we would spend some time together!
“I really thought we were going to start being closer again like old times! Before you decided it was cooler and more important to do drugs and get drunk all the time with your so called friends, but I guess I was wrong.”
> You could hear his voice crack at the end. Trying his best not to break down. It was at that same time you could feel your own heart break.
“I thought I was doing the right thing by saving you from those thugs, but I don‘t even know anymore.”
> You stand there quietly against his door. Hoping desperately that he would open it to look at you.
“I want to believe that you’re the same sister that I’ve always known and loved, but it feels like every day you keep slipping further and further away from me.”
> There was no mistaking the pain in his voice and it was tearing you apart.
“Do you even realize how much debt you piled up from those guys? DO YOU! Who knows what they would have done to you had I not shown up.”
“Everyday I made sacrifices for you. Everyday I covered for you in school. Doing practically half of your homework, and gathering assignments for you. Whenever we fought I would always let you win. No matter how trivial the argument was.”
“But now I’m done.”
> Done? What does he mean by done?
“After today. You’re no longer my sister.”
> Silence was all that followed. Every fiber in your being screamed for Anon to open the door.
> To let you see the pain on his face.
> To apologize for everything you’ve put him through.
> To just say you were sorry.
> But the door stood firm.
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>>28138300

> You could feel yourself slouch to the floor. Holding your hand over your mouth to muffle your own wails of sorrow.
> Anon.
> Please.
> Let me in.
> I’m sorry.
> Your mouth tried to form words, but all you could do was weep.
> He couldn’t do this. Who would you fall back on now that he was gone.
> You had no one.
> Even your so called closest friends had abandoned you to that place to rot away.
> For the first time in your life you were alone.
> You couldn’t be alone. You needed somebody. Anybody.
> As the gravity of your situation gradually sunk in, so to did the feeling of loneliness.
> You felt cold. Isolated from the rest of the world. Discarded and forgotten. Was this what death felt like?
> No
> You would have welcomed death. To save you from the nothing you’ve become.
> It was at that moment you knew that you were merely a shell of the person you once were. The person once named Rainbow Dash.
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>>28138304

> Be Anon
> Time seemed to have stopped.
> You couldn’t hear anything. Life was frozen in place, and your body had gone completely numb.
> You didn’t want it to be this way, but you had no other choice.
> Then, why did you feel so dead inside? Why was is that you couldn’t face her? And most importantly, why couldn’t you stop crying?
> Your sister had done nothing but neglect and use you, so why did you feel this way?
> It felt like you were experiencing the seven stages of grief all at once, and it made you want to throw up.
> Where were you going? What were you doing? Was life even worth living anymore?
> These thoughts flooded your mind demanding answers when you had none.
> You couldn’t stay like this. You could feel yourself spiraling down a path that had only one end.
> Grabbing your jacket you write a note and leave it on the kitchen counter.
> Mom was going to be upset when she got home, but you couldn’t stay here.
> Grabbing the keys you take the car to the only other place you felt at home.
> Ringing the doorbell you wait until a middle aged woman answers the door.
“Hello Anon- oh. Are you alright honey? You look pale.
> “Hi Mrs. Hooves. Is Derpy home?”
“Yes she is. Please come in dear.”
> “Thank you.”
> Mrs. Hooves calls out to Derpy to come and greet you, but you just head straight for her room. Her door opens just as you reach for the knob.
“Anon? Oh my goodness! What’s wrong!?”
> “Can you talk for a bit.”
“Yeah of course sit down.”
> Taking a place on her bed. Before running your hands through your hair to try and regain your composure.
“What happened Anon? It looks like you’ve been crying.”
> “I have.”
> Is all you reply with. Unsure how to respond further.
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>>28138308

“Did someone beat you up?”
> “A lot of things have happened Derpy. I’m just need to be away from home right now.”
“From home? Did something happen between you and Rainbow Dash?”
> “You could say that.”
“Well it sounds like you have a lot on your mind. Maybe you should start from the beginning.”
> “I’ll try.”
> The next few hours seemed to both drag on, and at the same time fly by. As each detail of your ordeal makes itself known to her.
> How you started off by visiting your dying grandmother. When you went hunting for Dash in some ghetto neighborhood. Finding her and ultimately getting arrested with her. Before finally ending on the somber note of disowning her as your sister.
“Anon you can’t do that she’s your sister.”
> “I know Derpy, but you don’t understand-”
“You’re right I don’t understand, and I never want to either. What is wrong with you!”
> Then something unthinkable happens.
> She slaps you.
> “I may be an only child, but I would never dream of leaving my sister.”
> Never in your life had you imagined Derpy being angry with you. It was scary.
“You’ve known each other longer than I have, and you suddenly want to give up on her just because things got too difficult for you. What the fuck is wrong with you!”
> She slaps you again, and this one was even more surprising than the first.
“The Anon I know is strong. Someone who never gives up on a friend; especially his sister.”
> You could tell from her voice that she was on the verge of crying.
“He’s a guy who never shies away from getting hurt; because he knows that he’s protecting someone else. Never giving a second thought to his own well being.”
“I want that Anon back. Not the Anon who shrivels up and cries when he thinks the world has turned it’s back on him.”
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>>28138315

> She begins pounding on your chest. Not very hard, but strong enough to show defiance.
> It was at that moment you wrap your arms around her back and hug her.
> “I’m sorry Derpy. It seems no matter what I do I just tread over your feelings. Please forgive me.”
“You idiot. It’s not me you should be apologizing to.”
> She was right. You needed to make things right.
> “I can’t thank you enough Derpy. I don’t know what I’d ever do without you.”
“Just promise me you’ll never do this again. I don’t think my heart can take it.”
> “It’s a promise then.”
> With a heavy heart you say your farewells. Not wanting to leave, but at the same time knowing you had no other choice.
> By the time you got home it was already dark.
> You weren’t sure how mom was going to react. Not well you imagine.
> “I’m home.” You say tentatively.
“Anon come here.”
> Oh boy.
> Your mother was sitting alone at the dinner table. The lack of food smells indicated to you that they had not eaten yet.
> “I realize I went against your orders mom, but me and Dash had a fight and I needed some comfort.”
“I know. She’s been in her room crying ever since I got home. What I’m concerned with is the fact that you explicitly disobeyed me after I told you never to leave home after school. What part of that don’t you understand?”
> “It’s not that I failed to understand it mom it’s the fact that me and Dash are going through a rough patch in our lives and you don’t seem like you have any intention of helping us.”
“Not helping you! I’m the one who works fifty hours a week to keep this family afloat, and I’m the one not helping!”
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>>28138317

> “Money means nothing mom. If we don’t come home to somebody willing to listen to our problems then you’re not helping the real problem.”
“How dare you question my parenting! I’ve been raising both of you for almost ten years now. How do you think I feel having to come home every night to a couple of kids who are throwing their lives away!”
> “I’ve been as straight laced a kid as fucking Jesus Christ, and I’m throwing MY life away!”
“The both of you have been nothing but a burden ever since Dash was in middle school. I can’t shield you from that shady life of crime forever.”
> “I know you can’t, but you have to stop worrying and trust we’ll make the right decision.”
“How can I do that when you and Dash just got arrested yesterday? You literally have no way of proving to me that I can trust you to do the right thing.”
> “That’s not true and you know it! You’ve trusted me to make it through high school up until this point. What’s changed?”
“You were arrested Anon. That’s going to be on your permanent record. No matter what you do now people will know that you’re a felon.”
> “I was never convicted mom. It’s only one strike. It’s never going to happen again.”
“Well what about your sister. She’s one strike away from being locked away. What am I supposed to do then?”
> “Mom if you knew how bad this last incident got to her you would know that she’s given up on those crooks.”
“You don’t know that. She’s been in this situation dozens of times what makes this one any different.”
> “It’s because of me.”
“What do you mean it’s because of you?”
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>>28138319

> “It’s that argument we had earlier. I told her that I wasn’t going to help her anymore, and we both broke down.”
“You? Giving up on your sister. I never thought I’d see the day.”
> “Yeah well I made a mistake, and I’m going to rectify that situation now.”
“Hold on we’re not done talking.”
> “What’s the point? All we’re going to do is continue yelling at each other. I’m sick of it. You can decide whether or not you want to punish me again. I don’t care.”
> Not looking back you make your way to Dash’s room. Thinking what you wanted to say to her.
> (Knock) (Knock) (Knock)
> “Dash it’s me.”
> No response.
> “I’m coming in.”
> Carefully you push the door ajar to see her curled up into a ball in her bed.
> As you approach you could hear her faintly breathing. With no signs of emotion to tell you how she was feeling.
> You take a seat next to her, but she doesn’t move.
> Sitting there in silence you wait. You don’t know what for, but you wait.
> The right time to speak, a gesture, something. The length of time grows, but the tension never goes away.
> “Dash, I-”
> You pause to ponder what you want to say, but now was not the time to hesitate.
> “I messed up. I shouldn’t have said all those things to you. You didn’t deserve it. I thought that maybe my life would have been easier without you. But I know that’s not true.”
> She continues to lay there. Still unmoving and unresponsive.
> “It wasn’t till someone slapped some sense into me did I understand it. That you’re the only reason I’m still able to continue living this life. It was also when I realized that I’m what keeps you going.”
> “Had I thought about anything but myself I would have seen it. Now here we are. Both scared and alone.”
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>>28138323

> “I know what I did was wrong, but could you find it in your heart to forgive me?”
> At last she removes her head from her pillow. Looking at you with tears in her eyes. Seeing her like this was making you well up with tears in turn.
> (Bam)
> She tackles you while holding you tightly. Sobbing gingerly into your shoulder.
> It was too much for you to keep it in anymore. As you too cried with her.
> It wasn’t until she looked up at you that you could feel yourself calm down.
“Why? Why are you so nice to me?”
> “What do you mean?” You say a little puzzled.
“You have every right to be angry with me Anon. I’ve been a terrible older sister to you, and yet here you are apologizing like you did something wrong.”
> “But I did Dash. I said all those awful things to you that I can never take back.”
“You just did you idiot, and here I was thinking I lost you forever.”
> Placing a hand on her cheek you gently rub away a tear from her eye.
> “I’m sorry I made you worry Dash. I promise I’ll never leave you again.”
“But you never have Anon. Even after all those times I pushed you away you always came back.”
> “And I always will. You’re the most important thing in the world to me.”
“Okay you need to stop.” She says as she pushes off of you.
“You’re going to make me cry again.”
> You just chuckle softly before planting a soft kiss on her forehead.
> “You’re so cute when your embarrassed.”
> That comment gets you a cannonball pillow to the face.
“Oh shut up. I’d kill you if I didn’t love you.”
> “Love you too sis.”
> She slouches back into her bed. With a content look on her face. As you both just stare at each other with a couple of big smiles on your faces.
“I guess that’s it then.”
> “Sure seems like it.”
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>>28138326

“No more late nights of getting drunk and missing school.”
> “Done.”
“Spend more of my free nights training to stay in shape.”
> “That’s always important.”
“Make some new friends.”
> “As long as they’re hot.”
> She throws another pillow at you; which you duck underneath.
“Try and get on better terms with mom.”
> “Probably a good idea.”
“And most importantly spend some quality time with my favorite brother.”
> “You coming on to me?”
> She jumps you again and starts punching your arm.
“Oh my god shut up. You’re such an ass.”
> “Ouch. Come on sis you’re going to leave a bruise.”
“Suck it up you’re a tough guy.”
> “No please I bruise like a banana.”
“Then I’ll kiss it to make it better.”
> True to her word she plants a quick kiss on the spot where she’s been waling on you.
“Better?”
> “Yes actually.”
“Good now get out of here. I need to take a shower after all this mushy feely crap.”
> “Alright.”
> As you get to the doorway you steal one more glance at her.
> “Just remember. If you ever need me I’ll be here.”
“I know.”
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Xg2vMrDzoXM
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Okay. There you have it. Everything I wrote during my vacation just for you guys.

I really liked how Derpy's scene turned out. Teared up a little as I wrote that and the break up with Dash. Was considering putting a little smut here at the end, but thought that it would be rushing things.

What do you guys think?
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>>28138353
Did good bra, did good.
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>>28103029
You know I was drawing Sunset wearing his underwear on her head while playing with her butt, but I thought that would be silly
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>>28138353
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>>28138395
DOOOOO IT!
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>>28138401
Fuck yeah science feels.
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>>28138404
But she'd be wearing it on her head like a mask. That's /a/ or /h/ stuff
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>>28138353
Excellent so far.
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>>28138395
D O I T
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>>28135860
>>Her slightly darker ring of skin around her pucker, the way her puffy lips part just slightly as she throws another leg out to climb up, giving you just the smallest hint of bright pink color against a pale surrounding.

>>Cool water around you, then suddenly a warm surface pressed up against your nose.
>>you can feel her legs on your back and sides.
>>but the end result is you think you feel a bit of coarseness on your face

Frostybox, no, I have things I need to do today.
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>>28139552
Masturbate to the thought of skinny dipping with your hot sister?
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>>28139747
That's the thing, Anon; I was only supposed to do that ONCE today.
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>>28139773
>Only once
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>>28135972
such cozy descriptions

and then masturbation
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>>28135972
"[I] forgot to masturabate."
I'm pretty sure I read the same words in an online hentai comic.
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>>28138353
Better than the last part for sure but seriously you seem to have cut out like half of it
That or all the characters are bipolar and just flip from happy to sad and back at the drop of a hat
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Need more Shycest
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>>28141814
>Last week your Aunt Fluttershy started taking confidence courses from some guy named "Iron Will".
>Today, she invited you over after school.
>"Come here, honey, and give your Aunt Flutters a kiss~"
>Fluttershy, completely naked, is laying spread-eagle on the couch you used to take naps on when you were a kid.
>Her fat, meaty nether-lips drip arousal all over the couch cushion.
>When you do nothing except stand there in shock, she crosses her arms (propping up her soft tits) and frowns at you.
>"Well?" she asks, oozing confidence and command, "Why isn't your cock pumping my womb full yet?"
"Wh...?"
>Aunt Fluttershy sighs and stands up, striding across the room and gripping you by the hand.
>You're honestly too shocked and confused (and aroused) to put up much of a fight as she forcefully strips you of your clothing.
>With a smile on her face, Aunt Fluttershy leans down and caresses your balls.
>"THAT'S better."
>She grabs you by the cock and leads you upstairs towards her bedroom.
>"Let Auntie Fluttershy teach you ALL you need to know to make some of your classmates VERY happy."
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>>28141988
Gave a semi/10
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>>28141988
>>28142088
semi bump
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>>28125065
I actually don't know if this is /incest/ material but I think I just thought of a good prompt to write to: Sunset mom is struggling internally over whether to tell her baby boy son about not originally being human or keeping it a secret. Her friends think he has a right to know but she's still on the fence. It gets so bad that things start slipping out without her realizing it
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have there been any stories yet of a pony sibling doing anal for the first time because that's the "responsible" way to do incest?
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>>28135972
>that last line
10/10
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>>28117271
FOUNTAIN SNATCH
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>>28143725
I'll take one large summer squash
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>mfw limestone was jealous of maude making anon "reek"
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>>28138353
good story, BUT the jedi tales man...when are they coming back :(
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>>28145593
None of them actually had sex with Anon yet, did they?
I wonder if it's building up to a grand foursome.
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>>28145894
That would be nice, I can just see Pinkie going around all over her sisters and brother, just playing with them until its her turn.
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>>28145593
Ayyy, I think that's the first time I've seen anyone acknowledge that, I'm glad to see you picked up on it Anon
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>>28146447
>>28145593
What did she do? Did Anon smell like Maud?
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>>28146490
They slept in the same bed and Maud rubbed all over her desired mate while they slept, claiming him as her own for the family. These mating rituals of the rock and pie lovers is so interesting.
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>>28146490
In short yes, Maud was Anon's little spoon for the second night in a row and he picked up her scent on his clothes and skin which carried over into the morning when Limestone went to wake him up
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>>28146525
>>28146532
Fascinating.
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>>28146532
So what's everyone's depivmctions of the Pie family? Since we're on the Limestone route right now, I envision her a bit like this except paler and snaller breasts.
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>>28146706
Holy shit, that's hot!
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>>28146706
Normally, I try to match the characters up with good designs from fanarts I've seen.

I assume that's what you mean by depivmctions.
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>>28146763
That too is my fetish. Sadly I don't have many beautifully toned girls of MLP, so I'm woefully short on supply.
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>>28146706
I'm not too strict on descriptions, one because I'm bad at them, and two because I think it's good for the reader to envision them how they wish unless their depiction is very relevant to the story. It's mostly the former reason though admittedly

That said though, here's the way I envision the sisters and will likely gravitate towards when describing them, but feel free to take my lack of descriptions to see them however you want

Maud is thicker than the average girl, but it's a nice mix of fat and muscle. If she were to flex you'd see definition, but relaxed you can only barely see it. Basically Samantha Wright

Limestone has a nice athletic build, a body built by having a very active job in her later years but had a waifish body up until that point so she has a firm muscular booty now, but barely any breast.

Pinkie is thicker like Maud. A lot of that was due to her snacking and living a less active lifestyle after moving away for a while to work in a bakery though. Her bust and hips are the biggest, though their size is obscured some by the slight bit of pudge on her belly. She's curvy, in the truest sense of the word.

Marble is a bombshell, sizable chest, sizable hips, round butt, the works. She got his with the genetics jackpot as she just kind of blossomed that way while Anon was gone. She hides a lot of her features though by dressing plainly and keeping her hair draped over her chest often.
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>>28146851
>Samantha Wright
>Mikasa
>Fertility Goddess
>Shy Mega Babe
I want to waifu all your waifus Frosty.
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>>28120268
Come back damn you!
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>>28145894
They gonna dry him up if that´s the case
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>>28147108
oh jeez
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>>28146851
>>28146907
>muh dick

Why are you the best.
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Anon was suppose to be
an archaeologist.
Wonder if he had a Indy Jones kinda life
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>>28146851
>tfw your headcannon matches up with senpai
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>>28146851
>Marble is a bombshell, sizable chest, sizable hips, round butt, the works.
OH SHIT
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>>28145886
I don't know, but I'm in no position to start it myself.
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>>28141988
M-more?
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>>28147108
You say that like Pinkie doesn't have a magic Viagra fruit punch stand ready for it. This is going to be a good thing.
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>>28135972
>You are comfy.
>God DAMN are you comfy.
>Nice supportive bed under you.
>Snuggly warmth curled up beside you, half on you just about.
>You raise your pinned and mostly asleep arm off the mattress and plant onto your partners lower back.
>Slowly your hand trails downward until the tips of your fingers touch on the cleft of her butt.
>Your fingers spread apart wide as your hand travel just a little further down, about as far as you can stretch it, to get a nice handful off her soft supple flesh.
>There’s just a lovely tingle in your loins caused by a gentle pressure on and around your shaft.
>It feels so good.
>A low grunt escapes your lips as your mind becomes less clouded with sleep.
>Your hips thrust of their own accord, thigh pushes against the one on top of you but more importantly the pressure on your crotch changes too.
>The gentle spoke becomes harder, more frequent.
>You thrust more, but weakly, mostly a gentle rocking of your hips against the pressure, trying to get more out of each stroke.
>Ffffuck, it feels so good, even through your shorts and underwear.
>Your other hand, the one not currently lazily groping a handful of firm supple ass, is laying right next to your waist.
>It would be hardly an effort to slip your bottoms down and get an even better feeling out of all this.
>You hear a soft mewling of pleasure come from beside you.
>Her voice is… well not sweet exactly, more gravely but sweet in its own…
>She tightens her legs around yours, you can feel the heat from her crotch on your thigh.
>Her ass feels… you trail your hand up again, fingers beg to slip under the band of her bottoms as they graze over them but you resist the urge.
>They travel higher up to her lower back, your hand travels over her side and touches gently around her hip.
>Or where a hip should be instead of a faint curve.
>Your mind is now speeding to alertness from the slow crawl it was doing before.
>You open your eyes.
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>>28148655
>There’s a sizable bulge poking up out of the sheets around your crotch.
>A shifting bulge.
>You throw the sheets back and find a dainty tanned hand on your stiff bulge.
>Her fingers are split, two on the left side of you, two on the right.
>Palm is pressing down on your cockhead, and her two fingers apply pressure to the sides.
>Your hip thrusts of its own desperate accord, her hand reacts like it was doing before, it moves down with the upward thrust and the tips of her fingers graze over your balls for a brief moment.
>Her palm presses down on your shaft and the sides of her fingers work the base before everything returns back to the start.
>An uncomfortable mix of panic, pleasure, and disgust begins to course through your veins as you follow the hand up to the arm.
>It’s when you reach the shoulder and catch a glimpse of slivery hair in your periphery that your brain catch up to speed and makes you completely aware of the situation at hand.
>Limestone’s head has travels over from your shoulder and now rests more on your chest.
>Her body is still in about the same position, just more on you now and just barely squirming against you.
>Her head is turned more towards your leg opposite her so you can’t see her face.
>The small damp puddle on your chest gives you reason to think that, thankfully, she’s still asleep.
>You quickly rip your hand away from her back like she were a hot stove.
>You look over her sleeping form at your hand, knowing where it’s just been and now completely unsure of what to do with it.
>It’s… tainted!
>All of you is tainted.
>Your hips thrust partway, you immediately resist the motion and respond by planting your ass firmly into the mattress.
>Your mind races for solutions.
>Limestone is curled all over one half of you now.
>Oh god, your thigh is so warm you think it’s sweating…
>Limestone lets out a small gasp.
>Your cock throbs as she continues to provide her weak ministration without your added trusting.
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>>28148655
sheeiiiiiit
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>>28148717
>These aren’t solutions asshole this is only making you harder.
>You need to think of how to get her off-
>Oh lord, each breath of hers out carries a faint moan to it.
>Can’t think!
>Act on instincts!
>You jump out of bed, rudely awakening Limetone, “Hey! The hell Anon?!” she growls as you sprint for the bedroom door.
“Bathroom!” you whisper shout back.
>You quickly, but quietly at the very end, shut the bedroom door behind you and almost collapse into a heap.
>Instincts bad, still, they haven’t improved from yesterday, they’re still bad!
>Your member throbs painfully in the confines of your cloth prison.
>You scurry for the bathroom, making sure to pace quietly outside of your bedroom door.
>The bathroom door shuts behind you and you immediately drop your shots and boxers.
>Your hand wraps around your shaft, the head is already slick and shimmery with your pre.
>The small bead of milky fluid grows bigger with each stroke.
>Your breathing becomes heavy to compensate for the fact that you have to be quiet.
>Should’ve gone to the other bathroom but it’s too late to do anything other than this now.
>You grab onto the sink for support, your legs are actually trembling as the pleasure and pressure builds up in your loins.
>But it only goes so far.
>All you’re doing is focusing on your own cock.
>You’ve been relying on the internet for too much.
>With no other options at hand, you close your eyes tight and try to imagine something, anything to get you off.
>Nice big round… t- ass.
>Tanlines, sexy clean ones all around the crotch, just the crotch, you certainly have nothing against darker tits.
>Dark smooth skin on a girl's chest.
>Hard pointed nipples, darker areoles around them, slightly bumpy with arousal.
>All on a soft flat chest.
>Your stroking gets faster.
>The scent of citrus fills your nostrils.
>You think back to Limestone’s body being wrapped around your waist.
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>>28148770
>How it’d be no great effort to have slipped her down further.
>Could’ve poked something else other than her cheeks.
>Could’ve wrapped her around your cock as well as your hips.
>Her struggling grunts of play become ones of pleasure as you thrust into her fuzzy plump lips.
>All the sounds of splashing coming from your bodies slamming into each other with wild abandon.
>You imagine her hands digging into your back.
>Her voice calling your name in a low gruff slur as she grinds on top of you.
>The sight of her amber eyes piercing through the cover of darkness.
>Her face completely flushed red with color.
>Your hands grabbing hungrily at her flat hips, fingers digging into her flat butt as you trust up into her.
>The smell of sex and the bitter smell of alcohol assault your nose.
>You blink your eyes open and stop just before you hit climax.
>What… what the hell was tha-
>The door flies open as Pinkie barges into the room with you and shuts the door behind her quietly.
>You are frozen there, like a deer in headlights as Pinkie turns back around.
>Everything slows.
>Her eyes widen as they settle on you.
>Slowly, you see them travel down.
>Lower and lower until they settle around your groin.
>You look down also.
>Your a thin strand of pre is dripping down from the tip of your cock, one hand is still firmly planted around your shaft, the same hand that was grabbing handfuls of your little sister's ass.
>Her mouth opens slowly.
>You wince in advance as you prepare yourself for what’s going to happen next.
>”Oh holy crackers YES!” she whisper-cheers.
>…What?
>Pinkie closes the gap between you both and places a hand on your arm.
>Her other hand plants down on your hip closest to her.
>Everywhere she touches you is like lighting, tingles shoot immediately back to your spine.
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>>28148836
>She shoves you away.
>Caught off balance you stumble and just barely manage to step into the tub without falling over.
>The moment you pass through Pinkie grabs the curtain and throws it shut.
>”Im so sorry I barged in while you were getting ready to shower Nonners but I REALLY need to tinkle!” she explains.
“Wh-what?” is all you can manage to respond with.
>”I know I know, I’m super rude but you have to-“
>Pinkie groans.
>Through the curtain you can see Pinkie’s shadow.
>Her hands come together near her crotch and she does a little squat while shifting her weight from one foot to the other.
>You can see the outline of her shadow tremble.
>”Marble and I had some bladderbuster size sodas to keep ourselves up while we were playing a boardgame. We fell asleep on the floor and woke up realizingthattheadvertisingisprettyspoton!” her words got faster and faster as she went on.
>The pajamas around Pinkie’s lower half drop and you hear the seat creak as Pinkie plops herself down onto it.
>A brief and very uncomfortable moment of silence passes before you hear the beginnings of a trickle followed by a long low groan of relief from your sister, “Oooh yeah…” she shudders, “I thought I was seriously going to pop Nonners.”
>You listen on with the most confused boner in the world.
>Pinkie’s squeaks, gasps, and received sighs as she squirms around on the toilet, knowing the cause for them all leave you very conflicted.
>Certainly doesn’t help when she says things like “Oh god, it feels soo good to just let go!” and “Such sweet relief!"
>”Ha! Wow! Look at me go!” she says with a giggle, “Nonners, hey, I bet I could fill a swimming pool eh?”
>You are completely caught off guard and her stupid joke manages to slip through.
>You snort which makes Pinkie laugh which makes you laugh and by the end of it you feel at least comfortable enough to speak.
“Why didn’t you go to the other bathroom?”
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>>28148879
>Pinkie leans back against the tank relaxed, you can see the silhouette of her bust rise and fall, “I did, but Marble beat me to it. I just barely made it in here, sorry for barging in on you again Nonners.”
“It’s… fine.” you mumble back.
>Pinkie lets out one last sigh of relief before doubling over to tidy up.
>She slips her bottoms on while almost jumping back up to her feet.
>Pinkie’s silhouette approaches the shower curtain.
>You watch her lean forward some, the curtain protrudes towards you right where her face is, “Mmuah! Hope you have a nice relaxing shower after all that big bro~ I’ll see you soon~” she sing-songs before leaving the bathroom.
>You fall bak against the cold wall of the tub.
>Your cock lays limply against your thigh.
>Pinkie gave you just the distraction you needed to shut down the lust that was clouding your mind.
>Your hand begins to travel south.
>A wistful sigh escapes your lips.
>Only she shut you way down.
>Now you just feel weird and awkward.
>You need to go get real porn, or just spend some time away from Limestone.
>You exit the tub and slip your bottoms back on.
>The hallway is quiet, it’s not as early as when Limey woke you up yesterday but it’s still pretty early.
>Now what?
>You cast a glance into Limestone’s room, the door is still firmly shut like you left it.
>She’s gotta be pretty mad with how you woke her up.
>You really don’t think you can deal with her right now, just over all, not even because you pissed her off.
>You look over to your bedroom.
>Maud is sleeping still, she must be.
>You know she used to get mad if she was woken up, but Limestone made it seem almost world ending now.
>But… she was fine the last two nights, upset but nothing on the level that Limestone seemed certain of.
>Maybe she just caught Maud on a particularly bad day and it stuck with her.
>At the very least this gives you your own bed...
>No more unfamiliar familial bodies on you.
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>>28148934
>Your hand trembles as it hovers over the door handle.
>C’mon Anon, it’s nothing, Maud was fine the last two nights.
>You slowly open the door.
>It starts to creak once it opens far enough, you immediately freeze in place and had your breath.
>You hear nothing.
>You force yourself through the small opening you’ve made so far with only minimal squeaking and delicately close the door shut behind you.
>Through the dark of the room you see Maud’s sleeping form in the middle of her bed.
>She’s laying on her side, curled up with a pillow draped over her back.
>You can’t help but smile a little at the sweet sight.
>Your eyes travel to the bed on the opposite side of the room, it’s smaller and theres just a bunch of mismatched sheets thrown on top of it.
>The floorboards make only the faintest of creaks as you tiptoe your way over to the bed and carefully lay your body down onto it.
>You roll over to the center of the bed and practically melt onto it.
>Your head falls back and a comfy sigh escapes your lips.
>This is nice, lonely, but theres something nice about that right now.
>Finally you have some time to yoursel-
>A hand plants itself over your mouth.
>You yelp, but the sound is muffled.
>The moment you try to get up a weight bears down on you.
>Your hand is pressed down on the wrist, securing it against the mattress.
>Legs are pinned down at the thighs by a warm weight.
>Face is smoothed deeply into your pillow by the hand over your mouth.
>Two bright blue eyes twinkle above you.
>Pinkie’s face comes into focus as the adrenalin in your body winds down.
>She raises a finger to her plump lips, you can see what looks like fear in her eyes.
>Those two bright blue orbs dart to the side, her head turns around to look over her shoulder.
>Pinkie’s pajama top is only partially buttoned.
>From this angle you can see straight down her chest.
>Pinkie shifts her weight, her torso lowers onto yours.
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>>28148976
>Her breasts slowly smoosh and expand as she brings her torso closer.
>You can feel her warm belly on your crotch.
>Once she is laid over you, she rolls and grazes down your side to lay against your side.
>Pinkie slowly removes her hand from your mouth.
“What are you-“
>Only to quickly slap it back on.
>She taps one finger against her pursed puffy lips a bunch of times in quick succession.
>You blow frustrated air through your nose.
>She gets the hint and removes her hand again.
“What are you doing here Pinkie?” you ask in an even quieter whisper.
>Pinkie shifts around on you for a second, “Marble locked me out.”
“She did what?”
>”She locked me out of our room. She’s still mad at me” Pinkie says with a pout.
“What?”
>Pinkie sighs, “We both woke up really needing to go right?”
>You nod.
>”Well we kinda got stuck at the door, she wouldn’t let me through so I poked her left boobie. It’s where she’s most ticklish.”
>Oh no.
>Pinkie winces as she looks at the realization dawning on your face, “Yeah… not my best move, but hey, she managed to slip through and bolt for the bathroom which let me get to yours.”
>Yeah, can’t really blame Marble for-
“Wait, who cares? What are you doing in my bed?!”
>Pinkie shushes you, “You’re gonna wake up Maud. You REALLY don’t want to wake up Maud.”
>Her too? Seriously?!
“I’m going to wake up Maud? You’re going to wake up Maud. You shouldn’t even be here, this is my bed” you hiss.
>Pinkie pouts again, she grabs two handfuls of your shirt and pulls you towards her, “B-but you weren’t using it last night Nonners! I figured you were going to go back to Limey’s room so I slipped in here.”
>You sigh, “Alright, fair. I’m here now, so you gotta go.”
>Pinkie tilts her head, “Are you crazy? I took enough of a risk getting in, I can’t go!” she pleads.
>Her bubblegum scent tickles at your nose.
>Her curly hair tickles at your neck.
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Mama Applejack or Fluttershy green when?
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>>28149013
“I-I’m sorry. You have to go.”
>Pinkie throws herself over your chest and buries her face into your other shoulder, “It’s sooo early” she whines, “I want to go back to sleep.”
>You grab her by the shoulder and force her up and off of you.
>You look her sternly in the eyes.
“You’re a baker! Getting up early is what you do!” you huff.
>She boops your nose, “Was a baker.” she corrects, “I get up whatever and whenever I want now, so long as dad doesn’t need my help with anything.”
>She can tell you were not swayed by her playfulness and goes right back for the pity.
>Her hands press gently onto your chest, she gives you the bottom lip quiver, “Please bro bro, I don’t have anywhere else to go.”
>You roll your eyes.
“Pinkie” you respond flatly, “You literally have a room to go to. Or at the very least a couch downstairs.”
>She scrunches her lips, “NO! I hate that couch, please Nonners, just let me stay-“
>She climbs on top of you.
>You can feel her weight on your crotch, her pressing firmly against yours.
>You squirm under her, trying to get the leverage need to push her off but she counters every move with one of her own
“Get off!” you hiss.
>”Shush Nonners! You’re going to wake up Maud.”
“YOU’RE going to wake up Mau-"
>You try to push her away, but she manages to divert your hands directly into her chest.
>Pinkie bites her lip as you accidentally squeeze down in a confused attempt to retract your hands.
>Your face becomes very hot at the same time that your blood begins to run ice cold.
>"BOTH of you are going to wake up MAUD." a low grumble comes from across the room.
>Everything stops, Pinkie’s crotch is pressing down on your quickly shriveling cock.
>Her breasts are so very soft and warm in your hands.
>Pinkie’s nails dig into your chest, just enough to send tingles rather than pain radiating through your body.
>Behind her, you both hear the muffled creak of Maud’s bed.
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>>28103029
>Mom Rara will never give you a uninterested hand job while working.
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>>28149075
>Pinkie’s eyes widen with fear, you can feel her tense up.
>You look around Pinkie to see Maud shift slightly.
>Her upper half springs up in bed which.
>You start to yelp but a hand quickly finds itself over your mouth, stifling it.
>Maud’s face is obscured by a curtain of her hair, still flat.
>All you can see is the slight downward curve of her lips.
>By any other standards those are the lips of someone who is slightly upset.
>On Maud, the sight makes your heart sink.
>The room is completely quiet, save for the almost growls of Maud’s exhales.
>You and Pinkie remain paralyzed as you are in fear while Maud continues to fume across from you.
>"Gonna... look at... feldspar all over the place..." Muad grumbles.
>Pinkie slowly chances a turn of her head to look over her shoulder.
>It quickly whips back around and she looks slightly relieved.
>”I think we’re okay Nonners. She’s still asleep.”
>You shoot glance from your sister, to your other sister, back to the younger one.
“Asleep? She’s asleep?”
>Pinkie nods, “Hear her snoring?”
>You listen, all you can hear is that faint growl on her exhales, her mumbling has stopped.
>That’s what she sounds like when she’s snoring?
>”We’re lucky. Now we have to be super careful, not to move too much more. Her vision is based on movement.”
>What?
“Movement? What is she a dinosaur?”
>Pinkie smiles, “No silly, I’m pretty sure mister big brother Archeologist would know that Maud’s not a dinosaur. She can see still things too, but movement is what matters right now.”
>Even under threat of… whatever it is Maud would do, she can still find the willingness to crack a jok-
>WOAH!
>Pinkie grinds on your cock briefly as she brings her hips closer to your thighs.
>She presses her hands onto your chest and pushes her chest back and away from your hands, “Too much of it and we’re going to have a bad time, right Nonners?”
>Bad time.
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>>28149104
>The muffled creak of springs under you dive her point across.
>Yeah, very very bad, this is bad, all of this is bad.
>Your cock being nestled in such a warm place is especialy bad.
>You put your hands on Pinkie’s shoulders and help her lower herself down on top of you.
>Fear and regret swirl around in your chest as you now have an uninterrupted view of Maud’s bizarre sleeping form while Pinkie nestles her head into the crook of your neck.
>You honestly don’t know what it is your afraid of by looking at her, with that smallest of frowns on her face, but it’s probably the uncertainty that makes it grip so tightly in your chest.
>You close your eyes tight and try to swallow the fear down.
>Under the comfort of darkness you hear Pinkie’s soft breaths.
>You can feel them lazily drape over your chest.
>Her body slowly sinks into yours.
>You hear what sounds like a catch in her throat, but quickly realize that she’s also snoring the you hear more and more of them with each breath.
>She’s already asleep.
>Thanks to Maud, your cock is limp with fear.
>This bed is nice.
>Pinkie is dense like Maud, just as heavy as her too, but softer.
>Much softer.
>Your eyes relax as you drift off to sleep again with a face covered of bubblegum scented curls.

Okay, that's all for now. Pastebin's updated here http://pastebin.com/Y2enwxeD
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>>28149097
I need this.
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>>28149155
Will you ever stop cockteaseing us?
I'm starting to lose hope.
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>>28149519
Everyone does.
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>>28149097
Green when?
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>>28103029
>Tight White™ brand underdrawers
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>>28149531
Thus far the teasing is all story related, not done just because, Anon is still pretty resistant, but the thoughts and certain memories are very much in his head now and that's kind of what I've been working towards. I hope that makes sense.

That said, to answer your question yes I will stop. And if I've become too much of a bother, maybe I could take up one of these prompts and write a short lewd?
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>>28149097
Yes plz. Uninterested sex is best sex.
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>>28150048
We still need cute teasing with Marble. Dont skip straight to lewd when we still need sexual frustration with cutest pie sister
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>>28150048
Honestly dude, I could go to literally ANY other greentext meme arrow story on this board and get porn n' penetration galore.
I can read 10 to 100 more teases like this just fine. In fact, I enjoy this more than I would just straight up porn.
Don't rush anything, for the love of God. I've got cold feet while writing before and rushed shit out to keep Anons interested, and I've regretted it ever since.
Just keep doing what you're doing.
Genuine question though, Pinkie totally knew what Anon was doing, right?
There's no way she actually thought he was finna shower.
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>>28150048
Lewd? Like Anon bones his sisters - followed swiftly by The End?
Satisfaction not guaranteed.

You know what would totally be better?
A big, sudden final conflict to overcome, followed by happy, cute ending, THEN followed by lewd epilogue.
An epilogue so lewd, you'll be ashamed you wrote it.
Yeah, all of the ducks are nicely in a row, and then you fuck the ducks. That's how it works where I come from.
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>>28150663
>"That's right, I'm going to FUCK the fear turkey."
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>>28150129
I just have this feeling Marble is going to end up being the most sexually repressed out of all of them.
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>>28148879
>you hear the beginnings of a trickle followed by a long low groan of relief from your sister
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>>28138353
I have to say, I really am enjoying the green because the concept has so much feels potential. As an only child who has always wanted a sister, not even for thread-related reasons, I can't imagine the immense grief I would have if the sister I loved and supported unconditionally was destroying herself with drugs right in front of me. That said, I would really try stretching out your scenes more. As someone said, everyone was sad and then they were happy again. Let the feels have time to sink in.

My other suggestion is that I hope you don't do what I think you're doing and make it some over the top drama about bullies and gangs all trying to beat up Anon. I'd prefer you to focus on the two main characters and talk more about Dash struggling to overcome her addiction and stuff like that, but that's just me.
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>>28149155
YOUR STORY IS GETTING SO LEWD
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>>28147964
are you not gonna update until sarge comes back?
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>>28150974
This. I've read so many greens where good guy Anon is trying to be on the straight and narrow but gets caught up with gangs who all make it their first priority to fuck him up. Just off the top of my head several come to mind, such as naoh's story. Hope you go a different route
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>>28150745
>Anon goes to bed laying back-to-back with Marble, spaced 3 feet away and with a pillow in between them; only then is Marble comfortable enough to let him sleep in her bed with her
>Anon wakes up to the sensation of his balls being sucked and a sisterly pussy mashed into his face
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>>28146851
>Her bust and hips are the biggest, though their size is obscured some by the slight bit of pudge on her belly. She's curvy, in the truest sense of the word.
Frosty, you always do a good job of making my dick diamonds.
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>>28150048
No short lewds, no distractions, just keep writing - it's amazing.
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>>28152180
This.
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>>28103029
Jesus those are some stiff underwear. Did he use that pair as a jizzrag for 3 months straight and is that why Sunset's after that one particular pair?
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>>28149155
LEWD/10

You write all the sisters so well. I can't wait to see how you do Marble.
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>>28103029
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Frosty? Stupid question, but how far along are Anon's sisters with their feelings? "Someone is making my no-no place tingle and it might be my brother", or "I'm going to act with the goal of getting my brother's cock-meat into my vagoo-goo"?

And maybe if I asked you really nicely could you maybe please write a non-canon scene from Limestone's POV from when she was kinda jacking off Anon and/or left alone with her thoughts after Anon ran out of her room?
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>>28149155
Holy shit, Frosty. Lewd as hell, here. BTW I love your pacing - keep it up.
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>page 8 bump

Post green about lovingly impregnating your horse sister.
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>>28155148
>page 8 again

Anons confirmed for faggots.
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>You will never have a nice wank into your trusty hand towel before bed.
>You will never throw it into your laundry hamper before passing out.
>Your sister will never sneak into your room and use your cum rag to get off.
>She will never lick the fresh cum off and finger herself with it.
>She will never do all of this right next to your sleeping body, secretly hoping you will wake up and fuck her right there.
>You will never find out shes pregnant with your child and wonder how.

Left it vague in case anyone wants to run with it, excluding spoilers if need be.
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>>28154115
Well the first answer I don't know that I can answer fully without spoiling my plans, but I guess I can say both are happening.

I'l think about it, because you asked so nicely.

>>28154549
S-sempai! You l-love my... my pacing?! I'll try not to disappoint you
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>>28150974
>>28151126
I really appreciate this feed back guys. This is exactly the type of response I look for when I write. The Star Wars story I have now is so long it's hard to keep people's interest. Now that I'm starting fresh I have a clean slate to build off of.

>>28150986
That was my plan, but it seems Sarge might not update for sometime now. He's made no announcement to the steam group, and I'm not sure that I want to start it up again right now. Real life for me has a lot going on, and I don't think I would be able to contribute as much to the thread as I want to. I can hardly contribute to THIS thread as it is.
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NEARING TIME FOR NEW THREAD
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>>28156133
bamp and love specifically for you Frosty

keep it up
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The Dickening is nigh.
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>Anon's sister tries to convince Anon to play doctor with her and claims that she doesn't know how sex works
>She's 24 and Anon doesn't fall for it
>She tries using cutesy bullshit like calling his cock a "lollipop", but no dice
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>>28103029
Bump
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>>28159614
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>>28159088
What, is Anon gay?
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>>28161273
>"Wow! That's the biggest lollipop I've ever seen! Why are you keeping it hidden in your pants?"
"Fuck off."
>"C'mon Anon, stop hiding your candy from me!"
"Bon Bon, that's my penis."
>"W-wow, what a weird name for, uh... for candy."
"That's because it ISN'T candy, Sweetie. Stop making this wei-"
>"For fuck's sake, Anon, just stick it in me already!"

I'd actually read a story where Anon is just jaded and tired to the whole situation. Like, he isn't attracted at all to his sister (like most of us are; let's be real for just a minute) and incest isn't one of his fetishes. His sister, on the other hand, desperately wants his cock. It would be pretty fun to watch his sister try and trick him into touching her or letting her touch him. also: page 10 bump
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desperately waiting on greentext bump

is there anybody out there
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>>28162107
Be the change you want to see, Anon.
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>>28161825
>his sister try and trick him into touching her
wew lad
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>>28162107
Lurking.
>don't have incest tendencies towards sister
>miss her since she moved though
>thread makes me remember how spoiled and retarded she acted
>"Anon. Anoooon."
>'What.'
>"...Can you put this in the sink for me?"
>'Get up and stop being lazy, dork.'
>"I caaaaaan't."
>'Oh god, fine, jesus.'
>Take her cereal bowl
>Finish cereal milk in it
>"Gross, you're gonna get my gerrrms now."
>'It's ok I don't think retardation is contagious.'
>"RUDE."
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>>28162107
Well it's partway done, but I'll post what I've got so far

>>28154115
I decided to go with the former more so than the latter.

>You inhale deeply.
>Legs squeeze his thigh tightly against you as you drink in his scent.
>It’s incredible, honestly.
>There’s no difference in the detergent, he used the same one you do, the one sitting on the washer down the hall but-
>You bury your nose into his chest again and drink him in again.
>Your heart pounds in your chest and you think your vision goes blurry for a while.
>Because it’s him the smell is just intoxicating!
>Anon’s thighs tense for a moment.
>You slip your hand up a little higher and gently knead the head of his cock through his bottoms before pacing your palm back over it.
>He lets out a small gasp before returning back to breathing heavily.
>Your lips are ablaze as you lose yourself in the rhythm of his pleasured breathing.
>The feeling of his hot member under your palm.
>HIs firm, warm body tucked away in your arms.
>And his-
>You look up, his eyes twitch, deep in sleep still, his face calm and relaxed, and his neck fully exposed.
>You shift around, pressing down on his cock and straddling more of his thigh as you bring yourself closer.
>Nose gently prods at the soft flesh, your nostrils flare.
>You let out a shuddered breath as tremors run up and down our spine.
>GOD, his smell!
>No detergent, no fabric softener, no dryer sheets, just his pure unmasked scent.
>Anon grumbles.
>Your heart skips a beat and you quickly shimmy back down and nestle your head on his chest.
>He shifts around under you.
>Shoulders.
>Arms.
>One leg, then the other.
>He lets out a sigh.
>His breathing becomes softer.
>You start to panic.
>You pushed it too far.
>Then you feel it.
>A gentle tap, that’s all.
>On the palm of your hand.
>The palm currently hovering over his crotch, trembling slightly with a mix of fear and excitement.
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>>28162212
>Your eyes glance down, you can see a dark circle forming on the cloth where the bulge that signifies his cockhead is at.
>Your hold your breath as you wait, maybe its just your lust addled mind making you think-
>It happens again!
>You saw it this time!
>His hips raise, bringing his cock towards your hand, tapping the tip against your plan.
>You feel the faint sliminess he left behind on you.
>He wants this…
>He wants your touch.
>Anon wants his little sister to sate his lewd desires.
>You bring your hand closer, press his head down against his belly with the palm of your hand.
>Anon makes a noise, somewhere between a moan and a grumble.
>Your fingers graze down to rest on either side of his shaft.
>Slowly, you curl your fingers, stroking the sides of his thick member up to his head.
>You rub his head with the base of your palm a few times before uncurling your fingers, stroking back down the sides of his length.
>Your body shifts as Anon tries to lift the arm pinned under you only to give up moments later.
>Just as you bring your thigh up higher onto his, allowing you better leverage to grind your wanting pussy against him, you feel a warmth on your back.
>You gasp and tense up, planting you cheek firmly into his chest.
>The warmth spreads along your upper back, slowly trailing lazy circles down.
>You bit your lip and hold your breath as you focus entirely on feeling every bit of his touch on your body.
>Tingles radiate out from every place his hand touch.
>You can hear his heart beating, quickening as his hand travels lower, all for you.
>His fingertips prod curiously at your waistband.
>Your heart leaps into your throat and you want nothing more than for him to rip your shorts down, panties can be pushed aside so you couldn’t care less what he does with those, and ravishes all that you have to offer him.
>But no, they travel further down, much to your dissapoint-
“Ha~…” you squeak out, bitting your bottom lip to stifle any further sounds.
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>>28162224
>Your body is on fire, jolts of excitement shoot up your spine with each handful of your ass he takes.
>HIs hips thrust hard.
>You quickly return your attention to Anon’s cock.
>His slickening cockhead presses into your palm, you give him a firm squeeze with two of your fingers this time.
>You swear you could feel his cock throb against you.
>This continues for a time, the tingles coming from your crotch are beginning to become unbearable.
>Your thighs are slick and hot with your own arousal.
>Rubbing his thigh against your groin is okay… but it’s only teasing at your desires.
>Like blowing a stream of air on an itchy spot, feels kinda nice, but what you need is a long hard scratch.
>You can barely keep your voice down, each breath out comes as a moan.
>The desire burning in your heart only seems to intensify when his hand begins to trail upwards.
>HIs fingers dance around the band of your shorts.
>Finally!
>He… trails up your side.
>Is he going to slip his fingers in up there? S-so he can slip his fingers in-
>Anon retracts his hand away form you.
>You can hear his heartbeating faster and faster.
>He shifts around under you.
>The damp spot on his chest where you drooling while you fantasized being fucked by your big brother comes in contact with your cheek.
>You continue to stroke him, hoping that maybe he’s getting ready to-
>You are lifted unceremoniously up and fall down hard onto an empty spot on the bed.
>A feeling that you can only describe as sexual whiplash hits as Anon rolls out of bed and scrambles for the door.
“Hey! Th-The hell Anon!?” you bark.
>”Bathroom!” he shouts back before closing the door shut behind him.
>You fall back onto the cool spot on your bed, laying sprawled out with an intense heat burning in your chest, quickly fading tingles all over your body, and a soaked mess between your legs.
>Bathroom…
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>>28162229
>You slip it of your room and tip-toe over to the bathroom door.
>You pause for a moment, contemplating your choices here.
>He could be telling the truth, your pussy yearns to be pumped full of his hot liquid, but not THAT kind.
>A muffled sound can be heard, just a step over by the door, coming form the thin wall.
>A low deep moan.
>You creak the door open just enough to see inside with one eye.
>And boy do you get a sight!
>Anon is hunched over the toilet, grabbing the sink counter for support while vigorously stroking his cock with the same hand that groped your ass.
>His shirt oversized shirt is bunched up in his mouth, exposing that deliciously toned stomach.
>”Mnn… L-limestone…” he whispers.
>And that was all you needed to hear.

Okay, that's all for the moment. Gonna have dinner then come back and finish this up tonight. Probably more canon Pie family tomorrow.
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>>28162248
Fuck, Frosty. Non-canon Limestone is lewd as FUCK. Thanks for posting all this green, sempai. Writing isn't an easy job and our mutual hangouts have been a bit stressful lately, so I know it isn't all fun and games all the time.
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>>28162248
excite
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>>28162248
How did you become so based?
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>>28162248
Shit Pinkie is going to raise all kinds of hell after she ruins Limestones show and then sleeps on top of him.
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>>28162248
Frosty, I love you.
But I humbly ask that you update your Pastebin with the first part of the Double Suncest story and your missing incest stories.
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More please
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>>28162248
Okay I'm back, lemme finish this non-canon one-shot and, going by posts left, this thread

>Anon jumps when he hears the door shut behind you.
>He looks so cute, like a half naked sexy deer in the headlights.
>His lips move but no words come out.
>The room is silent.
>You tuck your fingers under your shirt and lift your arms up.
>His eyes dart down to your bare chest, back up to your face, then back down again.
>The furious blush on his cheeks makes you feel giddy inside.
>You love watching his beautiful green eyes drink in your form.
>You take one step towards him.
>He takes on back.
>You stand in place and he stops too.
>Giggles begin to well up in your chest, he is just too adorable.
>You extend a hand and place it over his, the one still on the counter.
>He look from your hand back to you.
>Your hand gently caresses his, fingers diligently poke and prod every nook and cranny of his sweaty hand.
>You slip your fingers under his wrist and lift his hand up.
>He lets you by making his hand go limp, giving you full control.
>You let out a shuddered breath as you slowly lower his hand onto your bare chest.
>He looks into your eyes and you stare right back into the beautiful emerald orbs.
>You feel his warmth on your body, right next to your heart.
>You watch his eyes widen, the darkness of his pupil spreads, quickly overtaking the colorful parts.
>He steps closer and so do you.
>He places his other hand on your hip, and you his.
>Anon gives your breast a gentle squeeze, your back arches and you let out a gasp.
>Your fingers curl and dig into the smooth flesh of his hip.
>He winces slightly.
>You slip your hand under his oversized shirt and quickly rip it off, tossing the obstructive fabric to the floor to join his bottoms.
>He curls a finger into your shorts.
>Anon shoots you a worried look.
>You bite your lip to keep from screaming at him to just do it, just take you right here and fucking now.
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>>28163808
>He takes the much more restrained hint and pulls your shorts down as far as his hand will travel.
>You shimmy them the rest of the way off.
>And now you stand somewhat the reverse of yesterday.
>Topless with your beautiful older brother naked.
>The two of you tucked away in a quiet private place.
>You graze a hand down his chest, feeling every nook and cranny of his tight body.
>Until your fingers meet the coarse patch of his pubic hair.
>He shies away from you despite the regular throbbing of his thick member.
>You offer him a gentle smile and step closer to him.
>He looks down your chest, drinking your body in with his hungry eyes as you slowly curl your fingers around his firm veiny cock.
>Anon closes his eyes, a weak moan escapes his lips.
>You rub your thumb over his tip, wiping away a fresh bead of hot pre with each pass.
>Slowly Anon’s hand travels back from your hip, his fingers dig into the supple flesh of your ass.
>You shiver and give his shaft a firm squeeze in return.
>He proceeds to caress and knead the small mound on your chest.
>You look away from his face as he does it.
>You know what guys are supposed to like.
>And while you’re proud to be doing okay in the trunk department…
>Your headlights are pretty outdated.
>You chance a look back up and are hit with a wave of confidence.
>He can’t take his eyes off of your flat chest.
>HIs fingers poke and prod.
>You almost fall due to weak knees as he traces circles around your sensitive areolas.
>The room is getting so hot, it feels no different than being in here after having taken a scalding shower.
>The room is filled with the sounds of your heavy breaths, his low grunts, your breathy moans, and the rhythmic schlick as you stroke the entire length of his cock.
>Anon starts thrusting in time with your jerking.
>Long strands of thick creamy pre begin to cripple out of his hole.
>Your heart is racing as you work his shaft.
>You can feel him getting thicker.
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>>28163817
>His breathing becoming more labored, he’s having a harder time keeping tis moans quiet.
>You can see his thighs bulge as he tenses them.
>He’s close.
>You are too.
>Just from his hands working your chest.
>You can feel trickles of arousal trailing down your bare thighs with your shorts no longer there to stop them before they traveled this far.
>Your head is swimming in a sea of lust.
>All sorts of depraved acts you could do, you want him to do to you, flash in your mind.
>Above them all you have a single urge that burns in both your heart and your loins.
>Anon lowers his head, you can feel his body tense up and tremble.
>HIs cock feels like the biggest it’s ever been in your hand.
>You act quickly, forcing his hard member down just as the first rope of cum explodes from his urethra.
>A streak of thick white cum drapes across your belly.
>The second pump lands right where it’s supposed to.
>Your back arches and it takes all the focus you have to keep yourself upright as his head presses on your most sensitive area.
>Your other hand has the front of your panties pulled down, exposing your soaked pussy to the warm outside air.
>Not for too long though as you quickly forced the head of his cock into the space between your slick panty and quivering lips.
>You were too rough however, making Anon yelp as you forced his cock downward and also pushed yourself over the edge when his wet head rammed against your sensitive clit.
>The resulting orgasm sends tremors all over your body.
>You can no longer think.
>You feel his cock pulsing.
>Each drop of his seed filling your burning crevice, cooling the desire.
>Feel his cum trickle down your bush, over the sides of your panties, trailing slowly down your things.
>Your fluids mixing together into a hazy white puddle on the floor.
>You ride your orgasm out for longer by grinding the tip of his cock against your sensitive swollen clit.
>Anon starts to fall back and you fall forward into him.
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>>28163832
>HIs cock slips out of your panties and you let the waistband slap the fluid shut against you.
>He grabs at the wall to hold the two of you upright.
>Your forehead rests against his shoulder, you keep your eyes down.
>HIs wonderful manhood softens in your hand.
>You gently graze your hand up and down the length of his cock.
>Nursing it some after regretfully being a little rough with it.
>Anon’s breath is hot on your head.
>Your drink in the heady scent of his sex as you caress his member.
>Once what seems like the final drop has formed at his tip, you prod his sensitive head with the tip of your finger, wiping up the last milky pearl of semen.
>Anon, now having recovered somewhat doing that slow stroke session, stands up tall.
>You stand up too, tilting your head up to look into his eyes.
>He watches with lustful eyes as you bring the small dollop of his cum to your lips.
>Anon swallows as he looks on.
>His eyes widen as slowly as your lips part, he focus entirely on you as your tongue extends out of your mouth.
>One long strand of saliva trails down the tip of your tongue and lands directly onto his creamy dollop.
>Your finger follows the strand up.
>Anon’s eyes begin to burn with an intense lust as he watches your lips pucker firmly around your finger.
>You pull back, making a quiet pop as your finger exists your mouth, only thin spots of saliva remain on it.
>HIs taste is incredible.
>Bitter and salty, you shouldn’t like this combination but it sends your heart a flutter.
>Your can feel your lips quiver as a new lust builds in your core.
>You lock eyes.
>His beautiful emerald eyes look deeply into yours.
>No words are exchanged, they don’t need to be.
>The only sounds that can be heard are the muffled smacks and pops as your lips come together, each with the intent of trying to devour the other whole.
>HIs hands caress and squeeze.
>Yours rake and dig.
>You push him against the wall, he grunts in pain but only retaliates with his tongue.
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>>28163843
>You lift your leg, wrapping it around the back of his butt and thigh, desperate to mount him, you lean into his chest and try to hop up to throw the other leg over.
>He hums disapprovingly into your mouth.
>You hum questioningly back.
>He wraps his arms around the small of your back and was you backwards.
>You travel back and back until your heel bumps into something hard and cold.
>Anon hands travel further south, grabbing to rough handfuls of your ass.
>Your moan loudly into his mouth, puling him tightly against you.
>He pulls up on you, leaning forward and forcing you to release him and throw your arms back to support the both of you.
>Your hands find the wall and below that the-
>Yet dawns on you suddenly what he was getting at and you waste no time in submitting.
>You climb up onto the toilet seat and use the tank on top to support your upper half.
>Anon breaks the kiss and attacks your neck.
>HIs groin moves away, your body immediately screams out in defiance of not having him grinding on you anymore.
>One of Anon’s hands travels to your back, supporting you up while the other slips a pair of fingers under your panties.
>He rips the soaked underwear down, they fall wherever, probably around your ankle, you’re too focused on puling his hardening member into your exposed pussy to care.
>His hips slam against yours.
>You slip your legs around his sides and dig your heels into his back.
>Anon’s hands firmly grab you by the hips, fingers extended and digging into your ass cheeks, pulling them apart as he grinds his cock over your cream-coated lips.
>You tighten your legs, using his hips as support so you can free one arm.
>Your fingers comb through his scalp, grabbing a handful of hair.
>He bites down and pulls back one of your nipples, engorged with arousal, as you pull his head up.
>You cry out as his teeth ‘pop’ off your stinging teat and moan into his mouth as the tingles of pain quickly become ones of pleasure .
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>>28163855
>Mouth right back where it belongs, you release his head and place both arms back onto the tank.
>Anon’s cock is now fully erect, and completely drenched i a mixture of both of your fluids.
>He lines his tip to your entrance.
>You moan loudly into his mouth, as he easily passes through your engorged lips.
>Your body tenses up, heels dig firmly into his back.
>This is it.
>You can feel the bristles of his pubic area brushing against yours.
>The heat from his gonads on your pucker makes your shiver.
>His tongue intertwine around yours, doubling down on your immoral embrace.
>But the both of you are long past concerns of morality.
>This is about deeply seeded carnal lust.
>An expression of the deepest kind of love possible.
>One that demands sacrifice of modesty, complete trust in your partner.
>Your brother, Anon, he’s the only boy you’ve deemed worthy of releasing every inhibition for.
>With each pounding thrust.
>Bite of the lip.
>Dig into sensitive flesh.
>You both share equally in this heated exchange.
>Anon’s cock spreads your walls wider than any toy you used in his absence.
>Hits deeper than you could muster the courage to go.
>If you thought the itch was scratched as he pumped his seed into your damp panties, then that spot was numb.
>Your mind is going blank as he pounds into you.
>Each slap of his balls against your asshole sends jolts of awkward pleasure rippling up your spine.
>This is what you wanted earlier, in the lake.
>To feel this beautiful body drive feverishly into you.
>Know it as deeply as it knows you.
>You open your eyes.
>Directly before them, just inches away are two bright emerald jewels.
>Twinkling with the same deep carnal love you feel swelling in your heart.
>You can feel his cock swell.
>Your walls contract tightly around him, desperate to squeeze out every drop contained in his sack.
>Anon’s face contorts as his body trembles with desperation.
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>>28163865
>You wrap your legs tighter around him, allowing him only the choice of going deep or deep into your thirsty cunt.
>With one final thrust, he hilts as far inside you as he can.
>You feel him shake against you.
>The throb and push of his cock as it fires off rope after rope of his thick hot seed.
>A warmth radiates out from deep in your core as you imagine his urethra overflowing your womb.
>Your body begins to go limp, the sensations bring you over the edge for a second time.
>You throw one hand at his shoulder, the other arm bends and you start to fall back.
>Anon catches you and pulls you up to his chest.
>Your arms immediately pull him in close.
>You focus on the pounding of your heart, and the feeling of his in his chest.
>He breaks the kiss and you immediately bury your face into his sweaty neck.
>Each breath of his sour, musky smell only prolongs the dull haze in your mind as you send trickles of fluid down Anon’s leg.
>He holds you long enough that you are able to catch your breath and regain some basic thoughts running in your head again.
>You can feel his arms shaking with exhaustion against your back.
>You push back from him ad motion to the ground with your head.
>Anon takes the hint and slowly squats down with you until your rump hits the cold lid of the toilet.
>With much hesitation, he pulls out from you.
>You can already feel his climax dripping out of you, pooling into a mix of lust on the lid.
>He steps back, looking down at you with loving eyes.
>You low your gaze to his crotch directly in front of you.
>His cock dangles at half-mast now, still dripping with both of your juices.
>You bring a hand to his hip and pull him closer.
>He presents his cock for you.
>You open your mouth and slowly take him in.
>Lapping at every inch that passes through your lips, mixing your climaxes with saliva to make a thick bitter mouthful.
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>>28162164
>"Anon! Anon!"
>Your sister Bon Bon bursts into your room, rudely interrupting your fap session.
>Her shirt is missing, and her breasts jump and jiggle as she makes her way over to you.
"Bonnie?! What the fuck! G-get out!"
>You let go of your cock and scramble to find a blanket to cover yourself with, but you aren't fast enough.
>Bon Bon leaps onto your lap and hugs you tight against her.
>"Anon, help! Oh, god, Anon!"
>Bon Bon's shoulders heave as she sobs loudly into your neck.
>"I... I think... I was t-touching my b-breast... an-and I th-think I felt a l-lump!"
>Your blood runs cold.
>Cancer?
>Your sister might have cancer?
>No.
>Please, God, no.
>Bon Bon pulls back and grabs your hand, which she pulls onto her left breast.
>"Feel it! Feel it, Anon! P-please, I... please, just t-tell me if you feel it too!"
>You do her one better.
>You grab both of her breasts and caress them, squeezing the tit-flesh gently all over.
>In your panicked state, you even tweak her nipples as well; you figured that you can't be TOO careful, and what if she has NIPPLE cancer too?!
>You aren't thinking clearly.
>You keep your eyes locked on her tits, trying to make sure you cover every inch of her chest.
>A small part of your mind notes that she has a very nice pair; not too big, not too small, and nipples that are just the right size to suck on.
>"Y-yeah, just like that."
>Oh good; you're doing it right.
>"Keep it up, big brother..."
>How long does it take to check for lumps?
>"Oooh~ So rough... naughty..."
>You slow your squeezing and pinching and slooowwwly look up at your sister.
>She has the lewdest expression on her face; heavy-lidded eyes, biting her lip, and a nice heavy flush on her cheeks.
>"Why'd you stop?"
>Fuck's sake.
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>>28163873
>You drink it down happily, savoring the taste of his cleaned cock in your mouth for a moment before pulling him off you with a loud pop.
>”Oh!” a voice squeaks out from behind Anon, followed by a muffled giggle.
>The hair on the back of your neck stands on end, Anon’s eye widen with fear as he spins around to give both of you a view of the voice’s owner.
>Pinkie is standing at the doorway, with a hand over her mouth.
>She stops shaking with stifled laughter before speaking up, “Sorry, that pop sound you made was really funny” she explains, “And so is the looks on your faces, you didn’t even know I was here huh?"
>You heart starts to race, judging by the tightness in Anon’s shoulders he doesn’t know what to say either.
>”Oh don’t worry Limey, Nonners, I won’t say anything~” she sing-songs, slapping her hands in front of her waist and rocking back and forth on her heels.
>Your eyes naturally follow the movement and you watch as a small drop of liquid falls from behind Pinkie’s hands.
>Following that you see an enormous PUDDLE OF FLUID HOLY HELL!
>Pinkie holds out her hands, after having seen the look of shock on your faces, “Oh no! I know what you’re thinking but it’s okay, only some of that was my squirt. Though let me tell you, if I wasn’t severely dehydrated I bet you I could’ve claimed at lest fifty-fifty on this puddle here after witnessing you two” she boasts.
>You share an uncertain look with your brother.
>”Now then… as I was sing-songing, I won’t tell anyone…”
>Her hand slips behind her, moving over to where the doorhandle should be.
>The next thing you hear is the audible click of the lock.

Okay, that's that.

>>28162507
You got it senpai, I'll do that before going to bed tonight.

>>28162304
It's not been ideal that's for sure. But it's okay, I've had enough free time that it hasn't been a huge burden to write.

>>28162435
Being a degenerate maybe?
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>>28163895
would you have my babbies frosty

we can even pretend were related
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>>28163895
F-fuck~ 10/10 would boner again. Your non-canon scenes just make it so that I can't wait for when the canon scenes begin.

>You will never fuck one sister while the other one stands nearby and pisses herself
Why even live?
Hey, Onii? Would you kindly change the link you have in the thead's pastebin for my Pie Sisters story to http://pastebin.com/2qAwkNKY? The link is currently pointing to Frosty's finely-crafted Octavia story.
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>>28159088
>Anon and his sister play doctor
>His sister is Twilight
>She always gets to be Dr. House while Anon is stuck being Allison
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>>28162107
I've come bearing greens to repent for being so slow, the beds to good for me...
Continuing from...http://pastebin.com/X8xpizr6
>It’s hot.
>Burning!
>Eyes snapping open you stiffen suddenly before slowly relaxing.
>Swallowing a dry mouth you look around to find yourself alone in bed.
>Sunset must have gotten up already, looking over at the clock you can see that the time is already past noon.
>Cripes you slept in today.
>Shambling out of bed you grab the cane from the bedside table before heading into the living room.
>The house is quiet for once as you look around for your sister.
>It's only when you look at the television do you see a post it note.
>Taking it down you read, ‘Went with Rarity to get groceries and hang out at mall, will be back around five. Stay home and get some rest big brother! Hugs and kisses, Sunset.’
>Oh, well that explains it.
>Rarity, that reminds you,if Sunset told Twilight did she tell the rest of her friends?
>Grunting you walk to the couch and phone before looking at your contact list.
>Admittedly you don't have many people on here, but your sister had insisted on you knowing her friends just in case.
>Now which one to cal
>Rarity is out as you don't want her to tell Sunset right away
>Flicking ingredients through the list you a top on a blond mop of hair, Applejack.
>Didn't Sunset mentioned that this one was really honest or something?
>Might as well try.
>Clicking on the phone icon you wait for her to pick up
>It takes two rings before you hear that distinctive southern drawl, “Howdy Sugarcube, what's up?”
“Hey Applejack, hope I didn't call at a bad time.”
>”Naw, taking a break from picking apples, what’cha need?”
“Look this will sound weird, but Sunset did she ever mention certain things about me and her?”
>”Come again?”
>Covering your eyes with your hand to avoid the cringe you can see coming.
“Did Sunset ever mention wanting to be more than brother and sister to you? “
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>>28164490
>”...”
>The silence is very telling.
>It's only when you check the phone to see if she hung up on you that she responds.
>Quickly Slamming the phone to your ear with a wince you catch, “-cube, I don't want to pry or nothin’ but…”
“No, go ahead I want to know.”
>”Alright, yeah, she mentioned a time or two on wanting to be more with you cuz of all the good you done by her.”
“The good?”
>”Well o’course! Most folks don't go as far as leaving their whole life behind for family and I can respect that Anon, Sunset cares for ya deeply Anon I promise she does.”
“Not enough to stop her from sleeping with me…”
>”She told ya about that!?”
“You knew?!”
>”Uh, what was that Anon you're breaking up, can't make ou-”
“Applejack.”
>”Darn it.”
“If she told you then it's a fair guess she told the rest of you huh?”
>”She did, but Anon she truly cares about you, don't throw that away Sugarcube.”
“I'm not it's just, I don't know. Alright?”
>”Have yall at least talked with the girl?”
“No, not yet at least.”
>”Do it, if there is anything I know best, is that you need to be honest for a relationship to work.”
“even when one of them isn't honest at the start?”
>“Cornsarnett Anon, she at least told you to your face instead of hiding it!”
“Sorry just, bitter i guess.”
>Suddenly the doorbell rings drawing your attention
>”Anon you an-”
“Hold that thought. “
>”Huh?”
>Walking towards the door you hold the phone with your shoulder.
“Someone at the door is all.”
>”Oh, well I can wait.”
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>>28164498
>As you unlock the door you turn the handle over and pull.
>A cheerful smile and gentle hug is at the door in the form of a familiar pink girl with too large headphones blasting some odd punk rock music.
>”Anon, what's that noise?”
>Instinctively your hand reaches up to pet Zest on the head, memories of Sunset sneaking a hug now and then come to mind.
“I’ll call you later, a friend came over.”
>Hanging the phone up you thought you heard her ask who, before Zest turns her head up to look at you, “Anon, I know you might be weirded out by me coming over, but I’m totally down to help you out by /any/ means necessary!”
>The hooded look she throws your way at the mention of anything makes you shiver in your mental space.
“Neat, well if you wanted to help me change my bandages…”
>”Sure!” With a preppy spring in her step Zest quickly closes the door behind her as she drags you towards the living room.
>Helping you down Zest begins to pull off your shirt before you can utter a word.
>Lifting your arms up with a grunt you shimmy from side to side when the hem of the shirt catches on your nose.
>Grimacing from the discomfort start to grab the shirt ready to rip it off when there is a soft, moist kiss!
>Eyes wide you jerk back nearly falling over and yelping out in pain from the sudden movement.
>”Oh my gosh, I’m sorry Anon. I thought-”
“What was that even!?”
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>>28164513
>”I just, I wanted to show my appreciation.” The hurt look in her eyes makes your resolve tremble, but you hold fast.
“Okay, well first too fast, second you almost got raped, I would think you wouldn’t be so eager.”
>”No, it’s not that. It’s, it’s better when I’m with you, I feel...safer.”
>Curling in on herself atop the couch Zest looks so frail by herself there.
>Sighing you simply hold out your arm to her.
>Face brightening up Zest happily crawls over to gently snuggle into your side, you can feel her heartbeat as she lays against your side.
>Not to mention that rather small buds that press against your side, shaking of those lusty thoughts you focus on Zest.
“If you want to show your thankful, then do it in smaller things, you know? I didn’t get into that fight trying to get laid.”
>’Yes you did’ a traitorous thought lingers in your mind before you dismiss it
>Zest turns her head up to look at you for a moment, worry and concern mixed with hopefulness, “Well you could tell me what you need done?”
“That’s a good start, maybe my bandages?”
>”Oh, right. Sorry I sometimes forget things at times.” Lemon Zest does a small knock on her head, “It just falls out like that, I’d lose my own head if it wasn’t attached to me.”
“Heh, well at anyrate the doctor did the ending of it on my back, think you can get to it?”
>Seeing the confident nod you leverage yourself up before turning your back to her.
>You wait before butterfly light touches start to graze your back.
“You can be a bit rougher, if you need to.”
>”Sorry, I just don’t want to hurt you.”
”Nah I’ll be f-rip-i~~~~~ne!”
>”Oh gosh, what did I do!?”
>Tilting your head back at Lemon Zest you give her a lazily grin, “Gotcha.”
>A flurry of emotions flash across Lemon’s face before it settles on anger, “You jackass! I thought I really hurt you!”
>A couch pillow meets your face in retaliation!
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>>28164525
“Sorry, I was just trying to break the ice.”
>”Well consider it broken you idiot, gah!”
“Didn’t mean to scare you.”
>”No it’s fine I just- phew okay, I’m nervous alright?”
>Patting her shoulder you give the best comforting grin you can.
“It’ll be fine, all you need to do is just undo the clips and then I can do the rest.”
>It seems to have worked as Lemon Zest gulps before nodding at you face oddly red.
>Turning away once more you wait before feeling her fingers slowly, but with more confidence begin to undo the bandages.
>The silence is somewhat comforting as the steady rasp of cloth fills the room.
>You started to reach for the bandage, but instead Lemon keeps undoing it.
>Not seeking a fight you relent though as you get closer to your skin, Lemon’s progress starts to stall.
>You feel fingers start to trace your skin where it’s whole, small goosebumps starting to raise up in response.
>The wounds look nasty you bet, better take over for the poor thing.
“Here, I’ll get the rest.”
>”Huh? Oh! Uh, no I’m almost done.”
“Are you sure? I know that it’s going to look gross…”
>”No, I can do it.”
“If you’re sure.”
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>>28164539
>The last wrap slowly comes undone with a clinging feel to it and you can hear the gasp from behind.
“It’s pretty bad isn’t it?”
>”A-a little, b-but it’s pretty closed up!”
“S’cuze me?”
>Trying to look back you falter as you can’t see it.
>”Yeah, you’re healing really well Anon, it’s still really red an- oh gosh it’s bleeding again! What do I do!?”
“Calm down, hand me a bandage.”
>Fumbling Lemon brings the cloth over and you quickly unravel it.
>It’s starting to sting now, and you can feel a small drop of blood work it’s way down your back.
>Grunting you hold one end in place and gesture back to Lemon.
“Need you to start wrapping me.”
>”Right!” Quickly the bandage is snatched from your hand and you can see the small shakes in Lemon’s arms as they seem to fly around you quickly wrapping you up once more.
“Not so tight!”
>”Sorry!”
>Making a few last minute adjustments you’re rebandaged properly and can now sit against the sofa comfortably.
“Thanks, should have done it yesterday, but was too busy.”
>”With what?”
>Memories of Sunset’s tearful confession and your answer spring to mind.
“Magic stuff…”
>”Do you think you can do more of that?”
“The magic?”
>”Yeah!” Bouncing in place the girl leans forward looking at you eagerly.
“Not a clue.”
>Man dat pout.
>”Really?”
“Yeah, can’t really try to do it like I am now, but we did learn a few things.”
>In an instant the excitement is back and Lemon nods for you to continue.
“Emotion seems to be key, so far we’ve only tried a few different ones, but it looks like there are a few that are the best to use. Love seemed to have the greatest effect it looked like.”
>”Wait, if you managed to find this out, who was d- wait your sister can do magic too?”
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>>28164551
>Nodding at her Lemon Zest frowns before biting at her thumbnail, “Darn it.”
“Why are you mad?”
>”Well, it’s not that I’m mad, just...have you ever noticed she seems to be awfully possessive of you?”
>Internally you sweat as you let out a unconvincing laugh.
“Ha you noticed?”
>”Really though! It’s so weird, she acts like you’re her boyfriend or something.”
>The word boyfriend sinks into like an arrow finding its mark with unerring accuracy.
“Y-you don’t say.”
>”Yeah! Seriously there isn’t anything wrong with me wanting to get to know my savior you know? And I meant it when I said I’d help.” Zest lays a hand on your thigh as she shares a genuine smile with you.
>Despite yourself you can’t help but return it.
“Sunset has always been a bit precocious, but hey she just doesn’t know you yet, to be honest neither do I.”
>”Well I’d be happy to fix that!” With that Lemon sits up and pulls out her ophone before scrolling to her playlist, “Here, this is some of the stuff that I like to listen to.”
>[HEAVY DEATH METAL MUSIC]
“A-ah, I see, though I can’t hear now.”
>”I know right it’s so full of energy!”
>Remembering the lyrics of R3@p3rs hit song, ‘Die, Die, Die!’ you can’t help but let out a laugh.
>”What’s so funny?”
“It’s just, your music is inspired by carnage, death and other stuff and you say it’s so full of life, just some odd parallels yanno?”
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>>28164558
>”Mm, I suppose, but that’s the great thing about music! You just find your own way with each one, its like, a reflection of your soul you know?”
>That’s a rather poetic way of looking at it.
>For the next couple of hours you and Lemon mostly hang out learning more about each other, you found out that she rather enjoyed a bizarre selection of music, not only death metal, but things ranging from punk rock to country rap.
>That last one is actually a thing, just very rare.
>You also learned the Zest had a passion for cooking as well as she uses her ophone to show you meals she’d made herself.
>Though you don’t know the difference between the flambe and the champe are you guess Lemon just has a zest for cooking.
>Somewhere you feel there is a smug mexican looking on in pride.
>Of course you had to share some tales of your own, since the cat was out of the bag in regards to your extradimensional origins you’re telling her of the time when you and Sunset had set up a prank for Princess Celestia.
“So we have this spell set primed and ready to go, it’d turn her mane all these different colors that clash together right, but when she walked through the door and the spell triggered. Let’s just say we didn’t try that one so close to Nightmare Night.”
>”You mean Halloween? Why’s that?”
“Yeah that, well turned out that Celestia had cottoned onto our prank and turned it back on us by using the spell to change into this fiery demon looking thing with sharp teeth, fire for a mane and slitted eyes before she started to chase us throughout the entire castle!”
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>>28164574
>Zest giggles at that leaning back in her chair enthralled with your story.
“It got so bad that we tried every trick in the book to stop her; shields, spells, throwing things down and at her! Nothing would stop her as she cackled about eating our souls.”
>”How’d you get away then?”
“That’s the thing, we’d thought the royal baths would save us because of all the water and we found it just made things worse as the waters had evaporated. So we started to throw things at her before Sunset-”
>The door opens and closes interrupting your story.
>”Anon I’m home! Sorry I- oh, it you.”
>”Darling who a- oh, hello there, Lemon was it?”
~To be Continued!~

Sorry for blue balling, but I did say I was gonna get an update out afore school starts up, hope it was worth the wait. By the By Anons, I had an idea, a crazy idea, but what if I wrote out something like a cyoa, but ahead of time, so that during certain key moments, such as say the reaction of the confession for example, Anons could chose the way the story ends that is a bit more satisfactory than the shit tall tell does with it's bullshit spiel about, "Oh you're choices matter in this world completly when instead no matter what you choose you're still fucked over by the world regardless of what you do!~"
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>>28164599
So, will you be reposting this when the new, non-autosage thread is up?

I'll just assume 'yes'.
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>>28164616
You know...It had just occured to me that is the case... Thanks Anon for reminding me!
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>>28163895
hot
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>>28164599
Not sure about the CYOA thing, repost it next thread so i can think about it incase i forget, I prosume you mean a story different to the current one though, which you would CYOAize.
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>>28164599
Zest is fucking adorable.
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>>28164599
>cyoa
Why would you do that.
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>>28164599
>Inb4 "GET AWAY FROM MY BROTHERU REEEEEEEEEEEEE"

New thread when?
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when new thread?
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Coming right up.
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>>28165643

Nailed it!
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